Blackbooks

[TAO]

whoo ha ha thats sweet
its hard for me to make it out tho :blink: u made me think

[toy_mongo]

im a toy so give me any sort of feedback!

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i260/toy_mongo/mongo.jpg

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i260/toy_mongo/snail.jpg

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i260/toy_mongo/switch.jpg

[DR FORCE]

Originally posted by force@Apr 9 2006, 05:01 PM
Did that today.. should I color it or leave it be?

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/5971/cmykhitsugaforceapdz0ew.jpg

For a friend (coloring pencils.. I don't have markers) -

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/8564/cblue2copy3fd.jpg
hEY MUTHEFUCKER MY WRITER NAME IS THE FORCE A.K.A DR FORCE A.K.A SUC

YOUR FUCKING NICKNAME IS ALSOUW FORCE

[DR FORCE]

Originally posted by DR FORCE+Apr 10 2006, 06:51 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DR FORCE @ Apr 10 2006, 06:51 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-force@Apr 9 2006, 05:01 PM
Did that today.. should I color it or leave it be?

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/5971/cmykhitsugaforceapdz0ew.jpg

For a friend (coloring pencils.. I don&#39;t have markers) -

http://img354.imageshack.us/img354/8564/cblue2copy3fd.jpg
hEY MUTHEFUCKER MY WRITER NAME IS THE FORCE A.K.A DR FORCE A.K.A SUC

YOUR FUCKING NICKNAME IS ALSOUW FORCE [/b][/quote]
But that shit is cool man no beef

[mr.T]

http://home.no.net/ramsesk/trem44.jpg

any crits? and which t letter is the best or are all shit? :) and could i start writting such throws on walls or need to learn more?

[Mse]

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/138516910.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/138516919.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/138516926.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/138516927.jpg
mse is in the hizzle

[aren1]

sick man i like em.. in that colored one i think that middle isnt very good :P

[Mse]

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/138519317.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/138519313.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/138519311.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/138519309.jpg

[Jank]

if u want ppl to comment on u comment on the ppl above u wen u post&#33;&#33;

trek i like the top one best, tho the T looks a lil too ruonded in places for m. and dont make the bottom of the K too ruonded unless the other letters are all rounded in the same way to match it.. it works well in the top 1. i wouild make the T less rounded. they r all nearly right lol. if i was u i would get a board or sumit and pract5ise in me garage or garden so u learn how to paint... thats wot i always say tho n i no alot o ppl disagree...that way u will get paintin skills n by the time u rnt too bad wit a can u&#39;ll have somethin worth paintin as well.

mse they r takin a yr to load for sum reason. i dno im not a fan of those sort of letters in general bt its not bad for that style, bt like i dont like the gap in the R so big in the top 1. i can only see the top of the 3rd one bt the colours look pretty cool lol.. if i see em all eventually ill post again, keep it up tho....go wit wateva style u like best...dont listen to me lol

for a battle:SPRING... obv not perfect... like the overlappin arrows at the end..wot u think?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/finalspring.jpg

[mr.T]

its trem ;&#092;, im a toy but i think you are using to many arrows..

[Jank]

o ye lol i see the M now. its quite nice lol. ye its tru i did use a couple too many there..i dont normally use em at all so i thort id go all out lol

[EatRichPeople]

The only arrows that doesn&#39;t really look in it&#39;s place to me is the one comming out of the top of the G. The rest looks good in my opinion.

Dope ass shit mse, really feeling the It&#39;s like that and the bottom 2 characters

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/183/leo1nk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Any suggestions??

[AlmoSt]

ya, that spring looks good, bt i dont really like the S, did u forget about it or start with 1 style and turn it into another?

[Mse]

dont discriminate against arrows
its become like a symbol of toyness now
who gives a fuck add arrows the&#39;re old school

eatrichpeople nice and simple i like it

and dope shit jank i just dont like the little s thing you got going on

[joker00]

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+Apr 9 2006, 08:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ Apr 9 2006, 08:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-umop 3pisdn@Apr 9 2006, 08:43 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y123/DonnieDelinko/IMG_6807.jpg
oh lord....
ok man
start with some block letters
if youre trying to learn graffiti..whats the difference in what youre doing and some little 2 year old girl doing bubble letters

start with block letters and start with a simple easy vanishing point..
add your 3d

from there start to form your style..morph your letters a little but do not over do it&#33;

hope this helps.. [/b][/quote]
:o :lol: :D <_< i really hope that was a joke cuz he stole that tag from that mark ecko shit hahahaha so i advise u get a new name "trane" hahahahaa

:( sry im being suck a dick but seriously

[BILE]

^hahha i was waiting for someone to write "trane" and put it up aroudn here. good shit man. shows how clueless us toys can get&#33;

[Jank]

cheers lads..gd to have some comments lol. ye the only arrow i wasnt happy wit was the overlapped one off the G. ye i cudnt b assd wit an S. tbh i cudnt b bothered with it lol...im shit with Ss&#33;&#33;
eatrich ppl, i really like that...simple crisp n clean. nice1...alhough u dnt rllly like how u can see all the overlaps. nice shit tho

[melo]

lol @ the fool that writes trane... idiot..

heres some older stuff:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/c1998b98.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/0a5accb4.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/e6ad62ea.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/ac85a853.jpg

[EatRichPeople]

thanx mse and Jank.

Dope shit Melo

[beefgerky]

mse <3 your karaks.

[Mse]

my letters?

[Crucible]

Originally posted by Crucible@Apr 9 2006, 10:20 PM
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/8516/crux0033lp.th.jpg (http://img129.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0033lp.jpg)

I had a sketch up the other night with the same letter style/structure. Trying to get it down. Thanks for any crits and tips.
bump

[hitemup101]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/chanllanger08.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/chanlanger07.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/chanlanger06.jpg

these are jsut some things ive been wokring on. the second was is the same thing i did last time but soem one here helped me and told em to do it like this. the fist one isa simple one i did in school today.and on the third one i was wondering what yall thaught of the karaks??

critz plzz

[Flash]

im likin ur stuff mse you give me orgasm&#39;s at times :)

[minesweep]

crits?
http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/4744/dscn01810si.th.jpg (http://img387.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn01810si.jpg)

[AlmoSt]

I think that says DELV, thats pretty tight. The lettering is really clean and looks good, make the 3d bigger on the EL and V. Keep it up,


http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P4100830.jpg

Critz on mine please...hopefully good 1s

[RollTRS]

You don&#39;t need to connect or link every letter, and you may want to go back and start a bit simpler.

As for me, I&#39;m thinking about switching names, and here was an off the cuff attempt at a throw for it.

http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/540/picture50vp.png

What&#39;da yall think?

[hitemup101]

in my opinon lose hte arrows and ur r if thats what it is is fuked up the rest i thnk looks good keep it up ull get better

[minesweep]

Originally posted by AlmoSt@Apr 10 2006, 05:10 PM
I think that says DELV, thats pretty tight. The lettering is really clean and looks good, make the 3d bigger on the EL and V. Keep it up,



yea it says delv, thanks

[AlmoSt]

Thanks for the critz, im trying to find a good style i can build on, im just trying a bunch of new things, i thot this 1 was purty cool so i posted it, anymore crits would b cool, but i think i got the picture

good job on the coder, all the letters look good, but the top part of the E i think should b bubble style like the rest, but it looks good even with it

[Mse]

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/138516922.jpg
uhh i dont think i posted this :(

[AoAssis]

i wish you hadn&#39;t.

How come you havent been on MSN for a while, i got Night life vol 1, and drum and bass arena 1 i think i forgot wich one, tell me if you need them.

[Mse]

i havent been online in a while and right now my proxies are being gay
ill try again in a bit
why do you wish i hadnt?
you dont like it?

[ZeNiTh]

Originally posted by ZeNiTh@Apr 9 2006, 08:32 PM
http://img345.imageshack.us/img345/3033/00000478zb.th.jpg (http://img345.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00000478zb.jpg) hers somthin i did on a yellow box . finished it quick, any crits comments? :huh:
seriously does any one think this zen throwie is any good?

[AoAssis]

Mse, you know im jokin man, i just like being an asshole, i like it just work on the E and R and its nice, im loving the karaks too

[WAKE-1]

wat u guys think of this. i need help with a K.

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/9240/wake164zj.jpg

[hitemup101]

looks good work on that k and a lil on that a abd it would be good i think and the 3d looks good

[hitemup101]

Originally posted by hitemup101@Apr 10 2006, 04:17 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/chanllanger08.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/chanlanger07.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/chanlanger06.jpg

these are jsut some things ive been wokring on. the second was is the same thing i did last time but soem one here helped me and told em to do it like this. the fist one isa simple one i did in school today.and on the third one i was wondering what yall thaught of the karaks??

critz plzz
bumpp

critz??

[WAKE-1]

yea i fucked up the a in that one

[tubedisasters]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/Picture076.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

dammmm tube that shits tight...u write daet right? post up those throws if you do lol...good job tho

[AoAssis]

You mean these sketches :

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/4830/daet23mm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/6948/daet2vw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img350.imageshack.us/img350/5769/daet36qx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Sluts_r_us]

yes sir...and ao i just imed u and u signed off....

[AoAssis]

edit

[Hater-AiD~>]

nice sh*t aoassis

[AoAssis]

not mine its Daet&#39;s by request of Sluts

[melo]

deck i seriously suggest you taking the time to look outside the toy box and lookin at real graffiti.. your 3d can&#39;t get any worse.. and dont post everything you do, most of the times when u draw something new u tend to like it, then when u sleep over it, you realize its garbage.. learn the basics first and then post, and don&#39;t bump your own shit. (not to be a dick)

[AoAssis]

look outside the toy box but dont post outside the toy box. important rule.

[CHEN[Ken]]

Any Crits HELP? on my throwie on page 618 dont wanna repost the picture id feel annoying even tho im askin too much fo help and its kinda hard to get


also how would i start workin with something new any help?

[ghostbusta5]

just repost it, it would be easier

[flclnaruto1213]

well since f18 droppedout and simpuhl just straight didnt reply. im posting the sketch i would have used for that battle here

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/6066/sketcher2753we.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[AoAssis]

im feelin that style man the E is sexy i dont like the wings or what ever those are in the background though.

[flclnaruto1213]

lolyeah def,i was having second thoughts about the wings but then i didthem...idk why.

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Idk, the wings dont look too bad....I love the word of choice, and that E is damn sexy.

lol

heres a thing i did a while ago. one of the few ones ive ever colored.

Crits?


http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/9189/picture0780jd.jpg


Tis a sticker

[What Happened to the Letters?]

flncnaruto or whatevber your name is, i like the wings actually and the e was the one letter i didnt like...it reminds me alot of my stlye...ont have a lfick of my recent simples but it looks liek an unpolished version kinda

we have extremely similar "S"s

[What Happened to the Letters?]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Apr 10 2006, 07:59 PM
dammmm tube that shits tight...u write daet right? post up those throws if you do lol...good job tho
no its really not...its good coloring but the letters are shit...its just boxes on top of other boxes...looks liek an attempt at daim to me...colored nicely adn failed miserably...but the guy who wrote it has nice simples nda throws

[flclnaruto1213]

thanks to everyone

[EatRichPeople]

Nice fetus...dope handstyle aswell.

http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/6163/leo0wf1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
any critz?

[Sli]

lookin good, nice lettering and color scheme

[flclnaruto1213]

ldvr thats so tight. the color is fire. dope handy, might have used a dif coloron the 3d but still veryhot

[Big-Inches]

dident relly take time on this so tell me wat u think

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/7955/image50sw.gif (http://imageshack.us)

[koper]

Originally posted by RollTRS@Apr 10 2006, 05:13 PM
You don&#39;t need to connect or link every letter, and you may want to go back and start a bit simpler.

As for me, I&#39;m thinking about switching names, and here was an off the cuff attempt at a throw for it.

http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/540/picture50vp.png

What&#39;da yall think?
Here&#39;s some Coder from Calgary, with Conz and Beast

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/2238/conzcoder7ha.jpg

http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/6821/conzbeastcode39ef.jpg

[djsupreeme]

Originally posted by Big&#045;Inches@Apr 10 2006, 10:28 PM
dident relly take time on this so tell me wat u think

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/7955/image50sw.gif (http://imageshack.us)
if you didnt spend time on it why post it :&#092;

[Big-Inches]

cus i dont relly keep any of my shit so just thought id post something

[Crucible]

Dag, a lot of you guys are really good. Fetus, the only thing I didn&#39;t like was that there was no hole in the e. LDVR, that shit was bangin&#39;, real nice job on the 3d.

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7613/crux0029hm.th.jpg (http://img97.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0029hm.jpg)

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/8346/crux0046va.th.jpg (http://img97.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0046va.jpg)

http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/4460/crux0054cx.th.jpg (http://img66.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0054cx.jpg)

Can anyone give me some crits for these? I tried to use the same letter style for all 3, the 3rd was just something I did in school today. What do you guys think I need to work on?

[sepha_one]

Originally posted by sepha_one@Apr 9 2006, 09:29 AM
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/d0a63a05.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/5d301ea9.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/e6349d0d.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/8144afeb.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/25a7a930.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/1f9f4b57.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/b1140380.jpg

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/c0f86fa3.jpg
(for a friend)

http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j286/sepha1/44c3645c.jpg

(in chronological order)
bump?

[EatRichPeople]

thanx sli and naruto, I agree about the 3d colour...didn&#39;t know what to go for so just picked something.

Really like the fourth from the bottom and the last one sepha.

[-AXM-]

this was a quickie i was trying a new style
i know the x looks like an h haha but whatever

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/04-11-06_0101.jpg

crits / advice?

[aoime]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Apr 10 2006, 07:53 PM
well since f18 droppedout and simpuhl just straight didnt reply. im posting the sketch i would have used for that battle here

http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/6066/sketcher2753we.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
flclnaruto > one thing i noticed that didnt look right was your lines in the 3d. i dont think they all should go in the same direction. they should be somewhat perpendicular from the actual letters and the outside outline of the 3d

AMX > it sort of looks like SBW to me. the M would look great if you took off the first top part of it...

[Karma]

Originally posted by &#045;AXM&#045;@Apr 11 2006, 12:18 AM
this was a quickie i was trying a new style
i know the x looks like an h haha but whatever

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/04-11-06_0101.jpg

crits / advice?
Thats mad tight, round out the front of that a so it goes with the other letters.

[AlmoSt]

Sepha, you have a bunch of super good styles&#33; like they all look real good&#33; Im jealous man, im stuck in a rut, idk wat to do, all my stuff lately sucks...not that it was ever good but i just need to get 1 good style find a word and stick to the 1 word, ive been changing a lot and its effin me over cuz then i have to learn all new letters...thanks for listening to me whine, or not....

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by Karma+Apr 11 2006, 01:16 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Karma @ Apr 11 2006, 01:16 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#045;AXM&#045;@Apr 11 2006, 12:18 AM
this was a quickie i was trying a new style
i know the x looks like an h haha but whatever

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/04-11-06_0101.jpg

crits / advice?
Thats mad tight, round out the front of that a so it goes with the other letters. [/b][/quote]
you should be working on them letters they are awful theres no style to them wat so eva i cant see what it says to
no beef given :)

[2KoS]

zepha....zehpr.... :huh: :blink: :unsure:

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by 2KoS@Apr 11 2006, 08:53 AM
zepha....zehpr.... :huh: :blink: :unsure:
is this implied at me ?
<_<

[uhhh]

Originally posted by Crucible@Apr 10 2006, 10:53 PM
Dag, a lot of you guys are really good. Fetus, the only thing I didn&#39;t like was that there was no hole in the e. LDVR, that shit was bangin&#39;, real nice job on the 3d.

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/7613/crux0029hm.th.jpg (http://img97.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0029hm.jpg)

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/8346/crux0046va.th.jpg (http://img97.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0046va.jpg)

http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/4460/crux0054cx.th.jpg (http://img66.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0054cx.jpg)

Can anyone give me some crits for these? I tried to use the same letter style for all 3, the 3rd was just something I did in school today. What do you guys think I need to work on?
my advice, try really simple letters, like THE basic letter and just try and make your lines even

[sabeSAHBEY]

an peice orid that i did a couple weeks ago please let me know how i can improvwe on anything not really finished but i just left it i added purple for a highlight(where the pencil mark is)
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/233769.jpg

[molotow_15]

the chariks ok.
you seriously dont know where you went wrong ?

[sabeSAHBEY]

no haha

[molotow_15]

fair enough...

[cord]

good stuff AXM

[molotow_15]

the last 2 things are shit

[cord]

aren&#39;t you subtle

[Seek139]

^^ dosent know hardcore is the same thing as emo

[rek]

no love for a rejakt huh?
this is the first time i tried to bend th eflow of my letters. do ya&#39;ll think longer words look better curved/slanted kinda like above or standard flat lying

- or the brotha ali "im gonna be alright you dont haveta be my friend tonight . . . .

[cord]

damn rek thats some good shit, as usual&#33;&#33;

seek stop kissing molotow&#39;s ass, obviously you&#39;ve never listened to hardcore or been to a show

[Seek139]

umm from a secound story window? ...listened to something along that line i laughed and told the person its emo

[rek]

almost - when im stuck and just spinning my wheells i like to grab all those notebooks full of 5 second sketches we have lying around and look at the letters, if that dont work look at them sideways and if yyouve got a good enough imagination you can make them into a different letter than they originally were and you can find some nice new styles

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by rek@Apr 11 2006, 10:56 AM
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6420/11313580ek.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

no love for a rejakt huh?
this is the first time i tried to bend th eflow of my letters. do ya&#39;ll think longer words look better curved/slanted kinda like above or standard flat lying

- did anyone check out that big balls song from ACDC? its not some crappy cock rock TNT shit

or the brotha ali "im gonna be alright you dont haveta be my friend tonight . . . .
very good :), it would look nice for a tattoo as well
but i dont think you should be posting here anymore
as your not a toy :D

[rek]

M to the E, C to the U, A to the mutha fuckin K homeboys

-- alright ill shut up and start on that enable, damn i need my roomate to wake up so i can bug out

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by rek@Apr 11 2006, 11:20 AM
M to the E, C to the U, A to the mutha fuckin K homeboys

-- alright ill shut up and start on that enable, damn i need my roomate to wake up so i can bug out
:blink:
lol

[westsida]

mecuak?

[molotow_15]

:D still dont know what that is

[2KoS]

Originally posted by molotow_15+Apr 11 2006, 08:56 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ Apr 11 2006, 08:56 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-2KoS@Apr 11 2006, 08:53 AM
zepha....zehpr.... :huh: :blink: :unsure:
is this implied at me ?
<_< [/b][/quote]
....

Dumb ass.

[Seek139]

http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/3343/onekshit8iu.th.jpg (http://img49.imageshack.us/my.php?image=onekshit8iu.jpg)
a abbreviation throw-up i&#39;ve been workin on for the last few days any body got ideas cause i&#39;m only like 2 days into developing a throw-up

[_Sic_]

^^^Looks ok, BK ?

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b371/Looney510/d2b4682a.jpg

[RollTRS]

Sweet. Everyone loves Cheech&#33;

How&#39;s this newer throw look, along with the slap I did?

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1369/picture75rv.png

[Seek139]

the bottom one is formin out

and no its not bk idk what B&#39;s look like 2 you but thats an O in everyone else i&#39;ve asked book

[toxus]

looks quite nice^^just maybe make it brighter and put some 3d on next time...
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060411/11/0/a/1/0a1028527d4528faa8017fdfa253cebc200604110_full.jpg
i know the outline is shit, i used a white board marker, but any comments?

[sabeSAHBEY]

hard to read colors are kind of off

[uhhh]

woooooorrd

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/4821/myhair4ap.th.png (http://img143.imageshack.us/my.php?image=myhair4ap.png)

[RollTRS]

Toxus, looks pretty good, I like it, as sabe said, the colors are a little off, but still looks good though I can&#39;t read it properly.

Here are two more new ones, the last one being on my blackbook cover.

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/5237/picture13go.png

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/3766/picture25tn.png

[Seek139]

toxus yeah the colors are off

and uhh wtf is with the hat thing?

heres something i worked up today beside&#39;s that throwie
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/1994/onekshit0039oq.th.jpg (http://img133.imageshack.us/my.php?image=onekshit0039oq.jpg)

[Karma]

^^ Word, RollTRS, its all about USD; Your stiff pisses me off for some reason, i see it and it makes me want to punch an infant.

[tubedisasters]

Originally posted by What Happened to the Letters?+Apr 10 2006, 08:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (What Happened to the Letters? @ Apr 10 2006, 08:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@Apr 10 2006, 07:59 PM
dammmm tube that shits tight...u write daet right? post up those throws if you do lol...good job tho
no its really not...its good coloring but the letters are shit...its just boxes on top of other boxes...looks liek an attempt at daim to me...colored nicely adn failed miserably...but the guy who wrote it has nice simples nda throws [/b][/quote]
thanks, those simples are kinda old though, and i have a new trow. im just kinda fooling around with some 3d, so its bound to suck for a little while.

[RollTRS]

Originally posted by Karma@Apr 11 2006, 03:48 PM
^^ Word, RollTRS, its all about USD; Your stiff pisses me off for some reason, i see it and it makes me want to punch an infant.
My stuff make you want to punch and infant? Why?

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/7021/picture0019ew.jpg

New charac.

Crits? Comments?

[Karma]

Originally posted by RollTRS+Apr 11 2006, 04:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (RollTRS @ Apr 11 2006, 04:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Karma@Apr 11 2006, 03:48 PM
^^ Word, RollTRS, its all about USD; Your stiff pisses me off for some reason, i see it and it makes me want to punch an infant.
My stuff make you want to punch and infant? Why? [/b][/quote]
Word, ahah i dont really know why, work on the letter forming a bit. I think thats what it is. Try and use colors to your advantage a little more. I think thats what it is, you have the talent but you arent using it.

[RollTRS]

Ok. Letter structure is an ongoing process for me, so I&#39;ll continue towards eliminating infant punching as a whole.

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by RollTRS@Apr 11 2006, 03:40 PM
Toxus, looks pretty good, I like it, as sabe said, the colors are a little off, but still looks good though I can&#39;t read it properly.

Here are two more new ones, the last one being on my blackbook cover.

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/5237/picture13go.png

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/3766/picture25tn.png
you intrested in doing a sticker trade? im making a sticker book of peoples stickers so hit me back with a pm ..

[TAO]

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/5548/phto00013fk.th.jpg (http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image=phto00013fk.jpg)

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/963/phto00062ms.th.jpg (http://img459.imageshack.us/my.php?image=phto00062ms.jpg)

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5484/cimg18730kn.th.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cimg18730kn.jpg)

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4875/cimg18701et.th.jpg (http://img140.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cimg18701et.jpg)

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/8769/cimg18726lg.th.jpg (http://img224.imageshack.us/my.php?image=cimg18726lg.jpg)

[RollTRS]

I like the 3rd/4th one, other than that, keep it simple and work on letter structure.

[ceroX24X]

so yeah i tried adding new things but fucked up the coloring really bad. thats what i get for trying to get ahead of myself. but can i get some advice on just the letters?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0309.jpg

[Tonkaha!!1!]

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/6097/dscn35263gx.jpg

Eh, first time putting pick up here so ha, blast the fuck out of it, and i know the d is messed up.

[RollTRS]

Cero, I really like that piece, as well as the coloring. Your structure looks pretty good there too, I had no trouble reading it. Keep up the good work&#33;

Tonkaha, good on you for starting simple. Just look through the big boy BB thread, and get some ideas, and sketch sketch sketch&#33;

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Tonkaha&#33;&#33;1&#33;@Apr 11 2006, 04:57 PM
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/6097/dscn35263gx.jpg

Eh, first time putting pick up here so ha, blast the fuck out of it, and i know the d is messed up.
Tonk is my nukka

[madsencarl]

http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/963/phto00062ms.jpg

please, please do noot put that shit up anywhere near my hood. please. no offence.

[sabeSAHBEY]

Originally posted by sabeSAHBEY@Apr 11 2006, 09:48 AM
an peice orid that i did a couple weeks ago please let me know how i can improvwe on anything not really finished but i just left it i added purple for a highlight(where the pencil mark is)
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/233769.jpg
can u give me some suggestions how to imrove please

[Tonkaha!!1!]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Apr 11 2006, 05:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Apr 11 2006, 05:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Apr 11 2006, 04:57 PM

Tonk is my nukka [/b]
<!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Apr 11 2006, 04:57 PM
[/quote]
Tonk is my nukka

[Z FUSE]

my new throw sketch. the pointed tops style i&#39;ve seen, and i love how they look so i wanted to see if could write my name good. i&#39;ll make the f round on the edge, and increase the bubble size of the e but any other comments?
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4980/thrownew0rs.jpg

[HeIsT422]

Originally posted by ceroX24X@Apr 11 2006, 04:53 PM
so yeah i tried adding new things but fucked up the coloring really bad. thats what i get for trying to get ahead of myself. but can i get some advice on just the letters?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0309.jpg
nice piece man, really feelin it, keep it up

[CHEN[Ken]]

Tips,Crits,Any Thing Please

http://i1.tinypic.com/v7ecg3.jpg

[Z FUSE]

the n looks like an H a lil.

[AlmoSt]

Ya, ChenKen, make the N a lower case, just take off the upper right add on and it will b good, or make it more defined

[505 artist]

Originally posted by ceroX24X@Apr 11 2006, 04:53 PM
so yeah i tried adding new things but fucked up the coloring really bad. thats what i get for trying to get ahead of myself. but can i get some advice on just the letters?

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_0309.jpg
the only thing would be that arrow in the bottom cus the picec had no arrows so why u put that for?"

and u did not fuk up that color skeme B)

[+HyBriD+]

nice cero

[Seek139]

Originally posted by Seek139@Apr 11 2006, 03:42 PM
toxus yeah the colors are off

and uhh wtf is with the hat thing?

heres something i worked up today beside&#39;s that throwie
http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/1994/onekshit0039oq.th.jpg (http://img133.imageshack.us/my.php?image=onekshit0039oq.jpg)
bump for critz...

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Apr 11 2006, 04:16 PM
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/7021/picture0019ew.jpg

New charac.

Crits? Comments?
Just a comment, thats all i ask.

Cmon

[sabeSAHBEY]

^ i like it but the needle is not straight and is thin everything else seems pretty good

decent karik

[Seek139]

i like but clean it up

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by AlmoSt@Apr 11 2006, 09:11 PM
Ya, ChenKen, make the N a lower case, just take off the upper right add on and it will b good, or make it more defined
Thanks For The Tip Ill work on it any other TIPS,CRITS?

http://i1.tinypic.com/v7ecg3.jpg

[phont]

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/1638/reyk8oh.jpg
just something really simple
any advice?

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by AlmoSt@Apr 11 2006, 09:11 PM
Ya, ChenKen, make the N a lower case, just take off the upper right add on and it will b good, or make it more defined
Thanks For The Tip Ill work on it any other TIPS,CRITS?

http://i1.tinypic.com/v7ecg3.jpg

[Apoc]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/P4110019.jpg

operation IRAQI&#33; (freedom)

[AlmoSt]

Apoc, good stuff man, did u use paint on that? like actualy dick blick art type paint? lol, u can c through the white, or maybe it is a paint marker, either way, that looks super fresh for a basic style&#33; You own me man...


the toy status leaves me able to still do gay stuff like this, yea its about as low as a toy can go, but i had to try it&#33; uk, its like shrooms or sumthin, if u dont try it once ull always wonder wat its like&#33;&#33;&#33; gay wildstyle

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P1010832.jpg

[AoAssis]

just cuz you HAD to try wild style doesnt mean you HAD to post it

[AlmoSt]

ya, good point, im a fag, but its cool, i already kno that :D

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by SEROKID@Jun 15 2005, 11:30 AM
http://img166.echo.cx/img166/7325/seroekid22228dn.png :D

i tryd....but i suck
This is the best ive seen by you, i guess from backkkk in the dayy and gerk, if you comment on this for suckin up to sero, i just <3 his style a fuckton

[AoAssis]

i dont like the R and the O much the e and s are ok but still work on em, but ya best i seen from you man.

[Z FUSE]

CHEN[Ken] Posted on Apr 11 2006, 09:57 PM
QUOTE (AlmoSt @ Apr 11 2006, 09:11 PM)
Ya, ChenKen, make the N a lower case, just take off the upper right add on and it will b good, or make it more defined


Thanks For The Tip Ill work on it any other TIPS,CRITS?




don&#39;t bump ur shit TWICE on the same page&#33; i learned the hard way from aoassis^

[AoAssis]

and look what it brought you, now you dont do it and you are even teaching others. ;)

[Z FUSE]

yup. and still people ignore the shit i post. like my sketch of new throw a couple o pages back. :angry:

[Rend]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01498.jpg

which of the two throws is better?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01497.jpg

[+HyBriD+]

nice rend im always feelin yo stuff

[Big-Inches]

rend i like the top throw better
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/7049/fs6dv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
tell me wat u think

[DynamiteBoy]

work on it more. 3D is ok i guess but try simpler letters first

[Stewe]

heres some of my shit..

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00422.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00434.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00439.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00457.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00407.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00411.jpg
last one has some characs and SHITTY LETTERS from last year..

[weldo]

healthy critisizum please
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/6124/cci000078vx.png (http://imageshack.us)

[ehh...!?!]

wat does it say?

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by Z FUSE@Apr 11 2006, 11:15 PM

CHEN[Ken] Posted on Apr 11 2006, 09:57 PM
Â* QUOTE (AlmoSt @ Apr 11 2006, 09:11 PM)
Ya, ChenKen, make the N a lower case, just take off the upper right add on and it will b good, or make it more definedÂ*


Thanks For The Tip Ill work on it any other TIPS,CRITS?




don&#39;t bump ur shit TWICE on the same page&#33; i learned the hard way from aoassis^
yepp but last time i didnt do it i just said the page someone was like you should just repost it so yeahh....

[xDISMALx]

rend i like the top 1 better


the bottom D kinda looks like a b

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by CHEN[Ken]+Apr 12 2006, 05:37 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (CHEN[Ken] @ Apr 12 2006, 05:37 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Z FUSE@Apr 11 2006, 11:15 PM

CHEN[Ken] Posted on Apr 11 2006, 09:57 PM
Â* QUOTE (AlmoSt @ Apr 11 2006, 09:11 PM)
Ya, ChenKen, make the N a lower case, just take off the upper right add on and it will b good, or make it more definedÂ*


Thanks For The Tip Ill work on it any other TIPS,CRITS?




don&#39;t bump ur shit TWICE on the same page&#33; i learned the hard way from aoassis^
yepp but last time i didnt do it i just said the page someone was like you should just repost it so yeahh.... [/b][/quote]
Oh Wait Sorry I Didnt Realize They Were On The Same Page :(

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by Stewe@Apr 12 2006, 12:50 AM
heres some of my shit..

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00422.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00434.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00439.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00457.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00407.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00411.jpg
last one has some characs and SHITTY LETTERS from last year..
work on the letters..
and the color schemes..

nice can charik

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by CHEN[Ken]+Apr 12 2006, 05:37 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (CHEN[Ken] @ Apr 12 2006, 05:37 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Z FUSE@Apr 11 2006, 11:15 PM

CHEN[Ken] Posted on Apr 11 2006, 09:57 PM
Â* QUOTE (AlmoSt @ Apr 11 2006, 09:11 PM)
Ya, ChenKen, make the N a lower case, just take off the upper right add on and it will b good, or make it more definedÂ*


Thanks For The Tip Ill work on it any other TIPS,CRITS?




don&#39;t bump ur shit TWICE on the same page&#33; i learned the hard way from aoassis^
yepp but last time i didnt do it i just said the page someone was like you should just repost it so yeahh.... [/b][/quote]
Oh Wait Sorry I Didnt Realize They Were On The Same Page :(

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by weldo@Apr 12 2006, 03:33 AM
healthy critisizum please
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/6124/cci000078vx.png (http://imageshack.us)
are these fresh letters ?

[weldo]

fresh as pie

[molotow_15]

nice :D
its good keep working on it, could turn into killer stuff

[aren1]

hey guys i did a sketch for a battle... the rules wher only black and white.. so : (says same)
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/8314/same8cv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

construtive criticism pls...

[RollTRS]

I like it a lot, I&#39;d simplify some of your extensions and such, but overall, I really dig.

Here&#39;s something I sketched up an hour or so ago. Crits?

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/9756/04120612230rz.jpg

Here&#39;s a closer pic of the actual lettering.

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/3631/04120611386qy.jpg

[aren1]

hey tnx i like urs to colors are good but a lil work on letters to perfect the style wont hurt :)

[molotow_15]

im just not liking the charik

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by Rend@Apr 11 2006, 11:48 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01498.jpg

which of the two throws is better?
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01497.jpg
bump.

work on your D&#39;s...theydont look like D&#39;s...

[molotow_15]

work on the second letter too........

[hitemup101]

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/fcd29ebb.jpg[/IMG] this is what i was suppsoe to battle bugs with but i dunno if im able to so yea any critz?

[molotow_15]

get your html tags wright.......................

[hitemup101]

get my what right?

[aeon]

Originally posted by AoAssis@Apr 10 2006, 07:05 PM



http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/6948/daet2vw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


thats fckin rude mate

and aren, im feelin that. that middle arrow ain&#39;t really necessary tho, as is the one on the upper left. also i&#39;d lose those fragment over the . other n that it&#39;s real noice...

[molotow_15]

html tags for your picture..
im liking that throwup but i dont see what rude about it
unless it was some kind of rhetorical question..
if so im an idiot oww yer i am anyway :)

[aeon]

rude=sick/ill/dope/of the hook/good. getme?

[sabeSAHBEY]

i like the daet throw aeon but the e and t are a lil big and the bottom of the e is to thin the bottom right of the a would prolly look better if it was straight lines rather than curved good shit other than those minor things

[sabeSAHBEY]

aren1 sketch is ok letters are a lil to think compared to the s and some of the arrows are a lil sketchy

[sabeSAHBEY]

Originally posted by sabeSAHBEY+Apr 11 2006, 07:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sabeSAHBEY @ Apr 11 2006, 07:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sabeSAHBEY@Apr 11 2006, 09:48 AM
an peice orid that i did a couple weeks ago please let me know how i can improvwe on anything not really finished but i just left it i added purple for a highlight(where the pencil mark is)
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/233769.jpg [/b][/quote]
..

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j80/blowmestupid/Voodoo.jpg


I&#39;m thinkin about adding this to the Character Battle. Not completley done....but pretty much finished. a few more touches.

Any crits?

[near]

piece...hard time keepin symmetry (says &#39;NEAR&#39; , the &#39;R&#39; is backwards)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/near_piece.jpg

[joker00]

^i dont like that middle wit that heart lookin thing it looks liek there is an "I" in it and makes it look like neiar and connect the r or make it look closer just my 2 cents

[sabeSAHBEY]

cheez i like it just touch it up and it will be good

near i like the symetry but the letters kinda suck the e is good and the colors are good if u changed the leter style i think it would be better

[melo]

all of you should say thanks to aaosis, if it wasnt for that fool being anywhere.. u guys wouldn&#39;t have a clue what to do, and im the first

thanks fool :ph34r:

[Akshun]

Originally posted by aren1@Apr 12 2006, 12:09 PM
hey guys i did a sketch for a battle... the rules wher only black and white.. so : (says same)
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/8314/same8cv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

construtive criticism pls...
i think you need to work on your A, M, E but the s is sick as hell..i think you should add more structure to your other letters

[Rend]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/2throw.jpg

what u think of this new throw?

[Z FUSE]

that looks pretty good. i like throws w/ letters closer together, but then on urs you wouldn&#39;t be able to see the shadow so its ok.

any tips for my throw?
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3809/bestnewthrow3or.jpg

[Hater-AiD~>]

i have a new name now..so im starting from basics to find a style for it
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/4810/dscf12660ov.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
constructive crits

[Rend]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01499.jpg

[Ironik]

Did this one in geometry and i was trying to get that comik book super hero thing going on.

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/9494/whatpig0126fl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and heres another one involving the pig character i used highlighters.

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/6981/whatpig0107yw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think?

[ehh...!?!]

ur i looked like a j at first...

[aren1]

Originally posted by Akshun+Apr 12 2006, 05:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Akshun @ Apr 12 2006, 05:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aren1@Apr 12 2006, 12:09 PM
hey guys i did a sketch for a battle... the rules wher only black and white.. so : (says same)
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/8314/same8cv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

construtive criticism pls...
i think you need to work on your A, M, E but the s is sick as hell..i think you should add more structure to your other letters [/b][/quote]
ok :) same isnt quite my word b(my tag is aren) ya i know ive coden done better with the e... i hate the m and the a..hmm work on it but i got a depression on a my tag starts with and it isnt a good startletter(or it is) whos up 4 a exchange?

[Rend]

feedback on my throws pleassseee.

[Rend]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/2throw.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01499.jpg

[Hater-AiD~>]

nice throws rend
im not a fan of that sytle of "e" but it looks cool

heres my throwie
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/5779/dscf12728gh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dont mind all the scribble behind my handstyle..its just because i messed up on the shadow and tried to cover it up

[comeback?]

Originally posted by Rend@Apr 12 2006, 10:54 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/2throw.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01499.jpg
Nice shit man, u are comin along really quick...

the first black and white sketch has a sick "E" the n is pretty good in there too, its just not the same style

if i didn&#39;t know that was an R at the beginning... well.. yea, i dun think i would realize.. but it definitely looks fresh.. as i said, the first black and white is nice, if i were you i would alter that "R" i&#39;m just not sure how exactly

[Ume]

rends getting hooooot. :lol:


something for that weekly toy battle..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006284.jpg
didn&#39;t come out that great..might do another and just scrap this one, i dont know yet.

[Z FUSE]

please someone give me some feedback&#33; posted before, no one replied.
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/3809/bestnewthrow3or.jpg

[AoAssis]

i cant even read it, does it say duse?

[Z FUSE]

fuse. the leg of the F is short.

[N:Craze]

http://i2.tinypic.com/vdfukl.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/vdfuvr.jpg

let me know.

[beefgerky]

ur balls.


and fuse man, i like it....mad good for a throw...just chane the e, take out that top line, leave the dot. but besides that line, paint it&#33; if u need chill spots PM me.

edit: rend your first R looks like an R, but otherwise, good shit.

[westsida]

i used to write craze....better than that.no beef,i moved on to other names

[Akshun]

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 12 2006, 11:05 PM
nice throws rend
im not a fan of that sytle of "e" but it looks cool

heres my throwie
http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/5779/dscf12728gh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dont mind all the scribble behind my handstyle..its just because i messed up on the shadow and tried to cover it up
good job goin simple work on the shadow and try not to make your letters come to a point at the top it looks badd..but i see potential

[Akshun]

Originally posted by N:Craze@Apr 13 2006, 12:43 AM
http://i2.tinypic.com/vdfukl.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/vdfuvr.jpg

let me know.
this shit is weak...no beef just go simple i know people say that all the time but its true go simple and you will get letter structure once you got a good letter structure your own style should come outt that..just go simple loose the arrows and dont connect your letters like you did in the first one

[Akshun]

Originally posted by Ume@Apr 12 2006, 11:34 PM
rends getting hooooot. :lol:


something for that weekly toy battle..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006284.jpg
didn&#39;t come out that great..might do another and just scrap this one, i dont know yet.
yo im really feelin this nice and simple nice simple fill and nice lil forcefield keep sketchin and youll get better but i think its dope

[Mse]

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9643562/139130832.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9643562/139130831.jpg
skool shizzle

[Akshun]

work on letter structure

[Mse]

what letter exactly do you have a problem with
if you dont mind

[Akshun]

all of em they just dont have good structure..no beef just sayin wat i htink or maybe it was your came cuz it just looks shaky..but i saw some of your other stuff and it looks better than that

[Mse]

i rushed the letters but took my time on the char
ok thanks for your opinion

[Feliks]

Originally posted by Mse@Apr 13 2006, 08:28 AM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9643562/139130832.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9643562/139130831.jpg
skool shizzle
The &#39;R&#39; needs to look liek teh rest of the letters, the second leg is too different, change it all or change the &#39;R&#39;. But I like it...
Weak compared to yoru other stuff, but hey, you rushed.
Don&#39;t rush it, you make yourself look bad ;)

[Mse]

what about the character?

[Feliks]

I hate him, remidns me too much of spongebob square pants show, and that little tic who&#39;s always tryignt o get eh secret ingredient. STUPID FUCKING GAY-ASS SHOW&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Seti]

quik pencil sketch sayin insane..the s goes behind the in...crits, bad pic soz
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insane1.jpg

[SEROKID]

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/6532/skatevids0310kl.jpg

[BBoy_ErbN]

http://my.purerave.com/gallery/p/2299955.jpg

haha,

first piece ever

and far too many arrows.

Loveit.

[vare_187uk]

Originally posted by Feliks+Apr 13 2006, 09:05 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Feliks @ Apr 13 2006, 09:05 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Mse@Apr 13 2006, 08:28 AM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9643562/139130832.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9643562/139130831.jpg
skool shizzle
The &#39;R&#39; needs to look liek teh rest of the letters, the second leg is too different, change it all or change the &#39;R&#39;. But I like it...
Weak compared to yoru other stuff, but hey, you rushed.
Don&#39;t rush it, you make yourself look bad ;) [/b][/quote]
sort the letter out so there same witdh and that character is a bite of the EYES character he does near enuff the same thing

seti nice totem tryout its all about biting at this stage looking not bad

sero not bad man keep goin define your letters more there too covered by all the bleedin 3d it looks like

bboy get to basics no colour fills just pencil outlines for you

simple letters by writing the letter on the page and then lightly outlining round it
or even better mr wiggles.com get some proportion down and stuff

look around for simple letters and take what u can from them
;)

[Mse]

not even gonna react
cept to say that letters i might have bitten a long time ago
but characters never, go fuck yourself with your baseless accusations
and if you dont believe me take a look at all my other characters
whatever thanks for commenting

[vare_187uk]

COME BRING THE NOISE &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :D :D :lol:

[Mse]

yeah ok

[Seti]

VVVVVWWWOOOSHH...ther u go vare..lol
any wayz i no wat u meen by it bein a bit totem but i draw wit no solid material infront of me, i no u didnt meen bad but I AINT NO BITE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
lol

[Seti]

another quik straight to ink
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image005.jpg

[Feliks]

this is for an exchange battle that me gesus and kasem were supposed to do but kasem is a procrastinating bastard :lol:
http://www.5images.com/uploads/2179c0720c.jpg (http://www.5images.com)



And seti, good 3-D I think you need to make it look sharper though.

[sabeSAHBEY]

i like the waxy feel and the mix of colors is good kinda makes it 3d

[Seti]

fuckin hell felix that piece is fuckin meltin hot..the only ting thats rong wit it is the black outline above the dripps...
an the reason that the pics so blurry is cuz the sketch is only bout 5cm across

[Feliks]

ahh okay.
And the outline above the drips is that way because it&#39;s going behind the letters. Belive me I didn&#39;t know anyother way to do it :(

[Seti]

fair playz its phat, jus thort id mention..lol..ur much further than me in the colour department i still aint got my fades workin.
heres an old one sez saber....wat i used to write

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image006.jpg

[Feliks]

At least you got your 3-D down&#33;&#33;
As for colouring, the letters were with pencil crayon, I suggest you start there.
TIP: always, Always, ALWAYS start with the lighter colour.

[Seti]

cheers..i got the theory its jus the practice..lol
i realy cant be asked i mite jus carry on doin it cell shaded
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insane3.jpg

[tubedisasters]

still playing around with some 3d
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/Picture082.jpg

it says daer, the simple says damn

[Feliks]

I see Daer. and DAMN, nice marker shading. Seti, see that?

[Mse]

that simple is dope but the a on daer is kinda iffy

[Seti]

thats fuckin fresh...clicked save image as, for latter inspection..lol

[cord]

seti i really like your style

[tubedisasters]

Originally posted by Mse@Apr 13 2006, 02:41 PM
that simple is dope but the a on daer is kinda iffy
thanks, maybe ill try a more simple 3d style and see how it plays out

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Apr 12 2006, 04:16 PM
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j80/blowmestupid/Voodoo.jpg


I&#39;m thinkin about adding this to the Character Battle. Not completley done....but pretty much finished. a few more touches.


bump.

Crits please...

[Seti]

u shld have the strings in his mouth tied to rings in his lips itd look phat..

[Feliks]

Remember to put all the requirements int here, like a shoutout to BS, and 2 handstyles I think it was? Go check if you are planning on entering it as your submission.

[backtoyou]

new piece needs to be finished give coments please
[img=http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/892/pict00165ym.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

[backtoyou]

sry bout thathttp://img146.imageshack.us/img146/568/pict00174gi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Feliks]

get rid of that extension on the &#39;S&#39;, the C needs to be thinner and closer to the &#39;I&#39;. I don&#39;t like the little extension you got on the bottom of the &#39;C&#39; either. Ditch it.
Atics?

[backtoyou]

yah

[backtoyou]

yah i agree about the c but the place im going to paint will look good with the extention on the s

[Sluts_r_us]

hey tube that sketch is tight&#33; same to you seti..

[Feliks]

http://img325.imageshack.us/img325/2497/img00085oe.jpg

[Sprae]

dude feliks holy shit ur improving fast... whats ur secret?

[Apoc]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/512e219b.jpg

followed up

[DynamiteBoy]

feliks, shits crazy i&#39;m really feelin&#39; the stars

[joker00]

feliks i like it but i dont liek the f and the l so change them a bit and otha then that thats hot

[Rend]

my frend said this styles looks like saggy tits? is it any good?

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/34.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/35.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/36.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/37.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/40.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/41.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/55.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/58.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/63.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/DSC01362.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e321/FluentKrylon2/66.jpg

[joker00]

Originally posted by Seti@Apr 13 2006, 01:43 PM
cheers..i got the theory its jus the practice..lol
i realy cant be asked i mite jus carry on doin it cell shaded
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insane3.jpg
that is sexy wut point perspective is that i just cant get it rite i fucked around wit 3 but it came out like cow shit

[tea dee sea]

Originally posted by Rend@Apr 13 2006, 08:01 PM
my frend said this styles looks like saggy tits? is it any good?
yea man it looks good

[Apoc]

Originally posted by Apoc@Apr 13 2006, 07:10 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/512e219b.jpg

followed up
bizump

[tubedisasters]

Originally posted by Feliks@Apr 13 2006, 06:03 PM
http://img325.imageshack.us/img325/2497/img00085oe.jpg
dude, the coloring is sick, but sketch itself really isnt that good. spend more time on the letters than on the coloring

[joker00]

Originally posted by joker00+Apr 13 2006, 08:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (joker00 @ Apr 13 2006, 08:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Seti@Apr 13 2006, 01:43 PM
cheers..i got the theory its jus the practice..lol
i realy cant be asked i mite jus carry on doin it cell shaded
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insane3.jpg
that is sexy wut point perspective is that i just cant get it rite i fucked around wit 3 but it came out like cow shit [/b][/quote]
any 1 wanna help me out?

[What Happened to the Letters?]

Originally posted by Rend@Apr 13 2006, 09:01 PM
my frend said this styles looks like saggy tits? is it any good?

well unless your friends an asshoel hes fucking weird...cause saggy tits are gross as hell

and joker, yes its 3 point...you just gotta understand simpler 3ds first just lei kall otehr styles, it takes practice and cna be hard

[Feliks]

Originally posted by Sprae@Apr 13 2006, 07:29 PM
dude feliks holy shit ur improving fast... whats ur secret?
Sketch like a mad whore.
Sketch sketch sketch X 2480673589764568.