Blackbooks

[One Evil]

^yur comments to sors n shroom makes no sense what so ever... imo that shit he did with his buddy is fresh as hell... and that style is ment to pretty much just blow ur mind and u arent suppose to read it thats the point..

top piece by sors, bottom piece me [xist]
crits?http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=27788&d=1310972445


thats fuckin cool really diggin em both!

[Dune]

Hey Im fairly new to all this, feedback on the attatchment would be great!Its obviously not finished yet, but tell me what you think, Thanks!

[EWL24]

Shroomsh & Sors - nice job, i like them both a lot

Dune - go way simpler, git rid of all the extensions and arrows, cause right now it looks really bad

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

one evil- your right its doesn't make any sense i just read it back to myself lol wot an arse i am pretty tired though
ok so again in proper english this time i was trying to say:
i can't make out what it says but just to look at and admire it, it is shit hot! :)
that make more sense now? lol
I can't make a biro work that well so i'm definatly not dissin it yo!

[Shroomsh]

Cheers everyone, im glad you realise that its just ment to look good and not readable, when i was doing this, i could visulize looking at somesort of building identical to what i wasnted to draw, and it worked :D

dune - your wildstyle is essentially built off of your simple style, which is why new people who try to go wild straight away cant, work on you simple until you have built some sexy as letters before you add on extensions, simples are very underated too, some of my favorite artists including askew and rime (bothe wild as fuck) do simples still and you can tell how developed and natural graffiti has become for them. Because there simples are the tits, i hope this helped

[upper90daynnight]

27835
i think this was good exsept the E needed to be moved down a bit and i the lines could have been cleaner

[.Cuore]

get rid of the shine and practice your simples.

[DaFugg]

The more time i spend on this site the more "Practice your simples" sounds like "Eat your vegitables"

[Dune]

Alright thanks for the advice, I added to it and i think it looks pretty good. But il practice my simples and start from the bottom, sweet deal guys

[.Cuore]

The more time i spend on this site the more "Practice your simples" sounds like "Eat your vegitables"

no matter where you go, that's what you'll hear. you need to eat your vegetables to grow up to be big and strong the same way you needa practice your simples to make headway in becoming a decent artist.

[Dune]

[ATTACH=CONFIG]27844[/ATTACHI know that its alittle over the top and i understand that im going to work on my simples. But i added to it, so just for fun, throw me some feedback please:cool:

[DaFugg]

bars are bad and arrows are just crap. It doesn't look good and has no flow.

[-Sinn-]

Dune - Looks like shit no hate it just does u said u know what to do so no excuses not to
This is for Messer
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture247-1.jpg
crits?

[TastyMcNasty]

^^FUCKIN DOPE! thats so bangin bro, the fills, the extensions,everything!
on that note, you wanna exchange?

[-Sinn-]

I'm down ill prob just do simps tho need to pick up markers what u write and heres a song to put everyone in the mood to laugh and draw if uve had few b-rips like me lol
http://youtu.be/dHZopVDdgVA

[TastyMcNasty]

sick bro. and i write soar

[Tony]

i started doing simples and now its all i can do






do whatever the fuck you want

[SHUT]

I'm not in much of a position to talk, but i see slotr pretty clearly in there. Its just ugly, that's all. Fucked up on my S and the shadowing.

27872

[lord_plankton]

sloter is weak. call it style i call it uglyness. and when it comes down to paintin hes even worse. rasm you shut the fuck up.
haha just recognized the "dont fuck with me" in slotrs pic...stuuupid head!

some stuff be me n others...
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/IMG_3593.jpg

http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/IMG_3624.jpg

http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy329/lord_plankton/IMG_3665.jpg

[REVNoner]

http://i342.photobucket.com/albums/o411/tcoley13/2011-07-19_17-52-06_180.jpg

Critts^^ whatcha think?

[killroywashere]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6020/5955874059_01c0bf1ef9.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/61418984@N05/5955874059/)

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6029/5955873819_19eb9b7374.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/61418984@N05/5955873819/)

random stuff i been working on

sinn - your a beast
Revm - throw some 3d on there

[ProxyArt]

I just started a couple weeks ago so here's what I got

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz333/InfernoParadox/snapshot1.jpg

http://i841.photobucket.com/albums/zz333/InfernoParadox/snapshot.jpg

Crits please :)

[.Cuore]

Dune - Looks like shit no hate it just does u said u know what to do so no excuses not to
This is for Messer
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Picture247-1.jpg
crits?

that fill is top shelf.

[REVNoner]

ProxyArt... try and use more of your style instead of a graffiti creator.

[ProxyArt]

ProxyArt... try and use more of your style instead of a graffiti creator.

Yeah, I got that, I used it to see how certain letters should look, I don't see good graffiti where I live so I had no idea where to start, but I've been playing around with it a bit trying to make it my own.

[Shroomsh]

There is no 'what graffiti letters should look' everyones style should be different from another otherwise shit gets boring, and nobody stands out

[REVNoner]

Proxyart... yeah go on google images. But just keep sketching.


But anyways.. got bored so y'all critt!
http://i342.photobucket.com/albums/o411/tcoley13/2011-07-19_23-07-21_854.jpg

[ProxyArt]

There is no 'what graffiti letters should look' everyones style should be different from another otherwise shit gets boring, and nobody stands out

Idk, at the beginning you always bite off others a bit and eventually through subtle changes it becomes your own style, at least that's what I was told :/. But living where I live I don't have anyone to 'look up to' in a way so I went to the internet.

[Ravid1]

3 day piece.."LOST"27943

[ribcage]

^that sucks, background-sucks, colors-sucks, letters-sucks, tags at the bottom-suck.

you are all fat losers and have body odor

[extinct]

unfinished... 1st character in months... the right hand is backwards...
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6124/5956578123_4d94b5107c.jpg[/url]

[Shroomsh]

yeah my stuff is wild and you cant read most of it but 'lost' that is filth, and not in a good way,

extinct, i like the charo and the most part of the piece, but the "R" doesnt suit imho,
i like the "E" a lot though.

and proxy, sure thats understandable, but the less you bite while your starting out, the more you test your creativity and actually improve, i know from personal experience, i used to be the biggest toy, biting everything i saw, but my graffiti didnt take off until i started visualizing what i wanted to see myself, and not visualising what others had done. the less you try to copy, the more you can visualize your own style development, ya dig?

[Ravid1]

Like you said shroomsh, I was "testing my creativity"
I mean sure its not your typical graff but at least Im attempting to step outside the box. Something you don't see too much of nowadays

[Shroomsh]

I do so much moving in and out of the box that you could say i was fucking it.

[Ravid1]

Haha alright I'll take a witty line over blunt ass remarks any day

[Jiska Matos]

27960 hows it going ppl? here is some stuff im working on ;)

[golfwanger]

27972

27987

any tips for me?

[paintfaceVT]

some old, some new

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6141/5934211663_909318d63a_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5934211663/)
sketchmania (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5934211663/) by JokzOner (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6129/5934776290_b01c3b67f9_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5934776290/)
old sketch (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5934776290/) by JokzOner (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6148/5934214507_4586a70f1a_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5934214507/)
old outline, new colours (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5934214507/) by JokzOner (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr

crits please


yo for real best thing on here, mad simple, defines the blocks, proper structure, this is where I started, keep at it, start changing the size of the blocks, widths length, add some bends, trust me more bad crits will follow, but in the long run, you'll get it

[golfwanger]

27989

Pursy.....

critz?:confused:

[Rasm]

Like you said shroomsh, I was "testing my creativity"
I mean sure its not your typical graff but at least Im attempting to step outside the box. Something you don't see too much of nowadays
There's really no point in stepping out of the box if you're going to drop all letter structure and consistency while doing so.

[golfwanger]

279902799127992

a few more. Ive been messing with the word elder, elbo.

Could some one give me some pointers?

[golfwanger]

2799327994

Both Unfinished.


Crits?

[OvanOne]

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/200/c/0/ovan_a1_by_ovanone-d40q8pw.jpg

hey guys, this is my first post here, hope you like my shit.

i know the markers suck, cause theyre almost dead and i didnt have time to get my hands on new stuff, so dont pay attention to the fill, just comment the letter structure and shit like that

[golfwanger]

whats the word?

[OvanOne]

youve got to be kidding me

and the word is OVAN, same as my nickname

[OvanOne]

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/201/0/4/devil_by_ant_h_raxx-d41397m.jpg

i made this one today, for a competition on deviantart...

[golfwanger]

youve got to be kidding me

and the word is OVAN, same as my nickname

hahah, my bad bro. couldnt tell if that was a v.

[Rasm]

@Extinct, I can't really crit characters because I don't draw them myself, but I like the style you're going for on the sketch. The letters don't seem to flow very well with one another because the I is too small and too far away from the R. It really kills the flow. I like the word Eris though; there's actually a dwarf planet named Eris that's larger than Pluto but 3 times further out.

@Jiska, that's super dope homie! I'm digging the character too!

@GoldWanger, work on your consistency. The middle part of the M in that top piece is practically nonexistant. The C is also very rough. Your A's in that bottom one are way too wide compared to the E and P, and the E is very boring and bland. In the Pursy sketch, the PUR seems to flow but the S doesn't fit, and I don't know if I'm digging the backwards Y. I'm not feeling the ENDR one. It has no flow or consistency, and your drop shadow is royally screwed. The ones below it are kinda meh, and so are those hand styles. The sketch at the bottom has some potential but I'd like to see you work on it more. You definitely seem to have some style and potential, just keep at it.

@Ovan, I'm definitely not liking the O in that yellow one, and the rest of the letters are bent in all the wrong places. Also lose those blocky chunks at the top... they're so overused it's not even funny. In the second one, I'm not feeling those little bumps you threw in all over the tops of your letters... they just don't look that good. And that's literally the least original thing to put at the bottom of the letter I. I hate seeing that shit because I know the artist didn't come up with that idea on their own... Aside from that, keep the bar widths more consistent and try coming up with your own style and add-ons.


Here's a sketch that's still pretty rough. There are several parts of it that I need to drop/re-do, but I was just looking for some crits before I ink and color it.
It says GOFAR.

http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/83/imag1015.jpg

EDIT: ... I know the lines are sketchy... I said it was a rough sketch.

[golfwanger]

im digging the A. and the extra shadow things.

[Anon Y]

Here's a sketch that's still pretty rough. There are several parts of it that I need to drop/re-do, but I was just looking for some crits before I ink and color it.
It says GOFAR.


Looks good so far, but I get a vibe off of it that I get in a lot of my sketches where I feel like it still needs something but can't put my finger on what it is.

[killroywashere]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6020/5955874059_01c0bf1ef9.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/61418984@N05/5955874059/)

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6029/5955873819_19eb9b7374.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/61418984@N05/5955873819/)

random stuff i been working on

sinn - your a beast
Revm - throw some 3d on there


bumped for crits

rasm - try to give your lines more purpose so they dont look so sketchy

[Anon Y]

bumped for crits

haha, never thought of working a piece out on a whiteboard; that's a good idea.

[Jiska Matos]

28004 project for my room :P any crits?

[Phat 2]

golfwanger, if you're trying to write apear, I advise you look up APEAR from LA... I guess he's with MTA

[golfwanger]

golfwanger, if you're trying to write apear, I advise you look up APEAR from LA... I guess he's with MTA

good looks bro. im not trying to die young(:

ill stick with ELDR.


28004 project for my room :P any crits?

that looks great bro.
only thing i can see, is make the bottom part of the mane a little more flowy.
but other than that great job.

[Jokz]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6141/5960211040_85d2ef9cf0_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5960211040/)
MF JOKZ (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5960211040/) by JokzOner (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr

[DaFugg]

Batman/Spartan/Elephant Hybrid.

[TastyMcNasty]

^thats a mf doom elephant if im correct. not spartan
and its pre sick

[Skeletor1134]

28012

posting a pic to feel cool. pretty shitty

[Jokz]

^thats a mf doom elephant if im correct. not spartan
and its pre sick

you are indeed correct therefore the "MF JOKZ" :P

[Shroomsh]

a few throw ideas, fuck that tag, it brought a tear to my eye, and not in a good way :(
28013

[Anon Y]

^cool stuff man, with some polish I could see those throws being pretty tits.

[Rezume_or_die]

mfdoom elephant is sick, that lion is on point
1st two pager i ever finished
28045
i may go back and do the shading better but i cant use any more time on this i have other peices to finish

[Skeletor1134]

280472804828049

Criticize n shit

[Tokyo_ROCKABILY-CLub]

"M" extension needs to gtfo.

[Skeletor1134]

"M" extension needs to gtfo.

yeah M has been giving me some shit. not sure how to make it look good. i dont think my m in the last one is that bad but the second pic sucks.

[Tokyo_ROCKABILY-CLub]

How does summer fag have 93 credits? even if you made the extension on the "M" shoot to the right it would look alot better.

[Rezume_or_die]

on that third one, take that zigzag and spiral part out and it would be dope, imo

[Rasm]

Xist, your throws aren't bad but keep working on them. X's are tricky.

Nice page Rezume.

And this SKAM burns you Skeletor.
http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewThumbs/artist/474/city/127/style/1

[Skeletor1134]

Xist, your throws aren't bad but keep working on them. X's are tricky.

Nice page Rezume.

And this SKAM burns you Skeletor.
http://www.bombingscience.com/index.php/gallery/viewThumbs/artist/474/city/127/style/1

ya ive seen his shit. its alot better than me no doubt but hell its not like im gonna start havin beef with him, i just like to write skam. every god damn name is taken so fuck.

[Shroomsh]

throws are soo much easier with paint and a fat cap,
going bombing tonight so ill do a few and post them for proper crits on what the syle actually looks like, but yeah, i dont normally do throws, i piece a lot more..

[REVNoner]

http://i342.photobucket.com/albums/o411/tcoley13/2011-07-21_23-32-18_764.jpg
What y'all think? Go critt^^^
REVNoner!

[OZON]

http://i342.photobucket.com/albums/o411/tcoley13/2011-07-21_23-32-18_764.jpg
What y'all think? Go critt^^^
REVNoner! make the letters the same size close the hole on the e and push it out a bit more

[KOKADEVA]

28070
crits please!

[Rasm]

What y'all think? Go critt^^^
REVNoner!Man, quit posting the same 30-second simples over and over and demanding crits without even giving crits first.

[MN Nice]

Not feelin it Cane. Bar widths are wack and just the style of the piece is lame. No offense.

Simps/rollers maybe and a new throw idea. Crits.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00191-20110722-0901.jpg?t=1311343536

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00192-20110722-0902.jpg?t=1311343572

Edit: Ignore that bottom tag. Did it at like 4 in the morning lol.

[Jokz]

i was too lazy to try and fit in a "Z" lol
colours pop more in real life tho... shittay camera ftw

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6030/5964989712_c9768e3f90_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5964989712/)
Jok(z)? (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5964989712/) by JokzOner (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr

[OvanOne]

cool letters bro, only the o seems a bit bad...

and about the colors, download photoshop and edit them there :)

[nah!]

just some shity random words
http://i1238.photobucket.com/albums/ff497/NAHgraff/100_2356.jpg
i chose these at random i dont write any of these

[Jokz]

cool letters bro, only the o seems a bit bad...

and about the colors, download photoshop and edit them there :)

yea wtv, its mainly about the letters anyways. thx for the comment man

[Skeletor1134]

i was too lazy to try and fit in a "Z" lol
colours pop more in real life tho... shittay camera ftw

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6030/5964989712_c9768e3f90_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5964989712/)
Jok(z)? (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jokz/5964989712/) by JokzOner (http://www.flickr.com/people/jokz/), on Flickr


liking your colors and your style but the K is kinda throwin me off, still sick tho

[Jiska Matos]

280892809028091
just testing my new molotow one4all 127 and 227. any crits?

[TastyMcNasty]

jokz- sick, i dig that style, O is a little weak tho. and the arrows coming off the 3D is unnecessary.

jiska- no beef, but thats pre wack. if youre not gonna do keyboard letters at least simple it up and drop the extensions. but i do like the S on the last one

[ribcage]

yo last one on the bottom is pretty good. The one above it could use some fixing of the proportions like the right leg of R is super thick compared to the thickness of all the other letters. Your extensions also make it so your letters arent defined, except for most of the very bottom one

[Jiska Matos]

jokz- sick, i dig that style, O is a little weak tho. and the arrows coming off the 3D is unnecessary.

jiska- no beef, but thats pre wack. if youre not gonna do keyboard letters at least simple it up and drop the extensions. but i do like the S on the last one

thks for the crits, this was just a testing of the markers, can you give me any crits on the lion i posted here? it´s a project for the room of my young brother.
and thks to rib for the crits 2

[ERAYS]

Yo Jokz thats pretty cool but i think you should work on the k, it kinda looks like a R

nah! - keep writing straight letters until u get the letter structure down solid and then you'll develop style naturally

MN Nice - i like that throw up, pretty clean...keep drawing

any crits for me?? not really feeling what i did with the Y and the A.

28092

Btw, this is like my 5th straight letter

[DaFugg]

I don't know how bad the y and a is, but the fact your A is so far from the R really makes it look bad. try mirroring the top of your E with the bottom a little. looks dumb flat at the bottom like that. The R is was top heavy and the bottom leg looks a bit stumpy. Practice straight letters like the are on your key board. notice an R leg doesn't have to come from the corner of the top and horizontal and back bar. Keep working.

Jiska your characters are always boss, I like your style but work on them letters. I don't feel how squished the bottom of those S's are.

Jok, your k looks like an R other than that the shits sick to me.

[One Evil]

http://i342.photobucket.com/albums/o411/tcoley13/2011-07-21_23-32-18_764.jpg
What y'all think? Go critt^^^
REVNoner!

heres a crit work on ur tags they are totally POO and for ur simple... the R isnt to bad it needs a bit of work on the top left area and the bottom right leg also the E is way to small compared to your RVN 3d is pretty much good and make ur lines straight not all jagged as hell ur R especially!

[Shroomsh]

since theres nothing but shit on this page, ill actually post something aight kids
this is what simple pieces look like when time is taken so Rev Noner this is what to look forward to.

for a hell nice chick, took about 4 hours straight for the record, done with fineliners
28116

[Phat 2]

yall need to get off revn's case.
it's his choice whether he wants to progress or not. no one's concern If he doesn't want to evolve his style.
Lotta bombers out there doing chrome simps like these back to back all day, and they get more ups than any of us here. so as far as I'm concerned, my crits are the following: wear your lines cleaner, adjust those bar alignments on your R, get everything nice and smooth, make a proper shadow instead of the 3D/shadow mutant, and you're golden.
go destroy your city with that shit.

[nah!]

nah! - keep writing straight letters until u get the letter structure down solid and then you'll develop style naturally
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=28092&d=1311380138

umm how about you

[SENS-Oner]

2822028221
sup guys, im new to the forum. check out my work. let me know what you think.

[Messer]

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/PICT0126.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/PICT0127.jpg
thinking about making this into slapssss:
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/PICT0129.jpg

[Phat 2]

SENS-Oner, the VERY most common graff name is Sense... anything like sens sense senser sensor whatever is worn out. hell I even have a Sens in my own crew here dude... you're defo not the first one to be writing sens one. I can also tell you that it's not too late to change it.

[Skope2]

shroomsh - still killing it, nice work.
nah - you've got your bars even and they're going the right way, but your letters are pretty ugly, like the bottom of that E. I'd get rid of the connection from the A to the Y too.


Biro flik! Reads DEBTR - E doesn't fit the style properly, the forcefield is uneven/sketchy as fuck.28229

[nah!]

that ERAYS wasnt my piece

[Skope2]

Oh yea, fuck. Well then the crits are for the guy that you quoted.

[Rezume_or_die]

28231
not entirely done, gotta put the colorful street fighter energy around his hands,
did it with prismas, micron and colored pencil(first time using dems)
but idk when i'll have the markers so for now enjoy, thats akuma btw

[One Evil]

diggin that shit rezume6!!^

[Strange Journeys]

debtr- the E's tight but everything else is wack

[extinct]

...shitty flick for xist http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/0724012314a.jpg
and for a buddy
http://i869.photobucket.com/albums/ab251/xxextinctxx/0724012314.jpg

[OvanOne]

Two of my latest drawings in the blackbook

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/206/b/0/ovan_a3_by_ant_h_raxx-d41miy1.jpg

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/206/5/3/ovan_a2_by_ant_h_raxx-d41mirv.jpg

personally it hink the second one is good, but the first one sucks balls :)

[Flawless Victory]

I have a hard time believing those two pieces came from the same person

[OvanOne]

i made the first one a long time ago, and i decided to put it here, cause its like my only wildstyle, i suck at it.

and the second one, i made recently :)

[bait]

i lold

[Mc Satan]

been away for a bit, got a chance to do one today. the breaks in the inking are from things that will lose detail if i ink em. when i color them they should come out looking well
28242

[SENS-Oner]

28246 new piece i just finished. used my new molotow 127s

[Mc Satan]

here it is colored. most of this was done with a brush so excuse the places where i colored out of the lines. ill fix that later. either way crits 28247

[Shroomsh]

phile, your deffinately improving which is good to see, im glad you have gone simpler than when you first started posting,
crits on the last piece
- make the black outline bolder but still using the felt tip, it will make the letters look stronger and the outline cleaner.
- add a drop shadow to this one, but not a 3D because it would take away the texture of the letters
- if your confident enough add some white highlights to the necessary areas, but if you stuff up yeah whole piece is ruined so yeah if you want to try.
keep posting the good work.

as for sens i think thats an SE piece but not sure, the letters need to be bettr structured so they are more legible and the 3D needs to be cut off at some point other wise it looks retarded, i like the colourscheme, and im jealous of the markers you own, ive been wanting a set for ages now
keep it up

[RedEyes]

Sketch for a canvas for the girl, any crits would be appreciated

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f327/olredeyes/Photo6-5.jpg

[Mc Satan]

mind pointing towards some people writing with the letter "P" want to start bending letters a bit but i'm stumped with that letter. need some ideas to further make my own.

red eyes i like it, although it might just be me but the 3d on the left side of the V looks a bit off to me

[Phat 2]

yeah P's can suck sometimes, ask me :P

[Mc Satan]

phat mind postign some simps with slightly bended letters? i want to see your P's so i can get some ideas im srsly stumped

EDIT:

just a lil sketch, playign around with ideas on how to add a bit of style to it. i feel comfortable with simple straight letters. need to start experimenting now

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[skinaone]

oh helll nah
keep doing simples with out does extencions
make the bars even
dont separete them tomuch
dont put the letters so close neither

[rusto123]

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[ribcage]

^nice double post, terrible sketch... whats it say?

@phat@phile P's are easy

[Shroomsh]

Ahah it depends what style your other letters are if yu 'p's ahre hard, and phile deffinatly stick to simps for a while, that sketch is uggllee, ahah no offence, i find once you start experimenting with letters, bend individual bars, make new bars if you need to, but still respect the shape of the letters, ill exchange with you, if you want so you can see your name in a different style? I write xist

[Phat 2]

well yeah I guess p's might be easy by themselves.. but in my case, the h after it makes it a pain in the ass, especially when that top bulge in the P covers the whole top bar of the h (lower case) and makes it look like a lower case n.. I dunno.. but anyway, I'm lazy to look for them sketches, but maybe ribcage'll show us some examples?

[Shroomsh]

ya not really feeling this one to be honest, i dont know why, dont gotta crit, just to keep flicks up
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rib, and phat, single letter "P" threeway Battle with me?

[Mc Satan]

shroom il exchange with you. will do it later this afternoon. also i want to see that way P battle. and about the sketch im not even remotely happy with it, but i was playign around with different letter structures this was the only one were i kinda liked the P

[The Kidz]

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[Shroomsh]

i like the face, dont like the tag, and it needs to be inked, get on it!!

i dont like the piece, or any of the letters on the page, but the face of the charo is alright, ink the charo

[blameitonthewhiteboy95]

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first post on here, not the best i got, be postin more soon. im down wit constructive crit. i been up for bou 2 and a half years now, lookin for more tips, thnx

[PETER]

I've been interested in the scene since 98. Never took my writing very seriously. I was far more into djing and raving. I just wanted to post a few old pieces and a couple I have done more recently when the mood would strike. feed back is appriciated. I doodle from time to time, but just to entertain myself, but now that I find my self with more free time I want to do it more often. Been doing some work with canvases and paint which is completely new to me. First post on the forum. Cheers guys. 28381 this is the only one on my computer. the link is to my flickr. http://www.flickr.com/photos/antik_1

[Phat 2]

i see a resemblance in your tag to the user ani-33's signature here on the forums... mere coincidence? ;)

[PETER]

first time on the forum. I'll look'em up though. been using antik one (which I am sure many others have too) for over a decade now. I use it as my dj name.

edit. looked him up... not seeing of what you speak. just something about bandwidth....

[Mc Satan]

shroom completely forgot about the trade until today. decided to do something colorful for once

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[Shroomsh]

Thats alright ey phile ill have yours up later

[Mc Satan]

no probs, also i really need markers dammit. can only do so much with these things

EDIT: forgot to ask crits please

[Skeletor1134]

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[.Cuore]

Messing about with the 3d a little. Used a deco for the paint, need some new markers.. anyhow, let me know what you think.

http://i872.photobucket.com/albums/ab283/xMILANISTA4LYFEx/c895a6de.jpg

[ribcage]

^ smoother end to end transiotions like on top of your R and top and bottm of the C and top of O and top of E and bottom left of U. those little pieces of bar sticking out look good to you?

[OvanOne]

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2011/210/3/6/ovan_a4_by_ant_h_raxx-d420myq.jpg

hello everyone, just posting something i made last night, hope you like it :)

[PETER]

not exactly a book... spray paint and acrylic on wood. thoughts?

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[Mc Satan]

skeletor: firs pic i dont like anything in it sorry. second pic i like although i think if the D was a bit bigger it would look better
cuore: i like your 3d but i agree with rib not to convinced about the lil bits sticking out
ovan: like everything but the left leg of the N the bottom of it just looks awkward to me
Peter: i like the color scheme like the A and the N but after that i don't like your letters at all to be honest

[Mc Satan]

finally did a half decent stylized letter one, but i don't want to ink it yet cause im not satisfied with my E. any suggestions for it?
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[PETER]

finally did a half decent stylized letter one, but i don't want to ink it yet cause im not satisfied with my E. any suggestions for it?

if it where me I would make the I and the e taller to match the height of the rest of the letters. you could do this by elongating the dot of the i (which looks kinda like a cheereo at the moment) and the top of the e... maybe something like this? 28557 just a thought. also I noticed the base of the i gets thinner at the bottom. not to be picky, but you're pretty even across the board except there.

[Mc Satan]

not quite sure what you mean by the E? as in turn it sideways? and yeah i realized the I later but that's a quick fix

[PETER]

not quite sure what you mean by the E? as in turn it sideways? and yeah i realized the I later but that's a quick fix
no, the photo is turned sideways and I don't have the ability to flip it sorry. but I think that height and shape might fit with what you are going for (with it up right.) worth a shot anyway. just doodle it a few times to see if it gives you something you like in the style you're going for.

:edit: just was looking at the p. you could use that same basic shape to fashion an e as well.

[PETER]

Mc. it looks like you're using colored pencil for the xist?

[Messer]

http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/DSCF0045.jpg
new slaps, anyone want to get down on a slap exchange?

[Mc Satan]

peter they are watercolor pencils, dont have markers need to order them online.

messer id do it but dont think you want international shipping :P

[Messer]

haha dude pm me :D

[Shroomsh]

Phile, i like your most recent sketch, the h and P are sweet

[Mc Satan]

thanks shroom here it is inked everyone gimme crits please.. personally the 3d on the I seems a bit iffy to me
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[Mc Satan]

ad coloring is done. this is the most intricate coloring ive done so far so crits on it to pls
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[mista_dza]

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this is a style i came up with on the 13 hour ride back from florida, got home, sketched it out a last time, added color and heres the result, comments welcome, especially since im workin on a more complex style than most of my other work which i should post but later when i take flicks

edit: flick aint showin up for me, let me know ill upload to photobucket and repost if needed after resize

[Shroomsh]

i actually like that style, suits the colour scheeme well, cant really read what it says, but thats not the point, with a bit of refinement that could become something original for you and, with some work, ill respect you for coming up with something original

[Mc Satan]

bottom page bump

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[.Cuore]

http://i872.photobucket.com/albums/ab283/xMILANISTA4LYFEx/c895a6de.jpg

yo guys long time no post. let me getcha feedback.

[Mc Satan]

i gave you feedback on that one in previous page. i dont like that lil nubs sticking out

[sadgeh]

same as McSatan, i dont like the nubs.

btw whats a bottom page bump? im not really in the scene and im dutch.

[MN Nice]

same as McSatan, i dont like the nubs.

btw whats a bottom page bump? im not really in the scene and im dutch.

When you post something at the bottom of a previous page and then a new page starts without getting crits or views, so you post it again.

[Mc Satan]

not to be demanding but crits dammit. this was first time i bended letters and first time i do a more intricate fill so i really want crits on everything

[MN Nice]

not to be demanding but crits dammit. this was first time i bended letters and first time i do a more intricate fill so i really want crits on everything

Chill out dude. If no one is critting it, it can't be too bad. You should've had the E taller to keep the symmetry with the P, but otherwise your bar widths are even for the most part and no unnecessary extensions. Keep at it and get those markers already lol

[HëRbN]

satan- keep working on your bars, and your 3d is off on some of the bends. dont put a hole in the dot of the I. And i think it would be better letter arrangement if it were all caps but thats just me. You have the right idea just dont get ahead of your self.

Cuore- your U looks like a L, your O looks like a lower case b a lil bit, and your R and your E are ugly. No hate just callin it as i sees it. lol But your bars are decent, i dont like the nubs either. And i can tell that your trying to get the outside of the piece to be a certain shape. dont do that yet. itll come naturally. if you concentrate on that then your not concentrating on your letters.

[Mc Satan]

i need to get a job first which im working on now, after that i order markers. and sorry about that its just that even though im not very experience i give crits whenever i can. and i not a fan of ppl posting and not giving out any crits

[HëRbN]

Mostly golden oldies

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And dont order markers man, go to hobby lobby or a craft store or walmart and pick up some decos, markers dont matter at your level dont waste money. cop some crayolas lol

[Mc Satan]

live in aruba no craft stores or similar here. so if im gettign markers i want markers that will let me be able to do at teh very least what these watercolor pencils allow me to do. therefore go out for good ones right away. also i love that panda skull thing. and finally im seeing PH combo main reason why i didn't do them all capital letters was because i had no idea wtf to do with the h

[KOKADEVA]

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[mista_dza]

straight letters! first off. for the throw up lose the whole pointy shit on the bottom make em all the same size fix the N so theres actually a middle bar. for the piece alot of work, needs to be done , CANE should look like that your drop shadow is off, lose all extensions , make your E actually legible, and try again, oh and the C on the handstyle looks like a D. but i learned that if you practice your straight letters the better you get the cleaner your style gets, the cleaner your fills get , practice makes perfect keep it up,

[Fluffy Bunnies]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/photo-1.jpg

kinda messy cuz i am kinda drunk, and havent sketched anything in a long ass time. pretty good for almost a year of not sketching lol
and SIMPLES SIMPLES SIMPLES.
simples turn me on, so i stick to that

[HëRbN]

yeah you needa go bare bones simple and for the time being give up on the arrows, shadows, extensions and any other thrills. New to graff thread

[.Cuore]

thanks guys.

[HëRbN]

fluffy - always gotta love a drunk quicky

[Fluffy Bunnies]

fluffy - always gotta love a drunk quicky

thats what i am talkin about

i am feelin pretty good so who wants to exchange? i got about an hour before i leave to dinner
i write Kils/Kilsr whatever one i guess doesnt matter

[mista_dza]

kilsr love that simple, ill do an exchange ill start it now and finish when i get off work, i write Del/ Delone

[Fluffy Bunnies]

k i'll start it now

[Fluffy Bunnies]

got lazy and decided to just write delo

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/photo-2.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/photo2.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/3-10.jpg

[Mc Satan]

guys just some suggestions, this is an idea i sketched real quick last night for the piece battle thread. this is jut to kinda show the concept. is it worth putting the effort into it and make a good version? or is concept not working? also i was thinking of having the E and A on the side of the mattres (im sure i misspelled it) instead of extending all the way down. give me your worst so i can see whether i do it or not

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[HëRbN]

ahhhhhhhiiiiiiiii dunno bout that. i think your better off just puttin some work into a simple using some steezy bars. and caps man, E and A are both more interesting of letters in caps.

[Mc Satan]

so ditch the monster under your bed concept and just do regular word? I thought well executed this could be good, but again not sure which is why i posted this lil sketch here.

[Shroomsh]

Phile i already critted the uncoloured one, and im colourblind so i dont crit the colours of the piece, all i could say is, getr rid of the hole in the top of your i and yeah, i got a piece voming along quite nicely at the moment

[SLVRONE]

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[TastyMcNasty]

^ http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?2185-New-To-Graffiti-Start-Here!
merry birfmas... go to that thread, and follow what they say, if you wanna get good you cant just jump into "wildstyles"...

[Mc Satan]

Mcnasty mind giving me a second opinion on the concept i had going? just want to see if everyone thinks the concept wouldn't work

[Shroomsh]

Ahah just cos its his fist post dont mean his new to graff, i quite like the top one, deffinately has letter structure, but still semi-wild, props

i take that back, the pieces looked way better in low res on my cheap ass phone, sorry

[TastyMcNasty]

mc satan, iif youre talking about the fear piece, then i suggest ditching the characs, and making all letters either capital or all lowercase, not both. and im still not sure what that person in the background is supposed to be..

and shroomsh, theres a bit of structure in that first flick from slvrone, but the extensions and add ons are wack! (no beef). and i sent him that link so he could learn how to do 3D (even tho the first flicks 3D is on point), and progressively add extensions, connections (etc.).

[Mc Satan]

basically concept is a lil kid wrapped up in blankets scared of the monster under the bed. the letters i will most likely change but i was wondering if the concept could work. make bed out of the letters then add the characters.i knwo this was done sloppy. but as i stated this was just a sketch to try and work out the concept on paper to see if it should be done or not

[TastyMcNasty]

oooohhhh i see it now >.> k, make all the letters the same height, and have the kid hiding in his blankets on the top of the letters, and have the monster underneath the letters... it looks awesome in my head hahhahaha

[SLVRONE]

yea, thanks for the help guys ive been doing graff for probably about half a year now and was on youtube and got nice feedback but people there mostly don't really know alot so I decided I'd try here :D

[Mc Satan]

looked awesome in my head too thats why i drew this lil sketch ill just do do simple straight letters then and do the fill as if where a bed so the ends wood-ish brown and the center some other color to look like the mattress wht you think? or just leave the whole bed idea out of it and make simple letters with whatever fill ?

[TastyMcNasty]

dont worry about the wooden fill, just do all the letters the same height so it creates like a bed top, have the kid up there and the monster underneath. just do like a single colour fill

[Mc Satan]

allrite thanks, just gonna chill for a bit and start working on it

[mista_dza]

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lol wack handy on top, but some straight letter for Kilsr. Anyone else wanna do an exchange, between work and my new girl, all im doin now is rackin stuff for my homemade ink which i got a shit load of, so yeah im down for exchanges, pm me or hit me up on here. i write Del/ Delone



edit: only got one crit last page, moar opinions?
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[thatguy1234]

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my first simp ever.....crits would be nice

[.Cuore]

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lol wack handy on top, but some straight letter for Kilsr. Anyone else wanna do an exchange, between work and my new girl, all im doin now is rackin stuff for my homemade ink which i got a shit load of, so yeah im down for exchanges, pm me or hit me up on here. i write Del/ Delone



edit: only got one crit last page, moar opinions?
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Good simp, but I would change the nub on the left side of the K, and make it just flat. That's my 2 cents. Oh, and the handy above it .. no me gusta

[dankbudz]

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/securedownload-1.jpg
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[ribcage]

thicken up your outline lines broheem. E is aight but has more style(because of the amount of bending) than the rest of the letters. The right leg of the R is strange. The middle part of F and E look to small on this 1. Lastly if your going to start adding extensions you need to really pronounce them visually, cause right now your extensions are to small it makes look bad, like your A would look better if the top was flat instead of one bar ending above the other

[Hulk]

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[Mc Satan]

hulk ill be honest i cant make out the letters at all color and ink it though i wanna see it finished.

Mcnasty thanks for the help here is finished product

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[Hulk]

Mc- it was going to say "ocean" and have the tide go over it. but i just kindaa stopped. soo its at the OCE but alright ill probibly have it finished tonight

[Mc Satan]

on that case your letters and wave look more flame like to me try emulating the old school japanese way of drawing waves its more graff friendly

[Rasm]

McSatan, you seem to be spending too much time on your characters for your letters to improve.

[Mc Satan]

rasm check 2 pages ago, for this concept simple straight letters worked better which is why i used them


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just a quick sketch thought i'd go for something pointier crits and suggestions pls not continuing with it till i get some different points of view on it
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[PETER]

MC... It turned out pretty good. I still don't like the cheereo dot for the I, but that's personal preferance. E turned ot fairly well too. Work on your rounded 3d. The bottom portion of the 3d bit on the dot of the I is a bit flat. Try drawing cups, coke cans, lighters, markers, anything with a curve to it to practice. As for the new on thing seem to be going well. I would make the bottom portion of the l run parallel (sp?) to the back of the E and go from there.

[nah!]

i don't write mos i'm just playing with the letters

ignore the fill on this one i was playing around with fineliners
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2367.JPG

i did this late at night when i couldn't sleep so its messy
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2368.JPG


couple of throws
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2371.JPG
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2372.JPG

this ones way too messy
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2363.JPG

[Mc Satan]

anyone care to battle me in the toy forum round robin? preferably someone that would not blow me away :P wanna do it for the practice

[MN Nice]

@Nah, I'm not really feeling how those M's are looking. Your throw technique could use some work too, try working with each letter individually to get a nice and quick flow to it. I think you should do a round robin with satan, it'd be a good match between you two.

[TastyMcNasty]

anyone care to battle me in the toy forum round robin? preferably someone that would not blow me away :P wanna do it for the practice

i got you, no one else will battle me hahaha. and i need the practice too, been forever since i sketched

[Mc Satan]

i got you, no one else will battle me hahaha. and i need the practice too, been forever since i sketched
pick a word my one demand is full colors. also crit finished fear and possible new piece sketch pls

[nah!]

@Nah, I'm not really feeling how those M's are looking. Your throw technique could use some work too, try working with each letter individually to get a nice and quick flow to it. I think you should do a round robin with satan, it'd be a good match between you two.


i got you, no one else will battle me hahaha. and i need the practice too, been forever since i sketched


fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

[TastyMcNasty]

mc satan, how about skrim or skyrim? and as far as that fear piece, it turned out decent, your straights and 3D are on point. my only problem is that both the fill and the characs are a bit sloppy

nah, you wanna battle too?

[nah!]

yes?

[TastyMcNasty]

aight choose the word

[Mc Satan]

lets do a 3 way ( im kinky like that lol) and let nah choose word again same demands though full color

[nah!]

hmmm ok ill choose crome as the word

[Rasm]

mc satan, how about skrim or skyrim? and as far as that fear piece, it turned out decent, your straights and 3D are on point. my only problem is that both the fill and the characs are a bit sloppy

nah, you wanna battle too?I wouldn't say that his straights or 3D are "on point"... The 3D is alright but it's messed up in a few places. For example, the 3D on the top part of the F is a lot thicker than the 3D in the middle of the R. I'm not saying it's bad, but don't get it in your head that it's perfect either. And I might throw down a chrome sketch... don't have the time or resources to make it full color though.

[nah!]

nono its crome

[Mc Satan]

allrite so 3 way colored crome

[Shit Outta Luck]

Let it be a 4 way?

I'm down for this haha

[Rasm]

Well shit, my H is fresh. Fuck it.

[nah!]

it can have a h if you want

[Mc Satan]

ok wait is this going to be 4 way or 5 way?

[kedekone]

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[ribcage]

^I dig the vagina D on the first 1

[Mc Satan]

kedek not to be an ass but i really dont like your letter structure in the first one, the throwie is nice though


everyone else, lets set the rules for this battle orgy, 4 way or 5 way if rasm decides to join. word is crome full color preferably 3 days from now. ill be working on mine tonight

now give me crits on this sketch i did last night since im not sure whether to continue it or not:
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[kedekone]

lol thats exactly wat i was goin for

[TastyMcNasty]

^I dig the vagina D on the first 1

buuuump hahahahahahah

[ribcage]

I bet it was.... its a half decent vagina, terrible D.... vagina C-; D....F-

sharpie freestyle... sucks zee cock, just a rough draft for my battle with strange, only postin it cause its been a super long time since ive drawn anything
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0801111641.jpg

[Phat 2]

mcsatan, nah, rasm and whoever's working on this crome battle for the the round robin, you guys can't do a 3 way battle. the participants have to be 1 on 1
find a 4th person and form 2 separate battles

[Shit Outta Luck]

We have 4 people haha

[Mc Satan]

i think this ended up becomign something else than round robin ill still battle mcnasty with skyrim
SOL ,mcnasty nah lets post crome in battle thread im about done with penciling so i want this battle to continue

[Shit Outta Luck]

haha I finished penciling like an hour ago. But yeah dude sounds good.

[thatguy1234]

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bump for crits

[Mc Satan]

thatguy there is something about it that irks me but i really can not put a finger on it

SOL, nah, MCnasty where do we post this ? i just finished mine

EDIT: fuck it ill post it here in the meantime
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[Shroomsh]

is their a fifth already? ill make 6?

[Mc Satan]

is their a fifth already? ill make 6?
holy crap! more? hahah this lil battle ended up pretty damn big lol

[TastyMcNasty]

haha fuck! and post it in the beef battle thread, i'll try an have it up tomorrow

[ribcage]

4 a.m./ been up fo the big twenty-fo+ im on the d type shit. Yalls battle is gay, crome is a stupid word. peace. queers.

[Mc Satan]

alright i posted it in beef battle posting it here cause i want crits please

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[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^ keep going Mc its getting better! :)

[PETER]

unfinished... 1st character in months... the right hand is backwards...
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6124/5956578123_4d94b5107c.jpg[/url]
I am diggin' this a lot. I like that hand style. I like the vibe of the letters. The I and R seem to be a bit skinny next to the E and Z, but that's nit picking. I'd like to see some thing with some color.
edited due to spelling error....

[nah!]

4 a.m./ been up fo the big twenty-fo+ im on the d type shit. Yalls battle is gay, crome is a stupid word. peace. queers.

your a stupid word!

shutup crome's* an old writer from my city
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I'm gonna need a bit to get the colour for the battle.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2383.JPG

[Hulk]

tryin some new styles here and there. just some shit i did in a few minutes before work. crits (no were close to done)
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[Mc Satan]

that smoke/ flame thingy on the M needs work but otherwise i like it. the T seems like it doesn't quite fit in though

[Hulk]

that smoke/ flame thingy on the M needs work but otherwise i like it. the T seems like it doesn't quite fit in though

thanks man. but yeahh i know. if i wasnt goin to work in a few i would have taken more time. but im just tryin to get a better flow and style to my shit. thanks for the critt

[Mc Satan]

battle against Mcnasty, word is pretty obvious (not quite done yet adding a bit more)
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[Tempo718]

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[ribcage]

your R is almost a better A than your A

[Mc Satan]

EDIT: inked will be coloring in about an hour or so please crit it
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[Shit Outta Luck]

Well McSatan, I see where you got yo concept, and that games gonna be fucking amazing.

But please just keep your letters simpler, don't try and bend the bars yet, and don't try to give the whole piece a flow like that. At least not yet. I especially don't like the S, because it's pretty sloppy and wtf did you do with the top end of it haha. If you consider that an extension don't do that yet either. SIMPLER DAWG. That's all I'm saying, no beef.

[Mc Satan]

actually mcnasty picked the word and i thought id add a lil sackboy vikign dude when i was done. to be honest i wast really thinking per say i jsut started drawing and it came otu liek that, i kinda liked it untill i did the 3d

[Shit Outta Luck]

If it makes you feel better I like vikings. Lol his helmets funny and cool.

But yeah I get whatchu sayin, just do what works for you. And improve on it hah

[Mc Satan]

meh vikign dude will be saved i liek him word will be redone

[Shit Outta Luck]

Word haha. And I'm sure you'll like it more the second time

[Mc Satan]

im still coloring vikign dude first though a shame not to color the lil dude

[Shit Outta Luck]

haha thats whats up. Do him justice dawg

[Mc Satan]

viking dude got colored
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[ribcage]

.......what compulses you to post every little thing you do? It aint no thang at the moment since no one else is posting, but in the future please dont post every little thing you do to a sketch unless its in one post, just post the beginning image and the finished project, cause its starting to get annoying

ima crit your sketch tho.your barwidths are really inconsistent, your K lacks structure same with your Y and R. The I is the only lower case letter... kinda weird. Only thing I like about the sketch is the vantage idea, if you would have put the character above the Y it woulda made it better...