Blackbooks

[sadgeh]

well you can hate but its what it is
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eyWHHunvcWE&feature=plcp&context=C35c99d9UDOEgsToPDskJPoXF99B6u5ayEYfQ0MlSe
link-dump but see here why its biting.

[sadgeh]

47321


Crits?

[Hick94]

wonky loving your sketches man
ones i did today the picture turned out a bit funny on this one
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/7607/img0160li.jpg
http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/3305/img0155h.jpg
outline i did messed up the fill tho
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/6935/img0157he.jpg

[Wonky]

My call on Biting is; whilst you're a Toy, Bite away. It's one of the best ways to learn. When you graduate, never Bite again. You shouldn't need to, and it would be plagiarism not learning.

[sadgeh]

maybe is almost everything biting, but when you start earlier developing your own style its only better. Simps are not what i mean cause thats just some what everytime looks the same.

[eriekid]

sadgeh appreciate the link man ! this forum is better than the 814s...

[eriekid]

well you can hate but its what it is
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eyWHHunvcWE&feature=plcp&context=C35c99d9UDOEgsToPDskJPoXF99B6u5ayEYfQ0MlSe
link-dump but see here why its biting.
its very similar all i did was write out plain letters and outlined each individual part or line but yes i can see where your going

[sadgeh]

sadgeh appreciate the link man ! this forum is better than the 814s...
what the fuck do you mean cause my english is not all the best.

[eriekid]

what the fuck do you mean cause my english is not all the best. ha im sayin thanks for the link it makes sense and this page is better than others on bombing science

[gemer]

@hick your k' is looking bettter than the ones i seen before...keep on sketchin man

[Wonky]

seriously. When you're a pupil, steal from the masters. But be prepared to cut the apron strings and fly solo....

[gemer]

quick throw
47763

[KingKozmik]

47764

critiques?

[gemer]

^the a' dont fit with the rest of it

[eriekid]

bump that e on smoke

[dmot_snts]

bump for crits



47325

[gemer]

bump that e on smoke

this is good?

[SynOne]

Gemer - Yeah that's good lol.

As for the whole biting thing... Don't bite letters... Simples are all you need to be doing anyways. If you can't design your letters correctly, then you don't need to even be doing anything of that sort. You need simple shit guys, until you get down the way they work, you'll know when you can start moving on. The letters will come to you, you will be able to form your own shit. Don't fucking bite it.

[MN Nice]

Experimental on the bottom, usual style on top - exchange with slotr

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00576-20111231-0427.jpg?t=1325327599

[sadgeh]

Props at SynOne aboput the whole biting thing.

Gemer - uhm i like it but the K is al lil bit weird cause the other letters are big and compact but the K the < legs are too much apart from each other.
Mues - dope solid simp the T is not the best, i like it if it was more like this T.

[Tempo718]

page is looking decent here's another quick ting

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7145/6588285045_60bca5bb6d_z.jpg
that koo pimp

[2mor]

dont do this. you will NEVER devlop your own style through biting....this is the most ridiculoius thing ive read on here and theres ALOT of stupid shit to compare it to..

[Phillip McDougall]

There's a difference between biting and taking influence, but apparently too many people have a hard time discerning the two.

[2mor]

i dont.

[tico]

48714

[Wonky]

god this is awful...

48732

[MN Nice]

Awful? That's the best thing you've posted.

[Wonky]

I know art is subjective and all the styles are subjective, but, really? I hate it... Was trying to evolve a Dub but it has no flow or funk at all. It's white mans writing. I Hate it. Onwards and upwards

[gemer]

for my boy shep
48756

zeno
48757

[H1P30N3R]

I like your pieces wayyy more than your throws gemer props

[gemer]

^^ lol well thanks man :cool:

[H1P30N3R]

wasnt trying to offend you lol just meant I can you tell you have put more effort and time into piecing

[gemer]

lol fer sure i got you.. idefinatly spend more time peicing then throwin but im tryin to start throwin a bit more to beacuse idk really hahah

[knowtheledge]

khan

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7022/6609454291_1beddb89d5_z.jpg

[gemer]

^^ to be honest man not really diggen the bars in the middle at all but its clean so thats dope

[knowtheledge]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7174/6616488091_64fd37c287_z.jpg

[Coleo]

48881
Sorry about the colurs thats really all i have to work with... crits please

[gemer]

freestyle
48914

[Mori]

Fuck it gem this doesn't belong down here in this thread bro. That is way dope my man.please get some pics of some painting man, I am anxious to see your style on a wall. But straight on that piece man. Killer letters for a free style

[gemer]

@knowtheledge-now im diggen that one
@neso- slow down a bit and fix up the structure like with the n' and stuff bottom of it looks weird but keep em comin man

[knowtheledge]

ruuuude gem

[gemer]

^^^^ why ruuuude??? what do you mean?
@mori well thanks man :) thats awesome you think that and fer sure man ill see what i can do and im anxious to put my style up on a wall again but shit when i get it done ill be sure to post them up

[knowtheledge]

haha thats a positive comment brotha shit is ill

[gemer]

ah very nice :) thanks man

[Coleo]

@knowtheledge-now im diggen that one
@neso- slow down a bit and fix up the structure like with the n' and stuff bottom of it looks weird but keep em comin man
the stuff at the bottom is just me pumpin my markers and the orange drip was an accident

[bio99]

49033

crits?

[-Sinn-]

Bark fatten up the begining of the B and then work on your connections
http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r231/zinkery90/385027_10150450158736475_516386474_9113529_6785737 00_n.jpgcrits?

[gemer]

quick freestyle for a battle on puregraffiti.com
49155
old sketch but ill throw it up here monday freestylen as always.........not really liken this one
49236

[Wonky]

Nice stuff there Gem, handstyle looking v neat too

[knowtheledge]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7029/6624376953_68ecd70e81_z.jpg

[Phat 2]

quick "thery" sketch
comments?
https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/392161_346226498737599_100000507545549_1316360_385 533929_n.jpg

[Wonky]

You know Theory is spelt Theory not Thery tho right?

[Phat 2]

you know spelled is spelled spelled, not spelt tho right?

[Hick94]

both are correct....i think

[Wonky]

We spell words properly in England, and we give girls proper names not trailer trash bitch made up KFC worker names.

This is what he also wrote but being an admin he edited that without anyone knowing. Obviously wants some beef.

Phat2: "thery is obviously a girl's name dipfuck"

I was only trying to help, dipfuck.

[Tempo718]

aso besides all the crackheads talkin bout their next hit in here this page is decent so far.

[Tempo718]

49288

Jus me experimenting with some fills.

[dankbudz]

cute fill, bro. ^^

boredom freestyles in class today

[Wonky]

Nice hits dank. I can't work out what's going on in that fill Temp, might not be a bad thing.

[Phat 2]

wonky, if i had the patience to beef with a toy, I wouldn't have removed that part you quoted... now please, don't get on my dick nerves. I'm not in the mood for this bullshit. give proper crits or get the fuck out of here

[Wonky]

Ha no problem, I am indeed a toy, and I know it, as you are judging by the Thery piece ;) Chill out man and work on your structure...

[knowtheledge]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7141/6628355745_bcd0b70731_z.jpg

[Wonky]

Looks nice that sir. Nice choice of colors. I can't read what it says but hey ho.

[dankbudz]

those colors look nice but i don't like the letters. they just wrap around each other too much and shit.

posted this a few pages back, finished the 3d and cleaned it up a bit
still gotta finish the 420 tho..

[Wonky]

did these mental / shit / bollocks / toy wank outlines today in pencil.. gonna keep drawing and having fun with outlines for a few weeks before I break out the markers etc. Go tell me i'm shit etc :)



49321493224932349324

[MN Nice]

I spy a nipple on the bottom right.

[Wonky]

You got me. If you look closely you'll see a hideous dripping squid-Cthulhu-anus.

[MN Nice]

wtf

[Tempo718]

49352
Chain Gang

[gemer]

@seder 420 looks dope
@knowtheledge colors r sick but idk about the letters man i agree with seder they just like intertwine together
@tempo not really diggin it man lol the flames are weird....seen you do better

[malto]

I usually only do simple stuff but I thought I'd try something a bit more technical, didnt work out to well in my opinion.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/041.jpg

[TBS]

not been here in a week or so.
kinda like this one, think i'll work on it a bit again but crits would be handy.
http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x433/Stuedingwall4298/be504eb7.jpg

i would give some crits but i'm on my phone and your pictures aren't loading... will crit when i can see em though.

[BennyBoii]

@TBS- i like the background, and ima steal the drips on the tag above it, maybe work on defining the letters more and maybe throw a 3d in
49414
3d is a little fucked, and im just trying out some of the colours
crits?

[gemer]

how old r u?^^

[BennyBoii]

y do u ask

[dankbudz]

hahahaha goddamn

[Tempo718]

lol @ his lil copyright sign n' sheet

[BennyBoii]

i was just bored so i figured i'd put it on there

[The Silent One]

lol @ his lil copyright sign n' sheet

what's even cuter is how he got the date wrong, ahahahahaha

[The Silent One]

i don't usually post in here, but fuck it.. i'll be a toy

http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/387567_126523757465300_100003230306628_126185_1048 937719_n.jpg
http://a7.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/395224_126522600798749_100003230306628_126174_8043 91338_n.jpg
http://a3.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash4/390502_126522977465378_100003230306628_126176_1706 046920_n.jpg

[Tempo718]

who ever benny boii is they got 2 be sarcastic as fuq

[BennyBoii]

what's even cuter is how he got the date wrong, ahahahahaha
dude, how did i get the wrong date?

[straightgoods]

http://i.imgur.com/yVN77.jpg (http://imgur.com/yVN77)

[DaFugg]

dude, how did i get the wrong date?
Probably has a lot to do with the fact you scribbled out the 11 and put a 12.

Dont post anymore, practice just writing letters, handstyles, then when you have decent handwriting and maybe even a little style in it, then start working on barring and graff.

[Rasm]

lol @ his lil copyright sign n' sheet
As if anyone would ever consider stealing that shit... hahah, man his 3D is some of the worst I've ever seen.

[malto]

I usually only do simple stuff but I thought I'd try something a bit more technical, didnt work out to well in my opinion.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/041.jpg

bump4newpage

[sadgeh]

49453
49454

some detail
49456
49457

Crits?

[Wonky]

Cripes

[knowtheledge]

exchange tings

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7019/6631802983_8d7ffe33b5_z.jpg

[Hick94]

i like it very clean...not really liking the top of the s tho...
http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/6743/img0165o.jpg

[sadgeh]

Cripes

And why?

[kredyt]

knowtheledge wery nice

[aaesoo]

exchange tings

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7019/6631802983_8d7ffe33b5_z.jpg

mad fresh mad clean. only crit i have is i dont like the extension on top of the s, and the ink explosions/whatever coming out of the outline are a little too hectic for me.

[dankbudz]

rrrain

[gemer]

@knowtheledge not diggent the s' at all man but the rest looks aright nice n clean keep it up man
@danks nice simple im diggen it just dont know about the r' to much but i like the a'

[gemer]

old freestyle

49478

[TBS]

Knowledge, much the same as everyone else but it's clean as fuck and all looks good apart from that extension on the S.
Dank, i don't like the top of the R and the I looks too static. try to give it some movement
Gemer, the K and W are alright but then it gets a bit squashed together. not bad though.



http://i1181.photobucket.com/albums/x433/Stuedingwall4298/be504eb7.jpg

can i get some worth while crits on this?

[SynOne]

49479

Dank - Getting some simps down, I'd like to see you try some fills.

[gim]

49493
first time trying to piece, crits appreciated disregard the garbage tag lol

[The Silent One]

shit's tight! i wanna see some good 3d tho you. start to eloborate!

[eriekid]

say what you want haha crits on the tag?494944949549496494974949849499

[Tempo718]

49500
This has to be the worst so far.

[sadgeh]

49453
49454

some detail
49456
49457

Crits?

Some crits would be nice.

Tempo - concistent letters, but its becoming boring just add some more style.

[malto]

tempo - not feeling the little leg on the bottom right of the middle letter (A)?

http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/005.jpg
can i get some crits please?

[TBS]

take your time a bit more with the lines, just to neaten them up. and work on that handy a bit. keep it up though. i reckon your heading in the right direction

Temp - lose that kick on the right side of the A

[malto]

cheers man, i cant seem to find a pencil anywhere so thats part of the reason for the messiness. i just sketched it out with a paint pen then filled it haha.

[kredyt]

eriekid it's yours ? realy all projects keep the style!

regards kredyty (http://zyskuj24.pl) crew kredyt

[gim]

49493
first time trying to piece, crits appreciated disregard the garbage tag lol
bump for crits, much love

[toopski]

not bad for a simple just start making ur lines a bit straighter and cleaner and ull have a nice simple flowing

[PETER]

Sake: You're working in the right direction. Work on bar consistency (example: the legs and cross portion on the A and K). Your SAK leans (lmao that gave me a chuckle) to the left while your E stands straight up. It draws away from the flow of the piece.

[Tempo718]

49671
some mo' freestyle fuq shyt
I might stop doin 1 letter at a time. i ono

[PETER]

Tempo: your other style is way better than this mess. The line through the middle just looks bad imo. Work with this style without the bar through the middle and try and get it flowing a little better.

[knowtheledge]

some wackness:
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7029/6641932273_0cf85ebd3e_z.jpg

[spiltink]

49671
some mo' freestyle fuq shyt
I might stop doin 1 letter at a time. i ono

heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l

http://www.facebook.com/riley.s.brennan

looks like you just got BROAD SIDE FED UP THE BONE BULDGE LMAO

to prove its him look at the name of the image 400274_270138976380770_100001540101387_759614_1231 99693 thats a facebook image code, third number is profile id thank you and fuck you

~~post splitter wooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh~~

o hi i drew this piece to try something is it good.....

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/SAM_0044.JPG

[Fang]

Malto what kind of markers do u use??

[.gaye]

heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l

http://www.facebook.com/riley.s.brennan

looks like you just got BROAD SIDE FED UP THE BONE BULDGE LMAO

to prove its him look at the name of the image 400274_270138976380770_100001540101387_759614_1231 99693 thats a facebook image code, third number is profile id thank you and fuck you

~~post splitter wooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh~~

o hi i drew this piece to try something is it good.....

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13341191/a/SAM_0044.JPG

WTF spilt ink u bitch you steel my piece i drew that i hate it when people take credit for work that is not theirs

oh i caould have some crits

[malto]

cheers for the crits PETER


Malto what kind of markers do u use??
yo, i use uni posca paint pens. needa go get some more though cause thats the only 2 colours ive got left haha

[SynOne]

49479

Dank - Getting some simps down, I'd like to see you try some fills.

Biggaty Bump for some Crits, posting another tomorrow when I work on em in class.

[Tempo718]

heres a tip... dont post your bad drawings on facebook,.... it doesnt make you k00l
I have to have more patience i think ur right to say what I quoted, if I do post that type of style ever again its gonna be after I had a moment to do it right ok.

[dankbudz]

bored as hell over here. yea this dudes gon lost his hand

[SkateJunt]

crits? lines are kinda rough cuz im using sharpies and thin ass graph paper

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7143/6646916011_9641f052b5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6646916011/)
Picture 184 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6646916011/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[Wonky]

Just keep writing - over and over... dont stop. Still a bit rough...

[Jiska Matos]

49730 another one i did in the ofice, my boss has nice markers lol

[SkateJunt]

Just keep writing - over and over... dont stop. Still a bit rough...
thanks, yeah i try to practice as much as i can, and just getting the hang of the new name

[SkateJunt]

some jokes lil tings i sketched up, dans is my buddy

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7005/6647369015_bf9972264c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369015/)
Picture 188 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369015/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7162/6647369747_4c88e10f94.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369747/)
Picture 189 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369747/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7018/6647368357_b4247805b5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647368357/)
Picture 187 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647368357/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7027/6647367371_4163d87bb5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647367371/)
Picture 185 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647367371/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[unjust ban]

your B looks like something that isnt a B

it would be better with circles as holes??

[knowtheledge]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7171/6647950259_287244ef7b_z.jpg

[unjust ban]

I have to have more patience i think ur right to say what I quoted, if I do post that type of style ever again its gonna be after I had a moment to do it right ok.

you keep posting the same shit shit and no progreess fuck of

[Wonky]

@knowtheledge Veery clean pen work Know. I'd like to see you throw some flow into your pieces. They're a little static and 'uninteresting'. Not bad, just not a lot of movement.
@skatejunt I like the energy you there at your work. Don't lose that. Try to tighten up the letter structure. Take a step backwards into simp / keyboard letters. There's no way to really tell what that character is after the G

[SynOne]

He only needs to really needs to work on that B.

[Wonky]

No the e and r are sketchy

[Tempo718]

4973549736

[SynOne]

49739

Wonky - I disagree, I do think the R needs a tad bit more definition, but I think the E is fine.

Tempo - The wrong direction, I can't even tell if that's a F, E, or R.

Jiska - Clean, what markers are those? Only thing that bugs me, and it isn't even really a bad thing at all, I would have just left it out is the one arrow on the right side. Just not my flavor is all.

[The Silent One]

http://img829.imageshack.us/img829/3407/photo0170i.jpg
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/6592/photo0172c.jpg
http://img803.imageshack.us/img803/7594/photo0173j.jpg

[Colors]

tempo use bars

[Jiska Matos]

49739

Wonky - I disagree, I do think the R needs a tad bit more definition, but I think the E is fine.

Tempo - The wrong direction, I can't even tell if that's a F, E, or R.

Jiska - Clean, what markers are those? Only thing that bugs me, and it isn't even really a bad thing at all, I would have just left it out is the one arrow on the right side. Just not my flavor is all.

OTR 830,840,850, staedler liner0.3 and molotow 127...here is something new i did today at work 4976649767

[Tempo718]

do the first we see say SERP

[knowtheledge]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7001/6651547401_34dfa199dd_z.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7001/6651549493_021695c5f8_z.jpg

[smokeitup]

some jokes lil tings i sketched up, dans is my buddy

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7005/6647369015_bf9972264c.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369015/)
Picture 188 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369015/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7162/6647369747_4c88e10f94.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369747/)
Picture 189 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647369747/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7018/6647368357_b4247805b5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647368357/)
Picture 187 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647368357/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7027/6647367371_4163d87bb5.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647367371/)
Picture 185 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6647367371/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

good shit stewart stevenson, lol!

[gim]

49803
basic idea for a throwie, I'm new at this
can i get a crit, much love

[Phat 2]

...
much love?

[SkateJunt]

crits on the trow i did for the throwie battle? the only letter i use in this in my tag is the E
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7022/6655409693_b480bcc2ed.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6655409693/)
Picture 192 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6655409693/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[how can sheban!?]

49819

[Wonky]

Skate. I still like your style but your letters just don't make enough sense to me. I'd waste some paper doing alphabets. The q is horrible. The O is also a non-starter

[emace1]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7168/6655493989_07dce9dd08.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6655493989/)
IMG_0148 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6655493989/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/spacehoes/), on Flickr

[SkateJunt]

haha yeah ive never done a Q in my life. and what do you mean by non starter?

[Wonky]

It just doesnt cut it stu. Its an oval with a face on it. Needs thought bro.

@emace that face is quality, Handstyle coming on nicely too blud

[SkateJunt]

tru yeah i dono i dont do os either, i just saw a couple of people just makeing their os chars so i tried it, guess it doesnt work, im gonna try an alphabet right now

[Wonky]

If you're gonna do that it needs to be super-stylish. Otherwise it's just pure lame.

Don't be afraid to waste reams of paper sorting these letters out blud. It's you versus them.

[Phillip McDougall]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7168/6655493989_07dce9dd08.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6655493989/)
IMG_0148 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/spacehoes/6655493989/) by sirduke! (http://www.flickr.com/people/spacehoes/), on Flickr

Intermediate worthy.

[Wonky]

Yep. It's good that blud.


Sheblind, you need to ground your letters. The a don't work and then after that, the whole flow is fucked. Imagine you started your piece on a train. The a is pointing at the moon.

[Tempo718]

sooooooo dem sarcasm dem

[Colors]

too lazy to try and havent sketched in a while
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[Wonky]

A little 2B outline I did this morning

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/a962c27e.jpg
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/e84d26dd.jpg

[SkateJunt]

crits on this? i know the bars are really off, i just quickly sketched it for a general idea im gonna do a better one right now
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7019/6660320683_becac384ff.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6660320683/)
Picture 193 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6660320683/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[Jiska Matos]

50181 you guys think this is intermidiate worthy?

[Skadeem]

I'd say....definitely better than some shit that gets posted

[dankbudz]

that joker is dope

fucked up the purple one haha
and mission some black shit in the 3d

[Jiska Matos]

The "d" looks a bit strange on the last one, but so clean as usual DANK

[malto]

dank - feelin that first simple its got a nice flow.
jiska- that shits insane, intermediate thread if you ask me.


changed my name to RASEK. first one was just a stoned sketch i know i should stay simple for now.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/011.jpg
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/012.jpg
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/013.jpg

also dont mind all the handstyles just trying to get a bit of flow into it, being a new name and shit.

[Jiska Matos]

POSCAS 4 lining can be a pain in the ass xD

[Skadeem]

Work on the last one rasek it's pretty interesting. and seder I'd advise against mixing cases of the same letter in one piece, especially a simp

[gemer]

@malto looks aright and all just think you need to clean it up a bit kinda sloppy dude

freestyle...not diggen the n' to much on this one

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[Tempo718]

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[EWL24]

gemer - that looks sick, the N is nice its just the extension that has to go, but still that is awesome for a freestyle. Ur stuff always makes me want to go and draw some more :D

[MoNaRK3]

Man,idk if i'm talking out my ass here or if anyone else agree's with me, but i mean. It doesn't matter how many little scribbles or tags you add around your graff, its still just a bubble letter you know? Maybe its just me.

[PREA672]

@malto There's already a RASEK on BS

[gemer]

@EWL24 thanks man thumbs up

[gim]

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basic idea for a throwie, I'm new at this
can i get a crit, much love
bumpin

[Wonky]

Sim, the first up strOke on the s is fundamentally wrong, throwing the whole letter off.

[MN Nice]

Gonna put some color around this later.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00588-20120111-0647.jpg?t=1326300652

[Wonky]

Why bother? Why are you drawing the same thing over and over?

[kwu]

Whats good kids
Gem.. shit is ill as usual

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7156/6665098509_215393628b_z.jpg

[MN Nice]

Why bother? Why are you drawing the same thing over and over?

I've been making subtle changes each time if you haven't noticed. And its far different than the last two book pages I posted before. Notice how knowtheledge is doing the same with his Khan pieces? Similar letters but with subtle changes in every one.

[Colors]

Lol malto are you really trying to write that? There's a rasek even on this site and he's damn good hahaha

[SynOne]

Gemer - DEFINITELY feeling that E man.

MN - I wouldn't make your S's so blocky, they tend to look all weird when they are.

First pic is sketch of the bottom one on the 2nd pic, the last is a freestyle.. meh. Crits?

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[gemer]

^^thanx man and that bottom freestyles dope man definatly think you need to freestyle more like ya boi
@kwu thanks to you as well andyour shit looks clean and the style is funky fresh
@MN nice hahah i agree with wonky man u do the sameee one over and over but keep postin man just sayin go outside the box a bit
@tempo badd ass character dude thumbs up

[Tempo718]

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[malto]

Lol malto are you really trying to write that? There's a rasek even on this site and he's damn good hahaha

Unless hes from Australia then I couldnt give a fuck

[KingKozmik]

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[gemer]

not diggen this one at all

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[dankbudz]

Mn NIce- thats startin to look nice. don't fux with adding more color, thats as much as you need.
Syn ONe- the 2nd pic bottom piece is the best. bottom freestyles not bad, not feel in the rigid ass loop in the middle of the W, shoulda left it plain n simple
tempo- keeep practicing

my pictures kinda big..

[Tempo718]

dank - any a more charactors on deck yoga I could be luke pahlease g cause u got that on lock imo.
mues - your progression is consistant dont vexx. easy.
every1 else - stay ya heads up but dont post something til. it is your satisfaction.
i think going back and reanalyzing your bars and etc.
can in prove your flow if you do three in a row but something different n' more complex as you move to 1,2,3
(1) Being simple could benefit your patience also and just enjoy when you see what eventually progresses
into something a little differnt that what the 1st rendition was.

[Tempo718]

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I like where he going with this uh.. mainly first one the one after is eh... but uh yeah that otha one do it 3 times in a row se post it plz?

[dankbudz]

got no idea what you just said about characters


quickie sketch before i pass out.. maybe you can see it.. bout to color it tomorrow
the R is busted as fuck

[kwu]

nice seder

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7013/6684885531_d53b7c6095_z.jpg

[MN Nice]

Those colors are illin!!^ Nice grey detail on the letters. I'm not so sure about your extensions though, you seem to be going out of your way to make them.

@dank - can't really see the letters too well, post it up inked. Thanks for the good looks on mine though.

This is what I meant by adding some more color. I think it gives it a little more movement.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00594-20120111-1858.jpg?t=1326385096

[2mor]

[QUOTE=Wonky;1769163]A little 2B outline I did this morning

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/a962c27e.jpg
most of them letters are hurtinnn...spesh the s. little dragon face is the only thing remotely worth keepin i reckon man, anyways, half coloured.50643 ...colourin was just quick, to be redone .

[dankbudz]

that khan is dope

[Wonky]

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/61bdd825.jpg
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/6ce40aed.jpg
http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/98d236b5.jpg

[Colors]

Crits on any of this? the hollow 2 letter is my fave, the finished 2 letter is pretty old so its not the best. and i put a force around the sunset naked but it sort of ruined the piece so i am just gonna upload the unruined version haha/
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[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

this is what i meant by adding some more color. I think it gives it a little more movement.


Lmao XD:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleye s::rolleyes:

[gemer]

@colors y the upside down cross?
@wonky gettin btter keep drawing

[Colors]

gemer- at first it was supposed to be a devilish evil piece but i changed halfway through but i already outline that part haha

[SkateJunt]

crits on all these?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7170/6675582733_afc299874f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6675582733/)
Picture 202 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6675582733/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7004/6686749153_80603c312d.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6686749153/)
Picture 205 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6686749153/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7002/6686888405_f30e73b7c7.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6686888405/)
Picture 206 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6686888405/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7028/6687084327_f35179fe06.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6687084327/)
Picture 207 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6687084327/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7146/6687084637_cd93e7f8df.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6687084637/)
Picture 208 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6687084637/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[2mor]

not too bad, letters are kinda weak though n seem too skinny..anyways not gonna repost the flic, but feel free to crit the picca few posts up i put on here earlier x

[Tempo718]

roaches ... are ... fast

[kwu]

@naked.. I like that first one a lot yo keep it up
@gerb.. those pieces are all over the place... take a step back n watch how the other kats on here have been progressing through simples and bar consistency. the throws are alright but the r aint working you dont need the extra kink in the leg... keep it up tho

[MN Nice]

Junt: go simpler on your letters and thicken them up, random ass extensions and connections are weak. And for your throw, don't connect the middle line of your b to the r, it makes it look like an e. and don't do the flat top, just keep fuckin around with it.

Colors: diggin the first piece, real nice fill. just make sure you're keeping your letters evenly spread out.

Wonk: actually feeling that top piece. Your N could've used a little more room and less space on your D and E

[gemer]

@ gerb drop all them extensions off those first flics

freestyle tryin something new
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after looking at it a couple times on here makes me hate it :(

[dankbudz]

lol, its dope broski. just gotta pay attention to the hights of those letters. i wish those lines were bars thou, i think bars would look better lol

[gemer]

^^^haha fer sure man them letters are all different sizes....and definatly bars woulda been way better i was stoned when i did it tryin to get on a different level haha but thanks dude

[SynOne]

Just some pen freebies testing some new stuff.

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[PETER]

Wonky: That top piece is interesting. I like it. Run with it. I'd like to see what you do with colors.
Gemer: Dont hate it. I like the flowing vibe of it. I think it would work well with a Rime style to it.
Edit:
SynOne: Both have potential. I like the top one better, but that R needs help. The R on the bottom one is looking a bit like a B.

[SynOne]

I feel, you and agree with both, the top R was actually going to have to top loop like like the top of the S, but I fucked it up, can't undo the pen lol. As for the R looking like a B, I know, I just didn't give the leg enough room for the extension.

[kwu]

gettin better skewr just watch those W's, try writing EW over n over till you find a way for them to flow

[Tempo718]

syn - that 1st one there is on a new direction imo i like it.

[Cisco]

not gonna throw in colours till i get all the kinks worked out. the R turned out like shit and im still not stoked on the rest of it. crits would be appreciated.

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[SkateJunt]

crits on some throws i drew today?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7005/6693103331_c1ddc30953.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6693103331/)
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7143/6693102987_9e17206ce6.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/Picture 211 by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[Shit Outta Luck]

Syn, try different EW like whats his face said. Try and maybe make the left bar of the W go up and right then kink left. If you know what I mean.
And to those trying throws...try more. Do more handies. And do more simples. Throwies come wit time.

[manchoo]

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[SynOne]

Manch, this is NO DOUBT better than what you posted in the intermediate. Do more shit like these.

[malto]

a little different to the other one.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/005-1.jpg

then a quick piece i sketched just to go for a paint tomorrow and a little freestyle above it.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/008.jpg
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/007.jpg

[SneeZ]

rasek, handstyles are off tha hook. And i also saw some of your posts in intermediate thread, i have to say you got some nice bombs. keep rockin on!

[snal]

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some sketches of mine :) let the dollar circulate and hope paint comes home

[Jake_NN_Bake]

New name. Changed it to make the tag flow more and my sketch looks better with it as well :D
Crits appreciated.
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/42/img20120116144623.jpg

[SLVRONE]

crits welcome :D5119551196

[SLVRONE]

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[MN Nice]

then a quick piece i sketched just to go for a paint tomorrow and a little freestyle above it.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/008.jpg

Bangin. Take notes kids. Notice his bars. Keep with this style dude, you down to exchange?

[dankbudz]

420

[oversprae mds]

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[Tempo718]

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was doin a pen freestyle tonight while putting my 2 nephews 2 sleep worked like a charm on the sleepy part, eh freestylie part i ono bout.

[thebench504]

http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/259117_214087995279750_100000356521032_719036_6643 337_o.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/258885_214088031946413_100000356521032_719037_6159 166_o.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/258533_214088101946406_100000356521032_719039_2054 442_o.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/257345_214088251946391_100000356521032_719046_5214 518_o.jpg
http://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/243233_214088285279721_100000356521032_719047_2645 84_o.jpghttp://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i270/thebencstore/240985_214088175279732_100000356521032_719043_7495 088_o.jpg

www.thebench504.com - Birmingham graffiti store (http://www.thebench504.com/)

[PETER]

Bench: You've got some seriously sick pages there.

Looking for some crits on these. They are old, but looking for ideas on advancement.
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[SLVRONE]

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[Colors]

I need some legit crits, my ideas are so boring and suck.Blockbuster cam out decent i think, and the kansr is for the battle. the nakd that looks like nako was a quick effortless piece but decided id flick it anyways cuz i sorta like the feel, idk
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[PETER]

Colors: Try leaning your letters the other direction. Also try tall an narrow.... Just stretch and bend away. That Kansr isn't bad.

[dankbudz]

Colors- those aren't that boron compared to most others shit. some good practice

PETER- get a peter griffin avatar. you should just do work on simples if you are stuck on development. fuck around with basic styles and just draw.
that sevr is coo



somebody hit me with some crits

[PETER]

Dank: I like where that piece is going. Try fucking with bar widths. Think of how a chisel tip marker looks and fuck with that. Also try leaning your letters to the left a little. Maybe go taller and with thicker bars. For the CDXX try making the tops super fat and the bottoms super narrow.... just some thoughts. I keep forgetting to flick that Dank piece I did years ago.
Edit: That skull is cool. I would like to see you do it more candy skull style. Day of the Dead like.

[Colors]

thanks seder, heres my crits on your piece. It seems like the bottom bar of your E has too many kinks, id just get rid of the weird extensions to the bottom bar of the E. Your S looks like its bent in too many ways, maybe try a little simpler S? Your definitly moving in the right direction though, i like your style. the right leg of the R looks a little awkward also. And this is just a tip i use sometimes to help with the flow of my piece, i usually draw a line on top and on the bottom of my letters to make sure none of my letters go past the line so that they are all the same size, but thats just what i think. In all i like your style and your moving in the right direction, but keep staying siimple. Oh yeah and one last thing, maybe you could add a force to your piece, it looks a little bare haha. keep it up though

[dankbudz]

thanks for all the crits dudes, both are hella useful.
drew that skull with a rebel8 dia de los muertos shirt in mind, didn't show through much, that type of style is dope though.
you should post up the dank piece, you keep makin me wonder what that looks like, but you never post it!
also the piece is unfinished, i at least know to slap some 3d and outline on. I'm just a lazy fuck and post my shit before its done.

[Colors]

oh wasnt sure though because sometimes i do pieces with just the outline, like yours. do you want to exchange seder?

[snal]

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some sketches of mine :) let the dollar circulate and hope paint comes home
some advices?

[Colors]

yeah veko go simpler. do straight simples, that stuff doesnt look too great but if you just do some simple pieces for a while youll notice your stuffs gonna get better overtime

[PETER]

Snal: what he said. look at Dank and Color's simples I have a few up there too. If you start out with basic square letters you can start to bend and stretch them like the naked. You've got to build the foundation of the house before the roof.

[Hick94]

did these over the weekend...internet been shit latley takes ages to upload pics...
veko i agree with colors draw keyboard letters to get a idea of bars...
http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/9822/img0004kx.jpg
http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/996/img0002fni.jpg
critz are always welcomed :D

[kwu]

Props bench antik naked n seder lookin ill

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7010/6716379689_0a5a4a2e60_z.jpg

[Colors]

damn kwu feeling your style. the only thing i really have to say is the N looks a little awkward and parts of the A because the bars get really skinny compared to the KH.i like it man good work
Edit: and your KH looks bigger than the N, the n gets really small. and the left leg of the A's a little awkward. Just what i think

[kwu]

aha thanks dude flicked it on an angle thats why it might look bigger respect for the input tho homes

[malto]

Bangin. Take notes kids. Notice his bars. Keep with this style dude, you down to exchange?

Cheers man, yeah for sure. Its Mues right?

[Wonky]

Simps

http://i1142.photobucket.com/albums/n606/clinicaldaz1/6e3a9f56.jpg

[Colors]

just a quick 2 letter, decided to do it in lowercase cuz im always rockin the uppercase.
crits would be awesome
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And this is a piece i just did but im only flickin the na because im in love with the n on this piece

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[malto]

Make the K a little bigger it looks all squashed up.

just sketched this up, i need some new markers it looks fucked with just the outlines.
http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy314/lachyw/008-1.jpg

[SkateJunt]

crits?
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7169/6717594045_89c728502f.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6717594045/)
Picture 216 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6717594045/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[Colors]

well that should probably go in the throwie thread but hmmm im bad at throws so i guess ill try to crit it.well, i think the g looks wicked weird like the whole thing, and the bubble part of it on the left is too big in my opinion, and your throw is sorta wavy, not saying make it even and flat but dont have it go all over the place. Then again you dont have to listen to this because i never do throws

And this is just what my rip big L piece looks like right now. this was sort half assed so im going to do another later in the week that will be waay better. But for now, anyone wanna crit this before i go any further?

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RIP BIG L

[Colors]

i raped the forums today. well heres the finished product. has a green force but you cants really see it
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oh yeah and i didnt do it this little dude did it
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[Tempo718]

feelin the letters on this page guys. no lie

[oversprae mds]

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[dankbudz]

got bored,

colors i dig tha RIP BIG but the el if its EL or LL or what. just looks like twirls. but somehow i new what it said before i read what you wrote... haha

can't really crit that SPRAE, i liked ur other stuff you posted more

[SynOne]

Dank - 3D is looking NIIICEEEE, I dig your E's and R's the most. Keep 'er rocking.

Lil' Freestyle during class. E got hidden to much.

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