Blackbooks

[dankbudz]

that 2nd one is best, but work on that S and smooth them letters out.
that color on the O in the last picture is sick, what markers you use in it?

[ribcage]

on the last 1 EOS doesnt fit with the TH, 3d is messed up, little drips/bottom of background looks bad, handy also looks like the TH is diffrent/doesnt fit with the eos

lose extensions for starts and do the rest of the letters like the TH and fix the 3d, cause the Th is aight

[OverOne]

lol why did you bump yourself on the same page?

because i'd like some replies on that shit. I seriously don't know how to get this 3D right. any suggestions?

[ribcage]

you didnt host the image so know 1 can see what you posted so no one can crit

[OverOne]

my bad man, i thought i was uploading it.

[TastyMcNasty]

over- first of all, youve been doin this for a year and youre only at this point?? second, simple up your letters (i.e. lose all the extensions, work on consistent bar width, and try to keep all the letters the same size)... and finally use a vanishing point for your 3D (go to the "new to graff thread", there'll be a tutorial there)

[SicK-]

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/Photo-0201-1.jpg

what do people think of this as a direction to head down, the O came out too small, do i need to make the bar widths more consistent?


easy

This shit is dope. best stuff ive seen in the Toy bb in a while, keep it up man
but i think you could make your A a tad bigger

[sir.to.you.]

rib- i know they dont fit. i usualy always leave the h out now
and mr dank sticky icky i use prismas

[SeizeTheMoment]

http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/85/010bg.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/607/010bg.jpg/)

crits?

[The Grapist]

safe sick, the A will get some roids,

Monster : the cross bar on the T needs to flair up to the left if you ask me, and either make the M first loop more square or make the loop on the R more round, if you get me
Yewl: pretty trip, i'd make the arm of the Y finish further up, and try more to make the bottom loops of the Y and E more like the L,

[pointman]

Yewl- looks good but the middle of the E is abit high up .

[ribcage]

firts 1's not too shabby, just fix the middle bar of that M, its still waaaay to puny

[take2]

getting back into graffiti
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/405e16d6.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/b2d03af9.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/f22a80f3.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/798a3b5f.jpg
http://i685.photobucket.com/albums/vv220/Taker2/8b97f989.jpg

[smack1one]

theos, nice but i would like it better if the t was the same size as the other letters but other than that its fresh

[Mippi]

yewl - good shit i would agree with the middle bar on the e
glums - i like the style i would say make the u the same size as the rest of the letters tho. and in the 1st image i dont like how the u is so hidden
take ur character is jokes

heres a peice i did crits please

[sir.to.you.]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3201/5732023667_d4a182e732.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732023667/)
fuckin round at work (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732023667/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5168/5732027103_6bd2056915.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732027103/)
fuckin round at work (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732027103/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2282/5732575886_e93b21501e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732575886/)
fuckin round at work (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732575886/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[SeizeTheMoment]

http://img802.imageshack.us/img802/237/013ag.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/802/013ag.jpg/)

wish i didnt do the whole backround... but i was high and i thought it looked good at the time

[sir.to.you.]

i wish i didnt fuck my best friends mom. but now hes got a chillin little brother and it was cool at the time

[dankbudz]

yeah, that fairo is mad fresh

@Over
work on letter structure for a little, get to know letters, have a nice chat with them... ya know?
but forreal.
and on that piece, that 3d is way off, the whole piece is supposed to have the same vantage point, shit idk if thats the right word. FUCKIT.
just practice my broski

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0517111024.jpg
just noticed how fucked that D is... got crits?

[Stigma02]

says JASON

[ribcage]

@ dankbudz dope, almost think you maybe should have connected all your lines instead of leaving the overlapping parts open, but only because how it might look when color it if you color it.... and your D aint really all that fucked up

[dankbudz]

eh, we will see how it turns out.
I still dont know how i wanna color it, definitely some shades of green... fuckin love that color.

[dave the pirate]

dude go simpler^^

[ribcage]

now that i think about it more if the open parts have the same colors then it will look like it does now, im trippin. unless you did every letter a different color or something....dont do that

[sir.to.you.]

bitt the shit outa fairo.shits ripe.smokebudzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. some old shit .. http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3398/5732357941_a2deb13a82.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732357941/)
Photo 243 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5732357941/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[ribcage]

your lines are super crooked breh, and the extensions on your S's are wiggidy wack. ya hands is bad too....

[dankbudz]

@sir to you
just practice letters alot. practice. and practice some more.
think of it this way, you learn to walk before you ride a bike, right
so why try something you dont know, before you truly understand letterforms?


haha what are you talking about, ribcage? i think you are trippin..
im probably just going to close them letters up. itll help with coloring this bitch too.

[always crushin]

dope shit dave love the old school feel
and menace watcha talkin bout iv had 1ok desipher and this one

[nah!]

some other sketches crit will be appriciated
http://i1085.photobucket.com/albums/j440/smack1one1/IMGA0850.jpg

lol your that kid from you tube

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2227.jpg

[sir.to.you.]

no i mean like ooollld that was the first name i started writing just dont like commenting with out leavin somthin so i left a shitty throwback

[ribcage]

haha what are you talking about, ribcage? i think you are trippin..
im probably just going to close them letters up. itll help with coloring this bitch too.

dont close em!!!! Lol yeah i was rambling thinking about how id color it... prolly like first letter solid blue next letter pink and then alternate, but if you did that with parts of your lines open the blue and pink would create a different unwanted color where they touch if the black dont seperate them ya digg? but if you do any combination of color horizontally that wouldnt be a problem because the open parts would have the same color ya feel me?

[CarpeUK]

http://i999.photobucket.com/albums/af111/Dredger1/Picture003.jpg

Hurr durr, terrible tag is terrible. Can't really think of one at the moment.

Can't get better quality atm, will try and post better next time I get around to doing so.

[skinaone]

GOOD but fix the / on the R and your handstyle is oldschool ahahah could be better though
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[dave the pirate]

...

[skinaone]

you need to work on simples first cause your letter structure isnt that great
your extencions dont make sence one the 2nd one

[dankbudz]

I hate the M, and it looks like MUSC to me haha. damn.
can i get crits? help on the M would be dope, i think its the fact that its curved right that it looks weird.
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/Photoon2011-05-18at2018.jpg
also lame piece i colored
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/Photoon2011-05-18at20182.jpg

[ribcage]

lol what happened to that seder peice? anyways m troubles eh? It looks to me like the middle bars coming down to make the point in the middle like this \ / are too close togethor, making it look a little awkward... space them out a little bit so theres some space between the \/ bars and the straight bars for starts, and then see what it turns into from their. THe bar widths on the straight bars of the M are off too.

@dave the N and A are dope, the R and K......not so much. you got purty hands for a pirate

[sir.to.you.]

why would you write nark thats like makin pancakes with corn filled shit. i dont get it

[dankbudz]

i still got have the seder piece, i colored it straight lightish green. i wanna add more but im lazy and brain dead

haha nice analogy, sir2you

[dave the pirate]

ahahah those arnt my hands their my girls lol
and fuck i dunno i like the letters

[dave the pirate]

exchange for a friend "seya"

[ribcage]

uuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhnnnn now thats dope^ i figured they wasnt yo hands lol tell yo grill whaddup fo me tho:cool:

[Dcicfhbimv]

Im not feeling the colors but other than that looks pretty chill

[pointman]

slime and bubbles haha

[ribcage]

yo M's have middle bars that meet in the middle l\/l so if your outside bars are straight, you still got to make the ones that meet in the middle come down from the top corners of the outside bars......

[pointman]

Yeah I will try it on another sketch later see how it looks. What do you think about the sketches?? Shit, ok? Haha I did do one where the L connected To the M from the bottom legs covering a bit of the U looked alright.

[TastyMcNasty]

nark- those arent bad, but your fills need work, and imo drop some of the extensions and shit....
dankbudz- your second one is better, go off of that,,,, and on the music oiece, if youre going to do the I as a note, make it the same width
glums- best ive seen form you, like ribcage said tho, with the M the middle bars should still be aligned with eachother... also work on the drips and bubbles, and for the drips dont over do them (i.e. last piece, on the L and M)

meh.... crits?

[Lado]

your throw reminds me of Goze. Not because they look similiar, but because the glob on the R. It's cool, and Goze has this cool thing he does with his E.

[haezr]

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-05-20012246.jpg

Still trying to get my S down... not sure about it, played with it for some time now.

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-05-17013744.jpg

One liners from like a week ago... tweaked them a bit since then so they aren't as bad.

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-05-20004220.jpg

Played with this a bit...

My markers are shiite, need new ones exclusively for my blackbook.

Feedback, por favor.

[nah!]

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2227.jpg

ffs



pics


firefox
ventrilo
utorrent
Ishit
starcraft
Kapesky internot security
winrar

???

[EnV]

Started about a month and a half ago...Yeah I know I suck any help though?

[EnV]

Last four I did...So any help would be nice thanks.

[lawlcat]

eros- youre hands are coming along. keep at them. and the throw could have potential, theres too much going on inside the letters for me though, make them flow.

env- does that shit look good to you? new to graff thread please.

new attempt at a throw, says munser because i hate O's and T's for throwies.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG_20110520_115820.jpg

[nah!]

pics

needs more arrows

[dave the pirate]

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[ribcage]

letters r dope background is weak

[_Aristrocracy_]

Nuem- I'm really loving that simple.
Glums- I'm not a fan of the bubblely letters but I'm sure that if you keep practicing you will get me to like it.
Dave the pirate- I'm feeling the first one, the second one though, has little to be desired.

I haven't been on here in a while. Crits would be greatly appriciated.

[_Aristrocracy_]

forgot pics, or i might be double posting like a fag.

[smack1one]

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3296/5729003708_92fafa7108.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5729003708/)
Photo 237 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5729003708/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2737/5729036604_4f08fa587d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5729036604/)
Photo 221 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5729036604/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3047/5728453023_f258723308.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5728453023/)
Photo 202 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5728453023/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5094/5729003494_3fccf5f900.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5729003494/)
Photo 199 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5729003494/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
shitty shit but im tryin so crit the fuck outa these fuckums if you will. i dont even know why i put that last one up.but its up so murk it

It would be sick if the t was the same size as the other letters and also the t and the h are bent and the others arnt you feel me? other than tht its fresh

[skinaone]

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[ribcage]

^meh not too shabby, only thing i can really pick at right now is that the bottom of your S has negative space but the top doesnt.... not really a big deal in this type of sketch tho so whatevs

.......havent post a pick in a while, drunk outlining is the worst and i dont recomend it.....L and O suck cock, hopefully this will look better after i put color steaz on it, exchage with slotr
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0520111904.jpg

[skinaone]

whats negative space ?
im feeling that S O really does need work and the S os higher then th rest of the letters

[ribcage]

Negative space is the space that isnt tooken up by your actual letters. like spaces in between your letters, or the inside parts/holes of letters like on A's and R's and O's and D's and others, make sense? So on your S the bottom part has negative space in the middle, but the top doesnt

i fucked up the outline on the steazy L and O I sketched, and because of it that L and that O are what came out of it. I aint place my letter on a line, does it really make a difference if theyre all in equal height? ......maybe if its a straight letter... idk, part of developing style means breaking away from fitting your letters in a box and making them all the same size...

[dankbudz]

@ribcage
im with you on that L and O being off. mainly the verticle bar on the L.
whats that piece below it? looks ill

could have easily fixed it to not look like MUSC.. i was lazy.
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/Photoon2011-05-20at1551.jpg

[ribcage]

^that note pad is hella small

Its this vvvv with out a background, did a while ago
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0221111715.jpg
will post full page after its colored up if it looks aight

[Zookyook]

env- does that shit look good to you? new to graff thread please.

new attempt at a throw, says munser because i hate O's and T's for throwies.
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e174/trevronious/IMG_20110520_115820.jpg

id like to ask u this very question, and smugly tell u to take ur own advice and gtfo...
monster? really? do u hate Os and Ts cuz it looks like u hate all letters... Os are the best letters for throwups, and Ts can be done with style... little prick kanye west wannabe hipsters, quit graff before u get grounded

and budz that MUSC simp has decent coloring but u spelled bass wrong too lol unless of course u mean SMOKE a bump of FREEbase... ?

reach- i think multicolor fills look way better when the colors blend or flow into each other, like drips or bubbles, shit like that lol... the letters arent bad but the way each color just stops and a new one starts kinda kills the style

just givin yall fools some insomniac crits, dont be hatin

[striggy]

Started wanting to draw graffiti about 2 years ago. Started trying stuff out but got bored then stopped. Now I wanna learn again, and here's one of the first pieces I did. I know it's shit, someone doing graffiti for a long time now told me, so I'd appreciate crits telling me WHY it's shit and what I can do to improve and stuff. Thanks!

http://i54.tinypic.com/nfmmhc.jpg

[nah!]

you drew shit letters and added a load of arrows

[skinaone]

crit dude dont just say he drew shit letters and put it aload of arrows thats fucked up yo maybe thats his style
and dude work on the last letter alot needs alot of work A isnt all that bad try something simpler like music or mine for example

[DamoOne]

EnV-start doing simples,copy the letters from your keyboard,you know,block letters,I like the vader char though ^^
Dave the pirate-dope letters but a pretty bad background
ribcage-that's a dope S but the rest of the letters need some work and on the other sketch the C doesn't flow so well with the rest of the letters
striggy-go simpler and lose the arrows
dankbudz-try not overlapping the letters,the U is squished between M and S

a few sketches,I'm having a lot of trouble making my letters flow
http://i52.tinypic.com/2qs03lc.jpg
http://i53.tinypic.com/4udso6.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/25kkg7b.jpg

hope I can get some crits on these :) giving crits4crits of course

[Marcus McMuffin Price]

EnV-start doing simples,copy the letters from your keyboard,you know,block letters,I like the vader char though ^^
Dave the pirate-dope letters but a pretty bad background
ribcage-that's a dope S but the rest of the letters need some work and on the other sketch the C doesn't flow so well with the rest of the letters
striggy-go simpler and lose the arrows
dankbudz-try not overlapping the letters,the U is squished between M and S

a few sketches,I'm having a lot of trouble making my letters flow
http://i52.tinypic.com/2qs03lc.jpg
http://i53.tinypic.com/4udso6.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/25kkg7b.jpg

hope I can get some crits on these :) giving crits4crits of course
Maybe shade them darker?

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/247713_218967188123271_202093693143954_897532_3345 949_n.jpg

gave my new molotow markers a first run. <--- highly recommended btw
crit the man

[TastyMcNasty]

phat thats actually sooo dope... other than the top right bar on the H, and how low the top of the 2 goes... sick man, keep that up!

from a few pages back, didnt really get any feedback on them.

[ribcage]

reach- i think multicolor fills look way better when the colors blend or flow into each other, like drips or bubbles, shit like that lol... the letters arent bad but the way each color just stops and a new one starts kinda kills the style

Yeah man i dig what ur sayin, and almost completely agree, but my mind was set on pinks and greens, and if I would of tried to blend them with no blender pen it would have created a super dark practically black green color that wouldnt have looked good ya digg? so thas why there was no blend...

@soar you ever try anything different? lol no hate just the last couple peice sketches look the same except for different minor extensions...and i still no like the A on jur throw, if that dot wasnt there itd look like sonr

[dankbudz]

attempting some different, bottom of the S is killin me.
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0521111518.jpg

[ribcage]

lol S's can be difficult i guess...... instead of changing the bottom change the top, all your other 1's have that top, make the top half look like the bottom half and go from there.... or at least thats what id do... also your E's vertical bar starts to drift to the left half way through same wit da D

[skinaone]

i HATE S's Ks Is Ns and As thats why i have skina as my name

[pointman]

its not great but il post
http://i1121.photobucket.com/albums/l514/oniclub/IMG_1323.jpg

[Hulk]

.

[nah!]

letters r dope background is weak


Dave the pirate-dope letters but a pretty bad background


It's just like your saying the same thing but with different words

http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2235.jpg

[skinaone]

looks like you just doddled on a peice a paper and threw an put line

[dave the pirate]

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[ribcage]

^ thats a step in the wrong direction...... you do that a while back or what?

so uh yeah I finished, bottom 1 I did daaays ago so you aint need to crit it unless you really want, top one is what i just finished...and I already know the L and O suck cock like i said before, so dont tell me how bad those letters suck, crit on somethin else if you got somethin else, which i know yall do
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0521112010.jpg

[dankbudz]

@ribcage
the top of the S seems a bit away from the L, and i feel like that R could be better, but i dont know how. haha.
and the background on the bottom one is rad

i said fuck it to everything. turned out hella shitty, but i still colored it
just gunna work from this though.
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/Photoon2011-05-21at2018.jpg

[thepekins]

Havent been on here in forever. heres some recent ish
http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/4219/scan0001pe.jpg (http://img829.imageshack.us/i/scan0001pe.jpg/)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/9020/scan0002ki.jpg (http://img146.imageshack.us/i/scan0002ki.jpg/)
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/8034/scan0004sk.jpg (http://img29.imageshack.us/i/scan0004sk.jpg/)
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/2252/scan0003dp.jpg (http://img690.imageshack.us/i/scan0003dp.jpg/)

[Tempo718]

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[nah!]

looks like you just doddled on a peice a paper and threw an put line

looks like you are giving out nice crits and threw an put line :rolleyes:

--


24038

the shadow looks nice but your letters aren't so good try taking the points of the bottom and keep everything at the same level for now also fix them bar widths

[skinaone]

so yall can crit something insteed of starting another stupid argument with naah, ill post a pic
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FEET

[pointman]

-Nah didn't you change you're name because your mum found some sketches?? Fucking gimp stop talking shit and post flicks!

Skina- I actually really like that sketch has a real euro style feel to it. And you should get some of your crew members on here posting.

[skinaone]

thanks homes ill try but not many of them talk english and were are only 2 ruok and i
i got some homies that do but they arent interested there a bunch of lil bitches

[dankbudz]

thats tight, skinaone

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/Photoon2011-05-21at2259.jpg

[skinaone]

thanks
put them a bit closer together and work on that S ya feel me?

[DamoOne]

so I guess the crits4crits thing is just a myth :/
dankbudz-make the top of the S more like the bottom

[Hulk]

Didnt get any crits last page. anyone wanna help n give me any tips on how im doin?

[thepekins]

Havent been on here in forever. heres some recent ish
http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/4219/scan0001pe.jpg (http://img829.imageshack.us/i/scan0001pe.jpg/)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/9020/scan0002ki.jpg (http://img146.imageshack.us/i/scan0002ki.jpg/)
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/8034/scan0004sk.jpg (http://img29.imageshack.us/i/scan0004sk.jpg/)
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/2252/scan0003dp.jpg (http://img690.imageshack.us/i/scan0003dp.jpg/)
bump myself. no crits for yall right now cus im a selfish asshole

[ribcage]

@damo@hulk if you want to bitch about not getting crits at least bump your pics to this page while your bitching so people can see what skill level the person bitching for crits is at

[Hulk]

@ Ribcage. my mistake on not putting my pic. i messed up n deleted that soo chill.

[SicK-]

Hulk i have a feeling that M is bitten cause that is litterally the only good letter the rest look like shit.

[pointman]

Hulk- lose the sludge bit and post some more sketches.

[ribcage]

@hulk most the time if I or any1 else here has something to say about someone else's work, they say it. So if no one crits you on 1 page bump it until someone does. I aint really have nothin to say about it except the bottom of the S is fucked up, and you shouldnt have put a break in the slime at the bottom of the S it makes the slime look dumb. you using crayons?

[dave the pirate]

I like that aspeckt sketch
@glums loose the cracks a drips.

[skinaone]

i cant see the 1 leter the N is alright A needs a bit of work R is not that great and its too separetade from the A and the K dont look like a K but its nicer then all the shit ive seen here IMO i think the 1st extencions of the N make it look like an F ahah

[_Aristrocracy_]

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I'm posting again because sadly no one likes t crit.
Glums- Don't go so crazy with the fills, please.

[BzarsOne]

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crits please

[dankbudz]

@anek
top ones sick, but leave a bit more space for the N, its a little tooo crammed in.

@bzarsone
i dont got crits for your piece, but that 2nd character is so dope

[OverOne]

Hulk i have a feeling that M is bitten cause that is litterally the only good letter the rest look like shit.

it is bitten. It comes from meek.

http://blogs.sfweekly.com/shookdown/Meek%20on%20Flickr%20-%20Photo%20Sharing!.jpg

[ribcage]

^...stfu, those arent the same M's. They are both simple tho

[Shroomsh]

been a while, so i tried a new style, uncoloured because i got shitty crayola markers, crit me,
@Over they are not the same "m" get your eyes checked?

[smack1one]

anything to fix before coloring
http://i1085.photobucket.com/albums/j440/smack1one1/IMGA0857.jpg

[DamoOne]

http://i52.tinypic.com/2qs03lc.jpg
http://i53.tinypic.com/4udso6.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/25kkg7b.jpg

ok then,bump
If you gentlemen would be so kind I would like some crits

[smack1one]

ok then,bump
If you gentlemen would be so kind I would like some crits

dope

[nah!]

the letters look fuckd up

and smack AKA ecggraff

those letters are fuckd up too try gettin some nice letters down idk

[DamoOne]

well alright I'll work on my letters,just going to post the colored version of the second sketch and then get right on it,thank you for the crits
http://i52.tinypic.com/2m7g19i.jpg
smackone-you should use bars when making letters and do block letters for now

[Task977]

Damo - Thats far too busy, I can only make out an R and an E
Smack - Don't do block letters, just do keyboard letters using bars. SMACK <---- like that
http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/857/scan0002pz.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/851/scan0002pz.jpg/)

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[BRER]

@Zers I like it a lot, but the bottom left corner of the E should not be rounded to stay in the style of the other letters. I don't like the R either. It's too small and just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the piece. The Z is dope and if the S was a little bit more like a backwards version of the Z it would be dope (mostly on the bottom part. Bring the leg up slightly higher)

@Smack Like Damo said - work on bars. Try to make all you letters look like this EMSOES. Once you get that down well then you can try to add extensions and bend parts of letters, but until you have better control and understand letter structure stick to simples.

@Damo I can see that you are using bars, but it looks really forced with all the extensions and bent bars. It doesn't flow at all. Try to lose the business of all the extensions and get some dope letters and flow in your piece before adding extensions. Use the letters to create the flow of the piece, then try to use extensions to accentuate the flow of the letters.

@Jest The E and S are not the same style as the J and T so it looks off in my opinion. If you could get the J and T to match E and S that has potential.

[thepekins]

Havent been on here in forever. heres some recent ish
http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/4219/scan0001pe.jpg (http://img829.imageshack.us/i/scan0001pe.jpg/)
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/9020/scan0002ki.jpg (http://img146.imageshack.us/i/scan0002ki.jpg/)
http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/8034/scan0004sk.jpg (http://img29.imageshack.us/i/scan0004sk.jpg/)
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/2252/scan0003dp.jpg (http://img690.imageshack.us/i/scan0003dp.jpg/)
bump again

ZERS- the Z looks good. parts of the letters look good and other parts are wack. Make them more the same size
JEST- the E looks good. the T is a lol too fat. the things on top of the E and S are too big

EMSOES and DAMO- i agree with what BRER said about yall. Damo your shit is hard to read bro

[DamoOne]

thank you for the crits
Task977-the J and T are simpler then the E and S so it looks weird,try matching the letters in complexity (if that makes any sense, english is not my main language)
Shrooms-I suggest you to do simples a little while longer and try making the letters the same size,the R is squished between the E and S and that is not dope
thepekins-I like the simplicity of it and some of the letters look dope,I would suggest yo experiment a little because it seems you have basic letter structure down

here is a simple version of the D colored with pastels (I don't have any markers left),I hope I'm going in the right direction now,more feedback would be nice
http://i52.tinypic.com/121yd94.jpg

[skinaone]

use a darker tone at the top like the very very top o it lost like a fade right now just looks like 2 blue tones

[smack1one]

@Zers I like it a lot, but the bottom left corner of the E should not be rounded to stay in the style of the other letters. I don't like the R either. It's too small and just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the piece. The Z is dope and if the S was a little bit more like a backwards version of the Z it would be dope (mostly on the bottom part. Bring the leg up slightly higher)

@Smack Like Damo said - work on bars. Try to make all you letters look like this EMSOES. Once you get that down well then you can try to add extensions and bend parts of letters, but until you have better control and understand letter structure stick to simples.

@Damo I can see that you are using bars, but it looks really forced with all the extensions and bent bars. It doesn't flow at all. Try to lose the business of all the extensions and get some dope letters and flow in your piece before adding extensions. Use the letters to create the flow of the piece, then try to use extensions to accentuate the flow of the letters.

@Jest The E and S are not the same style as the J and T so it looks off in my opinion. If you could get the J and T to match E and S that has potential.

thanks for the tip

[Tempo718]

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criticize

[TastyMcNasty]

tempo, what are you doing? go back to more simple, your bar width is sooo outta wack, your 3D is way off everywhere, and your overall letters suck in this one to man... so like i said go back to more simple, and gradually (once you have bar width etc. down) start adding more style.

[dankbudz]

@tempo
exactly what TastymcNasty said, listen to him. and anyone else that says keep it simple.

The S is hurtin like hell and doesnt fit the E and D at all.
but the question i got is, does the ED flow well? and should i work the S to fit the ED, or the other way around?
give me some opinions
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0523112203.jpg

[ribcage]

^you double posted breh:p. But uh as for flow goes id say nah, none of the letters flow well. When you connect letters/extend letters, you want to make sure the connections or extensions are smooth. The E doesnt go into the top of the D smoothly... Where'd that Seder peice go? id try to progress off of that

[dankbudz]

haha damn, didnt mean to double post. but thanks for the crit, shits been killin me lately, cant think of anything to do other then simps, and those can get boring.

totally forgot about that seder piece
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/Photoon2011-05-18at2019.jpg

[Tempo718]

what if those letters I did was all the same width

[ribcage]

^Then all the extensions and bullshit would still make it look super bad

@dankity-da-dank-da-dank-dankbudz That S is nice, I think you should do more like that... ^thats the best ive seen from ya. As for flow goes on the other one, it really takes experimenting. Your gonna do things wrong a lot but its part of trial and error, but i think you'll pick it up... some others on here recently wont be as fortunate....

You wan exchange? I been feelin S's a little bit more lately

[dankbudz]

@ tempo
uh, try taking off all the extensions, and using making good use of bars that make sense, keeping them the same width too. try it out, but i would still do hella key board letters like TEMPO. itll help, mannn

@ribcage
yo im down to exchange, you want a Reach piece?

[thepekins]

SEDER- that first sed is looking wack but that green SEDER is looking fly as fuck

[StayHyE]

http://i53.tinypic.com/2wqd1u1.jpg
http://i51.tinypic.com/63sxlj.jpg

armen

[SicK-]

http://i618.photobucket.com/albums/tt265/gzus1994/0682d08b.jpg
Sevor

[prome]

a couple of quick pics ive done, let me know what you guys think. peace

[StayHyE]

you guys need to make your bars the same size

[SicK-]

^ your bars arent the same size either homie

[EWL24]

sick - i like the S, E, and O but i kept thinking your V was a C or something until i saw that u wrote sevor under the pic. So u should probably fix that. The R looks good except i think the leg is too thin compared to the rest of the letters

prome - get rid of the arrows they are really random and come out of nowhere, and don't make your E backwards cause that just looks bad, also the extension on the leg of the R makes it look like a B. pretty much u need to make your letters more simple and like StayHyE said make your bars the same size.

[upper90daynnight]

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Its been a while sense ive posted ive been busy with school and shit but did this one in prolly 30 minutes so ik the bars and stuff are off a little bit and ik some of the extensions are gay but how is the letter shape? crits are appreciated thanks in advance

[mont]

anything?

[haezr]

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-05-20171724.jpg

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-05-25025711.jpg

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-05-25025730.jpg

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-05-25025744.jpg

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/2011-05-25025855.jpg

I seriously can't figure out a way to write my throw up...
The S is my biggest undoing.

[Shroomsh]

i agree Eros, the s is the worst for thowies..

i call this "school=bordom bordom+pen+paper=pen freestyles"

[upper90daynnight]

hey mont that shit is dope bro keep it up so far nothing that i see, u should paint that shit, props any crits for my piece above? crits for crits guys c'mon

[sir.to.you.]

k no ones ever on the charter thread so what yo think of this eos character http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3490/5751363945_f9624bb091_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5751363945/)
Photo 246 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/5751363945/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[ntn]

http://sp1.fotolog.com/photo/1/55/73/ditrymef/1306349050744_f.jpg

[TastyMcNasty]

stayhye- lose some of the extensions/ add-ons, other than that its good.
prome- go wayyy simpler. keyboard letters
pure- same goes for you, go simpler.
mont- i like it alot, im just not feeling the top extension on the R and S.
eros- your tags are decent, but your S's on your throws are hurtin... oh and check your notifications.
zers- thats sick.sir.to.you- im feelin that charac.
sir.to.you- im feelin that charac.
hoax- lose the add ons, and keep all the bars the same size, and your 3D needs some work too/// feelin that tag tho.

stuff from today... pre sloppy, all done real quick, hate my tags/
p.s to everyone i owe exchanges to, ill have em up asap.

[trooper]

http://i52.tinypic.com/2qk31hk.jpg

This is my first, crits will be appreciated!

[always crushin]

http://a4.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/208093_10150543588555244_539650243_18125434_420198 0_n.jpg

[dave the pirate]

30896_10150612576850109_531610108_18498980_1096519 _n.jpg (68.4 KB)

[fuhrah]

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sorry the colour isnt very good, but crits would help because i think it just looks like some boring block letters

[Task977]

Sick and Hye I'm likin that
http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/1345/scan0002uy.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/822/scan0002uy.jpg/)

jest

[dankbudz]

@ tasty chicken
put those handys and throws in those threads, youll probably get more crits
the coke piece looks nice, but the K is kinda weak.
@jest
thats improving alot, the top of the s is a lil fat and the T is still just sorta a loner


http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/0525111138.jpg
i iinked this but i gave it to a friend before i could take a picture, im gettin it back eventually and gunna color it. might post it up then.

[_Aristrocracy_]

Zeta- I want you to look at your keyboard. See those letters? Work on them.
Jest- I'm digging that simp, keep it up.
Crits please?242762427524274

[upper90daynnight]

aristrocracy its a style ive never seen before but im liking it work on cleaning it up a litlle though

[mont]

i'm a little behind here but thanks for the crits, i agree with you tatsy, the r and s need work

[trooper]

http://i52.tinypic.com/2qvffux.jpg

Second one. I can't seem to get my black lines straight. Looks like the ink is being absorbed by the paper which makes it wiggly or sumthing. Tips?

[upper90daynnight]

Zeta go simple bro, before you work on flow between your letters and shape you need to get everything cleaned up so work on making your 3d the same everywhaere and alot more even, also usually you do the first letter caps and then the rest lower case or you do all capital letters keep working on it bro and as for your black lines what kinda marker are you using?

[trooper]

Zeta go simple bro, before you work on flow between your letters and shape you need to get everything cleaned up so work on making your 3d the same everywhaere and alot more even, also usually you do the first letter caps and then the rest lower case or you do all capital letters keep working on it bro and as for your black lines what kinda marker are you using?
Thanks for the crits bro, personally I like the e and a that way, but you're saying I should make the z capital or something? I dont really get it... I'm using On The Run 830 graphic twin markers, on a MTN blackbook (dunno what kinda paper that is). It's like the ink is far too agressive for the paper, it leaks right through the pages.

[FlatScank]

@ Zeta, you got some good ideas, but you should try sketching things out in pencil, so you can fix things that are not straight or wobbly.
Crits please.

[always crushin]

http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/255650_10150602448875244_539650243_18744354_343284 5_n.jpg

[upper90daynnight]

yo flat if i didnt know what it was supposed to say i would prolly think it says OLAO or sumthin the T at the end looks like a O and the F looks like an ) and with the hook thing at the top the L cud be a Z same with the hook on the bottom of the A it cud be tooken for a B but its clean as far as i can see so props on that

[nah!]

http://a1.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/255650_10150602448875244_539650243_18744354_343284 5_n.jpg

i dont like the extention on the end

[upper90daynnight]

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this is my club soccer team ignore the terrible tag on the side but yea it says elm grove imma put it on a sweatshirt so yea crits please

[FlatScank]

24286
this is my club soccer team ignore the terrible tag on the side but yea it says elm grove imma put it on a sweatshirt so yea crits please

Your lines are too crooked and awkward, I'd avoid putting that on a sweatshirt until you can come up with something crisp, or atleast cleaner.

[upper90daynnight]

it says soccer club and alright thanks but ive got my width, 3D and bar width down atleast right?

[Phat 2]

your 3D is fine, but your bar widths are still not. and the letters lack tons of style

[thepekins]

Zeta- I want you to look at your keyboard. See those letters? Work on them.
Jest- I'm digging that simp, keep it up.
Crits please?242762427524274

lookin kinda like kid acne's letters

[_Aristrocracy_]

lookin kinda like kid acne's letters

I looked him up and because I was curious and I can't find any writing of his that looks like mine.

[Task977]

ELMO - Don't put that on a sweater, I probably sound like an asshole, but just don't.
ANEK - I like the first one but dont make the E overlap the N and make it so the bars coming off the k aren't squished like that.
I don't really want crits on the little guy's head poking out, but go ahead if you like
I changed the bar widths a bit. Once I get this down I'm gunna work on extensions, any tips on them?
http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/5286/scan0001uq.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/577/scan0001uq.jpg/)

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[smack1one]

please crit
http://i1085.photobucket.com/albums/j440/smack1one1/IMGA0878.jpg

[Phat 2]

Jest, it's perfect, your mission: paint this baby 3 times this weekend
please for fuck's sake. start bombing that shit man, I'm begging you

[Task977]

Jest, it's perfect, your mission: paint this baby 3 times this weekend
please for fuck's sake. start bombing that shit man, I'm begging you

I dont have the paint, the hardware store in my town is unbelievably hard to rack from. Im 13 too so the only option i have is to sneak out real late.

How do I know when Im ready to move on to the intermediate thread?

[SeizeTheMoment]

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/6050/006oz.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/90/006oz.jpg/)

unfinished... crits?

[dankbudz]

i cant really crit that much
top ones lookin good though


im enterin this in the piece battle, i have yet to add the background, but im tryin to get crits on the letters and such

[haezr]

http://i1236.photobucket.com/albums/ff442/haezr/cache_000001302fe0976b10c.jpg

[toopski]

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/3766/dsc0004wt.jpg
http://img818.imageshack.us/img818/9057/dsc0003yz.jpg
http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/2621/dsc0002fdd.jpg

haha first sketches in years

[mont]

another little one, sorry to break up the drama

[Isho]

Isho, any pointers etc? First piece lol

[mekosbc]

USE= lovin the s.. curious to see what you paint like...


a couple of quick pics ive done, let me know what you guys think. peace


(sighs... rubs eye brows with index finger and thumb...) ok....

1- make your letter letters..
2-dont go crazy with colorful fills at 1st...makes your stuff look trashy..
3- im not a big fan of tellin ppl to ue bars but try them... but do it in your own way...make your own READABLE STYLE
4-lose the characters in and out side of your letters..
5- wtf do you write?lol cant read any of them....

[upper90daynnight]

2435624355going simple but where to go from there? do i just work on connections or do i need to get letter style down before i do connections?

[skinaone]

I dont have the paint, the hardware store in my town is unbelievably hard to rack from. Im 13 too so the only option i have is to sneak out real late.

How do I know when Im ready to move on to the intermediate thread?

first YOUR 13!!!? wtf i thought i was the youngest here ahahahah
and buy your paint fuck who ever thinks your a toy if you buy your shit
and to get in the intermidiate thread you need to paint:D

[Shroomsh]

task you live somewhere where you gotta be 18 to buy or 21 in some areas i think? in that case get someone to buy for you, show them some of your sketches so they know your the real deal, and plus i only ever go out late at night, unless its a legal gig, or a very secluded area, im 16 btw

anyway here is one that i am planning to paint

[ribcage]

yo i like, but i think the top halfs of the Z and S could use a little negative space, nahmeen?

[TastyMcNasty]

stuff from the past 2 days... crits?

[Shroomsh]

@ribcage, you mean remove tha scribble things or??

[RERUN3]

Tasty that is awesome.
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Crits please?

[skinaone]

on the peice
try bars and simpler things homesss

[toopski]

USE= lovin the s.. curious to see what you paint like...




(sighs... rubs eye brows with index finger and thumb...) ok....

1- make your letter letters..
2-dont go crazy with colorful fills at 1st...makes your stuff look trashy..
3- im not a big fan of tellin ppl to ue bars but try them... but do it in your own way...make your own READABLE STYLE
4-lose the characters in and out side of your letters..
5- wtf do you write?lol cant read any of them....

thx man yeah gonna go take pics soon of some recent painted stuff

[ribcage]

@ribcage, you mean remove tha scribble things or??

oooo those scribble things are defining the bars seperation arent they? if so i only realized till now, so nvm what i said cause i like the wavy scribbles

[Rezume_or_die]

2438124380 havent posted in a bit, internets been down, ill have some more up in a couple days

[OverOne]

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/1916/picture60t.jpg

I know your gonna say that i shouldn't be doing a legends name and shit like that. But i was looking at some of his work, and it inspired me to do this. just a quick sketch. crits?

Oh and, ignore the extra lines and squiggles. I took a scrap piece of paper to draw this.

[EWL24]

task you live somewhere where you gotta be 18 to buy or 21 in some areas i think? in that case get someone to buy for you, show them some of your sketches so they know your the real deal

no thats a bad idea to tell them your going to be doing something illegal with the paint (unless there another writer)
task977 just get a bum to buy it for you and then give him the change. or if you look 18 you could just try to buy it yourself, but since your 13 that probably wont work so just go with the bum

shroomsh - thats dope, your stuff always looks so sick

OverOne - as long as you don't write it on a wall its fine, its good practice for you to do other letters, i did the same thing when i first started and with the same word too haha:D

[toopski]

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/6702/dsc0008cl.jpg
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/614/dsc0007xc.jpg

same piece diff ways of taking a photo since my scanner broke

trying some diff types of letters

[upper90daynnight]

everythings dope bit im not digging the S the bars are un even

[aaesoo]

I'm not really feeling the R too much. and the S is good except I'd say don't bend the middle bar keep it straight, and thicken up the bars some too, cause especially right next to that fat ass e it seems really skinny. overall though it's dope and i like it.

[pointman]

marker fail..found it in my locker today sooo yeah

[DaFugg]

I know my stuff is shit. I just need advice or maybe some imput on style. Not even sure if I got the bar thing right. Main focus I'd like to be the unfinished one.
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/100_3163.jpg
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/100_3162.jpg
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/100_3161.jpg
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/100_3160.jpg
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/100_3159.jpg

[centrysam]

@ toopski like that style bit of work on the S and it be dope

few flicks crits plz

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2123/5769365306_775a97ef02.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5769365306/)
Snapshot_20110528_3 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5769365306/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5261/5769230138_feda5cc148.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5769230138/)
Snapshot_20110528_2 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5769230138/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3213/5752070753_c4752a1624.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5752070753/)
Snapshot_20110523_4 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/5752070753/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

[Task977]

Humr - The top left is the best two letter and the center is the best full. The H on the last pic is very hard to decipher, I do think it's better than the second pic though
Glums - I think you should make your U the same size as the rest of the letters. Your handstyles need quite a bit of work as well

[nah!]

ey ey(ye ye but backwards like)
o i did this late and i was borred so i putted a little guy in my e
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2258.jpg
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2256.jpg

[toopski]

yeah tbh since i neva take reference when painting i usually just flow the s and usually the e as well, the r well i personally hate r's but @ the same time love them

[Shroomsh]

just experimenting with different fills before i go painting, crits?
the letters were rushed and i dont have a felt tip no more :( r.i.p clean lines

[serk757]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/umm231/RAEKBB.jpg

[serk757]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/umm231/raekbb1.jpg

[FlatScank]

@ Humur: Your last sketch would be good if you could paint it nice and crisp
@ Zers: looks good though you should make your 3d a different colour than your fill
@ Raek: maybe lose the arrows?, though if you could paint that, might look dope with an ill fill.

Crits please.

[serk757]

idk about the piece, but the strait letter will be in paint very soon.

flat, ur style looks like its needs to smoke a j man haha. i no thats not very helpful. just try to be a little more fluid.
yo u wanna do an exchange dude?

[ierkpeople]

http://i1227.photobucket.com/albums/ee433/ierkpeople/IMG-20110519-00085.jpg

[extinct]

zers that last one is funky

[ribcage]

@humr i feel like you already posted all of those twice already and i already critted them......
@user S is bad, right leg of R is bad
@zers the first 1 the E is real hidden, you did too much with the black outlines in the middle of your letters... only really looks good when you keep it black and white, second one the R is really bad
@raek more arrows!
@flat for the love of god do something different, you should exchange with dude that asked you cause you gotta get out of the habit of doing the same fuckin letters the same fuckin wack style all the fuckin time
@erk dont like the Y or colors, the rest is aight tho, excepty your handy is fuckin terrible, how can you sketch a wicked piece and then have a garbo handie breh? priorities

[DaFugg]

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/100_3159.jpg
Can I just get advice on this one please?

[ribcage]

ooops i skipped you, use bars. dont know what bars are? go to the new to graffiti thread. Know what bars are? go to the new to graffiti thread anyways. not new to graffiti? go to the new to graffiti thread

*outline for exchange with bay... Y is super wack I know, but it was either keep the wack Y or take another week and a half to finish the exchange, so yeah
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0529112004.jpg

[Shroomsh]

cheers for the crits boys, my last two pieces were just to experiment with fills, i know the letters werent the best :/

[Shroomsh]

exchange sketch for sors, and exchange piece for damnz, will be colouring the sors piece leter

[Rezume_or_die]

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just what ive done in the past week, any crits? planning to use acrylics to do the one with the skull and pteradactyl

@shroosh your style is fresh never seen anything like it before

[The Grapist]

not been sketching much, heres a battle entry
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02611.jpg

Shroom, ill stuff, not sure if the heart on the Z works though, look forward to the other being outlined

rezume, last ones best, and your characters look nice too, but the second arm of the R covers the E too much

[dankbudz]

^yo thats sick, only thing i see is the L looks a bit crammed in.

kinda bit your one color drippin letter, thought id try it out. my S sucks though
need some crits on the bottom piece too. went off of something old ive done.

[SicK-]

not been sketching much, heres a battle entry
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02611.jpg

Thats pretty good but you need to work on moving your hand faster when doing your outline cause that shit is crazy sloppy it would look way better if it was cleaner

And Sed your letters are boring as fuck start tweaking them

[aaesoo]

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2183/5778017241_475266eb9b_b.jpg
I fucking regretted that A-E connection the second I drew it...

[upper90daynnight]

hey rezume ur shit is looking tight but work on the Z in all ur pieces make the Z a Z make that diagonal line direct bro dont add in all those angles

[dankbudz]

i tried making my shit less boring as fuck
hit me with crits

[dave the pirate]

@dank budz i like the one with the drippin e super clean

[SicK-]

Sed- its better but that S does not flow at all
Nark- that shit is tiiiits

[upper90daynnight]

hey just fucking with this line style i was inspired by it, i didnt come up with it but im adding my own style to it as well crits please?
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[serk757]

@sed. the first one looks like fridge magnets. the last ones dope tho.
@nark. word word. dope stucture and flow, like the extentions on that bottom one to.
@upper90. negitive. sorry homie

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/umm231/RAEKBB.jpg
let me no what yall think about this so i can stop bumbing it

[Rasm]

A few sketches from the last few days. Comments/critics??
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j89/fearophobia/resbozer.jpg
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j89/fearophobia/otang.jpg
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j89/fearophobia/minor-2.jpg
Tell me what you think!

[ribcage]

@rezume unconsistant bar widths are taking away from your letters, your shit could look a lot better....
@grapist what sick said
@upper what is that? do you really think thats cool?
@rasm top right is tight, second 1 say otang? lol weird word but that G is super steazy

exchange fo bay, Y sucks, bout to color the middle of the letters orange i think
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0530112115.jpg

[Rasm]

@rasm top right is tight, second 1 say otang? lol weird word but that G is super steazy[/IMG]
I spent the most time on that top right one, and yup the 2nd one does say otang. I was just messing around with different words/letters. I found out that I like G's. One thing I'm still not great at is add-ons, so I usually end up keeping my sketches simple.

[ribcage]

yeamp G's are tight, now that i look at again it kinda bugs me that the bars on the T and A arent touching....... but whatev stills looks good

[Rasm]

yeamp G's are tight, now that i look at again it kinda bugs me that the bars on the T and A arent touching....... but whatev stills looks goodYeah I know what you mean. I probably won't do that in the future. I also drew that one at 2am.

[ribcage]

the only reason why it bugs me is cause u didnt do it to the other letters I think

[Rasm]

Yup I didn't like how the top of the A was disconnected when I drew it but it was late and I was way to tired to fix it. There's nothing like that on any of my other sketches though.

Here's one from last year
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j89/fearophobia/Photo06150328_2-1.jpg

[MoF.]

still very toy :( but opinions a tips welcome very welcome ;)

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[ribcage]

Here's one from last year
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j89/fearophobia/Photo06150328_2-1.jpg


@rezume unconsistant bar widths are taking away from your letters, your shit could look a lot better....
@grapist what sick said
@upper what is that? do you really think thats cool?
@rasm top right is tight, second 1 say otang? lol weird word but that G is super steazy

exchange fo bay, Y sucks, bout to color the middle of the letters orange i think
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0530112115.jpg

bump

[aaesoo]

MOF, get rid of all your arrows, and straighten out that fucking F. looks like it got ran over by a truck.

[MoF.]

aight thnx maayne

[drae]

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[RERUN3]

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crits please?

[pointman]

more sketches
Drae- work on clean outlines and you're lettering

[TastyMcNasty]

glums- nice to see you progressing, just work on letter height and bar width and you be set
rerun- your S and your fills are hurtin, not bad tho, keep it up
drae- sorry man, but thats pre wack simple it up, and clean up your lines too
mof- go simple, and for now lose all extensions and arrows
reach- not the best ive seen from you... like bg tho, what markers you use?

new stuff, playin around with everything a bit more... crits?

[ribcage]

^ last throw at the bottom the O is cool but it look kinda like an A, and your A looks like an R

[TastyMcNasty]

^ last throw at the bottom the O is cool but it look kinda like an A, and your A looks like an R

yo thanks... and ya man i agree, i was going for flow on that one tho, thus trying to use as little lines a possible.

[ribcage]

yea i super digg the whole leaving letters open and then closing/finishing them with part of another letter thing, kinda hard tho

[haezr]

Mcnasty, I dig your shit bro, especially the last one, I like the style.

[extinct]

bad quality pic... haven't coloured anything in sooo long... http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/0531011844.jpg
...tofe.... work on your letters... then your colour

[dankbudz]

i was doodling and shit in school and decided to sharpy this bitch up, the coloring is really sloppy, but im trying to get crit on letters and flow. trying to pick that shit uppp.
also i sadly couldnt fit the R in the end. this happens too often.

[ribcage]

lol work on letter placement, center your shit, no room to center then do something smaller. But wit sketchs if u cant center then get a new piece of paper... extensions on the E's and D and what would have been your R are unnecesary and look bad

where we at on the exchange? i got yo shit in pencil rightchere, just threw that R on there for the picture's sake wont look that bad in a minute
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0531111920.jpg
prolly outline it tonight since its fucking raining here and everythings wet

[dankbudz]

placement on that shit was off cause it was filled with doodles and after i did SED i decider to add ER, and yeah i was thinking those extensions werent great, but for some reason i have a tendency to still put em.. fuck haha
that sketch is looking sick

so i just busted some shit out, and it alll looked way to gay to go with past RE, i think my bars were too thick or some. this is quick as hell, but i just gotta know if im on the right track for making letters flow, shits been pissing me off! i am trying to avoid extensions and making parts of letters go one way cause i want it to.. idk haha, just kinda let my pencil go on this one.

[OverOne]

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8733/picture62y.jpg

Just a pencil sketch. What do you all think?

[dankbudz]

try making those letters simple, like keyboards. just plain old letters for now. its a bitch but it pays off.
also try to keep bar width consistant, mainly with that whole DOPE part. work on that 3D, each line should be at the same angle for that one. you could practice drawing a vantage point and drawing the lines to that. whatevers good man, just keep practicing. key is too learn letters before you try "cool shit" with them. no matter how tempting it is haha. cause just doing simples can get fuckin boring!

[OverOne]

Definitely man. Simples do get boring, but i guess we all gotta start somewhere. Ill definitely work on my simples more often.

[ribcage]

@dank yeahman that not all that bad, R is kinda funky, but the rest actually looks like some shit I woulda done back in the day, and the A and C even looks like similar simp i do still

[dankbudz]

hope i did accidentally bite aha :p
i fixed up all the letters a bit, R was killin me, made all the letters a bit longer, mainly the shorter ones, like the A. i hope i can find a fine liner to ink this, i hate using the sharpie "fine" tip, it always randomly dies then bleeds hella. pisses me off.
Ill have this posted up in the exchange thread tomorrow by the end of the day.

[ribcage]

oh nah i wasnt implyin a bite or nothin, especially on simp/straight letters. I was just comparing it to things of mine a while back that im pretty sure you never seen before lol

but fasho, ill try to have yours done by tomorow too

[Willis1989]

sup guys

ive not done anything in a while this is my first piece in months, can I get crits on my letters cuz I know my colours are shit, just working wit wot I got

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2011-06-01152618.jpg?t=1306938744