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Meph*
05-07-2010, 09:41 PM
tezo- work on your tracing and bars

Safe- i like everything but the S..dont put it so far behind the A

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1-1.jpg

Meph*
05-07-2010, 09:43 PM
tezo- work on your tracing and bars

Safe- i like everything but the S..dont put it so far behind the A

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1-1.jpg

bzerkyetii
05-07-2010, 10:36 PM
http://i39.tinypic.com/2ciided.jpg
crits would be great
new and improved
made the c more pronounced

ILL STREET BLUES
05-07-2010, 11:11 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/sketch.jpg i got 7 mack 11's

Mr yarbles
05-08-2010, 01:40 AM
http://i42.tinypic.com/261j53b.jpg

I'm rolling hard right now hahhaha

LeaksOne
05-08-2010, 01:48 AM
only thing i would say is revise the R. and make the bottom of the E look like the bottom of your C's

Mr yarbles
05-08-2010, 01:51 AM
Yeah R's alwats were hard for me but whatever I did that in like hyper sppeed

LeaksOne
05-08-2010, 01:52 AM
haha well for "hyper speed" thats pretty decent

Mr yarbles
05-08-2010, 02:32 AM
haha thanks fool

viseversa101
05-08-2010, 12:53 PM
try finishing the bottom



http://i39.tinypic.com/2ciided.jpg
crits would be great
new and improved
made the c more pronounced

BlacktodaFuture
05-08-2010, 12:57 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03608.jpg?t=1273341345

exchange for Separ.

PRANEONE
05-08-2010, 04:12 PM
http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5308/picture066mz.jpg
http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/4412/picture065cx.jpg

RES4
05-08-2010, 04:13 PM
separ- the a looks as if its just threw in. it doesnt really work with the rest of the letters. the rest are good tho especially the s

stuff i did today

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4039/4589538207_5aa56d011a.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4049/4589537697_d430739741.jpg
just the outline for this so far, hopefully have it finished in a few days. it on really small paper too
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4062/4589537959_a5b8682d99.jpg

-Empty-Can-
05-08-2010, 04:21 PM
Feelin' that style. Only problem is the S. Make the middle just a diagonal slant rather than a few bars.

RES4
05-08-2010, 04:23 PM
what do you mean?

-Empty-Can-
05-08-2010, 04:27 PM
See how it's just a diagonal line instead of a few horizontal and vertical ones?
If that makes sense.

http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/sketch016Mediumfghj.jpg

RES4
05-08-2010, 04:31 PM
oh yea i see now. ill try that thanks

BlacktodaFuture
05-08-2010, 04:52 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03544.jpg?t=1273355517

better example of what he is talking about.

Meph*
05-08-2010, 06:43 PM
safe- very nice, and original, only thing id say is to practice on your character but even then he's not bad either

Meph*
05-08-2010, 06:46 PM
http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1-1.jpg

MoganOne
05-08-2010, 08:13 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03544.jpg?t=1273355517

better example of what he is talking about.

Yo this "F" is wack... Try tweaking it... It does not fit with the style your strappin'

ScAmeretoLme
05-08-2010, 08:41 PM
been a long time since i've posted anything
http://i285.photobucket.com/albums/ll68/SocoAmeretoLime/0503101934-00.jpg

Sesh-it-up
05-08-2010, 08:42 PM
im sick of seeing this toys wack ass book ^
NNEEEXXXT!

EDIT; talking bout safer

BlacktodaFuture
05-08-2010, 08:45 PM
if you have something to say use the paint. other wise quit running your mouth bitch.

ScAmeretoLme
05-08-2010, 08:45 PM
haha i was gonna say, i personally havent put anything up in ages, was a touch confused

BlacktodaFuture
05-08-2010, 08:50 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03608.jpg?t=1273341345

exchange for Separ.

bump this toy's wack ass book!

Amereto: i like the originality and the art but focus on structure. it's one of those situations where i like the graffiti as art but not as graffiti

asper: make all the bars the same size unless you are trying to do the thing where the bars get progressively bigger like a flair, other wise make it more evident that, that is what you are doing.

meph: i want to see a left to right piece. other wise it's not too bad just work on flowing it better. and make the 3-d go to one point for the whole word instead of different points for different letters.

Sesh-it-up
05-08-2010, 08:54 PM
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/sketch016Mediumfghj.jpg


id let that run, but i wouldnt let anything from safe... goin to bomb peace toys.

Sesh-it-up
05-08-2010, 08:57 PM
lol ps safe fag... kfc is alredy a huge crew from the uk :D

BlacktodaFuture
05-08-2010, 09:09 PM
p.s. sesh it up.

kfc is also a restaurant and it for a inside joke :D

Freaker
05-09-2010, 12:20 AM
Nice shit black, don't mind the skinny letters, but still good...


http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5554/picture38w.jpg

Seperation in the book fucked up my E. Otherwise, anything else bad?

ILL STREET BLUES
05-09-2010, 01:51 AM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/orange3.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/orange1.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/orange2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/bannana2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/bannana.jpg
they say its lonely at the top but whatever you do, you always got to watch mother fuckers around you

A356
05-09-2010, 04:23 AM
Some recent shit...
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z47/bhusari/ART/IMG_4327.jpg

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z47/bhusari/ART/graf1.jpg

That one for a friend who has his own site for story writing, poems etc check it out
http://www.yourtwocents.co.uk/

lord_plankton
05-09-2010, 04:37 AM
A356 you have some nice background goin on but your letter structure needs work..actually in the 2nd pic the letter aint too bad and match up

Nice shit black, don't mind the skinny letters, but still good...


http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5554/picture38w.jpg

Seperation in the book fucked up my E. Otherwise, anything else bad?

i bet it wouldve fit on one page...its not that huge and is spaced out poorly..ak way too much space, fr little to no... safes paper less complicated..

ILL STREET BLUES
05-09-2010, 12:15 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/flavainyaear.jpg now lets here the verbal diarrhea

MoganOne
05-09-2010, 12:50 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/flavainyaear.jpg now lets here the verbal diarrhea

Cool fill... Your shadows are all over the place though lol

ILL STREET BLUES
05-09-2010, 07:12 PM
yea iknow there un proportioned

graff4ever
05-10-2010, 05:12 AM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/flavainyaear.jpg now lets here the verbal diarrhea

man u need 2 work with some bars

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-10-2010, 11:47 AM
Just some quick shit I've had in my mind for a while. Don't care much for constructive crits just say whether you like it/hate it..or anything along those lines would be appreciated...
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDA5NzUtMjAxMDA1MDktMTI1M.jpg
Says GS kings

RES4
05-10-2010, 12:12 PM
hate the first s
like kings

some unfinished stuff
http://i43.tinypic.com/2q9vyix.jpg
really bad pic but supposed to be guru

http://i40.tinypic.com/3497z90.jpg

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-10-2010, 12:27 PM
Ya the ruff draft s looked better but I couldn't do it the same but thanks and the bottom one is clean
That guru one is looking pretty legit wana see it done

thepekins
05-10-2010, 01:44 PM
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8247/scan0002ao.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002ao.jpg)

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/5156/scan0001xa.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001xa.jpg)

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2651/scan0002hu.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002hu.jpg)

2FNK?
05-10-2010, 07:53 PM
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/coldhardclimber/IMG00165-20100510-2026.jpg

Yeah, I know I suck. Crit's/comments?

thepekins
05-10-2010, 07:59 PM
clean it up. Have a solid color fill for now and just work on letter structure. sketch it out in pencil. and get a new name imo

graff4ever
05-11-2010, 12:44 AM
yeah what he said skecth it out in pencil first also use bars and get rid of the wavy shit 4 now

RES4
05-11-2010, 04:10 AM
how about give crits if you want them

massacreman
05-11-2010, 05:19 AM
ah RES finally someone whos sharing my opinion.
damn morons screaming for attention

2FNK?
05-11-2010, 06:20 AM
Thanks for the crits, I'll work on my shit.

lord_plankton
05-11-2010, 10:18 AM
i think thats fucked up.. id not expect someone who clearly sucks to crit my stuff...its nonsense, it does not help, i wouldnt give 2shits about the opinion of someone who has no idea what hes doing..and instead of sayin ey! you dont get crits if you dont give em you could have used your time to give him a lil advise..fnk just go black n white n do your stuff over n over again guess thats the most valid advise for all who r seekin for help fill about 2 books n see what you got in the end

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-11-2010, 10:42 AM
i think thats fucked up.. id not expect someone who clearly sucks to crit my stuff...its nonsense, it does not help, i wouldnt give 2shits about the opinion of someone who has no idea what hes doing..and instead of sayin ey! you dont get crits if you dont give em you could have used your time to give him a lil advise..fnk just go black n white n do your stuff over n over again guess thats the most valid advise for all who r seekin for help fill about 2 books n see what you got in the end

Definately right, although they should atleast comment it if they like it or not
But I remeber I was new on here I didn't even know you were suppozed to

RES4
05-11-2010, 12:34 PM
i think thats fucked up.. id not expect someone who clearly sucks to crit my stuff...its nonsense, it does not help, i wouldnt give 2shits about the opinion of someone who has no idea what hes doing..and instead of sayin ey! you dont get crits if you dont give em you could have used your time to give him a lil advise..fnk just go black n white n do your stuff over n over again guess thats the most valid advise for all who r seekin for help fill about 2 books n see what you got in the end

were not asking them to write an essay about it, just say whats good or bad about it. its not hard

Meph*
05-11-2010, 01:42 PM
2fnk- i would suggest keep it green inside the letters and use yellow as the forcefield, but lose the wavy shit asap.

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/1_1-1.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1-2.jpg

should i color the first one?..n should i outline the green goo with black sharpie on the second one?

kew1
05-11-2010, 02:28 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-11_1048.jpg
sharpie freestyle while waiting at the dmv i didnt get to finish though

thepekins
05-11-2010, 02:55 PM
mevsr- not bad I would get rid of the extensions on the M and the thing on the bottom of the V, and clean up the lines a little to make the letter a little more even

meph- I like that second one a lot. I wouldn't outline the green but suit yourself

fukew- pretty good for a freestyle, I always have to sketch my shit out in pencil. I don't like the cut thing in the middle of the E

noticed I havent had crits on my shit. Hmmmm....

and massacremen why you gotta call us morons? everyone here wants to get better whats moronic about that? And like plankton said, there's no need for the cats who are brand new to graff to give crits when they don't even know what they're talking about yet.

2FNK?
05-11-2010, 03:21 PM
thepekins, I could try and give you some crits from just what looks good and shit, if you repost your shit. I looked back a page or so, and couldn't find anything. Thanks for the crits, I've been working on my shit today. Got one sketch done, but didn't use bars, which I need to start doing.

thepekins
05-11-2010, 03:28 PM
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8247/scan0002ao.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002ao.jpg)

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/5156/scan0001xa.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001xa.jpg)

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2651/scan0002hu.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002hu.jpg)

i was on the last page can you see them now?

MoganOne
05-11-2010, 04:55 PM
http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/8247/scan0002ao.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002ao.jpg)

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/5156/scan0001xa.jpg (http://img210.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001xa.jpg)

http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/2651/scan0002hu.jpg (http://img263.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002hu.jpg)

i was on the last page can you see them now?

The E in the middle one looks pretty decent... I would not sugest markering up the background like that. And I don't really care for your fills lol

thepekins
05-11-2010, 05:42 PM
I don't usually do the background like that, those times it was just cus I fucked up what I was trying to do with it. And yeah that fill in the second pic is pretty bad, i was experimenting but failed. I'll try to sketch up some better shit tonight to post

AMERO
05-11-2010, 06:05 PM
I really like the first one, but the second one not too much, change the background bro, but keep up the work!

haze4life
05-11-2010, 06:17 PM
Sucks to hear this but go simpler waze... you're getting ahead of youreself structure wise... which is the only real thing that matters in the toy bb section IMO.

Stussy
05-11-2010, 06:31 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1331/4599427341_35c3ece2da_o.jpg

Meph*
05-11-2010, 07:06 PM
moganone- i only like the letters of the last one...u need to work on ur colors i think.

stussy- i like the style i think it would look crazy with some bright colors n a outline

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/0_1-2.jpg

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/th_1_1-1.jpg
..crits

thepekins
05-11-2010, 07:17 PM
http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/9263/scan0003lf.jpg (http://img94.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0003lf.jpg)

an e I sketched up while I was at my bros house

viseversa101
05-11-2010, 07:29 PM
^^grow up

thepekins
05-11-2010, 07:51 PM
lol? its the toy thread man. chill out. and how bout actually givin me a crit so that i can get better

thepekins
05-11-2010, 08:04 PM
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/7498/scan0006y.jpg (http://img225.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0006y.jpg)
i dont really like this but...

thepekins
05-11-2010, 08:08 PM
Stussy- I like it, i would make the letters solid and get rid of the arrows on the R

Stussy
05-11-2010, 08:40 PM
says the guy with the gap letter and giant arrows. haha
work on simples thepekins.

AMERO
05-11-2010, 09:22 PM
crits please?

Shay70
05-11-2010, 09:26 PM
stussy- next time make sure the hookups are evened out, but dont take them out fully

kew1
05-11-2010, 09:54 PM
mevsr- not bad I would get rid of the extensions on the M and the thing on the bottom of the V, and clean up the lines a little to make the letter a little more even

meph- I like that second one a lot. I wouldn't outline the green but suit yourself

fukew- pretty good for a freestyle, I always have to sketch my shit out in pencil. I don't like the cut thing in the middle of the E

noticed I havent had crits on my shit. Hmmmm....

and massacremen why you gotta call us morons? everyone here wants to get better whats moronic about that? And like plankton said, there's no need for the cats who are brand new to graff to give crits when they don't even know what they're talking about yet.
all i have to say dude is bars u lack seriously in that department

kew1
05-11-2010, 09:59 PM
waze man ur doing the same exact shit i use to do u r gettin ahead of urself bad my dude it took me awhile to realize it to but ur not gonna get any better till u realize that. work on simples. no extensions no add ons no chips no arrows none of that stuff just pure letters then once u start to see some flow and bars in ur shit then start doing more complex shit

kew1
05-11-2010, 10:02 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-11_1048.jpg
sharpie freestyle while waiting at the dmv i didnt get to finish though

bottom page bump

LeaksOne
05-12-2010, 02:38 AM
waze start over simple

amero i only see a M and E. throw away everything youve dont and start fresh and simple

fukew the E and W are ugly and it looks like your trying hard

RES4
05-12-2010, 04:12 AM
fukew make the main bar in each letter go in the same direction to make it flow better. the letters arent bad on there own you just need to make them look good with eachother

thepekins
05-12-2010, 06:44 AM
waze man ur doing the same exact shit i use to do u r gettin ahead of urself bad my dude it took me awhile to realize it to but ur not gonna get any better till u realize that. work on simples. no extensions no add ons no chips no arrows none of that stuff just pure letters then once u start to see some flow and bars in ur shit then start doing more complex shit

Yeah thats what Ive been doing lately but Im having I guess what you'd call writers block right now, all this stuff Ive posted is from a couple months ago.

here's a simpler sketch, the characs awful

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/9734/scan0005sx.jpg (http://img46.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0005sx.jpg)


http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/5092/scan0004nc.jpg (http://img14.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0004nc.jpg)

kew1
05-12-2010, 08:20 AM
that wat i mean dude keep doing that. lose the arrow on the w though dont add anything to ur letters and make the middle bar on the w,a,z,and e al the same width and ur good man

LeaksOne
05-12-2010, 04:32 PM
and make your letters closer

thepekins
05-12-2010, 06:16 PM
http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/6883/scan0005nx.jpg (http://img571.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0005nx.jpg)

just sketched this up. real real blazed not sure if its any good

LeaksOne
05-12-2010, 07:55 PM
replace the X in the A with a triangle and remove the block on top of the Z

lord_plankton
05-12-2010, 08:32 PM
that wat i mean dude keep doing that. lose the arrow on the w though dont add anything to ur letters and make the middle bar on the w,a,z,and e al the same width and ur good man

kew, you should listen to your own advise, the way you cut break bend your letters is still akward..

kew1
05-12-2010, 09:47 PM
yea ik but i really want that style i will eventually get the hang of it but im not gonna if i dont keep trying

viseversa101
05-13-2010, 02:41 AM
wanted to post sumthin......


http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11064.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11065.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11066.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11067.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11068.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11069.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11070.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11071.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11072.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11073.jpg
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/Blackbooks/SDC11074.jpg

thepekins
05-13-2010, 06:08 AM
yea ik but i really want that style i will eventually get the hang of it but im not gonna if i dont keep trying

wait... this is what i was doing but then YOU told me to do simples :confused:


VICE- that shit is all pretty sloppy. And that throw needs to changed a lot. Mostly just clean it all up, maybe stay with pencil for a while imo

A356
05-13-2010, 06:31 AM
Some recent shit...
http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z47/bhusari/ART/IMG_4327.jpg

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z47/bhusari/ART/graf1.jpg

That one for a friend who has his own site for story writing, poems etc check it out
http://www.yourtwocents.co.uk/

Bump for crits

lord_plankton
05-13-2010, 08:18 AM
A356 you have some nice background goin on but your letter structure needs work..actually in the 2nd pic the letter aint too bad and match up

this is what i told you in the first place...let me expand on it..that london is T rash !! you have understanding of color shade etc. but the letter hurt big time
chop off all that stupid cuts n breaks n whatnot match the barwidth..id even fatten em up a lil , spacing and placing is good so far...well your overlapping is super gay..

for the 2nd piece. as i said, anint too bad overall, your letters aint beauty but they match up , i hate huge 3d.. now stop bumping

vise, it def. looks all shaky n shit, i love number 5..adorable robot..background n fills dont really contribute...oh didnt you say ull do me another exch??

kew1
05-13-2010, 10:41 AM
wait... this is what i was doing but then YOU told me to do simples :confused:


VICE- that shit is all pretty sloppy. And that throw needs to changed a lot. Mostly just clean it all up, maybe stay with pencil for a while imo

ik thats what u were doing but u wernt going anywhere with it u have to get down and understand bars first. which happens by doing simples. u need to learn a lil more basics be4 trying 2 get a style all though i have no room to say any of this to but its just my opinion. do wat u want.

Stussy
05-13-2010, 01:25 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1428/4604627456_4b15e85c0b_o.jpg
goya

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 01:57 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/zufep0.jpg

RES4
05-13-2010, 02:44 PM
in the bottom one the drop shadow needs to be the same for each letter. its hard to explain but imagine the light coming from top right. the shadow will be at the bootom left of each letter, you know what i mean?

StayHyE
05-13-2010, 02:48 PM
yeah i got it now that you mention it, it does look weird.... its for my friends kid he wants me to do a canvas which ive never done, and he wants a robot theme...i dont know if that means robot style letters too

RES4
05-13-2010, 03:21 PM
i would go for one of the top two. maybe the right

make it look all shiny and shit

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-13-2010, 03:32 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/zufep0.jpg

Definately the one to the right or the 2nd row one but maybe take of the stars, clean shit yo

v12
05-13-2010, 03:37 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/auxcer.jpg

AMERO
05-13-2010, 03:40 PM
crits please?

IllLogic
05-13-2010, 03:43 PM
cant really tell what it says b.c of the splatters, other than that it looks pretty dope. your 3-d is hot i dont really care for the blue boxes though.

AMERO
05-13-2010, 03:49 PM
it says AMERO. i dont know why i did the splatters lol, but thanks man

.nolove.
05-13-2010, 04:18 PM
your name is very similar to mind.i dislike that...





















we must duel to the death for rights to names that are totally different yet similar in sound.ONGUARD!

.nolove.
05-13-2010, 04:18 PM
your name is very similar to mind.i dislike that...





















we must duel to the death for rights to names that are totally different yet similar in sound.ONGUARD!

AMERO
05-13-2010, 04:24 PM
my name?..

"awesome"ONE
05-13-2010, 04:49 PM
amero, your in over your head, start simple work up

keyboard letters yo

v12
05-13-2010, 04:51 PM
foreeelz

ManikOner
05-13-2010, 06:30 PM
lol....

i havent posted here in a while. heres something i did before i went to do some finals

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/1427/dsc00217z.jpg

-Empty-Can-
05-13-2010, 08:39 PM
some simple shit.
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/simples001Medium.jpg
backwards
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/simples003Medium.jpg

http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/simples002Medium.jpg
blockbuster

gonna redraw these soon. crits it

BlacktodaFuture
05-13-2010, 09:02 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03609.jpg?t=1273802412

crits?

Me: i need crits on the S and A flow, and anything else that pops into your head.

Stot: bottom one is the best. paint it.

Ram: BARS. new to graffiti forum. read it.

flask1995
05-13-2010, 09:44 PM
move the middle bar from the A more down, and that leg kicking inside the A just remove it cause it looks like shit

-Empty-Can-
05-13-2010, 09:47 PM
Yo flask. I have that throw done i just never flicked it. ill post it in a minute

kew1
05-13-2010, 10:33 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-13_1152.jpg
not finished

FlippingChickens
05-14-2010, 12:14 AM
stot - fix the shadow on the r on the last one..the reverse is cool..the middle one had pottential but the 2nd t connected with the o doesnt looks good,i also think the black forcefield needs to be thicker and the middle bar of your s needs to flow more..

fukew - not to be an ass,but the w just killed the whole peice.

safe - really like that man

manik - go simplir,i dont really like how your making a throwup look like a peice

v12 - the a is really nice

been working on these the past few days,finally done..

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3295.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3293.jpg

Crafty
05-14-2010, 11:40 AM
fist and secound drawings plz comment.
1
http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/6462/dsc07921c.jpg
2
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5371/dsc07922h.jpg

Meph*
05-14-2010, 12:22 PM
Faze- i like the black one looks nice, i like the style the purple outline kinda killed it though

tofe- those drawings came out sick, n yeh that pencil came out better than i thought

"awesome"ONE
05-14-2010, 01:00 PM
bump this toy's wack ass book!

Amereto: i like the originality and the art but focus on structure. it's one of those situations where i like the graffiti as art but not as graffiti

asper: make all the bars the same size unless you are trying to do the thing where the bars get progressively bigger like a flair, other wise make it more evident that, that is what you are doing.

meph: i want to see a left to right piece. other wise it's not too bad just work on flowing it better. and make the 3-d go to one point for the whole word instead of different points for different letters.
hey safer, why dont you always use that style its really ill, i dont like the r though

Fury
05-14-2010, 04:03 PM
^ That you, markingz or prefer?

"awesome"ONE
05-14-2010, 04:36 PM
?? who are those people? my screename isnt what i write, please enlighten me on what your talking about.

Fury
05-14-2010, 06:37 PM
Prefer/Markingz. writes Awesome, and I assumed from your username that you could be him.

Stussy
05-14-2010, 07:40 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1344/4607862860_a65a8dcfdd_o.jpg
been sketching a lot lately.

zaco
05-14-2010, 07:43 PM
lol....

i havent posted here in a while. heres something i did before i went to do some finals

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/1427/dsc00217z.jpg

as in ram records? thats whats up

kace91
05-14-2010, 08:15 PM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1344/4607862860_a65a8dcfdd_o.jpg
been sketching a lot lately.

im a toy, so dont trust much my opinion, but i think that A looks too like an R

excepting that, i think its dope.

Stussy
05-14-2010, 08:30 PM
I can see where you see a R but its just an A with a chunk takin out. I would say it looks more like an A than R though.

thepekins
05-14-2010, 08:38 PM
stussy that looks real good.b but the a does kinda look like an r. i really think it sould be a lkittl emore solid than broken up like that but it still looks real relaz good as it is. when yuou gonna ink it uopp"

"awesome"ONE
05-14-2010, 11:31 PM
Prefer/Markingz. writes Awesome, and I assumed from your username that you could be him.
dont know either of them, must be someone else

weird dough
05-15-2010, 01:27 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/4zw26p.jpg

from years ago.

BoomSlang
05-15-2010, 02:33 AM
just getting back into things myself after about a 20 year hiatus.

ya can tell i am not up to scratch yet from the eraser marks lol.

crits please as i will be looking to expand and perfect different styles as i go.

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/graff/Boom1.jpg

and damn i cant wait for my copics to come in this week. lame assed markers really dont help the cause much =oX

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/graff/Diesel.jpg

lord_plankton
05-15-2010, 04:29 AM
yeah, youve got the right idea on the second one, spacing, overlap is alright but dont chop ya letters that much n some of em hurt, id say round your d straighten your i n open your s as first step.

BoomSlang
05-15-2010, 04:38 AM
thanks for the input, relearning something that used to be fairly easy 20 years ago is a pain in my ass.
i will give those ideas some thought and see how my next one turns out

KRE1
05-15-2010, 05:14 AM
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1344/4607862860_a65a8dcfdd_o.jpg
been sketching a lot lately.

man, i gotta say, i definitely liked your older style a whole lot more. that one throw up you did a while back, that giant white one, DOPE.

why the change?

thepekins
05-15-2010, 06:39 AM
man, i gotta say, i definitely liked your older style a whole lot more. that one throw up you did a while back, that giant white one, DOPE.

why the change?

i concur

ssome stuff i sketched in school

http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5426/scan0006ns.jpg (http://img29.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0006ns.jpg)

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/2886/scan0007w.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0007w.jpg)

i hate the charac looks fuckin wierd

Mr.posh
05-15-2010, 08:29 AM
Half assed sketch at 12:00 pm.
Crits?

soath
05-15-2010, 09:25 AM
Half assed sketch at 12:00 pm.
Crits?


no offense, does that say TERD? I have seen this style a lot, the R (if it is an R) has to long of a bar and to skinny in my opinion.
the first letter and last are a little to... elusive (i am really trying to not sound like an ass, especially since i am so toy) make ur word BOLDER, so even the untrained eye can read it then do additional things... my .02

sick of all the hate

thepekins
05-15-2010, 10:19 AM
like soath said, the first and last letters are hard to figure out. looks like SERO to me but i have no idea

thepekins
05-15-2010, 10:29 AM
http://i39.tinypic.com/4zw26p.jpg

from years ago.
looks fucking cool. too bad i cant read any of the letters go waaaayyy simpler

soath
05-15-2010, 10:42 AM
i concur

ssome stuff i sketched in school

http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/5426/scan0006ns.jpg (http://img29.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0006ns.jpg)

http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/2886/scan0007w.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0007w.jpg)

i hate the charac looks fuckin wierd

yeah the dude sorta sucks... try drawing more simple... get this book the natural way to draw (it's old school) the bulbous top of ur Z looks a little weird to me and the W should match the E more... I mean on the red one, my .02

peace

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-15-2010, 11:09 AM
Boomslang-like the second one the fill is clean
Weird dough-looks like OST at first look but then I saw that you put water on the top left so I'm thinkin it says WAT, looks good don't like what I'm thinkin is the 'W' and 'T'
Stussy- hate the Z everything else is clean as fluck
Sero-just like that E
And waze..well I think there's already enough people helping u/telling u the same thing, keep at it tho

CrustOner
05-15-2010, 11:15 AM
Weird Dough, the effect on the top left is fucking sick.

Stussy
05-15-2010, 02:33 PM
man, i gotta say, i definitely liked your older style a whole lot more. that one throw up you did a while back, that giant white one, DOPE.

why the change?
Giant throw up?
I changed because the style i was doing was way over used and wasnt challenging me like i would it too. The shit im doing now is a bit more challenging, has some DC style with some funk thrown in.

Cyto Aka Son1c
05-15-2010, 04:51 PM
http://i40.tinypic.com/s3d2e1.jpg

http://i44.tinypic.com/34qo7si.jpg

says SPARE, S is totally whack so I cropped it

obviously still working on this

Meph*
05-15-2010, 05:08 PM
spare- u should finish the letters with 3d and outline, and the characters nice but is that a crystal ball hes holding?

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/bujil.jpg

crits..i did the corner design for fun

Cyto Aka Son1c
05-15-2010, 05:26 PM
yeah its a crystal ball orb or something

keep on drawing

thepekins
05-15-2010, 06:34 PM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3239/scan0008f.jpg (http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0008f.jpg)

kew1
05-15-2010, 06:45 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-13_1152.jpg
not finished

bump for crits

kew1
05-15-2010, 06:46 PM
i dig the somber throwie except the twirly thing in the B

pleasedontstayr
05-15-2010, 06:51 PM
fukew you were already told to fix the W

kew1
05-15-2010, 07:22 PM
ok well obviously i cant. i was just wondering if there was anything else like if people like it or not.

thepekins
05-15-2010, 07:27 PM
I like it. the green in the 3-d looks kinda wierd though

Mr.posh
05-15-2010, 07:46 PM
no offense, does that say TERD? I have seen this style a lot, the R (if it is an R) has to long of a bar and to skinny in my opinion.
the first letter and last are a little to... elusive (i am really trying to not sound like an ass, especially since i am so toy) make ur word BOLDER, so even the untrained eye can read it then do additional things... my .02

sick of all the hate

Thanks for the crit man, it says sero but i was just fucking around with a random word and style.

soath
05-15-2010, 10:00 PM
^ no problem. yeah, it is a style, and it is good to have other styles down for sure but i still am learning basic graff letters and structure and it's best to have a handle on 'em first. then branch out from there, ya gotta walk b4 ya run. peace.

KEw1: unlike peking I LIKE the green 3d, i never us effects like that but I think a simple thing like that really brings a simp like urs up a notch. IF i was u I would trace those letters without the 3d, then erase the top 1/4 of each letter, the point are all going of in diff directions but ur 3d doesn't follow, like acording to the points, if dem are st8, the letters are turned in (some) and out (others). try what i said and repost if you want anymore from me. peace.

soath
05-15-2010, 10:03 PM
CYTO: no diss but I do not like ur guy. it's like a 15 yr olds doodle, no offense really, thereis this book the natural way to draw, i think it is a essential before folks try to draw charecters and shit. whatever, no offense really, the letters look RIGHT, just maybe try drawing other thinks... more simple, cups and fruit. check out hat book it helped me a hundy. peace.

soath
05-15-2010, 10:05 PM
i dig the somber throwie except the twirly thing in the B

word.

weird dough
05-16-2010, 12:50 AM
looks fucking cool. too bad i cant read any of the letters go waaaayyy simpler

yeah, that was my problem with my old style. it says xater. i'll try to post up some newer stuff.

and @CrustOner. thanks for the props, G.

KRE1
05-16-2010, 04:10 AM
Giant throw up?
I changed because the style i was doing was way over used and wasnt challenging me like i would it too. The shit im doing now is a bit more challenging, has some DC style with some funk thrown in.

i can understand that. good for you trying new things.

old shit for chit chatting.
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/1831/014dm.jpg
and something a lil newer.
http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/7830/008yq.jpg
never going to finish either.

RES4
05-16-2010, 05:30 AM
i actually like the old one better

fakiee
05-16-2010, 08:40 AM
hi guys, you said i should try to do blocks.so i tried... what do u think about it?
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/teenageragainst/hold.jpg
sorry for the quality.

massacreman
05-16-2010, 08:43 AM
give crits to get them.

outline with a black MARKER

do bars.
not blocks.
dont tweak em
write your name like this: HOLD
exactly like it.

than post it again

soath
05-16-2010, 08:53 AM
give crits to get them.

outline with a black MARKER

do bars.
not blocks.
dont tweak em
write your name like this: HOLD
exactly like it.

than post it again

yeah, word. sounds to simple. but it is true.

RES4
05-16-2010, 09:17 AM
the h is good. make the rest of the letters match it same height, width, same bend in bar etc.

FlippingChickens
05-16-2010, 09:19 AM
can i get some crits??
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3295.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3293.jpg

thepekins
05-16-2010, 09:33 AM
i dig it tofe

fakiee
05-16-2010, 10:47 AM
give crits to get them.

outline with a black MARKER

do bars.
not blocks.
dont tweak em
write your name like this: HOLD
exactly like it.

than post it again

i dont really think that i will give good crits, but i will try :)

i tried to make it with black marker but it looked awful.
its not my name,i just liked this word :) my name is amoris.
ok. i will do it.thanks man.

massacreman
05-16-2010, 10:59 AM
why do you guys think your crits are useless?
someone else's opinion is always fresh!

fakiee
05-16-2010, 11:04 AM
you know, im not a pro, or a really good toy. i think that my crits can be bad and mess up. if you say so i'll try!

ok so this is just hold:
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/teenageragainst/hold2.jpg

and my name made few days ago:
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/teenageragainst/amoris-2.jpg

RES4
05-16-2010, 12:20 PM
just cause your a toy doesnt mean you cant recognise whats good or bad about a piece tho

and keep the style of the first one, just try and make the bars equal width for now

fakiee
05-16-2010, 02:35 PM
yeah thats truth...

ok.thanks. i'll try :)

-Empty-Can-
05-16-2010, 03:18 PM
Hold-First one is perfect. Just make the D a bit fatter. Keep it up.

Inlyn08
05-16-2010, 06:18 PM
can i get some crits??
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3295.jpg
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3293.jpg

I like the blunted bird. If I was on acid.. this would probably destroy my mind. Easily.

2FNK?
05-16-2010, 07:10 PM
I'm toy. What's the difference between bars and blocks?

Inlyn08
05-16-2010, 07:33 PM
I'm toy. What's the difference between bars and blocks?
Google it.
I'm not being a jerk, just Google it. Look at the images, then look at some Graff. You may be surprised that you are viewing it differently. If not, then.. I don't know. LOL.

CrustOner
05-16-2010, 08:21 PM
Tofe, it looks like you threw it a bunch of random shit to distract from your wack ass drawing skills.

Zase
05-16-2010, 08:27 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/21k003d.jpg

IbuprofenTablets
05-16-2010, 08:28 PM
Tofe, it looks like you threw it a bunch of random shit to distract from your wack ass drawing skills.

word, homie's making the shit look all fancy to distract one away from his horrid letter structure.

kew1
05-16-2010, 08:28 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-16_1901.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-16_1859.jpg

IbuprofenTablets
05-16-2010, 08:45 PM
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/DirtyBed/Photo45.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
05-16-2010, 08:48 PM
http://i43.tinypic.com/21k003d.jpg

why you posting in the toy black book thread? you usually post in the regular bb thread.

Zookyook
05-16-2010, 08:50 PM
kew i like that name better than fukew if ur plannin on changing it... ur getting better with ur bars i can see that, but try putting the extensions in different places until it looks right... the bottom one is way better than the top one

on that foremost the R looks like a Y to me, and the T looks preggo lol, did u get ur style from FV?

IbuprofenTablets
05-16-2010, 08:54 PM
nope. does it look like a bite?
although i would say the shit do now is influenced by FV, but my shit ain't a straight bite, or atleast i think it's not..

Zookyook
05-16-2010, 09:11 PM
well just the F looks like a straight bite lol but the way the letters kick out like the R and bottom of the M just reminded me of his style

IbuprofenTablets
05-16-2010, 09:55 PM
hmm, well nah man, i didn't bite that F.
it was actually the first time i've done an F in a throw up and tried to improv it.
i tried making the slits in the F look like the Slits in my E.
Additionally, i've never even see FV do a throw up F letter before to bite. :/

BlacktodaFuture
05-16-2010, 10:10 PM
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03620.jpg?t=1274065665

no pictures on this page so no crits. i'll give crits when i see pictures. otherwise. crits please

LeaksOne
05-16-2010, 10:22 PM
Tofe, it looks like you threw it a bunch of random shit to distract from your wack ass drawing skills.


word, homie's making the shit look all fancy to distract one away from his horrid letter structure.

http://www.yesmagazine.org/images/content/yes_logos.jpg

ive been telling this niggga to just quit graff. he doesnt know how to progress. his work still looks like he just started and hes been here since nov 08....

4ENOD
05-17-2010, 01:06 AM
http://i822.photobucket.com/albums/zz143/DONE_FOUR/101_3532.jpg

LeaksOne
05-17-2010, 01:11 AM
so after finally figuring out your screen name is what you write backwards id say fix the E and try to make the D not look like an S and the N not look like an H.

4ENOD
05-17-2010, 01:15 AM
alright thanks!

kew1
05-17-2010, 09:43 AM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-17_0822.jpg http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-17_0634.jpg

mawks
05-17-2010, 03:52 PM
idk what that says ^
so crits, make it more legible and don't worry about extensions and shit
safe, that's pretty cool. the f is awkward though, so i guess just work on that
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image043-1.jpg

kew1
05-17-2010, 03:54 PM
it says kas its my boys tag

J6/51x
05-17-2010, 03:55 PM
i am, if you noticed my first post, literally embarassed in every way to have my stuff here compared to yall.
first off sorry for the sizes

http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/05-08-2010063104PM.jpg
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/0504101744.jpg
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/0504101744.jpg
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/05-08-2010063528PM.jpg
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/05-08-2010063803PM.jpg
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/05-08-2010063941PM.jpg
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/05-08-2010063941PM.jpg
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/05-08-2010064238PM.jpg
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/GGGSD.jpg
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/kki.jpg
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/nondescript/05-17-2010045333PM.jpg

Cyto Aka Son1c
05-17-2010, 04:04 PM
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/5120/dscn1876e.jpg

weird dough
05-17-2010, 04:22 PM
^looks sick. i like the letters. i think i would like it more if the D was solid as the other ones. good shit

RES4
05-17-2010, 04:32 PM
yea, i would be embarresed to

try making letters next time

Amends_Ego
05-17-2010, 04:48 PM
yea, i would be embarresed to

try making letters next time

^lol, agreed
my crits to the same dude is hide all your art materials except a pencil and note book and get the fuck down on whole alphabets of letters that resemble a keyboards letters. No arrows,fills,3d, or whatever else you got going on.

J6/51x
05-17-2010, 05:07 PM
i have always been under the impression that most shit letters can be fixed with a good fill in.

only been "writing" for 2 months

its lame but the dumpster piece was in a window marker since it was my first time out.
its a bitch to get off. still there after a month.

IbuprofenTablets
05-17-2010, 05:38 PM
lol? window markers come off with water, and a rag.
they're tough though.

Amends_Ego
05-17-2010, 05:38 PM
sorry to say but you best lose that impression quick if your looking to progress at all NOTHING, ill say one more time NOTHING can fix shit letters, might make them look like less shit. Think of letters like a house, your fundamental knowledge of letter structure is the foundation, now if you have a shitty foundation but cover it with all the bells and whistles(i.e. bends,curves,ARROWS,fills,3d etc.) the house will look fine but when really put under pressure easily crumbles.

Hepatitis
05-17-2010, 07:21 PM
Shit son, Its all about the letters. Thats what the art is. Taker easy and do what everyone says contrary to what some people think it is all about the bars haha.
Trying a new style of 3d. Not sure it really worked or what i did to mess it up.
Crits?
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo33.jpg?t=1274141774 Crits?

FlippingChickens
05-17-2010, 08:01 PM
dont write rade
http://miamigraffiti.com/search.php?search=rade&p=1

deser - fix the d and s

mawk - thats cool

kew - looks bad man

safe - thats dope


Leaks,stop worrying about me..how about u go out and paint instead of wasting all that time talking on bombing science,your a waste of life.

KRE1
05-17-2010, 08:08 PM
ENOUGH.

if u in the same city, don't. if not, FUCK ERRYONE ELSE and write what you want.

KRE1
05-17-2010, 08:11 PM
TOFE: it would look better if you dropped that dingleberry on the E, and made the T & F the same proportion as the overweight E.

Hepatitis
05-17-2010, 08:44 PM
Word Up KRE1 Im not close at all to Florida so i don't give a fuck. I want help with my letters not my name.
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo33.jpg?t=1274141774
Bottom of page bump

soath
05-17-2010, 08:55 PM
looks like ur word is wrapped around a pole. is that the effect? if it is maybe something at the top of ur A is missing, if not where is the right side of ur A and D. haha, peace.:D

[MiTH] hovz
05-17-2010, 10:08 PM
ive been out of commission for a pretty good amount of time. its good to be back. heres some shit ive done while ive been out of the game.

Rade - work on the 3d.. all the lines should come out at the same angle. Also i dont know what it is about the leg in the R, but that kink in it looks weird to me.

Deder - i like it. i think its just the angle it was taken at but the letters at the end seem bigger. if not then make em the same size and itd look good.


any crits on mine? i havent worked on colors so most are just pencil. one is color but its whack.. i put a charac that ive been workin with a little and just scribbling around. they arent all finished. just doodles or shit i drew while i had some time. thanks everyone

Hepatitis
05-17-2010, 10:28 PM
Mith: its called a vanishing point breh, 3d doesn't always go the same way and yeah thanks i dont like the R either. Also i see nothing to crit for yours did you forget to post the picture?
Soath: yeah i was kinda going for that effect. Thanks for pointing out the A

Tried a fill kinda killed it but its the idea that counts haha.
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo35.jpg?t=1274153280

Hepatitis
05-17-2010, 10:32 PM
Never mind found your pictures. I like the character and most of the straights but the cone thing is kinda whack and same with the mushroom. The Idea with the bushes is solid though.

LeaksOne
05-17-2010, 10:40 PM
leaks,stop worrying about me..how about u go out and paint instead of wasting all that time talking on bombing science,your a waste of life.

haha this nigggas mad hes still sorry after 2 years. you dont know what i do behind the comp kid. but just know you suck and havent progressed not one bit. and ill continue to be worried about you. your like a retarded kid. you have to keep reminding you to do simple shit. everytime you post your bars are uneven and you always make the same mistakes. your a waste of space. give up. graff isnt for you. stop forcing it, it looks REALLY bad.

pilerskee
05-18-2010, 01:55 AM
J6/51x absolutely toy, i recommend you hit your black book often and when your good enough then start bombing

Zookyook
05-18-2010, 08:38 AM
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo35.jpg?t=1274153280
rade... the vanishing point of ur 3d isnt bad, looks to be going to the bottom middle... but dont overlap ur 3d onto ur letters... instead get ur letters drawn out and then 3d the entire shape of everything... on the bottom right of the R the 3d overlaps onto the A and on the crossbar of the A the 3d overlaps onto the D... itd look better if u didnt have a 3d there nawmsayin??? ... and the maze fill would look cool if it was super clean and u could actually get from one end to the other hah good idea though

soath
05-18-2010, 08:48 AM
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo35.jpg?t=1274153280
rade... the vanishing point of ur 3d isnt bad, looks to be going to the bottom middle... but dont overlap ur 3d onto ur letters... instead get ur letters drawn out and then 3d the entire shape of everything... on the bottom right of the R the 3d overlaps onto the A and on the crossbar of the A the 3d overlaps onto the D... itd look better if u didnt have a 3d there nawmsayin??? ... and the maze fill would look cool if it was super clean and u could actually get from one end to the other hah good idea though


haha, yeah a friend of mine did a maze fill in my book, it worked.

*yeah I over lap 3d sometimes. i dunno how else it works if ur letter overlap..

Zookyook
05-18-2010, 09:02 AM
just because the letters overlap doesnt mean the 3d has to overlap too... like i said just draw out the letters with no 3d, and then 3d the outer shape of everything

soath
05-18-2010, 09:05 AM
just because the letters overlap doesnt mean the 3d has to overlap too... like i said just draw out the letters with no 3d, and then 3d the outer shape of everything


yeah like I get that and I DO that, BUT if the letters ARE 3 dimentional and the 3d is actually part of the letter... knawmeen? it's weird, I guess with some pieces it might work, coz an effect, but not on most. peace.

Zookyook
05-18-2010, 09:16 AM
oh ok well when ur doing actual 3d lettering then there wont be any traditional 3d in it.. u basically sketch it out the same way but instead of making the 3d section black or w/e u color it same as the letters and blur the lines defining the 3d to make it look like the letters are just an object and ur seeing it from a perspective... daim is fucking insane, his shits more abstract than most 3d graff but i think it looks better than anything...

check out this for pics... DAIM flickr (http://www.flickr.com/search/groups/?q=daim&w=319509%40N20&m=pool)

fakiee
05-18-2010, 10:16 AM
Shit son, Its all about the letters. Thats what the art is. Taker easy and do what everyone says contrary to what some people think it is all about the bars haha.
Trying a new style of 3d. Not sure it really worked or what i did to mess it up.
Crits?
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab260/hepatitis_M/Photo33.jpg?t=1274141774 Crits?

it didnt work.you mess it up.
you have to have one point where every line of 3d end. can you see it? you dont have one point.your lines go whereever they want.
(i hope it is clearly, i'm not english or american, i'm sorry for mistakes).
but i like the shape of letters :)
http://i232.photobucket.com/albums/ee170/teenageragainst/rade.jpg

mawks
05-18-2010, 10:55 AM
rade - lose the bar bending, i don't think you're doing it right. keep it simple and put a slant to your letters or something like that
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image047-1.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image045-1.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y55/flomar/---/Image043-2.jpg

Amends_Ego
05-18-2010, 12:39 PM
Been off drawing letters for a couple months now, new adderall scrpit brought back my love for...well pretty much anything...so im gonna start workin at this again.

Started with this one. realized i was getting a little ahead of my self
http://img8.imageshack.us/img8/7268/img0489w.jpg (http://img8.imageshack.us/i/img0489w.jpg/)

so i tryed to go simpler...thank god for adderall i dont have the attn. span for this ish
http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/812/img0491x.jpg (http://img248.imageshack.us/i/img0491x.jpg/)


So N & E are new letters for me to piece an i feel they hurtin the most, even though the b n i hurtin too

Zookyook
05-18-2010, 01:21 PM
bring them shits closer together man... a piece should be just that, a one-piece kinda thing... id stick to just black and white for a while too, or solid fills til u got the control to make some wilder fills, those fills just seem like u got ahead of urself.... god damn i wish i had some AD hah id be piecing all the time

Amends_Ego
05-18-2010, 02:28 PM
bring them shits closer together man... a piece should be just that, a one-piece kinda thing... id stick to just black and white for a while too, or solid fills til u got the control to make some wilder fills, those fills just seem like u got ahead of urself.... god damn i wish i had some AD hah id be piecing all the time

thank yo much mane. An i agree with just goin black n white, I started doing that when i was getting good with letters, heh then lost intrest. N I didnt say anything about ADD, told my doc i had some test coming up, an he hooked it up.

J6/51x
05-18-2010, 02:43 PM
http://i1016.photobucket.com/albums/af286/J6X/dds.jpg
s is lacking hardest.
comparatively speaking from last post to now id say its an improvement

Zookyook
05-18-2010, 02:47 PM
my neck hurts from all these sideways pics... rotate before uploading people!

i dont know wtf is goin on with that S, and the middle of the E looks bad being boxy like that... the R should be more defined too, just looks like a whales ballsack or somethin lol try some different lines to make the R... go to the exchange thread if u need ideas

kew1
05-18-2010, 02:48 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-17_0634.jpg
says kas^
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-18_1141.jpg
after this ive decided im just gonna write fuke

J6/51x
05-18-2010, 02:51 PM
my biggest issue. a decent name thats original enough not to be on the net.
in reality i simply need drawing lessons, now where are all those handy little guides. i know they are here somewhere

Zookyook
05-18-2010, 03:27 PM
fuck lessons lol i was thrown out of art class in 7th grade and never took art again... teach yo-self nicca!!!! haha... i like the name change fuke, it shows that ur maturing... the U in that piece is bad though i dunno how id change it... the fill isnt bad but seems to just be disguising uneven bars, at least its noticeable in the E

Amends_Ego
05-18-2010, 04:02 PM
my biggest issue. a decent name thats original enough not to be on the net.
in reality i simply need drawing lessons, now where are all those handy little guides. i know they are here somewhere

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

Hepatitis
05-18-2010, 04:50 PM
Zook: thanks for the help non overlapping 3d would look better i think also. i knew something looked kinda funky and i think thats one of the things.

Fakiee: Word I did mess up alot on it, but i know the concept just didn't execute. Thanks for pointing that out though

Fuke: not really feeling the U either but the fills pretty complex

Vinnie Paz
05-18-2010, 05:52 PM
Time for a name cahnge need some crits though for some help never done c's or u's before so bear wit me lol.
Fuke im feelin that fill fo show.
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/oo137/CAN-KILLER/p_00058-1.jpg

Meph*
05-18-2010, 06:12 PM
http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/bujil.jpg

Amends_Ego
05-18-2010, 07:01 PM
meph-not too bad decent flow, id say pull the bend in the P an find a dif way to stylize,an drop the bend in the H.
vinnie-i like it cept the back bar of the K...cant put my finger on why.
fuke- id like to see the second pic redone with pencil or just the outline.
j687?-???new to graff thread PLEEAASE

an da pic.
http://i47.tinypic.com/11syosl.jpg
cwits

Bazer
05-18-2010, 07:07 PM
looks like youre scared to let your letters touch. i think you should let em get closer and make your letters just a little fatter. oh and the bottom right part of your n, bring that down, it looks bad that way bro.

Amends_Ego
05-18-2010, 07:31 PM
haha yeah im afraid of losing letters to eachother, used to be a problem for me guess i over compensated.
much love for crits. ill be back with another try come night time.

kew1
05-18-2010, 09:20 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/May-18_1541.jpg

-Empty-Can-
05-18-2010, 09:33 PM
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af35/pics4bscience3/reverseosmosis002Medium.jpg
Shadow and S are kinda blahh....Took like 3 minutes

PegCityBoy
05-18-2010, 11:24 PM
kew - i liked the kas sketch better, but fuke is a better name
Meph - the structure on your E and P are lackin
nuck - looks solid cept for the little piece on the bottom of the C
Bime - is your M and E having sex?... didn't think so dooo nottt mash bars together like that
stotr - nice straight simps good work

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3357/4620808016_d2394a6bfe_o.jpg
get it.. eat me, cause i'm spam :D

ps ignore the shitty hand

Edit: I just realized it's Bine not bime look down at your keyboard, does the N on there look anything like the one you drew? keep that right leg down

IbuprofenTablets
05-18-2010, 11:49 PM
haha, i fucks wit' this. ^^^
nice n' clean.

shem
05-19-2010, 12:18 AM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4064/4620945912_a6ebc23341.jpg

ignore that character.. i was too high to even see what i was drawing...lol

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4007/4620945896_e85d70c8e6.jpg

syne7
05-19-2010, 12:28 AM
In the first one the H really killed the flow, but the second one is dope.

[MiTH] hovz
05-19-2010, 01:25 AM
shem - im really liking yours, in the first one id try to fix that h like someone said. im really likin ur E's. they look dope. the second ones really good. id like to see it in color.

eat me -nice and clean. lookin good. sometimes i think simple is better

rtots - stick to making bars. the s and r are pretty crazy.

fuke - looks good, maybe make the f and u a bit bigger?

bine - try to move the N down so the second leg is touching the bottom. it looks kinda weird when its up there. i think it could look good if u kept the same thing but just worked on that N. your bars look pretty good to me.



anything for mine? kinda a quick sketch. the S and B are kinda weird. and idk if the B is really flowing with it at all.

Cyto Aka Son1c
05-19-2010, 01:31 AM
dont block b if the rest arnt going to be blocked as well



http://i45.tinypic.com/2r4udk6.jpg

syne7
05-19-2010, 02:19 AM
Saba: Your S is a bit blocky-er then the rest of your letters, they're all pretty decent, nice bar consistency(or whatever). Pretty much, just redo your S a bit and space out your letters the same space and your good.

Deser: the dent in the front of that D is a little weird, and the little triangle you filled in on the bottom of the back bar of that R wasn't the greatest addition, it would be better if it wasn't there, overal the middle ESE is sexy and the whole thing has a good flow but the D is a bit akward.

Bazer
05-19-2010, 11:08 AM
Shem that second one looks alright. you should try doing it over but keep your bars a consistent thickness.

RES4
05-19-2010, 11:22 AM
deser- dont like the d or the r. rest of the letters are nice

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4044/4621878950_5e1117daa3.jpg

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1139/4622013820_8082313f7c.jpg

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3389/4622019080_bd921ca212.jpg

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-19-2010, 11:31 AM
Fuke-really like the second one even the 'u' but didn't like that wavy one as much but its still clean
Nuck-looking good idk
Meph-I feel like a capital E woulda made it flow better
Pegcity-clean, but the m looks a little wide
Shem-i like the e on the second one but not the S
Cyto/sonic-diggin it

Here's me then my boy I think he was writing limit back then
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BaGlvaHUgemFiaW1hcnUuanBn-1.jpg
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BcHVzaGluZGFsaW1pdC5qcGc-1.jpg

TheToy
05-19-2010, 11:36 AM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4044/4621878950_5e1117daa3.jpg


Dopeski.

RES4
05-19-2010, 11:56 AM
im not really happy with it tho. letters get smaller

and the e and c are fucked

TheToy
05-19-2010, 12:13 PM
im not really happy with it tho. letters get smaller

and the e and c are fucked

You can fix the proportions later. At least you have some good letter structure.

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-19-2010, 12:44 PM
The shading is coming along nicely on that guru man
And I like the style on the one the toy quoted

<[(Smokers187二S上M)]>
05-19-2010, 12:45 PM
The shading is coming along nicely on that guru man
And I like the style on the one the toy quoted

[MiTH] hovz
05-19-2010, 01:18 PM
aspect im really feelin all of yours (no homo). i like that style alot. everything is looking pretty fresh. the letter structure is sick

-Empty-Can-
05-19-2010, 02:04 PM
rtots - stick to making bars. the s and r are pretty crazy.
wat.

lol obviously there are bars. And it's backward yo. stotr haha

Aspect. 2nd is the best. 1st has too many random extensions.

ButtsexFTW
05-19-2010, 04:28 PM
For my boy...

http://i47.tinypic.com/jqt4lc.jpg

CrustOner
05-19-2010, 05:54 PM
yes. Now that's a good simp.

Zookyook
05-19-2010, 05:59 PM
its good, but the top of that S is not... errthang else looks great

FlippingChickens
05-19-2010, 06:30 PM
the only thing i did was the fill on the bottom peice, everything else was my boy

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3298.jpg


you dont know what i do behind the comp kid.
YEAH EXACTLY,SHUT THE FUCK UP THEN

Zookyook
05-19-2010, 06:40 PM
that top page there is the best ive seen from u tofe... the tye dye fill on the bottom looks good but the bomb is kinda shaky..... mail me ur one4alls!!!! i miss mine :-( hah

Inlyn08
05-19-2010, 07:04 PM
Your boy's got some style.

STUTERS-DAILY
05-19-2010, 08:00 PM
aspect- liking it man. you got a basic style down. good job
buttsex- loving that simple man. everything about it but yeah i agree with ^^^^ the s could be fixed
http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/487/img015jc.jpg
something quick