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SINoner
04-01-2006, 05:29 PM
that shits gay...

SiMpUhL
04-01-2006, 05:32 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter+Apr 1 2006, 06:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Apr 1 2006, 06:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-running man@Apr 1 2006, 06:06 PM
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/runpencilsketch.jpg

pencil sketch. crits please so i can fix it before i color it.
o.0 i like it alot but utline it cause the pencil makes it hard ot look at [/b][/quote]
personally im a big fan of straight lines. some of ur lines are distorted-not feelin that....i get bull all the time about how i need to start simpler-so im gunna giv u the same ;)

Nosypainter
04-01-2006, 05:32 PM
Originally posted by SINoner@Apr 1 2006, 06:29 PM
that shits gay...
so is your sig ZING&#33;

running man
04-01-2006, 05:34 PM
thanks ass.

Nosypainter
04-01-2006, 05:47 PM
Originally posted by running man@Apr 1 2006, 06:34 PM
thanks ass.
i wasnt talking to you, but i do have a nice ass thanks for looking *blows kiss*

505 artist
04-01-2006, 05:56 PM
this is the style that i want to learn more i think the a is the best letter the e and m are wak :lol:

any comments ?

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/DCAM6781.jpg

AMAZ tbscrew
04-01-2006, 05:57 PM
that style is wack.

running man
04-01-2006, 06:04 PM
i wanst talkin to you either nosy, thanks for tha comment. i was talkin to sin

Rend
04-01-2006, 06:09 PM
Originally posted by WAKE&#045;1@Apr 1 2006, 12:51 PM
http://img430.imageshack.us/img430/6537/wake61zg.jpg
make a line go through the middle limb of the e.

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 06:29 PM
like this

http://img309.imageshack.us/img309/8069/wake64zo.jpg

AMAZ tbscrew
04-01-2006, 06:30 PM
yea

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 06:31 PM
that dont look right. y would i have a line in the middle of an E. it doesnt fit

AMAZ tbscrew
04-01-2006, 06:38 PM
yes it dose...it flows with ur w.

got bored haha
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/wake64zo.jpg

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 06:42 PM
u doin my work for me AMAZ :D :D lol

AMAZ tbscrew
04-01-2006, 06:46 PM
lol i got bored man..im stuck in this room cuz im on probation and i dont wana go out and fuck up again lol so yea..oh and if u want u can write waxe....if u put a line like u did in the e...but on the k..u make and x...i already tried it haha

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 06:49 PM
you right i didnt think bout writin waxe

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 06:50 PM
hahaha lol :lol:

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/384/wake67mf.jpg

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 06:59 PM
what do u guys think of this. its just an easy throw

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/1823/wakethrowup9gr.jpg

Sluts_r_us
04-01-2006, 07:35 PM
crayon LOL

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 07:47 PM
colored pencil actually. looks like crayon, must have happened when i scanned it

ceroX24X
04-01-2006, 07:58 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+Apr 1 2006, 01:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ Apr 1 2006, 01:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ceroX24X@Apr 1 2006, 02:10 AM
some stuff i got any crits? feedback?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0304.jpg
simple

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0305.jpg
another simple one but i fucked up on letter size

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0306.jpg
simple with extensions

where u from? cuz theres a cees in jersey wit the same style [/b][/quote]
i live in the bay area ive never heard of another cees damn it this sucks i dont want to change my name.

Sluts_r_us
04-01-2006, 08:12 PM
yup wit the exact same style too...and wake yeah like amaz says scanners usually fuck everything up

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 08:23 PM
scanners all i got. no digital cam :(

505 artist
04-01-2006, 08:48 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 1 2006, 06:57 PM
that style is wack.
good man i wont do it no more lol
ill do wild shit like i do most of the time i just went different on this one dunno whay

Rend
04-01-2006, 09:28 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01375.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01376.jpg

hungr
04-01-2006, 09:32 PM
shady peice
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P1200001.jpg

Rend
04-01-2006, 09:32 PM
Originally posted by WAKE&#045;1@Apr 1 2006, 07:29 PM
like this

http://img309.imageshack.us/img309/8069/wake64zo.jpg
yea thats riGHT&#33; Finally
see thats how i like to do my e lol http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01364.jpg

u can make the a better. like instead of an x. replace it with an A. A capital round a. thats a trick i seen. do u see it?

see man, u got good letters. be creative with it

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 09:33 PM
whoa hungry i like that. is it with prismas

beefgerky
04-01-2006, 09:37 PM
looks like decos. HUNGR, clean it up a bit and make the end capital, other than that, pretty dope.

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 10:06 PM
alright i think this is my best drawing yet. i havent added 3d or fill but i think the letters are pretty good. wat do u guys think???

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/6996/wake79kh.jpg

AMAZ tbscrew
04-01-2006, 10:09 PM
whoa...wtf howd u do that...lmao ur style went from block letters 2 suttin half ass decent......damn lol

edit: whod u bite?

Rend
04-01-2006, 10:13 PM
i liked ur throw better. on ur throw use an A instead of an x on ur A. and the like on the outer potion of the throw make the line thicker. then add a shadow. then add a force field. put ur tag under it. date it. flix it. post it. SHAZAM&#33;

T R E O
04-01-2006, 10:13 PM
Originally posted by ceroX24X+Apr 1 2006, 08:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ceroX24X @ Apr 1 2006, 08:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 1 2006, 01:17 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ceroX24X@Apr 1 2006, 02:10 AM
some stuff i got any crits? feedback?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0304.jpg
simple

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0305.jpg
another simple one but i fucked up on letter size

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0306.jpg
simple with extensions

where u from? cuz theres a cees in jersey wit the same style
i live in the bay area ive never heard of another cees damn it this sucks i dont want to change my name. [/b][/quote]
where in the bay?cause im down in frisco.

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 10:13 PM
ya i know its like i just got it i was sketching. then i just started drawing lines and it turned into that. :lol:

oh and no i didnt bite. id never to that shit

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 10:14 PM
plus before i was just doin strait lines now i started to curve em and stuff

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 10:36 PM
just photoshoped some color in.

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/2354/wake84xi.jpg

T R E O
04-01-2006, 10:42 PM
your "w,k" look sketchy.

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 10:44 PM
how can i make it better?

Rend
04-01-2006, 10:51 PM
spend some time on it. get a ruler. make to lines paralell and even. put the letters in there and dont make them come out. that way it makes it even. then try make the letters flow together to match. try using bars on the letters to make them. thats what i do. BARSSS. nobody taught me them. i was just drawing around and learned it.

Rend
04-01-2006, 10:52 PM
read my other post on the other page TOO

WAKE-1
04-01-2006, 11:01 PM
wat page. 636?

Rend
04-02-2006, 12:22 AM
yea at the bottum

ceroX24X
04-02-2006, 03:39 AM
im from san jose. well i dunno man i dont really want to change my name but style i can work on so yeah but if i think of a better name then ill definately change it cause i want to be original.

obseen
04-02-2006, 03:50 AM
Originally posted by Feliks@Apr 1 2006, 04:40 PM
here kitty kitty...
http://www.5images.com/uploads/09d8b548bd.jpg (http://www.5images.com)
fukin dope

Rend
04-02-2006, 04:16 AM
i like the tribal design. how the heck do ppo do that shiz?

chase one
04-02-2006, 06:38 AM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/5588/chaseone0050ln.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my latest sketch comments???

SiLeNt-BoB
04-02-2006, 07:16 AM
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/1531/imag00419ye.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for a battel FO&#39; SHO&#39;

Mse
04-02-2006, 10:37 AM
word to ya motha

WAKE-1
04-02-2006, 10:48 AM
REND. on 636 at the very bottom u said u liked my throw. was u talkin bout the WK or the Wake ?

WAKE-1
04-02-2006, 10:53 AM
crits

http://img416.imageshack.us/img416/9348/wakethrowup9eg.jpg

running man
04-02-2006, 11:24 AM
some more shit from the book.

-the run bomb
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/bubblyrunbomb.jpg

-first wild thing ive tried
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/runnerwild1.jpg

-a full wall im gonna do
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/fullwallrun.jpg

this is a new name ive been workin wit. tell me what yall think. its hacker one.

-pen sketch from bein bored at work
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/hackpensketch.jpg

-first hacker sketch
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/hackerpencil1.jpg

-pen sketch re-drawn and colored
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/hackeronegreen.jpg

tear it apart guys.

WAKE-1
04-02-2006, 11:26 AM
dont try wildstyle yet. your not to bad tho

running man
04-02-2006, 11:37 AM
link to tha green hack. its too small to really see.

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/run...keronegreen.jpg (http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/hackeronegreen.jpg)

running man
04-02-2006, 11:37 AM
nm. that didnt work either. ill repost it bigger later.

MUSASHI
04-02-2006, 12:11 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/bignast.jpg

flclnaruto1213
04-02-2006, 12:22 PM
my camera has been gay lately , thats why i havent posted shit.
but heres some recent stuff i took with my camera phone

throwies im working on
http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/6323/b7wt.png (http://imageshack.us)

http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/2052/jkjk1cy.png (http://imageshack.us)

something i did
http://img304.imageshack.us/img304/6626/untitled0gz2.png (http://imageshack.us)

and a new concept im trying
http://img304.imageshack.us/img304/5025/concept6xt.png (http://imageshack.us)


crits?

WAKE-1
04-02-2006, 12:33 PM
cmon guys give me crits :(

AoAssis
04-02-2006, 12:37 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Apr 2 2006, 10:37 AM
word to ya motha
ice ice baby (in the background)* to cold to cold*, ice ice baby *to cold to cold*

:lol:

Feliks
04-02-2006, 12:43 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Apr 2 2006, 12:11 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/bignast.jpg
Mu-mu, you ruined that piece with the freakin&#39; magnet. Get rid of it&#33;&#33;
The who piece is kinda sketch but I like the idea. the letters flow well.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-02-2006, 12:44 PM
Originally posted by WAKE&#045;1@Apr 2 2006, 12:33 PM
cmon guys give me crits :(
http://www.lockitupoffroad.com/Clubpics/hiddensetting1.jpg

flclnaruto1213
04-02-2006, 12:44 PM
you realize the magnet is his U right?

AoAssis
04-02-2006, 12:46 PM
naruto i like the first one alot, just change the D i dont really like it

Mse
04-02-2006, 12:46 PM
no really musashi work on your letters
work hard

AoAssis
04-02-2006, 12:48 PM
its all been said 100+ times, mushi is just gana do his own shit, the way he wants to. So i dont even try and say anyting about his shit anymore B)

Mse
04-02-2006, 12:58 PM
cool and all that yadda yadda yadda
you can say graffiti is art but then percieve it as an art
you would draw a stilll life with a dancing banana
you have to learn the rules and laws of graffiti before you can break them
anyone who doesnt is (no offense to anybody) just someone who failed at doing some dope letters so hides behind a mask of absrtact bullshit
im sooo not aware of my surrroundings hehehah

flclnaruto1213
04-02-2006, 01:01 PM
^word.

AoAssis
04-02-2006, 01:08 PM
I like Mse.

DynamiteBoy
04-02-2006, 01:14 PM
Originally posted by ceroX24X+Apr 1 2006, 08:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ceroX24X @ Apr 1 2006, 08:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 1 2006, 01:17 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ceroX24X@Apr 1 2006, 02:10 AM
some stuff i got any crits? feedback?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0304.jpg
simple

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0305.jpg
another simple one but i fucked up on letter size

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0306.jpg
simple with extensions

where u from? cuz theres a cees in jersey wit the same style
i live in the bay area ive never heard of another cees damn it this sucks i dont want to change my name. [/b][/quote]
if you live in SF, wanna hit up some yards sometime?

AMAZ tbscrew
04-02-2006, 01:16 PM
p.m him.

Mse
04-02-2006, 01:17 PM
yeah bsq *****z 4 life
*does little handshake thing*

DR FORCE
04-02-2006, 01:18 PM
Originally posted by DynamiteBoy+Apr 2 2006, 01:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DynamiteBoy @ Apr 2 2006, 01:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ceroX24X@Apr 1 2006, 08:58 PM

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 1 2006, 01:17 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ceroX24X@Apr 1 2006, 02:10 AM
some stuff i got any crits? feedback?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0304.jpg
simple

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0305.jpg
another simple one but i fucked up on letter size

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0306.jpg
simple with extensions

where u from? cuz theres a cees in jersey wit the same style
i live in the bay area ive never heard of another cees damn it this sucks i dont want to change my name.
if you live in SF, wanna hit up some yards sometime? [/b][/quote]
You alle live in amerika i live in Belgium :lol:

:P thats al littel distence
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beceause rabit wont alsouw world power
Help Rabit and copy him in your topic

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FUCK BUNNY HEIL RABIT :P

AMAZ tbscrew
04-02-2006, 01:43 PM
ur such a fuckin idiot dj force make ur sig ur actual sig instead of copying and pasting it everytime...u herb some words from the crazy bitch


http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/dumbass2.jpg

WAKE-1
04-02-2006, 02:38 PM
http://img303.imageshack.us/img303/5495/wake105id.jpgadded a 3d

AlmoSt
04-02-2006, 02:46 PM
Good job wake man, that is def one of the best pieces ive seen from u

heres my poopy, crits please :D
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P4020806.jpg

WAKE-1
04-02-2006, 02:48 PM
like the m. 3d looks good

Torrent
04-02-2006, 02:54 PM
My homie wants crits on his. Anyone have any?

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/1000/imgp3735upload8aw.jpg

Sluts_r_us
04-02-2006, 03:05 PM
yeah fuckin roll that shit up, put it in a SECRET place and NEVER speak of it again.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-02-2006, 03:15 PM
dang pesk calm ur tits man.....hmmm ye i got no comments

Sluts_r_us
04-02-2006, 03:19 PM
ill pass on that one....

WAKE-1
04-02-2006, 03:33 PM
added an outline. think i milked this drawin for alll its worth now

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/6579/wake112km.jpg

rek
04-02-2006, 04:17 PM
i got a shitty camera

WAKE-1
04-02-2006, 04:23 PM
theres way to much goin on. make it simpilar

AlmoSt
04-02-2006, 05:07 PM
Sluts r u sayin that shit about mine? rolling it up and shit? wtf dude, fuck u...post up ur shit i havnt seen any of it for a while&#33;

AMAZ tbscrew
04-02-2006, 05:11 PM
....better then ur shit so idk why u bitchin man

Sluts_r_us
04-02-2006, 05:12 PM
thats cuz im done with posting on sites....

rona2
04-02-2006, 05:18 PM
*edit*

MUSASHI
04-02-2006, 05:20 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/STAR.jpg

see I can do it..i&#39;m just way past that shit man...

Mse
04-02-2006, 06:06 PM
no offense but your not way past that shit
those are just capital letters with 3d drawn on a different plane
what you need to do is build style
the width fluxuations in your tags/pieces show me that your a toy
you started a relativly short time ago you have improved but you should be making most of your shit like that^ not that normal crap you do
thats just my opinion, i know it sounds like im jealous or i dunno what but its not my fault everyones riding your nuts
peace

Logikalone
04-02-2006, 06:22 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/bschampbattlerd.jpg
^^^been a long ass time since I sketched anything.

aoime
04-02-2006, 07:09 PM
i must be fucking freakin, but does that ^^ picture above have some odd shit on it or somthing, like a fade of seafoam green that appears when you first see it?

Scared the shit out of me, saw it twice&#33;&#33;

Rend
04-02-2006, 07:10 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/65.jpg

for an exchange
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/66.jpg

MUSASHI
04-02-2006, 07:30 PM
seriously you can&#39;t hate this one too much...


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/star1.jpg

Feliks
04-02-2006, 07:35 PM
http://www.5images.com/uploads/65c01a5efa.jpg (http://www.5images.com)

Sluts_r_us
04-02-2006, 07:44 PM
musashi that sketch is herendous...how can you look at that and say that?

Rend
04-02-2006, 07:45 PM
Originally posted by Rend@Apr 2 2006, 07:10 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/65.jpg

for an exchange
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/66.jpg
any comments or critz?

Sluts_r_us
04-02-2006, 07:47 PM
you should stick wit the style on the first one...thats my favorite one you have ever posted but why does it matter?, you dont listen to peoples advice/crits...

WAKE-1
04-02-2006, 07:55 PM
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5993/wake117kl.jpg

didnt get any crits

AMAZ tbscrew
04-02-2006, 07:56 PM
uhhh good job?

beefgerky
04-02-2006, 08:06 PM
or not.

SiLeNt-BoB
04-02-2006, 08:07 PM
dont really like it mate..try going more simple..

MUSASHI
04-02-2006, 08:16 PM
uh your probly right ...being a non-conformist such as myself I do that alot

Logikalone
04-02-2006, 08:19 PM
Originally posted by Logikalone@Apr 2 2006, 06:22 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/bschampbattlerd.jpg
^^^been a long ass time since I sketched anything.
crit me

WAKE-1
04-02-2006, 08:36 PM
alright thanks guys

>skea<
04-02-2006, 08:43 PM
logikalone - bad shadowadn it shouldnt go over the other letters and work on ur letter structure

Seek139
04-02-2006, 08:45 PM
i got acouple here check this one http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=4/9115494142.jpg&s=x11
and a double pager
http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=4/9120435760.jpg&s=x11

crit it i love being told i suck... hehe

DÜM
04-02-2006, 08:46 PM
To be a non-conformist you have to understand what you&#39;re not conforming with. Once you get down &#39;normal&#39; graff stuff..ten add your own style.

Boodabang923
04-02-2006, 08:48 PM
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/8211/sketchessercsimp1ek.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

keeping it simple right now. I like the straight letter ones the most. I just don&#39;t know where to go from here. Any tips?

BTW- ive tried more advanced stuff and i always end up with two hot letters that flow but the other 2 look like shit. Anyone got any tips on flow?

sibil juggalo
04-02-2006, 08:51 PM
i dont know its hard to explain flow you just work with your letters until they go together its something you have to do on your own really

Logikalone
04-02-2006, 09:07 PM
Originally posted by Logikalone+Apr 2 2006, 08:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Logikalone @ Apr 2 2006, 08:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Logikalone@Apr 2 2006, 06:22 PM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/bschampbattlerd.jpg
^^^been a long ass time since I sketched anything.
crit me [/b][/quote]
bumpty bump

Sluts_r_us
04-02-2006, 09:09 PM
if you dont get crits then dont keep bumping it, just keep sketching and post some new shit up....fuck off and sketch

Save
04-02-2006, 09:31 PM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2684/set6ki.jpg

I havn&#39;t posted in a while, And I finally sketched for the first time in months. Any crits would be good, I&#39;m gonna hopefully paint this somewheres discreet just want to get it sketched out before i do. I&#39;m not really diggin the &#39;T&#39; so if anyone has any ideas on how to prove please share.

MUSASHI
04-02-2006, 09:55 PM
Sluts and you other guy&#39;s ...I understand where you are coming from...so i guess it would help you all to understand where i am going with this...My work...care or not ,I am not doing this to be a good graffiti artist,i am doing this to become a great person,not to you ,not to me,not to anyone that is even alive yet...all that to say this...to the rest of y&#39;all if you wanna follow the rules don&#39;t do anything i do,but if you wanna be something out of the ordinary you aint gotta listen to a Goddamned thing but you....you know if you suck or not...and I do alright for myself...nuff said on the matter...


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/1musa.jpg

Save
04-02-2006, 10:04 PM
Damn it Musashi, you better not steal the light, I want some crits on my sketch. lol

Sluts_r_us
04-02-2006, 10:05 PM
Originally posted by Save@Apr 2 2006, 09:31 PM
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2684/set6ki.jpg

I havn&#39;t posted in a while, And I finally sketched for the first time in months. Any crits would be good, I&#39;m gonna hopefully paint this somewheres discreet just want to get it sketched out before i do. I&#39;m not really diggin the &#39;T&#39; so if anyone has any ideas on how to prove please share.
no no no...setup is a famous jersey writer...

AoAssis
04-02-2006, 10:06 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Apr 2 2006, 01:17 PM
yeah bsq *****z 4 life
*does little handshake thing*
does the little hand shake thing back *little rusty on it since havent done it in a while*

Save
04-02-2006, 10:08 PM
fuck me, I&#39;ve been tagging Setup for a few months now.


what if I leave off the "UP" and just use "SET" lol.

+HyBriD+
04-02-2006, 10:23 PM
damn ive been away all week & i have 2 say there has been sum great stuff i jus saw/ nice musashi & every one else

Feliks
04-02-2006, 10:30 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Apr 2 2006, 12:22 PM
my camera has been gay lately , thats why i havent posted shit.
but heres some recent stuff i took with my camera phone

throwies im working on
http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/6323/b7wt.png (http://imageshack.us)

http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/2052/jkjk1cy.png (http://imageshack.us)

something i did
http://img304.imageshack.us/img304/6626/untitled0gz2.png (http://imageshack.us)

and a new concept im trying
http://img304.imageshack.us/img304/5025/concept6xt.png (http://imageshack.us)


crits?
Yo shit guy&#33;&#33;
That shit is dope as fuck.
Oh wait...the x? with the &#39;user-posted image&#39;?
Naw man, you bit that.... :rolleyes:

Save
04-02-2006, 10:31 PM
WTF are you talking about, the Images are there...

MF Feed Letter
04-02-2006, 11:45 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0863.jpg
simple

MUSASHI
04-02-2006, 11:50 PM
^^^ uhuh,nice mf

+HyBriD+
04-02-2006, 11:58 PM
nice simple

Select_One
04-03-2006, 02:31 AM
Originally posted by Save@Apr 2 2006, 10:08 PM
fuck me, I&#39;ve been tagging Setup for a few months now.


what if I leave off the "UP" and just use "SET" lol.
Set is too common. But you cant write setup. so mix and match something else. Add numbers or somethin.

http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/07052005180755setup.jpg

http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/setup031011.jpg


Like it would really matter if you live somewhere else but w/e.

Hater-AiD~>
04-03-2006, 06:15 AM
wake i just have to comment and say you are progressing fast

WAKE-1
04-03-2006, 08:54 AM
your pretty good wit a can. too bad bout the name

DÜM
04-03-2006, 08:58 AM
How about Upset?

vare_187uk
04-03-2006, 11:08 AM
in my view thats the same set of letters just muddled around and still easy for him to bite setup if he really couldnt think of anything else

but still upset nice tag and all that&#33;&#33;&#33; ;)

flclnaruto1213
04-03-2006, 02:56 PM
thanks feliks

Sluts_r_us
04-03-2006, 03:00 PM
yeah fund im likin that 1st 1 just work on the d imo....i like the last one as well :D

beefgerky
04-03-2006, 03:05 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Apr 2 2006, 11:45 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0863.jpg
simple
bwomp.

Seek139
04-03-2006, 03:06 PM
Originally posted by Seek139@Apr 2 2006, 08:45 PM
i got acouple here check this one http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=4/9115494142.jpg&s=x11
and a double pager
http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=4/9120435760.jpg&s=x11

crit it i love being told i suck... hehe
*bump*

neer
04-03-2006, 03:09 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky+Apr 3 2006, 03:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beefgerky @ Apr 3 2006, 03:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MF Feed Letter@Apr 2 2006, 11:45 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0863.jpg
simple
bwomp. [/b][/quote]
FUCK i was working on a new thing with the little spikeys (or something sortof liek them) and now if i post ill be biting

flclnaruto1213
04-03-2006, 03:11 PM
ok first i KNOW the letters suck, i was just trying a new color scheme and didnt feel like working on the letters
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/7255/040306160419fh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits anyway?

vare_187uk
04-03-2006, 03:12 PM
lmfao neer :lol: :lol: :lol: B)

neer
04-03-2006, 03:12 PM
woa...work those letters first then color

the letters make the color alot worse in my oppinion

neer
04-03-2006, 03:14 PM
just my luck haha maby ill switch some of it up

vare_187uk
04-03-2006, 03:14 PM
or the other way round in my view

the letters come first man

then the color

you imagine painting a white piece with black outline
them letters wouldnt stand in a hof for a day let along on the streets

forget colour work your black n white outlines first &#33;&#33;&#33;

flclnaruto1213
04-03-2006, 03:18 PM
you guys are talking to me right?

Mse
04-03-2006, 03:18 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis+Apr 2 2006, 10:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ Apr 2 2006, 10:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Mse@Apr 2 2006, 01:17 PM
yeah bsq *****z 4 life
*does little handshake thing*
does the little hand shake thing back *little rusty on it since havent done it in a while* [/b][/quote]
YE AHHHHHH
i noticed you added me you porn obsessed little boy
............

AoAssis
04-03-2006, 05:29 PM
what human being does not like porn? (regular porn)

MF Feed Letter
04-03-2006, 05:33 PM
Originally posted by neer+Apr 3 2006, 03:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (neer @ Apr 3 2006, 03:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by beefgerky@Apr 3 2006, 03:05 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-MF Feed Letter@Apr 2 2006, 11:45 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0863.jpg
simple
bwomp.
FUCK i was working on a new thing with the little spikeys (or something sortof liek them) and now if i post ill be biting [/b][/quote]
what spiky things are you tlaking about?

Boodabang923
04-03-2006, 05:51 PM
http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/5601/imgp05937xy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me what you think. I think i should remove the extensions on c and s and make the weenie part of the r and e bigger.

SINoner
04-03-2006, 05:56 PM
http://img432.imageshack.us/img432/2506/seniss8kk.jpg

Ume
04-03-2006, 06:06 PM
now if i could only do this kinda stuff with my own name. :(
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006120.jpg

MF Feed Letter
04-03-2006, 06:16 PM
i dont liek the a...doesnt really go wiht the other letters

Ume
04-03-2006, 06:20 PM
the A&#39;s the only i like out of them all...i thought the E didn&#39;t go with the rest, oh well i showed her like 4 different things and that was what she picked.

WAKE-1
04-03-2006, 06:21 PM
ya the e and the t r like...flashier than the a. not too bad tho

running man
04-03-2006, 06:38 PM
some new shit...

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/runredgrey.jpg

...crits?

AoAssis
04-03-2006, 06:42 PM
Originally posted by Ume@Apr 3 2006, 06:20 PM
the A&#39;s the only i like out of them all...i thought the E didn&#39;t go with the rest, oh well i showed her like 4 different things and that was what she picked.
whos the special someone?

Sluts_r_us
04-03-2006, 06:47 PM
his sister...

Mse
04-03-2006, 06:52 PM
my pistol
porn is only good if there is excessive violence and bloodshed
this statement is false therefoe making it true

DynamiteBoy
04-03-2006, 07:36 PM
Originally posted by DynamiteBoy@Mar 31 2006, 08:58 PM
uhmm just some sketches nothing fancy.
http://img327.imageshack.us/img327/5849/img00087la.jpg
http://img327.imageshack.us/img327/7700/img00097op.jpg

i know i messed up on alot of the 3-D. any crits?
crits?

MF Feed Letter
04-03-2006, 07:38 PM
dont connect all your letters especially the way you did it wiht that black white one


http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0864.jpg
for cor battle

cess!
04-03-2006, 07:39 PM
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/LL004.jpg

Suuuup

Ume
04-03-2006, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis+Apr 3 2006, 07:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ Apr 3 2006, 07:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ume@Apr 3 2006, 06:20 PM
the A&#39;s the only i like out of them all...i thought the E didn&#39;t go with the rest, oh well i showed her like 4 different things and that was what she picked.
whos the special someone? [/b][/quote]

his sister...


ahahahahahaha that made me laugh :lol:

MF Feed Letter
04-03-2006, 07:44 PM
where you been cess? and im liken that except for the purple in the 3d and i think the extension on the bottom of the s should be to the end..if that makes sense

Rend
04-03-2006, 07:46 PM
something different im trying out. wut u think?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/67.jpg

kill
04-03-2006, 07:50 PM
n looks like a w

SINoner
04-03-2006, 07:51 PM
Originally posted by kill@Apr 3 2006, 07:50 PM
n looks like a w
thats what I was thinkin

*~ANZIO~*
04-03-2006, 07:54 PM
you make me proud considering wut you were like a while back

Ume
04-03-2006, 08:06 PM
Originally posted by cess&#33;@Apr 3 2006, 08:39 PM
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/LL004.jpg

Suuuup
i wanna see that on a train.



MF, i liked your other stuff more then that pink one.


Rend, hot.

cess!
04-03-2006, 08:37 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Apr 3 2006, 07:44 PM
where you been cess? and im liken that except for the purple in the 3d and i think the extension on the bottom of the s should be to the end..if that makes sense
been extremely busy..i barely can draw anymore
i didnt know which color to put in the 3-d..i was thinkin green but ehh
i think that cor cudda been much nicer if the o was closer to the c

flclnaruto1213
04-03-2006, 09:14 PM
guess what everyone. i am now known as FETUS. i have grown out of fund. so ...yeah. be happy for me&#33;

leaks
04-03-2006, 09:22 PM
yo yooo does anyone know wat white markers stays up over prismas

neer
04-03-2006, 09:41 PM
decocolor white paintmarker or a whiteout marker

Select_One
04-03-2006, 09:43 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/PAUS2-1.jpg

Paus.Twoooo

kill
04-03-2006, 10:24 PM
nice piece
but the karak im not feelin it

MUSASHI
04-03-2006, 11:01 PM
here&#39;s some more crap for y&#39;all to tell me not to do...the white on the "M" is f&#39;d cuz the white is a white out pen cuz my white paint pen is used all up...i know y&#39;all hate my structure but from now on just comment on the coloring..unless the structure is so dadgumn awful you cant control the urge to speak out against it...love


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/bb.jpg

kill
04-03-2006, 11:05 PM
i like ur u

SINoner
04-03-2006, 11:28 PM
Originally posted by SINoner@Apr 3 2006, 05:56 PM
http://img432.imageshack.us/img432/2506/seniss8kk.jpg
bump bitches

MUSASHI
04-03-2006, 11:30 PM
I saw that i felt it ...and,you should be spanked for sexual harrassment

K.A.B.
04-03-2006, 11:40 PM
only been writin for a month or so is it coo or gay
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c19/CallMeBirdE/SUC50015.jpg

SINoner
04-03-2006, 11:44 PM
Originally posted by K.A.B.@Apr 3 2006, 11:40 PM
only been writin for a month or so is it coo or gay
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c19/CallMeBirdE/SUC50015.jpg
This is about your skill level (http://mindgem.nu/board/) I reccomend going there and staying there.

Vorce
04-03-2006, 11:53 PM
I say it&#39;s not all that bad

Vorce
04-03-2006, 11:54 PM
musashi your pretty tight

Karma
04-03-2006, 11:58 PM
No worries Musa you got your shit down, itlooks NOTHING like anyone elses style i have ever seen. Your shit is straight, dont you use Kilz now? How is that working for you?

Nosypainter
04-04-2006, 12:15 AM
Originally posted by running man@Apr 1 2006, 07:04 PM
i wanst talkin to you either nosy, thanks for tha comment. i was talkin to sin
Flips him a thumbs up ^^ i was just being a smart ass

Nosypainter
04-04-2006, 12:21 AM
Originally posted by SINoner+Apr 3 2006, 11:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SINoner @ Apr 3 2006, 11:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-K.A.B.@Apr 3 2006, 11:40 PM
only been writin for a month or so is it coo or gay
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c19/CallMeBirdE/SUC50015.jpg
This is about your skill level (http://mindgem.nu/board/) I reccomend going there and staying there. [/b][/quote]
not bad i like it alot

ffx
04-04-2006, 01:29 AM
kinda bad quality (camera phone)
and yes i know someone else on this board writes spin but i didn&#39;t find that out till now.

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/8897/dsc000474pp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Rend
04-04-2006, 02:54 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01393.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01385.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01382.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01378.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01395.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01396.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01401.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01403.jpg

Frends tags:
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01394.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01392.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01381.jpg

This part was pretty fun. Went to the water tank. Basically hiked up a mountain. Wasnt prepared with good stuff but soon will be getting spray etc... Just practicing and getting used to that adreneline rush and stuff
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01402.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01403.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01404.jpg

saw this along the way:
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01388.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01390.jpg

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g250/fluentkrylon3/DSC01391.jpg

Tode
04-04-2006, 02:58 AM
nice rend

Nosypainter
04-04-2006, 04:57 AM
yeah nice rend

Mse
04-04-2006, 05:18 AM
no not nice
your handstyle is ugly as FUCk

Seti
04-04-2006, 05:28 AM
yeh cheers rend for all those useluss pics of hndstyles,

Jank
04-04-2006, 07:08 AM
musashi that on the top of the last page is one of ur bets so far in my opinion..the letters aint bad n its looks nice.... keep going...

bin out for a few months..first try again...probs shudnt hav tried nu shit after a break but meh... obv some of it dont flow..like that B dont fit wit the other letters but wateva..for a battle:Kabey, comments?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/backagain.jpg

Seti
04-04-2006, 08:41 AM
jus someink i been workin wit, tinkin of makin it into stix, crits???
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/stix.jpg

CL3ver1
04-04-2006, 08:45 AM
ew bitch you suck.

Seti
04-04-2006, 08:48 AM
ha..i jus love constructive crits... go fuck ur self

near
04-04-2006, 08:52 AM
uhh just wanted a few crits on this new throwup says &#39;NE&#39;

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/bspic.jpg

Seti
04-04-2006, 09:16 AM
like it mate, i tnink u shld have the big drip ting comin out of the right bit of the e jus to make it a little tighter.

*~ANZIO~*
04-04-2006, 09:52 AM
ditch the character

hello2006
04-04-2006, 10:19 AM
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/stix.jpg

those are sum dam nice sticker designs, real mean that to. dont listen to that bellend that told u they were shit. keep it up

Jank
04-04-2006, 10:31 AM
ye seti that is some attractive shit...is it letters? i never really understood your shit but i cant say it aint nice&#33;

Xsjadox
04-04-2006, 10:39 AM
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/4023/img07213hb.jpg

Jank
04-04-2006, 10:49 AM
nice buildings./ i think the letters are a bit too on top of each other and wierd sizes... like that s is well small..and is the last letter a z? its not bad but keep it straight like a standard piece..with the letters all the same height...and fuking comment on shit above u if u expect people to comment on urs&#33;

Seti
04-04-2006, 10:53 AM
cheers jank, yeh they all say insane

Xsjadox
04-04-2006, 11:12 AM
Yeah, Last letter is a Z... I would comment on other peoples stuff,but I just don&#39;t feel I am worthy to judge other peoples stuff when I am not good :P But I will say... those stickers are fucking sick&#33;

What Happened to the Letters?
04-04-2006, 11:37 AM
Originally posted by Seti@Apr 4 2006, 08:41 AM
jus someink i been workin wit, tinkin of makin it into stix, crits???
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/stix.jpg
yo seti, these look fresh as ever, i&#39;d love to see a few closeups of em...

Seti
04-04-2006, 11:58 AM
dont no if they&#39;ll be any bigger but here u go
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Untitled-2copy.jpg

nephsike
04-04-2006, 12:34 PM
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e286/nephsike/pics007.jpg

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e286/nephsike/pics010.jpg

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f352/whatuptizzy/jea111.jpg
some older shyyytt.....

Seti
04-04-2006, 12:38 PM
tryin to draw sm people but hands fuck me up
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/canman.jpg

beefgerky
04-04-2006, 01:12 PM
looks good to me.

hot shit all last page too.

warn&#39;s style is mad hot.

DR FORCE
04-04-2006, 01:49 PM
Originally posted by Seti@Apr 4 2006, 11:58 AM
dont no if they&#39;ll be any bigger but here u go
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Untitled-2copy.jpg
Thats not graf thats fucking art for a museum

:rolleyes: sorry it&#39;s fresch but its not graffitie :D

leaks
04-04-2006, 02:06 PM
http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/1182/picture1163tn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
markers and blunts

Seti
04-04-2006, 02:08 PM
well graff is onlly words mate an they say insane..lol

leaks
04-04-2006, 02:16 PM
seti u shouldnt be in the toy forums seriously maybe u were before but seeing those stickers def not

no one can give u critics

Seti
04-04-2006, 02:18 PM
cheers..nah i only jus got back into graff, took a break chillin wit da girl an shit. but this is my new shizzle im glad ya likes it

WAKE-1
04-04-2006, 02:44 PM
couldnt really figure out a throw. heres my best attempt. feel free to tear it apart :D

http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/7941/wakethrowup26jk.jpg

Seti
04-04-2006, 02:46 PM
NICE.. OLD SCHOOL

WAKE-1
04-04-2006, 02:51 PM
thanks was tryin to go pretty simple with the letters :D

AMAZ tbscrew
04-04-2006, 02:55 PM
wow some good shit inthis thread finaly

AMAZ tbscrew
04-04-2006, 02:58 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter+Apr 4 2006, 12:21 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter @ Apr 4 2006, 12:21 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by SINoner@Apr 3 2006, 11:44 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-K.A.B.@Apr 3 2006, 11:40 PM
only been writin for a month or so* is it coo or gay
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c19/CallMeBirdE/SUC50015.jpg
This is about your skill level (http://mindgem.nu/board/) I reccomend going there and staying there.
not bad i like it alot [/b][/quote]
:o did u say u liked it?....r u crazy?

Mse
04-04-2006, 03:00 PM
crazy

WAKE-1
04-04-2006, 03:01 PM
ya i agree wit AMAZ that things wack theres arrows goin everywhere, the letters are all combined and its like a sorry excuse for a wildstyle attempt -_-

vare_187uk
04-04-2006, 03:06 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/thro.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/euro.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/euro2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/simp.jpg
dunno if i posted this
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/eruo.jpg

WAKE-1
04-04-2006, 03:10 PM
holy shit that second one is DOPE :lol:

RollTRS
04-04-2006, 03:30 PM
Ok, I did this during class with my prismas, did my best to erase the pencil. I really wish I had not done the purple lining on the inside of the letters, I think it ruins it and looks like a super thick outline, but I&#39;d like crits and comments non the less, particularly on the letter structure.

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/2033/picture23ut.png

backtoyou
04-04-2006, 03:52 PM
that seckond vare is taken strait out of gettin up

fuckin villan
04-04-2006, 04:09 PM
stick to those simples vare, those are dope man

vare_187uk
04-04-2006, 04:19 PM
Originally posted by backtoyou@Apr 4 2006, 03:52 PM
that seckond vare is taken strait out of gettin up
i wouldnt know ive never played the game im not into the mainstream graffiti
especially games that have reviews where artists them selfs critise the game to be above board and exagerated.


the sketch was purely off the top of my head
straight up check the last one it was the refurbed version of that &#33;
same type of letters just fooled around with kept with the theme though just switched up the colours

WAKE-1
04-04-2006, 04:34 PM
did this for a battle, but i wanted some crits anyway :)

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/4084/trapt8yb.jpg

vare_187uk
04-04-2006, 04:42 PM
you letters seem to smother each other i wouldnt be able to see that was a P for the fact that the T is over it so much try not to over lap the letters as such but more touching or small edges over lapping

WAKE-1
04-04-2006, 04:45 PM
k thanks for the advice i tried puting the t closer to the p but it looked wierd so i did that

RollTRS
04-04-2006, 05:41 PM
Originally posted by RollTRS@Apr 4 2006, 03:30 PM
Ok, I did this during class with my prismas, did my best to erase the pencil. I really wish I had not done the purple lining on the inside of the letters, I think it ruins it and looks like a super thick outline, but I&#39;d like crits and comments non the less, particularly on the letter structure.

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/2033/picture23ut.png
Anyone?

leaks
04-04-2006, 05:46 PM
i like the colors and the bubbles the letters could be even or even the same style but its good

vare_187uk
04-04-2006, 06:12 PM
get the letter down first of all so that they all maybe look similar or the same then ill get back to you&#33;

RollTRS
04-04-2006, 06:27 PM
Thank&#39;s guys&#33; I&#39;ll work on making them look similar, I kind of noticed that near the end, but I couldn&#39;t think of anything better at the time.

Sheek
04-04-2006, 06:39 PM
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/2504/arrows9fz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it says to post your pieces with two many arrows

crits please

Boodabang923
04-04-2006, 06:42 PM
Any constructive critisism would be awesome

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/2719/imgp05999zb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sheek
04-04-2006, 06:49 PM
i&#39;m no one to be taking advice from but i would take the extencions off of the bottoms of the s and c

Boodabang923
04-04-2006, 06:50 PM
yeah, and the r too?

Sheek
04-04-2006, 06:53 PM
yeah

Sprae
04-04-2006, 06:56 PM
serc man ur simples are tight but yea you might wanna take off of some of the extensions... maybe not all of them

WAKE-1
04-04-2006, 07:03 PM
i didnt think the extension on the S was that bad

Boodabang923
04-04-2006, 07:20 PM
which extensions should i scratch? like the bottom or top of the c and s or both?

flclnaruto1213
04-04-2006, 07:25 PM
all of them, both on the S and C, then it would look like an alright simple

ffx
04-04-2006, 07:26 PM
Originally posted by ffx@Apr 4 2006, 01:29 AM
kinda bad quality (camera phone)
and yes i know someone else on this board writes spin but i didn&#39;t find that out till now.

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/8897/dsc000474pp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i dont mean to be a douche but i didnt get anything... any tips?

HeIsT422
04-04-2006, 07:27 PM
yur 3d is pretty good.. jus try to take all the bumps and random shit off of your letters, try to work on simples for now

WAKE-1
04-04-2006, 07:29 PM
^^AGREED^^

Sheek
04-04-2006, 07:30 PM
crits on mine please

Boodabang923
04-04-2006, 07:32 PM
Originally posted by Boodabang923@Apr 4 2006, 06:42 PM
Any constructive critisism would be awesome

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/2719/imgp05999zb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
is it just me or should i change the e&#39;s top as well as dropping the extensions?

WAKE-1
04-04-2006, 07:34 PM
ya change the e up its horrible... no offense

flclnaruto1213
04-04-2006, 07:36 PM
wake please dont ever call someone elses stuff horrible. what he did is better than all of your shit. and yeah i would change the top of the E, but the rest looks good

AMAZ tbscrew
04-04-2006, 07:36 PM
Originally posted by Sheek@Apr 4 2006, 06:39 PM
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/2504/arrows9fz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

it says to post your pieces with two many arrows

crits please
:lol: :lol: :lol: no. :huh:

Save
04-04-2006, 07:37 PM
I think all the letters look fine on th SERC except the &#39;E&#39; Drop the little drooping bit on the top and it would look pretty sick.

WAKE-1
04-04-2006, 07:46 PM
i didnt say that the whole piece was horrible just that the e wasnt very good and i never said that i was better than him

Boodabang923
04-04-2006, 07:56 PM
ruto, i&#39;m kinda confused cause earlier you said to take off the extensions&#33; wtf should i do other than fix the e :)? (i get confused easily) But anyways, thanks for the help

flclnaruto1213
04-04-2006, 07:57 PM
by insulting someone at all your implying that you could do better. a basketball player wouldnt tell another one he sucked at shooting if he was a bad shooter, its call being a hipocrit

Boodabang923
04-04-2006, 07:57 PM
actually. i guess the best way for me to learn would be to mess around wiht it.

flclnaruto1213
04-04-2006, 07:58 PM
you should take off the extensions and fix the e. i just didnt notice the e at first