Blackbooks

[weakfingers]

snoozr- Fix your R up the extention is bad looking. Add some shadow, but its coming along well

[transmission]

go simpler. alot simpler. then work your way up

me?

[ILL STREET BLUES]

street blues - change the top of your R[/QUOTE]

lol were do you see a r? i think ur looking at the z. it says sevz6

[BlacktodaFuture]

me?

yes

[Stuck]

tryin out the funk quickie
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo10-1.jpg

[Darkeist]

snoozr- Fix your R up the extention is bad looking. Add some shadow, but its coming along well

thanks, i know it got kinda fucked up when i was outlining/filling.

but thanks.

[weakfingers]

Awake- Read the new to graff thread and that will send you in the right direction
Stuck-Looks good, keep it up



Im trying to get loose and throw my lines more and I know it looks like it getting bigger/un-proportioned but I just took the picture on an angle. crits please
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9530.jpg

[boodah]

The S doesn't fit, make it thicker.

[JustChillin]

Stuck you should loose alot of the extensions.
weakfingers that looks fuckin sick, i wanna see that painted.

havent posted in a while. a new name im working on. "Blir" any improvement?

http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/0107101535a.jpg

[shem]

i like it squint

[Stuck]

lol just chillen...u havnt posted in a while? how bad were u before? are u going for a throwup in that one.
aha if ur going for a simple use bars...if thats a throwup its pretty weak no real constructive crit there
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo12-1.jpg

[sinkilla1]

prolly not gonna listen but ima say anyway the first peice dont curve the left leg of the H the second won is fixed up and looks tight xD

[rasta tagger]

http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u270/GrrrrrrlJeans/4167343688_3f5f633d4d_b.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

so much better then when you first started.

[n8galicia]

damn rasta thats some sick shit

[weakfingers]

Geek- That shit looks good but im not feeling the name. One thing i would do is make the arm of the K an extention of the E

[JustChillin]

lol just chillen...u havnt posted in a while? how bad were u before? are u going for a throwup in that one.
aha if ur going for a simple use bars...if thats a throwup its pretty weak no real constructive crit thereYes its a throwup i think its really easy to see that. dont get too butt hurt cus i said you needed to loose a few extensions.

Any real criticism?

[Flash_One]

http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/8773/flashavatarn.jpg (http://img694.imageshack.us/i/flashavatarn.jpg/) http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/flashavatarn.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img694/flashavatarn.jpg/1/)

any advice?

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo13-1.jpg
dont liek R's

[eng]

Yes its a throwup i think its really easy to see that. dont get too butt hurt cus i said you needed to loose a few extensions.

Any real criticism?

yo man if you want some real crits then you should go away and practise it 100 times before you post one. the guy is only giving you a bad crit cause you need to read up on posts or just go round your city checking graffiti to see what it actually looks like to understand what you're trying to do.

Here's a good crit: Throwies are the essence of street graffiti - they embody the speed and precision you need to succeed on the street. The whole idea of a throwup is that you write your name - bigger than a tag - in just a few seconds longer. That means your lines cant look tight and careful like yours do, they gotta look speedy, energetic, rounded, fast. When a real graffiti writer sprays up a throwie he does it in 20-40 seconds, just search COPE2 in youtube. your sketches need to represent this speed and energy - and yours? well its just sittin there on the page like a fat kid on the sofa

hope that helps

[eng]

safeway - cant really read anything apart from S at the end which is nice but for me personaly i cant really crit it
CPAM - dont really like this shit its too computerised for me i fell graffiti is more about the hand, the man-made mark and this feels rigid and has little flow - that my opinion
stuck - character looks nice but i dont really get the orangey smokey shit around him
safeway - im really liking the second one down with the beer labels - though i reckon it could lose a little of the slime and increase the legibility slightly - does it say RST or JST?
ILL street blues - work on your 3d drop its relly inconsistent. think of it as each point has equal distance and angle away - draw dots and connect them
eark - really nice except for the R in my opinion, its all flows and the letters seem effortless

now my turn:

http://imgur.com/ykgAH.jpg

can i get a real crit on this... i gave 6
if you want crits then give them out too... unless you're real toy

[Stuck]

your bars look kinda sketchy and the areas around some corners like the top right part of ur e and top left part of ur z have weird lumps...fix those. the middle bar on the Z is to thin and the two middle bars on the M are weird....cant crit that cus i suck at M's

[eng]

i'll give a few more crits:
HEIR - I really like the overall flow of the piece - especially in the top of the I - there really nice curves and angles - its tight right there. What i would say is that the bottom left bar of the H seems to bend inward awkwardly? consider a symmetrical extension to you R to balance the sketch out maybe? also not feeling the bottom half of your R - i think you should split the bars apart at the bottom

[eng]

your bars look kinda sketchy and the areas around some corners like the top right part of ur e and top left part of ur z have weird lumps...fix those. the middle bar on the Z is to thin and the two middle bars on the M are weird....cant crit that cus i suck at M's

decent crit man thanks alot

[Stuck]

yeah my R is a real killer but i dun get wat u mean about splitting the bar???

[eng]

i mean the right, zig-zagged bar of the R tucks under the straighter left foot of the R - i feel that if should kick out to the right a bit more so its less like a B (i know it doesnt look anything like a B but just for the sake of the R having more flow) (in my opinion)

[lord_plankton]

tryin out the funk quickie
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo10-1.jpg

You really seem to struggle with the H alot , you keep bending its legs strangely , work on that,i like top of r too,

referring to your last post ive to say that youve definately improved,on the one hand i feel the top of your r, but on
on the other hand its a bit too curvy n smooth compared to the other letters, all the other bar endings extensions n stuff are way more sharp angle shaped...alos id open up the e a lil more cuz it looks squeezed give it room to breath, bottom middle e i is wired too, lots of little stuff goin on, not really contributing to the overall appearance, last but not least you should work on your i , its a bit too big n in your recent posts it looks like t. but still good job though

[M3KA1!]

now in my professional expertise, what you all need to do is take a break and enjoy some french toast sticks

[Stuck]

trying a whole bunch of different things but with the similiar styles/conections
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo15-1.jpg
improving?

[408Bomber]

http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/8773/flashavatarn.jpg (http://img694.imageshack.us/i/flashavatarn.jpg/) http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/flashavatarn.jpg/1/w640.png (http://g.imageshack.us/img694/flashavatarn.jpg/1/)

any advice?
Ur starting to get it, Now try and make it more simple first. Than start playing with your bars.


http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo13-1.jpg
dont liek R's
I like it.

[Elno]

trying a whole bunch of different things but with the similiar styles/conections
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo15-1.jpg
improving?

Looks dope, paint it much :D

[Trestoner707]

no dont.. not talking down or nothing

[M3KA1!]

HAHA thisssss guy^^

[BlacktodaFuture]

[QUOTE=BlacktodaFuture;1539251]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03208.jpg?t=1263008900

^ Not even close to done w. the elephant. and the F sucks, i forgot to erase it.

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03210.jpg?t=1263008940

^the F is ehh, and idk if i want to keep the extending bars on the A and F and only put it on the S and the R that im going to draw.

crits: flash: that L is fucked up. and your lines are really sketch. zome make straight lines.

[408Bomber]

[QUOTE=BlacktodaFuture;1539251]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03208.jpg?t=1263008900

^ Not even close to done w. the elephant. and the F sucks, i forgot to erase it.

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03210.jpg?t=1263008940

^the F is ehh, and idk if i want to keep the extending bars on the A and F and only put it on the S and the R that im going to draw.

crits: flash: that L is fucked up. and your lines are really sketch. zome make straight lines.
Dont really like the style, but I can definitly see it ending up as something crazy. Keep working with it if you like it.

[408Bomber]

wo0pz my bad for the double post

[RemoZ]

Weakfingers-That would make a sick burner, you really should paint that
Rasta- The GEEK name is kinda whack, maybe like REEK? that could be alota good balance like backwards R and shit in a piece? Plus it would give more to work with

[Aktag]

trying a whole bunch of different things but with the similiar styles/conections
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo15-1.jpg
improving?
Dope piece, definitely a lot better H than before. Keep it up

[Mellowdrone]

Musk
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9048/musk3.jpg
lol this thing says Rebecka. :)
http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/3307/beccai.jpg
Rezi
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/1535/rezi2.jpg

[Mellowdrone]

sorry doublepost

[M3KA1!]

http://i786.photobucket.com/albums/yy146/BUSERone/002-3-1.jpg

crits

[Trestoner707]

i just dont like the bottom bars heir

[funhouseXcast]

simplify mekai

[weakfingers]

M3KA1!- I cant really read it, I cant see a flow either, not hating its just my opinion.
Mellowdrone- I cant read the first and the second ones, but the last kez needs proportion.
Stuck-You missed the 3-d on the R
Black to the future- You could really do more if your doing 3 letters. Make them go together more, They look like 3 seperate letters not really a name, the s if bending to the left really far, The A is in the middle and the F is just there.


Still working with a new style
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9531.jpg

[Fury]

SQ are squished.

Mellow - Go simpler, I can't read anything.
Mekai - Go simpler also, but you have more basic shit.

[faser]

Squint I like it. That's one of your better S but it covers the Q too much.
Maybe you could make the U exactly like that upside down N

[lord_plankton]

[QUOTE=weakfingers;1539471]M3KA1!- I cant really read it, I cant see a flow either, not hating its just my opinion.

on a close look it actually does say meka but lots of stuff goin on flyin around n the letters itself lack structure n flow but its something to build up on...

like your last one squint, id only cut off t tail n as well as everyone else said space out s n q,i like the idea of n upside down u , you should try it, i is funny

[sodi]

very good

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2689/4260214525_fc11479baf.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4057/4260216881_b04bb2404e_o.jpg
tools were prisma steatdler sharpies in bics

[Mellowdrone]

better? says ocean
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/9607/ocean1u.jpg

[Fury]

^ It's a little bit better, but just do the keys on your keyboard and lose all the extensions and stuff. I can't tell when a line ends a letter.

Crus - Good as usual.

[M3KA1!]

how bout you guys get more technical. get off the simples. not hatin. just my opinion

[Mellowdrone]

i thought it flowed pretty well... :( i guess more practice though. ive gotten way better in the past month though, so thats good.

[BlacktodaFuture]

how bout you guys get more technical. get off the simples. not hatin. just my opinion

dont listen to him. stay w. simples till you get better.

[M3KA1!]

i wasnt talkin bout him. im talkin bout mine. everyone said stick to simples. i got simples down. honestly yea mellow you need to take it down to simples. work on bar structure and such

[BlacktodaFuture]

nah, i thought that too and i stuck to them and it really cleaned some shit up, idk it made my shit look better. yet it's still not where i want it
pix for talking

i like the S in mine yet i hate how everything turned out

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03212.jpg?t=1263099053

weakfingers: im liking.
Crus: i said something in intermediate
Ocean, bars.

[suparjafar]

ocean do simples.
squint the char throws me off IMO
safer i like it, but not the f.

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0283.jpg

rough sketch. any crits before i start to fill in my pieces? also ik, 3ds off on the bottom of the s.

[BlacktodaFuture]

nah, i thought that too and i stuck to them and it really cleaned some shit up, idk it made my shit look better. yet it's still not where i want it
pix for talking

i like the S in mine yet i hate how everything turned out

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03212.jpg?t=1263099053

weakfingers: im liking.
Crus: i said something in intermediate
Ocean, bars.

bottem page bump. roes. nice. you are progressing. remember to use a vanishing point

[408Bomber]

bottem page bump. roes. nice. you are progressing. remember to use a vanishing pointthat E is dope

[suparjafar]

fixed up a little. fill soon, once i can rack any markers at all.

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0284.jpg

[Zookyook]

i like ur progress roes... try using a vanishing point like black said, even though u dont HAVE TO it always looks better... color them shits too! steal markers from children lol

[M3KA1!]

crayons dude. be a gangsta and use crayons

[-Empty-Can-]

Why would you use a vanishing point for a side-ways 3D?

[M3KA1!]

i take that back. black i do dig yer simples but after awhile you gotta progress. so just keep on movin up slowly. you'll get it. tweak yer 'f' a lil. it seems a lil off. maybe its just me. stay up. oh and yer handys aint half bad either

[Th3t4]

this isn't really graffiti but it's for a tattoo
this will become an ambigram (a word that reads the same both ways up)
so I only have to draw 2 characters to cover the whole word, the F/e and r/e
it should read "free". and no, I did not choose the word.
i flipped the letters and put them next to the unflipped so you can see how it would read.
crits welcome
http://i48.tinypic.com/wtzr6u.jpg

[Patchy]

tips please
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0406.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0407.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0408.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0409.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0411.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0412.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0415.jpg

[b SQUARED 08]

Roes: Your E needs some tweaking, but overall it looks pretty good. Just keep runnin' through simps and practicing making clean lines and you'll be good in no-time.
Safer: Your S and A have pretty good flow together, but your F, E, and R throw it off. Your R isn't too bad, so I wouldn't scrap it, but your F and E need a lot of work. I'd develop on that though for sure.
SLM: Read the New To Graffiti Thread and start using bars for your letters. Read the thread and you'll know what I mean.

Tonight's efforts (as it says, disregard the handies- I know they suck, lol):
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo20.jpg

[Patchy]

squared thanks for the tips but ive tried it, but i have trouble with the "s" i dont like boxy can you give me an example on how to use boxs with an s

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0109100133.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0110101655.jpg

Anybody have any criticism on the simple? I usually just bomb but I wanna start really trying simples and shit
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0110102257.jpg

Asker- I am loving that bro
Patchy- Work on just doing simple keyboard letters and use bars.

[Fury]

Asker - Don't have two line-weights on the S, and I stand by everything I've ever told you.
SLM - New to graff thread.
Roes - I literally said out loud "Damn that ***** got hella better." Keep at it, and I dig that E. Push your letters closer together and don't forget to work on hands. Other than that, good job.

[Patchy]

Fury are you saying my work has no potential what do i need to work on

[cow]

crits or w/e boredomkills


http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i79/sly89/DSCF5403-1.jpg
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i79/sly89/DSCF5404.jpg
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i79/sly89/DSCF5406.jpg
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i79/sly89/DSCF5408.jpg

[Fury]

Fury are you saying my work has no potential what do i need to work on

All of your letters basically. Your M looks bad, and so do the rest. Basically, copy keyboard letters and use bars. This way, all of your letters will be proportional.

Kow - I don't understand your first sentence, but give crits. I don't like the character, and all your letters look whack, in my opinion. Actually the last O and W look good.

[cow]

Kow - I don't understand your first sentence, but give crits. I don't like the character, and all your letters look whack, in my opinion. Actually the last O and W look good.

it says in full sentence all written out : crit me or talk shit whatever is clever..i dont post really but boredom causes me to....

and graffiti have no rules... lol jk... hmm how would u improve both my char. and some letters?

[lord patrick]

http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k276/kmurray_2006/boris005.jpg


diggin some of those throws radawg.
your simples coming along. jus work on your bars

[Aktag]

Cocacola: That 1st piece is cool :)
suparjafar: Like others said, your progressing. I like ur R
Patchy: I think you should try simpler....straight letter, imo.
Squared: Nice piece, but i think that i've seen same letter all the time from you...dunno

My latest piece:
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9840/picture011ku.jpg

[lord_plankton]

overall not too bad, pay more attention to proportions, your R is way too squeezed compared to the others, the o is alright , try to place the extension somwhere else...L and N go good together but your i is perfectly out of place, so strange, bottom n top extension, how its leaning forward to the L i guess you get the idea....oh and id try to make a fat first outline n then a second, you have three outlines, i mean it doesnt look bad but try switch it up n see what it looks like...

[Aktag]

Thanks! :)

[suparjafar]

boris thats so sick. rolin i like everyhing but that r

[WasteFour]

Hey people,
Im new here.
You dont wanna know where, but im writing for a long time. Here I guess Im a toy. Well probably, hers something I did yesyerday. =]
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5373/newstyleo.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

Bump these

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/throwie001.jpg

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch005.jpg

and something new

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch.jpg

I fell like some parts of letters are unproportional and my bars could be thicker
^^crits on them

waste-there was a guy on here who wrote waster and he passed away. You might wanna change the name
roes-try to make the round parts of your letters rounder. Them seem boxy and jagged
SLM-bubble letters and bars. although I do like the 5th one
asker- don't make the K cover up so much of the E at the bottom. Your outlines are touching. Try to give it some space. If you understand what I mean.
rolin-cirve your I the other way

[Trestoner707]

waste - write whatever u want who gives a fuuu shit even i like the word waste
stot - ur things go from better to worse IMO the last ones ehhh the worst. ur 3d is off too
aktag - ehh clean for the most part just gotta work on the leter form
boris - to many extensions i dont understand


on another note i dont understand why people keep coming back with damn near the exact same sketch as they have for over a month now n keep wanting crits lol

[prefer]

hey guys whatsup, some rescent sketrchs
http://i569.photobucket.com/albums/ss140/baydude/923_0169.jpg

[Schizz]

Passer, why a double S mate? That's going to be a pain in the arse if you ask me. Stay simple like you did in your top sketch and make your your sketches a bit bigger, maybe get your letter a bit chunkier too.

Stot, top one's the best there if you ask me. Middle one, pick a style and stick with it, you've got a mix of curves smooth edges and sharp one. It's easy as fuck to do, you just gotta go slower. The bottom one is aright apart from the 3D mucking up in a couple of places. Try doing it as a 1 point perspective or whatever, you know? Mark a point at the bottom of your page and trace your 3D back to it. It makes a good guide. Not a huge fan of the style of lettering you picked but that might just be personal preference. Fuck, at least you're coming up with your own shit. Oh and if you don't know already, look up stot in the dictionary, tee-hee.

Waste, lettering's really nice man, if you can paint like that, you're well on your way. I'd feel a bit guilty critting that since I probably can't do better, haha!


shitty quick sketch I did on the bus today, not really sketched anything graffiti related for a while, I've just noticed the Z is way to fucking small but fuck, I'm posting it anyway, since I typed this shit and uploading this cunt. Anything you guys would change apart from the aforementioned? I might line it in or something after I fix it.

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n8/Zatoichi_01/P1010033.jpg

[suparjafar]

emptycan you should change your name...

[-Empty-Can-]

Stot, top one's the best there if you ask me. Middle one, pick a style and stick with it, you've got a mix of curves smooth edges and sharp one. It's easy as fuck to do, you just gotta go slower. The bottom one is aright apart from the 3D mucking up in a couple of places. Try doing it as a 1 point perspective or whatever, you know? Mark a point at the bottom of your page and trace your 3D back to it. It makes a good guide. Not a huge fan of the style of lettering you picked but that might just be personal preference. Fuck, at least you're coming up with your own shit. Oh and if you don't know already, look up stot in the dictionary, tee-hee.
I'm not really sure what you mean one the middle one. I understand I have some sharp points and some round points in it but what's wrong with that? I understand I fucked up the 3D in the last one. I completely messed it up on the second T. I did use the point thing put I never really do this style of 3D so I messed it up.

Yes I know what it means. I already explained that in the bombs/pieces thread.


emptycan you should change your name...

No.

[sinkilla1]

im back lol new werd crits for you passer keep going make the bars wider
stot your on the write path
http://i50.tinypic.com/25taweb.jpg

[Zookyook]

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9840/picture011ku.jpgur getting better at filling rolin... i dont like where the bottom of the I meets the N though... the R is nice, the shading under ur chunks looks good. id say step outta the box and keep what u learned with bars in mind but try something different... gets cleaner each time though

arson i dont like the incomplete outline, makes ur R look like a B and ur N look like a P

stot i hate that pencil one lol the O is terrible... the last one is ok though, pens for throwups kinda suck unless its just one color

[lakim shabazz]

that waste burrrrns word bond

[weakfingers]

Rolin-Looking good,
Sinkilla-The merging letters dont look to fly
Taz-Start over
Prefer-new to graffiti thread will help you out, or just practice bars.
Stot-work on letter flow
Waste-Looking ill as fuck but I would remove that S extention if I where you.


Finding it hard to cross over to more advanced style, should i keep doing simple shit or try to just freeestyle sketches more? help plox?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9616.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/piece.jpg

Decided to color it.

["Sin"]

has anyone ever seen anyone write bosk, bask?

[b SQUARED 08]

Finding it hard to cross over to more advanced style, should i keep doing simple shit or try to just freeestyle sketches more? help plox?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9616.jpg

I feel you on that lol. I've been runnin' through the same sketch so many times to get it right. Wanna exchange? I write ASKER.

[weakfingers]

aight, Ill start sketching. illl have my posted soon

[Church]

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/piece.jpg

Decided to color it.

fucking yes and then some. Do better on the fill next time though, you have crayons so there is no reason why you can't make it look elite. I like the style though.

Weakfingers you still need to work on the basics, but it has a lot of potential for style. I like the last three letters especially. The S is the weakest letter in your setup, partially because of its size and also because it doesn't flow as well since it has so many hard angles compared to the other letters.

schizz your letters have good potential for style, but by adding the drips as part of the drop 3d takes away from the letter itself. It weakens it structurally. Nice job keeping them all the same size though, and as always I'm a big fan of symmetry, and the first and last letters "round the piece" out nice.

[weakfingers]

Word, I hate my S ive been struggaling in between letters for a while but Ill just keep working on simples.


and heres your sketch asker, not the best but i havent done any of those letters , but what ever you can probably take some shit from it.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSCF9617.jpg

[Flash_One]

http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/2479/0111002106.jpg (http://img63.imageshack.us/i/0111002106.jpg/)

some advice would be extremely appreciated thanks...

????
http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/3632/0111002121.jpg (http://img39.imageshack.us/i/0111002121.jpg/)

????
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/6153/0111002128jmgpgwpwmpg.jpg (http://img706.imageshack.us/i/0111002128jmgpgwpwmpg.jpg/)

[zennegen]

pick a style and stick with it, you've got a mix of curves smooth edges and sharp one.



what makes that a bad thing?
http://i50.tinypic.com/1ghet1.jpg

[b SQUARED 08]

Right on Squint. Sorry, yours came out shitty too lol. Feel free to take from it what you will:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo22.jpg

[Aktag]

Thanks for crits.

Waste: Looking pretty good tho :)
fingers: It's ok but I don't like that extention on R
Squared: Dunno why u colored in Q, U and N, i'll just outline like on other letters...imo

[Schizz]

what makes that a bad thing?
*snip*]

Not really the same thing, is it?

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n8/Zatoichi_01/P1010034.jpg

Finished my shit off. Probably would have been aright without the drip/melty thing, I don't think I'm gonna try that again, it doesn't look too good when it's actually part of the lettering. ...When I do it at least.

Flash, keep doing what you're doing, that's good.

[Zookyook]

flash i like the one at the bottom best before u added the extensions... if u add them they should look like part of the letter that just went a little more crazy but still keeps the same flow, if that makes sense lol

taz ur bar thickness is inconsistent throughout the sketch... and in some places the 3d doesnt fit right, like mainly on the drips and the far left of the T, watch ur thickness with the 3d too... all lines haveta match for it to be convincing... and one more thing (im not talkin shit just tryin to help) is the actual outline of the letters... i know its a sketch and u cant just lay it down fast but it has to look like u did, make everything a little smoother by making it thicker and matching it all the way around

[M3KA1!]

zook post up yer meka piece and ill probably just do an exchange with you if yer down

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/January-12_1243.jpg

[saltybastard]

hey flash, for your name you couldnt have picked a slower looking font... looks like its standing in the cafeteria line... maybe try italicized straight letters, like there sliding to the right.... food for thought..

[kew1]

ignore the handy

[Flash_One]

hey flash, for your name you couldnt have picked a slower looking font... looks like its standing in the cafeteria line... maybe try italicized straight letters, like there sliding to the right.... food for thought..

k thanks

how about this??

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3314/poonp.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/i/poonp.jpg/)

meh...

[zennegen]

Not really the same thing, is it?


oh, no, i feel you, stot's thing still sucks, just don't say it sucks because there's flowing bends and sharp edges, because it doesn't have to be one or the other. just trying to make that point.

[zennegen]

dubz post. my bad.

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/January-12_1523.jpg

["Sin"]

kew that is pretty sick man, i really like that W.
i stopped writing "sinner one" and im working with my new word "isor" (eye sore) crits would be nice..

http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/2010-01-12195302.jpg

[RedEyes]

its a bad name and holds true, its an eye sore.

[RemoZ]

First attempt at a piece.
http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/656/photo7n.jpg

["Sin"]

ANY OTHER crits! and remoz that looks kinda dumb man... no offence man

[408Bomber]

Not really the same thing, is it?

http://i108.photobucket.com/albums/n8/Zatoichi_01/P1010034.jpg

Finished my shit off. Probably would have been aright without the drip/melty thing, I don't think I'm gonna try that again, it doesn't look too good when it's actually part of the lettering. ...When I do it at least.

Flash, keep doing what you're doing, that's good.
ur 3d is dope. gdfo out this thread.

[Zookyook]

i like the concept of that 3d... but it IS hurtin in a lot of spots...

and isor i dunno man... the letters are ugly... if ur gonna do a throwup make it bubblier or just thicker with straight lines... ur kinda in the middle, and the 3d comin off the top of S O and R doesnt match the I, gotta watch that... make the top of ur R and S slightly taller than the I and R and itll give u more space to add 3d and give it more dimension

["Sin"]

zooyook thanks man, ill work something up and see what happens
.

[408Bomber]

yo 408. the binma battle is good to go as soon as i get your entry. you have till tomorow though so no rushiite...i got my throwie and handie done... just working on the piece lol.... how late can i turn it in tomorrow haha

["Sin"]

zookyook, so something this with the iso, i fucked up the R
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/2010-01-12210620.jpg

[CO_SNAIL]

work in progress
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h221/BHALE1987/CIMG0834.jpg

[CO_SNAIL]

work in progress
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h221/BHALE1987/CIMG0834.jpg

[kew1]

throw that style away

[massacreman]

CO snail,u suck go to the new to graff thread or commit suicide, nah , lol i once was that bad too, just try simple stuff first
sin, it looks like u couldnt make up your mind between something bubble styled or a straight. Do it either one of them.

i write ages but i did ges this one time (i know hes legend blah blah and some youtube guy is named gez too.. woohoo, idfc.)

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4050/4269832046_4181df38dc.jpg

[lord_plankton]

Hey people,
Im new here.
You dont wanna know where, but im writing for a long time. Here I guess Im a toy. Well probably, hers something I did yesyerday. =]
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5373/newstyleo.jpg

thats the best piece ive seen in here for quite some time, but still, at some points you forced your style too much, like the huge extension of the s and the lil of the e , you might draw your t a lil bigger though, beside all that its pretty much on

[Searius]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4001/4271273781_58bc09d530_o.jpg
new in here started b4 about 9 month

[Church]

work in progress
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h221/BHALE1987/CIMG0834.jpg
DO NOT THROW THIS STYLE AWAY. You need a lot of work, but that style has a lot of potential. I actually write like that. I make my letters droop off each other and end in rips. However work on basic letter structure right now and then slowly work your style into it. Some people think that if your graffiti doesn't look like it came straight out of a fucking comic book then it must be a toy style:rolleyes:

Wastefour your piece is looking good. I wouldn't say it is the best I have seen on here in awhile though.

massman the drop on that GES looks good, just work on making the letters stronger.

remoz that is fire. keep it up. I like the sketch look you have going there.

[Zookyook]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4001/4271273781_58bc09d530_o.jpg
new in here started b4 about 9 month

there are already so many 'sear's.... unless uve been writing that a while id change it up.... but i like ur fill a lot actually... use more contrast with ur outline and the shell or forcefield though, when theyre close colors u cant tell where one ends and the other begins, if u used a lighter blue ud be able to see the 3d better is what im sayin... and make sure those drips all go the same way

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/January-13_1024.jpg

[STEP TWO]

any sugggestions as how to make my shit better

[Zookyook]

kew i dont like the color balance in that one.... i like the connection on the letters though

step 2 does that say baron??? u gotta check out the new to graff thread... lose every arrow in that pic and start with simpler shit, right now the pic just makes no sense in a lot of spots...u gotta put in work before u do a big piece and i can tell ur newer

[sinkilla1]

crits step two dont do so many tiny as arrows if your gonna do arrows make them fit with wat your doing
kew your letters are kinda wack im not gonna tell you to do simplies just work on ur letters
sin lol same first but i dont know why you made your I so big and ur r so small idk just try to work on letter size
massacre gez lol man im your number one fan lol jk
and heres a peice i did in my planner xD
http://i49.tinypic.com/202fdt.jpg

[Zookyook]

kew i dont like the color balance in that one.... i like the connection on the letters though

step 2 does that say baron??? u gotta check out the new to graff thread... lose every arrow in that pic and start with simpler shit, right now the pic just makes no sense in a lot of spots...u gotta put in work before u do a big piece and i can tell ur newer

[sinkilla1]

crits step two dont do so many tiny as arrows if your gonna do arrows make them fit with wat your doing
kew your letters are kinda wack im not gonna tell you to do simplies just work on ur letters
sin lol same first but i dont know why you made your I so big and ur r so small idk just try to work on letter size
massacre gez lol man im your number one fan lol jk
and heres a peice i did in my planner xD
http://i49.tinypic.com/202fdt.jpg

[sinkilla1]

go damnit zook u made me double post lol

[Zookyook]

much better with the outlines connected.... looks like u went a little wild on the highlights though, id tone that down, and bring the line in the middle of the n all the way down too, makes things look less flat

[sSimpleMindeded]

Hey people,
Im new here.
You dont wanna know where, but im writing for a long time. Here I guess Im a toy. Well probably, hers something I did yesyerday. =]
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5373/newstyleo.jpg

this is actually really good. that W and A are near perfect. I think the only thing this piece really needs is more balance. The extension on the back of the S even makes sense if you bring the rest of the S up a little further. and personally I wouldnt have 2 extensions coming out of the top of my S like that...but if your going to you should make the extension on the front of the S connect with the T. Here is a little visual of what im talking about

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/860/whoknows.jpg (http://img62.imageshack.us/i/whoknows.jpg/)
obviously^^ this looks like shit im just trying to give you an idea of what im talking about.


Also you should know that there was a writer that wrote waster and has passed away. and they will give you shit about it on this forum. im not im just warning you.

[STEP TWO]

is this any better for more simple?

[Bets369R]

nope. draw the letters exactly how they look on your keyboard.

[Zookyook]

step2 u just have no concept of bars, thats what bets means is u should write regular capital letters and keep the same general concept of where each bar in the letter goes, and when u draw it keep a relative thickness... like the chunks on ur S are over twice the size of the actual bars in the letter

[mexico]

that waste is pretty fly dude, but I don't dig the extensions on the back of the e and s.

i bet you can tell which one was at the bottom of my backpack.

[Zookyook]

man writing gk is almost as bad as writing cope...... that does say gk right?

[mexico]

it says ek. i dont know if thats any better man, they are fun letters to use, what can i say?.

[Inlyn08]

that waste is pretty fly dude, but I don't dig the extensions on the back of the e and s.

i bet you can tell which one was at the bottom of my backpack.

Need to work on that E. Clearly no one could tell it was.. an E.
Keep doing it.

[shep1]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=374&pictureid=2918

for a battle tell me wut u think

[Fury]

I like the typeface, just work on the N and the M.

["Sin"]

shep, i like that bottom one, i like that style

ok i worked on trying to make it straight or bubbly..
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/2010-01-13182551.jpg

[sodi]

I actually really like that. but the bleed through sorta ruins it

["Sin"]

haha yeahh i know its hella gay. i kinda need a new book. but thanks man
anything i can do to make it look nicer?

[sodi]

shadow

["Sin"]

ok

["Sin"]

shodow fuck it up or no?
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/2010-01-13194547.jpg
or
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/2010-01-13194301.jpg

[408Bomber]

imma send my piece in now...

[-Empty-Can-]

Added a few extensions. Fucked up the bottom of the robot. fuck colored pencils

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/piece002.jpg

[shem]

unadd the extensions.

make the O bigger.


to be completely honest id change almost everything the best looking thing on the page is where it says 2010

[Kraft561]

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm238/gube1234/IMG_0083.jpg
i kno its kinda off balance but i just did it real quick. any one got any tips?

[Kraft561]

o and by the way i still gotta add 3d to it

[STEP TWO]

zoo and anyone else is this for better for the bars

[STEP TWO]

i kno it still sucks wicked bad but are the proportions better

[zennegen]

step, don't connect your letters, and don't do that overlapping thing with your S, and do less of an overlap with the other letters.

[-Empty-Can-]

Added a few extensions. Fucked up the bottom of the robot. fuck colored pencils

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/piece002.jpg

just abumpin'

Step- Do simple letters. Like Keyboard letters. Don't worry about adding all these doodads and colors just yet. Learn to do the basics first.

[sinkilla1]

sstot its getting cleaner right path i thin k and urge dats pert tight
http://i49.tinypic.com/202fdt.jpg[/QUOTE]

["Sin"]

arson i really like you highlights for some reason. i think thats hella cool

[sinkilla1]

i know lol i got this inspirtiation from this sticker in my neighbor hood witch has highlites like that so i was shit ill give it a try and zookyook looks like i didnt go to to crazy lol xD

["Sin"]

haha yeah man it looks good i think. i wanna try somethin out kinds similar but with the 3d ya know what i mean??

[sinkilla1]

i dont like making my 3d super fucking exciting maybe a little color in it sometimes.

[M3KA1!]

For Freek
http://i786.photobucket.com/albums/yy146/BUSERone/002-5.jpg

[Fury]

I don't like the tag: looks like it says PRSON. (damn that's a good name too in my opinion). I'm not a fan of the highlights or the O either.

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

im diggin that shit meka. lime greens my color. this is the one i did.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a364/hedbanger/0109002106.jpg

[zennegen]

that arson is dope. and i'm feelin that tag, too, even though it's pretty basic. except for that penis at the end :p

[sinkilla1]

i see no penis xD just a fucked up arrow

[sinkilla1]

i know these are a littl bad and gay xD but just some recents and both those mekas ar pretty banging
http://i50.tinypic.com/v4rnko.jpg
pencil freee style over with pen
http://i46.tinypic.com/2n7f40l.jpg

["Sin"]

arson i like your R man. i wanna a fresh ass R but idk lol this is some shit i just did real quick.crits?
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/2010-01-14182347.jpg

[sinkilla1]

im not gonna tell you to use bars cause i dont there stupid shhhhh lol but when i make my shit i make a solid bar and just add on to that bar it helps because it helps you do letter size shit makes them the same size

["Sin"]

yeahh i know what you mean, like with how my R is all kinds of fucked up and small looking..?

[sinkilla1]

well first of all your bars are way to fat to be that short make the width of your bars smaller or make your letters taller

["Sin"]

i think i made my s a lil too big but i tried to use the bars
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/2010-01-14191703.jpg

[zennegen]

just change the top part of the S, and i think you're good.

[sinkilla1]

make some skinnier bars

["Sin"]

alright man, yeah i think skinnier bars would look good.
aye sinkilla do you have many people in your area that write?

[sinkilla1]

a shit load lol everyone at my school writes theres just some people who are actually good and im not even one of the good ones

[BlacktodaFuture]

here ya go

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03216.jpg?t=1263526383

alts exchange:

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03214.jpg?t=1263526622

hyte exchange:

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03215.jpg?t=1263526510

was kinda lazy so i didnt color or anything. sorry if it looks shitty. it was real quick bc i realized i owed you guys.

["Sin"]

damn your hella lucky. i use to live in hawaii and everyone use to write but when i moved here NO ONE writes lol so it hella sucks dick

[sinkilla1]

Lol where u from now I r delawhere and it's kinda cool there's slot of writers but there's just a lot of toy ass posers not saying I'm not toy but I'm not a poser

[Slittt6]

crits step two dont do so many tiny as arrows if your gonna do arrows make them fit with wat your doing
kew your letters are kinda wack im not gonna tell you to do simplies just work on ur letters
sin lol same first but i dont know why you made your I so big and ur r so small idk just try to work on letter size
massacre gez lol man im your number one fan lol jk
and heres a peice i did in my planner xD
http://i49.tinypic.com/202fdt.jpg

^^^^^^^^^^^
Thats Whats up!!!

["Sin"]

yeah yeah, im in washington now. and yeah the people that do say they write hella suck worse than me haha

[BlacktodaFuture]

cut the chit chat. take it to PMs.

crits?

crits: Arson, i like it, top of the R is alittle wird.
Isor: is that a throw or a simple?

["Sin"]

thats just one of my simps. cause my R in my throwie is garbage. lol

[Fury]

I think it could be a good throw actually. If it's a throw, make it stay like that and you don't need skinnier bars.

Blacktodafuture - I really like your style, but not your simp so much. I don't know what I don't like, I'm just not really feeling it. The Hyte one looks clean though

[Church]

sin the "S" is too big. Nice tag though. Also nice simple style you have going there.

Here is an update on that one I posted awhile back. I haven't been working on it as much since I've been real busy.

http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00059.jpg
Idea outline (5-10mins)
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00060.jpg
Style file(5mins)
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00049.jpg
Outline (3mins or less)
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00055.jpg
began knocking it out now, I think there is where I left it off with you guys.
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00056.jpg
Still more to be done. I worked on it for like an hour or something around there.
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00057.jpg (http://s565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/?action=view&current=DSC00057.jpg)
Whole word is done, but now I gotta block in the tomb and other shit.
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00061.jpg
Perspective and loose outlining
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00068.jpg
This is pretty much where I am right now with it. I gotta do detail work on the trees, get the roots wrapping around everything just right, detail on the stone, lighting, shading, and then colorize it. I have been working on this off and on so I'm in no rush.

The picture below was just a quick 1 1/2 hour sketch I did.
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00074.jpg (http://s565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/?action=view&current=DSC00074.jpg)
I did do an idea outline, but I don't have a pic of it. I did NOT do a style file and it sorta shows I think.
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00075.jpg (http://s565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/?action=view&current=DSC00075.jpg)
Began shading it in
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00081.jpg (http://s565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/?action=view&current=DSC00081.jpg)
Pretty much done. I could clean it up more and take a better pic. It didn't really turn out how I wanted since I freestyled the style and I did not have the actual idea outline handy when I did it. W/e though.
http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/outline.jpg
When I put an outline over it I can see my mistakes easier. The S is weak, R breaks up the flow, and the A could have been better.

Any other crits for either of these sketches?

crit me up bitches

[graff4ever]

nice sketch

[RanO]

http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4739/1501201050352pm.jpg (http://img707.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1501201050352pm.jpg)
http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/9122/1501201050610pm.jpg (http://img64.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1501201050610pm.jpg)

[LeaksOne]

not you again.....stop with the akward slim lookin shit and DO SIMPLES

["Sin"]

rano you have a really different style,i dont see much structure at all anywhere... but i like your handstyle!

[woonybomber]

yeo

do some stright letters mang

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo6-1.jpg
no one tell me thicken up my bars! lulz

[woonybomber]

you changed your5 name agin mang
nice bars i lik the top one you should finish it

[Stuck]

well ive got some toronto heads helpin me out and their tellin that there was a hier already so i changed....gota listen to da boss *****s

[woonybomber]

yeah thats how the game gose b

[Church]

quick hour and a half sketch. BWAAHahHAHAHAHahahHAHa

i know im about to come of as a douch bag so bear with me hear
http://www.myspacecomedy.com/images/funny/bear.jpg

you need to be spending time on your letter structure, not on making them have organic texture with the little chips and dents. dont get me wrong, the finished product is cool and reminiscent of celtic knot shit, but your letters are being severely neglected in favor of slightly gimicky gnarled wood effects that conceal the lack of structure.

and what do you mean by the phrase style file?

anywho, dont take my word for it, do what you think looks good

The last sketch I posted did take less than 2 hours after I got the idea right, no bullshit. Also you didn't sound like a douche, I asked for crits and you gave me honest criticism so I get better. It was insightful and helpful. I don't start shit with people who don't like my art on the internet unless I'm bored or cruising for a ban. Thanks

What I call a style file is something I do to decide what the piece is going to look like in general. It will decide if I do 3d, simple 3d drop, nice straight letters, or maybe add a little this and that to each letter.

Idea outline: To get basic letter structure and flow down

Style file:decides what the letters themselves will look like. You can see the style file I posted loosely resembles how the finished letters look, it was a quick basic sketch.

Outline/blocking in: Most important part I think. Nothing is worse than running out of room on a page, or realizing some character or structure you added won't really flow with everything else. This is where blocking out and outlining helps keep things to size.

Knocking it out: Just doing the damn thing. This can take as long as you want it to, and it is full of annoying steps like coloring, or shading, but the time you spend here will decide how well the piece turns out.

That is just my general work flow for pieces I planned out in my head, or if I have a vision of what I want to do. The last picture I posted is when I just freestyled parts. I do a bit of freestyling and planning, it just depends.


stuck Im feeling that, but maybe make the bars wider.....

Rano nice color schemes. Work on structure now.


Any other crits on my stuff people?

[woonybomber]

i think your shit looks like die59 nd grose7's shit i honestly think your style is fckin insane and all the haters.. are lik i said HATERS!!!

["Sin"]

stuck man... that top m is dope. and i like your bottom r.
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/2010-01-15155029.jpgsomethin i did in class today..

[woonybomber]

i didnt say that i juss said the people that hate are haters ckuz his shit is fresh thats all i waz not saying nething torward you b

[RanO]

not you again.....stop with the akward slim =LeaksOne;1543095]not you again.....stop with the akward slim lookin shit and DO SIMPLES
Yes, Its me again and it was simples...

[sinkilla1]

yo isor man that would be a pretty good throw if you fiz up the s make it less opin in the top bottom just a lil free style felt like just throwing sometin tagoetherthough i tried to do a good fool you can be the judge of that and dont tell me my N is wack i know
http://i48.tinypic.com/1zwxgg.jpg

[RanO]

yeo

do some stright letters mang
LOL Why i should do straight letters!? o_O

[woonybomber]

yeh you should they are better and the flow better thn tht stule it is wired

[MrVONEK]

Yeah try straight lettering first broham.

["Sin"]

i though of a different R.. what ya think?
http://i389.photobucket.com/albums/oo334/markopolo321/2010-01-15174042.jpg

[sinkilla1]

yo your Rs fine for now need to fix that s try dis 1 sec

[STEP TWO]

still wicked shity

[sinkilla1]

second ones not bad at all the first one on the other hand ehhhh
im not mean but its terrible

[LeaksOne]

LOL Why i should do straight letters!? o_O

because you have no grasp whatsoever of your letters.


i didnt say that i juss said the people that hate are haters ckuz his shit is fresh thats all i waz not saying nething torward you b

did you really say "ckuz"? are you a blood or something?

[STEP TWO]

yeah i did the first one before i knew about bars

[sinkilla1]

just a lil free style felt like just throwing sometin tagoetherthough i tried to do a good filll you can be the judge of that and dont tell me my N is wack i know
http://i48.tinypic.com/1zwxgg.jpg[/QUOTE]

[woonybomber]

they both suck not being mean your e is poop and that first one is lik ewwww



not you sin i lik that shit juss no your n
but you got decos or prizmas?

[woonybomber]

did you really say "ckuz"? are you a blood or something?
why r you a ckrab?

lmfao
no im not a blood mi ckuzin is but the first time i said "ck" by mistack i waz juss typin fast

[LeaksOne]

oh so it was your excellent typing skills. gotcha.

and no i dont gang bang im against gang banging to the 100th degree.

[sinkilla1]

i never really got what gangs are about just abunch of minoritories versus some diffrent minority verses white people etc and they just kill eachother makes sence right

[woonybomber]

oh so it was your excellent typing skills. gotcha.

and no i dont gang bang im against gang banging to the 100th degree.

yeah my excellent typing skills lmfao

oh yeah gang b^anging is not ckewl lol


yeah killing people ova a color is the best thing in the world
i juss sit back nd watch all the little asin kill echother lmfao jk

[MrVONEK]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=404&pictureid=2932


????????????????

[408Bomber]

stuck is my hero.

[woonybomber]

????? y

[Stuck]

not feeling this oen to much...to sloppy
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo7-2.jpg

[408Bomber]

his bars are fucking sick.... i wish my bars lo0ked half as go0d as his... i cant do bars for shit.

[MrVONEK]

crit? on the blue one

[408Bomber]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=404&pictureid=2932


????????????????
im feelin that K. pretty dope in general.

[woonybomber]

yeah i feel you there his bars are sick and mine suck so bad it pisses meh off lik fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck stuck y are you so gewd lol

[sinkilla1]

woony you just suck in general lol

[woonybomber]

ahhahaah fuck you mang lol i dont suck that bad i like mi graff i dotn care wat ne one has to say a bout it lmfao

[sinkilla1]

nah man im jp u havent posted anytthing in a while

[STEP TWO]

another atempt at simple

[woonybomber]

nah man im jp u havent posted anytthing in a while

yeah mang i know i havent even been on in lik a week lol and i realized i waz filling the forums with nonscence and it need to stop yahearmeh

[sinkilla1]

yahihearyoubutdoeseverythinghavetobeconnected?

[RanO]

http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/8671/16012010125134pm.jpg (http://img269.imageshack.us/my.php?image=16012010125134pm.jpg)

[Stuck]

use bars and go simple...it looks like shit...FOOL!

[woonybomber]

yahihearyoubutdoeseverythinghavetobeconnected?

no juss yahearmeh bekuz lil wayne said it lik tht




yeah dude that shit looks lik you gave a 3 year old a bunch of crayons nd let him scribel on the paper then you did a handy next to it then took a pic of it and posted it (mang you realy suck is the point that im trying to stress here !!!!!!!!!!!!!) lol

[sinkilla1]

yo dog has anyone seen this i posted it on like 3 pages no thaoughts fuck ? BBAMP
http://i48.tinypic.com/1zwxgg.jpg[/QUOTE][/QUOTE]

[woonybomber]

i gave you crits on it nd then i asked you if you got decos or prizmas?

[MrVONEK]

god blezz you all.

[sinkilla1]

yo fucking eddited it in there lol i didnt see it and i have a shit load of decos painters etc

[woonybomber]

god blezz you all.

? were the fuck dose god kome in to play when we are talkign about graffiti


yeah i love decos i need to go to the craft store and rak some

[sinkilla1]

yo dont talk about god and graffiti the nioght before i ghot caught i was talking to my friend like god is prolly a bill board smasher hittin those heaven spots pun intended and the next morning got bopped

[woonybomber]

i didnt bring it up that nicka did

[MrVONEK]

not feeling this oen to much...to sloppy
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo7-2.jpg

im DIGGN this M bra

[MrVONEK]

not feeling this oen to much...to sloppy
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo7-2.jpg

im diiiiggn tha M bra..

kinda go simpler on the R and E...but stay with the sAme concept dude, it looks good.

[woonybomber]

see lik that dubbel posten^^^^^^^

[sinkilla1]

double post his bad hes a fucking noob fag your a fuckng douche bag your a fag your a bitch all of you can suck my dick
WE DIDNT START THE ?????

[woonybomber]

double post his bad hes a fucking noob fag your a fuckng douche bag your a fag your a bitch all of you can suck my dick
WE DIDNT START THE ?????

wat the fck r you trying to do poetry for skewl or some shit lmfao jk

but am i the douche bag or am i the fag cus i want to be teh douche bag mang


and start wat mang???

[sinkilla1]

its a fucking song retard
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_QyYaPWasos

[woonybomber]

oh mi bad niggs im kinda slow lol and im not retarded im juss special lol jk