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BlacktodaFuture
03-29-2010, 03:45 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/Scan1.jpg?t=1269895423

my black was dying. you can't see the top of the boarder bc of my scanner :/

LIZARD
03-29-2010, 03:47 PM
i like the letters but that character is hurtin

BlacktodaFuture
03-29-2010, 03:51 PM
he is just a quick something to fill in the space.

RedEyes
03-29-2010, 04:27 PM
is your crew named Brute?

BlacktodaFuture
03-29-2010, 04:31 PM
no that's my boy. we go painting all the time. it was in his book.

viseversa101
03-29-2010, 04:55 PM
crits?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10856.jpg

Jwhite
03-29-2010, 05:02 PM
crits?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10856.jpg

No... just no..
sorry man

BlacktodaFuture
03-29-2010, 05:13 PM
try again. use bars this time. and dont add those random super skinny bars. and use letters like this VISE

Werse
03-29-2010, 05:19 PM
Only been writing for about 3months no artistic background. so crits?

http://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture004.jpg[/URL]http://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture001.jpghttp://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture003.jpghttp://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture005.jpghttp://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture007.jpghttp://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture008.jpghttp://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture009.jpg

Bump.
Anyone remember this.

gumOnShoe
03-29-2010, 05:31 PM
LOL, i remember that shitty toss on that Keg bellied bitch, yeah.
on another note,
help a ***** out, huh?
i know the hole in the Q is to small i fixed that earlier btw.
http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy253/lolapples/Photo14.jpg

CrustOner
03-29-2010, 05:39 PM
hahahaha I REMEMBER BOME!

Bets369R
03-29-2010, 05:44 PM
shes rockin the beer gut.

Jarret
03-29-2010, 06:19 PM
i like the letters but that character is hurtin


lol



Bump.
Anyone remember this.

man 3 months writing and thats his best! WOW...thats not very good. im sorry. and im in class , i was scrolling , i didnt want to see that gut , nor did anybody else in my class....EWW!

but i think the best one he did was on that girl with the gut though HA!

viseversa101
03-29-2010, 06:24 PM
try again. use bars this time. and dont add those random super skinny bars. and use letters like this VISE



u mean along these lines then ehh?(if so do u take and add in things now?)
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10864.jpg

One Evil
03-29-2010, 06:45 PM
crits for these plz..
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/2781/dscf4526w.jpg (http://img121.imageshack.us/i/dscf4526w.jpg/)
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/5504/dscf4529.jpg (http://img192.imageshack.us/i/dscf4529.jpg/)
ugly i know ^

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3870/dscf4531n.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/i/dscf4531n.jpg/)

the R on this one i thinks a lil stupid but w.e
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/5025/dscf4527o.jpg (http://img214.imageshack.us/i/dscf4527o.jpg/)

bumping for crits hopefully :D

Daz801
03-29-2010, 06:47 PM
cocacola-im likin the top nd bottom ones, sweet character
tofe- likin the top one cept for the t
nm control- has the potetial ta go either way, the fill will make or break it in my opinion
sevr-clean nd sympol i like it


crits on this not fin yet need ideas for colour

http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s352/daz801/P280310_1648.jpg
bottom page bump

LIZARD
03-29-2010, 07:25 PM
vise-dont add anything till e get those simples down..try new style with those letter though(overlap them or tilt every letter a different way)make all ur bars the same thickness and lose the bars that are at the ends of all those letters

one evil-same thing^

sice-lose that extension that bends up at the end of the bottom leg on the e

Shell703
03-29-2010, 08:05 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/DEBRIDWILDS.jpg

Slice- decide whether of not to over lap- the S overlaps the I and the I a little the C then absolutely no overlap on the E. Also the 3D is off in many places throughout the piece.

One Evil- straight letters for a while

Vice- thats an ok straight letter but the S bar is off- try doing that fast like 50 times.

Black- the top of the S and E are fresh but id work with the bottom of those letters a little bit.

skeetz
03-29-2010, 08:27 PM
i agree with shells crits

shell- youre going towards a style that can look mad dope when its painted, but its hard to tell what it would end up like if you did it just from that sketch. the one obvious thing i see wrong with it is the bottom of the S and how the dark area doesnt match up the outside outline. All i really gotta say is that youre dealing with a steez that has a very fine line between mad wack and mad fresh. I'd have to see more of em to make a final decision on which one yours is.

exchange for evow. ran out of black so i outlined the rest in red. ignore the straight letter at the bottom and the hadnstyles, Ive been on a long break and just wanna know if the piece in the middle is still up to par, ill fix the rest later.

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/Photoon2010-03-29at2005.jpg

skeetz
03-29-2010, 08:29 PM
woah double post, sry my comp is shit.

viseversa101
03-29-2010, 08:42 PM
vise-dont add anything till e get those simples down..try new style with those letter though(overlap them or tilt every letter a different way)make all ur bars the same thickness and lose the bars that are at the ends of all those letters
e


For this effect? where do i take it to now....crits
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10865.jpg

RedEyes
03-29-2010, 08:47 PM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo5-4.jpg
my piece for the production
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo14-2.jpg
just cuz the sabres won tonight!

Inlyn08
03-29-2010, 08:50 PM
inlyn - i dont really bite letters man i just do whatever comes to my head...but i can give it a shot,were can i look at some fonts?
I look at everything. Cereal boxes.. street signs. Websites ( Porn ) LOL. But, no I mean I try to analyze some of the shit I see. Google man, something will pop up. In reality.. everyone ends up biting in some small way or another. But if you're taking in a style.. and making it your own, you're not really biting. Like a recipe.. ya dig? Something to start with.. then throwing in your own spices, herbs.. etc.

Sorry if I was vague.

LIZARD
03-29-2010, 09:23 PM
siko-lose those arrows but it looks good cuz ur addin some style to it now
vise-keep the simple and do different color fills,outlines,3d,shadow bubbles...keep the lettters like that and add different colors for now

viseversa101
03-29-2010, 10:17 PM
vise-keep the simple and do different color fills,outlines,3d,shadow bubbles...keep the lettters like that and add different colors for now

Thanx for a crit



Vice- thats an ok straight letter but the S bar is off- try doing that fast like 50 times.

Didnt realize till i uploaded that i dont like how the s is tight at the top n loose on the bottom but more of what u suggest no?


http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10866.jpg

LIZARD
03-29-2010, 10:21 PM
redeyes-i just reliezed one uses a k and the otherone a c...which one u keepin?

BlacktodaFuture
03-29-2010, 10:29 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03545.jpg?t=1269919654

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03546.jpg?t=1269919679

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03544.jpg?t=1269919629

RedEyes
03-29-2010, 10:34 PM
redeyes-i just reliezed one uses a k and the otherone a c...which one u keepin?

Its what ever i feel like, i write SIKO SICO SIKOH it dont matter.

Sesh-it-up
03-29-2010, 10:41 PM
safe- not digin the character at alll i like the piece tho

hpir
03-29-2010, 11:28 PM
siko-loose the arrows throw a drop down shadow on it and itl be straight
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/003.jpg
crits?

Sesh-it-up
03-29-2010, 11:31 PM
i some what dig the throw, work on the botton left bar of the K and try to keep each letter one line.

smokeitup
03-30-2010, 12:11 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch9.jpg

viseversa101
03-30-2010, 12:18 AM
i take it u was high?

smokeitup
03-30-2010, 12:20 AM
maybe, what do u think of it?

viseversa101
03-30-2010, 12:30 AM
smokeitup-in sum places the outline needs to be fatter, all in all gg tho im just not feeling the tags, i think if uda left it lone...flipped a page...n tagged ur heart out(like i do after a few drawings) ita saved itself. oh n the 3d on the 2nd letter is flat out missing





vise-keep the simple and do different color fills,outlines,3d,shadow bubbles...keep the letters like that and add different colors for now


not really liking what i did but i think il keep the 1/2 fill skeem goin
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10867.jpg



Prolly my fave idea, 3d it into slime on the bottom ina fresh green
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10868.jpg


go with a pink/purple fill leave the s alone n just blend, fatten some lines n give the letters a shadow...
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10869.jpg


just gona 3d it to a vanishing point in black/silver n call it a day
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10870.jpg




Crits

smokeitup
03-30-2010, 12:43 AM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch3.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch4.jpg

Meph*
03-30-2010, 09:22 AM
the first one looks sick as fuck..the only thiong i dont like is the the swigly shit you put next to the first M

RedEyes
03-30-2010, 10:27 AM
Took the arrows out and threw on a drop, any last suggestions before i add color?
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo1-3.jpg

RES4
03-30-2010, 11:07 AM
meph- like the concept but the car is a but off

kew - im not really sure if i like ot or not, r looks like a b and the k looks like a i and an e

http://i40.tinypic.com/f2snk1.jpg

what colour should i fill the letters

smoke it up - the red monkey is the best imo

AteskOne
03-30-2010, 12:41 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch3.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch4.jpg
i can dig. the only thing i would say is some of the letters seem to get a bit skinnier than others. ex: the bottom of the Z and pretty much the whole E on the top piece. the 3d's need work too. they're going in too many directions and are all different depths. those simples above the word are dope tho.

some slaps. shitty cellphone pic...
http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/4372/getattachmentslapps.jpg (http://img716.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentslapps.jpg/)

One Evil
03-30-2010, 01:12 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03545.jpg?t=1269919654

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03546.jpg?t=1269919679

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03544.jpg?t=1269919629


looks dope.. just SAFE is taken check him out on flickr

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss145/carlosdelgado/DSCF4468.jpg

massacreman
03-30-2010, 01:19 PM
almost everything is taken... as long as its not a real "legend" i dont really mind anymore... just saying

Amends_Ego
03-30-2010, 01:22 PM
Im lovin the slaps Dimes, what'd you use to make em?

massacreman
03-30-2010, 01:24 PM
a sticker and some markers i think

Patchy
03-30-2010, 01:36 PM
good page
Sico i love your S

Jwhite
03-30-2010, 01:38 PM
[QUOTE=One Evil;1591012]looks dope.. just SAFE is taken check him out on flickr

it only matters if theyre king status or not..

Patchy
03-30-2010, 01:51 PM
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0704.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0707.jpg

AteskOne
03-30-2010, 03:15 PM
a sticker and some markers i think
ha how'd you guess? yeah amends i'm just using some usps stickers (228's) and some deco paint markers. the labels are pretty small so for those i stuck 2 of them together.

LeaksOne
03-30-2010, 03:56 PM
http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60086.jpg

ive under gone another name change so to you guys im leaks again. probably not guna outline this so whatev.

hpir
03-30-2010, 05:41 PM
siko-loose the arrows throw a drop down shadow on it and itl be straight
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/003.jpg
crits?
leaks-bring in the right leg of the k more and the s is just kinda bland
Bump

One Evil
03-30-2010, 06:00 PM
almost everything is taken... as long as its not a real "legend" i dont really mind anymore... just saying

Safe Rc is pretty tight though. thats all im sayin.
http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/3715/im001359.jpg (http://img714.imageshack.us/i/im001359.jpg/)
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/5552/im001314v.jpg (http://img25.imageshack.us/i/im001314v.jpg/)
http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/1416/im001441.jpg (http://img202.imageshack.us/i/im001441.jpg/)
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2976/im001342.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/i/im001342.jpg/)
non stolen

but.. to the safe on here.. do ur thing man im just sayin and showing some safe shit :D

FlippingChickens
03-30-2010, 06:27 PM
Safe you should change your name its disrespect man you toys have it all wrong saying it only matters if the person is a king,im sure you wouldnt want some jit writing ur name after yo been putting in work for a long period of time,just aint cool man..do ur research kids

sico - that s looks good,everything else is normal,i sujest working on that c,dont like that bar sitcking out to the left

monkey - the red one looks straight but id like to see it without a peice on the bottom its kinda distracting,and fix that e and its solid

resik - color the shadow in black and leave the letters white it looks fine

dimes - those slaps are sexy,i wish i knew how to use scissors that well lol

patchy - not working bro

leaks - i really hope that isnt ur k or s for ur throwy because it looks like ass ,the top is straight but u should outline and put a shadow man

kan - on the left the k needs work and the other one dont connec the k with the a

BlacktodaFuture
03-30-2010, 06:57 PM
im not changing my name. i live in vermont and im sure there are other safe's in the world just like there are many other dimes, leaks, alts, duke or whatever. and i dont think of it as disrespect at all. AND i have done my research but it isn't like i am able to find every Safe ever. I picked the name bc it fit me. end.

AteskOne
03-30-2010, 07:52 PM
dimes - those slaps are sexy,i wish i knew how to use scissors that well lol

x-acto blades.

LeaksOne
03-30-2010, 09:19 PM
leaks - i really hope that isnt ur k or s for ur throwy because it looks like ass ,the top is straight but u should outline and put a shadow man


thats cute your trying to be harsh on me haha. does that even look like a throw to you? and im not outlining it.

i noticed the s was boring and the k could use work but these are just rough sketches nothing serious. i dont even write leaks. thanks though fellas.



Safe you should change your name its disrespect man you toys have it all wrong saying it only matters if the person is a king,im sure you wouldnt want some jit writing ur name after yo been putting in work for a long period of time,just aint cool man..do ur research kids

and really? your talking like your some big writer haha. how bout you research some bars and get your shit even.

Inlyn08
03-30-2010, 10:20 PM
If I found out someone "Local" was writing my shit, and they were horrible.. I'd more then likely change MY name. Because frankly speaking..
If they're writing like shit, people will more then likely remember shit. I'm not having some other person's garbage being mixed in with mine. And like it was said.. Unless YOU'RE a king then who fucking cares. People will remember fire, and they will remember shit. So, if it comes down to me switching my shit whatever. If I'm the better writer, then it won't be a thing. So, I'll just do what I'm doing.. and if I ever meet someone who writes the same shit as me ( Face to face of course ) then we'll battle. Otherwise, it doesn't matter to me. I'll get up, and worry about the "Politics" later.

Ya dig?

smokeitup
03-30-2010, 10:54 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch10.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch62.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch7.jpg

crits?

RemoZ
03-30-2010, 11:09 PM
I don't know how everyone scene is but you guys should be lucky that you just need to have a different name. Here the scene is so small. Maybe like 6 - 10 of us who get up and about 25 including the chill spot kids that we don't even like people to have a close name such as FAKE and JAKE or NORE and WORE. So drop that complaining shit it isn't as bad as here...

LIZARD
03-30-2010, 11:09 PM
http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/1285/photoon20100331at0007.jpg
just screwin around with letters and i came up with this...crits?

flask1995
03-30-2010, 11:15 PM
eh, it's okay, the thing on the S, the part sticking out, I think that should be removed. but try working with lower and upper case letter's. most of them come out good.

Inlyn08
03-30-2010, 11:16 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch7.jpg

crits?
O looks like a U, the Z and N and bottom part of the E are too thin, and that random wide fat O doesn't really fit with the rest of it.
I like the middle one the best, personally.

AteskOne
03-30-2010, 11:41 PM
If I found out someone "Local" was writing my shit, and they were horrible.. I'd more then likely change MY name. Because frankly speaking..
If they're writing like shit, people will more then likely remember shit. I'm not having some other person's garbage being mixed in with mine. And like it was said.. Unless YOU'RE a king then who fucking cares. People will remember fire, and they will remember shit. So, if it comes down to me switching my shit whatever. If I'm the better writer, then it won't be a thing. So, I'll just do what I'm doing.. and if I ever meet someone who writes the same shit as me ( Face to face of course ) then we'll battle. Otherwise, it doesn't matter to me. I'll get up, and worry about the "Politics" later.

Ya dig?
change your name? nah that's when you beat some ass. if a kid's rocking your name make sure you cross it the fuck out everywhere you see it and let heads know whats good with imposters.

mista_dza
03-30-2010, 11:50 PM
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00227.jpg


wrote saw onto a canvas that was pretty old and i sprayed over a while ago (you might be able to see through some of the yellow to see the original letters aha)

RedEyes
03-31-2010, 12:28 AM
The angle throws it off. ill take another one tomorrow.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo5-5.jpg

resker1
03-31-2010, 01:31 AM
ok soo recently changed my name from snug to resker
crits?

smokeitup
03-31-2010, 01:34 AM
dont like it resker, poor letter structure and no flow...

keep trying, and learn how to tag too.

resker1
03-31-2010, 01:38 AM
haha a little constructive criticism?
like do this or that? lololol

resker1
03-31-2010, 01:39 AM
haha a little constructive criticism?
like do this or that? lololol

LeaksOne
03-31-2010, 01:39 AM
draw it EXACTLY like this

RESK/ER

resker1
03-31-2010, 01:43 AM
heres a snug throw/piece i did on a wall

<a href="http://s935.photobucket.com/albums/ad196/snug760/?action=view&current=snug1.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i935.photobucket.com/albums/ad196/snug760/snug1.jpg" border="0" alt="apk,snug,nas"></a>

resker1
03-31-2010, 01:44 AM
oooooops
i guess im too noob at this to post :O

resker1
03-31-2010, 01:47 AM
ok soooo heres an old snug throw/piece i did on a wall
sorry i fucked up before

LeaksOne
03-31-2010, 01:56 AM
oook? :confused:


draw it EXACTLY like this

RESK/ER

same goes for snug. EXACTLY like this

SNUG

FlippingChickens
03-31-2010, 08:32 AM
change your name? nah that's when you beat some ass. if a kid's rocking your name make sure you cross it the fuck out everywhere you see it and let heads know whats good with imposters.

word

and leak im not trying to be harsh,yeah it does look like a throwup its bubbly and shit

Jwhite
03-31-2010, 10:43 AM
ok soooo heres an old snug throw/piece i did on a wall
sorry i fucked up before

Bars. Bars. Bars. Bars.

RedEyes
03-31-2010, 11:03 AM
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo5-5.jpg
bottom page bump.

LIZARD
03-31-2010, 11:22 AM
redeys-throw some shadow on those arrows to match

RedEyes
03-31-2010, 11:59 AM
yeah i caught that when i posted it. Anyone down for a piece/simple exchange?

Jwhite
03-31-2010, 12:03 PM
go to the exchange thread

Flawless Victory
03-31-2010, 12:27 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2n8tr1y.jpg


for da lulz.

B E A R
03-31-2010, 02:13 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2n8tr1y.jpg


for da lulz.

yeh... the uh... the colour scheme is...

huh?

Fury
03-31-2010, 02:29 PM
Dude is that a chick?

Flawless Victory
03-31-2010, 03:17 PM
That's a chick, dude.

zennegen
03-31-2010, 04:24 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2n8tr1y.jpg





AAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

dope.

pookienuts
03-31-2010, 05:00 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3397.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3395.jpg

CrustOner
03-31-2010, 06:12 PM
Getting there, Sear. That bottom one's S is dope.

zennegen
03-31-2010, 06:19 PM
i suspect bites. that, or a serious influence from saber and pose.

pookienuts
03-31-2010, 06:28 PM
oooooorrrrrrrrrrrrr... something similar to a calligraphy handstyle i do...

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0827.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0807.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0831-1.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0814.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0779.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0773.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0796.jpg

possibly...

M3KA1!
03-31-2010, 06:44 PM
id hit it. some straight SCRIBE

markingz.
03-31-2010, 08:42 PM
that women looks like a man straight up yall got low standards

Flawless Victory
03-31-2010, 08:45 PM
That women?
I only see one woman, straight up.

zennegen
03-31-2010, 08:47 PM
what a fucking clown.

markingz.
03-31-2010, 08:47 PM
shes a women but shes distusting

markingz.
03-31-2010, 08:52 PM
i PREFER no pun intended a much more refind female

Flawless Victory
03-31-2010, 09:02 PM
I don't think you understand.....
you are saying womEn, and that is incorrect.
The correct word is womAn.
Also, it's refinEd.

markingz.
03-31-2010, 09:09 PM
you get my point, more feminine and less manly, she can still be a badass but she neeeds to be more feminine not like a man in disguise you know

mista_dza
03-31-2010, 09:31 PM
Sear- honestly im not to fond of the extension goin across the bottom of the R almost makes is seem like a B , but thats just me i dunno
anyway
something i did the otehr night picture is dark my bad :(
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00227.jpg

AnteUp
03-31-2010, 10:08 PM
Dza- a bit generic, but you're keeping it simple. thatll pay off later.
if you stand back and look, the A is too fat for the piece, and the w is lacking major. The s is the generic part, but its most on point. Don't be afraid of round edges.

First pen freestyle, first piece, (whatever you wanna call it.) in months.
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/wtfawk/IMG00608-20100331-2152.jpg
The T is lacking major, I know. Says BENT LIFE.
Crits are majorly appreciated.

-Dank-DK-
03-31-2010, 10:30 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/dvlhrq.jpg

Flawless Victory
03-31-2010, 10:45 PM
I think the bend in the leg of the R is too much.

AnteUp
03-31-2010, 10:52 PM
Its a B, fine sir.

Flawless Victory
03-31-2010, 11:09 PM
Oh, not, not you dude.
Haha, I meant that shit Dank posted.
I don't really like the things on the top left of your Es, though.
I think that your Es would actually look a lot better without them

-Dank-DK-
03-31-2010, 11:13 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2gyd942.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/15ewopy.jpg

not dont but what u think
and your b looks like a r hommie

AnteUp
03-31-2010, 11:16 PM
Haha. Yea, I realized after I posted it. Thanks for the crits though.

Inlyn08
03-31-2010, 11:17 PM
http://i44.tinypic.com/2gyd942.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/15ewopy.jpg

not dont but what u think
and your b looks like a r hommie

That K...

viseversa101
03-31-2010, 11:22 PM
backbone to tall..k

Flawless Victory
03-31-2010, 11:24 PM
That K is the only good letter on the whole canvas, haha.

For real though, I'm not digging any of the other letters, They are too disproportionate.

Sesh-it-up
04-01-2010, 12:38 AM
I like the S the best lol

-Dank-DK-
04-01-2010, 12:47 AM
now all i need is 4 more people to like the a the r and two people to like each c and i can fuse thoses 6 people together to make one person that likes it

im fuckin so happy rainbows are flyin out my ass

Flawless Victory
04-01-2010, 12:57 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/244qs0k.jpg

MOAR LULZ

flask1995
04-01-2010, 06:54 AM
http://i44.tinypic.com/14c8whe.jpg

crits?

massacreman
04-01-2010, 07:29 AM
give crits to get them
all i say is
USE BARS
CHANGE COLOUR SCHEME
TIDY IT UP
HIGHLIGHTS OR INLINE MIGHT SAVE THIS PIECE

RES4
04-01-2010, 12:41 PM
trying to do something with the letters

http://i40.tinypic.com/w81821.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/2rppg1s.jpg

flask- i like the overall piece but not the letters. s is the best

gumOnShoe
04-01-2010, 02:21 PM
Wtf did you do to those bars?
take off all those sharp warts on those letters and you'll be fine (The bottom one).
the top on is gey, mainly because of those random bar extensions (idk if i'd even classify those as extensions)...

RES4
04-01-2010, 02:36 PM
ignore them lol, i didnt realise how bad they are im workin on something now and il post it later

gumOnShoe
04-01-2010, 02:46 PM
try taking a peek in the picture gallery (Big Boy threaads) and see how they mess with extensions n' shit. however, i'd only suggest messing with those extensions until you can make a CLEAN simp.
cause trust me, Bad structure+extensions= Eyes Vomiting.

RES4
04-01-2010, 02:55 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/mwr13m.jpg

hows this

gumOnShoe
04-01-2010, 03:01 PM
bad, make your bars even, if you're using them.......
3D is weird too.
look for a 3D tutorial thread on here, i think it's in the the Tool's n' tips forum. shit helped me with my 3D.

Meph*
04-01-2010, 04:54 PM
http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/peace.jpg

improving?..let me know ;)

shem
04-01-2010, 05:56 PM
start... worth finishing?

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2695/4482241073_c838573231.jpg

Meph*
04-01-2010, 06:01 PM
yeh looks pretty sick

flask1995
04-01-2010, 08:02 PM
?, I have been giving crits, you just dont see my picture because i haven't done them. I have gave like atleast 5 crits to other people without me putting a piece up

BlacktodaFuture
04-01-2010, 09:02 PM
i say you finish it. it's weird and different but lets see what you can do w. it.

smokeitup
04-01-2010, 11:17 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/bored.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/P0227_123451.jpg

Sesh-it-up
04-01-2010, 11:19 PM
GAY AS MY 9TH GRADE ENGLISH TEACHER, he was full on fag too by the way.

smokeitup
04-01-2010, 11:21 PM
i like it.

Sesh-it-up
04-01-2010, 11:22 PM
my english teacher? wow u are fucked

smokeitup
04-01-2010, 11:27 PM
yeah your english teacher, haha naw the sketches.

not really the first one but i reckon the 2nd one is decent.

Capo Izi
04-01-2010, 11:31 PM
shem & smokeitup- illlll.

8568

8569

8570


Crits? The last one is for some chick.

viseversa101
04-01-2010, 11:37 PM
top is dope i like it alot, middle is too skinny n just...idk n i duno becca but hope she gives u skins or atleast sumthin for that thing, ur throwies r okay too

shem & smokeitup- illlll.

8568

8569

8570


Crits? The last one is for some chick.

Freaker
04-01-2010, 11:44 PM
Here's something....

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/8712/picture6na.jpg

smokeitup
04-01-2010, 11:53 PM
http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000805.jpg

oldddd.

TheSebWay
04-02-2010, 12:38 AM
For my girldriend
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4013/4482272130_423a522a74_o.jpg
Baser[my tag]
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2770/4481252748_f5bfa5c65e_o.jpg
Exchange to Vors(Israelian Writer)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2749/4458691085_fe77ed2764_o.jpg


What U think about it???

smokeitup
04-02-2010, 01:35 AM
i like the baser and the vors but not the 'moriel' or whatever it is. and on that page where u got the baser, u need to fix them tags.

TheSebWay
04-02-2010, 01:53 AM
New thing trying something diffrent now what u think about it
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4041/4483035955_2e9d3c3433_o.jpg

LeaksOne
04-02-2010, 01:56 AM
too confusing.

RES4
04-02-2010, 08:20 AM
give crits to get them.

anyway baser, second is the best, dont like the first one

http://i42.tinypic.com/uymo5.jpg
not finished yet

Jwhite
04-02-2010, 08:22 AM
give crits to get them.

anyway baser, second is the best, dont like the first one

http://i42.tinypic.com/uymo5.jpg
not finished yet

resik i like it but i cant get over the fact it just looks like the same thing being posted over and over again

RES4
04-02-2010, 09:29 AM
it is, i just dont know how to develop it without it looking like shit

LIZARD
04-02-2010, 10:09 AM
res-make ur letters a little more boxy, i dont like the random curves in some letters(the e and the s mainly)
im trying to think of a new name and i came up with hont and im just wondering if it would read haunt...i spelled it that way it sounds,do u think thats right?

Meph*
04-02-2010, 10:21 AM
http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/peace.jpg

Karma
04-02-2010, 10:27 AM
some abstract http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/7357/image31z.jpg

AnteUp
04-02-2010, 12:11 PM
Karma-that abstracts a bit too simple for my taste.
Meph-those are way too boxy bro. You're trying to hard to invent new ways of making letters.
Resk-looks more like a throw to me, but those are pretty solid simples, but you have 2 different styles there, the R and K match, and the E and S match. But the sets don't match eachother. You know?
Sebway-that too one is hurtin bad. The 2nd and 3rd are a good use of bars, but it looks like something off of a graffiti creator site. Experiment with thickness of bars. your handy is hurting bad too, you're trying too hard. Just let it flow.

Crits please? Ignore the S on batteries...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/wtfawk/IMG00613-20100402-1150.jpg

Sesh-it-up
04-02-2010, 01:30 PM
thats dope i like that style^ just try and clean it up a bit
karma i dont like it but only cuz i dont get it haha
meph i dont like the piece at all but it looks like u got some coloring skills
resik the E and S dont real match its close tho.
baser i like that new style ur working on but i think u should master the old one first.

Karma
04-02-2010, 01:42 PM
P- heart O- lung P- brain E- eye

POPE lol

Sesh-it-up
04-02-2010, 01:43 PM
ohhhh now i see it, i like the idea keep workin on it.

viseversa101
04-02-2010, 01:44 PM
P- heart O- lung P- brain E- eye

POPE lol


http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10873.jpg

Karma
04-02-2010, 01:49 PM
ohhhh now i see it, i like the idea keep workin on it.

Nah I was just bored and had a pen around. Probably file that away.

RES4
04-02-2010, 01:50 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10873.jpg

lol^

Karma
04-02-2010, 01:52 PM
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10873.jpg


http://teoten.files.wordpress.com/2009/05/dont_feed_the_trolls.jpg

LeaksOne
04-02-2010, 02:04 PM
troll or not that handy, the wack wack, is indeed that. looks like a big ego with no skills to back anything up....

RES4
04-02-2010, 02:12 PM
troll or not that handy, the wack wack, is indeed that. looks like a big ego with no skills to back anything up....

http://www.thefreedictionary.com/joke

LeaksOne
04-02-2010, 02:19 PM
what exactly is the point of that link?

RES4
04-02-2010, 02:33 PM
because its a joke. it doesnt matter about his handstyle it was funny

LeaksOne
04-02-2010, 02:38 PM
yeah but what i was getting at is hes no better then what hes calling whack, therefore has no room to call out others when what he producing is garbo. and it would have been funnier if it actually was whack.

funhouseXcast
04-02-2010, 02:48 PM
Crits please? Ignore the S on batteries...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/wtfawk/IMG00613-20100402-1150.jpg

Are you a bandwagon cage fan who started listening when DFM came out? If you are you should kill yourself.
If you're not then that's great!
either way i like the sketch

pookienuts
04-02-2010, 08:18 PM
lol... dope sig by the way...

heres another in progress i think its coming out a little better

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3399.jpg

Capo Izi
04-02-2010, 08:52 PM
8578

8579

8580

8581

8582

Sesh-it-up
04-02-2010, 10:39 PM
sear thats looking ballin
stick to straight bars homie^
speaking of straight bars haha thinking of doing a roller tomrow if the weather clears up, ignore the out line.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e155/dc12/IMG000226.jpg
any color combo tips?? and feel free to crittt

smokeitup
04-02-2010, 10:59 PM
8578

8579

8580

8581

8582

the first one is the 'best' i guess. the others are all ehhhhh.

LeaksOne
04-02-2010, 11:05 PM
capo what are the bottom 3 letters? c e/z m?

AnteUp
04-03-2010, 12:53 AM
fun house-im offended, I've been a cage fan. :/

Capo Izi
04-03-2010, 11:17 AM
capo what are the bottom 3 letters? c e/z m?

SZM, stands for skizm.

LeaksOne
04-03-2010, 01:59 PM
you gota revise the entire thing. define your letters better. and if your guna have a thick S and Z thicken your M too

testing.
04-03-2010, 03:42 PM
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q223/dark_cow1/Graf/DONEresize.jpg

Crits?

lord_plankton
04-03-2010, 03:57 PM
d isnt too bad, o..why not...n wouldnt do the shaky outline..e...terribly messed up.. overall need lots of work just let your hands go over n over again

mawks
04-03-2010, 04:27 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image017-1.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image036-1.jpg
kinda ran outta space

Karma
04-03-2010, 05:28 PM
http://blog.honeyee.com/kaws/archives/images/KAWS%20captain%20morgan%201995.jpg

Your A W K resemble that of Kaws, but everyone's A W K 's remind me of his cause he's one of my favorite writers.

I think the M and the A and the K could use some work, but I like the style. I wouldn't drop a bomb straight white and blue outline around these parts either.

Hit me up.

STooF
04-03-2010, 06:53 PM
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/6002/downloadnd.jpg

How can I improve?

LIZARD
04-03-2010, 06:56 PM
lose the little bumps on the B and make the E more bubbly to flow with the rest..throw a shadow on that bitch to
and watch out on that handstyle cuz it looks like BOPLE...make the R moe defined

Inlyn08
04-03-2010, 07:20 PM
lose the little bumps on the B and make the E more bubbly to flow with the rest..throw a shadow on that bitch to
and watch out on that handstyle cuz it looks like BOPLE...make the R moe defined

Well said.

ManikOner
04-03-2010, 08:27 PM
done - it looks pretty good but i would work on the e. the n squiggly could be a bit easier too

heres one i did a few days ago, tell me what you guys think

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5328/maniky.jpg

lord_plankton
04-03-2010, 08:47 PM
solid, you could try to lower the m or rise the k, upper leg k too slim , k overall not really suit. same goes for i ,but than again i overall like it..a lil work and itll turn out dope straight simple

AMERO
04-03-2010, 09:04 PM
first one ive uploaded, need some feedback. thanks.

ManikOner
04-03-2010, 09:41 PM
AMERO - i would lose the characters and all the fancy stuff and just work on letters. start out with simples and just gradually try new things. start it easy man, or else youll over do it

AMERO
04-03-2010, 09:55 PM
thanks, i will keep that in mind. thanks for the constructive criticism.

medacog1
04-04-2010, 06:14 AM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/5328/maniky.jpg

im feeling this... the M is weirding me out

http://i41.tinypic.com/ndlb10.jpg

http://i39.tinypic.com/2rcsvn9.jpg

crits

Daz801
04-04-2010, 07:23 AM
polar im feeling the second one except the "r" try doing it as a higher case "R"

CrustOner
04-04-2010, 09:53 AM
^^^ lol'd at "higher case"

no, but Polar, you're adding extensions and extra bars to the wrong places of your letters. That P bar is totally unnecessary and does nothing for the letter, not to mention being the only extension of it's kind. to be totally honest, the only good letter I see is the O.

ManikOner
04-04-2010, 02:02 PM
Polar - im likin the throw, not feelin either of your R's though. shorten your r on the piece. i like the o-l connection.
im with Crust on your P extension but i like your o l and a.

i got a 'krust' piece i did yesterday. ill post it

just got prismacolors today, first time tryin em out. tell me what you think.

http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/3656/manikprisma.jpg

edit:
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/1351/dsc00192cn.jpg

viseversa101
04-04-2010, 02:14 PM
u needs to flow with the rest mayber make the bottom of the u fatter

Capo Izi
04-04-2010, 02:19 PM
you gota revise the entire thing. define your letters better. and if your guna have a thick S and Z thicken your M too

you mean like write all of SKIZM, or just like try to figure out how to get SZM easier to read?

CESP.one
04-04-2010, 03:52 PM
throw ideas

CES:
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll75/fullyflared322/IMG00214-20100404-1320.jpg
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll75/fullyflared322/IMG00212-20100404-1319.jpg

Did this one for this chick
MADDIE:
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll75/fullyflared322/IMG00202-20100329-2021.jpg

What im trying to write now
CEASR:
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll75/fullyflared322/IMG00209-20100404-1318.jpg

constructive crits?

ManikOner
04-04-2010, 08:48 PM
CESP - i like your throwie style. like the A's and E's

crits?

Karma
04-04-2010, 08:57 PM
don't know how I feel about it, I think this may have been the toyist thing Ive ever done. lol

CESP.one
04-04-2010, 09:52 PM
Karma-
Are those two P's?
If they are loose that extension on the back of them or make it a smaller space.
other than that I actually like the O and the E. Just lose that little tag thing coming off of the O. Its unnecessary. Its pretty dope just work on making the letters cleaner.

Manik-
I like what you're going for. Just work on your letter structure more. I don't like the T or the S in the Krust one. I really like the style you used in the pen sketch with the green outline you posted earlier though. I kinda like the red and yellow one too. Just keep practicing.

viseversa101
04-04-2010, 09:55 PM
local stuff ive seen...
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Random%20graff/l_9f13a9bca22b27a551ded865a2e33418.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Random%20graff/l_9474fe89e009478cbdc2889bd7e08387.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Random%20graff/l_0226b3fa2735c706e3f9d190fe6ae8f1.jpg

LeaksOne
04-05-2010, 12:35 AM
you mean like write all of SKIZM, or just like try to figure out how to get SZM easier to read?

define your letters meaning make every letter look like what its suppose to be. and even your bars meaning make every letter the same width

TheSebWay
04-05-2010, 05:22 AM
canvas
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4028/4492446455_a70ce22d88_o.jpg
i dont like it so much but its my first one

CrustOner
04-05-2010, 11:17 AM
Waste of a canvas :/

Amends_Ego
04-05-2010, 05:23 PM
Waste of a canvas :/

haha i lol'd

Capo Izi
04-05-2010, 05:38 PM
Tryin some shit out..

8599

8600

Crits?

FlippingChickens
04-05-2010, 06:31 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3215.jpg

Capo Izi
04-05-2010, 06:38 PM
Tryin some shit out..

8599

8600

Crits?

bumppp

FlippingChickens
04-05-2010, 06:42 PM
go simple man dont be doing drips and shit

BlacktodaFuture
04-05-2010, 07:05 PM
doodle, crits?

flipping chickens: hard to tell that the O is a O. the middle bar on the F prob shouldn't be lopping bc it looks out of place. and there should be more shine.


http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03583.jpg?t=1270512037

-Empty-Can-
04-05-2010, 07:09 PM
I think the middle of the E extends out way too far.

weakfingers
04-05-2010, 08:14 PM
Tofe - Props on the cyursive style that shit can be tough, I stil havent been able to sketch something worthwhile outlining, the 3d also really sets it off.


quick 5 minuts exchange.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0022-3.jpg

ManikOner
04-05-2010, 08:34 PM
Chicken - That looks sick, the 3d would start confusing me
Safe - Im diggin the whole thing, love the s. im with Empty on your e though

BlacktodaFuture
04-05-2010, 08:47 PM
the thing w. the E was to match the S a little bit but i think i went a little to much w. it. thx for crits.

weak: ehh, idk what to say about it. not really feeling it honestly. i feel like the drips ruin the letters.

cocacola
04-05-2010, 09:18 PM
nice stuff on this page
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4053/4495129923_da1f80fcb4.jpg

W_G_O_N_E
04-05-2010, 10:37 PM
for the battle that hasn't been postedhttp://img337.imageshack.us/img337/6803/dscn6843.jpg

-Empty-Can-
04-05-2010, 10:50 PM
not feeling that brown rainbow around it.

walkingcarpet
04-05-2010, 11:15 PM
Safe. I love it
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/51c2bfa8.jpg

CrustOner
04-05-2010, 11:40 PM
haven't sketched in a while.. I dig the S.. but my K killed it D: I'm not even going to bother finishing this.

http://i41.tinypic.com/33c2gdw.jpg

mista_dza
04-06-2010, 12:24 AM
blahblahblah names, who needs one haha but whatever right now im just doin the word Self/selfish looks cool imo. anywayyyy
i did this tonight untill, you see that blotch above the L, well marker like leaked i suppose....(i have these otr .840 artist twin markers) i dont know whatever i got mad and didnt wanna do the 3d on it....
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00234.jpg

nonetheless...
sketch i did in class
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00231.jpg

chikkenbone
04-06-2010, 12:29 AM
mista- nice straight letters definatly keep working with simple shit like that
crust- loose all that crazy shit, and see how it comes out just using the same bars. maybe dont go so big on the k
W_G_O_N_E- that ironlak looks pretty ill

what do you think?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/_MG_5381.jpg

FlippingChickens
04-06-2010, 03:32 AM
Safe - probably my favortie sketch from you..just fix the middle of that e and your good

weak - looks good for 5 minute's but im not really a fan of that dripy style

coca - fix how the I sticks out to the right like that because it takes away from the t..overall looks good but ive seen better from you

wgone - its really clean but if you put less ripped things inside your letters it would have been better imo, it would have looked really nice if you left it with that white forcefield too but still looks good man

selfish -really like that,you should paint it!

jek - use pencil because your kinda shakey with the marker

crust - the s is cool i agree but that robotic stuff ur doing inside your letters take away from your letters

quiet - im really fealing that simple,,try a capital e next time and fix the u connecting with the I..i like that t

manik - thanks

lord_plankton
04-06-2010, 06:22 AM
crust, yeah s is good, k is a lil too close in my opinion plus its too high and its big front leg has a wired angle, try to use ya bottom s as k leg should make a difference...

kew1
04-06-2010, 02:46 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/April-06_1116.jpg
havent drawn in forever so i decided to let loose 2day in skool. im not really sure what to think about this what do u guys think?

massacreman
04-06-2010, 02:50 PM
what do you think?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/_MG_5381.jpg

i dig it, clean.

mista_dza
04-06-2010, 03:51 PM
thanks chickens, im workin on getting some rollers or something cuz i pretty much beat the shit out of the wall as i progressed through graff haha so imma paint it over and do one big nice piece im thinkin taht selfish one, in rainbow i think itd be sick the wall is just big enuff i think

mindtrix350
04-06-2010, 03:53 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/April-06_1116.jpg
havent drawn in forever so i decided to let loose 2day in skool. im not really sure what to think about this what do u guys think?

Way too many extensions in my opinion.
chikkenbone- Dope stuff. I like how clean it looks.

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm203/mindtrix92/ser.jpg
Meh. Didn't really know what to put for the E's.

Flawless Victory
04-06-2010, 04:50 PM
http://i42.tinypic.com/34qs5yu.jpg

FlippingChickens
04-06-2010, 05:46 PM
kew - go simple man,that really doesnt look good it just looks like spikey shit all around letters


seaer - i thought ur first letter was a p,define that s more, and those e's r desperate for help,try doing them capital


http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3218.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3222.jpg

ManikOner
04-06-2010, 09:14 PM
Chikkenbone - Love the outlet piece, looks clean
WGONE - that piece is amazing, i want to be able to do stuff like that.
Tofe - im diggin the first one. like the throws all around it.

heres one i just did. crits?

http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/144/dsc00197n.jpg

jdub
04-06-2010, 09:16 PM
flippinchickens-the bottom part of the e is wack on da first n the 3-d on da second needs work

http://i959.photobucket.com/albums/ae76/jdub627/scan0002.jpg

seywhat
04-06-2010, 10:13 PM
word up, gettin them bars down man. keep those ends on the e and n the same width as the rest of the letters and u'll be straight. and i'd drop the character and crown for now, just till u develop them more as well

kew1
04-06-2010, 10:35 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/April-06_2100.jpg

-Empty-Can-
04-06-2010, 10:38 PM
no.

SicK-
04-06-2010, 10:42 PM
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/dais.jpg
I know d is horrible. but crits?

walkingcarpet
04-06-2010, 10:56 PM
http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/6ac31157.jpg

ManikOner
04-06-2010, 11:44 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3222.jpg

for this i would either 3d it one way or if you make it different ways make it all go toward one point like maybe the center. and dont let your 3d go over your letters like you did with your F over the E. otherwise its a cool piece, like the outline. :)

SirBigO
04-07-2010, 11:02 AM
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/2276/bild0390y.jpghttp://img199.imageshack.us/img199/3867/bild0389b.jpghttp://img251.imageshack.us/img251/7761/bild0387.jpghttp://img260.imageshack.us/img260/7711/bild0388.jpghttp://img90.imageshack.us/img90/446/bild0383k.jpghttp://img532.imageshack.us/img532/7933/bild0382.jpghttp://img39.imageshack.us/img39/6396/bild0385s.jpg

dunno why they are next to each other.. but i don't mind tbh..;)

everything reads Sir, Si or Rasta.. if it's only Si then i coudn't cum up with an dope R to match the thing..

i know i should probbely go simple and shit like that.. but i'm just ryin to find new things 2 do with letters..

peace

-Empty-Can-
04-07-2010, 11:10 AM
That's an R? I thought they said Basta. lol The 6th one looks cool, but other than that stay simple fer a while.

Teco
04-07-2010, 11:14 AM
im pretty new with graff..
just wanted to get some opinion about my skecths..
(:

flask1995
04-07-2010, 11:44 AM
Tofe: I really like the 1st one piece with the throwies all over it but the O needs work, but the 2nd one looks terrible, but you're getting there.

Kew1: alot of shit going everywhere, it's like eatting a burrioto filled with beans and taking a dump and it's flying everywhere, try simple.

mindtrix350: really nice, I really wanna learn this style but be careful where you put those letter's cause they can look like a whole different letter then you actually wanted it to be.

teco: I really like the 2nd one, i'm feeling it also nohomo. :p
______________________________________________

Yes, I have changed my name to jase, flask was too hard when trying to draw a FL beside eachother,


http://i39.tinypic.com/wv65q8.jpg

http://i41.tinypic.com/egwq60.jpg

crits on my new name?

-Empty-Can-
04-07-2010, 11:51 AM
I'm sorry to tell you that Jase has been kinged already.

Teco
04-07-2010, 12:03 PM
Thnx Man (:
any other comments?

-Empty-Can-
04-07-2010, 12:06 PM
don't make the T bulge in like that. I like it.

flask1995
04-07-2010, 12:12 PM
so what are you saying? to change my name?

everyone out in the world is gonna have the same name depending if you atleast spend 1 day or more trying to figure out a name.

so what if I change my name to tase? I don't see anyone with thta name when I search that name in bombingscience gallary.

-Empty-Can-
04-07-2010, 12:21 PM
flickr is your friend.
:)

shem
04-07-2010, 12:27 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4052/4500592364_0053462fc3.jpg

need some help with this M cant get it too match the other letters... what i have is the basic flow of what i want it to look like... any suggestions?

flask1995
04-07-2010, 12:29 PM
true, nevermind I foudn a new name,

ManikOner
04-07-2010, 12:49 PM
Jase - i like the first one, keepin it simple. straighten out your j and just give it a solid fill and itd look a lot cleaner. on the second just make the s a little thicker and the one bar on the e is way to thin. dont make that little crack at the top of the s either, keep em solid. your gettin there tho man.

Teco - i like the second one the best, like what you did with the bottom of the fillins. i woud like the warefare one but im not so sure about doin the camo as a fill.

Sir - i like the last two and the 3rd and 4th. try not to do so much to em tho. just work on your letter structure a little bit more and dont try to do crazy fills. they looks pretty dope though, just give em a little work.
this is the one im liking the best.


http://img532.imageshack.us/img532/7933/bild0382.jpg
peace


Shem - i think it looks pretty dope but you need to make the lines that curve on the top of the S a little bit thicker. MAYBE with the E. for the M just kinda do the style you did with the H with the bar going from the center of the M to the right. i dono.

Con-Artist
04-07-2010, 01:17 PM
ratha

ManikOner
04-07-2010, 02:23 PM
any crits? over all im not so sure about it. i shouldnt have used brown as an outline... i messed it up a bit too... :(


http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/8323/dsc00199i.jpg

-Empty-Can-
04-07-2010, 02:28 PM
Nice simple. Watch your bar width in some places though.

Karma
04-07-2010, 02:29 PM
fix the middle of the M and the A make the I and the K even with itself (letter proportion).

CESP.one
04-07-2010, 04:05 PM
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll75/fullyflared322/IMG00250-20100407-1355.jpg

TECO- the second one is nice and clean.
Jase- Your A is thicker compared to your S. Clean those up and make the letters the same size and those will look sick.
Shem and Manik- Keep your bar width the same

FlippingChickens
04-07-2010, 04:29 PM
i only like the a,dont connect letters like the c and the e

manik - thats alright,work on your tag give the letters more steez

shem - that looks dope,find a way to make that m work and ur straight

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3223.jpg

Capo Izi
04-07-2010, 04:51 PM
I've got lots of new shit...a few simples, different throw styles I'm workin on, a character, and a freestyle....

8621

8622

8623

8624

8625

8626

8627

8628

8629

CESP.one
04-07-2010, 05:30 PM
Tofe- The only thing I really like is the T.
Capo Izi- I like the 3rd and the 6th one

newbornsek
04-07-2010, 06:37 PM
shitty peice for my girlfriend, stupid webcam pic
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/Image1.jpg

walkingcarpet
04-07-2010, 08:18 PM
^I think it'd look alot better without the other purple lines in the letters and without the arrow from the S. just my opinion

http://i715.photobucket.com/albums/ww159/digginsik/8a371d3e.jpg

crits please

CESP.one
04-07-2010, 09:00 PM
It looks kinda weird when you put the N and the R in the front

-Empty-Can-
04-07-2010, 09:34 PM
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/piece010Medium.jpg

O is a bit big. S and T shouldn't touch. Other crits.

ManikOner
04-07-2010, 09:52 PM
i dont think the S and T look bad touching. maybe not as much.

snare - just keep the R behind the E

BlacktodaFuture
04-07-2010, 10:25 PM
Manik had the best thing on this page.

ManikOner
04-07-2010, 10:31 PM
Manik had the best thing on this page.
im sorry but id have to disagree. thanks tho man.

heres one i just tried. tryin to work out somethin nice. what you guys think?

EDIT:
http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1301/manikthrowie.jpg