Blackbooks

[FlippingChickens]

shore im fealing the first one,2nd one you should have added 3d to your letters..sikoh that looks solid just bring the s down and keep working hard at it

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture64.jpg

[SofatOner101]

Hpir - your pic is too light. Grab a black texta or something and go over your stuff so its visible ay. I'd like to see those tags properly, they look pretty sweet.

[B.S. P0LICE]

nice shore, keep it going and youll be on your way to intermediate before summer

[FlippingChickens]

i like the one on the bottom kan
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3058.jpg

[woonybomber]

okay tofe your 3d is getting better but i tought you were going to rape me in that battle have you looked at it lately

[prefer]

wow flippin, nice ass sketches man

[FlippingChickens]

yea woony next time ill let my work do the talking.. but honestly i havent seen anything appealing from you,i'd like to see more flix your always talking..same goes to you prefer,and thanks..what you think about disss!!

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3061.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3065.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3059.jpg

[prefer]

first ones killing, best shit i seen on here in a while no joke, first time ive seen bars used in the right way in a while, same with woonies a while back

[B.S. P0LICE]

flipping you got the bars down but not the flow. work on that

[prefer]

you must be smokin bs flippins got shit on lock

[B.S. P0LICE]

no, no he doesent. and yes i do smoke but that in no way hinders my ability to judge toy graff and catch mistakes from a mile away. ive been doing this since before you knew what toy was, youd think by now i know what im talking about

[-Empty-Can-]

some quick 3D. A lot my lines are off but i rushed it
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch013.jpg

Tried to bend my letters and start adding small extensions. amidoinitrite?
http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch014.jpg

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch012-1.jpg



bump for crits

Tofe- Start with straights. You have no idea what your doing

[woonybomber]

no crits do some thing new wtf the same old shit nigguh get a life draw some new shit

[prefer]

3-d lookin really cool not gonna lie, but uh, whats up witht he t in the second, that looks like a swastika man, not cool at all man, damn your lucky you aint around me with that shit or you would have serious problems

[FlippingChickens]

empty can ive been writing since late 06 so dont talk shit ive put more tags in the street than what youve put in your sketchbook

prefer - thanks man i thought u were just an asshole who beefs with everyone i never thought i'd here a compliment from u

police - yea i can deffinatly play with the flow some more..ill have a new improved version tomorrow

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3066.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

empty can ive been writing since late 06 so dont talk shit ive put more tags in the street than what youve put in your sketchbook

Quality over quantity homie..

[FlippingChickens]

its the other way around ,to have quality you need quantity

[prefer]

its the other way around ,to have quality you need quantity

you got your time to shine man now back down

[-Empty-Can-]

Rofl. Sure is...

[Flawless Victory]

Quantity > everything.
You're shit can look good as hell, but nobody will give a fuck if they don't get a chance to see it.
Quality is a matter of opinion, but NOBODY can debate whether or not you get up, you either do or you don't.

[-Empty-Can-]

True but I would still rather see a hand full of good tags rather than hundreds of shitty ones.

[Flawless Victory]

Who are you going to remember at the end of the day, though?
Every writer in Detroit knows about Fluff and Mr Derby,
but there are mad writers that are dope as hell that don't really get noticed, because they don't paint often.

[-Empty-Can-]

You win. :(


lol

[B.S. P0LICE]

theres a big difference between being known and being respected. i never EVER think twice about going over shitty work. no matter how hard the kid gets up. id rather be respected by few for solid work than known by all for shit style.

their not laughing with you their laughing at you

[Flawless Victory]

They still know who you are.
I'm not saying fuck ever trying to produce anything worth it's weight in salt.
I'm just saying that getting up is THE most important part of graffiti.

[FlippingChickens]

nobody cares if u go over shitty work its shitty so obviously thats why your going over it..all known for shit style doesnt exist,someone who is known is obviously good if they had a shit style it'il just be another toy.. putting in a lot of work meaning tags,throwups,rooftops,hollows is well respected not just doing a fancy peice and thinking your god because your crew tells u it looks dope..and like flawless just said getting up is the definition of graffiti ..the more you do it,the more your doing graffiti,that simple.

[-Empty-Can-]

FV is right but I still feel you need style and have to look good doing it.

[sinkilla1]

i feel like th french fries are better then the pizza the more you french fry and pizza your gonna have a good time you dont french frie and pizza your ganna have a bad time
sike id have to say quality ull be know for quallity but maybe if you stay in the books for a while you dont have to worry about either

[Keso]

Should I post this in the intermediate thread? Or does it still need work? Crits in general please?

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/124/l_5960413d8c9147c3801646da1c03ce05.jpg

Edit: COuldnt think of a good filler for this one.

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/125/l_b324124d7e644a9b9becacfa96ebbca9.jpg

[B.S. P0LICE]

do your whole name not just one letter. that character deff belongs here.

graffiti is not about quantity thats a toy mindset. thats why you see so many toys get up so hard thinking thats what its all about, its not. graff is about quantity AND quality. so waht if your up your still a toy

[Flawless Victory]

and so what if your dope, you never get up.
I'd rather be known as a toy then not known at all.

[B.S. P0LICE]

thats like being a gold medalist in the special olympics man

[Keso]

and so what if your dope, you never get up.
I'd rather be known as a toy then not known at all.

That is the stupidest fucking thing I have ever heard.

[-Empty-Can-]

Fv you know that Malt Eratik mural? Or what it used to be. I've never seen anything else from Eratik but I respect him alot more that some of the dudes who get up a around here.

[sinkilla1]

thats like being a gold medalist in the special olympics man

I FUCKING LOLD SO HARD at this

[Flawless Victory]

No sir, I do not know the Malt Eratik mural.

and my bad for not having the same opinion as y'all?
I care more about my ups then super doap arrows, yo.

[-Empty-Can-]

http://www.flickr.com/photos/97851520@N00/377629557/

this one.

[B.S. P0LICE]

its ok your allowed to have your own opinion. but i promise you as you get deeper into graff and the persuit of styles your opinion will change

[sinkilla1]

yo ***** yall dont know shit bout dis coke dis weed

[Flawless Victory]

I've been in the game for a minute, good sir.
You and I have done exchanges.

[hpir]

better look at everything
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture65.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture66.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture68.jpg

[woonybomber]

that k is better but the n kinda looks like and a bro fix it up a lil bit

[Keso]

and so what if your dope, you never get up.
I'd rather be known as a toy then not known at all.

Dude are you fucking serious??? Most writers have forgotten the true meaning of toy. Toy to them is an easy person to fuck with, a piss on graff writer. Trust me homie, you don't wanna be known as a toy.

BTW woonybomber the fuck is up with your sig? Fuck all the hatterz?

[B.S. P0LICE]

I've been in the game for a minute, good sir.
You and I have done exchanges.

im not saying you havent man

[Flawless Victory]

BTW woonybomber the fuck is up with your sig? Fuck all the hatterz?
He hates people that make hats.

[Keso]

He hates people that make hats.

I thought so.

[B.S. P0LICE]

lmao

[CrustOner]

Bastard. I make hats.

[EST2007]

hes starting to move away from his normal style to a more solid direction. and yes the speed lines are totally where its at. like speed holes in samalia

i lol'd

[SEEK NRA]

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i18/systm6/pics3015.jpg?t=1265895757

[prefer]

seek sucks

[Nick_0ne]

crits..?

[prefer]

you in oh crew, theres a pope i n that crew from cakli

[Armored Bulletz]

looks good but watch out for the handy, it looks like pqoe with the line from the second p

[Nick_0ne]

nah, i dont even know that many graff heads, let alone any other dudes named pope.. i definitely did my research as far as vegas goes and theres no pope here.. so does that mean i can take it to the streets? or should i not waste my time?

[Armored Bulletz]

your throw looks set to me

[prefer]

haha word man, you sound like me, the reason i suspected is cali is klose to vegas and the pope from cali has the same style as you lmfao no offense so i was just like hmm did pope move becuase i mean this pope is like from napa or somethin but he gets up from freways to chills all over cali, with practically your same style, hes been writin it for a few years to so im gonna leave you to be the judge, i tend not to want anyone else to have my name but i know iys impossible so i try to tune that out you know idk, your call man stay up

[Nick_0ne]

fuck, well, if u got pics i'll give em a look and make my decision.. if this pope dude is up and we really look that close in style, theres no need in me having a lower level copy in vegas. id rather just start over.. it'd suck, but since i got dudes on this site to lemme knows whats up it shouldnt be that hard..

[Fury]

If nobody in your area writes it and they're not famous, go ahead.

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch015.jpg

Dunno how to add steez to a T and O

[prefer]

If nobody in your area writes it and they're not famous, go ahead.
you'd be surprised

[prefer]

fuck, well, if u got pics i'll give em a look and make my decision.. if this pope dude is up and we really look that close in style, theres no need in me having a lower level copy in vegas. id rather just start over.. it'd suck, but since i got dudes on this site to lemme knows whats up it shouldnt be that hard..

not to scare you man, trll you the truth id throw a number other than 1 at the end just to be safe if you reallty like the name

[woonybomber]

stot do not start cuting peaces out of your shit yet your not ready

[FlippingChickens]

yea dont cut off shit and adding steez to t's isnt that hard but im also having trouble with a nice flow'y o all i do is oval,fucking boring yo ..

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3068.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3069.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3070.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3071.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3072.jpg

how are my new throwy's,can you see the f better now??

is the 1st one looking better than this one?
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3061.jpg

[woonybomber]

yeah the first one is the best i have seen from you

[FlippingChickens]

i did that shit today..im kinda bored with the cloudy o,do u think a oval'y o would suit the peices flow?

[woonybomber]

yeah i think it would flow nice

[prefer]

seconded

[CrustOner]

http://i45.tinypic.com/2wnd2sp.jpg

Chickens, the only thing I really like is the shading.. And flow-wise, the top is better.
Stot, stop the cuts and work on an S with curves.

[blink615]

My first 3d sketch. Give me some advice.

http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/461/blinkgraffiti.jpg (http://img717.imageshack.us/i/blinkgraffiti.jpg/)

[hpir]

better look at everything
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture65.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture66.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture68.jpg
bump
crust-lookin like a good start for a peice but dont forget to use bars, also i wouldent use the extension for the arrow on the T

[rush2]

edit
wrong page

[CrustOner]

crust-looking like a good start for a piece but don't forget to use bars, also i wouldn't use the extension for the arrow on the T

I am using bars..

[hpir]

im trying to say to keep them evenly sized

[B.S. P0LICE]

flippinchickens, your problem is not the o. its the down bar on your E. it doesent fallow the one for the f or the t. fucks with the flow

[Some Kind of Joke]

http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/IMG_0129.jpg

took me a couple hours... :(
but i think its better than what ive been doing, and i didnt copy any style, just started drawing.

[LeaksOne]

couple hours? really? go back to simple letters. its not THAT bad but i think a little more time with simps will help improve that style for you

[Some Kind of Joke]

haha yeah... the reason it took so long was becasue i did like 4 fuckups before this one, and the couple hours time include all the fuckups.

[LeaksOne]

pencil it first

[SofatOner101]

some kind of joke - dude, a sketch like that shouldn't take you hours even with fuckups mate. Not to talk myself up here but I would get something like that done in around 2 mins. Is Erge what you write or are you just practising?

[shore 616]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo18.jpg
Messed the S ^

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo19.jpg
Effed the E ^

still

[Some Kind of Joke]

yeah i know it shouldnt take that long...
and no ERGE isnt what i write, i was just messing around with letters.

[SofatOner101]

yeah i know it shouldnt take that long...
and no ERGE isnt what i write, i was just messing around with letters.

Fair enough then. Keep posting stuff though, cause if anything, the dudes (and ladies although there aint many) here on BS will certainly tell you what you're doing wrong ay.

Shore - I dig that first one but the face in the "O" is a little much for my liking ay.

[kew1]

shore- im lovin the style not so much the e's though they need a lil work but coming along.
erge?- nice simp but def shouldnt take hours this simp under me took 40 mins.

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/February-11_1053.jpg
knowledge withought the e

[kew1]

crits? ik i needa fix my bars ina some places so crit on something else

[AteskOne]

maybe you should have spent a couple hours on it...i'd say go simpler. good that you're working with bars but you dont know how to correctly bend those bars yet. also the W should be split down the bottom of the middle. dont make it one piece like that. W's consist of 4 bars. you made it out of 2. edit* that o is straight hurtin.

shore- top ones fresh. not sure about the second one tho.

simple pen freestyle i did for an exchange with myns.
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3600/getattachmentmyns.jpg (http://img5.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentmyns.jpg/)
gotta bang out a proper version of this still.

[W_G_O_N_E]

http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/1684/dscn6093r.jpgatesk def. nice there def. would like to see it cleaned up . kew- your on to somethin i agree with atesk on the w 4 sure though. shore- feelin both just need to fix the e and make the bottom left bar on your r match up but nice stuff 4 sure

[Chippey]

Shore - I like the face on the first one but it really fucks up the H, i think you should find a way to improve that.

Atesk - i think it looks good, i cant find nothing wrong with it

WGONE - The only thng i dont like about it is the kind of splat shaped green coming off the left and right.

[FlippingChickens]

erge,go simple...

shore, first one is aight but that h is way tooo thick in the middle and the e looks too thick..2nd ones is fresh but that thing on top of the o and that e areee like wtfff..your doing stupid mistakes,it happends to all of us keep practicing im fealing that style you got going on

kew,if you add some 3d it might not look that bad but im not fealing it too much the way it is..

atesk- http://i703.photobucket.com/albums/ww39/Ironclad_2009/borat_nice.jpg

wg- im fealing it but i think you went overboard with accessories like the letters getting peeled off, the backround you should have just left it with the green and thats it..but still overall nice

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3108.jpg
crits?

[Daz801]

my first attempt at toy sketch battle
NOT ACTUAL ENTRY!!!

http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s352/daz801/P100210_2237.jpg

[(SoS)Viruz]

Sketch battle well be post in about 30mins. Any entries after then wont be accepted.
BATTLE IS CLOSED

[AteskOne]

exchange for myns
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/7281/002ih.jpg (http://img519.imageshack.us/i/002ih.jpg/)

[RustySpoon]

Atesk- That's fresh :D What did you use for the shadow?

[AteskOne]

thanks. used cool grey prismas. 80, 40 and 20%. first time i tried doin a drop like that. not real happy with it but im never happy with the first attempt.

[FlippingChickens]

fucking dooooooooope

[b SQUARED 08]

Shore, Kew, and Daz, I'd suggest you all go simpler; you're getting ahead of yourselves. The more you try to rush a style, the worse its going to look because you're missing out on vital steps in style development.

Wgone: Looks pretty cool overall, but it's a bit busy too. I like the colors and the peeling idea, but some of the add-ons are a bit distracting. Overall, nice work. It's the best entry for that battle I've seen so far, so good job.
Atesk: Lookin' good- really diggin' that drop shadow. If there's a letter there you need to work on, it is the S. The lower half looks a little sketchy, but I can't put my finger on what would look good. Maybe make the lower half look like the lower half of the Y?
Tofe: I haven't posted here in awhile, but it doesn't really look like you've progressed at all. I'd crack down and practice getting down some proper simples and repeating it time after time until you get it. I'm not sure if it's that you don't practice enough or that it isn't clicking for ya. Your E really doesn't fit there, bar thicknesses are inconsistent, zero flow between the F and E (that's gonna be hard to do...), etc. Keep at it though.

I haven't been sketching much lately, but I've been working on a throw, and I know my piece hasn't changed a bit, but here's a pic for talking:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo23.jpg

[Rin5e]

Last page was dope.
http://i291.photobucket.com/albums/ll304/Greatgone/f5c907e4.jpg

[%DR.SPRAI%N.E.K]

http://i922.photobucket.com/albums/ad63/big_bellyz/023.jpg

IMG]http://i922.photobucket.com/albums/ad63/big_bellyz/100_0369.jpg[/IMG]

http://i922.photobucket.com/albums/ad63/big_bellyz/100_0370.jpg

http://i922.photobucket.com/albums/ad63/big_bellyz/100_0371.jpg

abort.. crits?? what do yall think??

[%DR.SPRAI%N.E.K]

http://i922.photobucket.com/albums/ad63/big_bellyz/100_0369.jpg
i forgot this one

[Chippey]

dr. sprai - I think the first ones a bit to busy. and the 3D is fucked up on your 3rd piece. The 3d on your last one is tight tho, thats probably my favourite one.

rin5e - drop shadow needs work, and maybe the are could use abit of tweaking.

asker - the throws good i think but the K should fit the style more maybe have a more circular part somewhere as all your other letters do.

[CrustOner]

White lighters are bad luck!

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/February-14_1002.jpghttp://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/February-13_2036.jpg

[Rin5e]

Simples simples simples

[AteskOne]

yeah man like i said before. go simpler. you're trying to bend bars but you dont have enough experience to know where and how to bend the bars yet. go simple, learn the structure and the rest will fall into place.

edit* pic of my exchange with virus for talking
http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/4241/002jpl.jpg (http://img32.imageshack.us/i/002jpl.jpg/)

[Keso]

Abort. Bar letters first.

Yo guys I didn't get a lot of crits on these. Let me know what you think.

http://c3.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/126/l_57a0798c11f64a629e9e2f3c08c3dcd2.jpg

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/125/l_b324124d7e644a9b9becacfa96ebbca9.jpg

http://c2.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/124/l_5960413d8c9147c3801646da1c03ce05.jpg

http://c1.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/116/l_ba57f83e03954f3c94612ea32b7a83b4.jpg

[SNAP!]

http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/Mobile%20Uploads/img056.jpg
http://i474.photobucket.com/albums/rr106/osnapo7/Mobile%20Uploads/img0629.jpg

Bizer's pretty dope if you ask me.

[Atmos419]

Yooo.
Been awhile since I've been here.
Random shit.
http://i45.tinypic.com/2uyssd5.jpg
http://i47.tinypic.com/rcpt0n.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/5vq72b.jpg
http://i45.tinypic.com/jf9oxx.jpg
http://i45.tinypic.com/15x1x0h.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/2cng44.jpg
http://i46.tinypic.com/al2is0.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/2rgm9g0.jpg
http://i45.tinypic.com/59xck.jpg

[WoOnEyBoMEr<~~~]

hey guys miss me much

[-ShAmEE-]

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8717/img0175b.jpg (http://img294.imageshack.us/i/img0175b.jpg/)

WOW its been a while, latest works. atmos - your simples work is probs the best, but keep your bars the same width - you have done this in your inked pieces. plus dont add pointless extensions ask your self why you have done that. and if it works. charaks are kool thou. props for them.

Snap. that throw is dope. put that shit up on a wall and link me it.

Keso - simples.

dr. simples. keyboard use the other thread for help.

ateskone - wow you have improved that shit looks like its coming off the page. means that you have done the shadow well.

[-ShAmEE-]

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/8717/img0175b.jpg (http://img294.imageshack.us/i/img0175b.jpg/)

WOW its been a while, latest works. atmos - your simples work is probs the best, but keep your bars the same width - you have done this in your inked pieces. plus dont add pointless extensions ask your self why you have done that. and if it works. charaks are kool thou. props for them.

Snap. that throw is dope. put that shit up on a wall and link me it.

Keso - simples.

dr. simples. keyboard use the other thread for help.

ateskone - wow you have improved that shit looks like its coming off the page. means that you have done the shadow well.

[AteskOne]

hey guys miss me much
did this kid really make ANOTHER account? you're a fool.

wow shamee's back haha. thanks man good to see an old head posting again. looks like you've improved too. lets see a full piece.

[LeaksOne]

yeah man like i said before. go simpler. you're trying to bend bars but you dont have enough experience to know where and how to bend the bars yet. go simple, learn the structure and the rest will fall into place.

edit* pic of my exchange with virus for talking
http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/4241/002jpl.jpg (http://img32.imageshack.us/i/002jpl.jpg/)

damn this is gorgeous. solid style solid coloring and the drop shadow is amazing. this shit pops out. good shit mayne

[Keso]

yo leaks howd u make that avatar?

[Con-Artist]

Quick pencil sketch, yes I bit on the s and r sum, but I'm workin on changing it up http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/d6714ce9.jpg

[Keso]

Quick pencil sketch, yes I bit on the s and r sum, but I'm workin on changing it up http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/d6714ce9.jpg

lookin good. but on that B connect the middle bar.

[AteskOne]

you can definitely tell that S was bit. its like 10 times better than any of the other letters. idk the piece doesnt really flow either. the OMB and E are all different styles. choose a style and stick to it.

[CrustOner]

Learn to adjust your other letters to fit that S.

[Con-Artist]

i was tryin to do that... any ideas?

[CrustOner]

Notice how the bars look, how they get wider toward the end, and follow the structure. That'll help you out for sure. :]

[Con-Artist]

thanks. ill do that hah

[CrustOner]

Notice how the bars look, how they get wider toward the end, and follow the structure. That'll help you out for sure. :]

[Zookyook]

for the rr tournament... should be posted soon i guess but ill post for crits
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4020/4361086000_830aaf7cd7_o.jpg

[FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle]

im reaaaaally feeling that man

[AteskOne]

thanks. ill do that hah
honestly i dont think you should try that. there's too many inconsistancies in your bar widths from letter to letter. notice how skinny the leg on the R is compared to the leg of the M. i would work with simpler pieces if i were you until you can get solid widths throughout the entire piece.

nice zook. thats probably my favorite piece i've seen from you.

[newbornsek]

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3108.jpg
crits?[/quote]

I think overall your kinda getting it, the shadowing and 3-d is really nice. I think you biggest problem is how you "round" off your letters. If you look at the top of the T E and F they all kinda float off the same way. My crit to you would be to try to use a some bars to round off the top of your letters diffrently, kinda like you did in the beggining of your T.

[newbornsek]

LOL and i just realized i probably bumped something from like 100 pages back. My bad

[LeaksOne]

yo leaks howd u make that avatar?

didnt make it. found it online by accident then edited it on photobucket

[lord_plankton]

you can definitely tell that S was bit. its like 10 times better than any of the other letters. idk the piece doesnt really flow either. the OMB and E are all different styles. choose a style and stick to it.

dont you think its a bit hasty to call that a bite?? i mean its a pretty generic s, its like ive seen it 10000000 times but its the same with the rest of the letters..idk maybe s is just his best n favourite???
Somber, your m is your major flaw plus your letters are really squeezed, try to maintain the same style throughout your whole piece...overall i guess stick to atesk advice n work with simpler stuff

hey crust you still up for the battle?? i kind of forgot about it, just give me conditions n deadline and well be on our way

[DoMakeSayThink]

that has some pretty nice flow tofe, but im not really feeling those purple bars on the 3d, especially on the E

not really feeling this but i'll post it anyways to see what you guys think

http://i374.photobucket.com/albums/oo182/skoreone/Photo193.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

work on making your hands flow

[DoMakeSayThink]

haha yeah for sure, i realized that after i outlined with marker and i was just like fuck it i'll finish it see what people think

[AteskOne]

dont you think its a bit hasty to call that a bite?? i mean its a pretty generic s, its like ive seen it 10000000 times but its the same with the rest of the letters..idk maybe s is just his best n favourite???

he said that he bit the S and the R a little. dont get me wrong i'm all for taking things you like from a piece and tryna change them and make them your own. thats how you're going to improve. but if its to the piont where none of you're other letters look as good as that one then you should be going simpler until you can pull off a solid style with it.

[sinkilla1]

hey guys havent been on here in a while heres the first sketch with ma new name
http://i50.tinypic.com/2iw6rt.jpg

[Fury]

Why do you cut off a piece of your stuff? Finish the whole thing. I think it would've looked better white, but that's just me.

[sinkilla1]

it did look better white lol i just got bored and heres my opinion on the peice of the top cut your out bombing straights imgona be that guy at the top xD

[Some Kind of Joke]

another sketch.kinda liking it, but i think the O breaks it up.

oh, and no thats no supposed to bwe a handstyle at the top, just messing with lines to see how i wanted the bars.

http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/IMG_0145.jpg

[Keso]

another sketch.kinda liking it, but i think the O breaks it up.

oh, and no thats no supposed to bwe a handstyle at the top, just messing with lines to see how i wanted the bars.

http://i694.photobucket.com/albums/vv304/danR2/IMG_0145.jpg

Whoa man go with keyboard letters for now.

[weakfingers]

I love it when people think im a cop....
(Pen free style)
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0009.jpg

[woonybomber]

Quick pencil sketch, yes I bit on the s and r sum, but I'm workin on changing it up http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/d6714ce9.jpg

yeo this would be kinda fresh but the s looks a lil bit biten
see

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll234/seywhat/TempImage14.jpg
.
the bar on the right that is juss wat i think but you guys are most likely gonna try to dis agree but im juss saying that is wat i think
lmfao

[Bets369R]

that looks nothing alike at all.

[woonybomber]

ight if you guys say so thats juss wat i think =D

[sinkilla1]

full paggers bad pic to lazy dotn want to take nother one
http://i49.tinypic.com/2l8g47.jpg

[RedEyes]

New one liners.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo6-2.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo8-2.jpg

[weakfingers]

Posting for a friend

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2702/4366352531_5f121feae8_b.jpg

[b SQUARED 08]

Meh...
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo25.jpg

[markingz.]

hey squint, that looks alright but chamge the q, it looks more like an o to me

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/February-17_2235.jpg
i love erika^
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/February-17_2146.jpg
virtue and wisdom^

[shem]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4055/4367640211_b42874ecf5.jpg

[kew1]

shem i think that would look pretty cool painted

[lord_plankton]

kew, the love is decent nothing really to crit there just the flow is a little off the L is strong forward ve are way more relaxed...
the erika is on its way but you gotta work it over a lil especially your i and a do not fit in right..virtue , wisdom...not as good

[W_G_O_N_E]

astro battle piecehttp://img64.imageshack.us/img64/168/dscn6203.jpg

[test982]

^^^ :)

[test982]

http://i50.tinypic.com/154gbog.jpg

[sinkilla1]

kato you fucked up your 3d and your letters are wack exceot the a the A is actualy ok use better bars xD
tell me wat yall thank
http://i49.tinypic.com/2nao11k.jpg

[mawks]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/sc00be878201.jpg

[test982]

it's weird actually that toys giving crits to toys!!!.... iám outta here

[sinkilla1]

ok cya later just to say i am alot fucking better then you which means i can critique the fuck out of your slopy crypt writing which looks like a pig fucked a pladopause which then had a baby and that baby fucked rosie odonnel and bam your graffiti was the baby

[-Empty-Can-]

it's weird actually that toys giving crits to toys!!!.... iám outta here

Rofl.

What would be the point of posting then?

[RES4]

wgone: looks pretty amazing

messed up the iv on this but whatever

http://i48.tinypic.com/1zwgm7t.jpg

[FlippingChickens]

sin - i hate everything u posted beside the pink and blue,but u kinda killed the peice with the pink drip.

somber - im fealing the one with pencil but that bar sticking out of the bottom s looks wack

red eyes - the brown throwy looks proper,keep reproducing and doing little tweaks everytime

asker - that purple and yellow.............................GOOOOOD SHIT,that blue throwy idk how to explain dont get me wrong it looks aight but try and make ur letters more massive

that astro battle peice wgone is nice just not fealing the rocket smoke

res- fix the s and the iv looks wack

[sinkilla1]

its all cool chickens we both have two totally diffrent styles i dont really like much of your stuff any way xD but the pink drip is red and my deco fucking asploded when i was giving some red shade lol

[FlippingChickens]

wtf were u anal raping ur deco for it to explode like that?

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3117.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3118.jpg

[markingz.]

i like the first letters but that other peice is some wannabe nyc style

[KAZonee]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=395&pictureid=3030

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=395&pictureid=3028

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=395&pictureid=3029

what yahh think ndd i like to color

[KAZonee]

the last 2 i did for some bitch to get in her pants

[FlippingChickens]

dam bro not fealing ur colors too much man..work on a shadow/3d ...too many colors also can make it look bad..go simple

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe5.jpg
fuck...i should have done a cloud

[KAZonee]

my friends were tellin me that im doin anotha one ndd ima work on that

[sinkilla1]

nah tofe i wasnt anal raping my deco i keep my decos tip side down and i havent used the red in a while im more of a blue green person lol and i started shaDing working pretty good but i get i slipped and boy did i feel the pressure of it lol it asploded and i was just like FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUU

[markingz.]

haha cop so acrylics homie, screw deco paint markers there no good for canvas

[shem]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2740/4368446675_8d940b481f.jpg

devotd to much of my day to this.. not happy with the outcome got lazy..

[markingz.]

yeah you did, go back to simps homie you aint ready

[shem]

i feel its more about ideas and inspiration than going back to simps. i understand bars i just have trouble coming up with original ideas.

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/February-17_2146.jpg
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/February-11_1053.jpg
i need peeps opinions bc im paintinga wall an i need 2 choose a word

[markingz.]

then get new ideas shem

[shem]

you say that like its easy homie... considering you asked what bars were a week or so ago you should understand.

[CrustOner]

Check out the "Need Inspiration? Look Here" thread.

[shem]

i do that its just actually getting what i take in out of my head. i always have something i want to work off of and an idea of the direction i want to head but its getting it on paper that i have trouble with.. this sketch is growing on me tho. the letters arent my most solid but the overall compisition i really like.

[CrustOner]

That's good, keep working at that, man. I have respect for you. You seem really chill.

http://i45.tinypic.com/1zn2x3p.jpg
for talking.

[sinkilla1]

whyd you post it 3 times lol triple post new fag

[CrustOner]

3 times? what three times? ;]

[-Empty-Can-]

ohhh burned

icwhatudidthar

[sinkilla1]

ahh your sneaky xD

[woonybomber]

kew:your shit is gettin better you are nto juss doing random shit i liek 2nd one that shit it is simp and pretty dope throw a drop shadow on that shit and mayb a yellow fill and yellow sheald and it will look good
thats wat i think
crust: fix your d and the thing on the a and it wouldnt look half bad

[shem]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2740/4368446675_8d940b481f.jpg



crits?

[markingz.]

you say that like its easy homie... considering you asked what bars were a week or so ago you should understand.
yeah man i feel you sometimes i feel like its rediculously hard to get ideas for graff, i try and get really original though whne that happens, thetoy dont listen to me i was rambling like a fool a while back, just keep doin what you do homie your shit looks good shem just stick with it ideas willl come just dontthink to hard

[SHER_WON_WTS]

Hey SHEM.
so whats up. I get bored and i was reading over this here thread and saw your name was real similar to mine so i went ahead and drew your name out. sorry if thats weird but... i get bored. Anyways, this evolved from a strate letter i drew up for my name, then i just rounded off the corners and added some details....umm, here ya go!

http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy295/khikhan1/Shem_Sher.jpg
BTW...if anyone is ever interested in an exchange...PLEASE! hit me up..

[shem]

i like that shit homie.

[markingz.]

crits?
id make your letters more interestiong, try adding do dads to the edges and whatnot to make em look strange, maybe make em look drippy, maybe burnt, maybe broken, be creative come up with shit

[shem]

i love that you just contradicted yourself first you tell me im not ready and that i need to go back to simples now youre telling me add "doo dads"

[Atmos419]

http://i46.tinypic.com/ehexdg.jpg
Finished.
O looks like a bottle opener ...
Clouds were added at the last minute, and look like shiiitttt.

http://i50.tinypic.com/6pops6.jpg
For a battle with Dookie.
C looks like a G.
Simple sucks major d*ck.

http://i47.tinypic.com/2hhnog6.jpg
Boredom.
Working on throws.

http://i46.tinypic.com/2z4bsap.jpg
More boredom.

[markingz.]

i love that you just contradicted yourself first you tell me im not ready and that i need to go back to simples now youre telling me add "doo dads"
yeah sorry about that I already apologized, i made a mistake your one with simps ive seen your shit youve dong simps forever, its time to get intricate now but keep letters

[fitzy36]

i need to get to work on fixing this
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t114/froggy36/0219001416.jpg

[SHER_WON_WTS]

http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy295/khikhan1/LUZE_SHER.jpg

keep it simple. i drew basic strate letters then added small cuts and limbs.

[fitzy36]

i have some complete simples but it just gets kinda boring, i guess i'm just anxious haha thanks i'm gonna keep trying

[Fury]

^ You never get over doing simples. Your letters have odd line-weights, so I'd say stick to simples for now.

[FlippingChickens]

luze go simple dont cut lines or nothing like that

crits
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3117.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3118.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

luze go simple dont cut lines or nothing like that

crits


Exactly what you said.

[FlippingChickens]

i dont think u understand..i cant control these ideas that pop into my head i just fucking draw them not everything i do is a simple that shit gets mad boring

[LeaksOne]

but your throw STILL looks like toee and your bars are still uneven so although your getting all these ideas you still havent improved on any aspect of graff.

[FlippingChickens]

na man u can tell its a f on the right one ur just being gay and you have no idea how much ive improved hop offf ma'cock

[markingz.]

dont get jeleaous leak haha leak dummy

[LeaksOne]

haha no cause you think your really good but you still need improvement. the right one looks like an F because you took your time one it. the left one is rushed and says toee. and that piece........well anyways believe me NO ONE is on your cock besides your right hand buddy. so just work on evening your bars and actually making an F when you do your throw fast. good day

[SHER_WON_WTS]

BUT YEAH, LUZE...
before you get to far in creativity you start simple. I usually pencil my letters simple then add detail then marker it up.

[LeaksOne]

both those luze's are nice

fitzy id say thicken the middle bar in your Z

and sher maybe modify your E to make it flow bettter with the other letters.

[BlacktodaFuture]

seyor exchange (I bit my own S from a past peice)

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03374.jpg?t=1266618958

jungle fever

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03373.jpg?t=1266618994

so far in a friends book

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03372.jpg?t=1266619019

[markingz.]

maybe bars arent for you man with all respect i think bars are holding you back, there just a starting block you know

[BlacktodaFuture]

when you are giving someone crits try to say their name before saying the crit so we know who you are talking to

flipping chickens: SIMPLES!!!!!!!!!! i know they suck but do them bc you are putting too much random bullshit in your pieces
luze: get ride of the cuts. not doing bad.

[markingz.]

im talkin to you back, cut the bars out mang

[Steezy McCreezy]

The kid above me is hilarious.

[SHER_WON_WTS]

both those luze's are nice

fitzy id say thicken the middle bar in your Z

and sher maybe modify your E to make it flow bettter with the other letters.

Leaks i feel ya. That E was the only letter i was unsure of. i was trying to make it go with U, having a rounded corner at the bottem butjust didn't cut it.

[markingz.]

bars are a tool, once youve mastered the tool your ready to just add shit

[CrustOner]

Markingz, post something. You seem like you don't know what you're talking about.

Black, you've got the bars down, but your letters are mad boring. There isn't any flow since they're on a straight line. Try to add a little flow. :]

[Steezy McCreezy]

Bars are the foundation for your letters, they're not a tool to help you make letters.

[markingz.]

crust please dont be mad at me still for my rant a while, back i admited i was sorry, i know bars dont help you make cool letters but they are a tool fo good letters to have, without them your stuff really wouldnt look to hot

[Steezy McCreezy]

You realise you just said the complete opposite to what you were saying a minute ago?

[markingz.]

maybe so man, haha,i think we both actually just said the same things in two different ways lol

[BlacktodaFuture]

Markingz, post something. You seem like you don't know what you're talking about.

Black, you've got the bars down, but your letters are mad boring. There isn't any flow since they're on a straight line. Try to add a little flow. :]

yeah i should add flow but no one really explained it well to me. ive kinda connected it to a river in my mind. if one letter leans back they all should. if you have a better explanation it would help. thx.

[shem]

markingz is constantly going back on wat he says he did that with me yesterday obviously he doesnt kbnow shit he just stays talkin all day.. dont listen to him.

[CrustOner]

http://i47.tinypic.com/xcvmuu.jpg

Notice how the letters have some style to them? regardless of the way they're leaning, they're at least leaning. However, if you look, they all have common traits for their extensions. Just a little tip. :]

STOLEN FLICK, BY THE WAY.

[sinkilla1]

i see no style ^^

[BlacktodaFuture]

how the 2 s's mirror each other and when he bends the bar it goes out big then real skinny but he applied it to all the letters. EX: the S, S, R. also the thing off the I and the right bar of the U

[CrustOner]

i see no style ^^

And that's why you will be a toy forever.

[sinkilla1]

toy lol i really dont know what a toy is these days oh wait im referring this post to him lol OWNED

[Thrice]

Definite style man. you need to get familiar with graff, simples and straights.

[Fube]

http://i47.tinypic.com/xcvmuu.jpg

if you dont see style in these letters you FUCKIN CRAZY.
i love Serius.
havent seen him posting lately tho
Crust where you get this i wanna see more. pm me his photobucket or something.

[CrustOner]

I don't know if he has a flickr or a photobucket :(

I have a folder on my laptop for inspiration. I love how clean his letters are.

I just searched Serius GH Toronto and a bunch of street flicks came up, he got a hell of a lot better.

haha I found a sticker version of the one right there though.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2792/4289601788_b1f1d2e9a6.jpg

Sorry Fube, did the best I could :(

Edit: here's another sticker to look at one of his newer styles
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3281/2869725370_a1b855fedf.jpg

[Ages24]

lol crust, i have a folder for inspiration too
with stuff like this
http://i48.tinypic.com/33p6oia.jpg
http://i48.tinypic.com/dzvvcy.jpg

[FlippingChickens]

haha no cause you think your really good but you still need improvement. the right one looks like an F because you took your time one it. the left one is rushed and says toee. and that piece........well anyways believe me NO ONE is on your cock besides your right hand buddy. so just work on evening your bars and actually making an F when you do your throw fast. good day

hahaahahaha i think im really good? stop putting words in my mouth dickrider..ur masturbating joke is not funny ,i pull more hoes than u any day..yea but i will work on evening my bars and i'd appreciate if u didint worry about how fast i do my throw ive been knowing how to do a legible f

[CrustOner]

lol crust, i have a folder for inspiration too
with stuff like this
http://i48.tinypic.com/33p6oia.jpg
http://i48.tinypic.com/dzvvcy.jpg

haha that's cool. but the stuff I have is a littttle different.
http://i49.tinypic.com/2ed62at.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/1zz5bhh.jpg
http://i49.tinypic.com/o5vrl1.jpg

[FlippingChickens]

Holllllllly shit o________o fucking orgasmic

[sinkilla1]

lol anyone see the ^^ at the end of my post i was fucking kidding

[kew1]

yo safer wats up wit that exchange

[CrustOner]

Or pointing up to what I had posted.

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/February-20_1642.jpg
haha i think i may start writing this it says fukew but pronounced fuck you

[sodi]

lol anyone see the ^^ at the end of my post i was fucking kidding

Good point right there

[SirBigO]

nice shit Fukew, i must say i dislike your e but that's just my personall prefference,

here's my latest sketch.. i was totaly blown from the face of the earth when makin it but ye..
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/3582/bild0302.jpg

btw blame the blue marker it kinda fucked up some parts..

[hpir]

sir big- bro what it say? lol
fuke- yr k is alittle to small i wouldent overlap the right leg over the left
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture103.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture94.jpg
crits?

[SirBigO]

yo it's sayin Sir..

soz did think i includuded that in the post aight..

and nice shit mate! i like the simplistic style of your shit!

here's my newest trows.. http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3582/bild0302.jpg

left upper corner is sayin SI, the right lower corner is sayin Sir,

please.. no hatin on my whack R on the Sir one.. i kinda fucked it up but wanted to give it an lil bit of an twist..

peace,

[BlacktodaFuture]

yo safer wats up wit that exchange

forgot all about it. but im on vacation so i'll start it today. im working on seyor's exchange right now.

[RedEyes]

Just messen around with some styles.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo10-1.jpg
crits?

[kew1]

forgot all about it. but im on vacation so i'll start it today. im working on seyor's exchange right now.
np man take ur time

yo do u guys think i should just write fukew now so when someone in skool is like o wat u writin i can just be like ay fuck you

[Xfish]

np man take ur time

yo do u guys think i should just write fukew now so when someone in skool is like o wat u writin i can just be like ay fuck you

lol yes

[kew1]

fukew is original too right? i never heard of a writer by that name.

[SHER_WON_WTS]

ay FUCK YOU.
it's pretty original but to be fair, there is a crew in miami FA-Q. but thats the closest i know, i think your good with Fukew....oh and im working on a sketch for your name.

[SirBigO]

yo red eyes.. your shit aint whack but i don't digg that S nor that k..The I is as good as an simple I can be if you ask me.. kind of an hard letter to be cool with.. the N is cool and if it's an R.. ( blame the blurry visson^^) then it's cool 2 but not as cool as it would be as an N

and that marker u usin for the fill? wtf is that! it's lookin mad fresh..

any crits on my 2 pics i posted?

[SHER_WON_WTS]

sirbig, definently original throws. i love that little FUNK speech bubble, but for the bottom one, you gotta work on elimination the huge space between the letters.

[SirBigO]

thanks sher.. i'll try to fix it an bit.. dunno how yet but the R i normaly do on the trow is an lot beter.. i'll get an flix of it later.. aight...

the pic you posted/in your sig no idea what it is.. it's awsome mate!

[RedEyes]

Yeah like i said i was just messen around it didnt come out as i envisioned as usual and it is an N. heres some of my recent simples.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/0126001554.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo1-1.jpghttp://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo3-2.jpg