Blackbooks

[snal]

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from today,vere boring day...give me crits if you're in the mood :) will preciate

[SynOne]

Sam - Toooo many pointless extensions in that. That U doesn't even look like a U because of all that in the middle of the letter. That random extension on the R, right in the middle of it's right leg and the loop in it throws it off bad. Almost causing it to not look like an R.

[centrysam]

thanks for the crits ill work on that

[MN Nice]

Bump that Reach exchange!

[SynOne]

Some stuff I done did do.

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[Tempo718]

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[Colors]

Tempo do you write tempo

[Tempo718]

yeah an sauna 2

edit:not sauna 2 "sauna" too

[Colors]

I don't know why but when I got bored earlier I sktched a quick tempo simple, and I figured ill post it on here and you could just sketch a simple based off of mine. Its a quick one so its not too greaT but hey just an idea, thought I could help you out

[SkateJunt]

for the labour throwie battle this week. critz appreciated
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6222/6351386467_9bdbe2b861.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6351386467/)
labor throwie battle (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6351386467/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[DRZ]

skatejunt - it makes my eyes hurt. should have just filled it in completely. it looks like doodoo the way it is.
http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x44/sic0_0ne/playg2bb.jpg

[smack1one]

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crits?

[dankbudz]

,

[ribcage]

Woah mang, that D is hurtin, and the S aint too good either. The bottom bar of S is too thick for how short it is, if you woud made it a little bit longer it probably wouldnt of made a difference

[Tempo718]

yeah colors im wit that ga'hed 1st tho lol.
um dank i ono what he talk bout that is decent. even if you are a dick sometimes u can still write.
only thing i see what he sayin is the supporting bar on the D is too think. big whoop
if you took a moment to try to duplicate one of your favorite writers you dont have to post it but
it might do you some good.

[SynOne]

Smeck - If your goal was to make them all slanted to the right. Nice attempt. Try to make sure they are slanted at the same angle. That tends to help it flow better. I dig that fill though.

DRZ - Bad bad letter structure. To many bends and pointless addons. Go simple and do a bunch of straight letters.

[SynOne]

Some stuff I done did do.

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Exchange with Slotr. Not as clean as it needs to be.

Bump Crit them.

[MrSpyrydus]

My first attempt in a pretty long time. It's just a sketch so be as hard as you can on crits:D
PS: it says ART btw:D

[Tempo718]

41206 2 sides to each story chi town stay up ez.

[ribcage]

syn did a simp with no extensions, and what do you know, turns out to be the best thing hes ever done. You should have made your 3d go in the other direction, it woulda cut down way more negative space

[SynOne]

Fuck you bro lol. I can do simps. But I'm trying to learn to start extensions. Cause I can rock simples.

[TBS]

Syn, that straight is pretty cool. nit keen on the character with it but it's still cool. just clean up the lines a bit. and as Ribs said, maybe it would have been better if the 3D was the other way.
Spyrydus... ehm... scrap that altogether. you'll hear this a lot but do a straight letter or something. just start again.
Tempo, the letter structure is horrible. try and straighten out the letters and make them all the same height. the 3D's off at some parts and the fill in the 3D doesn't look right. really don't like any of the letters....

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i know the straight's a little off at parts. have since sorted them, just don't have a pic since fixing it.

[Sync1]

Hello everyone. I'm new to the forums and to the whole graffiti scene. I'm just starting out to be honest... here's some of my recent pieces. Please check it out and give me some feedback on where to improve etc. Thanks! :)

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1608/19665322.jpg

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/6269/15756247.jpg

http://img689.imageshack.us/img689/7838/77090336.jpg

I used Molotow Paint Markers, Pencil Colors and Touch Markers...

[SkateJunt]

that looks dopeeee^ tried somethin new today on the subway, lookin for crits
http://farm7.static.flickr.com/6051/6359981281_526dabb237.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6359981281/)
Picture 096 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6359981281/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[TBS]

Sync, i think you have a good idea of what graff is but i also think you need to tone it back a bit with all the extensions and such.
SkateJunt.... Simple simple simple simple simple please

[Sync1]

Sync, i think you have a good idea of what graff is but i also think you need to tone it back a bit with all the extensions and such.
SkateJunt.... Simple simple simple simple simple please

Thanks, TBS. Much appreciated. I'll try to get some clean pieces out in the next few days and not try to go too 'wild' with the extensions till I get the full hang of things. Thanks!

[SkateJunt]

like this stuff?
http://i44.tinypic.com/axoe46.jpg
http://i39.tinypic.com/donwhg.jpg

[TBS]

no worries sync.
yeah. like that. but clean those up. take your time with it. make sure all your letters are the same height and all your bars are the same width.
anyone got any crits on mine?

[SkateJunt]

your stuff looks really sick, think you should be postin in intermediate

[Strange Journeys]

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did this at school, got some fucked bars, and the ut is wack, fuck the whole things pretty wack, but imma paint it on sunday

[TBS]

i don't like the extensions but the basis of the letters is pretty cool

[ribcage]

Fuck you bro lol. I can do simps. But I'm trying to learn to start extensions. Cause I can rock simples.

thats a straight letter though, wheres the simps with flow?

[Colors]

I smell bacon

[SynOne]

thats a straight letter though, wheres the simps with flow?

In my pants.

[ribcage]

^yeah... I doubt it. The only thing you have in your pants is a baby dick


I smell bacon

I love bacon

[SynOne]

Not even mad. Been lurking to long to fall for your trolling.

[TBS]

i scream, you scream, we all scream for bacon!

[ribcage]

...not trolling, just speaking the truth.

yeah, im doing this for credits... so what, gotta get that free shipping before christmas
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[.Cuore]

I could dig the most bottom left simp.

[always crushin]

here ya go broke
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/skws20.jpg

[ribcage]

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[TBS]

Ribs of that first load, bottom left simp is cool as fuck.
cheers Slotr, will get something down for ya in the next couple days.
unfinished piece for talk. i think there's too much going on and i spent too long looking at 'BATES' pieces....
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[ribcage]

glad you guys like that one, wish i woulda flicked it after it got painted, hella fucked the R up in the sketch tho...
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as for yours broke, its pretty tight, The B and R look the same, and the connection at the bottom of them is ugly. You should really try to define that K a tad bit more, looks like a K X hybrid, I think on the right bar the top part where it meets the left bar its a little too chubby, if it was thinner or that line curved the other way it might of defined it a tad better. The Arrows coming off the middle part of the E are kind of bad, but its a good idea, you shoulda made the Arrow the middle part, instead of an extension, and then kept the swirly extension ya dig? Cause if the middle part of E cam off as that arrow, Itd be ill

[dave the pirate]

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[TBS]

cheers Ribs. will take that into consideration and give it another go at some point.
with yours, as you said, the R is fucked, no hate, it's just fucked. i like the E and A, i think the C should be a lil bigger and i'm not too keen on the kink in the H, maybe give it a little curve or something to fit with the other letters a bit more.
quick as fuck simple freestyle. crits more than welcome. haha

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[dave the pirate]

nothing really to crit but my self id put a lil more style into the k and r nice clean and simple tho daps!

[ribcage]

@tbs yeah the idea was there for the R, but I failed. Anyways, the top extenison on that B is begging to be longer.

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[dave the pirate]

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[TBS]

i think the basis of the letters is alright. lose the 2 arrows pointing down though. also the extension coming off the R and under the K isn't such a good idea. work on the 3D, no hate towards it but it's off at a few places and brings the whole piece down. other than that i think it's pretty good.

[smack1one]

Smeck - If your goal was to make them all slanted to the right. Nice attempt. Try to make sure they are slanted at the same angle. That tends to help it flow better. I dig that fill though.

DRZ - Bad bad letter structure. To many bends and pointless addons. Go simple and do a bunch of straight letters.

thanx=]

[Messer]

yoooooo, havent been on here in a while....
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Photo0222.jpg
http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p157/best-BTK/Photo0207.jpg

[Lado]

...not trolling, just speaking the truth.

yeah, im doing this for credits... so what, gotta get that free shipping before christmas
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furthest one to the bottom is top notch.

[rewz]

some stuff
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[rewz]

i heart naked
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[rewz]

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[rewz]

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[rewz]

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[rewz]

oh one more... This is gees, he writes gees.
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[rewz]

Gees mozis earn mink ub........

Word up to naked

[sadgeh]

Damn only blessing.

[MN Nice]

Earn, you have an interesting style. Its like a combination of two cats who post on here, Mone and Sear. Its nice though. Your N's could use some simplifying on your more complicated pieces though. otherwise your simps are on point

[ribcage]

^ I dont see that at all... intermediate thread worthy work though

[TBS]

yeah i'd say inter worthy. there's a lot there and it's 2:56am, it could be my tired eyes but it all looks pretty good to me. few tweaks here and there but over all it looks good. and no i don't see it either..


Slotr exchange for the chatter
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[rewz]

thanks guys, its kinda old shit from the crew but im going to be posting more recent stuff soon hopefully,

slotr, i like the movement to your piece...

[ribcage]

should have made those letter connecting extensions thinner than the normal bars. Cause right now that is hard to read, all I see are a bunch of w's, an O and an R

[TBS]

yeah i thought that too.. i'll maybe do another one... but better..

[MrSpyrydus]

a quick sketch...crits please :D
the word is CRAK

[TastyMcNasty]

no.

[Stuck]

only fat joe is worthy of writing crack

[MrSpyrydus]

and some ideas to improve it??
i know it looks shitty as hell but i dont know where to start..what to remove what to keep what to change etc...thank you

[3omo]

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[3omo]

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[SynOne]

Quicky that was rushed as fuck, very sloppy. Bad overall. Just for some talk.

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[dave the pirate]

Eanr some shit is realllly banging some shit is well horrible hahah what word do you actually write?

[always crushin]

ight since not enough people go to the exchange thread anybody wanna exchange.(i write slotr)

[dave the pirate]

Poke

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[.Cuore]

http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lltzgnHi5F1qzib3wo1_400.jpg

though I would fix up that E.

[ribcage]

says poke? yo id take a sharpie or something to that outline and beefin it up. would make it look better, and then id be able to tell witch extensions work and witch dont... cause right now a lot of em aint lookin to hot...

pen freebie
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[dave the pirate]

i used a sharpie out line pen

[ribcage]

take something bolder

[dave the pirate]

i do sometimes i dunno i just prefer the thin line to a thick one in my sketches flcik any way
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[TastyMcNasty]

and some ideas to improve it??
i know it looks shitty as hell but i dont know where to start..what to remove what to keep what to change etc...thank you

simplicity is best, so just basic keyboard letters, then go from there.

3omo, either quit graffiti or start over, because whatever that is, it is not working at all.

oh ya, dope stuff dave and reach

[ribcage]

that one looks good, but the one before would do wonders with a broader outline

[dave the pirate]

il try it

[dave the pirate]

some one wanna exchange

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

41949

What you guys think of this? I the the R is cool, but it just doesnt flow with the rest.

[Takeiteasy]

Is this used toilet paper? ^

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

obviously not. And if u were tryin to take a shot at me... failure man

[SkateJunt]

an exchange I did on PG
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6222/6380354371_24f55e647c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6380354371/)
Picture 103 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6380354371/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[Takeiteasy]

Have you even read anything from this site?

[SkateJunt]

haha yeah ruhig, looks like you can barely hold a pen, maybe wait a couple years til your older, or just write 10 keyboard letter things a day and youl get the hang of it

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

I did it on purpose... I was experimenting fools.
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[.Cuore]

Oh sweet baby jesus..

[Tempo718]

dude got athritus get some bengay son.

[rewz]

any one down to exchange message me man because im board

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

I really dont have a steady hand. I always sucked at doin shit free hand. And my meds certainly made that alot worse.
Which is why I barely do anything in my blackbook...

[Tempo718]

41956
ruhig - try not taking ages to do one line, if ur uncapable of chicken scratch like this then try

[Rakadishu]

Couple of sketches.
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[Rakadishu]

Read em backwards

[Tempo718]

41965
lacks structure but for 2nite its all I can do.

[always crushin]

any one down to exchange message me man because im board
what ya write homeboy? i write slotr

[rewz]

an exchange for the man Sauna.....
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[MN Nice]

any one down to exchange message me man because im board

Word, I got you. I write MUES. EARN for you right?

[Tempo718]

dope

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

41975
Rokadishu, one of urs kinda gave me this idea... albeit, incomporable.

[rewz]

nah gees man ill wip one up for ya just give me a little bit

[rewz]

41975
Rokadishu, one of urs kinda gave me this idea... albeit, incomporable.
First rule...... letter structure, it would be a lot more easier then that

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

what do you mean by letter structure though?

[dankbudz]

quick as hell freestyle, both S's areeeent too pretty

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

Idk if i can do this shit well, Ill prolly never be able to do a piece... ive just never had been able to make art. BUT damn, do I have fuck tons of ideas

[rewz]

hey talk like that and your shits ganna go down hill, i been doing this shit for a while and when i mean a while since like idk 6th grade i think, look at my old old old old posts from a while ago. see how bad i was. shit man ill even post my tinypic so you can see all my old shit

[rewz]

http://tinypic.com/usermedia.php?uo=u3L5ZvFm2l6JzNdhPRLb0Yh4l5k2TGxc

go all the way to my first shit man

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

hey talk like that and your shits ganna go down hill, i been doing this shit for a while and when i mean a while since like idk 6th grade i think, look at my old old old old posts from a while ago. see how bad i was. shit man ill even post my tinypic so you can see all my old shit
I know the negative talk aint doin me any good. But, ive taken art class for years and never had any improvement. But, I was doin graffiti words in my notebooks at class. Long before I ever got into graffiti.

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

http://tinypic.com/usermedia.php?uo=u3L5ZvFm2l6JzNdhPRLb0Yh4l5k2TGxc

go all the way to my first shit man
That doesnt look bad at all.

[rewz]

ill post up letter structure for you alright?

[Tempo718]

build that shit like a skyscraper! bom bom

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

allright. thanks

[rewz]

this is letter structure. its letters broken in bars, if one line of the bar bens one way the other line should go with it. copy your key board and then start making slight adjustments
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[TastyMcNasty]

some one wanna exchange

i will man, you still writing nark?

[rewz]

41981

mues exchange. yo wheres mine man

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

I did a throw up of that pic I posted. I think it came out allright.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?5058-tot-throwies./page827

41975
Rokadishu, one of urs kinda gave me this idea... albeit, incomporable.

[PETER]

i will man, you still writing nark?
are you calling him out or did he really write that shit?

[TastyMcNasty]

are you calling him out or did he really write that shit?

he really writes nark.

[theking]

ruhig let me sum it up: THAT IS SCARY

[spiltink]

ruhig let me sum it up: THAT IS SCARY

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_cVXPJYulx_g/TPEGKZfZxCI/AAAAAAAAD_s/GMVWV5Ridh8/s400/courage-the-cowardly-dog_20883_1.jpg

[Lado]

41981

mues exchange. yo wheres mine man

The second half of the 'M' I'd say is your weakest part of the piece. And idk about that extra bar on top of the 'E' either. Idk though, just me maybe

[EWL24]

^^
i agree, but i do love that S

[rewz]

yea sorry it was my third piece in a row last night

[ribcage]

^good shit, seein that just put me in a drawing mood.

[MN Nice]

Using my old prismas was a bad choice.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00460-20111122-2117.jpg?t=1322018333

[Takeiteasy]

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[Ruhig Der Sankt]

I tried doing this thing on this site here. http://www.mrwiggles.biz/how_to_construct_a_letter.htm
Tell me how I did.42204

[.Cuore]

http://memegenerator.net/cache/instances/400x/11/11332/11604316.jpg

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

fuck you. Its not like I said it was good. I'm here to learn. If you want to be an asshole, take it somewhere else. This is the "TOY" section.

[.Cuore]

And I had every intention of reviewing and giving you crits until you posted that link to some shit called 'Mr Wiggles: The phattest hip hop...' something or rather and I became disinterested and decided to reply in a humorous fashion. Start with simps and straight bars of equal lengths and forget those quick-and-easy bullshit guides you find on these obscureass websites. That's my advice to you.

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

I just googled graffiti basics. Maybe I was too hasty to snap at you. Just gettin tired of takin shit today. and thanks.

[ribcage]

just today?? cause by the looks of it you been takin shit to the face your whole life

[MN Nice]

Using my old prismas was a bad choice.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00460-20111122-2117.jpg?t=1322018333
Bump

[Takeiteasy]

just today?? cause by the looks of it you been takin shit to the face your whole life Atta boy. Feed the flames! Lulz.

[sadgeh]

Ill post up some shit later today, whao long time ago i did.

@Ruhig keep practising and dont look at Mr. Wiggles.
@MN Nice i like it but the R is too much behind the A. The lowest bar of the E i dont know how to say but i dont like it.

[Ruhig Der Sankt]

just today?? cause by the looks of it you been takin shit to the face your whole life
sorta true. howd you tell?

[ribcage]

you got shit in ya teeth

[H1P30N3R]

Dis diiiicckk!!

[spiltink]

this is the first time i tried a style like this

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2561.JPG

[ribcage]

you a fool, you know whats worse than getting dis dicked? saying dis dick at the wrong time, or dis dicking someone who didnt fall for it.

How to play dis dick:
ask someone a question or something. if they answer a question or statement with a question i.e. What, Who, When, where, why, or any sort of question, than you can dis dick em.

Example:
me- you know how to get to 8th and shmiglsmad?
you- "what?"
me- dis dick

example of doing it wrong:
me- mn nice sucks fat cock
you-"dis dick"

^^doesnt work
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[PETER]

he really writes nark. Man that's brilliant!!!!

[Takeiteasy]

Crits my last pic please and thanks. I have some ideas as what i have to fix and work on.

[spiltink]

i thought dis dick is whats in my pants and goes in your mouth

[ribcage]

yo when you can think of something funny to say, come back. until further notice im going to ignore you for being many things, retarded being the one that bugs me the most

[H1P30N3R]

I meant it more as a reference to you rib

[spiltink]

yo when you can think of something funny to say, come back. until further notice im going to ignore you for being many things, retarded being the one that bugs me the most

lol are you made?

[ribcage]

I meant it more as a reference to you rib

ooo well you should have said "this" dick

[Tempo718]

reach - did we ever do an xchange b4? would u be wit it?

[spiltink]

reach - did we ever do an xchange b4? would u be wit it?

if you want to contact him and hes not on here i have his facebook he he he...

just look for this guy
http://profile.ak.fbcdn.net/hprofile-ak-ash2/368706_100001540101387_606625388_n.jpg

that is the finger he uses for pushing up bumholes

[ribcage]

reach - did we ever do an xchange b4? would u be wit it?
what you write, i could put it on the list

[Beko]

tryn a new style! i normally do simps but i thought i would try to do one more complacated!
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6220/6391871879_f8de40e686_z.jpg

[Colors]

Real quick 2 letter
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[TBS]

Beko, stick to the simples at the moment.
Tempo, that looks like a bad 'REN'

[ribcage]

for real tempo? When you ask someone to exchange with you, you should put some effort into it, and not do some half assed bullshit. If your as old as you say you are, then why does everything you do literally look like its from an 8 year old? Not even trolling right now, im serious, you draw and speak like an 8 year old. next time you draw, do something that has worth, not something my dog wouldnt wipe its ass with

unfinished waste of time.
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[SynOne]

Yo Ribcage. I'll throw an exchange that way. You know what I write.

[ribcage]

no thanks, ive had enough bogus exchanges for one day. And I still owe people some, i just did that one cause I was already drawing.

[dave the pirate]

Ed GEIN And @ tasty mcnasty yep i still am pm or some shit what you write also slotr ahaah dude i still owe one :p

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[SynOne]

Lol Reach, I did it anyways. Huge dead spot right on the E and 3D's off. But so be it. Get around to mine after everyone else.

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[Ruhig Der Sankt]

you a fool, you know whats worse than getting dis dicked? saying dis dick at the wrong time, or dis dicking someone who didnt fall for it.

How to play dis dick:
ask someone a question or something. if they answer a question or statement with a question i.e. What, Who, When, where, why, or any sort of question, than you can dis dick em.

Example:
me- you know how to get to 8th and shmiglsmad?
you- "what?"
me- dis dick

example of doing it wrong:
me- mn nice sucks fat cock
you-"dis dick"

^^doesnt work
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sharpie freebie for rules

We had a thing like that in my town, except we said "show you right"

[Tempo718]

ay you know somethin yall right im gonna redo tha for reach cause that is bogus as hell ma bad.

[Beko]

tempo- did you not notice that the first time????? like wtf bro! i can do better than that an i just started!! more effert woulsd be nice when your doing an exchange! i would be pissed if that happened to me!

[Colors]

woah beko not much room to talk and calm down on the beef its not even your exchange, although i agree that the piece is not all that great haha maybe another try tempo with a little more effort

[Beko]

lol sorry i just let out a lot of frustration on him, but i edited so no affending anyone sorry!

[Beko]

COLORS- the D looks a lot like an O if it wasnt for you saying naked i would think it was NAKEO. but the rest of the letters i like a lot! but on the E i dont like those pointy little spikes they just dont go with the rest of it. and just some of those random straight blue lines without the fades just dont look appealing to me!

i would also enjoy some crits please!
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6024/5986541716_3e615e52c1_z.jpg

[Colors]

Bek just use wicked simple stuff dont go for all that arrow jazz just regular letters with no flair for now, and dont outline each individual bar, if you know what i mean? like in that piece dont outline the bars inside the letter like in the middle of the k where all the bars meet. look at my piece i guess for the outline

[Tempo718]

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arright reach look man, u write i had 2 slow it down n' put a good light on so I could see wat im doin lol. the last one was half ass wont deny it. sry bout that but I did try to focus wit this much more but it only a start jus a pencil outline so... any thoughts where to go wit it?

[Colors]

tempo just restart with wicked simple letters. remember bar consistency and stay simple. use bars

[Beko]

the legs on the R, A, and H just dont look good

[Tempo718]

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well I did not plan on this to turn out so bizzare looking, I did fit all the letters but yet plenty to improve on no doubt. my C turnd a lil E'ish and that is just the tip of the iceburg, once I got started I just started adding on mad diff ish... anyways sorry to dissapoint fellas. I'll just keep trying

[Colors]

tempoooo dude bar consistency! keep all the bars the same size and go simple

[Tempo718]

they over lap 2 much? is that wat u sayin

[Colors]

no look at the left side of your R. wiiiicked fat bar. now look at the leg of your R, thats like 1/3 the size. keep all the bars the same width

[Tempo718]

hmm okay

[SynOne]

As my exchange wasn't the best either. Nor am I good. At this point... This thread still makes me want to punch myself in the face.

Colors - That left leg on that N needs fixing. I wouldn't bend it that way. I would keep it straight. It seems to mess the entire letter. Your A and K are the best letters. The bottom of your E is all fucked. The D looks like an O you need to straighten out the left side of it.

[H1P30N3R]

tempo that reach is fire bro

[Colors]

and yeah they do overlap too much also. just keep them the same size(the letters and bars) and GO SIMPLE hah

[H1P30N3R]

keep doin what your doing is what tempo is reading from what anyone who crits his work says

[SynOne]

^ Yo. You need to punctuate. I had to re-read that shit like 3 times before I understood what you said.

[H1P30N3R]

true, my bad im high and ramblin.

[Colors]

hahahaha truth hipe

[.Cuore]

^ Yo. You need to punctuate. I had to re-read that shit like 3 times before I understood what you said.

lol word me too

[rewz]

Tempo. You need to keep that shit simple or there's ganna be no improvement. O and yes use letter structure

[spiltink]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2561.JPG
this is the first time i have ever do something like this

[2mor]

4234142338 first an old simp from a long while ago, and then second ones basic outline for what im gna paint later, whats ya think?

[2mor]

other way round*

[TastyMcNasty]

almost everyone in this thread needs to go more simple.

havent posted anything in a bit. crits always appreciated

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2468.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2469.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2470.jpg

[MN Nice]

You got a fresh style developing. Try to fill your negative space in the N and A on the nark piece.

[TastyMcNasty]

thanks man, took a while of fucking around to get. and as for the nark piece, thats only the rough on, ima try and fill that space somehow on the good one

[chen]

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[dankbudz]

boredom simple. crits?


tasty- that Kunt piece is fillth, the Nark is getting there, you just gotta smooth some bars out and pull it together like you did the KUNT piece.
chen- you should draw more

[Beko]

should've got rud of those bars:/
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[dankbudz]

yeah dude i wish i did, coulda looked perty funky. gunna leave it till next time

[Beko]

haha i was taln bout mine ^_^ but yours too! lol

[dankbudz]

hahah oh... awkward
but yo, on yours you should make those letters more simple. like on the B, you dont need that flat part on teh bottom curve. and that E would look alot better if it was uncovered and didnt have the top extension. Just work on that K and CONNECT THE BARS. also i think it would look dope with the O at the end. that is, if you write BEKO

[Beko]

yeah i just started written BEKO so ill have to work on getten O's in my pieces!

[dankbudz]

which is why you shoulda put it in that piece, hombre. get that practice in, ya dig?

[Beko]

yeah im just so used to writing BEK that i forget the O :X lol

[snal]

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[Takeiteasy]

42418 Crit this shit jive turkeys.

[Colors]

takeiteasy - go simpler some of those extentions look weird like on the bottom of the a and bottom of the sand that line that goes through the back just looks random, and maybe just make regular e's. go simpler is the moral haha
Beko- Dude when i said dont outline each individual bar i mean like dont outline the whole bar when your doing the black. Dont outline where the bars meet

[Tempo718]

takeit - that is fresh as hell stick wit same concept but fit it on the page better maybe

[Colors]

what?^ im not saying that the piece is horrible but i wouldnt say fresh as hell hahaha

[Tempo718]

I would enjoy crits on the naked
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dude what the hell... is that a pencil blocking the pic on the left side?! retake the pic or somn

Edit: yeaa an that is true Fresh as hell is some next shit .... lol

[Colors]

no thats a finger hahaha and its not like your missing much. dont have the book its in so i cant retake one

[Colors]

BEKO -Cleanliness and effort were 2 things i didnt put in but this is just to show you what to do with your oultine
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[Takeiteasy]

Thanks for the crits fellas. Did you mean lower case e's? I agree with the bar in the background. I was supposed to take it out but accidentally started outlining it so I kept it. Color choice and 3D look ok?

[Colors]

yeah i wouldnt worry about colors too much for now but looks good to me. and i dont use 3d so im the last person to ask for that haha sorry. Nah for the E's i mean regular ones like the e i just typed not like that 3 looking thing. just simple for now.But thats a good point if you start out with capital letters make em all capital, and same for lower case it just helps with the flow usually. but im your piece you did it all capital

[TastyMcNasty]

almost everyone in this thread needs to go more simple.

havent posted anything in a bit. crits always appreciated

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2468.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2469.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2470.jpg


bumping for crits

[Colors]

I like the kunt piece but idk if this is just me or if i cant tell good style but it seems your bars have way too many kinks in them in the other pieces. Idk maybe its fine, but through my eyes it looks weird

[Takeiteasy]

I prefer the Nark piece. It's just a little cluttered between the A and R. The kunt piece is good, I like the style but it seems a bit all over the place. I would like to see it with a full size U just for reference.

[Takeiteasy]

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Crits? I know I most definitely hate the R and the 3D. Haha. Oh well. It was a 45 min piece that I kind of rushed through.

[MN Nice]

All the letters are pretty weak. Define your A more, and work on how to fully understand bars in letters.

[Colors]

unfinished because i am so cool
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[aaesoo]

http://i1199.photobucket.com/albums/aa468/aeso6/11262011184.jpg
http://i1199.photobucket.com/albums/aa468/aeso6/11262011185.jpg
http://i1199.photobucket.com/albums/aa468/aeso6/11262011183.jpg
schools productive as fuck for me lol.

[SkateJunt]

AESO love those straights
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6037/6405551503_8cf7d1265a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6405551503/)
Picture 109 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6405551503/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[sadgeh]

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Some work is old, some not.

[sadgeh]

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forget this.

[Beko]

Crits please! something im doing for the gf. whatcha think! all new letters besides the E and O

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VVVVVV TBS- i really like all of those!! the only thing i dont like is the squigly line in the A and the color choices of the 3rd one! but other than that i like em mate!

[TBS]

Edit: Deleted and re-posted a better quality image.

Sadgeh, some of your stuff's alright. just remember to keep an eye on that 3D though. some of the pieces are pretty cool but the 3D's off and it ruins them.

Reach, had a go at your letters. now that i look at it i shoulda fattened up the first leg of that R... infact, i shoulda done a better R altogether!!
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[sadgeh]

Yea i know but i dont even now how to do that 3d, so maybe some1 has some tips therefore.

Tbs- Looking good, but the H is a lil bit bigger than the others, but overall it looks very clean.
Beko- where is the V. But i like the connections.

[Beko]

sadgeh- its behind the heart and ontop of the E its like blended in with it

[TBS]

Beko the V is too hidden,

Sadgeh, what you're doing is alright, just remember to keep it clean

[dest1]

Edit: Deleted and re-posted a better quality image.

Sadgeh, some of your stuff's alright. just remember to keep an eye on that 3D though. some of the pieces are pretty cool but the 3D's off and it ruins them.

Reach, had a go at your letters. now that i look at it i shoulda fattened up the first leg of that R... infact, i shoulda done a better R altogether!!
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very nice take at reach, i like it, the E is actually my least fav, i like that R. all personal taste i guess.

[Colors]

this was an exchange but hey crit it
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[Beko]

with colored pencils.... probally couldve done without the little extensions on the B and O but it just looked out of place on both sides because they were so flat. wells crits and tips please! i really like this tyle i just need to IMPROVE it!
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7143/6407307685_28f9925902_z.jpg

[Colors]

beko before you go trying any style start out with simps. gonna help your letter structure

[Tempo718]

sadgeh- PLEASE keep posting! Its been along time since someone who could benefit from advice has showed up. Keep yo mind open to critisism and apply. I try the best I can to do so but I still suck. Maybe you do better, good luck!
- Dam dude this page turned out some burners aside from a few pix that lack worthiness glad I have'nt posted yet I think I'll wait til' next page lol


Edit: <----- Previous page ma fault heh well time to get to sketchin then right?

[ribcage]

there were no burners on that last page

[Colors]

exactly ribcage. tempo you cant tell the difference between whats good and whats not maybe thats why your not progressing man

[snal]

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some shit i sketched in my classes...with a pen and fax marker..took me 40 minutes,I tried to keep it simpleany crits ? :D

[ribcage]

not really, theres flaws to your letters, but their not major, keep on with letters like that

[Beko]

messed up alittle on the 3D but overall i like it! crits please!
without clouds.
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with clouds.
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[pocket]

any crits ? :D

i like it man, but maybe the U on tough and C on fuckers have little gaps of negative space that mess with the flow a little. if the left hand leg of the U kinda curved to the right at the top a little it might help.




messed up alittle on the 3D but overall i like it! crits please!

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is really cool man, love the japenese symbol, if you added some oranges/yellows or other shades of red into the 3d it might look more like the magma core and be awesome.

[pocket]

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Crits? I know I most definitely hate the R and the 3D. Haha. Oh well. It was a 45 min piece that I kind of rushed through.

maybe try raising the R up a little and have the top of the E go through the hole on the R if that makes sense? and bring the right leg of the R in a little

[pocket]

messing around just now, started with basic blocks and this is my first step towards making it interesting BUT i feel i'm lost right off the bat with the D.

and plan of moving the N so it doesn't look like its behind the D

any crits/suggestions appreciated

[ribcage]

yes, dont fuckin triple post.

said I wasnt gonna finish, but I did. fucked my sharpie freebie hella bad, couldnt fit an H, and the R and C are doodoo
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[SynOne]

Pocket - use bars. Go look at the new to graffiti thread. Read it all. Learn how structure works. Ohh and on bekos piece that's not a Chinese letter. That's a shitty fucked up B that is ugly as Fuck.

Ribcage - sick ass exchange you got there. Yeah I would have cropped that at the bottom out if I were you. But I'm not even that good so. It's not near as bad as half the flicks in this thread.

I got 2 simps ima upload when i get to a comp. I cant do it on my phone that i know of.

[ribcage]

yeah, not to be an ass, but my fucked up freestyle, rapes anything uve ever done

[Beko]

synone- im pretty sure he was talking about the O in orange. that pencil one was just like a 1 second sketch getting and idea for where to start. so stfu

[SynOne]

Not disagreeing Rib. I know it does. I know my place. But i do know I'm definitely not even close to the biggest toy on this forum.

[ribcage]

not anymore...

[Colors]

crit it. i bump myself
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[SynOne]

Crit them. My coloring skills are that of a 5 year old.. sorry.

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[dave the pirate]

@Skewt last one is pretty fresh
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[.Cuore]

@skewt: no me gusta el handstyle