Blackbooks

[Mildstyles]

Thanks man, and i definitely feel you on the S. I have so much trouble with the tops of them that i usually just make em swirls...haha

[cred1384]

@Mild Yeah that's sick. Didn't really go simpler on this but this is some good weed.

The 3d fill made it look pretty dark so posting both.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo33.jpg
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo34.jpg

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

work on your spacing. The c overlaps the R, but the E doesnt get overlapped at all, and the D is overlapped a teeny tiny bit. Looks weird

[lostyoursense]

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shitty picture look at the letters

[toopski]

Looks like creo. Go simpler.
Crits on this for the robin?
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looks good dont like the top of the S myself tho

[EWL24]

i finished reading The Green Mile a couple days ago and it made me want to draw something with an electric chair
crits please
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[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

^crits: LOL. Your W and A only have 4 fingers.... what the fuck is that about. on earth, nіggas got 5 fingers.

[cred1384]

^crits: LOL. Your W and A only have 4 fingers.... what the fuck is that about. on earth, nіggas got 5 fingers.

That's not on earth, it's on a piece of paper. But for real how are you gonna flip some bitch ass fool the bird with only 4 fingers? Also you couldn't give your lady partner the eversofamous "shocker"?
But on a real note here i think that drawing is pretty dope

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

shiiiiiit why the fuck did you just bring the shocker into this?!!!!!

MAN. WHERE IS HIS PIECE OF PAPER AT?!!!!! IS IT ON THIS PLANET?! I THINK YES, WHICH MEANS ITS ON EARTH. SO FUCK YOU

[toopski]

simpsons style shit

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

That nіgga cred is stupid. Thinks he cant give a lady the shocker with 4 fingers. Whats 2+1 cred?!!!

[DankOner]

Dank: I feel im improving feedback?

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[7thIncision]

@Lostyoursense lovin' it man, I like the letter style. I'd probably either lose that extension on the top right of the N, though, or play around with it to make it look less awkward.
@Dank, man, keep the bars all the same size, and forget about all that extension insanity on the A, K, and D. Lose the split line at the top of the D, and split up the right side of your K with some open space. And straighten them out, don't make them skinny at the top and fat at the bottom.
I'm taking it back to basics with this one a little bit after my last one not turning out nearly as good as I need it to be.
Also, I got sick of fucking around with the letter W, so I switched it to a U. Fits WAY easier.Respect to @MN Nice, kinda based my U off of one of his Y's I saw in another thread.
56216^ I kinda fucked up the S with that one, but I'm playing around with different styles of E's
56217^ The E at the end is too big, but other than that I like this one.

[toopski]

ur letters has no structure need to work on ur bars and basic simps man

[Mildstyles]

Ewwwwww

[killroywashere]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7199/6795257456_7bd5f947e0.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6795257456/)

[lostyoursense]

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better pic

[R3bel1995]

Too ski, I'm lovin your sig. Fresh bro

[MN Nice]

Youth: Pretty nice flow, just work on that U and some of your folds at the end of your bars.

Sense: looks tight man, flows nicely.

bumping for crits


Fuckin around with alternating bar size.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00686-20120225-0914.jpg?t=1330386191

[lostyoursense]

Mm nice not bad but your m's bigger than the other letters and the s is a little weird

[cred1384]

That nіgga cred is stupid. Thinks he cant give a lady the shocker with 4 fingers. Whats 2+1 cred?!!!

Well played Ribcage.. Well played... But for real the gap between the poo and the stew would be all wrong.

@Mues I think it's pretty good man, i can see improvement. Something about the middle of the S is throwing me off, I do like the U and the E.

[dankbudz]

was messin round in class, was supposed to be raecs but i fucked up
lookin for crits on this as far as extensions connections and flow goes, from someone who knows a lil something

mn- idk bout that. bars are funky as fuck and i don't feel the extensions
that tag looking good, but you should listen to i think it was Phat that said to make sure you point your the middle of the M more so it don't go looking like H or U

[TheFedexGuy]

http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-02-28134029.jpg Better?

[SynOne]

Dank I'm digging it, seems like you coming a tad bit out of the comfort zone. Looks nice.

For the Round Robin.

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[Mildstyles]

Pure EVYILL
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[cred1384]

@Dankbuds shit negro that's dope as hell.
@Neus make sure you keep your baseline consistent and try to keep your bars straight.
@SynOne Good shit. Only part im iffy about is the bottom section of the O. The T is perfect.

Tried pointing my bars on this one, not sure if it worked. Also feel like the R needs work.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo35.jpg
Crits?

[Shit Outta Luck]

Dont hide the left leg of the R that much. It was good besides that.

[Mildstyles]

WHY DOES EVERYONE WANT TO POINT THEIR BARS NOW
but yeah snyskipheeny- The bar on the bottom of the t got waaay too fat, and i just dont like either of the connections on the bottom of the H, but other than that its not bad.
Creo- Pretty much the last 5 sketches ive seen form you looks like creo, you should change from cred ahahha. Hid the R too much, The bottom of that E is funky, and your double outline is sketchy, try single outlines till you got your hand steady and clean

[cred1384]

@mild cause all the cool kids are doing it. And it looks more like a D if you think about it as a D hahaha. That'd be one messed up O. As for the second outline idk what happened. needed to hit another grav. Thanks for the crit

[PETER]

cred best from you yet keep workin'

[lostyoursense]

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i usual go for real simple shit

[Mildstyles]

Makin em pop
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[lostyoursense]

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i usual go for real simple shit

bottom page bump

[Dossbog]

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I know I put too many cuts in the first one but i spent so much time colouring it, thought I'd put it up for some crits!

[lostyoursense]

Wtf do those say

[Dossbog]

Rzst

[lostyoursense]

Okay well you to dumb down yur letters a lot and give your letter way more room to breath mang

[Mildstyles]

And pick a new word...Rzst is just letters thrown together. unless it means something to you i guess

[Dossbog]

Resist....and yes it does mean something to me

[EWL24]

^crits: LOL. Your W and A only have 4 fingers.... what the fuck is that about. on earth, nіggas got 5 fingers.
haha, idk its easier to draw
a lot of cartoons like the Simpson, Family Guy, and Loony Tunes all do it

[Dossbog]

Also the reason these are so tightly spaced is because i drew them using my leg as a surface for the paper while i was on the bus

[lostyoursense]

I would just throw those sketches out and start fresh

[Mildstyles]

^ yeah do that. Simple junk all day

[Dossbog]

Why would I throw them out? I want to develop a piecing style just as much as I want to do throw ups and these are my first attempts at a slightly different style, I liked the (very few) crits I got which were actually constructive and motivational

[lostyoursense]

I'm not trying to ruin your motivation just being brutally honest those suck you have to crawl before you can walk and walk before you run you need to go to simple styles before piecing throw them out stasprt fresh with straight letters that are actually legible

[MN Nice]

Because the key to developing a style is working with words as they are now. You get a full understanding of their structure by doing simples. From then on, you bend the bars, add extensions, try different fonts, whatever. You're pieces you posted are junk, theres no structure to your letters, they're completely cramped together, and it just looks plain ugly. If you stick to it, which half of the kids don't because simples get boring or they get in trouble or blah blah blah, then you'll get better. Now shut the fuck up and take the advice.

[Mildstyles]

I am just backup on this whole thing. ^ Hell yeeea ^^^^^^^^

[lostyoursense]

^^mm haha

Any critz for the shit I posted?

[killroywashere]

Sense - make the circles in your 3d completed circles. turning them into ovals usually works if you run out of room

[Norfsuthr]

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I'm not liking the arrows coming off the S and E. The disconnect in the N looks out of place, and don't put that [ thing on it.

Naked- it looks like 12d or md. Just fix that part of the N and itll be good.

[lostyoursense]

I'm not liking the arrows coming off the S and E. The disconnect in the N looks out of place, and don't put that [ thing on it.

Naked- it looks like 12d or md. Just fix that part of the N and itll be good.

All the samemshit I thought when I was drawing it haha thanksm

[Mildstyles]

Did this in 3 minutes just cause i wanted another top page...haha
Thanks norf, this is another 12a
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[Dossbog]

That would have been a very intelligent criticism if you hadn't told me to shut the fuck up at the end. I will definitely work my way up from straights before I connect my letters. Mildstyles, I think you could elaborate more on your crits. Thanks *****s

[Mildstyles]

I didnt crit anything, i just agreed that whole page

[Dossbog]

Yes my point exactly. At least I'm glad that people are being honest, its hard showing people in real life because most artists I know either don't care or are too polite

[Mildstyles]

I'm not critting your junk, sense and MN said everything that needed to be said

[Dossbog]

So why say anything at all? Either way I'm taking the actual crits i received to heart and starting over basic

[Mildstyles]

I am the backup, making sure you understand my friend.
I am there for you to understand you need to go simple, because that's exactly what i was thinking and im not going to type exactly what they just said.
Meow.

[Dossbog]

Also, if anyone really feels generous and wants to help a toy out, I'd be stoked on a rzst sketch done by someone else for inspiration

[Dossbog]

I don't even mean to argue with you, it's just hard to accept agreement of criticism without receiving any actual additional criticism, I know you're trying to help.

[toopski]

Did this in 3 minutes just cause i wanted another top page...haha
Thanks norf, this is another 12a
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ur N looks like a fucked up M

[lostyoursense]

you did receive criticism draw straight letters long story short

[Mildstyles]

Don't bite this shit.
And don't start pointing your bars all of a sudden.
Got bored.
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[Dossbog]

Don't bite this shit.
And don't start pointing your bars all of a sudden.
Got bored.
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word i like this alot, I won't bite it but its definitely given me an idea

[Dossbog]

word i like this alot, I won't bite it but its definitely given me an idea
I really like how subtle the connections are and the way you've made the whole word bend, thanks for taking the time dude!

[lostyoursense]

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[lostyoursense]

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this better?

[Dossbog]

Thanks sense! I really like that R and the way that bottoms of the Z and S meet.

[lostyoursense]

just some simple shit man stuff that you need to be doing i dont care if you take that and trace it a thousand time to get your structure down just dont bite it and say you did it

[Mildstyles]

Sense, honestly im not feeling that one man. It may be because the top of the letters are huge and the bottom are tiny, i dont know. But thats your style haha keep doing work

[lostyoursense]

mild thanks mang i like the big to small bottom thing idk i guess its a matter of opinion? well see what others think

[dankbudz]

i like it, not the shine on the 3d or the resemblance of the S on the top of the N. but it got a nice consistency pattern through it which i tend to like.
id like to see what you do with a more complex piece

[cred1384]

2 more
Tried some different fill methods with the purple one, not sure about it, fucked up the highlight on the R, wanted to make it like on the E but just wasnt thinking.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo37.jpg
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo36.jpg

[Dossbog]

I would never directly bite someones lettering and certainly wouldn't take credit if I did, sense and MS, you've both helped me out and if I base a throw on the styles you guys made I'll shout you out

[Mildstyles]

sense-Yeah i usually dig most of your pieces, and your style, but it's just 1 sketch anyway haha

[dankbudz]

dossbog- if you do, keep it in your book.
cred- dont hid them bars that much!

[lostyoursense]

haha i dont like complex shit i think there way "too much" to them and i like legible shit that everyone can read i guess plus i hate bars and arrows im not so great with them

and mild ill try to do something more appealing for ya next time man (not being a smartass either)

[Mildstyles]

This was seriously my favorite NA i've ever done until i colored this. The N still gives me an orgasm. Crit this? The ED is wacker than wack i already know this much.
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[lostyoursense]

give your a and k i little less bend and work that d bro other then that dope mang

[City of Trees]

yea pretty good mi nikka.. bt needa work on dat 3d zhitz makez a piece

[City of Trees]

56335 Mi cuz'z laz name... Critz?

[MN Nice]

work that d

lol

[lostyoursense]

^^^ ahaha

[cred1384]

@City of Trees are those veins on it?

[Mildstyles]

Mues perfect time to add on to Cred's spot in your signature^^^

[MN Nice]

He's already on there, its just too easy with that kid.

[EWL24]

crits please
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[lostyoursense]

I'm glad I made your sig.. Haha

[cred1384]

I need to stop posting when blitzed.

[Mildstyles]

Dont hate i am tired and bored
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[dankbudz]

hate hate hate. nah. i like how where your goin.
except the 5...

[Graff J up]

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couple of quick sketches ARI (for my bitchhh)

[toopski]

wack

[R3bel1995]

I know, simple.simple.simple

[s33on3]

ok i dont get this. we post our work on here to get feed back but all it is in negative. oh your flow is off oh your k doesnt fit with your s your style is wack blah blah blah. ive guys who are "kings" with whack styles and guys with solid flow to be know as "toys" this doesnt make any sense. honestly style is a personal choice i just think its bullshit that when someone posts somethin even if its actually some what good people still dump on it. its just confusing thats all im saying because i would actually like to evolve to be better sometime in my life and i think i actually have a solid flow and style. most will not agree but whatever all i want is some feedback that is somewhat helpful.

[PETER]

there is a reason for that. Flow is a foundation not a matter of oppinion really. read the new to graffiti thread front to back. every post.

[sadgeh]

Graff J up - BARS BARS BARS

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for the round robin shizzle
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drew very high
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[dankbudz]

s33on3 olisten to norf, and everyone else on here. if you want to get anywhere.l

[sadgeh]

Crits on mine?

[cred1384]

ok i dont get this. we post our work on here to get feed back but all it is in negative. oh your flow is off oh your k doesnt fit with your s your style is wack blah blah blah. ive guys who are "kings" with whack styles and guys with solid flow to be know as "toys" this doesnt make any sense. honestly style is a personal choice i just think its bullshit that when someone posts somethin even if its actually some what good people still dump on it. its just confusing thats all im saying because i would actually like to evolve to be better sometime in my life and i think i actually have a solid flow and style. most will not agree but whatever all i want is some feedback that is somewhat helpful.

Telling you that your K doesn't fit or that your S style is wack is critique. You have to be told what is wrong to know what to improve on. People don't say this stuff without reason, It's the creative process of art. If you like your style and people dog on it here than who cares? if you are happy with your style than why get upset when people give you negative crits? If you don't want peoples advice don't post.

That's my rant for the day.

[notmikegiant]

@ s33on - you can take the advice and crits or leave it, its up to you man! i just think its important to understand what works and what doesnt, and people on the internet are real quick to tell you what doesnt. on the flip side, the better you get the more people will notice.

@ sadg - i'm digging the style on the second pic a lot, but on the R tighten up those arrows if you want to use em. on the bottom right its noticable that it will never come to a true point, work on making sure if it will be an arrow that it could potentially connect - even if its off the page.

[Mildstyles]

ok i dont get this. we post our work on here to get feed back but all it is in negative. oh your flow is off oh your k doesnt fit with your s your style is wack blah blah blah. ive guys who are "kings" with whack styles and guys with solid flow to be know as "toys" this doesnt make any sense. honestly style is a personal choice i just think its bullshit that when someone posts somethin even if its actually some what good people still dump on it. its just confusing thats all im saying because i would actually like to evolve to be better sometime in my life and i think i actually have a solid flow and style. most will not agree but whatever all i want is some feedback that is somewhat helpful.

Maybe one day you'll understand why

[notmikegiant]

just screwing around, i really like the E, if any of this looks bit let me know, first attempt at a sketch, also i know nothing really matches style wise

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[TheFedexGuy]

Just messin around a bit kind of shitty, but a sketch none theless. @CRED thanks for the crits on my last one. what did you mean about the baseline or whatever (NEUS by the way)http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-01164315.jpg

[cred1384]

@Neus no problem. When you do your sketch start by taking a straight edge and drawing a line and make your letters sit on it, it helps a good bit. and thicken up them bars!

[TheFedexGuy]

Thanks man. Im gonna try that heres another I just did before I read that lol ignore the circles under the s I dont know what the fuck I was doin

[TheFedexGuy]

oops here it ishttp://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-01170549.jpg

[gemer]

^^^ s' doesnt fit with the rest and the weird black cloud is pretty random.. keep drawing man ull get it

[SkateJunt]

my entry for the round robin
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7179/6798818032_8ca162ebf3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6798818032/)
BS Tape battle (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6798818032/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

[dankbudz]

for da tourney.
bout to get shit on.

[Mildstyles]

Graff J up, If you think of the left side of that lime green A as a P, that would be a sick P.
And seder, you make your 3d too big
Robin junk:

http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w476/awsskat3r/saillll.jpg

[dankbudz]

eh, i guess

[TheOutsider]

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Didn't have any supplies so I just used CS3 and my tablet. I really fucking hate that A but I cant figure out what I want to do with it.
Open as fuck to crits.

[EWL24]

bump for crits
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[cred1384]

@Dank badass as always. Making them simps look dopee.
@Outsider I like everything except the teeth.

Lost my form a bit towards the E and D on this.. hate them but posting anyways.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo38.jpg

[toopski]

^can seel progress already though from what u first posted to this good work

[City of Trees]

yea sumthin like dat.. got it from futurama haha

[dankbudz]

yo when can i pass in the intermediate?

[Mildstyles]

When you don't suck!










Just kidding

[dankbudz]

:(

[Mildstyles]

I kid, I kid. Pretty solid simples, im assuming when you add more and get a little more intracate or some nice letter interaction? I dont know man

[EWL24]

really? i still haven't got any crits :(

dank - thats sick, i always love ur characters. u should post something in the intermediate thread and see if it gets deleted or not, that would be the best way to tell

[dankbudz]

thanks bro.
crits for you dude i don't really wanna type it. so just remember bars. and heres a lil picture. you don't want your letters to look like wavy gravy noodles. if you curve the bars, make its gradual and consistent. you learn to walk before you run.
unless your superman, then you fly....

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

little e's huh... only retards do little e's

[dankbudz]

guess Ive gone full retard

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

you never go full retard bro

[EWL24]

@dank yeah i know, i was trying to give it some "movement" but what ever. heres something i was working on today that has straight bars
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[toopski]

little e's wtf is this i never knew e's came in little and big form

[notmikegiant]

@ EWL - looks clean, proportioned.


messing around with a pen after work
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[dankbudz]

ewl-thats good
if your going for movement, go for it like its moving left or right. slants and slight curves.

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

little e's wtf is this i never knew e's came in little and big form

shiiit you aint seen a medium e befores?!

[Mildstyles]

This 2 letter is dancing...

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[cred1384]

@Mild Those highlights are nice.

if using little E's is cool than consider me Miles Davis.

New markers coming tomorrow, ignore the tag i know it's shit and i'm okay with that for right now. ass.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo39.jpg

Edit: Tried adding some depth, the silver came out weird cause my marker tip is too wide but posting anyway.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo40.jpg

[toopski]

^looks good but you need to work on your letters more before messing with that side of things

[sadgeh]

Damn no one is given crits? Only thing you see here is: looks dope and that sort of stuff.
Cred - Cut the silver and do it whit that light blue it will fit together and looks doper with the darker blue.

[Mildstyles]

Cred you sketch alot but you need to dumb down your stuff. Simpler and stop trying fancy coloring junk just focus on learning lettering and structure for right meow.

[Zookyook]

i see what u tried to do there cred... my advice would be to put those light blue highlights u used on the other side of ur bars, since ur 3d (which would be a shadow basically) is coming off to the left that would make more sense, and i woulda taken that silver and used it to define ur 3d... put a line of silver in the black right behind each bar, leaving the black outline there, i know its hard to put into words so heres some reference...


if u think of the light blue u used as the white highlights in this pic... look what side of the bars i put the white highlights on in relation to where the 3d is, its always on the opposite side the 3d is coming off... and what i was saying about defining the 3d with ur silver, u can see the white that defines the 3d in this pic too... just makes shit pop better when u dont cover ur outline with highlights, but instead u DEFINE it with ur highlights... hope this was helpful haha

fucking attachments... the pic is supposed to be under the first paragraph lol

[cred1384]

Thanks for the crits, All that extra color was just out of boredom, not trying to hide bad letter form or anything, just couldnt sleep and wanted to draw. And yea i get what you're saying Zook, Idk why i did the wrong side. Here's the pic i took of it pre-extra shit.

http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/2816/photo41gx.jpg

[Zookyook]

yea looks better without all the bs... hope u take my advice though... and instead of doin crazy backgrounds next time just do another one right on top of it... stack em up and fill ur books up children! lol

[cred1384]

I'm not one to turn down good advice. The crits i get on here are 100% the reason i've progressed the little bit i have. The full page bg was just cause i had never done one and wanted to give it a whirl haha. Zooky those highlights are sick. Is that paint on canvas?

[Zookyook]

cool deal... thanks, just prismas and paint markers on canvas type paper...

[Mildstyles]

This sorta reminds me of an armored car...
Crit this??
Tried some different things...I'm in love with my own NA but the K is weird.
But crits appreciated!

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[dankbudz]

you always seem to make your bars smaller after your N. try and keep them the same size and the N, it'll look nice. and yeah the K's weird. the A;s got a lil too much also.

[Mildstyles]

Thats what I was going for! That's what makes it looks like an armored car ya know. haha word thanks man

[dankbudz]

actually... i don't know.. because this is an armored car...
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/000_0001.jpg
i see no comparison :cool:

[Mildstyles]

I meant this kind of armored car. duh.
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[dankbudz]

maybe..

[Mildstyles]

;)

[cred1384]

@Mild Just those 2 bars on the top of the K are a bit teeny. I think it's pretty sick though.

Working on spacing and flow. Trying at least haha.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo42.jpg

[Zookyook]

lookin better... i fucked with it a little to show u what i meant earlier about where to put highlights and define the 3d if u wanna throw some white or silver on it.... lol yea im fuckin bored...
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[cred1384]

thanks man, it helps to see it like that. My silver marker tip is too wide and my white marker is coming in the mail but i'll try it as soon as it comes.

[DEMPO]

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[Mildstyles]

You make me so angry

[cred1384]

You make me so angry

you spelled "horny" wrong.

[dankbudz]

lol

[Mildstyles]

Cred i kid you not I thought of someone doing that before i posted that comment, I knew it was just a matter of time. Mostly because the song ran through my head when i typed that.
Seder isn't that the same piece as before? or a different one?

[dankbudz]

got deleted from intermediate so i put it in here... i want the credits

[Mildstyles]

Ahhh gotcha. Don't worry your still intermediate in my heart ;)

[dankbudz]

lol thanks man..

[Zookyook]

like i said in there its better to be the best in this thread than the most toyish toy in the intermediate thread lol i think ur outlines are intermediate u should just bust out the add ons and fills to add some style... put cuts in ur letters and break them up a little, maybe when u add a cut somewhere itll look like a good place to make a connection, doing shit like that will help u build on ur style... attack the back(start drawing things in the bg first), work on bars and bending and shit... ull be intermediate in a month no problem...

and mildstyles that nak that u said looks like an armored truck lol my only crit would be listen to what dank said about thickness and u brok the backbone of the K in one too many places... take a kink out of that part and itll look straight... try to match the left bar of the K with the left one of the N... shit will be proper

[akaSKIZ]

hey whats good people.. i go by the name "skiz" and recently started sketching some graffiti type pics.. what do y'all think?

this was like my first "skiz" sketch ever. lol
http://i39.tinypic.com/24cxk6w.jpg
drawing i did for my friend.. it says "lakers"
http://i40.tinypic.com/k9uyp2.jpg
skiz drawing i did.. made it look like it was popping through a wall.
http://i41.tinypic.com/fx9j6c.jpg
this is a drawing i did on a desk at my school
http://i42.tinypic.com/34opq4z.jpg
this one is like a ninja graffiti monkey type thing. lol
http://i41.tinypic.com/zvd5ih.jpg
not really graffiti but cool sketch i did of monkey behind wall. sorry this is so big. lol
http://i40.tinypic.com/r75dew.jpg

[dankbudz]

if you are actually trying to get into graff, learn some letter structure.

flick for talk...
got distracted and fucked the I and part of the T

[cred1384]

ooooo Budz steppin his game up. That character is bawse. Not sure if i like the little I though.

Trying to improve form a bit. the fade i used was just cause i was tired of the same old stuff.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo43.jpg

EDIT: Just saw where i missed darkening a highlight on the bottom of the R, ignore that or else!

[dankbudz]

try not to hid the bottom of your R and E so much. and don't do that extension on the end of the E. annd that D is falling over. haha. but you're improving man, keep it up!

and yeah, the I woulda been better if i didn't mess up outlining it.

[Mildstyles]

A simple a day will keep the wackness at bay!
Cred= i still think you should go simpler, like this junk.
dank- thats gucci dude and the characters teeth are sick...idk why i think that but they are
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[s33on3]

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did for my gf she wanted to start trying graffiti


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both of these i did at work when I was bored please someone give me some cred that I can use

[dankbudz]

you're not a girl?...:confused:

your avatar has me so confused

[cred1384]

I know i've done so many simples that i just want to keep working with this style until i get it perfect. feel like i'm getting closer haha.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo44.jpg

[Lado]

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I've got to work on R's more. DARREL was for a battle. Dotch is sloppy and I need to define the T and C more.

[cred1384]

@Lado I like the full teal lest, nice simps.

Went simpler on this. made this shit cleannn
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo45.jpg

[gemer]

ur d' is coming out more nicely is that makes since..u improved from when u first got here i would say.. so thumbs up playa play keep writen

[DEMPO]

5653556536
the one on the right was a freestyle

[dankbudz]

sick...

[lostyoursense]

Those are so dope !!!..............

[kwu]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7203/6804078366_1b8f5b4e22_z.jpg

[cred1384]

@KWU That style is so cool, i miss the fades you usually do on the 3d though.

Lost my form so much on the D.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo46.jpg

[Zookyook]

damn kwu thats the hottest shit i seent from u!

cred keep chippin away at it mayn... watch how u close the ends of ur bars though, the bottom of that C really doesnt work out, and the D u lost form like u said... but also the bottom of the R how u pointed the bars like that kinda looks out of place... just try to make them rounded on the ends at first... or even just straight block letters


oh yea and erbody go vote on the round robin in the battle thread! some nice entries so far...

[dankbudz]

ber

[Dossbog]

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Tried drawing with bars, lots of erasing....

[TastyMcNasty]

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no


http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo46.jpg

other than the D, yes


http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7203/6804078366_1b8f5b4e22_z.jpg

yes


http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=56544&stc=1&d=1330821907

yes yes yes


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Tried drawing with bars, lots of erasing....

no

[cred1384]

My best yet i'd say. Had to try to color over a few mistakes but it just smudged... try to ignore that if possible.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo47.jpg

[notmikegiant]

@ cred - every post ive seen gets better and better, just shows im not practicing enough. keep it up, i want to see the same shading from the red piece in that one you just posted.

@ KWU - looks awesome, keep it up

@ dempo - really digging that one on the left, got any like that with color?

@ doss - not that i'm one to talk, but keep working those simples, im just not feeling any of it

[DEMPO]

im just glad to see whats being posted here. better days ahead

[cred1384]

@notmike Thanks man, just taking peoples advice and applying it to each new one.

struggled on the highlights on this one, not sure if too high or just confused.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo48.jpg

And another, again kinda fucked up the D. So frustrating.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo50.jpg

[DEMPO]

56576 trying to work on control with more "roundness", doing it WELL is another matter.
@dank good work bro your characters inspire me but i also wonder who inspires u

@cred really nice way of using your bars seems like your R and D are the weakpoints if anything. nice fills too

[NanaKillsKMC]

56577

started this for my bf just throwin it in here gimmie some colors
i was thinking rasta colors n then i thought maybe blue??? its just
a black book soooo i dont think it matters much...

[NanaKillsKMC]

^^ dips

[cred1384]

@Dempo Dope shading man. the kink in the top of the O is throwing me off a bit but the rest is sick.
@Nana Looks nice. Maybe use a light blue for the fill?

Trying more rounded bars. R came out looking a bit off.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo51.jpg

[NanaKillsKMC]

its a D it reads DIPSR

[SynOne]

Cred - Looking better, digging that C and D.

Nana - I'd drop a cyan blue on that, or maybe even a pinkish red. I can't really tell from the pic, but that R might need a tad bit more definition. I'm reading DIPSA.

Fucked the R. But meh.

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[NanaKillsKMC]

i get it!!! but i think its cause its done in pencil. and i used a webcam. none the less, i agree tho my r looks shitty...

[cred1384]

@Syn I don't think the R is bad. Only thing i see is mayabe space the W out a bit more or don't extend the bottom of the E as much. i wish i could do outlines as clean as you.

Lost all flow whatsoever with the D on this one...
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo52.jpg

[dankbudz]

^^not even.

cred, you should do some nice clean simples and get a lil better grasp on structure. don't get me wrong, not saying yours is horrible like some people... but it would help you develop your ish quicker. you are trying to do complicated things too soon and ittlll look whack if you don't gots some good structure

[cred1384]

^^not even.

cred, you should do some nice clean simples and get a lil better grasp on structure. don't get me wrong, not saying yours is horrible like some people... but it would help you develop your ish quicker. you are trying to do complicated things too soon and ittlll look whack if you don't gots some good structure

I hear ya, i always start off saying i'm gonna keep it simple then it ends up like that haha.

[NanaKillsKMC]

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the homies

[gemer]

say whattt we gotta female in bs?
haha ^^ diggen the guer one looks pretty good
@ cred its starting to look like an o' again

[SiteGraff]

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Sorry I uploaded so many, a lot of them are toy, my apologies

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[gemer]

freestyle on a paper towel
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[R3bel1995]

Not to be a jackass, but I think I'm... going to keep quiet...

["PHYSH"]

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crits please..............

[sadgeh]

Physh - like the concept, but the S is a lil off the bars are smaller then the other letters.
Site - go to the new to graffiti thread and read it forward backward from the right to the left from left to right. And post then what you made

[Norfsuthr]

freestyle on a paper towel
56672
Finally something i can look at.

Site MIND THE CRAP NIG.

[Zookyook]

565815658256583
the homies
theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...
56811
lolz


freestyle on a paper towel
56672 u neva used somethin so fresh n so clean to wipe ur ass with! lol

[cred1384]

@Physh - loving how you used your bars., good shit.

Trying to keep my shit simple and cleann
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo53.jpg

[kwu]

bump..lol


theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...
56811
lolz


and a quickie


http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7045/6807301952_47bb4b81ba_z.jpg

[Phat 2]

sitegraff, your characters might have potential if you work on them... try to do some minimalistic simple candy style characs... like kidrobot's for example. might work out for you
as for your actual graff stuff (letters) not so much, just like a lot of peeps here, you're starting wrong. the new to graff thread might help. hanging out and lurking for crits might also help. but one thing you need to do for sure is: stop what you're doing with your letters and stop using your methods and stick around to find out how to build your letters all over again. you're gonna have to start fresh if you want to get somewhere..

Nana, welcome to the forums, hope the guys here don't scare you away with their dicks.. you gotta understand, they don't see many females around these parts so youre something new and exciting to them, that confuses them...

[Asis13]

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few randoms here. stop character ideas and the sketches are kinda new for me. trying to figure out colours

[Phat 2]

the last one is very interesting, I can definitely see something like that as a clean ass wildstyle with details, an insane color scheme, 3D and background on some nice freshly painted wall... would burn hotter than a forest fire dude..
but if you could have properly structured letters in there rather than just random shapes, it would be much better

[Asis13]

thanks dude. i know my letters are fucked at times. just trying out a bunch of things. i kinda dig that third one i posted up.

[cred1384]

I like the style but yeah i'd say a little structure needed.

trying to be clean and simple still
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo54.jpg

[NanaKillsKMC]

theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...
56811
lolz

u neva used somethin so fresh n so clean to wipe ur ass with! lol
oh u want titties lol ill post my grandmas titties mine are off limits im married!!!

[EWL24]

Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred
Cred - that looks good, but i like the red one more

crits please
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[NanaKillsKMC]

^^^ clean now add shape

[DEMPO]

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["PHYSH"]

Physh - like the concept, but the S is a lil off the bars are smaller then the other letters.
Site - go to the new to graffiti thread and read it forward backward from the right to the left from left to right. And post then what you made
thanks sadgeh, appreciate the crits and found the other comment funny as fuck.....

[HipsterPunks]

http://i1222.photobucket.com/albums/dd488/chadhipster/nj.jpg

something i did over the weekend, its supposed to say New Jersey, letters are to crowded for my liking

[Dossbog]

56947

i rike crits prease

[PETER]

56948 need to go back through and clean up the outline. The A is too small. crits beside the mentioned issues?



Cred: You are progressing nicely. One of the quickest I've seen on here. Keep rockin.

[kwu]

antik that black tag is illy

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7198/6955852971_c92bdefbb5_z.jpg

[stien]

its not a black book but its a belt buckle i made 56951

[PETER]

Atma: Thanks man. I'm trying to work on a piece style based on that hand. Your style is coming along really well.

Atma, Mori, Sear, Seder, Venom, Hipster, any intermediate cats got suggestions on my piece/style?

[cred1384]

Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred
Cred - that looks good, but i like the red one more

crits please
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@Ewal Super clean! Good shit man
@Doss Looks like the far left character is just a big pair of balls (Can't unsee it)
@PETER thanks man, just taking peoples advice and sketching all i can. Try putting your 3d fill down before you trace your outline or retrace your outline after so that it looks like it was added at the end. I'm assuming you did it like that because you have a similar silver pen to me and you cant really write on the ink once it dries, which sucks. Other that that im digging it man, keep it up.
@Stein the middle point on the W looks weird, dont make it go off to a point like that.
@Hipster I'm not at a good enough skill leve to make crits on that, it's too dope haha.

[PETER]

the 3d was originally purple... I wish I would have left it. The silver I can't go back over without a black paint marker. Thanks for the kind words. Your progress is motivating me to spend more time drawing. 60hr work weeks plus practicing for a few dj show is keeping me super busy. :(

[Mori]

Peter, nice concept with the letters. If you cut your lines for sharper corners and go with something other then focal 3d you'd have somethinggoing and I'd loose the spikes you added on the purple aura

[sadgeh]

With that belt buckle you have no swag.
PETER - The M is also too little. On the whole sketch its going a lil from big too little but maybe i dont see it right.

[TheFedexGuy]

Couple new oneshttp://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-05170540.jpg http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-05170647.jpg

[cred1384]

@Neus Lookin better, make sure you keep your bars even on that S

Too hungover to keep my lines crisp on this one... tried to keep it simple
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_29007912x.jpg

[MN Nice]

Keep sketching cred.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00696-20120305-1641.jpg?t=1330989460

[dankbudz]

looking good hipster and kwu,
you're characters are the shit hipster.
Peter-Id of made them same height, thicken the bars of a few of em and make a few of the Letters bigger to match the J. i think it would look pretty dope then.
mues- thats looking nice

photo booth never captures the colors right
don't really like where i went with this... only like the E and D

[MN Nice]

Looks awesome man ^ my only suggestions are less cuts in your letters, seems kinda over the top. Maybe you were going for a more tore up look because of the dog, idk. And also the dog's front legs seem a tad bit too pigeon toed, ya know?

[dankbudz]

i got the dog how i wanted ;) not the words, was a bit too much for me too, but i wanted to see how it'd turn out.

[TheFedexGuy]

@cred thanks for the crits man. I wss proud of both of those thought those were probably my best yet. I feel ya on the s I knew it soon as I did it

[TastyMcNasty]

looking good hipster and kwu,
you're characters are the shit hipster.
Peter-Id of made them same height, thicken the bars of a few of em and make a few of the Letters bigger to match the J. i think it would look pretty dope then.
mues- thats looking nice

photo booth never captures the colors right
don't really like where i went with this... only like the E and D

fuck ya. keep working on it

[DEMPO]

dank that is dope i gotta try that

[cred1384]

good shit Dank

working on my lines, need new pens.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_66211022x.jpg

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

bricks arent layered like that... just sayin

[dankbudz]

cred, don't get stuck on connections. to be honest you aren't really there yet, doesn't mean you can try it but you shouldn't be doing them on every piece, nah mean?
also you should of leaned the top of the E to the left
i like that one more than your others though, because you didn't do unnecessary extension on the left leg of the R, looks a lot better. keep it up, man

fuck you rib.... i realize.

[Shit Outta Luck]

Dope dank, really like that dog haha. Reminds me of the dog from Tom and Jerry, except more brown.
And MN Nice that's nicer then usual, although I don't like the T covering the Y so much.
Flick for talkin, crits are always welcome.

Fucked up the M on the first one and the N on the second :/
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[dankbudz]

mugen is nice, kinda decreases in size though

[DEMPO]

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[Jiska Matos]

57053 something i did at work today

[Asis13]

I was trying to take suggestions from a pic a posted a couple days ago. tried a little more letter definition. I know my shading is messed in places. the second pic is an 'S' I want to incorporate into it..feel like it has more style.
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[SHEARZ.]

@Asis13 That stuffs pretty good bro, loving the shading, don't see so much of that ah.. Good stuff keep it up =)

57059

Some feedback? Thanks in advance.. Says "Sketch" But kinda stuffed up the k... Trying to get into characters, so all crits welcome, just keep in mind, it my first character.

[Asis13]

@shearz - thanks dude. ill keep posting pics as i update. i like your style but the letters need more spacing i think. sweet character idea but im lost on whats happening with happening with that can and the face/ mask look a little outta shape. but i dig where its goin

[kersoner]

57064 yeah e and r i still gotta fix up abit but what do you guys think, i wanna paint this on a freight

[TheFedexGuy]

sketched this in like two minutes this morning
http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-06070241.jpg

[PETER]

Thanks guys. I'll be working on this style a bit and post something up again by the end of the week. Djing tonight!!! Droppin' some DNB. Super stoked.

[Zookyook]

hoooly shit man.... why do u post here? lol thats at LEAST intermediate, wouldnt get deleted from the big boy thread either.... ur shit always has a clean concept and i can tell its well executed...

[Jiska Matos]

57103 another boring day at work

[PETER]

the S is a little tough to make out. looks like a Z with some feather lookin' extentions coming off the E. Beyond that it's tight.