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Tempo718
11-21-2011, 10:17 PM
dope

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-21-2011, 10:17 PM
41975
Rokadishu, one of urs kinda gave me this idea... albeit, incomporable.

rewz
11-21-2011, 10:17 PM
nah gees man ill wip one up for ya just give me a little bit

rewz
11-21-2011, 10:18 PM
41975
Rokadishu, one of urs kinda gave me this idea... albeit, incomporable.
First rule...... letter structure, it would be a lot more easier then that

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-21-2011, 10:20 PM
what do you mean by letter structure though?

dankbudz
11-21-2011, 10:22 PM
quick as hell freestyle, both S's areeeent too pretty

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-21-2011, 10:29 PM
Idk if i can do this shit well, Ill prolly never be able to do a piece... ive just never had been able to make art. BUT damn, do I have fuck tons of ideas

rewz
11-21-2011, 10:31 PM
hey talk like that and your shits ganna go down hill, i been doing this shit for a while and when i mean a while since like idk 6th grade i think, look at my old old old old posts from a while ago. see how bad i was. shit man ill even post my tinypic so you can see all my old shit

rewz
11-21-2011, 10:37 PM
http://tinypic.com/usermedia.php?uo=u3L5ZvFm2l6JzNdhPRLb0Yh4l5k2TGxc

go all the way to my first shit man

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-21-2011, 10:37 PM
hey talk like that and your shits ganna go down hill, i been doing this shit for a while and when i mean a while since like idk 6th grade i think, look at my old old old old posts from a while ago. see how bad i was. shit man ill even post my tinypic so you can see all my old shit
I know the negative talk aint doin me any good. But, ive taken art class for years and never had any improvement. But, I was doin graffiti words in my notebooks at class. Long before I ever got into graffiti.

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-21-2011, 10:39 PM
http://tinypic.com/usermedia.php?uo=u3L5ZvFm2l6JzNdhPRLb0Yh4l5k2TGxc

go all the way to my first shit man
That doesnt look bad at all.

rewz
11-21-2011, 10:45 PM
ill post up letter structure for you alright?

Tempo718
11-21-2011, 10:47 PM
build that shit like a skyscraper! bom bom

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-21-2011, 10:49 PM
allright. thanks

rewz
11-21-2011, 10:50 PM
this is letter structure. its letters broken in bars, if one line of the bar bens one way the other line should go with it. copy your key board and then start making slight adjustments
41980

TastyMcNasty
11-21-2011, 11:24 PM
some one wanna exchange

i will man, you still writing nark?

rewz
11-21-2011, 11:41 PM
41981

mues exchange. yo wheres mine man

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-22-2011, 12:42 AM
I did a throw up of that pic I posted. I think it came out allright.
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?5058-tot-throwies./page827

41975
Rokadishu, one of urs kinda gave me this idea... albeit, incomporable.

PETER
11-22-2011, 09:14 AM
i will man, you still writing nark?
are you calling him out or did he really write that shit?

TastyMcNasty
11-22-2011, 03:11 PM
are you calling him out or did he really write that shit?

he really writes nark.

theking
11-22-2011, 03:24 PM
ruhig let me sum it up: THAT IS SCARY

spiltink
11-22-2011, 03:34 PM
ruhig let me sum it up: THAT IS SCARY

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_cVXPJYulx_g/TPEGKZfZxCI/AAAAAAAAD_s/GMVWV5Ridh8/s400/courage-the-cowardly-dog_20883_1.jpg

Lado
11-22-2011, 03:49 PM
41981

mues exchange. yo wheres mine man

The second half of the 'M' I'd say is your weakest part of the piece. And idk about that extra bar on top of the 'E' either. Idk though, just me maybe

EWL24
11-22-2011, 03:56 PM
^^
i agree, but i do love that S

rewz
11-22-2011, 04:37 PM
yea sorry it was my third piece in a row last night

ribcage
11-22-2011, 07:52 PM
^good shit, seein that just put me in a drawing mood.

MN Nice
11-22-2011, 09:19 PM
Using my old prismas was a bad choice.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00460-20111122-2117.jpg?t=1322018333

Takeiteasy
11-22-2011, 10:38 PM
42170

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-23-2011, 02:21 AM
I tried doing this thing on this site here. http://www.mrwiggles.biz/how_to_construct_a_letter.htm
Tell me how I did.42204

.Cuore
11-23-2011, 02:32 AM
http://memegenerator.net/cache/instances/400x/11/11332/11604316.jpg

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-23-2011, 02:35 AM
fuck you. Its not like I said it was good. I'm here to learn. If you want to be an asshole, take it somewhere else. This is the "TOY" section.

.Cuore
11-23-2011, 02:42 AM
And I had every intention of reviewing and giving you crits until you posted that link to some shit called 'Mr Wiggles: The phattest hip hop...' something or rather and I became disinterested and decided to reply in a humorous fashion. Start with simps and straight bars of equal lengths and forget those quick-and-easy bullshit guides you find on these obscureass websites. That's my advice to you.

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-23-2011, 02:45 AM
I just googled graffiti basics. Maybe I was too hasty to snap at you. Just gettin tired of takin shit today. and thanks.

ribcage
11-23-2011, 05:07 AM
just today?? cause by the looks of it you been takin shit to the face your whole life

MN Nice
11-23-2011, 07:44 AM
Using my old prismas was a bad choice.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00460-20111122-2117.jpg?t=1322018333
Bump

Takeiteasy
11-23-2011, 08:46 AM
just today?? cause by the looks of it you been takin shit to the face your whole life Atta boy. Feed the flames! Lulz.

sadgeh
11-23-2011, 09:31 AM
Ill post up some shit later today, whao long time ago i did.

@Ruhig keep practising and dont look at Mr. Wiggles.
@MN Nice i like it but the R is too much behind the A. The lowest bar of the E i dont know how to say but i dont like it.

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-23-2011, 11:54 AM
just today?? cause by the looks of it you been takin shit to the face your whole life
sorta true. howd you tell?

ribcage
11-23-2011, 01:25 PM
you got shit in ya teeth

H1P30N3R
11-23-2011, 02:08 PM
Dis diiiicckk!!

spiltink
11-23-2011, 02:13 PM
this is the first time i tried a style like this

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2561.JPG

ribcage
11-23-2011, 02:17 PM
you a fool, you know whats worse than getting dis dicked? saying dis dick at the wrong time, or dis dicking someone who didnt fall for it.

How to play dis dick:
ask someone a question or something. if they answer a question or statement with a question i.e. What, Who, When, where, why, or any sort of question, than you can dis dick em.

Example:
me- you know how to get to 8th and shmiglsmad?
you- "what?"
me- dis dick

example of doing it wrong:
me- mn nice sucks fat cock
you-"dis dick"

^^doesnt work
42233
sharpie freebie for rules

PETER
11-23-2011, 02:55 PM
he really writes nark. Man that's brilliant!!!!

Takeiteasy
11-23-2011, 03:04 PM
Crits my last pic please and thanks. I have some ideas as what i have to fix and work on.

spiltink
11-23-2011, 03:07 PM
i thought dis dick is whats in my pants and goes in your mouth

ribcage
11-23-2011, 03:36 PM
yo when you can think of something funny to say, come back. until further notice im going to ignore you for being many things, retarded being the one that bugs me the most

H1P30N3R
11-23-2011, 03:41 PM
I meant it more as a reference to you rib

spiltink
11-23-2011, 03:45 PM
yo when you can think of something funny to say, come back. until further notice im going to ignore you for being many things, retarded being the one that bugs me the most

lol are you made?

ribcage
11-23-2011, 04:36 PM
I meant it more as a reference to you rib

ooo well you should have said "this" dick

Tempo718
11-23-2011, 04:48 PM
reach - did we ever do an xchange b4? would u be wit it?

spiltink
11-23-2011, 05:16 PM
reach - did we ever do an xchange b4? would u be wit it?

if you want to contact him and hes not on here i have his facebook he he he...

just look for this guy
http://profile.ak.fbcdn.net/hprofile-ak-ash2/368706_100001540101387_606625388_n.jpg

that is the finger he uses for pushing up bumholes

ribcage
11-23-2011, 05:26 PM
reach - did we ever do an xchange b4? would u be wit it?
what you write, i could put it on the list

Beko
11-23-2011, 06:09 PM
tryn a new style! i normally do simps but i thought i would try to do one more complacated!
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6220/6391871879_f8de40e686_z.jpg

Colors
11-23-2011, 06:15 PM
Real quick 2 letter
42259

TBS
11-23-2011, 06:45 PM
Beko, stick to the simples at the moment.
Tempo, that looks like a bad 'REN'

ribcage
11-23-2011, 07:15 PM
for real tempo? When you ask someone to exchange with you, you should put some effort into it, and not do some half assed bullshit. If your as old as you say you are, then why does everything you do literally look like its from an 8 year old? Not even trolling right now, im serious, you draw and speak like an 8 year old. next time you draw, do something that has worth, not something my dog wouldnt wipe its ass with

unfinished waste of time.
42268

SynOne
11-23-2011, 07:27 PM
Yo Ribcage. I'll throw an exchange that way. You know what I write.

ribcage
11-23-2011, 07:50 PM
no thanks, ive had enough bogus exchanges for one day. And I still owe people some, i just did that one cause I was already drawing.

dave the pirate
11-23-2011, 07:54 PM
Ed GEIN And @ tasty mcnasty yep i still am pm or some shit what you write also slotr ahaah dude i still owe one :p

42269

SynOne
11-23-2011, 08:35 PM
Lol Reach, I did it anyways. Huge dead spot right on the E and 3D's off. But so be it. Get around to mine after everyone else.

42270

Ruhig Der Sankt
11-23-2011, 08:51 PM
you a fool, you know whats worse than getting dis dicked? saying dis dick at the wrong time, or dis dicking someone who didnt fall for it.

How to play dis dick:
ask someone a question or something. if they answer a question or statement with a question i.e. What, Who, When, where, why, or any sort of question, than you can dis dick em.

Example:
me- you know how to get to 8th and shmiglsmad?
you- "what?"
me- dis dick

example of doing it wrong:
me- mn nice sucks fat cock
you-"dis dick"

^^doesnt work
42233
sharpie freebie for rules

We had a thing like that in my town, except we said "show you right"

Tempo718
11-23-2011, 08:53 PM
ay you know somethin yall right im gonna redo tha for reach cause that is bogus as hell ma bad.

Beko
11-23-2011, 09:09 PM
tempo- did you not notice that the first time????? like wtf bro! i can do better than that an i just started!! more effert woulsd be nice when your doing an exchange! i would be pissed if that happened to me!

Colors
11-23-2011, 09:27 PM
woah beko not much room to talk and calm down on the beef its not even your exchange, although i agree that the piece is not all that great haha maybe another try tempo with a little more effort

Beko
11-23-2011, 09:32 PM
lol sorry i just let out a lot of frustration on him, but i edited so no affending anyone sorry!

Beko
11-23-2011, 09:51 PM
COLORS- the D looks a lot like an O if it wasnt for you saying naked i would think it was NAKEO. but the rest of the letters i like a lot! but on the E i dont like those pointy little spikes they just dont go with the rest of it. and just some of those random straight blue lines without the fades just dont look appealing to me!

i would also enjoy some crits please!
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6024/5986541716_3e615e52c1_z.jpg

Colors
11-23-2011, 09:58 PM
Bek just use wicked simple stuff dont go for all that arrow jazz just regular letters with no flair for now, and dont outline each individual bar, if you know what i mean? like in that piece dont outline the bars inside the letter like in the middle of the k where all the bars meet. look at my piece i guess for the outline

Tempo718
11-23-2011, 10:08 PM
42274
arright reach look man, u write i had 2 slow it down n' put a good light on so I could see wat im doin lol. the last one was half ass wont deny it. sry bout that but I did try to focus wit this much more but it only a start jus a pencil outline so... any thoughts where to go wit it?

Colors
11-23-2011, 10:10 PM
tempo just restart with wicked simple letters. remember bar consistency and stay simple. use bars

Beko
11-23-2011, 10:27 PM
the legs on the R, A, and H just dont look good

Tempo718
11-23-2011, 11:20 PM
42276
well I did not plan on this to turn out so bizzare looking, I did fit all the letters but yet plenty to improve on no doubt. my C turnd a lil E'ish and that is just the tip of the iceburg, once I got started I just started adding on mad diff ish... anyways sorry to dissapoint fellas. I'll just keep trying

Colors
11-23-2011, 11:26 PM
tempoooo dude bar consistency! keep all the bars the same size and go simple

Tempo718
11-23-2011, 11:28 PM
they over lap 2 much? is that wat u sayin

Colors
11-23-2011, 11:33 PM
no look at the left side of your R. wiiiicked fat bar. now look at the leg of your R, thats like 1/3 the size. keep all the bars the same width

Tempo718
11-23-2011, 11:34 PM
hmm okay

SynOne
11-23-2011, 11:36 PM
As my exchange wasn't the best either. Nor am I good. At this point... This thread still makes me want to punch myself in the face.

Colors - That left leg on that N needs fixing. I wouldn't bend it that way. I would keep it straight. It seems to mess the entire letter. Your A and K are the best letters. The bottom of your E is all fucked. The D looks like an O you need to straighten out the left side of it.

H1P30N3R
11-23-2011, 11:39 PM
tempo that reach is fire bro

Colors
11-23-2011, 11:39 PM
and yeah they do overlap too much also. just keep them the same size(the letters and bars) and GO SIMPLE hah

H1P30N3R
11-23-2011, 11:42 PM
keep doin what your doing is what tempo is reading from what anyone who crits his work says

SynOne
11-23-2011, 11:46 PM
^ Yo. You need to punctuate. I had to re-read that shit like 3 times before I understood what you said.

H1P30N3R
11-23-2011, 11:47 PM
true, my bad im high and ramblin.

Colors
11-23-2011, 11:52 PM
hahahaha truth hipe

.Cuore
11-24-2011, 12:08 AM
^ Yo. You need to punctuate. I had to re-read that shit like 3 times before I understood what you said.

lol word me too

rewz
11-24-2011, 12:39 AM
Tempo. You need to keep that shit simple or there's ganna be no improvement. O and yes use letter structure

spiltink
11-24-2011, 12:11 PM
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2561.JPG
this is the first time i have ever do something like this

2mor
11-24-2011, 04:11 PM
4234142338 first an old simp from a long while ago, and then second ones basic outline for what im gna paint later, whats ya think?

2mor
11-24-2011, 04:12 PM
other way round*

TastyMcNasty
11-24-2011, 05:45 PM
almost everyone in this thread needs to go more simple.

havent posted anything in a bit. crits always appreciated

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2468.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2469.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2470.jpg

MN Nice
11-24-2011, 06:07 PM
You got a fresh style developing. Try to fill your negative space in the N and A on the nark piece.

TastyMcNasty
11-24-2011, 07:07 PM
thanks man, took a while of fucking around to get. and as for the nark piece, thats only the rough on, ima try and fill that space somehow on the good one

chen
11-24-2011, 08:30 PM
42352

dankbudz
11-24-2011, 08:32 PM
boredom simple. crits?


tasty- that Kunt piece is fillth, the Nark is getting there, you just gotta smooth some bars out and pull it together like you did the KUNT piece.
chen- you should draw more

Beko
11-24-2011, 09:38 PM
should've got rud of those bars:/
42354

dankbudz
11-24-2011, 10:28 PM
yeah dude i wish i did, coulda looked perty funky. gunna leave it till next time

Beko
11-24-2011, 10:32 PM
haha i was taln bout mine ^_^ but yours too! lol

dankbudz
11-24-2011, 10:39 PM
hahah oh... awkward
but yo, on yours you should make those letters more simple. like on the B, you dont need that flat part on teh bottom curve. and that E would look alot better if it was uncovered and didnt have the top extension. Just work on that K and CONNECT THE BARS. also i think it would look dope with the O at the end. that is, if you write BEKO

Beko
11-24-2011, 10:40 PM
yeah i just started written BEKO so ill have to work on getten O's in my pieces!

dankbudz
11-24-2011, 10:43 PM
which is why you shoulda put it in that piece, hombre. get that practice in, ya dig?

Beko
11-24-2011, 10:47 PM
yeah im just so used to writing BEK that i forget the O :X lol

snal
11-25-2011, 12:06 PM
42392
some shit i sketched in my classes...with a pen and fax marker..took me 40 minutes,I tried to keep it simple

Takeiteasy
11-25-2011, 03:01 PM
42418 Crit this shit jive turkeys.

Colors
11-25-2011, 03:26 PM
takeiteasy - go simpler some of those extentions look weird like on the bottom of the a and bottom of the sand that line that goes through the back just looks random, and maybe just make regular e's. go simpler is the moral haha
Beko- Dude when i said dont outline each individual bar i mean like dont outline the whole bar when your doing the black. Dont outline where the bars meet

Tempo718
11-25-2011, 03:30 PM
takeit - that is fresh as hell stick wit same concept but fit it on the page better maybe

Colors
11-25-2011, 03:32 PM
what?^ im not saying that the piece is horrible but i wouldnt say fresh as hell hahaha

Tempo718
11-25-2011, 03:33 PM
I would enjoy crits on the naked
42271
dude what the hell... is that a pencil blocking the pic on the left side?! retake the pic or somn

Edit: yeaa an that is true Fresh as hell is some next shit .... lol

Colors
11-25-2011, 03:36 PM
no thats a finger hahaha and its not like your missing much. dont have the book its in so i cant retake one

Colors
11-25-2011, 03:51 PM
BEKO -Cleanliness and effort were 2 things i didnt put in but this is just to show you what to do with your oultine
42419

Takeiteasy
11-25-2011, 04:11 PM
Thanks for the crits fellas. Did you mean lower case e's? I agree with the bar in the background. I was supposed to take it out but accidentally started outlining it so I kept it. Color choice and 3D look ok?

Colors
11-25-2011, 04:15 PM
yeah i wouldnt worry about colors too much for now but looks good to me. and i dont use 3d so im the last person to ask for that haha sorry. Nah for the E's i mean regular ones like the e i just typed not like that 3 looking thing. just simple for now.But thats a good point if you start out with capital letters make em all capital, and same for lower case it just helps with the flow usually. but im your piece you did it all capital

TastyMcNasty
11-25-2011, 04:38 PM
almost everyone in this thread needs to go more simple.

havent posted anything in a bit. crits always appreciated

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2468.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2469.jpg

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMG_2470.jpg


bumping for crits

Colors
11-25-2011, 04:43 PM
I like the kunt piece but idk if this is just me or if i cant tell good style but it seems your bars have way too many kinks in them in the other pieces. Idk maybe its fine, but through my eyes it looks weird

Takeiteasy
11-25-2011, 06:17 PM
I prefer the Nark piece. It's just a little cluttered between the A and R. The kunt piece is good, I like the style but it seems a bit all over the place. I would like to see it with a full size U just for reference.

Takeiteasy
11-25-2011, 06:18 PM
42420

Crits? I know I most definitely hate the R and the 3D. Haha. Oh well. It was a 45 min piece that I kind of rushed through.

MN Nice
11-25-2011, 06:31 PM
All the letters are pretty weak. Define your A more, and work on how to fully understand bars in letters.

Colors
11-25-2011, 07:38 PM
unfinished because i am so cool
42441

aaesoo
11-26-2011, 12:52 AM
http://i1199.photobucket.com/albums/aa468/aeso6/11262011184.jpg
http://i1199.photobucket.com/albums/aa468/aeso6/11262011185.jpg
http://i1199.photobucket.com/albums/aa468/aeso6/11262011183.jpg
schools productive as fuck for me lol.

SkateJunt
11-26-2011, 09:33 AM
AESO love those straights
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6037/6405551503_8cf7d1265a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6405551503/)
Picture 109 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6405551503/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

sadgeh
11-26-2011, 10:39 AM
42491
42492
42493
42494
42495
42496
42497
42498
42499
42500
42501
42502
42503
42504
42505

Some work is old, some not.

sadgeh
11-26-2011, 10:45 AM
42506
42507
42508

forget this.

Beko
11-26-2011, 12:56 PM
Crits please! something im doing for the gf. whatcha think! all new letters besides the E and O

42518
VVVVVV TBS- i really like all of those!! the only thing i dont like is the squigly line in the A and the color choices of the 3rd one! but other than that i like em mate!

TBS
11-26-2011, 12:57 PM
Edit: Deleted and re-posted a better quality image.

Sadgeh, some of your stuff's alright. just remember to keep an eye on that 3D though. some of the pieces are pretty cool but the 3D's off and it ruins them.

Reach, had a go at your letters. now that i look at it i shoulda fattened up the first leg of that R... infact, i shoulda done a better R altogether!!
42519

sadgeh
11-26-2011, 01:04 PM
Yea i know but i dont even now how to do that 3d, so maybe some1 has some tips therefore.

Tbs- Looking good, but the H is a lil bit bigger than the others, but overall it looks very clean.
Beko- where is the V. But i like the connections.

Beko
11-26-2011, 01:13 PM
sadgeh- its behind the heart and ontop of the E its like blended in with it

TBS
11-26-2011, 01:28 PM
Beko the V is too hidden,

Sadgeh, what you're doing is alright, just remember to keep it clean

dest1
11-26-2011, 02:20 PM
Edit: Deleted and re-posted a better quality image.

Sadgeh, some of your stuff's alright. just remember to keep an eye on that 3D though. some of the pieces are pretty cool but the 3D's off and it ruins them.

Reach, had a go at your letters. now that i look at it i shoulda fattened up the first leg of that R... infact, i shoulda done a better R altogether!!
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very nice take at reach, i like it, the E is actually my least fav, i like that R. all personal taste i guess.

Colors
11-26-2011, 02:36 PM
this was an exchange but hey crit it
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Beko
11-26-2011, 03:32 PM
with colored pencils.... probally couldve done without the little extensions on the B and O but it just looked out of place on both sides because they were so flat. wells crits and tips please! i really like this tyle i just need to IMPROVE it!
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7143/6407307685_28f9925902_z.jpg

Colors
11-26-2011, 03:36 PM
beko before you go trying any style start out with simps. gonna help your letter structure

Tempo718
11-26-2011, 03:40 PM
sadgeh- PLEASE keep posting! Its been along time since someone who could benefit from advice has showed up. Keep yo mind open to critisism and apply. I try the best I can to do so but I still suck. Maybe you do better, good luck!
- Dam dude this page turned out some burners aside from a few pix that lack worthiness glad I have'nt posted yet I think I'll wait til' next page lol


Edit: <----- Previous page ma fault heh well time to get to sketchin then right?

ribcage
11-26-2011, 03:51 PM
there were no burners on that last page

Colors
11-26-2011, 03:51 PM
exactly ribcage. tempo you cant tell the difference between whats good and whats not maybe thats why your not progressing man

snal
11-26-2011, 04:03 PM
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some shit i sketched in my classes...with a pen and fax marker..took me 40 minutes,I tried to keep it simpleany crits ? :D

ribcage
11-26-2011, 04:49 PM
not really, theres flaws to your letters, but their not major, keep on with letters like that

Beko
11-26-2011, 05:10 PM
messed up alittle on the 3D but overall i like it! crits please!
without clouds.
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with clouds.
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pocket
11-26-2011, 05:13 PM
any crits ? :D

i like it man, but maybe the U on tough and C on fuckers have little gaps of negative space that mess with the flow a little. if the left hand leg of the U kinda curved to the right at the top a little it might help.




messed up alittle on the 3D but overall i like it! crits please!

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is really cool man, love the japenese symbol, if you added some oranges/yellows or other shades of red into the 3d it might look more like the magma core and be awesome.

pocket
11-26-2011, 05:19 PM
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Crits? I know I most definitely hate the R and the 3D. Haha. Oh well. It was a 45 min piece that I kind of rushed through.

maybe try raising the R up a little and have the top of the E go through the hole on the R if that makes sense? and bring the right leg of the R in a little

pocket
11-26-2011, 05:41 PM
messing around just now, started with basic blocks and this is my first step towards making it interesting BUT i feel i'm lost right off the bat with the D.

and plan of moving the N so it doesn't look like its behind the D

any crits/suggestions appreciated

ribcage
11-26-2011, 06:11 PM
yes, dont fuckin triple post.

said I wasnt gonna finish, but I did. fucked my sharpie freebie hella bad, couldnt fit an H, and the R and C are doodoo
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SynOne
11-26-2011, 06:14 PM
Pocket - use bars. Go look at the new to graffiti thread. Read it all. Learn how structure works. Ohh and on bekos piece that's not a Chinese letter. That's a shitty fucked up B that is ugly as Fuck.

Ribcage - sick ass exchange you got there. Yeah I would have cropped that at the bottom out if I were you. But I'm not even that good so. It's not near as bad as half the flicks in this thread.

I got 2 simps ima upload when i get to a comp. I cant do it on my phone that i know of.

ribcage
11-26-2011, 06:27 PM
yeah, not to be an ass, but my fucked up freestyle, rapes anything uve ever done

Beko
11-26-2011, 06:29 PM
synone- im pretty sure he was talking about the O in orange. that pencil one was just like a 1 second sketch getting and idea for where to start. so stfu

SynOne
11-26-2011, 08:19 PM
Not disagreeing Rib. I know it does. I know my place. But i do know I'm definitely not even close to the biggest toy on this forum.

ribcage
11-26-2011, 08:23 PM
not anymore...

Colors
11-26-2011, 08:35 PM
crit it. i bump myself
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SynOne
11-26-2011, 08:36 PM
Crit them. My coloring skills are that of a 5 year old.. sorry.

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dave the pirate
11-26-2011, 09:39 PM
@Skewt last one is pretty fresh
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.Cuore
11-26-2011, 09:53 PM
@skewt: no me gusta el handstyle

SynOne
11-26-2011, 10:20 PM
Cool you don't like the handstyle. Not what im wanting crits on. How about critting the actual work Ffs.

Dave - Nice work. On the top one that E needs work. The bottom one that last letter which I think is a R. You can't even really tell what it is because it is so covered by the extra detailing and drips. I wouldn't have put that many drips between the left and right leg. It makes it blend to much. Bolden up that outline. You can tell you are putting in time on the work. Keep it up.

Takeiteasy
11-27-2011, 12:26 AM
Rib and Syn, fuck you guys. Hahaha. You two are my inspiration. I will be biting everything you do from here on. Lulz. Pics from my ne piece tomorrow night.

Takeiteasy
11-27-2011, 12:31 AM
Colors, I'm digging that Week piece. Good shit. Bars look clean.

ribcage
11-27-2011, 01:01 AM
putting me and syn in the same sentence is an insult. Unless the sentence goes something like "rib has waaay bigger cock than syn." or "Syn sucks muthafuckin donkey dicks, rib though, he okay."

SynOne
11-27-2011, 01:21 AM
^ Ayo fuck you lol. My shits getting cleaner and better. I'm improving.

ribcage
11-27-2011, 01:28 AM
...clean? HA!

BennyBoii
11-27-2011, 01:40 AM
putting me and syn in the same sentence is an insult. Unless the sentence goes something like "rib has waaay bigger cock than syn." or "Syn sucks muthafuckin donkey dicks, rib though, he okay."
i lol'd

SynOne
11-27-2011, 02:12 AM
^ Yeah no shit I lol'd pretty hard too.

Ribcage - As I said "Cleaner" not clean. I know my shit's not clean. But I'm trying. At least I apply crits when they're given.

Bump for crits.


Crit them. My coloring skills are that of a 5 year old.. sorry.

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42554
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Takeiteasy
11-27-2011, 02:17 AM
Rib, sorry I hurt your ego. Haha. I like Syn's shit in the sense of how far he's come. Shits looking good and I hope to be as good some day. Rib, your shit has also improved, but you're nasty. You've certainly found yourself and your style. I'm envious and happy for you. I sure hope to some day be in your shoes. I've got drawing to do. Haha.

MN Nice
11-27-2011, 02:20 AM
lol the man to man love is heavy tonight. Little kids on a big boy jock.

Takeiteasy
11-27-2011, 02:24 AM
lol the man to man love is heavy tonight. Little kids on a big boy jock. Hahaha. Shut up before I bite your shit aka Ribs shit. J/k. Hahaha.

MN Nice
11-27-2011, 02:29 AM
Fuck off. That shits dead and doesn't even involve you. Rib pointed it out and I fixed it.

H1P30N3R
11-27-2011, 02:31 AM
these guys lol... man i miss all the cats that use to post when i first joined .This place is dead now days

Takeiteasy
11-27-2011, 02:32 AM
Dude, I was seriously only joking. I don't mean to offend. Just being a ball buster. Just like its been said before, I know my place. Just trying to have some fun. That's all man.

MN Nice
11-27-2011, 02:38 AM
Trolled :cool:

Phat 2
11-27-2011, 02:58 AM
Hahaha. Shut up before I bite your shit aka Ribs shit. J/k. Hahaha.
rofl take it easy, takeiteasy

SynOne
11-27-2011, 02:59 AM
^ Nah cmon mues we know you bit the Fuck outa him on purpose.

Wait this isn't toy chat. Let's get some crits n flicks rolling in this bitch so we can improve before we die.

Takeiteasy
11-27-2011, 03:00 AM
For sure. Haha. Now piss off, I've got writing to do. Haha. Actually, I'm moving. I've got packing to do when I wake up. New shit to come soon.

Takeiteasy
11-27-2011, 03:07 AM
^ Nah cmon mues we know you bit the Fuck outa him on purpose.

Wait this isn't toy chat. Let's get some crits n flicks rolling in this bitch so we can improve before we die. Point taken. Word.

MN Nice
11-27-2011, 03:12 AM
^ Nah cmon mues we know you bit the Fuck outa him on purpose.

Wait this isn't toy chat. Let's get some crits n flicks rolling in this bitch so we can improve before we die.

lol like you should talk, you can't even get a clean tag yet.

pic for talk

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00464-20111127-0209.jpg?t=1322381636

Beko
11-27-2011, 04:07 AM
i realy like these colors! crits please!
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pocket
11-27-2011, 04:56 AM
beko, either don't use the same silver for the 3D lines if you're going to use it for the letter outline, or just have less 3d lines.

sadgeh
11-27-2011, 05:58 AM
Beko -thats many silver.

And more flicks instead of talking guys.

knowtheledge
11-27-2011, 12:37 PM
http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=42574&d=1322388408

beko, try spacing out your letters by giving em some more room and not so much overlap..and as a generic crit keep the bar widths consistent and post more outlines first

tryna get more pics up in here since most of these toy threads are dead

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7147/6412901569_aed6f7d650_z.jpg

Takeiteasy
11-27-2011, 02:09 PM
At first glance I thought you wrote "Nrike" Haha. Shit is sick.

SynOne
11-27-2011, 02:53 PM
Knowtheledge - Drop some 3d on that. It'd look sick with a light colored fill.

Mues - I was messing with ya. But no doubt I haven't put any time in my tag. I should get one down instead of pieces and throwies.

knowtheledge
11-27-2011, 08:38 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7032/6415731117_9bda2bbc9f_z.jpg

my m looks like an st.. stuke yo!

Strange Journeys
11-27-2011, 11:19 PM
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did a canvas with savek a while ago, didnt like what i did so i went over it with this Crits please!
i have some shitty bars and the extensions are wierd, maybe because of lack of space

beko do some simple fills for now, thats ugly
damn muke you got some weird stuff i dont even know what to crit, define your m i guess

Mori
11-28-2011, 08:38 AM
that bottom one burns

ribcage
11-28-2011, 01:48 PM
idk about burns, but it scrapes yours strange. too much negative space on your d and b

@knowledge, extension and add on look awful

dave the pirate
11-28-2011, 03:44 PM
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SynOne
11-28-2011, 03:50 PM
Crit them. My coloring skills are that of a 5 year old.. sorry.

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42555

Yet again. Bump for some crits. And ffs. Don't crit the handstyle. I know it's bad.

dave the pirate
11-28-2011, 03:51 PM
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SynOne
11-28-2011, 03:57 PM
Dave that shit is nice. I'd say the arrows on the N do not work though. And on the character. Normally you seem to make your K a character or something. And I don't see it this time. Where is that K at bro?

dave the pirate
11-28-2011, 03:59 PM
on the dudes hat

spiltink
11-28-2011, 04:00 PM
this is the first time i ever done style like this

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2564.JPG

spiltink
11-28-2011, 04:00 PM
this is the first time i ever done style like this

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/100_2564.JPG

always crushin
11-28-2011, 05:58 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/skws21.jpg

SkateJunt
11-28-2011, 06:38 PM
any crits on these?
http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6223/6419456449_a7a001c63a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6419456449/)
Picture 113 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6419456449/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7011/6419456779_1da0021be2.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6419456779/)
Picture 115 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6419456779/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7003/6419456635_2339176e75.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6419456635/)
Picture 114 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6419456635/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

always crushin
11-28-2011, 10:04 PM
dope shit in here
Just finished a sketched i started a few days ago.
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/skws21.jpg
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/skws23.jpg
older one
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/skws24.jpg

SynOne
11-29-2011, 07:06 AM
Crushing - Your style is ILLLL. But one thing I've noticed in all of your pieces. Your L always seems to be too hidden or crammed into the S to much.

Skate - Drop that R/K/Whatthefuckeverthatis. And look down at your keyboard. Draw those letters.

Dave - I see the K now. But that damn sure looks like a R. Probably just picture quality fucked that up.

SkateJunt
11-29-2011, 07:11 AM
yup i know. I draw so many dam straights every day, no use in posting those, they all look almost the same, I like to experiment too. Il never get anywhere if i dont, for instance, I drew that R and i now know that doesnt work

SynOne
11-29-2011, 07:25 AM
Do simples. Look at the way some of the users post pieces that are simple letters. And yet they still have flow and what not. Ribcage is by far the best in Toy Forums I've seen at simples. Start doing those. But make sure you understand how your letter structure works before you start them. Or they WILL look fucked.

SkateJunt
11-29-2011, 07:43 AM
thanks, yeah ribcages simps are smoooth as hell, i see what your saying, I need to work on flow, i kinda forget that sometimes

dave the pirate
11-29-2011, 04:00 PM
43010

dave the pirate
11-29-2011, 04:04 PM
Diver

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SynOne
11-29-2011, 07:03 PM
Got around to coloring this one. Crit it

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Dave - Nice fresh shit. Watch the 3D though. It's off in a couple spots.

TBS
11-29-2011, 08:22 PM
Dave, im lovin that second piece. Just needs a lil tweakin in a few places. First piece is good too though a little too much going on for my liking.
Skewt, keep an eye on the width of your bars.

No pics im afraid. Spent all day playing with my new phone.

Shit Outta Luck
11-29-2011, 08:32 PM
Just some sketch I did in class...I'm trying to understand some things, and trying to understand what I want to become.
And yeah, the 3d and all the other shit are supposed to be off like they are...I was messing around

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Norfsuthr
11-29-2011, 09:16 PM
dave looking nice

http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6050/6428651651_90fdedfc94.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6428651651/)
oie_3041152OxG2iSgZ (http://www.flickr.com/photos/52108332@N02/6428651651/)

knowtheledge
11-29-2011, 09:29 PM
illin ^

http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6227/6311575398_a20fbd6808.jpg

http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6236/6311052003_59c62389b6.jpg

http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6230/6314474928_6a9026db6a.jpg

http://farm7.staticflickr.com/6051/6313957329_2f5356dd4c.jpg

SynOne
11-29-2011, 09:42 PM
Knowtheledge - Not feeling that last one. But the 2nd to last one. Needs to be finished.

Tempo718
11-29-2011, 11:28 PM
yes, dont fuckin triple post.

said I wasnt gonna finish, but I did. fucked my sharpie freebie hella bad, couldnt fit an H, and the R and C are doodoo
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looks dope was your vagina moist after it was finished? jk

Tempo718
11-29-2011, 11:37 PM
Tempo. You need to keep that shit simple or there's ganna be no improvement. O and yes use letter structure
cant face the truth is the tip of the iceberg

pocket
11-30-2011, 01:40 AM
Got around to coloring this one. Crit it

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I like it man, the W is a little straight and boring compared to the others.

ohsogreasy
11-30-2011, 11:27 AM
my black loptop counts as a blackbook right? here's something I did in a facebook battle recently, the 3d was done in photoshop, thats it. http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g468/funkyabstract/gotra.jpg

and here's this

http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g468/funkyabstract/zealot343jpg.jpg


**ALSO if anyone wants to do a full collab I'm looking for a partner to do like a black/white prodo with, so holler!

SkateJunt
11-30-2011, 05:17 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7142/6433309351_e319e7e4ed.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6433309351/)
Picture 116 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6433309351/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7172/6433308579_0f0b9155aa.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6433308579/)
Picture 118 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6433308579/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
this one wack as hell, but postin anyway, for my homie RESM, drew it in like 5 minutes in class
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7145/6433307739_b3fa8e0fbe.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6433307739/)
Picture 117 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6433307739/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Beko
11-30-2011, 09:30 PM
crits please! the k's leg may need some shortening up on the bottom.
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OctoVenom
12-01-2011, 12:17 AM
Props to everyone. Just keep at it dont give up. And your style will come natuarly trust me. Peace out whoop whoop

sanberdoo
12-01-2011, 01:05 AM
http://i128.photobucket.com/albums/p197/SKECHBARRERA/CIMG5247.jpg
wazzah! ha

SynOne
12-01-2011, 07:28 AM
Beko, your letters are overlapping to much, give them some room to breathe.

Svc
12-01-2011, 10:52 AM
hey im back, been about a year or so since ive been here, heres some of the latest
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PETER
12-01-2011, 01:46 PM
Beko. Take it easy, don't press so hard with the pencil. (it's easier to erase and fix, it doesn't leave "carbon copies" in the pages below it.) Your curved letters tend to get bulbous in parts for now try and keep them even. For example the bottom of the B and O. The center of the B where the two curved portions meet is a bit too thick. Try making it the width of the bar from the top. Keep it up.

SkateJunt
12-01-2011, 07:29 PM
how are my straights lookin?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7035/6439216277_ab5174080b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6439216277/)
Picture 120[/url[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6439386953/]http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7024/6439386953_a8ec05f278.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6439216277/)
Picture 121 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6439386953/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr] by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

sadgeh
12-02-2011, 10:08 AM
Looking like crap! The bar consistency is everywhere different, comon you must do straights like a real mafakka, check your keyboard.

PETER
12-02-2011, 02:16 PM
Naked exchange. crits for improvement?43676

SkateJunt
12-02-2011, 02:45 PM
more simps, didnt bother with 3d, and sadgeh ive been drawing my keyboard for the past 3 weeks, im trying to tweak the letters a bit
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7163/6443248599_6fb0a0bd19.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6443248599/)
Picture 122 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6443248599/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Phat 2
12-02-2011, 05:15 PM
need some serious crits from the serious and respectable boys on here (you mans know who you are)
this baby's planned to go on a sweet highway spot i got this sunday, gonna be about 115 ft. long (letters are gonna be hand-reaching height) and filled in with chrome

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/375252_323940257632890_100000507545549_1244831_147 8960100_n.jpg

hit me

always crushin
12-02-2011, 05:33 PM
just posting here cuz i dunno give yall something to look at?
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d99/-syke-/skws28.jpg

TBS
12-02-2011, 09:48 PM
Phat, just fuckin blast it out. Something that big's guna be awesome anyway. Only thing i'd say is space the letters out a little bit more. That is all!!

Oldie for chat,43737

Lado
12-02-2011, 10:18 PM
need some serious crits from the serious and respectable boys on here (you mans know who you are)
this baby's planned to go on a sweet highway spot i got this sunday, gonna be about 115 ft. long (letters are gonna be hand-reaching height) and filled in with chrome

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/375252_323940257632890_100000507545549_1244831_147 8960100_n.jpg

hit me

I'm not one of those guys, I don't think, but I think 'karma' could use a little tweaking to flow a little bit better, and the 'R' in 'Absorbing' can be defined a little bit more. Try making the look bigger and bring the leg back a little bit. These crits aren't too important, it'll look sweet no matter what. There was a huge highway piece in Jersey a while ago, I forget exactly but I think it was something like "Destroy-create-rebuild" or something like that. Looking forward to flicks of the finished product.

ribcage
12-02-2011, 10:27 PM
dont bring the middle of the m to the ground, bring it up a tad like where that bar crosses the a, give it more negative space, and watch those bar widths (A's & K's particulary look bad). There arent enough cracks either, makes it look like just a bunch of fucked up lines imo, doesnt really give it that cracked effect unless you use the perfect amount

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tra_kind_liar
12-02-2011, 10:58 PM
single "radical" vanishing point... i do not have color markers.. im waiting on jolly old saint consumerist (santa) to bring me some 43740

askew
12-02-2011, 11:18 PM
I've recently started doing some handstyles and working on a name. I finally settled on ENDS, but made the mistake of showing people the sketches of them etc. I have a couple other names I have in mind, and am wondering if I should change my name. Also, I have a picture of a couple quick handstyles of 3 different names looking for crits, etc.43743

tra_kind_liar
12-02-2011, 11:33 PM
I've recently started doing some handstyles and working on a name. I finally settled on ENDS, but made the mistake of showing people the sketches of them etc. I have a couple other names I have in mind, and am wondering if I should change my name. Also, I have a picture of a couple quick handstyles of 3 different names looking for crits, etc.43743

looks good.. go crazier + tie things together.. work out side your comfort zone...

EWL24
12-03-2011, 01:20 AM
tra kind liar - im sorry but that looks horrible i cant make out one letter, u need to just work on Key Board letter right now
askew - do not go crazier, and those should be in the toy tags thread, not here.
both u guys should also go check out the new to graffiti forum since u are both just starting

tra_kind_liar
12-03-2011, 02:09 AM
tra kind liar - im sorry but that looks horrible i cant make out one letter, u need to just work on Key Board letter right now
askew - do not go crazier, and those should be in the toy tags thread, not here.
both u guys should also go check out the new to graffiti forum since u are both just starting

wait wait... i was just doing random shapes, i didnt do letters..... well damn.. is this feed just for letters?

MN Nice
12-03-2011, 02:42 AM
This is graffiti. Rarely you'll find 3d pieces but otherwise yes, its letter based. And hold back on giving advice.

EWL24
12-03-2011, 10:39 AM
wait wait... i was just doing random shapes, i didnt do letters...
oh... well next time tell people it doesnt say anything

TBS
12-03-2011, 09:07 PM
Couple unfinished things, crits would be appreciated...
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x433/Stuedingwall4298/cc8f27de.jpg
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x433/Stuedingwall4298/6f4d447a.jpg
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x433/Stuedingwall4298/ebc3f156.jpg

ribcage
12-03-2011, 09:26 PM
the B and E on the second one is the only thing I like. what happened to the steaz like form your last battle entries?

some bullshit
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SynOne
12-03-2011, 11:10 PM
Phat I know I'm not one of those respectable men. So I'm not going to really crit it. But one thing I noticed was that the N in Absorbing seemed to be hidden to much.

Colors
12-04-2011, 12:47 PM
tempo do simple things like this.
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Phat 2
12-04-2011, 02:24 PM
haha syn, I didn't mean to say that you're not respectable, I was just referring to the guys that have a bit more experience in this stuff, coz their comments are usually more accurate and useful..
anyway, we painted that piece today and it was fucking exhausting, it's a highway spot, and the thing is MONSTROUS really. it's so big, I couldn't fit the whole thing in one photo despite the fact that I crossed the road to take the flick. I ended up taking a lotta consecutive flicks which I'm gonna stick together.
will post the thing once I get the patience and physical strength to use photoshop again...
thanks for the input though everyone

dmot_snts
12-04-2011, 02:38 PM
looking for some feedback, much appreciated. Still a toy, but working hard.

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SynOne
12-04-2011, 02:51 PM
I tried to do like a 3d crack ordeal in this. But I was so blunted I went with too many cracks so... I fucked that one up.

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ribcage
12-04-2011, 02:58 PM
that T is garbage. and you've used it in the last 3 shits you posted

dmot_snts
12-04-2011, 03:14 PM
syonone one 3d will look better, get rid of the 3d for the outline. The E and W look ok, play with those letters, just go crazy with them.
I tried to do like a 3d crack ordeal in this. But I was so blunted I went with too many cracks so... I fucked that one up.

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Tempo718
12-04-2011, 05:04 PM
haha syn, I didn't mean to say that you're not respectable, I was just referring to the guys that have a bit more experience in this stuff, coz their comments are usually more accurate and useful..
anyway, we painted that piece today and it was fucking exhausting, it's a highway spot, and the thing is MONSTROUS really. it's so big, I couldn't fit the whole thing in one photo despite the fact that I crossed the road to take the flick. I ended up taking a lotta consecutive flicks which I'm gonna stick together.
will post the thing once I get the patience and physical strength to use photoshop again...
thanks for the input though everyone
wtf g that sig is comedy as hell lolz

smot dmot?- thazz kinah toy but at same time it like dope

SynOne
12-04-2011, 05:07 PM
Looking for some crits on this before I ink it up. I think I need to make the K smaller. The 3d missing on the W is already fixed. Didn't notice before I posted.

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Tempo718
12-04-2011, 05:14 PM
need some serious crits from the serious and respectable boys on here (you mans know who you are)
this baby's planned to go on a sweet highway spot i got this sunday, gonna be about 115 ft. long (letters are gonna be hand-reaching height) and filled in with chrome

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/375252_323940257632890_100000507545549_1244831_147 8960100_n.jpg

hit me
I understand that u never post in here g but anyway that is a nice share n' on the real, good concept, unseen 2 me, nice touch
AYO Phat question for you since I gotchu readin n ish do mathematics ever come into putting up a piece?

ribcage
12-04-2011, 05:29 PM
@syn lay down 2 horizontal lines before you sketch, cause the ewt is like a half inch higher than the rest. Then look at all your bar widths and make them consistant( whole T, top of E, top of S, bottom of S). Then look at the negative space of all your letters, the worst part is the space between the K and E at the top, find a way to get rid of that.

SynOne
12-04-2011, 05:40 PM
Ribcage - Agreed with the letters being higher up. But one thing. The bars I purposely made them uneven. Like thin to thicker.

ribcage
12-04-2011, 06:02 PM
looks like shit, it goes from thin to deformed, not thinner to thicker. that extension on top of the E also looks like shit. your 3d is also fucked up in some places

MN Nice
12-04-2011, 06:04 PM
I like that syn. Your improving. Get a little more funk with your W.

Crits? Not so sure about the cuts in my bars.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00468-20111204-1648.jpg?t=1323043285

ribcage
12-04-2011, 06:08 PM
erase the M, move it to the left, and then make it so your U isnt hidden. you got a bunch of space to the left on that page, so use it

SkateJunt
12-04-2011, 06:09 PM
i like it but maybe make both parts on the bottom of the M the same
andy crits on this?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7158/6456191523_005c21444c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6456191523/)
Picture 123 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6456191523/) by SkateJunt (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

MN Nice
12-04-2011, 06:16 PM
Ok seriously. Are you outlining your letters in pencil and then going over in sharpie, or are you just doing it freestyle with a sharpie? I find it hard to believe for someone who can't even make straight letters. Break down your letters into bars.

TBS
12-04-2011, 06:41 PM
the B and E on the second one is the only thing I like. what happened to the steaz like form your last battle entries?
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i'm guessing you mean the Kemos one? now that i look at it that Tiger one i sent you is rather shite.. Fuck knows to be honest.. just trying some new shit i guess. will blast out something half decent tomorrow. whole fucking day off! GET IN!

ribcage
12-04-2011, 06:57 PM
thats sweet, day offs are always fun... i get to wake up @ 330. And yes, i meant the kemos one. o and its you vs extinct in the last round of the round robin, so hit him up and decide on a battle

dest1
12-04-2011, 07:04 PM
sup guys, first time postin pics, just a quick sketch im playin wit, any crits are apreciated, ill be colorin it later tonight so sorry for the light pencil lines. (thinking of a limeish green fade to a yellow that ends about halfwayup but still has a yellowish inline around most the letter, with probally a grey letter outline..not really good with 3d yet so ill prolly leave that off.)

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dest1
12-04-2011, 07:16 PM
handy i been gettin up with..
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sketch im about to color (yellow/greens,white,grey outline)
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some other ishhh...
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MN Nice
12-04-2011, 07:23 PM
Moved my M over

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00471-20111204-1920.jpg?t=1323048165

Good shit Des! All around skill on your stuff.