Blackbooks

[IllLogic]

http://i44.tinypic.com/2v2jrza.jpg
just a quick throw..
crits

[viseversa101]

lmao nice sig there ilogic

[IllLogic]

heheheh

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Give more room to breath logic, and don't cover the e's hole and the make the top of the bar on the >r visible kuz it looks like pepso

[LIZARD]

definitly fix the e and make the s show more

[drOping]

bump



Snowboarding consumed most of me this winter, but here is some stuff.
http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/4750/1003192.jpg
http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/3037/1003193z.jpg

[FlippingChickens]

shem - thats looking good except that m is kinda bothering me,that extension on the top im not diggin

mogan - good shit

keav - that looks good man,now drop a 3d on that and throw on a forcefield

slek - top one is fresh the second one has dope colors but at the top of that e its looking wierd going down like that,dont do those lines ur doing around ur letters it doesnt look good

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe36.jpg


http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe37.jpg

the o is shit

[funhouseXcast]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0430001909a.jpg

Advice?

fucking ill

[MoganOne]

Thanks yo! I'm trying to improve my style before I get involved with sick ass fills... I have been writing for a little over a year now... Does anybody want to do a simple piece exchange? Mogan<~

[zaco]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3261/4568324399_468163695f_o.jpg

im lovin this style man! i just think the last bar and the M needs to be a bit lower

[Freaker]

shem - thats looking good except that m is kinda bothering me,that extension on the top im not diggin

mogan - good shit

keav - that looks good man,now drop a 3d on that and throw on a forcefield

slek - top one is fresh the second one has dope colors but at the top of that e its looking wierd going down like that,dont do those lines ur doing around ur letters it doesnt look good

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe36.jpg


http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe37.jpg

the o is shit

Its all shit. If you lived near me I'd cross that shit out and hunt you down.

[pleasedontstayr]

^ Tofe either start over again. or fucking quit, hell ive been writing for 4 months and ive progressed more than you.

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

That tofe throwie isn't too bad

[FlippingChickens]

freak stfu or battle ur shit is toy aswell

[-Empty-Can-]

But that second thing is horrible.

[FlippingChickens]

i never said it was good,kids swear ima pull off some msk shit with only very little experience painting,ive probably only done like 10 peices..probably less..and freak my painted throwy would rape your throwy on paper, so stfu or battle..and pleasedontstayr you have been writing for only 4 months,dont get cocky with yourself toy, i have done more work than you in 1 week..real talk you people are on some fag shit,especially u freak talking about how u will hunt be down ur a fuckin clown

[pleasedontstayr]

4 months and i can already understand proper letter structure and bars better than you can. idc about how much shit youve painted. you shouldnt even be putting that on walls until you get it down PROPERLY.
anyways im not bringin anymore ebeef. just start taking crits and actually using the advice rather than just passing it by.

Edit: that tofe throwie has potential. but the 2nd thing is wack as fuck..

[-Empty-Can-]

i never said it was good,kids swear ima pull off some msk shit with only very little experience painting,ive probably only done like 10 peices..probably less..and freak my painted throwy would rape your throwy on paper, so stfu or battle..
I never said you were bad at painting. I meant that style is GARBAGE! Stop posting if you won't take crits.

I don't care to battle but I will.

[CareGr]

http://i41.tinypic.com/k9f5p2.jpg

Any crits before I ink?
Should I do 3d on this one?

[drOping]

CareGr- yea add some 3d! your D looks a little cramped top and bottom, clean up those cans too a little bit.

Tofe-you sometimes get ahead of yourself with letters, its ok I do too, its fun! that throw was not bad either, just keep doing shit, different stuff all the time, try new things, clean shit up.

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/5868/1003194q.jpg

[flask1995]

Damn man that's good, Diggin' the fill, but that S could use some work. but keep up the great work man.

CareGr - The D looks really cramped up and squished in that area.

http://i43.tinypic.com/nzrbdg.jpg

crits?

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Wait Says 'sezt' rite..or 'sezr'? I feel like the top of the z looks too plain add one em lil bars like at the bottom
If its an r then it looks pretty good if its a t it looks like an r

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Wait Says 'sezt' rite..or 'sezr'? I feel like the top of the z looks too plain add one em lil bars like at the bottom
If its an r then it looks pretty good if its a t it looks like an r

[pleasedontstayr]

my boy flask keeeeppin it real.
lookin nice man

[flask1995]

ahah thanks alot pleasedontstayr.

and @ Smokers187 It says Sezr. :p

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Aight then its on point

[FlippingChickens]

slek - im glad u understand the way i paint,i sometimes just like to have fun regardless of the outcome

empty - ill take the crits only if i can agree with them,period.

sezr - i think the z should go more down so it can fit with the rest of the letters and not be tilted like that..thats the best ive seen from u,keep practicing!

[-Empty-Can-]

empty - ill take the crits only if i can agree with them,period.
Obviously were not all gonna agree with each other. But that's the point of posting. To get other opinions and critique. If your just gonna disregard what everyone says because your opinions vary THEN STOP FUCKING POSTING!

[funhouseXcast]

http://i43.tinypic.com/nzrbdg.jpg

crits?

i like this. looks like some of my older stuff. i recommend one vanishing point, rather than a vanishing line.

[drOping]

sezr-i dont like the z resting up on the E

[RES4]

i like this. looks like some of my older stuff. i recommend one vanishing point, rather than a vanishing line.

it is a vanishing point, hes just cut it off. unless ive misunderstood what youve said

[LeaksOne]

i never said it was good,kids swear ima pull off some msk shit with only very little experience painting,ive probably only done like 10 peices..probably less..and freak my painted throwy would rape your throwy on paper, so stfu or battle..and pleasedontstayr you have been writing for only 4 months,dont get cocky with yourself toy, i have done more work than you in 1 week..real talk you people are on some fag shit,especially u freak talking about how u will hunt be down ur a fuckin clown

tofe real shit, you've been part of this site since nov 2008 and your progression looks like you started writing last month....you've listened to ONEof the tips i gave you since you've been on the site. you suck. you show no progression and whenever people try to give you honest crits you act like a little bitch. now im not trying to be a dick but honestly graff just might not be your thing. everytime you post you look like your trying SUPER hard. so either start over simple, and by simple i mean thats all you do. not going back to simples for a week then posting more of that whack ass style saying you got simples down. or you can just quit graff. real shit man.

[RES4]

crits?
http://i43.tinypic.com/14xl9wk.jpg

tofe-
lose the random shit at the ends of your bars all the connections and all the random bends

[CrustOner]

Fuck the Tot Black Books thread, the majority of you guys don't give decent crits, since none of you know what is right about it.. fuck man. Alright, I'll do it right now.
CareGr: Your crew is really called "Vandal Kids?" Oh wow. The character is overly generic, not to mention ugly. And wtf is up with his teeth? the letters are alright, except for that S, and those cans are hideous. If you're doing something simple, at least make it clean.
drOping: That's wack. You're getting way too ahead of yourself, and you don't understand proper letter structure yet. That background's pink cracks are pretty sick though. Go simpler.
Flask, your bar thickness is way off in most of those letters, and you should learn how to draw an uppercase R. Also, the E should overlap the Z, not the other way around. Best thing on the page though.

Tofe, you should quit graffiti. Because you suck. and you have a big head.

[gumOnShoe]

lol, i've seen this happen before.
like people writting for mad long without progression at all or only a tad bit if any.
i personally think the people that are like that don't know what to practice specifically, and that's what immobilizes them in terms of skill.
people need to learn what to practice or else they'll never progress, in my opinion.

[the cannabis evangelist]

iv said this soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo many times
practice letters
letters only
not peices not fills not arrows not anything but letters

lots and lots and lots of letters.

[RES4]

crits?
http://i43.tinypic.com/14xl9wk.jpg

tofe-
lose the random shit at the ends of your bars all the connections and all the random bends
bootom page

[MoganOne]

lol, i've seen this happen before.
like people writting for mad long without progression at all or only a tad bit if any.
i personally think the people that are like that don't know what to practice specifically, and that's what immobilizes them in terms of skill.
people need to learn what to practice or else they'll never progress, in my opinion.

This is so write... Also they need to learn the roots and appreciate graffiti art for what it is because without the love for it you will lose motivation without motivation you will not have any progress in your skills as a artist.

[CareGr]

Fuck the Tot Black Books thread, the majority of you guys don't give decent crits, since none of you know what is right about it.. fuck man. Alright, I'll do it right now.
CareGr: Your crew is really called "Vandal Kids?" Oh wow. The character is overly generic, not to mention ugly. And wtf is up with his teeth? the letters are alright, except for that S, and those cans are hideous. If you're doing something simple, at least make it clean.


Thanks for the crit, and I'm sorry but the crew name is nothing I have any control over.
First of all, the crew's been around since 2003-2004 (I didn't start before recently though) and they've been getting up a bit, so it would be pointless to not keep going with it. It could also be called "Vestkyst" which basically means Westcoast in norwegian.

Anyways, thanks for the crit, and the char is being modified, that was just a quick sketch.

Finished version will be up tommorow.
The cans are just a quick outline of what they're going to be too.

[Inlyn08]

Post moar pix pl0x

[CrustOner]

http://i41.tinypic.com/ndam9v.jpg

[drOping]

Thanks for the criticism, I know that I have some what of simples down.
I'm kind of just experimenting, but i will take your thoughts into consideration.
http://img199.imageshack.us/img199/4843/1003192xo.jpg
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/1964/1003183.jpg
http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/8153/1003184.jpg

[b SQUARED 08]

Slek: I'd say that you have the whole "keeping proportionate bars" portion of simples down. However, you've got no flow on the sketches I've seen from you. As I've said before, you've got all of the designs and colors down, and that's all fine and good, but the letters are what matter the most. Keep away from those awkward bends and work on developing a relative flow between your letters.
Crust: Lovin' your characs dude. Nice work.
Asper: I think you're onto something with the top sketch, but watch the sizes of your letters- looks like they get smaller as they go. As far as the bottom one goes, I'd avoid connecting your letters like that for now.

And it's been forever since I've posted sketches, but I've been practicing on girls' names on Facebook, so might as well post 'em up, huh? Comments are appreciated as always...
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj168/Griffery0508/Photo35.jpg
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj168/Griffery0508/Photo29.jpg

Oh, and preach Crust!! Lol, I agree, this thread has become WAY too inexperienced. Get better people!

[MoganOne]

http://i41.tinypic.com/ndam9v.jpg

Those are some dope ass characters in your sketch bro! I like how they all want a piece of that mic and dude is givin' them a chance to rock :p

[bzerkyetii]

the j needs some work
came up with it in about 3 minutes
really diggin the c
crits
http://i42.tinypic.com/25r01gx.jpg

[LeaksOne]

that says jog and stop cutting off your letters

[pleasedontstayr]

http://i39.tinypic.com/33eu8ol.jpg
crits? not a fan of the y.

[IllLogic]

my favorite of all the others you posted ^


i like the s im not really feelin the y tho

[MoganOne]

http://i39.tinypic.com/33eu8ol.jpg
crits? not a fan of the y.

The letters I like the most are the T and the A all the other letters are hurrting... I agree the Y is really off and does not fit. The R need more shape and structure because you got that bitch looking like a awkward A lol... I also noticed your shadow is off. Try making all the edges going one way or even picture a vanishing point. It should maake it look a lot cleaner bro trust me.
I can see that you are working with a permanent marker, I would suggest a pencil first.

[pleasedontstayr]

yeah thats probably the worst S ive ever done haha. im sketching in pencil and outlining later, for visibility. but overall thanks for the crit,

[Mr yarbles]

http://i42.tinypic.com/24xfjt4.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/1lytf.jpg

I'm not good at piecing but I'm learning haha

and that s is the best letter in that piece

B squared your shits dope

[pleasedontstayr]

E kinda looks like a C,

fixed it up, crits? http://i42.tinypic.com/2mxinow.jpg

[MoganOne]

E kinda looks like a C,

fixed it up, crits? http://i42.tinypic.com/2mxinow.jpg

Yo man what kind of medium are you using? because what ever i is it is not working for you bro... I think you should avoid those wack paint markers for now and focus on getting your letters to look better... Just use pencils and some ball point pens... You should try to practice your name as much as you can.. But also try practicing to write a lot of other random words... it will help a lot... Think small first then when you got that down go big... Again I like that T because it has a cool style to it...

[MoganOne]

That S" looks alright just take your time.

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture163.jpg
crits?

[pleasedontstayr]

yeah mogan i think im just gonna stick with pen and pencil just do it dark, cause the markers always fuck up the lines when i do it, legit before i outline it it always looks crisp as fuck and the markers just wreck it. its just a regular Blackbook page btw.

[weakfingers]

Crust I'm feeling those faces.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0003-2.jpg

[chikkenbone]

skwint-that N is steazyyy

[b SQUARED 08]

hpir: If that says Kane, it's lookin' pretty good from what I can tell. Lets see some color.
Skwint: Lookin' fresh man. My only complaint on this one is that bar floating in the middle of the W, just doesn't really fit too well, imo. Aside from that, that's a real nice simp though.

Aaaannndd another sketch for a chick on FB lol. It's how I'm gettin' in my practice, so whatevs lol. Crits/ comments appreciated.
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj168/Griffery0508/Photo30.jpg

[weakfingers]

That bar is just to fill dead space and to put a crew name in or something.

[One Evil]

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/1640/dscf5633.jpg (http://img69.imageshack.us/i/dscf5633.jpg/)
http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/391/dscf5630dx.jpg (http://img189.imageshack.us/i/dscf5630dx.jpg/)

a lot wrong with this one i know that
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/9099/dscf5634.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/i/dscf5634.jpg/)

CRITS :D

[Sanc_one]

Its been a really long time since i post here sumtin. Im pretty sure im not ready for big guys section yet :D.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3385/4574271927_25cbff7bd3.jpg

[MoganOne]

Its been a really long time since i post here sumtin. Im pretty sure im not ready for big guys section yet :D.
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3385/4574271927_25cbff7bd3.jpg

I like your style man good shit. I don't care for the blue flames outside the outline though

[StayHyE]

http://i42.tinypic.com/epop61.jpg


quick sketch im finally getting a flow going

[b SQUARED 08]

Armen, looks nice for a rough idea. Keep at it and you could develop something pretty tight out of that man.

Here's a word I did for a buddy of mine today:
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj168/Griffery0508/Photo32.jpg

[pleasedontstayr]

oh....my...god... im in love.

[LeaksOne]

b squared im not guna lie. although youve got that style down its missing something. that pic you drew up there looks like a middle school girl could easily pull that off. start playing around with the style more.

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i40.tinypic.com/sqs8qu.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/aoqavm.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/xp0top.jpg

[vox]

http://img96.imageshack.us/i/vox1.png/

This is my first sketch in a while, wanted to know what you guys thought.
Used to do a little bit when i was younger but i never got into it really.
Cheers

EDIT: Doesnt seem to have the image, an url is here though http://img96.imageshack.us/i/vox1.png/

[BlacktodaFuture]

cracks: stop doing canvas's until you have something good to put on them.

[YeahThatsMe]

can someone tell me how to post pics im new here

[-Empty-Can-]

photobucket

[YeahThatsMe]

Only been writing for alittle over a month so try not to be harsh
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/4579352371_456f472800.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4071/4579352623_204e4d6da8.j

[CrustOner]

Haha I saw a guy who writes "yeah" in this area. Makes me laugh every time I walk by.

[-Empty-Can-]

There's a yeah in detroit too.

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0504002358-1.jpg

Let me know what you guys think. He's gettin it tatted on his inner arm lol

[lord_plankton]

he would be better off if his name was mas and still quite a decision..

[StayHyE]

http://i43.tinypic.com/6opk6r.jpg

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Everythings fresh the S could use a lil tweaking tho imo *directed at mogan*

[MoganOne]

he would be better off if his name was mas and still quite a decision..

Its for his son bro lol... Mason is straight up his baby's real name.. He wants to get his sons name tatted on his arm this saturday... I will post the pic of the tatt soon

[YeahThatsMe]

Only been writing for alittle over a month so try not to be harsh
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/4579352371_456f472800.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4071/4579352623_204e4d6da8.j

Lookin for Crits don't care if other people write this word

[-Empty-Can-]

Mason- Good but those arrows = gay
yeah. Wherever your letters have sharp edge "cut" them off. If ya know what I mean. And A and H and kinda blaahhh..

[vox]

facepalm for earlier post, im trying to go straight to wildstyle, thats probably why i sucked before...

gonna practice my letters and handstyle for a while and just lurk. Great tutorials in the 'new to graff' section for anyone about to make my mistake...

[hpir]

http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture163.jpg
crits?
Bump

[Etcha]

not happy with this one. The A is totally wack and the 3D is off. But none the less up it goes.

http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/4789/dsc07890x.jpg

[RES4]

the one above looks better i think

[EYAR15]

my 1st post on this forum.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4063/4535063531_d7ba12af7c.jpg

[Freaker]

^ Wsp eyar?

[FlippingChickens]

eyar that y i dont like,i like the 3d..

magon i like everything besides the arrows

emba - top one is better

new throwy im working on


http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3279.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3280.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3274.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3273.jpg




http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3280.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

half of those say jofe.

[FlippingChickens]

alright ill work on that

yeah is from miami,dont write that

http://miamigraffiti.com/search.php?search=yeah&p=1

[take2]

sloppy
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/798a3b5f.jpg

[Primal]

http://i42.tinypic.com/35mhz0n.jpg
Disregard the fill, crayola markers suck dick xD

[Primal]

Oops, double post. D:

[Inlyn08]

http://i42.tinypic.com/35mhz0n.jpg
Disregard the fill, crayola markers suck dick xD
Tezo? I couldn't read that, until I looked at the hand. Slow down, S I M P L I F Y. Don't make the middle part of the E do that. Simplify, and try again. Oh, and leave fills alone for right now. Work on structure.

Yeah: Try "Maybe."
And yes the Tofe's do look like Jofe's. Not to repeat.

[Primal]

I'll try a simpler piece. I'll have it up tonight.

[Primal]

http://i42.tinypic.com/nv6x4x.jpg
I don't really like it, but whatever. I coulda used a different color scheme. This isn't a throwie btw..

[BlacktodaFuture]

go even simpler and use bars. read new to graffiti forum.

[LeaksOne]

whats going on with that E?

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03607.jpg?t=1273268867

broke the rules and had some fun.

[Inlyn08]

whats going on with that E?

If I was to "assume" I would say that the two bars are bending to connect to form a lowercase e? If that's not it, then I have no idea because that'd be one fubar'd capital E. Either way, it's not working.

Those bends do not, and will not work. Straight bar it all out, get that down solid. Simples, if you're not familiar with the term go to the "New to Graff" section or Google that. Eventually you'll be bending bars and all that spiffy crap, but if you're totally warping the foundation/ structure of the letter then...

http://holycrapthatsfunny.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/06/doing-it-wrong.jpg

[Meph*]

tezo- work on your tracing and bars

Safe- i like everything but the S..dont put it so far behind the A

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1-1.jpg

[Meph*]

tezo- work on your tracing and bars

Safe- i like everything but the S..dont put it so far behind the A

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1-1.jpg

[bzerkyetii]

http://i39.tinypic.com/2ciided.jpg
crits would be great
new and improved
made the c more pronounced

[ILL STREET BLUES]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/sketch.jpg i got 7 mack 11's

[Mr yarbles]

http://i42.tinypic.com/261j53b.jpg

I'm rolling hard right now hahhaha

[LeaksOne]

only thing i would say is revise the R. and make the bottom of the E look like the bottom of your C's

[Mr yarbles]

Yeah R's alwats were hard for me but whatever I did that in like hyper sppeed

[LeaksOne]

haha well for "hyper speed" thats pretty decent

[Mr yarbles]

haha thanks fool

[viseversa101]

try finishing the bottom



http://i39.tinypic.com/2ciided.jpg
crits would be great
new and improved
made the c more pronounced

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03608.jpg?t=1273341345

exchange for Separ.

[PRANEONE]

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5308/picture066mz.jpg
http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/4412/picture065cx.jpg

[RES4]

separ- the a looks as if its just threw in. it doesnt really work with the rest of the letters. the rest are good tho especially the s

stuff i did today

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4039/4589538207_5aa56d011a.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4049/4589537697_d430739741.jpg
just the outline for this so far, hopefully have it finished in a few days. it on really small paper too
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4062/4589537959_a5b8682d99.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

Feelin' that style. Only problem is the S. Make the middle just a diagonal slant rather than a few bars.

[RES4]

what do you mean?

[-Empty-Can-]

See how it's just a diagonal line instead of a few horizontal and vertical ones?
If that makes sense.

http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/sketch016Mediumfghj.jpg

[RES4]

oh yea i see now. ill try that thanks

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03544.jpg?t=1273355517

better example of what he is talking about.

[Meph*]

safe- very nice, and original, only thing id say is to practice on your character but even then he's not bad either

[Meph*]

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1-1.jpg

[MoganOne]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03544.jpg?t=1273355517

better example of what he is talking about.

Yo this "F" is wack... Try tweaking it... It does not fit with the style your strappin'

[ScAmeretoLme]

been a long time since i've posted anything
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll68/SocoAmeretoLime/0503101934-00.jpg

[Sesh-it-up]

im sick of seeing this toys wack ass book ^
NNEEEXXXT!

EDIT; talking bout safer

[BlacktodaFuture]

if you have something to say use the paint. other wise quit running your mouth bitch.

[ScAmeretoLme]

haha i was gonna say, i personally havent put anything up in ages, was a touch confused

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03608.jpg?t=1273341345

exchange for Separ.

bump this toy's wack ass book!

Amereto: i like the originality and the art but focus on structure. it's one of those situations where i like the graffiti as art but not as graffiti

asper: make all the bars the same size unless you are trying to do the thing where the bars get progressively bigger like a flair, other wise make it more evident that, that is what you are doing.

meph: i want to see a left to right piece. other wise it's not too bad just work on flowing it better. and make the 3-d go to one point for the whole word instead of different points for different letters.

[Sesh-it-up]

http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/sketch016Mediumfghj.jpg


id let that run, but i wouldnt let anything from safe... goin to bomb peace toys.

[Sesh-it-up]

lol ps safe fag... kfc is alredy a huge crew from the uk :D

[BlacktodaFuture]

p.s. sesh it up.

kfc is also a restaurant and it for a inside joke :D

[Freaker]

Nice shit black, don't mind the skinny letters, but still good...


http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5554/picture38w.jpg

Seperation in the book fucked up my E. Otherwise, anything else bad?

[ILL STREET BLUES]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/orange3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/orange1.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/orange2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/bannana2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/bannana.jpg
they say its lonely at the top but whatever you do, you always got to watch mother fuckers around you

[A356]

Some recent shit...
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z47/bhusari/ART/IMG_4327.jpg

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z47/bhusari/ART/graf1.jpg

That one for a friend who has his own site for story writing, poems etc check it out
http://www.yourtwocents.co.uk/

[lord_plankton]

A356 you have some nice background goin on but your letter structure needs work..actually in the 2nd pic the letter aint too bad and match up

Nice shit black, don't mind the skinny letters, but still good...


http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5554/picture38w.jpg

Seperation in the book fucked up my E. Otherwise, anything else bad?

i bet it wouldve fit on one page...its not that huge and is spaced out poorly..ak way too much space, fr little to no... safes paper less complicated..

[ILL STREET BLUES]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/flavainyaear.jpg now lets here the verbal diarrhea

[MoganOne]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/flavainyaear.jpg now lets here the verbal diarrhea

Cool fill... Your shadows are all over the place though lol

[ILL STREET BLUES]

yea iknow there un proportioned

[graff4ever]

http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/flavainyaear.jpg now lets here the verbal diarrhea

man u need 2 work with some bars

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Just some quick shit I've had in my mind for a while. Don't care much for constructive crits just say whether you like it/hate it..or anything along those lines would be appreciated...
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDA5NzUtMjAxMDA1MDktMTI1M.jpg
Says GS kings

[RES4]

hate the first s
like kings

some unfinished stuff
http://i43.tinypic.com/2q9vyix.jpg
really bad pic but supposed to be guru

http://i40.tinypic.com/3497z90.jpg

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Ya the ruff draft s looked better but I couldn't do it the same but thanks and the bottom one is clean
That guru one is looking pretty legit wana see it done

[thepekins]

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8247/scan0002ao.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002ao.jpg)

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/5156/scan0001xa.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001xa.jpg)

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2651/scan0002hu.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002hu.jpg)

[2FNK?]

http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/coldhardclimber/IMG00165-20100510-2026.jpg

Yeah, I know I suck. Crit's/comments?

[thepekins]

clean it up. Have a solid color fill for now and just work on letter structure. sketch it out in pencil. and get a new name imo

[graff4ever]

yeah what he said skecth it out in pencil first also use bars and get rid of the wavy shit 4 now

[RES4]

how about give crits if you want them

[massacreman]

ah RES finally someone whos sharing my opinion.
damn morons screaming for attention

[2FNK?]

Thanks for the crits, I'll work on my shit.

[lord_plankton]

i think thats fucked up.. id not expect someone who clearly sucks to crit my stuff...its nonsense, it does not help, i wouldnt give 2shits about the opinion of someone who has no idea what hes doing..and instead of sayin ey! you dont get crits if you dont give em you could have used your time to give him a lil advise..fnk just go black n white n do your stuff over n over again guess thats the most valid advise for all who r seekin for help fill about 2 books n see what you got in the end

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

i think thats fucked up.. id not expect someone who clearly sucks to crit my stuff...its nonsense, it does not help, i wouldnt give 2shits about the opinion of someone who has no idea what hes doing..and instead of sayin ey! you dont get crits if you dont give em you could have used your time to give him a lil advise..fnk just go black n white n do your stuff over n over again guess thats the most valid advise for all who r seekin for help fill about 2 books n see what you got in the end

Definately right, although they should atleast comment it if they like it or not
But I remeber I was new on here I didn't even know you were suppozed to

[RES4]

i think thats fucked up.. id not expect someone who clearly sucks to crit my stuff...its nonsense, it does not help, i wouldnt give 2shits about the opinion of someone who has no idea what hes doing..and instead of sayin ey! you dont get crits if you dont give em you could have used your time to give him a lil advise..fnk just go black n white n do your stuff over n over again guess thats the most valid advise for all who r seekin for help fill about 2 books n see what you got in the end

were not asking them to write an essay about it, just say whats good or bad about it. its not hard

[Meph*]

2fnk- i would suggest keep it green inside the letters and use yellow as the forcefield, but lose the wavy shit asap.

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/1_1-1.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1-2.jpg

should i color the first one?..n should i outline the green goo with black sharpie on the second one?

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-11_1048.jpg
sharpie freestyle while waiting at the dmv i didnt get to finish though

[thepekins]

mevsr- not bad I would get rid of the extensions on the M and the thing on the bottom of the V, and clean up the lines a little to make the letter a little more even

meph- I like that second one a lot. I wouldn't outline the green but suit yourself

fukew- pretty good for a freestyle, I always have to sketch my shit out in pencil. I don't like the cut thing in the middle of the E

noticed I havent had crits on my shit. Hmmmm....

and massacremen why you gotta call us morons? everyone here wants to get better whats moronic about that? And like plankton said, there's no need for the cats who are brand new to graff to give crits when they don't even know what they're talking about yet.

[2FNK?]

thepekins, I could try and give you some crits from just what looks good and shit, if you repost your shit. I looked back a page or so, and couldn't find anything. Thanks for the crits, I've been working on my shit today. Got one sketch done, but didn't use bars, which I need to start doing.

[thepekins]

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8247/scan0002ao.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002ao.jpg)

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/5156/scan0001xa.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001xa.jpg)

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2651/scan0002hu.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002hu.jpg)

i was on the last page can you see them now?

[MoganOne]

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8247/scan0002ao.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002ao.jpg)

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/5156/scan0001xa.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001xa.jpg)

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2651/scan0002hu.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002hu.jpg)

i was on the last page can you see them now?

The E in the middle one looks pretty decent... I would not sugest markering up the background like that. And I don't really care for your fills lol

[thepekins]

I don't usually do the background like that, those times it was just cus I fucked up what I was trying to do with it. And yeah that fill in the second pic is pretty bad, i was experimenting but failed. I'll try to sketch up some better shit tonight to post

[AMERO]

I really like the first one, but the second one not too much, change the background bro, but keep up the work!

[haze4life]

Sucks to hear this but go simpler waze... you're getting ahead of youreself structure wise... which is the only real thing that matters in the toy bb section IMO.

[Stussy]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1331/4599427341_35c3ece2da_o.jpg

[Meph*]

moganone- i only like the letters of the last one...u need to work on ur colors i think.

stussy- i like the style i think it would look crazy with some bright colors n a outline

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1-2.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/th_1_1-1.jpg
..crits

[thepekins]

http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/9263/scan0003lf.jpg (http://img94.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0003lf.jpg)

an e I sketched up while I was at my bros house

[viseversa101]

^^grow up

[thepekins]

lol? its the toy thread man. chill out. and how bout actually givin me a crit so that i can get better

[thepekins]

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/7498/scan0006y.jpg (http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0006y.jpg)
i dont really like this but...

[thepekins]

Stussy- I like it, i would make the letters solid and get rid of the arrows on the R

[Stussy]

says the guy with the gap letter and giant arrows. haha
work on simples thepekins.

[AMERO]

crits please?

[Shay70]

stussy- next time make sure the hookups are evened out, but dont take them out fully

[kew1]

mevsr- not bad I would get rid of the extensions on the M and the thing on the bottom of the V, and clean up the lines a little to make the letter a little more even

meph- I like that second one a lot. I wouldn't outline the green but suit yourself

fukew- pretty good for a freestyle, I always have to sketch my shit out in pencil. I don't like the cut thing in the middle of the E

noticed I havent had crits on my shit. Hmmmm....

and massacremen why you gotta call us morons? everyone here wants to get better whats moronic about that? And like plankton said, there's no need for the cats who are brand new to graff to give crits when they don't even know what they're talking about yet.
all i have to say dude is bars u lack seriously in that department

[kew1]

waze man ur doing the same exact shit i use to do u r gettin ahead of urself bad my dude it took me awhile to realize it to but ur not gonna get any better till u realize that. work on simples. no extensions no add ons no chips no arrows none of that stuff just pure letters then once u start to see some flow and bars in ur shit then start doing more complex shit

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-11_1048.jpg
sharpie freestyle while waiting at the dmv i didnt get to finish though

bottom page bump

[LeaksOne]

waze start over simple

amero i only see a M and E. throw away everything youve dont and start fresh and simple

fukew the E and W are ugly and it looks like your trying hard

[RES4]

fukew make the main bar in each letter go in the same direction to make it flow better. the letters arent bad on there own you just need to make them look good with eachother

[thepekins]

waze man ur doing the same exact shit i use to do u r gettin ahead of urself bad my dude it took me awhile to realize it to but ur not gonna get any better till u realize that. work on simples. no extensions no add ons no chips no arrows none of that stuff just pure letters then once u start to see some flow and bars in ur shit then start doing more complex shit

Yeah thats what Ive been doing lately but Im having I guess what you'd call writers block right now, all this stuff Ive posted is from a couple months ago.

here's a simpler sketch, the characs awful

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/9734/scan0005sx.jpg (http://img46.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0005sx.jpg)


http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/5092/scan0004nc.jpg (http://img14.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0004nc.jpg)

[kew1]

that wat i mean dude keep doing that. lose the arrow on the w though dont add anything to ur letters and make the middle bar on the w,a,z,and e al the same width and ur good man

[LeaksOne]

and make your letters closer

[thepekins]

http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/6883/scan0005nx.jpg (http://img571.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0005nx.jpg)

just sketched this up. real real blazed not sure if its any good

[LeaksOne]

replace the X in the A with a triangle and remove the block on top of the Z

[lord_plankton]

that wat i mean dude keep doing that. lose the arrow on the w though dont add anything to ur letters and make the middle bar on the w,a,z,and e al the same width and ur good man

kew, you should listen to your own advise, the way you cut break bend your letters is still akward..

[kew1]

yea ik but i really want that style i will eventually get the hang of it but im not gonna if i dont keep trying

[viseversa101]

wanted to post sumthin......


http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11064.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11065.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11066.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11067.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11068.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11069.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11070.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11071.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11072.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11073.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11074.jpg

[thepekins]

yea ik but i really want that style i will eventually get the hang of it but im not gonna if i dont keep trying

wait... this is what i was doing but then YOU told me to do simples :confused:


VICE- that shit is all pretty sloppy. And that throw needs to changed a lot. Mostly just clean it all up, maybe stay with pencil for a while imo

[A356]

Some recent shit...
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z47/bhusari/ART/IMG_4327.jpg

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z47/bhusari/ART/graf1.jpg

That one for a friend who has his own site for story writing, poems etc check it out
http://www.yourtwocents.co.uk/

Bump for crits

[lord_plankton]

A356 you have some nice background goin on but your letter structure needs work..actually in the 2nd pic the letter aint too bad and match up

this is what i told you in the first place...let me expand on it..that london is T rash !! you have understanding of color shade etc. but the letter hurt big time
chop off all that stupid cuts n breaks n whatnot match the barwidth..id even fatten em up a lil , spacing and placing is good so far...well your overlapping is super gay..

for the 2nd piece. as i said, anint too bad overall, your letters aint beauty but they match up , i hate huge 3d.. now stop bumping

vise, it def. looks all shaky n shit, i love number 5..adorable robot..background n fills dont really contribute...oh didnt you say ull do me another exch??

[kew1]

wait... this is what i was doing but then YOU told me to do simples :confused:


VICE- that shit is all pretty sloppy. And that throw needs to changed a lot. Mostly just clean it all up, maybe stay with pencil for a while imo

ik thats what u were doing but u wernt going anywhere with it u have to get down and understand bars first. which happens by doing simples. u need to learn a lil more basics be4 trying 2 get a style all though i have no room to say any of this to but its just my opinion. do wat u want.

[Stussy]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1428/4604627456_4b15e85c0b_o.jpg
goya

[StayHyE]

http://i40.tinypic.com/zufep0.jpg

[RES4]

in the bottom one the drop shadow needs to be the same for each letter. its hard to explain but imagine the light coming from top right. the shadow will be at the bootom left of each letter, you know what i mean?

[StayHyE]

yeah i got it now that you mention it, it does look weird.... its for my friends kid he wants me to do a canvas which ive never done, and he wants a robot theme...i dont know if that means robot style letters too

[RES4]

i would go for one of the top two. maybe the right

make it look all shiny and shit

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

http://i40.tinypic.com/zufep0.jpg

Definately the one to the right or the 2nd row one but maybe take of the stars, clean shit yo

[v12]

http://i40.tinypic.com/auxcer.jpg

[AMERO]

crits please?

[IllLogic]

cant really tell what it says b.c of the splatters, other than that it looks pretty dope. your 3-d is hot i dont really care for the blue boxes though.

[AMERO]

it says AMERO. i dont know why i did the splatters lol, but thanks man

[.nolove.]

your name is very similar to mind.i dislike that...





















we must duel to the death for rights to names that are totally different yet similar in sound.ONGUARD!

[.nolove.]

your name is very similar to mind.i dislike that...





















we must duel to the death for rights to names that are totally different yet similar in sound.ONGUARD!

[AMERO]

my name?..

["awesome"ONE]

amero, your in over your head, start simple work up

keyboard letters yo

[v12]

foreeelz

[ManikOner]

lol....

i havent posted here in a while. heres something i did before i went to do some finals

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/1427/dsc00217z.jpg

[-Empty-Can-]

some simple shit.
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/simples001Medium.jpg
backwards
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/simples003Medium.jpg

http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/simples002Medium.jpg
blockbuster

gonna redraw these soon. crits it

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03609.jpg?t=1273802412

crits?

Me: i need crits on the S and A flow, and anything else that pops into your head.

Stot: bottom one is the best. paint it.

Ram: BARS. new to graffiti forum. read it.

[flask1995]

move the middle bar from the A more down, and that leg kicking inside the A just remove it cause it looks like shit

[-Empty-Can-]

Yo flask. I have that throw done i just never flicked it. ill post it in a minute

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-13_1152.jpg
not finished

[FlippingChickens]

stot - fix the shadow on the r on the last one..the reverse is cool..the middle one had pottential but the 2nd t connected with the o doesnt looks good,i also think the black forcefield needs to be thicker and the middle bar of your s needs to flow more..

fukew - not to be an ass,but the w just killed the whole peice.

safe - really like that man

manik - go simplir,i dont really like how your making a throwup look like a peice

v12 - the a is really nice

been working on these the past few days,finally done..

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3295.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3293.jpg

[Crafty]

fist and secound drawings plz comment.
1
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/6462/dsc07921c.jpg
2
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5371/dsc07922h.jpg

[Meph*]

Faze- i like the black one looks nice, i like the style the purple outline kinda killed it though

tofe- those drawings came out sick, n yeh that pencil came out better than i thought

["awesome"ONE]

bump this toy's wack ass book!

Amereto: i like the originality and the art but focus on structure. it's one of those situations where i like the graffiti as art but not as graffiti

asper: make all the bars the same size unless you are trying to do the thing where the bars get progressively bigger like a flair, other wise make it more evident that, that is what you are doing.

meph: i want to see a left to right piece. other wise it's not too bad just work on flowing it better. and make the 3-d go to one point for the whole word instead of different points for different letters.
hey safer, why dont you always use that style its really ill, i dont like the r though

[Fury]

^ That you, markingz or prefer?

["awesome"ONE]

?? who are those people? my screename isnt what i write, please enlighten me on what your talking about.

[Fury]

Prefer/Markingz. writes Awesome, and I assumed from your username that you could be him.

[Stussy]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1344/4607862860_a65a8dcfdd_o.jpg
been sketching a lot lately.

[zaco]

lol....

i havent posted here in a while. heres something i did before i went to do some finals

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/1427/dsc00217z.jpg

as in ram records? thats whats up

[kace91]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1344/4607862860_a65a8dcfdd_o.jpg
been sketching a lot lately.

im a toy, so dont trust much my opinion, but i think that A looks too like an R

excepting that, i think its dope.

[Stussy]

I can see where you see a R but its just an A with a chunk takin out. I would say it looks more like an A than R though.

[thepekins]

stussy that looks real good.b but the a does kinda look like an r. i really think it sould be a lkittl emore solid than broken up like that but it still looks real relaz good as it is. when yuou gonna ink it uopp"

["awesome"ONE]

Prefer/Markingz. writes Awesome, and I assumed from your username that you could be him.
dont know either of them, must be someone else

[weird dough]

http://i39.tinypic.com/4zw26p.jpg

from years ago.

[BoomSlang]

just getting back into things myself after about a 20 year hiatus.

ya can tell i am not up to scratch yet from the eraser marks lol.

crits please as i will be looking to expand and perfect different styles as i go.

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/graff/Boom1.jpg

and damn i cant wait for my copics to come in this week. lame assed markers really dont help the cause much =oX

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/graff/Diesel.jpg

[lord_plankton]

yeah, youve got the right idea on the second one, spacing, overlap is alright but dont chop ya letters that much n some of em hurt, id say round your d straighten your i n open your s as first step.

[BoomSlang]

thanks for the input, relearning something that used to be fairly easy 20 years ago is a pain in my ass.
i will give those ideas some thought and see how my next one turns out

[KRE1]

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1344/4607862860_a65a8dcfdd_o.jpg
been sketching a lot lately.

man, i gotta say, i definitely liked your older style a whole lot more. that one throw up you did a while back, that giant white one, DOPE.

why the change?

[thepekins]

man, i gotta say, i definitely liked your older style a whole lot more. that one throw up you did a while back, that giant white one, DOPE.

why the change?

i concur

ssome stuff i sketched in school

http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5426/scan0006ns.jpg (http://img29.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0006ns.jpg)

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/2886/scan0007w.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0007w.jpg)

i hate the charac looks fuckin wierd

[Mr.posh]

Half assed sketch at 12:00 pm.
Crits?

[soath]

Half assed sketch at 12:00 pm.
Crits?


no offense, does that say TERD? I have seen this style a lot, the R (if it is an R) has to long of a bar and to skinny in my opinion.
the first letter and last are a little to... elusive (i am really trying to not sound like an ass, especially since i am so toy) make ur word BOLDER, so even the untrained eye can read it then do additional things... my .02

sick of all the hate

[thepekins]

like soath said, the first and last letters are hard to figure out. looks like SERO to me but i have no idea

[thepekins]

http://i39.tinypic.com/4zw26p.jpg

from years ago.
looks fucking cool. too bad i cant read any of the letters go waaaayyy simpler

[soath]

i concur

ssome stuff i sketched in school

http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5426/scan0006ns.jpg (http://img29.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0006ns.jpg)

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/2886/scan0007w.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0007w.jpg)

i hate the charac looks fuckin wierd

yeah the dude sorta sucks... try drawing more simple... get this book the natural way to draw (it's old school) the bulbous top of ur Z looks a little weird to me and the W should match the E more... I mean on the red one, my .02

peace

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Boomslang-like the second one the fill is clean
Weird dough-looks like OST at first look but then I saw that you put water on the top left so I'm thinkin it says WAT, looks good don't like what I'm thinkin is the 'W' and 'T'
Stussy- hate the Z everything else is clean as fluck
Sero-just like that E
And waze..well I think there's already enough people helping u/telling u the same thing, keep at it tho

[CrustOner]

Weird Dough, the effect on the top left is fucking sick.

[Stussy]

man, i gotta say, i definitely liked your older style a whole lot more. that one throw up you did a while back, that giant white one, DOPE.

why the change?
Giant throw up?
I changed because the style i was doing was way over used and wasnt challenging me like i would it too. The shit im doing now is a bit more challenging, has some DC style with some funk thrown in.

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://i40.tinypic.com/s3d2e1.jpg

http://i44.tinypic.com/34qo7si.jpg

says SPARE, S is totally whack so I cropped it

obviously still working on this

[Meph*]

spare- u should finish the letters with 3d and outline, and the characters nice but is that a crystal ball hes holding?

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/bujil.jpg

crits..i did the corner design for fun

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

yeah its a crystal ball orb or something

keep on drawing

[thepekins]

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3239/scan0008f.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0008f.jpg)

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-13_1152.jpg
not finished

bump for crits

[kew1]

i dig the somber throwie except the twirly thing in the B

[pleasedontstayr]

fukew you were already told to fix the W

[kew1]

ok well obviously i cant. i was just wondering if there was anything else like if people like it or not.

[thepekins]

I like it. the green in the 3-d looks kinda wierd though

[Mr.posh]

no offense, does that say TERD? I have seen this style a lot, the R (if it is an R) has to long of a bar and to skinny in my opinion.
the first letter and last are a little to... elusive (i am really trying to not sound like an ass, especially since i am so toy) make ur word BOLDER, so even the untrained eye can read it then do additional things... my .02

sick of all the hate

Thanks for the crit man, it says sero but i was just fucking around with a random word and style.

[soath]

^ no problem. yeah, it is a style, and it is good to have other styles down for sure but i still am learning basic graff letters and structure and it's best to have a handle on 'em first. then branch out from there, ya gotta walk b4 ya run. peace.

KEw1: unlike peking I LIKE the green 3d, i never us effects like that but I think a simple thing like that really brings a simp like urs up a notch. IF i was u I would trace those letters without the 3d, then erase the top 1/4 of each letter, the point are all going of in diff directions but ur 3d doesn't follow, like acording to the points, if dem are st8, the letters are turned in (some) and out (others). try what i said and repost if you want anymore from me. peace.

[soath]

CYTO: no diss but I do not like ur guy. it's like a 15 yr olds doodle, no offense really, thereis this book the natural way to draw, i think it is a essential before folks try to draw charecters and shit. whatever, no offense really, the letters look RIGHT, just maybe try drawing other thinks... more simple, cups and fruit. check out hat book it helped me a hundy. peace.

[soath]

i dig the somber throwie except the twirly thing in the B

word.

[weird dough]

looks fucking cool. too bad i cant read any of the letters go waaaayyy simpler

yeah, that was my problem with my old style. it says xater. i'll try to post up some newer stuff.

and @CrustOner. thanks for the props, G.

[KRE1]

Giant throw up?
I changed because the style i was doing was way over used and wasnt challenging me like i would it too. The shit im doing now is a bit more challenging, has some DC style with some funk thrown in.

i can understand that. good for you trying new things.

old shit for chit chatting.
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/1831/014dm.jpg
and something a lil newer.
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/7830/008yq.jpg
never going to finish either.