Blackbooks

[WoRdSmYtH]

@ SECH. My bad, man. I had it up in my head you were writin' SECH 'cause the piece was four letters startin' with an 'S', haha. Like I said it looked like SG(or A)ER to me, so I should have realized you wern't writin' SECH. All good. Like I said, diggin' the style, but I still think you should do something about that space between the 'S' and the 'A'.

@ DANGERI. As I said above, I saw SG(or A)ER in SECH's piece, so don't act like I can't read the shit with your "blantantly" comment, especially when SECH cleared it up for me already. Simple mistake mang. As for givin' ghostwriter credit, another simple mistake, I was in a hurry. Thanks for pointin' that one out though. I'll fix that shit up in a min..

Aaaand, some critz for GHOSTWRITER: Awful... Sorry man, just my opinion. First off somethin' is horribly wrong with the main bar on your 'B'. Second, I'd get rid of the arrows or whatever's floatin' around - I don't think they contribute anything at all to the piece. Also, your 'S' is way too small. IMO it should be about the same size as the rest of the letters. Last but not least, something needs to be done with the flares you've got coming off your letters, especially the 'E'. My advice would be to curve some of the lines throughout the piece to give it more shape as a whole, then to try and pull the flares in a way that contributes to the flow of the piece's shape. As far as your bubble letters go, I'm not very good at those, but I know what you've got goin' on there isn't workin' at all. I don't mind the 'A' though.

@ EXI. Keep it up mang. Along with pulling the length of the bars, trying pull the width and tapering them.

@ GECKO. I like what you've got goin' on there. My advice would be to work on your 'G's though. They don't seem up to par with the rest of your letters.

@ MOGAN. That shit is dope. No critz from me, haha.

[EXI]

What do you mean by tapering with them?

[aekone]

May sound kinda lame but I made my own alphabet. Based on the english alphabet of course. I just thought it'd be cool to make one. So then I decided to make a piece with that same alphabet. It's funny because this is the best piece of graff I've ever done.
http://i717.photobucket.com/albums/ww171/slapomania/Photo2-1.jpg
Translates to Chuke by the way.

[RedEyes]

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4006/5080031448_f01ac2c826_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/27920940@N07/5080031448/)
For the NOVA battle

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-13_2006.jpg
nova. fresh simps an cool chracter

[NosE2]

What do you mean by tapering with them?

Tapering means makin the letters bigger to skinner...bendin them and shit. i think....i dont know, too blazed. aand yo kew, im diggin that e.

[Sbal]

Redeyes it kinda looks like NOYA

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-13_2101.jpg

[WoRdSmYtH]

Uhm, the easiest way I can explain tapering would be a triangle.
Going from one width to another...
Doesn't have to go to a point though.

[*Patch!]

kew1 the only good letter is the E... and just going by what you've posted in the past, im going to guess its bitten

[..(((DeAdOnE)))..]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/ab06dea5.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/a57c28a9.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/e098d70d.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/50e2d3fd.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/79bab4e9.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/94879364.jpg

First post don't really like these but u gotta start somewhere.

[..(((DeAdOnE)))..]

Whooo! Sorry about the picture size

[medacog1]

crits-
DeAdOnE-idk about some of that stuff but i like that grren one with 3d.. looks like a bubble wild style.

http://i55.tinypic.com/30wtd1d.jpg
CRITS

[Moon]

DEADONE, that looks fucking amazing.

[Zookyook]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/50e2d3fd.jpg
this is nice... u have great coloring skills and 3d concept.... but ill be the first to tell ya, structure is important yo, some of the letters just dont flow and they arent legible... but ur straights and simps are lookin good... stay doin it ;-)

nofuss, work on the hands if ur gonna write all around ur piece, its clean cept for the O-F connection, i dont like it really, makes the O look wobbly too.... and highlight your 3d, itll pop off a lot mo'......

been away for a while, workin on my execution more than style and cleanliness lately, got these all done pretty fast, at least compared to most of my shit
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/5080720073_37c3a73358.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/5080720665_dc043eebe0.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4113/5080721839_8dbc8dee00.jpg

[kew1]

kew1 the only good letter is the E... and just going by what you've posted in the past, im going to guess its bitten

its not bittin if u look its my common e

[NosE2]

yeah, that shit looks like ewoks E. And you can also tell because your R and K are in your own style, *****s can tell that E is bit though. Lol it's ok bro, everyone bites at some point when they first start.

And Deadone, you have good color schemes, can color properly, etc. You just need to work on your letters. Some of that shit is really illegible.

[NosE2]

yeah, that shit looks like ewoks E. And you can also tell because your R and K are in your own style, *****s can tell that E is bit though. Lol it's ok bro, everyone bites at some point when they first start.

And Deadone, you have good color schemes, color properly, etc. You just need to work on your letters. Some of that shit is really illegible.

[kew1]

dude im serious i didnt bite that e lmao but it makes me feel good u guys think its ewoks though

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-14_1039.jpg heres it finished

[Keso]

Any ideas for the fill??

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4012/5081174779_54901c5cb6_b.jpg

[ghostwriter]

critz accepted i like the color thats it

[LeaksOne]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-14_1039.jpg heres it finished

what the are those last 2 letter?
i see an E which has a pointless extension coming out of the base and the second letter looks like a P and K mashed together and the last thing.....i dont even.....

[MoganOne]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/50e2d3fd.jpg
this is nice... u have great coloring skills and 3d concept.... but ill be the first to tell ya, structure is important yo, some of the letters just dont flow and they arent legible... but ur straights and simps are lookin good... stay doin it ;-)

nofuss, work on the hands if ur gonna write all around ur piece, its clean cept for the O-F connection, i dont like it really, makes the O look wobbly too.... and highlight your 3d, itll pop off a lot mo'......

been away for a while, workin on my execution more than style and cleanliness lately, got these all done pretty fast, at least compared to most of my shit
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4021/5080720073_37c3a73358.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4040/5080720665_dc043eebe0.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4113/5080721839_8dbc8dee00.jpg

Damn man shit's hot bro... Looks like u are executing... I am likin the faces u are throwin in your O's the look ill man... and for your handy's, your shit's so nasty Bear grills would not even eat it...

[*slayer]

http://i54.tinypic.com/2jbmwsj.jpg

[NosE2]

you're a lot farther then a lot of people would be, if that's really your first attempt at a straight letter. i see you did the blockbuster where you make squares and then take out parts to make the letter. not bad, like i said. throw some 3d on that bitch, space shit out a little bit, and work on your handstyle. keep it up homie.

[*slayer]

thanks nosE2 u are the kinda people that toys need advice and complments from thanks .and i will work on throwing 3d in that and spacing that shit out a little bit..

[FlippingChickens]

got the peel effect idea from wgone


a sketch i did for chad

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/DSCN3572.jpg




*CRITS

dead - do clean keyboard letters with those dope coloring skills

nofus - the 'o' connecting with the f was a bad idea

nemore - not really feeling the peices because of the arrows and skinny to thick bars,but i do see progression on your throws

sair - i wish my first tag looked like that,keep it up

[..(((DeAdOnE)))..]

Color scheme suggestions and light source ideas please !

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/8113cfbc.jpg

[..(((DeAdOnE)))..]

Color scheme suggestions and light source ideas please !

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/8113cfbc.jpg

[*slayer]

http://i53.tinypic.com/25a0xle.jpg
a piece i did in my new black book

[MoganOne]

No man noooo

[Stigma02]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6897.jpg
says steven i dont like the t other then that i think it turns out pretty good besides having black
im trying to develop my letters to wear it is straight rigid lines on top but below it is more bubbly and round CRITS?!
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6896.jpg

@slayer do simples without making them block letter right now. and when u r doing 3 try to make the 3 go out toward the same place whether that is a vanishing point or just to side try to keep it conistant and keep your bars the same im not trying to be rude but that is garbage.

[dangeri]

Dead, smash that with silver bronze gold black background! I like that idea, no idea if it says anything mind, but as far as a doodle goes, that's pretty good,

Slayer, don't go to the corners of y page, means you can work on y 3d n shit, and change n edit y letter a lil easier, maybe try rounding some o them shapes up too, step it up a notch, :) but be wary of going too much too soon tho, keep a simple structure, then play with the letters; folds, drips, cracks, bits that fall off, bubbles, bells and/or whistles! Not all of the above obv, but make everything your own, :)

And stigma, that steven's good stuff man

[Keso]

Color scheme suggestions and light source ideas please !

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/8113cfbc.jpg

yo I'd lose the curves in that 3d. I think curves in any 3d are pretty difficult to perfect especially at your level (no offense) i can't even get em right. make the curves squarer

[EXI]

http://i53.tinypic.com/25a0xle.jpg
a piece i did in my new black book

I'll send you a pm of what I'm seeing in your work. But try to not take up a whole page for one piece, trust me, it isn't a good way to learn, try to take up a whole page for like 6-7 just penciled words.

[SECH]

another S.
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs385.ash2/66297_1651615691685_1275797532_1767309_6889558_n.j pg

[Boar 1]

http://i56.tinypic.com/2h3ahwx.jpg

[Stigma02]

Sech ur shit is pretty legit but i dnt like this one as much seems liike there is too much extensions. boar get down letters before u start trying drips and special effects is that an e or c?

[*slayer]

http://i55.tinypic.com/2gy0zeq.jpg

little toy sketch

[dangeri]

Right direction dude, try to even your bars out and smash that about 8 million times changing and tweaking as and when you see fit, u'll get your own style in time,maybe think about losing the bump on the a and r, imo, but that's not to say u can't put a bump or two in, to burgle a quote from rizla, "it's what you make of it" lol, so get busy :)

[*slayer]

http://i54.tinypic.com/2n1ysl0.jpg

any better than the first one ?

[MoganOne]

Sech that S is the shit

[SECH]

thanks. tried coloring
http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs776.snc4/67623_1652715639183_1275797532_1768999_7933806_n.j pg

[EXI]

Slayer your improving alot, good job. Work a little bit more on 3d and your handstyle:)

[SYFER1]

trying out this name, i cant tell if it looks good, or toyish
http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/Photo0398-1.jpg

[MoganOne]

toyish

[brainlord]

trying out this name, i cant tell if it looks good, or toyish
http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/Photo0398-1.jpg

Syfer, that's the right direction to go with it. I know it's been said time and time again, but stay simple until you can come up with something that looks good. That way you'll be out painting something that looks sick alot sooner, and practicing your can control. Don't be afraid to experiment though, I find that's where you learn the most. Pm if you have any questions or want some critique

[Res-tooth Slims]

slayer man...jeezus....we dont need to know how many fucking pieces you have done so far alrite...and sechs...usaly i like your letters but i can barely see the "s" in that ae....sorry

[RedEyes]

Jerms- that shits hott, just fix up the top of the J's bar and change that S to fit the style. i dont know where ur 3d is going though its all over.

[Moon]

no shit moron , its a fucking toy thread...jesus some of you have the IQ of a turtle

Woah, back off Mogan. He's basically the coolest guy that hangs in the toy forum, so don't mess.

[MoganOne]

lol

[Moon]

See that right there? Bam, coolest kid in school.

[extinct]

http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/1012002011.jpg
extremely rough design i'll redraw a better 1 l8r
and just playin around with structures and such
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/1013002219.jpg

[MoganOne]

Lean you got a lot of work to do bro... The Handy is not cuttin' it lol... It probably took you 3 mins to do just the handy? am I right? I like some of the lettering inside the shape of the dude... But you need to start a lot simpler

[extinct]

that handy was isnt really 1...but my real handstyle is way worse... im gunna start learning caligraphy so that might change stuff up. the stuff inside the guy was just to take up space. im just experimenting with structure and bar distortions but ill go back to simps for a while

[MoganOne]

Word... learning Calligraphy will help for sure... Not just with Tags but also with letters in your piece... Keep practicing

An exchange piece
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mokeexchange.jpg

[MoganOne]

Word... learning Calligraphy will help for sure... Not just with Tags but also with letters in your piece... Keep practicing

An exchange piece
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mokeexchange.jpg

[Tokyo_ROCKABILY-CLub]

oohh goddammn thats smeexxyy!!11!@
cept that faty extintion on the "e" :o

[MoganOne]

Yeah I should ahve ended the E early lol

[MoganOne]

a T-shirt design
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Ampersand-1.jpg

[..(((DeAdOnE)))..]

Color scheme suggestions and light source ideas please !

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/8113cfbc.jpg

This is what I was playing with.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/9d9247ec.jpg

[..(((DeAdOnE)))..]

I Know I'm super toy but I'm gonna keep postin till I get it down.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/7e3106ea.jpg

[LeaksOne]

Word... learning Calligraphy will help for sure... Not just with Tags but also with letters in your piece... Keep practicing

An exchange piece
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mokeexchange.jpg

i dont like how the M and E go into themselves makes the 3d look weird but all in all good shit. your tag looks like Mener also.

and exchange has a G in it haha.

[Fury]

Dead1, you seem to have gotten the idea of bars and your calligraphy looks pretty dope.

Keep at it, you're on the right track.

[MoganOne]

LOl yeah... thanks bro

[thepekins]

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/8435/dscf2068k.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscf2068k.jpg)
for the battle

[dubbed]

This is what I was playing with.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/9d9247ec.jpg

THIS! is my kinda shit lol. dimensional drawing is like, a passion of mine.
i love exaggerating, foreshortening, and abstracting shapes. youve just inspired me to get back into this stuff, i havent drawn like that in too long

[Stigma02]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6897.jpg
says steven i dont like the t other then that i think it turns out pretty good besides having black
im trying to develop my letters to wear it is straight rigid lines on top but below it is more bubbly and round CRITS?!
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6896.jpg

@slayer do simples without making them block letter right now. and when u r doing 3 try to make the 3 go out toward the same place whether that is a vanishing point or just to side try to keep it conistant and keep your bars the same im not trying to be rude but that is garbage.

bottom page bump crits plzz

[thepekins]

stigma- lose the extensions, dont connect all the letters. make the bars more even in size
Dead- thats a pretty solid simple I would just change the bottom of the E
mogan- not feelin it. the block-is extensions on both bars of the m dont fit with the piece


crits on mine please

[ghostwriter]

DeaD 1 Banggin Image in the your getttin booooonkers (STyles Lookin hot)
thats wha t i mean by it dont know

keep that fire helicopters

If you wanna be a graffiti artist you gotta learn to bomb the hardest

[Moon]

Word... learning Calligraphy will help for sure... Not just with Tags but also with letters in your piece... Keep practicing

An exchange piece
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mokeexchange.jpg

God dammit Mogan, I love your style so much.

[MoganOne]

it's pretty simplistic but thanks bro

[W_G_O_N_E]

mogan: like the sketch as a whole the bit on top of the n kida makes it look k-ish though , the bit on the m and e are spot on though , the ampersand piece is real good , love that s man
stigma: i would say the steven piece has real nice 3d , just maybe space it out a bit more and don't have every bar and extension overlap as for the bottom would like to see that colored the tree and shrooms look awesome
deadone:i'd say go with that color scheme looks like you got it figured nicely
pekins:nice job , maybe a lil more funk on the L and maybe connecting your e and r like the e and p do woulda been cool
here is a page i did in my book but i could really use some input on the background , just gotta make the shit pop , and don't wanna fuck it up

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7459/fall010.jpg

[..(((DeAdOnE)))..]

Thanx to eyerone for the input. It's all well noted and will be put to good use.

[MoganOne]

mogan: like the sketch as a whole the bit on top of the n kida makes it look k-ish though , the bit on the m and e are spot on though , the ampersand piece is real good , love that s man
stigma: i would say the steven piece has real nice 3d , just maybe space it out a bit more and don't have every bar and extension overlap as for the bottom would like to see that colored the tree and shrooms look awesome
deadone:i'd say go with that color scheme looks like you got it figured nicely
pekins:nice job , maybe a lil more funk on the L and maybe connecting your e and r like the e and p do woulda been cool
here is a page i did in my book but i could really use some input on the background , just gotta make the shit pop , and don't wanna fuck it up

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7459/fall010.jpg

Looks tight as always bro! your pieces always have a bold kick to them.. I would suggest a darker backround because it would make your bright pieces pop out...
That N is a K lol... The word says Moke... it is for my homie that writes Moke13

[thepekins]

wgone- thats ill. maybe a pink background?

[unique93]

new sketch :D
http://www1.picturepush.com/photo/a/4374134/640/4374134.jpg (http://picturepush.com/public/4374134)

[Stigma02]

ur not toy unique haha go away lol that is ill by the way,
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6900.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6898.jpg
CRITS

[Saint0913]

here is a superhero one i did for fun...

http://i909.photobucket.com/albums/ac296/Saint0913/68343_491599290930_634585930_7548695_356755_n.jpg

[PREA672]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0877-1.jpg

[SYFER1]

http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/Photo0399-1.jpg

[Fube]

been a while since ive been to my fav. toy forum!

been even longer since i posted anything work wise as well.

so, here is a product of boredom and highness.

love and hate welcome, just because your a mod dont mean your not toy.

http://blip.tv/file/get/Fubar-sketchTestCam715.wmv

[..(((DeAdOnE)))..]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/665cdfd0.jpg

[BRAZE-TWO]

@DeadOne, Thats sick, keep up the great work.

[Res-tooth Slims]

wgone...that middle piece with the peeling off paper effect thing is bangin..props indeed

[unique93]

ur not toy unique haha go away lol that is ill by the way,

man...i think i am toy...because i draw sketches only one year...thanks for comment :D
sorry for my bad english :D

[Keso]

Word... learning Calligraphy will help for sure... Not just with Tags but also with letters in your piece... Keep practicing

An exchange piece
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Mokeexchange.jpg

I came.

[..(((DeAdOnE)))..]

Bro your 3d is way off buddy I'd work on it.
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6900.jpg
The fill on 3d is a lil confusing to the eye.
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6898.jpg
CRITS[/QUOTE]

[walt_dissney]

hi

new 2 bombin sience and new to graff

here's my first tag and throwie

been workin on shit for a month or so

wut u think

http://view.pics-or-gtfo.com/20101020-6bdf1f54e417d4599c57e095d50f7b32.jpg

[BRAZE-TWO]

Ide have to agree with the above statements.

[walt_dissney]

and i aint even fuckin wit pieces rite now

just practice hands and throws all day

[BRAZE-TWO]

Good Choice, If you start trying to piece when you first start. you will most like just embarrass yourself...

[thepekins]

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/8435/dscf2068k.jpg (http://img87.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscf2068k.jpg)
for the battle
bump
nobody gave me crits on this except for wgone.

[PREA672]

your E's drop down too far, your L is ugly, the right leg on the K is too fat.. the 3d is on point though. not bad though

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/asdsad.jpg

Boooonkers - - - >(look hot)

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/sdf.jpg

Boooonkers looks hot fire

[LeaksOne]

youve GOT to work on that throw

[MoganOne]

some shitty piece i did the other day
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1020101617.jpg

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/wqeqw.jpg
Those arrows in the shadows are BOoonkers

[kew1]

http://i616.photobucket.com/albums/tt250/slerk/October-19_2128.jpg
sharpie freestyle

[PREA672]

your trying to hard kew1

[..(((DeAdOnE)))..]

I hate this! But what tha hell
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b77/galasman/cea5f81b.jpg

[EXI]

only thing im not feeling on that piece deadone is the heart/arrow extension on the top, idk where it came from but doesnt look good to me, but im a toy what crits can i give.

[m+s]

http://i53.tinypic.com/10ia05l.jpg
http://i54.tinypic.com/vs0504.jpg
not really feelin my K's.....thoughts?

that bottom ones got pottential

[thepekins]

slek- you got some funk man

[EXI]

He does, great style.

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo31-1.jpg
lolllll

[SYFER1]

http://i1216.photobucket.com/albums/dd380/SyferOne/Photo0399-1.jpg

[PREA672]

the right leg of your R at the bottom is ugly.. cut it before it curves

[FuckTheFame]

going through an old blackbook
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1056/5103726375_9b1af1d841.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726375/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1148/5103726237_662eaf4d82.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726237/)

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4062/5103726497_e6c6a8b9fd.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103726497/)

http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1117/5103776731_4ba31d9db1.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103776731/)

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4152/5103776669_1130725501.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5103776669/)

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4124/5104369034_6cde67aac5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104369034/)

http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4144/5104369150_d19251cfe8.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5104369150/)

[thepekins]

quick freestyle stuff
http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/4669/scan0006tj.jpg (http://img819.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0006tj.jpg)

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/9674/scan0005y.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0005y.jpg)

and some other junk with shitty fills
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/2506/scan0007zx.jpg (http://img12.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0007zx.jpg)
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/7324/scan0009crop.jpg (http://img259.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0009crop.jpg)
http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/9291/scan0009u.jpg (http://img823.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0009u.jpg)

some mexican dude
http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/7241/scan0008ul.jpg (http://img94.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0008ul.jpg)

[Stuck]

your first one is the best id say keep working with that style cus the other shit is weak compared to it.

[Scron]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/photo4.jpg

[..romero..]

that syde is pretty decent.keep on doin what yer doin.

[MoganOne]

your first one is the best id say keep working with that style cus the other shit is weak compared to it.

Absolutely correct

[*slayer]

http://i52.tinypic.com/2j1kis5.jpg

[sziv]

3d is waaay off man
http://i55.tinypic.com/fzbwg8.jpg
crits?

[Flash_One]

http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5295/img2065eo.jpg (http://img836.imageshack.us/i/img2065eo.jpg/)

or

http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/1336/img2069od.jpg (http://img514.imageshack.us/i/img2069od.jpg/)

thanks

[EXI]

Slayer- your bars are off by a little, stay simple man. plus work on 3d. dont worry about filling or colours. just do black and white pieces. you'll do x2 the work by the time you only colour one piece. don't worry about style, it will come. your trying to hard to make your style.
sziv-
lookin good
flash-sick handstyle and love what you got goin. kepe it up

[Flash_One]

thanks dude

[FlippingChickens]

i agree with stuck on that somber

syde that shit is dope my only crit is those arrows on the side..it takes away from the peice

flash you have goten a lot better keep at it

[FuckTheFame]

flash - your handstyle could use some work

[thepekins]

pen scribble
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/3620/scan0011fk.jpg (http://img259.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0011fk.jpg)

and a quick freestyle done with a dying sharpie
http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/8823/scan0012pg.jpg (http://img709.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0012pg.jpg)

[MoganOne]

Somber your handy is pretty straight

[Graff J up]

http://i54.tinypic.com/10dhbb7.jpg
http://i55.tinypic.com/2vaz6vs.jpg
just started messing around with extensions so ehh

[Amends_Ego]

http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/7159/img0051zd.jpg (http://img838.imageshack.us/i/img0051zd.jpg/)

Hangover sketching. first time using colors in 4 months. Ill give some crits later.

[swlost13]

http://i518.photobucket.com/albums/u350/shutter_shades_pwn/004.jpg
http://i518.photobucket.com/albums/u350/shutter_shades_pwn/031.jpg
yeah i suck i know :\

[Stigma02]

everyone sucks in the beginning

[HeklrToo]

http://i518.photobucket.com/albums/u350/shutter_shades_pwn/031.jpg
yeah i suck i know :\

Better than a lot of other peoples first times...

[Inlyn08]

http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/photo4.jpg
Overall this is pretty banging. The last letter is an E? Unless I am mistaken? Make it look more like it. Just add something to bring it out. One solid line, from what I see. Digging it. Completely. That S had me having whiplash.. LOL.

@Slayer..
On some real shit, no diss.. Can you tell me what you're trying to write there..
I see an O.. some other letters. And whatever else. Just saying.. No hate.

[thepekins]

pretty sloppy
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/4766/scan0004p.jpg (http://img109.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0004p.jpg)

[dubbed]

coser i like the colors in that
http://i55.tinypic.com/6p5aox.jpg
http://i54.tinypic.com/4sbsp1.jpg

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo2-8.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo4-3.jpg

[Amends_Ego]

http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/7159/img0051zd.jpg (http://img838.imageshack.us/i/img0051zd.jpg/)

Hangover sketching. first time using colors in 4 months. Ill give some crits later.

Bottom pg bump.
Stuck- I like the bottom one...I think I cant really see it
Coser- I would say stay away from colors and just work on structure. I would say the R is the worst but none of them are really piece worthy. keep at it just not with any colors.

[thepekins]

^the colors were the best part man. I was just fucking around with some new prismas

[MoganOne]

lol

[ManikOner]

Syde - looks pretty good i would just thin out the E a bit and maybe make the S bar a little thicker

Monix - that second simples cool i like it. just work it a little make it yours

Coser - Style and colors :)

Stuck - Second piece on first page is phire! is it not finished? i see the O

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1024101905-1.jpg

[Stuck]

that E is hurtin

for my girl
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo8-3.jpg

[Amends_Ego]

Diggin it stuck, a little cramped for my taste but its nice.
Morgan that is nearing fire, minus the e, it just dont belong there. Try rockin an upper case like stuck till you find something that works.

[Chippey]

thepenkins -extension on top of r looks off, and the leg doesnt look right either, the pink is hot tho

dubbed - x's are a bitch, keep working tho. on the 2nd piece the extension on top of the n ruins the symmettry

stuck - its a bit cramped, fills are nice. the shading on the inner part of the e on cassie looks incomplete, i dunno if thats just me.

mogan - the e has go to go, its slant is different from the other letters

[Keso]

more of my stuff

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd287/SPITONE/graffiti.jpg
http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd287/SPITONE/graffiti005.jpg
http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd287/SPITONE/graffiti001.jpg
http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd287/SPITONE/graffiti003.jpg
http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd287/SPITONE/graffiti004.jpg

LOLOLOLOLOLOL
This is my old shit! hahahahahahahaha 07 days! this is fucking awful compared to what im doing now. Damn can't believe I thought that shit was fly!

[extinct]

Mone.... Just flip the m on it's side

[EXI]

mone, your shit always amazes me great job man.

[Ratto]

Ok so I just started about 1 month ago and I would really like some feedback.

First of all I'm sorry for the image size, but I don't know how to change it.

the first image is my first try
the second one is my first character Maj. Values(major values) he represents the values that are dear to me.
the third one is a stencil I made using photoshop
the last one, is something I made a longtime ago when I was bored in class and I was Rat instead of Ratto.

[MoganOne]

Mone.... Just flip the m on it's side

Word up I got a little lazy with the E on this one... the
M sideways would definitely go good with the style...

[EXI]

Ok so I just started about 1 month ago and I would really like some feedback.

First of all I'm sorry for the image size, but I don't know how to change it.

the first image is my first try
the second one is my first character Maj. Values(major values) he represents the values that are dear to me.
the third one is a stencil I made using photoshop
the last one, is something I made a longtime ago when I was bored in class and I was Rat instead of Ratto.

use photobucket.com to upload your photos
And i'll give you as much feedback as i can, i too am learning but am advancing because of this forum.
Go simple, your bars are messed up, try to make all the letters same width and length etc, the O in the first one is smaller bars than the R. Think of bars this way:
E has 4 bars, I has 3, H has 3 etc. Every letter is made up by bars. Just bite off of your computer and stay as simple as you can.

MOGAN! PLEASE READ! what markers do you use? I'm in the market for some new ones, please share =3

[MoganOne]

Mone.... Just flip the m on it's side

Word up I got a little lazy with the E on this one... the
M sideways would definitely go good with the style...

[Ratto]

use photobucket.com to upload your photos
And i'll give you as much feedback as i can, i too am learning but am advancing because of this forum.
Go simple, your bars are messed up, try to make all the letters same width and length etc, the O in the first one is smaller bars than the R. Think of bars this way:
E has 4 bars, I has 3, H has 3 etc. Every letter is made up by bars. Just bite off of your computer and stay as simple as you can.

Ok thanks man, that really helps I was thinking of it the wrong way and I'll deff work on the width and lenght

[Ratto]

use photobucket.com to upload your photos
And i'll give you as much feedback as i can, i too am learning but am advancing because of this forum.
Go simple, your bars are messed up, try to make all the letters same width and length etc, the O in the first one is smaller bars than the R. Think of bars this way:
E has 4 bars, I has 3, H has 3 etc. Every letter is made up by bars. Just bite off of your computer and stay as simple as you can.

Ok thanks man, that really helps I was thinking of it the wrong way and I'll deff work on the width and lenght

[EXI]

Ok thanks man, that really helps I was thinking of it the wrong way and I'll deff work on the width and lenght

No problamo man! Just keep on doing simps, you'll know when your ready, once you have "decent" simps work on doing the filling. Pm me with your work if you wnat my crits!

[Stigma02]

@stuck i like your throwie and that cassie is pretty sick too like someone already said space it out better so the letters are so cramped.

@EXI if you are looking for some high end markers check out prisma colors but if you want something a little cheaper but still professional check out copics, but right now dont worry about getting super nice markers crayolas work fine just work on your letter structure and your bars.

i have spent 4 hours developing letters sketching them out doing the 3d and coloring it on this already so i dont want to fuck up im just looking for advice on a fill. i dont want specifics but im thinking cool colors would go well since it contrasts the warm in the 3d any thoughts on that? and crits on letter structure is always appreciated
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6901.jpg

[MoganOne]

On that piece that just did up there... I used shitty markers that I found at my work lol... The Black outline is a dico paint marker... the pink is a cheap highlighter that was loosing ink and going dead and the purple was also some cheap ass marker I stumbled upon lol

[Stuck]

decided to do n old school peice.... and if anyone has seen this R before tell me cus after i drew it , i felt like i had seen it before, if it is a bite its unintentional

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo16-2.jpg

other shitt
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo15-3.jpg
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo11-3.jpg

[qyangluo]

Very good, very creative


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[EXI]

@EXI if you are looking for some high end markers check out prisma colors but if you want something a little cheaper but still professional check out copics, but right now dont worry about getting super nice markers crayolas work fine just work on your letter structure and your bars.

I don't need to work on simples.. Lol, I didn't even post anything, I was just asking Mogan.

[Stigma02]

haha ok then i was looking at the wrong person give me crits plzz!

[Amends_Ego]

Yo no hate stig but I dont really like it. theres awkward extenstions, theres alot of connections between letters that dont belong and your t looks like a cancer from the I. I'm guessing you dont wanna hear this but I wouldn't do fill on that at all. Draw another up make the improvements and fill that. your headed in the right direction though.

[Phat 2]

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc4/hs949.snc4/74224_167736893253228_100000507545549_468043_35399 62_n.jpg

doodling and messing around on the book, playing mad scientist trying to experiment with some weird shit

gimme ur opinions

[dubbed]

@stuck i like your throwie and that cassie is pretty sick too like someone already said space it out better so the letters are so cramped.

@EXI if you are looking for some high end markers check out prisma colors but if you want something a little cheaper but still professional check out copics, but right now dont worry about getting super nice markers crayolas work fine just work on your letter structure and your bars.

i have spent 4 hours developing letters sketching them out doing the 3d and coloring it on this already so i dont want to fuck up im just looking for advice on a fill. i dont want specifics but im thinking cool colors would go well since it contrasts the warm in the 3d any thoughts on that? and crits on letter structure is always appreciated
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i309/bobthecow173/Picture6901.jpg

your 3d is sick, pops alot
phat that piece is pretty jazzy. i dig it

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo17-1.jpg

[FR1CTION]

Pretty shitty, but what else am I going to do in a psychology class? Anything I can do better? Obviously this is utter shit compared to some people, but I think it's only going to get better from here.

http://filesmelt.com/dl/FALLSHIRMJAGER1.png

[Stuck]

try to make ur letters have more flow now.... for example in the a, the round part, instead of having like 3 straight bars to make the o, just use one curvy bar.. do that for the other letters as well

["awesome"ONE]

crits yo

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/ertertert.jpg
Hammmers

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/dfgdfg-1.jpg
Bannngin

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/retert.jpg
Cllllean

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/ergsers.jpg
fire

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/sdrfghesrgserg.jpg
delightfully boonker ( you look hot like fire)

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/sdfgsergseg.jpg
Ill fill keep bangin like a block

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/ergergg.jpg
sly i like the way the worrdddddds strech

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/dfgedre.jpg
holdin the same style is harrdi allways have swirls whell bad lines

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/dsfgsasa.jpg
i love this style nice first letter

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/dfgergerg.jpg
loooking more like my stee here

["awesome"ONE]

can someone crit my peice please thx

[thepekins]

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/198/scan0020e.jpg (http://img59.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0020e.jpg)
new stuff what do you guys think?

["awesome"ONE]

i think your peice looks nice, what do you guys think about mine

["awesome"ONE]

im always blown away by your straight letters rewt, so precise nice and clean,also really like your concept you did with the face, nice shading

trying out a new name chelseas16 lol. i dont know just playin around with names

[MoganOne]

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/198/scan0020e.jpg (http://img59.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0020e.jpg)
new stuff what do you guys think?
I think your handy looks legit but your piece is not very cool

["awesome"ONE]

how about mine

[thepekins]

we cant see yours dawg

Mogan- you think you could like crit it better lol "not very cool" doesnt really help me

[gecko36]

nice and i really like the "S". Don't have much else to say

[gecko36]

tht was for ghostwriter.

[Amends_Ego]

you all need to learn how to fucking use the edit button instead of double posting. and ghost use the fucking multiple quote picture if you wanna fucking crit and post the flicks. As much as i love seeing all the pieces from the last 2 pages, I like to see them on the last two pages instead of in seperate posts on this page. 'awesome' post a fucking picture and crit the other pieces on THAT post and we'll leave you crits, fiending over crits multiple times w/ no pic (or even with a pic) is a waste of fucking time.

Rewt- Always fresh, you been rockin that same steez since I can remember. Alot of dudes say that you need to step outta you're box and go more complex but I disagree, you kill it on your simps so no crits there. For the charc, the eyes dominate the face too much, try doing them smaller next time, also I think that more of the left side of her face should show with the angle that shes facing, could be wrong on that the lines are pretty light.

Pekins-Im pretty sure I remember you from a little back, not sure if you were rocking somber then but the handy is pretty legit. I'm not feeling those letters, im guessing your trying to branch of from simps. iif so my advice is to work with way thicker bars, it'll give you more wiggle room. Overall its not bad definately got basic structure down but I think you might be moving a little too fast, drop the extensions fatten those bars and let you're letters flow naturally (the m looks way forced and doesn't look good at all.

["awesome"ONE]

thepekins cool but add some things to the letters there boring

ghostwritier start to use bars more cool olors but the name spit discusts me no diss
heres one of mine crits appreciated thx

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Heklr clean and that cassie is dope ghost writer

http://i566.photobucket.com/albums/ss103/turtleweed18/utf-8BSU1HMDAyNDAtMjAxMDEwMjYtMTYxNi5qcGc.jpg

["awesome"ONE]

nice stuff guys
i need some help being creative

[BoomSlang]

awesome, you need more than a little help on just the creative side.
first....congrats on actually posting a pic this time **applause**
second, dont worry about being creative till you fix the basic shit first.
your bar width is all over the place even down to having different sized bars in the same letter (M and second E)
S looks like its been strangled in the middle
O should be thicker all the way round.
last E doesnt have a consistent bar in it.
dont even bother with 3d till you fix up the structure.
its just more to go wrong in an already bad piece
3d crits
A=long 3d on outside of letter,3d inside the middle is short and out of proportion
W=bottom middle left should follow the angle of the bar it is the 3d of, yours goes straight up and down and is out of place
first E= middle bar 3d does not follow the rest of the piece, there is no angle on it
S=bottom 3d of the s starts in the middle of the letter instead of off to the right side where it should.
O= wtf happened there, its just all wrong
M=angle of the 3d does not match the rest of the piece
second E is prolly the best bit of 3d on the entire piece

not tryin to be a prick but you need to be able to see your own stuff objectively in order to improve

[Chippey]

REWT - Clean as always, i'd like to see some different stuff, not necessarily extensions, maybe just a different word cause all ive ever seen you write is rewt in the same style, id like to see how you fair with other words. As for the face there is some confusion with proportions mostly in the eyes (needs to be smaller) and some of the angles e.g. the cheek bones and the angle of the nose dont seem to fit right together.

Smokers - what can i say... its pretty clean, but i find some letters way easier to read than others. sick fill.

Awesome - check the width of your bars stay consistant, also it ruins the flow/style when you do like your A and W with squared edges and use curvey s's and o's right next to them, keep it the same, squared corners or curved corners. Crits for the shadow - in the center of the a look how small the width shaded is compared to that of the shading below it or the side, (if that made sense) basically the middle of the a should be completely filled. The M and the S's shadows seem to be off. I'd keep for shadows for now, but thats your choice.

[MoganOne]

Smoke- Glad to see your still laying down impressive work...
Awesome- Chill out bro... Creativity comes from inspiration.. seek inspiration... lol
Somber- my bad on the crit.. do you use pencil to sketch your piece out? or just go at it with that thick at marker on your outline? the piece will look a lot better if u also focus on the cleanliness of your outlines... try not to just use one outlline in black... work from thin to thick

[MoganOne]

Smoke- Glad to see your still laying down impressive work...
Awesome- Chill out bro... Creativity comes from inspiration.. seek inspiration... lol
Somber- my bad on the crit.. do you use pencil to sketch your piece out? or just go at it with that thick at marker on your outline? the piece will look a lot better if u also focus on the cleanliness of your outlines... try not to just use one outlline in black... work from thin to thick

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Thanks guys mogan once I start perfecting my stuff I'd love to do another exchange or ryte now if you like my recent simple stuff man

[MoganOne]

You know I'm down bro... Just Pm or some shit I might even sketch it tonight(if I have time)

[MoganOne]

Some old shit
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Clementetat.jpg

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo19-3.jpg

no markers

[MoganOne]

nice.. perfect structure

[Stuck]

http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo20-2.jpg

feeling it?

[Keso]

Some old shit
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/Clementetat.jpg

Holy shit man. I'm in love with your work! You down for an exchange?


http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo20-2.jpg

feeling it?

what is that style called?????? Like revok and sabers shit??? Thin and thick bars????? Ps caps lock is cruise control for cool

[Keso]

you all need to learn how to fucking use the edit button instead of double posting. and ghost use the fucking multiple quote picture if you wanna fucking crit and post the flicks. As much as i love seeing all the pieces from the last 2 pages, I like to see them on the last two pages instead of in seperate posts on this page. 'awesome' post a fucking picture and crit the other pieces on THAT post and we'll leave you crits, fiending over crits multiple times w/ no pic (or even with a pic) is a waste of fucking time.

Rewt- Always fresh, you been rockin that same steez since I can remember. Alot of dudes say that you need to step outta you're box and go more complex but I disagree, you kill it on your simps so no crits there. For the charc, the eyes dominate the face too much, try doing them smaller next time, also I think that more of the left side of her face should show with the angle that shes facing, could be wrong on that the lines are pretty light.

Pekins-Im pretty sure I remember you from a little back, not sure if you were rocking somber then but the handy is pretty legit. I'm not feeling those letters, im guessing your trying to branch of from simps. iif so my advice is to work with way thicker bars, it'll give you more wiggle room. Overall its not bad definately got basic structure down but I think you might be moving a little too fast, drop the extensions fatten those bars and let you're letters flow naturally (the m looks way forced and doesn't look good at all.

U mad?

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1028100922-1.jpg
Yo Keso I am down for a piece exchange what do you write?? PM me or someshit lol

[Zookyook]

that E is fuckin fresh moner... not really feelin the extension through the O though, just doesnt look convincing cuz theres 3d inside the O when u should see part of that extension, 'nam'sayin?

and meyor i like that callig one a lot... but the top of ur R should be at the same level as the top of the M in my opinion, itd keep that arc flow consistent... the letters are real nice though

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Mone and stuck GREAT work

[MoganOne]

It's more of a "now you see me now you don't" extension lolz...

[Amends_Ego]

U mad?

You got something better to do? I'll leave it at that

Mone-New e is dope. not feeling the M or the O the m's left leg appears to have some angular difficulties and the extenstion through the o kills it for me. Feelin the N and the E though they were made for each other.

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/1026101335-1.jpg

[EXI]

mogan, love it! what markers!? i need some nice ones lol.
havent posted in along time, got new name.
http://i56.tinypic.com/w5z0j.jpg
http://i53.tinypic.com/r9exeh.jpg
heres first time with copics, they bleed :,(
http://i55.tinypic.com/2568lcw.jpg
http://i56.tinypic.com/i5qj5g.jpg
first free hand with sharpie
http://i55.tinypic.com/4lt2ep.jpg
http://i56.tinypic.com/2cfuk3l.jpg
trying a new e, really don't like it :s
http://i53.tinypic.com/fxcruo.jpg

[Zookyook]

nice mone... i like the connection on that one :)

kuake i think u need to use sharpies for a while before trying copics or any nice set of markers, they all bleed the same, its ur control thats making them bleed too much... ur second to last pic is the best, but dont hide ur letters behind each other... and try for less negative space in between letters, if that makes any sense...

some recent shit... i know the simps are supergay... i lack motivation lately, once i start something i just wanna get it over with..... oh and yo zewl lol
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1427/5125782151_ce6e9361a0.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4087/5125784177_da419f2fbb.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1081/5126391212_02b248a1df.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1326/5126392078_bcc01d87af.jpg

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Nemor that throw is mighty fine
Kuake straiten out the bottom leg on the K its akward looking like that
And mone still killing it with the cleansnesseses..eses

[<[(Smokers187¤GS¤WM)]>]

Nemor that throw is mighty fine
Kuake straiten out the bottom leg on the K its akward looking like that
And mone still killing it with the cleansnesseses..eses

[EXI]

nemor- what do you mean by negative space
smoke- okay, so you mean like this? (crits also please)
http://i55.tinypic.com/jsglg8.jpg
i know that the "line" is going smaller to bigger, its just a small sketch.

[lowfatmilk]

Half of you have good solid sketches. if they were painted well they would be straight. quit buying into this online forum bs and getting caught up in the hype of sketching. half the dudes burning you know do not sketch. if you painted more and sketched less you would improve lightyears faster.

get out of your sketchbooks and go paint. do chill bridges and tunnels til your can controls good. catch a lot of handstyles WITH PAINT. learn how to use a can, after all, graffiti is about fuckin painting.

[EXI]

crits please
http://i54.tinypic.com/b8911j.jpg
http://i54.tinypic.com/e6dk5h.jpg
lower case looks good i think

[primitiveplus]

http://i53.tinypic.com/nfifcl.jpg
any tips?

[Zookyook]

negative space meaning big areas in between the letters... try to either bring the letters closer or make the 3d big enough to where it covers that open space, look at the big boy blackbook thread for some inspiration...

[BlacktodaFuture]

Merta exchange

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3548.jpg?t=1288404063

Halloween piece. crits?

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3549.jpg


crits:

primitive: i see the style you are trying to do. try drawing bigger, i find it to be easier if you draw that kind of style bigger
exi: what your bars, you are placing them in awkward places. and work on flow. if one letter has bends, all the others should too.

[W_G_O_N_E]

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/774/fall116.jpg

http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/8457/fall117.jpg

added some bricks to finish the full page one's background , and finished up the other one tonight

Factor i would fatten up that bar on the t , but good work overall
kuake you gotta make your bars even man , look at these pics i am posting , they are a good example of even bars

[MoganOne]

nice mone... i like the connection on that one :)

kuake i think u need to use sharpies for a while before trying copics or any nice set of markers, they all bleed the same, its ur control thats making them bleed too much... ur second to last pic is the best, but dont hide ur letters behind each other... and try for less negative space in between letters, if that makes any sense...

some recent shit... i know the simps are supergay... i lack motivation lately, once i start something i just wanna get it over with..... oh and yo zewl lol
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1427/5125782151_ce6e9361a0.jpg
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4087/5125784177_da419f2fbb.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1081/5126391212_02b248a1df.jpg
http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1326/5126392078_bcc01d87af.jpg

Thanks my man! Your style is fire... I like your Throw alot man that M is fukin wild lolz

[retro-one]

oldest to newest
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j276/Dulcinea606/DSC05595.jpg

http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j276/Dulcinea606/IMG-1.jpg

http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j276/Dulcinea606/desire2.jpg

http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j276/Dulcinea606/STRUK-2.jpg

http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j276/Dulcinea606/Number.jpg

http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j276/Dulcinea606/66654_104843749582920_100001718853183_32740_358164 4_n.jpg

http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j276/Dulcinea606/68405_103347536399208_100001718853183_20508_744444 9_n.jpg

http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j276/Dulcinea606/33631_104843759582919_100001718853183_32741_398187 5_n.jpg

[W_G_O_N_E]

damn retro keep that shit comin man , vvn , that number canvas is dooope

[Zookyook]

definitely intermediate at least retro... i like that second to last one AND the last one a lot.... niggle got style

[MoganOne]

Yo Retro your shit is Fire bro! Lovin your posts a lot man... Hit me up if you are down for an exchange..

Smoke Exchange
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1029101804-1.jpg

[mista_dza]

something new for halloween im not done, but actually i think imma scrap this one and restart from scratch and fix things.

http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s161/Shovoo/DSC00280.jpg

[MoganOne]

The piece looks straight but the colors are wack lol...

Another piece I did for an Exchange
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1030101949-1.jpg

[..romero..]

keso is dopeness.


http://i52.tinypic.com/1pwcgw.jpg

[thepekins]

http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/8097/scan0023v.jpg (http://img835.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0023v.jpg)
quick, baked, fuckin around. ran out of space for teh t

[MoganOne]

http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/8097/scan0023v.jpg (http://img835.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0023v.jpg)
quick, baked, fuckin around. ran out of space for teh t

Chill out with the jiggedy Jaggedy shit you got going on with the "L"...
The "F" is by far the best letter on here... Work off of that

[thepekins]

yeah i meant to do the L differently but fucked it up

[EXI]

w g o n e- thanks for the crits, i thought my bars were even though?
blacktodafuture- yeah, I'm just starting to go from really simp to curves and bends and pulls etc. and it's hard for me to do it to all of them.

[Zookyook]

kuake the bars really arent even... like the top right of ur K's.... and the bottom right too for that matter, also the left bar of the E in this one is about as uneven as it gets...
http://i54.tinypic.com/b8911j.jpg
itll help if u draw out each bar individually... just like meyor did here, thats why his bars are all even and shit... naaaaw'mean?
http://i326.photobucket.com/albums/k430/Atrik/Photo19-3.jpg

[EXI]

well with my K i was trying to pull the bar out to make it thicker, i see other people do it but they get "nice job man" and that, can you explain why my bar thickening or thining is bad? :s Like an example,
http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3549.jpg
see how his bars are thicker and thinner at times, how can I get good at this? :s because i just tried and i guess its bad.

[BlacktodaFuture]

bc. i know how to do it better then you do. start with bars doing the same thing, same size, then work on shit like that.

[Zookyook]

valid question... basically if u want to make thicker and thinner bars it has to get thicker at a constant angle... like the bottom left of safers S... u can see where he was sketching that bar into the next bar (this is what u should be doin, i do it too) and it gets thicker gradually and it makes it look more convincing, ur K just looks like a wonky triangle pretty much, its all about keeping flow....

heres one from me with some thick to thin shit goin on...
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4096/4924328128_e2d17b18e8.jpg
im not sayin this piece is perfect by any means lol... but if u notice the bars go from thick to thin at an even and constant angle... so it just looks better, to me at least, dont take my crits as fact if u dont want to, im not an expert

[PREA672]

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0881.jpg

[MoganOne]

The light blue Highlights give it some strength

[NosE2]

yo prea im pretty much diggin all the letters man, you just might want to work on proportions a little bit more. i know you know that e is just not fittin in there. everyone says i need to work on my 3d (fury inparticular) so i gave it a shot, just a lil rough sketch. critsss would be appreciated
http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/691/imgp3297a.jpg

[Gyse]

Looking much better zewl. The e in the top one is messed up on the bottom part where it curves up, but good otherwise.

Prea- SPace the letters out more, the E is too hidden. and that R kicking out so much messed it up. Just give the E some room and it would be fine

[Zookyook]

assuming the 3d's goin straight down, the far right tip of the L should have some 3d on it too ;) i think a piece exchange is overdue with us zewl, wuddyasay?

[NosE2]

well i have work all week but maybe just a straigh letter or whateverr ill see whats up but yeahhh im down no due date

[PREA672]

keep working on it zewl youll get it..

[PREA672]

trying to get down with different styles
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0887.jpg


http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u138/Stolzy805/IMG_0880.jpg

the R is hurtin on this one ^

[MoganOne]

Prea the second one looks pretty decent.. I like the flow of th letters bending(besides the E)...The First one is wiggidy wack because the P is garbage... Fix it lol... The one on the Bottom has a nice P...

Bust Battle
http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/1031102207-1.jpg

[EXI]

crits please. i know im bad.. sucks bc im not getting better :/
http://i51.tinypic.com/167jitj.jpg

zewl, you missed 3d on the w on the lower. :D

[thepekins]

http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/7907/scan0001kj.jpg (http://img401.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0001kj.jpg)
messing around with different letters. Any dope writers write Repo?

[lord_plankton]

crits please. i know im bad.. sucks bc im not getting better :/
http://i51.tinypic.com/167jitj.jpg

zewl, you missed 3d on the w on the lower. :D

dude take it slow youll get better..but not after writing your name 8 times..id also change my name to bukkake i mean youve kuake already so... and safe isnt really a good example for bars n shit.

[EXI]

lordplankton- I don't understand what your saying :s... except that takign it slower. thats it.

[EXI]

messing around. i know its still trash
http://i55.tinypic.com/2dj87qq.jpg

[thepekins]

try to make the corners of your lines so pointy if that makes an sense. In my opinion, you shouldnt even be trying this stuff yet. Get your handie much better than do some throw ups before you start these. Everyone sucks in the beginning, most of my stuff still sucks. Just try to get out of the Mega toy phase before you start piecing. imo

[EXI]

try to make the corners of your lines so pointy if that makes an sense. In my opinion, you shouldnt even be trying this stuff yet. Get your handie much better than do some throw ups before you start these. Everyone sucks in the beginning, most of my stuff still sucks. Just try to get out of the Mega toy phase before you start piecing. imo

i dont like throw upping that much. im more of a piece guy, and im just mad because i took a week off of writing because i was busy than i come back and my stuff was just not that good

[Fury]

yo prea im pretty much diggin all the letters man, you just might want to work on proportions a little bit more. i know you know that e is just not fittin in there. everyone says i need to work on my 3d (fury inparticular) so i gave it a shot, just a lil rough sketch. critsss would be appreciated
http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/691/imgp3297a.jpg

Hahahahaha. You're getting hella better man, just keep at it. Zook is right in his crits. Also, the W is kinda messy. Just work on the straight down stuff in pencil and go back over it in marker. The small straight looks better than the middle as well.

You are very much on the right track, keep it up.

And anyone wanna do an exchange? Zook?