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LeaksOne
07-16-2010, 06:13 PM
Damn Meko, nice work.

http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/coldhardclimber/IMG01299-20100716-1448.jpg

I fucked up the coloring later on, so I'm just posting this.

The S and U suck.

just the S and U? no sir. scrap the entire thing. make smooth lines not random jagged ones

MDT
07-16-2010, 09:20 PM
my shit obviously not worth commentin on...

idk401
07-16-2010, 09:28 PM
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs086.ash2/37644_135481053149076_100000615455157_215653_65094 95_n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs052.snc4/34964_135480916482423_100000615455157_215650_51216 35_n.jpg

jus a lone ranger tryna find where i belong .

diggin the style , except for the over done extensions in the bottom.

Sbal
07-16-2010, 09:46 PM
here goes...
let me know if this is the wrong place...
http://img594.imageshack.us/img594/6381/mmddtt.jpg
crits?

D looks like an O, or even an A at an angle... Work on straight keyboard letters before putting all those kinks in. No hate, but that's a lame fill, shoulda left it empty or went with a solid color. The D in your tag is to small in the hole but the legs go back over the M too far. Give crits to get them next time. Also, is MDT a crew or your initials? What's that all about.

Get Rekt!
07-16-2010, 10:20 PM
crits please..
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0716002312.jpg

iamBoZ96
07-16-2010, 11:17 PM
nice charater

M3KA1!
07-16-2010, 11:47 PM
Meka1!- i like your letters and you tags, keep it up the only thing id say is the M on the yellow piece looks more like an N instead, maybe try and fix that.

Drums- the first peter and stewy came out wack but the second one is almost i dentical to the cartoon, keep at it

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/brainer.jpg

havnt posted in a while, got busy did this last week please crit, let me know if its creative or just weird..

Nah bruh that's Mekos werk. not mine. nonetheless very sexual

mfatik88
07-17-2010, 12:06 AM
http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/8162/img1285h.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/i/img1285h.jpg/)

http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/4712/img1283w.jpg (http://img408.imageshack.us/i/img1283w.jpg/)

crits please

iamBoZ96
07-17-2010, 12:09 AM
sum colorz would look dope on the bottom peice

Loki X Sho
07-17-2010, 09:24 AM
http://i27.tinypic.com/2yzmxxu.jpg

blahhhh blah blah

Rasn, the second one is lookin spiffy

GuyGuyer of Guyland
07-17-2010, 09:55 AM
less extensions an thicken up the body for now. get rid of those arrow things on the bottom of your letters and bring the bars of the letters down more

NosE2
07-17-2010, 10:00 AM
i don't know if it's just me mfatik, but it looks like you bit the bottom one dude. you see the style in the one at the top then the one at the bottom? completely progressed and different. maybe not though. loki, diggin the fill.

Loki X Sho
07-17-2010, 10:06 AM
less extensions an thicken up the body for now. get rid of those arrow things on the bottom of your letters and bring the bars of the letters down more

in other words....conform to lame graff standards....Nahhhhhhh.
I like my weirdo extensions..without them it looks too normal.

and thanks nose...its mostly watercolor.

CERZone
07-17-2010, 11:06 AM
http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/2276/img0192kc.jpg (http://img42.imageshack.us/i/img0192kc.jpg/)

http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/1388/img0193mr.jpg (http://img33.imageshack.us/i/img0193mr.jpg/)

http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/4212/img0195zi.jpg (http://img535.imageshack.us/i/img0195zi.jpg/)[/IMG]

http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/9348/img0196jv.jpg (http://img709.imageshack.us/i/img0196jv.jpg/)[/IMG]

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/1042/img0197hl.jpg (http://img340.imageshack.us/i/img0197hl.jpg/)[/IMG]

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/7222/img0198il.jpg (http://img189.imageshack.us/i/img0198il.jpg/)[/IMG]

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/4867/img0199od.jpg (http://img338.imageshack.us/i/img0199od.jpg/)[/IMG]

http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/403/img0200pj.jpg (http://img687.imageshack.us/i/img0200pj.jpg/)[/IMG]

http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/1775/img0201xc.jpg (http://img684.imageshack.us/i/img0201xc.jpg/)[/IMG]

GuyGuyer of Guyland
07-17-2010, 11:18 AM
in other words....conform to lame graff standards....Nahhhhhhh.
I like my weirdo extensions..without them it looks too normal.

and thanks nose...its mostly watercolor.

im just throwin in my 2 cents. but i feel more work could be put into the letters

Baron
07-17-2010, 11:29 AM
im just throwin in my 2 cents. but i feel more work could be put into the letters

This. You need more structure.

dubbed
07-17-2010, 11:55 AM
cerz nice stuff

CERZone
07-17-2010, 11:59 AM
thanks bro

Loki X Sho
07-17-2010, 12:07 PM
structures for conformists.
I'll never paint that anyways..I wing it when I go out.

dubbed
07-17-2010, 12:11 PM
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/3733/sicesimp.jpg

CERZone
07-17-2010, 01:33 PM
good start. color. some 3d, outlining. go into depth with the piece and see how it turns out

LeaksOne
07-17-2010, 01:53 PM
Cerz, I absolutely HATE that flower with the arrows

CERZone
07-17-2010, 01:58 PM
hahaha, why.. i dont know, i drew the flower for a friend and it was in my blackbook so i just tryed to give it the graffiti feel i guess

Sbal
07-17-2010, 02:20 PM
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/9839/dsc04419n.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/395/dsc04420a.jpg
http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/5701/dsc04421.jpg
Some of my first attempts towards a simp.
Sice- I like it.
Sloth- Lose the hump on the side of the H and keep it like that. Restart everything else.

PREA672
07-17-2010, 02:36 PM
sbal- try a capital A instead of a lower case on those throwies..

4HER
07-17-2010, 02:49 PM
structures for conformists.
I'll never paint that anyways..I wing it when I go out.

Who the fuck are you?
Your letters are WEAK. You just shunned some really solid advice on how to IMPROVE.
''blaahh blahh i don't want to be conformist and standard graffiti..''
Guess what.. your work is STANDARD POOR TOY.
There's nothin wrong with wantin to be different, but youre not and you never will be unless you take some constructive advice and improve your letters.

RES4
07-17-2010, 03:00 PM
loki- listen to the crits. seriously

i had real bad writers block recently so i took this pic and tried to design this around it without directly biting, apart from the a was a bit bitten.
it actually helps a lot, way more than i thought actually
http://jasonburnz.files.wordpress.com/2009/12/aplus.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4102/4802184041_230a761359.jpg

weakfingers
07-17-2010, 03:03 PM
Thats so tight ^ go with that and itill get better.


How are these simples looking?
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0007-3.jpg

*Patch!
07-17-2010, 03:03 PM
the only thing that is close to that piece is the A which is pretty much bitten

Sbal
07-17-2010, 03:24 PM
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/9839/dsc04419n.jpg
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/395/dsc04420a.jpg
http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/5701/dsc04421.jpg
Some of my first attempts towards a simp.
Sice- I like it.
Sloth- Lose the hump on the side of the H and keep it like that. Restart everything else.

Bottom page bump. and prea, what's wrong with using a lowercase a.

Meph*
07-17-2010, 04:06 PM
http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/brainer.jpg

res4- that piece you started in the bottom i dig a lot, cant wait to see it fully colored.

weakfingers- those letters look nice and simple, something easy that would look good on a wall ( the backwards R is cute)

RES4
07-17-2010, 04:17 PM
weak- i prefer the first r and the second u, looking pretty good
sbal- keep working on the orange one, make the l more pronounced for one thing
meph- did anyone else notice the name on the brains, that was a god idea just need clean up a bit. and i will never finish it. i have no pens only biros and one red colouring pencil. im to ghetto for that shit

CERZone
07-17-2010, 05:33 PM
weak- lose the glitter

PREA672
07-17-2010, 06:14 PM
sbal- just fix it a little, just saying lowercase is a little harder to make work.. just keep at it.

Meph*
07-17-2010, 07:29 PM
thanks for the crit res4 and yeah i thought a throw up on the brain was mind-blowing too lol

4HER
07-17-2010, 07:50 PM
http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/brainer.jpg

havnt posted in a while, got busy did this last week please crit, let me know if its creative or just weird..

I like this. It's a cool concept. Would love to see it at a crazier angle though, rather than front on.
Like, lookin at the guy more from above, really seein the brain spewing out towards you, drippin n shit..

M3KA1!
07-17-2010, 10:50 PM
Who the fuck are you?
Your letters are WEAK. You just shunned some really solid advice on how to IMPROVE.
''blaahh blahh i don't want to be conformist and standard graffiti..''
Guess what.. your work is STANDARD POOR TOY.
There's nothin wrong with wantin to be different, but youre not and you never will be unless you take some constructive advice and improve your letters.

you. calm down. why cant she do her own shit without you bustin out the insults? you dont NEED to like it. Loki do yer thang

Zookyook
07-17-2010, 11:24 PM
aspek u in chitown??? i cant see too much influence in ur sketch besides the A and the separate bar in the P... id like to see something from u that doesnt flare out at the bottom, like all ur letters always are thin on top and thick on the bottom, switch it up and maybe ull like what comes out...

loki i dont like the wonky arrow extensions... if u dont like typical graff u dont have to go out and paint any... ill admit when i started painting i wanted to rock pieces and ive painted AND sketched a few wack pieces, but once u get serious about wanting to develop ur own style, u realize that u haveta go simpler to progress faster..... its just better to practice with simpler letters if u want to progress into ur own style and not constantly put up stuff no one likes to see... im not saying conform, i never would, but starting with the basics is just part of the game

nickstix
07-18-2010, 12:07 AM
Meph- Maybe try placing the letters as more of a part of the brain rather than a tumor sticking out the side...other than that it looks cool

Sbal- try sketching keyborad letters using bars. If you need help with bars look at the new to graff thread.

weakfingers- That belongs on a wall. pleasing to the eyes.


Something I started for the Break battle, Only an outline for now b/c I might re-do it. The E, A, and K are alittle close because I started running out of page.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/DSCN5262.jpg

Should I add 3-D and fill? or Re-do it with better spacing? also advice on the letters would be nice.

crits?

LeaksOne
07-18-2010, 12:11 AM
i dont like how the left leg of the A goes into the E

LeaksOne
07-18-2010, 12:14 AM
hahaha, why.. i dont know, i drew the flower for a friend and it was in my blackbook so i just tryed to give it the graffiti feel i guess

the flower and background are fine but the arrows are uneccessary and ridiculous. ruins the whole thing for me.

nickstix
07-18-2010, 12:24 AM
i dont like how the left leg of the A goes into the E

Yea I dont really like that either, but wanted to make sure I fit the K on the page and couldnt make it fit a better way that looked good. didnt feel like erasing the entire thing.

o well I decided to add 3d and a little color...

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/DSCN5267.jpg

mekosbc
07-18-2010, 01:24 AM
loki i love you =]

SicK-
07-18-2010, 06:27 AM
ASPEK-Like always your stuff is really clean, and your structure is great, i dont like the p though
REDUX-I like those, Alot actually, bottom one in my opinion is definitly better
Nickstix- The thing goin on with the E and A kills the whole thing for me
TOFE-i still doesnt seem like your listening to the crits you get, 2nd picture last on is best work with that, but i love your throwie
SBAL-what can i say, just keep practicing, look at alot of photos of graff and practice

FlippingChickens
07-18-2010, 07:10 AM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3478.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3477.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3476.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3475.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3473.jpg

BlacktodaFuture
07-18-2010, 07:44 AM
nothing has really changed while i have been gone, no one is really improving.

weakfingers and aspek are the only good ones.

4HER
07-18-2010, 10:43 AM
you. calm down. why cant she do her own shit without you bustin out the insults? you dont NEED to like it. Loki do yer thang

Sorry. Didn't mean to rant/insult like I did.
But still, just fucks me off to see writers throwing away really good advice because they think they're much better than they are.
You're right, I don't NEED to like it. But if Loki is hoping to get real props from anyone on this site, she should probably at least be a bit more respectful about the help people are trying to give her.
By all means Loki, do what you want, dare to be different. But above all, aim to improve by any means necessary; even if you have to 'conform' a little bit for now.

Meph*
07-18-2010, 12:16 PM
http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/concept.jpg

future pice on the way

Meph*
07-18-2010, 12:18 PM
piece*

extinct
07-18-2010, 02:24 PM
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03803.jpg
... crits... after all i am a toy... no shit

extinct
07-18-2010, 02:40 PM
fail tag at bottom... srry i waz lazy

LeaksOne
07-18-2010, 02:45 PM
With a fail piece on top. Introduce yourself to simples. Hopefully the two of you Get along well.

weakfingers
07-18-2010, 03:28 PM
what he said.


Took a break from drawing for abit and now im just messing around with things.
http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/SDC12073.jpg

SicK-
07-18-2010, 03:36 PM
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/Graffiti/wermM.jpg
Can i get some critsssss?

iamBoZ96
07-18-2010, 03:38 PM
ive seen this like 3 times

Baron
07-18-2010, 03:57 PM
Flipping chickens, pics 2 & 4 are good, keep working with that style.
Redux, I'm digging the backwards R on the throws and the pen piece at the bottom is ill but it seems like your X isn't quite going with the style of the piece.

First sketches in more than a few months, trying to get my steez back.
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn289/uncreative507/Clean%20Slate/DSCN2593.jpg
http://i307.photobucket.com/albums/nn289/uncreative507/Clean%20Slate/DSCN2592.jpg

Edit- Isn't it still "Give crits to get crits"?

SicK-
07-18-2010, 04:22 PM
ASPEK-Like always your stuff is really clean, and your structure is great, i dont like the p though
REDUX-I like those, Alot actually, bottom one in my opinion is definitly better
Nickstix- The thing goin on with the E and A kills the whole thing for me
TOFE-i still doesnt seem like your listening to the crits you get, 2nd picture last on is best work with that, but i love your throwie
SBAL-what can i say, just keep practicing, look at alot of photos of graff and practice

Bottom page bump

Cyto Aka Son1c
07-18-2010, 05:25 PM
http://i29.tinypic.com/14t4lep.jpg
it's awesome when u have a dad who makes over 10k per painting

hey check out what's just chillin in my hallway

http://i32.tinypic.com/2jaj7yd.jpg

this painting got picked out of like 800 other bay area artists to be in a figure contest, unfortunatly he didn't win.

Meph*
07-18-2010, 06:13 PM
Baron- i think if u even out the bars on the first one it'll look sick.

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/rall2.jpg
i know the coloring isnt that good, please leave crits anyways

Phillip McDougall
07-18-2010, 06:15 PM
@Cyto
That's fucking rad.

filur
07-18-2010, 06:22 PM
Meph - I love those ideas! :)

Meph*
07-18-2010, 06:34 PM
thanks I've been working at it all day:D

4HER
07-18-2010, 10:33 PM
Extinct - Could write an essay on what's wrong with that piece but.....
remember, anyone can colour in. You really need to study other letters a lot, then apply parts of what you see. Draw your letters and keep working and reworking and reworking them until youre really happy with them. Then you can think about colours.

Weakfingers - I'm a big fan of your throwies. Never been able to do them so well myself. Big props

Meph* - There's nothin wrong with the colouring, its just that the whole page has no depth. You really need to work into it, making parts darker and lighter. That top piece looks like its supposed to be 3d, but you cant tell cos theres no shadow or sheen on it.

2FNK?
07-18-2010, 10:50 PM
http://i731.photobucket.com/albums/ww318/coldhardclimber/IMG01318-20100718-0036.jpg

drums
07-18-2010, 10:53 PM
meph i like your idea of the IC turbo and BOV on your IC piping letters but you need to at least make sure those pipes look round to make it look right when its are finished

extinct
07-19-2010, 12:31 AM
Extinct - Could write an essay on what's wrong with that piece but.....
remember, anyone can colour in. You really need to study other letters a lot, then apply parts of what you see. Draw your letters and keep working and reworking and reworking them until youre really happy with them. Then you can think about colours.

Thanks for the advice.. ive been playin around with a small e an a whole lot of random stuff... so here iz a small quick <i dont know> (gatta keep practicing)
crits an tips plz

http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03806.jpg

drums
07-19-2010, 12:57 AM
crits from a toy (me)...
i like the reflection and 3d but the letters could use some more...i duno...style? put more time into the letters and less on the background shit

extinct
07-19-2010, 01:07 AM
thanks man... im kinda thinkin of jus spammin "Q" every where instead of eqs but still...
pce

nickstix
07-19-2010, 01:53 AM
extinct- You have some cool ideas but wait on that stuff for awhile and just work on letters. Using bars sketch letters that look like how they do on your keyboard. For instance the top bars on your e dont line up right. and the top right section of the s the 3d should be overlapping the main letter. Also i didnt get that the thing in the middle was a Q untill I saw your tag. Tag needs some work, go simpler. Keep sketching


Something I started tonight in a friends book, calling it a night and leaving it as a pencil outline for now, finish it tomorrow.

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/bbook1-5.jpg

crits?

drums
07-19-2010, 02:13 AM
nice even bars. props

sezer
07-19-2010, 02:38 AM
rekt: nice work, better then probably what I could do, but Fix the top of the T, watch the letter's width because i think it could totally mess you up

extinct: wtf?

baron: nice fucking work, simply dope.

weakfingers: same message I gave baron.

2FNK?: start with straight lines, I used to do this until i realized it was shit because I just put random bumps outta no where. Try SUPOZ just like that then advance from there.


anyways, crits?

http://i32.tinypic.com/2zhk4lh.jpg

I know the height isnt exactly straight, i'm super tired but an urge to do this :p

PREA672
07-19-2010, 04:15 AM
2006
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_3020.jpg

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_3024.jpg

PREA672
07-19-2010, 04:18 AM
2008
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_3346.jpg


blast from the past...

SicK-
07-19-2010, 07:11 AM
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/Graffiti/wermM.jpg
Can i get some critsssss?

Bump for crits

Meph*
07-19-2010, 08:56 AM
thanks for the crits, i wanted to use shining and shower but at the same time i dont want to fuck it up cuz im not that good at shining and shadowing

4HER
07-19-2010, 11:26 AM
thanks for the crits, i wanted to use shining and shower but at the same time i dont want to fuck it up cuz im not that good at shadowing

I know exactly where youre coming from, but try not to be too precious about your work.
Usually when ive done a sketch and im gonna colour it, i scan it and print a few rough copies to try stuff out on.
If you dont have a scanner, then just trace and copy some sample parts of your sketch onto paper to try different shading techniques on.
I think it could be lookin nice if you get a proper metallic look going on that piece and some shading on the tyres and body of the car..


Bump for crits

The actual letter structure is pretty decent on this, but certain parts could do with tightening up.
Those rounded ends at the bottom of the R and M, for example. Theyd probably look a lot better if they were sharper, like the ends of the E you got.
The R would probably look nicer without the bent leg in it too. More like a standard keyboard R, if you get me?


Thanks for the advice.. ive been playin around with a small e an a whole lot of random stuff... so here iz a small quick <i dont know> (gatta keep practicing)
crits an tips plz

Aside from other things, i think your pencil control is letting you down quite a lot. Its really really sketchy, like the lines dont look very considered. Take your time over it. Do what nickstix said (nice sketch nickstix btw).

Meph*
07-19-2010, 11:56 AM
thanks again for the crits...ill try those tips and yeh my hands are very shaking so sketching is the only way i know of drawing :S and its a P not an R (just clarifying it)

extinct
07-19-2010, 12:31 PM
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
what memph said

nickstix
07-19-2010, 08:42 PM
^if your hands are shaky try sketching with the heel of your hand at like the wrist area resting on the page/table

extinct
07-19-2010, 09:27 PM
tried actually using bars for once... ya i know im really retarded... didnt come out to bad

http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03809.jpg

ya i erase alot.. an i cant draw lightly... so...

justin kayse
07-19-2010, 09:32 PM
seyr and prea are the only ones i'm feeling
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4075/4797887003_5cb7887485_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4122/4806017018_f441a8212b_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4141/4806233669_fdb179a1e1_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4075/4807787942_fbc103be6c_z.jpg

Flawless Victory
07-19-2010, 10:16 PM
That shit.

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-19-2010, 10:19 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0254.jpg

sezer
07-19-2010, 10:31 PM
justin: try extending the E out abit more. and see what happens with that
posek: the K looks really retarded i'm sorry, otherwise the P aswell,

justin kayse
07-19-2010, 10:43 PM
yo thank you for liberating me from the rut i was stuck in, I just realized that I was stopping all of my e's short.

oh and here's some other flics, some are older
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4099/4810657327_25aeecb483_z.jpg

some are newer
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4117/4810656743_943b002605_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4115/4810657019_cb226f16de_z.jpg

ThatguywhodrinksTea
07-19-2010, 11:15 PM
http://i87.photobucket.com/albums/k124/Myles48/IMG_0261.jpg

^ making me sleepy... dope

ASHiS
07-20-2010, 12:06 AM
http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/8353/cimg0017.jpg (http://img844.imageshack.us/i/cimg0017.jpg/)

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Crit please!

sezer
07-20-2010, 12:10 AM
lol@doublepost

Lose the arrows
where the fuck is that arrow under the s coming from? this shit aint no magic show. just start simple

ASHIS.

there you go, copy that.

justin kayse
07-20-2010, 12:19 AM
ashis... http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?t=2185

extinct
07-20-2010, 12:51 AM
tried actually using bars for once... ya i know im really retarded... didnt come out to bad

http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03809.jpg

ya i erase alot.. an i cant draw lightly... so...

i feel so unloved :(

sezer
07-20-2010, 12:57 AM
hensing that you dont give any crits, dont expect to recieve any.

PREA672
07-20-2010, 12:58 AM
atleast you didn't get ripped on ^

ASHiS
07-20-2010, 01:01 AM
haha! Thx man.. Guess I'm tryn too hard.. I'll draw simple first.. And the arrow was suppossed to be from the h.. Just sayn.. Idk.. I like it..

extinct
07-20-2010, 01:16 AM
ok then..
ashis- from a toy... arrows add flow.. placing them randomly isnt balanced or flowing
posek- thats dope
bedhead- i like the top one but i hate the character...

nickstix
07-20-2010, 02:00 AM
EQS- dont do sketches like that anymore. draw simples, like how they look on the keyboard. exactly like this: EQS then post

Ashis- same thing, do it like this: ASHIS with no arrows or extensions. sketch with bars

Posek and Bedhead your sketches are good I like them

No_TomorroW
07-20-2010, 02:41 AM
Something new :)
http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/1867/dsc0215d.jpg
http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/9186/dsc0216u.jpg

B.S. P0LICE
07-20-2010, 02:45 AM
fresk intermediate thread

sezer
07-20-2010, 03:27 AM
hey man you cant make that shit up, everyone's gonna approve before you can make him to the intermediate thread :\

in other words looks fine.

RES4
07-20-2010, 05:04 AM
aspek u in chitown??? i cant see too much influence in ur sketch besides the A and the separate bar in the P... id like to see something from u that doesnt flare out at the bottom, like all ur letters always are thin on top and thick on the bottom, switch it up and maybe ull like what comes out...

no im from the mecca of hip hop aka belfast

by switching it up you mean using straight bars or flaring at the top?

Phillip McDougall
07-20-2010, 06:15 AM
Fresker, that belongs in the Intermediate thread.

4HER
07-20-2010, 08:13 AM
FRESK... tasty.
I think id only suggest that maybe you be careful not to let the letters merge together too much? The letters are real nice but theyre gettin cramped, particularly on the second one..

extinct
07-20-2010, 10:36 AM
jus realized how i screwed up the 3d... knew somethin was wrong with the 3d but here it is the long waited simple (cheer clap be happy).... not rlly
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03814.jpg
jus thought i could make ma stuff look better with this...
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03810.jpg

lord_plankton
07-20-2010, 11:28 AM
tried actually using bars for once... ya i know im really retarded... didnt come out to bad

http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03809.jpg

ya i erase alot.. an i cant draw lightly... so...

you dont get much love because its gay... it did turn out bad. concentrate on your letters. and all that stuff hiphop lives blabla rap is dying blablabla my heart bleeds because the decay of culture (which youve never really experienced from what i can tell) all that crap makes you look way too gay to give love.

the char isnt that bad though except his can control

-Empty-Can-
07-20-2010, 12:25 PM
the char isnt that bad though except his can control

i lol'd irl

Sbal
07-20-2010, 01:02 PM
i lol'd irl

I did as well.

4HER
07-20-2010, 01:09 PM
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03810.jpg

EQS Man... maybe im playin devils advocate here, so to speak, but....
Maybe you should give up on letters altogether and be a character writer? Its obvious that youre way more interested in that kinda shit.
Ive certainly known some people in my time who just do crazy characters and murals but dont bother with pieces much, just a couple handstyles here and there...
If you were to do that though, would be best to move away from cliche hiphop shit...

Ronathon
07-20-2010, 02:15 PM
Hey guys, Im fairly new to this. Heres some pages from my blackbook. Id really appreciate some honest (and detailed if possible) feedback.
Please ignore any crowns and or words saying king. I know Im still a toy.
I do need help with my colours but some of the ones here are cause Im low on pens. But I have found a great 'supplier' so Im slowly building up my collection. ;)
And obviously on some of the black & white pics the 'colours' are just bleed through.
Also ignore notes such as 'done on cap' or 'cycle helmet'. I customise clothes so those are for my reference.

I write Cuban or C75.

And I havent gone through the whole sticker thread but does anyone know where to get free stickers in the UK? Apart from racking them obviously.

http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/1155/25034387.jpg
http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/3747/1001r.jpg
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/7279/1002n.jpg
http://img121.imageshack.us/img121/4715/1003o.jpg
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/870/1004gk.jpg
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/4003/1005id.jpg
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6718/1006bu.jpg

PREA672
07-20-2010, 03:29 PM
http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy292/michaelstolz/002-4.jpg

my N needs some lovin for you critters out there

extinct
07-20-2010, 03:38 PM
[/QUOTE]EQS Man... maybe im playin devils advocate here, so to speak, but....
Maybe you should give up on letters altogether and be a character writer? Its obvious that youre way more interested in that kinda shit.
Ive certainly known some people in my time who just do crazy characters and murals but dont bother with pieces much, just a couple handstyles here and there...
If you were to do that though, would be best to move away from cliche hiphop shit...[/QUOTE]
tru dat... good idea tho... jus a whole lot a dinosaurs around vancity seems pretty dope... gunna try stencils an some slaps

yo cuban the one with wings is dope

mexico
07-20-2010, 04:49 PM
cuban_ hey man you have some solid stuff, all kinda retro LA status.
prea_ saw you other stuff, liek that KEEN much better. fucking love that blocky shit, you gotta roller that on a wall. i think your N needs a slightly thinner diagonal bar, maybe dont bring it all the way to the bottom of the right bar.

any words of wisdom, chapos? 3d is not perfect.
http://i28.tinypic.com/e9gi86.jpg

sezer
07-20-2010, 09:22 PM
rekt: nice work, better then probably what I could do, but Fix the top of the T, watch the letter's width because i think it could totally mess you up

extinct: wtf?

baron: nice fucking work, simply dope.

weakfingers: same message I gave baron.

2FNK?: start with straight lines, I used to do this until i realized it was shit because I just put random bumps outta no where. Try SUPOZ just like that then advance from there.


anyways, crits?

http://i32.tinypic.com/2zhk4lh.jpg

I know the height isnt exactly straight, i'm super tired but an urge to do this :p

vbump

Flawless Victory
07-20-2010, 09:35 PM
That shit on the S and R is unnecessary, the hole in the E too.

that keen up there would make a straight roller, or like a big ass spot

b SQUARED 08
07-20-2010, 09:50 PM
Another sketch for a friend of mine:
http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj168/Griffery0508/Photo46.jpg

sezer
07-21-2010, 01:12 AM
NosE2: work on it, especially the E, it looks really weird with the middle bar close to the top like that but I really like the 1st one you posted. i'm talking about the 2nd post.

lost_is_getting_up: work on it man, start simple for now and then advance from time to time, then you can start adding shit to your letters.

lost_is_getting_up: <just another one.... any comment? -SNIP-> basically what I said for your 1st one. but in conclusino you need to start simple bro and advance from other writers but dont bite them. that's the only way you'll get better and you're putting alot of hard effort in your work then alot of us says that it is ugly.

kelsey: pretty nice, I'd fix up that L and aswell with the S. not really feeling it but yeah.

anyways here is my piece, crits?

http://i25.tinypic.com/2i8dao6.jpg

crits?

Ronathon
07-21-2010, 02:35 AM
Thanks for the comments guys.

@Prea
The K is obviously in front of the other letters as told by the 3d and overlap but then the other letters, especially the second E, look like they are just next to each other. You could try angling the bottom bar of the E's. That would give more opportunity for the shadow to do the same as the K. I know that would possibly mean switching up the E's altogether but try it. Make the diagonal bar of the N like the top diagonal bar of the K. So it mirrors it a bit. It will also make the N a bit thinner.

@Mexico
I like it but theres something that just looks wrong with the 3D on that bar coming down. And tbh Im not sure what. It may just be the way youve shaded it. Even the pencil lines tell a story and add direction that may be unintended. (Can you tell I went to art school lol)

@B Squared
Lovin that Kelsey! Good colour work.

@Sezer
I agree about those unnecessary bits. Especially just having the one hole on the last pic there. Id make the letters a bit more bold (they seem to thin out a bit at the bottom) and bring that green colour higher so it looks like an equaliser. But thats just me lol. Id def bring them higher tho. The colours on the shadow need changing up. I think the gray (?) needs to be darker. Try going over it with the red already on there, I think it might work. Im rubbish at doing that style on shadow tbh. I need to work on it mself.

FlippingChickens
07-21-2010, 02:51 AM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3479.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3481.jpg

shore 616
07-21-2010, 04:38 AM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo-0213.jpg

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo-0214.jpg
Misoe!

Zookyook
07-21-2010, 06:45 AM
by switching it up you mean using straight bars or flaring at the top?

either or... i just meant avoiding the flare at the bottom, u could do either one and itd be different

and i asked if u were in chicago cuz i saw the xmen piece that u were taking influence from, i thought u actually TOOK that picture not just took it from the net haha

4HER
07-21-2010, 07:07 AM
http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy292/michaelstolz/002-4.jpg

my N needs some lovin for you critters out there

N's tend to look best when you got two thick verticals with a skinny diagonal

mexico
07-21-2010, 07:35 AM
tofe_ yes! man keep workin' on it, good progression. that gumwad piece needs wallspace if you clean up your T, and maybe chop off the little top nubbin.

misoe_ I like both of these, they have merit but I feel liek your getting distracted by details. The I in your first one could be just a rectangle, with no dot, anyway it needs a little tweaking. I do not liek how your second M gets smaller on the bottom. love that "fresh gang" lettering, under the second one.

seyr_ get those letters nice and consistent and you will have a great starting point. once you've got a few sketches of those and all the bars are pretty even you can start to think on how you want to warp them.

b squared_ dude, sooo retro i almost didn't like it, then i realized it was mad clean and the steez was all consistent, thumbs up.

Meph*
07-21-2010, 07:57 AM
tofe- i like the top siple up on the first one a lot and i think the second one would look a lot better if you do straight letters and keep the pink O as is, i see you getting better with those two styles

misoe- i dig everything on the first one except the i, looks a little squished in, and the character on the second is straight.

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/Picture.jpg

just eating shit with letters, got bored of my tag trying to create a new one, help me with crits pleaaaase..

Ronathon
07-21-2010, 11:13 AM
@Misoe
I like the character. Def need to work on my characters.

Phillip McDougall
07-21-2010, 12:11 PM
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo-0213.jpg

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo-0214.jpg
Misoe!

Not bad. Nice handstyles, and nice character. Keep working at those pieces and we'll probably be seeing you in the Intermediate thread sometime soon.

extinct
07-21-2010, 12:20 PM
something i need help with...tryin to figure out what im gunna put on a 24x30 canvas...as ma summer art proj.
Misoe-nice drips on the first one they'r dope
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03815.jpg

extinct
07-21-2010, 12:23 PM
q

LeaksOne
07-21-2010, 02:17 PM
that piece is terrible. introduce yourself to simples. and make your sig smaller. thats fucking annoying

IllLogic
07-21-2010, 02:18 PM
damn leaks..haha

LeaksOne
07-21-2010, 02:26 PM
we gota stop beating around the bush.

RES4
07-21-2010, 02:30 PM
something i need help with...tryin to figure out what im gunna put on a 24x30 canvas...as ma summer art proj.
Misoe-nice drips on the first one they'r dope
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03815.jpg

you know if thats for school they would probably think its amazing

LeaksOne
07-21-2010, 02:31 PM
all the kids are guna jock him haha. everybodies guna ask him to do their name. lulz

HOLY SHIT THE MOON HAS SKI GOGGLES AND A PAINT RESPIRATOR ON!!!!1!! THAT IS SO HXC

IllLogic
07-21-2010, 02:37 PM
you know if thats for school they would probably think its amazing

sooo true. hahaaha

Zookyook
07-21-2010, 06:03 PM
HOLY SHIT THE MOON HAS SKI GOGGLES AND A PAINT RESPIRATOR ON!!!!1!! THAT IS SO HXC

thanks lol i was tryin to figure out wtf that was....

sober exchange, prolly wont finish anytime soon, any crits before i ink it?

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4114/4816817514_191ff1491b_b.jpg

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 07:46 PM
zooyook, i wouldnt of joined the 'E' and 'R' i dont think it looks right, but that's my opinion,
also not sure about the wavey part of the 'O' it dosent fit in with the rest i also feel
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn171/1kenny111/Snapshot_20100721.jpg

that's a piece of my anme i worked on, took em a couple of hrs, and i'd like peoples ideas on it

extinct
07-21-2010, 08:00 PM
yo leaks.... thats y i like this site cause people straight out say "u suck"... it makes ya wanna get better... hearin "your good" makes ya cocky an makes u feel like a piece of shit when u know u suck... kids in ma grade think this skaterkid is tha bomb an i suck... the kid bites of some internet base wildstyle horribly an cant even make block letters himself... i do suck, but atleast i aint as bad as him...

sezer
07-21-2010, 08:07 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/2i8dao6.jpg

crits?

bump.

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 08:09 PM
"thats y i like this site cause people straight out say "u suck"... it makes ya wanna get better
- true true

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 08:32 PM
http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/2573/cimg0019s.jpg (http://img708.imageshack.us/i/cimg0019s.jpg/)

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crits? plz no!!!

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 08:38 PM
@ashis, u missed the 3D at bottom of the right stick of the 'A' and you only ahve one over lapping letter, (the 'K' on the 'i') either overlap them all or non and work on your forcefield

@sezer what is that 3rd letter, im guessing it's a 'Y' check your 3D at aprts it's off

@both of you

mabey add some shines, or blocks, or char's, build it up a lil now, slowley tho

ILL STREET BLUES
07-21-2010, 08:45 PM
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/score.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/flavainyaear.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/orange2.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/bannana.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/blueangels.jpg
http://i599.photobucket.com/albums/tt74/mesr737rts/RIPEYT.jpg
i be exspressing to my full capabilities,
now im living in correctional facilities
cme?

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 09:09 PM
'MEVSR'
the initial 'M' is fresh i like it, needs more to it tho, fill it and give it shadow, just mess with it,
the 2nd 'MEVSR' is ok, i feel their is sumthing missing, or heirs something about it, but i cant put my finger to it
the throwies are ok, i'd work on them tho, and i dont like the open 'M' on the last one dosent look right :/

ASHiS
07-21-2010, 09:14 PM
Thx man! ill work on that

-NAUZ-
07-21-2010, 09:15 PM
np :)

nickstix
07-21-2010, 11:09 PM
Mevsr- I really like that simple in 3rd flick



zooyook, i wouldnt of joined the 'E' and 'R' i dont think it looks right, but that's my opinion,
also not sure about the wavey part of the 'O' it dosent fit in with the rest i also feel
http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn171/1kenny111/Snapshot_20100721.jpg

that's a piece of my anme i worked on, took em a couple of hrs, and i'd like peoples ideas on it

please be a troll....

LeaksOne
07-21-2010, 11:10 PM
yo leaks.... thats y i like this site cause people straight out say "u suck"... it makes ya wanna get better... hearin "your good" makes ya cocky an makes u feel like a piece of shit when u know u suck... kids in ma grade think this skaterkid is tha bomb an i suck... the kid bites of some internet base wildstyle horribly an cant even make block letters himself... i do suck, but atleast i aint as bad as him...

Glad to see your not a little bitch like most newcomers. Work with simples and go from there.


http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/2573/cimg0019s.jpg (http://img708.imageshack.us/i/cimg0019s.jpg/)

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crits? plz no!!!

Stop that shit. Do simples.


And mevsr I really like your style btw. Its a perfect bomber steez.

ASHiS
07-22-2010, 12:33 AM
Whats a fukin simple looks pretty simple to me lol!

LeaksOne
07-22-2010, 12:40 AM
yeah simply bad.

if you really need instructions on how to do simples head to your local wal-mart, go straight to the kids section, go to the books and pick out your favorite letter book.

extinct
07-22-2010, 01:55 AM
lol...
simple...got rlly bored an decided to add shitty extras.... ...bad lighting = orange paper...
fuck sony an their batteries that dont charge...the flick was rushed 2
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/DSC03817.jpg
hate yall

LeaksOne
07-22-2010, 01:58 AM
NOW your on the right track. get that down to get a good feel/understanding of your letters then slowly start adding your own steez. and i mean SLOWLY

extinct
07-22-2010, 02:12 AM
thanks leaks...

devia
07-22-2010, 02:13 AM
lol...
simple...got rlly bored an decided to add shitty extras.... ...bad lighting = orange paper...
fuck sony an their batteries that dont charge...the flick was rushed 2
hate yall

Holy shit that's a lot of excuses for why you don't think someone will like your work. You know, confidence is attractive and if you're going to be like this then that's how everybody else will feel about it.

Do the best that you can with what you have and it will show.

extinct
07-22-2010, 02:36 AM
BOMBING SCIENCE: site for writing an LIFE tips
lol

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 12:30 PM
sup guys. here are a few pieces i got in my black book. crits would be awesome.
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/SIGE01.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/SideNINJA.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/SIDECOLORED.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/InspredCOPEDEC.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/DECppp.png

FlippingChickens
07-22-2010, 12:56 PM
fuzzy - dont mean to crush ur feelings but all that shit looks wack,u need to do what eqs is doing..simple,clean,keyboard letters.

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3484.jpg http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3487.jpg

sinkilla1
07-22-2010, 01:02 PM
tofe why do u still suck uve been writing forever

Phillip McDougall
07-22-2010, 01:02 PM
Same thing with you, Tofe.

PheltErUp
07-22-2010, 01:21 PM
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/9455/jdsbjsdag.jpg

PREA672
07-22-2010, 01:33 PM
that background reminds me of AUNR ZEE

DECO ONE
07-22-2010, 02:20 PM
Can i just say that Phelt is the only one on this page that has the right idea.. and TOFE isnt far off...but the rest of you.... starting out SIMPLE.... draw the letters on your keyboard.. OVER...and OVER...and OVER!... til you have an idea of shape, sizing, structure... only then will anything you do look remotely good....

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 02:29 PM
[QUOTE=FlippingChickens;1646769]fuzzy - dont mean to crush ur feelings but all that shit looks wack,u need to do what eqs is doing..simple,clean,keyboard letters.

Personally... i think your full of shit. no offense. but i think my shit looks better than what you just posted...and if what the other members say about you writing forever and still sucking. then. you have no room to talk. just saying...

Etcha
07-22-2010, 02:32 PM
quick something for a mate.
think there's too much going on tho.

http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/8854/dscf1434s.jpg

FlippingChickens
07-22-2010, 02:34 PM
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/SIGE01.png


yea u burn me,i wish i had arrows this good..just look at them drips holy shit how sick...and that ninja is fresh


emba- i really like everything except that bar sticking out the bottom of the r with the heart

extinct
07-22-2010, 02:37 PM
fuzzy - dont mean to crush ur feelings but all that shit looks wack,u need to do what eqs is doing..simple,clean,keyboard letters.


seriously people should.... makes everything easier later in the game

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 02:44 PM
Personally... i think your full of shit. no offense. but i think my shit looks better than what you just posted...and if what the other members say about you writing forever and still sucking. then. you have no room to talk. just saying...
aaaahahahahha. for real?

Kid, you are a fucking clown. EVERYTHING you posted sucks dick, ZERO good qualities to it. Shut your fucking mouth and get to practicing. JUST SAYING.

FlippingChickens
07-22-2010, 02:55 PM
flawless are u kidding me,did u see those arrows..kid is sick wit it

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3467.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3488.jpg

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3491.jpg

-Empty-Can-
07-22-2010, 03:17 PM
tofe first one isn't bad. I just don't like how the bottom of the F is rounded when evrything else is straight

sinkilla1
07-22-2010, 03:24 PM
haha cover of my black book messy as fuck tofe please get better
http://i31.tinypic.com/2rr9ufb.jpg

NosE2
07-22-2010, 03:27 PM
ahaha tofe you are biting that throwie T so hard its stupid

hpir
07-22-2010, 03:35 PM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/004.jpg

NosE2
07-22-2010, 03:37 PM
Your N looks like a R. Fix that

KRE1
07-22-2010, 03:39 PM
http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3272/001wuc.jpg

PREA672
07-22-2010, 04:53 PM
ahaha tofe you are biting that throwie T so hard its stupid

NOSE2 shut your mouth. your the biggest fool on this site

sinkilla1
07-22-2010, 05:10 PM
i fucking hate u tofe fucking hate u

FlippingChickens
07-22-2010, 05:11 PM
lol

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3493.jpg

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 05:30 PM
Damn! Lol so much hate. Calm down bro haha arguing over the Internet is pointless and dumb like special olympics. Lmao

Mr yarbles
07-22-2010, 05:33 PM
HAHA yeah man cus I've never heard that joke before

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 05:39 PM
Hahahahahahaaa!!! Fuck yea!!!

PREA672
07-22-2010, 05:41 PM
http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy292/michaelstolz/IMG_0778.jpg


tattle tales, youll find em by followin their blood trails

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 06:27 PM
Damn! Lol so much hate. Calm down bro haha arguing over the Internet is pointless and dumb like special olympics. Lmao
I don't see what's pointless or dumb about the special olympics.
The mentally and physically handicapped are fucking people too, prick.


that scribe it dope, but I'd like it more if the.... shakiness? (I don't really know how else to describe it, squiggles?) were a bit more subtle and uniform.

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 06:38 PM
hahaha! the special olympics are pointless, no one watches them or talks bout them. im not saying their not human. they are, just... special ones. hahaha!

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 06:40 PM
Nobody watches or talks about your graffiti. I guess it's pointless, so you should quit.

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 06:43 PM
ooh! that one hurt!.... lol like i hurt your moma last night! ahahahaha!! no one talks bout your shit either nukka! yo mama so fat her shadow wieghs 50 pounds!! hahaha!! im done with you man... lol your fucking wack.

M3KA1!
07-22-2010, 06:43 PM
schooled. hard. and I WATCH THE GODDAMN SPECIAL OLYMPICS YOU SLUT

FlippingChickens
07-22-2010, 06:44 PM
fuzzy u fucking suck shut the fuck up already

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3406.jpg

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 06:45 PM
no you don't.

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 06:47 PM
ooh! that one hurt!.... lol like i hurt your moma last night! ahahahaha!! no one talks bout your shit either nukka! yo mama so fat her shadow wieghs 50 pounds!! hahaha!! im done with you man... lol your fucking wack.
So you're a woman beater? Cool, dude. Or are you saying that you fuck fat chicks? Because that's disgusting, have some standards.

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 06:47 PM
you suck dick muthafuckaaaa! lol your shit is gay get outa here go suck a dick faggot. hahahaa your never gona get any better bitch. fucking poser...

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 06:49 PM
Okay dude, go worry about e-cops, or ONE crew.

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 06:50 PM
hahaha! wtf? hellz no! and Tofe, your shit is gay and always will suck dick. you shit facefaggot. get outta here your shit always suck

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 06:50 PM
hahaha! wtf? hellz no! and Tofe, your shit is gay and always will suck dick. you shit facefaggot. get outta here your shit always sucks

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 06:52 PM
Are you 13?

PREA672
07-22-2010, 06:54 PM
fuzzy2 you run your mouth alot dont you? you ever been stomped on? you seem like a kid who would get stomped alot

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 06:55 PM
maybe i am! what the fuck does it matter... im having fun with this! lol im bored as hell... maybe ill do your fat mom! hahahaha! whatever im done. lol Tofe sucks dick. your work is shit. its all the same... your better off writting on the walls with crayons. hahahahaa!

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 06:58 PM
writting?
Okay, you aren't 13; you're 9.

M3KA1!
07-22-2010, 07:11 PM
lets settle this shit over a battle. you lose you gtfo.

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 07:11 PM
I'm actually 7

PREA672
07-22-2010, 07:12 PM
M3 has got a great idea.. battle kid

M3KA1!
07-22-2010, 07:16 PM
get buck and get wrecked

PREA672
07-22-2010, 07:25 PM
looks like hes scared

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 07:50 PM
Say what? I was gone. A battle eh? Well how ling have you been drawing? I'm not gona compete with someone that's kickass and has alot of support just because their a senior member and are known on this site. Gimme the details!

iamBoZ96
07-22-2010, 08:04 PM
hey fuzzy2 please tell me you dont write fuzzy

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 08:06 PM
Noi don't write fuzzy. Lol

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 08:07 PM
you suck dick muthafuckaaaa! lol your shit is gay get outa here go suck a dick faggot. hahahaa your never gona get any better bitch. fucking poser...

You obviously don't think I'm very good, so why do you need to know how long I've been in the game? Just battle me.

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 08:10 PM
No. Why the fuck am I going to waste my time battling you when you know you smash me... Let me see some of your best works then I'll consider it. And that post was towers tore not you.

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 08:12 PM
You said I suck dick, kid.
You obviously think you're better than I am, so just go for it.

-Empty-Can-
07-22-2010, 08:16 PM
were are the mods?

lol

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 08:16 PM
That you suck dick post was to tofe dumb bitch... Let me see some of your best works

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 08:37 PM
Nah dude, if you are going to insult me battle me or get the fuck out, child.

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 08:51 PM
alright whatever fag... way to declare a battle and pussy out...

Sbal
07-22-2010, 08:56 PM
arguing over the internet is pointless and dumb like special olympics. Lmao

i see what you did thar!!!

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 08:59 PM
I just TOLD YOU to battle me.... how is that pussying out?
You do ANYTHING you want, piece, throw, ANYTHING.
I'll do a hand. You pick the word.

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 09:04 PM
No. Why the fuck am I going to waste my time battling you when you know you smash me... Let me see some of your best works then I'll consider it. And that post was towers tore not you.
Like i said before...

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 09:04 PM
So you admit I'll smash you, so you forfeit?
Then leave, please.

Fuzzy2
07-22-2010, 09:11 PM
fuck you bro... your just a toy. you'll never get anywhere. i doubt you even hit up the streets before. pussy. i'm wasting my time with your dumbass... no point in argueing with you anymore. your retarded. lol maybe ill watch you perform in the special olympics. shit this is why i hate sites with to many punk asses like you. your all just a bunch of clicks. you cant do nothing. i havent even seen your pieces, yet you crit mine saying their shit?! who the fuck are you? just a punkass lil kid that sucks dick at graffiti. peace out fags. this site blows because of posers like you. go fuck yourself. worthless shit bag.

-NAUZ-
07-22-2010, 09:14 PM
ooft seems like we have episode 2 of cyber wars: return of the keyboard warrior

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 09:14 PM
hahahahahahaha. battle me then dude.
If I am so HORRIBLE, then if you battle me, you will WIN, so why won't you do it?
YOOOU SCAAAARED, COURAGE THE COWARDLY DOG ASS NlGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

H1P30N3R
07-22-2010, 09:20 PM
just dont write his name fv or he will probably be runnin around his city jockin your steez

nickstix
07-22-2010, 09:22 PM
sup guys. here are a few pieces i got in my black book. crits would be awesome.
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/SIGE01.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/SideNINJA.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/SIDECOLORED.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/InspredCOPEDEC.png
http://i757.photobucket.com/albums/xx217/Fuzzycan/DECppp.png

lets not forget what your work looks like...

you honestly have no room to be saying anyone is bad. And if you do say someone else is bad, at least have the balls to battle them

NosE2
07-22-2010, 09:29 PM
yo this is bullshit im on this wack connection in this dui course and i had to read through 3 pages of some 14 year old kids bickering? for real dude, wheres the mods..

Flawless Victory
07-22-2010, 09:32 PM
I'm 18, actually.
You mad about it? Don't drink and drive next time, homie.

KRE1
07-22-2010, 09:33 PM
http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3272/001wuc.jpg

bump

idk401
07-22-2010, 09:36 PM
http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222602.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222833.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222741.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222646.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222618.jpg

http://i532.photobucket.com/albums/ee326/urboynoe93/222440.jpg



some shit blahhh> quick simps

NosE2
07-22-2010, 09:40 PM
on that muze that m looks like a R....

Mr yarbles
07-22-2010, 11:04 PM
What the fuck is this?
Flawless gets to say whatever he wants but whenever I talk my posts get deleted
Fuck you bombing science.

FlippingChickens
07-23-2010, 12:44 AM
bump for crits

http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3493.jpg

fuzzy if ur going to continue to talk out of your ass be prepared to battle

LeaksOne
07-23-2010, 12:55 AM
lots of akward lines in that, tufe.

aekone
07-23-2010, 12:55 AM
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo9.jpg

Just happy I can finally post here. When I came to bombingscience I couldn't even pretend to do a piece. :D

LeaksOne
07-23-2010, 01:01 AM
i dig it. maybe not the insides of the H but thats minor and a personal preference.

aekone
07-23-2010, 01:15 AM
Thanks man I appreciate it. I know it's not amazing but I've worked on that shit a looot. Like I never thought I'd be able to piece but it just kind of happened. My friend got me to draw while I was lifted and I did some decent shit and I was like "Woah!" Been attempting to seriously piece for like 3 weeks now and I just did this tonight. Makes me happy :D
Got a long way to go tho. /swt

nickstix
07-23-2010, 02:34 AM
aekone- its nice and clean. good structure. the backgrounds a little much for me but thats preferance.

finally finished what I did in a friends book

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/bbook.jpg

crits?

zeevok
07-23-2010, 09:07 AM
Yo, I just made an account and was wondering what you guys though about some of this? im a bit stuck for colour. any ideas/crits?
http://i828.photobucket.com/albums/zz204/zeevok/IMG_0112.jpg
http://i828.photobucket.com/albums/zz204/zeevok/IMG_0109.jpg
And also sorry about the size not sure how to downsize pics.

IbuprofenTablets
07-23-2010, 09:30 AM
Work on your letter structure, and proportions.
The little "shine" effect you gave it made some of the letters gross-er than they already were.

Mr yarbles
07-23-2010, 11:31 AM
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo9.jpg

Just happy I can finally post here. When I came to bombingscience I couldn't even pretend to do a piece. :D

U is too open
and there's some akward cuts that need touching up

aekone
07-23-2010, 11:48 AM
Hey thanks for the crits Yarbles. I was thinking that same thing about the U. Ehh I'll work on that. And what do you mean by awkward cuts? Sorry to bother ya I'm just not too familiar with piecing terms.

MERTAone
07-23-2010, 12:52 PM
zeevok-dont worry about wilds or 3d yet man do some simps for a bit thats what ive been doing lately and it improves your structure greatly when you go back to wildstyle
aek- that uhoh piece wouldve been improved by a lot without the awkward red splotches, and your letter structure is sound enough that you should start complicating shit a little more. A LITTLE. and listen to yarbles.
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7665/mertaorangepinkyellow00.jpg
still not ready for the main forum=\ but crit me on shit other than the letters cuz i already hate them

extinct
07-23-2010, 12:54 PM
nickstix- iz dope i rlly like the background

Mr yarbles
07-23-2010, 01:31 PM
http://i25.tinypic.com/35k5nx2.jpg

Heres something that will help the flow
Thicken the bars of the u and make them come in closer together
Try and get a little tail but not so much it looks like a y

on your h lose those little swoops they kinda kill the flow use more conventional straighter lines and remember to keep your bar thickness throughout those little squares are the cut lines that should be out I don't want to see little sectioned parts its a whole letter not 3 parts.

also on the last h I just added a bit of steez I think it would look good since you have that sideway flow going.

The only way you can learn is to keep practicing
Those are just some hints take some leave some overall it will help you develop flow.
Also this is in paint so try not to take it too literal because there's going to be some mistakes without a real pencil.

FlippingChickens
07-23-2010, 08:23 PM
http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3494.jpg

idk401
07-23-2010, 09:37 PM
Tofe make your middle bar of the E a bit bigger.

Mountain Dew
07-23-2010, 10:31 PM
Yo, I just made an account and was wondering what you guys though about some of this? im a bit stuck for colour. any ideas/crits?
http://i828.photobucket.com/albums/zz204/zeevok/IMG_0112.jpg
http://i828.photobucket.com/albums/zz204/zeevok/IMG_0109.jpg
And also sorry about the size not sure how to downsize pics.

theres someone who writes Revok and hes mad famous. u might wanna change ur name. and go a bit simpler. start off with straight letters

.Radio
07-23-2010, 11:10 PM
I'm new to this, so f*** me gently please.

My version of the LowLyfe tshirt:
http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/689/img0308u.jpg

I fk'd this up. i had a good idea, i thought, but its not deep enough and the o is too big.
http://img693.imageshack.us/img693/2134/img0309h.jpg

This is an actual maze too, haha
http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/1167/img0310hg.jpg

edit: lol @ name. no identity theft please.

NLITE
07-23-2010, 11:19 PM
thoughts/ advice

.Radio
07-23-2010, 11:37 PM
thoughts/ advice

You have clean lines.

Sbal
07-23-2010, 11:46 PM
. no identity theft please.

I am soooo stealing your identity.

.Radio
07-24-2010, 12:02 AM
I am soooo stealing your identity.

well 1 sh0uld b3 g00d unle55 y0u som3how figure out my s0cia1 security number

Zookyook
07-24-2010, 08:35 AM
this is fuckin dopeshit, get this shit in the intermediate thread... the bong looks fuckin convincing, nice coloring skills
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7665/mertaorangepinkyellow00.jpg

Phillip McDougall
07-24-2010, 09:34 AM
Letters aren't intermediate worthy.

IbuprofenTablets
07-24-2010, 10:32 AM
^ Agreed.
That TV head is SEEEEEEEXXX.

game...
07-24-2010, 10:36 AM
this is fuckin dopeshit, get this shit in the intermediate thread... the bong looks fuckin convincing, nice coloring skills
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7665/mertaorangepinkyellow00.jpg

guy this character is dope... i wanna see it painted,

nickstix
07-24-2010, 10:45 AM
aekone- its nice and clean. good structure. the backgrounds a little much for me but thats preferance.

finally finished what I did in a friends book

http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r98/nickstix91/blah/bbook.jpg

crits?

bump for crits

IbuprofenTablets
07-24-2010, 10:49 AM
My pieces are trash, so I'm no expert, But the dead space between the RE combo is screwing with the overall flow.