Blackbooks

[Mc Satan]

actually this one i wanted crits before i moved on but no one was around so yeah, either way ill do the word tomorrow again probably put 2 smaller dudes fighting somehow into it

[Ader]

Crit the shit outa this 28993

[MN Nice]

Connect the top of the O. ^

[Ader]

yeah i noticed that right as i put the line there haha, thanks any other suggestions?

[nah!]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2383.JPG

[Afroman]

here's somthing new...
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[Shit Outta Luck]

Ader try and keep your bar widths the same. Namely the bottom of the R. The legs ya know. Nah try and grt your S as the same size as your M and O. And Afro that second thing looks fresh. Nice style only thing i don't like is the top of the R. I feel like that bar shouldn't bend inward. Maybe outward instead haha

[Afroman]

haha yeha man your wright newer seen that before tnx :D

[Shit Outta Luck]

Haha no problem and that's the only thing that stuck out ta me. You should color that

[Leopold Stotch]

Props to Sear for being an actual writer, instead of a sketchbook junkie.

decided to go back to my old word, F's, L's, and T's are starting to piss me off29020
Hate the C on this one, but either way, Crits please

[SLVRONE]

critizism please, says emulous it was a logo for someone29021

[Mc Satan]

3d in U to L is a bit off bars are not consistent in width, and this might just be mi but im not a fan of the skull with down syndrome

[Skeletor1134]

afro i think yours is pretty sick and unique. and slvr your skull drawing is alright but the letters need more work.

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latest sketch

[Shit Outta Luck]

Skeletor that fill and background is sick! But your letters are a little whack. I don't like the k because it doesn't really look like a k. Fix the top legs. And the m, I don't really like the flat part of it. And try n keep your bar sizes the same

[Skeletor1134]

thanks man, yeah my letters are pretty whack but i was trying to keep it simple while still being a little unique. i tried to keep the letters basic and box like. but thanks for the critique.

[Beast_One]

New here, i write beast and since 12oz is down temporarily thought i'd try this
http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff404/Sce161/2011-08-02230301.jpg
Fucked up my B on this one
http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff404/Sce161/2011-08-02230140.jpg

Old dies sketch
http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff404/Sce161/IMAG0275.jpg

[TastyMcNasty]

^i have a friend who used to rock that name, then he got busted haha.
anyway, crits; dont do that overlapping bars thing, looks wack. your bar width is a bit weird too, and finally leave extensions alone for a while till your structure gets a bit better.

EDIT: your S is hurting big time too

[Shit Outta Luck]

Beast, try and keep your bar width the same. I noticed that mostly on your Bs. Go even simpler. Like on your second one that S isn't the best, it looks like an underline and a P. I don't like the E because of the extension going in, lose that. Just my advice.

[Mc Satan]

Mcnasty,nah, shroom, you guys ready with crome? im itching to see the results

[Shit Outta Luck]

one a yalls gonna win. Thats all I'm sayin haha

[Fluffy Bunnies]

i feel like doing a sketch soon

[Mc Satan]

ok redid skyrim crit me please
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[mista_dza]

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im gettin tired of capital Ls so i made it lowercase, for simplicity, not a big fan of the E needs some work but i like my D so far, any crits would be nice, oh and i realized the lines in all the letters with the little square is lame, but in the L it makes it look like a I sorta.

[Shit Outta Luck]

McSatan I like that one alot more! It looks alot cleaner my dude. I wouldn't have like, made the K and S as crooked though. And Del my dude haha that D is nice as hell. I feel like the E should've had its middle bar straighter and I like the L just cuz it's so simple. But I agree witchu sayin that the line and square makes it look like an I haha

[Mc Satan]

i think it would have looked better without the drippy bits to be honest. i about the letter themselves i agree with you i do not like the E at all it just looks odd, im drawing a complete blank on how to do it otherwise though, sorry.

SOL only thing is i drew it to damn big cant fit in a viking dude

[mista_dza]

im gonna work on that E, lol the drippy thing was for the laughs i wanted to see what itd look like, more or less.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

kilsr
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/posikils.jpg

trying new shit out. rough sketch btw and i kinda went bigger at the end. didnt notice til after

i'll try anything once. cept gay shit.

[HëRbN]

mcsatan ur R is to small

[TastyMcNasty]

blurry pics >.>
for the crome battle
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unfinished for the skyrim battle.
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[MakeItTakeIt]

That S makes no sense to me...

Fluff those letters are hurtin right now but they got potential, finish it.

Quick "NORTH" outline, crits would be appreciated. I wish I'd done more with the H..
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[Ader]

bump for crits. only got one last page29070 Name: Aobi :(i realize the "o" isnt connected at the top)i know it isnt very good im just getting back into graff. took a year or so break

[SLVRONE]

Ader-you 3d isnt very consistent and could use work, and it looked to me like the fill was supposed to be a cityscape, which would be cool if done correctly and i don't really like the backwards heart on the I. Imo

[Shit Outta Luck]

McSatan your R is a Lil' to small lol. But you can fit the Viking guys head and maybe an arm above the y and the r

[Mc Satan]

ok fixed the R made it bigger, also penciled in a horned helm,should i keep it or not?
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[Shit Outta Luck]

Nah just like...have the ragdoll coming out of the piece.

But if you fail at that keep the helmet lol

[Mc Satan]

tried the rag doll it wasn't looking good but i still wanted to add something to it, therefore the helmet

[Shit Outta Luck]

Well in that case good luck! And try and draw your lines faster and smoother

[TastyMcNasty]

mcsatan- looks good, R seems a little squished tho
del- those drips are weird, and that E seems awkward
kilsr- i like that style, throw some 3D on it and it'll be bangin
north- too many extensions, and the connections seem a little forced. and dont do the overlapping bar thing.
ader- you need to go simpler, the extensions and connections dont look good, and that fill and background are real sloppy


better flick for crome battle, i know the arrow coming off the E is wack, thought id give it a try tho
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[Mc Satan]

dammit nah! sell a kidney for them or something

[ribcage]

@tasty on R horizntal bar that starts the right leg of R top line of it should not be full where it meets the top right part of R ya dig? Leave that part open and it will start making your R's look better

[Mc Satan]

ok managed to get viking dude to look good this time, crits while i go eat dinner please. also possible color scheme's would be nice
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[Shit Outta Luck]

Lol sweet and I aint telling you color schemes, get that yaself! But sometimes try and incorporate a character into your letters, have him going through them or touching them or something haha.
And TastyMcNasty, like ribcage said lose that top lil piece of your R, and lol at the google chrome logo in there.

[Mc Satan]

Lol sweet and I aint telling you color schemes, get that yaself! But sometimes try and incorporate a character into your letters, have him going through them or touching them or something haha.
And TastyMcNasty, like ribcage said lose that top lil piece of your R, and lol at the google chrome logo in there.

that right there somehow sounded pervy to me

[Shit Outta Luck]

lol I didn't write it like that... but hey whatever works

[ribcage]

^wheres your sketches at dude?


....colored the dale fs
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0804111438.jpg

[TastyMcNasty]

rib- i like the letters and the fill, but the background seems a little sloppy to me, especially the drips

[ribcage]

I feel it, just a rough draft freestyle for the tfrrt... coloring the final draft, dont know if I like it better than the simple tho. I have like 40 somethin pages full colored in the book im workin in(not all by me) and its hella hard to think of new backgrounds that I havent done yet, so for this I just went quick and easy, nothin special

[Mc Satan]

ok i colored this just wondering whether i should do a color outline or not
EDIT: btw hated your word mcnasty :P
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[Tempo718]

rib- i think the background is just a lil accent 2 that peice but the peice in it self is nice to see. reguardless it came out nice
satan- feelin it way more after you threw some color into the peice but the I seems a lil lonley back there like it did'nt step up to the roll call on tha peice. i ono but good improvment anyhow.
tasty - ono wa happen to the 3d (backdrop) whatever u did it dont look right for some reason, try it again wit a diff 3d effect an lets see it after.

[Shit Outta Luck]

I'm on vacation with my aunt and my moms and my lil cousin. Not much time
To sketch. But if you want me to post everything I've ever painted and drawn I will later haha. And ribcage that's clean. I really like the colors of the letters, I dunno why lol. Satan i like the 3d and ragdoll fill, but wtf is with that blue and brownish fill for the letters. Looks weird to me haha

[ribcage]

you aint gotta do all that, you just givin mcsatan a lot of advice, and if your good it may motivate him to produce better quality work.

[Mc Satan]

did an outline color overall saving that one for when mcnasty has his piece ready, also ive been wanting to do something with blue and brown for awhile now dont really know why

@tempo the I looks like that because imade the R bigger 2 times before i was done, by then i had redone this piece almost completely about 4 other times so i didnt want to erase half the word again. therefore the I is being bullied into the back

[Shit Outta Luck]

Alright ribcage thanks for the advice. I feel what your coming from so tomorrow I'll post some stuff. And Satan I hope that outline is nice haha good luck in your battle

[Shit Outta Luck]

Alright double posting mofuckas. And uhhh bump? Here's everything I got, not many BB pieces. At all. Only two lol
http://imageshack.us/g/718/5983596252cb3ed13c16.jpg/

[Skeletor1134]

sol your throwies are sick.
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unfinished sketch. letters suck

[MakeItTakeIt]

I'm lazy...
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That bottom arrow is all kinds of ugly hahaha

[nah!]

@sol thake those extensions of you pieces and keep your bar widths the same and your stuff will look alright

[Shit Outta Luck]

Thanks skeletor haha. And yeah nah I been having that problem alot. I met the only other real writer in my area and he told me to fix that too. Lol if I get time to sketch tonight I'll try and do something decent.

[Phat 2]

takeitmakeit, back to the drawing board dude... not even close to being ready for all those extensions. sorry.

[MN Nice]

My round robin entry. Feel free to crit. I flipped the A to eliminate negative space on the upper part of the letters between the L and the S, even with an extension on the top of the A is still looked too open for me.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00204-20110805-1809.jpg?t=1312585977

[Tempo718]

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flashback

[Mc Satan]

allright i need me a tag master with not much to do tonight. iwanna concentrate tonight on tags trying to get something that works

[MN Nice]

That looks good to you? Honestly? You have no structure what so ever.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

everyone in this thread needs more arrows.

[The Kidz]

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crits?

[MN Nice]

everyone in this thread needs more arrows.

Why is that the theme of every one of your posts lately? Constant hate when your shit is weak too. Check yourself.

@Kidz - The top and bottom piece are your best because the letters have actual structure to them, although they need some work too. The char's are pretty dry too. Keep at it though.

[sema]

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old battle sketch 29281....hopen im aloud in this page ha

[Tempo718]

29282 did this after I got home with some pens i had in my socks

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Why is that the theme of every one of your posts lately? Constant hate when your shit is weak too. Check yourself.

@Kidz - The top and bottom piece are your best because the letters have actual structure to them, although they need some work too. The char's are pretty dry too. Keep at it though.

arrows are the shit, you hatin on them? i aint spreadin no hate. and i know my shit is weak... thats why i post in this forum


kids - looks to blobby and need to stick to the basics. gettin too ahead of urself man.
tempo - didnt quite nail it but it has potential. right now i feel you are in that awkward teenager phase but like in style, if that makes any sense. because that's how i feel about myself. when you establish your own thing, and do what you do and be good at it, i think you'll know

btw bump, need more feedback. thanksies
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/photo-1.jpg

[Mc Satan]

th kidz nothing against you, this might just be me, but your characters give me an irrational anger. i reeealllyyyy dont like em

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

I fucking love arrows :)
i also think fluffy bunnies and shit outta luck are fucking brilliant usernames :)
kilsr- i like it nice and easy i think the r is a bit fat tho
Tempo- i like the last one you did i think your letters look better if they are a bit fatter to be honest, like your ends on the letter t in one of the first ones on this page...where they sort of thin down to a point i don't think it looks so good....leave them a bit fatter i think it will look better yo :)
The kidz- same sort of thing on the middle too fatten them letters up a bit and the dos one's better and i like the afro dude on the bottom one, just need a little more time taken to neaten the letters up and outlines i reckon....bits and pieces like that but the dos ones are defo better than the middle too....to much overlapping and stuff for me personally :)
can i get any opinions on this one please, the overlap on the e pisses me off grr!! :
http://img38.picoodle.com/i586/potts/16fp_a87_u905z.jpg (http://i.picoodle.com/61cihkcy)

[aaesoo]

kidz-that first piece is ok but the ones that say power look like shit. get rid of the extensions/connections and do keyboard letters.
kilsr-thats pretty dope the only thing i can even think of for crits is the the little i and l look kinda weird next to each other. i like it tho.
bmore-its good the only thing i can say is the top and bottom legs of the B and R should be one continuous bar, not two different ones like you have them now.
tempo-is your friends name oahi?

[Phat 2]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/228863_260846967275553_100000507545549_1008014_419 983_n.jpg

[mista_dza]

bmore, i assuming maryland? shoot me a pm i live right by there, but interesting style not a huge fan of it but it does look nice with that color
phat2 , nice straight letter, i love it in straights when the A is upside down lol

[Shit Outta Luck]

Bmore, if your from maryland shoot me a PM too. lol. I'm from around there too. And nice colors but as aeso said, the B should be one continous bar, not two separate ones. And cker, thanks for the compliment! I love my name haha

[sema]

everyone on this page look at fluffy simple clean Strait get some letters down first
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[Shit Outta Luck]

I could say the same for you. I especially don't like the extension on the bottom leg of the R. But nice fill

[The Kidz]

thanks for the crits. the one's that say power are pretty old and the pos one's are newer.
ars; i'm lovin the color scheme
phat; i'm really likin the splatters

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

Thanks for the crits gang, all noted for the next bit of sketching :)
phat i love that its tight....whats with everyone doing the upsode down letter a's right now though?

[Phat 2]

yeah i noticed someone else did it too recently. can't remember if it was MN nice, or tempo or erm... can't remember his name, the dude with the red deadmau5 avatar.
I've done it a couple times now, I like it, got the original idea from mark ecko's getting up a couple years ago, the A's structure is basic, but I'd like to admit I reference JA with it... I'm also contemplating going all ghost ris soon and doing the whole upside down pieces and backwards and sideways and all that shit... ghost's one of my favorite bombers man

[MN Nice]

My round robin entry. Feel free to crit. I flipped the A to eliminate negative space on the upper part of the letters between the L and the S, even with an extension on the top of the A is still looked too open for me.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00204-20110805-1809.jpg?t=1312585977

Yeah it was me lol bump for crits

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

That was it^^^ I quite like that, sorry mean to crit this one actually...i like the background really sets the letters off but i think a little more use of lighter and darker shading on the blue would have made those letters pop out like mad! and i think the 3d is a little tiny bit off but i think thats with attention to detail like on the e you got one fatter bit of 3d and then the middle bar of the e has a thinner bit of 3d........but i'm just being picky i think :)
do like the letters think the s needs to have more level gaps in it though :)
again just being a pickey ass mo-fo lol :)

[ribcage]

ace-k why u steal my bg? lol jk...

[Mc Satan]

i know this is not 100% the right place but, tag thread is moving to slow, and for some reason they do not know what crit is. so mind giving me some opinions on these 4?
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[MN Nice]

Thanks for the crits bandit

Get that isht out of here Satan. Theres no need to post every single tag you try. Keep writing, try to find one that YOU like. One that YOU'RE satisfied with, not us.

[Mc Satan]

@MN nice to be honest any crits would be nit picking that piece is simple solid and pretty damn nice

[sema]

everyone on this page look at fluffy simple clean Strait get some letters down first
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bottom page bump

[lawlcat]

and for some reason they do not know what crit is.

I just fucking told you in the tag thread to keep them simple and write it over and over again to develop style... Those are the EXACT same tag four times and you're just slowly devolving the shitty P into a shitty F, so you're first move would be stop that. Keep it simple and it will come.

Consider that a crit?

[EWL24]

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these r a couple weeks old, but iv been out of town so i haven't gotten around to finishing them yet. Crits please

Mc Satan - i agree with lawlcat those are all the exact same tag, try something different

[MN Nice]

Clean work Ewl. Only thing bugging me about the top one is the W closing inwards on the top. Not too good looking. The second piece is meh. Connecting all the letters ruins it for me and the L is practically an i since its connected with the cross bar of the A. Pretty cool char though. Give your pieces some color too.

[Tempo718]

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to keep it simple yall jus be persistant listen to all a the heads in the forum if ur seeking guidance they do have good advice. not for nothin. thas my 2 cents 40 day. peace G an E's

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

yeah thats better tempo...nice and fat them letters..feed them some pies lol
Satan- take a whole wedge of paper and a pen and tag away little buddy :) go crazy....you'll get one you like and also you'll be able to do it in like 2 seconds flat :)
also in my picture below i tried a phile tag for you lol forgot bout that did it last night while i was looking at your 4 attempts lol .....don't know why i just felt the need :)
ewal- not crazy bout the e crossing over the w in the second one but other than that is not so bad...i like the little guy holding on the top of the a, if your 3d was a bit more precise i think the little guy holding the a would make them letters 'pop' :)

think i'm guna have to fatten up the leg on the R here and hope colour makes it look better lol...anything else you guys can spot??:
http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/6445/1005424.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/809/1005424.jpg/)

[dankbudz]

Ewal- top ones got good structure, cause its simple as fuck. but on the bottom one you gotta lose the connections and keep a baseline n all that jazz. You just tried to bend the bars too much in weird places.
Tempo- take your own advice, you do some weird shit to your letters
Bmore- keep your bars coonsistent and clean it up, it looks mad sloppy and quick. Take your time on your work

[Mc Satan]

arse after 5 pages full , i ended up really like that P in my 4 attempts don't really knwo why. which is why i made them bigger and modified the P a lil on each one, thnks for the tag btw. also you need to fatten up that leg on the R it look a bit out of place like that

[CliffJackson]

@Satan I like 4 too. I think everything flows nice. I want to see the tag with a fatter marker, i think that might look a little better and help fill in them empty spaces!!!!. Crits on my sketch

[mista_dza]

get rid of taht arrow goin through the piece and damn you relax on that pencil you might break it next time before your finished. lol is it just me? or do you guys like using like 2b pencils to do a sketch?

[MN Nice]

get rid of taht arrow goin through the piece and damn you relax on that pencil you might break it next time before your finished. lol is it just me? or do you guys like using like 2b pencils to do a sketch?

That'll happen with crappy notebook paper and any #2 pencil.


Too many posts from me lately lol But thats clean as fuck, dank. VVV Good work. Keep the stone and moss theme in the 3d.

[dankbudz]

^lol, not rearry

still gotta put some 3d on this, but can i get me some crits?
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/brains.jpg

[nah!]

its nice except the E and R are a little low

[ribcage]

slanted bar of R still bugs me, the width gets wider from left to right.talkpic
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0806112255.jpg

[ATAK!:3]

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quick ten minute sketch before i go surf, crits?

[Leopold Stotch]

@Dankbudz: slap some 3d on that, my suggestion is go inward on your letters so it kills the negative space
@Ribcage: looks cool but I think you should add some curve into those letters, especially on the R.
@ATAK: does that say Desa?

sketch for talk. 29367

[ribcage]

extension on the S is wack, extension on the top left of C is super wack, extension on the K is like the one on the s

...too late. redoin this one now tho
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0807111505.jpg

[Tempo718]

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hey yall wadup can I get some advice here?
I kno I dont do many crits, reason is I am not too good at pointing the weak points out yet.
Maybe after I begin to understand the mechanics of how things go I could be more helpfull. Peace

[dankbudz]

dont puts so many edges n shit, you gotta go back to basics and write it out like BRI or BAI, none of that other lame stuff


3d got a bit messed up
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/YO-1.jpg

[Skeletor1134]

your character is badassz

[aaesoo]

pen freestyle
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[TastyMcNasty]

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/228863_260846967275553_100000507545549_1008014_419 983_n.jpg

sick.

[Beastizm]

Damn Reach im really feeling that style bro, would you like to exchange

[Tempo718]

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watchu think...

[Mc Satan]

^ right bottom bar of the R should have been consistently fat, not the weird thin to fat back to thin look you gave it. your E looks a bit awkward to me but i honestly can not pinpoint why. other than that i like your piece and the fill, allthough the swirly bit on the V needs a better connection to the rest of the green , that should be a very easy fix though.

[sadgeh]

Tempo. I like the fill. The middle bar of the E should have been higher more in the exactly middle, now it looks weird.

[sadgeh]

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/8472/sjonge.jpg

[Rasm]

@Seder, good work man, you've come a long way since you started. Keep it up.

@Aeso, that's pretty fresh for a quick freestyle man!

@Tempo, The E looks awkward because the middle bar is too low, and it's too curvy in the wrong places. Your bar widths are all over the place, and your letters are spaced out too much and at inconsistent intervals. Also, your 3D is off, most noticeably on the E.

@sadgeh, looks like that took you about 10 minutes. I'd like to see a sketch that you took your time one. The letters are very square, throw some curves in there, especially in the E and the R. Also keep your bar widths consistent as well as the height and width of your letters.

[sernobil]

@butters...really like the SCANK in general, has a nice flow to it and I just really like b&w. Though I have to agree with ribcage that the extension on the s is a bit to much. The extension going from the bottom C to the bottom s might have looked better if you would have let it come out of the C(sorry it's hard to explain what I mean in english). Really like the shape of that K, original(atleast to me it is). Your handstyle really needs some work though :)

@Aeso...nice pennage...nice handstyles asfar as I can see, I don't think I would have put that little extension thingy on left side of the A though.

@Rave...try and make your letters overlap...it will become more solid as a whole.

@Sadgeh Maak je letters wat breder, maakt het hele inkleuren ook wat makkelijker. Er zitten hier en daar wel wat leuke vormen tussen maar volgens mij loop je te ver op jezelf vooruit. Het is al moeilijk genoeg om simpele letters zonder extension er goed uit te laten zien. Ik hoop dat je hier iets aan hebt, zo niet...nou dan niet :) ps. staat er nou "kanker of hoer"?

peace

[zemune]

http://imageshack.us/f/18/dsci0004l.jpg/
http://imageshack.us/f/841/dsci0014j.jpg/

tell me your opinions.

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^^My opinion is upload the image here so i don't have to go there to look at it lol :)
erm personally quite like the shape of you letters myself reminds me a shyne but like at the beginning needs alot of work to pull of that style though,but hell why not try someones got to :)
Tempo-yeeesssssss!!! those fat letters look beaut!
Aeso- tight! nice and easy on the eyes noting out of place there
Danks- thats just fucking awesome mate i love the little guy and the 3d on the letters really looks like their being pulled back by a vacuum or something and the detail on the green mold on the letters...u just keep doing what your doing :)
Reach- never been around to comment but been looking at your sketches for a while...nice i likes!
Scank- like everything think the c is a little weird/ skinny but still likes it alot
atak-like it but it looks like its been chopped in half down the bottom of the page
sadgeh- slow down a little bit bud....generally i can make out the letters and some bits don't look bad but its a bit to extreme (like the last r) for me and like i keep telling tempo fatten your letters up abit :)
had a little play about with this from a song i heard while i was doodling sooo.......not quite so sure on the fill lol :)
http://img585.imageshack.us/img585/6619/1005467.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/585/1005467.jpg/)

[nah!]

dont flair the bars

lol saw some aesop tags near me

[sadgeh]

that fill is kinda space, or i have smoked to much weed.
But what markers should i use to get better fills, cause that ''kankerzooi of hoer'' sketch was kinda old, but my camera is broke and the scanmachine is also broke, fuck.

[sernobil]

I've got "on the run twin markers".
example(not a very good one but oh well):
http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/2496/bek1qb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/845/bek1qb7.jpg/)

peace

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^^ i don't know sernobil that looks pretty fucking sweet to me! damn was looking at them on the run markers yesterday myself holy shit i'm guna have to go mug a granny or something because them colours are fresh as fook! i needs some of them pens
nah- u reckon lave it more blockbuster then??
sadgeh- lol, spaced, it could be :) i just doodled on my letters first cuz i was bored :)

[Shit Outta Luck]

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[emace1]

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6196/6024421793_68a2679ec5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/6024421793/)
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6150/6017587967_8a18f8e0e2.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/6024421793/)
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6128/6014702797_f4f6204e57.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/6017587967/)
photo (http://www.flickr.com/photos/60576921@N02/6014702797/) by

[Phat 2]

1st one sucks, second one sucks less, third one's letters suck even less, but the characs are dawp

[MN Nice]

Edit: Updated version. Crits?

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00221-20110809-2235.jpg?t=1312947388

[Beastizm]

just messing around
http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff404/Sce161/IMAG0013.jpg
i know im missing 3d and everything and Swae this is not my entry, this is just a fuck around

[Beastizm]

just checking if my signature shows up

[Shit Outta Luck]

MN Nice, work on your drop shadow a bit. It looks off in some places...and at the top of the S dont let the bar touch the middle of the S, cut it shorter. And Beastizm, that 3d is bad and shit blah blah you sound like you know haha. If that says Kasc your good, maybe fix the bar width (especially on the S) and the 3d. If it says Kast do that stuff + fix that fucking T. Good luck

[Beastizm]

yeah it says kasc, thanks for the crit

[Beastizm]

other shit is 2 big

[sema]

that bek piece is tight bro ....crits?29645

[MN Nice]

Get a better camera^

Finished this one.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00223-20110810-0216.jpg?t=1312960870

[Shit Outta Luck]

That looks clean and better. Nice haha

[Fury]

http://i.imgur.com/8eVEc.jpg
Drew this while bored.

ESCE - Make your middle bar come out more in your E's
sema - I can't even see that.
KAST - Work more on your bars before you push shit outwards and do different stuff. Also, take off the highlights.
EMACE - Some of it is kinda sloppy, like the first A. It's alright.
SOL - The only letter I can make out is the S. Don't connect letters yet.
BEK - I don't like your extensions on the B or how it connects to the E. Otherwise it looks decent.
2LIVES - L is too tall, and I overall don't really like it, but nothing specifically I don't like about it.

[sir.to.you.]

@emace- makes me feel all fuzzy inside. lol
havnt really sketched in forever. the hand was a joke. crits?
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6194/6030442065_753f1ea764_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6030442065/)
Photo 242 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6030442065/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr

[ATAK!:3]

29686
thinking about entering this for the reflect throw battle

[MN Nice]

Take that chode off the top of the R.

[upper90daynnight]

2968729688
havent posted in awhile so heres some new shit, im really feelin reuse, recap, repeat pieces some more on the way

[ribcage]

@mn nice take that chode out of your mouth

[upper90daynnight]

296892969029691
heres the rest

[upper90daynnight]

also im really feeling the handy on the wiz piece

[MN Nice]

@mn nice take that chode out of your mouth

Lol you have such the little crush on me, huh?

[sir.to.you.]

that hand looks like a impatient girls handwriting

[ribcage]

@mnnice I dont like you.

yeah.
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0810112020.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0810112030.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0810112045.jpg
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/08101121511.jpg

[Mc Satan]

^ your C seems bit to rounded,all your letters have straight lines pointy corner. the C stands out a lot in that. add to that the fact that its way fetter than your other letters, i think it makes it stand out too much. I know i shouldnt be saying much, but thats just my opinion

[ribcage]

The C is supposed to stand out. It breaks the standard charachteristic of the piece. I should have colored it a different color or smaller or something for yall to pronounce that it was on purpose. Anyways its a work in prgress. I did one with a bunch of extensions and shit last night but got shitface and fucked the outline up supremely. The R and the E were hella steazy and the ACH sucked cock, and on this one its the opposite for me, Ifucked the R and E and did okay with the rest.

[MN Nice]

^ your C seems bit to rounded,all your letters have straight lines pointy corner. the C stands out a lot in that. add to that the fact that its way fetter than your other letters, i think it makes it stand out too much. I know i shouldnt be saying much, but thats just my opinion

Quoting for truth. Who would've thought?

[sir.to.you.]

"they always said god is perfect and man is not, well guess what, man made boose and god made pot.so why not,im not fuckin wit needles or smokin a rock. cannabis, my medicine so i focus alot."
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6197/6031653642_d16f50ba1c_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6031653642/)
Photo 240 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6031653642/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
fucked up the bar in the middle good!FUCK
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6062/6031097853_410aeb8726_z.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6031097853/)
Photo 239 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/58969092@N06/6031097853/) by ripmb (http://www.flickr.com/people/58969092@N06/), on Flickr
Train tracks from nowhere!haha bullshitin

[.Cuore]

296892969029691
heres the rest

did you really do a wiz khalifa simp........ smh
and that handy looks like walt disney got shitfaced and try to graff
finally, get rid of the gay arrows that curve around the bottom of your shit. all of them. on handies, simps, everything.

[Beastizm]

@reach that usually works better if you do it with the middle letter, as in the "a"

[TastyMcNasty]

i wish i had my camera, shitty laptop flick does it no justice...
29697

[ribcage]

lol you drew a dragon and shit. You best color it before you take another pic.

[toopski]

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/4863/dsc0017aw.jpg
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/4090/dsc0029nm.jpg
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/5919/dsc0032qr.jpg
http://img26.imageshack.us/img26/1223/dsc0033wv.jpg

[Tempo718]

2969929698

[sema]

reach= if u wanna do the c try doin the e too
toop= i like the 2nd n 4th real clean nice structure

[sadgeh]

tempo - to pointy, dont like it
reach - hmm i like it cause everyone is expecting that you did the A.

[Graff2k11]

http://i1086.photobucket.com/albums/j454/graff2k11/IMG_0221.png

just a simple... crits

[sema]

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[Graff2k11]

sema.. youve posted that bottom piece before.
but try outlining your top piece with black, see how that looks, should make that teal really pop

[toopski]

reach= if u wanna do the c try doin the e too
toop= i like the 2nd n 4th real clean nice structure

thx man usually the stuff i paint turns out nothing like that tho lol since i freehand all painted shit unless its legal

[aaesoo]

@sekn work on keeping all your letters on one angle if you're gonna lean them to the left or something. it kinda seems like they're starting to straighten up as the piece progresses. your shadows off in some places too. good keyboard letters tho, but your S and N look a little disproportional
@acer that piece is sick although i don't really like the c just because the extentions kinda make it look like a G. and like the other dude said throw a black outline on the top piece
@reach that C should be straight its too rounded off for the rest of the piece. the extensions kill it too, especially on the H
@sir2you i like the fade and teos pieces on top, only thing i can say is the F seems a little too Far away from the rest of the letters. i like the bottom piece too i'd say thicken up the t tho and the K seems xrushed between the pedestal and O

[sir.to.you.]

thanks homie, i was lookin for crits and got no one gave me any, so its appreciated.

[TastyMcNasty]

i'll colour it later, looks like a laptop flick is as good as it gets at the moment >.>

29735

fucked up the R and the I >:[

[sema]

thanks for crits outline n a few scattered bubbles from behind set it off, i know i posted the 1 be4 its just same page. ill post the flik of the black when i fix this fkn scanner.
-sekn try given the letters some motion in the next one
-nasty shts tight like the vanishin point to the dragon some colourin will def make it pop

[nah!]

i don't write this i saw a tag on the street and used the letters in a piece
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2415.JPG

[Fury]

http://i.imgur.com/8eVEc.jpg
Drew this while bored.

ESCE - Make your middle bar come out more in your E's
sema - I can't even see that.
KAST - Work more on your bars before you push shit outwards and do different stuff. Also, take off the highlights.
EMACE - Some of it is kinda sloppy, like the first A. It's alright.
SOL - The only letter I can make out is the S. Don't connect letters yet.
BEK - I don't like your extensions on the B or how it connects to the E. Otherwise it looks decent.
2LIVES - L is too tall, and I overall don't really like it, but nothing specifically I don't like about it.

bump fo' crits

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^ thanks for the crit on the 2 lives fury :)
ok i can't tell what half of those letters are but i do like the general shape to them and the flares on the ends of them...well you do them better than i do put it that way :)
i think minor details like bar thickness/thinness in places and the characters tooth that is higher up and a bit off on the right handside it kinda draws my attention to it not being level
maybe i have obsessive.complusive.disorder i'm not sure lol :)
nah- noice!! 1's a bit pap though arrrh kid! :)
tasty- i really like that actually, nice style on the letters
graff 2k- you see how nice it looks when you first look and then you see the s trying to hump the e a little bit more than the k and the n, i reckon a bit more even space on the first two would be banging or alternatively tighten it up and pull the k and the n back in as close as the s and e :)
sema-i like it overall, but i think you slightly have the same problem i have as you get in to drawing a word or whatever the letters get bigger as you go along...watch out for doing that and yes take a less blurry one next time :)
think i'm getting like lush in my old age more decrepied and perverted lol, i know its shit but i like to share my cock drawings:
http://img37.picoodle.com/i58b/potts/16fq_c80_u905z.jpg (http://i.picoodle.com/2bdiiijn)

[sema]

^^^ someone watchin superbad bahaha jus playin thanks for crits

[Phat 2]

^^^ someone watchin superbad bahaha jus playin thanks for crits

OHHHHHHH hahahaha that was MEAN !!!
I'm not sure he got it though

[nah!]

http://img37.picoodle.com/i58b/potts/16fq_c80_u905z.jpg (http://i.picoodle.com/2bdiiijn)

hmm i think it would of looked better if each letter was a single PENIS or the whole piece was a single PENIS

kinda like this

http://vimeo.com/10840515

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^ oh i'm so glad...i fucking love lush! he's my style of bansky, and thanks sema lol :)
and nah i'll bear that in mind the next time i do any penis related shit haha :)

[.Cuore]

uncolored, plan on coloring it somehow. looking for crits on cracks / ideas for extensions. my letter game is decent so I'm trying to delve into the process of learning extensions.

http://i872.photobucket.com/albums/ab283/xMILANISTA4LYFEx/56dbb07d.jpg

[sema]

same-no cracks, dont connect your letters, get a clean smooth line n structure before you try to overstep your means

[Tempo718]

29788
ran out a space so

[Shroomsh]

Cant tell you guys enough, practice and self evaluation is the key, you are all pointing out each others mistakes whilst the piece you just posted have the same problems, if you can crit others you can crit yourselves. Proud to say all of you have great potential, just keep woking on letter structure, sit down with one word and adapt to the letter forms how they work with each other, the word shape as a whole ya dig?
Once you got how to teach yourself down, all you need is time and effort

[ATAK!:3]

29870298712987229873
some stuff ive been working on, crits?

[Beastizm]

my last fuck around sketch with this name, gonna start writing kasc, the word i chose for my battle wit swae
http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff404/Sce161/Mobile%20Uploads/1313121381.jpg

[sema]

^ shakey lines take ur time or try usin a roller point pen, i would also straiten the t out n extend the bottom hook of s to fill dead space the lean thros it off

[.Cuore]

bar width on the T is thicker on da top than on da bottom. and try making your E regular before adding bends etc

[Tempo718]

29899
jus a few minor changes nothin special

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

^^ fattening up is working in'it tempo :) not to sure on the two little joint lines on the t but the shape and the sort of sway of the letters looks well bud :)

[blameitonthewhiteboy95]

29901299022990329904

[Tempo718]

29905
arse ur comment made me want to do some changes to the fill, i like it but what yall think good or bad.
29907
finishing touches

[sema]

haha all of em look the same to me just diff lighting i dunno maby im goin blind
29910

[Tempo718]

yo it was crazy how I was unable to take off that bottom one.. its on there wit some internet super glue or suttn lol but the 1st two there is a difference cause I had added some shaddow to tha one in the middle but thas all.

[ATAK!:3]

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crits?

[ribcage]

uh theres someone on here who writes jest... He been gone for like a month tho...

[ATAK!:3]

really? i honestly just made it up on my own, oh well hope he doesnt care too much, but can i get some crits?

[Shit Outta Luck]

Jest, fix your tag haha. Try not to use arrows and make it more simple if you can. And I like that second sketch of yours the best, but that character makes it look like Jist instead of Jest.

[sadgeh]

29959

wtf why is mine gone.

btw crits?

[paintfaceVT]

yo tempo, honestly the simplicity of this is correct, its not that bad, it needs work, but compared to what else I have seen in here, the structure is descent, my favorite letter is the "E" work on the "T" a bit more and the "P" and this will look better dont do 3 force fields, and get ride of the cross hatching on the bubbles, get rid of the bubbles all together, one force field would look best, I would choose the yellow, those colors look dope together, black, green, and yellow. keep it up kid, glad to see some kids still start off basic, how I started.

[Tempo718]

thanks that mean alot to me

[paintfaceVT]

No problem!

[EWL24]

sadgeh - that looks sick

29993
crits please

[sema]

ewal 3d is off on w if thats wat you were goin for, i would just drop ll 3d strait back to left like a shadow do it like a roll out jam if ur gonna have it on a lean like that
30004

[VeX'D]

@Sadgeh, sick man, lovin' it

[PETER]

[QUOTE=toopski;1738001]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/4090/dsc0029nm.jpg
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/5919/dsc0032qr.jpg
QUOTE]
I LIKE THESE A LOT. MIND IF I USE THE A FROM THAT BLUE ONE TO TOY AROUND WITH?

[PETER]

cant tell you guys enough, practice and self evaluation is the key, you are all pointing out each others mistakes whilst the piece you just posted have the same problems, if you can crit others you can crit yourselves. Proud to say all of you have great potential, just keep woking on letter structure, sit down with one word and adapt to the letter forms how they work with each other, the word shape as a whole ya dig?
Once you got how to teach yourself down, all you need is time and effort
and people wanna say you do this or that wrong.... Its fucking art there is no right or wrong way about it, does some stuff work better than others sure, and learning the basics is vital, but your opinion is just that yours. Suggest changes rather than pretending you have some rightous graffiti commandments in hand and trying to force someone to write the way you want.

[sadgeh]

30024

Can i have some crits, please? With sick and loving it, i cant make further steps.

[PETER]

30040
30024

Can i have some crits, please? With sick and loving it, i cant make further steps.
Personally I would have gone uniform with the ribbion effect. Either changing width etc like the top of the T or completely the same witdth like much of the rest. Also if it where me I would work on the shape of the E. I think using something like the bit at the top left of the T on the end of the E going down would give it a good flow. diggind that rasta as well. I don't much care for seeing weed and such in graffiti unless it's a field of bad ass trees in a fx crew type mural. it just seems childish to me unless your are using it to make a statement for legalization or something. (just an opinion) My turn.30039

[ribcage]

but your opinion is just that yours. Suggest changes rather than pretending you have some rightous graffiti commandments in hand and trying to force someone to write the way you want.

My opinion is fact!!!!! Your graffiti will only be exceptd if you do exactly as I say!

[PETER]

My opinion is fact!!!!! Your graffiti will only be exceptd if you do exactly as I say! then how am I doing? Pen and paper and paint on wood?

[ribcage]

the top pic piece at top is actually pretty cool, if it was cleaned up a tad and way bigger in size id like it more. Your handies suck tho.
And I dont like the wood.

[EWL24]

no need to crit the top piece, but crits on the bottom piece will be appreciated
30072

[sadgeh]

Peter - im from holland, its allready legalized. But your toppiece looking good, maybe some 3d on. The purple thing is nice, make the lines cleaner.
Ewal - no crits, its simple, the 3d is nice with that colors.

[Shit Outta Luck]

30081
Characters are from a 60s or 70s cartoon, Inki and the Minah Bird. Or something like that. Show was funny, the bird is fucking awesome.

[PETER]

Peter - im from holland, its allready legalized. But your toppiece looking good, maybe some 3d on. The purple thing is nice, make the lines cleaner.
Ewal - no crits, its simple, the 3d is nice with that colors. lucky basterd! I was thinking a one point perspective in the center would give a nice shape. That was my first attempt at painting.... I am still learning the brushes and such I need to thin out the paint a lot more. It was going on like cake icing.

[pointman]

30092

panal sketch

[shadyloc420]

http://i51.tinypic.com/2ik9im9.jpg

[arsebanditskaelsucker]

peter- yeah i like all of that on this page :) especially the one above the painting
Sadgeh-nice, you need some blending pens tho, think the twists are a bit too much but i do likes it
s.o.l- nice but top of that is is a bit too short for my liking
ewal- the 2nd one shape of the letters reminds me of like wild west style writing don't know why lol, liking the 3d on the 1st one if not the colour :)
pointman- welcome hi, not seen you for a while lol :) goms now is it?? , only thing i dont like is the little kick off the top of the G, and m's a tiny bit porky..but i'm just being picky for no good reason ha
here's a random one i've just done....... kinda had the joined up letters idea in my head and just went for it
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/4789/1005536c.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/204/1005536c.jpg/)

[PETER]

no need to crit the top piece, but crits on the bottom piece will be appreciated
30072
It does have a wild west feel to it. A wood grain fill with nails would be sick if you can pull it off.

[aaesoo]

30157
another pen freestyle, because i dont own any colours atm.

[Shit Outta Luck]

Aeso thats looking fresh, if anything tilt the S and O just a tiny bit. To fit a LITTLE better with the A and the E.

[TastyMcNasty]

forgot to fill in some of the 3D. whatever :p
30313


sadgeh: fresh, keep that up.
peter: that canvas is dope
ewal: both are good, nice and simple, stick with that style.
aeos: letter sizes are weird
2lives: dont connect your letters
aeso: thats good, but your handstyle is hurting bad.

[ribcage]

howd you get it to host? send it to phat...
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0818111502.jpg

[.Cuore]

forgot to fill in some of the 3D. whatever :p
30313



really feelin it, although i also feel it might have been a bit better if you incorporated a capital E

[TastyMcNasty]

howd you get it to host? send it to phat...
http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0818111502.jpg

i use the stupid site uploader :p. doesnt work in pm's

[Beastizm]

A quick rough sketch I did while I rode into Virginia
http://i1234.photobucket.com/albums/ff404/Sce161/Mobile%20Uploads/1313601159.jpg

[alby]

30390
Crits?

[Strange Journeys]

widen up letters, drop that T, make the S less curvy, M is tight. make other letters similar to M

[dankbudz]

for the tfrrt
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb420/knowledgebornwisdom/securedownload.jpg

[sadgeh]

make your letters even big.

[centrysam]

@ dank buds... nice flick ..looks good

few flicks
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6004/6003238467_d76b1d98b0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6003238467/)
hhhh (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6003238467/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6127/6019669282_f392597821.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6019669282/)
Snapshot_20110807_1 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6019669282/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6184/6030326405_f30b73876d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6030326405/)
Snapshot_20110810_1 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6030326405/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6195/6033339617_1acc1a4671.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6033339617/)
Snapshot_20110811 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6033339617/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6199/6043803164_d2fdfcdb6e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6043803164/)
Snapshot_20110814 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6043803164/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6187/6043254221_83b71b206f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6043254221/)
Snapshot_20110814_1 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6043254221/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6076/6050829945_80534961f0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6050829945/)
Snapshot_20110816_2 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6050829945/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6189/6057453140_9aefa2c4af.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6057453140/)
Snapshot_20110818 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humrone/6057453140/) by grinder13 (http://www.flickr.com/people/humrone/), on Flickr

[Phillip McDougall]

Keep practicing!

[MN Nice]

Humr your throws are pimp.

[centrysam]

thanks

[KnoxIn]

http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/4476/img20110820133117.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/200/img20110820133117.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)
Amen, i haven't written in forever my lines are shaky and my fills kinda whack im tryin to figure out my prismas again on the 3-d but anyways crits always appreciated

centry- you got your own style which is good but it seems like you need to slow it down a little and get some structure make it more legible
dank- shits clean looks really good
alby- simples man you gotta learn bars make all your lines proportional

[Skope2]

Knox - A few things I dont like about it. The letters seem to get smaller as it goes through (maybe youve taken the picture at an angle) and theres a few extensions that aren't working. The one at the bottom left of the A and the bottom right of the M, they just make it look alot less clean that it could be.

That E is fucking fresh though. Same with the A if it didnt have that extension.

[fruitfulanomie]

30390
Crits? like that style it's raw and has an oldschool feeling to it
something that would be good to start up on walls

http://pic100.picturetrail.com/VOL587/2397355/23754133/398171278.jpg

http://pic100.picturetrail.com/VOL587/2397355/23754133/398171275.jpg

[MoF.]

yea i like dat fruite looks real tight, nice colours aswell

[TastyMcNasty]

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0820112106.jpg
.......drunk highlighter freestyles......ima be doin em for a minute...
Tasty, dank, shrooms, exchange?

ya bro i'll hit you up

[ribcage]

chunky

http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g388/ribcage22/0820112145.jpg

[-Sinn-]

Humr - coming here and seein that kinda work bein put in is what inspires me.
Dank looks like ur piece is torn between having bends and being round
Ribcage im diggin those simples nice and clean
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Artsy%20Shit/Picture337-1.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Artsy%20Shit/Picture338.jpg
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/Artsy%20Shit/Picture330.jpg

[Phat 2]

the fill in the chris piece is real nice. keep it up.

[centrysam]

@ sinn nice flicks man first one is dopee

[sema]

fruit- if ur gonna do somethin on a curve like that give the letters some motion but work on structure more
sin- keep it up showin alota potential
amen- dig the style i like the m the a is alittle too big tho draws off the focal point
30522old sketch

[pointman]

30539

Look alright to paint??

[ribcage]

all but the S, yes.

[.Cuore]

agreed

[EWL24]

pointman - that looks good, u should definitely paint that. and Im sorry if I sound stupid but who is that Char? ive seen it a million times but ive never known what it came from

[dankbudz]

id say fix the O a little bit too, could use a bit more funk on the bottom right.

[Discovery]

that character is dope

[Beastizm]

pointman - that looks good, u should definitely paint that. and Im sorry if I sound stupid but who is that Char? ive seen it a million times but ive never known what it came from
its a mark bode char, he collabs wit graffiti artist from time to time and everybody uses his chars, i dont kno much about them but i kno theres the lizard and some orangey red guy with a wizard looking hat covering most of his body

[MN Nice]

Feel free to crit the fuck out of this. I'm having some trouble with more technical style.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00276-20110822-0100.jpg?t=1313992945

[EWL24]

its a mark bode char, he collabs wit graffiti artist from time to time and everybody uses his chars, i dont kno much about them but i kno theres the lizard and some orangey red guy with a wizard looking hat covering most of his body
oh ok, ive seen both the lizard and wizard guy a bunch of times, so its nice to finally know were they came from. thanks man

MN Nice - there is to much negative space between the M and U and the E and S. also if u flipped the M it would look better

crits please
30568

[KnoxIn]

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6458/img20110822005058.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/233/img20110822005058.jpg/)

lines aren't clean and whatnot but just want crits about letter structure and style, i think my N looks retarted but crit the hell out of it any advice would be appreciated

Ewal- i like it its pretty clean, would like to see it with a fill to add some flavor its plain, but like i said its clean so i like it
Mues- i think your E needs some work, it looks out of place to me with the rest of the letters i think its just cuz how theres not too much to it, but i really like the style, i would just keep at it

[SEKA24]

i like the a and m but I'm not sure about that e if thats what it is
but yea the rest of the letters look good in my opinion

[Slip709]

knoxln that A is banggging.
As for the N, its pretty simple. But if you had those lines a little sharper i think it would look dope.
Maybe try to encorporate a wave in one of the legs or somthing similar to what you did with the A

Just my 2 cents, by no means am i "good" hah

[Beastizm]

yea bro i agree on the 'a' shit is fresh but the fat part coming off the middle of your 'e' is what looks wierd ,make that part skinnier to look like the rest of the letter

[Phillip McDougall]

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/6458/img20110822005058.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/233/img20110822005058.jpg/)

lines aren't clean and whatnot but just want crits about letter structure and style, i think my N looks retarted but crit the hell out of it any advice would be appreciated

mogan- your shits fire nothin i see that needs any crit

All those letters need work.