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weakfingers
12-23-2009, 07:04 PM
Yeah ill fershure work on my bars but you all relize thats taken with a fish eye lens right?

Bets369R
12-23-2009, 08:11 PM
Lose that little curly thing on the top of your Q. It looks like girly bangs.

Con-Artist
12-23-2009, 10:18 PM
Crus- those look pretty good.. I'm not sure what to say about em.
Well anyway, I'm trying to do better stuff, but it seems like when I compare the picture to the actual drawing, it's lame. I thaught the s was good, but now I'm not soo sure... Crits?
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/df620538.jpg

seelzoh
12-23-2009, 10:26 PM
3d kinda needs work but its def a solid start

kew1
12-23-2009, 10:49 PM
says split http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-10_1353.jpg

Con-Artist
12-23-2009, 10:56 PM
Kew-not feelin the clouds, can't see an l, and I don't like how it goes from thick to skinny. Crit mine?

kew1
12-23-2009, 11:03 PM
dont make the s so fat

TheToy
12-23-2009, 11:18 PM
lol, nobody is going to critically analyze that bullshit you put up, nobody cares if you waste your money.


on a side note, if your talking about buying rusto, i'd rather buy ironlak. rusto=the price of a can of montana around here, unless you find a dollar hook up.

You complain about my use of Belton most frequently. So you obviously do care if I waste my money.

Ironlak is not available in my area. Rustoleum doesn't fade and change color overnight either.

WTF you know about Ironlak other than keepin' it in the box?

NICCSACC
12-23-2009, 11:36 PM
kill yourself.

mawks
12-23-2009, 11:55 PM
lol, nobody is going to critically analyze that bullshit you put up, nobody cares if you waste your money.


on a side note, if your talking about buying rusto, i'd rather buy ironlak. rusto=the price of a can of montana around here, unless you find a dollar hook up.
do yall not have a walmart?
rack that shit

BlacktodaFuture
12-23-2009, 11:57 PM
i <3 the dollar store cans!!!

zennegen
12-24-2009, 03:15 AM
lol, i don't bomb with ironlak, i'm sorry. i do artfag shit, so i do know. and it is MUCH better than rusto. thetoy, graff sites just love people like you. always buying their shit and just wasting it on bullshit.

LeaksOne
12-24-2009, 05:57 AM
so some crits for this page.......wait......oh thats right theres no pictures up.

Zen i understand you hate for thetoy but come on man. you battled him you beat him just let the kid progress now. for a while he was toned down and taking crits well. lets not start this bullshit again. take it to the pms or both you guys get AIM/MSN and argue

TheToy
12-24-2009, 08:12 AM
lol, i don't bomb with ironlak, i'm sorry. i do artfag shit, so i do know. and it is MUCH better than rusto. thetoy, graff sites just love people like you. always buying their shit and just wasting it on bullshit.

You don't bomb at all. You do artfag shit.

Rust owns dude. Fuck you. Fuck your ironlack. If you can't bust a throw or straight simp with some Rusto and RF and NYO's then you shouldn't even be using specialty cans. There's a reason why I'm on a Rusto kick.

dinedgc
12-24-2009, 08:17 AM
rusto is fine, especially for bombs, especially with a rusto fat on it

ironlak is nice too, but you'd better be rolling in money or rackin em to be doing throws with it, i must say though the nicer paints are choice for canvas work

but who really gives a fuck y'all? use whatever works for you and fuck the haters

Con-Artist
12-24-2009, 11:26 AM
Well I tweaked this a bit, redid it. Crits would be appriciated.
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/6f589299.jpg

Con-Artist
12-24-2009, 11:27 AM
Well I tweaked this a bit, redid it. Crits would be appriciated.
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/6f589299.jpg

suparjafar
12-24-2009, 12:21 PM
much better somber, but i im iffy on the handy. simps lookin clean though

b SQUARED 08
12-24-2009, 12:21 PM
Somber: I like your O, B, and E. Your other letters don't work quite as well because the overlapping makes them look cramped, while your other letters look clean. Your M would probably look better if you erase the overlapping. Your R would look better if you rework the bottom right bar without overlapping as well. The only letter I would scrap is your S. Play around with that a bit more until you come up with one that fits well.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo16.jpg

zennegen
12-24-2009, 12:49 PM
You don't bomb at all. You do artfag shit.

Rust owns dude. Fuck you. Fuck your ironlack. If you can't bust a throw or straight simp with some Rusto and RF and NYO's then you shouldn't even be using specialty cans. There's a reason why I'm on a Rusto kick.

dawg, you're just mad because you have no artistic talent, it's ok to not have a future dude. have fun living in one of those art primo boxes in the near future.

b SQUARED 08
12-24-2009, 12:55 PM
Shut the fuck up and take that shit to PMs...

NouveauP
12-24-2009, 01:01 PM
To Asker: Looks good. I'd lose the green semi-forcefield thing. I think it looks fine without it. The only thing that kinda bugs me is the middle E bar. Just make it straight like your A bar. My opinion. I might match the bottom R bar with your bottom K bar as well. Just a thought. And not feeling the hands. Keep trying.

Somber: Don't.Draw.From.The.Bottom.Of.The.Page. It's really a bad habit and it gives you an excuse to not fully execute your letters since you don't have to draw a section of them. You'll get a better grasp of your letters if you draw them in the middle of the page. This also teaches you to line up your letters without a physical underline (I hope that made sense). Your B is your strongest letter by far, even though you bit the E of yours truly. Haha. Just playing. I don't really like the S. The top piece of it just doesn't fit with the piece. You have a lot of curved bars like your B and R, but decided to just have the straight line for your S. Just personal preference to keep your letter style constant. Especially in straight letters. I also don't dig the bottom of the S. No real reason, just don't. And the M and the bottom of the R are just awkward. As for the FPFM simples above the piece, keep trying. Because simples are just that: simple; they need to be SUPER CLEAN! Don't be afraid to use bars for them before you put ink or that soft graphite on it. And I feel I've rambled enough. Hope this helped.

CrustOner
12-24-2009, 01:15 PM
Doing throws in ironlak takes forever... Low pressure paint is way too difficult for something that's supposed to be quick.


EDIT: Oh, Toy, Zen, rebattle. I'm pretty confident Toy will win. Because you haven't progressed in what, 6 months that you've been on? TheToy has been on for 2, and we've seen a shitload of progression. Not to mention TheToy lost his bitchy ass attitude while you haven't changed a bit since you were xRACKINGxKINGx. Now both of you shut the fuck up and battle already.

OOPS!
12-24-2009, 01:17 PM
REALLY? WE HAD NOOO IDEA.. haha just playin man. Lower pressure paint sucks.

One Evil
12-24-2009, 01:33 PM
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9547/picture003.jpg
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/1518/brickah.png
crits.?

b SQUARED 08
12-24-2009, 01:45 PM
Give 'em to get 'em.

One Evil
12-24-2009, 01:48 PM
okay haha... asker.. that is tight.. but the words over rated but still looks fresh!

suparjafar
12-24-2009, 01:52 PM
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0265.jpg

kinda old, and the s is too far off but whatever. crits welcome. ignore handie

brick i just saw your painted shit, looks better than that shit^

asker i think it looks good except the top of the k seems a little awkward to me IMO

One Evil
12-24-2009, 01:56 PM
thanks... pretty much for ur ROES.. make the R right leg more str8 dont add that bendy thing to it..as well as the top left part of the R kinda make it go straight out instead of flowing downward ya kno :) jus keep doin ya thing tho!

b SQUARED 08
12-24-2009, 01:59 PM
Brick: I've always preferred keeping all capitals or all lowercase, myself, but again, that's just a preference. Your letters look alright, but I'd lose the drips and spade bottoms like on the first one. Also, clean up your lines and it'll look quite a bit better. The only hand I'm feelin' is the top left one in your top pic. Keep workin'.

zennegen
12-24-2009, 02:00 PM
I'll battle, but i'm not wasting any more paint. too fucking cold for that shit. and lol, you think i care about this shit? once again, YALL *****S THINK I TAKE THIS SHIT SERIOUSLY.

One Evil
12-24-2009, 02:05 PM
Brick: I've always preferred keeping all capitals or all lowercase, myself, but again, that's just a preference.

word i thought the same thing once i was done the sketch hah i was like fuck i made the B lower case and the rest the letters CAPS

~Star~
12-24-2009, 02:12 PM
sorry bout the fucked up lighting quick sketchh
http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk35/bomb4life/BUSH0004.jpg

CrustOner
12-24-2009, 02:51 PM
I'll battle, but i'm not wasting any more paint. too fucking cold for that shit. and lol, you think i care about this shit? once again, YALL *****S THINK I TAKE THIS SHIT SERIOUSLY.

Then gtfo.

zennegen
12-24-2009, 04:12 PM
Then gtfo.

NAWL ***** NAWL.

haha.

One Evil
12-24-2009, 04:32 PM
you sound retarded.. nawl haha

lord_plankton
12-24-2009, 05:02 PM
oh come on...that isnt the right attitude either.. id not want someone to crit my work if the one has no understanding of letterstructure and so on, so why not give some crits when you obviously have the time to...
brick, straighten your k, lose extension, watch your bars , cut your lines and youll be fine for the beginning

brG
12-24-2009, 05:06 PM
one random drawing
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/4618/61668801.jpg

comment please, how can i make it better?

suparjafar
12-24-2009, 05:32 PM
MORE ARROWS \M/

no seriously view the new to graff thread.

massacreman
12-24-2009, 05:53 PM
MORE ARROWS \M/

no seriously view the new to graff thread.

did you?

Zookyook
12-24-2009, 06:29 PM
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/4618/61668801.jpg yea thats way too many arrows, ur 3d is WAAAY off, so unless u can make them clean and basically all match i wouldnt use any arrows....try to match your letter size, and dont alternate between capital and lower case, the way it is now looks like WhiTE hAWKS... i see u tried to match the H's but dont start a word with a lowercase then the rest in caps, it looks crazy.... id say ur strongest letter style wise is the E... try to make the other letters match that, and make everything capital like that, then u can work on intertwining them like ur trying to do... and dont leave so much open space, ur background (which is the arrow stuff) should somewhat follow the outline of the lettering, or at least be closer to it...its just way too big and thick

and the part u signed says BRG DESINGE?? i think u meant design hah, dont sweat the small stuff

FlippingChickens
12-24-2009, 06:43 PM
White hawks,eliminate the arrows and listen to everything else zooyork said
Crus is getting dope!
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2836.jpg
less talk more flix n crits!

Zookyook
12-24-2009, 06:46 PM
its zookyook not zooyork lol.... and does that say TERE???? mad blurry

Zookyook
12-24-2009, 07:54 PM
no its just not a legible tag thats all... doesnt CLEARLY say anything, smug asshole

zennegen
12-24-2009, 07:56 PM
he's clearly fucking with you, fool.

RedEyes
12-24-2009, 07:57 PM
i wouldnt say that oops, it looks like TORE, but its a blurry pic and bad tag work on the O and F to make it solid.
BRG- lose the arrows and work on structure.
Star-get a clearer pic and add color for crits.

TheToy
12-24-2009, 08:06 PM
dawg, you're just mad because you have no artistic talent, it's ok to not have a future dude. have fun living in one of those art primo boxes in the near future.

Nice sig. Atleast I didn't have to make mine up.

You don't take this seriously, but you still mad...

OOPS!
12-24-2009, 08:33 PM
i wouldnt say that oops, it looks like TORE, but its a blurry pic and bad tag work on the O and F to make it solid.
BRG- lose the arrows and work on structure.
Star-get a clearer pic and add color for crits.

What? I didnt say anything

zennegen
12-24-2009, 08:59 PM
lol, you know i meant i don't bomb with IRONLAK. but that's cool, dude. keep living in that fantasy land of yours. btw, clearly, YOU MAD.

Con-Artist
12-24-2009, 09:09 PM
Well there's nothing on here to crit.. Soo I guess I'll post this, just got a new blackbook for Xmas.http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/25dc16e6.jpg

suparjafar
12-24-2009, 09:48 PM
somber open up your s and m a little.
hand im using
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0274.jpg

Con-Artist
12-24-2009, 10:11 PM
Roes- handys aight, r could be better...
Inked it!http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/0b81604c.jpg

Fury
12-24-2009, 10:12 PM
Somber - Not digging the S, but the rest looks pretty solid.
Roes - Not really like the swirl or the X.

Con-Artist
12-24-2009, 10:13 PM
Roes- handys aight, r could be better...
Inked it!http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/0b81604c.jpg

zaco
12-24-2009, 10:37 PM
yo con thats an ill simp, im really liking that R

NouveauP
12-24-2009, 10:50 PM
Getting better Somber. Still think you need to open the top of the S, but that was already said. And you're still drawing from the bottom! Ahhh!

Con-Artist
12-24-2009, 11:08 PM
Ino I started this before tlking too u, and figured I might as well post it, also the size of my book impares my ability to draw it in the middle.

zennegen
12-24-2009, 11:31 PM
Somber, S needs serious work. M could be better, too.

rasta tagger
12-24-2009, 11:46 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u270/GrrrrrrlJeans/12232017.jpgJust messing around with these letters at work. Trying out my skills in the ink as well

Con-Artist
12-25-2009, 12:26 AM
Sape?- not the most legible, maybe make sum of those bends strait.

b SQUARED 08
12-25-2009, 12:30 AM
Somber: Go back over the crits I gave you on your last one. Mainly, work on that S.
Sate?: It has got too many kinks, IMO. Work on some straight simples and then gradually start tweaking your letters with bends and breaks. I think it looks choppy because you haven't developed your simples yet.

I'm just not sure about this E, but crits are appreciated as always...
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo17.jpg

MoistGarbageCan
12-25-2009, 12:34 AM
shit looks cool man, but maybe try doing something else?
you've posted the same shit like 5times already. maybe fix the right leg or the R because it looks awkward.


oh yeah, try making that R leg like the K's leg. the E is just fine IMO...

RedEyes
12-25-2009, 01:27 AM
Naw man keep doing what your doing, shits dope and simple with your own style. lets see some paint.

NouveauP
12-25-2009, 01:29 PM
Looks sick Asker. I like it better with that E, but if you aren't feeling it, then by all means, change it to how you like it. Whatever you choose, keep it up. You have a pretty cool style.

sinkilla1
12-25-2009, 01:35 PM
asker ur Rs pretty wierd but it looks ok but stop doing the same fill every time try to do a solid fill ionstead of that dusty shit

CrustOner
12-25-2009, 02:58 PM
http://i50.tinypic.com/8x24a9.jpg
Lime battle. I'm going to scan it later, because the shitty webcam picture doesn't do the color justice. My scanner is being a bitch right now though.

Crits:
Asker, that S could use tweaking, and your leg on your R should match the leg on your K.
Geek: It's too straight.. Good for a freestyle though, and better than a lot of shit in this thread. keep practicing man.
Somber: Don't draw from the bottom of the page. It gives you the habit of not drawing the entire letters. And that S needs to be fixed. I like the BER though, shit's dope.
ROES: Fix the R and S. And eliminate that swirl on the bottom. Exchange it for a straight line.

Bazer
12-25-2009, 03:07 PM
one random drawing
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/4618/61668801.jpg

comment please, how can i make it better?
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy132/kidmoney420/ALPHABET-1.jpg

CrustOner
12-25-2009, 03:11 PM
hahahahahahahahaha owned.

EDIT: those circles look perfect though.

EDIT EDIT: VVV This kid joined to laugh at that.

Scron
12-25-2009, 03:13 PM
hahahahaha

TheToy
12-25-2009, 03:15 PM
That just made my day.

lord_plankton
12-25-2009, 04:16 PM
damn..i was about to go like :" not to bad, consistent style etc. but fuck that background!" ... dude, come on..seriously thats fkn poor.

Edit: still cant believe that attitude

Trestoner707
12-25-2009, 04:27 PM
crust. just dont like the top of the L with a dot. make it solid other then that keep em coming.

n the majority of those generic letters suck

somber. i dont like ur SO connecting. stop it lol let every letter be its letter if ur gonna go simple like that

Patchy
12-25-2009, 04:54 PM
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0293.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0292.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0291.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0290.jpg
Just a few quickies. Crits

faser
12-25-2009, 04:57 PM
gtfo

Con-Artist
12-25-2009, 04:58 PM
Patchy- sorry, start all over, look at the keyboard at ur computer, draw those letters, fatten them or make em as skinny as u want. Also read the new to graff thread.

Patchy
12-25-2009, 05:11 PM
Patchy- sorry, start all over, look at the keyboard at ur computer, draw those letters, fatten them or make em as skinny as u want. Also read the new to graff thread.

Thanks

seelzoh
12-25-2009, 06:03 PM
Patchy- sorry, start all over, look at the keyboard at ur computer, draw those letters, fatten them or make em as skinny as u want. Also read the new to graff thread.

word, & you dont need all the background shit either...makes it look too busy for now..letter structure yakno

Some Kind of Joke
12-25-2009, 11:03 PM
did these in like 2 seconds because i was bored, but didnt have time to care really.
http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/IMG_0059.jpg

http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/IMG_0058.jpg

CrustOner
12-25-2009, 11:32 PM
Get the fuck out. now. before you contaminate yourself with graffiti. Take up golf. Or collecting stamps. Or professional monkey wrestling. But please. Just... stop writing graffiti.

sinkilla1
12-26-2009, 12:14 AM
god damnit crust why do you post in here your intermidiate
i do agrree though
http://i50.tinypic.com/33f6aev.jpg

Some Kind of Joke
12-26-2009, 12:36 AM
Get the fuck out. now. before you contaminate yourself with graffiti. Take up golf. Or collecting stamps. Or professional monkey wrestling. But please. Just... stop writing graffiti.

stfu ill write what i want to. just becuase i suck you dont have to be an ass.

BlacktodaFuture
12-26-2009, 01:08 AM
^ actually he can do what he wants, just like i can.... bitch!

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03174.jpg?t=1261807547

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03173.jpg?t=1261807680

CrustOner
12-26-2009, 02:02 AM
haha dude, I'm totally messing with you because you're new. Sort of. Everyone's at that stage at one point. Just check out the New to Graff thread and practice. :]

EDIT: Safe, that throw has a lot of potential, man. and I only like the A in your piece. That character needs mad work though, man.

And I post in here because even though some people say I'm intermediate, I still know I'm a toy, and I want to help people get up to intermediate as well. The original purpose of the intermediate thread.

zennegen
12-26-2009, 02:03 AM
http://i785.photobucket.com/albums/yy132/kidmoney420/ALPHABET-1.jpg

OH SHIII-

fucking funny.

Some Kind of Joke
12-26-2009, 02:10 AM
haha dude, I'm totally messing with you because you're new. Sort of. Everyone's at that stage at one point. Just check out the New to Graff thread and practice. :]

oh thats cool. no harm done i suppose. although i guess i made a good decision by not tagging the streets yet. im gonna get decent first.



anyway, i decided to change back to my old name... Epoch, Epo for short.
heres a tag i came up wit crits plz:
http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/IMG_0111.jpg

CrustOner
12-26-2009, 02:21 AM
Considering that's your first try, a good start for sure. Fix up that E and P. That C looks like a G. Keep that H uppercase. It's EPOCH not EPOCh.

Some Kind of Joke
12-26-2009, 02:26 AM
Considering that's your first try, a good start for sure. Fix up that E and P. That C looks like a G. Keep that H uppercase. It's EPOCH not EPOCh.

what about the E and P need fixing?

Fury
12-26-2009, 02:26 AM
C looks like a G. Try a capital H, round off the E at the top to make use of space, and move the C out of the O.

Edit: Fucking Crust :|

CrustOner
12-26-2009, 02:30 AM
hahahaha OWNED.

sinkilla1
12-26-2009, 02:33 AM
BUMMP
http://i50.tinypic.com/33f6aev.jpg

Con-Artist
12-26-2009, 02:35 AM
Sin- dope k
Safe- both look good, remove bottom bar thing on the a.
Ok, soo I tried to take everyones crits to mind and make my simp as good as possible. Crit it.http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/5753e17c.jpg

sinkilla1
12-26-2009, 02:36 AM
i dont think u need to cmake it simpler i think u need to change the s and u did it looks good

Fury
12-26-2009, 02:40 AM
Try fattening up that leg of the R and make the S shorter. The S looks better though

Some Kind of Joke
12-26-2009, 02:41 AM
C looks like a G. Try a capital H, round off the E at the top to make use of space, and move the C out of the O.

Edit: Fucking Crust :|

when you say round off the top do you mean like one of these ways:
http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/004.jpg

because number 1 looks wierd to me, and number 2 just isnt a style im going for.
also, how should i make the H flow? all the letters have mostly round shapes, and i cant get a capital H to look good with it.

Some Kind of Joke
12-26-2009, 02:51 AM
sorry for double post, but heres what i came up with.
im not really sure about the H. i kinda like it, but then again im a toy ass M.Fer lol.
http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/005.jpg

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 11:08 AM
http://i928.photobucket.com/albums/ad130/graffkido9/graff001.jpg
http://i928.photobucket.com/albums/ad130/graffkido9/graff003.jpg
http://i928.photobucket.com/albums/ad130/graffkido9/graff002.jpg

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 11:10 AM
crits^


WoNeR

TheToy
12-26-2009, 11:36 AM
Crits? Go to church.

massacreman
12-26-2009, 11:37 AM
dude please drop the chars drop the little spraycan dudes and everything, work on your letter structure and style first and when thats REASONABLE (which really isnt now) try do some chars and stuff around it

ps NEVER NEVER fuck with 666 and swatstikas and stuff when your 12.

BlacktodaFuture
12-26-2009, 12:20 PM
edit:never never fuck with swatstikas!

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03175.jpg?t=1261848954

zennegen
12-26-2009, 01:15 PM
what's a swat sticker?

prefer
12-26-2009, 02:17 PM
hahah, epoch, you fukin toy lol, and wtf is up with that nazi shit hhaah the fuck

Vagrant
12-26-2009, 03:04 PM
something I'm working on

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4022/4216868824_e3c865f91c_m.jpg

StayTrueCrew978
12-26-2009, 03:12 PM
http://i97.photobucket.com/albums/l214/hippyskater9244/2323232327Ffp63268nu498849258WSNRCG.jpg

just started a new name, crits please

seelzoh
12-26-2009, 03:15 PM
lose the background cloud shit or whatever that is, fix your K up and make the O's match

Vagrant
12-26-2009, 03:17 PM
Drop the double o and replace them with a u

Fury
12-26-2009, 03:47 PM
Vagrant - Make the left side of the V a little taller to match the height. It's a cool style though.
Crook - Basically what he said ^
Safer - Your R is a bit too long and longer than the other letters. Your throw's letters are also too similar but if you can change that, it'll look dope.
Woony - Don't do characters for now.
Epoch - Just try using the second E and see how that looks. Otherwise, try to make the H match the E so it flows nicer.

SIGNS
12-26-2009, 06:08 PM
Started writing about two weeks ago so have just spent all my time trying, erasing, trying, erasing so I know I'm on my way.

Was just a quick sketch but please, brutal honesty so I can make sure it doesn't happen again ;)

BlacktodaFuture
12-26-2009, 06:19 PM
fury: what do you mean too similar?

Fury
12-26-2009, 06:49 PM
Like they all have the little line that goes up on the top left corner of each letter. Maybe only have a few letters do that, and some not? It's kind of hard to explain, just make them look like the same typeface, but not all exactly the same.

Signs - New to graff thread. Learn bars, copy the letters on your keyboard. Don't do pieces before you can crawl.

Fury
12-26-2009, 06:50 PM
Like they all have the little line that goes up on the top left corner of each letter. Maybe only have a few letters do that, and some not? It's kind of hard to explain, just make them look like the same typeface, but not all exactly the same.

Signs - New to graff thread. Learn bars, copy the letters on your keyboard. Don't do pieces before you can crawl.

Some Kind of Joke
12-26-2009, 07:17 PM
sorry for double post, but heres what i came up with.
im not really sure about the H. i kinda like it, but then again im a toy ass M.Fer lol.
http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/005.jpg

bump. crits on this. (something other than the guy who just said "lol you toy")
and ill ask again, what the fudge should i do to make the H macth the E... i cant think of anything. mabey Epoch just isnt a good set of letters?

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 07:32 PM
dude please drop the chars drop the little spraycan dudes and everything, work on your letter structure and style first and when thats REASONABLE (which really isnt now) try do some chars and stuff around it

ps NEVER NEVER fuck with 666 and swatstikas and stuff when your 12.

hahah fckyou im not 12 its more lik 16 you fcking mouse turd

Some Kind of Joke
12-26-2009, 07:37 PM
hahah fckyou im not 12 its more lik 16 you fcking mouse turd

lol.... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

SIGNS
12-26-2009, 07:50 PM
@ Some Kind of Joke - I like it man, its a cool start, you have good control with curves - get some grog! =)

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 08:50 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/meh018.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/meh010.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/lilliansname001.jpg
# 2 is a joke
#3 is mi girls name
nd the other one is juss old shyt

BlacktodaFuture
12-26-2009, 08:52 PM
sir, you are trying way to hard.

TheToy
12-26-2009, 08:57 PM
Don't worry about filling your letters right now. That's eye candy for a more advanced level.

Just work on your letter structure and basic drop shadow/3D for now.

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 09:09 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/trowy001.jpg
this is mi trowy crits ??

-Empty-Can-
12-26-2009, 09:13 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch003.jpg
kinda old style. i've been trying to make a good S to fit with it. crits...

Signs- more arrows. no really visit the new to graff thread and do bubble letters and keyboard letters

woonybomber- second one is alright. lose those wack fills

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 09:24 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/trowys005.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/trowys004.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/trowys003.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/trowys001.jpg
trowys nd handys


wack fills? ight if you say so i juss hate takein mi tyme so i fill as fast as i kan nd i leav some shyt not filled in juss kuss i want nd to meh i think it looks gewd





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WoNeR

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 09:31 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch003.jpg
kinda old style. i've been trying to make a good S to fit with it. crits...

Signs- more arrows. no really visit the new to graff thread and do bubble letters and keyboard letters

woonybomber- second one is alright. lose those wack fills

dont take this roung you need work on your handy

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 09:48 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/l001.jpg
white out trowy nd some dude idk i was mad bored

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 09:50 PM
crits^^^^^
i think it sucks

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WoNeR

-Empty-Can-
12-26-2009, 09:53 PM
Edit your posts instead of quadruple posting dude.

Yea I know my handies are terrible. crits on the piece

TheToy
12-26-2009, 09:55 PM
You can bang out 4-5ish throwies with just a drop/3D in pen/pencil in the time it takes to do the fills. You basically can't fuck up a simple fill when you get to the wall. I like the 'AE' combo in the red and yellow fills.

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 09:57 PM
ight


thiss is mi philly kind of shyty but i try
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/philly003.jpg




yeo empty-can wonna battel ??

-Empty-Can-
12-26-2009, 09:58 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch003.jpg
kinda old style. i've been trying to make a good S to fit with it. crits...


bamp

why do you wanna battle? but sure. PM me

TheToy
12-26-2009, 09:59 PM
Philly hands should stay in Philly. My opinion. I dunno' where you're from though.

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 10:00 PM
You can bang out 4-5ish throwies with just a drop/3D in pen/pencil in the time it takes to do the fills. You basically can't fuck up a simple fill when you get to the wall. I like the 'AE' combo in the red and yellow fills.

thanxs nnd ight

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 10:03 PM
rode island y?

TheToy
12-26-2009, 10:06 PM
Just wondering. You coulda' just said, not Philly. Lol.

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 10:27 PM
lol yeah nah im a 401 kat all day lol

seelzoh
12-26-2009, 10:45 PM
stot dont even worry about the fill your trying to bang out now, fix up your T's too it'd look alot nicer without the things coming out of them

zennegen
12-26-2009, 10:46 PM
wow, way to blow your shit up. philly hands are fucking tight if done well.

-Empty-Can-
12-26-2009, 10:51 PM
stot dont even worry about the fill your trying to bang out now, fix up your T's too it'd look alot nicer without the things coming out of them

It's not like thats some really had fill. Just a simple green fade. The T's are the whole point of this piece.

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 10:58 PM
wow, way to blow your shit up. philly hands are fucking tight if done well.

??? wat blow my shyt ?? i dont get it

__________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ ________
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/hybrid002.jpg
hybrid pic for the battel wit-empty-can-

TheToy
12-26-2009, 11:09 PM
philly hands are fucking tight if done well.

Like you said. If they're done right.

The spot ain't blown.
PVD is pretty grimey. They ain't stoppin' no bombers on them streets.

-Empty-Can-
12-26-2009, 11:14 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/battle006.jpg

hybrid battle with woonybomber

TheToy
12-26-2009, 11:20 PM
I'm diggin' that 'I'. He's like 'Ahhh, I have no arms and I'm getting crushed.'

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 11:21 PM
tht shyt is ight

_______________________________________________
critss^^^^^ who won the battel?
__________________________________________________ ____
juss found mad old graff in a box .. ima post some pics

MoistGarbageCan
12-26-2009, 11:33 PM
wow, way to blow your shit up. philly hands are fucking tight if done well.

anyone else see the irony in this?

Location: Detroit

918xCRUDe
12-26-2009, 11:35 PM
linkin park! hell yea

BlacktodaFuture
12-26-2009, 11:36 PM
^ he joined just to say that

-Empty-Can-
12-26-2009, 11:37 PM
anyone else see the irony in this?

Location: Detroit

I see what you did thar.

woonybomber
12-26-2009, 11:51 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff005.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff007.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff008.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff009.jpg
my moms name ^
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff010.jpg
juss some guy^
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff011.jpg
didnt finish^
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff012.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff013.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff014.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff015.jpg
juss sone old shyt

-Empty-Can-
12-27-2009, 12:04 AM
That 3-D one looks alright. You kinda did it wrong though.

Bumping these


http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/hybrid002.jpg
hybrid pic for the battel wit-empty-can-


http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/battle006.jpg
hybrid battle with woonybomber

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 12:11 AM
yeah i no i fcked it up thts y i didnt finish it


__________-
wOnEr


http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff017.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff018.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff019.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff020.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff021.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff022.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff023.jpg

old trowys

Zookyook
12-27-2009, 12:37 AM
that last pic is actually ur strongest i think...i like the E... but lose the multicolor fill in the other one

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 12:54 AM
yeo -empty-can- wonna juss have lik a simp battel but you do your wat tagg nd ill do mine

The Child
12-27-2009, 01:03 AM
Hope I do this right-
http://www.flickr.com/photos/44128925@N04/4105172778/

n8galicia
12-27-2009, 01:28 AM
go simpler, and make your bars the same length. restructure you letters, and don't include arrows/flares until further notice

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 10:31 AM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03176.jpg?t=1261928074

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03177.jpg?t=1261928352

^starting something in new bb

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 11:15 AM
go simpler, and make your bars the same length. restructure you letters, and don't include arrows/flares until further notice

hahah further notice mi dick

lol

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FlippingChickens
12-27-2009, 01:23 PM
Safer - the one on page 4865 on top is good,just fix the e's 3d .. that character looks aight,would like to see it when finished

Woony - your peices dont really appeal to me,just keep arrows,bubbles,drips and caracters to a minimum and work on your letters,your handstyle needs mad work,just keep practicing!

Somber - that simple came out dope,paint that shit!

didnt know witch picture i liked better,so i'll post both
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2840.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2842.jpg

ive always sucked at throw up's :\
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2838.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2839.jpg

Zookyook
12-27-2009, 01:29 PM
is that a cardboard box??? i like that last tag, makes ur O look less like an E... n i think your throwup would look better if u left ur O blank and put ur tags in there instead of in the E

FlippingChickens
12-27-2009, 01:33 PM
Yea its a carboard box,for some reason i like'd it over paper,just wish more colors worked on it...yea the o bothers me too,thanks!

kew1
12-27-2009, 01:53 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/December-27_1043.jpg

FlippingChickens
12-27-2009, 01:57 PM
u ruined that with that thing on the right bottom of the w and it goes over the w??
the left part of the e going over the k looks retarded,overall i dont like the e..keep working with that just think of were your placing those add's

LeaksOne
12-27-2009, 04:08 PM
Kew too many random extensions. its a little too busy for my taste.

Tofe GO SIMPLE! that wavy/jagged letter look is disgusting

FlippingChickens
12-27-2009, 04:15 PM
Bro ive done so many simples..i just wanna practice doing different shit,thanks anyways.

LeaksOne
12-27-2009, 04:27 PM
try simple for longer. that sketch is uneven almost all over and your letters are just akward looking. maybe thats not your style

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 04:32 PM
Woony - your peices dont really appeal to me,just keep arrows,bubbles,drips and caracters to a minimum and work on your letters,your handstyle needs mad work,just keep practicing!


mi handys need mad work ? yours do too

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 04:35 PM
Kew too many random extensions. its a little too busy for my taste.

Tofe GO SIMPLE! that wavy/jagged letter look is disgusting

hahah tht shit is disgusting!!!


and kew your shyt aint tht bad juss some os you extenions dont goo the bars r off but i like were you were going with it

kew1
12-27-2009, 04:48 PM
good looks guys i think my w was to skinny an tofe dont ever do that fill again just sayin

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 05:15 PM
no prob *****s be hattin lol

FlippingChickens
12-27-2009, 05:52 PM
good looks guys i think my w was to skinny an tofe dont ever do that fill again just sayin

why shouldnt i use that fill again? Wooney i never said my handstyle is better than anyone else's just giving u fucking crits!

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 05:56 PM
why shouldnt i use that fill again? Wooney i never said my handstyle is better than anyone else's just giving u fucking crits!

i waznt say nething i waz juss simply given critss wonna battel meh

FlippingChickens
12-27-2009, 06:22 PM
What crits,you didnt give any..handstyle battle! you pick word

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 06:33 PM
ummm is delta a gewd word ?

-Empty-Can-
12-27-2009, 06:33 PM
yeo -empty-can- wonna juss have lik a simp battel but you do your wat tagg nd ill do mine

ok sure. PM me

FlippingChickens
12-27-2009, 06:55 PM
yea delta is fine,already got it done,who do i send it to?

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 07:00 PM
juss post it on here

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 07:01 PM
juss post it on here
ill do mi now

FlippingChickens
12-27-2009, 07:10 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2846.jpg

and another one just for giggles
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2847.jpg

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 07:13 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/001.jpg

your l looks lik a z a lil bit

tht l is way better

FlippingChickens
12-27-2009, 07:34 PM
your right,i didnt even notice..that arrow and star is not looking good homie,everything else is pretty basic

a "simple" im working on..i still need to retouch some of the proportions and letters before i outline..dont think i'll be adding a 3d on this one..if there's anything off in any letter let me know,thanks
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2848.jpg

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 08:12 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff002.jpg
simp for the battel with -empty-can-


crits^^^^

i fcked up the a bad !!!!

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 08:21 PM
go simpler. lose all that extra shit

FlippingChickens
12-27-2009, 08:35 PM
word

-Empty-Can-
12-27-2009, 08:53 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/battle007.jpg

quick freestyle sketch

battle with woonybomber

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 08:55 PM
here is some thing more simpel
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff003.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 09:01 PM
the bar in the middle of the is should be larger

-Empty-Can-
12-27-2009, 09:10 PM
^who were you talking to?

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 09:19 PM
^who were you talking to?

i know right i thought he waz tlking to meh but i dont have a s in mi tagg ..

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Mw cReW !!!

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 09:36 PM
i mean E hahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaaaaaaahah ahaaaahahaaaaa niggggggggaaahhfuckaaa

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 09:45 PM
i mean E hahaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaaaaaaahah ahaaaahahaaaaa niggggggggaaahhfuckaaa

ohhh lol yeah it could be biger


ngggah fucka????0_o

-Empty-Can-
12-27-2009, 09:47 PM
^that's what she said!

lolol I had to

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 09:54 PM
^that's what she said!

lolol I had to

hahahahahah lmfao

yeo i juss did a cursive peac i think it kame out fresh

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 09:58 PM
my gf just broke up w. me bc she said im a danger to the stability of her vagina =/

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 10:02 PM
my gf just broke up w. me bc she said im a danger to the stability of her vagina =/

hahaha wat the fuuck
this is tht tagg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff004.jpg



idc wat ne one ses i lik tht shyt i never tryd tht b4 nd i think its fressh

-Empty-Can-
12-27-2009, 10:15 PM
Work on your 3D. Try to make your letters flow a bit more and I think in would look better with a lowercase R.

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 10:15 PM
yah hear homie g ass motha fucka. bitch ass bitches word son. mad gangsta ass motha fucka right hereeeeeeeeeeee hahahahahaahahah braaaa

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 10:29 PM
yah hear homie g ass motha fucka. bitch ass bitches word son. mad gangsta ass motha fucka right hereeeeeeeeeeee hahahahahaahahah braaaa

wat the fuuck r you retarded or some shyt

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 10:39 PM
juss a trowy
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff005-1.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 10:53 PM
you dont need to post everything you draw...

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 10:57 PM
you dont need to post everything you draw...

fck you shut up i have way more if you realy wont meh to i will post the fckign stupidest littel scribels on paper so juss shut the fck up
thts wat this if for if you wonna tlk bout shyt nd not post go to the fckign chat forum

you shut the fuck up too faser

faser
12-27-2009, 11:04 PM
^What the fuck are you on how the fuck is anyone meant to understand that, clown ass *****

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 11:08 PM
fck you shut up i have way more if you realy wont meh to i will post the fckign stupidest littel scribels on paper so juss shut the fck up
thts wat this if for if you wonna tlk bout shyt nd not post go to the fckign chat forum

just bc you are a little virgin kid that has nothing better to do then post pictures of his shitty highligher throws and no structure or flow peices doesnt mean you have to. fucking faggot. burn you anyday. sober or wasted

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 11:11 PM
haha virgin i dont thinks so ***** if i waz you i would juss go ask you mom *****
nah but for real fuck you im not a fcking virgin nd you need to shut the fck up
for real ill fukin find you kill you nd nd rap you sister thn ill kill her to ight
so fuck you

faser
12-27-2009, 11:17 PM
You think you're top shit coz you're not a virgin?
Ugly chicks dont count, idiot.

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 11:17 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i288/The_Game21/E-thug2.jpg

dreaken1993
12-27-2009, 11:19 PM
http://i838.photobucket.com/albums/zz307/Dreaken/scan0001-16.jpg

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 11:21 PM
haha thts funny ^^^^ for real tho i will kill you shut the fck up you bern meh hahah
yours shyt is garbidge ***** mi oneliners have more style thn ne thing you ever did

nd faser itso kay yeo i dont know y you keep tlking shyt bout your gurl

dreaken1993
12-27-2009, 11:26 PM
what?

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 11:27 PM
>_> psh. typical cocky for no reason bitch talk

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 11:28 PM
what?

not you the fagit befor you

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 11:29 PM
>_> psh. typical cocky for no reason bitch talk

fck you ***** you started it

kew1
12-27-2009, 11:35 PM
why shouldnt i use that fill again? Wooney i never said my handstyle is better than anyone else's just giving u fucking crits!

bc its retarded lookin

BlacktodaFuture
12-27-2009, 11:44 PM
fck you ***** you started it

nah you spazzed bc i said you dont have to post everything you do

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 11:47 PM
w/e mi bad i took it the roung way

dreaken1993
12-27-2009, 11:54 PM
http://i838.photobucket.com/albums/zz307/Dreaken/scan0001-16.jpg

yeah

woonybomber
12-27-2009, 11:57 PM
your handy is pretty nifftey i lik it

dreaken1993
12-27-2009, 11:59 PM
thanks
you said nifftey lol

dreaken1993
12-28-2009, 12:00 AM
thanks
you said nifftey lol

woonybomber
12-28-2009, 12:01 AM
yeah nifftey lol

FlippingChickens
12-28-2009, 01:19 AM
woony stfu u sound like a fucking idiot
keep that shit to p.m's or battle,quit filling each page with senseless bullshit
i agree with black,you dont gotta post every drawing you do,i only post 30% of what i draw..someone crit this please,any letters or proportions that should be retouched let me know
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2848.jpg

kew i still dont understand how that fill looks bad,whatever everyone has different opinions

hpir
12-28-2009, 01:44 AM
tofy- make your letters closer together
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kanone-1.jpg
crits?

Gam
12-28-2009, 01:50 AM
kan- like the A throw and K simp, get a handie going, but not bad. Not digin the N on the lower one.
Tofe, too much dead space tighten it up exspecialy between the O and the F.Edit: add shadow might make up for some dead space.

CrustOner
12-28-2009, 02:31 AM
http://i47.tinypic.com/4soavp.jpg

Trestoner707
12-28-2009, 02:33 AM
i like that bro. i just got a perscription for vicodin so i should be getting on that pretty soon

Bets369R
12-28-2009, 02:35 AM
i like it. i dont like how your ESI all connect to eachother, and i dont like how your E is half hidden.

still dope though.

KidReny!
12-28-2009, 02:38 AM
http://i47.tinypic.com/4soavp.jpg

thats sick, i fucks with that character haha,

dreaken1993
12-28-2009, 03:33 AM
he looks like a cracked out will smith

-Empty-Can-
12-28-2009, 12:31 PM
Tofe- I love that T.

MoistGarbageCan
12-28-2009, 12:32 PM
bite it. he'll never know!

sinkilla1
12-28-2009, 03:12 PM
any body wanna do a friendly throwie or handy exchange battle

FlippingChickens
12-28-2009, 03:56 PM
could have been cleaner..fuck it you get the point
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2855.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2851.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2849.jpg

suparjafar
12-28-2009, 04:36 PM
simplify the handy a little more without edges idk how to explain it make it flow more and close up your throw

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0276.jpg
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0275.jpg

havent drawn in a week. =/

-Empty-Can-
12-28-2009, 04:44 PM
Make your R look more like an R. That kinda looks like an A with penis on the left.

FlippingChickens
12-28-2009, 04:57 PM
simplify the handy a little more without edges idk how to explain it make it flow more and close up your throw


? i dont write sin,i was doing a exchange..your throwy hasnt improved man,keep practicing.

Zookyook
12-28-2009, 05:07 PM
i think roes is improving a bit... all i ever see is a pen throw though, use some colors mayn! ... i like the R but u should make the bottom of the E kinda like the kick of the R so they match a little

sinkilla1
12-28-2009, 05:16 PM
didnt want to post this but oh well here ya go and a straight i m bump
http://i47.tinypic.com/1234ltj.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/23wl8b6.jpg

Trestoner707
12-28-2009, 06:16 PM
your excused from posting sinkilla lol
roes - use the throwie i gave u as a reference
flipping chickens - no i dont get it

Trestoner707
12-28-2009, 07:01 PM
your excused from posting sinkilla lol
roes - use the throwie i gave u as a reference
flipping chickens - no i dont get it

sinkilla1
12-28-2009, 07:28 PM
u didnt even like the second one :(

prefer
12-28-2009, 11:40 PM
oh shit!!! prefers sketch before hand!!!!! enjoy, crits whaat yall think bout it man i need crits asapp!!!! haha

sinkilla1
12-28-2009, 11:52 PM
wats it say

prefer
12-28-2009, 11:54 PM
Awesome:]:]:]:]:]!!!!!!!!!!

sinkilla1
12-28-2009, 11:58 PM
no fucking way lol thats sweet it looks nice but the pics kinda blurry so i cant see the detail but a cool style none the less

FlippingChickens
12-29-2009, 12:16 AM
Niceee

prefer
12-29-2009, 12:27 AM
thanks mang:]

-Empty-Can-
12-29-2009, 12:29 AM
Blurry pic but your 3D looks kinda off. Otherwise, dope sketch.

prefer
12-29-2009, 12:32 AM
^haha word blurry fuckin pu sorry bout that one nd yeah fuckin got lazy on da fuckin 3-D haha just wanted to finish the damn thing you know.

Hearr!
12-29-2009, 02:20 AM
I haven't posted shit in forever. not that any one cares any way.

http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/IMG_0001-4.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/IMG-14.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/IMG_0002-5.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/IMG-16.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/IMG_0002-6.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/IMG_0001-8.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv343/aktreonest/IMG_0002-7.jpg

last one was done today. the one before that I painted today.

Zookyook
12-29-2009, 02:25 AM
that top one has really nice color shading, it fades real nice... but u need to work on letter structure id say... u have skills just apply them where theyre needed

Hearr!
12-29-2009, 02:33 AM
yeah man, I getcha. I'm starting to straighten my bars out, and get the structure bangin' again.

Vagrant
12-29-2009, 02:34 AM
Someone exchange with me

Zookyook
12-29-2009, 02:38 AM
i might be able to tomorrow if im not busy, im drunk and tired... ill let u know... unless u think im too toy hah

Vagrant
12-29-2009, 02:48 AM
I'm not that good.
And I want to exchange nao! Not tomorrow.
Anyone?