Blackbooks

[AlecR2K]

rehab lookin so dope

[CrustOner]

just some shit scattered around my desk, nothing special.
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/Photo13-1.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/Photo14-1.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/Photo17.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/Photo18.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/Photo19.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/Photo20.jpg
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k6/flipskater2215cc/Photo21.jpg
Get to the intermediate thread, you too, Janek. Shit is dope.

[LeaksOne]

kind of old, but all i have flicked at the moment

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/4391156376_eac9a62d3a_o.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4038/4391156344_a65ca674c2.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2710/4390388229_c3cf22ab2a_o.jpg

looking pretty good squint

klic where the fuck have you been?

[sinkilla1]

dont like my style go fuck yourself no jk jk but really
http://i50.tinypic.com/124eq1l.jpg
dont mind the coloring i fucks wit it
http://i46.tinypic.com/20tqfxk.jpg

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo6-3.jpg
Old piece...new throw's

[-Empty-Can-]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4065/4399633671_6d179672cf_b.jpg

Actual crits please

[sinkilla1]

that was a nuclear waste of time LOL

[||BREAD||]

haha

[flask1995]

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8775/img0003ns.jpg
my poorly attempted, but I think it really turned out really nice, I dont know how to colour it without FUCKING it up. :p

any crits?

[||BREAD||]

back to basics because i dont know what im doing half the time...
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/bics.jpg



im digging those throws red, are they oneliners?

[weakfingers]

Mayo- I like what your doing keep it up and i love the name.
Empty can - I dont like your style at all, you had some good basic striaght letters but your just working with to much colour without going with the basics.
Flask-New to graffiti thread
Bread-New to graffiti,


Bumping my own shit over the past couple pages, Am i good enough to move on up to intermediate thread?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0004-1.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0066.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_00552.jpg
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0010.jpg

[CrustOner]

Start working with flow man, you've got those simples fucking down.

[||BREAD||]

yaa those are fucking tight,,, def liking those

[smokeitup]

heres some sketches a friend did for me:

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/dkode1.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/dkode2.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image018-1.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/Image089.jpg

what do you think?

[sodi]

smokeitup: Try to get cleaner fills and smoother lines, your 3d is great

New style I'm thinking. crits?
http://i874.photobucket.com/albums/ab306/Sodi1/DSC01996.jpg

[LeaksOne]

what does that say?

[SHER_WON_WTS]

thats pretty cool looking SODI. im not gunna lie tho, having a hard time finding the letters

[sodi]

XCLL... I was just experimenting

[Spraycan Stories]

http://tinyurl.com/yjd9bj5/index.php?id=113d1e161dad0dcecdfc8d1414053b60

[.nolove.]

what do you think?

judging by the pokemon your probably like 10 years old and therefore should not be anywhere near a computer.its full of pedophiles who want to get you in their van...
















their rape van.with puppies laced with rophynol.watch your back *****.

[||BREAD||]

^ ahah you say some funny shit.


umm back to basics: B's

all are shit except the curved ones (imo) annd the one i like the most is the bottom curved. any comments?

Edit: wow, thats a shitty cell phone pic haha
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/bs.jpg

[ironcrack]

pokemon..the hardest shit out there
the realest gangster catch em' all

[Jarret]

pokemon..the hardest shit out there
the realest gangster catch em' all

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!

that pokemon shit threw me WAAAY OFF , i was never expecting to see that on a graffiti forum.

[||BREAD||]

goofin in paint...i want some feedback on the letters themselves. i cant draw up a good c to save my life.
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/bee.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

...or a good B...... or a good I.

[||BREAD||]

:D thanks...at least you didnt completely ignore the shit. can you tell me whats wrong with them? and dont just say they are completely shit because we est. that already ahah

[FlippingChickens]

smoke - last one is good

bread - 2nd one on the right looks aight

[flask1995]

something I did during detention, I think it turned out pretty good, but I need to make it smaller (Hensing that I only wrote FLA and not writing flask cause i couldnt fit it

crits?

http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8554/img00012e.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

Take off all those wacky extensions and curves for now and stay with simple letters. Make your bars supa-straight.

[FlippingChickens]

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3137.jpg



http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3139.jpg

[||BREAD||]

i dont care for the t's and your 3-d is off i like the shading flip flop lol even though it hurts my eyes haha still creative. i think it also could do without the F' this --> ' on the end of your eff

[||BREAD||]

oneliners and ya sure the lines could be waaaay cleaner but here are a couple i got after 3 pages full haha... edit: after looking at these...im proud of myself, i think theses are fucking dope for my skill lvl.
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/0302001527.jpg

[sinkilla1]

gonna stop doing fills for a while working on my simples xD
http://i48.tinypic.com/xvvkm.jpg

[flask1995]

Here's one of my simple pieces I just did right now, crits?

http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/6343/img0002jv.jpg

[Fury]

The F is too far away from the rest of the letters. A's a little funky, make it shorter and have a bigger hole.

[||BREAD||]

wayyyyy fucking better flask! bravo...fix that f though...top bar is too long and whats your first letter sin? and can i get some fucking crits or some agknowlegement...i give those both and get nothing in return. even if mine are shit please tell me so i know what to do lol shit maaaan.

edit : ditto to the f being to far away

[Fury]

^ Calm down, broski. You didn't leave crits on this page until right now.
I don't do one liners, but that's a good start I guess.

[sinkilla1]

no one likes my simple i guess then :(

[||BREAD||]

i asked what the letters were lol...lines are messy what does it say babe? lololz

edit : and thanks for aknowlegement lol

[FlippingChickens]

im not fealing ur k or n the bottom has to go and that thing on the top left of the k

[sinkilla1]

it says klone in ma style nukkah
and tofe the bottom of the k and N ar supposed to be there part of ma styl nukkah ???

[FlippingChickens]

well im not fealing those hearts / arrows coming out of ur letters and ur e looks aight,why dont u have clean lines though?

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3137.jpg



http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3139.jpg

[sinkilla1]

cause i did em in like 2 min and just marker pencil only makes you worse

[||BREAD||]

i like the capital E chicken iddd say make a new t and tweak your f

edit : haha kk no problem either flasssk

[flask1995]

wayyyyy fucking better flask! bravo...fix that f though...top bar is too long and whats your first letter sin? and can i get some fucking crits or some agknowlegement...i give those both and get nothing in return. even if mine are shit please tell me so i know what to do lol shit maaaan.

edit : ditto to the f being to far away

thanks alot man :) i will, ill start, and when i mean start i actually MEAN start doing simple pieces, then once I get better when you guys tell me I will start doing simple pieces but some attachments etc. :D:D

and dont worry bread. next time ill crit you :)

[flask1995]

^ ahah you say some funny shit.


umm back to basics: B's

all are shit except the curved ones (imo) annd the one i like the most is the bottom curved. any comments?

Edit: wow, thats a shitty cell phone pic haha
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/bs.jpg

wow, keep practicing man, practice makes perfect

here's a tutorial i found on the internet, should be good for you for pieceing
http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z248/amkah/32dfsaas.jpg

keep it up man (Y) :D:D

[CrustOner]

gonna stop doing fills for a while working on my simples xD
http://i48.tinypic.com/xvvkm.jpg

E is the only good letter. stop putting your legs of your K and N on the base bar!

[markingz.]

no no sin i really do like your simple i do, and fuck crust you toy fuck

[||BREAD||]

markingz did you see those oneliners i did on the previous page? check em out and give some feedback please...annnd of course if you want to lol first try on oneliners, 3 pages to get those lol

[-Empty-Can-]

bread, since you've been asking so much for crits, have these

It's decent for your first try. Bottom right has the most potential. I's are hard to do so keep working on those. Not feeling that bump on the B, and don't make the bottom of the C go up and out that much.

[||BREAD||]

thank you! fucking for real...ill work on that...ya i's and c's fuck me hard haha...not sure about what you mean when your talking about the c. i dont mean to be annoying, i know coming off as that.

[sinkilla1]

look it is nuclear TOY PEW PEW PEW

[-Empty-Can-]

shut the fuck up and finish your piece.

[woonybomber]

who the fuck do you think you are empty
SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU SUCK

you only won that battle with me becuz you did a black outline and a read sheald you fuck head
i juss did pencil cuz im nice like that lmfao
it waz black and white only you cheated so there for you fucking lost eny way you bitch ass fag mufin so
like i juss said shut up

[-Empty-Can-]

I told him to shut up because he's annoying like you. Who the fuck do you think you are?

Excuses. I won solely because I outlined it? C'mon, that has nothing to do with letter structure.

[sinkilla1]

ive been done for like 3 hours i already sent it in loland if woony had a bigger picture and outlined it in marker he would have won

[Bombing With Insurance]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4037/4402931986_41b9a84873.jpg

[woonybomber]

WAT
who do i think i am ?
lets see i am WoneR and i get up ***** i bet you sit at home and finger your lil girlly pussy all day looking at pics of your dad you lil bitch nigguh so shut the fuck up

[flask1995]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4037/4402931986_41b9a84873.jpg

sick man. werd. :D:D

[sinkilla1]

empty can if you were a dog youd be a bitch oh shit u sitting behind ur computer acting all rich but meet me in real life youll get stiched ha ima fucking rhyming genuis

[Naysayer]

[IMG]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4037/4402931986_41b9a84873.jpg

Nice letter structure. Keep it up.

I found this in my backpack and happened to be sitting at a PC with a scanner. crits?

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i23/croberts_12/Graff.jpg

[woonybomber]

sins a rhyming genuis empty suck can my penis you toy ass bitch you act all rich when i bet you poor your moms a whore, your moms cuty shes a hoe i gave her a dollar to let me go cuz her pussy waz all nasty , her legs were all ashy , dont get me started on that bitches acne

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

woony you dont get up....you have no place in manch son
gotta atleast be ina decent crew to say you "get up" or to show you have any talent or respect
and sin those rhymes are horrible lol

[sinkilla1]

yo yo emptys mom is sucking on my schlong it aint wrong but damn she hitting it like a bong its just like singing a song but oh the microphones my dick lick lick im fucking that hick while emptys in the other room looking all gloom as his mom deep throats more boom now it on her face emptys grace just flew up as his littlle tiny penis just stood up
DAMN

[woonybomber]

woony you dont get up....you have no place in manch son
gotta atleast be ina decent crew to say you "get up" or to show you have any talent or respect

nah goo look out side your crib walk up masibick look on almost eny sign i hit mad of them and or walk down spruce street i hit mad taggs on signs and windows and i would get in a crew but i dont even know enyone (in person) out here like i told you b4 b i juss moved up here

and i only have talked to one writer out here and its you and for some reason you dont like me

[sinkilla1]

lolz i just busted out a freestyle no one looked but wait
is it considered rape cause technically i entered rectally with out her aproval xD

[BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK]

alright but still jus cuz you put tags up every where dont mean you get up
atleast put some throws up somewhere and some decent peices then you jus might be able to say you get up

[-Empty-Can-]

lolz im soo up cuz i hit lik evry sign on ma street.

You two are annoying as hell.

[woonybomber]

ight blunted i will juss for you
i got some spots i have been scoping out

lmfao

and empty its not my street so shut the fuck up son

[sinkilla1]

empty can empty can your mom should have ran because you as useless as that wierd shit flan she regrets ever fucking your dad to bad youll never know him i bet hes glad you act like you write but u are a toy and u suck dick just for the joy boy PEACE

[SAID]

just battle

[-Empty-Can-]

We are.

[sinkilla1]

yeah but im not really sweating this battle still think that word is gay who the fuck writes limit for a battle ??

[woonybomber]

a fag named empty

and sinkilla lmfao jk

[-Empty-Can-]

Why the fuck does it matter? It's just a word I thought of. If you can't write other words then stop bitching. Your fault you told me to pick the word.

[sinkilla1]

so i was like pick a word andu just thought how much cock could i fit in my mouth oh shit 5 is the LIMIT

[SAID]

Haha

[-Empty-Can-]

Who cares why I chose a word. Just wait till the battle is posted.

[CrustOner]

Wow Sinkilla, you have the maturity of a six year old, so I'm going to assume you're still in Elementary school.

[sinkilla1]

nah negro fresshiiiiie

[-Empty-Can-]

Seriously. Talkin' about peoples mothers got old in like 5th grade.

[sinkilla1]

aight empty you grumpy toy u just pissed cause you have no style like me cause i can rap like fucking lil weezy nahh jjkkkkkkk but still go take a nap

[-Empty-Can-]

BS really needs a :facepalm: smiley.

[woonybomber]

ill give you a bottle up my nut to go to nappy time =D

[sinkilla1]

just post your picture on here bcause you wer the biggest facepalm in the whole universe

[-Empty-Can-]

Whatever. I'm done feeding the trolls.

[woonybomber]

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc280/bleurgh_bucket/facepalm.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

woot! no pictures!

[Bombing With Insurance]

woot! no pictures!

forreals shits insane...

[||BREAD||]

haha ya no shit...all this talk and nothing...also weezy sucks a big dick.

[KRE1]

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/2240/001jr.jpg

[||BREAD||]

namechange!
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/0302002225.jpg

[Con-Artist]

Bread the k and e suck, just do super regular bars. I can't tell I that's an l or a v, u look like u know to use bars, but u need alot more control in your letters.
Anyway.... Here's a pen freestyle I did today, i don't really like it, but I wana post somthing hah. Crits would be appriciated.http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/6af742a8.jpg

[markingz.]

i dont like that at all

[Jarret]

Bread the k and e suck, just do super regular bars. I can't tell I that's an l or a v, u look like u know to use bars, but u need alot more control in your letters.
Anyway.... Here's a pen freestyle I did today, i don't really like it, but I wana post somthing hah. Crits would be appriciated.

that "M" is kinda sketchy doesn't flow right to me.but way better then anything i can do.nice

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo6-3.jpg
What chall think?

[markingz.]

woot! no pictures!
shut up man quiet bars your no good at

[FlippingChickens]

akbar - do u have anymore im fealing that

kre - i fealz

bread - that looks pretty good just gotta get better at controling ur marker

somber - everything u do always looks very similar,i like it though the s should have been fixed and u know were..and that r should have been stretched out to the bottom more man

siko - ive seen that same picture 15 times already fuck,work on some new shit

[flask1995]

sumthing i did before i hit the bed last night, last thing i ever did.

http://i48.tinypic.com/2edxiyc.jpg

crits?

[FlippingChickens]

hey man clean up ur 3d lines such as on the bottom k and that s looks busted needs to be fixed,i like the whole 3d thing though,keep at it

i would really like some crits on this ,im happy with the way my e came out and my mushroom ,any crits?

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3142.jpg

[b SQUARED 08]

KRE, that's got potential for sure. Keep workin' with it.

Kevoz: Go simpler and use proportional bars for now.

Somber: I'm not feelin' it at all. Your letters are too thick and don't match up well at all. Your M, for example, is too skinny in the middle compared to the other letters. Your S is hard to see, the overlap in the middle of your B is ugly, and the legs on your R and E are pretty nasty as well.

Flask: I'd suggest working with straight letters before you start bending letters.

And I'm super out of practice, but here's one I did today:
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo28.jpg

[FlippingChickens]

asker - those look good,now do a new font!!!!


this is NOT mine something my boy did for me
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3148.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3145.jpg

[sinkilla1]

lolz just for shits and giggles
http://i45.tinypic.com/25pl9p3.jpg

[kancr]

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k98/BBp8ntballaLP508/Photo28.jpg

that style is thugin



AND this be me, my shadow is fucked. someone wanna ms paint the shadow for me im still trying to get the hang of it :D

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture0071.jpg

[soath]

don't use these letters, check PMs.

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/kancersketch.jpg

[kancr]

thanks homes

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i48.tinypic.com/sopoya.jpg

[FlippingChickens]

looks alright but fix that r why is it so big?..and were the crits at thoooo???

[SHER_WON_WTS]

dank your drawing style is exactly like my friend beware. similer letters and 3d on every individual letter.

[Con-Artist]

asker you got that shit down!
heres a sketch i did yesterday, crits?
http://i853.photobucket.com/albums/ab92/Somberatm/1.jpg

[RES4]

^not bad but i dont really like the s and the b is too far behind the m

[-Dank-DK-]

looks alright but fix that r why is it so big?..and were the crits at thoooo???

if u r talkin about the second one that is a lower case k dog

[Hepatitis]

http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo36.jpg?t=1267744541Math class with colored pencils. just for fun but i thought it looked alright. i know everyone hates connected letters but crits anyways?

[kancr]

cant seem to get the shadow on the c right

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture0077.jpg

[kancr]

cant seem to get the shadow on the c right

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture0077.jpg

[woonybomber]

bars
go to the new to graffiti thread

[flask1995]

bars
go to the new to graffiti thread

whatever.


anyways i think this is great man, keep up the great work, and i think you're doing fine, just take alook around the new graffiti thread just to get you started, plus simple's would be great from you actually ;D

[woonybomber]

http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff011-4.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff007-5.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff005-10.jpg
i fucked up this shit it is not wat i had in mind
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff002-15.jpg
a throw and some shit i am workign on for skewl
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff001-15.jpg

[Amends_Ego]

woner-first pics my fav. id drop one of the extensions on either the w or the n and figure out a new e cause im not fellin it in any of them.
kancr-drop the shadow and basically everything...go back to simps.
raer-i dont like it.i couldnt tell you why i just dont.
somber-i dont have enything to say that everybody hasnt said already.
dank-you know whats going on keep it up.
http://i48.tinypic.com/kdq1w7.jpg
ive been working with alot of oil paints that if you dont know take FOREVER to dry, anyway i got bored and drew this up with some prismas.

[medacog1]

http://i49.tinypic.com/j13py1.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/f0tdf9.jpg

here a sketch there a sketch

Hepatitis -stop connecting and use key board letters
Woony-other the the sharp part on the W or your throwup sketch i like it

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/piece005.jpg
old style new piece

polar- Don't do that loopy O to L connection yet. MAke the extension on the top of the A face down
woony- second one looks pretty cool
hepatitis and kancer- simples and bars.

[kancr]

whatever.


anyways i think this is great man, keep up the great work, and i think you're doing fine, just take alook around the new graffiti thread just to get you started, plus simple's would be great from you actually ;D

me?

[rootpl]

ROT

http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii285/root_pl/ROTCOLORS.jpg

what do you think ?

[KidReny!]

I am more than impressed this is really fucking good work on your 3d though, and your arrows kinda over do it, but on the real this is great

[rootpl]

Thanks !!!

[massacreman]

root, i dont know, it seems like graffiticreator inspired you and you added some random stuff... i mean for real look up the flava font...

[woonybomber]

http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff002-16.jpg

[rootpl]

hahahahahahahahahahahaha thats joke, yes ? ( i write this to massacreman )

wone : i like your "O"

paint more and more and 05.03.2011 back to this sketch :)

[ChadWarden]

http://i45.tinypic.com/308e0eb.jpg

wow, im a fucking dick. started a whole new page without critting anyone on the last.

[smoggy_mcfly]

http://i45.tinypic.com/308e0eb.jpg

wow, im a fucking dick. started a whole new page without critting anyone on the last.

dude i love tht shit

[flask1995]

did this during silent reading. thats right, everday we gotta read something for like 20 minutes, boring as shit but this is what i do.

i really LOVE the K. it turned out better than I expected.
crits?

http://i50.tinypic.com/2rctwrl.jpg

[SHER_WON_WTS]

make your letters go more with the K
outward extensions with semi-sharp corners.

OH! and silent reading, i remember that shit.

[flask1995]

lol. :p
i was just messing around and i just did that

i dont know how to make semi corner pieces, make a tutorial or FIND one oplease? :D:D

thanks alot ,and silent reading for me is good cause i can hit hte blackbook :p

[sinkilla1]

what r u in 7th grade?

[flask1995]

naw man, 9th.

[sinkilla1]

fuck dawg you get silent reading time im in 9th grade we get nothing like that i even go to catholic school but i do get open time so i cant complain

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

:hahaha does n.e one remember A.R. Reading..if they ever had it haha

[RADAWG]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Picture1-1.png

[sinkilla1]

perty simple that throwies hurtin son well the bottim won is top wons good

[AteskOne]

new pen freestyle from evening class.
http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1166/getattachmentcrack.jpg (http://img194.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentcrack.jpg/)

[Rin5e]

Killin it with those P's

[jdub]

crits anybody?
http://i959.photobucket.com/albums/ae76/jdub627/scan0001.jpg

[sodi]

jdub that is dope! I want to see it on a wall man

[jdub]

word homie ima get up on dat 4sho

[jdub]

yea im relatively new to da game soo still learnin bout tons of shit if u got pointers hook a ***** up

[sodi]

yeh cool, I think maybe you could put the S a little higher aswell, good luck painting it man

[jdub]

much appreciated man

[CrustOner]

Don't listen to Sodi..

[FlippingChickens]

jdub - na man im sorry i dont like it

atesk - dope as usual

eark - the bottom left one is solid

flask - keep sketching...ur probably mad young anyways so dont feal bad everyone starts out bad


CRITS ??

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3150.jpg

[||BREAD||]

make your 3-D inner design uniform, it would look a hell of a lot better. and with the shroom, make the stem go far into the bottom of the cap and the spore walls dont all come from the top, make those lines circular.

[CrustOner]

When will you stop putting those wack ass fucking extensions on your letters?

[massacreman]

lol i fail

[RedEyes]

Tofe- you need structure dude all ur shit has way to many random bends.

[FlippingChickens]

is this better structure wise

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3142.jpg

[CrustOner]

No.

[woonybomber]

he bends his letter in the wrong fucking place

[Bets369R]

tofe your shits terrible. listen to the crits youve been getting for the past 2 fucking months or stop posting your fucking shit.

[Jarret]

is this better structure wise




No.


lol...funny

tofe you eat shrooms alot huh? you be tripping?

[FlippingChickens]

bets stfu ur not one to talk lol and u got raped in that battle aganst crust with that wack ass entry

and yea jarret i have only done them twice

[jdub]

Legalize the herb!!!

[Amends_Ego]

flip take the crits or stop asking for them, and your shroom anatomy is awful. i think you should stop drawing them altogether but since i doubt youll listen heres what some REAL mushrooms look like
http://i45.tinypic.com/jv4vtk.jpg

[Fury]

^ I lol'd

[flask1995]

I agree you tend to bend the letter's in the wrong places.

[Bets369R]

bets stfu ur not one to talk lol and u got raped in that battle aganst crust with that wack ass entry

and yea jarret i have only done them twice

LOL im like 5 thousand times better than you kid.

[AteskOne]

I agree you tend to bend the letter's in the wrong places.
thats the least of his problems. the proportions are completely wrong. go back to simples so you can learn structure.

amends- those look delicious

[CrustOner]

bets stfu ur not one to talk lol and u got raped in that battle aganst crust with that wack ass entry

and yea jarret i have only done them twice

He didn't get raped, and the entry was definitely not wack.

His had mad flow, knew where his extensions went, and overall was dope. You fail at all of that.

[Sesh-it-up]

tofe your style is so gernric, get a style/life kids are tryin to make u better and ur not taking the crits, now thats a defenition of a toy.

[BlacktodaFuture]

tofe, no sense of understanding of 3-d. they teach you it 1st day of art class >_>

as for letters. to many meaningless extensions. horrible looking shrooms. and as for the bends.... wtf are you doing?

[Sesh-it-up]

and dont even get me started on ur handstyle..

[jdub]

smoke session sketchin
crits anybody?

http://i959.photobucket.com/albums/ae76/jdub627/scan0010.jpg

[SHER_WON_WTS]

its not very consistent, and the letter density gets a little off in some parts. But its clean, and the fill is nice.

[jdub]

thanks for da heads up man
gotta stay up on dem bars..

[SHER_WON_WTS]

exactly. good work tho

[FlippingChickens]

black - ive never taken a art class , do they acctualy teach u how to do 3d?!?

crust - he has one vote over 27 that u have and he didnt get raped :p all his letters besides the n and t were god awful that entry was pure garbage

sesh - u mean generic,very few people give me helpfull crits and when they do i do apply it to my work if not i wouldnt be posting here in the first place..it might take a minute but i will have a unique solid style im never quiting and i will have my shit on point it just takes some practice ,and fuck everybody hating on my shrooms that was my first time attempting to draw some!

[-Empty-Can-]

^ You will get better if you do simples.

[LIZARD]

jdub-fills sicks

[jdub]

^ You will get better if you do simples.

truth.

[BlacktodaFuture]

yeah. im taking art class at my school. they teach you perspective and 3-d. right in the beginning.

[FlippingChickens]

my school doesnt have art class :[

..im real faded im going to draw something now..

[jdub]

i got 2 art classes

[SHER_WON_WTS]

yeah i took art all four years of high school. i own that room. i have my peice painted in the back, i still have the key to that room, that my teacher didn't know i had.

[jdub]

i caught a tag on the wall behind ma art teachers desk so when all da kids in class look at her they see ma shit

[Sesh-it-up]

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/story.jpg

[jdub]

gotta love dat sarcasm

[Sesh-it-up]

stop talking and post some pics.

[SHER_WON_WTS]

i'll give one internet dollar to any one who can name the superhero above.

[Sesh-it-up]

cope2....

[SHER_WON_WTS]

....nah, its not cope2.
Didn't you post it?

[Sesh-it-up]

yea but i donno who it is.. haha i just googled that shit.

[SHER_WON_WTS]

lame. i remember when people actually read comic books instead of just watching whatever crappy movie and pretending to know (not talkin to you)

anyway its Hercules from Marvel. no internet dollars for anyone

[woonybomber]

yeo sher im get on that battle

is there a collor
i waz thinking black and white and a force feild

[SHER_WON_WTS]

oh. yeah that sounds fine.
so if i remember correctly the word is Acer, its a peice battle
were using black and white, and any color third color for the "forcefield"

am i right ? sounds good.

[woonybomber]

yeah shounds great okay its ON lmfao



edit :
haha im done
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff009-6.jpg

[||BREAD||]

that looks like shit...

[||BREAD||]

Question: Am i gettin' it or what?

sorry for scratchy lines...did them in the car.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/nikon1131.jpg

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/nikon1124.jpg

[SHER_WON_WTS]

damn, woon. my bad i havent started yet.

[SHER_WON_WTS]

not bad bread, but i would lose the things on the letters, and work on keeping the letters equal the whole way around.

[||BREAD||]

Thanks man! but i think im going to keep those onthere...adds character :D you and woony battling?

[flask1995]

Question: Am i gettin' it or what?

sorry for scratchy lines...did them in the car.

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/nikon1131.jpg

http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s270/kanoop/nikon1124.jpg

Yeah dude your getting it. But stay simple first, first time I did this and atmos suggested to do simple pieces and I'm more into my letter structure then I used to. but hey its your option, you can just AHEAD and go on but alot of simple pieces actually LOOK sick if you get what I mean.

1st piece: It's good, but start using straight lines for now, unless you wanna dont take my opinion just go ahead, im trying to make you better i hope. You might wanna take that blocks out of it cause it ruins it. (Like for example that bar on the left side of the K, it looks like shit, and the partbar's ontop and under the O is messed.

2nd piece: it's good, nothing to say from my point of view. just keep practicing and you'll get the hang of it.


yeah shounds great okay its ON lmfao



edit :
haha im done
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff009-6.jpg

Nice, but I wouldn't vote fo' this because TBH from my pov. it really looks sloppy. Teh letter structure is alright but the drips at the botom is poorly done. Otherwise if you had markers then it would be more better lol. but i cant really say anything because i havent seen his yet.

__________________________________________________ _______________

Well enough crits for today for me. Something I did when i was bored. took me about 20 minutes (minus the 3d) and hensing the picture that its also incomplete :(
http://i50.tinypic.com/1z3b0ig.jpg

crits?

[Sesh-it-up]

lol. wait so who is that super hero?
flask-i say fuck the 3d and go even simpler im diggin the F hella tho

[SHER_WON_WTS]

flask- the center bar in K is too thin
Sesh-its Hercules from Marvel. He sucks ass

[flask1995]

haah XD

thank god I didnt do it in decos yet. :p

[flask1995]

Oh and Btw @ ||BREAD|, your 1nd piece, loose the letter extention's at the end of all the letter's it looks ugly, and your 2nd piece you might want to let that S run through behind the eye, cause right now it looks boxed/squished up

[Sesh-it-up]

dont deco a simp

[flask1995]

why not?

[Sesh-it-up]

not worth it

[flask1995]

well if i have 2 pencil case's worth of deco's then im just gonna go ahead anyways, I have enough to spare for a simple piece, plus i have prisma's so i actually might use those.

anyways? that was a weird conversation, I'm pretty much done the simple piece, Just need to colour it in, I sorta took this one seriously cause i wanna master this, I made the middle of the K more fatter and i made a few changes, I tried making the A more like the other letter's but If It looks ugly then please feel free to tell me, I take all crits.

http://i45.tinypic.com/qxqhi0.jpg

[Amends_Ego]

looks much better flask drop the extension on the left side of the a next time though. other than that the bottom loop on the S is off aswell just work at it though and it'll improve.

[RedEyes]

Flask-the LA is solid but other letters need improvement, that F would be dope if you ditch the thing on the left and solid off the bottom. and that S...needs works.
Keos-solid letters just keep working on them and lose the extra extension on the S.

[flask1995]

alright I fixed the S and I fixed the F also.

i hope I did it right :)

http://i47.tinypic.com/90ngv9.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

i liked the F befo...

[W_G_O_N_E]

"Zero" piece - Hey flask maybe kick a little ext. out the bottom left of the "f" kind of like the one on your "a" but make it a little longer http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5804/dscn6312a.jpg

[AlecR2K]

http://i48.tinypic.com/ouunnp.jpg

[SHER_WON_WTS]

SODI. thats pretty hot but you need to clean it up

[sodi]

yeah. fucken dora the explorer textas. haha jokes, my artline 100 is almost empty

[SHER_WON_WTS]

time to re-up on the markers.

[sodi]

yep :|
fuck. I deleted both of my posts. let me repost the pic
http://i874.photobucket.com/albums/ab306/Sodi1/DSC02003.jpg

[flask1995]

"Zero" piece - Hey flask maybe kick a little ext. out the bottom left of the "f" kind of like the one on your "a" but make it a little longer http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5804/dscn6312a.jpg

kk will try that definately :p

[jdub]

i kno ma o and r needs work
always open for crits

[jdub]

http://i959.photobucket.com/albums/ae76/jdub627/scan0020.jpg

[||BREAD||]

maybe different colours (that's just me) but ya i like it...rad man

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/graff005.jpg
Not finished. Got blocked on the O so decided to post what I have. I'm kinda feeling it but I feel the letters are a little too wide.

sorem?- looks alright. Try somethin' a tad simple. and that O is wack

[jdub]

yea man i fuckd up on dat o n it says soren

[SHER_WON_WTS]

empty, i gotta say. that S doesnt look like it has any style at all.
its a little to all over the place.
it doesnt follow a theme.

[Amends_Ego]

soren you got potential, i want you to take a ruler and draw to parrallel lines before you draw another piece and then make the tops and bottoms of each letter touch the lines. you got some style but your shits always shrinkin if ya feel me.

[B E A R]

http://i45.tinypic.com/51reo8.jpg

what are we feeling? Sorry about bad picture quality

[SHER_WON_WTS]

Bear, the R is too hard to read.

[B E A R]

safe, fair dos! looks alright on its own when i get it down, sometimes my Rs do look a bit too bubbly though. is the circular-ness the problem?

[SHER_WON_WTS]

yeah, i think you need to show more detail. draw a little bigger and give yourself some room.

[B E A R]

cheers pal, will do

picture for the page 4992 mandem

http://i45.tinypic.com/51reo8.jpg

[AlecR2K]

http://i48.tinypic.com/2ewdycz.jpg

late night sketch, first time trying something like this.
rip it apart

ps all the lines inside the letters are from messing around trying to shape them better.

[flask1995]

pretty sick man, I'd stay its all good but on the K the bottom left the Leg should be removed, and IMO the K is bent alittle bit too much. although i'm diggin' the S alot man. it looks messed but you wanna make the S alittle bit more straight.

[AlecR2K]

ya like i said, its a first attempt. tons of work to do

[LeaksOne]

Bear - NO

alec - thats pretty decent. id just say find a way to make the right leg of the k go down instead of an angle.

[gumOnShoe]

so i've been messing around with the bars on my letters and shit. quick 2min. sketch.

help a ***** out huh?
http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy253/lolapples/Photo9.jpg

[RemoZ]

Gum- The I is pretty wack all around the other letters look good, would look nicer with a shadow.

Bear-Sketch for a long time.

Likely going to piece this the weekend after next(I'll be in Florida this weekend)

I plan to do a Dark brown to light brown fade from the bottom to top with maybe around 4 different shades, Black outline, Kinda light blue double outline.

I know the E needs some work and my shadow game is whack. But I really like the WOR

any crits?

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9677/photo38pl.jpg

[Patchy]

Didnt feel like taking time to do much to this one
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0706.jpg

Decent
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0705.jpg

My favorite outta the 3
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0704.jpg

Crits please

[RemoZ]

Learn Structure, you really need to bite the key board for awhile. It'll help alot man

[dave the pirate]

http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs036.snc3/12417_10150110985625014_532660013_11550490_5586512 _n.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

S is garbage. Crit it though. Still working on this. The right leg of the R is kinda bothering me too.

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch018.jpg

SLM- simples

[RedEyes]

Stot-were's the style comen from? make the T's identical and make a straight leg on the R.

[-Empty-Can-]

Was that meant in a good or bad way lol? I used to always make my T's identical and I'm trying to differ them a bit now. It looks too odd when they're the same.

[Flawless Victory]

I'm also interested to know why there is a sudden change in this sir's style.

[-Empty-Can-]

Practice, Inspiration, progression. I dunno.

[RedEyes]

Inspiration maybe, direct bitting the TO yes. if you need inspiration dont just bite it study the style and how it flows then free hand your own.

[-Empty-Can-]

I didn't bite anybody. I don't know how you think I did.

[Flawless Victory]

Look at that O, then look at your S, man.
you don't think that one is suspiciously nicer looking than the other one?

[-Empty-Can-]

It is. I put a new S in too. I don't see how that proves I'm biting. I'll post the finished sketch in a little.

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/sketch019.jpg

[AlecR2K]

http://i44.tinypic.com/15hzn6s.jpg

i might be getting the hang of it. still working out the flaws in my K structure, the S is doing alright IMO but still need a lot of practice.

[lord_plankton]

yeah those are so generic common used letters..then you have to say that all the stuff in here is bitten cus i swear ive seen em all somewhere..thats simply how most of us start off, it always looks quite the same...stupid, call the bite bring the proof and still its nonsense
classic example is right above me

sk, actually i favor the k over the s, loose those little cracks and top bar a lil shorter, do your s bars thinner n try to make it fit the more stiff bars of k or shape the k the style of your s plus i wouldnt use sec outline color for background n blocks but whatever..you get it..oh and i hate that name, a gay crew in and around my area write sk n they suck n cross like crazy..but thats just me

nothing, you did bite nothing,did you even read the post properly??..thats exactly what im talkin about but fuck it..