Blackbooks

[Female]

either that or fix the left bar on the N so it doesnt go up so much.

[Rask Wsk LA]

no i dont,

[ian]

word, any comments on the actual letters themselves?

[Gatsoi]

The S and the E are good, Don't connect any of your letters with those extensions. Do 3d and that piece might actually be goodlooking.

[ian]

so kill all the extensions?

[bomber boy]

http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/4580/imag0279q.jpg


wanted to post this shit before i filled and inked it cuz i tend to fuck stuff up sometimes. i like the way it turned out, what do you guys think?

ian i like some of the connecters but maybe get rid of the one under the o and the one on the n but i like how uve connected the i, s, and e

[ViniVidiVici]

No, he is wrong, honestly he is straight up wrong, the connections are whack and the letters themselves are suffering, don't even think about crazy connections unless your letters are solid.

[ian]

Alright dude. I'll lose the connections, throw on some 3d and give it a fill and see how it turns out. Is anything wrong with the letters themselves though Im tryin to work on getting past simple stuff but still keeping the structure solid

[ViniVidiVici]

I'll give you the real crits Ian.
Your bars are fairly consistent which is a good thing but the N at the upper left side, fix that because the bars are wrong, also on your S the highest part, the bars are off again. Your O is, eh well that style of O is tough to pull of and you need to know what your doing, your I is simple but that is fine, the dot part however is not lined up, maybe you meant to do that, but I think it looks bad. Your E isn't horrible but that top broken area looks bad, and the middle bar isn't as thick as the base bar or bottom bar, and that sharp jagged corner on the lower right part is not appealing to the eyes. If you lose the connections on the N and fix it up a bit it will be a good N, the S will be good too if you get rid of that broken bit, fix the top bars like I said and also make sure that when you fix that broken bit on the S it has the same bar width as the rest of the S.

You may not like it that I am ripping on your piece but honest crits without saying 'you suck' and 'quit graff' is what is really needed in the toy forums instead of toys telling toys their shit is good, and kings telling toys to die in a gutter.
Anyways I gotta go study, I'll be posting some shit later.

[ian]

I honestly think you're the first person to actually give me a nice full crit. I really appreciate it dude that's the kinda stuff everyone should be doing. I'll fix stuff up and see what I can come up with. Thanks a lot man, really helpful

[KNS13]

http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/Photo0798.jpg
http://i654.photobucket.com/albums/uu261/Kema13/Photo0799.jpg

[Sbal]

jhiz cannon

[KNS13]

thats me(;

[SicK-]

lmao do you really write jhiz?

[NosE2]

Cumgun would be way funnier..have fun with the z's tho

[swae101]

workin on an s wat do you think?
http://i56.tinypic.com/3312ej6.jpg
hillbilly bob aha
http://i51.tinypic.com/2r6cxtc.jpg

[Cl4sh]

What the fuck is up with that char?
17004
My turn
Simp and an attempt at a throw

[Bliz Graf]

1722017221172221722317224

Some of my stuff. Beat the fuck out of it, tell me everything thats wrong and how to make it better. Im having trouble with wildstyle, I have no fucking idea where to start with it.

[soej]

1722017221172221722317224

Some of my stuff. Beat the fuck out of it, tell me everything thats wrong and how to make it better. Im having trouble with wildstyle, I have no fucking idea where to start with it.

Don't start with it, keep working at simps and build from there. I like the second one, no real style, just blocky, but the dudes cool. Just add on and have the letters go into eachother, don't try and throw together any crazy till you can create your own real style.

[bomber boy]

workin on an s wat do you think?
http://i56.tinypic.com/3312ej6.jpg
hillbilly bob aha
http://i51.tinypic.com/2r6cxtc.jpg

that first s looks like its got potential if u do a cleaned up one with out the structure lines it will look sick although im not sure about that last bit at the bottom looks to meit ruins it abitand the peace on the second one looks good the bars are nice and consistent, just ad some 3d and a force feild and itll look sick

[ribcage]

Cumgun would be way funnier..have fun with the z's tho


Well, in complete honesty, my name means exactly what you read:
cum gun. It's a gun that shoots cum.
like this
http://i54.tinypic.com/i42u4h.jpg

^like this kid

[extinct]

its funny cause ive seen so many names used here by real kids out here in BC like rask an noise...

[ian]

well i live in the US so i dont really think it matters too much if someone has the same name as me in canada as long as theyre not a king or anything. its pretty hard to come up with a name that no one uses anywhere these days

[Rin5e]

1722017221172221722317224

Some of my stuff. Beat the fuck out of it, tell me everything thats wrong and how to make it better. Im having trouble with wildstyle, I have no fucking idea where to start with it.
Holy shit, this is all so dope. Keep up the good work.

Fuck the haters.

[Sbal]

fag

[Rin5e]

You seem jealous of Bliz Graf.

[ian]

http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/5854/imag0282o.jpg

finally got around to finishing this. im real happy with the way it turned out, i think its a step in the right direction. crits anyone?

[ribcage]

^......you took a step... but idk in what direction. Ima disregard the bar width cause its fucked in too many places to name them all. So just based on letters ima tell u what i aint like. Bottom left of N you got the bar curvin to the left and a little flip/extension goin to the left, and then top right of n u got the bar curvin to the left an extension goin left, when yuo should have made the right bar curving to the right with an extension at the top goin to the right. which woulda killed a good amount of negative space. Then, your O looks like a bad backwards D. the I in my opinion is the worst letter up there, u made it a lower case w/ a fucked up janky bar at the bottom that makes it look half upper and half lower case. You made your S curve until the very end where u put a random bar curving to the left looks weird. top of E is fine. the middle part should have been straight then bottom part should have been straighter as well. Lastly if you made your letters bars go at more convenient angles your 3d wouldnt look so bad, because u have the right idea w/ picking a light source point. most of this is easiar to draw then describe so pm or someone else if u want actual help

[Rehz]

Uhmm Ribcage is tellin it like it is, which I respect, but you gotta remember this IS the Toy forum. Noise, you made a huge step in the right direction. I liked the colors, and your letters look a lot better now that you made those improvements from before. Rib was right about the bar width though, there is a couple places it was a LITTLE off, and I agree that the N would've looked better if the right side curved to the right. The I is ugly, just my honest opinion. I just don't like the I having those things at the bottom, even if it does kill a good amount of negative space. But all in all, it looks so much better. Keep it up. PS, work on your drips. It is hard to explain how to make em look better, but like make em different lengths and have some closer than others instead of so evenly spaced out. But yeah, good luck.

[ian]

thanks dudes, appreciate the help. i had the bars all even but when i outline i always fuck em up, i just gotta work on that i guess and ribcage ill shoot you a PM

[CRIS 3F]

plain and simple right there good shit son luv the colors keep working on letter structure youll hav this shit down soon :)


-CRIS

[SNAP!]

Keep that shit goin Noise, just connect the O it looks better you know? Work on that tag too..

a quick freestyle with this new steez im fuckin with..

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5050/5378322973_3c3cae9d6f_z.jpg

[BlacktodaFuture]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/Snowmonkey117/DSC03976.jpg?t=1295711030

bucka bucka!

[SNAP!]

thats dope Safe..i cant do fancy shit with markers :(

[MoganOne]

thats dope Safe..i cant do fancy shit with markers :(

Cuz you're wack... lol just playing
me either

[ian]

gotcha mone, that piece is interesting, i dont like the M it doesnt flow well but the other 3 letters arent lookin bad. good to see youre tryin something different.

safe thats sick. only thing i dont like is the top part of the A, especially the left bar, it looks too skinny to me. keep it up i like that background

[Flawless Victory]

That one up there isn't mone haha, it's scone.

[upper90daynnight]

17351 heres a simp where do i go from here just slowly start changing the shape of the letters?

[MoganOne]

gotcha mone, that piece is interesting, i dont like the M it doesnt flow well but the other 3 letters arent lookin bad. good to see youre tryin something different.

safe thats sick. only thing i dont like is the top part of the A, especially the left bar, it looks too skinny to me. keep it up i like that background
WTF man lol...

[MoganOne]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0122111800-1.jpg

[Rehz]

Mone, almost everyone in this thread is still finding their own style, but you know your style and have perfected it. Everything you do comes out soo well. Keep it up.

[Sbal]

someone jizzed on your piece

[ian]

hahaha no wonder it didnt look like an M, my bad dude i see it now, looks good.


piece i did for the latest battle. tear it apart i know it sucks

http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/9407/imag0283j.jpg

[SicK-]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/db79d4e9.jpg
Critsss?

[SNAP!]

id make a hole in the R i think man.. just matter of opinion. looks straight though

[Rehz]

Indeed I jizzed. And Ian, I couldn't really tell if you wanted crits, but I think the S should be more rounded to go with the O and D.

[bomber boy]

http://i937.photobucket.com/albums/ad220/Albinoethiopian07/Graffiti/0122111800-1.jpg
mogan your letters flow so well get some colour on it and itll look sick

[ViniVidiVici]

Ian - That is better, I think you should rework the S though, and get rid of arrows, and also fix the bar on the R lower right leg.
Werm - I like that style, distorted but not too much where it takes away from the piece, however your R is confusing, it looks almost like a messed up E and it need to be better defined, but that is about all I can find wrong
Mone - Dope like always, if I had to name one thing that I dislike, and this would be pushing it, it would be your R, I just think that it doesn't fit the style of the rest of the piece as all the other letters are really curved and 'swirled' and the R is just there ya know, and there is some negative space in the R that could be filled, but I am just picking at what little I can pick at, dope as hell either way.

[bomber boy]

havent posted any pics in a while so here are a few:

although the attempts on connecters on the first one is shit i dont know why i did it it looks shit

[extinct]

Werm you've developed quite a steez wanna xchange?

[Svc]

so heres some pics from my old blackbook before i started workin with structured letters
17427174171741817419174201742117422174231742417425 1742617416

[ViniVidiVici]

Bomber - lose ALL connections, all of them hurt your piece, work on letters more, they aren't bad they aren't good, they simply aren't.
SVC - Thank god you said those are old...

[Svc]

yea, the setik one i did quickly last night when i was bored, not much structure but theres a start, i'll post somthin new tonight or tommorow tho.

[Gatsoi]

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/IMG00124-20110123-1756-1.jpg

[Cl4sh]

Newt, I would say widen up those lines in the middle of the E.

[SicK-]

Werm you've developed quite a steez wanna xchange?
Yessir whatchu write?

[extinct]

"days"

[SicK-]

Alright itll be up in a little while

[Houston]

any opinions?

[Cl4sh]

I can't have an opinion. Because I have no idea what the fuck its supposed to be. No offence though.

[Houston]

its cool just messin around supposed ta say thc dont know if u can see it

[Cl4sh]

Ohh word kinda.
I take it you're new.

[SicK-]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/b281ebec.jpg
Tryn to get some crits?

[ian]

the r would look better with some kind of hole, and the bottom left of the E looks weird. keep both sides of the bar parallel or at least close to it and lose that part where it like cuts in (bottom left of the E). also dont really like the negative space above the M and i dont like the arrows either, esp the top left one, it just looks like a weird plus sign. clean up that white line going through too

[Gatsoi]

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/4-2.jpg
Exchange I did for Wermin

[ViniVidiVici]

Clean up your bars WERM, they aren't bad but they are suffering in some areas, rework the R completely and get rid of the arrows, the E's bars are the worst too so fix that stuff.

[SicK-]

^who are you talkin to me or Gatsoi?

[ViniVidiVici]

You sick

[ViniVidiVici]

and Gatsoi hahaha

[SicK-]

yeah lol mad confusing

[FuckTheFame]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5213/5385502306_4ef97b0fe0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5385502306/)


werm - work on your structure. the arrows are wack
gatsoi - nice exchange

[ian]

the right side of that H looks real bad, and i dont like the top left of the T either. The top left of the y doesnt fit and the u doesnt really fit either, I dont like hot it comes to points. also the top part of that arrow is weird lookin. also the bottom bar of the Y has a weird line right past where the arrow intersects, and the part that comes out of on the Y is missing 3d, idk if you meant to do that but it looks weird that it has no 3d there and that fat ass 3d a little farther up with that arrow covering it

[FuckTheFame]

that is the 3d kid
i just didnt color it
those lines in it are to help me judge the width the 3d should be
it was a high times sketch man
cut me a break

[Female]

@FuckTheFame i think you should color it, i wanna see how it comes out.

[Ridiculous]

@FuckTheFame I like what's going here but it seems to me that you are are working with a few different styles and motifs in one piece.

For instance you have an arrow extending off of the y but no where else, which wouldn't be a problem if both the O and the H did NOT introduce two new elements. Try to pick one of two motifs (like swirls and points) per piece and be consistent with them.
Do you know what i mean?

[ian]

relax dude im just tryin to help out

[Gatsoi]

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/IMG00128-20110124-2044.jpg
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/IMG00129-20110124-2111.jpg

[Sbal]

whats up with the lip on your E it would look better without

[Gatsoi]

It's pouting

[FuckTheFame]

@FuckTheFame I like what's going here but it seems to me that you are are working with a few different styles and motifs in one piece.

For instance you have an arrow extending off of the y but no where else, which wouldn't be a problem if both the O and the H did NOT introduce two new elements. Try to pick one of two motifs (like swirls and points) per piece and be consistent with them.
Do you know what i mean?

yah i get what your saying man. i was working more with stretching my letters and extensions rather than the actual flow of the letters. i just started messing around with that kind of style so im still a little rusty.

@ian - sorry man just been a little on edge lately

[ribcage]

anyone got 3d/background ideas?
17527

[extinct]

Just practice letters... My backgrounds are to confusing to explain

[ribcage]

ah... explain w/ a pic then

but i guess all just put the same ol plain 3d and bg to it

[ViniVidiVici]

Fuckthefame - I like it, it obviously has some flaws but it is a nice blueprint you could use and then just fix it up, it could have some real nasty ill flow if you do it right.
Ribcage - good letters, I would change the left bar on the R so it is uniform like the bars of the other letters, other than that I really have nothing to crit on your actual letters, they are clean and the bars are good, maybe thicken up the bars on the R but that is all I can find.

Will post some stuff when I get another phone....

[FuckTheFame]

vinvidivici - thanks for the optimism man
ribcage - clouds work all day with some drop shadow on the letters

[ribcage]

o fasho, the r is fucked
clouds eh? i had already tried the drop shadow, no bars on drop shadows tho...
17604

[SicK-]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/8715158e.jpg
Exchange with newt

[extinct]

I'll get yours up sometime... I hate midterms

[ChadWarden]

http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/3470/img011oa.jpg

[weedeater]

that shits ill chad, best thing posted in the thread for a while.

[Sbal]

chad you should get in on the PENIS beef battle

[Flawless Victory]

Does that dick have a prince albert?

[Smik]

17786
Ignore the black scribble on the upper left bar of the S.
I know I'm toy as hell, but could I get some crits?

[Sbal]

do simples

[Female]

Start getting used to this word "BARS"

[swae101]

http://i55.tinypic.com/2100iu0.jpg

[extinct]

Suar I like that style man... Would it be dick if I asked for an exchange an got a flick up on saturday

[TastyMcNasty]

Suar I like that style man... Would it be dick if I asked for an exchange an got a flick up on saturday
**says SOAR

[swae101]

i write swae. it was an exchange for soar.
but u got a flick on saturday? i dont know wat that means but ill exchange what do you write?

[SicK-]

^Swae im tryn to exchange to if your down. if so hit me up with a WERM

[Gatsoi]

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/9.jpg
Crits?

[ViniVidiVici]

Newt - Your spacing needs work, the NEW are all right next to and overlapping each other, but then the T is just out there and it creates some unwanted negative space. Also, I think a few of your bars are suffering. The last thing technically you didn't do wrong but, I think that when your doing a shadow you shouldn't do it just horizontally if ya know what I mean, I would've put it up and right not just right, it usually looks much better that way. Your blending is good though. Oh you also need to add more highlights because you only did like half of them and that looks whack.

[Gatsoi]

This is what I got outta your crits
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/6-1.jpg

[swae101]

alrite werm ill start your sketch soon

[NouveauP]

Doodles from class. Some emulations in there, so don't call it a bite. The letters are mine.
http://i357.photobucket.com/albums/oo20/NouveauP/IMG_0181.jpg

[soej]

http://i54.tinypic.com/3128vux.jpg

BASH ME BITCHESSSS.

(But somewhat teach me how to do 3d.. lol)

[ViniVidiVici]

Hekle - Fairly good but watch bar width
Soej - You need to start way simpler, way way simpler, You have real real bad bars, and your letters aren't even recognizable, and I don't mean that in any good way. Go simpler, work on letter structure and less on 3d and backgrounds/fills.

[Cl4sh]

Chill with that 3D too man. Shit strains my eyes. Makes the piece hard too look at.
But I agree with Vini. Your bars are completely different widths. The S and O are recognizable, but you can barely tell what the E and J look like.
I kinda like how to 3D from the J goes over the E though. It adds more depth to the piece.
Keep working brotha. Don't give up. Then you're a mufuckin quiter.

[Cl4sh]

This is what I got outta your crits
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/6-1.jpg

I can't stand Xbox 360. PS3 is where it's at.

[Skope2]

I'd appreciate crits. I think the 'S' is slightly too big, and the lines in the 3d are a bit fucked, think i might fill it in block black instead.

[pointman]

I like that a lot. Good shit

[Skope2]

Just worked this up a minuite ago. Im shit when it comes to thinking of fill ideas too. Anyone got any suggestions? 3-D?

[dubbed]

skope your letters are good and nice proportions. but alot of those extensions are kind of too much

[TastyMcNasty]

skope- not bad letter structure (especially on the second one)... but your 3-d's hurting alot, and you need to drop the extensions/ connections, because theyre pre wack

[Skope2]

Cheers for the comments guys, ill do something else more like you said and upload it soon.

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/Picture080-1.jpg

First image in 3 years. just picked up the pen again at 21

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/Picture003-2.jpg
My trowback trowie

[Cl4sh]

Fix those fucking lines. it looks like you were having a seizure when you drew that.

[Skope2]

Yea props to the first piece. Im not really in any place to crit, but that throwie is quite bad simply because the lines are wobbly as fuck. Tidy them up and it'll look quite decent.

[kiddy]

lemme get some critics abt my structure

[Cl4sh]

I'm too high to tell if you're really good, or if you're bad and just trying too hard. I'll try again later

[SicK-]

^Comon how does being high stop you from telling if someone is good or bad. stop being a poser

[Cl4sh]

That was a joke dumbass.

[kiddy]

wtf?

[Cl4sh]

That was my dick way of saying I like it.

[extinct]

i write swae. it was an exchange for soar.
but u got a flick on saturday? i dont know wat that means but ill exchange what do you write?
I write " days "

[Skope2]

skope your letters are good and nice proportions. but alot of those extensions are kind of too much

Made a new piece, removed any connections etc. Is this a bit better?

[Skope2]

Thought i'd try the connections again. Let me know if this is whack too, ill practice on them or remove them altogether.

[Gatsoi]

^Simpler. Your extensions are too much, I can't even read it.

[thepekins]

I'm too high to tell if you're really good, or if you're bad and just trying too hard. I'll try again later

lol

[thepekins]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/Picture003-2.jpg
My trowback trowie

do you have parkinsons?


heres a bunch of doodles from when I was baked in first period this week
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/2663/scan0010v.jpg (http://img80.imageshack.us/i/scan0010v.jpg/)
http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/9549/scan0011yq.jpg (http://img16.imageshack.us/i/scan0011yq.jpg/)
http://img51.imageshack.us/img51/2197/scan0012u.jpg (http://img51.imageshack.us/i/scan0012u.jpg/)
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/2950/scan0013f.jpg (http://img444.imageshack.us/i/scan0013f.jpg/)
http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/4575/scan0015d.jpg (http://img684.imageshack.us/i/scan0015d.jpg/)
http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/2581/scan0016crop.jpg (http://img156.imageshack.us/i/scan0016crop.jpg/)

[ribcage]

the face in the middle of the first one is dope

[thepekins]

thats what everyone whos seen my notebook has said, its my least favorite of everything. I like the charac on the bottom left of the first one with the star on his helmet.

[MoganOne]

the shoe monster is cool

[ribcage]

its the shaded part that makes it

[BoomSlang]

aight.. i cant comment on anything on this page itself because i wouldnt know where to start, from looking at scribbling and not being able to make out letters much less words i woud pack it in and start over
i havent posted any work in quite a while...
http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/010.jpg

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/008.jpg

http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/007.jpg

flame on....

[Skope2]

The fill in that last one is quality.

[W_G_O_N_E]

your coloring skillz are on point boomslang , and the letters in the second one are my fav , maybe try opening up your t's instead of tilting them inwards it seems to take away so much space form the rest of the letters

[Cl4sh]

Th extensions in the first one give me a fuckin headache. But other than that it's all pretty dank.

[BoomSlang]

one from this afternoon
http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm24/CobraMods/013.jpg

[Cl4sh]

one from this afternoon


Dig it! but maybe make the vertical bars on the T's a little bit wider?

[BoomSlang]

did em that way on purpose to be honest. top bars are approx 1.5 the width of the verts.
same for the uprights of the w , the backbone of the y and the center bar of the s.
will work on diff variations over the next week or so and see what turns the best feedback

thanks for lookin tho

[Phat 2]

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/hs253.snc6/180100_193076174052633_100000507545549_641888_2017 610_n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs790.ash1/168045_193076280719289_100000507545549_641889_1133 976_n.jpg

the fountain pen idea is stolen from WGONE... hope u don't mind dawg. it looked ill so I used it

[kiddy]

some good crits on my piecing pls

[MoganOne]

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/hs253.snc6/180100_193076174052633_100000507545549_641888_2017 610_n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs790.ash1/168045_193076280719289_100000507545549_641889_1133 976_n.jpg

the fountain pen idea is stolen from WGONE... hope u don't mind dawg. it looked ill so I used it

If it is not a problem stealing Wgone's Ideas why stop there bro??? If you copy why not copy from the greatest

[W_G_O_N_E]

well whatever abou tthe fountain pen bite , but a crown man......come on

[..romero..]

its not even s seven point crown.you nigghas dont know what your doing.ElMeroMero is gonna have to show you *****s whats up.

[Phat 2]

forget about the crown maaaaaaaaaan its just decoration dont get ur panties in a twist about it. and is it such a big deal if i copied ONE idea (to correct ur plural ideas) from wgone, mone? he didnt mind. do you really have to make such a dick comment about it ? >=( from what i know this is how we learn
give crits instead. again, the crown was just for decoration, chill

[Dcicfhbimv]

I agree with Phat 2 the whole point of posting is to learn and teach one another. So phat 2 saw something he liked and used it. And as far as the crown goes yes its kinda cliche but Phat 2 can do whatever the hell he wants and personally the crown really doesn't take anything from the piece anyway. I really like the fills though really nice what did you use?

[Dcicfhbimv]

Oh and sorry kiddy don't want to overlook ya. The k kinda looks like a "b" and the y on the end isn't working for me. Also the breaks in the " i " are sort of overkill. I wish I had some advice for your piece but I can't really think of anything else just figured I'd at least try and crit your work.

[Phat 2]

yemen thanks... yeah I mean a lotta people take crowns and dat shit too seriously, but to me it's ok as long as your intentions are like the ones I had when I drew. I definitely am not a self proclaimed king at all, I know I'm still just merely a knight... and I needed something to fill that negative space between my face and the piece, so i just added the first thing i could think of
I was using cheapshit stabilo markers, nothing special at all really

[extinct]

It's Ok to bite in your blackbook as long as you make it your style... If you have any

[Marc]

http://i51.tinypic.com/r1n8ef.jpg

[FuckTheFame]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5014/5406094870_b634909a94.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5406094870/)
says rambel
got lazy at the b
mark - fix your 3d. make it the whole legth through the entire piece
phat 2 - dope colors

[..romero..]

you faggots are missing the point.its not that he rocked a crown,its the fact that he had the audacity to rock it with an even number of points like the number six.thats some toy shit right there.everyone knows that crowns go 3,5,7,and if your really super cool like me,9 points.im going to write this in big bright ass letters so its etched into your psyche and your toys wont forget it.btw that mask your wearing is an outdated model.get with the times.were out here rockin space helmets when we bomb niggha.

[..romero..]

Sometimes i wish there was a size 8 because 7 just doesnt seem big enough to me.

[Phat 2]

WHO GIVES A LIQUID SHIT ABOUT THE NUMBER OF POINTS THERE ARE IN A MOTHERFUCKIN CROWN???!!!

BUT JUST TO PISS YOUR ASS OFF, I WILL SEE YOUR COOL 9 POINTS AND RAISE YOU 11... CHECK THE 5 POINTS YOU MISSED ON THE BACK SIDE OF THE CRoWN

now can you please stop trolling about useless crap? I know you're bored as fuck, and so is all the rest of us, still not a reason enough to act a fool
another thing no one gives a shit about is the model of a motherfucking gasmask... wtf... is... WRONG WITH YOU?

PS: size 8 ^

[OG x KUSH x]

New to the forums

[TastyMcNasty]

kush- start simple, legit i cant even understand what that says... and that charac looks like a dick who jizzed gold on your page

[Rin5e]

now can you please stop trolling about useless crap? I know you're bored as fuck, and so is all the rest of us, still not a reason enough to act a fool
another thing no one gives a shit about is the model of a motherfucking gasmask... wtf... is... WRONG WITH YOU?

PS: size 8 ^
That isn't a gasmask, that's a respirator.

Respirator =/= gasmask

[dubbed]

marc good shit man i really like your flow. same with fuck the fame,but work on your M though thats all. everyone else, shut the fuck up.

[TastyMcNasty]

marc good shit man i really like your flow. same with fuck the fame,but work on your M though thats all. everyone else, shut the fuck up.
ha either youre joking, or some how we're looking at a different marc

[dubbed]

nope. i like that dudes letters. the extras stuff is too much, but thats the only problem.
but even his extensions are at least decent.

[TastyMcNasty]

the only letter i actually dont mind on it is the A... but everything else is garbage, including the extensions/ connections

[..romero..]

somebody give me a word to draw,i hit a wall with my own name and i need something to get the juices flowing.id pick one on my own but i feel like i'll just pick something im overly comfortable with and it wont be worth anything...

[MoganOne]

Yo phat I was being serious man... Why don't you check out some real dope writers work and take notes and attempt their shit? Just for practice... Bite all you want I would not suggest to post it... It will help a lot... Cuz your style is pretty weak... I do like some of the shit you post... But I can not really see the style you have right now going anywhere

[MoganOne]

somebody give me a word to draw,i hit a wall with my own name and i need something to get the juices flowing.id pick one on my own but i feel like i'll just pick something im overly comfortable with and it wont be worth anything...

Yo do the word "PUKE" my man.. it'has dope letters

[bait]

yo im new here started graff couple weeks ago
http://i54.tinypic.com/bdjh2r.jpg

[PegCityBoy]

somebody give me a word to draw,i hit a wall with my own name and i need something to get the juices flowing.id pick one on my own but i feel like i'll just pick something im overly comfortable with and it wont be worth anything...

wanna do an exchange? i need to work on some new shit too. i write spam

[Dcicfhbimv]

Just finished this a little while back any advice? It reads Samurai and its a little too big for my scanner.Would appreciate some crits.

[Skope2]

Your colouring and sketch capabilities are clearly extremely good, but the letters there seem kind of weak. Id think about fattening them up abit. Youd lose the 'japanese' style of lettering to fit the samurai theme but it might be worth it.

[Marc]

the only letter i actually dont mind on it is the A... but everything else is garbage, including the extensions/ connections

Ok, straight in the head. :D
My work are still on the low level, I am aware of that. This is toy forum, so... that say everything.

[Nynja]

im new here, and heres a few from my book, the first one is kinda what i started with, the other two are kinda what i have been getting more in to and liking. ive only been doing this for about two months soo i know they suck lol, i appreciate any crits good or bad.

http://http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn125/69ninja69/12172010560.jpg
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn125/69ninja69/01122011593.jpg
http://i303.photobucket.com/albums/nn125/69ninja69/01292011608.jpg

[Sbal]

you dont understand the concept of 3D at all. You need to do simple, keyboard like letters before you attempe to abstract them like this.

[weedeater]

yeah that 3d is making my head hurt, you need a reference point. but like sbal said, you need to get down letter structure before anything.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

aight so before you hate, i dont paint... ever lol. i got home from work and randomly decided to do this cuz i am feeling somewhat depressed and i decided i wanted to paint something and i wanted to do something dark and evil and this came to my mind. i wasnt too concerned on how it came out. i did it for me and me only
and i realize this isnt really graff related but i posted it here get over it
i used acrylics, paint marker, bent bobby pin since i lacked a paint brush, torn sock.
ALIZER
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/ea9216f1.jpg

[Dcicfhbimv]

Thanks man. The projects already done. So i can't really faten the letters up now. But I'll keep it in mind for my next piece. I've been doing alot more characters lately so it may take awhile. But a few ideas for a fresh theme or a word would be awesome as hell.




Your colouring and sketch capabilities are clearly extremely good, but the letters there seem kind of weak. Id think about fattening them up abit. Youd lose the 'japanese' style of lettering to fit the samurai theme but it might be worth it.

[Gatsoi]

Can I get crits on this?

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/13-1.jpg

[..romero..]

]http://i54.tinypic.com/9h3rq8.jpg

fools on 12oz said it was cool but idk.i still think its kinda lame.but i talk alot and never post so i thought id throw this out here just to add something...


not my best work.but it was quick and im out of practice haha.ima redo it and post that one up later to compare...

[soej]

pretty cool romeo, i would try and fill in below the O and C somehow, maybe come up with a background for it if you're gonna redo it.

[ian]

this is the piece i was workin on for the last battle, i got real lazy and it was takin way too long and i didnt have any good pencils. i like the S and the A and K arent bad, the S turned out shitty tho. figured id just post it for the hell of it

http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/9249/imag0291w.jpg

[trashpickaflash]

shitty picture. wish I had a real camera. I'm okay with the AID, not a fan of the GR though. Crits?
http://i56.tinypic.com/ermzhc.jpg

[Female]

@Ian the arrow behind the k is random, overall i like the idea you should finish
@Graid is your bg corn? i'm curious .

[thepekins]

graid your I is weird just make it straight.

[ian]

@Ian the arrow behind the k is random, overall i like the idea you should finish
@Graid is your bg corn? i'm curious .

its comin off the top of the A, kinda hard to tell becuase i had the shadow from the K on it so and i made it pretty dark so it looks like its not connected to anything

[..romero..]

]http://i54.tinypic.com/9h3rq8.jpg

...

so i wanted crits but i really didnt get any.you guys are lame.

i know how shit goes,crits for crits or whatever.so ima critique some of yall niggras


SAMURAI-lord jesus,where do i start haha.it looks obvious that this is your first few months,because its very similar to how i started out.first off your letters are overlapping too much,before i read your post i thought it said sakurai...your m is almost non distinguishable
becuase of the S's overlap.space them out more so that the individual letters are better able to be recognized.the s as the A's middle bar is a bad look,its its own letter and shouldnt have to depend on other letters making up its bars.also the i is unrecognizable because its so small.dont trip just practice more


NYNJA.i cant read it.i think you should go back to simples until you have a better understanding of the letters,honestly i think that you hsould find someone who knows what their doing with 3ds.i cant even do them.my homies can though,in the end it takes alot of practice and alot of patience,but if thats the style your wanna do i suggest you work on making the letters more pronouncable.really just keep practicing.

NEWT-nice little simple.you should make sure that your individual bars are more consistent
in thickness,they look cattywampus,im not saying to make your letters more rigid or block like
but the actual bars them selfs should be be equal in consistency the whole lenght of the bar

really it looks like something that will correct itself with more practice,your on the right track though.




i can haz critz nao?

[TastyMcNasty]

romero- lookin good, the only thing i dont really like is the bar at the bottom of the R and K

[trashpickaflash]

@Graid is your bg corn? i'm curious .

The light brown part is like a bannerish thing. I was just messing around with it, and the blue parts is a swarm of faceless ghosts.

[Phat 2]

isnt there someone that already writes rock1 ?

[Dcicfhbimv]

Of course you can haz critz now. honestly didnt look back to this thread till just now so I totally missed your post. I can see what your talking about regarding the letters and it shows in your work. the extention dipping from the end of the "R" is alright I'd just make the one on the "K" go the opposite way you know inward to match. And the o and c work but come off a bit weak. Looking back you used the extention from the "k" to make the 1 so maybe you could just use the back end to tie it inward and leave the front one as is. Hope it helps. And no not my 1st few months. Just screwing around trying to make something out of nothing.



so i wanted crits but i really didnt get any.you guys are lame.

i know how shit goes,crits for crits or whatever.so ima critique some of yall niggras


SAMURAI-lord jesus,where do i start haha.it looks obvious that this is your first few months,because its very similar to how i started out.first off your letters are overlapping too much,before i read your post i thought it said sakurai...your m is almost non distinguishable
becuase of the S's overlap.space them out more so that the individual letters are better able to be recognized.the s as the A's middle bar is a bad look,its its own letter and shouldnt have to depend on other letters making up its bars.also the i is unrecognizable because its so small.dont trip just practice more


NYNJA.i cant read it.i think you should go back to simples until you have a better understanding of the letters,honestly i think that you hsould find someone who knows what their doing with 3ds.i cant even do them.my homies can though,in the end it takes alot of practice and alot of patience,but if thats the style your wanna do i suggest you work on making the letters more pronouncable.really just keep practicing.

NEWT-nice little simple.you should make sure that your individual bars are more consistent
in thickness,they look cattywampus,im not saying to make your letters more rigid or block like
but the actual bars them selfs should be be equal in consistency the whole lenght of the bar

really it looks like something that will correct itself with more practice,your on the right track though.




i can haz critz nao?

[Nynja]

Yea i know the 3d is completly horrible at the moment, i havent stopped practicing letter structure and basics, this is just something i came up with recently and have only done about 3 pieces with to see if i like the concept of 3d multiple perspective. And thanks ian hopefully i can find someone who is good with 3d when i get back from basic, also it probably is the direction i will go once i get everything down.

Dcicfhbimv- i really dig the whole samurai theme, but the letters do need to be more seperated, im not a big fan of how there are really close for the SAM and more spread apart for the UARI half. Other than that its a really good piece!

NEWT- i like how simple it is, seems very clean, and the green outline is very subtle but looks good!

Romero- other than the extensions on the R and K it looks pretty good, except my first quick glance at the R sorta looked like a B so maybe move the leg out a little? keep up the good work, i would definitly like to see it redone.

Ian- awsome concept the arrow connected to the A does look a little off but if you finish it im sure it would look great! shoot i would even send you a good set of pencils to see it finshed! haha keep working on it, its looking good.

[ghostwriter]

http://i176.photobucket.com/albums/w188/sabe-2/jyylo.jpg

i lik the ink fill and teh whole thing is pretty banging

[ribcage]

the bottom of the left bar of the r came out a little small, idk if you meant to do that but if it was the same width as the top part the r, it might look better

[FuckTheFame]

not really feeling the extensions off the bottom right of your R and K...turn em into arrows?
haha other than that its honestly a solid piece
letters could be a little more all the same size
but its got some real style

[..romero..]

i haz the crits,now i can go back to slumber in my cave,only reappearing on BS to devour toys and deliver lulz.i'll deliver them but none of you seem to get the jokes,i assume its because your all canadians...



god damn canucks.

[Real Gangsta Shit]

18176
worin on my 3D

[thepekins]

obviously this is just my opinion but you guys shuoldnt be working on 3-d stuff like that, just work on normal letters and get that solid before you try that stuff. were not all daim on here.. but do what you want thats just my 2 cenzz

http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/6821/scan0001hf.jpg (http://img560.imageshack.us/i/scan0001hf.jpg/)
ignore the B in this i ran out of space its retarded
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9408/scan0002ev.jpg (http://img62.imageshack.us/i/scan0002ev.jpg/)
http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/2893/scan0003s.jpg (http://img810.imageshack.us/i/scan0003s.jpg/)
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9323/scan0004hv.jpg (http://img62.imageshack.us/i/scan0004hv.jpg/)
http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/1446/scan0005tt.jpg (http://img34.imageshack.us/i/scan0005tt.jpg/)

[Phat 2]

i h8 ur karax

[Fluffy Bunnies]

i h8 ur karax

very informative lol

i wouldnt say i hate them, they just arent very well done, like man i can do that and i dont even do characters. do something thats unique to you, like something that doesnt look like me or the next guy can do or little jimmy down the street
and ur letters look like they on the way, not totally awesome but you'll get better in time... i hope

[H1P30N3R]

this is the piece i was workin on for the last battle, i got real lazy and it was takin way too long and i didnt have any good pencils. i like the S and the A and K arent bad, the S turned out shitty tho. figured id just post it for the hell of it

http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/9249/imag0291w.jpg

The concept is nice some of the best ive seen from you get it tweaked dont give up on this 1

[thepekins]

Its not like im saying "oh a charac i did". that stuff is just doodles from school, nothing serious you know.

[ENKM]

18182181831818018181 im new yea and um criticism is needed :x

[JustChillin]

ENKM- Start from scratch and learn the basics of letter structure. dont bother wasting ur time with the color schemes till u can find a nice simple flow with your letters.


a couple quickies in class
http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/downsized_0203012003.jpg
http://i619.photobucket.com/albums/tt277/WeRunLA818/downsized_0203011937.jpg

[ENKM]

I DID start from scratch I've been on other various sites like this and I got told to move on to more complex stuff

[ENKM]

sorry for double post heres more 1818518186 hell i should prob just post my DA account its all on there too

[JustChillin]

Those are better but perfect it. then after uve perfected your basic letters make small simple changes to each letter and work with it a little more

[ENKM]

Yea I know basically I wanted crits on the newer stuff(the 2 top pieces) and the rest is just like an image dump, been tryin this shit for 2 years and everyone either say I'm good or I'm bad I want to be ready to paint already but I know I'm not ready and well doesnt seem like I can find my style i really like old school graf and try to model it after that

[ian]

haha damn you guys tellin me to finish my shit, i was so over that too. i guess ill finish it when i have some time.

[Cl4sh]

ENKM: Your name has no vowels :O word are supposed to have vowels. You sir, have defined the laws of english. Also, ditch that fucking crown

Also: BITCH YOU MISUSED SHIPPING LABELS! Didn't you read the warning when you ordered them? Pigs gonna come knocking at cho door soon. Gonna go to jail bitch. Have fun getting raped.

[thepekins]

obviously this is just my opinion but you guys shuoldnt be working on 3-d stuff like that, just work on normal letters and get that solid before you try that stuff. were not all daim on here.. but do what you want thats just my 2 cenzz

http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/6821/scan0001hf.jpg (http://img560.imageshack.us/i/scan0001hf.jpg/)
ignore the B in this i ran out of space its retarded
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9408/scan0002ev.jpg (http://img62.imageshack.us/i/scan0002ev.jpg/)
http://img810.imageshack.us/img810/2893/scan0003s.jpg (http://img810.imageshack.us/i/scan0003s.jpg/)
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9323/scan0004hv.jpg (http://img62.imageshack.us/i/scan0004hv.jpg/)
http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/1446/scan0005tt.jpg (http://img34.imageshack.us/i/scan0005tt.jpg/)

bump I got no crits on the last page. mostly just care about my letters the characs are just bullshit doodles

[thepekins]

ENKM- Dont fill your pieces yet, especially not with colored pencils lol. Your second post was better try donig different stuff with them now, tilting them and shit just to play around

[Gatsoi]

Somber- Bring the letters in your pieces closer together
ENKM- It doesn't even look like you used bars on the first piece, You say you've been writing for two years?
@Clash E is a Vowel.

http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/17.jpg

[Nynja]

i like the color scheme and charc, keep up the good work!

[ENKM]

meh i sometimes use bars i sometimes dont lol i use colored pencils cuz im to poor to get any good stuff and i live in a wee little town lol so no stores here to rack from, and yes 2 years on and off then been doin it everyday for like 9 months now, unlike others i just want to do old school graff sure sum of the stuff these days is good but its like everyone just has to have a perfect looking style and all that crap but the truth is graff was created simple so i want my stuff to stay relatively simple hell doesnt even have to be perfect i have a throwie that i think is pretty good i could post pics of that if it makes a difference haha

[ENKM]

[ATTACH=CONFIG]18196[/ATTACH this is my throwie i guess

[SicK-]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/bfad8614.jpg
Crits please?
enkm- dont use a ruler on your letters bro.
pekins- your letters are real nice, maybe bring them closer together they seem pretty far apart
Newt- YOU SUCK ASS. just playn i like that E i actually did a e similar to that on one of these sketchs.

[thepekins]

Werm- your R in both of those seems a little big. I like your W's the most. Try to get crisper edges on the corners of the letters if you know what i mean
ENKM- lolslolslolslolslolslolslolslolslols. that throw up is horrible, along with your handie. You need to be more critical of yourself, like more self conscious of your stuff. Your explanation for having bad or as you call it "simple" graffiti just doesnt really make any sense. You dont have to listen to me but you came on this site for crits so there they are

[Cl4sh]

@Clash E is a Vowel.


Fuck my dumbass.

[ENKM]

@thepekins ok what makes my throwie horrible??? throwies are supposed to be sumthin ou put up quick and fast they dont hafta be perfect
@sick hahhh didnt use a ruler made lines with a pencil then went over with pen marker etc lolz :l
just keep the crits comin im enjoying this its helpin a lot lol

[Flawless Victory]

Bro if you are going to get mad every time someone says your shit is bad (it is, all of it, not just your throw), then you might as well just quit right now.
Throws are something to "put up quick" that reflects your style, like "this is how dope the shit I can pull off in a hot spot is", if it's bad then you are just making yourself look bad.

[ENKM]

im not getting mad this is the prob i have on other sites everyone thinks i get mad :l but idk i just dont see what makes my stuff so bad..and no never gonna quit just not gonna happen this is sumthin i hafta work for

[NosE2]

maybe you should change your name...i doubt you get up so it wouldn't be too big of a deal....usually when you fuck with different letters it really helps you progress

[ENKM]

ive changed my same like 11 times and im pretty good with an E fairly good with N and K suck with M tho thats why most of the time lately i put up ENK

[Flawless Victory]

I would recommend picking something pronounceable

[thepekins]

look man i dont think your getting mad or anything but just because a throwie is something to be put up quick doesnt mean it should look bad. fuckin shit dude, just admit your bad at graff. You are making reasons why having bad graffiti is ok. If you dont want to be good at graffiti thats cool but dont think youre anything close to good right now cus your stuff is really bad, it looks like youve been writing for two months at the most. Im not saying that as an insult or anything, its just true.
Im mucchh better than you dude, but I still think that about 90% of my stuff is awful and the other 10% still isnt good.
sorry for this stoned rant right now. Bottom line ENKM YOU NEED TO BE MORE CRITICAL OF YO SELPHHH

[ENKM]

all the pronounceable onces are taken lolz ummm lemme think ERUV? ESKY? I want it to start with an E, EONS? EXUL? These are real words btw
@thepekins the only thing i thought was good was my throwie and i am critical of myself im a perfectionist but obviously my stuff wasnt as good as i thought and come on im sorry but saying your better than anyone is like me saying it were ALL TOYS here all of us the only other thing i think is good is my one character i have

[thepekins]

im not saying im better than anyone. just you. its mad true i could paint a throw in a second that would be better than yours, but that was not the point I was trying to make dude. The point I was making is that saying im better than you isnt saying much. Im not saying im some hot shit or anything

[Mippi]

i dunno if this is a good time to post this lol. but im bout to fall asleep and i need some crits on this for the morning if you dont mind... i did it in about 5 minutes so yea i wanna work on it more :D

[Female]

the R might be too small and the W too wide but thats my opinion.

[Dcicfhbimv]

Mippi-I like the simple look except the inconsistant outline on don't and the ending "a" on wanna. other than that and the kinda small "r" I like it.

[Dcicfhbimv]

18280

Just kinda threw something together don't like it too much. Figured I'd ask you guys where you think I went wrong with this one.

[thepekins]

^you should drop the crazy fill and the crazy swirly extensions. I cant tell what the first letter is. Try to make straighter bars and dont waste all your black on that background.

Mippi- dont do the little lines at the bottom of all the letters. And I would drop the swirls in your d,a,g,p.

[ghostwriter]

could some one help me with a new name shoes isnt cuttin it

[H1P30N3R]

just gotta try different letters find out your fav letters then build a name from there

[Skope2]

could some one help me with a new name shoes isnt cuttin it

A nice way to find a new name is taking a word and spelling it differently. For example i thought of the word telescope. Seperated scope, spelt it with a k. I liked it so stuck with it.
Or you could literally just draw out a graf alphabet and stick together the ones you like the most, then arrange them into a word.

[thepekins]

kinda gotta pick your name yourself. Do letters that you are good at. make sure no one else who is well known already writes it. thats about it

[NosE2]

18280

Just kinda threw something together don't like it too much. Figured I'd ask you guys where you think I went wrong with this one.

what the fuckkkkkk

[ghostwriter]

thats nice killing

[FuckTheFame]

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5093/5419190552_00e0592800.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5419190552/)

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5178/5418587469_9fafa3cd33.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5418587469/)

(an exchange for smooth nuts)
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5253/5418587597_328b619fc3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5418587597/)


everything i draw seems forced lately
i need inspiration

[Flawless Victory]

Do drugs, man.

[FuckTheFame]

lmao i do man
i went to a dubstep rave a couple weeks ago
molly, random alc, smoking purple kush straight on the dance floor
ate mushrooms the day after
lol i even sell tree
i need xanax something fierce
my shit is all over the place without a calm structure
lol if you notice my lines are kind of shaky

[Mippi]

awh the swirls aren't working eh.

[ENKM]

@thepekins sorry man but im gettin a lil sick off all your damn bragging i wanted crits but now your bragging very ignorantly
@mippi i like how its simple but it needs some work in my opinion the n's look a lil funky and your r is a tad bit to small
@fuckthefame i like the top one

[ENKM]

18324
new throwie shitty handie and character

[Phat 2]

shitty throwie too... only good letter is the n and only if it was standalone

[FuckTheFame]

throw some structured funk on that
bombs are basically circles ENKM
or at least for the style your attempting i think thats a good assumption

[NosE2]

havent sketched in a minute, heres a quick one...crits would be appreciated
http://i54.tinypic.com/5mxr2q.jpg

[Phat 2]

looks great in general, except the middle part of the W

[NosE2]

yeah I've been tryin' to figure some shit out, but I've had writers block for a minute

[ENKM]

@fuckthefame so i should basically just make it flow better and all? like do have like a reference pic for throwies? that would be help like i dont see many throwies
@phat2 any tips for the other letters?

anyone have any tip on the character?