Blackbooks

[ATso]

did this thismorning. crits? the colors look a little dirty in this pic but their actually bright16159

[Rin5e]

Idea I've been toying with.
http://i53.tinypic.com/mm99n5.jpg
http://i55.tinypic.com/2il1shw.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/34ni253.jpg
(Stitches one is not in the proper res, I'm too lazy to fix it atm.)

No one visits the sticker thread, look for crits.

[NosE2]

Yo Atso where at in Ohio do you live

[Serbr]

Hahaha @rehz we were gonna see who actually noticed and only two people have, but the character looks like the sorta guy who might have fucked up limbs,
and i only write ease legaly, cos i get commisioned work in adelaide, i write something else illegally

[Norfsuthr]

^I guess the stitched one looks best, but the middle finger looks like it's not connected to the rest of the hand or something. If its extended like the finger it's stitched to put it behind the finger on it's left.

Reach, in the top one the C is too hidden, the 3d doesnt look good over letters.

Did this last night, just starting piecing really. More concerned with letter structure crits as I was high and couldn't be bothered to color it cleanly.
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/1360/newyf.jpg (http://img228.imageshack.us/i/newyf.jpg/)

[extinct]

you from vancity or are you reppin van

[Norfsuthr]

Jan/uary, I'm in the south east.

[Rehz]

Rin5e, I think the one with the rope is cool, but maybe if you added another rope it might look better. But then again I don't know anything about stickers :/
And ATso, work on your lettering. Alot. Go simple. But if you just can't get yourself to go simple, then at least take out those spikey things around your force field. Oh and don't try to make shines with silver sharpies (bottom right). Your Handie needs hella work too. At least you're in the right thread though lol

[ATso]

rin5 thats actually a pretty sweet idea... if you could could u tell me how you print these onto the postal labels cuz im geting sick of painting each one indevidually
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[Cobra716]

http://i51.tinypic.com/rrp3k8.jpg

[Female]

the bottom of the N is kinda weird. :/

[NosE2]

Almost all of the bars are uneven, T is for terrible, the diagonal bar on the N needs to connect to the bottom of the right bar, and the E is bubbly and thick, whereas the rest of the letters are more skinny.

[ATso]

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bump for crits.. only got one. im working with decos i racked from michaels... there really hard to do shadows with so thats why the bottom of the letters are like that... the character is a busted finger.

[ATso]

yea cobra uneven bars is big. . . and id love to see someone do an E that wasnt in that 3 style... i dont know just opinion i guess... the E just shouldnt be that style if it was supposed to go with the rest of the word

[NosE2]

Atso where do you live in ohio

[kringe]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5206/5340933803_fa856c3a07_z.jpg
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5287/5337870268_c7759fba36_z.jpg
Pen freebie exchange...E is fucked...
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5009/5337251041_90279f2f30_z.jpg
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5290/5337248073_10bba0010c_z.jpg

[ATso]

nose i posted it in your comments on your page but either way in cle. and nice buttery tre ur busting in your picture. also could u crit my pic cuz i know ur straight

[NosE2]

word....i live between columbus and datyon...crits....do simples

[Norfsuthr]

eon- on those capital simps I'd make the N more narrow, or maybe the E fatter. Idk. Also the lowercase e has some inconsistent line widths that dont look intentional. I like the orange one tho.

Still need some crits on the shit I posted earlier, anyone?

[NosE2]

If that's a backwards E and a R, I'm diggin the R. i cant really tell what the last letter is

[Norfsuthr]

its 3RD, I had some trouble gettin the D to go with it...

[I_FLOAT]

Eons im diggin that 3rd one. should go over the sketched outline with a fatter black marker to clean it up a bit
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/sketch%20book/IMG_0294.jpg close to being finished

Any Crits???

[NosE2]

I like the color scheme....just work on that structure a little bit. Lose that fake glow, if you're going to do a glow, use a color.

[trashpickaflash]

http://i55.tinypic.com/30mpz78.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/16iv5nl.jpg

[Rin5e]

rin5 thats actually a pretty sweet idea... if you could could u tell me how you print these onto the postal labels cuz im geting sick of painting each one indevidually
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I'll print them on just blank stickers.

[swey]

Trying to check out which E i prefer and I have no idea what to do with my Ws. Fairly satisfied with my S and Y, though. Any opinions / crits?

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[Rehz]

If somebody doesn't tell me where I can get those white pens or markers that people use for shines and stuff, I just might throw myself in front of a train. Where to get em? Can I order em? What are they even called?

[SicK-]

i use a white deco and just switch the nib around

[I_FLOAT]

i use a white out pen.

[Female]

Swey the 2nd e looks more like a L , probably only cause i do my L's like that.
and the W is too big in the first pic

[Flawless Victory]

^I guess the stitched one looks best, but the middle finger looks like it's not connected to the rest of the hand or something. If its extended like the finger it's stitched to put it behind the finger on it's left.

Reach, in the top one the C is too hidden, the 3d doesnt look good over letters.

Did this last night, just starting piecing really. More concerned with letter structure crits as I was high and couldn't be bothered to color it cleanly.
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/1360/newyf.jpg (http://img228.imageshack.us/i/newyf.jpg/)


http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/3184/98384559.jpg


For the 3, try making the indent in the middle more defined, so it doesn't get confused for a backwards E

And try and keep the right side of Ds straight through the middle, otherwise they end up looking like Os or some shit.

[bomber boy]

just got into graf heres a few sketches and fillers

[NosE2]

Those are all reposts from the last page...get the fuck outta here..

[TastyMcNasty]

ummm whats the word im thinking of... oh thats right SIMPLE!!!!!!!!!1!1!!!

[bomber boy]

Those are all reposts from the last page...get the fuck outta here..

ye i know i asked if i was good enough to post in their people said no so im posting in hear and i know there simple but isnt the point of being a toy you start of simple and get better the more u practise

[Rehz]

No, Bomber Boy, Tasty wasn't saying that they ARE simple. He was saying for you to GO simple. If you think that your posts were simple, well, we've got some work to do. But just keep sketchin. Look at a LOT of graff pictures, and work on bars before you even try to do anything else.

[soej]

What do you mean by bars bro?

[Gatsoi]

Just some shit
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/3-1.jpg

[bomber boy]

ah rigth my mistake ye ill take that into consideration when im sketching again

[Female]

Bomber if you want me i can show you what simple is.

[bomber boy]

Bomber if you want me i can show you what simple is.

ye sure itll be cool to see some elses style

[Female]

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like this is simple, not feeling my bars too much, and the right of the R i was making a O.

[bomber boy]

wow ye that is simple ill give it a go and come back with one

[bomber boy]

k heres my simple lettering

[Cl4sh]

I'd say go simpler. It should look like Keyboard letters
Like this: BBOY

[bomber boy]

o right then like just build onto them later

[Female]

theres alot of negative space between the o and y, and your letters arent the same size.

[bomber boy]

well i dont know i suck at simple letters, inlees i can put a little style in i get board and it turns out shit as u can c

[Task977]

can you print letters on paper? do that but bigger and in bars

[Female]

i do too but i see it as if i keep doing these simples, later on i'll get better and get to the real fun

[ian]

not really gonna echo everyone else, and other than bomber the only other things on this page is NEWT, the throwie is pretty good, although idk what that little bit sticking out of the right of the E is, i can see what youre tryin to do with that simp, but i feel like the thin parts are too thin and its all real sloppy, doesnt look good IMO. the handstyles nothin special, i like the t in the right side one, although the left one looks to be all caps except the n and the right looks to be all lowercase except the n, how bout you swap those n's to keep it the same.

piece i did for the newest battle, help me out here people, still fresh and still learnin

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/3892/imag0258r.jpg

[ribcage]

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^lookin pretty gay, aint gonna finish

[ian]

not really gonna echo everyone else, and other than bomber the only other things on this page is newt, the throwie is pretty good, although idk what that little bit sticking out of the right of the e is, i can see what youre tryin to do with that simp, but i feel like the thin parts are too thin and its all real sloppy, doesnt look good imo. The handstyles nothin special, i like the t in the right side one, although the left one looks to be all caps except the n and the right looks to be all lowercase except the n, how bout you swap those n's to keep it the same.

Piece i did for the newest battle, help me out here people, still fresh and still learnin

http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/3892/imag0258r.jpg

bottom page bump!

[Female]

@reach i think you should finish it, and have the honey dripping off the top of the C and the the left top bar of the H.

[ribcage]

^ that was the original plan, was boutta do it but concept seems weak now

[soej]

Basic block style. Critics?

[Norfsuthr]

^soej, is that finished? jw because you missed a lot of 3d. the O is a bit thin and E and J are a little to crooked, they overlap more than the other letters and it looks out of place. Good otherwise, except the star thing.

[soej]

To be honest, I always fuck up my 3d lol. I can never seem to do it right.

[ian]

To be honest, I always fuck up my 3d lol. I can never seem to do it right.

http://www.cutnspray.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=34&t=5263

check out step 8, should help you out.

how come im the only one who gives crits when i post, and yet im the only one who doesnt get any in return

[Serbr]

soej, you have just missed the inside of the letters really, all of the 3d is going in the right direction

[FuckTheFame]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5001/5351088936_9617791042.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5351088936/)

[Norfsuthr]

how come im the only one who gives crits when i post, and yet im the only one who doesnt get any in return

it happens sometimes...
The right part of the N should've been lower, level with the other letters. E should be thicker. Work on structure

[soej]

http://www.cutnspray.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=34&t=5263

check out step 8, should help you out.

how come im the only one who gives crits when i post, and yet im the only one who doesnt get any in return

thanks man, that deff helps.

[ian]

thanks man, that deff helps.

no problem dude



it happens sometimes...
The right part of the N should've been lower, level with the other letters. E should be thicker. Work on structure

thanks bro, i've been workin on structure, tried to tweak it a bit here, i still feel like its a lot better than my early shit lol

[Shell703]

crits.. besides the poor use of color

Fuck- simps

Soej- 3d needs work, there should be a gap in the middle section of the S, O's middle section should be filled etc. study perspective- letters are good, maybe a little too good... dont use a ruler, do it free hand

Ian- simps

Rib- there's no flow in your letters, A looks alright, I dont know if you bit it or not though, kindda looks like it cause all your letters are of a different graff style, not your own

[ribcage]

^say what? No flow? i guess your right. Bite? the fuck? get outta here w/ that shit, the only thing i bit on that was the shittyass pooh bear i drew, as for not my style i guess u only seen 1 thing ive posted cause pretty much all my shit look the same but whatever

^ o and sweet G bro, it shits on all my drawings...

ian-looks like u went backwards direction on that 1 cause of the inconsistent bar width, once you got consistent bars your letters will look better

[KnoxIn]

hey i haven't done any drawings in like a year, but i got some new sketch books today and im going to try to get back into it. so to start off anyone want to do a exchange i write MATR? heres some of my older stuff, 16276162771627816279

[ribcage]

id throw a dark colored outline on that first 1 w/ the gorilla, help letters pop

[bomber boy]

hey i haven't done any drawings in like a year, but i got some new sketch books today and im going to try to get back into it. so to start off anyone want to do a exchange i write MATR? heres some of my older stuff, 16276162771627816279

i realy like ur lettering man

[bomber boy]

ian, work on ur 3d uve got it drawn in on the top but the bottom of the o, s and e need to have it aswell

[NosE2]

Lol @ Shell

[I_FLOAT]

simple.
http://i122.photobucket.com/albums/o268/scotty2hotty78/sketch%20book/DSCF0637.jpg

[kringe]

That piece is almost sick Float. Cutting off the top and separating it doesn't really work for that word though. The O looks like a mix of an O and a U, and the L looks like a lowercase I mixed with an L. It's good with the S and E but not so much the L and O.
Besides that though, it's really nice. Throw a black halo on around the outline to thicken it up and it'll look clean.

[Female]

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ignore the letters, they're horrible im trying to learn how to do point 3D, which way would work best for these letters?

[FuckTheFame]

an inch directly to the right
then just follow the shape of the letter

l_FLOAT - that is serious man

[Female]

ok so like this? tell me if i missed a spot
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[Rin5e]

http://i51.tinypic.com/2m7dm6b.png

Still working on my hand, going to make stickers and stencils out of it.

[Female]

Sponge bob hand haha. looks good.

[FuckTheFame]

thats about right
but you dont always need a horizon point

[Female]

i know u said to the right so i assumed

[ian]

ian, work on ur 3d uve got it drawn in on the top but the bottom of the o, s and e need to have it aswell

vanishing point is in the center where the o and s meet, you cant see the bottom of those letters with that ;) may not be the best choice but its right. thanks anyway tho

[Female]

16293 ok is the 3D even?

[Cl4sh]

Check the middle of your C

[Female]

which is correct?
http://i51.tinypic.com/4ih8g2.jpg
http://i53.tinypic.com/2m4rjn5.jpg

[nERg_0Ne]

started writing not even a week ago shit sucks pretty hard any pointer on how to make it better?

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3664.jpg?t=1294967981

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3662.jpg?t=1294967981

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3663.jpg?t=1294967981

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSCF3661.jpg?t=1294967981

[Cl4sh]

started writing not even a week ago shit sucks pretty hard any pointer on how to make it better?

What's up with all the little dots? And the big one?
And that definitely doesn't look like an E to me.

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[nERg_0Ne]

the little dots idk why they're there haha but the big dot was a tag i fucked up so i colored over it

[Female]

the dots are probably from marker bleeding

[Rin5e]

started writing not even a week ago shit sucks pretty hard any pointer on how to make it better?

You have a long way to go if you've only been writing a week, I've been writing on and off for quite some years and I'm not even happy with my shit. Start simple and work your way up, you don't understand letter structure so the bends don't look good.

[Amends_Ego]

Let me sum that up for you. Go simple. its as easy as that.
Safe- I hate/love the first one. If the e was tweaked a little and the outline was a color that popped more than the green I think you'd have some fire.
Nerg- the first part is directed towrds you. Ever heard of new to graff thread?
Clash-Looks sloppy and forced. take your time on it and let style flow naturally.

[Rin5e]

Fucking around with some ideas.

http://i55.tinypic.com/2mpken7.jpg

[weedeater]

looks like the pope holding a pistol with a banana clip with his thumb.... i really dont know what youre getting at

[Rin5e]

It's an AK.

[ribcage]

quite pinner ak eh? u should defiently reposition the ak and make it bigger, make that ***** actually holding it

[Rin5e]

Yeah, I wasn't sure if I was going to continue working on it so I just threw it on and posted it here. You think it's worth fixing?

[ribcage]

i think the idea of the pope holding an ak is entertaining so yeah go for it. but i wouldnt come back here w/ another weak ass one like that, not offense

[Rin5e]

Yeah bro, it's that terrible.

:rolleyes:

[extinct]

the only good toys are the ones that come here... cause they can actually learn somethin... letter structure is slowly bein lost...

[Female]

yup that seems true.

[bomber boy]

vanishing point is in the center where the o and s meet, you cant see the bottom of those letters with that ;) may not be the best choice but its right. thanks anyway tho

o fair enoguh man ur peace not mine

[ian]

@rin5e, how do you go about makin shit like that? I've always wanted to do some stencil shit like that but i never know where to start. it looks like you made that on a comp, what program did you use?

[Rin5e]

@rin5e, how do you go about makin shit like that? I've always wanted to do some stencil shit like that but i never know where to start. it looks like you made that on a comp, what program did you use?

I use Photoshop for it. There are a couple ways to do it, I either draw my stencil scan it onto my computer then use the pentool to make the lines even. Or there is a technique that you can use to make it all on Photoshop, either works.

Shoot me a PM and I can help you out.

[bomber boy]

I use Photoshop for it. There are a couple ways to do it, I either draw my stencil scan it onto my computer then use the pentool to make the lines even. Or there is a technique that you can use to make it all on Photoshop, either works.

Shoot me a PM and I can help you out.
what material do u use for ur stencils cus ive used the back of cereal boxes but once u sprayed onto them when it dries big cut out sections curl up

[kringe]

Contrast all the way up for photoshop/gimp
and for the stencils, use stencil paper.

[Rin5e]

You can use transparents as well.

[ian]

http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/5730/imag0266w.jpg

Simple. I'm on my phone so i can't really give crits but yeah ill hit this up once I get back on my computer

[Cl4sh]

Went with a different approach
Thoughts?
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[Sbal]

clash concentrate on bar width more, the H looks wierd and the S comes off as a Z, which mite be intentional.

[kringe]

A backwards Z of course...which is an S.
:rolleyes:

Ian, getting better. Keep it up

[Shell703]

Notice how DAHM's letters all look like they belong with one another, your A and C look kinda similar and I guess could work
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your R and H have that similar hook at the end of the bars and could work with one another, but you mixed them up

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The E could work with the A and C but looks more stylized and fluid and might work better with a different style

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All the letters should look related, part of the same family

[Mippi]

I had a problem with my white marker on the purple one please ignore the spill. Crits?

[Female]

that 2nd one is awesome

[TastyMcNasty]

mipe- i wouldnt say that second one is completely "awesome" letters could use some work, but the colour scheme and the lightning effects are pre dope

[Phat 2]

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/hs033.snc6/166323_188964474463803_100000507545549_615228_7259 634_n.jpg

[ribcage]

@shell lol ahh my letters aint a family, they just drawn next to eachother. so u sayin i shoulda put hooks like on the r and h on all the shit and make all the legs look the same? I aint so into that, but if i go back to that 1 ill give it a go. I think if the R wasnt so shitty the rest would look fine next to each other, the only reason why the r even has the hook like the h is because it was too plain so i added it right before i started inking it.

even looking at that 1 now id lose all the little extra things i put on it, ie the hooks on the r and h and the liitle extenson on the top of the e and the little flip on the c

[TastyMcNasty]

phat lookin pre nice, except i dont like the 2...
haha forgot this to post this for the battle last week ... crits?

[ian]

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/8386/antoineq.jpg

stencil idea? lol i've been wantin to make a stencil of this dude

[TastyMcNasty]

^^ i lol;d

[Female]

omg please do a tag under that saying "Hide ya wifes"

[Cl4sh]

Seems complicated. But you'd be my hero.

[Phat 2]

pls 2 keep stenils in their own thred? kthx
can i get some crits on mine?
and thanks tasty

[ribcage]

itd prolly have to be a 2 peicer, but it would dope if u do like female said

[Cl4sh]

I don't like your h Phat. Just looks... out of place.

[ian]

^ second that, sorry phatty i dont really pay too much attention to the other threads but ill keep that in mind. and @ ribcage i was thinkin about that so i could make the bandana red and the rest black, idk lol ill definately keep workin on it

[Sbal]

i fi saw that stencil i would piss on it

[ian]

i fi saw that stencil i would piss on it

but you would react to it :P ill be sure to put it just above pissing height, so that you'll have to bring a stepladder

[Serbr]

phat2 there is too much negative space between the ph and the at2 i dont really like the bar thats goin through everything either, but thats just my opinion.

oh and that stencil is dope, i wanna see that every where :DD
"hide yo wife, hide yo kids, hide your husband cos there rapein errrbody out here"
aha

[Cl4sh]

@Mipe: Don't like the M in the fist one, or the P in the second one

@Tasty: The E doesn't seem to fit

[Cl4sh]

Know I messed up the top of the C
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[Cl4sh]

went Retro haha
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Did this for a friend
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And this
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[ian]

clash my dude, you need to slooooooow down. all that shit is lookin pretty bad, no offense. even that rainbow simp you got there is all fucked up, bar width is inconsistent, the s and h are squished but the cla are all spaced out, and the sh are angled down to the right. keyboard letters man, with bars. keep it even keep it consistent. i know its boring, but its what you gotta do.

[Cl4sh]

*sigh* yeah it's boring. Gotta do what I gotta do though I guess. Back to the drawing board.

[ian]

don't worry my man, im with you on that, you really gotta get a feel for the structure of the letters tho and get some consistency, then start extending and bending bars to tweak your letters and shit all in due time

[ribcage]

woah first you do 1 for a friend that reads "joey" ...kinda weird, then you fuckin wit the rainbow. ***** you gay

[TastyMcNasty]

@Tasty: The E doesn't seem to fit

ya the E's pre sloppy, it looked better before i did the outline

[JETZ]

this is what I have on a throw so far (wasn't sure whether to post it here or in throws) help me out, I know I need it. maybe suggest a different "A"?
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m35/fizzle122/5c4f39aa.jpg

[Dcicfhbimv]

Hey Jetz your sig looks pretty tight so obviously your throwie doesn't represent your skill. I'd say throw out the $ all together it looks completely unneccesary. As far as throws go they should be quick to put up right? why not make the letters flowinto one another? It would look nicer that way maybe A lower case a ? Idk just throwing out some ideas for ya hope it helps.

[Phat 2]

clash that pacman one's cool dude

[Cl4sh]

@Ribcage: Never even noticed that. Maybe I'm one of those people that's like subconciously gay and doesn't know it, and I subconsciously posted them in that order haha.

@Phat: Thanks dude

[Rehz]

Clash, what I love about you is that even though you are bad, like reeeally bad, that's not stopping you from posting. Most toys post a couple and then don't like the criticism so they all quit. You are one of the few that is actually taking your crits, attempting to correct your mistakes, and posting again. And you may not be seeing any improvement, but I am. Not a whole lot, but you are much better than your first couple posts and that's what it's all about, right? Damn that was way too long of a post....

[Female]

@JETZ i need help with throwies too so if you want me and you can do a exchange and work on them i write Tjc.

[bomber boy]

clash i realy like that pac man theam for a peace abit of crits would be mauybe make the coins smaller makes it a little confusing to read at first like so u can still see the middle bar in the H

[JETZ]

DCI: thanks for the crits man. I've had my sig down and was wondering how it looked to other people, so thanks for that comment. I'll try and come up with some lower case a's and make them flow together more.

[Female]

Saer, just asking again do you want to do a exchange?

[JETZ]

Saer, just asking again do you want to do a exchange?

bro, you've been pm'd.

[jet.Setta]

@Jetz Dude, change that A fo sho. and round that r out. then itll be hella sexy

[Sbal]

but you would react to it :P ill be sure to put it just above pissing height, so that you'll have to bring a stepladder

dude i can piss pretty high

[JETZ]

@Jetz Dude, change that A fo sho. and round that r out. then itll be hella sexy

THANKS FOR THE CRIT BROOOOO haha we need to have a graff movie/drawing night again sometime. When its warmer so we can go out. haha

[ribcage]

ah maybe your subconscious, is getting fucked in the ass all the time so rainbow fills and writin dudes names is the only way you can be truly happy?

subconciously gay or not, work on your simps, the rainbow 1 u put an extension on the right bar and it looks bad, and the a-s-h are smaller than the c-l, make sure ur shits the same size b4 u color it/ outline it

[Phat 2]

what's the big deal about writing a dude's name?
I once made a piece sketch for a friend in class in exchange for him doing my homework
ribcage everyone's gay... only difference is HOW gay each of us is :D

[weedeater]

jesus, one guy comes out of the closet and the rest just start falling out.

[ribcage]

say what?! nah ***** i aint gay, you on the other hand, might have some homo in you. A dude asks me to write his name it better be his alias and not his actual name..shits homo. If a bitch asks you to write her name for her its all good, cause she probably wants some dick

[Phat 2]

yes u are, and I'll prove it 2 ya

and lol weedeater

[ian]

dude i can piss pretty high

ahaha i believe it

[NosE2]

Piss tags in the snow = dope, and stay for a while if it;s cold enough. I caught a pee tag on the ground last weekend, came back the next morning, it was frozen....seriously.

[Phat 2]

piss tags yeah man, one liners :D

[SicK-]

Wasnt there a somber on this forum? if he sees this he should drop me a PM

[Flawless Victory]

yes u are, and I'll prove it 2 ya

and lol weedeater
Prove to me that I'm gay.

[Cl4sh]

There's no way possible that you can honestly say you've never judged a guy's looks.

[ribcage]

woah woah woah, ive judged i guy BY his looks but never judged a guys looks, like oh that ***** aint got teeth his hair is fallin out and his clothes is ripped hes, hes homeless. Not - o he got nice teeth im a homo

theres a huge difference

[weedeater]

holy fuck this thread is entertaining, straight up admitting to looking dudes up and down

[ribcage]

^ well it wasnt, all it was was pretty fuckin gay bro. Lol the delete post button is your friend

[scrib]

wtf... post graf, come out of the closet on yer own time...


heres the back of one of my books...

http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g55/protectedbyuzi/IMG_20110116_205729.jpg

[Phillip McDougall]

I thought you said you were going to post graffiti?
because that looks like a mass of bullshit to me

[scrib]

I thought you said you were going to post graffiti?
because that looks like a mass of bullshit to me

touche... thats my style though ... bullshit style...

clearly anything was better then several post about checking out dudes...

HADOKEN!

[Rehz]

Phillip McDougall makes me lol. NO HOMO. <-- Had to call out the no homo especially now cuz we just finished a whole page of homo comments...

[Cl4sh]

Phillip McDougall makes me lol. NO HOMO. <-- Had to call out the no homo especially now cuz we just finished a whole page of homo comments...

I second this

[ian]

just whipped this out, any suggestions before i ink it? I'm obviously gonna clean shit up

http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/397/imag0271id.jpg

[Cl4sh]

The thing at the top left. Going from the N to the dot above the i. I can't stand it for some reason.

[Rin5e]

Noise - I`m no digging the extensions.

Some shit I'm working on.
http://i53.tinypic.com/15x2zjc.jpg

[MoganOne]

@IAN, It looks like you are trying to copy Herste's style lol

[Cl4sh]

@Rin5e: That looks like SLNCE but i can't tell

My turn to post some more shitty shit. But it's simpler shitty shit now.
16420

16421

[Cl4sh]

PS that keyboard is dank dude

[Rin5e]

Says "Since," take your second one overlap it a bit and add a dropshadow.

Haha, yeah, it's a nice keyboard.

[Cl4sh]

I would say to clean that S up and make that I look like an I.

[Rin5e]

Yeah, it's a pretty rough draft.

[Cl4sh]

Like so?
16422

[ian]

@clash, i see what you mean, i was just tryin to fill some negative space, but i dont like it too much either. your shit is lookin a hell of a lot better, keep it simple, keep it clean. lose the little extension on the C in the second picture the boxier one

@rin5e, im just tryin to mess around a little more but i do feel like i went a little overboard

@mone i was lookin at his shit when i was doin that lol but im not tryin to bite or anything, just tryin to get some inspiration and some work with extensions and shit and where they look alright. not something im gonna just keep doin ;) I was really just lookin over his extensions and stuff, the letters i did by myself


EDIT:
finished product, slightly sloppy, fucked up some of the bar widths when i did the outline, and some of the lines in the 3d are a little off but whatever.

http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9138/imag0272x.jpg

[SicK-]

Lol nose quit biting WGONE.

[ian]

its actually noise ;) and i didnt bite anything. im just tryin to learn quit hatin

[Dcicfhbimv]

Yo Cl4sh Try darkening the lines up top aka thickening them. and you missed some of your shadow at the top of the L. And the Explanantion points shadow runs off the letter. Keep on keeping on brother not trying to slam you or nothing just calling what I see.

[Dcicfhbimv]

Hey it's a little something I'm working on unfortunately the pic is a little big for the scanner so I had to use a camera. Im starting to really like it and hope you guys can throw some ideas and critiques my way before I finish. Bear in mind the lettering is inverted due to my camera so its all F#'d up looking.

[Phat 2]

yeah u should go participate in the character battle dude


Prove to me that I'm gay.
do you watch porn ?

[Dcicfhbimv]

Me? Man thats awesome I started doubting myself A bit cause I didn't understand how the forums opperated I kept getting my pictures and posts deleted from the Blackbooks feed. but yeah man I'll check out some of the battles.

[Flawless Victory]

yeah u should go participate in the character battle dude


do you watch porn ?
I only watch lesbian or female masturbatory porn.
Dicks in porn is a serious bonerkill, because I am not sexually interested in them.

[Phat 2]

alright so u've seen ron white :P hahahahahaha ok joke's over I guess... everyone back to being straight lol

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mY711HJK7pg

[thepekins]

this shit didnt fit on my scanner, there were orange highlights in the 3d but it didnt show up

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/9483/scan0006z.jpg (http://img89.imageshack.us/i/scan0006z.jpg/)
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/94/scan0005qr.jpg (http://img27.imageshack.us/i/scan0005qr.jpg/)
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/9175/scan0007dt.jpg (http://img339.imageshack.us/i/scan0007dt.jpg/)

[SicK-]

YO! somber drop me a PM man!

And noise im not hating but dont bite a style and call it learning, If your gonna bite something dont show it off on here. And reply to my PM noise.

[Rehz]

Damn... I wish I could get PMs... :(

[ian]

im pretty sure everyone can Rehz... and i answered Sick. and honestly im not postin on here to show off, im posting for crits so i can improve, i was lookin at some of herstes stuff when i did that piece, but im really just trying to understand where extensions fit well and how to incorporate them into a piece. I'm not copyin his piece and then comin on here bein like oh yeah look how good i am yakno? its cool tho. any suggestions for improvement on that one?

[StayHyE]

http://i54.tinypic.com/2n8wy1u.jpg

crits? just working on my bars/letter connectivity thanks in advance

[Rehz]

Yeah I was kidding Ian, but StayHyE, I actually can't tell if I like it or not. It looks like it has the foundation of a good piece but I don't know if it really does. You'd have to color it for me to have a solid opinion. But I can say that I like where the A connects to the R.

[StayHyE]

haha yeah i might work on the connects a bit before messing around and coloring it

[pointman]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5168/5365015936_ec0ce277b3.jpg
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5008/5365014648_d81e805ca9.jpg

Crits on these? think i fucked the t on the second, well it all looks fucked haha but im not really sure where im going with these, back to the board i guess.

[StayHyE]

prismas are running out and i suck at blending them

http://i53.tinypic.com/1q4cnb.jpg

[thepekins]

this shit didnt fit on my scanner, there were orange highlights in the 3d but it didnt show up

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/9483/scan0006z.jpg (http://img89.imageshack.us/i/scan0006z.jpg/)
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/94/scan0005qr.jpg (http://img27.imageshack.us/i/scan0005qr.jpg/)
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/9175/scan0007dt.jpg (http://img339.imageshack.us/i/scan0007dt.jpg/)
bump got no crits on the last page

[ian]

^Way too much negative space with the M on the big piece, the BER look alright together, i cant even tell about the S and O because theyre too far away, if you took out that M i think it would look better. Throwies decent, bring up the top of the O a little bit but its pretty consistant. im not too much of a fan of the handstyle, i think the M is whats turning me off of that as well

[Rehz]

Ok, StayHyE, you make that letter structure work well. The 3D is off in alot of places though. Work on the 3D, and those silver shine things can go. Other than that, it looks pretty good. And I like the colors too.

[MERTAone]

stayhye-the e and the connecting point of the m look busted but other than that the final piece isnt bad...thepekins-perspective on that 3d..the somber throw isnt bad though

[BaYeNoRe1]

http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x420/banerwho1/graff003.jpg
http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x420/banerwho1/graff002.jpg
http://i1180.photobucket.com/albums/x420/banerwho1/graff006.jpg

[pointman]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5082/5365365713_0f0b3923c4.jpg

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5129/5365366265_a271ff06f8.jpg

Failing at putting 3d bubble around a throw up.. fuck haha

[Cl4sh]

The T in the first one does't seem to fit in my opinion, and I don't like the first O either

[Shay70]

16469
critsssssssssssssssss

BANE- Good shit but it kinda looks like ur A has a boner lol
SOMBER- I'm fiending that last throw mad hard
ARMEN- I like the connections but try makin ur bars thicker

[NosE2]

Have fun with Z's bro

[extinct]

z's are actually very good for extensions on the end but an r... just makes it harder

[Sbal]

Hey Bane we should exchange i write SBANE

[ribcage]

well i decided to finish this weak ass drawing cause i cant stand things half done but yeah didnt turn out as planned and the h is fucked up, but yall can tell me what you aint like

16471

[Shay70]

what if i make the z connect into the left bottom leg of the r? then extend that

[extinct]

...naaaaw if you can rock that ya but you should choose one of em r or z

[memphisbleak2133]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5082/5365365713_0f0b3923c4.jpg

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5129/5365366265_a271ff06f8.jpg

Failing at putting 3d bubble around a throw up.. fuck haha

damn bro i looked like this when i saw how gay your throw up is
http://i53.tinypic.com/29eiwx5.jpg
im just kidding bro keep the work in progres up kid

[upper90daynnight]

Last time i posted i had alot to work on ik ive got along way to go but am i on my way and please crits but with ways to fix the problems you point out thanks in advance

[..romero..]

paes i dont usually say this until i see more work from people but i sincerly think that you could post in the big boys thread at this point.the color scheme is ridiculous and the way you like seperated the leters at points or whatever the fuck the term is,yeah thats dope.


i think you could take me.id battle you but i already know who would win...me.but i rig all the polls here anyways...

[weedeater]

romero entertaining with his comedic stylings

[ian]

^are you for real dude? thats supposed to say raes. and to be honest, its pretty sloppy. look at the width of the left bar of the R and S compared to the left bar of the A and E. i really like the top of the S but i think that would look better on the top of the E, which is really pretty sloppy, idk what that curvy line is up on the top right of the E. The bottom part of the R is pretty bad, make it come out closer to the top loop and make it at least as wide as the top part at some point, R <--see how it comes out even with the top part? I like what you did with a bunch of the corners like the top right of the A and the top left of the R, but you gotta work on bar width and letter structure before you start messin around with all the fancy stuff. its comin along tho, theres a bunch of good stuff goin on there, but you need to get the basics down to a science

[Cl4sh]

I hope your kidding Romero... I didn't think it was very good. And that means a lot coming from me haha.

[weedeater]

i whipped this up for ^^ you guys

http://i52.tinypic.com/2zp37ys.jpg

[Cl4sh]

heh heh

[..romero..]

nah im being serious.those lightning bolts are really striking,YES pun intended.



shit blew my mind when i first saw it.i think my brain literally exploded inside my head when i saw it,and it was at this point in time that i knew what it was like to see the face of god.raes is the new cope.



okay im exaggerating a little bit but it is pretty dope and i think you could possibly give ruger or gesus a run for their moneyss.keep up the work my dude.your gonna go places with that shit...

[ian]

lololol internet sarcasm can be hard to pick up on

[..romero..]

girls are hard to pick up on too....for me atleast.thats why i realy on this.

http://www.fohguild.org/forums/attachments/mmorpg-general-discussion/117699d1248975899-getting-girlfriends-play-mmorpgs-chloroform-20bottle.jpg

[ian]

haha, that would do the trick

[Female]

girls are hard to pick up on too....for me atleast.thats why i realy on this.

http://www.fohguild.org/forums/attachments/mmorpg-general-discussion/117699d1248975899-getting-girlfriends-play-mmorpgs-chloroform-20bottle.jpg
And i'll be sure to stay away from that haha.

[MoganOne]

lololol internet sarcasm can be hard to pick up on

Don't you know good graph when you see it dude : )

[ViniVidiVici]

Sato - get some bar structure *****h, there is no point in trying to do anything else fancy until you got letter structure down, honestly, you can put tons of make up and paint on piece of shit, and if you're drunk you'll think it is amazing, but once you sober up you realize.... it's still shit, this goes for everyone in the toy forums, I am guilty of it myself, but some of you really need to stop trying all these backgrounds, effects, forcefields, 3d, etc. until you actually get letter structure down.

[ViniVidiVici]

What the, when did BS start censoring shit like *****!?!

[Sbal]

always

[ian]

Don't you know good graph when you see it dude : )

touche

[Rask Wsk LA]

Just got my phone workin again,

[Flawless Victory]

Your S looks like a big blob of herpes sore, you should have outlined it with the black.

[extinct]

rask do you know a kid who writes naus or nausiate

[upper90daynnight]

thanks man and yea if you wanna battle me shoot me a PM

[upper90daynnight]

thanks romero and if u wanna battle im down shoot me PM some time

[ian]

haha dude he was joking.

[upper90daynnight]

hey ian i changed up the lettering a little bit and this one is for a friend it says 3oh!3 ik the colorscheme looks homo but once it done and the letters are filled in lime green and backround is solid black i think it'll be sick crits so far?16665

[ian]

left bar of your h doesnt line up, first 3 looks like a J with a harpoon through it and an arrow, curved pard of the second 3 doesnt fit the theme, connection from the exclamation point to the second three is bad, arrow in the middle of the second three is bad and ugly, extenson from the bottom right of the o looks bad, connection from first 3 to h looks bad. you gotta go simpler man

[upper90daynnight]

alright ill work on it thanks

[kozmicz]

16715 it's not very good but i thought i might as well put it up to get peoples opinions on how to improve my style or whatever

[Cl4sh]

That's kind of ugly bro. Drop the brass knuckles for sure. make all your lines at least near the same size. And I hope that says LEER.

[upper90daynnight]

also after you get your style down i wud suggest using markers sharpies are good to start with, get yourself a sketchpad also that way the lines in the backround are gone

[upper90daynnight]

16747 here is some other stuff i did any crits?

[Cl4sh]

Simpler.

[upper90daynnight]

what is the goal of going simpler?? are the lettering on the first one good?

[Sbal]

you guys suck you need to go simpler with BARS to understand how letters are shaped that is all ugly crap

[Female]

the goal for simples to learn letter structure. Then again i could be wrong.

[ian]

sbal and female are dead on. lose the cuts upper90, work on simples more your letters are ugly especially that R

[ian]

http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/4580/imag0279q.jpg


wanted to post this shit before i filled and inked it cuz i tend to fuck stuff up sometimes. i like the way it turned out, what do you guys think?

[Cl4sh]

I can't stand that extension on the bottom. Under the O. Or the one on the N

[Stuck]

is the W supposed to be an N lol

[ian]

ha alright so lose the extension on the N and under the o?