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PREA672
10-07-2010, 06:23 PM
why?

ghostwriter
10-07-2010, 06:25 PM
i know skillz show

Fury
10-07-2010, 06:37 PM
FURY iS FUCKING CONFUSED!

ghostwriter
10-07-2010, 07:16 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/adas.jpg

Killllar

ghostwriter
10-07-2010, 07:21 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/fdhgfdg.jpg

CLEAN

iloveCrackaine
10-07-2010, 10:49 PM
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/8979/pict0999h.jpg
(audeo)
can i get some crits on this one .. good or bad up 2 u?

Sbal
10-07-2010, 10:57 PM
Give simps a try, i can not see audeo.

Art class Value project... Anyone diggin'?
http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/2917/dsc04466j.jpg

iloveCrackaine
10-07-2010, 11:03 PM
http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/3833/pict0999.jpg

ViniVidiVici
10-07-2010, 11:06 PM
anyone else think that looks like Mone's style? or at least an attempt at it?

*Patch!
10-07-2010, 11:20 PM
mone has somewhat of a generic style, and that does not look like it

ViniVidiVici
10-07-2010, 11:22 PM
so short answer no, okay hahahaha, probably looked more like it in my mind cuz of the just black and white....

iloveCrackaine
10-07-2010, 11:25 PM
vini i could understand y u said tht .. i disagree .. but hes dope anyway to me atleast

Stigma02
10-08-2010, 03:50 AM
ghost writer sick as fuck
simples crackaine
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6893.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6892.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6890.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6891.jpg
fucked up on the 3d with seth crits!?!
piece for a girl it better work cuz this shit took forever

SzrZx
10-08-2010, 07:47 AM
szxzx - stop, please, that's sloppy as fuck also, clean up your lines people.... geez what is everyone in a rush for? this is a blackbook, you don't have to rush, take your time and make your lines clean. but that is not the main thing that is wrong with your piece, it's just bad in general, go simple cuz your 3D is whack and all the letters are horrible.


dude are you serious?, yes granted my lines are sloppy but my letters are not bad at all theres a couple uneven lines but if you think my letters are "horrible", and then you call sviz' fuckyou piece "okay".. well then you shouldnt be critting anyones shit

SzrZx
10-08-2010, 07:58 AM
crackaine & stigma - do simples.

Stigma02
10-08-2010, 09:38 AM
do u not see the letters i kept the bar width the same and made the bottom bars bigger then the top i can point it out on ms paint if u dont see it?

ViniVidiVici
10-08-2010, 09:41 AM
Yes szrzx, and I stick with what I say, maybe your T and A would be alright not great, but alright, but your R and E are bad, real bad, and I'm not saying your T and A are good, like I said the bars are off and the lines are not clean and the 3D is bad all around. Don't post if ya don't want to hear the truth.

Stigma - The blue and pink one I can't fully make out all the letters, maybe rework that one. the Seth one I can make out the letters, but there is so much going on it's kinda distracting and makes it look messy imo

Stigma02
10-08-2010, 09:43 AM
yea i realized the seth was messy when i finished it but i couldnt change it :/
ill rework the blue and pink one it says ashlyn btw

ViniVidiVici
10-08-2010, 09:49 AM
yeah i saw the ash and the n, but the ly area was a little eh hectic I guess, but ya know according to srxzx I can't crit on anyone's pieces anymore cuz his was a fucking dope ass burner and I apparently have no clue about graff.... makes sense....

SzrZx
10-08-2010, 09:52 AM
lmao whatever dude i didnt have a wicked burner it was simples dumb ass
stigma - get rid of all the unnessary extensions for now. and some of your letters were lacking structure

Stigma02
10-08-2010, 09:54 AM
<script src='http://img836.imageshack.us/shareable/?i=picture68902.jpg&p=tl' type='text/javascript'></script><noscript>http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/1314/picture68902.jpg (http://img836.imageshack.us/i/picture68902.jpg/)</noscript>

does this clear it up i might put another outline around the l to make it stand out

ViniVidiVici
10-08-2010, 10:13 AM
I see you also don't fully understand sarcasm either srxzx, listen, you either take or leave what I said, I could fucking care less, but if you don't listen to others, you're gonna be in this section of the forums for a while.

and Stigma yes I see it now, but with all the extensions between the L and Y I couldn't before.

SzrZx
10-08-2010, 10:31 AM
k. well that as smple as my shits getting thanks though.

Amends_Ego
10-08-2010, 10:39 AM
Like vini said, y'all need to take some fucking critisism without bitching. Be happy you got any at all because you didn't leave none for nobody else. Self absorbed jackoffs.

And dude with all the crazy color schemes, do straight pencil sketches, it'll help you're steez ten-fold right now you just have crappy lettering hidden in chaotic color schemes. no good.

SzrZx
10-08-2010, 10:44 AM
your right my bad... im just defending myself cause i know my shit not that bad but whatever im done...

Stigma02
10-08-2010, 10:48 AM
yeah i will probably just put some outlines to get rid of some of the extensions and connections between the L and Y

PREA672
10-08-2010, 11:58 AM
whats up with that RIP? is that the RIPSET

SzrZx
10-08-2010, 12:23 PM
na im guessing thats a friend/family member that past away...

MoganOne
10-08-2010, 01:32 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/wewefd.jpg

This is pretty sick man... dope azz steez i'm diggin' the K

Stuck
10-08-2010, 04:10 PM
lol stigma even wen u wrote the letters in with ms paint i cant read it.... i cant even read the letters u wrote with the actually ms paint program....u fucking fail dudeee ahaha

on another note i failed and was reading it upside down XD ahaha

ghostwriter
10-08-2010, 06:39 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/werwe.jpg

The FIRST letter i would put one more extension on the bottom arrow that goes dow to the RIGHT then shoots up and Acroose the whole page close to the end of the page and finish the arrow


You already know

Stigma02
10-08-2010, 06:55 PM
lol stigma even wen u wrote the letters in with ms paint i cant read it.... i cant even read the letters u wrote with the actually ms paint program....u fucking fail dudeee ahaha

on another note i failed and was reading it upside down XD ahaha

yeah that would do it u see em now?
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6894.jpg
i think its more legible now?

Stuck
10-08-2010, 07:29 PM
dont connect the letters and lose some add ons and it would be decent

Sbal
10-08-2010, 07:31 PM
Agreed

Stuck
10-08-2010, 07:36 PM
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo25-1.jpg

LeaksOne
10-08-2010, 07:56 PM
that looks like hgrg

Stuck
10-08-2010, 08:02 PM
..... are you a blonde ditz who likes to go clubbing?
on a second note at least you can read the two G's as the same letter....

LeaksOne
10-08-2010, 08:05 PM
lol are you mad?

Stuck
10-08-2010, 08:07 PM
Hulk rageeeeeeeeee

LeaksOne
10-08-2010, 08:10 PM
haha nigguh why you mad for? your E's look like G's at first glance. its not my fault, dont get mad at me. maybe someone else will see it different.

Stuck
10-08-2010, 08:12 PM
im not mad dude lol

hpir
10-09-2010, 12:44 AM
http://i605.photobucket.com/albums/tt133/hpirrung/Picture287.jpg

NosE2
10-09-2010, 07:32 AM
yea stuck, those e's look like solid g's at first....your cramping up your e's too much. give your letters some space.


edit: i found out why. that extention that goes from the top of your bottom leg of the e and back to the middle, take that thing out on both of em, might help.

Zookyook
10-09-2010, 10:26 AM
And I agree with ViniVidiVici; Good job Nemor, that shit looks fresh. What sort of markers do you use?

zook, that simp, those tages and those throws are all dope as fuck. I'm jealous lol

damn havent been here in a while... thanks yo, i used sharpies for the throws and tags and one4alls for the simp...

ghostwriter that one with the fill is clean but the black and white looks a bit too technical... the 3d is going like 10 different places

here- good to see that u can paint that piece just as well as u sketch it... so props for that... but i think maybe u should flip the H and see where that flow leads u... most of what ive seen from u is that same piece yanno? ur ready to change it up and keep that piece in ur arsenal

MoganOne
10-09-2010, 04:57 PM
Quick sketch... I know the "e" is wack
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Monewithcharacter.jpg

MoganOne
10-09-2010, 04:58 PM
Quick sketch... I know the "e" is wack
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Monewithcharacter.jpg

FuckTheFame
10-09-2010, 05:01 PM
http://i387.photobucket.com/albums/oo319/fuckthefame/PHTO0038.jpg
random one
need to get some inspiration to work on my name again
been stuck in a slump

mone - would have been nice to see the e flair out like the m. i've heard a lot a good writers say symmetry is essential for certain pieces

W_G_O_N_E
10-09-2010, 05:16 PM
kane : i like the simp but lose the tags on the tops of the k and a
mone : like it but the n with the star below it kinda looked like an r at first glance
FTF: not sure what it's supposed to be
here is a piece for the round robin battlehttp://img293.imageshack.us/img293/3671/fall017.jpg

extinct
10-09-2010, 05:22 PM
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/1004000647.jpg

iloveCrackaine
10-09-2010, 05:47 PM
http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3201/pict0999i.jpg
can i get some crits on this one?.. thanks

MoganOne
10-09-2010, 06:01 PM
kane : i like the simp but lose the tags on the tops of the k and a
mone : like it but the n with the star below it kinda looked like an r at first glance
FTF: not sure what it's supposed to be
here is a piece for the round robin battlehttp://img293.imageshack.us/img293/3671/fall017.jpg

Yeah thanks bro...
This piece is pretty hott man! I am diggin the shit u put around it! it really pops it out... Also nice thick letter style

MoganOne
10-09-2010, 07:46 PM
A piece that I am working on... Trying something with the BG
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1009001924.jpg
Moner wit a boner
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1009001913.jpg

RADAWG
10-09-2010, 09:18 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo344.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo342.jpg
fucked up the right leg of the K alittle bit but w.e
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo343.jpg

WoRdSmYtH
10-09-2010, 09:49 PM
why?

Nevermind man.

Bump for critz.

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=525&pictureid=3980

WoRdSmYtH
10-09-2010, 10:02 PM
Bump for critz.


http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=525&pictureid=3980

WoRdSmYtH
10-09-2010, 10:06 PM
Critz?

http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/picture.php?albumid=525&pictureid=3980

extinct
10-10-2010, 12:31 AM
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/1004000647.jpg
bump for crits
mone that stuff is sick...
general tip for yall.. use tracing paper if u wanna keep the outline but u wanna try a fill

WoRdSmYtH
10-10-2010, 04:15 AM
Critz please.

http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff379/MonkeySaysRelax/FRITE.jpg

ViniVidiVici
10-10-2010, 09:38 AM
Extinct - I like it, alot, it's pretty dope the letter structure and the fill is sweet, I really really like the A and N

Wordsmyth - I like the general idea, like the style you are going for but the R is a little weak, the leg coming off it is too short and looks like a peg leg, and whatever that letter is after the T try cleaning it up and changing it up, cuz that part needs some work, but like I said before, I really am digging that style.

Moner - I always like your shit, always nice, that E is whack on the first one, and the N does look like an R, with the second one I just like it hahaha. Also I'm in love with that Karak

WGONE - Dope, that is all, dope.... nice connections and extensions, perfect colors, good structures.... dope


This page is looking good for it being the toy section, I have some shit I'll be posting up soon.... been real busy with school and all, Orgo is trying to fuck me over, but I'm gonna show that bitch what's what.

thepekins
10-10-2010, 10:53 AM
http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/5381/scan0001sg.jpg (http://img151.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001sg.jpg)

http://img692.imageshack.us/img692/857/scan0002pz.jpg (http://img692.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002pz.jpg)

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/5589/scan0003xq.jpg (http://img46.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0003xq.jpg)

PegCityBoy
10-10-2010, 04:01 PM
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo344.jpg
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo342.jpg
fucked up the right leg of the K alittle bit but w.e
http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/Photo343.jpg

not tellin you to change your name or anything, just saying there's a RAONE in Winnipeg that runs shit.

shit looks dope though

EXI
10-10-2010, 04:24 PM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/217.jpg
someone said work with pencils.

W_G_O_N_E
10-10-2010, 05:06 PM
finally picked a name and started with some simps , gonna keep workin on these letters , bottom one is for a battlehttp://img844.imageshack.us/img844/803/fall040.jpg

MoganOne
10-10-2010, 05:24 PM
bump for crits
mone that stuff is sick...
general tip for yall.. use tracing paper if u wanna keep the outline but u wanna try a fill

Or use a copy machine...

EXI
10-10-2010, 05:58 PM
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/217.jpg
someone said work with pencils.

bump, end page crits please

thepekins
10-10-2010, 07:20 PM
bump, end page crits please
looks bad lose drips and connections. Do normal letters

wgone- dope!

Flawless Victory
10-10-2010, 08:25 PM
bump, end page crits please
Why the fuck would you bump the shit on the same damn page?
Just for that I'm not helping you out with shit.

Wgone, though, that top shit is pretty dope.

EXI
10-10-2010, 11:21 PM
looks bad lose drips and connections. Do normal letters

wgone- dope!
it is normal letter holy hell... I'm not just gunna sit there and draw letters off of my keyboard, I have a full binder of that already, It's time to add shit like that too it, I don't see why its so fucking bad as you proclaim


Why the fuck would you bump the shit on the same damn page?
Just for that I'm not helping you out with shit.

Wgone, though, that top shit is pretty dope.
good for you

*Patch!
10-10-2010, 11:39 PM
simples can look fresh even without extensions or anything. Youre doing too much and it just isnt working out

MoganOne
10-10-2010, 11:42 PM
finally picked a name and started with some simps , gonna keep workin on these letters , bottom one is for a battlehttp://img844.imageshack.us/img844/803/fall040.jpg

Pimp shit I am diggin the top one bro it really stands out...
@EXI: You need to start way simple bro

a piece I am working on
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1010002332.jpg

SYFER1
10-11-2010, 12:12 AM
http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/syfer.jpg

SicK-
10-11-2010, 12:15 AM
it is normal letter holy hell... I'm not just gunna sit there and draw letters off of my keyboard, I have a full binder of that already, It's time to add shit like that too it, I don't see why its so fucking bad as you proclaim


good for you

You need to calm down bro. dont ask for crits and get pissed when you get em. Just keep doing simple letters, style comes over time not in a few weeks. Look at Wgone's shit its awesome and its still simple.

And heres my crit for your work. The letters look real shaky take your time for now on, lose all those silly ass drips and connections, and work on your bar width try and keep your letters all the same width.

sziv
10-11-2010, 12:32 AM
http://i55.tinypic.com/jq18ye.jpg
one of my old ones , critz????

RedEyes
10-11-2010, 12:36 AM
[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/27920940@N07/5070196543/]http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4146/5070196543_93716898be.jpg
crits?

FuckTheFame
10-11-2010, 12:46 AM
@exi - you need more structure man. try messing around with some fills
they can normally get the creative juices flowing
especially if your still new to it
and try to remember to keep your lines straight
they look a little wobbly

(that syfer above is a good example of structure)

red eyes - noice. digging the forcefield and two tone

mogan - your chars are ill. the shading on the shirt is legit

thepekins
10-11-2010, 06:27 AM
it is normal letter holy hell... I'm not just gunna sit there and draw letters off of my keyboard, I have a full binder of that already, It's time to add shit like that too it, I don't see why its so fucking bad as you proclaim



its bad because you cant draw a straight line. The 3d is way off and the drips look like some nasty poopies... and what is the last letter supposed to be? Don't draw keyboard letters anymore, add some curves and shit and change the volume of the letters and stuff. Go to the new to graffiti thread and look at the shit about bars. If you cant realize that it looks horrible then you wont get better. damn


maybe someone could crit my stuff at the top of da page

NosE2
10-11-2010, 09:42 AM
http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/syfer.jpg

theres already a dude wayyyy up that writes syfer

and yo bumz...im feelin that..good shit

WoRdSmYtH
10-11-2010, 09:51 AM
@ thepekins, I'm diggin' that last piece in yellow, but I would remove that little add on you've got on the inside of the 'O'. None of the other letters has anything like that so it just looks out of place. But I like your drips and your yellow fill/outline. Letter structure is pretty good. The other two I'm not feelin' so much but I like the 'E's for both and the 'S' on the first one. Also, notice how in the 3rd one you've squished your letters together. I think the spacing between letters in the first one ruins it. As far as the second one goes, I'm just not feelin' the letters, especially the 'S'. Too many straight bars. Just my opinion anyways, not bad, just keep practicing.

lord_plankton
10-11-2010, 10:01 AM
finally picked a name and started with some simps , gonna keep workin on these letters , bottom one is for a battlehttp://img844.imageshack.us/img844/803/fall040.jpg

i like the second one much better...
mone, your char is nice, the piece not so great and well the hello my name is is executed well but old story..nice though.

the outline only is also not bad...

EXI
10-11-2010, 11:10 AM
You need to calm down bro. dont ask for crits and get pissed when you get em. Just keep doing simple letters, style comes over time not in a few weeks. Look at Wgone's shit its awesome and its still simple.

And heres my crit for your work. The letters look real shaky take your time for now on, lose all those silly ass drips and connections, and work on your bar width try and keep your letters all the same width.

I'm just tired of doing simples and I'm just getting mad that every time I try to add my own stuff into it, it doesnt work out. I feel like I'm just trash with style lol.

dangeri
10-11-2010, 11:25 AM
Thepekins : liking y o's but not too keen on the e's bud, bottom e is the best tho,
Exi : mixing upper and lower case is always a pain in the ass! But lose y drips n concentrate on y shape, overall shape and bars,
Mogan : like y theme there man, looks sweet!
Redeyes : solid colours and nice fill,
Wgone : smashing it there dude!

And 'truth' for a blackbook comp at my local shop, was well pissed off when I added the second green for the force field, shoulda used an orange or red or sumat to make it kick! Happy critting...
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm73/danger_i/e33c22d9.jpg

ghostwriter
10-11-2010, 02:55 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/thdrh.jpg

blawk (blow my mind)

ghostwriter
10-11-2010, 02:57 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/gfhgfh.jpg

BAnnngin

ghostwriter
10-11-2010, 02:58 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/trghdetrh.jpg

HAMMMERs

ghostwriter
10-11-2010, 03:00 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/Picture251.jpg

LEave us behind why dont we LEave you behind

WoRdSmYtH
10-11-2010, 05:34 PM
Critz please.

http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff379/MonkeySaysRelax/FRITE.jpg

Wanting to develop this one further, so...
Bumped for more critz.

lord_plankton
10-11-2010, 05:41 PM
forget all the little triangle shit, dunno what it says though..id suggest start over again or make from that letters evenly bars n see where it gets you..

WoRdSmYtH
10-11-2010, 05:48 PM
Yah it was just a 'final rough draft' if you know what I mean.
I threw the points on there just to see what they'd look like.
It says FRITE, btw.

So you're saying keep the letter formation just try making the bars even width throughout?

RedEyes
10-11-2010, 07:57 PM
Use the bar width of your F and make all ur letters sit straight. Dont worry about them blending in just yet, go for more of a slit overlap of each letter. Also scrap that E and lengthen ur R's right leg.

MakeItTakeIt
10-11-2010, 09:03 PM
http://i56.tinypic.com/20pbmte.jpg

Pretty insecure about this one. Crits? The letter T is a stupid letter, it leave so much dead space.

I'd give crits, but I don't think people would appreciate it much after seeing that ^

WoRdSmYtH
10-11-2010, 09:13 PM
I'll try out the suggestions for sure.
But REDEYES, don't you think if I slim up the 'T' it'll totally kill it's form, especially the center bar?

MoganOne
10-11-2010, 09:14 PM
"The letter T is a stupid letter" Lol word up

MoganOne
10-11-2010, 09:19 PM
Thepekins : liking y o's but not too keen on the e's bud, bottom e is the best tho,
Exi : mixing upper and lower case is always a pain in the ass! But lose y drips n concentrate on y shape, overall shape and bars,
Mogan : like y theme there man, looks sweet!
Redeyes : solid colours and nice fill,
Wgone : smashing it there dude!

And 'truth' for a blackbook comp at my local shop, was well pissed off when I added the second green for the force field, shoulda used an orange or red or sumat to make it kick! Happy critting...
http://i293.photobucket.com/albums/mm73/danger_i/e33c22d9.jpg
Yo
You got a crazy style dude lol.. your shit looks like a monster and shit

WoRdSmYtH
10-11-2010, 09:26 PM
your shit looks like a monster and shit

Haha! I think that's what he was goin' for Mogan... Stoned or what? Lol.

RedEyes
10-11-2010, 09:50 PM
No if all the letters are the same width it should look good, you can bend and twist the T to help just dont make it so top heavy. Heres an example of that T sorta.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4095/4750431901_5f48a9f957.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/27920940@N07/4750431901/)

Moon
10-11-2010, 09:52 PM
http://i56.tinypic.com/20pbmte.jpg

Pretty insecure about this one. Crits? The letter T is a stupid letter, it leave so much dead space.

I'd give crits, but I don't think people would appreciate it much after seeing that ^

I think that looks pretty fine for now. I would just elaborate on it for now and see how it goes.

[EDIT] Wait, no. That "E" is bugging me a lot, I would make it more level with the other letters.

Stigma02
10-11-2010, 09:52 PM
dangeri i like it but inbetween every letter there is a space except the R and U maybe try to more of an outline around the u on the left side so it fit perfect with all the other letters? it looks pretty legit anyways

Moon
10-11-2010, 09:57 PM
No if all the letters are the same width it should look good, you can bend and twist the T to help just dont make it so top heavy. Heres an example of that T sorta.
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4095/4750431901_5f48a9f957.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/27920940@N07/4750431901/)

Niiiiice. I like the style in this one. The "H" bugs me a bit, but it's not that bad. Also, the "Z" looks like it's missing some 3D.

MakeItTakeIt
10-11-2010, 10:04 PM
Actually lookin at at close, the Z has too much 3d lol


I'm just tired of doing simples and I'm just getting mad that every time I try to add my own stuff into it, it doesnt work out. I feel like I'm just trash with style lol.

Work on making your letter structure better, that's where style really comes from, not shitty add-ons like drips and connections.

Thanks for the crits yall, final version. The E is a little fat and the 3d on the N is too skinny.
http://i53.tinypic.com/5x3675.jpg

WoRdSmYtH
10-11-2010, 10:26 PM
Haha, I'll give what you're sayin' a try.
But to be honest, I'm feelin' my 'T' a lot more than that one.

Rufio
10-12-2010, 12:06 AM
https://mail.google.com/mail/?ui=2&ik=faccc30988&view=att&th=12b9ed418d0adaf1&attid=0.1&disp=inline&zw

i know its complete ass haha, but what should i do to fix it up

SECH
10-12-2010, 06:27 AM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4020/5075015354_f3fc52328e_z.jpg
crits

freakeenyc
10-12-2010, 06:33 AM
much better sech...really feelin that..the letters flow and the extensions arent overboard.

dangeri
10-12-2010, 07:19 AM
Good shit as usual sech, love to see you do one with a black fill, think those sort of letters look awesome negative!

And cheers for earlier comments ppl,

MoganOne
10-12-2010, 08:31 AM
Sech bringing out the guns

ghostwriter
10-12-2010, 02:18 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/wdasdasd.jpg

BBBaaaaaangggin

ghostwriter
10-12-2010, 02:19 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/gfhgfh-1.jpg

Boooonkeerrrs

Keso
10-12-2010, 02:57 PM
leak do u ever shut the fuck up?

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3565.jpg

lol do u ever not suck? tofe you suck. just stop. from now on you're not allowed to say anything. just post shit and get crits. thats it. nothing more.

*Patch!
10-12-2010, 04:20 PM
every tofe piece looks the same.
Herste that first one is clean, im not feeling how the Horizontal bar on the T goes into the verticle one, if that makes sense. And that second one has good structure and flow but im not diggin the Es, they look like they could be Zs

SicK-
10-12-2010, 04:56 PM
^i agree with this kid. I have never seen anything new from him. Sometimes i just think he is a troll

SicK-
10-12-2010, 05:03 PM
I'm just tired of doing simples and I'm just getting mad that every time I try to add my own stuff into it, it doesnt work out. I feel like I'm just trash with style lol.

I got you man. but seriously letters develop overtime. it may seem annoying and frustrating but always have fun with graffiti dont make it a chore to write, if you cant get something the way you like it put it down and go do something else for a bit.

Im gonna go look for my first ever graffiti drawings and post em up here so everyone can laugh at how bad i was. Not saying im good now or anything.

Sorry for the double post

FlippingChickens
10-12-2010, 05:41 PM
keso you act like i give a fuck hop off u fag boy u seriously went that many pages back to bump my shit,LOL!

Stigma02
10-12-2010, 06:14 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6895.jpg
not even close to done but name is SKEE now. i hate my E because i had to cram them in resulting in erasing some of the scene but its just a sketch so whatever. it feels a little busy to me so far but ill fix it. i have a chalkboard wall so im gonna put a huge ass mural on my wall. and yeah i did bite shepard fairy but im giving him the props so i thinks its fine anyways crits?

sech that is ill i would like to see what it looks like with 3d

EXI
10-12-2010, 07:26 PM
So I took your guys's advice and just worked on fills, kept it clean.
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/220.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/218.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/219.jpg
^ that one was made on my new blackbook with paint markers. So i think pretty good for not erasing

WoRdSmYtH
10-12-2010, 07:29 PM
@ Stigma. I don't know who you bit or whatever but I see potential in those letters. To be honest though, I'd get rid of the whole scene. Seems cheesy and very toy, but that's just me. But yah, as far as the word goes, keep your general letter forms but try curving some lines here and there to give them more shape and flare. I think the 'SK' could also be dropped down a little bit too, the word seems to drop.

@ FlippingChickens. If you don't give a fuck about your art then stop, and get the fuck off BS. Stop posting the same shit over and over when peeps are trying to tell you to switch it up for your own sake. I'm not hatin' on your shit but it's gettin' annoying, and that's sayin' something 'cause I havn't been on BS but a minute.

@ Ghostwriter. I'm feelin' that HERSTE shit, but I agree with whoever about the bars of the 'T' comin' into each other. And I know you said it was for a battle or whatever, but that NOVA looks wack IMO.

And I hate to rain on your parade SECH, but I'm not sure why everyone is biggin' that shit up. I must be in a bad mood or something but I see room for a lot of improvement. I know it's supposed to be SECH but all I see is SG(or A)ER, and a big ass empty space between the first and second letter. Not hatin', wicked style for sure, just wonderin' if I'm the only one that's got some crits on it.

SYFER1
10-12-2010, 07:33 PM
http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/Photo0382.jpg

WoRdSmYtH
10-12-2010, 07:35 PM
@ EXI. Big improvement dude. Not sure what that means considering they are DAMN simple. But that shit looks a lot fresher. My advice would now be to forget the fills and 3D, and work on pullin the bars on those simple letters. Just a little pull for now, lol.

WoRdSmYtH
10-12-2010, 07:40 PM
Holy shit... Tryin' not to double post or whatever but there's a new piece up each time I finish posting.

@ SYFER. Feelin' it. I think you're 'F' should stand up a bit more, though I know why you've got it leaning, to get rid of the space it creates. Stand it up a bit more so that it does have a small space, about the same size as the other spaces in the piece. It should look fine. I'd change the 'R' too, but it's just a personal preference. Try kickin' the leg of the 'R' up, then break it down, and kick it out. Sort of match it with the kick out of the 'S' on the opposite end of the piece. Just my two cents.

extinct
10-12-2010, 07:59 PM
tofe- look at my old stuff and your old stuff look at my new stuff and look at yours... its called progress...some people actually get better and stop repeating old mistakes

EXI
10-12-2010, 08:06 PM
@ EXI. Big improvement dude. Not sure what that means considering they are DAMN simple. But that shit looks a lot fresher. My advice would now be to forget the fills and 3D, and work on pullin the bars on those simple letters. Just a little pull for now, lol.

What do you mean by pull?

FlippingChickens
10-12-2010, 08:16 PM
tofe- look at my old stuff and your old stuff look at my new stuff and look at yours... its called progress...some people actually get better and stop repeating old mistakes


you do know that sketch is from summer right? and wordsmith i obviously post my shit to get feedback not "oh shit u havent progressed" the fuck that shit doesnt help fuck off.. here is what i did for the "nova" peice battle

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3571.jpg

<J-one>
10-12-2010, 08:33 PM
yooo a couple exchanges

this is for Grind
http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/5076888404/

and for Seaz
http://www.flickr.com/photos/31156026@N02/5069613402/in/photostream/
sorry bout the wack fill attempt, all i got is reeeal fine tips

an a apology on the links, can't figure out why my pics wont show up...

Sbal
10-12-2010, 08:59 PM
Ay Tofe I like how you blended those warm colors in the 3D it looks nice especially on the N. I like the caligraphy ecept for that last R fallin off, and I hate that O. A normal one would have been way stronger. Other shit needs tweaking though.

Stigma02
10-12-2010, 08:59 PM
tofe, i like the 3d on it. shade the eye better try to make it 3 dimensional not a flat circle.

FlippingChickens
10-12-2010, 09:10 PM
it was my first time blending colors like that for 3d..going to start doing that effect more often,and yea i agree a normal "o" would have worked a whole lot better

WoRdSmYtH
10-12-2010, 09:26 PM
What do you mean by pull?

Check out this video.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=psZqSr5MEjM

Stigma02
10-12-2010, 09:34 PM
only use objects for letters when you can shade them correctly and they look good of course haha

EXI
10-12-2010, 09:57 PM
Check out this video.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=psZqSr5MEjM

Thanks man

W_G_O_N_E
10-12-2010, 10:36 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/gfhgfh-1.jpg



http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3571.jpg

welll i do like the piece there tofe probably the best i've seen from you by far , except the eyee or whatever that is , but the fill on the 3d looks real familiar, i just posted this piece like a day or two ago..........idk it is a generic color scheme and a general idea for 3d fill , so whatever no biggie man , just had to throw it out there

FlippingChickens
10-12-2010, 10:42 PM
yea not even gonna lie i got the idea from u dog

EXI
10-12-2010, 11:07 PM
Hey, first two tries from simps to pulling and getting my own style
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/221-1.jpg
what you guys think

WoRdSmYtH
10-12-2010, 11:20 PM
A LOT better than what you were postin' before mang.
Now you understand what these guys are sayin' 'bout stayin' way simple?
It's not that your shit wasn't simple, it was that it lacked structure.

Even though in graff you fuck wit' letters and make 'em look crazy,
they still gotta have structure, otherwise they just look like some bunk ass illegible shit.
It's also the reason why a crazy ass piece that most people can't read
can be read by those who know how graff works.

Your next step would be to spend an absurd amount of time practicing that shit.
Develop your own style. Pull the letters whichever way feels natural to you.
You can refer to other people's letters and pieces,
just make sure you maintain the letter structure.

Once you master that you can move on to crazier shit.

EXI
10-12-2010, 11:25 PM
A LOT better than what you were postin' before mang.
Now you understand what these guys are sayin' 'bout stayin' way simple?
It's not that your shit wasn't simple, it was that it lacked structure.

Even though in graff you fuck wit' letters and make 'em look crazy,
they still gotta have structure, otherwise they just look like some bunk ass illegible shit.
It's also the reason why a crazy ass piece that most people can't read
can be read by those who know how graff works.

Your next step would be to spend an absurd amount of time practicing that shit.
Develop your own style. Pull the letters whichever way feels natural to you.
You can refer to other people's letters and pieces,
just make sure you maintain the letter structure.

Once you master that you can move on to crazier shit.

Thanks man, I can tell what you guys ment, I was doing too much things to the words so it was distracting it from the point of the wrod. And Yeah I'm gunna be spending at least a month or two on just getting my own style down, I really think it's gunna come out pretty good, only problem is that O's and P's are pretty awkward to me to right, I'm gunna see what SNT looks like tomorrow

SYFER1
10-12-2010, 11:31 PM
tried skinnier letters
http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/Photo0396.jpg

EXI
10-12-2010, 11:33 PM
Syfer- I like your skinnier shit a little bit better, keept it up, nice form.

Aus10
10-12-2010, 11:45 PM
hey, heres a quick bomb i drew (it still needs a lot of work! ). it took me 5 mins. I'm dedicating this to my cousin who died back in 06 ( te-jay ). anything I can do to improve this? thanks
http://i53.tinypic.com/apbhxw.jpg

MoganOne
10-13-2010, 12:17 AM
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1012002041.jpg

sziv
10-13-2010, 01:21 AM
http://i51.tinypic.com/2a9a7vo.jpg
critzz???:P

Moon
10-13-2010, 01:29 AM
It looks good, but I don't like the dots. Also, the "O" is just kind of annoying. The crack, the size, the line coming from the top. Also, the 3D is a bit inconsistent. Other then that, it's pretty great.

SECH
10-13-2010, 03:55 AM
And I hate to rain on your parade SECH, but I'm not sure why everyone is biggin' that shit up. I must be in a bad mood or something but I see room for a lot of improvement. I know it's supposed to be SECH but all I see is SG(or A)ER, and a big ass empty space between the first and second letter. Not hatin', wicked style for sure, just wonderin' if I'm the only one that's got some crits on it.[/QUOTE]

thanks for crits appreciate it ,it says saer though.

Sbal
10-13-2010, 08:37 AM
Sziv you should totallly revamp your hand

gecko36
10-13-2010, 08:53 AM
Just got back into, so i thought posting here would be good for now.

dangeri
10-13-2010, 09:33 AM
@ Ghostwriter. I'm feelin' that HERSTE shit, but I agree with whoever about the bars of the 'T' comin' into each other. And I know you said it was for a battle or whatever, but that NOVA looks wack IMO.

... Some skipped txt...

I know it's supposed to be SECH but all I see is SG(or A)ER,

Firstly, it blatantly says saer, and if you think it says sech, here's a link, http://www.specsavers.co.uk

Secondly, you gave ghostwriter credit for copying wgones pic and writing bonkerssss after it,

And geko: last one looks teal niice man, e's rockin

ghostwriter
10-13-2010, 02:38 PM
YEA i know
im BALLin out goin bonkers so killlar like concreteits bangin

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/Picture251.jpg

ghostwriter
10-13-2010, 02:39 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/Picture250.jpg

Yea yo

ghostwriter
10-13-2010, 02:40 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/Picture250.jpg

Yea yo
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/Picture249.jpg

EXI
10-13-2010, 04:52 PM
First day of pulling and stuff
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/225-1.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/224-1.jpg
http://i277.photobucket.com/albums/kk69/flyffm4ner/222-1.jpg

dangeri
10-13-2010, 05:26 PM
That disturbed is mucho improvement on what iv seen from u bud, good shit! Sharpen it up with ink, and finish it off,

EXI
10-13-2010, 06:22 PM
That disturbed is mucho improvement on what iv seen from u bud, good shit! Sharpen it up with ink, and finish it off,

Thanks, it's my favorite except for the B. Was my first time every writing a B.

WoRdSmYtH
10-13-2010, 06:25 PM
@ SECH. My bad, man. I had it up in my head you were writin' SECH 'cause the piece was four letters startin' with an 'S', haha. Like I said it looked like SG(or A)ER to me, so I should have realized you wern't writin' SECH. All good. Like I said, diggin' the style, but I still think you should do something about that space between the 'S' and the 'A'.

@ DANGERI. As I said above, I saw SG(or A)ER in SECH's piece, so don't act like I can't read the shit with your "blantantly" comment, especially when SECH cleared it up for me already. Simple mistake mang. As for givin' ghostwriter credit, another simple mistake, I was in a hurry. Thanks for pointin' that one out though. I'll fix that shit up in a min..

Aaaand, some critz for GHOSTWRITER: Awful... Sorry man, just my opinion. First off somethin' is horribly wrong with the main bar on your 'B'. Second, I'd get rid of the arrows or whatever's floatin' around - I don't think they contribute anything at all to the piece. Also, your 'S' is way too small. IMO it should be about the same size as the rest of the letters. Last but not least, something needs to be done with the flares you've got coming off your letters, especially the 'E'. My advice would be to curve some of the lines throughout the piece to give it more shape as a whole, then to try and pull the flares in a way that contributes to the flow of the piece's shape. As far as your bubble letters go, I'm not very good at those, but I know what you've got goin' on there isn't workin' at all. I don't mind the 'A' though.

@ EXI. Keep it up mang. Along with pulling the length of the bars, trying pull the width and tapering them.

@ GECKO. I like what you've got goin' on there. My advice would be to work on your 'G's though. They don't seem up to par with the rest of your letters.

@ MOGAN. That shit is dope. No critz from me, haha.

EXI
10-13-2010, 06:44 PM
What do you mean by tapering with them?

aekone
10-13-2010, 07:59 PM
May sound kinda lame but I made my own alphabet. Based on the english alphabet of course. I just thought it'd be cool to make one. So then I decided to make a piece with that same alphabet. It's funny because this is the best piece of graff I've ever done.
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo2-1.jpg
Translates to Chuke by the way.

RedEyes
10-13-2010, 08:20 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4006/5080031448_f01ac2c826_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/27920940@N07/5080031448/)
For the NOVA battle

kew1
10-13-2010, 09:15 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-13_2006.jpg
nova. fresh simps an cool chracter

NosE2
10-13-2010, 09:34 PM
What do you mean by tapering with them?

Tapering means makin the letters bigger to skinner...bendin them and shit. i think....i dont know, too blazed. aand yo kew, im diggin that e.

Sbal
10-13-2010, 09:58 PM
Redeyes it kinda looks like NOYA

kew1
10-13-2010, 10:03 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-13_2101.jpg

WoRdSmYtH
10-13-2010, 10:40 PM
Uhm, the easiest way I can explain tapering would be a triangle.
Going from one width to another...
Doesn't have to go to a point though.

*Patch!
10-13-2010, 10:45 PM
kew1 the only good letter is the E... and just going by what you've posted in the past, im going to guess its bitten

..(((DeAdOnE)))..
10-13-2010, 11:46 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/ab06dea5.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/a57c28a9.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/e098d70d.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/50e2d3fd.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/79bab4e9.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/94879364.jpg

First post don't really like these but u gotta start somewhere.

..(((DeAdOnE)))..
10-13-2010, 11:52 PM
Whooo! Sorry about the picture size

medacog1
10-14-2010, 12:22 AM
crits-
DeAdOnE-idk about some of that stuff but i like that grren one with 3d.. looks like a bubble wild style.

http://i55.tinypic.com/30wtd1d.jpg
CRITS

Moon
10-14-2010, 01:23 AM
DEADONE, that looks fucking amazing.

Zookyook
10-14-2010, 09:33 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/50e2d3fd.jpg
this is nice... u have great coloring skills and 3d concept.... but ill be the first to tell ya, structure is important yo, some of the letters just dont flow and they arent legible... but ur straights and simps are lookin good... stay doin it ;-)

nofuss, work on the hands if ur gonna write all around ur piece, its clean cept for the O-F connection, i dont like it really, makes the O look wobbly too.... and highlight your 3d, itll pop off a lot mo'......

been away for a while, workin on my execution more than style and cleanliness lately, got these all done pretty fast, at least compared to most of my shit
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/5080720073_37c3a73358.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/5080720665_dc043eebe0.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4113/5080721839_8dbc8dee00.jpg

kew1
10-14-2010, 11:29 AM
kew1 the only good letter is the E... and just going by what you've posted in the past, im going to guess its bitten

its not bittin if u look its my common e

NosE2
10-14-2010, 11:43 AM
yeah, that shit looks like ewoks E. And you can also tell because your R and K are in your own style, *****s can tell that E is bit though. Lol it's ok bro, everyone bites at some point when they first start.

And Deadone, you have good color schemes, can color properly, etc. You just need to work on your letters. Some of that shit is really illegible.

NosE2
10-14-2010, 11:44 AM
yeah, that shit looks like ewoks E. And you can also tell because your R and K are in your own style, *****s can tell that E is bit though. Lol it's ok bro, everyone bites at some point when they first start.

And Deadone, you have good color schemes, color properly, etc. You just need to work on your letters. Some of that shit is really illegible.

kew1
10-14-2010, 11:47 AM
dude im serious i didnt bite that e lmao but it makes me feel good u guys think its ewoks though

kew1
10-14-2010, 11:49 AM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-14_1039.jpg heres it finished

Keso
10-14-2010, 12:48 PM
Any ideas for the fill??

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4012/5081174779_54901c5cb6_b.jpg

ghostwriter
10-14-2010, 02:07 PM
critz accepted i like the color thats it

LeaksOne
10-14-2010, 03:40 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-14_1039.jpg heres it finished

what the are those last 2 letter?
i see an E which has a pointless extension coming out of the base and the second letter looks like a P and K mashed together and the last thing.....i dont even.....

MoganOne
10-14-2010, 05:31 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/50e2d3fd.jpg
this is nice... u have great coloring skills and 3d concept.... but ill be the first to tell ya, structure is important yo, some of the letters just dont flow and they arent legible... but ur straights and simps are lookin good... stay doin it ;-)

nofuss, work on the hands if ur gonna write all around ur piece, its clean cept for the O-F connection, i dont like it really, makes the O look wobbly too.... and highlight your 3d, itll pop off a lot mo'......

been away for a while, workin on my execution more than style and cleanliness lately, got these all done pretty fast, at least compared to most of my shit
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/5080720073_37c3a73358.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/5080720665_dc043eebe0.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4113/5080721839_8dbc8dee00.jpg

Damn man shit's hot bro... Looks like u are executing... I am likin the faces u are throwin in your O's the look ill man... and for your handy's, your shit's so nasty Bear grills would not even eat it...

*slayer
10-14-2010, 08:43 PM
http://i54.tinypic.com/2jbmwsj.jpg

NosE2
10-14-2010, 08:47 PM
you're a lot farther then a lot of people would be, if that's really your first attempt at a straight letter. i see you did the blockbuster where you make squares and then take out parts to make the letter. not bad, like i said. throw some 3d on that bitch, space shit out a little bit, and work on your handstyle. keep it up homie.

*slayer
10-14-2010, 09:09 PM
thanks nosE2 u are the kinda people that toys need advice and complments from thanks .and i will work on throwing 3d in that and spacing that shit out a little bit..

FlippingChickens
10-14-2010, 09:33 PM
got the peel effect idea from wgone


a sketch i did for chad

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3572.jpg




*CRITS

dead - do clean keyboard letters with those dope coloring skills

nofus - the 'o' connecting with the f was a bad idea

nemore - not really feeling the peices because of the arrows and skinny to thick bars,but i do see progression on your throws

sair - i wish my first tag looked like that,keep it up

..(((DeAdOnE)))..
10-14-2010, 09:42 PM
Color scheme suggestions and light source ideas please !

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/8113cfbc.jpg

..(((DeAdOnE)))..
10-14-2010, 09:43 PM
Color scheme suggestions and light source ideas please !

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/8113cfbc.jpg

*slayer
10-14-2010, 10:46 PM
http://i53.tinypic.com/25a0xle.jpg
a piece i did in my new black book

MoganOne
10-15-2010, 12:13 AM
No man noooo

Stigma02
10-15-2010, 03:49 AM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6897.jpg
says steven i dont like the t other then that i think it turns out pretty good besides having black
im trying to develop my letters to wear it is straight rigid lines on top but below it is more bubbly and round CRITS?!
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6896.jpg

@slayer do simples without making them block letter right now. and when u r doing 3 try to make the 3 go out toward the same place whether that is a vanishing point or just to side try to keep it conistant and keep your bars the same im not trying to be rude but that is garbage.

dangeri
10-15-2010, 03:56 AM
Dead, smash that with silver bronze gold black background! I like that idea, no idea if it says anything mind, but as far as a doodle goes, that's pretty good,

Slayer, don't go to the corners of y page, means you can work on y 3d n shit, and change n edit y letter a lil easier, maybe try rounding some o them shapes up too, step it up a notch, :) but be wary of going too much too soon tho, keep a simple structure, then play with the letters; folds, drips, cracks, bits that fall off, bubbles, bells and/or whistles! Not all of the above obv, but make everything your own, :)

And stigma, that steven's good stuff man

Keso
10-15-2010, 08:10 AM
Color scheme suggestions and light source ideas please !

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/8113cfbc.jpg

yo I'd lose the curves in that 3d. I think curves in any 3d are pretty difficult to perfect especially at your level (no offense) i can't even get em right. make the curves squarer

EXI
10-15-2010, 10:47 AM
http://i53.tinypic.com/25a0xle.jpg
a piece i did in my new black book

I'll send you a pm of what I'm seeing in your work. But try to not take up a whole page for one piece, trust me, it isn't a good way to learn, try to take up a whole page for like 6-7 just penciled words.

SECH
10-15-2010, 03:48 PM
another S.
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs385.ash2/66297_1651615691685_1275797532_1767309_6889558_n.j pg

Boar 1
10-15-2010, 04:39 PM
http://i56.tinypic.com/2h3ahwx.jpg

Stigma02
10-15-2010, 06:38 PM
Sech ur shit is pretty legit but i dnt like this one as much seems liike there is too much extensions. boar get down letters before u start trying drips and special effects is that an e or c?

*slayer
10-15-2010, 08:35 PM
http://i55.tinypic.com/2gy0zeq.jpg

little toy sketch

dangeri
10-15-2010, 08:46 PM
Right direction dude, try to even your bars out and smash that about 8 million times changing and tweaking as and when you see fit, u'll get your own style in time,maybe think about losing the bump on the a and r, imo, but that's not to say u can't put a bump or two in, to burgle a quote from rizla, "it's what you make of it" lol, so get busy :)

*slayer
10-15-2010, 09:18 PM
http://i54.tinypic.com/2n1ysl0.jpg

any better than the first one ?

MoganOne
10-16-2010, 10:23 AM
Sech that S is the shit

SECH
10-16-2010, 11:47 AM
thanks. tried coloring
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs776.snc4/67623_1652715639183_1275797532_1768999_7933806_n.j pg

EXI
10-16-2010, 12:49 PM
Slayer your improving alot, good job. Work a little bit more on 3d and your handstyle:)

SYFER1
10-16-2010, 10:45 PM
trying out this name, i cant tell if it looks good, or toyish
http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/Photo0398-1.jpg

MoganOne
10-16-2010, 11:04 PM
toyish

brainlord
10-17-2010, 01:40 AM
trying out this name, i cant tell if it looks good, or toyish
http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/Photo0398-1.jpg

Syfer, that's the right direction to go with it. I know it's been said time and time again, but stay simple until you can come up with something that looks good. That way you'll be out painting something that looks sick alot sooner, and practicing your can control. Don't be afraid to experiment though, I find that's where you learn the most. Pm if you have any questions or want some critique

Res-tooth Slims
10-17-2010, 01:54 AM
slayer man...jeezus....we dont need to know how many fucking pieces you have done so far alrite...and sechs...usaly i like your letters but i can barely see the "s" in that ae....sorry

RedEyes
10-17-2010, 01:54 AM
Jerms- that shits hott, just fix up the top of the J's bar and change that S to fit the style. i dont know where ur 3d is going though its all over.

Moon
10-17-2010, 02:13 AM
no shit moron , its a fucking toy thread...jesus some of you have the IQ of a turtle

Woah, back off Mogan. He's basically the coolest guy that hangs in the toy forum, so don't mess.

MoganOne
10-17-2010, 11:52 AM
lol

Moon
10-17-2010, 11:59 AM
See that right there? Bam, coolest kid in school.

extinct
10-17-2010, 02:08 PM
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/1012002011.jpg
extremely rough design i'll redraw a better 1 l8r
and just playin around with structures and such
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/1013002219.jpg

MoganOne
10-17-2010, 04:27 PM
Lean you got a lot of work to do bro... The Handy is not cuttin' it lol... It probably took you 3 mins to do just the handy? am I right? I like some of the lettering inside the shape of the dude... But you need to start a lot simpler

extinct
10-17-2010, 06:00 PM
that handy was isnt really 1...but my real handstyle is way worse... im gunna start learning caligraphy so that might change stuff up. the stuff inside the guy was just to take up space. im just experimenting with structure and bar distortions but ill go back to simps for a while

MoganOne
10-17-2010, 06:59 PM
Word... learning Calligraphy will help for sure... Not just with Tags but also with letters in your piece... Keep practicing

An exchange piece
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mokeexchange.jpg

MoganOne
10-17-2010, 07:59 PM
Word... learning Calligraphy will help for sure... Not just with Tags but also with letters in your piece... Keep practicing

An exchange piece
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mokeexchange.jpg

Tokyo_ROCKABILY-CLub
10-17-2010, 09:11 PM
oohh goddammn thats smeexxyy!!11!@
cept that faty extintion on the "e" :o

MoganOne
10-17-2010, 10:04 PM
Yeah I should ahve ended the E early lol

MoganOne
10-17-2010, 10:45 PM
a T-shirt design
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Ampersand-1.jpg

..(((DeAdOnE)))..
10-17-2010, 11:04 PM
Color scheme suggestions and light source ideas please !

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/8113cfbc.jpg

This is what I was playing with.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/9d9247ec.jpg

..(((DeAdOnE)))..
10-17-2010, 11:14 PM
I Know I'm super toy but I'm gonna keep postin till I get it down.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/7e3106ea.jpg

LeaksOne
10-18-2010, 12:29 AM
Word... learning Calligraphy will help for sure... Not just with Tags but also with letters in your piece... Keep practicing

An exchange piece
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mokeexchange.jpg

i dont like how the M and E go into themselves makes the 3d look weird but all in all good shit. your tag looks like Mener also.

and exchange has a G in it haha.

Fury
10-18-2010, 12:56 AM
Dead1, you seem to have gotten the idea of bars and your calligraphy looks pretty dope.

Keep at it, you're on the right track.

MoganOne
10-18-2010, 09:17 AM
LOl yeah... thanks bro

thepekins
10-18-2010, 09:42 AM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/8435/dscf2068k.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscf2068k.jpg)
for the battle

dubbed
10-18-2010, 10:52 AM
This is what I was playing with.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/9d9247ec.jpg

THIS! is my kinda shit lol. dimensional drawing is like, a passion of mine.
i love exaggerating, foreshortening, and abstracting shapes. youve just inspired me to get back into this stuff, i havent drawn like that in too long

Stigma02
10-18-2010, 11:43 AM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6897.jpg
says steven i dont like the t other then that i think it turns out pretty good besides having black
im trying to develop my letters to wear it is straight rigid lines on top but below it is more bubbly and round CRITS?!
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6896.jpg

@slayer do simples without making them block letter right now. and when u r doing 3 try to make the 3 go out toward the same place whether that is a vanishing point or just to side try to keep it conistant and keep your bars the same im not trying to be rude but that is garbage.

bottom page bump crits plzz

thepekins
10-18-2010, 01:19 PM
stigma- lose the extensions, dont connect all the letters. make the bars more even in size
Dead- thats a pretty solid simple I would just change the bottom of the E
mogan- not feelin it. the block-is extensions on both bars of the m dont fit with the piece


crits on mine please

ghostwriter
10-18-2010, 06:41 PM
DeaD 1 Banggin Image in the your getttin booooonkers (STyles Lookin hot)
thats wha t i mean by it dont know

keep that fire helicopters

If you wanna be a graffiti artist you gotta learn to bomb the hardest

Moon
10-18-2010, 07:23 PM
Word... learning Calligraphy will help for sure... Not just with Tags but also with letters in your piece... Keep practicing

An exchange piece
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mokeexchange.jpg

God dammit Mogan, I love your style so much.

MoganOne
10-18-2010, 08:50 PM
it's pretty simplistic but thanks bro

W_G_O_N_E
10-18-2010, 09:17 PM
mogan: like the sketch as a whole the bit on top of the n kida makes it look k-ish though , the bit on the m and e are spot on though , the ampersand piece is real good , love that s man
stigma: i would say the steven piece has real nice 3d , just maybe space it out a bit more and don't have every bar and extension overlap as for the bottom would like to see that colored the tree and shrooms look awesome
deadone:i'd say go with that color scheme looks like you got it figured nicely
pekins:nice job , maybe a lil more funk on the L and maybe connecting your e and r like the e and p do woulda been cool
here is a page i did in my book but i could really use some input on the background , just gotta make the shit pop , and don't wanna fuck it up

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7459/fall010.jpg

..(((DeAdOnE)))..
10-18-2010, 10:29 PM
Thanx to eyerone for the input. It's all well noted and will be put to good use.

MoganOne
10-18-2010, 11:07 PM
mogan: like the sketch as a whole the bit on top of the n kida makes it look k-ish though , the bit on the m and e are spot on though , the ampersand piece is real good , love that s man
stigma: i would say the steven piece has real nice 3d , just maybe space it out a bit more and don't have every bar and extension overlap as for the bottom would like to see that colored the tree and shrooms look awesome
deadone:i'd say go with that color scheme looks like you got it figured nicely
pekins:nice job , maybe a lil more funk on the L and maybe connecting your e and r like the e and p do woulda been cool
here is a page i did in my book but i could really use some input on the background , just gotta make the shit pop , and don't wanna fuck it up

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7459/fall010.jpg

Looks tight as always bro! your pieces always have a bold kick to them.. I would suggest a darker backround because it would make your bright pieces pop out...
That N is a K lol... The word says Moke... it is for my homie that writes Moke13

thepekins
10-19-2010, 06:15 AM
wgone- thats ill. maybe a pink background?

unique93
10-19-2010, 10:55 AM
new sketch :D
http://www1.picturepush.com/photo/a/4374134/640/4374134.jpg (http://picturepush.com/public/4374134)

Stigma02
10-19-2010, 08:42 PM
ur not toy unique haha go away lol that is ill by the way,
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6900.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6898.jpg
CRITS

Saint0913
10-19-2010, 10:26 PM
here is a superhero one i did for fun...

http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac296/Saint0913/68343_491599290930_634585930_7548695_356755_n.jpg

PREA672
10-19-2010, 10:42 PM
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0877-1.jpg

SYFER1
10-19-2010, 10:58 PM
http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/Photo0399-1.jpg

Fube
10-19-2010, 11:17 PM
been a while since ive been to my fav. toy forum!

been even longer since i posted anything work wise as well.

so, here is a product of boredom and highness.

love and hate welcome, just because your a mod dont mean your not toy.

http://blip.tv/file/get/Fubar-sketchTestCam715.wmv

..(((DeAdOnE)))..
10-19-2010, 11:53 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/665cdfd0.jpg

BRAZE-TWO
10-20-2010, 12:13 AM
@DeadOne, Thats sick, keep up the great work.

Res-tooth Slims
10-20-2010, 02:36 AM
wgone...that middle piece with the peeling off paper effect thing is bangin..props indeed

unique93
10-20-2010, 08:07 AM
ur not toy unique haha go away lol that is ill by the way,

man...i think i am toy...because i draw sketches only one year...thanks for comment :D
sorry for my bad english :D

Keso
10-20-2010, 08:22 AM
Word... learning Calligraphy will help for sure... Not just with Tags but also with letters in your piece... Keep practicing

An exchange piece
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mokeexchange.jpg

I came.

..(((DeAdOnE)))..
10-20-2010, 11:59 AM
Bro your 3d is way off buddy I'd work on it.
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6900.jpg
The fill on 3d is a lil confusing to the eye.
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6898.jpg
CRITS[/QUOTE]

walt_dissney
10-20-2010, 01:14 PM
hi

new 2 bombin sience and new to graff

here's my first tag and throwie

been workin on shit for a month or so

wut u think

http://view.pics-or-gtfo.com/20101020-6bdf1f54e417d4599c57e095d50f7b32.jpg

BRAZE-TWO
10-20-2010, 01:15 PM
Ide have to agree with the above statements.

walt_dissney
10-20-2010, 01:17 PM
and i aint even fuckin wit pieces rite now

just practice hands and throws all day

BRAZE-TWO
10-20-2010, 01:20 PM
Good Choice, If you start trying to piece when you first start. you will most like just embarrass yourself...

thepekins
10-20-2010, 02:28 PM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/8435/dscf2068k.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscf2068k.jpg)
for the battle
bump
nobody gave me crits on this except for wgone.

PREA672
10-20-2010, 02:47 PM
your E's drop down too far, your L is ugly, the right leg on the K is too fat.. the 3d is on point though. not bad though

ghostwriter
10-20-2010, 04:34 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/asdsad.jpg

Boooonkers - - - >(look hot)

ghostwriter
10-20-2010, 04:36 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/sdf.jpg

Boooonkers looks hot fire

LeaksOne
10-20-2010, 04:42 PM
youve GOT to work on that throw

MoganOne
10-20-2010, 04:46 PM
some shitty piece i did the other day
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1020101617.jpg

ghostwriter
10-20-2010, 04:50 PM
http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/wqeqw.jpg
Those arrows in the shadows are BOoonkers

kew1
10-20-2010, 09:46 PM
http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-19_2128.jpg
sharpie freestyle