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cocacola
03-18-2010, 08:15 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2783/4444624252_412e3d0c04.jpg
the colored version...anyone like?

cocacola
03-18-2010, 08:17 PM
wtf its everytime double posting, this page is lagginn

LIZARD
03-18-2010, 09:21 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/857/photoon20100318at22163.jpg
i know the letters get bigger as it goes on but what do u think other then that

LIZARD
03-18-2010, 11:31 PM
http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/8900/photoon20100319at0029.jpgcrits?

-Dank-DK-
03-18-2010, 11:39 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/13z0qig.jpg
http://i41.tinypic.com/qysub4.jpg

http://i43.tinypic.com/5b62hk.jpg
with yellow outline arounf it and bubble shit lol

GHOST_
03-19-2010, 12:18 AM
Okay so I am just starting out (it's been a couple of weeks) and I was hoping to get some crits from you guys.

1. Bomb/Throw-up idea:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo8.jpg

2. Same concept but as a one-liner:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo9.jpg

3. Bomb/Throw-up idea #2:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo5.jpg

All done relatively quickly, just trying to develop them really for the moment. Open to constructive criticism. Thanks.

&& Before anyone says this name is taken. Ugh, I know it has been used before. It's just what I started writing and practicing with, ignore that part please.

mawks
03-19-2010, 12:32 AM
everyone do simples...
no other crits i can give really
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image006-2.jpg
fucked this one up.. oh well
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image009.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image011-2.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image010.jpg

flask1995
03-19-2010, 12:48 AM
[IMG]
[IMG]http://i41.tinypic.com/qysub4.jpg[/IM G]


Remember to seperate your letter's more farther, I've told my friend's to do this cause some letter's can make different letter's taht you don't like/want, in this case the C is to close to the r which sorta makes it look like a U.

-Dank-DK-
03-19-2010, 12:57 AM
so is that the only problem
is it ok

LeaksOne
03-19-2010, 12:59 AM
Okay so I am just starting out (it's been a couple of weeks) and I was hoping to get some crits from you guys.

1. Bomb/Throw-up idea:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo8.jpg

2. Same concept but as a one-liner:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo9.jpg

3. Bomb/Throw-up idea #2:

http://i414.photobucket.com/albums/pp230/RockstarLDG/photo5.jpg

All done relatively quickly, just trying to develop them really for the moment. Open to constructive criticism. Thanks.

&& Before anyone says this name is taken. Ugh, I know it has been used before. It's just what I started writing and practicing with, ignore that part please.

http://www.dirtypilot.com/images/Ghost315s/ghost15_315.jpg

http://www.agiledevelopers.info/ugroove/pictures/43gky2js4hwvxea.jpg

that name is off limits.


and mawks those are raw

GHOST_
03-19-2010, 01:13 AM
Wow, sweet criticism LeaksOne, thanks for that. I can definitely see why you would think I had no idea Ghost was already taken considering the last few sentences of my previous post.

Does anyone have anything useful to say about the actual sketches maybe?

If not, it's cool. I was just going to try and get some help from advanced artists.

Let me reiterate something I said in my last post before wrapping this up. I understand Ghost has been used before. So have thousands of other names. I had already drawn up the sketches though before realizing this and was just hoping to get some feedback on them. Thanks again.

LeaksOne
03-19-2010, 01:17 AM
listen you fucking idiot. if he was some local writer i wouldnt say anything but he a big fucking deal and everyone is guna say the same thing. you might as well write cope. id figure you'd have enough sense not to write that.

GHOST_
03-19-2010, 01:29 AM
Okay. Hostility..

Situation: You don't really live in a "huge" city. You've seen graffiti here and there growing up at times and don't think much of it. Then one day you randomly get the urge to start trying it. You use the first name that pops into your head and that you like. You begin writing it and practicing with it.

You get online and do some research a week or two later, and come to find out the name you chose to use has already been done by someone somewhere else.

You then find a forum to post some of your pictures on. Even though you just found out someone else uses the alias you like you figure "what the hell I'm just going to post them anyways and see what people think for someone's first 'attempts' at graffiti."

/endsituation

Honestly, I figured I was just going to get flamed in the end. But still -_- ..fuck.

mawks
03-19-2010, 01:35 AM
haha just change your name.. your just starting out anyways and you'll probably change it another 5 times

LeaksOne
03-19-2010, 01:36 AM
well i would have put that same effort into thinking up a different name and sketching those out before posting on a graff site because regardless of what you say to defend your case people are guna point out that ghost is already a pretty big writer.

but as far as crits. the ballpoint one needs to be simplified. the black oneliner(?) needs practice and better letter definition and the throw could be improved. the ghost as a o is kinda weak. and try not to use a chisel marker when outlining your throw

AlecR2K
03-19-2010, 02:00 AM
i think im gonna start writing JA ONE. we can go bombing ok ghost

GHOST_
03-19-2010, 02:00 AM
Thank you, honestly, for the small review.

I am already trying to think of another name btw but I really like working with those letters. Hmm.

We'll see what happens.

LeaksOne
03-19-2010, 02:04 AM
hogs. thong/s.

Alts13
03-19-2010, 04:01 AM
Ghost - constructive crit here - do simple letters don't even work on a throw yet because it is pointless til you understand your letter structure so simple like this:
http://i274.photobucket.com/albums/jj259/decyferone/DSC02630.jpg

then look for a new name, I hope you already are because some names are just totally off limits, writing Ghost is like writing Revok or Cope, work on making your lines less shaky and just put hours and hours into blackbook work before you even consider painting

If you like the letters just rearrange them, it doesn't have to read Ghost or be a real word

Fury
03-19-2010, 01:39 PM
VEGA is also off-limits :)
But really, do what Alts said, and just do simples, since I can hardly read some of it.

Mawk - Like I said before, change the A and you're golden.

cocacola
03-19-2010, 03:02 PM
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2738/4445583865_dab539c969.jpg

flask1995
03-19-2010, 06:41 PM
so is that the only problem
is it ok

although it's really good man, the fillin is dope but you just need to focus on tat one situation right now/

CrustOner
03-19-2010, 08:20 PM
It's weak, Dank. AND STOP POSTING GIGANTIC PICTURES.

cocacola
03-19-2010, 09:38 PM
ay yo can i get some crits?

LIZARD
03-19-2010, 10:20 PM
http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/8900/photoon20100319at0029.jpg
help me out with crits,i dont double post its just everyone made fun of ghost on the last page

RedEyes
03-19-2010, 10:29 PM
Change the name, lose the breaks on the bars and go with key board letters that S is way out of proportion along with the E.

mawks
03-19-2010, 10:31 PM
you guys gotta give crits too..

LIZARD
03-19-2010, 10:33 PM
i do as much as i can i just had nothing to say to fix on the last page

woonybomber
03-20-2010, 09:08 AM
no they dont give crits mawks i tell them all the time to but they dont

RES4
03-20-2010, 12:11 PM
situr- dont like the s or i, and the fill makes it hard to read
sevr- connect all the bars, dont make them come apart like that

http://i42.tinypic.com/2v9emw1.jpg

LIZARD
03-20-2010, 12:35 PM
hahahaha woony
RES-ur missing a little shadow underneath the hook of the e, i dont know if thats what u were goin for but ur letters get bigger as i goes on so if u could make it all the same size it would be dope...over all i like it

RemoZ
03-20-2010, 01:03 PM
RES- your shadows are super uneven and inconsistent

Cerone
03-20-2010, 02:04 PM
Crits?

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u228/royalsjock94/Photoon2010-03-17at2357-1.jpg

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u228/royalsjock94/Photoon2010-03-20at1500.jpg

flask1995
03-20-2010, 02:11 PM
RES- your shadows are super uneven and inconsistent

So? Maybe he doesn't want it to be straight cause people are tired of straight line's and he wanted to try something new?

Otherwise RES, I Really like the style, the Bottom K on the left should be more fatter but it's totally up to you, TBH I can't wait to see you colour this cause it look's good, keep it up man.

CERONE- It's okay, but I'd like to see some other piece's for you otherwise I don't know what to say. Just wait for more crit's from other people otherwise then from myself.

RES4
03-20-2010, 02:16 PM
thanks, tbh i dont really know what he was taliking about. i know its wrong inside the letters for example but i dont see how its uneven

and cerone, do normal letters i can see what your trying to do but its a bit over the top

CrustOner
03-20-2010, 02:21 PM
He's talking about your drop shadow, d00d.

Cerone
03-20-2010, 02:33 PM
Its a sexy drop shadow though, right? :P I might put up more stuff later.

RES4
03-20-2010, 02:46 PM
yea, i know but hows it uneven

Cerone
03-20-2010, 02:49 PM
Oh, I was talking about my shadow, yours looks great dude, I really like it, keep it up

remos
03-20-2010, 02:49 PM
http://i255.photobucket.com/albums/hh139/remos905/Photoon2010-03-20at1543-1.jpg
havent sketched or posted in forever crits are always helpful

resik fix your r and k in my opinion and get your shadow more consistant
cerone your e's look really weird in my opinion

RedEyes
03-20-2010, 02:51 PM
Resik-Its wrong you got a shadow that goes down in some areas left for most of the piece and then a random one on the right of the K. you need to study up on your shadowing buddy.
Cer-im no fan of wiggly lines like that, its up to you but my crit is to make solid lines till u got style.
Meds-all your letters look like their from different pieces, and the fill is no good. also put the whole in that D to make it defined.

CrustOner
03-20-2010, 03:14 PM
Cer, that drop shadow IS fucking sexy. Now you just need some good simples to put it to. haha.

LIZARD
03-20-2010, 03:48 PM
http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/299/photoon20100320at1644.jpg
new style...i couldnt figure out a way to do the r,crits?

kew1
03-20-2010, 05:57 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1503.jpg

pookienuts
03-20-2010, 06:14 PM
trying to make my calligraphy into something... still working it but feedback is welcome

says sear... and no im not going back to simples... lol

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0841.jpg

Fury
03-20-2010, 07:43 PM
Kew - I don't like the side extensions. Try some 3D.
Sear - I don't see the E?

Sesh-it-up
03-20-2010, 09:07 PM
pookie that shit is nuts but i think its a lil too nuts just tone it down a bit. i like the idea tho

LIZARD
03-20-2010, 10:47 PM
pookie-that shits intense, i dont even know what to say
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8296/photoon20100320at2331.jpg
better R?...crits?

mista_dza
03-21-2010, 12:40 AM
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00203.jpg

just wanna bump for some more crits...
sevr- i dont really like that little spike on the top of the S, the R looks ok somethign about it makes me '???' though
pookie- uhhhhh i can barely read that lol but im fucked up right now ;/
kew- that extension on the right makes it look like it says KEWL ha...just a thought keep it in mind maybe make that E just a little bigger too...and add some 3d for flare.

Jwhite
03-21-2010, 12:43 AM
Crits?

massacreman
03-21-2010, 05:22 AM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1503.jpg

KEW! Finally i like your work!
Good job on that one!

Inlyn08
03-21-2010, 09:18 AM
Crits?

Not sure exactly how I feel about these. I can say for sure the second one the O looks like a U with a beard. Lose that unnecessary arrow. The first P isn't too bad, just needs work. As a whole, they need work. But, they have potential.

Try and simplify it, lock down some solid letters.. then kick it with that other shit. Because all you're doing right now is adding too much chaos to it.

El Chupacabre
03-21-2010, 09:38 AM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1503.jpg

This shit is pretty good. Keep this up.

shem
03-21-2010, 10:00 AM
quick ass messy sketch.. the M is fucked..

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2799/4450190739_9382411b69.jpg

Jwhite
03-21-2010, 10:01 AM
Not sure exactly how I feel about these. I can say for sure the second one the O looks like a U with a beard. Lose that unnecessary arrow. The first P isn't too bad, just needs work. As a whole, they need work. But, they have potential.

Try and simplify it, lock down some solid letters.. then kick it with that other shit. Because all you're doing right now is adding too much chaos to it.

thanks, im redoing my handstyle atm so ill probably throw up a newer version of a simple or something.

-Empty-Can-
03-21-2010, 10:18 AM
Shem bring the bottom bar of the E down so it doesn't look like an S. Same with the S, bring that bar down.

markingz.
03-21-2010, 11:25 AM
quick ass messy sketch.. the M is fucked..

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2799/4450190739_9382411b69.jpg
shem is from florida guys

pookienuts
03-21-2010, 11:41 AM
thanks for the critique yall ill definitely try those approaches...

RedEyes
03-21-2010, 06:45 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo5-3.jpg

CrustOner
03-21-2010, 06:47 PM
When do you plan to add a little style, there, RedEyes?

RedEyes
03-21-2010, 06:59 PM
Its ment to be a straight letter. the color scheme will make it look dope though.

Rosie716
03-21-2010, 07:05 PM
red eyes, is that gonna be a tounge comin out of the o? and sabs gave carolina an ass beating!

kew1
03-21-2010, 07:09 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-21_1755.jpg

CrustOner
03-21-2010, 07:25 PM
Your structure is terrible. Either fix it or quit graffiti

LIZARD
03-21-2010, 07:36 PM
http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/859/photoon20100321at20332.jpg
whats a better way to make it more like a v but keep the bubble style....crits?

CrustOner
03-21-2010, 07:39 PM
Give it a pointed tip. You did it to your S.

suparjafar
03-21-2010, 10:12 PM
sevr if anything id drop that r

ive only been doing throws/tags, and i wanna get into painting straights. so instead of sketching it i tried a pen freestyle thing...

AlecR2K
03-21-2010, 10:23 PM
ES is hurting. RO is pretty solid.

BeaN
03-21-2010, 10:50 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb49/Ghostpunk/sketch-1.jpg

BLAH!! First attempt at this style and im not really fellin the E

Sesh-it-up
03-21-2010, 11:11 PM
^ i dont dig how far left the A is. but keep at it your close.
some old shit, might go back to this kinda style what u guys think??
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000055.jpg

mista_dza
03-22-2010, 12:09 AM
sesh-that bottom of that E needs fixing and is that supposed to be a J or an L?
sevr- im not feelin that little spike you got on that R, maybe put the spike how you would do the "e"

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00208.jpg
^i know that "illvester" looks horrid i did it quick i would like some crits on the delone.

and heres the practice page before i got to the picture above
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00207.jpg

LIZARD
03-22-2010, 12:22 AM
not really sure what u mean...is there a way u could show me?

the cannabis evangelist
03-22-2010, 12:42 AM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/November-20_1503.jpg

everything about this peice flows to thr right,
the legs on the k
the bars of the e and w
the extension on the w

so why try and force symetry with the k's extension.
it messes up the feel of the peice and it looks slopy compared to everything else

but imo you shoul change ur name kell drop the extension on the w
and it would look way dope as a simple throw

medacog1
03-22-2010, 02:15 AM
http://i40.tinypic.com/jpeoo2.jpg
not to clean..but i need some help with my P and R?
Crits


delone- that blue delone is a nice thing

massacreman
03-22-2010, 04:11 AM
and heres the practice page before i got to the picture above
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00207.jpg

that page looks oldschool. nice throw youve got there

sodi
03-22-2010, 05:42 AM
random simple, need some crits
http://i874.photobucket.com/albums/ab306/Sodi1/DSC02056.jpg

lord_plankton
03-22-2010, 05:51 AM
d is too small, i to me is dangerously close to a penis but thats just me, silverchrome background and outline ?? at least do second outline the the holes of the letters so you can see em better but overall sloppy and ugly fill

Meph*
03-22-2010, 11:58 AM
http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/boredinschool.jpg

bored in school..

Rosie716
03-22-2010, 12:17 PM
suparjarfar, i dont think your name is close enough to mine..

RES4
03-22-2010, 12:32 PM
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00207.jpg

blue on the right is fresh

adelg88
03-22-2010, 01:52 PM
some of the ransom words ive done.. just bored...

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/pbnisgod/IMG_2023-1.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/pbnisgod/IMG_2022-1.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/pbnisgod/IMG_2021-1.jpg

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/pbnisgod/IMG_2020-1.jpg

i no they are not great.. i was just bored

LeaksOne
03-22-2010, 02:56 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y72/pbnisgod/IMG_2022-1.jpg

damn you might as well not have an L in this one.....

Juicee
03-22-2010, 03:30 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/bbbb.png

scanner fucked up the colors REAL bad lol

Juicee
03-22-2010, 03:32 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/bbbb.png

scanner fucked up the colors REAL bad lol

mista_dza
03-22-2010, 03:48 PM
damn sober im reallly feelin that piece and charac dude keep up the good work...

CESP.one
03-22-2010, 03:58 PM
Decided to finally start my own little blackbook...
First page:
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll75/fullyflared322/img096.jpg
Been paying too much attention to throws taht look shietty anyways so i decided to try somenew stuff.

lord_plankton
03-22-2010, 04:19 PM
you shouldnt have done the overlapping s to maintain harmony n shit, plus open up the bottom..otherwise not bad you might wanna try n define 3d inside the letters would look much better

Rosie716
03-22-2010, 04:25 PM
CES= i like it, but yeah, the overlapping of the S needs to be fixed, and the bottom part of the C should be rounded, its kinda ridged.. but its not 3d plankton, its a shaddow..

Juicee
03-22-2010, 04:39 PM
CES= i like it, but yeah, the overlapping of the S needs to be fixed, and the bottom part of the C should be rounded, its kinda ridged.. but its not 3d plankton, its a shaddow..

mr expert with the graffiti nomenclature

AlecR2K
03-22-2010, 06:59 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/axcfpt.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/2lau78.jpg

pen sketch and marker bomb. i realize they are not perfect but im working on it. i developed this simple style today

Rosie716
03-22-2010, 07:44 PM
sink is a risky name, buffalo and atlanta both have big sinks.

shem
03-22-2010, 07:45 PM
quick pen sketch from work... got lazy on the M..

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4455255933_7cbfa5f9c1.jpg

AlecR2K
03-22-2010, 07:56 PM
sink is a risky name, buffalo and atlanta both have big sinks.

meh.. id change it if they were world wide known legends. .
anyways, i posted these for crits since its a brand new style.

..and that is looking fresh, shem

banan
03-22-2010, 08:12 PM
hello im new to this forum so yeah...
first 1 says "sire" second "sare" crits would be welcomed
http://i43.tinypic.com/33a6o9h.jpg

suparjafar
03-22-2010, 08:26 PM
http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0336.jpg

bored simp.

-Empty-Can-
03-22-2010, 08:30 PM
round out that S

LIZARD
03-22-2010, 08:38 PM
banan-connect the the bars on the S and E

AlecR2K
03-22-2010, 09:44 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/ouv88o.jpg

any real fuck ups or am i doing ok?
btw the black lines in the middle of the K and from setting my bars up.
also dont tell me to remove the cracks, im practicing them and i like them.

RedEyes
03-22-2010, 10:06 PM
Roes- you mean this sink?
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo4-1.jpg
dont bite Alec!

LIZARD
03-22-2010, 10:07 PM
alec-keep it up lookin good

LIZARD
03-22-2010, 10:09 PM
redeyes-u tell everyone to change there name and stop bitin why dont u google siko and see what comes up

RedEyes
03-22-2010, 10:13 PM
U know me so well! actually fag i was showing that to roes, and for my name like ive said a thousand times. its just a world i fks with at the momment not ganna go kill the city with SICO lol come on dude.

LIZARD
03-22-2010, 10:26 PM
just sayin tellin someone to change there name when the name your using is already takin doesnt make sense

Inlyn08
03-22-2010, 10:29 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/ouv88o.jpg

any real fuck ups or am i doing ok?
btw the black lines in the middle of the K and from setting my bars up.
also dont tell me to remove the cracks, im practicing them and i like them.
I won't tell you to remove the cracks, instead I will tell you that I'm not really feeling that K.
Just not feeling it.

suparjafar
03-22-2010, 10:30 PM
redeyes why are you showing me that, thats not my name...

RedEyes
03-22-2010, 10:34 PM
The only reason i would tell someone to change their name and in this case i didnt Rosie did, is because a writer already exist in a big way. your not ganna find a sico in MSK or NSF now are you.

My bad by Roes i ment Rosie

LIZARD
03-22-2010, 10:42 PM
just sayin, no need to get your panties in a bunch

AlecR2K
03-22-2010, 10:49 PM
dont call it biting. i came up with the name my self.. and look at our styles, i havnt taken anything from the other sink. i didnt even know he existed. besides im Canadian.

RedEyes
03-22-2010, 10:50 PM
Naw by that i ment dont bite his style from that post.

AlecR2K
03-22-2010, 10:53 PM
lol.. the name stays.

btw was the drawing a BS member or what

LIZARD
03-23-2010, 12:10 AM
http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/8338/photoon20100323at0107.jpg
trying out some simps...crits?

SicK-
03-23-2010, 12:16 AM
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/Graffiti/Dais-simp.jpg
Any crits?

mista_dza
03-23-2010, 12:16 AM
ok right now im so fried and i watched the movie "the wackness" it literally is shitty wackness its so fuckin hilarioussssssss yo hahhahahahaha but ive been sketchin all night and i came up with some letters i really liked and struggled with the "D" but went to my mom and she gave me some real inspiration (lol!) and so i got to this point....thoughts ?

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00210.jpg
but on the real, i think imma name this ish the wackness...lolllll this movie is so fuckin lolzy

lizard- i think you should fix the bottom of that 'e' so it matches the hole
sick- keep your bars the same width

SicK-
03-23-2010, 12:21 AM
ok right now im so fried and i watched the movie "the wackness" it literally is shitty wackness its so fuckin hilarioussssssss yo hahhahahahaha but ive been sketchin all night and i came up with some letters i really liked and struggled with the "D" but went to my mom and she gave me some real inspiration (lol!) and so i got to this point....thoughts ?

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00210.jpg
but on the real, i think imma name this ish the wackness...lolllll this movie is so fuckin lolzy

I am also struggling on My d, i really like you T, i think you L looks more like a backwards J but other than that i really like your stuff

LIZARD
03-23-2010, 12:24 AM
is that a t?i thought it was an e...sick change your d

RemoZ
03-23-2010, 12:25 AM
I really enjoy that E, that movie was actually pretty dope too.


"I stabbed my wifey in da pussy"

mista_dza
03-23-2010, 12:29 AM
nawww dat aint no T! its D-E-L! lol but ill define the E some how ,
funny shit dawg that movie is just full of terrible realtions to myself thats why its bad, if only i was a drug dealer and met method man my life could almost been complete, nothing as terrible to the movie though...

mista_dza
03-23-2010, 12:30 AM
my computer is retarded for double post.

shem
03-23-2010, 01:17 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/WishesforWiggles/bbbb.png

scanner fucked up the colors REAL bad lol

bump this. dope character.

and this for crits..
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4455255933_7cbfa5f9c1.jpg

syne7
03-23-2010, 02:03 AM
bump this. dope character.

and this for crits..
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4024/4455255933_7cbfa5f9c1.jpgIt's really good but I think the S is a bit skinny at the top and throws off the flow alittle bit, how long have you been writing?

shem
03-23-2010, 02:11 AM
little under a year

syne7
03-23-2010, 02:18 AM
you got talent for sure, keep with it.

Meph*
03-23-2010, 06:44 AM
http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/boredinschool.jpg


need some crits, help me put ;)

lord_plankton
03-23-2010, 09:17 AM
your carrie is way better than your graff, dont know where to begin, forget the arrrow forget the star , drips explosion n bubbles...just do straight simple letters, your m aint thaaat bad though, pay attention to bar width n stuff

kew1
03-23-2010, 01:59 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-23_1103.jpg

sinkilla1
03-23-2010, 03:22 PM
why do you bend your letters at random spots it makes it look bad learn to bend your letters in the right spots

kew1
03-23-2010, 03:24 PM
ik i always fuck up on the k

sinkilla1
03-23-2010, 03:31 PM
nout just the k look ill show you

massacreman
03-23-2010, 03:52 PM
(fu)kew: get more flow/structure in your letters

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2748/4457564665_b539dec793.jpg
just a quik one the k was supposed to be different but i did the outline wrong because i was tired

mista_dza
03-23-2010, 03:59 PM
massacreman-the U seems to me like its just a tiny bit to small and in my opinion you should try junk with a lowercase "n" see how that works out

and this is what i pretty much did all night
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00211.jpg

no like 3ds or shadows yet im still thinkin about what i want on each one, but that droplet on the yellow/blue one in the D, was from the otr markers i bought one just straight up leaked into the cap and i opened it and it just spilled out , i was pretty angry but i got over it lol....

banan
03-23-2010, 05:12 PM
hello im new to this forum so yeah...
first 1 says "sire" second "sare" crits would be welcomed
http://i43.tinypic.com/33a6o9h.jpg

bump for crits

FlippingChickens
03-23-2010, 05:32 PM
kew - fix that k

junk - name is taken already man

del - i like the 3rd one

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3183.jpg

jiveONE
03-23-2010, 05:56 PM
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/2840/scan002001.th.png (http://img340.imageshack.us/i/scan002001.png/)

http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9873/scan001001.th.png (http://img641.imageshack.us/i/scan001001.png/)

Flipping- that needs work and so does the 3d
banan-work more on simples
massacre- reminds me of some eurostyle...pretty good.
kew-just work on that k--- make the bars more straight instead of slanting them.

the first pic is a shit attempt at a new style but i'll post more simples like the 2nd one soon.

jiveONE
03-23-2010, 05:57 PM
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/2840/scan002001.th.png (http://img340.imageshack.us/i/scan002001.png/)

http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/9873/scan001001.th.png (http://img641.imageshack.us/i/scan001001.png/)

Flipping- that "T" needs work and so does the 3d
banan-work more on simples
massacre- reminds me of some eurostyle...pretty good.
kew-just work on that k--- make the bars more straight instead of slanting them.

the first pic is a shit attempt at a new style but i'll post more simples like the 2nd one soon.

LIZARD
03-23-2010, 06:00 PM
chicken-i like everything except the f,the extension on the top looks wrong. id say just take it of and use a simple f

chikkenbone
03-23-2010, 11:13 PM
tofe- i would drop that thing off the f and make the e just straight up (E)
good work though
banan- go simple dont do random arrows or stars maybe try drop shadow
crits please
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/cweas2simp.jpg

medacog1
03-23-2010, 11:22 PM
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/cweas2simp.jpg[/QUOTE]

what is that thing after the A? and is that an H or W after the C

chikkenbone
03-23-2010, 11:37 PM
az and cw

medacog1
03-23-2010, 11:53 PM
.o ok

http://i40.tinypic.com/20prdrn.jpg

Crits

Rosie716
03-24-2010, 01:01 AM
DEL- top one is ugly. Bottom one is a straight bite off of a graffiti font, but you forgot the star in the D. The othrs look decent

Sesh-it-up
03-24-2010, 01:08 AM
polar- I love ur shit, not tryin to hate but there is a polar alredy on the east coast of canada but keep it up mang ur shit looks fly.
cweaz- not feelin the W but its close.
jive- stick to bars u got a longg way, i dig ur handys tho they remind me of mine when i was younger :D
tofe- change that F fool. and the bar of the T.
sare- dont push the style, put in the work and it will come. ease off the wildness, go back to the basics for a bit.
del- stick to bars with jive for now.
junk- the N an K should flow like the J and U
fukew- the K and W look a lil offset.

ill have pics for u guys to ragg out in a day or two. keep up the sketchin!

medacog1
03-24-2010, 01:34 AM
polar- I love ur shit, not tryin to hate but there is a polar alredy on the east coast of canada but keep it up mang ur shit looks fly.


thank you... but i hate my P&R.. if anyone wants to help with that plz

viseversa101
03-24-2010, 01:36 AM
The v is racking my flippin knoggin
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10823.jpg

Sp!ff
03-24-2010, 02:43 AM
what up? i always just sketch shit an' never finish it. this is the first piece i've ever drawn in my new black book... i bit the majority of the letter style, but i wanted to play around with simple overlaps and shit just to see if i could do it... i know i made some f-ups, but crits are greatly welcome

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2780/4459560548_cd0ff3b48c_b.jpg

-Dank-DK-
03-24-2010, 03:51 AM
http://i44.tinypic.com/24q050n.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/10yfk7k.jpg

finale getting into pieceing
so crit

Patchy
03-24-2010, 04:14 AM
Sp!ff your shits hot man. Keep it up

Dank i like it but what's the deal with your highlights? they look like upside down "h" or 4's

-Dank-DK-
03-24-2010, 04:37 AM
ya i know lol i hate them

just pretend they r not there lol

shem
03-24-2010, 06:04 AM
dank the letters are wack try and keep your bars comsistent.

spiff that shits ugly go reallly simple for now.

LIZARD
03-24-2010, 10:22 AM
smaller pics=better crits

major"LEAG"
03-24-2010, 10:50 AM
DANK - That's a good start. The 3D on the "R" is missing.
SP!FF - You have the connecting bits going into, and coming out of, the next letter at odd angles. Since you say that that was a "BITE" off of some letter style, try something more simple, like SHEM said.

markingz.
03-24-2010, 11:03 AM
Shem is from florida

RES4
03-24-2010, 02:29 PM
crits? tried to do something different. looked better earlier on

http://i40.tinypic.com/2eb4lc0.jpg

kew1
03-24-2010, 08:35 PM
[URL=http://s616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/?action=view&current=March-24_1924.jpg]
should i finish?

kew1
03-24-2010, 08:38 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-24_1924.jpg (http://s616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/?action=view&current=March-24_1924.jpg)
should i finish?

RedEyes
03-24-2010, 09:11 PM
your should straighten your letters, lose the extensions and fix that W. Then finish it.

Inlyn08
03-24-2010, 10:29 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-24_1924.jpg (http://s616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/?action=view&current=March-24_1924.jpg)
should i finish?
The way the letters bend in places is just awkward. And don't lay out that W. Especially with that bar on it.
No, no nononooo.

mista_dza
03-24-2010, 11:02 PM
not finished yet, just working on the essentials for the night, anyway crits are nice , also that goes for what fill etc..
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00217.jpg

goodnight

Sesh-it-up
03-24-2010, 11:34 PM
personaly i like that fukew just keep atter it will be clean in no timee

kew1
03-25-2010, 09:57 AM
wat do u mean dont lay out the w? like take it out? and shesh thanks man

weakfingers
03-25-2010, 10:33 AM
The letters dont have to much flow. It kinda looks liek you drew seperate letters then put it all together. The F U E all have a simmiler bend but the K just ruins that repetition of flow. The the W is super wide and totally random. Whats up with that var ontop of it? You need to work on matching your letter style's and dont bend your letters so much..

pookienuts
03-25-2010, 10:56 AM
i kinda went over board its hard for me to tell when to stop and simplify...

sear

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3375.jpg

lord_plankton
03-25-2010, 01:51 PM
mmmhh id say look at the letters youve goin on there n give em a fat black outline without all that stuff extension crap..and all the "cuts"
..just the pure letters n see what you got n try to develop from there , make them sheer letters fit n flow

still way too un essential shit much goin on...and the essential shit aint lookin too good

pookienuts
03-25-2010, 02:44 PM
thanks... i tried to simplify a bit more

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3378-1.jpg

dave the pirate
03-25-2010, 02:55 PM
kinda reminds be of saber, cool shit yo im curious to see how it would look with 3-d or shadow..

RemoZ
03-25-2010, 03:24 PM
Well Sear if you could paint that it's be dope but anything other than an amazing fill would be whack

kew1
03-25-2010, 04:49 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-25_1045.jpg

Fury
03-25-2010, 04:59 PM
K and E are whack, dude

RES4
03-25-2010, 05:11 PM
3 people told you to change that w

Jwhite
03-25-2010, 05:31 PM
3 people told you to change that w

and the curve on his letters, lol.

Patchy
03-25-2010, 05:57 PM
Kew the color scheme is okay but i dont like the K.

Crits?
Edit: i know the L is horrible
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/001.jpg

medacog1
03-25-2010, 06:15 PM
.o ok

http://i40.tinypic.com/20prdrn.jpg

Crits

bimp? crit
/

AteskOne
03-25-2010, 08:37 PM
looks alright polar. loose the little kick off the bottom of the P. also looks like your letters get smaller as they go. work on making them all the same height. round out the inner circle of the A and work on that R.

patchy- i'd say go a lot simpler. i cant make out any letters after the L.

kewl- that fill needs a lot of work.

half of a piece for my next class project. designing a skateboard deck. will say pergatory when finished.
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6492/0325002123.jpg (http://img440.imageshack.us/i/0325002123.jpg/)

LIZARD
03-25-2010, 08:58 PM
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/4420/photoon20100325at21542.jpg
tried some new 3D...crits?

mista_dza
03-25-2010, 09:41 PM
somethin new

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00218.jpg

viseversa101
03-25-2010, 10:13 PM
atesk-lookin good, id like to see it when finished
del-from what ive seen in the past from u, this is definately an improvemnt.

RedEyes
03-25-2010, 10:16 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo14-2.jpg
messed it up with the maker i used but its w/e

LIZARD
03-25-2010, 10:27 PM
redeyes-i like that simple but i think that face in the O could be better

weakfingers
03-25-2010, 10:54 PM
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/4420/photoon20100325at21542.jpg
tried some new 3D...crits?

Looks weird with the V having no 3-d even though its still proper.
I dont know if your trolling but... if you dont know who sever is you should quit now.
http://www.graffiti.org/la/sever_los_angeles.jpg

flask1995
03-25-2010, 10:57 PM
oh snaaaaaaaaaaaaaap!

Sesh-it-up
03-25-2010, 11:46 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-25_1045.jpg

bump this shit, if any thing needs work its the K.
keep doin what you do!

sevr- dont like the 3d but the letters are mint. lol

LIZARD
03-26-2010, 12:02 AM
yeah i know who he is but for right now im just usin the name on paper not hittin the city.thats mainly why i dont use the 2nd e. iv done the straight letter before but i never brought the 3D all the way back to the vanishing point. the v does look weird but thats how its supposed to but ill probably do it again with better 3D next time

viseversa101
03-26-2010, 12:06 AM
if u didnt want the v to have any 3d ur vanishing point should go right 2 notbook rings(i guess)

AteskOne
03-26-2010, 12:21 AM
nah the 3d follows the VP pretty well. what you should have done is put the VP below the letters. that way the V would have a little more 3d behind it. also dont let your 3D go all the way back to the VP. cut it off somewhere inbetween the letters and the VP.

CrustOner
03-26-2010, 01:01 AM
bump this shit, if any thing needs work its the K.
keep doin what you do!

sevr- dont like the 3d but the letters are mint. lol

Wrong-O.

LIZARD
03-26-2010, 01:05 AM
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/9640/photoon20100326at0203.jpg
crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it

massacreman
03-26-2010, 05:42 AM
make your letters the same with, you are using bars, i can see but they are uneven take a look at the right R leg for example

CrustOner
03-26-2010, 09:26 AM
Stick to the same thickness as that S. Reminds me of OhSnap's older shit.

Jwhite
03-26-2010, 01:22 PM
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/9640/photoon20100326at0203.jpg
crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it

S looks kinda bulkier than everything else, im feelin the letters though
Go in single long strokes with your markers >.< looks better in fills.

Inlyn08
03-26-2010, 08:02 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-25_1045.jpg
I won't repeat what I said last time, but I will say this..
If you look at your W..
It looks like you are taking an L and a J.. or T and connecting them.
This is why I suggested not laying it out. If it wasn't for the fact I have seen what you have been posting.. I would not know what to make of that.

AteskOne
03-26-2010, 09:22 PM
rough draft for school project.
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2654/getattachmentpergatory.jpg (http://img444.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentpergatory.jpg/)
says pergatory

mawks
03-26-2010, 09:36 PM
sexy

NoCanControl
03-26-2010, 10:08 PM
someone told me to come here. so here i am.
http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs436.snc3/25096_1121909406618_1193550161_30522336_7202097_n. jpg

pookienuts
03-26-2010, 11:16 PM
rough draft for school project.
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2654/getattachmentpergatory.jpg (http://img444.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentpergatory.jpg/)
says pergatory

i think it looks clean man... but i think you used to many arrows to accentuate your letter structure... try substituting some of the arrows for something a little more original to your kinda taste...like a flourish or spiral etc... (experiment using an overlay of tracing paper) and possibly incorperate some line breaks and cracks in the letter itself

TheToy
03-27-2010, 12:49 AM
I don't understand why it keeps saying a moderator has to approve my posts...

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3229

Crust, bent like the bottom? Or slanted at the top? Sorry it took so long. I don't know why I can't post pictures. Ehh, probably cause I spammed my Troll picture.

AteskOne
03-27-2010, 02:16 AM
i think it looks clean man... but i think you used to many arrows to accentuate your letter structure... try substituting some of the arrows for something a little more original to your kinda taste...like a flourish or spiral etc... (experiment using an overlay of tracing paper) and possibly incorperate some line breaks and cracks in the letter itself
yeah i'm just trying to fill in the negative space. i havent really experimented much with extensions so it's hard for me to come up with new ideas for them. good idea with the tracing paper. i never thought of doing that. good looks man.

Sesh-it-up
03-27-2010, 02:17 AM
rewt-i like the top u should roll that some where.
kan- the top one is decent not diggin the other two

soath
03-27-2010, 02:23 AM
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/9640/photoon20100326at0203.jpg
crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it


i would bust out the same bar that is on the bottom half of the S over unto the R to make it all more simetrical. my .02

peace

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/sevr.jpg

soath
03-27-2010, 02:26 AM
I won't repeat what I said last time, but I will say this..
If you look at your W..
It looks like you are taking an L and a J.. or T and connecting them.
This is why I suggested not laying it out. If it wasn't for the fact I have seen what you have been posting.. I would not know what to make of that.

the K is wack too, looks like an M or a X, spread it out or just try again, peace.

Bets369R
03-27-2010, 02:41 AM
eww no. the S is the worst letter why would you wanna repeat it. please dont do that sevr.

soath
03-27-2010, 02:48 AM
eww no. the S is the worst letter why would you wanna repeat it. please dont do that sevr.


NO the R is the worst letter for sure, that's why I was looking at it. whatever, my .02 but I think simetry might help the word. the S is decent for sure. a bigger E might help too.

Sesh-it-up
03-27-2010, 03:46 AM
sevr that shit looks good make them all the same as the S and ur laughin.

FlippingChickens
03-27-2010, 10:49 AM
sevr- i hate the whole thing especially that r,fix the left side of the v and that s is too fat..I hate your name too,you do know there is already someone with the name sever,right?

atesk - your always pulling out some dope shit,love the whole thing just wish you kept the arrows to a minimum,more than 5 is already too much imo...but its dope and im looking foward to see what you will do with the 3d on that :]

kans - the first one is on point just fix that k and make the n less fat

rewt - dope,black letters white 3d and black forcefield,rock it on a wall!

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3185.jpg

^ a freestyle,messy as fuck and a lot of proportions are wrong,like the f and e have to go lower and im going to make a fatter t like the f and im going to whip up a new one soon cuz i kinda like how it came out despite all the flaws it has


http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3186.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3184.jpg

^ really hate how my t came out

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3189.jpg
^ another pen freestyle

LIZARD
03-27-2010, 11:42 AM
tofe-u gotta lose the swirly t and that akward extension on the f thats goin up on the 4th on.iv said this before so try to improve from the crits or people are ust gonna stop givin em....and YES I KNOW theres already a sever

pookienuts
03-27-2010, 01:13 PM
in progress...
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3389.jpg

tofe i think it would look better since your doing simples to make your letters of an equal width

Jwhite
03-27-2010, 01:20 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/1o29nr.jpg

Crits?

pookienuts
03-27-2010, 01:27 PM
try droppin that background tealish color so the letters are more visible ... you notice how that lip on the l over laps to much on the u taking away from it try forming your letters at different angles so when you out the next letter in the work it doesnt overlap to much and hide a major portion of the letter...

LIZARD
03-27-2010, 01:57 PM
jwhite-ur letters are slightly gettin bigger as u read it...when i do a style with the letters overlaping like that make a rectangle and make the letters fit inside on it and i have every letter touch the top and the bottom of it so u know there the same size

Jwhite
03-27-2010, 02:06 PM
jwhite-ur letters are slightly gettin bigger as u read it...when i do a style with the letters overlaping like that make a rectangle and make the letters fit inside on it and i have every letter touch the top and the bottom of it so u know there the same size

i completely missed that haha thanks

pookienuts
03-27-2010, 02:25 PM
im going to extend the s extension but otherwise the finished sketch...
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3390.jpg

RES4
03-27-2010, 02:52 PM
^ i think it going to look a lot better than the last one. i think you should try something different with the 3d this time though

http://i43.tinypic.com/15oa5vr.jpg

Sesh-it-up
03-27-2010, 04:25 PM
i like that shit^^ do a nuty fill with a crispy out line and a pink forcefeild to make it pop :D

sear get at me for an exhange, mine wont look anyhting close to that. but holla if ur down

umopepisdn
03-27-2010, 11:28 PM
Newest sketch,
Don't really have any pens left, traded them away when i bought my graphic tablet, so i had to use a black ballpoint pen:

http://i43.tinypic.com/vhrlow.jpg

Don't really like the result, i never seem to do, crits would be appriciated..

/Shae

pookienuts
03-27-2010, 11:32 PM
cool man... since you seem to be going simple try making the letters proportionate to each other same height, width etc... i like the idea of the background but try using a perspective for that as well so it will pop out at you ya know?

LIZARD
03-28-2010, 12:32 AM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5127/photoon20100328at01282.jpg
tryin new shit....crits?

mista_dza
03-28-2010, 12:40 AM
so getting a new name is never easy
ive been informed that theres a really good writer by the name of DEL so im putting that on the back burner
i bet someone has the name Say but ill use it to sketch til i get a confirmed name in the future. anyway
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00220.jpg

CrustOner
03-28-2010, 03:24 AM
I use longer names for practice. I get more letters down that way. I just can't rock a three letter name.

mista_dza
03-28-2010, 03:33 AM
ive tried alot of 3 letter combos...i cant just get the longer words to flow well, plus 3 is like my lucky numbre or something...i cant get down with 5 letter + words, and 4 just looks awkward sometimes

LeaksOne
03-28-2010, 04:42 AM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3185.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3186.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3184.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3189.jpg


everytime you post i feel like a broken record.

ONCE AGAIN NO BARS ARE EVEN
YOUR T IS HIDEOUS
THE FLAVOR/STYLE YOUR TRYING TO ADD TO YOUR LETTERS IS BEING EXECUTED TERRIBLY

the best one is the second one. work off that one.

btw i gagged looking at your tofe tag.

inb4 get off my dick.

just so you know i give harsh crits because clearly you dont listen to any crits. your shits been of the same quality since you joined the site. and before you throw a hissy fit and clog up the forum ill give you 2 options. just take my advice or battle me. either way is fine.

FlippingChickens
03-28-2010, 06:32 AM
alright man,so you want me to repeat the 2nd sketch until i got all the proportions right,and then what?And i wouldnt know if i would want to battle ,you never post flicks of ur shit.And i have goten better,and i dont give 3 shits if u think otherwise...and wtf i do listen to crits,if not i wouldnt even atempt straight letters and i fixed the f in my throw,remember?

mista - yea man i was going to tell u that del was taken already,im pretty sure hes a old school san fransisco writer...

sevr - make the right bar of the v the same as the left,all the other letters look better now

pookie - bro i like it,but on the real its mad hard to read

shae - make the h bigger


*** !!! BEFORE ANYONE CLAIMS THAT IM BITING ANYTHING ,I WILL ADMIT I BORROWED THE MOUSE AND THE NOTE AND THE RED THING FROM THE WRITER NOTE IN THE BLACKBOOK THREAD !!!

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3193.jpg


any suggestions on what color i should make the letters??

soath
03-28-2010, 08:57 AM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5127/photoon20100328at01282.jpg
tryin new shit....crits?

that R is better for sure. not like I mentioned but still good. the V seems thinner than everthing... I dunno. those letters are pretty tight/straight but not that unique, looking good tho. the cracks are tiny.. tight too.

Patchy
03-28-2010, 12:42 PM
Tofe- its a cool concept even if it is biten, but the O is pretty gross and doesnt fit at all with the other letters Work on it

sevr- i like the cracks and letters but not the back fill. your letters are definatley getting better though

cocacola
03-28-2010, 01:10 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4010/4470700168_907ddc20f7.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2798/4469943223_d4167c4d22.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2691/4468982362_0d2f7f72e3.jpg

RES4
03-28-2010, 03:17 PM
tofe- the o fucks it up and so does the way the e is away off to the side. dont like it

sevr- an awful lot better than the last one

give me some ideas for the fill
http://i39.tinypic.com/9iwmxz.jpg

Sesh-it-up
03-28-2010, 03:22 PM
tofe i like some of ur shit but some is jus wackk

RES4
03-28-2010, 03:24 PM
tofe- the o fucks it up and so does the way the e is away off to the side. dont like it

sevr- an awful lot better than the last one

give me some ideas for the fill
http://i39.tinypic.com/9iwmxz.jpg

bottom page bump

BlacktodaFuture
03-28-2010, 03:24 PM
sevr- i hate the whole thing especially that r,fix the left side of the v and that s is too fat..I hate your name too,you do know there is already someone with the name sever,right?

atesk - your always pulling out some dope shit,love the whole thing just wish you kept the arrows to a minimum,more than 5 is already too much imo...but its dope and im looking foward to see what you will do with the 3d on that :]

kans - the first one is on point just fix that k and make the n less fat

rewt - dope,black letters white 3d and black forcefield,rock it on a wall!

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3185.jpg

^ a freestyle,messy as fuck and a lot of proportions are wrong,like the f and e have to go lower and im going to make a fatter t like the f and im going to whip up a new one soon cuz i kinda like how it came out despite all the flaws it has


http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3186.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3184.jpg

^ really hate how my t came out

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3189.jpg
^ another pen freestyle



have you thought about doing it good?

LIZARD
03-28-2010, 04:41 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5127/photoon20100328at01282.jpg
tryin new shit....crits?
bump for crits
res-do a solid fill,dont try anything crazy cuz as of right now its a sick simple. just do a bright outline around everthing to make it pop

Jwhite
03-28-2010, 04:58 PM
bump for crits
res-do a solid fill,dont try anything crazy cuz as of right now its a sick simple. just do a bright outline around everthing to make it pop

Dirty, i like it.

LeaksOne
03-28-2010, 05:49 PM
alright man,so you want me to repeat the 2nd sketch until i got all the proportions right,and then what?And i wouldnt know if i would want to battle ,you never post flicks of ur shit.And i have goten better,and i dont give 3 shits if u think otherwise...and wtf i do listen to crits,if not i wouldnt even atempt straight letters and i fixed the f in my throw,remember?

after you repeat it and get your bars even then SLOWLY start bending the bars and establishing your own style. and either battle me or dont im not guna post flicks just so you can test the water. so make your mind up either blind battle or puss out. and you def havent shown any progress besides finally making your F in your throw more defined. if you didnt have so many posts id think you were new. and next time just post the straight instead of the rest. oh yeah and i also dont give a fuck that you dont give a fuck. im guna tell you my opinion everytime you post something until you start listening and showing progress.

FlippingChickens
03-28-2010, 06:37 PM
im guna tell you my opinion everytime you post something until you start listening and showing progress.


haha i appreciate it man,and na im not gonna battle u thats like sticking ur dick in a hole and not knowing whos sucking it

Inlyn08
03-28-2010, 06:49 PM
TOFE..
To be honest.. there's really no variation in what you've been posting. It really is looking the same. Start from scratch. Forget what you have been sketching and/or painting as your "Norm" and just do something completely different. Then do what you have been doing. Then take the two and compare. I'm not meaning to sound vague.. but when I say do something different. Do something completely different. Analyze some fonts, preferably ones you feel you are capable of replicating.
Because from what I have seen.. and I agree with Leaks there isn't much progress.

TheToy
03-28-2010, 06:57 PM
Leaks, you been on a two week long rag ride with Aunt Flo...

Post a flick.

FlippingChickens
03-28-2010, 08:46 PM
inlyn - i dont really bite letters man i just do whatever comes to my head...but i can give it a shot,were can i look at some fonts?

-Empty-Can-
03-28-2010, 08:48 PM
^MS Word?

FlippingChickens
03-28-2010, 09:34 PM
haha word,gonna bang out some shit with a cursive font...

Sesh-it-up
03-28-2010, 09:40 PM
works on ur tag too.. the 1 above that straight letter is gross

FlippingChickens
03-28-2010, 10:24 PM
not saying my tag doesnt need work,but it is solid..that one is just really really wack because i was shrooming mad hard

Paser1
03-28-2010, 10:37 PM
bump for crits
res-do a solid fill,dont try anything crazy cuz as of right now its a sick simple. just do a bright outline around everthing to make it pop

I like it dude gettin the bar shit down I see straight progress keep at it and come fuckin chill you hooker

Sesh-it-up
03-28-2010, 11:05 PM
not saying my tag doesnt need work,but it is solid..that one is just really really wack because i was shrooming mad hard

haha ok cool.

LeaksOne
03-28-2010, 11:21 PM
Leaks, you been on a two week long rag ride with Aunt Flo...

Post a flick.

maybe later.

and i havent really been posting alot. not in the toy forums anyways. i have a couple things ive been doing but too lazy to do all the shit to get it posted. but im in no rush so ill continue my "rag ride"

Daz801
03-29-2010, 11:27 AM
cocacola-im likin the top nd bottom ones, sweet character
tofe- likin the top one cept for the t
nm control- has the potetial ta go either way, the fill will make or break it in my opinion
sevr-clean nd sympol i like it


crits on this not fin yet need ideas for colour

http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s352/daz801/P280310_1648.jpg

One Evil
03-29-2010, 11:57 AM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2937/sdc11898l.jpg (http://img262.imageshack.us/i/sdc11898l.jpg/)'

messy and kinda not finished but posting anyways

im feeling this so far even if it ain't done yet.

anyways crits for these plz..
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/2781/dscf4526w.jpg (http://img121.imageshack.us/i/dscf4526w.jpg/)
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/5504/dscf4529.jpg (http://img192.imageshack.us/i/dscf4529.jpg/)
ugly i know ^

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3870/dscf4531n.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/i/dscf4531n.jpg/)

the R on this one i thinks a lil stupid but w.e
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/5025/dscf4527o.jpg (http://img214.imageshack.us/i/dscf4527o.jpg/)

Meph*
03-29-2010, 12:04 PM
http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/dirtparadise.jpg

need some comments. tell me if the theme is straight!!!

kew1
03-29-2010, 01:36 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-14_1636.jpg
just messing around really bent. its just a R and K

kew1
03-29-2010, 01:38 PM
meph- the p throws the whole thing off otherwise not too bad an i like the car too

RES4
03-29-2010, 01:40 PM
meph- like the concept but the car is a but off

kew - im not really sure if i like ot or not, r looks like a b and the k looks like a i and an e

http://i40.tinypic.com/f2snk1.jpg

Fube
03-29-2010, 01:53 PM
http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5127/photoon20100328at01282.jpg
tryin new shit....crits?

please tell me this dont stand for "Sever".

LIZARD
03-29-2010, 02:15 PM
i know i know....just a word to fuck with nothing city wise

shem
03-29-2010, 02:23 PM
quick sketch.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2693/4474309272_d757ba8b9d_o.jpg

viseversa101
03-29-2010, 02:51 PM
nice start