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TheFedexGuy
03-01-2012, 03:48 PM
Just messin around a bit kind of shitty, but a sketch none theless. @CRED thanks for the crits on my last one. what did you mean about the baseline or whatever (NEUS by the way)http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-01164315.jpg

cred1384
03-01-2012, 04:01 PM
@Neus no problem. When you do your sketch start by taking a straight edge and drawing a line and make your letters sit on it, it helps a good bit. and thicken up them bars!

TheFedexGuy
03-01-2012, 04:11 PM
Thanks man. Im gonna try that heres another I just did before I read that lol ignore the circles under the s I dont know what the fuck I was doin

TheFedexGuy
03-01-2012, 04:12 PM
oops here it ishttp://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-01170549.jpg

gemer
03-01-2012, 04:19 PM
^^^ s' doesnt fit with the rest and the weird black cloud is pretty random.. keep drawing man ull get it

SkateJunt
03-01-2012, 04:52 PM
my entry for the round robin
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7179/6798818032_8ca162ebf3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6798818032/)
BS Tape battle (http://www.flickr.com/photos/69411978@N04/6798818032/) by Stewart Stevenson (http://www.flickr.com/people/69411978@N04/), on Flickr

dankbudz
03-01-2012, 08:32 PM
for da tourney.
bout to get shit on.

Mildstyles
03-01-2012, 08:40 PM
Graff J up, If you think of the left side of that lime green A as a P, that would be a sick P.
And seder, you make your 3d too big
Robin junk:

http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w476/awsskat3r/saillll.jpg

dankbudz
03-01-2012, 08:49 PM
eh, i guess

TheOutsider
03-01-2012, 09:09 PM
56427

Didn't have any supplies so I just used CS3 and my tablet. I really fucking hate that A but I cant figure out what I want to do with it.
Open as fuck to crits.

EWL24
03-01-2012, 09:17 PM
bump for crits
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cred1384
03-01-2012, 09:17 PM
@Dank badass as always. Making them simps look dopee.
@Outsider I like everything except the teeth.

Lost my form a bit towards the E and D on this.. hate them but posting anyways.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo38.jpg

toopski
03-01-2012, 09:20 PM
^can seel progress already though from what u first posted to this good work

City of Trees
03-01-2012, 11:13 PM
yea sumthin like dat.. got it from futurama haha

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 12:49 AM
yo when can i pass in the intermediate?

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 12:54 AM
When you don't suck!










Just kidding

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 12:54 AM
:(

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 12:56 AM
I kid, I kid. Pretty solid simples, im assuming when you add more and get a little more intracate or some nice letter interaction? I dont know man

EWL24
03-02-2012, 01:24 AM
really? i still haven't got any crits :(

dank - thats sick, i always love ur characters. u should post something in the intermediate thread and see if it gets deleted or not, that would be the best way to tell

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 01:33 AM
thanks bro.
crits for you dude i don't really wanna type it. so just remember bars. and heres a lil picture. you don't want your letters to look like wavy gravy noodles. if you curve the bars, make its gradual and consistent. you learn to walk before you run.
unless your superman, then you fly....

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
03-02-2012, 01:37 AM
little e's huh... only retards do little e's

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 01:38 AM
guess Ive gone full retard

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
03-02-2012, 01:39 AM
you never go full retard bro

EWL24
03-02-2012, 01:49 AM
@dank yeah i know, i was trying to give it some "movement" but what ever. heres something i was working on today that has straight bars
56440

toopski
03-02-2012, 01:51 AM
little e's wtf is this i never knew e's came in little and big form

notmikegiant
03-02-2012, 02:06 AM
@ EWL - looks clean, proportioned.


messing around with a pen after work
56441

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 02:07 AM
ewl-thats good
if your going for movement, go for it like its moving left or right. slants and slight curves.

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
03-02-2012, 02:09 AM
little e's wtf is this i never knew e's came in little and big form

shiiit you aint seen a medium e befores?!

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 02:26 AM
This 2 letter is dancing...

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cred1384
03-02-2012, 03:47 AM
@Mild Those highlights are nice.

if using little E's is cool than consider me Miles Davis.

New markers coming tomorrow, ignore the tag i know it's shit and i'm okay with that for right now. ass.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo39.jpg

Edit: Tried adding some depth, the silver came out weird cause my marker tip is too wide but posting anyway.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo40.jpg

toopski
03-02-2012, 07:01 AM
^looks good but you need to work on your letters more before messing with that side of things

sadgeh
03-02-2012, 08:48 AM
Damn no one is given crits? Only thing you see here is: looks dope and that sort of stuff.
Cred - Cut the silver and do it whit that light blue it will fit together and looks doper with the darker blue.

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 12:21 PM
Cred you sketch alot but you need to dumb down your stuff. Simpler and stop trying fancy coloring junk just focus on learning lettering and structure for right meow.

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 01:24 PM
i see what u tried to do there cred... my advice would be to put those light blue highlights u used on the other side of ur bars, since ur 3d (which would be a shadow basically) is coming off to the left that would make more sense, and i woulda taken that silver and used it to define ur 3d... put a line of silver in the black right behind each bar, leaving the black outline there, i know its hard to put into words so heres some reference...


if u think of the light blue u used as the white highlights in this pic... look what side of the bars i put the white highlights on in relation to where the 3d is, its always on the opposite side the 3d is coming off... and what i was saying about defining the 3d with ur silver, u can see the white that defines the 3d in this pic too... just makes shit pop better when u dont cover ur outline with highlights, but instead u DEFINE it with ur highlights... hope this was helpful haha

fucking attachments... the pic is supposed to be under the first paragraph lol

cred1384
03-02-2012, 01:30 PM
Thanks for the crits, All that extra color was just out of boredom, not trying to hide bad letter form or anything, just couldnt sleep and wanted to draw. And yea i get what you're saying Zook, Idk why i did the wrong side. Here's the pic i took of it pre-extra shit.

http://img687.imageshack.us/img687/2816/photo41gx.jpg

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 01:32 PM
yea looks better without all the bs... hope u take my advice though... and instead of doin crazy backgrounds next time just do another one right on top of it... stack em up and fill ur books up children! lol

cred1384
03-02-2012, 02:02 PM
I'm not one to turn down good advice. The crits i get on here are 100% the reason i've progressed the little bit i have. The full page bg was just cause i had never done one and wanted to give it a whirl haha. Zooky those highlights are sick. Is that paint on canvas?

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 02:14 PM
cool deal... thanks, just prismas and paint markers on canvas type paper...

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 04:03 PM
This sorta reminds me of an armored car...
Crit this??
Tried some different things...I'm in love with my own NA but the K is weird.
But crits appreciated!

56457

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 04:08 PM
you always seem to make your bars smaller after your N. try and keep them the same size and the N, it'll look nice. and yeah the K's weird. the A;s got a lil too much also.

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 04:17 PM
Thats what I was going for! That's what makes it looks like an armored car ya know. haha word thanks man

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 04:33 PM
actually... i don't know.. because this is an armored car...
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/000_0001.jpg
i see no comparison :cool:

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 04:40 PM
I meant this kind of armored car. duh.
56465

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 04:42 PM
maybe..

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 04:46 PM
;)

cred1384
03-02-2012, 05:53 PM
@Mild Just those 2 bars on the top of the K are a bit teeny. I think it's pretty sick though.

Working on spacing and flow. Trying at least haha.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo42.jpg

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 06:15 PM
lookin better... i fucked with it a little to show u what i meant earlier about where to put highlights and define the 3d if u wanna throw some white or silver on it.... lol yea im fuckin bored...
56472

cred1384
03-02-2012, 06:43 PM
thanks man, it helps to see it like that. My silver marker tip is too wide and my white marker is coming in the mail but i'll try it as soon as it comes.

DEMPO
03-02-2012, 07:13 PM
56473

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 07:17 PM
You make me so angry

cred1384
03-02-2012, 07:58 PM
You make me so angry

you spelled "horny" wrong.

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 08:01 PM
lol

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 08:03 PM
Cred i kid you not I thought of someone doing that before i posted that comment, I knew it was just a matter of time. Mostly because the song ran through my head when i typed that.
Seder isn't that the same piece as before? or a different one?

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 08:19 PM
got deleted from intermediate so i put it in here... i want the credits

Mildstyles
03-02-2012, 08:20 PM
Ahhh gotcha. Don't worry your still intermediate in my heart ;)

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 08:38 PM
lol thanks man..

Zookyook
03-02-2012, 09:04 PM
like i said in there its better to be the best in this thread than the most toyish toy in the intermediate thread lol i think ur outlines are intermediate u should just bust out the add ons and fills to add some style... put cuts in ur letters and break them up a little, maybe when u add a cut somewhere itll look like a good place to make a connection, doing shit like that will help u build on ur style... attack the back(start drawing things in the bg first), work on bars and bending and shit... ull be intermediate in a month no problem...

and mildstyles that nak that u said looks like an armored truck lol my only crit would be listen to what dank said about thickness and u brok the backbone of the K in one too many places... take a kink out of that part and itll look straight... try to match the left bar of the K with the left one of the N... shit will be proper

akaSKIZ
03-02-2012, 11:16 PM
hey whats good people.. i go by the name "skiz" and recently started sketching some graffiti type pics.. what do y'all think?

this was like my first "skiz" sketch ever. lol
http://i39.tinypic.com/24cxk6w.jpg
drawing i did for my friend.. it says "lakers"
http://i40.tinypic.com/k9uyp2.jpg
skiz drawing i did.. made it look like it was popping through a wall.
http://i41.tinypic.com/fx9j6c.jpg
this is a drawing i did on a desk at my school
http://i42.tinypic.com/34opq4z.jpg
this one is like a ninja graffiti monkey type thing. lol
http://i41.tinypic.com/zvd5ih.jpg
not really graffiti but cool sketch i did of monkey behind wall. sorry this is so big. lol
http://i40.tinypic.com/r75dew.jpg

dankbudz
03-02-2012, 11:37 PM
if you are actually trying to get into graff, learn some letter structure.

flick for talk...
got distracted and fucked the I and part of the T

cred1384
03-02-2012, 11:48 PM
ooooo Budz steppin his game up. That character is bawse. Not sure if i like the little I though.

Trying to improve form a bit. the fade i used was just cause i was tired of the same old stuff.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo43.jpg

EDIT: Just saw where i missed darkening a highlight on the bottom of the R, ignore that or else!

dankbudz
03-03-2012, 12:15 AM
try not to hid the bottom of your R and E so much. and don't do that extension on the end of the E. annd that D is falling over. haha. but you're improving man, keep it up!

and yeah, the I woulda been better if i didn't mess up outlining it.

Mildstyles
03-03-2012, 12:33 AM
A simple a day will keep the wackness at bay!
Cred= i still think you should go simpler, like this junk.
dank- thats gucci dude and the characters teeth are sick...idk why i think that but they are
56484

s33on3
03-03-2012, 12:48 AM
56487

did for my gf she wanted to start trying graffiti


56488

both of these i did at work when I was bored please someone give me some cred that I can use

dankbudz
03-03-2012, 01:11 AM
you're not a girl?...:confused:

your avatar has me so confused

cred1384
03-03-2012, 01:16 AM
I know i've done so many simples that i just want to keep working with this style until i get it perfect. feel like i'm getting closer haha.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo44.jpg

Lado
03-03-2012, 01:23 AM
56490
56491
56492
56493

I've got to work on R's more. DARREL was for a battle. Dotch is sloppy and I need to define the T and C more.

cred1384
03-03-2012, 04:02 AM
@Lado I like the full teal lest, nice simps.

Went simpler on this. made this shit cleannn
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo45.jpg

gemer
03-03-2012, 02:39 PM
ur d' is coming out more nicely is that makes since..u improved from when u first got here i would say.. so thumbs up playa play keep writen

DEMPO
03-03-2012, 03:21 PM
5653556536
the one on the right was a freestyle

dankbudz
03-03-2012, 03:31 PM
sick...

lostyoursense
03-03-2012, 03:50 PM
Those are so dope !!!..............

kwu
03-03-2012, 04:33 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7203/6804078366_1b8f5b4e22_z.jpg

cred1384
03-03-2012, 05:35 PM
@KWU That style is so cool, i miss the fades you usually do on the 3d though.

Lost my form so much on the D.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo46.jpg

Zookyook
03-03-2012, 05:40 PM
damn kwu thats the hottest shit i seent from u!

cred keep chippin away at it mayn... watch how u close the ends of ur bars though, the bottom of that C really doesnt work out, and the D u lost form like u said... but also the bottom of the R how u pointed the bars like that kinda looks out of place... just try to make them rounded on the ends at first... or even just straight block letters


oh yea and erbody go vote on the round robin in the battle thread! some nice entries so far...

dankbudz
03-03-2012, 06:45 PM
ber

Dossbog
03-03-2012, 06:55 PM
56545
Tried drawing with bars, lots of erasing....

TastyMcNasty
03-03-2012, 07:33 PM
5653556536

no


http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo46.jpg

other than the D, yes


http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7203/6804078366_1b8f5b4e22_z.jpg

yes


http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/attachment.php?attachmentid=56544&stc=1&d=1330821907

yes yes yes


56545
Tried drawing with bars, lots of erasing....

no

cred1384
03-03-2012, 09:52 PM
My best yet i'd say. Had to try to color over a few mistakes but it just smudged... try to ignore that if possible.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo47.jpg

notmikegiant
03-03-2012, 10:53 PM
@ cred - every post ive seen gets better and better, just shows im not practicing enough. keep it up, i want to see the same shading from the red piece in that one you just posted.

@ KWU - looks awesome, keep it up

@ dempo - really digging that one on the left, got any like that with color?

@ doss - not that i'm one to talk, but keep working those simples, im just not feeling any of it

DEMPO
03-04-2012, 12:12 AM
im just glad to see whats being posted here. better days ahead

cred1384
03-04-2012, 12:19 AM
@notmike Thanks man, just taking peoples advice and applying it to each new one.

struggled on the highlights on this one, not sure if too high or just confused.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo48.jpg

And another, again kinda fucked up the D. So frustrating.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo50.jpg

DEMPO
03-04-2012, 03:02 AM
56576 trying to work on control with more "roundness", doing it WELL is another matter.
@dank good work bro your characters inspire me but i also wonder who inspires u

@cred really nice way of using your bars seems like your R and D are the weakpoints if anything. nice fills too

NanaKillsKMC
03-04-2012, 03:52 AM
56577

started this for my bf just throwin it in here gimmie some colors
i was thinking rasta colors n then i thought maybe blue??? its just
a black book soooo i dont think it matters much...

NanaKillsKMC
03-04-2012, 03:53 AM
^^ dips

cred1384
03-04-2012, 04:11 AM
@Dempo Dope shading man. the kink in the top of the O is throwing me off a bit but the rest is sick.
@Nana Looks nice. Maybe use a light blue for the fill?

Trying more rounded bars. R came out looking a bit off.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo51.jpg

NanaKillsKMC
03-04-2012, 04:21 AM
its a D it reads DIPSR

SynOne
03-04-2012, 04:28 AM
Cred - Looking better, digging that C and D.

Nana - I'd drop a cyan blue on that, or maybe even a pinkish red. I can't really tell from the pic, but that R might need a tad bit more definition. I'm reading DIPSA.

Fucked the R. But meh.

56578

NanaKillsKMC
03-04-2012, 04:37 AM
i get it!!! but i think its cause its done in pencil. and i used a webcam. none the less, i agree tho my r looks shitty...

cred1384
03-04-2012, 05:10 AM
@Syn I don't think the R is bad. Only thing i see is mayabe space the W out a bit more or don't extend the bottom of the E as much. i wish i could do outlines as clean as you.

Lost all flow whatsoever with the D on this one...
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo52.jpg

dankbudz
03-04-2012, 05:17 AM
^^not even.

cred, you should do some nice clean simples and get a lil better grasp on structure. don't get me wrong, not saying yours is horrible like some people... but it would help you develop your ish quicker. you are trying to do complicated things too soon and ittlll look whack if you don't gots some good structure

cred1384
03-04-2012, 05:20 AM
^^not even.

cred, you should do some nice clean simples and get a lil better grasp on structure. don't get me wrong, not saying yours is horrible like some people... but it would help you develop your ish quicker. you are trying to do complicated things too soon and ittlll look whack if you don't gots some good structure

I hear ya, i always start off saying i'm gonna keep it simple then it ends up like that haha.

NanaKillsKMC
03-04-2012, 05:47 AM
565815658256583
the homies

gemer
03-04-2012, 08:24 AM
say whattt we gotta female in bs?
haha ^^ diggen the guer one looks pretty good
@ cred its starting to look like an o' again

SiteGraff
03-04-2012, 02:34 PM
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Sorry I uploaded so many, a lot of them are toy, my apologies

56630566315663256633566345663556636566375663856639 5664056641566425664356644

56657566585665956660566615666256663566645666556666 5666756668566695667056671

5667356674566755667656677

gemer
03-04-2012, 02:44 PM
freestyle on a paper towel
56672

R3bel1995
03-04-2012, 02:46 PM
Not to be a jackass, but I think I'm... going to keep quiet...

"PHYSH"
03-04-2012, 02:53 PM
56693
crits please..............

sadgeh
03-04-2012, 03:24 PM
Physh - like the concept, but the S is a lil off the bars are smaller then the other letters.
Site - go to the new to graffiti thread and read it forward backward from the right to the left from left to right. And post then what you made

Norfsuthr
03-04-2012, 03:58 PM
freestyle on a paper towel
56672
Finally something i can look at.

Site MIND THE CRAP NIG.

Zookyook
03-04-2012, 04:14 PM
565815658256583
the homies
theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...
56811
lolz


freestyle on a paper towel
56672 u neva used somethin so fresh n so clean to wipe ur ass with! lol

cred1384
03-04-2012, 04:19 PM
@Physh - loving how you used your bars., good shit.

Trying to keep my shit simple and cleann
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo53.jpg

kwu
03-04-2012, 04:29 PM
bump..lol


theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...
56811
lolz


and a quickie


http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7045/6807301952_47bb4b81ba_z.jpg

Phat 2
03-04-2012, 04:41 PM
sitegraff, your characters might have potential if you work on them... try to do some minimalistic simple candy style characs... like kidrobot's for example. might work out for you
as for your actual graff stuff (letters) not so much, just like a lot of peeps here, you're starting wrong. the new to graff thread might help. hanging out and lurking for crits might also help. but one thing you need to do for sure is: stop what you're doing with your letters and stop using your methods and stick around to find out how to build your letters all over again. you're gonna have to start fresh if you want to get somewhere..

Nana, welcome to the forums, hope the guys here don't scare you away with their dicks.. you gotta understand, they don't see many females around these parts so youre something new and exciting to them, that confuses them...

Asis13
03-04-2012, 04:53 PM
5686156862568635686456865568665686756868

few randoms here. stop character ideas and the sketches are kinda new for me. trying to figure out colours

Phat 2
03-04-2012, 05:14 PM
the last one is very interesting, I can definitely see something like that as a clean ass wildstyle with details, an insane color scheme, 3D and background on some nice freshly painted wall... would burn hotter than a forest fire dude..
but if you could have properly structured letters in there rather than just random shapes, it would be much better

Asis13
03-04-2012, 05:38 PM
thanks dude. i know my letters are fucked at times. just trying out a bunch of things. i kinda dig that third one i posted up.

cred1384
03-04-2012, 05:47 PM
I like the style but yeah i'd say a little structure needed.

trying to be clean and simple still
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/photo54.jpg

NanaKillsKMC
03-05-2012, 12:33 AM
theres a big writer in la named guer... tko... also...
56811
lolz

u neva used somethin so fresh n so clean to wipe ur ass with! lol
oh u want titties lol ill post my grandmas titties mine are off limits im married!!!

EWL24
03-05-2012, 12:35 AM
Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred
Cred - that looks good, but i like the red one more

crits please
56897

NanaKillsKMC
03-05-2012, 12:46 AM
^^^ clean now add shape

DEMPO
03-05-2012, 12:48 AM
568985689956900

"PHYSH"
03-05-2012, 09:09 AM
Physh - like the concept, but the S is a lil off the bars are smaller then the other letters.
Site - go to the new to graffiti thread and read it forward backward from the right to the left from left to right. And post then what you made
thanks sadgeh, appreciate the crits and found the other comment funny as fuck.....

HipsterPunks
03-05-2012, 10:16 AM
http://i1222.photobucket.com/albums/dd488/chadhipster/nj.jpg

something i did over the weekend, its supposed to say New Jersey, letters are to crowded for my liking

Dossbog
03-05-2012, 11:31 AM
56947

i rike crits prease

PETER
03-05-2012, 11:38 AM
56948 need to go back through and clean up the outline. The A is too small. crits beside the mentioned issues?



Cred: You are progressing nicely. One of the quickest I've seen on here. Keep rockin.

kwu
03-05-2012, 12:22 PM
antik that black tag is illy

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7198/6955852971_c92bdefbb5_z.jpg

stien
03-05-2012, 12:24 PM
its not a black book but its a belt buckle i made 56951

PETER
03-05-2012, 12:27 PM
Atma: Thanks man. I'm trying to work on a piece style based on that hand. Your style is coming along really well.

Atma, Mori, Sear, Seder, Venom, Hipster, any intermediate cats got suggestions on my piece/style?

cred1384
03-05-2012, 02:54 PM
Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred
Cred - that looks good, but i like the red one more

crits please
56897

@Ewal Super clean! Good shit man
@Doss Looks like the far left character is just a big pair of balls (Can't unsee it)
@PETER thanks man, just taking peoples advice and sketching all i can. Try putting your 3d fill down before you trace your outline or retrace your outline after so that it looks like it was added at the end. I'm assuming you did it like that because you have a similar silver pen to me and you cant really write on the ink once it dries, which sucks. Other that that im digging it man, keep it up.
@Stein the middle point on the W looks weird, dont make it go off to a point like that.
@Hipster I'm not at a good enough skill leve to make crits on that, it's too dope haha.

PETER
03-05-2012, 03:01 PM
the 3d was originally purple... I wish I would have left it. The silver I can't go back over without a black paint marker. Thanks for the kind words. Your progress is motivating me to spend more time drawing. 60hr work weeks plus practicing for a few dj show is keeping me super busy. :(

Mori
03-05-2012, 03:24 PM
Peter, nice concept with the letters. If you cut your lines for sharper corners and go with something other then focal 3d you'd have somethinggoing and I'd loose the spikes you added on the purple aura

sadgeh
03-05-2012, 04:46 PM
With that belt buckle you have no swag.
PETER - The M is also too little. On the whole sketch its going a lil from big too little but maybe i dont see it right.

TheFedexGuy
03-05-2012, 05:00 PM
Couple new oneshttp://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-05170540.jpg http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-05170647.jpg

cred1384
03-05-2012, 05:17 PM
@Neus Lookin better, make sure you keep your bars even on that S

Too hungover to keep my lines crisp on this one... tried to keep it simple
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_29007912x.jpg

MN Nice
03-05-2012, 05:18 PM
Keep sketching cred.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00696-20120305-1641.jpg?t=1330989460

dankbudz
03-05-2012, 05:33 PM
looking good hipster and kwu,
you're characters are the shit hipster.
Peter-Id of made them same height, thicken the bars of a few of em and make a few of the Letters bigger to match the J. i think it would look pretty dope then.
mues- thats looking nice

photo booth never captures the colors right
don't really like where i went with this... only like the E and D

MN Nice
03-05-2012, 05:38 PM
Looks awesome man ^ my only suggestions are less cuts in your letters, seems kinda over the top. Maybe you were going for a more tore up look because of the dog, idk. And also the dog's front legs seem a tad bit too pigeon toed, ya know?

dankbudz
03-05-2012, 05:45 PM
i got the dog how i wanted ;) not the words, was a bit too much for me too, but i wanted to see how it'd turn out.

TheFedexGuy
03-05-2012, 05:57 PM
@cred thanks for the crits man. I wss proud of both of those thought those were probably my best yet. I feel ya on the s I knew it soon as I did it

TastyMcNasty
03-05-2012, 06:00 PM
looking good hipster and kwu,
you're characters are the shit hipster.
Peter-Id of made them same height, thicken the bars of a few of em and make a few of the Letters bigger to match the J. i think it would look pretty dope then.
mues- thats looking nice

photo booth never captures the colors right
don't really like where i went with this... only like the E and D

fuck ya. keep working on it

DEMPO
03-05-2012, 06:25 PM
dank that is dope i gotta try that

cred1384
03-05-2012, 06:50 PM
good shit Dank

working on my lines, need new pens.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_66211022x.jpg

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
03-05-2012, 07:05 PM
bricks arent layered like that... just sayin

dankbudz
03-05-2012, 07:08 PM
cred, don't get stuck on connections. to be honest you aren't really there yet, doesn't mean you can try it but you shouldn't be doing them on every piece, nah mean?
also you should of leaned the top of the E to the left
i like that one more than your others though, because you didn't do unnecessary extension on the left leg of the R, looks a lot better. keep it up, man

fuck you rib.... i realize.

Shit Outta Luck
03-05-2012, 07:09 PM
Dope dank, really like that dog haha. Reminds me of the dog from Tom and Jerry, except more brown.
And MN Nice that's nicer then usual, although I don't like the T covering the Y so much.
Flick for talkin, crits are always welcome.

Fucked up the M on the first one and the N on the second :/
57023
57022

dankbudz
03-05-2012, 07:22 PM
mugen is nice, kinda decreases in size though

DEMPO
03-05-2012, 07:26 PM
5703957040

Jiska Matos
03-05-2012, 09:08 PM
57053 something i did at work today

Asis13
03-05-2012, 09:53 PM
I was trying to take suggestions from a pic a posted a couple days ago. tried a little more letter definition. I know my shading is messed in places. the second pic is an 'S' I want to incorporate into it..feel like it has more style.
5705757058

SHEARZ.
03-05-2012, 10:22 PM
@Asis13 That stuffs pretty good bro, loving the shading, don't see so much of that ah.. Good stuff keep it up =)

57059

Some feedback? Thanks in advance.. Says "Sketch" But kinda stuffed up the k... Trying to get into characters, so all crits welcome, just keep in mind, it my first character.

Asis13
03-05-2012, 10:45 PM
@shearz - thanks dude. ill keep posting pics as i update. i like your style but the letters need more spacing i think. sweet character idea but im lost on whats happening with happening with that can and the face/ mask look a little outta shape. but i dig where its goin

kersoner
03-06-2012, 02:58 AM
57064 yeah e and r i still gotta fix up abit but what do you guys think, i wanna paint this on a freight

TheFedexGuy
03-06-2012, 06:34 AM
sketched this in like two minutes this morning
http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-06070241.jpg

PETER
03-06-2012, 09:11 AM
Thanks guys. I'll be working on this style a bit and post something up again by the end of the week. Djing tonight!!! Droppin' some DNB. Super stoked.

Zookyook
03-06-2012, 12:34 PM
hoooly shit man.... why do u post here? lol thats at LEAST intermediate, wouldnt get deleted from the big boy thread either.... ur shit always has a clean concept and i can tell its well executed...

Jiska Matos
03-06-2012, 12:49 PM
57103 another boring day at work

PETER
03-06-2012, 01:34 PM
the S is a little tough to make out. looks like a Z with some feather lookin' extentions coming off the E. Beyond that it's tight.

TheFedexGuy
03-06-2012, 04:55 PM
http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-06100641.jpg
http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-06170518.jpg Not real happy with this one S is fucked among other things

sadgeh
03-06-2012, 05:08 PM
Neus - this looks like nothing read the new to graff thread and do bars and think of bar consistancy. Maybe check out some tuts about 3D would be also a good idea

cred1384
03-06-2012, 07:46 PM
Went all the way back to super simple!
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_51324782x-1.jpg

SynOne
03-06-2012, 08:07 PM
^ I like it keep doing that.

Meh I suck at this whole fading shit.

57268

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
03-06-2012, 08:12 PM
change your name to sharkie

dankbudz
03-06-2012, 08:15 PM
straighten that R, cred

skewr... how bout you bust out some nice simples

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
03-06-2012, 08:18 PM
57103 another boring day at work
THIS!!!! first one of yours thats clearly legible, good job jiska, looks pro

Jiska Matos
03-06-2012, 08:25 PM
THIS!!!! first one of yours thats clearly legible, good job jiska, looks pro thkx RIB, i still need to add the char, tomorow i will post the result

killroywashere
03-06-2012, 08:44 PM
skewer thats ill
seder i like your highlights

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7043/6960615571_40a490f2d6.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6960615571/)

kwu
03-06-2012, 09:02 PM
that seder is perf, minus the r... lol I like it tho its dope as hell
skewr you were progressin' nicely what happened? that skewr is dece, work on that EWR cause it kills your flow
nice cred try a capital e in that stee keep those bars the same girth throughout n then try leaning the letters i think you'd have something dope

Shit Outta Luck
03-06-2012, 09:21 PM
mugen is nice, kinda decreases in size though
I kept thinking that when I was drawing it. I just couldn't tell lol
And dank that's dope

Bean!
03-06-2012, 09:26 PM
57298

Bean!
03-06-2012, 09:31 PM
Nasty

TastyMcNasty
03-06-2012, 09:40 PM
57298

lol nope

cred1384
03-06-2012, 10:04 PM
More simple stuff
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_52308452x.jpg
Messed up the leg of the R on this one
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_99812982x.jpg

MN Nice
03-06-2012, 10:30 PM
You don't understand shines lol. They're all inconsistent.

Vergz
03-06-2012, 10:32 PM
Haven't graffed in a min
http://i43.tinypic.com/654ms1.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2cg0dw4.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/5490js.jpg

kwu
03-06-2012, 10:59 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7051/6814753988_a1773671f1_z.jpg

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
03-06-2012, 11:01 PM
I think you went a little extension/add on happy on that one

cuesto1
03-06-2012, 11:36 PM
57316
what u guys think?

cuesto1
03-06-2012, 11:39 PM
Haven't graffed in a min
http://i43.tinypic.com/654ms1.jpg
http://i42.tinypic.com/2cg0dw4.jpg
http://i43.tinypic.com/5490js.jpg
props on the top an bottom

kwu
03-06-2012, 11:42 PM
hah i think so too rib its mainly to compensate for the negative space

R3bel1995
03-06-2012, 11:47 PM
You don't understand shines lol. They're all inconsistent. i know right?? you have pick one side, and stick with it, that is always hard for me, especially on a very large, complex pieces

DEMPO
03-07-2012, 12:03 AM
57318

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
03-07-2012, 12:19 AM
@kwu I can feel it, but some of em look real bad. The one i dislike the most in the little breaks to the left of the middle of your G... it doesnt make sense to put those there.

ill upload some doodles of the night after i finish this last one

cred1384
03-07-2012, 02:25 AM
Played around with bending my bars. fucked up the E bigtime with that lean. Oh welll.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_35837302x.jpg

dankbudz
03-07-2012, 02:47 AM
which to paint maņana?

Cred- thicken them bars and if you try to bend them do gradual bends... keep practicing simples and learn them letters.

notmikegiant
03-07-2012, 02:50 AM
personally feeling the bottom one, but the E's seem inconsistent - same with the top one.

but, do what feels right

DEMPO
03-07-2012, 03:25 AM
I like the top one 2 paint sed

PETER
03-07-2012, 08:34 AM
I like the top one 2 paint sed
both are damn good. I like the top one, but feel it's missing something. paint both

"PHYSH"
03-07-2012, 11:11 AM
57361
crits please... little throw i played around with.....

s33on3
03-07-2012, 11:40 AM
Thank you Skrillex and Rhymesayers crits please?

57362





57363

MN Nice
03-07-2012, 12:02 PM
Bottom one flows better sede.

Asis13
03-07-2012, 02:52 PM
Asis13 - that monkey is tight and i agree with phat and cred

Thanks dude. it actually turns out as a pretty sick piece that you can even keep to a small sheet if necessary.

Jiska Matos
03-07-2012, 03:53 PM
57409 it's done

PETER
03-07-2012, 04:19 PM
Jiska: Came out dope as fuck.

S33on3: Get on some Chestplate records shit. Props on Rhymesayers though. The top one is cleaner. The bottom one is a good concept, but need a little work. Just needs some cleaning up. I want it licking an icecream cone with that box by it's tounge and the truck above it.

Asis13
03-07-2012, 05:06 PM
57413

cred1384
03-07-2012, 06:58 PM
@Asis Too hard to read.

Finally got my new markers
fucked up when trying some highlights then my white marker dripped on the C, just ignore that if possible

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_4899182x.jpg

Edit: and another
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_41705042x.jpg

Jiska Matos
03-07-2012, 10:09 PM
57413 as cred said, its too hard 2 read, it dosen't realy flow, and the letters r round and u did your shadows square?

snear
03-07-2012, 10:36 PM
57447

New to Bombing Science, heres a throwie ive been working on, let me how you think it can be improved, peace.

Jiska Matos
03-07-2012, 10:56 PM
57447

New to Bombing Science, heres a throwie ive been working on, let me how you think it can be improved, peace. make the arrow lines all flow in the same direction, make the cut on the "S" round not straight and do the shadow on the exclamation point...but nice work, like the style. keep posting

TheFedexGuy
03-08-2012, 05:44 AM
Bored yesterday started messing around with another name MERSAhttp://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-07143039.jpg http://i1148.photobucket.com/albums/o568/Thefedexguy/2012-03-08062501.jpg

Asis13
03-08-2012, 07:27 AM
@ cred and @ jiksa - thanks guys. ill keep goin with it..been tryin some different things with it lately at work. have new flicks posted once I get home

TastyMcNasty
03-08-2012, 08:18 AM
make the arrow lines all flow in the same direction, make the cut on the "S" round not straight and do the shadow on the exclamation point...but nice work, like the style. keep posting

i say, don't do the arrows. they make it look even more toy

s33on3
03-08-2012, 11:11 AM
Jiska: Came out dope as fuck.

S33on3: Get on some Chestplate records shit. Props on Rhymesayers though. The top one is cleaner. The bottom one is a good concept, but need a little work. Just needs some cleaning up. I want it licking an icecream cone with that box by it's tounge and the truck above it.


thanx man that bottom one was actually used with pen ink and a brush it was a technique that i used for school. I got the ice cream truck from the Bangerang Skrillex music video thanks for the advice

cred1384
03-08-2012, 11:19 AM
@Asis Yeah don't sweat it man, just keep sketchin away.

PETER
03-08-2012, 01:06 PM
ink and a brush it was a technique that i used for school. hhmmmm interesting. I'm really interested in doing handies with brushes at the moment....

cred1384
03-08-2012, 02:45 PM
Workin' on making my lines clean. Lost the flow in this one unfortunately. Crits?

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_2_939402x.jpg

dankbudz
03-08-2012, 04:06 PM
tits

"PHYSH"
03-08-2012, 05:09 PM
5747357474
a few attempts crits would be appreciated............

Mildstyles
03-08-2012, 05:31 PM
Been gone a while. I would like some good ass crits

574765747757478574795748057481

Shit Outta Luck
03-08-2012, 06:49 PM
I like that K on the last one for some reason haha

kwu
03-08-2012, 08:09 PM
Naked that second flick is tight I think its one of best yet. I like the cap A n all those letter flow pretty well too. Let that E breathe and it would be perf

cred1384
03-08-2012, 09:29 PM
@Naked I'm liking the bottom 2, good shit man

Trying stuff, again struggling with flow haha
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_92208542x.jpg

Coleo
03-08-2012, 09:34 PM
^ lookin alot better than some other ones you have posted... but i wouldnt do that thing with the "D" where it over laps connect it

cred1384
03-08-2012, 10:42 PM
Yeah I didnt know what else to do, if i didnt do that it looked like an O. Oh well next time.

GOHARDGRAFF
03-08-2012, 10:49 PM
wel u should check my profile if u can see my pics

GOHARDGRAFF
03-08-2012, 10:51 PM
tight man

Coleo
03-08-2012, 11:00 PM
Yeah I didnt know what else to do, if i didnt do that it looked like an O. Oh well next time.
well straighten the left bar out a lil more on the "D"

Norfsuthr
03-09-2012, 12:13 AM
Didn't really focus. Came out ok thouhg i guess.
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7189/6966181197_f3d4140aae.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6966181197/)
photo-51 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6966181197/)

MN Nice
03-09-2012, 12:21 AM
Hahaha High On Govt $

looks like somebody spent their tax return on something useful like myself.

SHEARZ.
03-09-2012, 12:37 AM
Meh, bored as I know over crowded and stuff but felt like posting something, give us some pointers please?

57533

Dossbog
03-09-2012, 12:46 AM
57534575355753657537

PETER
03-09-2012, 08:26 AM
Please see the new to graffiti thread please. Read Every page.

Zookyook
03-09-2012, 10:18 AM
well straighten the left bar out a lil more on the "D"
what he said cred....

physh (and others) u gotta work on ur color balance... just use the rule light dark light etc.... if ur fill is light, then ur outline should be dark, and ur shell or final outline needs to be light again... if ur fill is dark the outline should be light and the final outline should be dark... the more contrast the more ur shit will pop... i see lots of people doing like dark purple or green fills and using black to outline... makes everything look like a blob... go here...

http://colorschemedesigner.com/


this site should help a lot of people when ur choosing what colors ur gonna use, click the "complement" tab and choose a color, and itll show u which color will have the most contrast against the color u chose.... and for more than 2 colors theres other tabs u can click thatll show u the same thing with more colors...

and i gets high on govt money er-day!!!! unemployed *****s know whats up! lol

HipsterPunks
03-09-2012, 10:34 AM
@PHYSH - that rhino throw was more characters than letters and it distracted me from the word. Your characters are awesome tho just maybe use like one or two haha. I was feeling the physh throw just maybe stretch the letters upward alittle more, your progressing tho bro
@CRED - the R and D are bothering me on that last flick, pull out the top right of the R so its not dented inwards, and dont ever do that overlap with the D. your looking better than last week tho so keep it up
@DANK - loving the seders
@NAKED - your straight on the ditto looks exactly like NARK AIDS, with the NAK in your name i would stay away from that style. everything else looks good
@DOSSBOG - more detail on the bubble letters i cant make out what ur throwing up

Dossbog
03-09-2012, 11:22 AM
@DOSSBOG - more detail on the bubble letters i cant make out what ur throwing up

What do you think of the style though?

Dossbog
03-09-2012, 11:51 AM
5756157562
I'm not even going to fill these in until I get tips/approval

cred1384
03-09-2012, 02:27 PM
Tried some shit. Need to go a bit simpler. Meh
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_9197872x.jpg

Strange Journeys
03-09-2012, 03:34 PM
rzst, lose that face, that z and s is ugly
cred- thats pretty cool, Bottom right leg of the R comes off too low though
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7039/6965880867_6467f66d2a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/75328747@N06/6965880867/)

Coleo
03-09-2012, 03:35 PM
@cred looking good really liking the shading... but the "R" is looking kinda weird to me ...

Mildstyles
03-09-2012, 06:53 PM
@NAKED - your straight on the ditto looks exactly like NARK AIDS, with the NAK in your name i would stay away from that style. everything else looks good

School me because I'm not familiar

Kinger79
03-09-2012, 08:12 PM
57651576525765357654576555765657657

some newish blackbook stuff... trying to find my style and stuff. constructive critisism is totally wanted.

Kinger79
03-09-2012, 08:18 PM
more smooth lines and improve your shadow... cuz right now its sucks ass. its to uneven in spots.

Kinger79
03-09-2012, 08:20 PM
make it bigger... and ur style looks like you got it off graffiti creator...

Kinger79
03-09-2012, 08:24 PM
dont let the sides of he letters be so wavy and stuff. and the shadow is totally off. its supposed to be a drop shadow right?

toys.r.us
03-09-2012, 08:51 PM
still learning
right side is a bit congested
any other crits would be sick
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y79/Ragley/photo8.jpg

TastyMcNasty
03-09-2012, 09:00 PM
everyone on this page, except cred, is doing it wrong. you all need to go simpler

toys.r.us
03-09-2012, 09:14 PM
you learn from challenging yourself
but i feel it

TastyMcNasty
03-09-2012, 09:42 PM
you learn from challenging yourself
but i feel it

thats true. but you wont get anywhere without learning your basics first

toys.r.us
03-09-2012, 09:55 PM
word
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y79/Ragley/photo9-1.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y79/Ragley/photo12-1.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y79/Ragley/photo10-2.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y79/Ragley/photo11-1.jpg

toys.r.us
03-09-2012, 09:56 PM
lines need some work

Shit Outta Luck
03-09-2012, 10:06 PM
everyone on this page, except cred, is doing it wrong. you all need to go simpler
this

Dossbog
03-10-2012, 12:35 AM
Dear Good Writers on this Site,

Not to be the defiant toy but nobody wants to hear someone on the internet tell them that they can't draw worth shit....instead of "go simpler" as hard as this may seem, how about just giving tips to improve current styles? Every time i try and take people seriously on here and go simpler i end up over thinking all of my sketches and give myself the yips. My point is, just as we all like to defy the law and vandalize, we all like to defy other people, especially when their advice doesn't actually contain any tips or guidelines.

Go ahead, call me a fag or a loser or even the dreaded "TOY" for trying to point this out.....all i know is I'm going to put paint on peoples walls no matter what you think and that for me is what this is all about.

^obviously this doesnt apply when people are going way out of their league but when i can't get some tips for improvement on a simple simple style, theres a problem

cred1384
03-10-2012, 01:11 AM
They are telling you to go simpler for good reason, if you don't like it than ignore it. Think about the benefit of simples this way. If you attempt a piece with extensions, crazy letter forms, and all that jazz, but your basic letter form is not perfected, than obviously adding extensions and all that other stuff isn't going to fix it. You can't polish a turd. By starting simple you can learn the best ways to attain flow and bend your letters. That's like trying to backflip a motorcross bike before you've even learned to shift gears. If you want to ignore people who are good writers advice, than that's your choice nukka. All of my progression (if you can call it that) is from listening to the advice iv gotten from here.

Also tits.

cred1384
03-10-2012, 01:17 AM
^Such a negative nancy

Edit: Also @Kinger who the fuck are those 3 posts directed at?

Dossbog
03-10-2012, 01:35 AM
I am not in any way interested in piecing. I want to bomb and tag.

SHEARZ.
03-10-2012, 02:05 AM
Feedback please?

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notmikegiant
03-10-2012, 04:05 AM
@shearz - some of the ideas are nice but i dont think its working overall. I didn't realize that was a Z until i kept staring intensely, and those wavy bar - vein things connecting letters looks awkward. hate to say it but, try some simples.

@ cred - i wasn't feeling that as much as your other stuff, i think its all starting to get super super clean though

@ doss - i kind of get what you mean, but just ignore it if you don't care, no need to bring it up.

@ kinger - from seeing some of your other posts i can only say, take everything you know - and completely forget it.

@ toys - the shading and detail looks nice on that first post, but you should try more simples - or do whatever.

PETER
03-10-2012, 09:48 AM
but when i can't get some tips for improvement on a simple simple style, theres a problem
There is an entire thread dedicated to this very thing (new to Graffiti). No one is going to hold your hand while you try to figure out your own shit.... I'm not gonna help you climb the ladder I'm too busy climbing mine type shit. You might get some tips as to why something doesn't work etc, but when you haven't even tried to grasp the basics and it stands out like a blind man at a nude beach and talk about wanting tips and then about not giving a shit what people say no one is going to take you seriously and frankly your drawing should be deleted at that point or you should just stop posting. If you want tips take them and take the time to educate yourself. CRED is doing it and shows like a mother fucker.

Best tip you will ever get. SHUT THE FUCK UP AND DRAW.

Dossbog
03-10-2012, 12:23 PM
@PETER aside from my little alcohol induced ledge moment, i can't agree more with your final statement.

killroywashere
03-10-2012, 02:16 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7037/6824171468_5d27c412fa.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76420947@N05/6824171468/)
anybody help me with a name that starts with an A?

@shears - try gaining some structure. some of your swoops look off. the shading is kind of all over the place. think of a light source and direction. like have it all on one side. not imploding everywhere. just my 2 cents

dankbudz
03-10-2012, 02:32 PM
drunk fill and freestyle

killroywashere
03-10-2012, 02:38 PM
@seder - try adding some funk to your letters. get some more style going in there. those fills are sick tho

Mildstyles
03-10-2012, 03:17 PM
Seder the bottom ones pretty cool, im not so sure about the top one haha. But its still good. The only thing is the right leg of that R got wicked fat on the bottom one

HipsterPunks
03-10-2012, 04:18 PM
failure for the NOLA battle, character doesnt fit at all, gonna drop characters for a little while and concentrate on letters and better connections http://i1222.photobucket.com/albums/dd488/chadhipster/nola.jpg

Panic519
03-10-2012, 07:53 PM
Shears Ir shading and 3d are off.
Area dope letters but the r looks a bit small.
Seder that first one is sick why not try something a lil harder u make that look 2 easy.
Hipsterpunk u r to good for toy section IMO advance

Mildstyles
03-10-2012, 08:51 PM
For the ladies!
Got some weird junk goin on in this one...but it was a quickie

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dankbudz
03-10-2012, 10:42 PM
your K is weird

Panic519
03-11-2012, 01:17 AM
Naked the squares in the bg look weird waste of space.

Mario is dope, packing a 6 shooter nice

SHEARZ.
03-11-2012, 01:26 AM
Thanks for feedback, looking back, I am hating that piece so much, it was like 1 in the mourning so oh well, thanks.

SHEARZ.
03-11-2012, 03:01 AM
Ahh trying different styles, is this one better then the last? When markers come I might colour this one..

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gemer
03-11-2012, 03:05 AM
go more simple ^^^ way to many wack extensions
@hipster shits nice man thumbs up