Tot Black Books

[metro 519]

Originally posted by -=AgA=-TrAnCe@Aug 7 2005, 04:52 AM
another...
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/663/08072005105044am4qf.th.jpg (http://img213.imageshack.us/my.php?image=08072005105044am4qf.jpg)
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/2738/08072005105044am4qf1ng.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

well your definatly improving trance!!!

but somethings to keep in mind!

when making arrows dont keep them so stubby, try and extend the point a little longer,

keep all straight lines paralell like with up in your top left corner

and when making extensions try not to have more then one bend in it... its stops the peice from flowing!!!! but instead try and curve your extensions, intead of bending them!

but good work on the simitry of the the piece, i definatly see im provement!!!

[C H E N Z O]

Originally posted by bilal_tariq@Aug 7 2005, 08:36 AM
http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/1852/bilalbombscene9jd.jpg
wow please tell me it didnt take u an hour to do that sketch.

try 2 make it more simple - block letters. keep the thickness of letters the same throughout aswell. also sack all those add ons and arrows, thers way way too many.

[cess!]

hmm

[ERAZ]

Trance i know you have been told this hundreds of times......but you really have to start from the begining, and if you already have.... go back and do it angain....sinple letters....block letters

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0308.jpg


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0309.jpg


feed back and these two

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

man one,

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0313.jpg

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

dont like this too much

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0317.jpg

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

throw ups

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0359.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0320.jpg

[cess!]

1st throw is sexy

[Fate]

...

[Fate]

cess what is that 45" in yer sig? :ph34r:

[Fate]

,,,

[cess!]

damian marley

[C H E N Z O]

Originally posted by KANZ-KONVIKS@Aug 7 2005, 02:49 PM
throw ups

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0359.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0320.jpg
that top wan is tighter than a nuns cunt. fukkin sexual m8.

[ERAZ]

i agree it is pretty handsome

[KaSe01]

Originally posted by KANZ-KONVIKS@Aug 7 2005, 02:45 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0308.jpg


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0309.jpg


feed back and these two
first ones pretty tight man, and the backround on the second one is fire

[runci]

dont go too complicated.. the top 1 looks okay but keep it simple for now..

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

Originally posted by C H E N Z O+Aug 7 2005, 05:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C H E N Z O @ Aug 7 2005, 05:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-KANZ&#045;KONVIKS@Aug 7 2005, 02:49 PM
throw ups

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0359.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0320.jpg
that top wan is tighter than a nuns cunt. fukkin sexual m8. [/b][/quote]
hahahaha, cheers man, thats the most reacent,

[funky monky]

yeah kanz that first one is pretty tight the second one isnt bad but the z needs work i find
keep it up man

[Version 2.0]

Biggest Bite Ever&#33;
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y113/wspaudio/Picture30verbubbles.jpg

[AoAssis]

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/5639/remik41nr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/8666/remik56od.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fate]

...

[Fate]

...

[Fate]

...

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

funky monky: thanks man, i dropped the Z though im only using the S now,

simple

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0447.jpg

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0446.jpg

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

crew throw ups

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0444.jpg

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

nice work kanz

[funky monky]

this is a sketch ive been workin on tell me wat u think&#33;&#33;&#33; i find the "e" is fucked up but tell me wat else

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/976/moshcore8xr.th.jpg (http://img129.imageshack.us/my.php?image=moshcore8xr.jpg)
feedback??

[epod]

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7328/picture0028yn.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0028yn.jpg)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/9526/picture0012sc.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0012sc.jpg)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/9793/picture4zb.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture4zb.jpg)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/6034/picture0032hj.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0032hj.jpg)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/20/picture0049qu.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0049qu.jpg)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/6453/picture0059mq.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0059mq.jpg)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/1348/picture0067ep.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0067ep.jpg)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/9378/picture0071px.th.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0071px.jpg)

[epod]

Originally posted by epod+Aug 4 2005, 10:45 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (epod @ Aug 4 2005, 10:45 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-metro 519@Jul 22 2005, 01:56 AM
http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/7416/metrostuff0016xs.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

^^^ the throwie style i was gonna do soon
that e and o are both cope2 bites. [/b][/quote]
k, so theyre not bitten from that exact throw. ive seen many cope2 throws with those exact letters. the hole is tapered , skinny at the bottom, thick at top, with paralel top and bottom lines. and so what if i bit you and car2n? its not like i tryed to cover it up or claim it was my own. i came out and said , look, i bit your shit.

[runci]

the thing is he never bit cope 2..

[runci]

http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/deck_cope_jee.jpg
cope2

http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/7416/metrostuff0016xs.jpg
metro

i dont really think theres been any chompin goin on

[funky monky]

word runci.. the e and the o dont look nothing like cope2&#39;s letters but props metro that throw is dope

[epod]

like i saidm, he didnt bite that exact throw. i KNOW ive seen those letters brfore. i ccopied em and fucked around with em a bit. and ive never seen metros sketch b4. fuck it.

[runci]

well y dont u show us the throw he did bite...

[DNA]

Originally posted by epod+Aug 8 2005, 01:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (epod @ Aug 8 2005, 01:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by epod@Aug 4 2005, 10:45 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-metro 519@Jul 22 2005, 01:56 AM
http://img319.imageshack.us/img319/7416/metrostuff0016xs.jpg (http://www.imageshack.us)

^^^ the throwie style i was gonna do soon
that e and o are both cope2 bites.
k, so theyre not bitten from that exact throw. ive seen many cope2 throws with those exact letters. the hole is tapered , skinny at the bottom, thick at top, with paralel top and bottom lines. and so what if i bit you and car2n? its not like i tryed to cover it up or claim it was my own. i came out and said , look, i bit your shit. [/b][/quote]
if anything he bit Mint&#39;s M

http://img289.imageshack.us/img289/4346/mintmetro9yt.png



and now somthing i did on ms paint, and i know the additions are rediculous.
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/6357/proxymspaintsmall2fh.png

[metro 519]

that mint one is fucking close, and trust me its not intentional, but i made a new throwie style so that one is outta date... and epod i thought i would switch up my thowie to not have circles but triangles in the middle thats why they look tapered, i found another writer that does the same thing though so i stopped it... so can we go back to being friends now??? :wub:

[Seth]

ok lads, how about some feedback to help me out&#33;&#33;&#33;

I know it ain&#39;t much... :blink:

cheers,

[DNA]

resize it first.

[Seth]

ok, hope this turns out better.....

http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/219/14/ture2small.jpg

:D

[-Dash-]

No "work on your letter structure" or "practice." comments I already know I need to continue to do this....
Just want to know what you think... be kind please :) http://home.ripway.com/2004-4/103397/Niels%20privat/Sketch1.jpg
http://home.ripway.com/2004-4/103397/Niels%20privat/sketch2.jpg
http://home.ripway.com/2004-4/103397/Niels%20privat/sketch3.jpg

[-Dash-]

I know it looks a bit fucked up with those white lines...
I really dont know how to make them :/ ??

[Seth]

yo dash,

I like the german theme&#33; the colours match nice..

I would be a bit more accurate, take your time, don&#39;t rush it... than it will be better... ;)

by the way, how about my sketch..??

[DNA]

dash, sketch out what you are going to do with pencil first, then do and outline in pen, and then do your fill. becuase from what it looks like to me, you are just taking a big fat marker and drawing.

now for some of my stuff.
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2088/proxytrainburner8fd.jpg

and a new throwie i just came up with in the last couple of days
"PY" short for Proxy
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3600/pythrowie4ee.jpg

[-KrÖð>[é�-Önë-]

Originally posted by DNA@Aug 8 2005, 02:44 PM
dash, sketch out what you are going to do with pencil first, then do and outline in pen, and then do your fill. becuase from what it looks like to me, you are just taking a big fat marker and drawing.


^^^ what DNA said ^

[funky monky]

yo dna the first one aint bad but i dont like ur throwie i find a throwie has to be in like bubble letters or something simple but i dunno thats wat i think

keep it up man

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/6456/08092005103927am2op.th.jpg (http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=08092005103927am2op.jpg)

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

sorry if you look at this and go blind,

soooo shit&#33;

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0453.jpg

[FatMasterSlim]

thats actually not bad looks like your going somewhere and you have some solid letters that arnt flopping all over the place with arrows and whatnot. My advice would be to lose the extensions on the bottome of the "S", at least the one on the right, as well as getting rid of the little poke on the bottom left of the "N" as it confuses the flow besides that clean it up and try to get a decent fill in there...


FAT

[epod]

kans, nice to see someone with a lil bit of style in here. but i WOULD lose the "kay" extension on the a. lol keep it up.

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

haha, nice to hear some constructive feedback,

cheers fellas

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

feed back plz
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/74/08092005103927am2iw.th.jpg (http://img158.imageshack.us/my.php?image=08092005103927am2iw.jpg)

[AoAssis]

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/5558/remik61dw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/191/remik79ti.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/769/remik72vt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
just a close up so u can see better

[A-scon]

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a340/DillonversaRG/Spray1.jpg

Did this in like 2 min, plus pencil breaking and sharpening.

[SEROKID]

ascon....the3 coloring is weird.. and the bubble shit around it is not that good,....other than that its okay

[C H E N Z O]

ascon man wit age are u ?&#33;? once ano ill tell u wit a think...

[A-scon]

haha this is a trap....im 15

[AoAssis]

can u plz comment and crit on mine i need advice thx

[Dr. Coffee]

^sure, stop trying to bite senaz, and get some simple letters

[Atom]

Every Posted picture on that page needs alot of work (duh) but that last one, man you need to learn how to color, take your time and it will look at little bit better, steady hands goes a long way with coloring.

[AoAssis]

wat who the hell is senaz? i&#39;ll look up on google

[AoAssis]

ya i just looked up who the hell senaz was and i nvr seen his work before in my life and that piece that i did kinda looks like his a bit but his letterz are alot different so before u acuse me of bitin maybe u should ask or sumtin

[Myner]

to letter throw...
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/2120/image1119np.jpg

[C H E N Z O]

wow ur 15 fuk sake. thats pretty poor by anyones standards especially someone of 15. by the looks of ur sketch i was expectin an 11 year old or sumin.

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

lol

[segway]

image size fucked up, nevermind

[cess!]

Originally posted by Myner@Aug 9 2005, 03:19 PM
to letter throw...
http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/2120/image1119np.jpg
daddy likee


:unsure:

[DNA]

Originally posted by DNA@Aug 8 2005, 02:44 PM
dash, sketch out what you are going to do with pencil first, then do and outline in pen, and then do your fill. becuase from what it looks like to me, you are just taking a big fat marker and drawing.

now for some of my stuff.
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2088/proxytrainburner8fd.jpg

and a new throwie i just came up with in the last couple of days
"PY" short for Proxy
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3600/pythrowie4ee.jpg
bump for comments/help

[empty can]

Ditch the overlaping lines, and make then solid

[AoAssis]

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/8740/remik83dp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
wow my head hurts....cuz all i had to color this was a sharpie and highlighters i dont got no colored pencils or markers it sux and i was like rite next to the sharpie while i was color so i could keep a steady hand its like snifin a sharpie for an hour :huh: so wat u guys think is it ne good?

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

quick glance its shaped pretty good, but the letters look pretty poor to me,

my two cents

[Fate]

i dont like the "e" :ph34r:

[Dr.evil]

itsa poor bit off lumos&#39;s."gesa"^^

[AoAssis]

DR.evil thank you, u r atleast nice about bitin sumone i just liked the way he colored it and i guess the structore came out a bit like his....thx for not bein a dik like that other guy who just said i bit off sum dude who i didnt even kno about....

[-KrÖð>[é�-Önë-]

i like ur stuff kans ;) nice work

[LYTE-ONE]

http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/1396/lite4bj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i know its really toy but its my first throwie. im gonna keep practicing making my lines and shadow even

[FÄ“D]

quikie on a friends hat and a sketch i want a heavy C&C on, i need alot of work on my writing

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/7663/picture0544ab.jpg

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/3389/picture0538zl.jpg

[cess!]

cute moustache
i dunno how to spell moustache (mustache?)

[FÄ“D]

lol ill let him know people thinkits cute

[Dr.evil]

thats a tad homo erotic..

[FÄ“D]

^.~

[shae]

.EDIT

[lethalone]

3d is pretty nice on that shit^

[FaMoU$ NaMo$]

i dont draw much. fuck you toys. i just didnt hink these dawings belonged in the ral blackbook thread.

but i still will crush all u fucken toys,. i paint.

whoshotcha?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/hklhkl.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/hfj.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/kbjklbjk.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/jklhjkl.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/222222222.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/DSC00339.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/IMG_0440.jpg

[SPACE420]

http://groupfiles.aol.com/badassproduction/alllme/cover.jpg i think it needs more but i cant put my finger on what that is

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

Originally posted by &#045;KrÖð>[é�&#045;Önë&#045;@Aug 9 2005, 07:16 PM
i like ur stuff kans ;) nice work
cheers man ;)

[C H E N Z O]

wow name u paint...... can a b u ?

naw man am ko ur stuffs pretty qwality man a well like ur E on the 3rd wan.

[sorce oner]

EDIT

[dice e.s.t.]

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/6299/10017884bz.th.jpg (http://img206.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10017884bz.jpg)
help

[FaMoU$ NaMo$]

huh? i dont undeerstand any of th last posts

[LeetleMun]

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/5555/warzcolor9co.jpg

i had no markers so i just used colored pencils

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

dice work on lettering, loving your piece leetle

[Crack Killz]

name, you&#39;re toy...da fuck up.

[FaMoU$ NaMo$]

fuck you crack you arent even a writer. you said you would buff MY SHIT. thats in YOUR NEIGHBORHOOD. and YOU DIDNT.


get off my nuts. u know u cant fucks wit me dawg where u at on the lines?

[cess!]

trance what do you know man

dice decent
leetle too many arrows
name i love it

[dice e.s.t.]

http://img298.imageshack.us/img298/8636/10017892zn.th.jpg (http://img298.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10017892zn.jpg)

[SEROKID]

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/6377/requiewr7ig.jpgREQUIER

[SEROKID]

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/4213/requeier2wl.jpgREQUIER

[JadedSketches]

you dropped sero?
your requier now...huh?
damn,after like four days gone i cant understand anything
shit,im going to vancouver for a week
i&#39;ll be lost :(

[metro 519]

vancover is dope you wont want to come back&#33;

[DNA]

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/8502/koi8dq.jpg
messin around

[jd07]

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/9943/img23825il.th.jpg (http://img95.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img23825il.jpg)

[REQUIER2]

no ***** iam requier

[JadedSketches]

Originally posted by metro 519@Aug 10 2005, 03:31 PM
vancover is dope you wont want to come back&#33;
yeah i know,most of my family lives in white rock and vancouver
im leaving this piece of shit ottawa and im moving to vancouver in 4/5 years or so

[JadedSketches]

Originally posted by REQUIER2@Aug 10 2005, 08:28 PM
no ***** iam requier
ooh so you and sero are friends or something?

wow its the first time ive been called "*****"
doesnt really feel right,its like calling a black kid "cracker"

just doesnt work


By the way,i dont want to open a new post,so do you think i can bring my skateboard,kiwi mop,markers etc on the plane?
i know there was a thread on this but i dont want to search.
and can i bring cans back?

[NEVOS ONE]

sick pics

[NEVOS ONE]

sick pics

[NEVOS ONE]

sick pics

[metro 519]

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/1623/throwietag0016nx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

old design i just coloured

think i should do a backround???

[metro 519]

Originally posted by JadedSketches@Aug 10 2005, 08:55 PM

By the way,i dont want to open a new post,so do you think i can bring my skateboard,kiwi mop,markers etc on the plane?
i know there was a thread on this but i dont want to search.
and can i bring cans back?
i dunno about the markers but all cans on planes are banned cause the cabin pressure can make aerosol cans explode... they will confinscate them and you will lose all money you spent on em

[JadedSketches]

the baggage chamber is pressurised to match normal pressure.So that some asmatic kid wont cry because his respirator exploded.
nice try though ;)

joking&#33; yeah that orange one is dope,go for it,on the background i mean

edit: yeah the confiscating thing is what worries me

[funky monky]

yo metro that new sketch is DOPE&#33;&#33;&#33; i dunno how u do that style i tried but i cant get my letters to flow good and yeah about the background thing go for it

keep up the good work man
peace

[metro 519]

Originally posted by JadedSketches@Aug 10 2005, 09:41 PM
the baggage chamber is pressurised to match normal pressure.So that some asmatic kid wont cry because his respirator exploded.
nice try though ;)

joking&#33; yeah that orange one is dope,go for it,on the background i mean

edit: yeah the confiscating thing is what worries me
maybe areosols are just banned for carry on cause cabin pressure sure changes other wise why would your ears pop... i dunno i just saw the commercial saying that aerosols were banned on airplanes

[runci]

metro do u jus do a tag n outline it.. cos ur piecxes jus look like outlined tags

[metro 519]

i could do that...

but what i really do is the same as everyone else, i sketch an outline of my letter fill em then out line em...

[runci]

i think ur sketches dont really look lik epieces if u get what i mean.. they jus look like tags

[metro 519]

meh, your entitled to your opinion, thats just my style of writing thats all.


im not that great at drawing normal pieces like yours or anyone elses, nor do i enjoy it.

[Myner]

old sketch i found....
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/7748/image1188qz.jpg

[metro 519]

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/5210/mets0019vk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

here was a peice i was fooling around with a month ago, told ya runci im not that great with the normal style

[SEROKID]

dude thats tight start doing that style from now on

[JadedSketches]

metro tehhight

yeah but the pressure to pop your ears is not strong enough to blow a can though...
im gonna call air canada.
or go on the website

[metro 519]

cool hit me back with that info lol now you got me interested

[DNA]

first time ive tried a drop shadow(that i can remember) i think it turned out alright

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/9484/proxydropshadow1ts.jpg

[JadedSketches]

ARG&#33; all it says is that you cant bring on bucket paint as carry-on luggage and shit like that


Who the fuck brings on bucket paint as carry-ons??

[C H E N Z O]

proxy a quite like it. probably the best sketch av seen from u. but u mebby want 2 do somethin in another style cos thats reely the only one of ur&#39;s av seen &#33;??

[shae]

http://img342.imageshack.us/img342/6204/dsc025482sb.jpg

first emit peice

[President of Namerica]

Originally posted by JadedSketches@Aug 11 2005, 09:50 PM
ARG&#33; all it says is that you cant bring on bucket paint as carry-on luggage and shit like that


Who the fuck brings on bucket paint as carry-ons??
i actually have. i poured the paint into gatorade bottles. along with a backpack or 2 full of cans

on a greyhoud that is

anywhere in namerica for only 69 dollars if u buy them 2 weeks in advance.

[SEROKID]

yea thats pretty good

maybe work on the handstyel though

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

metro, nice pieces, wa does the older, "other style" one say, coz it aint metro is it?

anyway, dope as userall, im lovin ur current pieces runci, keep it up

[shae]

http://img289.imageshack.us/img289/6926/dsc025509ib.jpg

emit peice

[metro 519]

nah its shortend to say "mets" and thx for the props

[KaSe01]

ur 3D doesnt make sense man...thatz just not how dimensions work

[fLoE]

No

[KaSe01]

Originally posted by DNA@Aug 11 2005, 07:06 PM
first time ive tried a drop shadow(that i can remember) i think it turned out alright

http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/9484/proxydropshadow1ts.jpg
try and control the bleeding of ur markers a bit more, make sure the lines dont get fucked from it

[fLoE]

Gone.

[KaSe01]

floe y are u such a flaming homosexual, keep your homoeroticies to yourself, believe it or not regular people dont like to see that shit. :angry:

[fLoE]

Done

[KaSe01]

i hate you..









































...kill yourself

[metro 519]

well alright peeps you convinced me to draw a more conventional style, this piece doesnt have colour yet but tell me what to improve on, cause im sure ill need lots of help and therefore all the feedback i can get&#33;

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2508/mets4it.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Rogan]

metro...your fuckin ill dude why you in toys? that shit is sick...

the only thing i think could need improvement is make the m just a tad more basic its fuckin confusing... but the e and t are fuckin tite&#33;

[RiseONE]

yeah dude, that is deff. not toy stuff what so ever

[C H E N Z O]

metro man jist sack the arrow an the addons arouns the M an uv got a fizikal sketch man.

[epod]

metro, id put more space between the 2 parts of your e. just like a finger space. and on the bottom of your t, it makes you look lazy when you hide letters behind each other. in the future try to continue the letter, even if its just 2 mm beyond the letter its behind. and im not really feeling all the skinny addons on the top left. theyre alright, but too many all together makes it looks not as neat.

[DNA]

^^^pretty much what i was thinking. but besides that it is pretty clean.

what kind of marker did you use for the outline and for the 3d? i need to get a new marker for out lines---mine is almost out. :(

[metro 519]

thx for the input guys&#33; i was kinda feelin the same way about the left hand extensions, but i couldnt make it flow well with out em oh well, ill know for next time,

i use sharpies of the out line and 3d but i dont like the coloured ones... just normal black ultra fine tipped for the outline and regular fine tipped for the 3d

[DNA]

cool, i might have a couple of those sharpie ultra fines lying around, ill look.......

[DNA]

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6402/proxygreenbrowndropshadow1le.jpg
just did it

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2083/prbuublebag8vl.jpg
quickie freestyle i did earlier on the back of on of those bubble wrap small packages.

[KANZ-KONVIKS]

simple sketch for a battle

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_0514.jpg

[cess!]

Originally posted by DNA@Aug 13 2005, 07:32 PM
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6402/proxygreenbrowndropshadow1le.jpg
just did it

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2083/prbuublebag8vl.jpg
quickie freestyle i did earlier on the back of on of those bubble wrap small packages.
i like the fill on the first one.. but the letters are kind of weirdly seperated

[funky monky]

dna that drop shadow sketch is pretty sweet and metro that mets sketch is dope keep up the good work

[Myner]

new throw up im workin on........
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/3545/image1305ih.jpg

[Myner]

messin with a pen.
http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/7591/image1315hc.jpg

[FaMoU$ NaMo$]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/DSC00589.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/DSC00591.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/DSC00593.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/enamo.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/7grafidgey.jpg

[-KrÖð>[é�-Önë-]

^ nice

[wreckone.]

Originally posted by KaSe01@Aug 13 2005, 03:01 AM
ur 3D doesnt make sense man...thatz just not how dimensions work
The vanishing point.

[wreckone.]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v468/wreakone/100_7018.jpg

[runci]

wot dus that say atmos??
anyway i think its dope...

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

Originally posted by &#045;KrÖð>[é�&#045;Önë&#045;@Aug 13 2005, 11:40 PM
^ nice
nice sig kroa.........
lol

[cess!]

i love your stuff namos

[Katze]

http://ic1.deviantart.com/fs7/i/2005/224/5/c/Kat_by_ILUMITY.jpg
Ok, this is a quick sketch I have done but I just wanted the verdict, would you say I was a toy? And also what could be improved on this piece?

Cheers

[FaMoU$ NaMo$]

thanks

[Rogan]

katze man id give you feedback but i cant see it...host it somewhee else and ill tel ya what i think

yo has anyone heard of a dude named rise? i want to change my name to that but i figure its probly takin...anyone know for sure?

[metro 519]

Originally posted by Myner@Aug 13 2005, 10:02 PM
new throw up im workin on........
http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/3545/image1305ih.jpg
ohhhh that "M" would be sooooo dope with out the "Y" beside it... spend a lil more time on the "Y" and clean it up a lil and it might be my fav throwie ever :P

[Rogan]

ok rise is taken...bakc to the name finding game...

[FaMoU$ NaMo$]

thy are all taken. do something else to make yourself stand out.

[Scene*]

Originally posted by Rogan@Aug 14 2005, 09:41 PM
ok rise is taken...bakc to the name finding game...
look in the dictionary
you know
use that book for once

[epod]

anyone ever tried "scooby-doo cereal" this shits goood. its like cinamon coated puffs with marshmellows. and its like 1/2 n 1/2 with the marshmellows, so you dont have to throw out as much cereal. haha. anyone else try it?

[Jugga]

That&#39;s my favorite cereal...
That and the Smores shit...

Good stuff..

[epod]

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/8714/carevise0010fu.jpg
reminded me of kay&#39;s E. anyone else see it?

[metro 519]

lol did some one say random???? could be??? not too familiar with kay&#39;s work... where did you find that pic anyways?

[metro 519]

and the greatest cereal of all is capn&#39; crunch bitches&#33; believe that&#33;&#33;&#33;

[epod]

fuckoff im bored lol.

[Frantastic]

cinnamon toast crunch.

[metro 519]

ohh thats good too&#33;^^^

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

ok, another piece i tried
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/6624/08152005092631am8eu.th.jpg (http://img73.imageshack.us/my.php?image=08152005092631am8eu.jpg)

[Katze]

Ok got the hosting sorted, any critism or feedback welcome
http://www.geocities.com/bylast1234/Kat_Resized.jpg

[Rogan]

katze does that say digit?

ALSO...anyne no if the name fazeone is taken? i think it is so if so is fade taken?

[Rogan]

trance im not trying to be an asshoel here but do you realise you dont even draw strate lines? you gotta work on bubbles letters and get some flow then try your peices out...aight...better luck on the bubbles man

[Tanner]

na looks ok..... sort of

[metro 519]

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/2961/holla0013bi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^ new stencil i made akademiks is a clothing company for those who dont know <_< ^^^


http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/2825/holla0025gh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^^need some help here, i cant seem to think of a colour to fill this tag for my g/f b- day so HELP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;^^^^
GIVE ME A COLOUR TO FILL

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/3856/dragonhead1se.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^and a dragon head ive been designing^^^

[Rogan]

im thinking purple for our gf man but i dunno yet ill send another post in liek 2 mintues to either back up the purple or ill have anothr color...and sick stencil and dragon dude...

[Rogan]

now im thinkign the purple will be too drastic...shit pm somebody whos really good with color liek ae or somethign and ask them...thast what id do

[GeSuS_KRiST]

http://img56.imageshack.us/img56/7605/graffiti*****0045eb.jpg
pretty shitty, for a battle on 12oz....constructive critisism?

kireone

[Katze]

is was meant to say digit yes Rogan

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

feed back
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/6624/08152005092631am8eu.th.jpg (http://img73.imageshack.us/my.php?image=08152005092631am8eu.jpg)
metro, try a light blue fill or deepish red
idk.

[metro 519]

a good idea trance i was thinking a light blue force field / outline

[metro 519]

ok can we agree on a light blue fill and a purple outline / force field???

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

red + orange + yellow?
but hey wtf do i know, im a toy :ph34r: :blink: :unsure:

[cess!]

amen.

[ehobo]

http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/355/picture682jl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
help me inprove plz plz

[SEROKID]

^^ you can barely see that picture.......

[_Sic_]

eh nice pics

[snow2skate]

Originally posted by metro 519@Aug 15 2005, 11:07 AM
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/2961/holla0013bi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^ new stencil i made akademiks is a clothing company for those who dont know <_< ^^^


http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/2825/holla0025gh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^^need some help here, i cant seem to think of a colour to fill this tag for my g/f b- day so HELP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;^^^^
GIVE ME A COLOUR TO FILL

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/3856/dragonhead1se.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^and a dragon head ive been designing^^^
You should fill it in a sorta rougne,,like a little darker red.and do a black 3d..not to thick of 3d tho..and maybe a few bubble just floating out into space..itll give it nice effect.

[epod]

metro. i think theres a color scheme thread. if not, if i were you, id pm gesus, kay, lumos, ak47, or any other experienced writer.
oh, and that akademiks stencil is dope&#33; i wanna do a stencil that says "dont fuck&#33;" or something stupid like that, but im way too lazy, and everytime i try, i get frustrated and quit. did you copy the font ? or did u just freestyle it? props

ehobo, dont color your shit yet, waste of markers. when u flic your shit, point a light at the paper, so we can see it.

[metro 519]

yeah the stencil i downloaded the image from the net then freestyled it using that as a guide onto some card stock i had.... but the card stock got soggy and shitty so i only got one good stencil out of it lol

[wreckone.]

Did you over spray or what? If you still have it and you let it dry, it will become harder every time.

[Kronone]

dope shit i guess, lol

[metro 519]

yeah i let it dry but the first time kinda ruined it... maybe it wasnt good card stock i dunno

[Kronone]

i think baby blue would look dope with a black outline and navy blue 3D with a WHITE outline and some other special effects...that would lool so niceee&#33;&#33;

[Kronone]

look*

and another thing, make the 3D vanishing point at the top of the canvas, aboove the peice... but dont let the 3d go all the way, make it stop...if you know what i mean...

[metro 519]

kinda i was thinking if there was gonna be 3d at all i was gonna drop a shadow on that biatch

[Rogan]

heres a new peice i did...says zete...i think its dece...(only problem the faze one pic leaked through and the outlien shows on this one)
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9269/picture0201gu.th.jpg (http://img167.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0201gu.jpg)

and another...says faze one...
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/730/picture0217pq.th.jpg (http://img167.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0217pq.jpg)

[epod]

rogan, that z in the first one is tight. scrap the rest though. good work.

[FÄ“D]

blurry hell yes, only thing i dont like beside how sloppy it is is the top left part of the "F" its not round enough

http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/1570/picture0545pf.jpg

[Fate]

i think the stick or whatever in the middle of the f is to fat. :ph34r:

[Fate]

and maybe the top could stand to be fatter :ph34r:

[FuLa]

Originally posted by snow2skate+Aug 15 2005, 07:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (snow2skate @ Aug 15 2005, 07:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-metro 519@Aug 15 2005, 11:07 AM
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/2961/holla0013bi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^ new stencil i made akademiks is a clothing company for those who dont know <_< ^^^


http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/2825/holla0025gh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^^need some help here, i cant seem to think of a colour to fill this tag for my g/f b- day so HELP&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;^^^^
GIVE ME A COLOUR TO FILL

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/3856/dragonhead1se.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

^^^and a dragon head ive been designing^^^
You should fill it in a sorta rougne,,like a little darker red.and do a black 3d..not to thick of 3d tho..and maybe a few bubble just floating out into space..itll give it nice effect. [/b][/quote]
for the tag......Since its a tag...and you have that background...i would just fill it in Black with a white forcefield......i think that would be enough...simple but nice....and i don&#39;t know why i quoted you snow2skate ...but since i did......ummmmm kiss my ass.....:P there you go.

[Enemy]

just messing about what u think?
http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/4678/area8nc.th.png (http://img30.imageshack.us/my.php?image=area8nc.png)

[Version 2.0]

What do you guys think about my handstyle?

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y113/wspaudio/Picture37.jpg

[_Warrant_]

ha ha Tot Black Books

[sorce oner]

Warrant_ Posted on Aug 17 2005, 12:44 PM
ha ha Tot Black Books

i hope your not saying that your not a toy

[_Warrant_]

Originally posted by sorce oner@Aug 17 2005, 01:34 PM

Warrant_ Posted on Aug 17 2005, 12:44 PM
Â* ha ha Tot Black Books

i hope your not saying that your not a toy
what you want to battle you fakeass trick?

[epod]

Originally posted by Version 2.0@Aug 17 2005, 01:21 PM
What do you guys think about my handstyle?

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y113/wspaudio/Picture37.jpg
thats illllllllllllllllllllll. fucking mad skillz. haha well i guess theres no way ppl can say you bit it from som1 elses stlye. :lol:
props

[sorce oner]

_Warrant_ Posted on Aug 17 2005, 01:43 PM
QUOTE (sorce oner @ Aug 17 2005, 01:34 PM)
QUOTE
Warrant_ Posted on Aug 17 2005, 12:44 PM
ha ha Tot Black Books



i hope your not saying that your not a toy


what you want to battle you fakeass trick?

no im just say your a toy and, if your tryin to act like your all big .YOUR NOT

[sorce oner]

but if you wanna.........

[_Warrant_]

Originally posted by sorce oner@Aug 17 2005, 01:54 PM
but if you wanna.........
lets do battle.........or you chicken

http://www.teezz.co.uk/images/animals/chicken-jul3539.jpg

[sorce oner]

just tell me the rules and pick a word cuz i wanna see your "skill"

[_Warrant_]

Originally posted by sorce oner@Aug 17 2005, 01:57 PM
just tell me the rules and pick a word cuz i wanna see your "skill"
word is chickin
and bombs black n white.........

[sorce oner]

hah iight chiken it is.whens the do date?

[_Warrant_]

Originally posted by sorce oner@Aug 17 2005, 01:59 PM
hah iight chiken it is.whens the do date?
30 mins
lets make it a piece?

[sorce oner]

iight fine but black and white cuz i dont got markers

[sorce oner]

pick a better word cuz thats stupid

[_Warrant_]

Originally posted by sorce oner@Aug 17 2005, 02:04 PM
pick a better word cuz thats stupid
no way chink&#39;n is the word man.......its the shit.
plus i just started

[sorce oner]

ok chiken

[_Warrant_]

Originally posted by sorce oner@Aug 17 2005, 02:07 PM
ok chiken
start chick&#39;n

[epod]

both of you, shutup and pm each other. dont waste space in the thread. or you can edit your last post to save space. it really pisses me off, when im not on here for like 2 weeks, and i go to browse the shit in the thread, and i have to go through page after page of stupid chitter chatter. please dont double, trible and quadruple post. its a forum thread, not a chatroom.

[runci]

its only a fuckin forum dont take it so seriously..

[FaMoU$ NaMo$]

fuckin kids...

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/IMG_0501.jpg

[wreckone.]

Cam someone do my name in tag? I need someone to graffiti my name for me.

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

y?

[FaMoU$ NaMo$]

i got some names fo yah

http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y247/ArtVandilay/backcover.jpg
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y247/ArtVandilay/DFGDFHDF.jpg
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y247/ArtVandilay/DSC00602.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/DSC00587.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/DSC00584.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/DSC00339.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y11/name1name1name1/Paper/IMG_0440.jpg

more names ?

[-KrÖð>[é�-Önë-]

MORe NAMES&#33;

[wreckone.]

How many times are you going tp post these flicks of your Name? Why don&#39;t you make some new stuff already, your shit is getting old.

[runci]

yeh name ur stuff looks too similar.. i admit mines look similar but try n change it up abit

[Myner]

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/2884/serb6pd.jpg

[Myner]

sidewayz

[epod]

hey, hes contributing isn&#39;t he. its better having 500 sketches that are alike, then 1. its nice having some sketches of decent quality in here. keep em coming.

[cess!]

ever so dope names

[shone]

URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/1130/pic0082mi.jpg[/URL]
first somewhat peice plz tips

[funky monky]

yo shone, ur sketch is nice but it looks like u got sick of it at the e and just hurried up t finish cuz the sho but then ur e or c im not sure is just sloppy so u should work on that man

but other then that its all good
peace

[shae]

http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/8237/dsc025652cy.jpg

[KaOs-OneR]

to me that seems like you did your best to try and bite runci but have no one notice. Almost did a good job on that.

[shae]

Originally posted by KaOs&#045;OneR@Aug 18 2005, 12:12 AM
to me that seems like you did your best to try and bite runci but have no one notice. Almost did a good job on that.
i didn&#39;t bite him i didn&#39;t even know he wrote amet untill i already posted 2 sketches i just got blamed for a runci bite like 4 days ago we just went over this i didn&#39;t bite it u cant say runci was the first person to use the style it is generic so dont say i bit it cause i didn;t if i bit it itd look good

[shone]

Originally posted by funky monky@Aug 17 2005, 11:44 PM
yo shone, ur sketch is nice but it looks like u got sick of it at the e and just hurried up t finish cuz the sho but then ur e or c im not sure is just sloppy so u should work on that man

but other then that its all good
peace
thanks man

[C H E N Z O]

emit ur letters r way way too thin an runtish. make them thicker and more chunkous.

[carnage]

emit...im feelin the shaddow..its hella tight.but the letters arent to good..just my opinion

[Katze]

http://www.geocities.com/bylast1234/Hund.jpg
Any help or constructive critisism on my friends 1st piece?
Cheers. ;)

[metro 519]

well the "U" is alright but the word lacks flow the "H" is striaght and the "N" is kinda crooked and the "O/D" (cant figure out what letter it is) is smaller then all the rest&#33; which make the piece awkward to look at...


nice attempt tho

[Katze]

Thanks for the feedback Metro, I will pass it on to my mate.
I&#39;ve been looking at some of your work and I must say you are a great writer and you have a dope style man. Oh and you give great help and tips too.
Cheers. :)

[funky monky]

yo katze that sketch aint to bad but i find its just a bit too spaced out like the hu are together then the nd/o are together but other then that it just needs a lil bit of work on the flow/letter structure

kepp it up man