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malto
01-05-2012, 04:06 AM
tempo - not feeling the little leg on the bottom right of the middle letter (A)?

http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/005.jpg
can i get some crits please?

TBS
01-05-2012, 05:01 AM
take your time a bit more with the lines, just to neaten them up. and work on that handy a bit. keep it up though. i reckon your heading in the right direction

Temp - lose that kick on the right side of the A

malto
01-05-2012, 05:07 AM
cheers man, i cant seem to find a pencil anywhere so thats part of the reason for the messiness. i just sketched it out with a paint pen then filled it haha.

kredyt
01-05-2012, 06:09 AM
eriekid it's yours ? realy all projects keep the style!

regards kredyty (http://zyskuj24.pl) crew kredyt

gim
01-05-2012, 11:37 AM
49493
first time trying to piece, crits appreciated disregard the garbage tag lol
bump for crits, much love

toopski
01-05-2012, 12:05 PM
not bad for a simple just start making ur lines a bit straighter and cleaner and ull have a nice simple flowing

PETER
01-05-2012, 12:47 PM
Sake: You're working in the right direction. Work on bar consistency (example: the legs and cross portion on the A and K). Your SAK leans (lmao that gave me a chuckle) to the left while your E stands straight up. It draws away from the flow of the piece.

Tempo718
01-05-2012, 12:49 PM
49671
some mo' freestyle fuq shyt
I might stop doin 1 letter at a time. i ono

PETER
01-05-2012, 01:00 PM
Tempo: your other style is way better than this mess. The line through the middle just looks bad imo. Work with this style without the bar through the middle and try and get it flowing a little better.

knowtheledge
01-05-2012, 05:25 PM
some wackness:
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7029/6641932273_0cf85ebd3e_z.jpg

spiltink
01-05-2012, 06:50 PM
49671
some mo' freestyle fuq shyt
I might stop doin 1 letter at a time. i ono

heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l

http://www.facebook.com/riley.s.brennan

looks like you just got BROAD SIDE FED UP THE BONE BULDGE LMAO

to prove its him look at the name of the image 400274_270138976380770_100001540101387_759614_1231 99693 thats a facebook image code, third number is profile id thank you and fuck you

~~post splitter wooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh~~

o hi i drew this piece to try something is it good.....

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/SAM_0044.JPG

Fang
01-05-2012, 07:12 PM
Malto what kind of markers do u use??

.gaye
01-05-2012, 07:23 PM
heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l

http://www.facebook.com/riley.s.brennan

looks like you just got BROAD SIDE FED UP THE BONE BULDGE LMAO

to prove its him look at the name of the image 400274_270138976380770_100001540101387_759614_1231 99693 thats a facebook image code, third number is profile id thank you and fuck you

~~post splitter wooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh~~

o hi i drew this piece to try something is it good.....

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/SAM_0044.JPG

WTF spilt ink u bitch you steel my piece i drew that i hate it when people take credit for work that is not theirs

oh i caould have some crits

malto
01-05-2012, 07:29 PM
cheers for the crits PETER


Malto what kind of markers do u use??
yo, i use uni posca paint pens. needa go get some more though cause thats the only 2 colours ive got left haha

SynOne
01-06-2012, 02:08 AM
49479

Dank - Getting some simps down, I'd like to see you try some fills.

Biggaty Bump for some Crits, posting another tomorrow when I work on em in class.

Tempo718
01-06-2012, 03:09 AM
heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l
I have to have more patience i think ur right to say what I quoted, if I do post that type of style ever again its gonna be after I had a moment to do it right ok.

dankbudz
01-06-2012, 04:11 AM
bored as hell over here. yea this dudes gon lost his hand

SkateJunt
01-06-2012, 08:38 AM
crits? lines are kinda rough cuz im using sharpies and thin ass graph paper

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7143/6646916011_9641f052b5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6646916011/)
Picture 184 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6646916011/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Wonky
01-06-2012, 08:39 AM
Just keep writing - over and over... dont stop. Still a bit rough...

Jiska Matos
01-06-2012, 09:18 AM
49730 another one i did in the ofice, my boss has nice markers lol

SkateJunt
01-06-2012, 09:19 AM
Just keep writing - over and over... dont stop. Still a bit rough...
thanks, yeah i try to practice as much as i can, and just getting the hang of the new name

SkateJunt
01-06-2012, 10:30 AM
some jokes lil tings i sketched up, dans is my buddy

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7005/6647369015_bf9972264c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369015/)
Picture 188 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369015/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7162/6647369747_4c88e10f94.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369747/)
Picture 189 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369747/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7018/6647368357_b4247805b5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647368357/)
Picture 187 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647368357/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7027/6647367371_4163d87bb5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647367371/)
Picture 185 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647367371/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

unjust ban
01-06-2012, 12:21 PM
your B looks like something that isnt a B

it would be better with circles as holes??

knowtheledge
01-06-2012, 12:29 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7171/6647950259_287244ef7b_z.jpg

unjust ban
01-06-2012, 12:34 PM
I have to have more patience i think ur right to say what I quoted, if I do post that type of style ever again its gonna be after I had a moment to do it right ok.

you keep posting the same shit shit and no progreess fuck of

Wonky
01-06-2012, 12:38 PM
@knowtheledge Veery clean pen work Know. I'd like to see you throw some flow into your pieces. They're a little static and 'uninteresting'. Not bad, just not a lot of movement.
@skatejunt I like the energy you there at your work. Don't lose that. Try to tighten up the letter structure. Take a step backwards into simp / keyboard letters. There's no way to really tell what that character is after the G

SynOne
01-06-2012, 02:29 PM
He only needs to really needs to work on that B.

Wonky
01-06-2012, 02:59 PM
No the e and r are sketchy

Tempo718
01-06-2012, 03:30 PM
4973549736

SynOne
01-06-2012, 04:24 PM
49739

Wonky - I disagree, I do think the R needs a tad bit more definition, but I think the E is fine.

Tempo - The wrong direction, I can't even tell if that's a F, E, or R.

Jiska - Clean, what markers are those? Only thing that bugs me, and it isn't even really a bad thing at all, I would have just left it out is the one arrow on the right side. Just not my flavor is all.

The Silent One
01-06-2012, 06:38 PM
http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/3407/photo0170i.jpg
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6592/photo0172c.jpg
http://img803.imageshack.us/img803/7594/photo0173j.jpg

Colors
01-06-2012, 08:00 PM
tempo use bars

Jiska Matos
01-07-2012, 01:10 AM
49739

Wonky - I disagree, I do think the R needs a tad bit more definition, but I think the E is fine.

Tempo - The wrong direction, I can't even tell if that's a F, E, or R.

Jiska - Clean, what markers are those? Only thing that bugs me, and it isn't even really a bad thing at all, I would have just left it out is the one arrow on the right side. Just not my flavor is all.

OTR 830,840,850, staedler liner0.3 and molotow 127...here is something new i did today at work 4976649767

Tempo718
01-07-2012, 01:59 AM
do the first we see say SERP

knowtheledge
01-07-2012, 03:05 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7001/6651547401_34dfa199dd_z.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7001/6651549493_021695c5f8_z.jpg

smokeitup
01-07-2012, 03:27 AM
some jokes lil tings i sketched up, dans is my buddy

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7005/6647369015_bf9972264c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369015/)
Picture 188 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369015/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7162/6647369747_4c88e10f94.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369747/)
Picture 189 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369747/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7018/6647368357_b4247805b5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647368357/)
Picture 187 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647368357/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7027/6647367371_4163d87bb5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647367371/)
Picture 185 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647367371/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

good shit stewart stevenson, lol!

gim
01-07-2012, 11:25 AM
49803
basic idea for a throwie, I'm new at this
can i get a crit, much love

Phat 2
01-07-2012, 03:14 PM
...
much love?

SkateJunt
01-07-2012, 05:29 PM
crits on the trow i did for the throwie battle? the only letter i use in this in my tag is the E
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7022/6655409693_b480bcc2ed.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6655409693/)
Picture 192 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6655409693/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

how can sheban!?
01-07-2012, 05:30 PM
49819

Wonky
01-07-2012, 05:32 PM
Skate. I still like your style but your letters just don't make enough sense to me. I'd waste some paper doing alphabets. The q is horrible. The O is also a non-starter

emace1
01-07-2012, 05:42 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7168/6655493989_07dce9dd08.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6655493989/)
IMG_0148 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6655493989/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/spacehoes/), on Flickr

SkateJunt
01-07-2012, 05:42 PM
haha yeah ive never done a Q in my life. and what do you mean by non starter?

Wonky
01-07-2012, 05:45 PM
It just doesnt cut it stu. Its an oval with a face on it. Needs thought bro.

@emace that face is quality, Handstyle coming on nicely too blud

SkateJunt
01-07-2012, 05:58 PM
tru yeah i dono i dont do os either, i just saw a couple of people just makeing their os chars so i tried it, guess it doesnt work, im gonna try an alphabet right now

Wonky
01-07-2012, 06:06 PM
If you're gonna do that it needs to be super-stylish. Otherwise it's just pure lame.

Don't be afraid to waste reams of paper sorting these letters out blud. It's you versus them.

Phillip McDougall
01-07-2012, 07:11 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7168/6655493989_07dce9dd08.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6655493989/)
IMG_0148 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6655493989/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/spacehoes/), on Flickr

Intermediate worthy.

Wonky
01-07-2012, 07:15 PM
Yep. It's good that blud.


Sheblind, you need to ground your letters. The a don't work and then after that, the whole flow is fucked. Imagine you started your piece on a train. The a is pointing at the moon.

Tempo718
01-07-2012, 07:38 PM
sooooooo dem sarcasm dem

Colors
01-07-2012, 07:49 PM
too lazy to try and havent sketched in a while
49825

Wonky
01-08-2012, 06:13 AM
A little 2B outline I did this morning

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/a962c27e.jpg
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/e84d26dd.jpg

SkateJunt
01-08-2012, 11:42 AM
crits on this? i know the bars are really off, i just quickly sketched it for a general idea im gonna do a better one right now
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7019/6660320683_becac384ff.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6660320683/)
Picture 193 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6660320683/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Jiska Matos
01-10-2012, 08:56 PM
50181 you guys think this is intermidiate worthy?

Skadeem
01-10-2012, 09:36 PM
I'd say....definitely better than some shit that gets posted

dankbudz
01-10-2012, 09:45 PM
that joker is dope

fucked up the purple one haha
and mission some black shit in the 3d

Jiska Matos
01-10-2012, 09:48 PM
The "d" looks a bit strange on the last one, but so clean as usual DANK

malto
01-10-2012, 10:15 PM
dank - feelin that first simple its got a nice flow.
jiska- that shits insane, intermediate thread if you ask me.


changed my name to RASEK. first one was just a stoned sketch i know i should stay simple for now.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/011.jpg
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/012.jpg
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/013.jpg

also dont mind all the handstyles just trying to get a bit of flow into it, being a new name and shit.

Jiska Matos
01-10-2012, 10:28 PM
POSCAS 4 lining can be a pain in the ass xD

Skadeem
01-10-2012, 10:51 PM
Work on the last one rasek it's pretty interesting. and seder I'd advise against mixing cases of the same letter in one piece, especially a simp

gemer
01-10-2012, 10:52 PM
@malto looks aright and all just think you need to clean it up a bit kinda sloppy dude

freestyle...not diggen the n' to much on this one

50190

Tempo718
01-11-2012, 12:22 AM
50199

EWL24
01-11-2012, 12:42 AM
gemer - that looks sick, the N is nice its just the extension that has to go, but still that is awesome for a freestyle. Ur stuff always makes me want to go and draw some more :D

MoNaRK3
01-11-2012, 01:21 AM
Man,idk if i'm talking out my ass here or if anyone else agree's with me, but i mean. It doesn't matter how many little scribbles or tags you add around your graff, its still just a bubble letter you know? Maybe its just me.

PREA672
01-11-2012, 03:08 AM
@malto There's already a RASEK on BS

gemer
01-11-2012, 06:22 AM
@EWL24 thanks man thumbs up

gim
01-11-2012, 09:08 AM
49803
basic idea for a throwie, I'm new at this
can i get a crit, much love
bumpin

Wonky
01-11-2012, 09:19 AM
Sim, the first up strOke on the s is fundamentally wrong, throwing the whole letter off.

MN Nice
01-11-2012, 11:51 AM
Gonna put some color around this later.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00588-20120111-0647.jpg?t=1326300652

Wonky
01-11-2012, 11:52 AM
Why bother? Why are you drawing the same thing over and over?

kwu
01-11-2012, 12:34 PM
Whats good kids
Gem.. shit is ill as usual

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7156/6665098509_215393628b_z.jpg

MN Nice
01-11-2012, 01:39 PM
Why bother? Why are you drawing the same thing over and over?

I've been making subtle changes each time if you haven't noticed. And its far different than the last two book pages I posted before. Notice how knowtheledge is doing the same with his Khan pieces? Similar letters but with subtle changes in every one.

Colors
01-11-2012, 03:43 PM
Lol malto are you really trying to write that? There's a rasek even on this site and he's damn good hahaha

SynOne
01-11-2012, 04:36 PM
Gemer - DEFINITELY feeling that E man.

MN - I wouldn't make your S's so blocky, they tend to look all weird when they are.

First pic is sketch of the bottom one on the 2nd pic, the last is a freestyle.. meh. Crits?

50489
50490
50491

gemer
01-11-2012, 05:42 PM
^^thanx man and that bottom freestyles dope man definatly think you need to freestyle more like ya boi
@kwu thanks to you as well andyour shit looks clean and the style is funky fresh
@MN nice hahah i agree with wonky man u do the sameee one over and over but keep postin man just sayin go outside the box a bit
@tempo badd ass character dude thumbs up

Tempo718
01-11-2012, 06:55 PM
50508

malto
01-11-2012, 07:25 PM
Lol malto are you really trying to write that? There's a rasek even on this site and he's damn good hahaha

Unless hes from Australia then I couldnt give a fuck

KingKozmik
01-11-2012, 11:49 PM
5058750588

gemer
01-12-2012, 12:22 AM
not diggen this one at all

50591

dankbudz
01-12-2012, 12:25 AM
Mn NIce- thats startin to look nice. don't fux with adding more color, thats as much as you need.
Syn ONe- the 2nd pic bottom piece is the best. bottom freestyles not bad, not feel in the rigid ass loop in the middle of the W, shoulda left it plain n simple
tempo- keeep practicing

my pictures kinda big..

Tempo718
01-12-2012, 03:21 AM
dank - any a more charactors on deck yoga I could be luke pahlease g cause u got that on lock imo.
mues - your progression is consistant dont vexx. easy.
every1 else - stay ya heads up but dont post something til. it is your satisfaction.
i think going back and reanalyzing your bars and etc.
can in prove your flow if you do three in a row but something different n' more complex as you move to 1,2,3
(1) Being simple could benefit your patience also and just enjoy when you see what eventually progresses
into something a little differnt that what the 1st rendition was.

Tempo718
01-12-2012, 03:25 AM
5058750588
I like where he going with this uh.. mainly first one the one after is eh... but uh yeah that otha one do it 3 times in a row se post it plz?

dankbudz
01-12-2012, 03:41 AM
got no idea what you just said about characters


quickie sketch before i pass out.. maybe you can see it.. bout to color it tomorrow
the R is busted as fuck

kwu
01-12-2012, 11:15 AM
nice seder

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7013/6684885531_d53b7c6095_z.jpg

MN Nice
01-12-2012, 11:21 AM
Those colors are illin!!^ Nice grey detail on the letters. I'm not so sure about your extensions though, you seem to be going out of your way to make them.

@dank - can't really see the letters too well, post it up inked. Thanks for the good looks on mine though.

This is what I meant by adding some more color. I think it gives it a little more movement.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00594-20120111-1858.jpg?t=1326385096

2mor
01-12-2012, 12:25 PM
[QUOTE=Wonky;1769163]A little 2B outline I did this morning

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/a962c27e.jpg
most of them letters are hurtinnn...spesh the s. little dragon face is the only thing remotely worth keepin i reckon man, anyways, half coloured.50643 ...colourin was just quick, to be redone .

dankbudz
01-12-2012, 04:05 PM
that khan is dope

Wonky
01-12-2012, 04:21 PM
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/61bdd825.jpg
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/6ce40aed.jpg
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/98d236b5.jpg

Colors
01-12-2012, 04:40 PM
Crits on any of this? the hollow 2 letter is my fave, the finished 2 letter is pretty old so its not the best. and i put a force around the sunset naked but it sort of ruined the piece so i am just gonna upload the unruined version haha/
50652506535065450655

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
01-12-2012, 05:26 PM
this is what i meant by adding some more color. I think it gives it a little more movement.


Lmao XD:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleye s::rolleyes:

gemer
01-12-2012, 05:47 PM
@colors y the upside down cross?
@wonky gettin btter keep drawing

Colors
01-12-2012, 06:48 PM
gemer- at first it was supposed to be a devilish evil piece but i changed halfway through but i already outline that part haha

SkateJunt
01-12-2012, 07:23 PM
crits on all these?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7170/6675582733_afc299874f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6675582733/)
Picture 202 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6675582733/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7004/6686749153_80603c312d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6686749153/)
Picture 205 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6686749153/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7002/6686888405_f30e73b7c7.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6686888405/)
Picture 206 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6686888405/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7028/6687084327_f35179fe06.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6687084327/)
Picture 207 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6687084327/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7146/6687084637_cd93e7f8df.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6687084637/)
Picture 208 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6687084637/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

2mor
01-12-2012, 07:58 PM
not too bad, letters are kinda weak though n seem too skinny..anyways not gonna repost the flic, but feel free to crit the picca few posts up i put on here earlier x

Tempo718
01-12-2012, 08:06 PM
roaches ... are ... fast

kwu
01-12-2012, 10:39 PM
@naked.. I like that first one a lot yo keep it up
@gerb.. those pieces are all over the place... take a step back n watch how the other kats on here have been progressing through simples and bar consistency. the throws are alright but the r aint working you dont need the extra kink in the leg... keep it up tho

MN Nice
01-12-2012, 10:44 PM
Junt: go simpler on your letters and thicken them up, random ass extensions and connections are weak. And for your throw, don't connect the middle line of your b to the r, it makes it look like an e. and don't do the flat top, just keep fuckin around with it.

Colors: diggin the first piece, real nice fill. just make sure you're keeping your letters evenly spread out.

Wonk: actually feeling that top piece. Your N could've used a little more room and less space on your D and E

gemer
01-13-2012, 02:05 AM
@ gerb drop all them extensions off those first flics

freestyle tryin something new
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after looking at it a couple times on here makes me hate it :(

dankbudz
01-13-2012, 03:04 AM
lol, its dope broski. just gotta pay attention to the hights of those letters. i wish those lines were bars thou, i think bars would look better lol

gemer
01-13-2012, 07:52 AM
^^^haha fer sure man them letters are all different sizes....and definatly bars woulda been way better i was stoned when i did it tryin to get on a different level haha but thanks dude

SynOne
01-13-2012, 09:11 AM
Just some pen freebies testing some new stuff.

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PETER
01-13-2012, 09:11 AM
Wonky: That top piece is interesting. I like it. Run with it. I'd like to see what you do with colors.
Gemer: Dont hate it. I like the flowing vibe of it. I think it would work well with a Rime style to it.
Edit:
SynOne: Both have potential. I like the top one better, but that R needs help. The R on the bottom one is looking a bit like a B.

SynOne
01-13-2012, 09:20 AM
I feel, you and agree with both, the top R was actually going to have to top loop like like the top of the S, but I fucked it up, can't undo the pen lol. As for the R looking like a B, I know, I just didn't give the leg enough room for the extension.

kwu
01-13-2012, 11:02 AM
gettin better skewr just watch those W's, try writing EW over n over till you find a way for them to flow

Tempo718
01-13-2012, 06:42 PM
syn - that 1st one there is on a new direction imo i like it.

Cisco
01-13-2012, 08:37 PM
not gonna throw in colours till i get all the kinks worked out. the R turned out like shit and im still not stoked on the rest of it. crits would be appreciated.

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SkateJunt
01-13-2012, 11:13 PM
crits on some throws i drew today?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7005/6693103331_c1ddc30953.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6693103331/)
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7143/6693102987_9e17206ce6.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/Picture 211 by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Shit Outta Luck
01-15-2012, 10:04 PM
Syn, try different EW like whats his face said. Try and maybe make the left bar of the W go up and right then kink left. If you know what I mean.
And to those trying throws...try more. Do more handies. And do more simples. Throwies come wit time.

manchoo
01-16-2012, 02:44 AM
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SynOne
01-16-2012, 05:30 AM
Manch, this is NO DOUBT better than what you posted in the intermediate. Do more shit like these.

malto
01-16-2012, 06:01 AM
a little different to the other one.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/005-1.jpg

then a quick piece i sketched just to go for a paint tomorrow and a little freestyle above it.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/008.jpg
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/007.jpg

SneeZ
01-16-2012, 09:53 AM
rasek, handstyles are off tha hook. And i also saw some of your posts in intermediate thread, i have to say you got some nice bombs. keep rockin on!

snal
01-16-2012, 02:50 PM
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some sketches of mine :) let the dollar circulate and hope paint comes home

Jake_NN_Bake
01-16-2012, 02:57 PM
New name. Changed it to make the tag flow more and my sketch looks better with it as well :D
Crits appreciated.
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/42/img20120116144623.jpg

SLVRONE
01-16-2012, 09:38 PM
crits welcome :D5119551196

SLVRONE
01-16-2012, 09:58 PM
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MN Nice
01-16-2012, 11:33 PM
then a quick piece i sketched just to go for a paint tomorrow and a little freestyle above it.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/008.jpg

Bangin. Take notes kids. Notice his bars. Keep with this style dude, you down to exchange?

dankbudz
01-16-2012, 11:51 PM
420

oversprae mds
01-17-2012, 12:12 AM
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Tempo718
01-17-2012, 01:40 AM
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was doin a pen freestyle tonight while putting my 2 nephews 2 sleep worked like a charm on the sleepy part, eh freestylie part i ono bout.

thebench504
01-17-2012, 09:51 AM
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/259117_214087995279750_100000356521032_719036_6643 337_o.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/258885_214088031946413_100000356521032_719037_6159 166_o.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/258533_214088101946406_100000356521032_719039_2054 442_o.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/257345_214088251946391_100000356521032_719046_5214 518_o.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/243233_214088285279721_100000356521032_719047_2645 84_o.jpghttp://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/240985_214088175279732_100000356521032_719043_7495 088_o.jpg

www.thebench504.com - Birmingham graffiti store (http://www.thebench504.com/)

PETER
01-17-2012, 10:03 AM
Bench: You've got some seriously sick pages there.

Looking for some crits on these. They are old, but looking for ideas on advancement.
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SLVRONE
01-17-2012, 12:39 PM
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Colors
01-17-2012, 12:42 PM
I need some legit crits, my ideas are so boring and suck.Blockbuster cam out decent i think, and the kansr is for the battle. the nakd that looks like nako was a quick effortless piece but decided id flick it anyways cuz i sorta like the feel, idk
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PETER
01-17-2012, 12:53 PM
Colors: Try leaning your letters the other direction. Also try tall an narrow.... Just stretch and bend away. That Kansr isn't bad.

dankbudz
01-17-2012, 02:01 PM
Colors- those aren't that boron compared to most others shit. some good practice

PETER- get a peter griffin avatar. you should just do work on simples if you are stuck on development. fuck around with basic styles and just draw.
that sevr is coo



somebody hit me with some crits

PETER
01-17-2012, 02:36 PM
Dank: I like where that piece is going. Try fucking with bar widths. Think of how a chisel tip marker looks and fuck with that. Also try leaning your letters to the left a little. Maybe go taller and with thicker bars. For the CDXX try making the tops super fat and the bottoms super narrow.... just some thoughts. I keep forgetting to flick that Dank piece I did years ago.
Edit: That skull is cool. I would like to see you do it more candy skull style. Day of the Dead like.

Colors
01-17-2012, 02:43 PM
thanks seder, heres my crits on your piece. It seems like the bottom bar of your E has too many kinks, id just get rid of the weird extensions to the bottom bar of the E. Your S looks like its bent in too many ways, maybe try a little simpler S? Your definitly moving in the right direction though, i like your style. the right leg of the R looks a little awkward also. And this is just a tip i use sometimes to help with the flow of my piece, i usually draw a line on top and on the bottom of my letters to make sure none of my letters go past the line so that they are all the same size, but thats just what i think. In all i like your style and your moving in the right direction, but keep staying siimple. Oh yeah and one last thing, maybe you could add a force to your piece, it looks a little bare haha. keep it up though

dankbudz
01-17-2012, 03:25 PM
thanks for all the crits dudes, both are hella useful.
drew that skull with a rebel8 dia de los muertos shirt in mind, didn't show through much, that type of style is dope though.
you should post up the dank piece, you keep makin me wonder what that looks like, but you never post it!
also the piece is unfinished, i at least know to slap some 3d and outline on. I'm just a lazy fuck and post my shit before its done.

Colors
01-17-2012, 03:39 PM
oh wasnt sure though because sometimes i do pieces with just the outline, like yours. do you want to exchange seder?

snal
01-17-2012, 03:49 PM
51154
51155
some sketches of mine :) let the dollar circulate and hope paint comes home
some advices?

Colors
01-17-2012, 03:52 PM
yeah veko go simpler. do straight simples, that stuff doesnt look too great but if you just do some simple pieces for a while youll notice your stuffs gonna get better overtime

PETER
01-17-2012, 03:59 PM
Snal: what he said. look at Dank and Color's simples I have a few up there too. If you start out with basic square letters you can start to bend and stretch them like the naked. You've got to build the foundation of the house before the roof.

Hick94
01-17-2012, 04:05 PM
did these over the weekend...internet been shit latley takes ages to upload pics...
veko i agree with colors draw keyboard letters to get a idea of bars...
http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/9822/img0004kx.jpg
http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/996/img0002fni.jpg
critz are always welcomed :D

kwu
01-17-2012, 04:12 PM
Props bench antik naked n seder lookin ill

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7010/6716379689_0a5a4a2e60_z.jpg

Colors
01-17-2012, 04:37 PM
damn kwu feeling your style. the only thing i really have to say is the N looks a little awkward and parts of the A because the bars get really skinny compared to the KH.i like it man good work
Edit: and your KH looks bigger than the N, the n gets really small. and the left leg of the A's a little awkward. Just what i think

kwu
01-17-2012, 05:13 PM
aha thanks dude flicked it on an angle thats why it might look bigger respect for the input tho homes

malto
01-17-2012, 05:19 PM
Bangin. Take notes kids. Notice his bars. Keep with this style dude, you down to exchange?

Cheers man, yeah for sure. Its Mues right?

Wonky
01-17-2012, 06:29 PM
Simps

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/6e3a9f56.jpg

Colors
01-17-2012, 06:41 PM
just a quick 2 letter, decided to do it in lowercase cuz im always rockin the uppercase.
crits would be awesome
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And this is a piece i just did but im only flickin the na because im in love with the n on this piece

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malto
01-17-2012, 07:15 PM
Make the K a little bigger it looks all squashed up.

just sketched this up, i need some new markers it looks fucked with just the outlines.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/008-1.jpg

SkateJunt
01-17-2012, 08:33 PM
crits?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7169/6717594045_89c728502f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6717594045/)
Picture 216 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6717594045/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

Colors
01-17-2012, 08:47 PM
well that should probably go in the throwie thread but hmmm im bad at throws so i guess ill try to crit it.well, i think the g looks wicked weird like the whole thing, and the bubble part of it on the left is too big in my opinion, and your throw is sorta wavy, not saying make it even and flat but dont have it go all over the place. Then again you dont have to listen to this because i never do throws

And this is just what my rip big L piece looks like right now. this was sort half assed so im going to do another later in the week that will be waay better. But for now, anyone wanna crit this before i go any further?

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RIP BIG L

Colors
01-17-2012, 09:41 PM
i raped the forums today. well heres the finished product. has a green force but you cants really see it
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oh yeah and i didnt do it this little dude did it
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Tempo718
01-18-2012, 12:08 AM
feelin the letters on this page guys. no lie

oversprae mds
01-18-2012, 12:30 AM
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dankbudz
01-18-2012, 12:56 AM
got bored,

colors i dig tha RIP BIG but the el if its EL or LL or what. just looks like twirls. but somehow i new what it said before i read what you wrote... haha

can't really crit that SPRAE, i liked ur other stuff you posted more

SynOne
01-18-2012, 01:40 AM
Dank - 3D is looking NIIICEEEE, I dig your E's and R's the most. Keep 'er rocking.

Lil' Freestyle during class. E got hidden to much.

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dankbudz
01-18-2012, 03:38 AM
^^lookin good, def. improvement since the last ones i seen

toopski
01-18-2012, 03:40 AM
sketch for one of the guys who got me into graff
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/415/dsc0003zz.jpg

and a quick lil NOA
http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/6497/dsc0001tp.jpg

Wonky
01-18-2012, 04:06 AM
Simps

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/6e3a9f56.jpg

Bump for crits. Obviously quite simple but in working on structure and flow...

PETER
01-18-2012, 08:53 AM
Skewr: Best todate for sure. You're right, the E got hidden a bit... but all in all it has solid structure and flow. I like the shape and form of the letters as well. Nothing seems way out of place.
Inside: Still struggling with your S's (don't worry they are a huge bitch. I avoid them) The bottom one is getting there. Do a few pages of just S's.
Toops: Both look good. That E is sick imo. Good to see you postin' up.

Wonky
01-18-2012, 08:59 AM
Yeh, I like the top S better but everyone tells me my S's are shit. I'll work on it.

PETER
01-18-2012, 09:04 AM
It's hard to get proportions and bends to look good. It's easily one of the hardest letters for me. Anything round really. Just keep fuckin' with'em. Look at how a bunch of writters fuck with'em. Do some handstyle ones and use them to outline around. It doesn't help it's right in the middle of the word so a lot of direction is directed to it. Keep it up. (the reason I don't like the top S looks like a fat gut hanging over a belt.... it's just missing a belly button and hair.)

toopski
01-18-2012, 09:49 AM
http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/3233/dsc0002ve.jpg

the letter S is a tough one all depends what style ur rocking to how hard it is ive always been able to get a half decent flow with my s's but then again when i started writing me n a mate both had the same style so we both helped get it right

SynOne
01-18-2012, 10:20 AM
One thing I've learned and it helps me is on my S's I tend to start the Inside first, Like the holes, those determine how the entire S looks structure wise (this doesn't include extensions and what not.)

toopski
01-18-2012, 10:22 AM
yeah thats what i used to do when i painted a word with the letter s in it

Wonky
01-18-2012, 11:22 AM
I'll ditch the name lol.

Heres a mini page I did on a train journey

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/74e058a0.jpg

PETER
01-18-2012, 11:50 AM
That S in the Inside on the right of the page is decent. I like that inside. nice page.

toopski
01-18-2012, 11:53 AM
haha just reminded me of the time some people on the bus got talking to me coz i was sketching and told me all bout when they used to paint before i was born good times, good times

SLVRONE
01-18-2012, 05:33 PM
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sketch says 'Dash'

Wonky
01-18-2012, 05:56 PM
Does it? Thanks for telling..... Simplify it mate

dankbudz
01-19-2012, 01:38 AM
bored and stoned, hella sloppy

kwu
01-19-2012, 05:38 AM
I like the bottom one both fresh and so clean clean haha

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7003/6724857261_721dbae4f9_z.jpg

'Crook'
01-19-2012, 12:44 PM
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Give me some crits please !!!

'Crook'
01-19-2012, 01:44 PM
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Give me crits on these too please !

Colors
01-19-2012, 01:46 PM
old stuff from my old black book
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Colors
01-19-2012, 01:52 PM
oh yeah and a shoutout piece to all the people i can remember

seder i like the top one personally, both are nice though

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PETER
01-19-2012, 02:19 PM
Nice book. I can't believe in the 12 years I've been fiddle farting around with graff and had friends in the scene I don't have a hard book of stuff. I have a couple binders with shit in them.... I guess I should probly get on that...

'Crook'
01-19-2012, 02:29 PM
Guysss ! please can anyone give me critss ??

Colors
01-19-2012, 02:35 PM
crook- dont add that extention to the top of the c, and for the top right bars of both the k and r try to just keep them as simple straight lines and make your o's straight 0's for now

Colors
01-19-2012, 02:38 PM
yeah peter i really only sketch in books, and ive only had 2 normal ones and right now i got this absolutely huge black book and i love it haha its the size of like 2 black books. and damn dude 12 years! ive only been writing for like 1 year and a half, im young blood haha. but lately ive been sketching on loose paper, like not in a book

'Crook'
01-19-2012, 02:56 PM
Okay thank you i apreciate !!

PETER
01-19-2012, 03:45 PM
14 actually. I haven't been very serious about it since about 2000 until I got on here. I have had spiral books, and keep the decent pages. Some of my best drawind have been on random shit or given away. I took up djing in 2001 and have been focused on that. Served in the Army for 8 years. I'll post up some shit from when I started writing back in the day.

PETER
01-19-2012, 03:47 PM
Just had my ex txt me some old drawings I did of her name. I just wanna see if they are legible.
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edit to add a couple newer ones.
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Colors
01-19-2012, 07:55 PM
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SteezeFuhDayz
01-19-2012, 09:08 PM
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quick sketch. crits would be much appreciated haha

Colors
01-19-2012, 10:45 PM
i deleted my last commment but week you got the crits i hope...PHAT got bored and did a phat piece, dont mind the 3d looking part its retarded.
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Wonky
01-20-2012, 03:11 AM
I can't read them Peter

gemer
01-20-2012, 03:15 AM
@peter go more simple
@naked nice book man keep up the work

Phat 2
01-20-2012, 03:22 AM
i deleted my last commment but week you got the crits i hope...PHAT got bored and did a phat piece, dont mind the 3d looking part its retarded.
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thanks yo thats nice of u

PETER
01-20-2012, 08:36 AM
I can't read them Peter lol right on. Kristen. They are from 98. The others are from around 2003ish.

Gemer: Thanks. I've never really taken my art seriously and never took advantage of resources like this to lear the foundations. I just would draw from time to time and that's what happend.

PETER
01-20-2012, 09:49 AM
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PETER
01-20-2012, 10:04 AM
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here's that Dank Dank. I was hiding my poor letters behind huge arrows. I got a few free tshirts for it.

kwu
01-20-2012, 02:27 PM
naked with that illy stee! and peter finish that purple/blue one it looks rude!

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7001/6732102777_f4e4bf3770_z.jpg

PETER
01-20-2012, 02:45 PM
Thanks KWU. I was using my friend's colored pencils. I'm going to have to find some that come close to matching. I love the I on that piece. I am diggin' the piece you just posted. I am finding that bottom extention on the last letter confusing. My head is telling me it's Khan, but I am seeing Khao.

Phat 2
01-20-2012, 02:54 PM
practice full page:
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/394221_358530564173859_100000507545549_1347377_701 444012_n.jpg

crits are much needed

PETER
01-20-2012, 03:41 PM
damn it Phat. I have to get on my phone to see your stuff.... I like the bit on top. I suggest making the bits in the O look more like fangs and use a green to make venom drip from them. Your M for your throw is better, alot better. I forget who mentioned it but I was in agreement that it was too big. The upper handy on the left the M has too many humps. I like the one below it a lot better. The throw V is cool. The one next to it has potential. It seems like your M should be visible in the hole of the O almost. I would use the top of the E to model the top right of the N and M. The blocky piece at the bottom is good. I would like to see it with more care put into it. The handy on the right is nice.Play with that and a capital E if it doesn't work stick with the lowercase it works with the O. I'm not feeling the one with the family guy looking mouth at all. I'd like to see you do a VM throw and some how use Venom's spider logo in something.

Colors
01-20-2012, 04:00 PM
kwu your k is pretty nasty, the extension at the top of the n is a lil weird,
phat the thing i like most on that is the handstyle at the top

SynOne
01-20-2012, 04:48 PM
Phat I would say on that bottom straight, actually show the left side of the E, to me that always looks better.

Just a flick.

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Colors
01-20-2012, 05:13 PM
skewr i think you should go more simple, and in my opinion i think that w is too covered and the r is too far apart, and those extensions at the bottom of the r, well you could take em out. try some simples

SynOne
01-20-2012, 05:19 PM
^ I knew the R wasn't so hot. I've been trying/testing new things, just majority of them seem to fail. I'll rock out some more simples to help my letter development.

Colors
01-20-2012, 05:33 PM
dont worry its not terrible haha yeah just do some simples over and over youll notice you change little things everytime and then those develop

Phat 2
01-20-2012, 06:56 PM
thanks peter. the reason you can't see my flicks is coz I upload them on facebook and facebook is blocked on you PC.
the bottom blockbuster was just for fun, didn't put any effort into it (not like it needs any.. but the lines are shakey and stuff. could've been much cleaner) I was just in need of something to fill the page up with possible stuff I could paint later on with this new name.

but anyway CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! !!!

"PHYSH"
01-20-2012, 07:09 PM
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dedication............

eas
01-20-2012, 10:44 PM
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EAS
sketch i did on the back of my journal
looking 4 some crits

Colors
01-20-2012, 11:14 PM
i hate this so much but i feel the need to post it because besides how awkward it looks i feel like i wanna develop this style. the na isnt too bad in my opinion but the rest disappoints me. Please crit this
dont crit the week that doesnt count
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SteezeFuhDayz
01-20-2012, 11:37 PM
naked: the top of the k is a little funky and it looks kinda smushed but other than that, it looks prime to me haha.

SteezeFuhDayz
01-21-2012, 12:31 AM
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crits would be much appreciated.

PETER
01-21-2012, 01:41 AM
thanks peter. the reason you can't see my flicks is coz I upload them on facebook and facebook is blocked on you PC.
the bottom blockbuster was just for fun, didn't put any effort into it (not like it needs any.. but the lines are shakey and stuff. could've been much cleaner) I was just in need of something to fill the page up with possible stuff I could paint later on with this new name.

but anyway CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! CRIT THE THROW!!!! !!!
I know, its just a pain in the ass. The vowels in your throw are a little weak IMO. particularly the e. keep the points at the bottom. you could make them like teeth if you keep'em evenly spaced and give it a little curve. you could even work out another throw to make a bottom jaw.

gemer
01-21-2012, 01:47 AM
@ venom diggen the throw
@ skewr dont know about it seen you do btter
@ physph diggen the bow thing lol
@ eas sloppy man maybe out line it with pen or something and theres so much things around it idk what to even think
@ naked not diggen the connection but the naked simp looks pretty good
@ steezfuhdayz pretty shaky but it looks pretty good i guess but not the e' with the bar thing ya know what im sayin

heres a couple freestyles i did today

3ds off in both of them a bit
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not diggen this one at all
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eas
01-21-2012, 01:51 AM
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EAS
crits wanted

gemer
01-21-2012, 02:19 AM
loose the arrows the extensions and the a' is really weird..and the s/ not diggen the extension at the bottom at all go more simple man

Colors
01-21-2012, 03:03 AM
eas i think you should go to the new to graffiti thread and learn bars and the other basics

and gemer im really feeling the first one, the CEM is nice, but i dont like the s because it is so far off, like the top of it seems to go too far to the left. but the cem is dope

Wonky
01-21-2012, 06:03 AM
I know this is gucked up but I got bored of bubble simples just thought I'd do something completely new. So many structural errors,but I enjoyed drawing it anyway.

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/ee8f5c44.jpg

sadgeh
01-21-2012, 06:39 AM
wonky there are bars everywhere and coming from everything, just do simps and check other writers on how extensions work.

nkzs
01-21-2012, 01:05 PM
wonky: seems like there's a lot of stuff going on, maybe tone it down a bit and drop those extensions.

heres a few ive finished recently, little bit of variety.

51758

51759

51760

51761

Colors
01-21-2012, 01:10 PM
the piece that says what i think is blue is the best. do more stuff like that because its simple, but theres some things wrong. the right leg of the u could be brought up more it looks awakward, and fix that b if your using bars those holes shouldnt be so closed and small especially the top one. the e is a good idea but that one is skaetchy, just keep doing simple junk like that. maybe add a force too

gemer
01-21-2012, 02:43 PM
thanx colors

Wonky
01-21-2012, 02:48 PM
@gemer, why do you call tem freestyles? I can see pencil marks? What does that mean?

MN Nice
01-21-2012, 02:54 PM
They're light pen marks to get his bars right.

Wonky
01-21-2012, 02:55 PM
Is that still a freestyle then?

Tempo718
01-21-2012, 06:18 PM
51772
posted this on facebook. hope buddy dont blast me again.

dankbudz
01-21-2012, 06:28 PM
it doesn't look like you even try, tempo

did these during a power outage, the characters face is wonky as fuuck



AND KID UP THERE ^^^ don't write sedeone or sede.... you're a birch

Evow1
01-21-2012, 06:33 PM
top one is dope^

Hick94
01-21-2012, 06:59 PM
ya same seder nice little 3d effect on the first one and temp the best advice i can say quality over quantity...theres no point in half assin a sketch per day, ive seen better from you...if you dont have time just do one every 2 days or whatever suits you....
http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/3086/img0003jxg.jpg

Colors
01-21-2012, 07:09 PM
seder that top one rapes face.
and tempo im getting like legit pissed haha keep your bars the same width! use bars! look up graffiti for beginners damn

DEMPO
01-21-2012, 07:11 PM
it doesn't look like you even try, tempo

did these during a power outage, the characters face is wonky as fuuck



AND KID UP THERE ^^^ don't write sedeone or sede.... you're a birch
Dank sorry I dont meet your standards bro but I will try harder and maybe one day you'll feel my shit. peace

dankbudz
01-21-2012, 07:15 PM
HICK -
crits on the bottom, save the ink for when you get a realblackbook, i used to to that and i look back and I'm just like fuck, wish i had those colors now. lol

BUT connect the bars on the H and K and pay attention to bar width, like that fatty C, it should have more of and oval shape cut out of the center. and spacing between letters, you got neg. space in the H and K but crammed the IC in between, you coulda made the I more vertical so there was a bit of space to the left and if you narrowed the bars of the C it wouldn't be half bad.
hope you understand what i said, but another thing about colors is it is distracting, and if you are trying to improve your letter structure, you can't really look at it as critically if you throw on all these colors that you think are filthy or some shit

Dempo, maybe one day someone else can fulfill your fantasy of "feeling your shit" but I'm good on that

COLORS, in case you wanna peep this before 3d is on n shit. also i get more credits for post in it more... lolz imma probably do a few more NAKED cuz its an ill word

Colors
01-21-2012, 07:31 PM
damn dude that looks tight! haha get all the credits you can... and i might redo yours too, possibly if i dont suck at sketching tonight. that already looks ill without that seder 3d

dankbudz
01-21-2012, 07:45 PM
lol thanks man, and foreal, i am getting some free shipping.

Colors
01-21-2012, 07:55 PM
51784ehh i just like the n. crit this junk if you want, mostly the k because the k is wack.

DEMPO
01-21-2012, 08:33 PM
Dempo, maybe one day someone else can fulfill your fantasy of "feeling your shit" but I'm good on that


Oh of course I should have expected you to say that. Thanks for your concern anywho

gemer
01-21-2012, 08:41 PM
@ wonky i call them freestyles because i dont erase

Colors
01-21-2012, 10:23 PM
breaking this down into 3 parts. Crits are definitely welcome.

this is my piece without the outline so you can actually see the bleeding letters
51790

This is the finished product with the forcefield, but i feel like the forcefeild ruined the whole piece
51791

This was my favorite stage of the piece that i should not have given a bad force. Just pretend this is the finished product not the forcefield one51792

W_G_O_N_E
01-22-2012, 12:54 AM
i like the force i think the letters pop a little more , here is one i did for the piece battle

51795

Colors
01-22-2012, 01:04 AM
holy poop dude that ones sick. im just not a fan of the connections, not saying they are bad i just dont like connections haha. i have no crits dude, all the letters seem nice to me, good job

'Crook'
01-22-2012, 05:40 AM
yeah you're right colors that ones sickk !!

Wonky
01-22-2012, 09:31 AM
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/c228afdf.jpg

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/2b0fbe9a.jpg

kwu
01-22-2012, 10:30 AM
dope naked.. your stee is so consistent, only crit I can shoot your way is the right bar of the n meets the left one a lil weird, kinda makes it look like an m but not really cause I know its an n, maybe if you dropped that bottom line of the connection so that the bar meets horizontally. dope nonetheless homie

and that cutlas is grime too, though the thin connections are extra

some exchanges tryna expand the letter vocab, crits welcome n hit me up if you wanna exchange i'm always down

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7024/6738536173_4be7b47eca_z.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7164/6739555883_94e73f0d3a_z.jpg

Colors
01-22-2012, 10:53 AM
kwu your style is so dope man, and i feel you on my n situation haha. only thing i can really say about yours are that i know they arent what you write, but the mokas is the dopest IMO, but the N in zeno(i think) the middle bar i just dont like the way its bent, makes it look a little weird, and the z is tilted more than the other letters. thats really all i have, keep it up man.

And if you haven'talready, go vote in the Toy Piece Battle, we only need a few more voters, so go and vote!!

nkzs
01-22-2012, 11:36 AM
it doesn't look like you even try, tempo

did these during a power outage, the characters face is wonky as fuuck



AND KID UP THERE ^^^ don't write sedeone or sede.... you're a birch

I've been writing sede since 2009 so ill prolly continue to do so. Not saying I'm good or anything, clearly I'm still in the toy section. Just looks like if you want the name get out there and start bombing cause you've got catching up to do in that sense.

Colors
01-22-2012, 11:47 AM
So long as you dont bite each other and you dont live right next to each other you're good. although i see why seder doesnt want someone writing the same thing without the last letter haha, and youve been writing since 09 and thats what you got? Dankbudz is better and probably does get up, probably more than you. and you shouldnt be getting up, because you have a long way before your stuff even looks remotely okay-ish.

nkzs
01-22-2012, 11:55 AM
So long as you dont bite each other and you dont live right next to each other you're good. although i see why seder doesnt want someone writing the same thing without the last letter haha, and youve been writing since 09 and thats what you got? Dankbudz is better and probably does get up, probably more than you. and you shouldnt be getting up, because you have a long way before your stuff even looks remotely okay-ish.

Yeah its on and off but its only throws anyways. Not good enough to try pieces yet.

SteezeFuhDayz
01-22-2012, 02:05 PM
51811
figured id try a two letter. crits please.
@ W G O N E: that piece is sweeet, im feeling the colors a lot
@ kwu: your style is so dope and i agree with Colors, the mokas is the illest

dankbudz
01-22-2012, 03:30 PM
myes, myes... i probably do get up

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
01-22-2012, 03:36 PM
you fucked up your R, and the S looks a little weird. Youve come a long way though keep at it

MN Nice
01-22-2012, 08:32 PM
Good looks to Colors, dank, kwu, wgone.

Lookin for some crits on this
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00615-20120122-1929.jpg?t=1327282214

dankbudz
01-22-2012, 11:33 PM
your M is all by itself. you should loose those extensions on the U and have the right bar extend down like a normal U or nothin, maybe straighten out the left bar too.


lol this looked cooler when it was sketched out, i like the Es sorta, without the grimy shit. i keep fuckin up the legs on the Rs lately

Shit Outta Luck
01-23-2012, 12:57 AM
Simples for a whole page in the Toy bb thread?
That's dope! Keep at it all of you!

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
01-23-2012, 01:03 AM
god i hate you

dankbudz
01-23-2012, 01:05 AM
lolz

SONE.
01-23-2012, 01:25 AM
Yo, http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b10/byronpaulson/IMG068.jpg

Wonky
01-23-2012, 02:26 AM
Nah. Doesn't work for me. Lots of effort but too messy, no structure, bad Colour choices.

Did this quick n dirty last night. Fucked a few bits up and colored too quickly with a sharpie but just wanted to ink something rather than pencil all the time:

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/384a61f1.jpg

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/8b1fddfd.jpg

I course-corrected the top of the D as it was propa wrong. Shined the tags over breakfast ;)

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/0647704a.jpg

Wonky
01-23-2012, 05:42 AM
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/2b0fbe9a.jpg

Bump for crits... on this?

DEMPO
01-23-2012, 06:53 AM
i like the force i think the letters pop a little more , here is one i did for the piece battle
51795

YO g mad look up to you and what u've builded into tight like your stteze it'd be my pleaser to buy you some premium cans on me so Long as I can look at what u do..

Colors
01-23-2012, 09:02 AM
Inside- that pink blockbuster is the best thing you've done yet

PETER
01-23-2012, 09:08 AM
Inside- that pink blockbuster is the best thing you've done yet
Truth. Your handies still need work. I don't like overlaping on the S. On the pencil ones. I like the top one. The D and E are a little rough. The bottom one is solid. Your S's have improved a lot.

Wonky
01-23-2012, 09:14 AM
What's a handle? The D and E struggled because i'd run out of page which is what always happens. Just trying something different with that overlapping S. I am gonna get some tracing paper and start inking and colouring some pieces to see how get on... I'm sure i've improved, I know I have, but I still have a lot to learn. I can only really manage blockbusters, simps and bubbles, but I have to admit I do love those styles more than anything angular and wild. Thanks for input people....

PETER
01-23-2012, 09:59 AM
handstyle/tag. I'm a fan of what you've got going on and it that's what you like rock it like cradle. The tracing paper isn't a bad idea. You can run some photo copies if you wanna work of fills for 'em. I would keep the sketch super plain though.

Wonky
01-23-2012, 10:30 AM
Ah Handies not handles - get ya.... I am working on it - the more you work it the better it gets, it's like 99% better than what it was though.

Can I ask a question about handstyles? How do you know when you're smoking? I mean, does it have to look like everyone else's handstyle - or can it just look good on it's own merits? What are you / we aiming for there? I mean I quite like my handstyle (sometimes).