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Stigma02
09-20-2010, 09:50 PM
fuck ill put 3d on the next one btw i like how u used the red for the outline it blends in but it stands out just enough

FuckTheFame
09-20-2010, 10:09 PM
right on
3d can really pull a piece together
the colors on yours blend pretty close
what markers you use?

m+s
09-21-2010, 01:55 AM
try doin a thick out line.. once you have done your out line wrapp the out side of your letters to make them wider...

example:
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/108_0370.jpg

thats a nice effect but doesnt really pertain to his/her question.

the answer to how to drop shadow and 3d is fairly simple
you all know how to turn a square into a cube, yea?
http://www.cs.bham.ac.uk/~axs/fig/cube-only.png

well the idea is that you draw the same exact shape slightly offset in an arbitrary direction. then you draw in diagonal lines from the matching corner, right? Notice how the diagonal lines are all the same length and all parrallel to each other. that is crucial for the optical illusion of depth to take place.

so a drop shadow is when you draw the same dimensioned shape offset evenly and then do not connect up the edges with the parralell bars (the diagonal lines on the cube for instance). and simple no vanishing point 3d is acheived by connecting up those edges, case in point the cube pic

romero lookin good

m+s
09-21-2010, 02:08 AM
saint has the right idea. your slackin on makin those diagonal connectors parrallell, do it, itd look 10x better. and nice attempt at the vanishing point one yo, shit came out damn near propper.

which reminds me i forgot to speak on vanishing point 3d. the idea here is that instead of starting with evenly offsetting the image in a specific direction, you start with a single point that you determine to be your vanishing point. you then draw straight lines from that point to every edge that faces said point. once that is done decide how hefty you want the 3d to be by picking a specific lenght for the vanishing point lines, and then shortening them all to be the same length. after this is done, try your damndest to approximate what the shape of your object would look like going back into the page and with that in mind connect the new short ends of the vanishing lines as close to perpendicular to those vanishing points and as parrallel to the object as possible

gitter done
peas

m+s
09-21-2010, 02:17 AM
the F is cursive... like all the other letters. see how that works?

try suicide.

old shit.

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3314.jpg?t=1285010553

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3315.jpg?t=1285010553

yo i think you think that only the tops need to flow. naah doo, them whole shits have to make sense. keep at it


http://jamiedubs.com/fuckflickr/data/tshirts/web/haters-motivators.jpg
frienemy mother fuckers, hahahahahahaaaaaaahahahummm

m+s
09-21-2010, 02:29 AM
because i just went beast mode on this page like a dirty mother fucker i elect myself the king shit of the rest of its contents even if i posses no authoraty or spelling skills to back it up. WHAT SON

this thread is now the "did tutencommon ever get chilly enough in egypt to go an learn how to quilt, and if so where are king tuts lost quilts?" thread
http://rapidcitysewing.com/images/King%20Tut%20Thread.jpg
discussion, hate, what have you

drOping
09-21-2010, 02:34 AM
HAHAHHAHAHA well put bro...very clear your Location is fuckin brilliant!!

Fury
09-21-2010, 02:50 AM
Guys, how the fuck do you do 3D? I can't figure it out???
:confused::confused::confused:

Saint0913
09-21-2010, 07:35 AM
i know this is from graffiti creator.. some one wanted me to draw their name in it but is this wat ur talkin about with the vanishing point?

http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac296/Saint0913/012432.jpg

Saint0913
09-21-2010, 07:43 AM
http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac296/Saint0913/162345.jpg
http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac296/Saint0913/DSCN0655.jpg

Paint Pot & Pussy
09-21-2010, 03:22 PM
havent been around in a while
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/2526/soschoolwith3d.jpg
http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/8214/soschoolhollow.jpg
some quick school ish

EXI
09-21-2010, 05:06 PM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/224.jpg

just simple blocks, what you think?

dangeri
09-21-2010, 07:01 PM
Like that odu saint,

B+w similar to my last one, like the s n and t better, but other o fit nicer, hopefully paint it on fri if the weather holds up,
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm73/danger_i/634613f1.jpg

And bump 4 crits

B+w 4 the wall am painting 2mo, gotta sort the 3d out mind, no ideas on colours yet either, so suggestions + crits welcome
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm73/danger_i/cec97271.jpg

<[(Smokers187GSWM)]>
09-21-2010, 08:37 PM
Dangeri color that shit man!!
Saint-that odu is clean but the letters are a tad bit off
And I think I already addressed meko and safe
I'm still writing smoke for those who mite say they can't read...
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAxMzktMjAxMDA5MjEtMTIxOS5qcGc.jpg
Love the backwards S
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAxNDQtMjAxMDA5MjEtMTMwNS5qcGc.jpg

*Patch!
09-21-2010, 08:47 PM
smoke that second one is pretty dope but the E seems kinda weak in my opinion, your fills are sweet tho. And i love that throw on the bottom of the first picture
dangeri does tat say snot? thats a wicked sketch and if thats what it says i like how it has little snot like conncetions or whatever. I agree with smoke you should color it

EXI
09-21-2010, 10:25 PM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/224.jpg

just simple blocks, what you think?

bump for crits and new page

*Patch!
09-21-2010, 10:34 PM
sope, the curves in the S should be more square, like the holes in the O and P, that could bee a solid roller tho

FuckTheFame
09-21-2010, 11:15 PM
sope - your getting better everytime a see a new post from you
way to put in work

EXI
09-22-2010, 12:03 AM
sope - your getting better everytime a see a new post from you
way to put in work

Thanks man! I'm tryin my hardest to get out of simps!!! haha.

And about my S. Thanks! That's the first time I haven't heard someone say "just work on letter structer!"

<[(Smokers187GSWM)]>
09-22-2010, 02:03 AM
@patch, ya I know man I totally half assed my shit kuz I felt rushed seeing as this is my friends bb and I couldn't think of a decent enough E so I whipped that one up outta nowhere haha
And sope, that's real nice and all but I wana see like piece-worthy letters not rollers..although I would love to see that rolled up in paint if you can get to it

dangeri
09-22-2010, 05:11 AM
/\ yeah man! That like forty foot wide would look schweeet, and maybe colour em later. Always seem to destroy shit with colour,

aces
09-22-2010, 07:56 AM
Meko- Good shit! Lovin that style, keep it up.
Tofe- The drop shadow's a bit messy, the top bar on the T is a little wacked imo and not really feeling the O either. The throwie's pretty nice though and so is the 3D.
Stigma and Astro- Letter structure...work on it...
Romero- Not too bad the curves on the S and the U seem a bit necessary though.

http://i933.photobucket.com/albums/ad176/freeskierpjb/0919002009.jpg

SEAZ finally got something with more than just SE or SZ lol I've been having a hard time with my A's with any style I've worked on but I like this one. Any thoughts? Oh and the outline's only blue/black because its a blue marker over the orange lol...

Bump any crits?

dangeri
09-22-2010, 08:59 AM
Simplify and even your bars out dude, kinda looks like seo2 ATM, jus my 2penneth tho,

unique93
09-22-2010, 09:44 AM
new sketches :D
http://www4.picturepush.com/photo/a/4214072/640/4214072.jpg (http://picturepush.com/public/4214072)
and this(E and M are bad, but...but i will fix that)
http://www3.picturepush.com/photo/a/4228461/640/4228461.jpg (http://picturepush.com/public/4228461)

Saint0913
09-22-2010, 11:10 AM
Unique those are ill man nice work... i like the all red one u did. the colors in the second was nice also.. maybe use a perspective 3d if you do draw a 3d on it

MakeItTakeIt
09-22-2010, 03:13 PM
unique, what markers did you use for that top one? that red is hot shit

unique93
09-22-2010, 03:27 PM
i use this :D
http://english.fila.it/media/2529/071400_TURBOCOLOR_BIG.jpg

Zookyook
09-22-2010, 03:58 PM
unique that fill on the grid paper is clean shit.... interesting style

changed my name officially, nemor, i like it... fucking with it for the last 2 days, still need to work on a decent handy and throw with this name...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/5015137795_db2405be65.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4130/5015142925_7fe7295085.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4129/5015742962_af85b7403a.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4084/5015145691_934a0f227f.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4127/5015748242_969f01eb03.jpg

Phat 2
09-22-2010, 04:35 PM
y'd u change?

unique93
09-22-2010, 07:16 PM
i change E and M letter :D
http://www2.picturepush.com/photo/a/4231430/640/4231430.jpg (http://picturepush.com/public/4231430)

One Evil
09-22-2010, 07:49 PM
unique that fill on the grid paper is clean shit.... Interesting style

changed my name officially, nemor, i like it... Fucking with it for the last 2 days, still need to work on a decent handy and throw with this name...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/5015137795_db2405be65.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4084/5015145691_934a0f227f.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4127/5015748242_969f01eb03.jpg

bump!

PREA672
09-22-2010, 08:24 PM
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0835.jpg

Phillip McDougall
09-22-2010, 08:52 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4127/5015748242_969f01eb03.jpg

This. N kind of looks like a K, though. Round out the middle part of your M. and the round part on the R should not be cut in so deep on the bottom.

LeaksOne
09-22-2010, 08:59 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/5015137795_db2405be65.jpg


i like this one quite a bit except that R.

Saint0913
09-22-2010, 09:14 PM
unique that last one u did was fresh. what are you writing tho?

PREA672
09-22-2010, 09:18 PM
vote in the beef battle thread yo!

Get Rekt!
09-22-2010, 09:48 PM
binder cover for school. this is really just a shit show.
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0922002138.jpg

PREA672
09-22-2010, 10:27 PM
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0839.jpg

P-love
09-22-2010, 10:48 PM
thicken up your bars a little on your E my man, it doesn't really flow anymore

kew1
09-22-2010, 10:50 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/July-02_1538.jpg

EXI
09-22-2010, 11:10 PM
All this done in one day :). I try hards. and Kew is that done on your Girl or you? Pretty fukin sick dude, like it.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/225.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/211.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/212.jpg
^ thats my favorite so far

kew1
09-22-2010, 11:13 PM
thats a girl i dont wear a bra?

m+s
09-22-2010, 11:54 PM
Guys, how the fuck do you do 3D? I can't figure it out???
:confused::confused::confused:

wtf dude. read my long ass post explaining shit like 2 posts up from this question. i broke it all dowen for you, what is still confusing to you?

EXI
09-23-2010, 12:18 AM
All this done in one day :). I try hards. and Kew is that done on your Girl or you? Pretty fukin sick dude, like it.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/225.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/211.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/212.jpg
^ thats my favorite so far

bump for crit

Sbal
09-23-2010, 12:22 AM
Work on your tag homie

extinct
09-23-2010, 12:27 AM
and..... i return... post picks l8r... soap your handstyle might even b worse than mine...keep workin on it

Willis1989
09-23-2010, 05:08 AM
Crits on these please

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00305.jpg?t=1285232808

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00306.jpg?t=1285232882

Zookyook
09-23-2010, 09:12 AM
bump!

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4127/5015748242_969f01eb03.jpgThis. N kind of looks like a K, though. Round out the middle part of your M. and the round part on the R should not be cut in so deep on the bottom.

i like this one quite a bit except that R.

y'd u change?
thanks for the love n bumps my ninjas.....

i feel what ur sayin on the N and R crust, i kinda like the middle of the M though :cool:

and phat2 i changed for a lot of reasons... i wanted a 5 letter word, my gf thought of the name actually, after i gave her like 8 letters that i liked and told her to make 5 letter words from it.... personally i think its a good idea to change ur name once u know the basics of the game and u can put up more decent shit on freights and walls without people bein like 'consume? i saw some of ur shit a while back that was MAD TOY!!!!' haha so now im nemor....



Crits on these please
i dont like what ur doin with the 3d man... lose all the dots i say.... and dont dot ur L (?) and it usually flows better when u use either all capital letters or all lowercase... keep ur bar thicknesses consistant, like the top pic, the upper left part of the S, thats exactly what not to do... bottom pic, the left part of ur W IS what to do... at least ur not tryin "wildstyles" lmao keep practicing

EXI
09-23-2010, 11:25 AM
Yea my handstyle isn't that great, but hows my pieces?

kew1
09-23-2010, 12:39 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/September-23_1035.jpg
fucked up on the 3d

Sbal
09-23-2010, 07:43 PM
Sope- You're gonna be tagging wayyyyyy more than your going to piece, so work on your tag. I think the red ones best, the perple and green one has good 3d, but all the holes and add ons are distracting. And why is the P shitting out a blue leg in the first one?

proNYNJA
09-23-2010, 08:13 PM
sope- what sbal said.
wils- what zookyook said
kew1- it looks pretty clean, but yea. you fuked up on the 3d. Does is Say ERK?.

kew1
09-23-2010, 11:31 PM
yea it says erk i tried messin wit the letters like the wit the k an r to make it flow better

EXI
09-24-2010, 02:26 PM
Sope- You're gonna be tagging wayyyyyy more than your going to piece, so work on your tag. I think the red ones best, the perple and green one has good 3d, but all the holes and add ons are distracting. And why is the P shitting out a blue leg in the first one?

it's a horseshoe lol. idk why I drew it but I just did.
here's one i did yesterday, not that good
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/213.jpg

*Patch!
09-24-2010, 02:39 PM
sope i think you should just worry about doing black and white pieces for now intead of coloring. Its better to have solid structure as opposed to a solid fill, thats just my opinion

dangeri
09-24-2010, 02:50 PM
/\ agreed, shadow needs work aswell bud, e's shadow is gettin off, like that green n purple one above tho,

Wils, mega improvement from last time I seen y stuff, top one is sweet,

And kew, love your e's man,

EXI
09-24-2010, 02:56 PM
Yeah taht was my first time doing a shadow instead of a 3d so :p.

dangeri
09-24-2010, 03:12 PM
I find it helps if you draw the shadow as part of the letter, rarther than put it on as a last thing, :)

Dirty Doug
09-24-2010, 03:13 PM
i didint think id ever post my shit here but im curious what people think
been writing for close to a year but only seriously in the past couple months

http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/6388/snapshot201009241.jpg (http://img545.imageshack.us/i/snapshot201009241.jpg/)


[IMG]http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/1162/snapshot20100924.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/i/snapshot20100924.jpg/) Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

dj3hac
09-24-2010, 08:13 PM
Doug, the second one reminds me of a clown and too much acid, this isn't necessarily a bad thing! Keep it up bro!

proNYNJA
09-24-2010, 09:31 PM
doug- that 2nd looks like a clean fill, but im not digging all the yellow bubbles in your 3d.


some1 passed this huge books to me it was like 15"x20"
and i had it sitting in my closet for like 4 days with just the SERG on it. then i added the character and the Rising Sun backround last.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4113/5021338979_bf7dfeefe6_z.jpg

Heres is a new Steezy im working on, its a colab with my homie SPILZ.
if you don't notice, i fucked up on my drop shadow baaadddddd.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4108/5021945980_c354bda13e_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4106/5021946006_e94f2a1ea2_z.jpg

Stigma02
09-24-2010, 09:45 PM
serg try to keep ur 3d consistant make it it the same thickness as all other 3d

smokeitup
09-25-2010, 01:25 AM
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/1162/snapshot20100924.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/i/snapshot20100924.jpg/) Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

i like this one.

PREA672
09-25-2010, 01:41 AM
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0847.jpg

could this pass in the intermediate thread?

Phillip McDougall
09-25-2010, 11:05 AM
Not quite yet. But you're getting there. Keep it up.

Stigma02
09-25-2010, 03:36 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/theangrygorilla2005.jpg crits?

FuckTheFame
09-25-2010, 06:14 PM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1019.jpg
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1022.jpg

PREA - nice structure man. im jealous
STIGMA - still no 3d? work on those proportions too man

proNYNJA
09-25-2010, 09:52 PM
doug-

some1 passed this huge books to me it was like 15"x20"
and i had it sitting in my closet for like 4 days with just the SERG on it. then i added the character and the Rising Sun backround last.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4113/5021338979_bf7dfeefe6_z.jpg

Heres is a new Steezy im working on, its a colab with my homie SPILZ.
if you don't notice, i fucked up on my drop shadow baaadddddd.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4108/5021945980_c354bda13e_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4106/5021946006_e94f2a1ea2_z.jpg

bottom page bump for crits

prea: great straight letters
stigma im sorry but i cant read it, to much going on.
fucktheflame: top on is clean but u needa work on ur tags, bottom one is clean too

*Patch!
09-25-2010, 10:03 PM
that pink one is dope, somthing about the R bugs me but i dont know what

stigma- you're trying too hard, do less. Do nothing at all
prea do something more with that A, the rest i a pretty dope simple
dirty doug- it look good but the 3d is kinda lame in my opinion, the yellow doesnt really go well with the rest of the fill.

drOping
09-26-2010, 12:35 AM
stigma-simples
Prea-i dunno ur E is just one long bent bar and doesnt match ur p and R.
fuckjthefame-really dont know what it ssays but its not my cup of tea
surge-i personally dont like your superr loos style, there is no structural support in those letters...they will probably melt away


wish i could say this was a freestyle
http://i56.tinypic.com/2iut8c0.jpg

Shell703
09-26-2010, 03:42 AM
SIEK- I'd say make the S a little taller to match the rest of the letters, chill with the arrows for right now untill you get some solid letters going and get rid of that little peg by the K --what is that?? Thats a solid 3D though, just work on the shadings and highlighted areas, some of the highlighted areas shouldn't be highlighted.

SURGE- I don't know just not liking it- it looks more Powerpuff Girls than graff to me. Especially with those stars...but if thats what you're going for than so be it

FuckTheFame- dont know what you're doing

Stigma- does that say ROC?!@#RAC-RBC?

PREA- keep playing with those bars- fix that 3D though

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ABUsive.jpg
my absolute last piece of paper- dont like the B dont think it works well with the other letters I'd rather use a lowercase b but other than that whatcha think?
Dirty- don't really know what it says, work on your letters, the use of colors are good though I think thats what kinda holds the piece up-the colors within the letters and the yellows and pink contrast well

SOPE - grind those simples for a while before dressing it up with all those fills and extras

PREA672
09-26-2010, 04:28 AM
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0854.jpg

surge really digging that piece.. try making the top of our R bigger. might fit in better with the piece

mawks
09-26-2010, 01:05 PM
that's hot, the only things I would change are, that bar coming out of the right side of the A, and scooting the E to the right just a bit so it's not being so overlapped by the R.

lord_plankton
09-26-2010, 01:11 PM
e too hidden and r just ugly , overall no flow. definately not hot.

BoomSlang
09-26-2010, 02:05 PM
prea , sorry bud i just dont like that at all, no consistancy , no flow and just randon bits here n there.

heres 2 lame ones from this week, gonna try something a lil different this week and see what i come up with

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/graff/007.jpg


http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/graff/006.jpg

*Patch!
09-26-2010, 02:24 PM
i dont like the kinks in the Ts

lord_plankton
09-26-2010, 04:32 PM
second one is quite good. dunno about the connecting bar though.

KNS13
09-26-2010, 07:44 PM
playing around with photoshop
http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/jhiz.jpg

Stigma02
09-26-2010, 08:43 PM
droping i like everything but the extension from the k
prea no flow srry dnt like it at all
boomslang what is that thing at the then end of the t on the first piece?

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/theangrygorilla2005.jpg

freestyle of my buddies name DAVID

Fury
09-26-2010, 09:25 PM
That says David? I see like REC or something. If that is an R, it's dope.
JHIZ - that's a good simp.
BoomSlang - Both are cool, but I don't like the letters connected on the second.

Been a while but meh,
http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/682/dsc6091.jpg

Gyse
09-26-2010, 09:25 PM
That says david?

*Patch!
09-26-2010, 10:00 PM
jhiz- thats a solid simple, try to clean up the lines a bit tho
fury-clean up the lines and keep the bars equal width

Stigma02
09-26-2010, 10:44 PM
srry pasted the wrong code that one i did post says R.O.C this one is DAVID
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6882.jpg
the 3d has 2 different yllws but it didnt show up in the pic

BoomSlang
09-26-2010, 10:48 PM
boomslang what is that thing at the then end of the t on the first piece?



the extension from the s to balance the one from the w

i will end up redoing the 2nd one a few times till i get it how i want it. next time will prolly be without the bottom connector bar.
thanks for the comments so far

Shell703
09-27-2010, 07:49 AM
[QUOTE=Shell703;1669144]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ABUsive.jpg
my absolute last piece of paper- dont like the B dont think it works well with the other letters I'd rather use a lowercase b but other than that whatcha think?
Dirty- don't really know what it says, work on your letters, the use of colors are good though I think thats what kinda holds the piece up-the colors within the letters and the yellows and pink contrast well

BUMP FOR CRITS

NosE2
09-27-2010, 08:13 AM
try some straight letters. it seems like it went bigger as it went, a, b, u. get down the simples, then throw in those curves. idk.

SECH
09-27-2010, 09:53 AM
the O got a little smaller and yes i've used a simple R.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4109/5028917415_408a8bdbcc_z.jpg

SECH
09-27-2010, 09:54 AM
double post

Stigma02
09-27-2010, 11:19 AM
srry pasted the wrong code that one i did post says R.O.C this one is DAVID
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6882.jpg
the 3d has 2 different yllws but it didnt show up in the pic

bump crits plzz.

NosE2
09-27-2010, 12:13 PM
V is hella weak. Im feelin the fill and splats though.

FlippingChickens
09-28-2010, 04:23 PM
sech - thats not working out man..make them simple like the letter r

stigma - i dont like how each letter has a random extension made just so they can connect,makes it look wierd and unproportioned..the colors are cool

fuck the fame - go simple

surge - that character is pretty wack no offence..paint the pink one,just fix the "r"

slek - not diggin the loop in your s,or any of the letter connections or arrows

prea - did you even try? that letter e is literally behind the r

fury - that looks messy man and that letter z looks horrible ,work on that hand aswell

jiz - good simple,wack name.

boomslang - start doing all your sketches like the 2nd one,those letters looks MUCH much better than the 1st pic..haha i like how the end of the t looks like razor blade, u should have put it on the 1st "t" so it gives a balance and i would have taken it off completely from the bottom

abu - make that "a" bigger



http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3555.jpg
the top peice is a freestyle thats why the majority of the cracks look wack

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3556.jpg
http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3541-2.jpg
http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3553.jpg

EXI
09-28-2010, 08:13 PM
dr0ping - i love your style, When i drew this i was thinking about your style in school lol. what do you use for your colours?
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/214.jpg

eshen
09-29-2010, 12:38 AM
-seac

Res-tooth Slims
09-29-2010, 01:52 AM
http://i987.photobucket.com/albums/ae355/res-tooth-slims/IMG_0340.jpg

PREA672
09-29-2010, 02:48 AM
TOFE everything looks horrible. you havent progressed in a long time

FlippingChickens
09-29-2010, 09:06 AM
my shit is fresher than yours, dont think so? step up and battle me

PheltErUp
09-29-2010, 12:34 PM
quickie during the blunt sesh last night

http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/5072/photoazr.jpg

BoomSlang
09-29-2010, 02:27 PM
Lol @ prea, you got some balls calling anyones work shit bud, have you even looked at half the crap you have posted?

Res-tooth Slims
09-29-2010, 04:24 PM
phelts thats pretty cool but i reckin your drop is a little dodgy ae...

EXI
09-29-2010, 04:38 PM
dr0ping - i love your style, When i drew this i was thinking about your style in school lol. what do you use for your colours?
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/214.jpg

bump for crits

RedEyes
09-29-2010, 04:46 PM
keep trying...

DTE_PRONTO
09-29-2010, 05:53 PM
quickie during the blunt sesh last night

http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/5072/photoazr.jpg

coooolllllll nice quickie lol i like how u made tha top of tha E look like a bandaid

ViniVidiVici
09-29-2010, 05:57 PM
S is whack... n is whack... t is whack... forcefield is whack... 3d is whack... bars are whack.... I would say just completely do a new one and don't try anything to crazy, gotta learn to walk before ya run...

Res-tooth Slims
09-29-2010, 07:13 PM
yea and dont sketch with a pen...cos thats what it looks like...just do your lines one times

Mr yarbles
09-29-2010, 07:27 PM
http://i56.tinypic.com/15nuis9.jpg

http://i56.tinypic.com/2yya8uc.jpg

woonybomber
09-29-2010, 08:23 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff007-10.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff009-9.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff012-5.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff013-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff015-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff016-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff017-4.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff019-1.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff021-1.jpg



my black book is getting full so i thought i would post some ish crits

aekone
09-29-2010, 08:30 PM
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo1.jpg
Chuke- vomiting in such quantities that one could choke.

woonybomber
09-29-2010, 08:47 PM
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff007-10.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff009-9.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff012-5.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff013-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff015-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff016-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff017-4.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff019-1.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff021-1.jpg



my black book is getting full so i thought i would post some ish crits

bottom page bump

extinct
09-29-2010, 09:40 PM
crits on this...
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/0929001821.jpg

nel- the bottom pic...the addons are wack.. like the throwie though.. the second bottom pic has to many connections on the n

Zookyook
09-30-2010, 01:02 PM
yea woony, what he said... and the throw on the last pic looks good, the rest of it is just tryin too hard... if its nel46, ur 6's look too much like 5's, it kinda looks like "NELy5" to me... round out the top of the 6, make the "46" the same size and the "NEL" the same size and itll look better, the second pic is about the maximum of extensions u should be usin right now, itll look cleaner if u do those things, peace

lean2 lose ALL those extensions... try to bring the letters a little closer.... blocky sharp extensions dont really work on bubbly flowing letters, and halos are really meant just for tags no simps and shit


first nemor 'piece', just fuckin with it, not happy with anything about that one...
second is a bek exchange i never finished til now... crits appreciated

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4127/5039562378_e683916a55_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4126/5039560982_407c41d6f6_z.jpg

eshen
09-30-2010, 02:05 PM
Extinct: The letter structure is good, but the arrows are a like dodgy for me. The whole piece has radius corners but the arrows are sharp. They don't look like they belong.

homsie
09-30-2010, 02:08 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4092/5039117077_797fbd3bbf.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5039117077/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4085/5039735960_948447c86c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5039735960/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4108/5039114719_532df6be84.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5039114719/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4129/5033372211_96f53c72a9.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5033372211/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4147/5033365153_64e3c9381b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5033365153/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4083/5033981392_57b2e133cf.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5033981392/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4091/5033359759_03a32e498b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5033359759/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4133/5012172259_960257f470.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5012172259/)

FlippingChickens
09-30-2010, 02:57 PM
chuke - those look dope

woony - 3d picture is decent ,would have taken off the drips

extinct - bring them letters closer together and take off arrows and dont bend them so much

nemor - no offence man but your always doing that style and it just doesnt look good,you should go more simple

hom - the throw on the left in the last picture is dope just fix the o because it can be confused for another letter..and i really like the white and red simple in the 2nd picture

Zookyook
09-30-2010, 07:39 PM
fc- yea i have my own style im tryin to work it out to where its acceptable.... but ur the wrong ***** to be tellin me to go simple! lmao

homs- most of those O's look like A's to me, avoid the triangle O! u got some style though i like the throwups

C-Lurk
09-30-2010, 07:49 PM
homsie - those rip. love the yellow/red scheme, really pops.. kinda throwback to communist-era propaganda/chinese oriental stuff. mad stylez all over haha.

i got bored in math today, then took it home...
http://i52.tinypic.com/vphg91.jpg
into this
http://i55.tinypic.com/ilym1l.jpg

kew1
09-30-2010, 08:09 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/September-30_1808.jpg

eshen
09-30-2010, 08:21 PM
Kew: I like it. I don't think i'd change a thing,

SECH
09-30-2010, 08:53 PM
sech - thats not working out man..make them simple like the letter r

thanks man i'll try doing simples more often.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4146/5036534070_dd49dd2406_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4153/5039263541_8fa2c93bc3_z.jpg

Zookyook
09-30-2010, 09:05 PM
sech i think u should look at some of dukes work... it looks like u have a really close style, just behind his skill, if u dont know, hes a mod here........... i like that single S, but the piece on top isnt up to par, the fill and the structure need work, i like the blue outline a lot, just keep the spacing from the black outline even throughout, that way itll look like theres a clean white line in between, na'm'sayin?

SECH
09-30-2010, 09:13 PM
ya i hear u, thanks a lot.
here is the outline since the fill kinda hide parts of the letters
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4112/5040667608_5bc2952d5b_z.jpg

woonybomber
09-30-2010, 10:16 PM
kew is a biter

eshen
09-30-2010, 11:04 PM
Crits please. This is the first time i've written in a while.

HeklrToo
09-30-2010, 11:12 PM
kew is a biter

Well he ain't that good at it cause his letters are frumpy and his fills are worse.

Got flicks?

Stigma02
10-01-2010, 09:58 AM
say KORIE ill give crits a lil later i have to go to school haha but crits on mine?
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6886.jpg its at kind of an angle wont fit on scanner

FuckTheFame
10-01-2010, 10:37 AM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1087.jpg
random one im working out

stigma - nice 3d. digging those highlights too man
eshn - nice style. needs a little flow imo
sech - legit
zookyook - that bek is crazy. i really like the string that you threw around it. nice proportions and coloring too. still wanting a tag exchange man

woonybomber
10-01-2010, 11:20 AM
Well he ain't that good at it cause his letters are frumpy and his fills are worse.

Got flicks?

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/September-30_1808.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/EGOR.jpg
bite

FuckTheFame
10-01-2010, 11:39 AM
always nice to see someone called out on a bite
especially when you work hard as fuck to develop your own style
nice one woony bomber
kew...you suck

woonybomber
10-01-2010, 11:53 AM
i hate biters
i know im not that good but i dont bite noones shit
i can honestly say that my shit is original

ViniVidiVici
10-01-2010, 12:47 PM
who the fuck cares.... this is the toy forum, I say bite all the fuck you want, just don't be claiming it's yours... no one cares...

dangeri
10-01-2010, 06:27 PM
Sech: that s I propper nice man, digging alot of ur stuff tbf man, far from the generic bumf I'm used to seeing, and not that a compliment off me is something to rave about, but that s genuinely inspired me! Keep that shit up man!

murph3pt
10-01-2010, 09:39 PM
can i get some help with this? http://i53.tinypic.com/vzggfq.jpg

LeaksOne
10-01-2010, 09:46 PM
first off, theres no reason to post the same exact picture 4 times. second, that looks really cluttered and the S's are weird. im not even really sure what it says....skasc?

murph3pt
10-01-2010, 09:46 PM
and also this http://i56.tinypic.com/11sh2tj.jpg this 1 is SMAST the other is SKAST

LeaksOne
10-01-2010, 09:49 PM
needs moar arrows!!!

murph3pt
10-01-2010, 09:53 PM
yea i thought so. also i dont think the top right of the S n top left of the T dont realy fit the theme, ima do it again but any tips on color?

LeaksOne
10-01-2010, 09:56 PM
navy blue and yellow.

Stigma02
10-01-2010, 10:40 PM
blue will really stand out with the orange make sure its a brightish blue though so u can see the details of the black marker

LeaksOne
10-01-2010, 10:52 PM
navy blue nigguh

cushcota94
10-02-2010, 12:30 AM
after about 2 or months of writing...

ViniVidiVici
10-02-2010, 01:01 AM
basics..................................... are needed

*Patch!
10-02-2010, 02:45 AM
Youth- you have a unique style and i actually like it, but i think it would look better if you kept all your letters without the bars through them(picture for example). Also i dont like te extensions on your O they jusst dont fit the type of style you have in my opinion. But if you like it keep doin your thing
http://i912.photobucket.com/albums/ac329/uKnobGobblers/youthfix.jpg
murph3pt- that throw really needs some work, im not saying its bad but some of the letters are hard to make out( the last one) and the KA isnt very good, it just seems really generic. The orange and grey piece looks like youre trying to force style that you dont have yet. The structure just isnt there and you need to work on that before you go for a wildstyle
Purge- Work on simples. your structure isnt there yet.

Inlyn08
10-02-2010, 10:51 AM
after about 2 or months of writing...

The first one was the best of the two.
Second looks like the bee pissed that out. In my opinion, keep working with the first.

lord_plankton
10-02-2010, 11:10 AM
colors inverted doodle

http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF1858a.jpg

IbuprofenTablets
10-02-2010, 11:57 AM
Lol.

Stigma02
10-02-2010, 05:48 PM
rage do simples lord plankton wtf does it say?

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6888.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6887.jpg
crits

homsie
10-02-2010, 06:26 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4130/5044997489_0dd9890c36.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5044997489/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/5045617652_1974ef58cc.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5045617652/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4151/5045615798_d475e9f6c2.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5045615798/)

LeaksOne
10-02-2010, 07:08 PM
Damn Good shit homs

homsie
10-02-2010, 10:48 PM
anyone wanna exchange?

lord_plankton
10-03-2010, 07:54 AM
should answer the question what it reads..should have done it all like i did the chapters..fill and letter wise
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF1858ab.jpg

Zookyook
10-03-2010, 08:17 AM
the lost chapters... im surprised i actually read that.... if the white outline was cleaner it might look cool, but that fill is fuckin psycho shit lol u drinkin absenth or somethin?

lord_plankton
10-03-2010, 08:21 AM
haha no just weed on my account. well the white outie is done in ms paint (no black outline pen at the moment ) and believe me it does look cool, just imagine a fat sharp outline

edit: its real good weed.

IbuprofenTablets
10-03-2010, 08:27 AM
I fucks wit' the Parkinson's outline.

lord_plankton
10-03-2010, 08:38 AM
you fucks with your hand..only with your hand...

Chippey
10-03-2010, 09:06 AM
sik stuff lord, suprisingly easy to read - how long did the fill take?, just get a real nice outline down.

SECH
10-03-2010, 01:25 PM
not finished.
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs689.snc4/62893_1638507728521_1411594558_1753576_2757966_n.j pg

lord_plankton
10-03-2010, 01:25 PM
ill post up the whole thing when i come to finish it...the fill took about 30 mins.

Inlyn08
10-03-2010, 10:12 PM
Figured I'd toss some shit in here I never normally do.
Legit feedback only please. Ahahaha. I know how you BS people do..

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h85/popperahtzee/SDC11082.jpg

http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h85/popperahtzee/SDC11081.jpg

MoganOne
10-03-2010, 10:31 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/0926002337.jpg

Flawless Victory
10-03-2010, 10:37 PM
Those two posts are waaay too typical for my liking.
Like, it looks like getting up and graffiti creator fucked each other.
MAD generic.

Inlyn08
10-04-2010, 12:01 AM
Those two posts are waaay too typical for my liking.
Like, it looks like getting up and graffiti creator fucked each other.
MAD generic.

Yeah, I know what you mean man. That's why I wasn't toting a torch. I know on the Brian piece my A was thicker then everything else. I mean, on shit like that I just jammed to jam. Appreciate the honesty.

I haven't colored the VAS shit, which the character was really my thing. You know, the 3 B's. Blunts, beers, and bored. Might throw some color on that and repost. Drop more crits.

Thanks.

Stigma02
10-04-2010, 01:26 AM
rage do simples lord plankton wtf does it say?

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6888.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6887.jpg
crits

bottom page bump

SECH
10-04-2010, 07:47 AM
another s
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs377.ash2/65570_1639705038453_1411594558_1756632_6991281_n.j pg

dj3hac
10-04-2010, 08:18 AM
Hello fellas,
It's been quite a while since I've been on here. This is just something I drew for a friend "Shayne", Crits please! ^^

http://i52.tinypic.com/ng8z6b.jpg

RedEyes
10-04-2010, 01:09 PM
DJ-it looks like the SHAY is all one style then the NE just dont fit. Try a lower case NE to make it match the rest of the piece.

PREA672
10-04-2010, 02:49 PM
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0859.jpg

new bookskies.

lord_plankton
10-04-2010, 03:20 PM
too dark use at least a bright second to make it pop

C-Lurk
10-04-2010, 03:25 PM
homsie - those rip. love the yellow/red scheme, really pops.. kinda throwback to communist-era propaganda/chinese oriental stuff. mad stylez all over haha.

i got bored in math today, then took it home...
http://i52.tinypic.com/vphg91.jpg
into this
http://i55.tinypic.com/ilym1l.jpg

nothin?

ViniVidiVici
10-04-2010, 03:25 PM
agreed, I say you should do a like a light orange for the top part and maybe a bright green forcefield, might make it pop... idk though, never been too good with colors hahaha

lord_plankton
10-04-2010, 04:10 PM
...yeah but then it would be all bright n stuff..which aint "good" either...use a bright second for dark fill or a dark second for bright fill...like in preas case a bright orange or somthing. sometimes i feel people dont know what a second outline means. create contrast to make shit stand out

Fury
10-04-2010, 04:15 PM
Prea, not digging the dark green so much. And what LP said.

Does that say BIBOP?

For a friend:
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/8299/dsc6093p.jpg

FlippingChickens
10-04-2010, 05:48 PM
go more simple,all of you ^^^


http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3560.jpg

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3559.jpg

SzrZx
10-04-2010, 05:51 PM
prea - nice simples
fury - looksmlike you were tryin some mirror effect type thing but that second 'N' is very unattractive, lol. keep those bars coming though

LeaksOne
10-04-2010, 05:57 PM
go more simple,all of you

hahahahahahaaha

IbuprofenTablets
10-04-2010, 06:00 PM
I was gonna' say "Loltofe" after I heard him say "go simple", but I chose not to.
Idk.

LeaksOne
10-04-2010, 06:02 PM
yeah ill admit i hesitated at the risk of sounding like a broken record but fuck it.

SzrZx
10-04-2010, 06:03 PM
but you just did xD..

LeaksOne
10-04-2010, 06:04 PM
read the last 3 word fucktard.

SzrZx
10-04-2010, 06:06 PM
not you asswipe

KNS13
10-04-2010, 06:07 PM
http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/810a5e5e.jpg
http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/3420109c.jpg

SzrZx
10-04-2010, 06:09 PM
get rid of the legs on the 'A' 'M' and the stupid tabs on the 'Z'

LeaksOne
10-04-2010, 06:10 PM
not you asswipe

then learn punctuation. a ",ibuprofen." would have cleared that all up.

FlippingChickens
10-04-2010, 06:14 PM
hahahaah ibfaget is a retard

LeaksOne
10-04-2010, 06:15 PM
repost already?

FlippingChickens
10-04-2010, 06:17 PM
leaks shut the fuck up you sound like a fucking nerd

FlippingChickens
10-04-2010, 06:18 PM
leak do u ever shut the fuck up?

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3565.jpg

LeaksOne
10-04-2010, 06:19 PM
nope. do you ever progress? nope.

FlippingChickens
10-04-2010, 06:21 PM
lol ur both wack and did you just say boo boo? ur fuckin gay

Meph*
10-04-2010, 06:24 PM
havnt posted in a while, been busy tell me what u think of my boredom..http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/mudman.jpg

LeaksOne
10-04-2010, 06:25 PM
lol just shut up man ur wack

http://desertpeace.files.wordpress.com/2010/01/hypocrisy1.png

every since guy helped you out youve been using the same letters and they're still not good. you actually made them worse.

FlippingChickens
10-04-2010, 06:27 PM
y dont you post any of your "peices" then fag ur shit is wack and everyone else in this forum knows it

LeaksOne
10-04-2010, 06:28 PM
i dont piece....

LeaksOne
10-04-2010, 06:31 PM
you know what, just to make you happy, ill post some old throws i have in this notebook. keep your eyes peeled.....

FlippingChickens
10-04-2010, 06:32 PM
lol throws on a notebook?? i do them in the street u fucking toy i could care less about ur throws

sinkilla1
10-04-2010, 06:33 PM
yo tofe u suck dick why do u even write any more al u do is shitey unproportional block letters like serously u make me wanna take my dick put it throw my computer screen and molly whop ur bitch ass

FlippingChickens
10-04-2010, 06:37 PM
another no lifer hahahah look at your post ...why u beefing so much u all the way in nowhere shut the fuck up toy id drop your ass

LeaksOne
10-04-2010, 06:37 PM
lol throws on a notebook?? i do them in the street u fucking toy i could care less about ur throws

yep. its called practice. something you need alot of. also boredom. plus you fucking idiot, you have pieces and throws in a notebook.......damn your fucking stupid.

FuckTheFame
10-04-2010, 06:39 PM
havnt posted in a while, been busy tell me what u think of my boredom..http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/mudman.jpg

BUMP!
awesome to the 3rd degree
and tofe dont listen to the haters man
i dunno what you did to make everybody hate you but try to just prove em wrong
not everybody on BS looks at it as a popularity contest
especially if the people giving you crits "dont piece"
if people remembered there is life outside these e-walls the forum wouldnt be clogged with beef

FlippingChickens
10-04-2010, 06:41 PM
Yea im in the notebook thread dipshit

NosE2
10-04-2010, 06:41 PM
Lol, I was like Tofe when I first started getting up...that's ironic as fuck. =[

Meph*
10-04-2010, 07:02 PM
thanks fame, i thought it was gonna turn out terrible since i barely draw anymore

ViniVidiVici
10-04-2010, 07:20 PM
Yo Flippin, I'm sorry but I'm gonna have to agree that that is pretty bad, the letters the bars and all are just plain whack. I can see why you're getting pissed at others, but don't start trying to start beef with everyone, cuz honestly you can't back it up yet.

Fury
10-04-2010, 07:28 PM
Meph, this kinda got rolled over by beef, but that's pretty legit, no lie. I dunno if you traced it or used a ruler, but if you did, try it without it and see how well you do from memory.

It's cool to get up in the street and all, but if your shit isn't somewhat decent, then people will only remember you as a whack head. On the other hand, if it's somewhat decent and people see you everywhere, they'll remember you as "What the fuck, I been seeing that shit everywhere."

Tofe, I believe you need to work on your bars, bro.

Meph*
10-04-2010, 07:49 PM
no i didnt use a ruler i just used graphing paper to make all the lines and angles more or less even

KNS13
10-04-2010, 07:55 PM
http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/810a5e5e.jpg
http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/3420109c.jpg
bottom page bumpo

FlippingChickens
10-04-2010, 08:04 PM
http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3566.jpg

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3567.jpg

RedEyes
10-04-2010, 09:23 PM
nope. do you ever progress? nope.

LoL the truth.

SzrZx
10-04-2010, 11:33 PM
I like the g-shock. are you gonna add color?
tofe - I like the top right throw and the hand.

http://i1102.photobucket.com/albums/g447/jiOhh/8cbb6eef.jpg
sorry if it's rly big. (TWSS)
changed F to T and added 3D
crits?
crits?

Fury
10-05-2010, 12:03 AM
Prea, not digging the dark green so much. And what LP said.

Does that say BIBOP?

For a friend:
http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/8299/dsc6093p.jpg

Bump fo' crits pl0x.

SZ - I dunno if the first letter is an F or an E. The N isn't good, the E's okay but your A is your best letter. Just work on making lines parallel.

SzrZx
10-05-2010, 12:07 AM
the 'N' is no good cause it's an 'R' lol

unique93
10-05-2010, 08:48 AM
new-old sketch :D
http://www1.picturepush.com/photo/a/4305389/640/4305389.jpg (http://picturepush.com/public/4305389)

lord_plankton
10-05-2010, 09:04 AM
id read it wenos..

unique93
10-05-2010, 09:17 AM
no...it's nemos :D

Meph*
10-05-2010, 02:58 PM
bored in math lab at college...enjoy;)

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/lab.jpg

ViniVidiVici
10-05-2010, 03:01 PM
dope karak

Meph*
10-05-2010, 03:13 PM
thanks, its probably what im best at.

dangeri
10-05-2010, 03:58 PM
Quick simples before I get too shitfaced lol
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm73/danger_i/7280ed5d.jpg

SzrZx
10-05-2010, 04:02 PM
unique - go simpler......

just kidding nice shit

Venile
10-05-2010, 04:10 PM
My best so far:? just a bbook pic dump. please critz?
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x102/soadrox1324/IMAG0063.jpg
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x102/soadrox1324/IMAG0062.jpg
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x102/soadrox1324/IMAG0061.jpg
Just started about a 2 weeks ago, but I've been frequenting this forum for a about 6?
ANY criticism is welcomed :)

SzrZx
10-05-2010, 06:54 PM
okay I have so great information that will benefit you... throw everything you ever done, away. and then go to the "New to Graffiti" thread, trust me. if you really like graffiti you will do that without bitching. kthxbai

Meph*
10-05-2010, 07:06 PM
over all, it looks kind of childish, id stick with simples and throw ups before anything, definitely leave the characters for later.. just my opinion

http://i939.photobucket.com/albums/ad240/Meph_one/mudman.jpg

i know it was posted yesterday but with all the beef that went on i didnt think it got its proper dues.. so here it is again

Jokz
10-05-2010, 11:13 PM
trying new style
alright i know the picture is shitty. its cuz i sketch with these light blue eno pencils. tried to play with it in photoshop to make it more visible.

inspired by Rime's style, im just trying out some new things. not completely finished yet, gotta do some more things about the S and what not.

any feedback helps whether its good or bad feedback lol

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4124/5055639237_ef3b83bfbb_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5055639237/)new style Joks (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5055639237/) by ~JOKZ~ tradebreak (school) (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr

extinct
10-05-2010, 11:41 PM
unique hit me up with a lean2

WoRdSmYtH
10-05-2010, 11:51 PM
okay I have so great information that will benefit you... throw everything you ever done, away. and then go to the "New to Graffiti" thread, trust me. if you really like graffiti you will do that without bitching. kthxbai

I concur. No hard feelings mang.

WoRdSmYtH
10-05-2010, 11:52 PM
new-old sketch :D
http://www1.picturepush.com/photo/a/4305389/640/4305389.jpg (http://picturepush.com/public/4305389)

Tot Black Books. Nuff said.

Venile
10-06-2010, 01:29 AM
okay I have so great information that will benefit you... throw everything you ever done, away. and then go to the "New to Graffiti" thread, trust me. if you really like graffiti you will do that without bitching. kthxbai

Man, I wont throw shit, if only cause I want a record of my progress.. or a reminder of why I should keep practicing, you know? encouragement; so I don't ever drop whack shit like that, and believe me, I can lay some toy shit :P

Constant reminder or what I don't want, lol.

But I will still go to that thread, thanks man..
also, more critz still appreciated.


Edit: Nvm, I went there, I'm still working on the simples I just have a soft spot for anything remotely relating to metal of any kind, like Death's logo or the cannibal corpse type font/style, relating to that, anyone like metal or know what I'm getting at with my desired style? and as for chars, yea I know they aren't too great, but I just doodled, picked a few i liked and tried to redo them, either way your right, they shouldn't be my top priority, got any more tips?

sziv
10-06-2010, 01:58 AM
wats up guys , im sziv , n im new to dis place , iv been writtin graff for sumthing like 6 morth or close to it. anyway critz???:D be nice :P
http://i54.tinypic.com/3355eaf.jpg

Jokz
10-06-2010, 02:17 AM
wats up guys , im sziv , n im new to dis place , iv been writtin graff for sumthing like 6 morth or close to it. anyway critz???:D be nice :P
yea first of all resizing the pic helps a lot. this way we get a better overview of your work, cuz right now its kinda hard to determine what it looks like. after u do that, we'll talk more lol

SzrZx
10-06-2010, 02:34 AM
Man, I wont throw shit, if only cause I want a record of my progress.. or a reminder of why I should keep practicing, you know? encouragement; so I don't ever drop whack shit like that, and believe me, I can lay some toy shit :P

Constant reminder or what I don't want, lol.

But I will still go to that thread, thanks man..
also, more critz still appreciated.


Edit: Nvm, I went there, I'm still working on the simples I just have a soft spot for anything remotely relating to metal of any kind, like Death's logo or the cannibal corpse type font/style, relating to that, anyone like metal or know what I'm getting at with my desired style? and as for chars, yea I know they aren't too great, but I just doodled, picked a few i liked and tried to redo them, either way your right, they shouldn't be my top priority, got any more tips?

just do SIMPLES. do simples until you feel like you wanna kill yourself.... and then do more. do that until someone else who is better than you says something good about them then start adding some of your own personally touch to it. trust it'll all be okay.

sziv
10-06-2010, 02:37 AM
? how do i resize it??

SzrZx
10-06-2010, 03:05 AM
http://i1102.photobucket.com/albums/g447/jiOhh/8cbb6eef.jpg

bump for crits?

Zookyook
10-06-2010, 03:50 AM
watch the bars tare... make sure they match up, like the top of ur T and left of the R especially.... and if ur gonna make bits like on the bottom of the R, use more than one so it matches the other letters, maybe put some on the middle of the A and E, who knows....


insomniac boredom shit
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4128/5056124007_1e6edcea3b.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4128/5056738172_1144af62ed_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4108/5056737802_a5e62a4803.jpg

sziv
10-06-2010, 06:33 AM
hey i resized it an also heres one i did today :P

http://i52.tinypic.com/1zw282x.jpg

http://i53.tinypic.com/2nbccbb.jpg
critz???

Jokz
10-06-2010, 05:59 PM
hey i resized it an also heres one i did today :P
http://i53.tinypic.com/2nbccbb.jpg
the first one im not digging. the second one tho can use some improvement. i like the E and S isnt bad, work on ur other letters tho

MoganOne
10-06-2010, 07:11 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1005001325.jpg

EXI
10-06-2010, 11:41 PM
Haven't posted in a while here's my latest i did today
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/216.jpg

FuckTheFame
10-06-2010, 11:48 PM
what does it say?

hpir
10-07-2010, 12:41 AM
wat iv been fuckin with latly
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture279.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture280.jpg
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture281.jpg
suggestions?

ViniVidiVici
10-07-2010, 01:20 AM
Nemor I love that first one, I don't care what anyone says, it's dope1

WoRdSmYtH
10-07-2010, 02:20 AM
I agree with ViniVidiVici; Good job Nemor, that shit looks fresh. What sort of markers do you use?

@ HPIR, stick to your bars. They've got a lot more potential than bubbles.

@ JOKZ, I would hardly fuck with your ARES at all. I like it.
I'd change a few tiny details but nothing drastic.
All in all, I'd say leave it the way it is and give it some color. Good job.

@ MOGAN, I know you've already got that shit on a wall,
but I think the second and third letter (O,N? MONER?)
should have thin bars like the M, E, and R do.

-Sinn-
10-07-2010, 02:44 AM
EXI lose the arrows and use blosck letters slowly figure out ur bends and try to spend more time with just a pencil
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture1195.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture1197.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture1194.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture1192.jpg

Willis1989
10-07-2010, 06:27 AM
sinn- great stuff me likes
Exi - Cant read what that says

Crits pls
http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00307.jpg?t=1286447118

Sbal
10-07-2010, 09:59 AM
Sinn that top S is crazy and fuck yeah for Del the funkee homosapien

EXI
10-07-2010, 02:37 PM
it says SNT and it is block letters..???

ViniVidiVici
10-07-2010, 03:04 PM
Wil - I just don't like it sorry. The thickness in some spots are really bad, like in the bottom of the W and the right side of the L, also the I just doesn't fit the with the rest of it, it has curves and tons of edges while the rest of the piece does not.

EXI - NO stop, that is bad, it's sloppy, your lines are not even close to straight and clean, horrible extensions and connections. What the fuck is up with that one arrows 3D? the drips are sloppy as fuck, and all your curves in the piece are bad. honestly I barely ever rip apart someones piece this much, but yours needs to be ripped apart cuz there isn't anything salvageable in it. nothing at all.

SINN - you should post in the intermediate thread cuz you're no toy, but you're no pro yet, so I think the intermediate would fit you well.

Kane - perhaps post those in the throws thread?

Moner - It's good, clean and all, only thing is the M, the middle part of it where it is really thin, there is nothing actually 'wrong' with it, I just feel like it could be changed to look better, but maybe that's just me.

szxzx - stop, please, that's sloppy as fuck also, clean up your lines people.... geez what is everyone in a rush for? this is a blackbook, you don't have to rush, take your time and make your lines clean. but that is not the main thing that is wrong with your piece, it's just bad in general, go simple cuz your 3D is whack and all the letters are horrible.

Sviz - the first one is actually okay, it's not great but it's decent. your second one doesn't flow at all and the A is REAL bad, all the letters have different style which is not good, your E is also pretty bad. Your S is decent along with your R, but once again none of the letters look good with the other letters.

MakeItTakeIt
10-07-2010, 03:48 PM
hipr, the bar thickness on that simp isn't uniform. Those throws are good, but pretty generic. On the first one, try matching the top of your n to the top of your k for a little extra flow.

zook, that simp, those tages and those throws are all dope as fuck. I'm jealous lol

PREA672
10-07-2010, 04:07 PM
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0865.jpg

battle entry

Res-tooth Slims
10-07-2010, 04:16 PM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1005001325.jpg

yea the "R" is straight up fire and the rest IS nice but the way you do all those double overlaps and whatnot doesnt visualy make sense when it is combined with a heavy 3D like the one you used....also the extension off the "O" is terrible sorry..try not doing 3D's...use some other effect because "I" think your lettering style doesnt match it...that is just me though and 3D's are doep

NosE2
10-07-2010, 04:46 PM
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/9821/imgp3227.jpg

ghostwriter
10-07-2010, 04:47 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/5rty.jpg

Ill canvis ... I mean dope your the best super star wicked brilliant ballin

Got any catch for me please need

ghostwriter
10-07-2010, 04:58 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/wewefd.jpg