Blackbooks

[major"LEAG"]

DANK - That's a good start. The 3D on the "R" is missing.
SP!FF - You have the connecting bits going into, and coming out of, the next letter at odd angles. Since you say that that was a "BITE" off of some letter style, try something more simple, like SHEM said.

[markingz.]

Shem is from florida

[RES4]

crits? tried to do something different. looked better earlier on

http://i40.tinypic.com/2eb4lc0.jpg

[kew1]

[URL=http://s616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/?action=view&current=March-24_1924.jpg]
should i finish?

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-24_1924.jpg (http://s616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/?action=view&current=March-24_1924.jpg)
should i finish?

[RedEyes]

your should straighten your letters, lose the extensions and fix that W. Then finish it.

[Inlyn08]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-24_1924.jpg (http://s616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/?action=view&current=March-24_1924.jpg)
should i finish?
The way the letters bend in places is just awkward. And don't lay out that W. Especially with that bar on it.
No, no nononooo.

[mista_dza]

not finished yet, just working on the essentials for the night, anyway crits are nice , also that goes for what fill etc..
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00217.jpg

goodnight

[Sesh-it-up]

personaly i like that fukew just keep atter it will be clean in no timee

[kew1]

wat do u mean dont lay out the w? like take it out? and shesh thanks man

[weakfingers]

The letters dont have to much flow. It kinda looks liek you drew seperate letters then put it all together. The F U E all have a simmiler bend but the K just ruins that repetition of flow. The the W is super wide and totally random. Whats up with that var ontop of it? You need to work on matching your letter style's and dont bend your letters so much..

[pookienuts]

i kinda went over board its hard for me to tell when to stop and simplify...

sear

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3375.jpg

[lord_plankton]

mmmhh id say look at the letters youve goin on there n give em a fat black outline without all that stuff extension crap..and all the "cuts"
..just the pure letters n see what you got n try to develop from there , make them sheer letters fit n flow

still way too un essential shit much goin on...and the essential shit aint lookin too good

[pookienuts]

thanks... i tried to simplify a bit more

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3378-1.jpg

[dave the pirate]

kinda reminds be of saber, cool shit yo im curious to see how it would look with 3-d or shadow..

[RemoZ]

Well Sear if you could paint that it's be dope but anything other than an amazing fill would be whack

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-25_1045.jpg

[Fury]

K and E are whack, dude

[RES4]

3 people told you to change that w

[Jwhite]

3 people told you to change that w

and the curve on his letters, lol.

[Patchy]

Kew the color scheme is okay but i dont like the K.

Crits?
Edit: i know the L is horrible
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/001.jpg

[medacog1]

.o ok

http://i40.tinypic.com/20prdrn.jpg

Crits

bimp? crit
/

[AteskOne]

looks alright polar. loose the little kick off the bottom of the P. also looks like your letters get smaller as they go. work on making them all the same height. round out the inner circle of the A and work on that R.

patchy- i'd say go a lot simpler. i cant make out any letters after the L.

kewl- that fill needs a lot of work.

half of a piece for my next class project. designing a skateboard deck. will say pergatory when finished.
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6492/0325002123.jpg (http://img440.imageshack.us/i/0325002123.jpg/)

[LIZARD]

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/4420/photoon20100325at21542.jpg
tried some new 3D...crits?

[mista_dza]

somethin new

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00218.jpg

[viseversa101]

atesk-lookin good, id like to see it when finished
del-from what ive seen in the past from u, this is definately an improvemnt.

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo14-2.jpg
messed it up with the maker i used but its w/e

[LIZARD]

redeyes-i like that simple but i think that face in the O could be better

[weakfingers]

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/4420/photoon20100325at21542.jpg
tried some new 3D...crits?

Looks weird with the V having no 3-d even though its still proper.
I dont know if your trolling but... if you dont know who sever is you should quit now.
http://www.graffiti.org/la/sever_los_angeles.jpg

[flask1995]

oh snaaaaaaaaaaaaaap!

[Sesh-it-up]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-25_1045.jpg

bump this shit, if any thing needs work its the K.
keep doin what you do!

sevr- dont like the 3d but the letters are mint. lol

[LIZARD]

yeah i know who he is but for right now im just usin the name on paper not hittin the city.thats mainly why i dont use the 2nd e. iv done the straight letter before but i never brought the 3D all the way back to the vanishing point. the v does look weird but thats how its supposed to but ill probably do it again with better 3D next time

[viseversa101]

if u didnt want the v to have any 3d ur vanishing point should go right 2 notbook rings(i guess)

[AteskOne]

nah the 3d follows the VP pretty well. what you should have done is put the VP below the letters. that way the V would have a little more 3d behind it. also dont let your 3D go all the way back to the VP. cut it off somewhere inbetween the letters and the VP.

[CrustOner]

bump this shit, if any thing needs work its the K.
keep doin what you do!

sevr- dont like the 3d but the letters are mint. lol

Wrong-O.

[LIZARD]

http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/9640/photoon20100326at0203.jpg
crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it

[massacreman]

make your letters the same with, you are using bars, i can see but they are uneven take a look at the right R leg for example

[CrustOner]

Stick to the same thickness as that S. Reminds me of OhSnap's older shit.

[Jwhite]

http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/9640/photoon20100326at0203.jpg
crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it

S looks kinda bulkier than everything else, im feelin the letters though
Go in single long strokes with your markers >.< looks better in fills.

[Inlyn08]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-25_1045.jpg
I won't repeat what I said last time, but I will say this..
If you look at your W..
It looks like you are taking an L and a J.. or T and connecting them.
This is why I suggested not laying it out. If it wasn't for the fact I have seen what you have been posting.. I would not know what to make of that.

[AteskOne]

rough draft for school project.
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2654/getattachmentpergatory.jpg (http://img444.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentpergatory.jpg/)
says pergatory

[mawks]

sexy

[NoCanControl]

someone told me to come here. so here i am.
http://photos-h.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc3/hs436.snc3/25096_1121909406618_1193550161_30522336_7202097_n. jpg

[pookienuts]

rough draft for school project.
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2654/getattachmentpergatory.jpg (http://img444.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentpergatory.jpg/)
says pergatory

i think it looks clean man... but i think you used to many arrows to accentuate your letter structure... try substituting some of the arrows for something a little more original to your kinda taste...like a flourish or spiral etc... (experiment using an overlay of tracing paper) and possibly incorperate some line breaks and cracks in the letter itself

[TheToy]

I don't understand why it keeps saying a moderator has to approve my posts...

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=365&pictureid=3229

Crust, bent like the bottom? Or slanted at the top? Sorry it took so long. I don't know why I can't post pictures. Ehh, probably cause I spammed my Troll picture.

[AteskOne]

i think it looks clean man... but i think you used to many arrows to accentuate your letter structure... try substituting some of the arrows for something a little more original to your kinda taste...like a flourish or spiral etc... (experiment using an overlay of tracing paper) and possibly incorperate some line breaks and cracks in the letter itself
yeah i'm just trying to fill in the negative space. i havent really experimented much with extensions so it's hard for me to come up with new ideas for them. good idea with the tracing paper. i never thought of doing that. good looks man.

[Sesh-it-up]

rewt-i like the top u should roll that some where.
kan- the top one is decent not diggin the other two

[soath]

http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/9640/photoon20100326at0203.jpg
crits?...thanks for the 3D advice ill work on it


i would bust out the same bar that is on the bottom half of the S over unto the R to make it all more simetrical. my .02

peace

http://i409.photobucket.com/albums/pp179/sickofallthehate/sevr.jpg

[soath]

I won't repeat what I said last time, but I will say this..
If you look at your W..
It looks like you are taking an L and a J.. or T and connecting them.
This is why I suggested not laying it out. If it wasn't for the fact I have seen what you have been posting.. I would not know what to make of that.

the K is wack too, looks like an M or a X, spread it out or just try again, peace.

[Bets369R]

eww no. the S is the worst letter why would you wanna repeat it. please dont do that sevr.

[soath]

eww no. the S is the worst letter why would you wanna repeat it. please dont do that sevr.


NO the R is the worst letter for sure, that's why I was looking at it. whatever, my .02 but I think simetry might help the word. the S is decent for sure. a bigger E might help too.

[Sesh-it-up]

sevr that shit looks good make them all the same as the S and ur laughin.

[FlippingChickens]

sevr- i hate the whole thing especially that r,fix the left side of the v and that s is too fat..I hate your name too,you do know there is already someone with the name sever,right?

atesk - your always pulling out some dope shit,love the whole thing just wish you kept the arrows to a minimum,more than 5 is already too much imo...but its dope and im looking foward to see what you will do with the 3d on that :]

kans - the first one is on point just fix that k and make the n less fat

rewt - dope,black letters white 3d and black forcefield,rock it on a wall!

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3185.jpg

^ a freestyle,messy as fuck and a lot of proportions are wrong,like the f and e have to go lower and im going to make a fatter t like the f and im going to whip up a new one soon cuz i kinda like how it came out despite all the flaws it has


http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3186.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3184.jpg

^ really hate how my t came out

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3189.jpg
^ another pen freestyle

[LIZARD]

tofe-u gotta lose the swirly t and that akward extension on the f thats goin up on the 4th on.iv said this before so try to improve from the crits or people are ust gonna stop givin em....and YES I KNOW theres already a sever

[pookienuts]

in progress...
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3389.jpg

tofe i think it would look better since your doing simples to make your letters of an equal width

[Jwhite]

http://i39.tinypic.com/1o29nr.jpg

Crits?

[pookienuts]

try droppin that background tealish color so the letters are more visible ... you notice how that lip on the l over laps to much on the u taking away from it try forming your letters at different angles so when you out the next letter in the work it doesnt overlap to much and hide a major portion of the letter...

[LIZARD]

jwhite-ur letters are slightly gettin bigger as u read it...when i do a style with the letters overlaping like that make a rectangle and make the letters fit inside on it and i have every letter touch the top and the bottom of it so u know there the same size

[Jwhite]

jwhite-ur letters are slightly gettin bigger as u read it...when i do a style with the letters overlaping like that make a rectangle and make the letters fit inside on it and i have every letter touch the top and the bottom of it so u know there the same size

i completely missed that haha thanks

[pookienuts]

im going to extend the s extension but otherwise the finished sketch...
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3390.jpg

[RES4]

^ i think it going to look a lot better than the last one. i think you should try something different with the 3d this time though

http://i43.tinypic.com/15oa5vr.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

i like that shit^^ do a nuty fill with a crispy out line and a pink forcefeild to make it pop :D

sear get at me for an exhange, mine wont look anyhting close to that. but holla if ur down

[umopepisdn]

Newest sketch,
Don't really have any pens left, traded them away when i bought my graphic tablet, so i had to use a black ballpoint pen:

http://i43.tinypic.com/vhrlow.jpg

Don't really like the result, i never seem to do, crits would be appriciated..

/Shae

[pookienuts]

cool man... since you seem to be going simple try making the letters proportionate to each other same height, width etc... i like the idea of the background but try using a perspective for that as well so it will pop out at you ya know?

[LIZARD]

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5127/photoon20100328at01282.jpg
tryin new shit....crits?

[mista_dza]

so getting a new name is never easy
ive been informed that theres a really good writer by the name of DEL so im putting that on the back burner
i bet someone has the name Say but ill use it to sketch til i get a confirmed name in the future. anyway
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00220.jpg

[CrustOner]

I use longer names for practice. I get more letters down that way. I just can't rock a three letter name.

[mista_dza]

ive tried alot of 3 letter combos...i cant just get the longer words to flow well, plus 3 is like my lucky numbre or something...i cant get down with 5 letter + words, and 4 just looks awkward sometimes

[LeaksOne]

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3185.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3186.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3184.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3189.jpg


everytime you post i feel like a broken record.

ONCE AGAIN NO BARS ARE EVEN
YOUR T IS HIDEOUS
THE FLAVOR/STYLE YOUR TRYING TO ADD TO YOUR LETTERS IS BEING EXECUTED TERRIBLY

the best one is the second one. work off that one.

btw i gagged looking at your tofe tag.

inb4 get off my dick.

just so you know i give harsh crits because clearly you dont listen to any crits. your shits been of the same quality since you joined the site. and before you throw a hissy fit and clog up the forum ill give you 2 options. just take my advice or battle me. either way is fine.

[FlippingChickens]

alright man,so you want me to repeat the 2nd sketch until i got all the proportions right,and then what?And i wouldnt know if i would want to battle ,you never post flicks of ur shit.And i have goten better,and i dont give 3 shits if u think otherwise...and wtf i do listen to crits,if not i wouldnt even atempt straight letters and i fixed the f in my throw,remember?

mista - yea man i was going to tell u that del was taken already,im pretty sure hes a old school san fransisco writer...

sevr - make the right bar of the v the same as the left,all the other letters look better now

pookie - bro i like it,but on the real its mad hard to read

shae - make the h bigger


*** !!! BEFORE ANYONE CLAIMS THAT IM BITING ANYTHING ,I WILL ADMIT I BORROWED THE MOUSE AND THE NOTE AND THE RED THING FROM THE WRITER NOTE IN THE BLACKBOOK THREAD !!!

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3193.jpg


any suggestions on what color i should make the letters??

[soath]

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5127/photoon20100328at01282.jpg
tryin new shit....crits?

that R is better for sure. not like I mentioned but still good. the V seems thinner than everthing... I dunno. those letters are pretty tight/straight but not that unique, looking good tho. the cracks are tiny.. tight too.

[Patchy]

Tofe- its a cool concept even if it is biten, but the O is pretty gross and doesnt fit at all with the other letters Work on it

sevr- i like the cracks and letters but not the back fill. your letters are definatley getting better though

[cocacola]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4010/4470700168_907ddc20f7.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2798/4469943223_d4167c4d22.jpg
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2691/4468982362_0d2f7f72e3.jpg

[RES4]

tofe- the o fucks it up and so does the way the e is away off to the side. dont like it

sevr- an awful lot better than the last one

give me some ideas for the fill
http://i39.tinypic.com/9iwmxz.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

tofe i like some of ur shit but some is jus wackk

[RES4]

tofe- the o fucks it up and so does the way the e is away off to the side. dont like it

sevr- an awful lot better than the last one

give me some ideas for the fill
http://i39.tinypic.com/9iwmxz.jpg

bottom page bump

[BlacktodaFuture]

sevr- i hate the whole thing especially that r,fix the left side of the v and that s is too fat..I hate your name too,you do know there is already someone with the name sever,right?

atesk - your always pulling out some dope shit,love the whole thing just wish you kept the arrows to a minimum,more than 5 is already too much imo...but its dope and im looking foward to see what you will do with the 3d on that :]

kans - the first one is on point just fix that k and make the n less fat

rewt - dope,black letters white 3d and black forcefield,rock it on a wall!

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3185.jpg

^ a freestyle,messy as fuck and a lot of proportions are wrong,like the f and e have to go lower and im going to make a fatter t like the f and im going to whip up a new one soon cuz i kinda like how it came out despite all the flaws it has


http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3186.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3184.jpg

^ really hate how my t came out

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3189.jpg
^ another pen freestyle



have you thought about doing it good?

[LIZARD]

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5127/photoon20100328at01282.jpg
tryin new shit....crits?
bump for crits
res-do a solid fill,dont try anything crazy cuz as of right now its a sick simple. just do a bright outline around everthing to make it pop

[Jwhite]

bump for crits
res-do a solid fill,dont try anything crazy cuz as of right now its a sick simple. just do a bright outline around everthing to make it pop

Dirty, i like it.

[LeaksOne]

alright man,so you want me to repeat the 2nd sketch until i got all the proportions right,and then what?And i wouldnt know if i would want to battle ,you never post flicks of ur shit.And i have goten better,and i dont give 3 shits if u think otherwise...and wtf i do listen to crits,if not i wouldnt even atempt straight letters and i fixed the f in my throw,remember?

after you repeat it and get your bars even then SLOWLY start bending the bars and establishing your own style. and either battle me or dont im not guna post flicks just so you can test the water. so make your mind up either blind battle or puss out. and you def havent shown any progress besides finally making your F in your throw more defined. if you didnt have so many posts id think you were new. and next time just post the straight instead of the rest. oh yeah and i also dont give a fuck that you dont give a fuck. im guna tell you my opinion everytime you post something until you start listening and showing progress.

[FlippingChickens]

im guna tell you my opinion everytime you post something until you start listening and showing progress.


haha i appreciate it man,and na im not gonna battle u thats like sticking ur dick in a hole and not knowing whos sucking it

[Inlyn08]

TOFE..
To be honest.. there's really no variation in what you've been posting. It really is looking the same. Start from scratch. Forget what you have been sketching and/or painting as your "Norm" and just do something completely different. Then do what you have been doing. Then take the two and compare. I'm not meaning to sound vague.. but when I say do something different. Do something completely different. Analyze some fonts, preferably ones you feel you are capable of replicating.
Because from what I have seen.. and I agree with Leaks there isn't much progress.

[TheToy]

Leaks, you been on a two week long rag ride with Aunt Flo...

Post a flick.

[FlippingChickens]

inlyn - i dont really bite letters man i just do whatever comes to my head...but i can give it a shot,were can i look at some fonts?

[-Empty-Can-]

^MS Word?

[FlippingChickens]

haha word,gonna bang out some shit with a cursive font...

[Sesh-it-up]

works on ur tag too.. the 1 above that straight letter is gross

[FlippingChickens]

not saying my tag doesnt need work,but it is solid..that one is just really really wack because i was shrooming mad hard

[Paser1]

bump for crits
res-do a solid fill,dont try anything crazy cuz as of right now its a sick simple. just do a bright outline around everthing to make it pop

I like it dude gettin the bar shit down I see straight progress keep at it and come fuckin chill you hooker

[Sesh-it-up]

not saying my tag doesnt need work,but it is solid..that one is just really really wack because i was shrooming mad hard

haha ok cool.

[LeaksOne]

Leaks, you been on a two week long rag ride with Aunt Flo...

Post a flick.

maybe later.

and i havent really been posting alot. not in the toy forums anyways. i have a couple things ive been doing but too lazy to do all the shit to get it posted. but im in no rush so ill continue my "rag ride"

[Daz801]

cocacola-im likin the top nd bottom ones, sweet character
tofe- likin the top one cept for the t
nm control- has the potetial ta go either way, the fill will make or break it in my opinion
sevr-clean nd sympol i like it


crits on this not fin yet need ideas for colour

http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s352/daz801/P280310_1648.jpg

[One Evil]

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2937/sdc11898l.jpg (http://img262.imageshack.us/i/sdc11898l.jpg/)'

messy and kinda not finished but posting anyways

im feeling this so far even if it ain't done yet.

anyways crits for these plz..
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/2781/dscf4526w.jpg (http://img121.imageshack.us/i/dscf4526w.jpg/)
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/5504/dscf4529.jpg (http://img192.imageshack.us/i/dscf4529.jpg/)
ugly i know ^

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3870/dscf4531n.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/i/dscf4531n.jpg/)

the R on this one i thinks a lil stupid but w.e
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/5025/dscf4527o.jpg (http://img214.imageshack.us/i/dscf4527o.jpg/)

[Meph*]

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/dirtparadise.jpg

need some comments. tell me if the theme is straight!!!

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/March-14_1636.jpg
just messing around really bent. its just a R and K

[kew1]

meph- the p throws the whole thing off otherwise not too bad an i like the car too

[RES4]

meph- like the concept but the car is a but off

kew - im not really sure if i like ot or not, r looks like a b and the k looks like a i and an e

http://i40.tinypic.com/f2snk1.jpg

[Fube]

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5127/photoon20100328at01282.jpg
tryin new shit....crits?

please tell me this dont stand for "Sever".

[LIZARD]

i know i know....just a word to fuck with nothing city wise

[shem]

quick sketch.

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2693/4474309272_d757ba8b9d_o.jpg

[viseversa101]

nice start

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/Scan1.jpg?t=1269895423

my black was dying. you can't see the top of the boarder bc of my scanner :/

[LIZARD]

i like the letters but that character is hurtin

[BlacktodaFuture]

he is just a quick something to fill in the space.

[RedEyes]

is your crew named Brute?

[BlacktodaFuture]

no that's my boy. we go painting all the time. it was in his book.

[viseversa101]

crits?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10856.jpg

[Jwhite]

crits?
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10856.jpg

No... just no..
sorry man

[BlacktodaFuture]

try again. use bars this time. and dont add those random super skinny bars. and use letters like this VISE

[Werse]

Only been writing for about 3months no artistic background. so crits?

http://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture004.jpg[/URL]http://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture001.jpghttp://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture003.jpghttp://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture005.jpghttp://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture007.jpghttp://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture008.jpghttp://i686.photobucket.com/albums/vv229/hairfaceupurs/Picture009.jpg

Bump.
Anyone remember this.

[gumOnShoe]

LOL, i remember that shitty toss on that Keg bellied bitch, yeah.
on another note,
help a ***** out, huh?
i know the hole in the Q is to small i fixed that earlier btw.
http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy253/lolapples/Photo14.jpg

[CrustOner]

hahahaha I REMEMBER BOME!

[Bets369R]

shes rockin the beer gut.

[Jarret]

i like the letters but that character is hurtin


lol



Bump.
Anyone remember this.

man 3 months writing and thats his best! WOW...thats not very good. im sorry. and im in class , i was scrolling , i didnt want to see that gut , nor did anybody else in my class....EWW!

but i think the best one he did was on that girl with the gut though HA!

[viseversa101]

try again. use bars this time. and dont add those random super skinny bars. and use letters like this VISE



u mean along these lines then ehh?(if so do u take and add in things now?)
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10864.jpg

[One Evil]

crits for these plz..
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/2781/dscf4526w.jpg (http://img121.imageshack.us/i/dscf4526w.jpg/)
http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/5504/dscf4529.jpg (http://img192.imageshack.us/i/dscf4529.jpg/)
ugly i know ^

http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/3870/dscf4531n.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/i/dscf4531n.jpg/)

the R on this one i thinks a lil stupid but w.e
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/5025/dscf4527o.jpg (http://img214.imageshack.us/i/dscf4527o.jpg/)

bumping for crits hopefully :D

[Daz801]

cocacola-im likin the top nd bottom ones, sweet character
tofe- likin the top one cept for the t
nm control- has the potetial ta go either way, the fill will make or break it in my opinion
sevr-clean nd sympol i like it


crits on this not fin yet need ideas for colour

http://i511.photobucket.com/albums/s352/daz801/P280310_1648.jpg
bottom page bump

[LIZARD]

vise-dont add anything till e get those simples down..try new style with those letter though(overlap them or tilt every letter a different way)make all ur bars the same thickness and lose the bars that are at the ends of all those letters

one evil-same thing^

sice-lose that extension that bends up at the end of the bottom leg on the e

[Shell703]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/DEBRIDWILDS.jpg

Slice- decide whether of not to over lap- the S overlaps the I and the I a little the C then absolutely no overlap on the E. Also the 3D is off in many places throughout the piece.

One Evil- straight letters for a while

Vice- thats an ok straight letter but the S bar is off- try doing that fast like 50 times.

Black- the top of the S and E are fresh but id work with the bottom of those letters a little bit.

[skeetz]

i agree with shells crits

shell- youre going towards a style that can look mad dope when its painted, but its hard to tell what it would end up like if you did it just from that sketch. the one obvious thing i see wrong with it is the bottom of the S and how the dark area doesnt match up the outside outline. All i really gotta say is that youre dealing with a steez that has a very fine line between mad wack and mad fresh. I'd have to see more of em to make a final decision on which one yours is.

exchange for evow. ran out of black so i outlined the rest in red. ignore the straight letter at the bottom and the hadnstyles, Ive been on a long break and just wanna know if the piece in the middle is still up to par, ill fix the rest later.

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn233/skeetz2911/Photoon2010-03-29at2005.jpg

[skeetz]

woah double post, sry my comp is shit.

[viseversa101]

vise-dont add anything till e get those simples down..try new style with those letter though(overlap them or tilt every letter a different way)make all ur bars the same thickness and lose the bars that are at the ends of all those letters
e


For this effect? where do i take it to now....crits
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10865.jpg

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo5-4.jpg
my piece for the production
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo14-2.jpg
just cuz the sabres won tonight!

[Inlyn08]

inlyn - i dont really bite letters man i just do whatever comes to my head...but i can give it a shot,were can i look at some fonts?
I look at everything. Cereal boxes.. street signs. Websites ( Porn ) LOL. But, no I mean I try to analyze some of the shit I see. Google man, something will pop up. In reality.. everyone ends up biting in some small way or another. But if you're taking in a style.. and making it your own, you're not really biting. Like a recipe.. ya dig? Something to start with.. then throwing in your own spices, herbs.. etc.

Sorry if I was vague.

[LIZARD]

siko-lose those arrows but it looks good cuz ur addin some style to it now
vise-keep the simple and do different color fills,outlines,3d,shadow bubbles...keep the lettters like that and add different colors for now

[viseversa101]

vise-keep the simple and do different color fills,outlines,3d,shadow bubbles...keep the lettters like that and add different colors for now

Thanx for a crit



Vice- thats an ok straight letter but the S bar is off- try doing that fast like 50 times.

Didnt realize till i uploaded that i dont like how the s is tight at the top n loose on the bottom but more of what u suggest no?


http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10866.jpg

[LIZARD]

redeyes-i just reliezed one uses a k and the otherone a c...which one u keepin?

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03545.jpg?t=1269919654

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03546.jpg?t=1269919679

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03544.jpg?t=1269919629

[RedEyes]

redeyes-i just reliezed one uses a k and the otherone a c...which one u keepin?

Its what ever i feel like, i write SIKO SICO SIKOH it dont matter.

[Sesh-it-up]

safe- not digin the character at alll i like the piece tho

[hpir]

siko-loose the arrows throw a drop down shadow on it and itl be straight
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/003.jpg
crits?

[Sesh-it-up]

i some what dig the throw, work on the botton left bar of the K and try to keep each letter one line.

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch9.jpg

[viseversa101]

i take it u was high?

[smokeitup]

maybe, what do u think of it?

[viseversa101]

smokeitup-in sum places the outline needs to be fatter, all in all gg tho im just not feeling the tags, i think if uda left it lone...flipped a page...n tagged ur heart out(like i do after a few drawings) ita saved itself. oh n the 3d on the 2nd letter is flat out missing





vise-keep the simple and do different color fills,outlines,3d,shadow bubbles...keep the letters like that and add different colors for now


not really liking what i did but i think il keep the 1/2 fill skeem goin
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10867.jpg



Prolly my fave idea, 3d it into slime on the bottom ina fresh green
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10868.jpg


go with a pink/purple fill leave the s alone n just blend, fatten some lines n give the letters a shadow...
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10869.jpg


just gona 3d it to a vanishing point in black/silver n call it a day
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10870.jpg




Crits

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch3.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch4.jpg

[Meph*]

the first one looks sick as fuck..the only thiong i dont like is the the swigly shit you put next to the first M

[RedEyes]

Took the arrows out and threw on a drop, any last suggestions before i add color?
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo1-3.jpg

[RES4]

meph- like the concept but the car is a but off

kew - im not really sure if i like ot or not, r looks like a b and the k looks like a i and an e

http://i40.tinypic.com/f2snk1.jpg

what colour should i fill the letters

smoke it up - the red monkey is the best imo

[AteskOne]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch3.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch4.jpg
i can dig. the only thing i would say is some of the letters seem to get a bit skinnier than others. ex: the bottom of the Z and pretty much the whole E on the top piece. the 3d's need work too. they're going in too many directions and are all different depths. those simples above the word are dope tho.

some slaps. shitty cellphone pic...
http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/4372/getattachmentslapps.jpg (http://img716.imageshack.us/i/getattachmentslapps.jpg/)

[One Evil]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03545.jpg?t=1269919654

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03546.jpg?t=1269919679

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03544.jpg?t=1269919629


looks dope.. just SAFE is taken check him out on flickr

http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss145/carlosdelgado/DSCF4468.jpg

[massacreman]

almost everything is taken... as long as its not a real "legend" i dont really mind anymore... just saying

[Amends_Ego]

Im lovin the slaps Dimes, what'd you use to make em?

[massacreman]

a sticker and some markers i think

[Patchy]

good page
Sico i love your S

[Jwhite]

[QUOTE=One Evil;1591012]looks dope.. just SAFE is taken check him out on flickr

it only matters if theyre king status or not..

[Patchy]

http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0704.jpg
http://i755.photobucket.com/albums/xx198/BK_Patchy/100_0707.jpg

[AteskOne]

a sticker and some markers i think
ha how'd you guess? yeah amends i'm just using some usps stickers (228's) and some deco paint markers. the labels are pretty small so for those i stuck 2 of them together.

[LeaksOne]

http://i521.photobucket.com/albums/w335/jokster004/STP60086.jpg

ive under gone another name change so to you guys im leaks again. probably not guna outline this so whatev.

[hpir]

siko-loose the arrows throw a drop down shadow on it and itl be straight
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/003.jpg
crits?
leaks-bring in the right leg of the k more and the s is just kinda bland
Bump

[One Evil]

almost everything is taken... as long as its not a real "legend" i dont really mind anymore... just saying

Safe Rc is pretty tight though. thats all im sayin.
http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/3715/im001359.jpg (http://img714.imageshack.us/i/im001359.jpg/)
http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/5552/im001314v.jpg (http://img25.imageshack.us/i/im001314v.jpg/)
http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/1416/im001441.jpg (http://img202.imageshack.us/i/im001441.jpg/)
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/2976/im001342.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/i/im001342.jpg/)
non stolen

but.. to the safe on here.. do ur thing man im just sayin and showing some safe shit :D

[FlippingChickens]

Safe you should change your name its disrespect man you toys have it all wrong saying it only matters if the person is a king,im sure you wouldnt want some jit writing ur name after yo been putting in work for a long period of time,just aint cool man..do ur research kids

sico - that s looks good,everything else is normal,i sujest working on that c,dont like that bar sitcking out to the left

monkey - the red one looks straight but id like to see it without a peice on the bottom its kinda distracting,and fix that e and its solid

resik - color the shadow in black and leave the letters white it looks fine

dimes - those slaps are sexy,i wish i knew how to use scissors that well lol

patchy - not working bro

leaks - i really hope that isnt ur k or s for ur throwy because it looks like ass ,the top is straight but u should outline and put a shadow man

kan - on the left the k needs work and the other one dont connec the k with the a

[BlacktodaFuture]

im not changing my name. i live in vermont and im sure there are other safe's in the world just like there are many other dimes, leaks, alts, duke or whatever. and i dont think of it as disrespect at all. AND i have done my research but it isn't like i am able to find every Safe ever. I picked the name bc it fit me. end.

[AteskOne]

dimes - those slaps are sexy,i wish i knew how to use scissors that well lol

x-acto blades.

[LeaksOne]

leaks - i really hope that isnt ur k or s for ur throwy because it looks like ass ,the top is straight but u should outline and put a shadow man


thats cute your trying to be harsh on me haha. does that even look like a throw to you? and im not outlining it.

i noticed the s was boring and the k could use work but these are just rough sketches nothing serious. i dont even write leaks. thanks though fellas.



Safe you should change your name its disrespect man you toys have it all wrong saying it only matters if the person is a king,im sure you wouldnt want some jit writing ur name after yo been putting in work for a long period of time,just aint cool man..do ur research kids

and really? your talking like your some big writer haha. how bout you research some bars and get your shit even.

[Inlyn08]

If I found out someone "Local" was writing my shit, and they were horrible.. I'd more then likely change MY name. Because frankly speaking..
If they're writing like shit, people will more then likely remember shit. I'm not having some other person's garbage being mixed in with mine. And like it was said.. Unless YOU'RE a king then who fucking cares. People will remember fire, and they will remember shit. So, if it comes down to me switching my shit whatever. If I'm the better writer, then it won't be a thing. So, I'll just do what I'm doing.. and if I ever meet someone who writes the same shit as me ( Face to face of course ) then we'll battle. Otherwise, it doesn't matter to me. I'll get up, and worry about the "Politics" later.

Ya dig?

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch10.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch62.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch7.jpg

crits?

[RemoZ]

I don't know how everyone scene is but you guys should be lucky that you just need to have a different name. Here the scene is so small. Maybe like 6 - 10 of us who get up and about 25 including the chill spot kids that we don't even like people to have a close name such as FAKE and JAKE or NORE and WORE. So drop that complaining shit it isn't as bad as here...

[LIZARD]

http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/1285/photoon20100331at0007.jpg
just screwin around with letters and i came up with this...crits?

[flask1995]

eh, it's okay, the thing on the S, the part sticking out, I think that should be removed. but try working with lower and upper case letter's. most of them come out good.

[Inlyn08]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/ozonesketch7.jpg

crits?
O looks like a U, the Z and N and bottom part of the E are too thin, and that random wide fat O doesn't really fit with the rest of it.
I like the middle one the best, personally.

[AteskOne]

If I found out someone "Local" was writing my shit, and they were horrible.. I'd more then likely change MY name. Because frankly speaking..
If they're writing like shit, people will more then likely remember shit. I'm not having some other person's garbage being mixed in with mine. And like it was said.. Unless YOU'RE a king then who fucking cares. People will remember fire, and they will remember shit. So, if it comes down to me switching my shit whatever. If I'm the better writer, then it won't be a thing. So, I'll just do what I'm doing.. and if I ever meet someone who writes the same shit as me ( Face to face of course ) then we'll battle. Otherwise, it doesn't matter to me. I'll get up, and worry about the "Politics" later.

Ya dig?
change your name? nah that's when you beat some ass. if a kid's rocking your name make sure you cross it the fuck out everywhere you see it and let heads know whats good with imposters.

[mista_dza]

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00227.jpg


wrote saw onto a canvas that was pretty old and i sprayed over a while ago (you might be able to see through some of the yellow to see the original letters aha)

[RedEyes]

The angle throws it off. ill take another one tomorrow.
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo5-5.jpg

[resker1]

ok soo recently changed my name from snug to resker
crits?

[smokeitup]

dont like it resker, poor letter structure and no flow...

keep trying, and learn how to tag too.

[resker1]

haha a little constructive criticism?
like do this or that? lololol

[resker1]

haha a little constructive criticism?
like do this or that? lololol

[LeaksOne]

draw it EXACTLY like this

RESK/ER

[resker1]

heres a snug throw/piece i did on a wall

<a href="http://s935.photobucket.com/albums/ad196/snug760/?action=view&current=snug1.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i935.photobucket.com/albums/ad196/snug760/snug1.jpg" border="0" alt="apk,snug,nas"></a>

[resker1]

oooooops
i guess im too noob at this to post :O

[resker1]

ok soooo heres an old snug throw/piece i did on a wall
sorry i fucked up before

[LeaksOne]

oook? :confused:


draw it EXACTLY like this

RESK/ER

same goes for snug. EXACTLY like this

SNUG

[FlippingChickens]

change your name? nah that's when you beat some ass. if a kid's rocking your name make sure you cross it the fuck out everywhere you see it and let heads know whats good with imposters.

word

and leak im not trying to be harsh,yeah it does look like a throwup its bubbly and shit

[Jwhite]

ok soooo heres an old snug throw/piece i did on a wall
sorry i fucked up before

Bars. Bars. Bars. Bars.

[RedEyes]

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo5-5.jpg
bottom page bump.

[LIZARD]

redeys-throw some shadow on those arrows to match

[RedEyes]

yeah i caught that when i posted it. Anyone down for a piece/simple exchange?

[Jwhite]

go to the exchange thread

[Flawless Victory]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2n8tr1y.jpg


for da lulz.

[B E A R]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2n8tr1y.jpg


for da lulz.

yeh... the uh... the colour scheme is...

huh?

[Fury]

Dude is that a chick?

[Flawless Victory]

That's a chick, dude.

[zennegen]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2n8tr1y.jpg





AAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

dope.

[pookienuts]

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3397.jpg
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3395.jpg

[CrustOner]

Getting there, Sear. That bottom one's S is dope.

[zennegen]

i suspect bites. that, or a serious influence from saber and pose.

[pookienuts]

oooooorrrrrrrrrrrrr... something similar to a calligraphy handstyle i do...

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0827.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0807.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0831-1.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0814.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0779.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0773.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/DSCN0796.jpg

possibly...

[M3KA1!]

id hit it. some straight SCRIBE

[markingz.]

that women looks like a man straight up yall got low standards

[Flawless Victory]

That women?
I only see one woman, straight up.

[zennegen]

what a fucking clown.

[markingz.]

shes a women but shes distusting

[markingz.]

i PREFER no pun intended a much more refind female

[Flawless Victory]

I don't think you understand.....
you are saying womEn, and that is incorrect.
The correct word is womAn.
Also, it's refinEd.

[markingz.]

you get my point, more feminine and less manly, she can still be a badass but she neeeds to be more feminine not like a man in disguise you know

[mista_dza]

Sear- honestly im not to fond of the extension goin across the bottom of the R almost makes is seem like a B , but thats just me i dunno
anyway
something i did the otehr night picture is dark my bad :(
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00227.jpg

[AnteUp]

Dza- a bit generic, but you're keeping it simple. thatll pay off later.
if you stand back and look, the A is too fat for the piece, and the w is lacking major. The s is the generic part, but its most on point. Don't be afraid of round edges.

First pen freestyle, first piece, (whatever you wanna call it.) in months.
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/wtfawk/IMG00608-20100331-2152.jpg
The T is lacking major, I know. Says BENT LIFE.
Crits are majorly appreciated.

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i39.tinypic.com/dvlhrq.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

I think the bend in the leg of the R is too much.

[AnteUp]

Its a B, fine sir.

[Flawless Victory]

Oh, not, not you dude.
Haha, I meant that shit Dank posted.
I don't really like the things on the top left of your Es, though.
I think that your Es would actually look a lot better without them

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2gyd942.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/15ewopy.jpg

not dont but what u think
and your b looks like a r hommie

[AnteUp]

Haha. Yea, I realized after I posted it. Thanks for the crits though.

[Inlyn08]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2gyd942.jpg
http://i44.tinypic.com/15ewopy.jpg

not dont but what u think
and your b looks like a r hommie

That K...

[viseversa101]

backbone to tall..k

[Flawless Victory]

That K is the only good letter on the whole canvas, haha.

For real though, I'm not digging any of the other letters, They are too disproportionate.

[Sesh-it-up]

I like the S the best lol

[-Dank-DK-]

now all i need is 4 more people to like the a the r and two people to like each c and i can fuse thoses 6 people together to make one person that likes it

im fuckin so happy rainbows are flyin out my ass

[Flawless Victory]

http://i39.tinypic.com/244qs0k.jpg

MOAR LULZ

[flask1995]

http://i44.tinypic.com/14c8whe.jpg

crits?

[massacreman]

give crits to get them
all i say is
USE BARS
CHANGE COLOUR SCHEME
TIDY IT UP
HIGHLIGHTS OR INLINE MIGHT SAVE THIS PIECE

[RES4]

trying to do something with the letters

http://i40.tinypic.com/w81821.jpg
http://i40.tinypic.com/2rppg1s.jpg

flask- i like the overall piece but not the letters. s is the best

[gumOnShoe]

Wtf did you do to those bars?
take off all those sharp warts on those letters and you'll be fine (The bottom one).
the top on is gey, mainly because of those random bar extensions (idk if i'd even classify those as extensions)...

[RES4]

ignore them lol, i didnt realise how bad they are im workin on something now and il post it later

[gumOnShoe]

try taking a peek in the picture gallery (Big Boy threaads) and see how they mess with extensions n' shit. however, i'd only suggest messing with those extensions until you can make a CLEAN simp.
cause trust me, Bad structure+extensions= Eyes Vomiting.

[RES4]

http://i43.tinypic.com/mwr13m.jpg

hows this

[gumOnShoe]

bad, make your bars even, if you're using them.......
3D is weird too.
look for a 3D tutorial thread on here, i think it's in the the Tool's n' tips forum. shit helped me with my 3D.

[Meph*]

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/peace.jpg

improving?..let me know ;)

[shem]

start... worth finishing?

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2695/4482241073_c838573231.jpg

[Meph*]

yeh looks pretty sick

[flask1995]

?, I have been giving crits, you just dont see my picture because i haven't done them. I have gave like atleast 5 crits to other people without me putting a piece up

[BlacktodaFuture]

i say you finish it. it's weird and different but lets see what you can do w. it.

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/bored.jpg

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/P0227_123451.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

GAY AS MY 9TH GRADE ENGLISH TEACHER, he was full on fag too by the way.

[smokeitup]

i like it.

[Sesh-it-up]

my english teacher? wow u are fucked

[smokeitup]

yeah your english teacher, haha naw the sketches.

not really the first one but i reckon the 2nd one is decent.

[Capo Izi]

shem & smokeitup- illlll.

8568

8569

8570


Crits? The last one is for some chick.

[viseversa101]

top is dope i like it alot, middle is too skinny n just...idk n i duno becca but hope she gives u skins or atleast sumthin for that thing, ur throwies r okay too

shem & smokeitup- illlll.

8568

8569

8570


Crits? The last one is for some chick.

[Freaker]

Here's something....

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/8712/picture6na.jpg

[smokeitup]

http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/IM000805.jpg

oldddd.

[TheSebWay]

For my girldriend
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4013/4482272130_423a522a74_o.jpg
Baser[my tag]
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2770/4481252748_f5bfa5c65e_o.jpg
Exchange to Vors(Israelian Writer)
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2749/4458691085_fe77ed2764_o.jpg


What U think about it???

[smokeitup]

i like the baser and the vors but not the 'moriel' or whatever it is. and on that page where u got the baser, u need to fix them tags.

[TheSebWay]

New thing trying something diffrent now what u think about it
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4041/4483035955_2e9d3c3433_o.jpg

[LeaksOne]

too confusing.

[RES4]

give crits to get them.

anyway baser, second is the best, dont like the first one

http://i42.tinypic.com/uymo5.jpg
not finished yet

[Jwhite]

give crits to get them.

anyway baser, second is the best, dont like the first one

http://i42.tinypic.com/uymo5.jpg
not finished yet

resik i like it but i cant get over the fact it just looks like the same thing being posted over and over again

[RES4]

it is, i just dont know how to develop it without it looking like shit

[LIZARD]

res-make ur letters a little more boxy, i dont like the random curves in some letters(the e and the s mainly)
im trying to think of a new name and i came up with hont and im just wondering if it would read haunt...i spelled it that way it sounds,do u think thats right?

[Meph*]

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/peace.jpg

[Karma]

some abstract http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/7357/image31z.jpg

[AnteUp]

Karma-that abstracts a bit too simple for my taste.
Meph-those are way too boxy bro. You're trying to hard to invent new ways of making letters.
Resk-looks more like a throw to me, but those are pretty solid simples, but you have 2 different styles there, the R and K match, and the E and S match. But the sets don't match eachother. You know?
Sebway-that too one is hurtin bad. The 2nd and 3rd are a good use of bars, but it looks like something off of a graffiti creator site. Experiment with thickness of bars. your handy is hurting bad too, you're trying too hard. Just let it flow.

Crits please? Ignore the S on batteries...
http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t66/AnteUp14/wtfawk/IMG00613-20100402-1150.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

thats dope i like that style^ just try and clean it up a bit
karma i dont like it but only cuz i dont get it haha
meph i dont like the piece at all but it looks like u got some coloring skills
resik the E and S dont real match its close tho.
baser i like that new style ur working on but i think u should master the old one first.

[Karma]

P- heart O- lung P- brain E- eye

POPE lol

[Sesh-it-up]

ohhhh now i see it, i like the idea keep workin on it.

[viseversa101]

P- heart O- lung P- brain E- eye

POPE lol


http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10873.jpg

[Karma]

ohhhh now i see it, i like the idea keep workin on it.

Nah I was just bored and had a pen around. Probably file that away.

[RES4]

http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10873.jpg

lol^