Blackbooks

[sinkilla1]

yo coca cola wat happened that situr is kinda well poop

[zennegen]

that tofe is dope just work on the FE

[Rosie716]

dude i just dont understand, if it is you, how that situr came out so fucking shitty?

[cocacola]

i took a long break for a while . im still developing

[Rosie716]

well only time can tell i guess.

[Rosie716]

first ROSIE piece attempt. It's simple and I know it needs work. Crits appreciated.


http://i812.photobucket.com/albums/zz46/RosieOne716/rosie2.jpg

[Rosie716]

first ROSIE piece attempt. It's simple and I know it needs work. Crits appreciated.


http://i812.photobucket.com/albums/zz46/RosieOne716/rosie2.jpg

[cocacola]

how bout a crus tag next to a situr piece ,
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2712/4439879190_85207de8d2_o.jpg

[cocacola]

{woops}

[cocacola]

{woopz}

[cocacola]

and BTW start off like this next time bro,
ROSIE it'll help when you get better over time

[sinkilla1]

how did you ??

[Rosie716]

dude, do you just do your pieces on a computer or something? and what do you mean start off like that?

[cocacola]

how did i what?
and no i dont if you can see closely there are some marks going off the line i just use picasa to enhance the sharpness

[cocacola]

how did i what?
and no i dont if you can see closely there are some marks going off the line i just use picasa to enhance the sharpness

[Rosie716]

i have no idea what you are talking about when you say: and BTW start off like this next time bro,
ROSIE it'll help when you get better over time

[sinkilla1]

rosie you kinda dumb and no i was wondering how you made the font so big but then i thought maybe copy paste?

[cocacola]

nahh i just posted it then i went back and then edit it and changed the font size
Like this

[flask1995]

i was requested to come in here and post my shit

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/3671/img0014copy.png
crits? and anything to improve my lettering?

[Flawless Victory]

I personally think that the 3D should be thicker doing letters like that.

[Inlyn08]

What the fuck is with the onslaught of double posting?
And Flawless is right, the 3D should be thicker.
However, I am unsure if I agree with the way the S looks.

[sens415]

So I thought I'd try something new and do a sort of stop motion of a piece in my black book. What do you guys think? Leave comments on YouTube if you want.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nKn6_GIieTY

[Sesh-it-up]

i was requested to come in here and post my shit

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/3671/img0014copy.png
crits? and anything to improve my lettering?

FRESH AS FUCK!!! thickin the 3d, move the F to the left a lil and grab a shit load of paint and a roller and get that shit done sonn! best ive seen from you yet.

[CrustOner]

THe A's too wide.

[PegCityBoy]

permapaques+hungry=
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4020/4439438915_5231db6228.jpg
now i know what you guys are thinking, 540 mg is a lot of sodium for one package, but it's hard to care when they're that delicious

cocacola - stuff on the last page was aids sick, not feelin the one on this page as much
Rosie - drop shaddow is off in a few places, also the structure or RSE needs work
Flask - only the top half of your flick is loading for me so cant say too much about the piece but good to see your getting name brand hot chocolate, the last thing you want is low end hot chocolate.

[mista_dza]

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00203.jpg

and to comment on Peg...i hope you dont write penis...:P

but i like the P without a hole it shapes it up well, good color choice

maybe tighten up that N a little bit if you know what i mean

[SicK-]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/Graffiti/GetAttachment.jpg Crits?

[Sesh-it-up]

queeeerrr

[mista_dza]

and you call that giving someone crits?

just curious...

[flask1995]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/Graffiti/GetAttachment.jpg Crits?

okay, but they're extention's that are unneccessary like the bottom left A extention. as well as the middle bar extention and the bottom right also. just keep it like A not like _A_ or else it'll look ugly.

[TheToy]

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00203.jpg

I dig the concept of this. The twist/overlap of the bars. I like that 'E'.

This would be a good piece for a freight.

[AteskOne]

no, no....no. work on graf a lot more before you start hitting freights.

basic sketch for a poster design for my boys radio station.
http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/3395/localfocus.jpg (http://img21.imageshack.us/i/localfocus.jpg/)
still workin on the charac. not sure how happy i am with him.
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5215/localfocus2.jpg (http://img402.imageshack.us/i/localfocus2.jpg/)

[lord_plankton]

the charac is so tiny but id say he needs more dynamic n life, but for pre design o whatever your on ya way ...what about two battle angry spittin motherfuckers??? in their mid his logo or somethin.. and on its sides huge speakers like lots of em...just some ideas...

[DJ.ADDix]

http://photos-f.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs469.ash1/25718_411562385568_565925568_5430873_2602423_n.jpg

[smoggy_mcfly]

not to sure where i shoul post this

8408

[Rosie716]

people need to start givin some critts if the want some.

[smoggy_mcfly]

nmcontrol thts dope

[hpir]

del-not realy feelin it
nmcontrol-looks prety nice but i have no idea waht it says?
dj.aadix-bars my brothah, start out simple use key board letters to hep u out
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/kan001.jpg
crits?

[LIZARD]

hpir-the shadow on that extension on the N doesnt make sense..u dont see the shadow on the bottom of the letters so that means u wouldnt see one on the bottom of that part.

[hpir]

ya i just noticed it but w/e

[AteskOne]

the charac is so tiny but id say he needs more dynamic n life, but for pre design o whatever your on ya way ...what about two battle angry spittin motherfuckers??? in their mid his logo or somethin.. and on its sides huge speakers like lots of em...just some ideas...
yeah he looks small in the pic but he actaully takes up half the page. i hate working on computer paper i can never put as much in a piece as i want. but i'm not wasting all my bristol board on small projects like this. but yeah its just the basic sketch like i said. i'm changing the charac cause i dont like him and i'm adding all sorts of shit around him. my boy asked for it to have the elements of hip-hop in it so i gotta add some turntables and what not. thanks for the ideas i'll have to put some of them to use.

nmcontrol- that siphtard looks fucking dope man.

[sinkilla1]

hey guys simple i did
kan dont make your letters so bubble well it can be bubbly just make it thinner
atesk i like that its dope as shit
nmcontrol good shit cant read it but i like the style
Dj i dont even know what to say not bars maybe just scartch everything and start over
del thats some straight shit keep it up
http://i40.tinypic.com/2jeuuyb.jpg

[AteskOne]

lose the connection at the bottom of the A and that shit'll look fresh. good work sin.

[CrustOner]

and at the bottom of the R. Best thing I've seen out of you, Sin. But you need to STOP cutting off your letters on the top.


http://img638.imageshack.us/img638/9133/sdc11840a.jpg (http://img638.imageshack.us/i/sdc11840a.jpg/)

ballpoint from work yesterday, not so hot

It says Sipht(ard)

that S needs some work, especially the top, and lower right. It doesn't match the rest of the letters. I like the overall flow and how you eliminated the dead space with some good extensions. Props to that.

[sinkilla1]

im surprised you guys didnt crit the G its so bad

[LIZARD]

yeah the G has to be changed so it flows with the rest of the letters and get rid of that extra extention on the A and it would look sick

[Rosie716]

KAN- yeah dude, your shaddow is all fucked up. work on that. letters are a bit fat for my taste but keep workin at it.

BRAG- Looks decent, minus the 3D shaddow or whatever you were trying, the bottom of the right leg of the R, get rid of that thing there... The bottom connector of the A needs to go, and the drips on the G. keep it simple, but the letters overall look nice. the right idea anyway.

[mista_dza]

well pretty much everyone said what i was gonna say but brag ...yea only thing i would say is maybe fix the horizontal bar on that G make it similar to other letters...

heres another something

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00195-1.jpg
this was done within the past week...just something i wanted to play with, i like turning my D's backwards for simples so i decided to do a whole little piece using the same idea...but any help i can get with this one would be greatly appreciated i wanna fix this up and get it on my board and painted and ill post a pic of that soon.

[-Empty-Can-]

Only problem is that bar in the E. And it could be mistaken for led. try del but just put the letters backward. know what i mean? I have a friend that writes del too.

[mista_dza]

really now...well "technically" i write delone said like you would say it dull-own, but it plays out as del one ...but i understand what you saying about that doin just all the letters backwards i never thought of that...but i mean ive thought about ppl thinkin it was led but that doesnt affect me as much lol...and now im high as hell so im just blabbberrinngggggggggg

over and out.

[viseversa101]

fuckin around while refreshin recent posts on teh forums.....
nehow, comments?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10760.jpg

[flask1995]

It's pretty sick man, but you did what I did in the past. The crack's are pretty okay but not that good, someone said that You could make crack's out of line's instead of doing that.

I don't like that E, especially the curling thing ontop. the V need's more work, cause one one side it's curved but the otherside it's just straight.

the S is the only good lookin' letter in my opinon :p

[-Empty-Can-]

Vice - simpler, bars 3D is way off

[sinkilla1]

just foolin around
vise ur tryin little to hard work on your letters a little more
a simple sdont mind the fill fixed the A and tryed to fix the G dont think it worked but oh well
http://i40.tinypic.com/15nkl87.jpg

[flask1995]

hha word.

[-Empty-Can-]

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss148/pics4bscience2/piece008.jpg
finished my piece. happy with it 'cept there's not enough distinction between the black and purple

shitty pic. looks different in person

[SHER_WON_WTS]

outline the light blue with a slighty darker blue.

[-Empty-Can-]

I couldn't find my blue prisma. I was gonna force field in blue.

[CrustOner]

Stot, I hate those lumps on your S, T's, and R, and I would recommend against doing your letters backward unless you've got them down forward first. No dot after your T.

Sin, bring your R A way closer together. I'd recommend putting them closer together.

[viseversa101]

?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10761.jpg

[||BREAD||]

well thats better lol, i like the e in vise rather than in versa because it looks cramped in there. the R looks a lil messed up as well. S in versa in tight. I like it, 3-D seems to be spot on unless im missing something and im diggin the colours too

[CrustOner]

Learn letter structure. Use BARS.

[viseversa101]

thanx for the feedback, was just foolin around reading forum updates n pulled that1 off

OFFTOPIC markal products/ the stickers i ordered would be a plus if they came thru >P

[woonybomber]

go simpler vise

[Rosie716]

VICE- that blue/gold piece is sick. i like it alot.

BRAG- thats better, i just dont like how the B and G are simple and thre R and A have all those extensions and stuff. make all your letters similar, either simple or extensions. i would go with simple, i like the structure.


I know this needs work. the E is a little small, and i cant figure out what i want to do with the I. any ideas?

http://i812.photobucket.com/albums/zz46/RosieOne716/rosie3.jpg

[Inlyn08]

The R and the E need work. Not too bad, but they could be better. Where that bar comes off the end of the E, either lose it or have the bottom in line with the bottom line of the E. Looks weird to me.

[Rosie716]

yeah i think if i straightin the extension thing it will look better.

[Alts13]

I was told to post this in here as an example of what we mean when we say do simples

http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02630.jpg

Keepin it simple

[cocacola]

heres a class sketch, should i redo in color?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2748/4443513769_022ff71cac.jpg

[FlippingChickens]

alts i love the simple!! one of my favorites from you!!

coca - looking good,like the flow loving that u on the 2nd one

rosie - fix the bottom of that e ..looks solid though

vise - go simple,no cracks no silver fillins just focus on letters and that other one is really bad too..no hard fealings

brag - not fealing that a and work on a new g

stot - came out clean,there somethings i dont like but w.e..i like the 8ball



http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe22.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe23.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe24.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe25.jpg

^ REALLY DIDNT NOTICE I HAD TO RE-OUTLINE THE E FUCKKK,ILL FIX THAT TOMORROW

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe26.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe27.jpg


http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe28.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe29.jpg

[LeaksOne]

ok your piece is still akward looking and your handy needs work BUT your throw has improved. it says tofe instead of toee now

[Meph*]

http://img440.imageshack.us/i/photo0059t.jpg/

[FlippingChickens]

leaks - were does it looks akward..i know the t should have been lower,should i have left the circle inside the o??

yo meph,looks like u couldnt find out how to post a pic....try using photobucket..really fealing the one on the top!
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/meph.jpg

[RES4]

heres a class sketch, should i redo in color?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2748/4443513769_022ff71cac.jpg

i think you should colour the crus, its nice

[LeaksOne]

leaks - were does it looks akward..i know the t should have been lower,should i have left the circle inside the o??

nah its your T, F, and E. the F and E are just weird looking i cant explain and i dont really that that T

[FlippingChickens]

Yea i didnt have a sketch to look at and usually all my peices go to shit when i just freestyle..the f and e didnt bother me but that stupid splash thing i did with both letters really annoys me..cant complain though,eventho i dont really like how it looked with the blue and white inside it still has been a good day for me im getting better with the can control i can feal it but regardless i still need a shit load more practice.

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-16_1038.jpg

[LeaksOne]

Flkew? and your left handed huh?

[kew1]

its says fukew and nah im right handed

[FlippingChickens]

wtf is up with that k?? and that u looks like a l and the left part of the w is bad

[Meph*]

http://img214.imageshack.us/i/picture18s.jpg/











http://img23.imageshack.us/i/picture16pi.jpg/










http://img138.imageshack.us/i/picture14ca.jpg/










http://img401.imageshack.us/i/photo0059t.jpg/

[kew1]

idk i dont like the whole but i just posted it so roast it all u want lol i only like the e

[Rosie716]

KEW- your U looks like an L and your K looks like it has a T coming off of it. Make the U look like one, and loose that ugly extension on the K and it will look much better.

[FlippingChickens]

meph - dam you have improved a lot since the first one..that samurai looks fresh

[Meph*]

Thanks im trying to get better at the characters

[FlippingChickens]

http://img214.imageshack.us/i/picture18s.jpg/
^ that peice would have looked better if u didnt but the heart but the character came out really dope

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe30.jpg

[Meph*]

yo how do i post em..i just paste the link?

[FlippingChickens]

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1646/picture18s.th.jpg (http://img214.imageshack.us/i/picture18s.jpg/)

[Meph*]

yo how do i post the pics? do i just paste the link?

[Meph*]

how do i post the pics? do i just paste the url?

[FlippingChickens]

the forum link on ur imageshack

[Inlyn08]

Or you can manually post a link using Code.
It would be as follows The Url in here
If that makes sense.

[Meph*]

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/Picture16.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/Picture18.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/supermarioo.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/Picture2.jpg

[Meph*]

im using the (diret link) on photobucket

[LeaksOne]

oh my goodness. copy the link click the little mountain and moon/sun button paste the image link there then viola you have posted pictures

[Rosie716]

gotta use img link, the one that says -[img] in front of it.

[Meph*]

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/Picture16.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/Picture2.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/supermarioo.jpg

[LeaksOne]

your characters are straight but your graff needs work

[Xfish]

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4784/12583140.th.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/i/12583140.jpg/)

just a simple im trying out i need to sketch more often

crits?

[Meph*]

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/1_1.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/2_1.jpg

[LeaksOne]

your characters are straight but your graff needs work

.

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2783/4444624252_412e3d0c04.jpg
the colored version...anyone like?

[cocacola]

wtf its everytime double posting, this page is lagginn

[LIZARD]

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/857/photoon20100318at22163.jpg
i know the letters get bigger as it goes on but what do u think other then that

[LIZARD]

http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/8900/photoon20100319at0029.jpgcrits?

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i39.tinypic.com/13z0qig.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/qysub4.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/5b62hk.jpg
with yellow outline arounf it and bubble shit lol

[GHOST_]

Okay so I am just starting out (it's been a couple of weeks) and I was hoping to get some crits from you guys.

1. Bomb/Throw-up idea:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo8.jpg

2. Same concept but as a one-liner:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo9.jpg

3. Bomb/Throw-up idea #2:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo5.jpg

All done relatively quickly, just trying to develop them really for the moment. Open to constructive criticism. Thanks.

&& Before anyone says this name is taken. Ugh, I know it has been used before. It's just what I started writing and practicing with, ignore that part please.

[mawks]

everyone do simples...
no other crits i can give really
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image006-2.jpg
fucked this one up.. oh well
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image009.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image011-2.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image010.jpg

[flask1995]

[IMG]
[IMG]http://i41.tinypic.com/qysub4.jpg[/IM G]


Remember to seperate your letter's more farther, I've told my friend's to do this cause some letter's can make different letter's taht you don't like/want, in this case the C is to close to the r which sorta makes it look like a U.

[-Dank-DK-]

so is that the only problem
is it ok

[LeaksOne]

Okay so I am just starting out (it's been a couple of weeks) and I was hoping to get some crits from you guys.

1. Bomb/Throw-up idea:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo8.jpg

2. Same concept but as a one-liner:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo9.jpg

3. Bomb/Throw-up idea #2:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo5.jpg

All done relatively quickly, just trying to develop them really for the moment. Open to constructive criticism. Thanks.

&& Before anyone says this name is taken. Ugh, I know it has been used before. It's just what I started writing and practicing with, ignore that part please.

http://www.dirtypilot.com/images/Ghost315s/ghost15_315.jpg

http://www.agiledevelopers.info/ugroove/pictures/43gky2js4hwvxea.jpg

that name is off limits.


and mawks those are raw

[GHOST_]

Wow, sweet criticism LeaksOne, thanks for that. I can definitely see why you would think I had no idea Ghost was already taken considering the last few sentences of my previous post.

Does anyone have anything useful to say about the actual sketches maybe?

If not, it's cool. I was just going to try and get some help from advanced artists.

Let me reiterate something I said in my last post before wrapping this up. I understand Ghost has been used before. So have thousands of other names. I had already drawn up the sketches though before realizing this and was just hoping to get some feedback on them. Thanks again.

[LeaksOne]

listen you fucking idiot. if he was some local writer i wouldnt say anything but he a big fucking deal and everyone is guna say the same thing. you might as well write cope. id figure you'd have enough sense not to write that.

[GHOST_]

Okay. Hostility..

Situation: You don't really live in a "huge" city. You've seen graffiti here and there growing up at times and don't think much of it. Then one day you randomly get the urge to start trying it. You use the first name that pops into your head and that you like. You begin writing it and practicing with it.

You get online and do some research a week or two later, and come to find out the name you chose to use has already been done by someone somewhere else.

You then find a forum to post some of your pictures on. Even though you just found out someone else uses the alias you like you figure "what the hell I'm just going to post them anyways and see what people think for someone's first 'attempts' at graffiti."

/endsituation

Honestly, I figured I was just going to get flamed in the end. But still -_- ..fuck.

[mawks]

haha just change your name.. your just starting out anyways and you'll probably change it another 5 times

[LeaksOne]

well i would have put that same effort into thinking up a different name and sketching those out before posting on a graff site because regardless of what you say to defend your case people are guna point out that ghost is already a pretty big writer.

but as far as crits. the ballpoint one needs to be simplified. the black oneliner(?) needs practice and better letter definition and the throw could be improved. the ghost as a o is kinda weak. and try not to use a chisel marker when outlining your throw

[AlecR2K]

i think im gonna start writing JA ONE. we can go bombing ok ghost

[GHOST_]

Thank you, honestly, for the small review.

I am already trying to think of another name btw but I really like working with those letters. Hmm.

We'll see what happens.

[LeaksOne]

hogs. thong/s.

[Alts13]

Ghost - constructive crit here - do simple letters don't even work on a throw yet because it is pointless til you understand your letter structure so simple like this:
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02630.jpg

then look for a new name, I hope you already are because some names are just totally off limits, writing Ghost is like writing Revok or Cope, work on making your lines less shaky and just put hours and hours into blackbook work before you even consider painting

If you like the letters just rearrange them, it doesn't have to read Ghost or be a real word

[Fury]

VEGA is also off-limits :)
But really, do what Alts said, and just do simples, since I can hardly read some of it.

Mawk - Like I said before, change the A and you're golden.

[cocacola]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2738/4445583865_dab539c969.jpg

[flask1995]

so is that the only problem
is it ok

although it's really good man, the fillin is dope but you just need to focus on tat one situation right now/

[CrustOner]

It's weak, Dank. AND STOP POSTING GIGANTIC PICTURES.

[cocacola]

ay yo can i get some crits?

[LIZARD]

http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/8900/photoon20100319at0029.jpg
help me out with crits,i dont double post its just everyone made fun of ghost on the last page

[RedEyes]

Change the name, lose the breaks on the bars and go with key board letters that S is way out of proportion along with the E.

[mawks]

you guys gotta give crits too..

[LIZARD]

i do as much as i can i just had nothing to say to fix on the last page

[woonybomber]

no they dont give crits mawks i tell them all the time to but they dont

[RES4]

situr- dont like the s or i, and the fill makes it hard to read
sevr- connect all the bars, dont make them come apart like that

http://i42.tinypic.com/2v9emw1.jpg

[LIZARD]

hahahaha woony
RES-ur missing a little shadow underneath the hook of the e, i dont know if thats what u were goin for but ur letters get bigger as i goes on so if u could make it all the same size it would be dope...over all i like it

[RemoZ]

RES- your shadows are super uneven and inconsistent

[Cerone]

Crits?

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u228/royalsjock94/Photoon2010-03-17at2357-1.jpg

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u228/royalsjock94/Photoon2010-03-20at1500.jpg

[flask1995]

RES- your shadows are super uneven and inconsistent

So? Maybe he doesn't want it to be straight cause people are tired of straight line's and he wanted to try something new?

Otherwise RES, I Really like the style, the Bottom K on the left should be more fatter but it's totally up to you, TBH I can't wait to see you colour this cause it look's good, keep it up man.

CERONE- It's okay, but I'd like to see some other piece's for you otherwise I don't know what to say. Just wait for more crit's from other people otherwise then from myself.

[RES4]

thanks, tbh i dont really know what he was taliking about. i know its wrong inside the letters for example but i dont see how its uneven

and cerone, do normal letters i can see what your trying to do but its a bit over the top

[CrustOner]

He's talking about your drop shadow, d00d.

[Cerone]

Its a sexy drop shadow though, right? :P I might put up more stuff later.

[RES4]

yea, i know but hows it uneven

[Cerone]

Oh, I was talking about my shadow, yours looks great dude, I really like it, keep it up

[remos]

http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/Photoon2010-03-20at1543-1.jpg
havent sketched or posted in forever crits are always helpful

resik fix your r and k in my opinion and get your shadow more consistant
cerone your e's look really weird in my opinion

[RedEyes]

Resik-Its wrong you got a shadow that goes down in some areas left for most of the piece and then a random one on the right of the K. you need to study up on your shadowing buddy.
Cer-im no fan of wiggly lines like that, its up to you but my crit is to make solid lines till u got style.
Meds-all your letters look like their from different pieces, and the fill is no good. also put the whole in that D to make it defined.

[CrustOner]

Cer, that drop shadow IS fucking sexy. Now you just need some good simples to put it to. haha.

[LIZARD]

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/299/photoon20100320at1644.jpg
new style...i couldnt figure out a way to do the r,crits?

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1503.jpg

[pookienuts]

trying to make my calligraphy into something... still working it but feedback is welcome

says sear... and no im not going back to simples... lol

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0841.jpg

[Fury]

Kew - I don't like the side extensions. Try some 3D.
Sear - I don't see the E?

[Sesh-it-up]

pookie that shit is nuts but i think its a lil too nuts just tone it down a bit. i like the idea tho

[LIZARD]

pookie-that shits intense, i dont even know what to say
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8296/photoon20100320at2331.jpg
better R?...crits?

[mista_dza]

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00203.jpg

just wanna bump for some more crits...
sevr- i dont really like that little spike on the top of the S, the R looks ok somethign about it makes me '???' though
pookie- uhhhhh i can barely read that lol but im fucked up right now ;/
kew- that extension on the right makes it look like it says KEWL ha...just a thought keep it in mind maybe make that E just a little bigger too...and add some 3d for flare.

[Jwhite]

Crits?

[massacreman]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1503.jpg

KEW! Finally i like your work!
Good job on that one!

[Inlyn08]

Crits?

Not sure exactly how I feel about these. I can say for sure the second one the O looks like a U with a beard. Lose that unnecessary arrow. The first P isn't too bad, just needs work. As a whole, they need work. But, they have potential.

Try and simplify it, lock down some solid letters.. then kick it with that other shit. Because all you're doing right now is adding too much chaos to it.

[El Chupacabre]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1503.jpg

This shit is pretty good. Keep this up.

[shem]

quick ass messy sketch.. the M is fucked..

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2799/4450190739_9382411b69.jpg

[Jwhite]

Not sure exactly how I feel about these. I can say for sure the second one the O looks like a U with a beard. Lose that unnecessary arrow. The first P isn't too bad, just needs work. As a whole, they need work. But, they have potential.

Try and simplify it, lock down some solid letters.. then kick it with that other shit. Because all you're doing right now is adding too much chaos to it.

thanks, im redoing my handstyle atm so ill probably throw up a newer version of a simple or something.

[-Empty-Can-]

Shem bring the bottom bar of the E down so it doesn't look like an S. Same with the S, bring that bar down.

[markingz.]

quick ass messy sketch.. the M is fucked..

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2799/4450190739_9382411b69.jpg
shem is from florida guys

[pookienuts]

thanks for the critique yall ill definitely try those approaches...

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo5-3.jpg

[CrustOner]

When do you plan to add a little style, there, RedEyes?

[RedEyes]

Its ment to be a straight letter. the color scheme will make it look dope though.

[Rosie716]

red eyes, is that gonna be a tounge comin out of the o? and sabs gave carolina an ass beating!

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-21_1755.jpg

[CrustOner]

Your structure is terrible. Either fix it or quit graffiti

[LIZARD]

http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/859/photoon20100321at20332.jpg
whats a better way to make it more like a v but keep the bubble style....crits?

[CrustOner]

Give it a pointed tip. You did it to your S.

[suparjafar]

sevr if anything id drop that r

ive only been doing throws/tags, and i wanna get into painting straights. so instead of sketching it i tried a pen freestyle thing...

[AlecR2K]

ES is hurting. RO is pretty solid.

[BeaN]

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb49/Ghostpunk/sketch-1.jpg

BLAH!! First attempt at this style and im not really fellin the E

[Sesh-it-up]

^ i dont dig how far left the A is. but keep at it your close.
some old shit, might go back to this kinda style what u guys think??
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000055.jpg

[mista_dza]

sesh-that bottom of that E needs fixing and is that supposed to be a J or an L?
sevr- im not feelin that little spike you got on that R, maybe put the spike how you would do the "e"

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00208.jpg
^i know that "illvester" looks horrid i did it quick i would like some crits on the delone.

and heres the practice page before i got to the picture above
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00207.jpg

[LIZARD]

not really sure what u mean...is there a way u could show me?

[the cannabis evangelist]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1503.jpg

everything about this peice flows to thr right,
the legs on the k
the bars of the e and w
the extension on the w

so why try and force symetry with the k's extension.
it messes up the feel of the peice and it looks slopy compared to everything else

but imo you shoul change ur name kell drop the extension on the w
and it would look way dope as a simple throw

[medacog1]

http://i40.tinypic.com/jpeoo2.jpg
not to clean..but i need some help with my P and R?
Crits


delone- that blue delone is a nice thing

[massacreman]

and heres the practice page before i got to the picture above
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00207.jpg

that page looks oldschool. nice throw youve got there

[sodi]

random simple, need some crits
http://i874.photobucket.com/albums/ab306/Sodi1/DSC02056.jpg

[lord_plankton]

d is too small, i to me is dangerously close to a penis but thats just me, silverchrome background and outline ?? at least do second outline the the holes of the letters so you can see em better but overall sloppy and ugly fill

[Meph*]

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/boredinschool.jpg

bored in school..

[Rosie716]

suparjarfar, i dont think your name is close enough to mine..

[RES4]

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00207.jpg

blue on the right is fresh

[adelg88]

some of the ransom words ive done.. just bored...

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/pbnisgod/IMG_2023-1.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/pbnisgod/IMG_2022-1.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/pbnisgod/IMG_2021-1.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/pbnisgod/IMG_2020-1.jpg

i no they are not great.. i was just bored

[LeaksOne]

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/pbnisgod/IMG_2022-1.jpg

damn you might as well not have an L in this one.....

[Juicee]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/bbbb.png

scanner fucked up the colors REAL bad lol

[Juicee]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/bbbb.png

scanner fucked up the colors REAL bad lol

[mista_dza]

damn sober im reallly feelin that piece and charac dude keep up the good work...

[CESP.one]

Decided to finally start my own little blackbook...
First page:
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll75/fullyflared322/img096.jpg
Been paying too much attention to throws taht look shietty anyways so i decided to try somenew stuff.

[lord_plankton]

you shouldnt have done the overlapping s to maintain harmony n shit, plus open up the bottom..otherwise not bad you might wanna try n define 3d inside the letters would look much better

[Rosie716]

CES= i like it, but yeah, the overlapping of the S needs to be fixed, and the bottom part of the C should be rounded, its kinda ridged.. but its not 3d plankton, its a shaddow..

[Juicee]

CES= i like it, but yeah, the overlapping of the S needs to be fixed, and the bottom part of the C should be rounded, its kinda ridged.. but its not 3d plankton, its a shaddow..

mr expert with the graffiti nomenclature

[AlecR2K]

http://i43.tinypic.com/axcfpt.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/2lau78.jpg

pen sketch and marker bomb. i realize they are not perfect but im working on it. i developed this simple style today

[Rosie716]

sink is a risky name, buffalo and atlanta both have big sinks.

[shem]

quick pen sketch from work... got lazy on the M..

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4455255933_7cbfa5f9c1.jpg

[AlecR2K]

sink is a risky name, buffalo and atlanta both have big sinks.

meh.. id change it if they were world wide known legends. .
anyways, i posted these for crits since its a brand new style.

..and that is looking fresh, shem

[banan]

hello im new to this forum so yeah...
first 1 says "sire" second "sare" crits would be welcomed
http://i43.tinypic.com/33a6o9h.jpg

[suparjafar]

http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0336.jpg

bored simp.

[-Empty-Can-]

round out that S

[LIZARD]

banan-connect the the bars on the S and E

[AlecR2K]

http://i40.tinypic.com/ouv88o.jpg

any real fuck ups or am i doing ok?
btw the black lines in the middle of the K and from setting my bars up.
also dont tell me to remove the cracks, im practicing them and i like them.

[RedEyes]

Roes- you mean this sink?
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo4-1.jpg
dont bite Alec!

[LIZARD]

alec-keep it up lookin good

[LIZARD]

redeyes-u tell everyone to change there name and stop bitin why dont u google siko and see what comes up

[RedEyes]

U know me so well! actually fag i was showing that to roes, and for my name like ive said a thousand times. its just a world i fks with at the momment not ganna go kill the city with SICO lol come on dude.

[LIZARD]

just sayin tellin someone to change there name when the name your using is already takin doesnt make sense

[Inlyn08]

http://i40.tinypic.com/ouv88o.jpg

any real fuck ups or am i doing ok?
btw the black lines in the middle of the K and from setting my bars up.
also dont tell me to remove the cracks, im practicing them and i like them.
I won't tell you to remove the cracks, instead I will tell you that I'm not really feeling that K.
Just not feeling it.

[suparjafar]

redeyes why are you showing me that, thats not my name...

[RedEyes]

The only reason i would tell someone to change their name and in this case i didnt Rosie did, is because a writer already exist in a big way. your not ganna find a sico in MSK or NSF now are you.

My bad by Roes i ment Rosie

[LIZARD]

just sayin, no need to get your panties in a bunch

[AlecR2K]

dont call it biting. i came up with the name my self.. and look at our styles, i havnt taken anything from the other sink. i didnt even know he existed. besides im Canadian.

[RedEyes]

Naw by that i ment dont bite his style from that post.

[AlecR2K]

lol.. the name stays.

btw was the drawing a BS member or what

[LIZARD]

http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/8338/photoon20100323at0107.jpg
trying out some simps...crits?

[SicK-]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/Graffiti/Dais-simp.jpg
Any crits?

[mista_dza]

ok right now im so fried and i watched the movie "the wackness" it literally is shitty wackness its so fuckin hilarioussssssss yo hahhahahahaha but ive been sketchin all night and i came up with some letters i really liked and struggled with the "D" but went to my mom and she gave me some real inspiration (lol!) and so i got to this point....thoughts ?

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00210.jpg
but on the real, i think imma name this ish the wackness...lolllll this movie is so fuckin lolzy

lizard- i think you should fix the bottom of that 'e' so it matches the hole
sick- keep your bars the same width

[SicK-]

ok right now im so fried and i watched the movie "the wackness" it literally is shitty wackness its so fuckin hilarioussssssss yo hahhahahahaha but ive been sketchin all night and i came up with some letters i really liked and struggled with the "D" but went to my mom and she gave me some real inspiration (lol!) and so i got to this point....thoughts ?

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00210.jpg
but on the real, i think imma name this ish the wackness...lolllll this movie is so fuckin lolzy

I am also struggling on My d, i really like you T, i think you L looks more like a backwards J but other than that i really like your stuff

[LIZARD]

is that a t?i thought it was an e...sick change your d

[RemoZ]

I really enjoy that E, that movie was actually pretty dope too.


"I stabbed my wifey in da pussy"

[mista_dza]

nawww dat aint no T! its D-E-L! lol but ill define the E some how ,
funny shit dawg that movie is just full of terrible realtions to myself thats why its bad, if only i was a drug dealer and met method man my life could almost been complete, nothing as terrible to the movie though...

[mista_dza]

my computer is retarded for double post.

[shem]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/bbbb.png

scanner fucked up the colors REAL bad lol

bump this. dope character.

and this for crits..
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4455255933_7cbfa5f9c1.jpg

[syne7]

bump this. dope character.

and this for crits..
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4455255933_7cbfa5f9c1.jpgIt's really good but I think the S is a bit skinny at the top and throws off the flow alittle bit, how long have you been writing?

[shem]

little under a year

[syne7]

you got talent for sure, keep with it.

[Meph*]

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/boredinschool.jpg


need some crits, help me put ;)

[lord_plankton]

your carrie is way better than your graff, dont know where to begin, forget the arrrow forget the star , drips explosion n bubbles...just do straight simple letters, your m aint thaaat bad though, pay attention to bar width n stuff

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-23_1103.jpg

[sinkilla1]

why do you bend your letters at random spots it makes it look bad learn to bend your letters in the right spots

[kew1]

ik i always fuck up on the k

[sinkilla1]

nout just the k look ill show you

[massacreman]

(fu)kew: get more flow/structure in your letters

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2748/4457564665_b539dec793.jpg
just a quik one the k was supposed to be different but i did the outline wrong because i was tired

[mista_dza]

massacreman-the U seems to me like its just a tiny bit to small and in my opinion you should try junk with a lowercase "n" see how that works out

and this is what i pretty much did all night
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00211.jpg

no like 3ds or shadows yet im still thinkin about what i want on each one, but that droplet on the yellow/blue one in the D, was from the otr markers i bought one just straight up leaked into the cap and i opened it and it just spilled out , i was pretty angry but i got over it lol....

[banan]

hello im new to this forum so yeah...
first 1 says "sire" second "sare" crits would be welcomed
http://i43.tinypic.com/33a6o9h.jpg

bump for crits

[FlippingChickens]

kew - fix that k

junk - name is taken already man

del - i like the 3rd one

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3183.jpg

[jiveONE]

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/2840/scan002001.th.png (http://img340.imageshack.us/i/scan002001.png/)

http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9873/scan001001.th.png (http://img641.imageshack.us/i/scan001001.png/)

Flipping- that needs work and so does the 3d
banan-work more on simples
massacre- reminds me of some eurostyle...pretty good.
kew-just work on that k--- make the bars more straight instead of slanting them.

the first pic is a shit attempt at a new style but i'll post more simples like the 2nd one soon.

[jiveONE]

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/2840/scan002001.th.png (http://img340.imageshack.us/i/scan002001.png/)

http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9873/scan001001.th.png (http://img641.imageshack.us/i/scan001001.png/)

Flipping- that "T" needs work and so does the 3d
banan-work more on simples
massacre- reminds me of some eurostyle...pretty good.
kew-just work on that k--- make the bars more straight instead of slanting them.

the first pic is a shit attempt at a new style but i'll post more simples like the 2nd one soon.

[LIZARD]

chicken-i like everything except the f,the extension on the top looks wrong. id say just take it of and use a simple f

[chikkenbone]

tofe- i would drop that thing off the f and make the e just straight up (E)
good work though
banan- go simple dont do random arrows or stars maybe try drop shadow
crits please
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/cweas2simp.jpg

[medacog1]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/cweas2simp.jpg[/QUOTE]

what is that thing after the A? and is that an H or W after the C

[chikkenbone]

az and cw

[medacog1]

.o ok

http://i40.tinypic.com/20prdrn.jpg

Crits

[Rosie716]

DEL- top one is ugly. Bottom one is a straight bite off of a graffiti font, but you forgot the star in the D. The othrs look decent

[Sesh-it-up]

polar- I love ur shit, not tryin to hate but there is a polar alredy on the east coast of canada but keep it up mang ur shit looks fly.
cweaz- not feelin the W but its close.
jive- stick to bars u got a longg way, i dig ur handys tho they remind me of mine when i was younger :D
tofe- change that F fool. and the bar of the T.
sare- dont push the style, put in the work and it will come. ease off the wildness, go back to the basics for a bit.
del- stick to bars with jive for now.
junk- the N an K should flow like the J and U
fukew- the K and W look a lil offset.

ill have pics for u guys to ragg out in a day or two. keep up the sketchin!

[medacog1]

polar- I love ur shit, not tryin to hate but there is a polar alredy on the east coast of canada but keep it up mang ur shit looks fly.


thank you... but i hate my P&R.. if anyone wants to help with that plz

[viseversa101]

The v is racking my flippin knoggin
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10823.jpg

[Sp!ff]

what up? i always just sketch shit an' never finish it. this is the first piece i've ever drawn in my new black book... i bit the majority of the letter style, but i wanted to play around with simple overlaps and shit just to see if i could do it... i know i made some f-ups, but crits are greatly welcome

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2780/4459560548_cd0ff3b48c_b.jpg

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i44.tinypic.com/24q050n.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/10yfk7k.jpg

finale getting into pieceing
so crit

[Patchy]

Sp!ff your shits hot man. Keep it up

Dank i like it but what's the deal with your highlights? they look like upside down "h" or 4's

[-Dank-DK-]

ya i know lol i hate them

just pretend they r not there lol

[shem]

dank the letters are wack try and keep your bars comsistent.

spiff that shits ugly go reallly simple for now.

[LIZARD]

smaller pics=better crits