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-task-
04-21-2006, 12:08 PM
those are nice bro, i kinda like the second better, just seems more fresh, would love to see that on a wall.

cookies 000
04-21-2006, 12:13 PM
im feelin that first one but to me the 2nd ones cleaner

beefgerky
04-21-2006, 12:17 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@Apr 21 2006, 01:46 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture754-1.jpg

new one.
bump

AoAssis
04-21-2006, 12:21 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis@Apr 21 2006, 01:33 AM


http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/1320/picture2847xt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

slap.
bump

cookies 000
04-21-2006, 12:21 PM
the k looks wierd

cookies 000
04-21-2006, 12:22 PM
yo ao who drew that?

some guy from NCI...
04-21-2006, 01:00 PM
Couple of things I did last night..

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/9426/echo5star0zf.th.jpg (http://img73.imageshack.us/my.php?image=echo5star0zf.jpg)
and
http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/8967/echodub1dz.th.jpg (http://img67.imageshack.us/my.php?image=echodub1dz.jpg)

Any comments would be great

aoime
04-21-2006, 01:00 PM
^^check the quote

some guy from NCI...
04-21-2006, 01:10 PM
trf

some guy from NCI...
04-21-2006, 01:13 PM
A stencil, still need to cut out the fist and transfer to cardboard though.

http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/3703/echostenc8sr.th.jpg (http://img233.imageshack.us/my.php?image=echostenc8sr.jpg)

And another quickie..

---

http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/2048/echpinkstripe1lw.th.jpg (http://img403.imageshack.us/my.php?image=echpinkstripe1lw.jpg)

molotow_15
04-21-2006, 01:23 PM
and whats it supposed to be
zoom on your camara would help

some guy from NCI...
04-21-2006, 01:32 PM
Originally posted by some guy from NCI...@Apr 21 2006, 01:13 PM
A stencil, still need to cut out the fist
And why dont you try clicking on the image to get a better view :o

AoAssis
04-21-2006, 01:41 PM
Originally posted by cookies 000@Apr 21 2006, 12:22 PM
yo ao who drew that?
me....who else?

vare_187uk
04-21-2006, 01:44 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/vre.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/cfcpsc.jpg

some guy from NCI...
04-21-2006, 01:54 PM
^^ I really like that second one!

Mexiklan Beaner
04-21-2006, 02:11 PM
here is a sketch i did for a friend. what do u guys think bout it? any comments?

http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/7277/fridayapril21200623vd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some guy from NCI...
04-21-2006, 02:17 PM
^^ I really like that too!

Have you thought about colouring it?

AoAssis
04-21-2006, 02:19 PM
your an idiot shut the fuck up, you say everything looks good, both of those suck.

some guy from NCI...
04-21-2006, 02:21 PM
:huh:


wawawawaaankaaaa

Mexiklan Beaner
04-21-2006, 02:23 PM
ill prolly think bout colorin it

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
04-21-2006, 03:26 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis@Apr 21 2006, 02:19 PM
your an idiot shut the fuck up, you say everything looks good, both of those suck.
hahahaha your awesome.

some guy from NCI...
04-21-2006, 03:58 PM
^^ The guy who sucks up to and from the wanker!

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
04-21-2006, 04:11 PM
you talkin about me? no, i dont suck up to anyone. I havent even talked to or about ao in my life. the only reasdon i said hes awesome, is cause hes funny. and i like it when people say shut the fuck up.

I saw the piece, and it wasnt that bad. it looks like it started out good and went downhill. not so many arrows, and the charac could use some work too. take out the blunt cigar thing, it makes it look cheesy.

Heres a sticker i did earlier, just havent had a chance to post it.

http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/8286/dscn02576hb.jpg

Mse
04-21-2006, 04:21 PM
Originally posted by some guy from NCI...@Apr 21 2006, 02:21 PM
:huh:


wawawawaaankaaaa
***** WHAT!!
you insulting ao? that aint gonna go down
my fucking computer EXPLODED! ***** gotta get my music back all 60 gb of it fucking mutherfucking bullshit
bill wheel of cheese dont get offended but thats whack dont make your letters overlap so much try to stick to one thickness less add-ons more structure yeahh

MF Feed Letter
04-21-2006, 04:21 PM
that a is really wack and you need to work on getting your lines smoother

throw came up with during school

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0878.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0879.jpg

ion-i
04-21-2006, 04:24 PM
mexiklan: i got some crits for you. The hands holding the can are hella fucked up. his finger is all distorted and looks retarded. hold a can in your hand and sketch how your holding it.
the eyes, what the fuck is with the eyes. the lids are going over the bandana. shits all anime lookin, which is pure stupid (anime that is).
is that a fucking retarded cock under the book?
like he said before, cigar (or blunt since weed is soOoO fuckin cool now a days) looks dumb. like, it just makes the character look dumb.
what is the character in? a box? that a cape?
the actualy piece on the botom is pretty good, not to many arrows, you got a little mexi flag for your pride n whatnot and that doesnt over kill it, but the 2 "hearts" you have is a bit repetitive. such as the one under the T and under the flag pole.
just some crits.
and i cant really read the top, although the general idea of how you kept it simple was good, its just you put spaces between each letter which made it hard to read.

Mse
04-21-2006, 04:24 PM
i dont like your I otherwise good yeah *****... yeah... *****...yeah.....gangster shit.....yeah......*****.....*****....bigga....

some guy from NCI...
04-21-2006, 04:32 PM
Originally posted by Mse+Apr 21 2006, 04:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Mse @ Apr 21 2006, 04:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-some guy from NCI...@Apr 21 2006, 02:21 PM
:huh:


wawawawaaankaaaa
***** WHAT&#33;&#33; [/b][/quote]
http://demios.whattheboat.com/random/popeplz.jpg

sane*04
04-21-2006, 04:36 PM
new piece...i did it for the toy battle...the acanners fucked up srry
CRITS? COMMENTS? any thing to help me out

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e135/Omblog/scan0014.jpg

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
04-21-2006, 04:40 PM
hahaha i like the pope thing....lol

yeah dude, i know my letters are effed up. specially the G. I&#39;m more of a charac person anyway. but i drew a baby angel fetus, and it looked lonely. so i accompanied it with some letters. But thanks. ill try to get my structure down more....

tubedisasters
04-21-2006, 05:28 PM
lighter= size comparison, but it is a cool looking lighter
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/3d002.jpg

Mse
04-21-2006, 05:31 PM
other than the r its dope
but the size makes up for the r
bravoo

AMAZ tbscrew
04-21-2006, 05:33 PM
why so small?

sane*04
04-21-2006, 05:42 PM
who are we talking about?

beefgerky
04-21-2006, 06:07 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Apr 21 2006, 04:21 PM
that a is really wack and you need to work on getting your lines smoother

throw came up with during school

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0878.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0879.jpg
bigadee bump

AMAZ tbscrew
04-21-2006, 06:10 PM
^wuts wit ur sig?


bump dis shit 2 he puts work into his shit.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/3d002.jpg

JETc17
04-21-2006, 06:12 PM
Originally posted by tubedisasters@Apr 21 2006, 05:28 PM
lighter= size comparison, but it is a cool looking lighter
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/3d002.jpg
do you have a scanner? no?
buy one


scan it, then blow it up on the computer
print it out n trace it with a sharpie on to a page protector


put it front of a lamp to project it onto a wall
works for me :lol:
makes great posters too

AMAZ tbscrew
04-21-2006, 06:15 PM
scanners suck.

beefgerky
04-21-2006, 06:22 PM
my sig is flooded canals.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-21-2006, 06:24 PM
oh for some reason it looked like buildings...i tght it was like a flooded city.

segway
04-21-2006, 06:42 PM
intwo, dont bend the middle (vertical) bar of the i so much
aside from that that shows a lot of promise, keep it up

sane*04
04-21-2006, 06:55 PM
Originally posted by sane*04@Apr 21 2006, 04:36 PM
new piece...i did it for the toy battle...the acanners fucked up srry
CRITS? COMMENTS? any thing to help me out

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e135/Omblog/scan0014.jpg
hey i need some more crits

beefgerky
04-21-2006, 08:15 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture754-1.jpg
freestyle.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture753.jpg
throw.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-21-2006, 08:21 PM
gerk<3

Sluts_r_us
04-21-2006, 08:40 PM
quick pen sketch from school...

http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/5829/peskpenfreestyle9hw.jpg

C3ZR ONE
04-21-2006, 10:25 PM
A bunch of unfinished slaps for Nosy and Zato1.. (and a couple of bbook pages.. I got wrieters block like a motherfucker.)
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000042.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000043.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000041.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000038.jpg
<_<

flclnaruto1213
04-21-2006, 10:33 PM
sluts those balls look horrible.

Fosale!
04-21-2006, 10:42 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Apr 21 2006, 10:25 PM
A bunch of unfinished slaps for Nosy and Zato1.. (and a couple of bbook pages.. I got wrieters block like a motherfucker.)
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000042.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000043.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000041.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00542775f00000038.jpg
<_<
Cezr :wub:
and flcnaruto i agree teehee i just left ur paddd

Sluts_r_us
04-21-2006, 11:04 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Apr 21 2006, 10:33 PM
sluts those balls look horrible.
yeah i know bro...just go bored in religion and added them...w.e...

sane*04
04-21-2006, 11:49 PM
CRITS??

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e135/Omblog/scan0011.jpg

IKEZ
04-22-2006, 12:25 AM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8803/new8up.jpg (http://imageshack.us)A little something im working on. Just wanted some pointers before i go on with markers and shit...I know its a lil messy.

AoAssis
04-22-2006, 01:08 AM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us+Apr 21 2006, 11:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sluts_r_us @ Apr 21 2006, 11:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-flclnaruto1213@Apr 21 2006, 10:33 PM
sluts those balls look horrible.
yeah i know bro...just go bored in religion and added them...w.e... [/b][/quote]
you go to private school?

Stewe
04-22-2006, 01:17 AM
haha my friend goes to a private school with rascist teachers i mean his religion teacher told a girl to go back to mexico..and public schools are fucked up?

anyways a few slaps i made they arent great..and i dont have a handstyle really

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00546.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00547.jpg
bad pic it says AB for Anti Bush

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00548.jpg

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00544.jpg
sketch for a girl

any crits? comments

AoAssis
04-22-2006, 01:22 AM
Ya i go to private school to and one of my teachers asked a girl in my class " are you a catholic" the girl said " no &#39;&#39; then my teachers like " O thats bad, you should be."

i just think thats really fucked up.

beefgerky
04-22-2006, 01:33 AM
well the school u go to is a catholic school...

but still...freedom of religion is an amendment. so fuck that.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-22-2006, 01:35 AM
herd u dont go 2 skool...reason? or ther just aint one?

i think it took me like 6-8 min 2 sketch this.looks better in person...i need a cam

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture066.jpg

AoAssis
04-22-2006, 01:38 AM
Gerk doesnt go to school cuz he thinks he can make a living off art even though he sucks, he just droped out, and since he droped out his mom left him cuz she was so pissed.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-22-2006, 01:47 AM
gerks shit aint bad lol some of his stuff is actuly hot..but um yea makin a livin off art is hard...and his mom leavin is kinda fucked up lol

kill
04-22-2006, 01:50 AM
furreals?
u shouldnt drop out even if u are good at art

beefgerky
04-22-2006, 01:53 AM
haha, ao is silly, i do independent study, its the same as reg school, just at home, and im trying to go to art college, even tho i will probably end up at trade school.

some guy from NCI...
04-22-2006, 05:31 AM
^^ I&#39;m liking the top picture middle piece, and the bottom picture simple piece.


EDIT This was to CEZR

cord
04-22-2006, 05:53 AM
:unsure:

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/japstyle.jpg

obseen
04-22-2006, 06:02 AM
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00558133f00000005.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00558133f00000006.jpg
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00558133f00000007.jpg

cord
04-22-2006, 06:21 AM
the green one is nice, and the middle one would be if you tidied it up a bit and perhaps used thicker outlines.......

a sticker:

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/technostylee.jpg

BBoy_ErbN
04-22-2006, 06:54 AM
http://img1.purerave.com/2/3/2318109.jpg
for a toy battle here...

crits would be great.

BBoy_ErbN
04-22-2006, 06:55 AM
Originally posted by cord@Apr 22 2006, 05:53 AM
:unsure:

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/japstyle.jpg
decent try bro,

just need some letter structure in my opinion.

practice doing the basics some more.

aren1
04-22-2006, 07:10 AM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/3217/i2586hr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

constructive criticism pls...

Rare
04-22-2006, 07:16 AM
Originally posted by Rare@Apr 21 2006, 06:53 AM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6295/skice012640x4808hv.jpg
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5114/skice009640x4808tq.jpg

give comments please

some guy from NCI...
04-22-2006, 07:20 AM
Aren the letters and 3d are off at a few places.

Rare, no offence but I cant even think of a cuss to make fun of it, but when I do i&#39;ll tell ya. Just work on doing basic lettering, make it really simple at first. then you&#39;ll start to notice that if you put a little edge sticking out, or a arrow here and there it&#39;ll start to fit in. But for now just do really simple bubble writing.

BBoy_ErbN
04-22-2006, 07:24 AM
Originally posted by some guy from NCI...@Apr 22 2006, 07:20 AM
Aren the letters and 3d are off at a few places.

Rare, no offence but I cant even think of a cuss to make fun of it, but when I do i&#39;ll tell ya. Just work on doing basic lettering, make it really simple at first. then you&#39;ll start to notice that if you put a little edge sticking out, or a arrow here and there it&#39;ll start to fit in. But for now just do really simple bubble writing.
Yeah I agree with him there,

Aren it looks decent, got great potential on it, double check the perspective and colour it in bro.

Hater-AiD~>
04-22-2006, 08:28 AM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4153/dscf14058zh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new piece..
constructive crits please

Seti
04-22-2006, 08:28 AM
yo rare..to ell the truth i cant tell wat the fucks goin on...get sm ink in ther so we cn actualy see it

BBoy_ErbN
04-22-2006, 09:11 AM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 22 2006, 08:28 AM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/4153/dscf14058zh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new piece..
constructive crits please
yeah that&#39;s above my skill level so no crits really, the middle bit of the e looks a little whack but I dig it.

mr.T
04-22-2006, 10:21 AM
http://home.no.net/ramsesk/trem321.jpg i think i saw something like seen made it and just wanted to do it ...

http://home.no.net/ramsesk/trem022.jpg
http://home.no.net/ramsesk/trem024.jpg
http://home.no.net/ramsesk/trem123.jpg
http://home.no.net/ramsesk/trem00.jpg

any crits?

Seti
04-22-2006, 10:24 AM
yeh man im likin em...i cn see ur tryin to play wit the 3d a bit..keep it up

cape
04-22-2006, 10:28 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g304/cammie_03/P1010128.jpg
crits?

Blak-T
04-22-2006, 10:33 AM
sumthin i whipped up 2day........comments...crits
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0041.jpg

segway
04-22-2006, 10:44 AM
kape work on uniform bar width, letter structure and 3d angle consistency, also the 3d should not overlap the letter, that makes it appear as though the letters are on different planes. all the 3d should point in the same direction, youd be best off doing a straight (rather than diagonal or vanishing point) 3d for now
also, the name fresh is played out
blackt- go simpler, look at cereal boxes lettering for how simple you should be going. when you can put style into something as simple as cereal box style lettering, it will carry over when you start going wilder, trust me

cape
04-22-2006, 10:46 AM
cheers for the help, nah that&#39;s not my name its for a battle

Blak-T
04-22-2006, 10:48 AM
ok...thanks

some guy from NCI...
04-22-2006, 10:57 AM
Mr t I&#39;m liking the second one from the top work on the &#39;r&#39; and the &#39;m&#39; to make them fit in a bit more though, clean it up a bit and it&#39;ll be a nice throwie

Hater-AiD~>
04-22-2006, 11:00 AM
can i get some crits please..sheesh..haha

Blak-T
04-22-2006, 11:03 AM
^it&#39;s sik.....good style

Logikalone
04-22-2006, 11:25 AM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/ANEpiece.jpg
^^Crits please^^

Blak-T
04-22-2006, 11:35 AM
some ideas for a throw up.....crits....comments
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0050.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0048.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT0047.jpg

JETc17
04-22-2006, 11:43 AM
Originally posted by Logikalone@Apr 22 2006, 11:25 AM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/ANEpiece.jpg
^^Crits please^^
your using too many perspectives. try going just two ways (back and to the side, or down and too the side)

Hater-AiD~>
04-22-2006, 11:50 AM
Originally posted by Logikalone@Apr 22 2006, 11:25 AM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/ANEpiece.jpg
^^Crits please^^
your o looks like a D and your n looks like a wierd lookin k

try doing basic 3d before you develop your own kind of style which it looks like your doing in this

sabeSAHBEY
04-22-2006, 12:05 PM
stony night

stickers
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/235949.jpg
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/235949.jpg

bud
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/235950.jpg
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/235950.jpg

throw
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/235951.jpg
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/235951.jpg

3d atempt just shapes
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/235953.jpg
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/235953.jpg

tea dee sea
04-22-2006, 12:17 PM
nice shit sabe im really feeling the first one keep it up

Hater-AiD~>
04-22-2006, 12:25 PM
work on your handstyle sabe

mr.T
04-22-2006, 12:47 PM
he should work not only on his handstyle, but his letter structure too and especially 3D

sabeSAHBEY
04-22-2006, 12:56 PM
how can i improve structure and 3d

sane*04
04-22-2006, 01:06 PM
Originally posted by sane*04@Apr 21 2006, 11:49 PM
CRITS??

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e135/Omblog/scan0011.jpg

http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e135/Omblog/scan0014.jpg
Give this some crits

some guy from NCI...
04-22-2006, 01:42 PM
Just practice letter structure

mr.T
04-22-2006, 01:43 PM
sabe start with simple letters, you just cant come and do wildstyle from nowhere... you need to learn it from the begining, do some sketches with block letters, buble letters etc... 3d.. it will come naturally you just need to pracc it alot, look at other peoples 3d, look how they bend it where they end and look at your stuff if it looks decent etc

some guy from NCI...
04-22-2006, 03:02 PM
Something I did for a friend. After realising I spelt his name wrong I got a bit grumpy and rushed it

I realise the letters are a bit umm different. in the first and second half. I think it&#39;s because i&#39;m still practicing with letters

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8855/meta0rv.jpg

beefgerky
04-22-2006, 03:10 PM
structure is good, the H is a little iffy.

Sluts_r_us
04-22-2006, 03:13 PM
just did an exchange wit my boy zoar...:

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8211/zoarexchangebypesk8pr.jpg

some guy from NCI...
04-22-2006, 03:23 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@Apr 22 2006, 03:10 PM
structure is good, the H is a little iffy.
yeh the H and the Z were flops...

vare_187uk
04-22-2006, 03:26 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/varex2.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
04-22-2006, 03:28 PM
ive seena lot better stuff from you vare

some guy from NCI...
04-22-2006, 03:33 PM
I&#39;m liking the bottom one Vare. But hater&#39;s right I&#39;ve seen better stuff

vare_187uk
04-22-2006, 03:38 PM
TRUE TRUE &#33; NOT REALLY IN THE MOOD TO BOTHER TODAY
BUT OW WELL

I JUST DUNNO HWERE TO GO NOW I NEARLY GOT MY SIMPLES DOWN

IKEZ
04-22-2006, 04:35 PM
Originally posted by IKEZ@Apr 22 2006, 12:25 AM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8803/new8up.jpg (http://imageshack.us)A little something im working on. Just wanted some pointers before i go on with markers and shit...I know its a lil messy.
Critics would be nice

AMAZ tbscrew
04-22-2006, 06:27 PM
^why? u bumped ur shit here and in the big boy thread.

!.. DEck ..!
04-22-2006, 07:06 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/scan0001.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/d0a55a5d.jpg

this is hitemup temporary account i forgot my password... crits?

HeIsT422
04-22-2006, 07:56 PM
pretty good.. but ur 3d is messed
and u shud make it cleaner

Hater-AiD~>
04-22-2006, 07:59 PM
new
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/9329/dscf14242so.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
constructive crits..yall know the deal

AMAZ tbscrew
04-22-2006, 08:17 PM
edit...hmm take all the bumpy stuff out.

Hater-AiD~>
04-22-2006, 08:18 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 22 2006, 08:17 PM
edit...hmm take all the bumpy stuff out.
its a little late for that, lol

AMAZ tbscrew
04-22-2006, 08:23 PM
no its not...resketch it with out it.

MF Feed Letter
04-22-2006, 09:08 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0880.jpg

havent used airbrush in a while

textathief
04-22-2006, 10:12 PM
theirs some alrite stuff in here but then theirs some really funny ones

!.. DEck ..!
04-22-2006, 10:19 PM
nigaaaaaaaaaaa every1 on here izzzzzz dutzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz



















suck my balls hahaha

AMAZ tbscrew
04-22-2006, 10:34 PM
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/oldguystfu.jpg

MUSASHI
04-22-2006, 10:50 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/vv.jpg

Sluts_r_us
04-22-2006, 11:44 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Apr 22 2006, 03:13 PM
just did an exchange wit my boy zoar...:

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8211/zoarexchangebypesk8pr.jpg
bump

Sluts_r_us
04-22-2006, 11:45 PM
some pen freestyle i did a lil while ago...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesksketch.jpg

MF Feed Letter
04-23-2006, 12:06 AM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0881.jpg

more airbrush

ghostbusta5
04-23-2006, 12:18 AM
ya DECK i wouldnt draw any attention to myself if i were you

DnK/eeK
04-23-2006, 01:38 AM
ive only been writing for a couple of weeks so dont be too harsh

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSCF0017.jpg

vare_187uk
04-23-2006, 05:41 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/vre2.jpg

SiLeNt-BoB
04-23-2006, 07:10 AM
tryin a new name..info
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/1203/imag00130zl8kz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MUSASHI
04-23-2006, 09:17 AM
Originally posted by DnK/eeK@Apr 23 2006, 01:38 AM


http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSCF0017.jpg
this a great color scheme

Sluts_r_us
04-23-2006, 09:58 AM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Apr 22 2006, 11:45 PM
some pen freestyle i did a lil while ago...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesksketch.jpg
bump

Sluts_r_us
04-23-2006, 09:58 AM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us+Apr 22 2006, 11:44 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sluts_r_us @ Apr 22 2006, 11:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@Apr 22 2006, 03:13 PM
just did an exchange wit my boy zoar...:

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8211/zoarexchangebypesk8pr.jpg
bump [/b][/quote]
bump

TruGraffa
04-23-2006, 10:03 AM
yo tell me what you think please im still a begginer i need to add more stuff in the fill so any tips would be much appreciated thankz

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/701/230420060089yj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and without color just :D

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/1517/230420060052gh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

!.. DEck ..!
04-23-2006, 10:04 AM
yo everyone go check out graffitispot.com

Seti
04-23-2006, 10:07 AM
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/nsn.jpg

MUSASHI
04-23-2006, 10:16 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/rasas2.jpg

some guy from NCI...
04-23-2006, 10:18 AM
Nice stuff seti

TruGraffa
04-23-2006, 10:40 AM
PPL PLZ COMMENT N TELL IMRPOVEMENTS &#33; :(

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5097/230420060097zy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/7994/230420060087ju.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Logikalone
04-23-2006, 10:56 AM
Work on your letters, lose the drops, and your handstyle needs a major overhaul. Try out some block letters and get a feel for the structure and then add some of your own personal flair. Just keep sketchin.

DnK/eeK
04-23-2006, 11:02 AM
Originally posted by MUSASHI+Apr 23 2006, 09:17 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MUSASHI @ Apr 23 2006, 09:17 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DnK/eeK@Apr 23 2006, 01:38 AM


http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSCF0017.jpg
this a great color scheme [/b][/quote]
thanks but what can i improve on ? i dont know much

Logikalone
04-23-2006, 11:10 AM
move your j and u down to the same level as the rest of your letters. also your force field should follow the flow of the letters. Nice coloring though.

!.. DEck ..!
04-23-2006, 11:12 AM
http://www.graffitispot.com/forum/ go here

Logikalone
04-23-2006, 11:15 AM
No advertising.

!.. DEck ..!
04-23-2006, 11:35 AM
and wat u gonna do bout it bitch

































































nothing so suck my dick u pussy ur dutzz at graffiti

Logikalone
04-23-2006, 11:37 AM
Grammar is your friend. But I geuss if you can&#39;t follow the forum rules then you must not be very literate.

!.. DEck ..!
04-23-2006, 11:42 AM
suck my balls u dushbag do u here wat i said i can give 2 shits this website is dutzz u punk ass pussy graffiti spot rules motha fukaaaaaaaaaa got it

Seti
04-23-2006, 11:51 AM
latest styles, ive changed the bottom now so the left it loops round to the middle, any crits?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/insyne.jpg

obseen
04-23-2006, 11:52 AM
i like that one, especially the lines coming from the main part of the peice

AMAZ tbscrew
04-23-2006, 11:59 AM
seti...i think ur 2 good 2 be in here...but u can still stay lol

sabeSAHBEY
04-23-2006, 12:19 PM
shit is mad good seti

i can never read 3d tho

Hater-AiD~>
04-23-2006, 12:41 PM
Originally posted by &#33;.. DEck ..&#33;@Apr 23 2006, 11:12 AM
http://www.graffitispot.com/forum/ go here
how are you going to advertise a forum with no topics ...lol

flclnaruto1213
04-23-2006, 12:41 PM
Originally posted by Seti@Apr 23 2006, 10:07 AM
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/nsn.jpg
this is my favorite thing youve done,
it reminds me of a chinese castle, and i love all things oriental. :)

Hater-AiD~>
04-23-2006, 12:54 PM
sketches i did at church, haha
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/562/dscf14338kj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/894/dscf14345rc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SiLeNt-BoB
04-23-2006, 01:17 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6066/imag00018uz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4438/imag00029cz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for the battle with that loser molotow15..what one should i put into it??

Seti
04-23-2006, 01:25 PM
doesnt realy mater man, ull win either way, but id go for the first one, more colourfull

!.. DEck ..!
04-23-2006, 01:31 PM
there both dutzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz z

--suck my balls

some guy from NCI...
04-23-2006, 01:35 PM
^^ Wankaaaa

EDIT: Oh and Seti I&#39;m liking the latest and Silent bob I&#39;d use the first.

tea dee sea
04-23-2006, 01:35 PM
yo silent bob there both ill but i think u should goo with the first one

SiLeNt-BoB
04-23-2006, 02:00 PM
ahahah thats me got 2 votes for the first one..and the second one....

vare_187uk
04-23-2006, 02:02 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/cfc1.jpg
summat messing about wise


OH and info i like the first one man but the second colour scheme is hot

AlmoSt
04-23-2006, 02:40 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c71/Bent449/P1010869.jpg

kinda jacd, wat do u think? it says Oath...vare, that T or V or w/e is sick&#33; u should set up ur word with that style

vare_187uk
04-23-2006, 02:43 PM
if ur on about the middle letter it was an E but i will obviously have to make it more obvious next time around lol

AlmoSt
04-23-2006, 02:46 PM
ya, make the middle thing shorter, and the top one longer like switch the lengths of the 2,


watcha think of mine tho

obseen
04-23-2006, 02:46 PM
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00558133f00000009.jpg

AlmoSt
04-23-2006, 02:49 PM
i like the deal where u comment on the last piece wen u post urs....i still want critz on mine and stuff, lets all do that, it helps every1 out and gets them all crits

AMAZ tbscrew
04-23-2006, 02:54 PM
Originally posted by SiLeNt&#045;BoB@Apr 23 2006, 01:17 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6066/imag00018uz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4438/imag00029cz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for the battle with that loser molotow15..what one should i put into it??
the 2nd one is dope



yo deck battle me ur beggin 2 piss me the fuk off.

minesweep
04-23-2006, 03:16 PM
crits?
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/7955/dscn01834bz.th.jpg (http://img115.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn01834bz.jpg)

SiLeNt-BoB
04-23-2006, 03:18 PM
cheers amaz..just started writting that last night...new name..canny get a good tag with it yet..but am tryin

extirpate
04-23-2006, 03:43 PM
2nd ones good, but work on your O it looks a lot like a D

vare_187uk
04-23-2006, 03:48 PM
oath work on it man its there but its not the letters need more defining
its like a bunch of blocks at the moment
try make the letters stand out and make them clearer

Ironik
04-23-2006, 03:49 PM
Almost did u get that carac from the movie GRAFFITI ARTIST ?

beefgerky
04-23-2006, 04:04 PM
ill never forget watching that movie..i was like..this is ok...more shity acting than actual graf...then all of the sudden GAY SEX SCENE...i was like WTF&#33; haha, but yea thats bit from that/ w/e his is shittier than "rupture"s

Seti
04-23-2006, 04:11 PM
sez insyne, jsu sayin cz everyone sez they cant read em..
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image022.jpg

AMAZ tbscrew
04-23-2006, 04:14 PM
^u scanned it?


shit probly looks way better in person

SiLeNt-BoB
04-23-2006, 04:16 PM
that is on fire&#33;..dont think u should come here anymore..

GOFUCKENPAINT
04-23-2006, 04:50 PM
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/4009/hpim08604zf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/2405/hpim08550pl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SiLeNt-BoB
04-23-2006, 04:52 PM
thats pretty nice&#33;

EatRichPeople
04-23-2006, 05:06 PM
almost, I think it looks ok but you forgot a piece of 3d on the A and I think you should have used the red outline everywhere on the letters and then do a final black outline around the whole thing...just my opinion.
dope stuff seti and gemps.

minesweep
04-23-2006, 05:16 PM
crits?
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/7955/dscn01834bz.th.jpg (http://img115.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn01834bz.jpg)

Hater-AiD~>
04-23-2006, 05:23 PM
Originally posted by TruGraffa@Apr 23 2006, 10:40 AM
PPL PLZ COMMENT N TELL IMRPOVEMENTS &#33; :(

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5097/230420060097zy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/7994/230420060087ju.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
you need to work on yoru handstyle reaaaaly bad
and your letter structure..i wouldnt color anyting in until you get yoru structure down

also....take that crown out please ;)

writer45
04-23-2006, 06:01 PM
hey GOFUCKENPAINT thats tight

AlmoSt
04-23-2006, 06:14 PM
haha, i havnt even seen graffiti artist but i didnt bite it, i use that mouth , eyes, and nose for every carac i do and its just a paint can with wings how could i bite that idea? A lot of people do paint cans

GOFUCKENPAINT
04-23-2006, 06:19 PM
thanks man

joker00
04-23-2006, 06:34 PM
Originally posted by EatRichPeople@Apr 23 2006, 05:06 PM
almost, I think it looks ok but you forgot a piece of 3d on the A and I think you should have used the red outline everywhere on the letters and then do a final black outline around the whole thing...just my opinion.

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/5724/photo00073wf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/269/photo00109pu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/4755/photo00022yz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thinking of painting one...wich one??

dope stuff seti and gemps.
:) the first 1 i like best do that 1 n if u got enouf paint do em all and c how they look

joker00
04-23-2006, 06:37 PM
Originally posted by SiLeNt&#045;BoB@Apr 23 2006, 01:17 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/6066/imag00018uz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4438/imag00029cz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for the battle with that loser molotow15..what one should i put into it??
i like the second 1........bet truely its up 2 u

Ume
04-23-2006, 07:16 PM
newish throw...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/newthrow.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
04-23-2006, 07:17 PM
nice throw..dont like the u though

hitemup101
04-23-2006, 07:32 PM
ur us fuked up

AMAZ tbscrew
04-23-2006, 07:36 PM
Originally posted by Ume@Apr 23 2006, 07:16 PM
newish throw...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/newthrow.jpg
sesu..come on nukka.

ill be honest with you...it looks busted...and the e looks like it dosnt flow at all

joker00
04-23-2006, 07:40 PM
^i agree it looks like an A....and no offence

Hater-AiD~>
04-23-2006, 07:53 PM
eh
http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/3773/dscf14378bf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the c kinda looks like a g kuz i screwed up

cord
04-23-2006, 07:59 PM
clean that shit up it looks like you did it in half a second.....

sort the outlines and fill.

any help with this?

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0222.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
04-23-2006, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by cord@Apr 23 2006, 07:59 PM
clean that shit up it looks like you did it in half a second.....

sort the outlines and fill.

any help with this?

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0222.jpg
i did do it in like half a second

nice piece btw

cord
04-23-2006, 08:05 PM
i couldnt think of a fill, besides i dont like colors haha thanks man

backtoyou
04-23-2006, 08:13 PM
i wouldnt change anything its prety hot i like the drills

backtoyou
04-23-2006, 08:14 PM
*drips

extirpate
04-23-2006, 08:19 PM
new throw im gonna probly paint tongiht
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/3965/throwup2vs.jpg

heres some other stuff i did
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/9754/graff0059nl.jpg
^o kind looks like a c but w/e

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/6711/peice2wf.jpg

TricksForKids
04-23-2006, 08:34 PM
yikes, lose the craziness^ senk? if thats what it says, shits hot just gotta work on that S

heres some throwies, "RE"
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/8666/redthrow7im.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

EatRichPeople
04-23-2006, 08:44 PM
Originally posted by joker00@Apr 24 2006, 01:34 AM

:) the first 1 i like best do that 1 n if u got enouf paint do em all and c how they look
thanx , I&#39;ll start with the first one then.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-23-2006, 08:48 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Apr 23 2006, 08:34 PM
yikes, lose the craziness^ senk? if thats what it says, shits hot just gotta work on that S

heres some throwies, "RE"
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/8666/redthrow7im.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i missed you. :D

looks dope u got a wierd style so dose ur hole crew.

TricksForKids
04-23-2006, 08:49 PM
awwww ^ :P lol, yeah thanks, tryin something new

Hater-AiD~>
04-23-2006, 09:12 PM
entered this into the single letter battle
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/9186/dscf14444jb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

beefgerky
04-23-2006, 09:39 PM
:lol:

that made me laugh out loud.

hahahah.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-23-2006, 09:39 PM
wow wer so fucked up lol

Ume
04-23-2006, 09:43 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 23 2006, 08:36 PM
sesu..come on nukka.

ill be honest with you...it looks busted...and the e looks like it dosnt flow at all
i know... :(


i&#39;m just playing around with it right now, those were the first concepts for something newer to my collection..i did it in a minute...

xAWOKE.925
04-23-2006, 10:39 PM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/3667/canvas4lk.jpg

unfinished colab. canvas w/ me n gerk. Post the finished one later

Hater-AiD~>
04-23-2006, 11:35 PM
nice canvas awoke

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/7044/dscf14518rf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
constructive crits plz

Z FUSE
04-23-2006, 11:51 PM
loose the arrows and don&#39;t ever put the blocks coming off the sides of arrows.

Kiks
04-23-2006, 11:56 PM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/280/dsc020749pe.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc020749pe.jpg)


Crits plz.

Z FUSE
04-24-2006, 12:14 AM
make letters fatter and slow it down. down twine the letters together, that won&#39;t make it a wild style

beefgerky
04-24-2006, 12:59 AM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 23 2006, 11:35 PM
nice canvas awoke

just wait till i grace that ish...awwwyeaaaa.

TricksForKids
04-24-2006, 06:49 AM
then you can mail it tome and let regs get dowwwwwwwwn^

TricksForKids
04-24-2006, 06:49 AM
then you can mail it to me and let regs get dowwwwwwwwn^

TricksForKids
04-24-2006, 06:49 AM
then you can mail it to me and let regs get dowwwwwwwwn^

TricksForKids
04-24-2006, 06:50 AM
wow^...my bad.......ive posted 4 times...with one click of the mouse...geeeez

some guy from NCI...
04-24-2006, 07:43 AM
tricksforkids: Nice throwies&#33;
Cord: nice piece&#33;

Kiks: Go back to basic block letters
Haiter Aid: Same as above... or at least lose the arrows and the floating blocks and thebits where it goes skinny.

vare_187uk
04-24-2006, 02:37 PM
wtf @ your sig ^^^^

wacky waving inflatable arm flailing tube man ???????????

WAKE-1
04-24-2006, 04:19 PM
http://img284.imageshack.us/img284/9641/wake192at.jpg

WAKE-1
04-24-2006, 04:26 PM
wacky waving inflatable arm flailing tube man rules&#33;&#33; :lol:

AMAZ tbscrew
04-24-2006, 04:32 PM
it makes me dizzy...but wut do i no im light headed from lifting.

HeIsT422
04-24-2006, 04:50 PM
lol thats from the family guy movie i believe.. rele funny

AlmoSt
04-24-2006, 04:54 PM
ik i love that movie&#33; good style development wake, i saw u go from poopy to good within a month or so...thats tight bro, keep wit it

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-24-2006, 05:37 PM
[img=http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/8633/spray8er.th.jpg] (http://img265.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spray8er.jpg)

backtoyou
04-24-2006, 05:40 PM
your trying way to hard

Cyto Aka Son1c
04-24-2006, 05:45 PM
wtf u mean im trying to hard?

HoodRichSucka
04-24-2006, 05:46 PM
http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/466/yuck0wm.jpg

lmk..im toy

beefgerky
04-24-2006, 05:54 PM
maybe ill get more crits here.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture756.jpg

AMAZ tbscrew
04-24-2006, 05:56 PM
where else did u post?

*bites e*


dope.

beefgerky
04-24-2006, 05:56 PM
Originally posted by Cyto Aka Son1c@Apr 24 2006, 05:45 PM
wtf u mean im trying to hard?
he means your trying to do wildstyle before you can even to a throwup.
make your letters more simple. that shit is disgusing tbh.

WAKE-1
04-24-2006, 06:04 PM
like the throw gerk... eye patch :D

xAWOKE.925
04-24-2006, 06:20 PM
^ wake that style of throwie is mad wack man. The letters aren&#39;t proportionate and they&#39;re all mad boring.

MASE 14
04-24-2006, 06:24 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/Graffiti/MASEpeice.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/Graffiti/masecanc.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/Graffiti/masethrowup.jpg

Those are the pages i have

btw: im a toy. ive been writin for...about 6 days. 6 or 7

WAKE-1
04-24-2006, 06:27 PM
the first one sucks hard...second ones decent (lose the karak)... only good letter in the third letter is da s all others suck

dont come in here sayin mine is wack when ur puttin out that shit

beefgerky
04-24-2006, 06:28 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@Apr 24 2006, 05:54 PM
maybe ill get more crits here.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture756.jpg
they all suck.

bump.

PAST2
04-24-2006, 06:29 PM
Mase, props to you if you&#39;ve been writin for 6-7 days&#33; Keep at it , that stuffs not as shit as most peoples that have been writin for 6-7 days.

offtopic - SHOUTS TO THE KIAC &#33;

Hater-AiD~>
04-24-2006, 06:52 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 23 2006, 09:12 PM
entered this into the single letter battle
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/9186/dscf14444jb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for crits

xAWOKE.925
04-24-2006, 07:00 PM
the fill is clean and so are the colors, but i just think there&#39; stoo much shit going on. Like, in the left part of the E there&#39;s a bunch of layers and shit its mad crazy. the style has potential though

Hater-AiD~>
04-24-2006, 07:10 PM
well since its one letter i had to add a whole bunch of shit to it..its for the one letter battle

ion-i
04-24-2006, 07:13 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ioni_swirl.gif
I got bored.

Hater-AiD~>
04-24-2006, 07:20 PM
thats fucking ill ion-i

sane*04
04-24-2006, 07:20 PM
Ion
hmmm style seems to have potential but you just need to work on it to make it tight....cange that bump on the N and try an make it flow more
not reall feeling the C eather try to bring it closer to the rest of the words and not stand out there to much
jus keep practasin

AoAssis
04-24-2006, 07:22 PM
there is no C in ioni

AMAZ tbscrew
04-24-2006, 07:24 PM
Originally posted by MASE 14@Apr 24 2006, 06:24 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/Graffiti/MASEpeice.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/Graffiti/masecanc.jpg

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/Graffiti/masethrowup.jpg

Those are the pages i have

btw: im a toy. ive been writin for...about 6 days. 6 or 7
JUST STOP....MY BOY RIPS U.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b383/llmasell/IMG_0234.jpg

AMAZ tbscrew
04-24-2006, 07:27 PM
oh btw my sketch of the day....i hate girls :(


http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture069.jpg

cord
04-24-2006, 07:36 PM
fuck girls??&#33;&#33;

what the fuck?

amaz that &#39;&#39;mase&#39;&#39; is immense, a real burner, looks like its bouncing off the fucking page&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

i&#39;ve never seen anything like it&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

it really does look like its coming off the page god damn&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Hater-AiD~>
04-24-2006, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis@Apr 24 2006, 07:22 PM
there is no C in ioni
lol he thought the extension on the I was a c
:lol: :D ;)

beefgerky
04-24-2006, 08:50 PM
and i thought your crew was gay, oh wait...still do.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-24-2006, 08:51 PM
owned.

ion-i
04-24-2006, 09:00 PM
Originally posted by sane*04@Apr 24 2006, 04:20 PM
Ion
hmmm style seems to have potential but you just need to work on it to make it tight....cange that bump on the N and try an make it flow more
not reall feeling the C eather try to bring it closer to the rest of the words and not stand out there to much
jus keep practasin
Like they said before.. there is no "C" in my name. And how it&#39;s written like that is the style I was goin for.
whatev.
thanks for the comments tho.

Sprae
04-24-2006, 09:00 PM
wow... i didnt know ioni was in NFK too

RollTRS
04-24-2006, 09:03 PM
Just did these a couple days ago, never uploaded em. I hate the karak. Crits?

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/1072/picture12ig.png

http://img272.imageshack.us/img272/5065/picture24fb.png

Aven
04-24-2006, 09:11 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 24 2006, 07:24 PM


http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b383/llmasell/IMG_0234.jpg
That is so sick man

AMAZ tbscrew
04-24-2006, 09:22 PM
yes it is....but its not mine so ye..calm ur tits


so um...im in NFK to

Hater-AiD~>
04-24-2006, 09:25 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 24 2006, 09:22 PM
yes it is....but its not mine so ye..calm ur tits


so um...im in NFK to
my nips are getting hard :lol:

RollTRS
04-24-2006, 09:31 PM
Originally posted by RollTRS@Apr 24 2006, 09:03 PM
Just did these a couple days ago, never uploaded em. I hate the karak. Crits?

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/1072/picture12ig.png

http://img272.imageshack.us/img272/5065/picture24fb.png
Bump

AMAZ tbscrew
04-24-2006, 09:38 PM
^just write code...and then write coder for ur tag or trowie..

hmm where do we start

1.it blows
2.your c can pass for a e
3.D looks like a B
4.dont waste ur markers yet just sketch with a pencil cuz i dont
think ur gettin up and if u are put the cans down
5.shit woulda looked tighter if u did simples
6.Ex of a simple look at vare&#39;s shit..and pesks...simples yet hot
7.if ur guna put stars in the fill...make them look good they look busted
8.if ur gettin pissed while u read this..calm ur tits cuz evex says so


thats all.