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OvanOne
07-25-2011, 04:14 PM
i made the first one a long time ago, and i decided to put it here, cause its like my only wildstyle, i suck at it.

and the second one, i made recently :)

bait
07-25-2011, 04:14 PM
i lold

Mc Satan
07-25-2011, 05:03 PM
been away for a bit, got a chance to do one today. the breaks in the inking are from things that will lose detail if i ink em. when i color them they should come out looking well
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SENS-Oner
07-25-2011, 06:42 PM
28246 new piece i just finished. used my new molotow 127s

Mc Satan
07-25-2011, 07:40 PM
here it is colored. most of this was done with a brush so excuse the places where i colored out of the lines. ill fix that later. either way crits 28247

Shroomsh
07-26-2011, 12:08 AM
phile, your deffinately improving which is good to see, im glad you have gone simpler than when you first started posting,
crits on the last piece
- make the black outline bolder but still using the felt tip, it will make the letters look stronger and the outline cleaner.
- add a drop shadow to this one, but not a 3D because it would take away the texture of the letters
- if your confident enough add some white highlights to the necessary areas, but if you stuff up yeah whole piece is ruined so yeah if you want to try.
keep posting the good work.

as for sens i think thats an SE piece but not sure, the letters need to be bettr structured so they are more legible and the 3D needs to be cut off at some point other wise it looks retarded, i like the colourscheme, and im jealous of the markers you own, ive been wanting a set for ages now
keep it up

RedEyes
07-26-2011, 12:38 PM
Sketch for a canvas for the girl, any crits would be appreciated

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo6-5.jpg

Mc Satan
07-26-2011, 02:29 PM
mind pointing towards some people writing with the letter "P" want to start bending letters a bit but i'm stumped with that letter. need some ideas to further make my own.

red eyes i like it, although it might just be me but the 3d on the left side of the V looks a bit off to me

Phat 2
07-26-2011, 06:33 PM
yeah P's can suck sometimes, ask me :P

Mc Satan
07-26-2011, 06:54 PM
phat mind postign some simps with slightly bended letters? i want to see your P's so i can get some ideas im srsly stumped

EDIT:

just a lil sketch, playign around with ideas on how to add a bit of style to it. i feel comfortable with simple straight letters. need to start experimenting now

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skinaone
07-26-2011, 09:08 PM
oh helll nah
keep doing simples with out does extencions
make the bars even
dont separete them tomuch
dont put the letters so close neither

rusto123
07-27-2011, 01:37 AM
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ribcage
07-27-2011, 01:52 AM
^nice double post, terrible sketch... whats it say?

@phat@phile P's are easy

Shroomsh
07-27-2011, 03:27 AM
Ahah it depends what style your other letters are if yu 'p's ahre hard, and phile deffinatly stick to simps for a while, that sketch is uggllee, ahah no offence, i find once you start experimenting with letters, bend individual bars, make new bars if you need to, but still respect the shape of the letters, ill exchange with you, if you want so you can see your name in a different style? I write xist

Phat 2
07-27-2011, 06:07 AM
well yeah I guess p's might be easy by themselves.. but in my case, the h after it makes it a pain in the ass, especially when that top bulge in the P covers the whole top bar of the h (lower case) and makes it look like a lower case n.. I dunno.. but anyway, I'm lazy to look for them sketches, but maybe ribcage'll show us some examples?

Shroomsh
07-27-2011, 06:33 AM
ya not really feeling this one to be honest, i dont know why, dont gotta crit, just to keep flicks up
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rib, and phat, single letter "P" threeway Battle with me?

Mc Satan
07-27-2011, 06:52 AM
shroom il exchange with you. will do it later this afternoon. also i want to see that way P battle. and about the sketch im not even remotely happy with it, but i was playign around with different letter structures this was the only one were i kinda liked the P

The Kidz
07-27-2011, 06:52 PM
28353crits?

Shroomsh
07-28-2011, 02:44 AM
i like the face, dont like the tag, and it needs to be inked, get on it!!

i dont like the piece, or any of the letters on the page, but the face of the charo is alright, ink the charo

blameitonthewhiteboy95
07-28-2011, 04:13 AM
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first post on here, not the best i got, be postin more soon. im down wit constructive crit. i been up for bou 2 and a half years now, lookin for more tips, thnx

PETER
07-28-2011, 11:10 AM
I've been interested in the scene since 98. Never took my writing very seriously. I was far more into djing and raving. I just wanted to post a few old pieces and a couple I have done more recently when the mood would strike. feed back is appriciated. I doodle from time to time, but just to entertain myself, but now that I find my self with more free time I want to do it more often. Been doing some work with canvases and paint which is completely new to me. First post on the forum. Cheers guys. 28381 this is the only one on my computer. the link is to my flickr. http://www.flickr.com/photos/antik_1

Phat 2
07-28-2011, 01:33 PM
i see a resemblance in your tag to the user ani-33's signature here on the forums... mere coincidence? ;)

PETER
07-28-2011, 01:56 PM
first time on the forum. I'll look'em up though. been using antik one (which I am sure many others have too) for over a decade now. I use it as my dj name.

edit. looked him up... not seeing of what you speak. just something about bandwidth....

Mc Satan
07-28-2011, 04:29 PM
shroom completely forgot about the trade until today. decided to do something colorful for once

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Shroomsh
07-28-2011, 10:30 PM
Thats alright ey phile ill have yours up later

Mc Satan
07-28-2011, 10:37 PM
no probs, also i really need markers dammit. can only do so much with these things

EDIT: forgot to ask crits please

Skeletor1134
07-29-2011, 12:11 AM
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.Cuore
07-29-2011, 12:50 AM
Messing about with the 3d a little. Used a deco for the paint, need some new markers.. anyhow, let me know what you think.

http://i872.photobucket.com/albums/ab283/xMILANISTA4LYFEx/c895a6de.jpg

ribcage
07-29-2011, 01:21 AM
^ smoother end to end transiotions like on top of your R and top and bottm of the C and top of O and top of E and bottom left of U. those little pieces of bar sticking out look good to you?

OvanOne
07-29-2011, 06:01 AM
http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/210/3/6/ovan_a4_by_ant_h_raxx-d420myq.jpg

hello everyone, just posting something i made last night, hope you like it :)

PETER
07-29-2011, 09:50 AM
not exactly a book... spray paint and acrylic on wood. thoughts?

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Mc Satan
07-29-2011, 10:09 AM
skeletor: firs pic i dont like anything in it sorry. second pic i like although i think if the D was a bit bigger it would look better
cuore: i like your 3d but i agree with rib not to convinced about the lil bits sticking out
ovan: like everything but the left leg of the N the bottom of it just looks awkward to me
Peter: i like the color scheme like the A and the N but after that i don't like your letters at all to be honest

Mc Satan
07-29-2011, 10:15 AM
finally did a half decent stylized letter one, but i don't want to ink it yet cause im not satisfied with my E. any suggestions for it?
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PETER
07-29-2011, 11:05 AM
finally did a half decent stylized letter one, but i don't want to ink it yet cause im not satisfied with my E. any suggestions for it?

if it where me I would make the I and the e taller to match the height of the rest of the letters. you could do this by elongating the dot of the i (which looks kinda like a cheereo at the moment) and the top of the e... maybe something like this? 28557 just a thought. also I noticed the base of the i gets thinner at the bottom. not to be picky, but you're pretty even across the board except there.

Mc Satan
07-29-2011, 11:51 AM
not quite sure what you mean by the E? as in turn it sideways? and yeah i realized the I later but that's a quick fix

PETER
07-29-2011, 12:01 PM
not quite sure what you mean by the E? as in turn it sideways? and yeah i realized the I later but that's a quick fix
no, the photo is turned sideways and I don't have the ability to flip it sorry. but I think that height and shape might fit with what you are going for (with it up right.) worth a shot anyway. just doodle it a few times to see if it gives you something you like in the style you're going for.

:edit: just was looking at the p. you could use that same basic shape to fashion an e as well.

PETER
07-29-2011, 12:19 PM
Mc. it looks like you're using colored pencil for the xist?

Messer
07-29-2011, 01:55 PM
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/DSCF0045.jpg
new slaps, anyone want to get down on a slap exchange?

Mc Satan
07-29-2011, 02:21 PM
peter they are watercolor pencils, dont have markers need to order them online.

messer id do it but dont think you want international shipping :P

Messer
07-29-2011, 02:34 PM
haha dude pm me :D

Shroomsh
07-29-2011, 07:12 PM
Phile, i like your most recent sketch, the h and P are sweet

Mc Satan
07-29-2011, 08:06 PM
thanks shroom here it is inked everyone gimme crits please.. personally the 3d on the I seems a bit iffy to me
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Mc Satan
07-29-2011, 10:57 PM
ad coloring is done. this is the most intricate coloring ive done so far so crits on it to pls
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mista_dza
07-30-2011, 01:37 AM
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this is a style i came up with on the 13 hour ride back from florida, got home, sketched it out a last time, added color and heres the result, comments welcome, especially since im workin on a more complex style than most of my other work which i should post but later when i take flicks

edit: flick aint showin up for me, let me know ill upload to photobucket and repost if needed after resize

Shroomsh
07-30-2011, 06:00 AM
i actually like that style, suits the colour scheeme well, cant really read what it says, but thats not the point, with a bit of refinement that could become something original for you and, with some work, ill respect you for coming up with something original

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 06:33 AM
bottom page bump

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.Cuore
07-30-2011, 06:35 AM
http://i872.photobucket.com/albums/ab283/xMILANISTA4LYFEx/c895a6de.jpg

yo guys long time no post. let me getcha feedback.

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 06:37 AM
i gave you feedback on that one in previous page. i dont like that lil nubs sticking out

sadgeh
07-30-2011, 12:46 PM
same as McSatan, i dont like the nubs.

btw whats a bottom page bump? im not really in the scene and im dutch.

MN Nice
07-30-2011, 01:33 PM
same as McSatan, i dont like the nubs.

btw whats a bottom page bump? im not really in the scene and im dutch.

When you post something at the bottom of a previous page and then a new page starts without getting crits or views, so you post it again.

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 01:45 PM
not to be demanding but crits dammit. this was first time i bended letters and first time i do a more intricate fill so i really want crits on everything

MN Nice
07-30-2011, 01:57 PM
not to be demanding but crits dammit. this was first time i bended letters and first time i do a more intricate fill so i really want crits on everything

Chill out dude. If no one is critting it, it can't be too bad. You should've had the E taller to keep the symmetry with the P, but otherwise your bar widths are even for the most part and no unnecessary extensions. Keep at it and get those markers already lol

HRbN
07-30-2011, 02:04 PM
satan- keep working on your bars, and your 3d is off on some of the bends. dont put a hole in the dot of the I. And i think it would be better letter arrangement if it were all caps but thats just me. You have the right idea just dont get ahead of your self.

Cuore- your U looks like a L, your O looks like a lower case b a lil bit, and your R and your E are ugly. No hate just callin it as i sees it. lol But your bars are decent, i dont like the nubs either. And i can tell that your trying to get the outside of the piece to be a certain shape. dont do that yet. itll come naturally. if you concentrate on that then your not concentrating on your letters.

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 02:06 PM
i need to get a job first which im working on now, after that i order markers. and sorry about that its just that even though im not very experience i give crits whenever i can. and i not a fan of ppl posting and not giving out any crits

HRbN
07-30-2011, 02:11 PM
Mostly golden oldies

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And dont order markers man, go to hobby lobby or a craft store or walmart and pick up some decos, markers dont matter at your level dont waste money. cop some crayolas lol

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 02:43 PM
live in aruba no craft stores or similar here. so if im gettign markers i want markers that will let me be able to do at teh very least what these watercolor pencils allow me to do. therefore go out for good ones right away. also i love that panda skull thing. and finally im seeing PH combo main reason why i didn't do them all capital letters was because i had no idea wtf to do with the h

KOKADEVA
07-30-2011, 02:56 PM
2876728768 my tools are killing me
CRITS

mista_dza
07-30-2011, 03:24 PM
straight letters! first off. for the throw up lose the whole pointy shit on the bottom make em all the same size fix the N so theres actually a middle bar. for the piece alot of work, needs to be done , CANE should look like that your drop shadow is off, lose all extensions , make your E actually legible, and try again, oh and the C on the handstyle looks like a D. but i learned that if you practice your straight letters the better you get the cleaner your style gets, the cleaner your fills get , practice makes perfect keep it up,

Fluffy Bunnies
07-30-2011, 03:31 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/photo-1.jpg

kinda messy cuz i am kinda drunk, and havent sketched anything in a long ass time. pretty good for almost a year of not sketching lol
and SIMPLES SIMPLES SIMPLES.
simples turn me on, so i stick to that

HRbN
07-30-2011, 03:33 PM
yeah you needa go bare bones simple and for the time being give up on the arrows, shadows, extensions and any other thrills. New to graff thread

.Cuore
07-30-2011, 03:34 PM
thanks guys.

HRbN
07-30-2011, 03:36 PM
fluffy - always gotta love a drunk quicky

Fluffy Bunnies
07-30-2011, 03:39 PM
fluffy - always gotta love a drunk quicky

thats what i am talkin about

i am feelin pretty good so who wants to exchange? i got about an hour before i leave to dinner
i write Kils/Kilsr whatever one i guess doesnt matter

mista_dza
07-30-2011, 03:44 PM
kilsr love that simple, ill do an exchange ill start it now and finish when i get off work, i write Del/ Delone

Fluffy Bunnies
07-30-2011, 03:50 PM
k i'll start it now

Fluffy Bunnies
07-30-2011, 04:30 PM
got lazy and decided to just write delo

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/photo-2.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/photo2.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3-10.jpg

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 04:30 PM
guys just some suggestions, this is an idea i sketched real quick last night for the piece battle thread. this is jut to kinda show the concept. is it worth putting the effort into it and make a good version? or is concept not working? also i was thinking of having the E and A on the side of the mattres (im sure i misspelled it) instead of extending all the way down. give me your worst so i can see whether i do it or not

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HRbN
07-30-2011, 04:56 PM
ahhhhhhhiiiiiiiii dunno bout that. i think your better off just puttin some work into a simple using some steezy bars. and caps man, E and A are both more interesting of letters in caps.

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 05:07 PM
so ditch the monster under your bed concept and just do regular word? I thought well executed this could be good, but again not sure which is why i posted this lil sketch here.

Shroomsh
07-30-2011, 05:19 PM
Phile i already critted the uncoloured one, and im colourblind so i dont crit the colours of the piece, all i could say is, getr rid of the hole in the top of your i and yeah, i got a piece voming along quite nicely at the moment

SLVRONE
07-30-2011, 06:56 PM
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TastyMcNasty
07-30-2011, 07:01 PM
^ http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-New-To-Graffiti-Start-Here!
merry birfmas... go to that thread, and follow what they say, if you wanna get good you cant just jump into "wildstyles"...

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 07:46 PM
Mcnasty mind giving me a second opinion on the concept i had going? just want to see if everyone thinks the concept wouldn't work

Shroomsh
07-30-2011, 08:47 PM
Ahah just cos its his fist post dont mean his new to graff, i quite like the top one, deffinately has letter structure, but still semi-wild, props

i take that back, the pieces looked way better in low res on my cheap ass phone, sorry

TastyMcNasty
07-30-2011, 08:49 PM
mc satan, iif youre talking about the fear piece, then i suggest ditching the characs, and making all letters either capital or all lowercase, not both. and im still not sure what that person in the background is supposed to be..

and shroomsh, theres a bit of structure in that first flick from slvrone, but the extensions and add ons are wack! (no beef). and i sent him that link so he could learn how to do 3D (even tho the first flicks 3D is on point), and progressively add extensions, connections (etc.).

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 08:53 PM
basically concept is a lil kid wrapped up in blankets scared of the monster under the bed. the letters i will most likely change but i was wondering if the concept could work. make bed out of the letters then add the characters.i knwo this was done sloppy. but as i stated this was just a sketch to try and work out the concept on paper to see if it should be done or not

TastyMcNasty
07-30-2011, 09:04 PM
oooohhhh i see it now >.> k, make all the letters the same height, and have the kid hiding in his blankets on the top of the letters, and have the monster underneath the letters... it looks awesome in my head hahhahaha

SLVRONE
07-30-2011, 09:05 PM
yea, thanks for the help guys ive been doing graff for probably about half a year now and was on youtube and got nice feedback but people there mostly don't really know alot so I decided I'd try here :D

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 09:12 PM
looked awesome in my head too thats why i drew this lil sketch ill just do do simple straight letters then and do the fill as if where a bed so the ends wood-ish brown and the center some other color to look like the mattress wht you think? or just leave the whole bed idea out of it and make simple letters with whatever fill ?

TastyMcNasty
07-30-2011, 09:20 PM
dont worry about the wooden fill, just do all the letters the same height so it creates like a bed top, have the kid up there and the monster underneath. just do like a single colour fill

Mc Satan
07-30-2011, 09:23 PM
allrite thanks, just gonna chill for a bit and start working on it

mista_dza
07-30-2011, 09:39 PM
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lol wack handy on top, but some straight letter for Kilsr. Anyone else wanna do an exchange, between work and my new girl, all im doin now is rackin stuff for my homemade ink which i got a shit load of, so yeah im down for exchanges, pm me or hit me up on here. i write Del/ Delone



edit: only got one crit last page, moar opinions?
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thatguy1234
07-31-2011, 01:11 AM
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my first simp ever.....crits would be nice

.Cuore
07-31-2011, 01:27 AM
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lol wack handy on top, but some straight letter for Kilsr. Anyone else wanna do an exchange, between work and my new girl, all im doin now is rackin stuff for my homemade ink which i got a shit load of, so yeah im down for exchanges, pm me or hit me up on here. i write Del/ Delone



edit: only got one crit last page, moar opinions?
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Good simp, but I would change the nub on the left side of the K, and make it just flat. That's my 2 cents. Oh, and the handy above it .. no me gusta

dankbudz
07-31-2011, 04:40 PM
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/securedownload-1.jpg
CRITS

ribcage
07-31-2011, 05:11 PM
thicken up your outline lines broheem. E is aight but has more style(because of the amount of bending) than the rest of the letters. The right leg of the R is strange. The middle part of F and E look to small on this 1. Lastly if your going to start adding extensions you need to really pronounce them visually, cause right now your extensions are to small it makes look bad, like your A would look better if the top was flat instead of one bar ending above the other

Hulk
07-31-2011, 06:06 PM
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.Its been awhile since i posted here.Trying to work on style. crits?

Mc Satan
07-31-2011, 06:52 PM
hulk ill be honest i cant make out the letters at all color and ink it though i wanna see it finished.

Mcnasty thanks for the help here is finished product

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Hulk
07-31-2011, 06:58 PM
Mc- it was going to say "ocean" and have the tide go over it. but i just kindaa stopped. soo its at the OCE but alright ill probibly have it finished tonight

Mc Satan
07-31-2011, 07:05 PM
on that case your letters and wave look more flame like to me try emulating the old school japanese way of drawing waves its more graff friendly

Rasm
07-31-2011, 07:14 PM
McSatan, you seem to be spending too much time on your characters for your letters to improve.

Mc Satan
07-31-2011, 07:16 PM
rasm check 2 pages ago, for this concept simple straight letters worked better which is why i used them


Edit:

just a quick sketch thought i'd go for something pointier crits and suggestions pls not continuing with it till i get some different points of view on it
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PETER
08-01-2011, 07:11 AM
MC... It turned out pretty good. I still don't like the cheereo dot for the I, but that's personal preferance. E turned ot fairly well too. Work on your rounded 3d. The bottom portion of the 3d bit on the dot of the I is a bit flat. Try drawing cups, coke cans, lighters, markers, anything with a curve to it to practice. As for the new on thing seem to be going well. I would make the bottom portion of the l run parallel (sp?) to the back of the E and go from there.

nah!
08-01-2011, 10:41 AM
i don't write mos i'm just playing with the letters

ignore the fill on this one i was playing around with fineliners
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2367.JPG

i did this late at night when i couldn't sleep so its messy
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2368.JPG


couple of throws
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2371.JPG
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2372.JPG

this ones way too messy
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2363.JPG

Mc Satan
08-01-2011, 11:09 AM
anyone care to battle me in the toy forum round robin? preferably someone that would not blow me away :P wanna do it for the practice

MN Nice
08-01-2011, 12:35 PM
@Nah, I'm not really feeling how those M's are looking. Your throw technique could use some work too, try working with each letter individually to get a nice and quick flow to it. I think you should do a round robin with satan, it'd be a good match between you two.

TastyMcNasty
08-01-2011, 12:49 PM
anyone care to battle me in the toy forum round robin? preferably someone that would not blow me away :P wanna do it for the practice

i got you, no one else will battle me hahaha. and i need the practice too, been forever since i sketched

Mc Satan
08-01-2011, 12:59 PM
i got you, no one else will battle me hahaha. and i need the practice too, been forever since i sketched
pick a word my one demand is full colors. also crit finished fear and possible new piece sketch pls

nah!
08-01-2011, 01:23 PM
@Nah, I'm not really feeling how those M's are looking. Your throw technique could use some work too, try working with each letter individually to get a nice and quick flow to it. I think you should do a round robin with satan, it'd be a good match between you two.


i got you, no one else will battle me hahaha. and i need the practice too, been forever since i sketched


fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

TastyMcNasty
08-01-2011, 01:30 PM
mc satan, how about skrim or skyrim? and as far as that fear piece, it turned out decent, your straights and 3D are on point. my only problem is that both the fill and the characs are a bit sloppy

nah, you wanna battle too?

nah!
08-01-2011, 01:45 PM
yes?

TastyMcNasty
08-01-2011, 01:47 PM
aight choose the word

Mc Satan
08-01-2011, 03:09 PM
lets do a 3 way ( im kinky like that lol) and let nah choose word again same demands though full color

nah!
08-01-2011, 03:30 PM
hmmm ok ill choose crome as the word

Rasm
08-01-2011, 03:35 PM
mc satan, how about skrim or skyrim? and as far as that fear piece, it turned out decent, your straights and 3D are on point. my only problem is that both the fill and the characs are a bit sloppy

nah, you wanna battle too?I wouldn't say that his straights or 3D are "on point"... The 3D is alright but it's messed up in a few places. For example, the 3D on the top part of the F is a lot thicker than the 3D in the middle of the R. I'm not saying it's bad, but don't get it in your head that it's perfect either. And I might throw down a chrome sketch... don't have the time or resources to make it full color though.

nah!
08-01-2011, 04:11 PM
nono its crome

Mc Satan
08-01-2011, 04:12 PM
allrite so 3 way colored crome

Shit Outta Luck
08-01-2011, 04:21 PM
Let it be a 4 way?

I'm down for this haha

Rasm
08-01-2011, 04:21 PM
Well shit, my H is fresh. Fuck it.

nah!
08-01-2011, 04:27 PM
it can have a h if you want

Mc Satan
08-01-2011, 04:31 PM
ok wait is this going to be 4 way or 5 way?

kedekone
08-01-2011, 04:37 PM
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any crits?

ribcage
08-01-2011, 05:03 PM
^I dig the vagina D on the first 1

Mc Satan
08-01-2011, 05:05 PM
kedek not to be an ass but i really dont like your letter structure in the first one, the throwie is nice though


everyone else, lets set the rules for this battle orgy, 4 way or 5 way if rasm decides to join. word is crome full color preferably 3 days from now. ill be working on mine tonight

now give me crits on this sketch i did last night since im not sure whether to continue it or not:
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kedekone
08-01-2011, 05:19 PM
lol thats exactly wat i was goin for

TastyMcNasty
08-01-2011, 05:28 PM
^I dig the vagina D on the first 1

buuuump hahahahahahah

ribcage
08-01-2011, 06:48 PM
I bet it was.... its a half decent vagina, terrible D.... vagina C-; D....F-

sharpie freestyle... sucks zee cock, just a rough draft for my battle with strange, only postin it cause its been a super long time since ive drawn anything
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0801111641.jpg

Phat 2
08-01-2011, 07:25 PM
mcsatan, nah, rasm and whoever's working on this crome battle for the the round robin, you guys can't do a 3 way battle. the participants have to be 1 on 1
find a 4th person and form 2 separate battles

Shit Outta Luck
08-01-2011, 07:27 PM
We have 4 people haha

Mc Satan
08-01-2011, 07:28 PM
i think this ended up becomign something else than round robin ill still battle mcnasty with skyrim
SOL ,mcnasty nah lets post crome in battle thread im about done with penciling so i want this battle to continue

Shit Outta Luck
08-01-2011, 08:36 PM
haha I finished penciling like an hour ago. But yeah dude sounds good.

thatguy1234
08-01-2011, 09:51 PM
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bump for crits

Mc Satan
08-01-2011, 10:12 PM
thatguy there is something about it that irks me but i really can not put a finger on it

SOL, nah, MCnasty where do we post this ? i just finished mine

EDIT: fuck it ill post it here in the meantime
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Shroomsh
08-01-2011, 10:52 PM
is their a fifth already? ill make 6?

Mc Satan
08-01-2011, 11:07 PM
is their a fifth already? ill make 6?
holy crap! more? hahah this lil battle ended up pretty damn big lol

TastyMcNasty
08-01-2011, 11:44 PM
haha fuck! and post it in the beef battle thread, i'll try an have it up tomorrow

ribcage
08-02-2011, 06:18 AM
4 a.m./ been up fo the big twenty-fo+ im on the d type shit. Yalls battle is gay, crome is a stupid word. peace. queers.

Mc Satan
08-02-2011, 08:08 AM
alright i posted it in beef battle posting it here cause i want crits please

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arsebanditskaelsucker
08-02-2011, 08:58 AM
^^ keep going Mc its getting better! :)

PETER
08-02-2011, 09:46 AM
unfinished... 1st character in months... the right hand is backwards...
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6124/5956578123_4d94b5107c.jpg[/url]
I am diggin' this a lot. I like that hand style. I like the vibe of the letters. The I and R seem to be a bit skinny next to the E and Z, but that's nit picking. I'd like to see some thing with some color.
edited due to spelling error....

nah!
08-02-2011, 11:19 AM
4 a.m./ been up fo the big twenty-fo+ im on the d type shit. Yalls battle is gay, crome is a stupid word. peace. queers.

your a stupid word!

shutup crome's* an old writer from my city
~~~~

I'm gonna need a bit to get the colour for the battle.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2383.JPG

Hulk
08-02-2011, 03:33 PM
tryin some new styles here and there. just some shit i did in a few minutes before work. crits (no were close to done)
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Mc Satan
08-02-2011, 03:43 PM
that smoke/ flame thingy on the M needs work but otherwise i like it. the T seems like it doesn't quite fit in though

Hulk
08-02-2011, 03:47 PM
that smoke/ flame thingy on the M needs work but otherwise i like it. the T seems like it doesn't quite fit in though

thanks man. but yeahh i know. if i wasnt goin to work in a few i would have taken more time. but im just tryin to get a better flow and style to my shit. thanks for the critt

Mc Satan
08-02-2011, 05:43 PM
battle against Mcnasty, word is pretty obvious (not quite done yet adding a bit more)
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Tempo718
08-02-2011, 06:10 PM
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any thots?

ribcage
08-02-2011, 06:16 PM
your R is almost a better A than your A

Mc Satan
08-02-2011, 06:28 PM
EDIT: inked will be coloring in about an hour or so please crit it
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Shit Outta Luck
08-02-2011, 08:30 PM
Well McSatan, I see where you got yo concept, and that games gonna be fucking amazing.

But please just keep your letters simpler, don't try and bend the bars yet, and don't try to give the whole piece a flow like that. At least not yet. I especially don't like the S, because it's pretty sloppy and wtf did you do with the top end of it haha. If you consider that an extension don't do that yet either. SIMPLER DAWG. That's all I'm saying, no beef.

Mc Satan
08-02-2011, 08:56 PM
actually mcnasty picked the word and i thought id add a lil sackboy vikign dude when i was done. to be honest i wast really thinking per say i jsut started drawing and it came otu liek that, i kinda liked it untill i did the 3d

Shit Outta Luck
08-02-2011, 08:58 PM
If it makes you feel better I like vikings. Lol his helmets funny and cool.

But yeah I get whatchu sayin, just do what works for you. And improve on it hah

Mc Satan
08-02-2011, 09:04 PM
meh vikign dude will be saved i liek him word will be redone

Shit Outta Luck
08-02-2011, 09:06 PM
Word haha. And I'm sure you'll like it more the second time

Mc Satan
08-02-2011, 09:13 PM
im still coloring vikign dude first though a shame not to color the lil dude

Shit Outta Luck
08-02-2011, 09:24 PM
haha thats whats up. Do him justice dawg

Mc Satan
08-03-2011, 12:23 AM
viking dude got colored
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ribcage
08-03-2011, 12:30 AM
.......what compulses you to post every little thing you do? It aint no thang at the moment since no one else is posting, but in the future please dont post every little thing you do to a sketch unless its in one post, just post the beginning image and the finished project, cause its starting to get annoying

ima crit your sketch tho.your barwidths are really inconsistent, your K lacks structure same with your Y and R. The I is the only lower case letter... kinda weird. Only thing I like about the sketch is the vantage idea, if you would have put the character above the Y it woulda made it better...

Mc Satan
08-03-2011, 12:58 AM
actually this one i wanted crits before i moved on but no one was around so yeah, either way ill do the word tomorrow again probably put 2 smaller dudes fighting somehow into it

Ader
08-03-2011, 03:01 AM
Crit the shit outa this 28993

MN Nice
08-03-2011, 03:09 AM
Connect the top of the O. ^

Ader
08-03-2011, 03:20 AM
yeah i noticed that right as i put the line there haha, thanks any other suggestions?

nah!
08-03-2011, 07:25 AM
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2383.JPG

Afroman
08-03-2011, 07:33 AM
here's somthing new...
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Shit Outta Luck
08-03-2011, 08:12 AM
Ader try and keep your bar widths the same. Namely the bottom of the R. The legs ya know. Nah try and grt your S as the same size as your M and O. And Afro that second thing looks fresh. Nice style only thing i don't like is the top of the R. I feel like that bar shouldn't bend inward. Maybe outward instead haha

Afroman
08-03-2011, 08:22 AM
haha yeha man your wright newer seen that before tnx :D

Shit Outta Luck
08-03-2011, 08:26 AM
Haha no problem and that's the only thing that stuck out ta me. You should color that

Leopold Stotch
08-03-2011, 11:12 AM
Props to Sear for being an actual writer, instead of a sketchbook junkie.

decided to go back to my old word, F's, L's, and T's are starting to piss me off29020
Hate the C on this one, but either way, Crits please

SLVRONE
08-03-2011, 12:32 PM
critizism please, says emulous it was a logo for someone29021

Mc Satan
08-03-2011, 02:55 PM
3d in U to L is a bit off bars are not consistent in width, and this might just be mi but im not a fan of the skull with down syndrome

Skeletor1134
08-03-2011, 03:38 PM
afro i think yours is pretty sick and unique. and slvr your skull drawing is alright but the letters need more work.

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latest sketch

Shit Outta Luck
08-03-2011, 03:51 PM
Skeletor that fill and background is sick! But your letters are a little whack. I don't like the k because it doesn't really look like a k. Fix the top legs. And the m, I don't really like the flat part of it. And try n keep your bar sizes the same

Skeletor1134
08-03-2011, 05:47 PM
thanks man, yeah my letters are pretty whack but i was trying to keep it simple while still being a little unique. i tried to keep the letters basic and box like. but thanks for the critique.

Beast_One
08-03-2011, 05:55 PM
New here, i write beast and since 12oz is down temporarily thought i'd try this
http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff404/Sce161/2011-08-02230301.jpg
Fucked up my B on this one
http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff404/Sce161/2011-08-02230140.jpg

Old dies sketch
http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff404/Sce161/IMAG0275.jpg

TastyMcNasty
08-03-2011, 06:09 PM
^i have a friend who used to rock that name, then he got busted haha.
anyway, crits; dont do that overlapping bars thing, looks wack. your bar width is a bit weird too, and finally leave extensions alone for a while till your structure gets a bit better.

EDIT: your S is hurting big time too

Shit Outta Luck
08-03-2011, 06:40 PM
Beast, try and keep your bar width the same. I noticed that mostly on your Bs. Go even simpler. Like on your second one that S isn't the best, it looks like an underline and a P. I don't like the E because of the extension going in, lose that. Just my advice.

Mc Satan
08-03-2011, 07:18 PM
Mcnasty,nah, shroom, you guys ready with crome? im itching to see the results

Shit Outta Luck
08-03-2011, 08:09 PM
one a yalls gonna win. Thats all I'm sayin haha

Fluffy Bunnies
08-03-2011, 08:32 PM
i feel like doing a sketch soon

Mc Satan
08-03-2011, 09:35 PM
ok redid skyrim crit me please
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mista_dza
08-03-2011, 09:43 PM
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im gettin tired of capital Ls so i made it lowercase, for simplicity, not a big fan of the E needs some work but i like my D so far, any crits would be nice, oh and i realized the lines in all the letters with the little square is lame, but in the L it makes it look like a I sorta.

Shit Outta Luck
08-03-2011, 09:49 PM
McSatan I like that one alot more! It looks alot cleaner my dude. I wouldn't have like, made the K and S as crooked though. And Del my dude haha that D is nice as hell. I feel like the E should've had its middle bar straighter and I like the L just cuz it's so simple. But I agree witchu sayin that the line and square makes it look like an I haha

Mc Satan
08-03-2011, 09:51 PM
i think it would have looked better without the drippy bits to be honest. i about the letter themselves i agree with you i do not like the E at all it just looks odd, im drawing a complete blank on how to do it otherwise though, sorry.

SOL only thing is i drew it to damn big cant fit in a viking dude

mista_dza
08-03-2011, 10:38 PM
im gonna work on that E, lol the drippy thing was for the laughs i wanted to see what itd look like, more or less.

Fluffy Bunnies
08-03-2011, 10:53 PM
kilsr
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/posikils.jpg

trying new shit out. rough sketch btw and i kinda went bigger at the end. didnt notice til after

i'll try anything once. cept gay shit.

HRbN
08-03-2011, 11:38 PM
mcsatan ur R is to small

TastyMcNasty
08-04-2011, 01:32 AM
blurry pics >.>
for the crome battle
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unfinished for the skyrim battle.
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MakeItTakeIt
08-04-2011, 03:11 AM
That S makes no sense to me...

Fluff those letters are hurtin right now but they got potential, finish it.

Quick "NORTH" outline, crits would be appreciated. I wish I'd done more with the H..
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Ader
08-04-2011, 03:45 AM
bump for crits. only got one last page29070 Name: Aobi :(i realize the "o" isnt connected at the top)i know it isnt very good im just getting back into graff. took a year or so break

SLVRONE
08-04-2011, 08:52 AM
Ader-you 3d isnt very consistent and could use work, and it looked to me like the fill was supposed to be a cityscape, which would be cool if done correctly and i don't really like the backwards heart on the I. Imo

Shit Outta Luck
08-04-2011, 12:35 PM
McSatan your R is a Lil' to small lol. But you can fit the Viking guys head and maybe an arm above the y and the r

Mc Satan
08-04-2011, 06:30 PM
ok fixed the R made it bigger, also penciled in a horned helm,should i keep it or not?
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Shit Outta Luck
08-04-2011, 06:32 PM
Nah just like...have the ragdoll coming out of the piece.

But if you fail at that keep the helmet lol

Mc Satan
08-04-2011, 06:34 PM
tried the rag doll it wasn't looking good but i still wanted to add something to it, therefore the helmet

Shit Outta Luck
08-04-2011, 06:39 PM
Well in that case good luck! And try and draw your lines faster and smoother

TastyMcNasty
08-04-2011, 06:55 PM
mcsatan- looks good, R seems a little squished tho
del- those drips are weird, and that E seems awkward
kilsr- i like that style, throw some 3D on it and it'll be bangin
north- too many extensions, and the connections seem a little forced. and dont do the overlapping bar thing.
ader- you need to go simpler, the extensions and connections dont look good, and that fill and background are real sloppy


better flick for crome battle, i know the arrow coming off the E is wack, thought id give it a try tho
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Mc Satan
08-04-2011, 07:03 PM
dammit nah! sell a kidney for them or something

ribcage
08-04-2011, 07:22 PM
@tasty on R horizntal bar that starts the right leg of R top line of it should not be full where it meets the top right part of R ya dig? Leave that part open and it will start making your R's look better

Mc Satan
08-04-2011, 07:29 PM
ok managed to get viking dude to look good this time, crits while i go eat dinner please. also possible color scheme's would be nice
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Shit Outta Luck
08-04-2011, 08:03 PM
Lol sweet and I aint telling you color schemes, get that yaself! But sometimes try and incorporate a character into your letters, have him going through them or touching them or something haha.
And TastyMcNasty, like ribcage said lose that top lil piece of your R, and lol at the google chrome logo in there.

Mc Satan
08-04-2011, 08:07 PM
Lol sweet and I aint telling you color schemes, get that yaself! But sometimes try and incorporate a character into your letters, have him going through them or touching them or something haha.
And TastyMcNasty, like ribcage said lose that top lil piece of your R, and lol at the google chrome logo in there.

that right there somehow sounded pervy to me

Shit Outta Luck
08-04-2011, 08:13 PM
lol I didn't write it like that... but hey whatever works

ribcage
08-04-2011, 09:10 PM
^wheres your sketches at dude?


....colored the dale fs
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0804111438.jpg

TastyMcNasty
08-04-2011, 10:06 PM
rib- i like the letters and the fill, but the background seems a little sloppy to me, especially the drips

ribcage
08-04-2011, 11:07 PM
I feel it, just a rough draft freestyle for the tfrrt... coloring the final draft, dont know if I like it better than the simple tho. I have like 40 somethin pages full colored in the book im workin in(not all by me) and its hella hard to think of new backgrounds that I havent done yet, so for this I just went quick and easy, nothin special

Mc Satan
08-04-2011, 11:09 PM
ok i colored this just wondering whether i should do a color outline or not
EDIT: btw hated your word mcnasty :P
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Tempo718
08-04-2011, 11:58 PM
rib- i think the background is just a lil accent 2 that peice but the peice in it self is nice to see. reguardless it came out nice
satan- feelin it way more after you threw some color into the peice but the I seems a lil lonley back there like it did'nt step up to the roll call on tha peice. i ono but good improvment anyhow.
tasty - ono wa happen to the 3d (backdrop) whatever u did it dont look right for some reason, try it again wit a diff 3d effect an lets see it after.

Shit Outta Luck
08-05-2011, 12:44 AM
I'm on vacation with my aunt and my moms and my lil cousin. Not much time
To sketch. But if you want me to post everything I've ever painted and drawn I will later haha. And ribcage that's clean. I really like the colors of the letters, I dunno why lol. Satan i like the 3d and ragdoll fill, but wtf is with that blue and brownish fill for the letters. Looks weird to me haha

ribcage
08-05-2011, 12:47 AM
you aint gotta do all that, you just givin mcsatan a lot of advice, and if your good it may motivate him to produce better quality work.

Mc Satan
08-05-2011, 12:50 AM
did an outline color overall saving that one for when mcnasty has his piece ready, also ive been wanting to do something with blue and brown for awhile now dont really know why

@tempo the I looks like that because imade the R bigger 2 times before i was done, by then i had redone this piece almost completely about 4 other times so i didnt want to erase half the word again. therefore the I is being bullied into the back

Shit Outta Luck
08-05-2011, 01:20 AM
Alright ribcage thanks for the advice. I feel what your coming from so tomorrow I'll post some stuff. And Satan I hope that outline is nice haha good luck in your battle

Shit Outta Luck
08-05-2011, 03:21 PM
Alright double posting mofuckas. And uhhh bump? Here's everything I got, not many BB pieces. At all. Only two lol
http://imageshack.us/g/718/5983596252cb3ed13c16.jpg/

Skeletor1134
08-05-2011, 03:59 PM
sol your throwies are sick.
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unfinished sketch. letters suck

MakeItTakeIt
08-05-2011, 04:19 PM
I'm lazy...
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That bottom arrow is all kinds of ugly hahaha

nah!
08-05-2011, 04:50 PM
@sol thake those extensions of you pieces and keep your bar widths the same and your stuff will look alright

Shit Outta Luck
08-05-2011, 05:33 PM
Thanks skeletor haha. And yeah nah I been having that problem alot. I met the only other real writer in my area and he told me to fix that too. Lol if I get time to sketch tonight I'll try and do something decent.

Phat 2
08-05-2011, 06:13 PM
takeitmakeit, back to the drawing board dude... not even close to being ready for all those extensions. sorry.

MN Nice
08-05-2011, 06:18 PM
My round robin entry. Feel free to crit. I flipped the A to eliminate negative space on the upper part of the letters between the L and the S, even with an extension on the top of the A is still looked too open for me.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00204-20110805-1809.jpg?t=1312585977

Tempo718
08-05-2011, 06:53 PM
29239292402924129242

flashback

Mc Satan
08-05-2011, 07:02 PM
allright i need me a tag master with not much to do tonight. iwanna concentrate tonight on tags trying to get something that works

MN Nice
08-05-2011, 07:05 PM
That looks good to you? Honestly? You have no structure what so ever.

Fluffy Bunnies
08-05-2011, 11:05 PM
everyone in this thread needs more arrows.

The Kidz
08-05-2011, 11:28 PM
29274292752927629277
crits?

MN Nice
08-06-2011, 12:08 AM
everyone in this thread needs more arrows.

Why is that the theme of every one of your posts lately? Constant hate when your shit is weak too. Check yourself.

@Kidz - The top and bottom piece are your best because the letters have actual structure to them, although they need some work too. The char's are pretty dry too. Keep at it though.

sema
08-06-2011, 03:02 AM
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old battle sketch 29281....hopen im aloud in this page ha

Tempo718
08-06-2011, 03:42 AM
29282 did this after I got home with some pens i had in my socks

Fluffy Bunnies
08-06-2011, 04:38 AM
Why is that the theme of every one of your posts lately? Constant hate when your shit is weak too. Check yourself.

@Kidz - The top and bottom piece are your best because the letters have actual structure to them, although they need some work too. The char's are pretty dry too. Keep at it though.

arrows are the shit, you hatin on them? i aint spreadin no hate. and i know my shit is weak... thats why i post in this forum


kids - looks to blobby and need to stick to the basics. gettin too ahead of urself man.
tempo - didnt quite nail it but it has potential. right now i feel you are in that awkward teenager phase but like in style, if that makes any sense. because that's how i feel about myself. when you establish your own thing, and do what you do and be good at it, i think you'll know

btw bump, need more feedback. thanksies
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/photo-1.jpg

Mc Satan
08-06-2011, 07:27 AM
th kidz nothing against you, this might just be me, but your characters give me an irrational anger. i reeealllyyyy dont like em

arsebanditskaelsucker
08-06-2011, 07:33 AM
I fucking love arrows :)
i also think fluffy bunnies and shit outta luck are fucking brilliant usernames :)
kilsr- i like it nice and easy i think the r is a bit fat tho
Tempo- i like the last one you did i think your letters look better if they are a bit fatter to be honest, like your ends on the letter t in one of the first ones on this page...where they sort of thin down to a point i don't think it looks so good....leave them a bit fatter i think it will look better yo :)
The kidz- same sort of thing on the middle too fatten them letters up a bit and the dos one's better and i like the afro dude on the bottom one, just need a little more time taken to neaten the letters up and outlines i reckon....bits and pieces like that but the dos ones are defo better than the middle too....to much overlapping and stuff for me personally :)
can i get any opinions on this one please, the overlap on the e pisses me off grr!! :
http://img38.picoodle.com/i586/potts/16fp_a87_u905z.jpg (http://i.picoodle.com/61cihkcy)

aaesoo
08-06-2011, 08:20 AM
kidz-that first piece is ok but the ones that say power look like shit. get rid of the extensions/connections and do keyboard letters.
kilsr-thats pretty dope the only thing i can even think of for crits is the the little i and l look kinda weird next to each other. i like it tho.
bmore-its good the only thing i can say is the top and bottom legs of the B and R should be one continuous bar, not two different ones like you have them now.
tempo-is your friends name oahi?

Phat 2
08-06-2011, 09:02 AM
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/228863_260846967275553_100000507545549_1008014_419 983_n.jpg

mista_dza
08-06-2011, 10:10 AM
bmore, i assuming maryland? shoot me a pm i live right by there, but interesting style not a huge fan of it but it does look nice with that color
phat2 , nice straight letter, i love it in straights when the A is upside down lol

Shit Outta Luck
08-06-2011, 10:42 AM
Bmore, if your from maryland shoot me a PM too. lol. I'm from around there too. And nice colors but as aeso said, the B should be one continous bar, not two separate ones. And cker, thanks for the compliment! I love my name haha

sema
08-06-2011, 10:47 AM
everyone on this page look at fluffy simple clean Strait get some letters down first
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Shit Outta Luck
08-06-2011, 11:18 AM
I could say the same for you. I especially don't like the extension on the bottom leg of the R. But nice fill

The Kidz
08-06-2011, 11:53 AM
thanks for the crits. the one's that say power are pretty old and the pos one's are newer.
ars; i'm lovin the color scheme
phat; i'm really likin the splatters

arsebanditskaelsucker
08-06-2011, 03:17 PM
Thanks for the crits gang, all noted for the next bit of sketching :)
phat i love that its tight....whats with everyone doing the upsode down letter a's right now though?

Phat 2
08-06-2011, 03:39 PM
yeah i noticed someone else did it too recently. can't remember if it was MN nice, or tempo or erm... can't remember his name, the dude with the red deadmau5 avatar.
I've done it a couple times now, I like it, got the original idea from mark ecko's getting up a couple years ago, the A's structure is basic, but I'd like to admit I reference JA with it... I'm also contemplating going all ghost ris soon and doing the whole upside down pieces and backwards and sideways and all that shit... ghost's one of my favorite bombers man

MN Nice
08-06-2011, 03:45 PM
My round robin entry. Feel free to crit. I flipped the A to eliminate negative space on the upper part of the letters between the L and the S, even with an extension on the top of the A is still looked too open for me.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00204-20110805-1809.jpg?t=1312585977

Yeah it was me lol bump for crits

arsebanditskaelsucker
08-06-2011, 03:56 PM
That was it^^^ I quite like that, sorry mean to crit this one actually...i like the background really sets the letters off but i think a little more use of lighter and darker shading on the blue would have made those letters pop out like mad! and i think the 3d is a little tiny bit off but i think thats with attention to detail like on the e you got one fatter bit of 3d and then the middle bar of the e has a thinner bit of 3d........but i'm just being picky i think :)
do like the letters think the s needs to have more level gaps in it though :)
again just being a pickey ass mo-fo lol :)

ribcage
08-06-2011, 04:05 PM
ace-k why u steal my bg? lol jk...

Mc Satan
08-06-2011, 04:10 PM
i know this is not 100% the right place but, tag thread is moving to slow, and for some reason they do not know what crit is. so mind giving me some opinions on these 4?
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MN Nice
08-06-2011, 04:38 PM
Thanks for the crits bandit

Get that isht out of here Satan. Theres no need to post every single tag you try. Keep writing, try to find one that YOU like. One that YOU'RE satisfied with, not us.

Mc Satan
08-06-2011, 04:40 PM
@MN nice to be honest any crits would be nit picking that piece is simple solid and pretty damn nice

sema
08-06-2011, 09:17 PM
everyone on this page look at fluffy simple clean Strait get some letters down first
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bottom page bump

lawlcat
08-07-2011, 12:56 AM
and for some reason they do not know what crit is.

I just fucking told you in the tag thread to keep them simple and write it over and over again to develop style... Those are the EXACT same tag four times and you're just slowly devolving the shitty P into a shitty F, so you're first move would be stop that. Keep it simple and it will come.

Consider that a crit?

EWL24
08-07-2011, 02:44 AM
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these r a couple weeks old, but iv been out of town so i haven't gotten around to finishing them yet. Crits please

Mc Satan - i agree with lawlcat those are all the exact same tag, try something different

MN Nice
08-07-2011, 02:57 AM
Clean work Ewl. Only thing bugging me about the top one is the W closing inwards on the top. Not too good looking. The second piece is meh. Connecting all the letters ruins it for me and the L is practically an i since its connected with the cross bar of the A. Pretty cool char though. Give your pieces some color too.

Tempo718
08-07-2011, 03:05 AM
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to keep it simple yall jus be persistant listen to all a the heads in the forum if ur seeking guidance they do have good advice. not for nothin. thas my 2 cents 40 day. peace G an E's

arsebanditskaelsucker
08-07-2011, 07:32 AM
yeah thats better tempo...nice and fat them letters..feed them some pies lol
Satan- take a whole wedge of paper and a pen and tag away little buddy :) go crazy....you'll get one you like and also you'll be able to do it in like 2 seconds flat :)
also in my picture below i tried a phile tag for you lol forgot bout that did it last night while i was looking at your 4 attempts lol .....don't know why i just felt the need :)
ewal- not crazy bout the e crossing over the w in the second one but other than that is not so bad...i like the little guy holding on the top of the a, if your 3d was a bit more precise i think the little guy holding the a would make them letters 'pop' :)

think i'm guna have to fatten up the leg on the R here and hope colour makes it look better lol...anything else you guys can spot??:
http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/6445/1005424.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/809/1005424.jpg/)

dankbudz
08-07-2011, 09:22 AM
Ewal- top ones got good structure, cause its simple as fuck. but on the bottom one you gotta lose the connections and keep a baseline n all that jazz. You just tried to bend the bars too much in weird places.
Tempo- take your own advice, you do some weird shit to your letters
Bmore- keep your bars coonsistent and clean it up, it looks mad sloppy and quick. Take your time on your work

Mc Satan
08-07-2011, 09:26 AM
arse after 5 pages full , i ended up really like that P in my 4 attempts don't really knwo why. which is why i made them bigger and modified the P a lil on each one, thnks for the tag btw. also you need to fatten up that leg on the R it look a bit out of place like that

CliffJackson
08-07-2011, 10:40 AM
@Satan I like 4 too. I think everything flows nice. I want to see the tag with a fatter marker, i think that might look a little better and help fill in them empty spaces!!!!. Crits on my sketch

mista_dza
08-07-2011, 01:48 PM
get rid of taht arrow goin through the piece and damn you relax on that pencil you might break it next time before your finished. lol is it just me? or do you guys like using like 2b pencils to do a sketch?

MN Nice
08-07-2011, 01:52 PM
get rid of taht arrow goin through the piece and damn you relax on that pencil you might break it next time before your finished. lol is it just me? or do you guys like using like 2b pencils to do a sketch?

That'll happen with crappy notebook paper and any #2 pencil.


Too many posts from me lately lol But thats clean as fuck, dank. VVV Good work. Keep the stone and moss theme in the 3d.

dankbudz
08-07-2011, 03:26 PM
^lol, not rearry

still gotta put some 3d on this, but can i get me some crits?
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/brains.jpg

nah!
08-07-2011, 03:29 PM
its nice except the E and R are a little low

ribcage
08-07-2011, 03:34 PM
slanted bar of R still bugs me, the width gets wider from left to right.talkpic
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0806112255.jpg

ATAK!:3
08-07-2011, 03:39 PM
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quick ten minute sketch before i go surf, crits?

Leopold Stotch
08-07-2011, 04:03 PM
@Dankbudz: slap some 3d on that, my suggestion is go inward on your letters so it kills the negative space
@Ribcage: looks cool but I think you should add some curve into those letters, especially on the R.
@ATAK: does that say Desa?

sketch for talk. 29367

ribcage
08-07-2011, 05:08 PM
extension on the S is wack, extension on the top left of C is super wack, extension on the K is like the one on the s

...too late. redoin this one now tho
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0807111505.jpg