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Cl4sh
02-11-2011, 08:54 PM
You guys said make keyboard letters I did it I hated it here you go.
Female-Good stuff 1st piece that made me laugh in a long time

Well if you really don't like simples, you have two options.
1) Quit
2) Suck longer

Dcicfhbimv
02-11-2011, 11:13 PM
Or just do my own thing and learn graffiti without having to do it the way you guys deem mandatory. But I guess you missed that one.

Well if you really don't like simples, you have two options.
1) Quit
2) Suck longer

Cl4sh
02-11-2011, 11:28 PM
Or just do my own thing and learn graffiti without having to do it the way you guys deem mandatory. But I guess you missed that one.

Yeah I did. Have fun with that.

IbuprofenTablets
02-11-2011, 11:32 PM
So, I'm in medical school.
Everyone's trying to tell me how I'm suppose to know the human anatomy if I want to end up becoming a surgen,
but I say fuck that, I'll just do my own thing and learn the human anatomy by winging it. Those motherfuckers'll see, I'll be a dope surgeon in no time! I don't need to study shit! I can learn everything about being a surgeon by just copying the way other famous surgeons perform surgery!

Cl4sh
02-11-2011, 11:45 PM
Heheheh

SicK-
02-11-2011, 11:59 PM
Or just do my own thing and learn graffiti without having to do it the way you guys deem mandatory. But I guess you missed that one.

I agree with this kid, you guys act like doing keyboard letters is the only way to get better. Clash your not even good and you act all high and mighty, that thing screw posted was already better then anything ive soon from you.

Ante
02-12-2011, 12:47 AM
Some simps. I know they're not perfect, but I'd love some crits on how I can improve. Which ones suck? Which ones did I do well on, if any?

Female
02-12-2011, 11:04 AM
Ante keep working with the last one you did.

Cl4sh
02-12-2011, 12:49 PM
Clash your not even good and you act all high and mighty, that thing screw posted was already better then anything ive soon from you.

High and mighty? *****, I thought I was the only bitch on this forum the knew I sucked!

Dcicfhbimv
02-12-2011, 03:46 PM
thanks Sick. Im just kinda irritated that the only feed back I get when I post my work is do keyboard letters. I actually tried taking their advise for the last 3 pieces I've worked on and their advice is the only thing that hasn't changed.

Ante- It never hurts to look at another persons style take what you like leave what you don't, and tweak it to be your own. Idk you seem to be in a similar boat to me and the whole keyboard letter thing hasn't helped me at all. maybe it takes a little more time investment maybe its hopless. Either way just keep on working at your bound to improve.


High and mighty? *****, I thought I was the only bitch on this forum the knew I sucked!

TastyMcNasty
02-12-2011, 04:17 PM
new shit.. crits? oh and the "SHA" is a unfinished sketch for the battle

pointman
02-12-2011, 04:34 PM
Second piece is steez more in the pencil stage though.. you could make that so old school with some funky colours haha nice stuff

EWL24
02-12-2011, 05:21 PM
yeah yeah i have noticed that's what you guys say to every one who is new, but i have actually tried to start going more simple. i know the sonar one is wack and has too many extensions i did that some time over the summer and i don't use that name any more. anyways the one with the alien is the most recent and i think that it is pretty damn simple, if i were to go any simpler then that i think it would look dumb.
btw that YouTube vid is crazy

ian
02-12-2011, 05:26 PM
you new kids just dont get it, its not about goin out and puttin keyboard letters up on a wall, its about learning what makes a K a K or how an M is built. You need to be familiar with the structure of the letters before you start to tweak them or else the tweaks are gonna take away the basic form of the letter and its gonna end up looking like shit. You need to learn about bars because it doesnt look like any of you are using them. You need to understand where extensions fit and complement your letters rather than just putting them in wherever you have some open space. Its not about writing straight letters and thats it, its about learning what makes each letter up and then once you get that, you can tweak them and add more style.

Dcicfhbimv
02-12-2011, 05:35 PM
i feel ya Ian and I really appreciate your detailed explanation of why keyboard letters are actually important. Thanks for actually trying to help us out instead of just stating the same thing over and over again. I'm gonna try doing my own thing and may very well end up doing exactly what your talking about by finding the balance between clarity and style but I'm not gonna do it by their terms anymore. It just seems senseless. Thanks though it's actually nice to know some of these posts actuallty mean more than just another person shit talking.

Tasty-the top one the ending A looks alot like the H before it. I like the O on the 2nd one and the 4th one as well kinda reminds me of the green lantern logo and sort of a gear.

Cl4sh
02-12-2011, 06:24 PM
18706

Finally got around to this. Any thoughts?

MoganOne
02-12-2011, 06:28 PM
That look like you used really good markers on that piece clash... Prisma?

Cl4sh
02-12-2011, 06:36 PM
Nah man. They say Tree House Studio. Racked em from Hobby Lobby. They're pretty decent though.

ian
02-12-2011, 06:38 PM
i feel ya Ian and I really appreciate your detailed explanation of why keyboard letters are actually important. Thanks for actually trying to help us out instead of just stating the same thing over and over again. I'm gonna try doing my own thing and may very well end up doing exactly what your talking about by finding the balance between clarity and style but I'm not gonna do it by their terms anymore. It just seems senseless. Thanks though it's actually nice to know some of these posts actuallty mean more than just another person shit talking.

Tasty-the top one the ending A looks alot like the H before it. I like the O on the 2nd one and the 4th one as well kinda reminds me of the green lantern logo and sort of a gear.


youre gonna hear a lot of shit talking around here, its just the way things go. its not about finding a balance between clarity and style, theres some ridiculous wildstyles that are almost impossible to read unless youre a writer and used to it, its about knowing the structure of the letters and using it to your advantage rather than fighting it with your "style"

Dcicfhbimv
02-12-2011, 06:42 PM
I think I follow. Thats what I was wondering for awhile. Cause I'd see wildstyles and couldn't read any more than a letter or two. and then this whole keyboard lettering thing kinda just wouldn't stop guess it just got to me. But one things for sure I've been actually paying a bit more attention to letters lately not so much keeping them uniform like a keyboard but keeping them distinct and legible as they should be. and yeah I'll keep what you said in my mind. it was actually helpful.


youre gonna hear a lot of shit talking around here, its just the way things go. its not about finding a balance between clarity and style, theres some ridiculous wildstyles that are almost impossible to read unless youre a writer and used to it, its about knowing the structure of the letters and using it to your advantage rather than fighting it with your "style"

ian
02-12-2011, 07:06 PM
make sure you work with bars too dude, your other piece didnt have any type of bars and thats a big thing with keepin the letter structure tight. use uniform widths for now and once you get better you can start to vary the widths and curve the bars

Dcicfhbimv
02-12-2011, 07:23 PM
So bars are simply those little rectangles everyone uses?


make sure you work with bars too dude, your other piece didnt have any type of bars and thats a big thing with keepin the letter structure tight. use uniform widths for now and once you get better you can start to vary the widths and curve the bars

ribcage
02-12-2011, 07:32 PM
^lol

pointman
02-12-2011, 07:45 PM
http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4075/5439655407_3168cb041a.jpg
sort of a shitty bite of a whole train i seen when i was about 10 this thing was sick looked like it was made of stone

Phat 2
02-12-2011, 07:53 PM
shit !!!! good memory...
or it's the only piece uve ever seen :P

pointman
02-12-2011, 07:57 PM
well im 18 now so it was fair while ago haha now the trains don't even leave the yard when they get painted as it promotes crime apparently..hopefully shit will change

NosE2
02-12-2011, 08:10 PM
DCIC, this is what you're lookin' for...i googled imaged it, but its the simplest thing i found
http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/6451/93957054.jpg (http://img823.imageshack.us/i/93957054.jpg/)

ian
02-12-2011, 08:10 PM
So bars are simply those little rectangles everyone uses?

bars are basically rectangles yes, for example, an H is two vertical bars with a horizontal one in between, and a C is just one big curved bar. Work with bars and make sure you keep the width of them consistant throughout your whole piece. You should really check out the new to graffiti thread

pointman
02-12-2011, 08:38 PM
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5019/5439772659_22cb229aa3.jpg BARRRZZZZ!

ian
02-12-2011, 08:47 PM
no dude, just no. idk if thats supposed to be a 3d piece but the 3d is pretty much just fucked

NosE2
02-12-2011, 09:19 PM
lol what is that jizz lookin' shit..

pointman
02-12-2011, 09:22 PM
its half two i the morning here and i'm so high haha it was ment to be a nose exclamation mark or something hahah i have loads of other weird sketches as well its not like im better when im not baked im still shit

ian
02-12-2011, 10:14 PM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6070/imag0306i.jpg

Rask Wsk LA
02-13-2011, 12:50 AM
just fuckin around with a scetch, its w/e tho

work on that 3d nato

noise- letters and same size, nice handy tho

thepekins
02-13-2011, 09:26 AM
Pointman- does that say sato or vato? either way dont listen to da haterz. it would look better with like a vanishing point 3d or something but whatever.

Ian- wtf is wrong with you O?

Rask- the letters are decent, everything else should go. the bar coming off the top of your R is flaccid

ian
02-13-2011, 01:20 PM
its supposed to be a music note, i wasnt sure if i should put a hole in it and then the drop shadow fucked it up because it was black on black

MoganOne
02-13-2011, 05:16 PM
just fuckin around with a scetch, its w/e tho

work on that 3d nato

noise- letters and same size, nice handy tho

This kind of looks like there is a big horse behind your piece lol... wad the fuk are all those strands coming out suppose to be?

IbuprofenTablets
02-14-2011, 09:28 AM
It looks as if it took him like an hour to sketch that.

I'd say make quicker more decisive strokes.

newbornsek
02-14-2011, 02:23 PM
quick sketch
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m154/newbornsek/IMG-20110201-00234.jpg

ian
02-14-2011, 05:42 PM
rask i like those letters, id say flare that S out more at the bottom to match the other 3 and lose that background but it looks good.
fear you gotta work with bars more on that, the top of the F, bottom of the F, top of the E, top left of the A, and pretty much the whole top of the R are fucked up. lose all the fancy shit and get your letters together

quick sketch i did for the girl, i like the way it turned out, crits appreciated

http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/8288/imag0313q.jpg

thepekins
02-14-2011, 06:54 PM
dont say you hate graffiti thats not cool...

one crit for you ian... dont give it to her. . . hehe just kiddin the bottom of the C is bad, top of the t and a , dont curve them likke that tooo

ian
02-14-2011, 07:00 PM
haha, thanks bro, i know im no king but she doesnt know a thing about graffiti, ill make some tweaks color it up and she'll think its hot shit. The main things i think is the bottom of the C and the top of the T. i actually like the A, and im wonderin about the extension on the H. tried to kill some neg space but is it bad?

SicK-
02-14-2011, 08:04 PM
http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/5d6ae6ec.jpg
crits

ian
02-14-2011, 09:08 PM
crits4crits?

Norfsuthr
02-14-2011, 09:58 PM
Werm- nice R, I feel like the W and M are too simple for the ER tho.
Fear, your letters look like they got potential you just needa lose the extra shit around them and work simple for a minute.

Trying a new style, fuckin with connects
http://piczasso.com/i/1igkg.jpg (http://www.imagehosting.com/)

ian
02-14-2011, 10:52 PM
well thanks for skippin right over me

SicK-
02-14-2011, 11:28 PM
Yo ian no hate, by why the hell do you post so much. like how long are you on BS a day? you have like over half the posts on this page

ian
02-14-2011, 11:52 PM
just depends on the day TBH, im at school and i usually dont have much to do during the week so ill draw up some graff and hit up BS, just a way to pass the time really. And i also dont just like sit on here and refresh the page, i just check in a few times a day. I like to see what other people post and say, the more graff i see and the more i can draw the better ill get

NosE2
02-15-2011, 08:20 AM
yo Ian it looks pretty decent, like someone else said fix the bottom of the C, and on the A i think you should take the middle bar going across and bring it to the outside of the right bar, if you get what im sayin. And the R and I are really cramped up

ian
02-15-2011, 09:33 AM
thanks dude, im also tryin to decide if i should do 3d or a drop shadow, any suggestions?

NosE2
02-15-2011, 11:33 AM
either simple 3d to the left, straight drop down 3d, or make it all go to the bottom center

Norfsuthr
02-15-2011, 02:22 PM
well thanks for skippin right over me

ahaha chill. I probably thought it was another one of fear's sketches. whatever, space your letters out more, try some 3D, tighten up the S, and work on the A.

ian
02-15-2011, 03:28 PM
ha no worries dude, cant really space em out im outta room on the paper and im gonna throw some 3d on it. whys everyone hatin on my A lol i like it

ian
02-15-2011, 04:19 PM
take 2?

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6052/imag0314h.jpg

Sbal
02-15-2011, 04:22 PM
yeeee

NosE2
02-15-2011, 05:11 PM
ye yeeeeeeeee color that shit, she'll get wet......P in VG for good ol' Ian...yippeeeeeeee

FuckTheFame
02-15-2011, 05:32 PM
ians got moves

FlippingChickens
02-15-2011, 05:57 PM
the "i" with the heart is wack..everything else is improving.

OG x KUSH x
02-15-2011, 06:08 PM
a couple freestyles i did recently in school

FlippingChickens
02-15-2011, 06:32 PM
ian - the "i" with the heart is wack..everything else is improving.

kush - yo the first "s" is cool,but the rest needs to start looking more simple,like ian. too many wierd bends and shit

SeizeTheMoment
02-15-2011, 07:09 PM
you cant write kwest....

4menace2society0
02-15-2011, 07:10 PM
a couple freestyles i did recently in school

this is god awful lol
do your homework

OG x KUSH x
02-15-2011, 08:11 PM
wordd thanks for the crits. and @seizethemoment i know

Phat 2
02-15-2011, 09:49 PM
take 2?

http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6052/imag0314h.jpg

THIS is what I call progress
not regular, not big, not huge, but MONSTROUS props buddy

ian
02-15-2011, 10:16 PM
thanks phat, some spots are a little sloppy, the coloring isnt great (crayola markers and a staples highlighter), and the yellow is a little hard to see, but here it is. I'm happy with it and id be willing to say its my best yet

finished product:

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/3994/scan110460000.jpg

TastyMcNasty
02-15-2011, 10:23 PM
ian- that is the best shit ive seen from you... keep that shit up

MakeHate
02-15-2011, 11:17 PM
so fresh ian! any critz guys?

Gatsoi
02-16-2011, 10:49 AM
@ian shprolly just start throwin that bitch's name up

ian
02-16-2011, 02:40 PM
@ian shprolly just start throwin that bitch's name up


http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/3154/0copyg.jpg

but for real thanks lol i thought it was good but i didnt think it was /that/ good

thepekins
02-16-2011, 03:56 PM
a couple freestyles i did recently in school

DONT FUCKING WRITE KWEST DONT FUCKING WRITE IT!!!!

Ian- that shit looks wayyyy bette colored props dude

LeanOne
02-16-2011, 06:21 PM
18880

18882

NosE2
02-16-2011, 06:43 PM
do straight letters...so it looks like LEAN...i started coloring this shit the other night when i was wasted....not the best idea...
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/6186/imgp0097f.jpg (http://img148.imageshack.us/i/imgp0097f.jpg/)

Flawless Victory
02-16-2011, 07:03 PM
wasted on what? Mescaline?

Naw but for real, that shit is a little too loud bro.
Like, the individual fills aren't bad, but all together it just reminds me of fake bapes.

NosE2
02-16-2011, 07:07 PM
hahaha. word...nah im goin to try to do each letter different....i dont know...

but yo lean i did this in a minute, just a visual aspect of what you want it to be like
http://img535.imageshack.us/img535/2025/imgp0098c.jpg (http://img535.imageshack.us/i/imgp0098c.jpg/)


This is off topic, but check out what "AGEKTOHIO" just send me... lmao
"what part of OH you from? im tryin to meet up with some new cats"

hahaha fuck the po-lice

thepekins
02-16-2011, 07:17 PM
that shits awesome nose dont listen to FV you've progressed a bunch recently dude

ian
02-16-2011, 07:27 PM
yo zewl you think you could hit me up with one of those straight simps you always do except NOISE?

somethin like these
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1812/imgp3505a.jpg
http://img33.imageshack.us/img33/892/imgp3506.jpg

i can do my best to hit you back with somethin but im still not very good

LeanOne
02-16-2011, 07:28 PM
Sweet nose, the help is appreciated

Phat 2
02-16-2011, 08:15 PM
that lean sketch isn't half bad at all, LeanOne
just practice on

Norfsuthr
02-16-2011, 10:43 PM
Zewl those letters are sexy, makin me want to work harder.

Graff J up
02-16-2011, 11:39 PM
http://i54.tinypic.com/2i6kqbn.jpg
http://i55.tinypic.com/f3chdx.jpg
http://i54.tinypic.com/21j6aa9.jpg:)
havent been on here in some time changed name from neaz
and ignore the tags, i was really bored doing scribbles
ian- that I is fucking pointyyy
werm-that r and e is werid...fix that

extinct
02-17-2011, 12:39 AM
hehe i wrote "lean2"... lol

NosE2
02-17-2011, 02:50 AM
word Ian I got you tomorrow

and thanks everyone

DamoOne
02-17-2011, 08:04 AM
new here,i guess there's a crits4crits policy here so here are some crits
graff J up-go simple
nose2-sexy shit but i would get rid of the shit on top of the E, i like the coloring on that letter,funky
lean-like they said,go simple
well that's it for now,i would really appreciate some crits on this,the letters are just freestyled and the coloring is done with these http://i54.tinypic.com/20ro9dh.jpg
so yeah,it's shit

the sketch:
http://i56.tinypic.com/2iu85lc.jpg

LeanOne
02-17-2011, 08:46 AM
18888
Not sure where to go from here. I need to get hold of some pencils & rubbers coz im tearing through pads with these ball point pens.

Graff J Up - the smiley face in that O kinda kills it
Nose - Aside from the colours on that piece it looks quite good
DamoOne - Not bad but try single colours. Im new here but alot of the criticism i've seen is ''block letters''. Try that style and see how it works out.

EDIT: i have finished that peice but ill upload it later

NosE2
02-17-2011, 10:36 AM
it looks like youre sketching your lines really slowly, cause they look all shaky...do your lines in one quick motion, don't be scared to fuck up, its just paper...so eventually when you paint and whatnot it wont take you 20 minutes to sketch out a straight letter...more like 1....or 30 seconds..

ian
02-17-2011, 03:36 PM
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/6828/imag0317f.jpg

not my best but i gave it a shot

NosE2
02-17-2011, 03:46 PM
word....w's are hard arent they

ian
02-17-2011, 03:50 PM
word....w's are hard arent they

haha def, i could rock a ZEL if i had more time but that W was def a bitch

LeanOne
02-17-2011, 03:54 PM
Ian - Looks clean but i'd say on the top line of the E it shouldn't bend back down if you get me.

Finished piece
18900

thepekins
02-17-2011, 06:37 PM
W is my least favorite letter. Idk why i used to write waze. it was a toy name and my W's always looked retarded

LeanOne
02-18-2011, 07:15 AM
I rarely do W's but i find putting the outside bars like / and \ works.

18932
18931

MoganOne
02-18-2011, 10:08 AM
The Second W looks legit

Zookyook
02-19-2011, 03:40 AM
wud up bs toys... been a while since i posted, this site is a great insomniac escape... i thought id share some newish shit that hasnt been covered up yet
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5131/5458131850_2e61e2fb47.jpg
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5020/5458123524_21a708b568.jpg
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5255/5458122708_389c04d59c_z.jpg
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5291/5458129610_9d737cb0e0.jpg
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5016/5457523223_010ebd2479.jpg
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5056/5458125240_999f269876.jpg

oh and wud up to zewl and mone... i might have time for exchanges soon so pm me if u want in fools...

Phat 2
02-19-2011, 05:53 AM
sick as always zookyrock

LeanOne
02-19-2011, 07:00 AM
Some sick shit there zookyook

thepekins
02-19-2011, 09:08 AM
the second picture is dope what paint markers do you use?


http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/2937/scan0023d.jpg (http://img405.imageshack.us/i/scan0023d.jpg/)
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/5761/scan0024r.jpg (http://img231.imageshack.us/i/scan0024r.jpg/)
http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/8011/scan0025u.jpg (http://img696.imageshack.us/i/scan0025u.jpg/)
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/7402/scan0026o.jpg (http://img13.imageshack.us/i/scan0026o.jpg/)

idk what that last one was, cant even remember when I drew it just found it in a stack with all this other stuff

LeanOne
02-19-2011, 01:32 PM
Thepekins - only thing i dont like is the arrows. I think they'd look better if they were like >

Zookyook
02-19-2011, 02:21 PM
thanksh guysh.... i use one4alls and decos... most of what i posted was with the one4alls, im tryin to cover every page of my blackbook, even pages with a lot of tags and throws all over them... those throws and straights are over top of multiple layers of paint and ink... and ill say it again one4alls are the best paint markers out there

i like ur handstyles somber, looks like u could tweak them just a little and they could be oneliners.... the arrows dont look bad... the bars are decent, just get ur 3d perfect and add highlights and that shits gonna jump off the page

OG x KUSH x
02-19-2011, 04:03 PM
ehh new word first try at it

ViniVidiVici
02-19-2011, 05:28 PM
Eh, I'll take crits, changes my name to Mesh instead of Mesa, I don't think it is taken? Am I correct, I tried to search for Mesh graffiti but didn't get anything so.... I'm gonna hope the name isn't taken.

anyways
Nemor - always enjoy your shit
Pekins - It's not bad, but I just dislike that style, idk why
KUSH - not digging it at all sorry

Zookyook
02-19-2011, 06:11 PM
click the images tab when ur googling names mesh....
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3012/2720432172_b8964a6bd4.jpg
http://sp8.fotolog.com/photo/24/21/17/rskstilo/1228506543599_f.jpg
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3027/2803046636_5ca78a30ac.jpg
etc.....
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=19018&stc=1&d=1298154362
but since u took the time to make a lil simp ill crit ya...
i think ur H is a bit too blocky compared to the other letters, and the S hides it too much... try drawing out every letter individually even though they overlap, then when u go back u can choose which lines to keep, and have letters overlapping different ways and poking through each other.
i see where ur vanishing point is so i can tell u know how to 3d, just make sure its right, it looks like the 3d in the top parts of ur letters isnt pointing down far enough, and on the bottom half of the E its kinda just wonky, i nitpick i guess but im tryin to help... use a ruler to line everything up to that point if u have to

ViniVidiVici
02-19-2011, 06:22 PM
Thanks I appreciate the crits, and yeah I know my 3d is off at points.... don't have a ruler so when I freehand the 3d sometimes it is off (especially the E), kinda surprised you didn't rip apart my M (bars are way off now that I look at it.
I may switch my name to something with ESH in it, maybe DESH or something, idk....

Zookyook
02-19-2011, 06:38 PM
u clearly have paper lol all u need is a straight edge....

the left middle bar of the M doesnt match up... but the whole right side does, and that side of that letter is the cleanest part of the whole simp lol its not too flashy or blocky... try to make all of ur bars more like that on the ends and see what comes out

ViniVidiVici
02-19-2011, 06:46 PM
Yup there it is hahaha I saw that after I posted the pic and was like 'oops bad bar' hahaha thanks for the crits Zook!

extinct
02-19-2011, 07:50 PM
D's are sick to start names off

Dcicfhbimv
02-19-2011, 08:20 PM
Working on A pic for a friend of mine. figured I'd let you guys tear away at it before I'm done.
Zookyook-I'm digging the hell out of those markers your using I may have to pic some up sometime.
Kush- I'm not digging your stlye much either. Also i'm having alot of issues reading it.
Mesh- I like it though Zooky has some good point the "h" is completely different looking and the 3-d is inconsitent but all in all pretty chill.
Pekins- I don't really have anything for you, sorry man just can't think of anything. Though the blue pieces are harder to dicipher try utilizing negatve space and the white.

FlippingChickens
02-19-2011, 08:31 PM
zook - the black simple and the pink one are dope,work on that kinda style forget the bends and shit

penkins - i like the dope throne peice u did,just dont like the arrow off the h and how the t is more high
,and work on the 'o' they look like u's


a.j - the background is nice,the letters are pretty wack tho

http://i810.photobucket.com/albums/zz26/flippingchickens/scan0005-1.jpg

crits??

Zookyook
02-19-2011, 09:58 PM
thanks tofe i feel ya, i cant just stick to straights forever though so i try somethin new each time i do one

im feelin the one on the right , especially the T and E, i like the euro background u got goin there since its on a metro... definitely stick with the capital T a lot more often though, its way cleaner and probably faster and easier to get down, maybe with a squared O and F the same way id like it more, the gore style doesnt work for me, maybe its just the color combo

SicK-
02-20-2011, 12:26 AM
Zook what the hell are one4alls? but your shit is hot! what did you use for your highlights/how did you get them so clean?

Dcicfhbimv
02-20-2011, 01:53 AM
Finished it what you think?


One for alls are molotows paint markers. Supposedly rule on black books but I have never tried em.

leash
02-20-2011, 05:59 AM
@Dcicfhbimv i like the idea but don't really like your letters
molotow paint markers are for canvas not for paper if jou go over the paper twice then it will peel of


19033

19032
for a battle

LeanOne
02-20-2011, 07:23 AM
Leash - im not sure the blue outline really goes with the brown/beige fills, also im not sure the e on the KENT piece really fits in. Other than that they're lookin good.

Blink!
02-20-2011, 07:24 AM
^ 1945, USA, world champions

Zookyook
02-20-2011, 02:20 PM
sick- i used paint markers for highlights lol, what else would i use? as long as u put the highlights where they belong its gonna make it pop off nice, just remember they always go on the opposite side of ur 3d and ur golden



molotow paint markers are for canvas not for paper if jou go over the paper twice then it will peel of
thats the case with most paint markers i guess... but if ur not pushing too hard u can layer that shit on as much as u want with one4alls, some of my pages have like 10 throwups over top of each other and the paper isnt ripping, its actually stronger than it was with no paint on it... lol its like plastic coated

leash
02-20-2011, 02:35 PM
same :p my paper gets realy heavy

Zookyook
02-21-2011, 02:57 AM
did a simp and throw... workin on covering every page, at my rate itll take a year hah

yesterday
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5255/5458122708_389c04d59c_z.jpg
today
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5136/5463866497_d7a077d3b7_z.jpg

bomber boy
02-21-2011, 09:19 AM
nemor ur throws and straights are sick, never realy been a fan of straights but uve convinced me that they can look good

leash
02-21-2011, 11:23 AM
also leanone it is a black outline not blue

arsebanditskaelsucker
02-21-2011, 02:38 PM
sweet shit zookyook! :)

weedeater
02-21-2011, 02:47 PM
that nemor throw is too dope

H1P30N3R
02-21-2011, 03:16 PM
zook has throws for sale pm me your credit card info ill be sure he gets your payment

LeanOne
02-21-2011, 07:10 PM
By he gets your payment, you mean you get his payment... and alot of other shit from ebay.

NosE2
02-21-2011, 11:30 PM
Nothing gets by you, huh?

walkingcarpet
02-21-2011, 11:50 PM
facepalm.jpg

ian
02-22-2011, 01:12 AM
H4T3RZ M4K3 M3 F4M0UZz
http://oi55.tinypic.com/j76o15.jpg


thats some real shit right there dude, king for sure, you should throw that up on a wall

EWL24
02-22-2011, 01:23 AM
19083
crits please

Tempo718
02-22-2011, 01:48 AM
jfk t1

NosE2
02-22-2011, 12:16 PM
Nope.

FlippingChickens
02-22-2011, 03:25 PM
yo jakro ,ewl,tempo, drop that shit your doing and do simple keyboard letters.

NosE2
02-22-2011, 04:03 PM
this is for Ian, little quickie
http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/5568/dsc00232fx.jpg

thatswhatshesaid
02-22-2011, 06:00 PM
simp i just did, just learning straights

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture053-2.jpg

FlatScank
02-22-2011, 06:27 PM
Crits

chiefy
02-22-2011, 06:41 PM
http://cl.ly/3s1w1c061W1t311a0536
just starting out again after a bit of a break :P

chiefy
02-22-2011, 06:44 PM
http://cl.ly/3s1w1c061W1t311a0536
just starting out again after a bit of a break :P

http://i.imgur.com/BGiCe.jpg

Tempo718
02-22-2011, 07:22 PM
my attempt @ "keyboard letters"

NosE2
02-22-2011, 08:03 PM
burninnnnnn



edit: dont connect your E to your M like that...and on the right bar make it like "l", dont slant it like that, make it like you did the left one....
work on that P and maybe try a square o

@Flat: work on that T, kind of looks like an F with that arrow...lose some of those arrows, they're pointles. On your A i dont know about that curve going through the top. And if your going to add the top of the A anyway, at least make it connect with the other bars...its a little off. The L is pretty good to me, except maybe the little extention on the top of it going off to the left...color it and see what it looks like

Tempo718
02-22-2011, 08:30 PM
my armpit b.o. smell similar to fresh roasted coffee

EWL24
02-22-2011, 08:39 PM
yo jakro ,ewl,tempo, drop that shit your doing and do simple keyboard letters.

i thought that one was simple, any ways i did this in class to day is it any better? its not keyboard letters though cause i did this earlier today and i just now read what you wrote
19094

Tempo718
02-22-2011, 09:13 PM
after edit

TastyMcNasty
02-22-2011, 09:42 PM
tempo- that last one is on spot

crits always welcomed...

Darkeist
02-22-2011, 09:55 PM
noise - looking good. everyone else that this applies to, use bars, keep them consistent. practice.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Photo-0059.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Photo-0058.jpg

Tempo718
02-22-2011, 10:26 PM
mixed it up wit lower cases

thatswhatshesaid
02-22-2011, 11:52 PM
rack some pencils dude

ian
02-23-2011, 12:37 AM
this is for Ian, little quickie
http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/5568/dsc00232fx.jpg

proper, dude. much appreciated

KRE1
02-23-2011, 01:55 AM
rack some pencils dude

hahaha yes.

safira218
02-23-2011, 03:08 AM
the name of this thread just made me crack up

hey this is one of my first sketches..ive been writing for two 2 months now
ill take any comments

_______________
linkbuilding service (http://globalseos.com)
linkbuilding services (http://globalseos.com)
link building services (http://globalseos.com)

bomber boy
02-23-2011, 07:21 AM
noise - looking good. everyone else that this applies to, use bars, keep them consistent. practice.

http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Photo-0059.jpg
http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k100/skateaholic_2006/Photo-0058.jpg

i like the second one looks like its got potential would look sick if u sprayed it on a corner of a wall like its going up it

Gatsoi
02-23-2011, 12:30 PM
Changed up the tag, apparently there's a newt who is big in Bmore
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/1-6.jpg
Rewt will be happy about this...

thepekins
02-23-2011, 01:27 PM
get rid of the eye in the e

bomber boy
02-23-2011, 02:04 PM
havent posted in a while so here are two ive done recently also changed my tag to sike

ye on the first one th k is pritty shit with a shit connector kind of rushed the k and e

FlatScank
02-23-2011, 02:07 PM
after edit

3d always helps.

bomber boy
02-23-2011, 02:14 PM
i did do 3d

bomber boy
02-23-2011, 02:16 PM
gatsoi get rid of the eye in the e and get rid of the negative space in the e

leash
02-23-2011, 02:21 PM
bomber boy go basic also use proper bars

FlatScank
02-23-2011, 03:06 PM
i did do 3d

wasn't directed towards you, was directed towards Tempo.

thatswhatshesaid
02-23-2011, 03:10 PM
any crits if you feel like it. just got into simps couple days ago

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture054-2.jpg

my g is kinda fucky

thatswhatshesaid
02-23-2011, 03:13 PM
also theres already a SIKE on here that slays. if you care


edit: anyone wanna exchange anything? no one ever checks the exchange thread

leash
02-23-2011, 03:18 PM
i want but i want a propper 1 what do u write a piece or just a quiky or tag?

FlatScank
02-23-2011, 03:34 PM
I'm down as well.

FlatScank
02-23-2011, 03:36 PM
Crits are always welcome.

Gatsoi
02-23-2011, 03:40 PM
Sike use bars

NosE2
02-23-2011, 03:41 PM
get rid of all the fuckin arrows

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 04:09 PM
a lil sum

thatswhatshesaid
02-23-2011, 04:16 PM
make your m p and o look like your t and e. then do that 300 times. also make your bars on your t and e straight. and rack some pencils

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 04:18 PM
k

FlatScank
02-23-2011, 04:31 PM
get rid of all the fuckin arrows

here ya go, plain as fuck though....

chiefy
02-23-2011, 04:37 PM
@Gatsoi
looks nice but fill the e's hole in solid black the letter are nice and clean though
@bomber boy
take away all the arrows and other S*** and make the letters more simple
@thatswhatshesaid
have less gaps inbetween the letters and get rid of the background behind it
@FlatScank
the first was isnt that good too many arrows but the second one is way nicer letters are straight and look nice but the L looks too bent at the botom imo

SicK-
02-23-2011, 04:57 PM
here ya go, plain as fuck though....

Yo this is like 100x better

Rehz
02-23-2011, 04:57 PM
That looks much better, Flat! Haha I mean, the arrows, I guess that's just your style, but it looks way too complicated. This one looks real good. Maybe take out the little extension in the T, and if that is a tag to the left of it, work on that.

FlatScank
02-23-2011, 05:31 PM
That looks much better, Flat! Haha I mean, the arrows, I guess that's just your style, but it looks way too complicated. This one looks real good. Maybe take out the little extension in the T, and if that is a tag to the left of it, work on that.

When I use arrows, it's more for piecing on legal walls and such, but if I'm out doing just quicky burners, I just do the plain shit cause it takes up the least ammount of time, but I definately hear what your sayin'

NosE2
02-23-2011, 05:45 PM
dont call me a hater when youre the one tryin to be like saber or some shit\


and like everyone else said...that looks a hell of a lot better

thatswhatshesaid
02-23-2011, 06:15 PM
just banged this one out super quick not the best

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture055-1.jpg

the a is kinda balls

chiefy
02-23-2011, 07:15 PM
http://i.imgur.com/GaTz8.jpg
i fucked up on the N

@thatswhatshesaid
the g looks nice but the rest doesnt seem to match it all that well too straight

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 07:31 PM
practicing...

thatswhatshesaid
02-23-2011, 07:40 PM
much better, but try doing simple keyboard letters as well

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 07:43 PM
i ono i thot that wat i wa doin

weedeater
02-23-2011, 07:55 PM
^^reading that made my head hurt, and those arent keyboard letters, they are simple, but your T is straight hurting, the whole thing would look better if you had a round O instead of making it square and fix the T. Also, the top part of your E is dominating the bottom bar, makes it look off. and the middle bar looks like it should be a little longer. actually, just shorten the top and bottom bars on your E.

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 08:32 PM
k

Rehz
02-23-2011, 09:38 PM
Well Weedeater, Nose just told him that the square O would look better, so Tempo's probably a little confused now. And Tempo, when someone gives you their crits (assuming they're not being a dick about it), try to thank them or agree or say SOMETHING. When you write "k" it just kinda, ya know, uhmm, yeah. And about the O. With that one that weedeater's talking about, I think the square O goes well, because you've got a square kind of P. And just boxyy looking letters in general, but if you were to make everything more curvy and circular, obviously the sphere kind of O would be better.

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 09:50 PM
ya rehz, i feel ya.

Dcicfhbimv
02-23-2011, 10:57 PM
Fooling around.
Chiefy- I like it . the "N" isn't too bad I'm sure It would look tight as hell when you get how you like though.

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 11:01 PM
nice

Worm*
02-23-2011, 11:04 PM
http://i53.tinypic.com/m8fqsz.jpg

I'm not really happy with the R. What do you guys think?

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 11:05 PM
its very wormy:p

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 11:30 PM
filled in the res

Worm*
02-23-2011, 11:33 PM
Tempo I'm no expert but try getting down a tag you like first, then look at the tag and work that into a throwup. You gotta start small and work up.

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 11:46 PM
u mean sum like this? well cleaner than this.. or no

ChadWarden
02-23-2011, 11:52 PM
are you a woman? your shit has a feminine/homosexual feel to it.

Tempo718
02-23-2011, 11:55 PM
yea i got some big giant knockers with a dripping wet punani :p

Dcicfhbimv
02-24-2011, 12:00 AM
Finished it.
Worm I like all of it except the "R" and th dot of the "i" otherwise it came out looking pretty chill.

ChadWarden
02-24-2011, 12:01 AM
awesome





pm me pictures of forementioned big giant knockers and dripping wet punani and i will, in return, send you pictures of my phallus.

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 12:05 AM
gotta pass thanks

ChadWarden
02-24-2011, 12:06 AM
shit, bitch, why you backing out???

i can send cock pics first if you're shy or some shit.

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 12:14 AM
sad:cool:

KRE1
02-24-2011, 01:50 AM
cmon ho les see them tits that way ill know you aint takiin it the wrong way wen i say ur a fat fuggin pussy

and crack baby dcic are you on riddlin? the fuck ur shit look like you gonna die of a sugar overdose and your letters look like sperm.

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 01:58 AM
ya ok boss .

KRE1
02-24-2011, 02:13 AM
Tha boss doggie dog broooooo

Phat 2
02-24-2011, 02:59 AM
wait there's a girl in here ? :o

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 03:20 AM
yea an her name is sarcasm.

Dcicfhbimv
02-24-2011, 03:27 AM
Is that a crit a compliment or what? I really can't follow. And cmon leave Tempo alone.


cmon ho les see them tits that way ill know you aint takiin it the wrong way wen i say ur a fat fuggin pussy

and crack baby dcic are you on riddlin? the fuck ur shit look like you gonna die of a sugar overdose and your letters look like sperm.

FlatScank
02-24-2011, 05:16 AM
Tempo, you should try fattening up your letters, and also bringing them closer together.

bomber boy
02-24-2011, 11:12 AM
@Gatsoi
looks nice but fill the e's hole in solid black the letter are nice and clean though
@bomber boy
take away all the arrows and other S*** and make the letters more simple
@thatswhatshesaid
have less gaps inbetween the letters and get rid of the background behind it
@FlatScank
the first was isnt that good too many arrows but the second one is way nicer letters are straight and look nice but the L looks too bent at the botom imo

thanks for the crits chiefy probs just gunna take it back to the start and look at my letter strucutre cus my k's are so bad

bomber boy
02-24-2011, 11:15 AM
wasn't directed towards you, was directed towards Tempo.

o right my mistake

FlatScank
02-24-2011, 11:45 AM
Crits, I know people said less arrows, but this is for a legal wall.

ChadWarden
02-24-2011, 12:27 PM
so, since you're painting it where people and other writers can see it, you decided to ignore everyone's advice and use arrows and retarded extensions?

ditch all that stupid shit and just use your keyboard letters. if you really can't stand doing just straight letters then slant them or get a little creative, but ,seriously, stop what you're doing.

thatswhatshesaid
02-24-2011, 01:55 PM
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b105/gangstaville/Picture058-1.jpg

bored

ViniVidiVici
02-24-2011, 04:03 PM
No, that is a picture I believe there are other forums for that, we try to stick to graffiti on this forum....

Rehz
02-24-2011, 04:25 PM
That wasn't very nice, ViniVidiVici.
Gnar, that's kind of a weird style that I cant really crit. But I can say that the R needs work if you were going to stay with that kind of style. And your N looks like a capital A. Fix that.
And Flat, I think it looks nice. And even though you kept the arrows, there didn't seem to be near as many as on the other sketches, sooooo good job!

FlatScank
02-24-2011, 05:30 PM
thanks man!
@ Gnar, I like your G, you should work on that, and also your other letters, possible consider doing upper-cased letters?

heres a sketch I did today, no arrows, Crits are always welcome.

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 05:40 PM
i see the p, o are too small. but is this closer to keyboard letters?

@ flat , that look different from ur others..

weedeater
02-24-2011, 05:43 PM
Well Weedeater, Nose just told him that the square O would look better, so Tempo's probably a little confused now. And Tempo, when someone gives you their crits (assuming they're not being a dick about it), try to thank them or agree or say SOMETHING. When you write "k" it just kinda, ya know, uhmm, yeah. And about the O. With that one that weedeater's talking about, I think the square O goes well, because you've got a square kind of P. And just boxyy looking letters in general, but if you were to make everything more curvy and circular, obviously the sphere kind of O would be better.

word, my bad, i was away for a few days, and didnt read the last few pages. and remember tempo, its just my opinion, the only reason i gave it is to give you an idea to go off of and coem up with something better. not saying thats the way it HAS to be done.

thepekins
02-24-2011, 06:27 PM
tempo- make your letters a lot closer
Flat- your handie blows miniature - wooden- nutcracker dick. work on that shit. that L is wack and your 3-d is sloppy

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 06:41 PM
here is my attempt at less space between wider letters.

thatswhatshesaid
02-24-2011, 07:04 PM
your on a computer right? look at your keyboard and do those before you try bending and what not. straights then simps then piecing

ViniVidiVici
02-24-2011, 07:14 PM
This is like the blind leading the blind in here.....

jrone
02-24-2011, 07:39 PM
JR

FuckTheFame
02-24-2011, 07:43 PM
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5013/5474645911_099614b1d6.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5474645911/)

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5213/5475242246_cfc81f531c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5475242246/)

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5059/5474644363_ddc5143953.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5474644363/)

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5254/5474643979_40dda84b65.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/55010972@N05/5474643979/)

gnar - killing it

flat - throw some color out there

tempo - work on your letters more man

ian
02-24-2011, 08:07 PM
^only good shit on this page, i really like the first 2

this is what i did for the newest piece battle, lookin for crits. looks better in person TBH

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/1007/photoon20110224at1754.jpg

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 08:30 PM
revised my previous attempt.

btw: nice work @ risk & youth with your colors

ian
02-24-2011, 08:34 PM
^fuckouttahere with that, KEYBOARD LETTERS:


TEMPO

thatswhatshesaid
02-24-2011, 08:53 PM
^^^
for the 40th time

EWL24
02-24-2011, 08:55 PM
i thought that one was simple, any ways i did this in class to day is it any better? its not keyboard letters though cause i did this earlier today and i just now read what you wrote
19094

can i get some crits on this

EWL24
02-24-2011, 08:57 PM
you have to click the attachment to see it.
for some reason the pic didnt come with it

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 09:08 PM
@ EWL , i think were in the same boat dude. got to try an perfect keyboard letters before anything.

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 09:32 PM
mad old crusty dried up sharpie! lol

ian
02-24-2011, 09:36 PM
bottom page bump

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/1007/photoon20110224at1754.jpg

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 09:52 PM
workin tha sharpie til she got no mo!

ChadWarden
02-24-2011, 09:54 PM
the shit you were doing last night was better.

thatswhatshesaid
02-24-2011, 11:09 PM
ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPQRSTUVWXYZ


keyboard letters incase you have some fucked up keyboard where the letters all look like a bag of mashed up assholes.

ViniVidiVici
02-24-2011, 11:31 PM
Dude this *****h is obviously trolling....

Youth you are the only one who has actually posted something that is good.

Tempo718
02-24-2011, 11:50 PM
okay guys, from here on I promise. only key board letters.

ian
02-24-2011, 11:53 PM
Dude this *****h is obviously trolling....

Youth you are the only one who has actually posted something that is good.

crits on mine then?

Sbal
02-25-2011, 12:01 AM
sick character bro

weedeater
02-25-2011, 12:22 AM
his ass looks like pac man

Worm*
02-25-2011, 12:40 AM
http://i51.tinypic.com/2552xyt.jpg

Keepin' it simple, no 3D or outline. I need to make the top of the R a bit bigger to fill that gap. What do y'all think?

ian
02-25-2011, 12:47 AM
^shaky ass mother fuckin lines is what i think. you spent more time on that gay little star than the letters. P.S. someone on this forum already writes WERM, idk how well thats gonna go over. keyboard letters, why is that such a hard concept for everyone on here

Jigsaw
02-25-2011, 12:52 AM
says soen not finished ran outta colors! critts
http://i56.tinypic.com/2d2bxpy.jpg

ViniVidiVici
02-25-2011, 12:52 AM
Ian - Watch your bars they are off somewhere in all of your letters, but the overall idea is pretty good, just watch them bars, also drop your shadow/fills/highlights until you get some good letters, no sense in coloring something if the letters aren't good...
Worm - Change yo name, there is a mad made worm already, and just in case you are wondering WERM is taking also, but for crits I would say go WAAAAAYYYYY simpler, Keyboard letters and bars, it sucks to have to start so low on the food chain of graffiti skill but you must start somewhere and the basics are of the utmost importance.

ViniVidiVici
02-25-2011, 12:55 AM
Jigsaw - Can't really make it out cuz the pic is small, it looks clean though so that's good, can't really give anymore crits til I see a better pic

Jigsaw
02-25-2011, 12:58 AM
sry bout the handie trying new things but this is my original style
http://i53.tinypic.com/28ciwcw.jpg

Tempo718
02-25-2011, 01:07 AM
Ian - Watch your bars they are off somewhere in all of your letters, but the overall idea is pretty good, just watch them bars, also drop your shadow/fills/highlights until you get some good letters, no sense in coloring something if the letters aren't good...
Worm - Change yo name, there is a mad made worm already, and just in case you are wondering WERM is taking also, but for crits I would say go WAAAAAYYYYY simpler, Keyboard letters and bars, it sucks to have to start so low on the food chain of graffiti skill but you must start somewhere and the basics are of the utmost importance.

I second the part with sucks to have to start so low on the food chain :p

Jigsaw
02-25-2011, 01:12 AM
yeah but everyone has to start somwhere and trust me u learn way faster starting off by doin keyboard letters

Worm*
02-25-2011, 01:26 AM
Ian- That gay little star is part of my name so suck my dick.

And I know about worm which is why my name is worm*, bitches.

ian
02-25-2011, 01:35 AM
Ian- That gay little star is part of my name so suck my dick.

And I know about worm which is why my name is worm*, bitches.

hahahahahahaha


yo dawg i think imma change my name to cope*, actually no revok* is better, wait no i dont think banksy* exists, or maybe daim*, hmmmm.....

fuckin stupid people make me laugh

Tempo718
02-25-2011, 01:41 AM
Bam! forgot it was past midnight on this one.

SHUT
02-25-2011, 01:43 AM
crits?

Jigsaw
02-25-2011, 01:43 AM
not really feeling the p and o kinda throws it off a bit cause u have to space in the e and m if u get what in saying

Tempo718
02-25-2011, 01:44 AM
all I can say is my post are toy status, compare, contrast, re evaluate forum topic selection.

Tempo718
02-25-2011, 01:48 AM
@ jigsaw , yes not my best work i have to agree

Jigsaw
02-25-2011, 01:51 AM
@shut looks crazy but what does it say?