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kew1
01-04-2010, 05:55 AM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/January-03_1939.jpg

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 06:36 AM
ight thanks guys
nd w_g_o_n_e tht shyt is nice love the arows nd the tears with the brick that shit is fucking tight man
kew your shyt is geting better you juss need alil more work on your 3d nd youe add ons are in the roung spots but the fill is dope diggin that shit man

b SQUARED 08
01-04-2010, 09:12 AM
WGONE: I'd try out a glow, myself. For overall crits though, I'm not really diggin' the arrows. The overall design looks good, but I feel that the arrows take away from your letters, rather than compliment them. The boldness of the 'chicago' above your letters kinda draws attention away from the 'amu' as well. Nice coloring and concept.
Rear: All of your letters need work. Go simpler, then push a style once you've got the fundamentals of your letters down.
Safer: Individual letter structures as a whole looks pretty good. I'm not really feelin' the middle bar on the E, how it overlaps. Also, your A and R are much wider than your other letters- I'd try to make them all similar in size. Your 3d fill is way off as well.
Stuck: Are you working on several exchanges with Hoer? I personally think that this one is the worst one I've seen from you in terms of letter structure. Your H looks top heavy, the O looks like an I, the E looks okay, but maybe a bit cramped, and your R is much bigger than the rest of your letters. I did, however, like what you were working with before, so maybe take notes from those sketches?
Kew: I think you're going a little over your head with that one. The E has a completely different style than your K and W, and really, those letters don't match up to well either. The random extensions and fillers need to go- they're looking really forced at this point. Coloring and 3d look good, but that's not what matters if you're posting in the toy thread.

2mor
01-04-2010, 10:13 AM
woony i still gt an outline for ya,,,, jus need my cam back .........:(

prefer
01-04-2010, 01:47 PM
wooneys always been fresh ta def, back that looks dope you gonna finish it,wg that looks aight man but your letter structure i aint feelin

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 02:06 PM
haha werd man and sin i dont even know what the battle word is man pm with the word and details

-Empty-Can-
01-04-2010, 02:08 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch005.jpg
Bumping for crits

and something new
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/throwie001.jpg

Kew- go simpler. many of those extensions are unnecessary
wgone-looks good but those really big arrows ruin it. They seem out of place and I think they would have looked good smaller. And I don't like how you made the brick show on the 3D in the top right arrow.

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 02:11 PM
ok the bottom one is better and stop posting the top one thas like five times now dont the same thing day in and day out yadigg

do you wonna have a trowy exchange ?? ill do yours nd you do mines ight !??

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 02:21 PM
i pmed you wat do you want to write ?

-Empty-Can-
01-04-2010, 02:22 PM
Lol I keep posting that because nobody has crited it yet and I want some good crits on it because I like it.

Sure, you write rear?

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 02:24 PM
no hej ust likes it in the rear lol

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 02:27 PM
lol sin fck you jk nd yeah i right rear

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 02:34 PM
is this gonna be polled?

Stuck
01-04-2010, 02:37 PM
WGONE: I'd try out a glow, myself. For overall crits though, I'm not really diggin' the arrows. The overall design looks good, but I feel that the arrows take away from your letters, rather than compliment them. The boldness of the 'chicago' above your letters kinda draws attention away from the 'amu' as well. Nice coloring and concept.
Rear: All of your letters need work. Go simpler, then push a style once you've got the fundamentals of your letters down.
Safer: Individual letter structures as a whole looks pretty good. I'm not really feelin' the middle bar on the E, how it overlaps. Also, your A and R are much wider than your other letters- I'd try to make them all similar in size. Your 3d fill is way off as well.
Stuck: Are you working on several exchanges with Hoer? I personally think that this one is the worst one I've seen from you in terms of letter structure. Your H looks top heavy, the O looks like an I, the E looks okay, but maybe a bit cramped, and your R is much bigger than the rest of your letters. I did, however, like what you were working with before, so maybe take notes from those sketches?
Kew: I think you're going a little over your head with that one. The E has a completely different style than your K and W, and really, those letters don't match up to well either. The random extensions and fillers need to go- they're looking really forced at this point. Coloring and 3d look good, but that's not what matters if you're posting in the toy thread.

that "o" is supposed to be an I. It reads heir and i made the R bigger to balance out the heavyness of the H. I wanted to write hoer but theres already a dope hoer on bombing science so i decided fuck it. thnks though

-Empty-Can-
01-04-2010, 02:45 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/exchange.jpg
here ya go.. I feel the A is too pointy but w/e


crit the pics^^

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 02:54 PM
fuck you jk in the the rear ill do your hold on

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 03:03 PM
fuck you jk in the the rear ill do your hold on

http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff001-6.jpg

stot the toy tot lmfao

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 03:31 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff002-5.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff003-5.jpg
for the battle with sin i didnt even try so you probly won

-Empty-Can-
01-04-2010, 03:48 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff001-6.jpg
I really like that S.

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 03:50 PM
my battle with wooney dont make fun of the throw
http://i48.tinypic.com/308jzbl.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/2ypm2c2.jpg

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 04:02 PM
haha sin you won but to be honest i really didnt even try i didnt even wonna battle nd stot if you lik the s bite it i dont care thts y i did it so you kan take the letters you lik

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 04:07 PM
IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII II
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNNNNNNN OH YEAH IN YOUR FACE
http://i49.tinypic.com/2vct8hw.jpg

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 04:10 PM
hahaahha lol








































i let you win lol

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 04:11 PM
Liiiiiiiiiiiieeeeesss dis is bullshit

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 04:12 PM
lol no i really didnt even try you got soem nice markers thoe i juss got soem shyt markers lol

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 04:17 PM
i would trade all my decos except white lol
for prismas i only have two prismas

LeaksOne
01-04-2010, 04:18 PM
both those kike throws need TONS of work

-Empty-Can-
01-04-2010, 04:21 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch005.jpg
Bumping for crits

and something new
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/throwie001.jpg

Kew- go simpler. many of those extensions are unnecessary
wgone-looks good but those really big arrows ruin it. They seem out of place and I think they would have looked good smaller. And I don't like how you made the brick show on the 3D in the top right arrow.
bbbuump

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 04:21 PM
thats not my word lolz i hate I's

W_G_O_N_E
01-04-2010, 04:29 PM
WGONE: I'd try out a glow, myself. For overall crits though, I'm not really diggin' the arrows. The overall design looks good, but I feel that the arrows take away from your letters, rather than compliment them. The boldness of the 'chicago' above your letters kinda draws attention away from the 'amu' as well. Nice coloring and concept.
Rear: All of your letters need work. Go simpler, then push a style once you've got the fundamentals of your letters down.
Safer: Individual letter structures as a whole looks pretty good. I'm not really feelin' the middle bar on the E, how it overlaps. Also, your A and R are much wider than your other letters- I'd try to make them all similar in size. Your 3d fill is way off as well.
Stuck: Are you working on several exchanges with Hoer? I personally think that this one is the worst one I've seen from you in terms of letter structure. Your H looks top heavy, the O looks like an I, the E looks okay, but maybe a bit cramped, and your R is much bigger than the rest of your letters. I did, however, like what you were working with before, so maybe take notes from those sketches?
Kew: I think you're going a little over your head with that one. The E has a completely different style than your K and W, and really, those letters don't match up to well either. The random extensions and fillers need to go- they're looking really forced at this point. Coloring and 3d look good, but that's not what matters if you're posting in the toy thread.

well the arrows looked better in black and white , the chcicago def. draws a little to much away from the "AMY" but overall i'm happy with it. gonna try a green glow maybe. imo the structure is pretty simple and they all have similar style , but it's all good. stucks and mine are pretty easy to read and you misread them both ,i really don't know what that means?

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 04:30 PM
yeah i hate ks

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 04:31 PM
why ks are the best letters

LeaksOne
01-04-2010, 04:31 PM
thats not my word lolz i hate I's

i know you write kerse XD

but i was just saying since both you guys posted it. i noticed it was a battle

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 04:33 PM
yeah but i didnt even try at all i let him win

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 04:33 PM
no i changed my word lol i had no clue its now kable i pray to god theres no kable out there

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 04:35 PM
yall want to have a philly hand battle huh get at me

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 04:36 PM
i will have a philly battle with you the word is raker ight

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 04:38 PM
lol u just picked your doom little kid

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 04:42 PM
ahah i love phillys *****

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 04:50 PM
lolz im not on my fillys today lol
http://i45.tinypic.com/f06zkm.jpg

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 04:54 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/handybattle001.jpg

pshhhhhh i be on mi phillys all day every day ya digg

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 04:57 PM
lolz those have no flow man im not gonna say there not philly but there not close

beco3423
01-04-2010, 05:00 PM
heyy everyone im new to the site. i been on puregraffiti for awhile and heard this was a good site so i came here as well. im gonna post some of my older stuff and some new stuff. crits are welcome and appreciated and if you could let me know if im up to par for the intermediate thread

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2528/4245455699_b6456554b1_m.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2618/4245454531_cbeebb5db9_m.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4010/4245452789_deae090069_m.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2520/4246229584_ac6e3341b8_m.jpg

some old stuff from mid 2009

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 05:01 PM
no flow wtf your shyt is juss long stight letters with lines in it thts not a fucking philly lol jk go wach how to do a philly on youtube nd thts how you do it mofucka lol

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 05:03 PM
omg dude i fucking live right next to filly thats just one kind i know how to do ill get all the ones i kan do one sec

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 05:05 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/handybattle003.jpgpic of the dumpster next to mi crib mi tag is on the top left lol with a fcking white out pen lol

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 05:07 PM
cool story bro

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 05:20 PM
mhm you live right next to filly nikka you cant even spell it right its philly man

beco3423
01-04-2010, 05:23 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4016/4245492405_fd81f2bf69_m.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4025/4245493177_85fd06055c_m.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2488/4245492843_462a576f1e_m.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4066/4245491905_a1a3068304_m.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4037/4245490377_7e5e6d9fc5_m.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2734/4246260168_9a3fe90b06_m.jpg


my new stuff

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 05:24 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v512/SIKBALZ/PRSTARCOREYBLEEK.jpg

that is a fckign philly man tht shyt is dope

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 05:35 PM
i know if you get good at dem they look ill maybe someday ...... for you oh snap

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 05:42 PM
????
oh snap wat???

Stuck
01-04-2010, 05:44 PM
stop ur bickering and flooding the forums with usually shit. take it to the toy chat.
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo24-1.jpg
in progress took some advice i got. Still looking for some more critic on this newer one

woonybomber
01-04-2010, 05:47 PM
shit is good better thn the other heir you did b4

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 05:48 PM
shit beco those are some nice filly hands man u lve there?

LeaksOne
01-04-2010, 05:51 PM
you must have asked that before lookin at his location

-Empty-Can-
01-04-2010, 05:54 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch005.jpg
Bumping for crits

and something new
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/throwie001.jpg

Kew- go simpler. many of those extensions are unnecessary
wgone-looks good but those really big arrows ruin it. They seem out of place and I think they would have looked good smaller. And I don't like how you made the brick show on the 3D in the top right arrow.
bump this again because of all the chit-chat

heir-I think those bars on the top and bottom of the H don't fit well there. I really like that R

sinkilla1
01-04-2010, 05:55 PM
just saw that lolz

ChadWarden
01-04-2010, 06:15 PM
http://i45.tinypic.com/1zq62o8.jpg

from english class.

a week ago or so i finally started to "piece".

BlacktodaFuture
01-04-2010, 06:58 PM
Empty can: stop bumping your shit amillion times over, either post something new or shut the fuck up

@ all random people talking for no pointless reason: take it to the PM or toy chat

flix for talking!

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03203.jpg?t=1262652995

^just fucking around w. letters

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03202.jpg?t=1262653048

-Empty-Can-
01-04-2010, 07:03 PM
Im bumping it because I want some crits on it and I haven't got any yet. And those 2 kept chatting about pointless shit and wasting pages.

Stuck
01-04-2010, 07:06 PM
safer i think ur F should kinda resemble the R with the triangle part and i think the right leg on the A swings out to much. id say make it swing out the same amount as the s does.

b SQUARED 08
01-04-2010, 07:20 PM
Heir: I like this one quite a bit better. The left bar on the H looks a little shaky, and your E should be a tad bit bigger in proportion to the other letters. I'm not really a fan of the dot attached to the I, but it doesn't really look too bad either.
Stot: Your 3d is a bit off in a few places on the first one, but I'm diggin' the second one aside from the small O. I really like that S.
Saner: Looks good, but clean it up a little bit. I like the hands.
Safer: You're workin' on throws like I am lol. I keep x-ing things out and getting frustrated, haha. I can't say that I'm too fond of anything you've got on that pic. And I've already critted your second pic, so...

Here's just a little something I sketched up a few minutes ago... I don't really like it :/
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo19.jpg

Fury
01-04-2010, 07:37 PM
I kinda like the 3D idea, but like I said before, your weighted bars should all be on the same side.

BlacktodaFuture
01-04-2010, 07:39 PM
asker: i already got a throw it's just some shit im playing around w. haha. the top bar on the K and the middle bars of the A and the E seem too small unless you are doing that thing where the bars get progressivly bigger. then it's fine. like the 3-d fill. and yeah, work on your handstyle

MoistGarbageCan
01-04-2010, 09:17 PM
Heir: I like this one quite a bit better. The left bar on the H looks a little shaky, and your E should be a tad bit bigger in proportion to the other letters. I'm not really a fan of the dot attached to the I, but it doesn't really look too bad either.
Stot: Your 3d is a bit off in a few places on the first one, but I'm diggin' the second one aside from the small O. I really like that S.
Saner: Looks good, but clean it up a little bit. I like the hands.
Safer: You're workin' on throws like I am lol. I keep x-ing things out and getting frustrated, haha. I can't say that I'm too fond of anything you've got on that pic. And I've already critted your second pic, so...

Here's just a little something I sketched up a few minutes ago... I don't really like it :/
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo19.jpg

that's something new?
i just thought you re-posted the same picture 100 times, my bad.

b SQUARED 08
01-04-2010, 09:19 PM
Funny. Sorry I don't have enough time to please you. Fuck off.

MoistGarbageCan
01-04-2010, 09:22 PM
lol, you mad? it's not like i'm talking bullshit, you do the same shit all the time.
and oh, it doesn't look wack or anything. you just post that same shit way too much, relax.

BlacktodaFuture
01-04-2010, 09:22 PM
moist, you ever post anything or do you just talk to shit to everyone without work to back up the chit chat.

MoistGarbageCan
01-04-2010, 09:26 PM
whatever, EVEN if i've never posted anything on here before, wouldn't you agree with what i said?
and oh, are you mad cause i called you out on your bullshit?
like you came at eukos n' shit, so i had to call you out.

BlacktodaFuture
01-04-2010, 09:27 PM
nope, but still post up or shut up

Fury
01-04-2010, 09:31 PM
He won't be posting stuff.

Are you going to get on me for this post also? Because you've said it before, I just don't feel like going back to my original post (pointed at moist).

I do agree that it is rather similar to all the other stuff you post though, Asker.

MoistGarbageCan
01-04-2010, 09:34 PM
fuck that, i'll stay talking shit.

b SQUARED 08
01-04-2010, 09:35 PM
lol, you mad? it's not like i'm talking bullshit, you do the same shit all the time.
and oh, it doesn't look wack or anything. you just post that same shit way too much, relax.
I never said anything about you being wrong; I agree that what I've posted has shown little/ no variation. It'd be different if I was getting all sorts of crits, but I don't, so the changes will come at my pace. I'm not sketching for you. No beef.

-Empty-Can-
01-04-2010, 09:36 PM
asker- the way you do your 3D is strange. Why is it larger towards the middle like on the K?

MoistGarbageCan
01-04-2010, 09:38 PM
alright man whatever, you say.
to me that style already looks established.
like there's nothing wrong with it when i look at it.
so idk, do w/e the hell you want i gues.

b SQUARED 08
01-04-2010, 09:42 PM
asker- the way you do your 3D is strange. Why is it larger towards the middle like on the K?

Because I used a vanishing point about an inch under the letters themselves. This makes the 3d edges on the far left/right more horizontal, so they're tucked in, whereas the central 3d extends more vertically.


alright man whatever, you say.
to me that style already looks established.
like there's nothing wrong with it when i look at it.
so idk, do w/e the hell you want i gues.

What do you mean by 'established'?


Stuck -your the best person in this thread..good shit.

Asker -wtf man that shit looks horrible..change those letters up..arnt you bored?..your hand needs work,if ur down for a hand exchange hit me up..
safer-

Horrible? Really? I've gotten nothing but compliments aside from my lack of progression with this style. I'm just short on time to practice, so most of it comes out looking the same. I'm down for an exchange, but my hands are wack as fuck as you can see.

FlippingChickens
01-04-2010, 09:43 PM
Stuck - your the best person in this thread..good shit.

Asker - wtf man that shit looks horrible..change those letters up..arnt you bored?..your hand needs work,if ur down for a hand exchange hit me up..

Safer - shouldnt have made the e like that,throws off the 3d since its round'ish..nice colors,just take away them bubbles lol..

here's some shit im working on..working on colors as we speak
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2870.jpg

LeaksOne
01-04-2010, 09:44 PM
your bars are different widths all over that. work on evening your bars and your 3d is all out of whack

MoistGarbageCan
01-04-2010, 09:46 PM
it looks like you've been doing that shit for a minute, like if you were to do other letters n' shit, it'll look similar to that.
stot's right though the 3D's off on the K.

oh yeah, and that red straight you posted looks tough stot.

-Empty-Can-
01-04-2010, 09:51 PM
Because I used a vanishing point about an inch under the letters themselves. This makes the 3d edges on the far left/right more horizontal, so they're tucked in, whereas the central 3d extends more vertically.
I could be wrong but I'm pretty sure it should all be the same size. And you missed a bit on the right of the R.

Tofe- your 3D is wayyy off

garbage can- thanks

1,000 posts! yay

MoistGarbageCan
01-04-2010, 09:53 PM
I could be wrong but I'm pretty sure it should all be the same size. And you missed a bit on the right of the R.

Tofe- your 3D is wayyy off

garbage can- thanks

1,000 posts! yay

bump that shit though, and clean your fill up.

b SQUARED 08
01-04-2010, 09:55 PM
I could be wrong but I'm pretty sure it should all be the same size. And you missed a bit on the right of the R.

Tofe- your 3D is wayyy off

garbage can- thanks

1,000 posts! yay

I mean, it can be done either way. There's no 'right' way to do it- just different ways that may look better. Good call on that R though, I can't believe I missed that lol.

FlippingChickens
01-04-2010, 10:01 PM
your bars are different widths all over that. work on evening your bars and your 3d is all out of whack

yea i feal you,the top of that f and o looks retarded now that i really take a look,thanks for the crit homie...

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN2871.jpg

didnt really care how clean my colors came out on it




Tofe- your 3D is wayyy off



3d is already giving me a fucking headace,i dont need u to fucking tell me its wack..if u had a resourceful comment that would help improve my 3d then it would be cool,it's not like your's is any better..anyone know how i could improve/change my 3d,and anyone has any suggestions on how to put the 3d on the right part of the t so it wouldnt interfere with the o?

Stuck
01-04-2010, 11:17 PM
gona do this on a nice high up, old rusty water tower. Im thinkin krylon purple fills, some sort of solid yellow, maybe a drop shadow? and either a black force field or a teal forcefield if i can find it
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo28-1.jpg
gon demand attention yo

FlippingChickens
01-04-2010, 11:41 PM
how about..black fill with purple faded on top then yellow for forcefield

Stuck
01-04-2010, 11:43 PM
naw the fills got be bright cus the water towers in a big field away from everything but wen ur in the city u can see it well so i need the bright fill to make it reallly pop and stand out

FlippingChickens
01-04-2010, 11:49 PM
teal fill,black outline,yellow highlights,purple forcefield? ..i'd also say purple and yellow fill but im not a fan of the lakers lol...if u got any other colors i could give u more ideas but im kinda out of em right now..teal then black for forcefield would look dope..if u get a light purple and a white,it could be light purple dark purple faded on top with white highlights,black outline or yellow,that will look fresh

Stuck
01-04-2010, 11:54 PM
naw im sayin yellow fill, purple outline, some blue details in the fill and a black or teal force field. or purple fill yellow outline

FlippingChickens
01-04-2010, 11:59 PM
sounds good..purple fill , yellow outline with black forcefield,that's dope..goodluck man!

LeaksOne
01-05-2010, 12:08 AM
naw im sayin yellow fill, purple outline, some blue details in the fill and a black or teal force field. or purple fill yellow outline

yellow fill purple outline teal force field. royal blue details

Stuck
01-05-2010, 12:22 AM
i like yo style *****! :D

Stuck
01-05-2010, 12:43 AM
rough idea but the little dodads will be blue
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo29-1.jpg

LeaksOne
01-05-2010, 12:50 AM
nice

Flawless Victory
01-05-2010, 01:10 AM
naw the fills got be bright cus the water towers in a big field away from everything but wen ur in the city u can see it well so i need the bright fill to make it reallly pop and stand out
BLACK AND FUCKING WHlTE, YO.

Stuck
01-05-2010, 01:20 AM
naw im good on the color scheme

Slittt6
01-05-2010, 01:59 AM
Struck i thought you wrote SORE? wtf YO! :-P

rootpl
01-05-2010, 01:20 PM
I like this Heir and this green Asker.
Heir try do shadovs...

M3KA1!
01-05-2010, 01:23 PM
BLACK AND FUCKING WHlTE, YO.

shit yea bruh cant go wrong there. do it. stat. then post pics

sinkilla1
01-05-2010, 02:36 PM
heres a drawing i did in school it says kable without the E lazy not karl
and stuck yellows gona like blend in with the sunlight no one gonna see yellow so i say
silver fill black outline red forcefield shit will be seen from far away
http://i49.tinypic.com/35cn9xw.jpg

-Empty-Can-
01-05-2010, 02:52 PM
Looks like KRRL. Try to make the A and R somewhat different although I can tell your trying to give all the letters the same flow. And the L looks very out of place. Give it some curve or something to match the other letters.

Some Kind of Joke
01-05-2010, 03:13 PM
http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/IMG_0058-1.jpg

something... idk. i kinda like it.

and heres something when i was messing around with E bars.
http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/IMG_0059-1.jpg



sorry for double post, was aceddent!

Zookyook
01-05-2010, 03:54 PM
HAK could teach some lessons on bars, ver nice... looks like ur gettin good practice epoch?... u can delete ur posts too yanno

daoist
01-05-2010, 10:52 PM
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/2493/simplepimple.jpg

Stuck
01-05-2010, 11:25 PM
in progress and XD i kinda drooled on the end of the R aha that explains the smudge lol XD
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo10.jpg

suparjafar
01-05-2010, 11:29 PM
remis looking clean.
all those hakus are nice.

havent drawn anything but throws/hands in a while. IMO this is terrible and wack but whatever. did this in study hall today

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0281.jpg

Fury
01-05-2010, 11:36 PM
I'm not really a fan of the small holes, but it looks okay. The S is a little fat on the top though.

Stuck
01-05-2010, 11:44 PM
ur being modest fury...i would give him constructive crit but im to lazy atm

408Bomber
01-06-2010, 12:18 AM
in progress and XD i kinda drooled on the end of the R aha that explains the smudge lol XD
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo10.jpg
lmao wow... who dro0ls over a letter xD

Stuck
01-06-2010, 12:39 AM
someone on pain pills and muscle relaxers lol

weakfingers
01-06-2010, 07:08 AM
Stuck- I really love you shinres they look very natural.
Roes- Not feeling it.
Daoist-Nice straight letter
SKOJ-eh, idk the bar progression is nice but keep it simple


Tired as fuck from drawing all night, sorry leaks i bit your avatar for my I, it was the one thing i saw when i was deciding on what face to draw in it,
I know my style looks like frankinstien at this point but im trying to do things other then simples for a change
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9526.jpg

rootpl
01-06-2010, 10:47 AM
Zookyook : thanks !
I like this Remis !
This Heir with shadovs is better than that last.

I know... my english is terrible :)

M3KA1!
01-06-2010, 12:50 PM
I'm not really a fan of the small holes

what? im a huge fan of small holes. do you have any sisters?

Fury
01-06-2010, 02:03 PM
Unfortunately, no. Although, I believe Leaks has two!

Squint - Work on both of your Q's

LeaksOne
01-06-2010, 02:51 PM
haha squint its fine. that throw is straight. but the simp on the bottom that S is rubbing me the wrong way.

and i do have 2 sisters fully equipped with pepper spray and a bunch of over protective male family members. so..........go head and try.

rootpl
01-06-2010, 02:55 PM
weakfingers : i like this throwie ( S is the best )

ChadWarden
01-06-2010, 02:59 PM
squint, feeling everything on the page but the u,i,n in the throw.



http://i47.tinypic.com/a4wv85.jpg

Stuck
01-06-2010, 03:06 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/spawner.jpg

Fury
01-06-2010, 03:56 PM
Stuck - Looks good so far, keep coloring.
Chad - Make your lines straighter and not so wiggly. That top R piece is kind of distracting, in my opinion.
Hak - Fix the K.

kew1
01-06-2010, 04:38 PM
hak- make the bottom leg of the k fatter

b SQUARED 08
01-06-2010, 06:04 PM
Roes: Looking a bit rough, but not bad overall. The part that sticks out the most to me is the upper portion of the S- make that more skinny and play with your spacing a bit and you're working with a decent simple.
Squint: Looking pretty good overall. Like someone else said, I'd work on both of your Qs. There are a few other parts that I feel iffy about (bottom pic), but overall it looks good. These include the thick portion of the S, the lowercase i, the skinny portion of the N, and the curved portion of the T.
Hak: Your K is looking a little skimpy and the way the letters lean is kind of awkward. But mainly, I'd put my focus on the consistency in bar thickness.
Saner: Looks about like your last one- aside from the roughness of the sketch, the only part I'm not feelin' is the lowercase n.
Stuck: That Spawn is looking pretty good. Looking forward to seeing the final.

And since my letters at this point look alright, I started playing around with colors and designs today. Not really sure how I feel about this one though :/
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo21.jpg

Con-Artist
01-06-2010, 07:00 PM
squint-feelin em
saner- theyd be good if you made em strait and not all wiggly

Con-Artist
01-06-2010, 07:01 PM
squint-feelin em
saner- theyd be good if you made em strait and not all wiggly

daisyface
01-06-2010, 07:24 PM
weakfingers- throwie looks good. maybe make the s a bit larger
root-bars look even. maybe no to the detached bits on the two letters?
bsquared-do some 3d!
stuck-like i said in tot characters, keep up the coloring. waist/chest ratio looks off

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/painting.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v322/torrie_nilla/graff/noelle.jpgfor a girl...

RedEyes
01-06-2010, 08:25 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo9-1.jpg
new years thing i whipped up real quick

bump for 2010

RADAWG
01-06-2010, 08:36 PM
Stopped posting for awhile..might start coming back who knows
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0106101435.jpg

408Bomber
01-06-2010, 08:44 PM
^ ^
Dope throwie

408Bomber
01-06-2010, 08:45 PM
^ ^
Dope throwie

ILL STREET BLUES
01-06-2010, 09:16 PM
BUMP MY ***** EARK
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/fellmyflow.jpg

SafeWay
01-06-2010, 09:30 PM
well guys am i doin somthin right?

http://photos-c.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs131.snc3/17868_257263807937_554967937_4412452_1084754_n.jpg
http://hphotos-snc3.fbcdn.net/hs151.snc3/17868_257268837937_554967937_4412476_6412615_n.jpg
http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs151.snc3/17868_257263867937_554967937_4412454_7072444_n.jpg

i write justice now, but the pieces say "just"

Flawless Victory
01-06-2010, 09:46 PM
You're doing SOME things right,
but drinking New Castle isn't one of them.

Stuck
01-06-2010, 09:52 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo9.jpg
not gona finish

SafeWay
01-06-2010, 09:53 PM
haha yeah its got a different taste to it, tastes like breadish almost, but i liked the labels heh, you got any words of wisdom? that i can work on?

Flawless Victory
01-06-2010, 09:56 PM
It's not really my style, so I don't really know how you could progress it any.
Looks straight to me, though.

Fury
01-06-2010, 11:40 PM
Justice - Some shit's too skinny in my opinion. And you from the Bay, hooray!

RedEyes
01-07-2010, 12:57 AM
stuck stop posting that its a character not graff!

SK2
01-07-2010, 03:47 AM
this is my first attempt to draw 3d letters... cant connect them together%)
http://s09.radikal.ru/i182/1001/6c/3e557a921b84.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)
http://s14.radikal.ru/i187/1001/7e/e73b7e3d0c9f.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)
http://s54.radikal.ru/i146/1001/a2/2d460f7622ad.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)
http://i080.radikal.ru/1001/5e/62b195a2a0ea.jpg (http://www.radikal.ru)

LeaksOne
01-07-2010, 03:56 AM
draw? you mean generate?

SafeWay
01-07-2010, 04:20 AM
haha generate
hell yeah im from haywardd
thank you for the crits
heres another
http://hphotos-snc3.fbcdn.net/hs151.snc3/17868_257263917937_554967937_4412455_5608376_n.jpg
says marlis, its the piece i used for a murall

eng
01-07-2010, 06:10 AM
safeway - cant really read anything apart from S at the end which is nice but for me personaly i cant really crit it
CPAM - dont really like this shit its too computerised for me i fell graffiti is more about the hand, the man-made mark and this feels rigid and has little flow - that my opinion
stuck - character looks nice but i dont really get the orangey smokey shit around him
safeway - im really liking the second one down with the beer labels - though i reckon it could lose a little of the slime and increase the legibility slightly - does it say RST or JST?
ILL street blues - work on your 3d drop its relly inconsistent. think of it as each point has equal distance and angle away - draw dots and connect them
eark - really nice except for the R in my opinion, its all flows and the letters seem effortless

now my turn:

http://imgur.com/ykgAH.jpg

Aktag
01-07-2010, 08:44 AM
Had been away for a while...
SafeWay: you got mad ideas, but i think you should work a lil bit more on structure, imo.
Eng: Dope coloring in 3D ! :D

Here are my sketches...
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/4484/rolin3.jpg
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/3716/picture009sk.jpg
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/2712/picture010ol.jpg

-Rolin

Bazer
01-07-2010, 01:54 PM
lose the arrows.

Zookyook
01-07-2010, 02:06 PM
rolin i like the progress, u should sketch something with connections and see how it comes out... but yea those arrows are wack, maybe turn them into drips or something easier to match with the lettering

SafeWay
01-07-2010, 03:04 PM
thanks fellas, i'll see what i can do
my crew is RST

rolin- go simple
zome- work on that M

transmission
01-07-2010, 03:52 PM
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/4940/graffpo.th.jpg (http://img14.imageshack.us/i/graffpo.jpg/)
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/1824/graff4.th.jpg (http://img109.imageshack.us/i/graff4.jpg/)
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/1506/graff3.th.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/i/graff3.jpg/)
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7024/graff2.th.jpg (http://img109.imageshack.us/i/graff2.jpg/)
http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/8922/graff1.th.jpg (http://img709.imageshack.us/i/graff1.jpg/)

CRITTS PLZZZZ

Darkeist
01-07-2010, 04:32 PM
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20100107_1.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Snapshot_20100107.jpg

cant see most the pictures on here for some reason so...

safeway - dope shit. i like it mayne, keep it up.
street blues - change the top of your R

transmission
01-07-2010, 04:44 PM
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/4940/graffpo.th.jpg (http://img14.imageshack.us/i/graffpo.jpg/)
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/1824/graff4.th.jpg (http://img109.imageshack.us/i/graff4.jpg/)
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/1506/graff3.th.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/i/graff3.jpg/)
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/7024/graff2.th.jpg (http://img109.imageshack.us/i/graff2.jpg/)
http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/8922/graff1.th.jpg (http://img709.imageshack.us/i/graff1.jpg/)

CRITTS PLZZZZ

ehh too plain snoozer add something to make it pop more.... i kinda like the lettering tho... its pretty cool

any critts pzzzZ??#$#$@#$

BlacktodaFuture
01-07-2010, 05:04 PM
go simpler. alot simpler. then work your way up

Darkeist
01-07-2010, 05:08 PM
who was that to?

weakfingers
01-07-2010, 05:21 PM
snoozr- Fix your R up the extention is bad looking. Add some shadow, but its coming along well

transmission
01-07-2010, 05:29 PM
go simpler. alot simpler. then work your way up

me?

ILL STREET BLUES
01-07-2010, 05:35 PM
street blues - change the top of your R[/QUOTE]

lol were do you see a r? i think ur looking at the z. it says sevz6

BlacktodaFuture
01-07-2010, 05:38 PM
me?

yes

Stuck
01-07-2010, 05:59 PM
tryin out the funk quickie
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo10-1.jpg

Darkeist
01-07-2010, 06:00 PM
snoozr- Fix your R up the extention is bad looking. Add some shadow, but its coming along well

thanks, i know it got kinda fucked up when i was outlining/filling.

but thanks.

weakfingers
01-07-2010, 07:46 PM
Awake- Read the new to graff thread and that will send you in the right direction
Stuck-Looks good, keep it up



Im trying to get loose and throw my lines more and I know it looks like it getting bigger/un-proportioned but I just took the picture on an angle. crits please
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9530.jpg

boodah
01-07-2010, 08:00 PM
The S doesn't fit, make it thicker.

JustChillin
01-07-2010, 08:09 PM
Stuck you should loose alot of the extensions.
weakfingers that looks fuckin sick, i wanna see that painted.

havent posted in a while. a new name im working on. "Blir" any improvement?

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0107101535a.jpg

shem
01-07-2010, 08:10 PM
i like it squint

Stuck
01-07-2010, 08:30 PM
lol just chillen...u havnt posted in a while? how bad were u before? are u going for a throwup in that one.
aha if ur going for a simple use bars...if thats a throwup its pretty weak no real constructive crit there
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo12-1.jpg

sinkilla1
01-07-2010, 09:40 PM
prolly not gonna listen but ima say anyway the first peice dont curve the left leg of the H the second won is fixed up and looks tight xD

rasta tagger
01-07-2010, 09:51 PM
http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u270/GrrrrrrlJeans/4167343688_3f5f633d4d_b.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
01-07-2010, 10:41 PM
so much better then when you first started.

n8galicia
01-07-2010, 10:51 PM
damn rasta thats some sick shit

weakfingers
01-07-2010, 11:34 PM
Geek- That shit looks good but im not feeling the name. One thing i would do is make the arm of the K an extention of the E

JustChillin
01-07-2010, 11:58 PM
lol just chillen...u havnt posted in a while? how bad were u before? are u going for a throwup in that one.
aha if ur going for a simple use bars...if thats a throwup its pretty weak no real constructive crit thereYes its a throwup i think its really easy to see that. dont get too butt hurt cus i said you needed to loose a few extensions.

Any real criticism?

Flash_One
01-08-2010, 12:09 AM
http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/8773/flashavatarn.jpg (http://img694.imageshack.us/i/flashavatarn.jpg/) http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/flashavatarn.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img694/flashavatarn.jpg/1/)

any advice?

Stuck
01-08-2010, 03:29 AM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo13-1.jpg
dont liek R's

eng
01-08-2010, 04:48 AM
Yes its a throwup i think its really easy to see that. dont get too butt hurt cus i said you needed to loose a few extensions.

Any real criticism?

yo man if you want some real crits then you should go away and practise it 100 times before you post one. the guy is only giving you a bad crit cause you need to read up on posts or just go round your city checking graffiti to see what it actually looks like to understand what you're trying to do.

Here's a good crit: Throwies are the essence of street graffiti - they embody the speed and precision you need to succeed on the street. The whole idea of a throwup is that you write your name - bigger than a tag - in just a few seconds longer. That means your lines cant look tight and careful like yours do, they gotta look speedy, energetic, rounded, fast. When a real graffiti writer sprays up a throwie he does it in 20-40 seconds, just search COPE2 in youtube. your sketches need to represent this speed and energy - and yours? well its just sittin there on the page like a fat kid on the sofa

hope that helps

eng
01-08-2010, 04:50 AM
safeway - cant really read anything apart from S at the end which is nice but for me personaly i cant really crit it
CPAM - dont really like this shit its too computerised for me i fell graffiti is more about the hand, the man-made mark and this feels rigid and has little flow - that my opinion
stuck - character looks nice but i dont really get the orangey smokey shit around him
safeway - im really liking the second one down with the beer labels - though i reckon it could lose a little of the slime and increase the legibility slightly - does it say RST or JST?
ILL street blues - work on your 3d drop its relly inconsistent. think of it as each point has equal distance and angle away - draw dots and connect them
eark - really nice except for the R in my opinion, its all flows and the letters seem effortless

now my turn:

http://imgur.com/ykgAH.jpg

can i get a real crit on this... i gave 6
if you want crits then give them out too... unless you're real toy

Stuck
01-08-2010, 05:19 AM
your bars look kinda sketchy and the areas around some corners like the top right part of ur e and top left part of ur z have weird lumps...fix those. the middle bar on the Z is to thin and the two middle bars on the M are weird....cant crit that cus i suck at M's

eng
01-08-2010, 05:28 AM
i'll give a few more crits:
HEIR - I really like the overall flow of the piece - especially in the top of the I - there really nice curves and angles - its tight right there. What i would say is that the bottom left bar of the H seems to bend inward awkwardly? consider a symmetrical extension to you R to balance the sketch out maybe? also not feeling the bottom half of your R - i think you should split the bars apart at the bottom

eng
01-08-2010, 05:29 AM
your bars look kinda sketchy and the areas around some corners like the top right part of ur e and top left part of ur z have weird lumps...fix those. the middle bar on the Z is to thin and the two middle bars on the M are weird....cant crit that cus i suck at M's

decent crit man thanks alot

Stuck
01-08-2010, 05:37 AM
yeah my R is a real killer but i dun get wat u mean about splitting the bar???

eng
01-08-2010, 05:45 AM
i mean the right, zig-zagged bar of the R tucks under the straighter left foot of the R - i feel that if should kick out to the right a bit more so its less like a B (i know it doesnt look anything like a B but just for the sake of the R having more flow) (in my opinion)

lord_plankton
01-08-2010, 08:28 AM
tryin out the funk quickie
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo10-1.jpg

You really seem to struggle with the H alot , you keep bending its legs strangely , work on that,i like top of r too,

referring to your last post ive to say that youve definately improved,on the one hand i feel the top of your r, but on
on the other hand its a bit too curvy n smooth compared to the other letters, all the other bar endings extensions n stuff are way more sharp angle shaped...alos id open up the e a lil more cuz it looks squeezed give it room to breath, bottom middle e i is wired too, lots of little stuff goin on, not really contributing to the overall appearance, last but not least you should work on your i , its a bit too big n in your recent posts it looks like t. but still good job though

M3KA1!
01-08-2010, 09:52 AM
now in my professional expertise, what you all need to do is take a break and enjoy some french toast sticks

Stuck
01-08-2010, 03:27 PM
trying a whole bunch of different things but with the similiar styles/conections
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo15-1.jpg
improving?

408Bomber
01-08-2010, 03:50 PM
http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/8773/flashavatarn.jpg (http://img694.imageshack.us/i/flashavatarn.jpg/) http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/flashavatarn.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img694/flashavatarn.jpg/1/)

any advice?
Ur starting to get it, Now try and make it more simple first. Than start playing with your bars.


http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo13-1.jpg
dont liek R's
I like it.

Elno
01-08-2010, 06:41 PM
trying a whole bunch of different things but with the similiar styles/conections
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo15-1.jpg
improving?

Looks dope, paint it much :D

Trestoner707
01-08-2010, 09:47 PM
no dont.. not talking down or nothing

M3KA1!
01-08-2010, 09:56 PM
HAHA thisssss guy^^

BlacktodaFuture
01-08-2010, 10:05 PM
[QUOTE=BlacktodaFuture;1539251]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03208.jpg?t=1263008900

^ Not even close to done w. the elephant. and the F sucks, i forgot to erase it.

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03210.jpg?t=1263008940

^the F is ehh, and idk if i want to keep the extending bars on the A and F and only put it on the S and the R that im going to draw.

crits: flash: that L is fucked up. and your lines are really sketch. zome make straight lines.

408Bomber
01-08-2010, 10:17 PM
[QUOTE=BlacktodaFuture;1539251]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03208.jpg?t=1263008900

^ Not even close to done w. the elephant. and the F sucks, i forgot to erase it.

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03210.jpg?t=1263008940

^the F is ehh, and idk if i want to keep the extending bars on the A and F and only put it on the S and the R that im going to draw.

crits: flash: that L is fucked up. and your lines are really sketch. zome make straight lines.
Dont really like the style, but I can definitly see it ending up as something crazy. Keep working with it if you like it.

408Bomber
01-08-2010, 10:38 PM
wo0pz my bad for the double post

RemoZ
01-08-2010, 11:31 PM
Weakfingers-That would make a sick burner, you really should paint that
Rasta- The GEEK name is kinda whack, maybe like REEK? that could be alota good balance like backwards R and shit in a piece? Plus it would give more to work with

Aktag
01-09-2010, 09:59 AM
trying a whole bunch of different things but with the similiar styles/conections
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo15-1.jpg
improving?
Dope piece, definitely a lot better H than before. Keep it up

Mellowdrone
01-09-2010, 11:45 AM
Musk
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9048/musk3.jpg
lol this thing says Rebecka. :)
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/3307/beccai.jpg
Rezi
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/1535/rezi2.jpg

Mellowdrone
01-09-2010, 11:46 AM
sorry doublepost

M3KA1!
01-09-2010, 12:27 PM
http://i786.photobucket.com/albums/yy146/BUSERone/002-3-1.jpg

crits

Trestoner707
01-09-2010, 12:45 PM
i just dont like the bottom bars heir

funhouseXcast
01-09-2010, 12:50 PM
simplify mekai

weakfingers
01-09-2010, 02:13 PM
M3KA1!- I cant really read it, I cant see a flow either, not hating its just my opinion.
Mellowdrone- I cant read the first and the second ones, but the last kez needs proportion.
Stuck-You missed the 3-d on the R
Black to the future- You could really do more if your doing 3 letters. Make them go together more, They look like 3 seperate letters not really a name, the s if bending to the left really far, The A is in the middle and the F is just there.


Still working with a new style
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9531.jpg

Fury
01-09-2010, 02:49 PM
SQ are squished.

Mellow - Go simpler, I can't read anything.
Mekai - Go simpler also, but you have more basic shit.

faser
01-09-2010, 02:51 PM
Squint I like it. That's one of your better S but it covers the Q too much.
Maybe you could make the U exactly like that upside down N

lord_plankton
01-09-2010, 03:59 PM
[QUOTE=weakfingers;1539471]M3KA1!- I cant really read it, I cant see a flow either, not hating its just my opinion.

on a close look it actually does say meka but lots of stuff goin on flyin around n the letters itself lack structure n flow but its something to build up on...

like your last one squint, id only cut off t tail n as well as everyone else said space out s n q,i like the idea of n upside down u , you should try it, i is funny

sodi
01-09-2010, 05:20 PM
very good

cocacola
01-09-2010, 06:04 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2689/4260214525_fc11479baf.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4057/4260216881_b04bb2404e_o.jpg
tools were prisma steatdler sharpies in bics

Mellowdrone
01-09-2010, 07:25 PM
better? says ocean
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/9607/ocean1u.jpg

Fury
01-09-2010, 07:29 PM
^ It's a little bit better, but just do the keys on your keyboard and lose all the extensions and stuff. I can't tell when a line ends a letter.

Crus - Good as usual.

M3KA1!
01-09-2010, 10:01 PM
how bout you guys get more technical. get off the simples. not hatin. just my opinion

Mellowdrone
01-09-2010, 10:05 PM
i thought it flowed pretty well... :( i guess more practice though. ive gotten way better in the past month though, so thats good.

BlacktodaFuture
01-09-2010, 10:38 PM
how bout you guys get more technical. get off the simples. not hatin. just my opinion

dont listen to him. stay w. simples till you get better.

M3KA1!
01-09-2010, 10:43 PM
i wasnt talkin bout him. im talkin bout mine. everyone said stick to simples. i got simples down. honestly yea mellow you need to take it down to simples. work on bar structure and such

BlacktodaFuture
01-09-2010, 11:01 PM
nah, i thought that too and i stuck to them and it really cleaned some shit up, idk it made my shit look better. yet it's still not where i want it
pix for talking

i like the S in mine yet i hate how everything turned out

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03212.jpg?t=1263099053

weakfingers: im liking.
Crus: i said something in intermediate
Ocean, bars.

suparjafar
01-09-2010, 11:06 PM
ocean do simples.
squint the char throws me off IMO
safer i like it, but not the f.

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0283.jpg

rough sketch. any crits before i start to fill in my pieces? also ik, 3ds off on the bottom of the s.

BlacktodaFuture
01-09-2010, 11:16 PM
nah, i thought that too and i stuck to them and it really cleaned some shit up, idk it made my shit look better. yet it's still not where i want it
pix for talking

i like the S in mine yet i hate how everything turned out

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03212.jpg?t=1263099053

weakfingers: im liking.
Crus: i said something in intermediate
Ocean, bars.

bottem page bump. roes. nice. you are progressing. remember to use a vanishing point

408Bomber
01-09-2010, 11:41 PM
bottem page bump. roes. nice. you are progressing. remember to use a vanishing pointthat E is dope

suparjafar
01-10-2010, 01:16 AM
fixed up a little. fill soon, once i can rack any markers at all.

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0284.jpg

Zookyook
01-10-2010, 11:59 AM
i like ur progress roes... try using a vanishing point like black said, even though u dont HAVE TO it always looks better... color them shits too! steal markers from children lol

M3KA1!
01-10-2010, 12:14 PM
crayons dude. be a gangsta and use crayons

-Empty-Can-
01-10-2010, 12:40 PM
Why would you use a vanishing point for a side-ways 3D?

M3KA1!
01-10-2010, 12:43 PM
i take that back. black i do dig yer simples but after awhile you gotta progress. so just keep on movin up slowly. you'll get it. tweak yer 'f' a lil. it seems a lil off. maybe its just me. stay up. oh and yer handys aint half bad either

Th3t4
01-10-2010, 01:08 PM
this isn't really graffiti but it's for a tattoo
this will become an ambigram (a word that reads the same both ways up)
so I only have to draw 2 characters to cover the whole word, the F/e and r/e
it should read "free". and no, I did not choose the word.
i flipped the letters and put them next to the unflipped so you can see how it would read.
crits welcome
http://i48.tinypic.com/wtzr6u.jpg

Patchy
01-10-2010, 08:14 PM
tips please
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0406.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0407.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0408.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0409.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0411.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0412.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0415.jpg

b SQUARED 08
01-10-2010, 09:28 PM
Roes: Your E needs some tweaking, but overall it looks pretty good. Just keep runnin' through simps and practicing making clean lines and you'll be good in no-time.
Safer: Your S and A have pretty good flow together, but your F, E, and R throw it off. Your R isn't too bad, so I wouldn't scrap it, but your F and E need a lot of work. I'd develop on that though for sure.
SLM: Read the New To Graffiti Thread and start using bars for your letters. Read the thread and you'll know what I mean.

Tonight's efforts (as it says, disregard the handies- I know they suck, lol):
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo20.jpg

Patchy
01-10-2010, 09:53 PM
squared thanks for the tips but ive tried it, but i have trouble with the "s" i dont like boxy can you give me an example on how to use boxs with an s

RADAWG
01-10-2010, 10:11 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0109100133.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0110101655.jpg

Anybody have any criticism on the simple? I usually just bomb but I wanna start really trying simples and shit
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0110102257.jpg

Asker- I am loving that bro
Patchy- Work on just doing simple keyboard letters and use bars.

Fury
01-10-2010, 10:16 PM
Asker - Don't have two line-weights on the S, and I stand by everything I've ever told you.
SLM - New to graff thread.
Roes - I literally said out loud "Damn that ***** got hella better." Keep at it, and I dig that E. Push your letters closer together and don't forget to work on hands. Other than that, good job.

Patchy
01-10-2010, 10:20 PM
Fury are you saying my work has no potential what do i need to work on

cow
01-11-2010, 02:37 AM
crits or w/e boredomkills


http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i79/sly89/DSCF5403-1.jpg
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i79/sly89/DSCF5404.jpg
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i79/sly89/DSCF5406.jpg
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i79/sly89/DSCF5408.jpg

Fury
01-11-2010, 03:48 AM
Fury are you saying my work has no potential what do i need to work on

All of your letters basically. Your M looks bad, and so do the rest. Basically, copy keyboard letters and use bars. This way, all of your letters will be proportional.

Kow - I don't understand your first sentence, but give crits. I don't like the character, and all your letters look whack, in my opinion. Actually the last O and W look good.

cow
01-11-2010, 03:57 AM
Kow - I don't understand your first sentence, but give crits. I don't like the character, and all your letters look whack, in my opinion. Actually the last O and W look good.

it says in full sentence all written out : crit me or talk shit whatever is clever..i dont post really but boredom causes me to....

and graffiti have no rules... lol jk... hmm how would u improve both my char. and some letters?

lord patrick
01-11-2010, 04:07 AM
http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k276/kmurray_2006/boris005.jpg


diggin some of those throws radawg.
your simples coming along. jus work on your bars

Aktag
01-11-2010, 07:44 AM
Cocacola: That 1st piece is cool :)
suparjafar: Like others said, your progressing. I like ur R
Patchy: I think you should try simpler....straight letter, imo.
Squared: Nice piece, but i think that i've seen same letter all the time from you...dunno

My latest piece:
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9840/picture011ku.jpg

lord_plankton
01-11-2010, 11:02 AM
overall not too bad, pay more attention to proportions, your R is way too squeezed compared to the others, the o is alright , try to place the extension somwhere else...L and N go good together but your i is perfectly out of place, so strange, bottom n top extension, how its leaning forward to the L i guess you get the idea....oh and id try to make a fat first outline n then a second, you have three outlines, i mean it doesnt look bad but try switch it up n see what it looks like...

Aktag
01-11-2010, 11:42 AM
Thanks! :)

suparjafar
01-11-2010, 12:13 PM
boris thats so sick. rolin i like everyhing but that r

WasteFour
01-11-2010, 01:53 PM
Hey people,
Im new here.
You dont wanna know where, but im writing for a long time. Here I guess Im a toy. Well probably, hers something I did yesyerday. =]
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5373/newstyleo.jpg

-Empty-Can-
01-11-2010, 02:34 PM
Bump these

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/throwie001.jpg

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch005.jpg

and something new

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch.jpg

I fell like some parts of letters are unproportional and my bars could be thicker
^^crits on them

waste-there was a guy on here who wrote waster and he passed away. You might wanna change the name
roes-try to make the round parts of your letters rounder. Them seem boxy and jagged
SLM-bubble letters and bars. although I do like the 5th one
asker- don't make the K cover up so much of the E at the bottom. Your outlines are touching. Try to give it some space. If you understand what I mean.
rolin-cirve your I the other way

Trestoner707
01-11-2010, 02:46 PM
waste - write whatever u want who gives a fuuu shit even i like the word waste
stot - ur things go from better to worse IMO the last ones ehhh the worst. ur 3d is off too
aktag - ehh clean for the most part just gotta work on the leter form
boris - to many extensions i dont understand


on another note i dont understand why people keep coming back with damn near the exact same sketch as they have for over a month now n keep wanting crits lol

prefer
01-11-2010, 02:50 PM
hey guys whatsup, some rescent sketrchs
http://i569.photobucket.com/albums/ss140/baydude/923_0169.jpg

Schizz
01-11-2010, 03:28 PM
Passer, why a double S mate? That's going to be a pain in the arse if you ask me. Stay simple like you did in your top sketch and make your your sketches a bit bigger, maybe get your letter a bit chunkier too.

Stot, top one's the best there if you ask me. Middle one, pick a style and stick with it, you've got a mix of curves smooth edges and sharp one. It's easy as fuck to do, you just gotta go slower. The bottom one is aright apart from the 3D mucking up in a couple of places. Try doing it as a 1 point perspective or whatever, you know? Mark a point at the bottom of your page and trace your 3D back to it. It makes a good guide. Not a huge fan of the style of lettering you picked but that might just be personal preference. Fuck, at least you're coming up with your own shit. Oh and if you don't know already, look up stot in the dictionary, tee-hee.

Waste, lettering's really nice man, if you can paint like that, you're well on your way. I'd feel a bit guilty critting that since I probably can't do better, haha!


shitty quick sketch I did on the bus today, not really sketched anything graffiti related for a while, I've just noticed the Z is way to fucking small but fuck, I'm posting it anyway, since I typed this shit and uploading this cunt. Anything you guys would change apart from the aforementioned? I might line it in or something after I fix it.

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n8/Zatoichi_01/P1010033.jpg

suparjafar
01-11-2010, 03:28 PM
emptycan you should change your name...

-Empty-Can-
01-11-2010, 04:14 PM
Stot, top one's the best there if you ask me. Middle one, pick a style and stick with it, you've got a mix of curves smooth edges and sharp one. It's easy as fuck to do, you just gotta go slower. The bottom one is aright apart from the 3D mucking up in a couple of places. Try doing it as a 1 point perspective or whatever, you know? Mark a point at the bottom of your page and trace your 3D back to it. It makes a good guide. Not a huge fan of the style of lettering you picked but that might just be personal preference. Fuck, at least you're coming up with your own shit. Oh and if you don't know already, look up stot in the dictionary, tee-hee.
I'm not really sure what you mean one the middle one. I understand I have some sharp points and some round points in it but what's wrong with that? I understand I fucked up the 3D in the last one. I completely messed it up on the second T. I did use the point thing put I never really do this style of 3D so I messed it up.

Yes I know what it means. I already explained that in the bombs/pieces thread.


emptycan you should change your name...

No.

sinkilla1
01-11-2010, 05:59 PM
im back lol new werd crits for you passer keep going make the bars wider
stot your on the write path
http://i50.tinypic.com/25taweb.jpg

Zookyook
01-11-2010, 06:19 PM
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9840/picture011ku.jpgur getting better at filling rolin... i dont like where the bottom of the I meets the N though... the R is nice, the shading under ur chunks looks good. id say step outta the box and keep what u learned with bars in mind but try something different... gets cleaner each time though

arson i dont like the incomplete outline, makes ur R look like a B and ur N look like a P

stot i hate that pencil one lol the O is terrible... the last one is ok though, pens for throwups kinda suck unless its just one color

lakim shabazz
01-11-2010, 06:31 PM
that waste burrrrns word bond

weakfingers
01-11-2010, 07:30 PM
Rolin-Looking good,
Sinkilla-The merging letters dont look to fly
Taz-Start over
Prefer-new to graffiti thread will help you out, or just practice bars.
Stot-work on letter flow
Waste-Looking ill as fuck but I would remove that S extention if I where you.


Finding it hard to cross over to more advanced style, should i keep doing simple shit or try to just freeestyle sketches more? help plox?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9616.jpg

-Empty-Can-
01-11-2010, 08:50 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/piece.jpg

Decided to color it.

"Sin"
01-11-2010, 09:06 PM
has anyone ever seen anyone write bosk, bask?

b SQUARED 08
01-11-2010, 09:27 PM
Finding it hard to cross over to more advanced style, should i keep doing simple shit or try to just freeestyle sketches more? help plox?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9616.jpg

I feel you on that lol. I've been runnin' through the same sketch so many times to get it right. Wanna exchange? I write ASKER.

weakfingers
01-11-2010, 09:35 PM
aight, Ill start sketching. illl have my posted soon

Church
01-11-2010, 09:38 PM
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/piece.jpg

Decided to color it.

fucking yes and then some. Do better on the fill next time though, you have crayons so there is no reason why you can't make it look elite. I like the style though.

Weakfingers you still need to work on the basics, but it has a lot of potential for style. I like the last three letters especially. The S is the weakest letter in your setup, partially because of its size and also because it doesn't flow as well since it has so many hard angles compared to the other letters.

schizz your letters have good potential for style, but by adding the drips as part of the drop 3d takes away from the letter itself. It weakens it structurally. Nice job keeping them all the same size though, and as always I'm a big fan of symmetry, and the first and last letters "round the piece" out nice.

weakfingers
01-11-2010, 10:12 PM
Word, I hate my S ive been struggaling in between letters for a while but Ill just keep working on simples.


and heres your sketch asker, not the best but i havent done any of those letters , but what ever you can probably take some shit from it.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9617.jpg

Flash_One
01-11-2010, 10:15 PM
http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/2479/0111002106.jpg (http://img63.imageshack.us/i/0111002106.jpg/)

some advice would be extremely appreciated thanks...

????
http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/3632/0111002121.jpg (http://img39.imageshack.us/i/0111002121.jpg/)

????
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/6153/0111002128jmgpgwpwmpg.jpg (http://img706.imageshack.us/i/0111002128jmgpgwpwmpg.jpg/)

zennegen
01-11-2010, 10:35 PM
pick a style and stick with it, you've got a mix of curves smooth edges and sharp one.



what makes that a bad thing?
http://i50.tinypic.com/1ghet1.jpg

b SQUARED 08
01-11-2010, 10:45 PM
Right on Squint. Sorry, yours came out shitty too lol. Feel free to take from it what you will:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo22.jpg

Aktag
01-12-2010, 07:14 AM
Thanks for crits.

Waste: Looking pretty good tho :)
fingers: It's ok but I don't like that extention on R
Squared: Dunno why u colored in Q, U and N, i'll just outline like on other letters...imo

Schizz
01-12-2010, 11:13 AM
what makes that a bad thing?
*snip*]

Not really the same thing, is it?

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n8/Zatoichi_01/P1010034.jpg

Finished my shit off. Probably would have been aright without the drip/melty thing, I don't think I'm gonna try that again, it doesn't look too good when it's actually part of the lettering. ...When I do it at least.

Flash, keep doing what you're doing, that's good.