Blackbooks

[TheBoredOne]

you have 3 arrows on your letter b wat the fuck u smoking?

lol weed but thats besides the point theres 2 arrows coming out of the B the 3rd ones either from the O or the R

ooops i forgot to not ink in the entire B where the arrow comes out lol this was entirely done in pen while i was bored so mistakes are bound to happen :X

[JustChillin]

as long as you have great letter structure and flow, it doesnt really matter how many arrows u have.

[FlippingChickens]

lol weed but thats besides the point theres 2 arrows coming out of the B the 3rd ones either from the O or the R

ooops i forgot to not ink in the entire B where the arrow comes out lol this was entirely done in pen while i was bored so mistakes are bound to happen :X

why dont you use pencil so mistakes wont happen,you should sketch your name like how it is on your sig.

[TheBoredOne]

why dont you use pencil so mistakes wont happen,you should sketch your name like how it is on your sig.


no i use pencils but i was sitting there with some paper from my school and a sharpie so i made do with what i had + boredom(while on hold)

[mekosbc]

couple of my new things... the flick are kinda blurry need a new camera...and yes i know the last ones are the text books style simples like every one expects... im just tryin to break outta the cycle...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2727.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2730.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2728.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2733.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2734.jpg

[TheBoredOne]

couple of my new things... the flick are kinda blurry need a new camera...and yes i know the last ones are the text books style simples like every one expects... im just tryin to break outta the cycle...
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2727.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2730.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2728.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2733.jpg
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/SANY2734.jpg

fuckin dopeee

[FlippingChickens]

meko - 2nd picture is proper the character too

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3542.jpg

[Fury]

^ You don't need to quote if it's right above you.
Meko - Not digging the M on your throw that much. And in some of your pieces, the right part of the K kinda looks like an O. Otherwise, they're dope

[meka man]

i dont really get this thread because most of the peices aint toy but heres my peice my camera made it the wrong way round but i hope u like it
http://http://www.flickr.com/photos/52275515@N08/4991245367/
add me on flickr if u want

[luvsac]

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3541.jpg



http://i138.photobucket.com/albums/q241/psychopathic_demon_girl/Anime%20and%20Games/Pokemon/ghastly.gif
?
lulz

[FuckTheFame]

dont hate on gastly man

[funhouseXcast]

I have an ill bong named gastly.

[drOping]

http://i53.tinypic.com/10ia05l.jpg
http://i54.tinypic.com/vs0504.jpg
not really feelin my K's.....thoughts?

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Meko pretty good except the white one, turned me right off lol
Slek nice but I despise the E on the second one man and the throw would be much better off w/out the teeth mang
I got a better pic, opposed to the earlier one but ya boom, please focus on the letters not so much the fact that I went crazy with my markers!
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAxMjYtMjAxMDA5MTQtMjEzMy5qcGc.jpg
And meka I think it was, there's a huge debate of who belongs in which thread so we post in the bottom two lol to be sure/get more crits

[EXI]

here's just a simp I through together during class with a little bit of my own creation to it.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/223.jpg
crit please?

[BlacktodaFuture]

go simpler. use bars. (rectangles)

[Get Rekt!]

go ahead call my bite. i was bored of doing throws and tags so I attempted doing something a little more complicated but I was definetly inspired by alot of other pieces.

http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0915002012.jpg

[SHER_WON_WTS]

http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy295/khikhan1/1066335-prof_oak_large.jpg http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy295/khikhan1/images.jpg

gastly, a ghost pokemon.

[TheBoredOne]

^^ Scam Id like to see you get better so having just two random arrows in there makes it look like shit, (take out the arrows) Also make your S bars the same width and length that one long string is ugly make your S not stand so tall over all of them, Shorten it a bit, i know you said you were tired of simp's but stick with some simples for a while, + also you said "Call my Bite" Doubt anyone was gonna say you bit from someone else's your shoved your self out into the open by saying you bit.

[Heklr]

http://i54.tinypic.com/vs0504.jpg


This works...
You could do some wild stuff with that outline.

[exitus]

http://i55.tinypic.com/sqib1e.jpg
needs some work but meh im trying

[CuCCui]

Dropping I think what you could do is,connect the "K" to the "E" at the top where the extension comes off of the "e" and lose the extension on the "K" that connects the vertical bar to the arm bar kinda makes it look like an "R" if you get me also lose the connection from the "E" to the "K"...I was gonna draw it but you can probably get what I'm going on about. hope that helps

[smast]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=515&pictureid=3903

How should i color the rest?

[drOping]

Thanks I get what ur sayin...I feel that extention on the top of the K ruined it, I think Im gonna rework that whole thing...to much homework right now tho.

[Willis1989]

Meko - your shit is amazing, really liking it, keep it up.
Tofe - That arrow in the T comes form nowhere, not one of your best.
Slek - Apart from the arrow at the top of the S on your 3rd piece I think its great.
Smokers187 - That piece is the bomb, I like the whole thing.
Scam - Really like this, maybe make the middle of the S a bit thicker.

This is my first piece in a while
http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00303.jpg?t=1284625014

[SpadeStylez]

spadestylez.deviantart.com
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/257/6/9/gas_mask_by_spadestylez-d2yp41h.jpg
spadestylez.deviantart.com
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/256/a/f/tower_by_spadestylez-d2yo1ts.jpg
spadestylez.deviantart.com
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/255/1/f/puru_by_spadestylez-d2ym1us.jpg
spadestylez.deviantart.com
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/254/6/4/dragon_character_by_spadestylez-d2yilck.jpg

[Sbal]

Good job Willis, looks better then your other stuff. I think if the wil are going to be connected at the bottom, then the s should connect with it too, instead of going behind the l. Also work on the bars in the W.
Spade, you're good at art, but you have a very wack tag. I'm going to say try to simplify your letters a little, cause those could be dope pieces if they were more controlled. Those characters are insane though, good job.

[Willis1989]

Thanks for the crit Sbal

Spade, like the characters, cant really read any of the letters though, but if your that good at art then it shouldnt be too difficult for you.

just finished this piece

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00304.jpg?t=1284646799

[EXI]

wils- I'm not that good at giving crit but i'll try. I love the 3d, i think the bottom part of the W should be thicker? It might be your style but idk.

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Wils really diggin the structure on the first a lot and the 3D on the second is extra dopeskii

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

DOUBLE POST MUTHAFUCKAZ
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAxMjgtMjAxMDA5MTUtMTk1MS5qcGc.jpg
Oh yas and spade I like the first one man sick mask/char

[EXI]

smokers- I like the detailed forcefield.

spade- I've been watching you on deviant for a while haha.

[-Dank-DK-]

http://i52.tinypic.com/r1a80m.jpg

first piece i have put on here plan on more to come
but what u think

[SpadeStylez]

Exi- Haha really? small world man
Sbal- Thanks, on my upcoming work ill try to make it more consistent and controlled.

[SpadeStylez]

Exi- Haha really? small world man
Sbal- Thanks, on my upcoming work ill try to make it more consistent and controlled.

[LeaksOne]

exitus, what does that even say?

willis, keep working on those simps and try to steady your hand.

spade, simps.

smokers, im not completely sure what that says but i like the concept.

dank, your R's are still akward looking and the add-ons on the top of them is pointless. makes them look like retarded B's.

[One Evil]

jus some ish i did last night b4 i passed out.
http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/9673/dsc0107i.jpg (http://img812.imageshack.us/i/dsc0107i.jpg/)
http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/8968/dsc0105zf.jpg (http://img689.imageshack.us/i/dsc0105zf.jpg/)

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Leaks it says smoke mang
Dank-that eye is clean as fluck man proprs

[LeaksOne]

im having trouble identifying the S and E.

[down!]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4154/4997686016_76ef1718b3.jpg

[LeaksOne]

you may need to practice simps. thats really akward

[down!]

yeah, you're right, and i suck at 3d, i suck at drop shadows. anyone got any tips for practicing that?

[proNYNJA]

risk: your R's and S is clean. but im not digging the I.
hork: the top one is alright. the bottom one... im not to fond of.
kno: you letters r weird. go simp. do straight letters.


http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4104/4997892642_d822fbc605_z.jpg
i fucked up a lot but it still looks alright i think.
critz.

[exitus]

http://i55.tinypic.com/sqib1e.jpg
needs some work but meh im trying

bump

[Stigma02]

try to get the widths of ur letters the same. the s and the e seem like they go together and the urg is together but they dont flow with fat letters and then ur skinny letters pick one and stick to it crits plzz
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6879.jpg

[LeaksOne]

bump


exitus, what does that even say?

.

[Willis1989]

Salt?

[.A.K.4.7.]

risk: your R's and S is clean. but im not digging the I.
hork: the top one is alright. the bottom one... im not to fond of.
kno: you letters r weird. go simp. do straight letters.


http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4104/4997892642_d822fbc605_z.jpg
i fucked up a lot but it still looks alright i think.
critz.

Why are you giving pointers when you are rubbish yourself?

[Willis1989]

Do you not give crits to receive crits? Im shit but I leave crits in hope that someone will crit me, I thought thats how it worked on the forum?

[.A.K.4.7.]

How can you give pointers about something you know nothing about? It makes no sense.

[Willis1989]

Normally I just say what I think would make it look better, i dont know a lot about writing graff apart from putting bars up etc helps, so if I see a piece and I can see things that are wrong ill say so that hopefully someone will crit me too, cuz everyone knows its easier to find problems in someone elses stuff than your own.

[Stigma02]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6879.jpg bump for crits plzz i just gave crits haha

[Sbal]

I think the A needs a stronger right bar to make it more prominent, and the drips coming off the bottom seem a little overdone. I would like to see those letters in a different color without the snot, that would be cool.

[Willis1989]

I agree, all the detail makes it harder to read, maybe keep the "snot" at the bottom and take away the rest.

[Stigma02]

ight sounds good ill clear up the letters of the goo

[HeklrToo]

How can you give pointers about something you know nothing about? It makes no sense.

Shut the fuck up and buy a modern camera...
Film is dead.

Just because someones skill level on paper or a wall isn't legendary, does not mean that this person does not understand the rules for graffiti and where things should or should not be. Just because someone lacks skill, does not mean that they cannot give somebody valuable input on a subject matter related to their artwork. Whether it be a toy or a king, almost anyone at any level is going to be agree that a letter is wompy or needs work. So what's it matter if it comes from a toy or a king?

If it were only kings that gave crits, or any kings gave crits and shared knowledge, the graffiti scene wouldn't be heading down the road it's goin'...
Ya'll big boys need to be sharin' the knowledge and keep the movement goin'.

But for now, all I'm hearin' from you AK47, is hate, hate, hate, hate, hate, hate.

Props to Stigma for contributing something decent to the thread.
Like the colorway and the stringy drips.
I find it to be clearly legible...
Maybe I'm just getting used to seeing that style around. ;)

[FlippingChickens]

surge - i like your r,but that s and e are wak,make them simple like S AND E and make em the same size as the other letters

salt - what your bar proportion,just look at your l its thick as fuck then thin at the bottom,just practice drawing your name like this SALT

stigma - all the drips on the bottom of your letters look forced,the ones inside the letters are dope

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3547.jpg

[exitus]

heklr needs to stfu and read post numbers.

[LeaksOne]

Lolololololololol that's quite possibly the funniest thing I've ever read.

Heklr, I agree the big boys should give insight to the toys. That would help progress go that much faster.

[SHER_WON_WTS]

film is not dead..... just thought id drop in on that. sorry and good day.

[Stigma02]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6880.jpg
just the sketch soo far im trying to see any struture errors i might have made and overlooked? thx

[cushcota94]

been writing for like a week or two...

[Sbal]

Simple it out homie. And also, are you a girl?

[BossOfUsAll]

Feedback?

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/7281/apem.jpg
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/148/arrows.jpg

[BossOfUsAll]

Feedback?

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/7281/apem.jpg
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/148/arrows.jpg

[BossOfUsAll]

sorry bout the double post, heres some more
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7673/descent.jpg
http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/2385/dunce.jpg
http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/3001/illeagle.jpg
http://img541.imageshack.us/img541/2007/image1js.jpg
http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/3117/image2td.jpg
http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/2689/image3lt.jpg
http://img651.imageshack.us/img651/8539/image4qy.jpg
http://img828.imageshack.us/img828/5336/image5j.jpg

[Flawless Victory]

Why would you apologize for giving your opinion on a public forum? That seems pretty redundant to me.

[BossOfUsAll]

who me?

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/6898/image6m.jpg
http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/1232/image9gj.jpg
http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/8701/image10n.jpg
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/8819/image11aq.jpg
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/3135/slugc.jpg
http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/6181/spaceshipg.jpg
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/1556/treefrog.jpg

[LeaksOne]

stop that shit. you need to go simple. way simple. drop the arrows, bite your keyboard.

[cushcota94]

Am II a girl?

[Sbal]

ye

[cushcota94]

nah why

[Sbal]

I looked through your post and saw that you used to be bulimic, which is more prevalent in females, so i made an assumption. My bad.

[cushcota94]

Oh, no problem.
What'd you mean by simple it up?

[Sbal]

Do simple letters. PURGE Like that. You gotta work on bar sizes that make up letters.

[LeaksOne]

bite your keyboard.

.

[cushcota94]

Aright thanks man

[cushcota94]

how's this one? just finished it...

[BlacktodaFuture]

simpler. just like this PURGE

[Stigma02]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6880.jpg
just the sketch soo far im trying to see any struture errors i might have made and overlooked? thx

bump from the bottom crits?
boss simple out ur letter try to give them the same tilt same spacing maybe make ur letters fatter

[PegCityBoy]

heklr needs to stfu and read post numbers.

lmao

[mekosbc]

yeah, you're right, and i suck at 3d, i suck at drop shadows. anyone got any tips for practicing that?

try doin a thick out line.. once you have done your out line wrapp the out side of your letters to make them wider...

example:
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/108_0370.jpg

[FlippingChickens]

meko thats nice and simple
http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3547.jpg

[Astro.FRSk]

http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/21/photovs.jpg (http://img831.imageshack.us/i/photovs.jpg/)

http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/3065/astror.jpg (http://img72.imageshack.us/i/astror.jpg/)

[Stigma02]

astro:1st one is garbage 2nd one has some flow to about the t that looks likes a y try to get ur bars same width ur t only has sharp angles not much round on it as opposed to the other letters

[Stigma02]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6881.jpg oh and astro ur R doesnt fit in at all with that piece handy is pretty sick tho, CRITS!

[drOping]

Stigma- I take it that says atone? if so here are my thoughts...
The overall sense of flow is good, it seems symetric. But I think the structure is lacking. The middle bar of the A is too much make it smaller and not overlapping the right bar of the A. I don't get why there is like a middle horizontal bar thing in the middle of your T, thats wack. The bar in the middle of the O is...not cool. Middle bar of the E is wack too. Take your time clean up things, its just overall sloppy. But hey its a cool idea, rework it.

[Stigma02]

alright ill clean it up thx

[smokeitup]

and the tags suck too, it would of looked better without them.

[..romero..]

crits.id give them but i cant see anypics.i assume if i did i would tell you to keep practicing.because thats all i can say.
-meko.yours is the only one i can see.keep doin what your doin.shit looks dope.

http://i51.tinypic.com/16jg6ls.jpg

just fucking around while coughin up a lung.

[aces]

Meko- Good shit! Lovin that style, keep it up.
Tofe- The drop shadow's a bit messy, the top bar on the T is a little wacked imo and not really feeling the O either. The throwie's pretty nice though and so is the 3D.
Stigma and Astro- Letter structure...work on it...
Romero- Not too bad the curves on the S and the U seem a bit necessary though.

http://i933.photobucket.com/albums/ad176/freeskierpjb/0919002009.jpg

SEAZ finally got something with more than just SE or SZ lol I've been having a hard time with my A's with any style I've worked on but I like this one. Any thoughts? Oh and the outline's only blue/black because its a blue marker over the orange lol...

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3423.jpg?t=1284946369

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3421.jpg

the thread needed a lil boost

[lord_plankton]

weak boost. both suck hard. in the first one especially the a. i think yout tryin too hard to make all the lettes look the same. second one doesnt even have a f in there.

[Saint0913]

heres some morehttp://www.facebook.com/#!/photo.php?pid=5781285&id=634585930&ref=fbx_album
http://www.facebook.com/#!/photo.php?pid=5781287&id=634585930&ref=fbx_album&fbid=420716235930

http://www.facebook.com/#!/photo.php?pid=5781288&id=634585930&ref=fbx_album&fbid=420716240930
http://www.facebook.com/#!/photo.php?pid=5781291&id=634585930&ref=fbx_album&fbid=420716260930
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=5781292&id=634585930&ref=fbx_album&fbid=420716265930
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=5781292&id=634585930&ref=fbx_album&fbid=420716265930#!/photo.php?pid=5781293&id=634585930&ref=fbx_album&fbid=420716270930
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=5781292&id=634585930&ref=fbx_album&fbid=420716265930#!/photo.php?pid=5781294&id=634585930&ref=fbx_album&fbid=420716280930

[Saint0913]

Here are some of my stuff..

[BlacktodaFuture]

weak boost. both suck hard. in the first one especially the a. i think yout tryin too hard to make all the lettes look the same. second one doesnt even have a f in there.

the F is cursive... like all the other letters. see how that works?

try suicide.

old shit.

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3314.jpg?t=1285010553

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3315.jpg?t=1285010553

[smast]

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=515&pictureid=3903

any tips on color or design inside the letters?

[lord_plankton]

your stuff is bad, simple n plain.

[proNYNJA]

-meko: shits clean.
-save: clean.
-safe: keep working on it.

[FuckTheFame]

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1014.jpg

romero - looks dope. got some originality in there. refreshing
blacktodafuture - it'd be cool to see some new stuff looking like the old stuff
stigma - no 3d?
tofe - i like the effects
aces - try making your lines cleaner and you'll look legit. maybe tweak the e a little?
Meko - legit as always

[Saint0913]

Hey are we supposed to give crits even if we are new? non of yall gave me any and i hear its supposed to be "give crits to get crits"

[Stigma02]

fuck ill put 3d on the next one btw i like how u used the red for the outline it blends in but it stands out just enough

[FuckTheFame]

right on
3d can really pull a piece together
the colors on yours blend pretty close
what markers you use?

[m+s]

try doin a thick out line.. once you have done your out line wrapp the out side of your letters to make them wider...

example:
http://i345.photobucket.com/albums/p389/meckoh/108_0370.jpg

thats a nice effect but doesnt really pertain to his/her question.

the answer to how to drop shadow and 3d is fairly simple
you all know how to turn a square into a cube, yea?
http://www.cs.bham.ac.uk/~axs/fig/cube-only.png

well the idea is that you draw the same exact shape slightly offset in an arbitrary direction. then you draw in diagonal lines from the matching corner, right? Notice how the diagonal lines are all the same length and all parrallel to each other. that is crucial for the optical illusion of depth to take place.

so a drop shadow is when you draw the same dimensioned shape offset evenly and then do not connect up the edges with the parralell bars (the diagonal lines on the cube for instance). and simple no vanishing point 3d is acheived by connecting up those edges, case in point the cube pic

romero lookin good

[m+s]

saint has the right idea. your slackin on makin those diagonal connectors parrallell, do it, itd look 10x better. and nice attempt at the vanishing point one yo, shit came out damn near propper.

which reminds me i forgot to speak on vanishing point 3d. the idea here is that instead of starting with evenly offsetting the image in a specific direction, you start with a single point that you determine to be your vanishing point. you then draw straight lines from that point to every edge that faces said point. once that is done decide how hefty you want the 3d to be by picking a specific lenght for the vanishing point lines, and then shortening them all to be the same length. after this is done, try your damndest to approximate what the shape of your object would look like going back into the page and with that in mind connect the new short ends of the vanishing lines as close to perpendicular to those vanishing points and as parrallel to the object as possible

gitter done
peas

[m+s]

the F is cursive... like all the other letters. see how that works?

try suicide.

old shit.

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3314.jpg?t=1285010553

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3315.jpg?t=1285010553

yo i think you think that only the tops need to flow. naah doo, them whole shits have to make sense. keep at it


http://jamiedubs.com/fuckflickr/data/tshirts/web/haters-motivators.jpg
frienemy mother fuckers, hahahahahahaaaaaaahahahummm

[m+s]

because i just went beast mode on this page like a dirty mother fucker i elect myself the king shit of the rest of its contents even if i posses no authoraty or spelling skills to back it up. WHAT SON

this thread is now the "did tutencommon ever get chilly enough in egypt to go an learn how to quilt, and if so where are king tuts lost quilts?" thread
http://rapidcitysewing.com/images/King%20Tut%20Thread.jpg
discussion, hate, what have you

[drOping]

HAHAHHAHAHA well put bro...very clear your Location is fuckin brilliant!!

[Fury]

Guys, how the fuck do you do 3D? I can't figure it out???
:confused::confused::confused:

[Saint0913]

i know this is from graffiti creator.. some one wanted me to draw their name in it but is this wat ur talkin about with the vanishing point?

http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac296/Saint0913/012432.jpg

[Saint0913]

http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac296/Saint0913/162345.jpg
http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac296/Saint0913/DSCN0655.jpg

[Paint Pot & Pussy]

havent been around in a while
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/2526/soschoolwith3d.jpg
http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/8214/soschoolhollow.jpg
some quick school ish

[EXI]

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/224.jpg

just simple blocks, what you think?

[dangeri]

Like that odu saint,

B+w similar to my last one, like the s n and t better, but other o fit nicer, hopefully paint it on fri if the weather holds up,
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm73/danger_i/634613f1.jpg

And bump 4 crits

B+w 4 the wall am painting 2mo, gotta sort the 3d out mind, no ideas on colours yet either, so suggestions + crits welcome
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm73/danger_i/cec97271.jpg

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Dangeri color that shit man!!
Saint-that odu is clean but the letters are a tad bit off
And I think I already addressed meko and safe
I'm still writing smoke for those who mite say they can't read...
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAxMzktMjAxMDA5MjEtMTIxOS5qcGc.jpg
Love the backwards S
http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAxNDQtMjAxMDA5MjEtMTMwNS5qcGc.jpg

[*Patch!]

smoke that second one is pretty dope but the E seems kinda weak in my opinion, your fills are sweet tho. And i love that throw on the bottom of the first picture
dangeri does tat say snot? thats a wicked sketch and if thats what it says i like how it has little snot like conncetions or whatever. I agree with smoke you should color it

[EXI]

http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/224.jpg

just simple blocks, what you think?

bump for crits and new page

[*Patch!]

sope, the curves in the S should be more square, like the holes in the O and P, that could bee a solid roller tho

[FuckTheFame]

sope - your getting better everytime a see a new post from you
way to put in work

[EXI]

sope - your getting better everytime a see a new post from you
way to put in work

Thanks man! I'm tryin my hardest to get out of simps!!! haha.

And about my S. Thanks! That's the first time I haven't heard someone say "just work on letter structer!"

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

@patch, ya I know man I totally half assed my shit kuz I felt rushed seeing as this is my friends bb and I couldn't think of a decent enough E so I whipped that one up outta nowhere haha
And sope, that's real nice and all but I wana see like piece-worthy letters not rollers..although I would love to see that rolled up in paint if you can get to it

[dangeri]

/\ yeah man! That like forty foot wide would look schweeet, and maybe colour em later. Always seem to destroy shit with colour,

[aces]

Meko- Good shit! Lovin that style, keep it up.
Tofe- The drop shadow's a bit messy, the top bar on the T is a little wacked imo and not really feeling the O either. The throwie's pretty nice though and so is the 3D.
Stigma and Astro- Letter structure...work on it...
Romero- Not too bad the curves on the S and the U seem a bit necessary though.

http://i933.photobucket.com/albums/ad176/freeskierpjb/0919002009.jpg

SEAZ finally got something with more than just SE or SZ lol I've been having a hard time with my A's with any style I've worked on but I like this one. Any thoughts? Oh and the outline's only blue/black because its a blue marker over the orange lol...

Bump any crits?

[dangeri]

Simplify and even your bars out dude, kinda looks like seo2 ATM, jus my 2penneth tho,

[unique93]

new sketches :D
http://www4.picturepush.com/photo/a/4214072/640/4214072.jpg (http://picturepush.com/public/4214072)
and this(E and M are bad, but...but i will fix that)
http://www3.picturepush.com/photo/a/4228461/640/4228461.jpg (http://picturepush.com/public/4228461)

[Saint0913]

Unique those are ill man nice work... i like the all red one u did. the colors in the second was nice also.. maybe use a perspective 3d if you do draw a 3d on it

[MakeItTakeIt]

unique, what markers did you use for that top one? that red is hot shit

[unique93]

i use this :D
http://english.fila.it/media/2529/071400_TURBOCOLOR_BIG.jpg

[Zookyook]

unique that fill on the grid paper is clean shit.... interesting style

changed my name officially, nemor, i like it... fucking with it for the last 2 days, still need to work on a decent handy and throw with this name...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/5015137795_db2405be65.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4130/5015142925_7fe7295085.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4129/5015742962_af85b7403a.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4084/5015145691_934a0f227f.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4127/5015748242_969f01eb03.jpg

[Phat 2]

y'd u change?

[unique93]

i change E and M letter :D
http://www2.picturepush.com/photo/a/4231430/640/4231430.jpg (http://picturepush.com/public/4231430)

[One Evil]

unique that fill on the grid paper is clean shit.... Interesting style

changed my name officially, nemor, i like it... Fucking with it for the last 2 days, still need to work on a decent handy and throw with this name...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/5015137795_db2405be65.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4084/5015145691_934a0f227f.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4127/5015748242_969f01eb03.jpg

bump!

[PREA672]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0835.jpg

[Phillip McDougall]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4127/5015748242_969f01eb03.jpg

This. N kind of looks like a K, though. Round out the middle part of your M. and the round part on the R should not be cut in so deep on the bottom.

[LeaksOne]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/5015137795_db2405be65.jpg


i like this one quite a bit except that R.

[Saint0913]

unique that last one u did was fresh. what are you writing tho?

[PREA672]

vote in the beef battle thread yo!

[Get Rekt!]

binder cover for school. this is really just a shit show.
http://i317.photobucket.com/albums/mm362/mitchconley/0922002138.jpg

[PREA672]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0839.jpg

[P-love]

thicken up your bars a little on your E my man, it doesn't really flow anymore

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/July-02_1538.jpg

[EXI]

All this done in one day :). I try hards. and Kew is that done on your Girl or you? Pretty fukin sick dude, like it.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/225.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/211.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/212.jpg
^ thats my favorite so far

[kew1]

thats a girl i dont wear a bra?

[m+s]

Guys, how the fuck do you do 3D? I can't figure it out???
:confused::confused::confused:

wtf dude. read my long ass post explaining shit like 2 posts up from this question. i broke it all dowen for you, what is still confusing to you?

[EXI]

All this done in one day :). I try hards. and Kew is that done on your Girl or you? Pretty fukin sick dude, like it.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/225.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/211.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/212.jpg
^ thats my favorite so far

bump for crit

[Sbal]

Work on your tag homie

[extinct]

and..... i return... post picks l8r... soap your handstyle might even b worse than mine...keep workin on it

[Willis1989]

Crits on these please

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00305.jpg?t=1285232808

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/DSC00306.jpg?t=1285232882

[Zookyook]

bump!

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4127/5015748242_969f01eb03.jpgThis. N kind of looks like a K, though. Round out the middle part of your M. and the round part on the R should not be cut in so deep on the bottom.

i like this one quite a bit except that R.

y'd u change?
thanks for the love n bumps my ninjas.....

i feel what ur sayin on the N and R crust, i kinda like the middle of the M though :cool:

and phat2 i changed for a lot of reasons... i wanted a 5 letter word, my gf thought of the name actually, after i gave her like 8 letters that i liked and told her to make 5 letter words from it.... personally i think its a good idea to change ur name once u know the basics of the game and u can put up more decent shit on freights and walls without people bein like 'consume? i saw some of ur shit a while back that was MAD TOY!!!!' haha so now im nemor....



Crits on these please
i dont like what ur doin with the 3d man... lose all the dots i say.... and dont dot ur L (?) and it usually flows better when u use either all capital letters or all lowercase... keep ur bar thicknesses consistant, like the top pic, the upper left part of the S, thats exactly what not to do... bottom pic, the left part of ur W IS what to do... at least ur not tryin "wildstyles" lmao keep practicing

[EXI]

Yea my handstyle isn't that great, but hows my pieces?

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/September-23_1035.jpg
fucked up on the 3d

[Sbal]

Sope- You're gonna be tagging wayyyyyy more than your going to piece, so work on your tag. I think the red ones best, the perple and green one has good 3d, but all the holes and add ons are distracting. And why is the P shitting out a blue leg in the first one?

[proNYNJA]

sope- what sbal said.
wils- what zookyook said
kew1- it looks pretty clean, but yea. you fuked up on the 3d. Does is Say ERK?.

[kew1]

yea it says erk i tried messin wit the letters like the wit the k an r to make it flow better

[EXI]

Sope- You're gonna be tagging wayyyyyy more than your going to piece, so work on your tag. I think the red ones best, the perple and green one has good 3d, but all the holes and add ons are distracting. And why is the P shitting out a blue leg in the first one?

it's a horseshoe lol. idk why I drew it but I just did.
here's one i did yesterday, not that good
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/213.jpg

[*Patch!]

sope i think you should just worry about doing black and white pieces for now intead of coloring. Its better to have solid structure as opposed to a solid fill, thats just my opinion

[dangeri]

/\ agreed, shadow needs work aswell bud, e's shadow is gettin off, like that green n purple one above tho,

Wils, mega improvement from last time I seen y stuff, top one is sweet,

And kew, love your e's man,

[EXI]

Yeah taht was my first time doing a shadow instead of a 3d so :p.

[dangeri]

I find it helps if you draw the shadow as part of the letter, rarther than put it on as a last thing, :)

[Dirty Doug]

i didint think id ever post my shit here but im curious what people think
been writing for close to a year but only seriously in the past couple months

http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/6388/snapshot201009241.jpg (http://img545.imageshack.us/i/snapshot201009241.jpg/)


[IMG]http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/1162/snapshot20100924.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/i/snapshot20100924.jpg/) Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

[dj3hac]

Doug, the second one reminds me of a clown and too much acid, this isn't necessarily a bad thing! Keep it up bro!

[proNYNJA]

doug- that 2nd looks like a clean fill, but im not digging all the yellow bubbles in your 3d.


some1 passed this huge books to me it was like 15"x20"
and i had it sitting in my closet for like 4 days with just the SERG on it. then i added the character and the Rising Sun backround last.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4113/5021338979_bf7dfeefe6_z.jpg

Heres is a new Steezy im working on, its a colab with my homie SPILZ.
if you don't notice, i fucked up on my drop shadow baaadddddd.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4108/5021945980_c354bda13e_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4106/5021946006_e94f2a1ea2_z.jpg

[Stigma02]

serg try to keep ur 3d consistant make it it the same thickness as all other 3d

[smokeitup]

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/1162/snapshot20100924.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/i/snapshot20100924.jpg/) Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

i like this one.

[PREA672]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0847.jpg

could this pass in the intermediate thread?

[Phillip McDougall]

Not quite yet. But you're getting there. Keep it up.

[Stigma02]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/theangrygorilla2005.jpg crits?

[FuckTheFame]

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1019.jpg
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1022.jpg

PREA - nice structure man. im jealous
STIGMA - still no 3d? work on those proportions too man

[proNYNJA]

doug-

some1 passed this huge books to me it was like 15"x20"
and i had it sitting in my closet for like 4 days with just the SERG on it. then i added the character and the Rising Sun backround last.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4113/5021338979_bf7dfeefe6_z.jpg

Heres is a new Steezy im working on, its a colab with my homie SPILZ.
if you don't notice, i fucked up on my drop shadow baaadddddd.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4108/5021945980_c354bda13e_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4106/5021946006_e94f2a1ea2_z.jpg

bottom page bump for crits

prea: great straight letters
stigma im sorry but i cant read it, to much going on.
fucktheflame: top on is clean but u needa work on ur tags, bottom one is clean too

[*Patch!]

that pink one is dope, somthing about the R bugs me but i dont know what

stigma- you're trying too hard, do less. Do nothing at all
prea do something more with that A, the rest i a pretty dope simple
dirty doug- it look good but the 3d is kinda lame in my opinion, the yellow doesnt really go well with the rest of the fill.

[drOping]

stigma-simples
Prea-i dunno ur E is just one long bent bar and doesnt match ur p and R.
fuckjthefame-really dont know what it ssays but its not my cup of tea
surge-i personally dont like your superr loos style, there is no structural support in those letters...they will probably melt away


wish i could say this was a freestyle
http://i56.tinypic.com/2iut8c0.jpg

[Shell703]

SIEK- I'd say make the S a little taller to match the rest of the letters, chill with the arrows for right now untill you get some solid letters going and get rid of that little peg by the K --what is that?? Thats a solid 3D though, just work on the shadings and highlighted areas, some of the highlighted areas shouldn't be highlighted.

SURGE- I don't know just not liking it- it looks more Powerpuff Girls than graff to me. Especially with those stars...but if thats what you're going for than so be it

FuckTheFame- dont know what you're doing

Stigma- does that say ROC?!@#RAC-RBC?

PREA- keep playing with those bars- fix that 3D though

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ABUsive.jpg
my absolute last piece of paper- dont like the B dont think it works well with the other letters I'd rather use a lowercase b but other than that whatcha think?
Dirty- don't really know what it says, work on your letters, the use of colors are good though I think thats what kinda holds the piece up-the colors within the letters and the yellows and pink contrast well

SOPE - grind those simples for a while before dressing it up with all those fills and extras

[PREA672]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0854.jpg

surge really digging that piece.. try making the top of our R bigger. might fit in better with the piece

[mawks]

that's hot, the only things I would change are, that bar coming out of the right side of the A, and scooting the E to the right just a bit so it's not being so overlapped by the R.

[lord_plankton]

e too hidden and r just ugly , overall no flow. definately not hot.

[BoomSlang]

prea , sorry bud i just dont like that at all, no consistancy , no flow and just randon bits here n there.

heres 2 lame ones from this week, gonna try something a lil different this week and see what i come up with

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/graff/007.jpg


http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/graff/006.jpg

[*Patch!]

i dont like the kinks in the Ts

[lord_plankton]

second one is quite good. dunno about the connecting bar though.

[KNS13]

playing around with photoshop
http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/jhiz.jpg

[Stigma02]

droping i like everything but the extension from the k
prea no flow srry dnt like it at all
boomslang what is that thing at the then end of the t on the first piece?

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/theangrygorilla2005.jpg

freestyle of my buddies name DAVID

[Fury]

That says David? I see like REC or something. If that is an R, it's dope.
JHIZ - that's a good simp.
BoomSlang - Both are cool, but I don't like the letters connected on the second.

Been a while but meh,
http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/682/dsc6091.jpg

[Gyse]

That says david?

[*Patch!]

jhiz- thats a solid simple, try to clean up the lines a bit tho
fury-clean up the lines and keep the bars equal width

[Stigma02]

srry pasted the wrong code that one i did post says R.O.C this one is DAVID
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6882.jpg
the 3d has 2 different yllws but it didnt show up in the pic

[BoomSlang]

boomslang what is that thing at the then end of the t on the first piece?



the extension from the s to balance the one from the w

i will end up redoing the 2nd one a few times till i get it how i want it. next time will prolly be without the bottom connector bar.
thanks for the comments so far

[Shell703]

[QUOTE=Shell703;1669144]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee183/Whispem703/ABUsive.jpg
my absolute last piece of paper- dont like the B dont think it works well with the other letters I'd rather use a lowercase b but other than that whatcha think?
Dirty- don't really know what it says, work on your letters, the use of colors are good though I think thats what kinda holds the piece up-the colors within the letters and the yellows and pink contrast well

BUMP FOR CRITS

[NosE2]

try some straight letters. it seems like it went bigger as it went, a, b, u. get down the simples, then throw in those curves. idk.

[SECH]

the O got a little smaller and yes i've used a simple R.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4109/5028917415_408a8bdbcc_z.jpg

[SECH]

double post

[Stigma02]

srry pasted the wrong code that one i did post says R.O.C this one is DAVID
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6882.jpg
the 3d has 2 different yllws but it didnt show up in the pic

bump crits plzz.

[NosE2]

V is hella weak. Im feelin the fill and splats though.

[FlippingChickens]

sech - thats not working out man..make them simple like the letter r

stigma - i dont like how each letter has a random extension made just so they can connect,makes it look wierd and unproportioned..the colors are cool

fuck the fame - go simple

surge - that character is pretty wack no offence..paint the pink one,just fix the "r"

slek - not diggin the loop in your s,or any of the letter connections or arrows

prea - did you even try? that letter e is literally behind the r

fury - that looks messy man and that letter z looks horrible ,work on that hand aswell

jiz - good simple,wack name.

boomslang - start doing all your sketches like the 2nd one,those letters looks MUCH much better than the 1st pic..haha i like how the end of the t looks like razor blade, u should have put it on the 1st "t" so it gives a balance and i would have taken it off completely from the bottom

abu - make that "a" bigger



http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3555.jpg
the top peice is a freestyle thats why the majority of the cracks look wack

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3556.jpg
http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3541-2.jpg
http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3553.jpg

[EXI]

dr0ping - i love your style, When i drew this i was thinking about your style in school lol. what do you use for your colours?
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/214.jpg

[eshen]

-seac

[Res-tooth Slims]

http://i987.photobucket.com/albums/ae355/res-tooth-slims/IMG_0340.jpg

[PREA672]

TOFE everything looks horrible. you havent progressed in a long time

[FlippingChickens]

my shit is fresher than yours, dont think so? step up and battle me

[PheltErUp]

quickie during the blunt sesh last night

http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/5072/photoazr.jpg

[BoomSlang]

Lol @ prea, you got some balls calling anyones work shit bud, have you even looked at half the crap you have posted?

[Res-tooth Slims]

phelts thats pretty cool but i reckin your drop is a little dodgy ae...

[EXI]

dr0ping - i love your style, When i drew this i was thinking about your style in school lol. what do you use for your colours?
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/214.jpg

bump for crits

[RedEyes]

keep trying...

[DTE_PRONTO]

quickie during the blunt sesh last night

http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/5072/photoazr.jpg

coooolllllll nice quickie lol i like how u made tha top of tha E look like a bandaid

[ViniVidiVici]

S is whack... n is whack... t is whack... forcefield is whack... 3d is whack... bars are whack.... I would say just completely do a new one and don't try anything to crazy, gotta learn to walk before ya run...

[Res-tooth Slims]

yea and dont sketch with a pen...cos thats what it looks like...just do your lines one times

[Mr yarbles]

http://i56.tinypic.com/15nuis9.jpg

http://i56.tinypic.com/2yya8uc.jpg

[woonybomber]

http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff007-10.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff009-9.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff012-5.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff013-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff015-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff016-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff017-4.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff019-1.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff021-1.jpg



my black book is getting full so i thought i would post some ish crits

[aekone]

http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo1.jpg
Chuke- vomiting in such quantities that one could choke.

[woonybomber]

http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff007-10.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff009-9.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff012-5.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff013-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff015-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff016-3.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff017-4.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff019-1.jpg
http://i931.photobucket.com/albums/ad159/datkewlkid09/graff021-1.jpg



my black book is getting full so i thought i would post some ish crits

bottom page bump

[extinct]

crits on this...
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/0929001821.jpg

nel- the bottom pic...the addons are wack.. like the throwie though.. the second bottom pic has to many connections on the n

[Zookyook]

yea woony, what he said... and the throw on the last pic looks good, the rest of it is just tryin too hard... if its nel46, ur 6's look too much like 5's, it kinda looks like "NELy5" to me... round out the top of the 6, make the "46" the same size and the "NEL" the same size and itll look better, the second pic is about the maximum of extensions u should be usin right now, itll look cleaner if u do those things, peace

lean2 lose ALL those extensions... try to bring the letters a little closer.... blocky sharp extensions dont really work on bubbly flowing letters, and halos are really meant just for tags no simps and shit


first nemor 'piece', just fuckin with it, not happy with anything about that one...
second is a bek exchange i never finished til now... crits appreciated

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4127/5039562378_e683916a55_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4126/5039560982_407c41d6f6_z.jpg

[eshen]

Extinct: The letter structure is good, but the arrows are a like dodgy for me. The whole piece has radius corners but the arrows are sharp. They don't look like they belong.

[homsie]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4092/5039117077_797fbd3bbf.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5039117077/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4085/5039735960_948447c86c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5039735960/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4108/5039114719_532df6be84.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5039114719/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4129/5033372211_96f53c72a9.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5033372211/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4147/5033365153_64e3c9381b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5033365153/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4083/5033981392_57b2e133cf.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5033981392/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4091/5033359759_03a32e498b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5033359759/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4133/5012172259_960257f470.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5012172259/)

[FlippingChickens]

chuke - those look dope

woony - 3d picture is decent ,would have taken off the drips

extinct - bring them letters closer together and take off arrows and dont bend them so much

nemor - no offence man but your always doing that style and it just doesnt look good,you should go more simple

hom - the throw on the left in the last picture is dope just fix the o because it can be confused for another letter..and i really like the white and red simple in the 2nd picture

[Zookyook]

fc- yea i have my own style im tryin to work it out to where its acceptable.... but ur the wrong ***** to be tellin me to go simple! lmao

homs- most of those O's look like A's to me, avoid the triangle O! u got some style though i like the throwups

[C-Lurk]

homsie - those rip. love the yellow/red scheme, really pops.. kinda throwback to communist-era propaganda/chinese oriental stuff. mad stylez all over haha.

i got bored in math today, then took it home...
http://i52.tinypic.com/vphg91.jpg
into this
http://i55.tinypic.com/ilym1l.jpg

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/September-30_1808.jpg

[eshen]

Kew: I like it. I don't think i'd change a thing,

[SECH]

sech - thats not working out man..make them simple like the letter r

thanks man i'll try doing simples more often.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4146/5036534070_dd49dd2406_z.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4153/5039263541_8fa2c93bc3_z.jpg

[Zookyook]

sech i think u should look at some of dukes work... it looks like u have a really close style, just behind his skill, if u dont know, hes a mod here........... i like that single S, but the piece on top isnt up to par, the fill and the structure need work, i like the blue outline a lot, just keep the spacing from the black outline even throughout, that way itll look like theres a clean white line in between, na'm'sayin?

[SECH]

ya i hear u, thanks a lot.
here is the outline since the fill kinda hide parts of the letters
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4112/5040667608_5bc2952d5b_z.jpg

[woonybomber]

kew is a biter

[eshen]

Crits please. This is the first time i've written in a while.

[HeklrToo]

kew is a biter

Well he ain't that good at it cause his letters are frumpy and his fills are worse.

Got flicks?

[Stigma02]

say KORIE ill give crits a lil later i have to go to school haha but crits on mine?
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6886.jpg its at kind of an angle wont fit on scanner

[FuckTheFame]

http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO1087.jpg
random one im working out

stigma - nice 3d. digging those highlights too man
eshn - nice style. needs a little flow imo
sech - legit
zookyook - that bek is crazy. i really like the string that you threw around it. nice proportions and coloring too. still wanting a tag exchange man

[woonybomber]

Well he ain't that good at it cause his letters are frumpy and his fills are worse.

Got flicks?

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/September-30_1808.jpg
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e357/LockDown2/EGOR.jpg
bite

[FuckTheFame]

always nice to see someone called out on a bite
especially when you work hard as fuck to develop your own style
nice one woony bomber
kew...you suck

[woonybomber]

i hate biters
i know im not that good but i dont bite noones shit
i can honestly say that my shit is original

[ViniVidiVici]

who the fuck cares.... this is the toy forum, I say bite all the fuck you want, just don't be claiming it's yours... no one cares...

[dangeri]

Sech: that s I propper nice man, digging alot of ur stuff tbf man, far from the generic bumf I'm used to seeing, and not that a compliment off me is something to rave about, but that s genuinely inspired me! Keep that shit up man!

[murph3pt]

can i get some help with this? http://i53.tinypic.com/vzggfq.jpg

[LeaksOne]

first off, theres no reason to post the same exact picture 4 times. second, that looks really cluttered and the S's are weird. im not even really sure what it says....skasc?

[murph3pt]

and also this http://i56.tinypic.com/11sh2tj.jpg this 1 is SMAST the other is SKAST

[LeaksOne]

needs moar arrows!!!

[murph3pt]

yea i thought so. also i dont think the top right of the S n top left of the T dont realy fit the theme, ima do it again but any tips on color?

[LeaksOne]

navy blue and yellow.

[Stigma02]

blue will really stand out with the orange make sure its a brightish blue though so u can see the details of the black marker

[LeaksOne]

navy blue nigguh

[cushcota94]

after about 2 or months of writing...

[ViniVidiVici]

basics..................................... are needed

[*Patch!]

Youth- you have a unique style and i actually like it, but i think it would look better if you kept all your letters without the bars through them(picture for example). Also i dont like te extensions on your O they jusst dont fit the type of style you have in my opinion. But if you like it keep doin your thing
http://i912.photobucket.com/albums/ac329/uKnobGobblers/youthfix.jpg
murph3pt- that throw really needs some work, im not saying its bad but some of the letters are hard to make out( the last one) and the KA isnt very good, it just seems really generic. The orange and grey piece looks like youre trying to force style that you dont have yet. The structure just isnt there and you need to work on that before you go for a wildstyle
Purge- Work on simples. your structure isnt there yet.

[Inlyn08]

after about 2 or months of writing...

The first one was the best of the two.
Second looks like the bee pissed that out. In my opinion, keep working with the first.

[lord_plankton]

colors inverted doodle

http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF1858a.jpg

[IbuprofenTablets]

Lol.

[Stigma02]

rage do simples lord plankton wtf does it say?

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6888.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6887.jpg
crits

[homsie]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4130/5044997489_0dd9890c36.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5044997489/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4148/5045617652_1974ef58cc.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5045617652/)
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4151/5045615798_d475e9f6c2.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/acresonensg/5045615798/)

[LeaksOne]

Damn Good shit homs

[homsie]

anyone wanna exchange?

[lord_plankton]

should answer the question what it reads..should have done it all like i did the chapters..fill and letter wise
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/DSCF1858ab.jpg