Blackbooks

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I've painted outside my yard alot last year... and it was shit... I want to get some style down before I go wreck shit again

[melo]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/433e38d2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/fb19cba3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/29f9ab2f.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/fd1016f5.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/1ebb754b.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/ce87aba6.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/4658d54c.jpg

[CHEN[Ken]]

hey any critics on my stuff on page 663?
didnt wanna repost the pictures but i need help BAD

[CHEN[Ken]]

melo the second to last picture is awsome the way you made the thing look like a negative effect

[melo]

Originally posted by CHEN[Ken]@Apr 6 2006, 01:55 PM
http://i2.tinypic.com/t5rw90.jpg
tips?
first, thanks on the compliment

ok connect the C and H.. add 2 horizontal lines in between the H so you can tell its an H (optional) the E doesn't fit, or make the shading better, and the N is nice

[smartSOFT]

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9598/mar280013bw.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mar280013bw.jpg)

old pic of sticker and tag

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5844/apr070011vv.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=apr070011vv.jpg)

picture quality is really bad ill get my friends cam and retake the picture..

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/3558/img02958di.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img02958di.jpg)

resized image...sorry about the earlier post. im workin on my handstyle first and foremost..ive been doin sketches in my book and workin on my tag since november. lookin to learn more and get some fresh ideas :D

[extirpate]

new throwish kinda thing what ya all think? it reads "demo" btw i know the o looks like a g xDhttp://img90.imageshack.us/img90/5063/demokthrow0022ot.jpg

[rek]

havent done a canvas in awhile. last couple of pages has been nice to see

[xDISMALx]

^looking good

[vare_187uk]

Originally posted by rek@Apr 7 2006, 03:05 AM
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/3343/11212691jp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

havent done a canvas in awhile. last couple of pages has been nice to see
fire!!! :lol:

[vare_187uk]

Originally posted by extirpate@Apr 7 2006, 01:35 AM
new throwish kinda thing what ya all think? it reads "demo" btw i know the o looks like a g xDhttp://img90.imageshack.us/img90/5063/demokthrow0022ot.jpg
get rid of that bit on the bottom of the E and sort the O out so it dont look like a C
all the letters could do with some werk really but its up to u at the end of the day!

[Seti]

biro badness..not finished
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insaneun.jpg

[vare_187uk]

looking good seti you got them flowin angles going good

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by melo+Apr 7 2006, 12:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (melo @ Apr 7 2006, 12:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-CHEN&#091;Ken
,Apr 6 2006, 01:55 PM] http://i2.tinypic.com/t5rw90.jpg
tips?
first, thanks on the compliment

ok connect the C and H.. add 2 horizontal lines in between the H so you can tell its an H (optional) the E doesn&#39;t fit, or make the shading better, and the N is nice [/b][/quote]
ok thanks for the tips ill work on the H and i arleady changed the e on another picture someone noticed the same problem on it

[CHEN[Ken]]

Ok here we go the C is more connected to the H.
The H has to Little Lines There Didnt know how else to do it so yeah.
The E is new and like the rest of the alphabet.
and the N idk.
But i did mess up on the shading.

http://i2.tinypic.com/t6xvsp.jpg

[vare_187uk]

much better ^^^ props&#33;

[mr.T]

http://home.no.net/ramsesk/trem99.jpg

any crits?

[pua]

Originally posted by pua@Apr 6 2006, 09:18 AM
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/7476/151415021493150414920153mu.jpg


http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/6566/151415021493150414920125ui.jpg


how about this?
what is so bad about this? you can&#39;t just say it sucks without explaining why

[molotow_15]

for a start its basic and shit the lines arnt straight and they arnt even equal its looks like a 2 year old drawing learn to have a steady hand before you start graff and that first picture is sooooo shit
no beef

[cord]

Originally posted by Seti@Apr 7 2006, 09:42 AM
biro badness..not finished
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insaneun.jpg
SICK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

i like that style a lot

[Jank]

hey seti as usual loving it... but do u rekon u cud show me where the letters are lol? i really dont get it.... hot anyway tho&#33;

[DR FORCE]

Originally posted by cord+Apr 7 2006, 07:53 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cord @ Apr 7 2006, 07:53 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Seti@Apr 7 2006, 09:42 AM
biro badness..not finished
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insaneun.jpg
SICK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

i like that style a lot [/b][/quote]
Its nice BUT IT ISNT GRAFFITIE ITS ART i keep saying that but i like it allot :D

[molotow_15]

im posting somert stupid up in a min

[Jank]

Originally posted by DR FORCE+Apr 7 2006, 01:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DR FORCE @ Apr 7 2006, 01:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by cord@Apr 7 2006, 07:53 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Seti@Apr 7 2006, 09:42 AM
biro badness..not finished
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insaneun.jpg
SICK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

i like that style a lot
Its nice BUT IT ISNT GRAFFITIE ITS ART i keep saying that but i like it allot :D [/b][/quote]
apparently theres a word there so it sorta is...

[molotow_15]

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/P4070092.jpg

here it is ozzy osbourne i was so bored an did this shitty thing
amuses me though

[Jank]

haha..wierd thing is it sorta looks like hiM&#33; terrible and mighty shit but jokes. nice1

[molotow_15]

im posting up my new pirate ear ring as well its solid gold

[molotow_15]

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/o.jpg
check my bling

[Jank]

wow you really are very very bored arent u....

[molotow_15]

yeah

[mr.T]

http://home.no.net/ramsesk/trem86.jpg


any crits? :)

[molotow_15]

is your battle thing goin be better?

[molotow_15]

ohhhhhhh that is it i will start the poll thens

[molotow_15]

THE POLLS UP NOW

[T R E O]

Originally posted by mr.T@Apr 7 2006, 09:31 AM
http://home.no.net/ramsesk/trem86.jpg


any crits? :)
your "R,E,M" looks weird.

[molotow_15]

anybody got any ideas how i can beat my bordness

[nephsike]

Originally posted by pua+Apr 7 2006, 07:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (pua @ Apr 7 2006, 07:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-pua@Apr 6 2006, 09:18 AM
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/7476/151415021493150414920153mu.jpg


http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/6566/151415021493150414920125ui.jpg


how about this?
what is so bad about this? you can&#39;t just say it sucks without explaining why [/b][/quote]
it sucks because the letters are weak and theres no reason to have 48 arrows on a piece thats made up of 3 letters. do straight block letters and dont even try to use arrows

[nephsike]

you should be trying to play around with letters like the ones at the top of the bottom picture....and you did those pretty bad too....wokr on that shit....and just look at vares signature for some proof of how simples and letter structure can develop inot more comlicated shit

[toxus]

wow, i remember being that bad^^
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060407/08/9/c/c/9cc1842693307d784834bdc840cc8e11200604070_full.jpg

[Save]

Originally posted by molotow_15@Apr 7 2006, 10:16 AM
anybody got any ideas how i can beat my bordness
Yea, Go outside and paint and stop spamming the fucking forums.

[Xsjadox]

http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/6031/img07364mx.jpg

Throwies :/

Ps : Rad oneliner person 2 posts above

[WAKE-1]

those throws r dope like the bottom one better

[near]

2 throws and a tag :) NE,NE and then &#39;Nears&#39; (tags a lil blurry shitty camera)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/cropdnear.jpg

[Select_One]

^ nice, ur NE beats my NE:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/NE.jpg

and 2 new marker freestyles:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/PAUS2-2.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/PAUS2z.jpg

[Jank]

real nice pen shit paus&#33;&#33;.... reallyreally good... not alot to say on it&#33; maybe the Us go a little skinny where the 2 parts mee but reall gd&#33;

[aoime]

Originally posted by toxus@Apr 7 2006, 10:24 AM
wow, i remember being that bad^^
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060407/08/9/c/c/9cc1842693307d784834bdc840cc8e11200604070_full.jpg
i havent tried doin a one-liner, but this aint one of them. it looks bad with the letter outlines crossed for no reason.

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by vare_187uk@Apr 7 2006, 05:58 AM
much better ^^^ props&#33;
thanks man
i also messed around in school with a new word tried to do a stitching effect on it saw somone do it thought it was pretty neat so i just wanted to try

http://i2.tinypic.com/t7gwvs.jpg

[hitemup101]

yea maybe that was me u saw doing that stiching effect if i was u i wouldnt try it anyomre lol i mean it looks cool but to mose ppl thell rip u apart for it

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by hitemup101@Apr 7 2006, 02:12 PM
yea maybe that was me u saw doing that stiching effect if i was u i wouldnt try it anyomre lol i mean it looks cool but to mose ppl thell rip u apart for it
lol why no beef with someone im not tryin to take their idea just tryin it once because i thought it looked sweet

[Sheek]

http://img306.imageshack.us/img306/2316/new1xh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits please

[hitemup101]

alright noi beef man but dam it looks like shit no offense or anyhitng im not trying to act like a dickhead im not sying im better either but here jsut start off real simple look at i think its vares signiture it had a thing telling you how to start off take a look at it i think ull need it

[Select_One]

thanks jank.

chen u cant write sake, its taken... and stitchin could MAYBE work if you were better but for now stick to tryin to get some better letter structure down.

heres two more i did today:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/pausnit22.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/pausnit2.jpg

and im bumpin this one cuz i like it :lol:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/PAUS2z.jpg

[Sheek]

you talking to me cuz ive done alot of simple shit and im tring to get into more complex shit but i suck

[Select_One]

^ well you should stick to the simples because you havent the skill to move on yet. Not that its a bad thing, but you need to know youll be wasting your time tryin to advance too early. I would go back to trying to make perfect, legible 3d replications of the original english letters... and sketch slower, i can tell that prob took you less than 10 min... you should be sitting there for an hour sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, sketching, erasing, than outlining and coloring.

also, this board really needs a sig pixel size limit.

[hitemup101]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/c787841f.jpg
heres something i did today and umm i did a realy good simple ill orolly psot up tomorrow jsut leave critz

sorry for the pic being so big

[Xsjadox]

^ The 3d kinda confuses me,since it seems to go back and forward (to the right) ,if the one is shadow it should be under..Letters have potential with practice in my opinion :D Just keep at it

[joker00]

agreed

[near]

Originally posted by near@Apr 7 2006, 11:09 AM
2 throws and a tag :) NE,NE and then &#39;Nears&#39; (tags a lil blurry shitty camera)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/cropdnear.jpg
bump :[ crits

[hitemup101]

looks good keep it up did a good job in the overall throw and a really good job on the drips looks like a clean fill but form here looks like a ltl whiter spots around everyware but than agian u said it was ur shitty camera so....

[Jank]

hitmeup: arite, 3d shoudla ll go one way.. like all straight to the left. keep the letters the same widtht throughout too.

paus, loving the red one&#33;

both of these were for battles: enter and smurf..ne comments?

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/Shitenter.jpg


http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/Smurf.jpg

[hitemup101]

haha i like that second one with the smurf holdin up the s thats mad nice and im feelin the first one also

ps- yo jank you think that is should keep workin on that and post it up agian when im done and see how it looks and shit and wile im doin that wokr on my simples

[Xsjadox]

I really like it,looks ill&#33;

[phont]

http://img436.imageshack.us/img436/8320/falala4bg.jpg

give me some advice

tdc kru<----

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by hitemup101@Apr 7 2006, 02:26 PM
alright noi beef man but dam it looks like shit no offense or anyhitng im not trying to act like a dickhead im not sying im better either but here jsut start off real simple look at i think its vares signiture it had a thing telling you how to start off take a look at it i think ull need it
ight man thats cool ill make sure to look at it i mean it doesnt bother me when you say its shit because thats what all my stuff looks like but i just started im tryin stuff out tryin to practice different things to make my self better

but yeah do you also know any other sites,forums that can help me with writing

also know i started this tuesday cant blame me for suckin

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by Select_One@Apr 7 2006, 02:31 PM
thanks jank.

chen u cant write sake, its taken... and stitchin could MAYBE work if you were better but for now stick to tryin to get some better letter structure down.
lol i guess i should work on my N&#39;s that says sane i dont wanna use that as my name just messin around but i know what you mean i know i need practice.

though do you know any website,forum or any thing i can do to try to get better other than writing my name over and over till i get it down i understand i need to do that too but is there any thing to do to get better that can help me practice?

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by calculating infinity@Apr 6 2006, 08:17 PM
this is my friends stuff. he wants some some help with his letter structure and stuff. neither him nor i felt like making a new account so im just posting it under mine. be kind.
http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/851/jmp0018rd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/641/jmp0035yi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/9671/jmp0043kl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/9531/jmp0059jy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/7046/jmp0067ui.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/2996/jmp0072mt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i gotta agreethat made me want to cry... sorry so harsh but it blows ass

[Sheek]

this ones alot simpiller i think i should add 3d instead of shadow besides
that crits

http://img326.imageshack.us/img326/2248/drips1jf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Jank]

i dont really like the drips bt apart from that its gd. only thing thats gon rong is the K..see its too fat on the left and too skinny on the right? gd start tho.. it mite b worth concentraiting on the letters not coloring tho.

[cess!]

well shiiiiiiiit

everyones gettin better

including me maybe?
tell me what you guys think..
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nnbbbv007.jpg
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nnbbbv005.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nnbbbv003.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nnbbbv002.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b213/cenoceno/nnbbbv001.jpg

[HeIsT422]

hmm... good sketches, i like the 3rd one the best, but it kinda looks like the N is hiding
but good shit tho and keep it up

[running man]

i was bored. Food bomb

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f377/runblc/foodbomb.jpg

[HeIsT422]

theres a writer in brooklyn who writes food, oh well hes not up that much and u probably dont even live near there

[Hater-AiD~>]

some shit i did in journalism class..ive been writing for about 2 weeks now
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/1299/jeezy04073nb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[running man]

heist - im from brooklyn. i live in ky now. born in brooklyn, raised in stony brook, long island. now i live in kentucky. shittyest culture shock ever.

[ceroX24X]

looking for some crits on this.

ps. cess i love your style the sketchiness mixed with the unique letters is sick man
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0308.jpg

[running man]

it looks the same as other stuff u put on here just with a cloud in the back. not hatin, it looks good, just nuthin new. keep up the good shit though

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 7 2006, 07:47 PM
some shit i did in journalism class..ive been writing for about 2 weeks now
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/1299/jeezy04073nb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for crits

[ceroX24X]

thanks no offense taken im just trying to get my basic stuff down right now then ill start throwing other stuff in soon

[505 artist]

damn come on soem crits on these

sluts or evex noles some one ples

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/DCAM6786.jpg

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/DCAM6795.jpg

this one is differnt shit i just did wile fuking around with the markers :lol:
http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/DCAM6735.jpg

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e275/ramos505/DCAM6736.jpg

[extirpate]

little pen sketch i did in class today, any comments or crits?
http://img430.imageshack.us/img430/4465/online4ux.jpg

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by extirpate@Apr 7 2006, 10:07 PM
little pen sketch i did in class today, any comments or crits?
http://img430.imageshack.us/img430/4465/online4ux.jpg
wow i like it
any tips for how to learn to write like that?

[Seek139]

the latest [img=http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/8267/onek1wildstyle3qe.th.jpg] (http://img215.imageshack.us/my.php?image=onek1wildstyle3qe.jpg)

[running man]

Demo, the M doesnt really match the lettering scheme. my 2 cents.

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/695/dscn02198wv.jpg

This is the first time ive ever used stickers. at least from the ups.

I didnt know whether it was in blackbooks or pieces, but it seems more like a blackbook to me, so here it is.

Crits?

[Sprae]

im for sure feeling it wheeze... sick

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Thanks bro.

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+Apr 7 2006, 08:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ Apr 7 2006, 08:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 7 2006, 07:47 PM
some shit i did in journalism class..ive been writing for about 2 weeks now
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/1299/jeezy04073nb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for crits [/b][/quote]
last bump for crits and i give up, lol

thats some nice sh*t bill btw

[Sluts_r_us]

no need to bump that shit 3 times in the same fucking day...

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Apr 8 2006, 12:03 AM
no need to bump that shit 3 times in the same fucking day...
i just want some simple crits on it..ive come from forums where shit gets commented fast so im not used to this

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by Select_One@Apr 7 2006, 02:31 PM
thanks jank.

chen u cant write sake, its taken... and stitchin could MAYBE work if you were better but for now stick to tryin to get some better letter structure down.

heres two more i did today:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/pausnit22.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/pausnit2.jpg

and im bumpin this one cuz i like it :lol:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/select_one/PAUS2z.jpg
how many times u guna change ur name man :(

[AoAssis]

heres something for the Enter battle
somehting i threw together quickly, i dont like it to much, my cam destroyed the Hot pink, turned it weird, what ever

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/927/picture2730sn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Hater-AiD~>]

nice aoassis
what kind of markers are those

[kill]

decos?

[AoAssis]

yup, decos and painties. the fill was Hot pink but it got destroyed.

[rek]

started working on a mirror i had lying around. says lois, pics only show half of mirror. hopefully i can do another piece, tie it together and put on the finishing touches tongiht. bottom pic is with flash on camera, shows the letters better

[AoAssis]

lookin good i must say.

[Jank]

niiice&#33;

[Hater-AiD~>]

very nice rek&#33;
i see some arizona green tea

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/varethrow.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/throw2.jpg

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^ for some reason i think u bite....ur styles dont really match up.

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 8 2006, 08:48 AM
^ for some reason i think u bite....ur styles dont really match up.
me too..that looks like Wakes style to me

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/throw3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/ruffvare.jpg

wasnt bitten it was a in the maming throw
the first one was the tester the second was the mod

and why the fuck would i want to bite wake for

thats just an unreal comment you just made

[AMAZ tbscrew]

no i mean..like ur simples and the other shit uv done just dosnt flow with ur throwies....

[vare_187uk]

it doesnt have to flow with my frows
frows are a whole different sector to pieces etc

there bubble styled and not straight letters
there bound to look different

[AMAZ tbscrew]

no i mean ur trows just fuckin suck compared 2 ur other shit

[vare_187uk]

it doesnt have to flow with my frows
frows are a whole different sector to pieces etc

there bubble styled and not straight letters
there bound to look different

[vare_187uk]

oh well there ment
to be simple so simple i make them
they mite look shit
but ohwell another day another try

[Jank]

Originally posted by vare_187uk@Apr 8 2006, 01:53 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/throw3.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/ruffvare.jpg

wasnt bitten it was a in the maming throw
the first one was the tester the second was the mod

and why the fuck would i want to bite wake for

thats just an unreal comment you just made
vare man wats happened to u?&#33;? assuming ur the same vare as i think ur...whos bnin on these boards for a while..u were real gd a while bak and now u do stuff like that&#33;?&#33;? odd.....

[vare_187uk]

if u read the bottom itr does state ruff as fuck yo&#33;&#33;

[Jank]

o ye fiar play..jus dont sell urself short with stuff like that

[Mess <^>]

Wut^ All, I&#39;mma New to the forum and Graffiti, i would like some constructive critisism is ya don&#39;t mind :P

[rek]

hhh

[westsida]

lovin the character,shits hella dope,but i aint feelin the piece/handy.start out with simple block letters,bubble letters,just basic shit before u go crazy with wildstyle etc.just sketch sketch sketch and ur style will cum along when ur ready.have u been drawing characters for long?

[westsida]

last post was to mess

[humano]

Originally posted by near+Apr 7 2006, 03:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (near @ Apr 7 2006, 03:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-near@Apr 7 2006, 11:09 AM
2 throws and a tag :) NE,NE and then &#39;Nears&#39; (tags a lil blurry shitty camera)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/cropdnear.jpg
bump :[ crits [/b][/quote]
your n looks alot like one in a video game i was playin forget exactly
which one either The Warriors or Gettin up but dude honestly dont steal
letters or styles its wack, especially from a game
no beef, keep doin your own stuff, but noone elses.

[westsida]

rek,hot shit,do u mean move it so its like 1 word?? move the D closer and put the 1 arrow from the D below the S (next to the arrow under the S)and the utha 1 just below the arrow at the top of the S.
this probly sounds stupid,so,here it is with sum "photoimpact" fun:

http://img409.imageshack.us/img409/5892/likethis5tt.jpg
excuse my shit digi-skills but the red things are the arrows.do that and move the D closer in

[Mess <^>]

I been drawin Characters since i was in 5th grade, startin wit pokemon (***** gotta start somewhere&#33;) i just got into graffiti cause *****s out in new york here keep shit gang related and shit, no one does anything pure and shit just for art, i wanna get good enough to change views of what people think nah meen

[AoAssis]

yes yes, you can stop pretending you are a gangster now and talk normaly, and take that shit out of your sig its way to big.

[KHI2]

pencil throwie I drew the other day, :huh: http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/6138/00000122pw.th.jpg (http://img50.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00000122pw.jpg)

[Jank]

lovin it rek&#33;

[Seek139]

sketched this up last night sorry but it looks better clicked to enlarge...
http://x10.putfile.com/4/951755259-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=4/951755259.jpg&s=x10)

[molotow_15]

putfile.com

[flclnaruto1213]

molotow nice avatar
lol

[molotow_15]

:D

[Vorce]

nice seek

:D

[Mess <^>]

My new Tag "syndrome"

[hitemup101]

not feelin it start simple man

[Seek139]

Originally posted by Seek139@Apr 8 2006, 12:24 PM
sketched this up last night sorry but it looks better clicked to enlarge...
http://x10.putfile.com/4/951755259-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=4/951755259.jpg&s=x10)
bump for the critz...

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by Mess <^>@Apr 8 2006, 02:30 PM
My new Tag "syndrome"
hahaha this kid put his myspace in his sig...hope you get arrested

[beefgerky]

u act like he paints. bahahahahaha.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture729.jpg
simple i want to paint.

[>skea<]

nice
post it up

[hitemup101]

Originally posted by hitemup101@Apr 7 2006, 03:27 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/c787841f.jpg
heres something i did today and umm i did a realy good simple ill orolly psot up tomorrow jsut leave critz

sorry for the pic being so big
bumppppp
i know i got critz on this and i did do the new one but i jsut wanted to see wat some otherppl thaught thanks

[Jank]

real nice gerk keep it up. wud look gd painted espesh with taht colour scheme

seek i can see the lst letter is a real nice K. make the other letters more defined like that so it is clearer what they are....cos i cba to look 4 more than 3 seconds cos im fat.

for a battle.. didnt wanna do an S so ima do sumtin holdin it again lol..cant do Ss.. lol so apart from that nethin u rekon i shud change b4 i ink and colour it? (soz if u cant see it v well) SPRING:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/springbattlepencil2.jpg

[melo]

Originally posted by CHEN[Ken]@Apr 7 2006, 05:49 AM
Ok here we go the C is more connected to the H.
The H has to Little Lines There Didnt know how else to do it so yeah.
The E is new and like the rest of the alphabet.
and the N idk.
But i did mess up on the shading.

http://i2.tinypic.com/t6xvsp.jpg
looks much much better chen.. keep sketchin bro
heres some more shit..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/f182616f.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/1589a5a2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/17a6fd76.jpg

give crits mothafuckers

[HeIsT422]

those are hot but i wasnt really feeling ur throw, but keep doin ur thing
and in the second one u shud finish coloring it

[AMAZ tbscrew]

kara not done..still gota add alot of shading and a pice

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture060.jpg

workin on simple letters again and messin around wit an old style i had wit the name ever

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture059.jpg

[melo]

aye where is tbs crew located?

[HeIsT422]

nice amaz, i like both of em
lets see the karak shaded with the piece

but i kinda dont like the arrows coming out of the E&#39;s And X&#39;s on the 2nd sketch bottom piece

anyways nice

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by melo@Apr 8 2006, 04:19 PM
aye where is tbs crew located?
tbs is from new jeresy...crew fell apart and split into other new crews like tuk crew and ebk and others


thanx...yea there not that good i just tght id go bak 2 doing simples 2 get better at pieceing and stuff the cara is guna be hot im just thinkin of a piece and stuff.

[AlmoSt]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P4080823.jpg


ummm, edited style?

[Sprae]

when i sketch should i try not to do it in pencil first so that im not tempted to erase it and fix it?

[AMAZ tbscrew]

uh... wtf.

[Hater-AiD~>]

what what
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/8642/dscf12309dy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AoAssis]

what shoes came in that box

[AlmoSt]

so mine is???? wat does every1 think?

[cookies 000]

yo guys im sorry for how i acted before.....heist ur better and u didnt do shit i dont no why i called u out i was jus being a doosh.
peace..

[Jank]

almost, the thin--&#62;large bits dont work for me. i would keep it constant width throughout.

the E on the box is too small for me and the 3d on the Z is too.

whoever was talkin bout pencils: i would advise doin shit in pencils first..its gd to edit shit and work into it..
AMAZ nice chars... the bottom piece would do better to not have the arrows i rekon, but nice shit.. now...


IF U POST UR SHIT COMMENT ON THE SHIT ABOVE U U SELFISH FAGS&#33;

[AMAZ tbscrew]

jank....idk <3? hahah wow im fuckin bored =[

[AlmoSt]

the z is too spaced out from the e and J, it takes away from it a lot, and try it on paper, its kinda hard 2 c, in general tho, it looks good

[ZeNiTh]

Crits and comments on this pencil throwiehttp://img47.imageshack.us/img47/930/00000414ns.th.jpg (http://img47.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00000414ns.jpg)

[ZeNiTh]

Crits and comments on this pencil throwiehttp://img47.imageshack.us/img47/930/00000414ns.th.jpg (http://img47.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00000414ns.jpg)

[ZeNiTh]

comp acted up sorry about the flood :(

[AlmoSt]

Zenith, take off those lil quote/splash lookin things, and all the letters are good until the last T and the H, work on those and ull have a super good basic throw

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P4080826.jpg

[ZeNiTh]

yeah ur right , but I dont know which one would look better a capitol H or lower case h?

[Hater-AiD~>]

about my shoebox piece
i just did it in like 2 minutes kuz i was bored

and air force ones came in that box assis :)

[HeIsT422]

Originally posted by cookies 000@Apr 8 2006, 06:34 PM
yo guys im sorry for how i acted before.....heist ur better and u didnt do shit i dont no why i called u out i was jus being a doosh.
peace..
wow lol

[Hater-AiD~>]

man the new neon crayola markers are the sheez
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/306/dscf12389za.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
constructive crits please..its a new style im workin with

[Z FUSE]

make ur letters fatter

[Hater-AiD~>]

the whole point of that style was skinny letters but owell

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by HeIsT422+Apr 8 2006, 07:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HeIsT422 @ Apr 8 2006, 07:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-cookies 000@Apr 8 2006, 06:34 PM
yo guys im sorry for how i acted before.....heist ur better and u didnt do shit i dont no why i called u out i was jus being a doosh.
peace..
wow lol [/b][/quote]
he just doesnt want to be hated on since he made a bad rep for himself here :rolleyes:

AIDS say Ao, you keep calin me ASSis lol

[Ironik]

Heres a scetch i did for the battle but no one posted it up.

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3123/kode0051bp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think?

[Hater-AiD~>]

its an even trade thing aoassis..you call me aids haha

i made that piece yall said was too skinny in fatter letters and it does look better..i gotta color it in now

[AlmoSt]

CRITZ ON MINE UP THERE&#33;

[MUSASHI]

Ironik I like that alot...that fill is killin&#39;

[Hater-AiD~>]

just finished
http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/4783/dscf12450pi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
constructive critz

[Ironik]

Its ok try not to connect ur letters lik that i dont know y but i dont lik that j

[AoAssis]

Aids - lose those things that jut out the boxes er what ever and lose all the etensions and then repost it, it should look good as a simple, and dont connect the letters


For Kode battle:

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/4192/picture2743ap.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I dont like the way it turned out, i didnt add 3-d and i outlined it with a fat marker, i wish i used a fine tip one, but you gata experiment sometimes so what ever, i was just tryin a new style, cuz i thought people might get bored with the old Euro one.

[Hater-AiD~>]

everybody should pick up a 10 pack of crayola neon markers kuz they are the frickin shizniz
they were like 3 99 also

[Hater-AiD~>]

http://img325.imageshack.us/img325/4671/dscf12518gm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i bought a bunch of markers today minus the prismas

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^ um....ok? want a cookie or medal or suttin?

[AlmoSt]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P4080826.jpg

bump for critz please&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[>skea<]

dont put eyes on ur fukin letters

do block letters and dont do that thing wen u make the letters fukin huge towards the botttom

[CHEN[Ken]]

Prismas are good and not affordable unless your stealin em there like 3.50 each

anyway i did something new i thought was rad kinda hard to write on it and the surface was hot so even harder

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h93/sheityo/chenmetal2.jpg

[newbornsek]

man thats pretty good, but it almost looks like its forced abit to much
w.e i really like the "B" but remember to buy some real markers that outside fill is
wack

[kill]

Originally posted by AoAssis@Apr 8 2006, 09:27 PM
Aids - lose those things that jut out the boxes er what ever and lose all the etensions and then repost it, it should look good as a simple, and dont connect the letters


For Kode battle:

http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/4192/picture2743ap.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I dont like the way it turned out, i didnt add 3-d and i outlined it with a fat marker, i wish i used a fine tip one, but you gata experiment sometimes so what ever, i was just tryin a new style, cuz i thought people might get bored with the old Euro one.
the d needs work...

[AoAssis]

its just for a battle.

[kill]

the d is weird cus the hole is hella big buh the other letter holes are jus dots
maybe try makin it a dot
if those r decos u could fix the prob if u wanted too

[Vorce]

aoassis that kode is hella tight&#33; :D

[Crucible]

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/3018/crux0025cc.th.jpg (http://img97.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0025cc.jpg)

Thanks for any crits and tips.

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by Crucible@Apr 9 2006, 01:01 AM
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/3018/crux0025cc.th.jpg (http://img97.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0025cc.jpg)

Thanks for any crits and tips.
the R is too skinny especially the bottom lines

[kill]

nice swastika in ur tag

[Seek139]

Originally posted by Jank@Apr 8 2006, 03:51 PM

seek i can see the lst letter is a real nice K.
are you tryin to say my first letter looks like a k?...the piece is "onek"

....if soo i feel so wack its not funny :(

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by beefgerky@Apr 8 2006, 03:30 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture729.jpg
simple i want to paint.
bump

[Jank]

Originally posted by Seek139+Apr 9 2006, 06:33 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Seek139 @ Apr 9 2006, 06:33 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Jank@Apr 8 2006, 03:51 PM

seek i can see the lst letter is a real nice K.
are you tryin to say my first letter looks like a k?...the piece is "onek"

....if soo i feel so wack its not funny :( [/b][/quote]
i mean last letter....i like the last letter...which is a K....

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by Jank+Apr 9 2006, 05:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Jank @ Apr 9 2006, 05:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Seek139@Apr 9 2006, 06:33 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Jank@Apr 8 2006, 03:51 PM

seek i can see the lst letter is a real nice K.
are you tryin to say my first letter looks like a k?...the piece is "onek"

....if soo i feel so wack its not funny :(
i mean last letter....i like the last letter...which is a K.... [/b][/quote]
:)
im goin do somert for later
yeee.

[aren1]

hi im new here&#33; :huh:
i made sum work until now...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/i_229.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/nort.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/sexologusheff.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/i_228.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/gmjdrim.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/akuum001.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/akuum.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/ash.jpg
could u please comment this. :rolleyes:
"constructive criticism pls" <_<

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by aren1@Apr 9 2006, 07:25 AM
hi im new here&#33; :huh:
i made sum work until now...
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/i_229.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/nort.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/sexologusheff.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/i_228.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/gmjdrim.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/akuum001.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/akuum.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e347/cron06/ash.jpg
could u please comment this. :rolleyes:
"constructive criticism pls" <_<
yeah, thats good work, for a toy :)
jus work on your letters a bit more
everythin good :)

[Hater-AiD~>]

yo cruicible..you need to work on your letter structure..like everybody always says..go back to block letters and progress a little more slower for your style

in that piece your letters look like they are all different sizes and weights

and most important..
work on your handstyle some more

[molotow_15]

is your name half bit from geez :angry:

[Hater-AiD~>]

uh no..ive had this name since tony hawk pro skater 3 came out..people think i bit it from young jeezy..i hate this shit..i had this name way before he came out

any way
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/9739/dscf12544ft.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i f&#39;ed up the colors...maybe just f&#39;ed up in general but constructive crits please

[sepha_one]

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/d0a63a05.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/5d301ea9.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/e6349d0d.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/8144afeb.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/25a7a930.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/1f9f4b57.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/b1140380.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/c0f86fa3.jpg
(for a friend)

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/44c3645c.jpg

(in chronological order)

[sepha_one]

...

[aren1]

sepha i like ur pieces&#33;
thanks for the comments&#33;
for interrest when is considerd a writer not a toy if u get me, exp ??

im workin alot in writin
il post my work ofetn from now one here :) tnx alot and respect 4 all

[molotow_15]

that guitar could be better
like drawin an ibanez sg
tha would look sweet

Molotow

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by kill@Apr 8 2006, 11:28 PM
the d is weird cus the hole is hella big buh the other letter holes are jus dots
maybe try makin it a dot
if those r decos u could fix the prob if u wanted too
nah their painties they suck ass, you can tell they are kinda dryed out, ya i see wat you mean by the other holes are just dots, i guess i should keep that in mind next time thanks, and i guess this piece is a matter of preferance, cuz i dont like it but Gerk does, and you dont like it but, Vorce doese, so what ever, i lost the battle to SENE any way because of all the stupid toys, they voted for him cuz his shit is so "funny" it just sucks big balls, but what ever.

[molotow_15]

havik now e-terror lost to sene too and i think he found out that he bit.
the kids got nice colouring though

[AMAZ tbscrew]

bump dis one its tight


http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/b1140380.jpg

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us+Apr 8 2006, 03:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sluts_r_us @ Apr 8 2006, 03:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Mess <^>@Apr 8 2006, 02:30 PM
My new Tag "syndrome"
hahaha this kid put his myspace in his sig...hope you get arrested [/b][/quote]
O.o

Wow. i hope this kid DIES.

Myspace? wtf?

[Sluts_r_us]

yo jeez if youve been writin that name since tony hawks pro skater 3....you need to quit. now.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

fuckin my scanner kills all the shading..this sketch has alot alot of detail in it..and the scanner killed it all.

before
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture060.jpg


afer
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture061.jpg

[aeon]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 9 2006, 10:23 AM
bump dis one its tight


http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/b1140380.jpg
yeh the top ones sick. s and e need work in the lower one i reckon tho. s should be the same heigh as the rest and the e is kinda skinny...

[Hater-AiD~>]

NO..you misunderstood

ive been writing for 2 WEEKS...ive had that nickname since tonyhawk pro skater 3

2 totally different things..back when i was into games i used the nickname Jeezy..and ive been using it to write for 2 weeks

[aren1]

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 9 2006, 08:58 AM
in that piece your letters look like they are all different sizes and weights


yo man tnx 4 remindin that i didnt know what wasnt working :) tnx

[aeon]

http://img344.imageshack.us/img344/2875/exib28ky.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yeh check this one, diffrent style still...
excuse the lines...

[Vorce]

ill wit it

[Sluts_r_us]

lies.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^ u got that from me........lies. lmao

[CHEN[Ken]]

Holla So Ive Been Writing The word CHEN and ive always been writing it the same way do you guys got any critcs on it or and idea to change it make it look different or something to be better or any thing HELP&#33;&#33; :blink:


http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h93/sheityo/CHENORANGEBLOOD.jpg

[anarchy]

work on a new style, all together. Just keep drawing throwies, and practice with some shitty paint on plywood/ cardboard.

[force]

Did that today.. should I color it or leave it be?

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/5971/cmykhitsugaforceapdz0ew.jpg

For a friend (coloring pencils.. I don&#39;t have markers) -

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/8564/cblue2copy3fd.jpg

[Vorce]

add a sick dark to light color fade or light to dark

[force]

To the 1st one? Got any colors in mind? lol

[Vorce]

hmmmmmmmmm?

idk maybe...
nope im stumped

just sample a few colors on a different paper to see what matches your style :D

[AMAZ tbscrew]

fade dark 2 light blue...orange force field.

[force]

lmao i was thinking of that lol anyways thanks :P NEed sleep now ciaooooooo xD

[Vorce]

AMAZ thats a tight idea


Force u should do what amaz said

that wolud be hella ill

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by anarchy@Apr 9 2006, 04:52 PM
work on a new style, all together. Just keep drawing throwies, and practice with some shitty paint on plywood/ cardboard.
thanks man i have no idea where to start how to start on a new style :(


ANY TIPS AND HELP ON MY DRAWING ON PAGE 681??

[Flair Heads]

Originally posted by aeon@Apr 9 2006, 01:39 PM
http://img344.imageshack.us/img344/2875/exib28ky.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yeh check this one, diffrent style still...
excuse the lines...
dopeness in the 3rd dimension

[Flair Heads]

Originally posted by force@Apr 9 2006, 05:01 PM
Did that today.. should I color it or leave it be?

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/5971/cmykhitsugaforceapdz0ew.jpg

For a friend (coloring pencils.. I don&#39;t have markers) -

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/8564/cblue2copy3fd.jpg
your letters are awful. putting flowers on a turd does not change the fact that its a turd.

[force]

it&#39;s called a wildstyle..well the 1st one is anyway,lol.. and yeah the blue one is well fucked up i know,lol then again theres a reason why its in the toy section,lol

[Flair Heads]

how come all the toys have to do wildstlyles. its called progression.

[[]RENT[]]

hey new peice, crits please?

http://img56.imageshack.us/my.php?image=rent65dm.png (sorry the img thing isnt working..)

[beefgerky]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture730.jpg
sloppy 6am freestyle. pushawwwww.

[Flair Heads]

Originally posted by beefgerky@Apr 9 2006, 08:17 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture730.jpg
sloppy 6am freestyle. pushawwwww.
not feelin the self-overlapping r and k. the e is kinda funny lookin. but im feelin it.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

^ur my hero..

[aeon]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Apr 9 2006, 04:33 PM
lies.
excusez moi?

[AMAZ tbscrew]

he said....u suck

[ZeNiTh]

http://img345.imageshack.us/img345/3033/00000478zb.th.jpg (http://img345.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00000478zb.jpg) hers somthin i did on a yellow box . finished it quick, any crits comments? :huh:

[flclnaruto1213]

what in Gods name...

[AMAZ tbscrew]

old...just changed the r to x :unsure:

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/picture88.jpg

[umop 3pisdn]

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y123/DonnieDelinko/IMG_6807.jpg

[beefgerky]

i got some crits for u.
http://www.globalsecurity.org/wmd/library/news/china/1999/43a.jpg
faggot.



and amaz, the R looks like an X lol. paint that shitttt.

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by umop 3pisdn@Apr 9 2006, 08:43 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y123/DonnieDelinko/IMG_6807.jpg
oh lord....
ok man
start with some block letters
if youre trying to learn graffiti..whats the difference in what youre doing and some little 2 year old girl doing bubble letters

start with block letters and start with a simple easy vanishing point..
add your 3d

from there start to form your style..morph your letters a little but do not over do it&#33;

hope this helps..

[Hater-AiD~>]

this is my very first sketch
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/9148/dscf11740ox.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and this is my most recent...not great but you can see some progression in the 2 week time frame that i haven been writing
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/6268/dscf12541hx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[beefgerky]

you havent improved much, but tis only 2 weeks.

[flclnaruto1213]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 9 2006, 08:39 PM
old...just changed the r to x :unsure:

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/picture88.jpg
damn amaz , that bomb is nice as hell, only think is the x looks like a K, but a really sick k at that.

and the v looks a bit like a u.

[umop 3pisdn]

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+Apr 9 2006, 08:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ Apr 9 2006, 08:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-umop 3pisdn@Apr 9 2006, 08:43 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y123/DonnieDelinko/IMG_6807.jpg
oh lord....
ok man
start with some block letters
if youre trying to learn graffiti..whats the difference in what youre doing and some little 2 year old girl doing bubble letters

start with block letters and start with a simple easy vanishing point..
add your 3d

from there start to form your style..morph your letters a little but do not over do it&#33;

hope this helps.. [/b][/quote]
wow im surpisde you dont get it.


Thats from mark Eckos getting it up.

i was just playing

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 9 2006, 08:39 PM
old...just changed the r to x :unsure:

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/picture88.jpg
damn amaz , that bomb is nice as hell, only think is the x looks like a K, but a really sick k at that.

and the v looks a bit like a u.

its an R fuck tard.

read?

[flclnaruto1213]

i did read. i must have misunderstood cause it said "changed the r to x"

whatever..

[aeon]

Originally posted by beefgerky@Apr 8 2006, 03:30 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture729.jpg
simple i want to paint.

yeh, thats biggle

n fuck the straight dissin (yeh s&#39;r&#39;u) if a sketch is shite, give reasons innit, else your words don&#39;t hold no weight, getme?

[Hater-AiD~>]

oh it is..
my bad
thats in the game? hahaha

i dont have an xbox..i sold it way before the game came out

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Originally posted by beefgerky+Apr 9 2006, 08:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beefgerky @ Apr 9 2006, 08:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
<!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 9 2006, 08:39 PM
old...just changed the r to xÂ* :unsure:

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/picture88.jpg
damn amaz , that bomb is nice as hell, only think is the x looks like a K, but a really sick k at that.

and the v looks a bit like a u.

its an R fuck tard.

read? [/b][/quote]
yea that was the 1st time i ever sketched it...if u look close u can find mistakes....

the V looks like U
and now my name is EVEX not EVER
and the bottem of every letter is missing 3d
and the kara is missin a ear.


dam huh...oh and jeez or jez or wutever u havent improved much...bring ur letters closer 2gether and dont worry about fills...keep working on ur letters..in about 4 months post ur first sketch up and ur last sketch...i do it every once in a while 2 see how far iv came...its kinda scary lookin at how bad u wer.

[Hater-AiD~>]

4 months im pretty sure ill be much better then this
i dont know how to improve the letter form too much ill keep tryin stuff everynight

[Crucible]

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/8516/crux0033lp.th.jpg (http://img129.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0033lp.jpg)

I had a sketch up the other night with the same letter style/structure. Trying to get it down. Thanks for any crits and tips.

[Sprae]

this one sucks just like the rest of the shit i post.... 3d is off and i did a shitty coloring job... the letters suck too but oh well
oh yeah and just ignore everything except the piece

http://img437.imageshack.us/img437/2441/picture0573xo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AMAZ tbscrew]

whys it remind me of rend?

[Sprae]

lol i dont write send i was just writing words.... did i bite him?

[AMAZ tbscrew]

idk for some reason it reminded me of him

[Sprae]

oh oops.... sorry about that... if its a bad thing

[rek]

"rejakt" -- shitty camera