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H1P30N3R
04-27-2012, 12:44 AM
uh oh naked got a gang of homies in here now !! If your assembling a crew you better have strict rules like dmgraff (fight to the death)

Mildstyles
04-27-2012, 12:45 AM
Hahaha i did not cause this ^^^
and yes our super crew fights to the death and no writing on anything illegal...and stuff. more r00lez later
Exchange with mues, my s... :(
66535

Got bored...crits?
66551

DUEN
04-27-2012, 05:23 AM
Who cares man. If someone says your shit's wack than either respect it as an opinion and try to learn from it or say fuck it and do your thing. Less arguing more sketching.

Flick for talk, a pen freestyle from class. Not very clean and the D is squished cause i ran outa space.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_89769222x.jpg

I agree, but saying to give up all together?....
ANYWAYS, nice piece, just with your E the middle bar of it, trying making it shorter? Don't know if it will work but something to try out.

ven0m
04-27-2012, 07:04 AM
I'll tell you who I am, DUEN, I'm someone who's been here long enough to be able to tell when someone is meant for graffiti or not... it's not a trend, it's not something anyone can adapt to and become part of over night... CRED up there has been here about just a month and progressed over 500% more than MTK had in a whole year.
I've seen users signing up with shit works, being told how to do it, and fixing themselves to the point they're at now. people like MN nice, Dankbudz, Cred, Flatskank etc have all listened to crits and progressed and got better with time. I've also seen other users signing up with shit works, being told how to do it, and not listening, or not getting it and staying where they're at forever, in which case they either stay here and annoy us with crap posts and get hated on, or they just take the hint and leave and use their time for something more constructive.

I've seen a lot.. enough to be able to say such words to someone. If I couldn't back it up, I wouldn't say it.
Also, if I'm a moderator, it doesn't mean I have to sugarcoat shit, instead, I need to increase this forum's quality, even if it's the toy part... this is what the guy needs to hear, it better come from a stranger on the internet than from someone important..

gemer
04-27-2012, 08:43 AM
Good shit Dank.

2 different but similar simples.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_2_83339892x.jpg

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_2_58905942x.jpg

a post by cred 3-22-2012 thumbs up dude

rewz
04-27-2012, 10:36 AM
66534[/QUOTE]

HA. how many times you got to erase your lines

cred1384
04-27-2012, 11:44 AM
I agree, but saying to give up all together?....
ANYWAYS, nice piece, just with your E the middle bar of it, trying making it shorter? Don't know if it will work but something to try out.

@Gemer and Venom - much love to the both of you.
@Duen Thanks for the crit, i see what you mean on the E, i gotta mess with it a bit. About giving it up, just because someone tells you to give up doesn't mean you have to do it. If it really get's under your skin than work your ass off and prove them wrong.

PETER
04-27-2012, 12:46 PM
Damn Cred that is sick. Thank you!

Shit Outta Luck
04-27-2012, 01:40 PM
BigFaggot with the drips!

Pen freestylin
66571

Norfsuthr
04-27-2012, 01:51 PM
get some steez on the end of those L's

uknowigetup
04-27-2012, 02:09 PM
Ignore the shitty acrylic background and the whack bubbles, critz?

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120427_150215.jpg

dankbudz
04-27-2012, 02:49 PM
i would give you crits cause you really need them, but i fuckin hate you... soooo....

cred1384
04-27-2012, 03:22 PM
^lol
@Sol Looking good. The top bar of the O is a wee bit small, if ya tweak and then maybe try making the top left extension of the O reach the top of the S. Love how well you pull off simps.

Exchange with Naked, don't have any tape or glue so had to staple the pages together...
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_370702x-1.jpg

Big Africa
04-27-2012, 03:51 PM
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/Graff/2012-04-27164140.jpg

I know the O isn't the best but Critz anyway

DUEN
04-27-2012, 04:10 PM
See Cred, I think that looks quite nice on the E, that middle bit shorter on Nakeds, good stuff keep it up.

DEMPO
04-27-2012, 05:49 PM
66597
bigafrica, I assume your writing drem, was there some structure b4 your sharpie?
cred, your style almost seems to become consistent and I have a difficult time buying your date of beginning. Regardless you've become an inspiration to all of us.
uknow, those branches on all your bars seems to not flow very well.
sol, the way you almost have flow is because you (like me) have not got to the point where u end your letters with style.
neer, you've got more flo than I do bro but at the same time your not as good as naked. no offense see his bars and yours its easy to agree.

Mildstyles
04-27-2012, 05:51 PM
rEWZ IS BETTER THAN ME LOLZ

oh wait unless you're talking about the picture he bumped, that was bigfaggot.

MASTAH_RIBCAGE
04-27-2012, 05:56 PM
rewz/geez scrapes yall. he belongs in the intermediate thread no doubt

Shit Outta Luck
04-27-2012, 06:01 PM
get some steez on the end of those L's
But how? I been messing with em but haven't found anything that works...yet.


^lol
@Sol Looking good. The top bar of the O is a wee bit small, if ya tweak and then maybe try making the top left extension of the O reach the top of the S. Love how well you pull off simps.
Cred whadda ya mean by making the top left extension of the O? And thanks haha

DEMPO
04-27-2012, 06:04 PM
oops i ment bigfaggot sry... haha

cred1384
04-27-2012, 06:05 PM
@Sol The horizontal bar that reaches towards the S. Might be worth a try who knows.

Sloppy fill.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_4373272x.jpg

Big Africa
04-27-2012, 06:07 PM
@ DEMPO i actually write orem, but there was some structure before my sharpie my marker skills are just lackin

DEMPO
04-27-2012, 06:10 PM
@ bigafrica its school just next time you post acknowledge the crit and post a pic(of your next try) with your comment/crit.

BigFaggot
04-27-2012, 08:22 PM
66620 Dropped most of the drips, left the bottoms fo flava.

Quote1
04-27-2012, 08:28 PM
1st try at a wildstyle
66621

Strange Journeys
04-27-2012, 08:29 PM
nah man go simple, it dont look good

DaFugg
04-27-2012, 08:37 PM
Go simple Africa.

dark2
04-28-2012, 02:09 AM
66654

ven0m
04-28-2012, 04:10 AM
cred how the fuck did you do that fill?

centrysam
04-28-2012, 08:48 AM
^ i was thinkin the same thing .. cred is pretty good

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7099/6975187316_547ca89308.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6975187316/)
IMG_0249 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6975187316/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr

cred1384
04-28-2012, 12:03 PM
cred how the fuck did you do that fill?

It was sort of a flook how it came out. I used various shades of decocolor paint pens faded for the base layer, and prisma's on top using colorless blender to spread out the shades. Came out fancier than expected, looks a bit blotchy though.

@Centry thanks man.
@Soda Watcht the negative space on your S. You have lines representin all of the holes on your other letters but on the S you have gaps, try to keep it all consistent.

Flick for talk, black and white of the last one just cleaner. Need to figure out better positioning for my E or something, it's always hiding behind my R.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_65996502x.jpg

GpersKreepers
04-28-2012, 12:46 PM
can i get a crit on this, is this style too much of a push or what?

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02673.jpg

Friz_One
04-28-2012, 12:56 PM
http://www.bildites.lv/images/c19iuq6oy7u76awehkn.jpg

PETER
04-28-2012, 01:08 PM
Cred: It's tight as fuck. looks like spray paint. You're workin' out the bottom of that E. It's a bit hidden now though.... but honestly who cares you've about got it down. start moving your 3d perspective.
Gpers. I love that name. Is it too much of a push?... Yes, but it's not a huge stretch. Drop the arrows and some of the extra shit. Your bar consistency needs a bit of work but you're close. Draw what you have there, but with just straight letters and we'll go from there.

dankbudz
04-28-2012, 01:10 PM
gpers, im diggggin that style, i just think it could be cleaned up in some places

H1P30N3R
04-28-2012, 05:02 PM
I like the grimeyness of the style gpers
friz start all over keyboard letters

crits please I know I should keep my shit straight and simple. But I gotta experiment to develop... but Im lookin for crits on structure and 3d

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120428_174517.jpg

Norfsuthr
04-28-2012, 05:16 PM
^3d is fucked around the O. Just draw lines coming off the corners in the exact same direction every time, then draw the 3d on. It looks like you do that, just gotta be more precise.
Oh yeah the bottom right of the K is probly where you went wrong on 3d.

Structure of the O needs work, pretty good bar consistency everywhere else.

Kaze
04-28-2012, 05:55 PM
like norfsuthr said the 3d on your O is kinda messed up. On your P it looks like it rises before it turns and drops down to complete the circle of the P. Maybe make your R closer to your P, other then the O's 3d it looks cool.

Drew this with out a ruler so there is lots of areas that are off. crits please
66797

Shit Outta Luck
04-28-2012, 06:16 PM
Crits on this rugged marker freestyle?
66829

DEMPO
04-28-2012, 06:31 PM
66831
crits plz.
sol, the 3d on the bottom of ur S is a lil off, im not feelin those cuts on ur letters yet.
kaser, best not to use a ruler. those blocks on ur S and R should be bar width matching your other letters.
kopr, try not using structure on your O, your good at throws so an O should be easy for you. imo

H1P30N3R
04-28-2012, 06:37 PM
yea I like the o in this piece but I need to take a step back with big tweaks and rock simps for a while...

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_232051.jpg

Kaze
04-28-2012, 06:45 PM
looks cool sol, your S looks top heavy though and the cut on your L is off.

thanks for the crits dempo i appreciate it, il fix that S and R bar width.
i dont really like the E but the proportion of your bars looks good. maybe with your M when it drops down and cuts inside, keep it straight and make it drop abit lower. even though its rising on an angle it looks like its still abit to high. the shadow looks good, maybe try putting the lines on the curves of the letters were it changes angles if you get what i meen

Silky Johnson
04-28-2012, 07:12 PM
Some shit pictures on this page yall weak muhfukkas

Mildstyles
04-28-2012, 08:23 PM
Because your comment totally just benefitted this page. Yall a weak mofucka

H1P30N3R
04-28-2012, 08:49 PM
flooding this bitch today but crits please

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120428_211540.jpg

Mildstyles
04-28-2012, 08:51 PM
pretty good but the K is too small and you probably should have let the O be regular and not have that bottom thing, but thats not bad at all. keep it up homes

DRIG
04-28-2012, 08:53 PM
Some shit pictures on this page yall weak muhfukkas

Wow... wheres your dope shit silky? dont dish shit out unless you have backup. I dont have any pics up yet, therefore, ive got no business criting people, constructive or not. I reccomend you do the same. All youve posted on here so far is to the effect of "your shit sucks muhfukka". All 4 of your posts. Now, fuck off.

Mildstyles
04-28-2012, 09:46 PM
Any crits on this little piece
66837

dankbudz
04-28-2012, 09:48 PM
dope

MN Nice
04-28-2012, 10:41 PM
Dat negative space. Work on it.

Mildstyles
04-28-2012, 10:44 PM
Its hard nagger those letters loooove neg space, like the KED part. but thanks ill try some new junk

cred1384
04-28-2012, 11:43 PM
@Naked I dig i dig. Only suggestion is the negative space and the top bar of the E looks a little funky.

Got a little sloppy on this one. Experimenting with extensions to fill negative space
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_85256062x-1.jpg

Norfsuthr
04-28-2012, 11:51 PM
^youre good as fuck with shading and coloring. Nice one.

Might paint this banger
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7265/6977347586_037e7efb5a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6977347586/)
photo-6 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6977347586/)

really though

Kaze
04-29-2012, 12:05 AM
that looks dope norfsuthr, only thing i dont really like is the j but overal it looks sick i think

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 12:24 AM
Its a concept that j is a dick and balls and the add ons are puddles of cum ...

Mildstyles
04-29-2012, 12:34 AM
Cred i like the new style you been doing lately but in almost all of them the E looks off to me. in that last one its too small, try bringing the bottom bar of that E further down, basically just let the middle of that E breathe and break it up a little.

Kaze
04-29-2012, 01:29 AM
Its a concept that j is a dick and balls and the add ons are puddles of cum ...
oh hahah, creative

GpersKreepers
04-29-2012, 02:56 AM
Mildstyles, i think the big loop on the N makes it look too different from the other letters, maybe change that to make it more angular,
H1P31er, out of the three that have the red outline the last is the best, but try to make the K as big as the R,
Dempo, not sure why the e and b are so small, bar size anyway, and a lower case b for the end of a word doesn't work for me

couple pennies

Shit Outta Luck
04-29-2012, 10:10 AM
Any crits on this little piece
66837
I dig that, alot. The bottom right of the N is a little big for my like though. But the colors are so pretty.

MyTagNameIsDune
04-29-2012, 10:11 AM
This is some toy shit I did a while back. Felt like posting it just for kicks 66862

MyTagNameIsDune
04-29-2012, 10:12 AM
This is also pretty toy even though it's my avatar right now but I might as well post it to the toy blackbook page. 66863

GoPaintDay
04-29-2012, 10:15 AM
I was just messin around but what do u think of the clo at the bottom? 66864

rewz
04-29-2012, 11:01 AM
^theirs a thread that you should go in before posting here its called new to graffiti of what ever its called. go there learn letter structure then come back and post something

Beko
04-29-2012, 12:14 PM
Got a little sloppy on this one. Experimenting with extensions to fill negative space
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_85256062x-1.jpg

the 3D on the C at the bottom is off. it should go back like the vanashing point. instead you curved it up with it other than that its siick!

TastyMcNasty
04-29-2012, 12:50 PM
everyone on this page, garbage. you need to go more simple.

Norfsuthr
04-29-2012, 01:07 PM
the 3D on the C at the bottom is off. it should go back like the vanashing point. instead you curved it up with it other than that its siick!

youre not seeing it right.

cred1384
04-29-2012, 01:09 PM
youre not seeing it right.

I just forgot to re-ink one of the 3d lines. And Tasty i feel ya, i got carried away with that one.

IronyATB
04-29-2012, 01:19 PM
66891

Would like some crits please, I know I need to work on spacing (Mainly between the N R and D.)

ComradeR
04-29-2012, 02:21 PM
that's dope Irony. like u said u need to work on the spacing

uknowigetup
04-29-2012, 04:43 PM
i would give you crits cause you really need them, but i fuckin hate you... soooo....
...

when i ask for crits, I'm asking for crits from someone who's not a total fag, such as you.

4menace2society0
04-29-2012, 04:53 PM
your still gettin up dawgggggggggg

Norfsuthr
04-29-2012, 05:04 PM
u know it

DEMPO
04-29-2012, 05:16 PM
smh

cred1384
04-29-2012, 05:35 PM
your still gettin up dawgggggggggg

I mean his name says he does. so obviously he does...

Felt like coloring.. Pen exploded on the D letter right as i'm finishing up.. Never even attempting to draw ambient light with markers again..

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_16220972x-1.jpg

IronyATB
04-29-2012, 05:37 PM
I mean his name says he does. so obviously he does...

Felt like coloring.. Pen exploded on the D letter right as i'm finishing up.. Never even attempting to draw ambient light with markers again..

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_16220972x-1.jpg

Cred I'd suck your dick if I could right now.

cred1384
04-29-2012, 05:37 PM
Cred I'd suck your dick if I could right now.

haha you just won a spot in my sig!

IronyATB
04-29-2012, 05:40 PM
haha you just won a spot in my sig!

Just as I clicked "post" I figured there would probably be a consequence of that post.

For real though, the lighting is great.

uknowigetup
04-29-2012, 06:27 PM
your still gettin up dawgggggggggg

Hell yeah my dude. I stay up. Not about to get a new username just because I don't write know anymore haha. I expect you to troll at least 90% of my posts now that you're back.

Mildstyles
04-29-2012, 06:39 PM
Irony.. I don't understand where that comment was even going.
All i got out of it is that was really really gay

dankbudz
04-29-2012, 06:55 PM
yeah irony, you're just as gay as "uknowigetup"


need some crits on the monkey.., gonna have chains flying and breakin, but his arms are pretty fucked so i gotta fix that.

uknowigetup
04-29-2012, 07:01 PM
.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TVicCD8FmMs&feature=youtu.be

4menace2society0
04-29-2012, 07:03 PM
ohhp there he is again killinnn it

MN Nice
04-29-2012, 07:03 PM
Try getting a better looking fist grabbing on the right. it looks kind of limp

DEMPO
04-29-2012, 07:54 PM
6696866969
want this as a name change with a passion. lil pencil outline for some crits.
dank, nice concept we're waiting 2 see it filled in

Kaze
04-29-2012, 08:10 PM
Dank- the picture looks cool so far, maybe with the monkeys left arm have it giving the middle finger or holding a 40 or some shit like that lol.
Dempo- the agida looks good i think, a name change could be good, do it up if you really want to. I like how the G and D come out of your I like that. and who is holding that massive bowl or chronic in it??? those nugs look to big to be real lol

Would appreciate crits on these pieces of shit, fucked up on the R.
6697366974

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 08:49 PM
dank - goin ape shit homie I dig the face just touch up his arms your characters are boss!!
agida - top of the g is a little off and I really dont dig the the off set legs on the a's , but that could be just personal preference. But overall it looks alot cleaner than your recent work so keep at it.

thinking of a name change myself "nephu" didn't have room for the u but I dig the name and the letters for pieces seem to fit together well.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_212403.jpg

dankbudz
04-29-2012, 08:58 PM
thanks mayne.
id advice refraining from changing your name unless someone in your area already writes it and is up.
if your having trouble with the KOPR i was gonna suggest earlier tryng KOPER

crits on that though, id of done and uppercase N, personally. but the lil extension on the foot is a no go right now, also the top of the N gets a lil thin. not really feel in the boxy P. and If you made the middle bar of the E the same size its kill some space. try pulling your letters closer in together. , just some thoughts. keep up the work

kaser- man theres alotta kaser's out there.. think I've told you that before. good use of bars i guess, just make your S curve and Your top R curve. don't hid ethe leg of the A behind the K like that

Kaze
04-29-2012, 08:58 PM
hipeoner-3d in your P is wak, and make it closer to your E

Kaze
04-29-2012, 09:05 PM
thanks dank i appreciate the crits. il think of another name, i only used kase/kaser for throwies and straightletters cuz i like the letter combo but il think of somthing else lol. if i have the A's leg infront of the K then wont it like throw off the angle its on? or should i just make all my letters further away from eachother?

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 09:08 PM
thanks mayne.
id advice refraining from changing your name unless someone in your area already writes it and is up.
if your having trouble with the KOPR i was gonna suggest earlier tryng KOPER

crits on that though, id of done and uppercase N, personally. but the lil extension on the foot is a no go right now, also the top of the N gets a lil thin. not really feel in the boxy P. and If you made the middle bar of the E the same size its kill some space. try pulling your letters closer in together. , just some thoughts. keep up the work

kaser- man theres alotta kaser's out there.. think I've told you that before. good use of bars i guess, just make your S curve and Your top R curve. don't hid ethe leg of the A behind the K like that

Yea thats a solid idea ill try the koper ... I was just frustrated paintin my first simp today the o is a bitch to make perfect on a wall. But then again it was my first attempt. Thanks for the crits I need to try different letters to gain experience anyway. Ive only drew about 15 -20 simps I just need to get down on my spacing next. Question do you all add your 3d as you complete each letter or after you do all letters?

kase - try out nephu lol you might like it

dankbudz
04-29-2012, 09:08 PM
space it out. it take some tweaking of the K and A from the looks.

Silky Johnson
04-29-2012, 09:25 PM
naw I hit him wit da a to da k muhfukka!

Mildstyles
04-29-2012, 09:27 PM
I want to see this kid post a picture^
or just shut up. Either one works.

Silky Johnson
04-29-2012, 09:29 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_165433.jpg

THERE YA GO MUHFUKKA !

Mildstyles
04-29-2012, 09:31 PM
One of your own created things**
H1p3 crushes you hahaha

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 09:37 PM
yea the alter ego wasn't as amusing as I had thought it would be.

Mildstyles
04-29-2012, 09:38 PM
yeah you crush yourself, muhfukka

Kaze
04-29-2012, 09:43 PM
lol hipeoner i could try it but i cant do P's...i guess i gotta learn all letters eventually, i was thinking of either going back to my old one seak, or maybe try something like Ashmuk, like that jewish word shmuk..thought it would be funny but i dono still trying to decide. i add the 3d after i draw the outline most of the time but sometimes i add in 3d after each letter too...dono if u were asking me though cuz i suck

thanks dank, il space them out more then what i got now.

H1P30N3R
04-29-2012, 09:43 PM
lol muhfukka dave chappelle, gotta love that guy.

Beko
04-29-2012, 10:18 PM
I just forgot to re-ink one of the 3d lines.
okay i see it now!

Beko
04-29-2012, 10:25 PM
the O bothers me a lot! crits appreciated!
66993

cred1384
04-29-2012, 10:29 PM
@Beko the K looks nice, the wobble in the O looks strange you're right. the top of the E looks iffy as well, maybe try making it expand a bit like the bottom right leg of the k?

Improving my structure.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_2_76947152x.jpg

HRbN
04-29-2012, 10:36 PM
your D could be confused for an O and i dont like how short the left leg on the R is but other than that i love your style. nice work

Kaze
04-29-2012, 10:36 PM
beko- like both you and cred said, the O is weird. i like your T and and K though and the bottom part of your E is nice. maybe with the middle bar of your E have it coming out a little bit in the back of the E if u know what i meen. the shading looks good too i think.

Cred- as usual it looks pretty fucking dope from my stand point lol. only thing i dont really like is the left leg on your R and that thing ontop of your D that comes out to the right looks kinda weird, sorta makes it looks like a crazy J lol. other then that though i like the D and i think your E is sick.

Willis1989
04-30-2012, 04:01 AM
Cred - Like the piece but not really feeling the top of the D
Kote - Id move the K over a little, feel free to ignore me but It looks like its taking to much off the O
4Eyes - Dont like the top of the Es and S otherwise the throws are ok

I fucked up most of these, thought id post em anyway, fuck Ws I started writing Lead instead of Lewd cuz just cant do Ws and Ive been doing Ws since my first name twice as long as my other letters, I think the LEAD looks better anyway, could I get some crits on these?

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081117.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081133.jpg?t=1335776351

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081140.jpg?t=1335776351

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081048.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081105.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081057.jpg

IronyATB
04-30-2012, 06:11 AM
@Lewd your fills need work, too messy.

Also graff culture is too homophobic, I plan to change that. Embrace the dick, become the dick.

Willis1989
04-30-2012, 06:43 AM
yea not too bothered about colours atm just letters, just coloured it to fuck around

MN Nice
04-30-2012, 08:05 AM
Some exchanges

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/214c91e8.jpg?t=1335475171

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/c6c0ab5a.jpg?t=1335501085

kwu
04-30-2012, 11:29 AM
^ dope these letters suit your style more

havent given crits in a while but i see some worth mentioning
Lewd/Lead n Kote, just avoid the extra kinks, bends and extentions, and focus on the movement of the bars, the illest simples in my opinion dont need all that extra shit if the flow is on point
Cred, I kno you're trying to develop your style, and your structure is improving quick, but keep practicing simples cause that shit will help you figure out how your letters best coincide and where you can kill negative space without throwing in the extra ish.

recents
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dankbudz
04-30-2012, 11:32 AM
that shit is straight fressh, atma

H1P30N3R
04-30-2012, 12:42 PM
thats dope shit atma only thing I dislike is the philly get you a swisher lol

Mildstyles
04-30-2012, 02:00 PM
Atma i love the 2 page ones. And that last one is so dope.
Cred thats much better but fix yo D

Reality
04-30-2012, 05:25 PM
Opinions? Somewhat new to graffiti. Practiced for quite some time. Some suck, some are better.

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no-sleep
04-30-2012, 05:38 PM
you WILL get better just keep practicing

DEMPO
04-30-2012, 07:20 PM
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trying to do @ least one sketch each day. wish I had the patience to do more.

dankbudz
04-30-2012, 07:28 PM
if you are trying to improve, dempo, the advice id give is to not color your work for a while. just stick with black sharpie and pencil. youll get twice as much done... which should lead to quicker improvement.

gotta start coloring my older shit, just got a new black sharpie so i can outline fuck ya...

Kaze
04-30-2012, 08:18 PM
^^Reality- like no-sleep said, just keep practicing and you will see improvement. its good that your practicing lots of different letters but you should pick a name and practice that and try to master it, its still good to experiment with other shit too though, just concentrate mainly on what you write. keep it up

Dempo- your letters look cool but i dont really like the coloring in there. the shadowing looks good i think, try to push your self to draw 2-6 sketches each day or something. patience will grow

dank- i think that looks sick, the one thing i dont really like is the D but it doesnt look bad, better then what i can do. the streaks looks good and i like the concept with your E and O...the ripped neck character is dope too

cred1384
04-30-2012, 08:54 PM
@Dank that M and S are poppin' Good shit man.
@Dempo very nice. The middle bar of the G maybe should go behind the curving bar on the left? shit idk haha

Fucked up this fill.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_44983572x.jpg

Friidom
04-30-2012, 08:59 PM
65077
reposting for crits
ignore the terrible fill I had no good markers to use

Reality
04-30-2012, 10:00 PM
Thanks for feedback no-sleep and Kaze. Will def keep practicing.

EWL24
04-30-2012, 10:07 PM
cred - that E is sick and i like how it matches the C. the D i think looks a lot like an O though
Friidom - work on bars and keyboard letters

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 12:16 AM
yeah I should have used a ruler to make my vanishing point lines cleaner and fucked up the line to the leg of my r .... any other crits ?

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_005250.jpg

dankbudz
05-01-2012, 12:21 AM
the O is a no go, loose those lines in the letters. you want to get your letters down before you mess with that. and pic a vanishing point that compliments your piece. id try something to fill the neg space between the P and R. and don't draw your lines all the way to the vanishing point. and there is also no need to use a ruler, looks clean as is

Kaze
05-01-2012, 12:24 AM
^that looks good, maybe make your O a litttle bit smaller and the circular part on your P, the first bar on your R looks a little crooked. i like those lines u have coming out of the centre point of your o, p and r, the one on the O is a little crooked it looks but thats minor. other then that it looks nice and clean

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 12:27 AM
yea the koper would help with the negative space. Ill have to work on the vanishing point shit that was my first go at it. And the o well fuck an o lol gonna have all kind of fun gettin them down. but thanks for the crits

2 -3 weeks of piecing still the 0 is annoying is that normal ?

Kaze
05-01-2012, 12:32 AM
O's just seem like there a pain in the ass to make perfect.

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 12:40 AM
november 2006 you joined ??? wtf just noticed that, 6 years and you dont even have a name ?

BoostIt
05-01-2012, 12:46 AM
Crits? I know i fucked up the 3d on the top of the E and the letters aren't all the same proportion. Not feeling the L or the E, ran out of room on the edge of the paper..just trying to work out my own style

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120501_014008.jpg

braxtons a g
05-01-2012, 01:05 AM
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A sneak peak of a pack i just sent out, Dont mind that gay shit in the background. lol
Just trying new stuff out

dankbudz
05-01-2012, 01:24 AM
I've gotta take a fat shit. mind if i use the sticker as teepee?

DaFugg
05-01-2012, 01:44 AM
How the hell do you write "SELDOM" on a piece of average sized paper. I'm about to kill myself.

braxtons a g
05-01-2012, 02:01 AM
I've gotta take a fat shit. mind if i use the sticker as teepee?

Thats all you partner, Just stick that shit when your finished

DaFugg
05-01-2012, 03:46 AM
Struggling with the S. not a fan of it in general but I need to widen my ability in writing more than just MK. Lol
Crits? Btw, exchange.
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/f001611e.jpg

Friidom
05-01-2012, 09:02 AM
boost-left leg of the a looks disconnected and I'm not really feelin how the top of the e covers the middle bar. also the handy looks like it says ENAMT so fix up the l
dafugg-i like the d but not really feelin the bottom bit of the e and maybe add a little more flavor to the L but overall not bad at all

no fill on this one, crits appreciated
my e's kinda hiding too much behind my O but I like my m and s
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BoostIt
05-01-2012, 11:18 AM
just finished this one, did the whole thing in bars first and i like it a lot better than freehanding it. also tried some new tags at the top of the paper.

Crits? I thought the mixed colors would turn out better so if i painted this piece it would probably be a solid fill
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120501_121631.jpg

Big Africa
05-01-2012, 11:47 AM
http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/Graff/simps.jpg

Critz por favor, I know the O is lopsided I forgot to make it larger at the top and my marker skils still be lackin but im workin on them

Friidom
05-01-2012, 01:10 PM
boost-left leg of the a looks disconnected and I'm not really feelin how the top of the e covers the middle bar. also the handy looks like it says ENAMT so fix up the l
dafugg-i like the d but not really feelin the bottom bit of the e and maybe add a little more flavor to the L but overall not bad at all

no fill on this one, crits appreciated
my e's kinda hiding too much behind my O but I like my m and s
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bringin it over from bottom of last page

cred1384
05-01-2012, 01:32 PM
@Frii try to keep your bar size more consistent. and your letters are too squished.

Messing with perspective
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_87749182x.jpg

PETER
05-01-2012, 02:07 PM
not feeling that R at all. I don't like the left* leg of it. You seem to be getting your E worked out though. That hand needs help too!

Mildstyles
05-01-2012, 02:08 PM
This thread....
Not done yet, still space for juan more person and a background
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H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 02:10 PM
Word I think that r can be a easy fix tho cred. Like the leg on your c almost looks like it could naturally be the r's leg also jus a thought with a little tweaking..I may be off to cause idk alot on piecing.

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 03:15 PM
http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_161107.jpg

DaFugg
05-01-2012, 03:20 PM
Put the O on a diet

PETER
05-01-2012, 03:47 PM
KOPR. Try making your O out of two bars and give them a similar flex to the rest of your letters. Bend the left bar like the left of the K and the right bar like the bottom of the K and R, just stretched out. Just make sure to connect them so that it is clear it's an O. Idk if it will work, but it's worth a shot. Maybe shape the top like the top of the P and R.

uknowigetup
05-01-2012, 04:15 PM
Critz? Its not great but its the only thing I've felt like uploading recently.
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120501_171239.jpg

dankbudz
05-01-2012, 04:15 PM
so did you punk outta the battle? or are you gonna reply... pussy

oh and that page is dope, naked

Shit Outta Luck
05-01-2012, 04:16 PM
Naked I'm diggin that. The GEES dude...but your K-E leaves a bit too much space I think.

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 04:48 PM
KOPR. Try making your O out of two bars and give them a similar flex to the rest of your letters. Bend the left bar like the left of the K and the right bar like the bottom of the K and R, just stretched out. Just make sure to connect them so that it is clear it's an O. Idk if it will work, but it's worth a shot. Maybe shape the top like the top of the P and R.

solid idea wish I had thought that while sketching. thanks man

Kaze
05-01-2012, 04:50 PM
mild styles those all look dope, only thing i can say is maybe maybe make your E of naked abit closer to the other letters but other then that it looks cool.

uknowigetup- i like your 3d shading on it, your last E seems to be bigger then the first one, but maybe thats just me, it looks like you messed up one of ur 3d bars on the M but other then those things i think looks good. just keep doing it and make it more tidy and what not

hipe- that idea peter said about the O sounds cool, i like your k and the bend on the letters, maybe try to incorporate those curves you have on the P and R on top your K somehow. the O is kinda big but Os just r a pain in the ass, overall it looks good and clean

Mildstyles
05-01-2012, 05:11 PM
Thanks all and yeah the KE is always hard to work out, but I'm gonna try.
And i had to color the gees cuz he left...my brain pretty much died trying to keep up with his blueprints im not ready for complex hahaha

DaFugg
05-01-2012, 06:52 PM
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/f8e91bfd.jpg
Crits?

Friidom
05-01-2012, 06:55 PM
seld-fatten up the left half of the m its lookin a little anorexic but im diggin the D a lot

dankbudz
05-01-2012, 07:00 PM
ill pm your exchange in a day or some with some crits on yours, dafuug

no-sleep
05-01-2012, 07:11 PM
characters are mine rest is my boy
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DaFugg
05-01-2012, 07:11 PM
Don't hold back. I know that it's pretty wack, it's nice stepping out of my comfort zone though, thank dude
Nosleep that's pretty dope, I can't draw like that but the shit looks a little unoriginal, no offense just played out a bit, still good. Not a fan of those throws though.

no-sleep
05-01-2012, 07:15 PM
Don't hold back. I know that it's pretty wack, it's nice stepping out of my comfort zone though, thank dude
Nosleep that's pretty dope, I can't draw like that but the shit looks a little unoriginal, no offense just played out a bit, still good. Not a fan of those throws though.

oh of course its unoriginal i only wish i could think of characters like that, and my boys still workin on em hes gotten alot better

DaFugg
05-01-2012, 07:19 PM
The last one is the worst spaced randomly and no letter structure. The second one is just inconsistent and I don't like. The first one, is best but still needs more work, you can't make out any of the letters at all.

no-sleep
05-01-2012, 07:22 PM
[QUOTE=DaFugg;1794260]The last one is the worst spaced randomly and no letter structure. The second one is just inconsistent and I don't like. The first one, is best but still needs more work, you can't make out any of the letters at all.[/QU

ill be sure to tell him

TastyMcNasty
05-01-2012, 07:24 PM
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0075.jpg

no-sleep
05-01-2012, 07:31 PM
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Kaze
05-01-2012, 07:35 PM
that looks pretty cool dafugg, i like the top part of your E but i think the bottom part of your D is too fat but its a cool idea. i like your O just maybe make a litttle bit smaller and your M is nice just make it a little bigger lol...overal though i think its pretty cool looking

tastymcnasty- i think that throw is fucking sick.

no sleep- those characters are cool, your first one on the other page is my fav, the others could use work but still alot better then wat i can do. i like your friends simpler graff work too

no-sleep
05-01-2012, 07:59 PM
that looks pretty cool dafugg, i like the top part of your E but i think the bottom part of your D is too fat but its a cool idea. i like your O just maybe make a litttle bit smaller and your M is nice just make it a little bigger lol...overal though i think its pretty cool looking

tastymcnasty- i think that throw is fucking sick.

no sleep- those characters are cool, your first one on the other page is my fav, the others could use work but still alot better then wat i can do. i like your friends simpler graff work too

thanks what u think of the letters?

TastyMcNasty
05-01-2012, 08:01 PM
no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well

EDIT:
it;s like the blind leading the blind in here.
before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site.

Sep 2010
67423

April 2012
67422

Mildstyles
05-01-2012, 08:04 PM
that grand theft auto page is so nice though, i like that

Kaze
05-01-2012, 08:08 PM
thanks what u think of the letters?
no sleep- letters wise i like the bottum 2 pics, i think that R is dope. and yeh that gta one that you did is dope lol

Friidom
05-01-2012, 08:13 PM
no sleep-too many arrows, simp it up a bit. i really like the orange one, maybe lean your c a little more so it touches the top of the r

no-sleep
05-01-2012, 08:42 PM
no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well

EDIT:
it;s like the blind leading the blind in here.
before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site.

Sep 2010
67423

April 2012
67422

ight ill take what you said into consideration, when i have some more time ill upload afew more pictures

no-sleep
05-01-2012, 08:45 PM
also the first picture is from the beginning of summer at that time i was only writing for around 9-10 months, i try to stay away from arrows as best as i can now

DaFugg
05-01-2012, 08:50 PM
Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.

TastyMcNasty
05-01-2012, 08:53 PM
Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.

shit ****** you just went full on retard. never go full on retard.

and no-sleep, atta be.

BigFaggot
05-01-2012, 09:19 PM
both pretty sloppy, plenty of mistakes. seconds a work in progress. 6742867429

no-sleep
05-01-2012, 09:21 PM
i like the set of E's in the first one

getpaiddaily
05-01-2012, 09:30 PM
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A little thing i made up for a friend how is it?

Mildstyles
05-01-2012, 09:34 PM
Nice shopping cart neer
that first one isnt even bad yo
But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking

DaFugg
05-01-2012, 09:35 PM
I hate iPhones. Autocorrect I grammar-retarded.

DaFugg
05-01-2012, 09:35 PM
FULL grammar retard.

BigFaggot
05-01-2012, 09:45 PM
thanks no sleep.
Naked, What shopping cart? hahaha, thanks man, and i know the Rs need work, i wanna kick em out more and make the bottom bar that comes back in more symmetrical with the N's, but i always run out of space.

MN Nice
05-01-2012, 09:46 PM
Nice shopping cart neer
that first one isnt even bad yo
But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking

Its a dog kennel. I'll put $5 on it.

BigFaggot
05-01-2012, 09:48 PM
Its a dog kennel. I'll put $5 on it.
hahahaha, you guessed it meng.

MN Nice
05-01-2012, 09:50 PM
Awwww yeeeee.

Mild, you never said you WON'T take the bet, so therefore you owe me 5 dollaz.

4menace2society0
05-01-2012, 10:02 PM
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BigFaggot
05-01-2012, 10:33 PM
sear, both are fresh as hell, seconds my favorite.

DEMPO
05-01-2012, 10:38 PM
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no matta who ya familys are everybody needs familys yall.
sear, those balls had better be gobstopers a somethin close 2 a jawbreaker

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 10:45 PM
diggin that 1 tempo looks nice and clean keep it up man
crits please changed the o up like suggested and I know its a little sloppy

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_233536.jpg

Mori
05-01-2012, 11:17 PM
Gettin there hype. id say drop the 3d for a drop shadow or just a bold outline, and id take those little cuts out of the inside of your letters where the top bar of the k conects and the bottom of the o and the p and r. and i don know how i feel bout the o looking fat like that. try a more old school looking o, kinda like a flat topped tear drop shape if that makes any sense.

H1P30N3R
05-01-2012, 11:20 PM
word Ill try that out man ... as long as I am progressing atleast somewhat it helps. thanks for the crits man

EWL24
05-01-2012, 11:38 PM
before u guys start telling me about structure u should know that this was just for fun
and yes, i know the letters r all wack, :)
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Kaze
05-01-2012, 11:43 PM
hipe- i like your P and R but not really feeling the K. try to make the dip thing on top of your p more suttle like it is on the R. the 3d looks off at the bottum of your P and the bottum left leg of your R but it looks good elsewhere. you know with ur P and R how at the top it has the dips, maybe in the centre part of the 2 letters the 3d should have the dip too if you get what im saying, may look better but i donno, could fuck it up too but maybe try it out.

EWL- i think that looks dope haha its a cool idea for sure.

dankbudz
05-02-2012, 12:04 AM
sear top ones dope, could do without the A pms ing all over the place
bottom ones dope as fuck too, but that tounge is flat as fuccck

uknowigetup
05-02-2012, 12:12 AM
I'm not digging some of my follow through lines on my bars. It looked a lot better with pencil shading but fuck it. Drips are ugly too, can I get some critz on my letters?
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120501_213526.jpg

dankbudz
05-02-2012, 12:13 AM
then don't do em, def aint helping your letters

cred1384
05-02-2012, 12:29 AM
@Emune ^ He has a point. Also for your letters the bend in the bottom bar of the E looks wack. Those extra lines aren't playing into your flow at all, try to position them so they look more natural if ya get what i mean.
@Dank So clean, damn good work.

Freestyle messing around with some new colored pens.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_10999652x.jpg

notmikegiant
05-02-2012, 12:44 AM
@ sear - reminds me A LOT of Rime, still looks sick though
@ Hipe - not really feeling the lines that cut in, otherwise looks solid, on the right track
@ ewal - cool concept, looks like it was fun
@ dank - i feel like you've got your simples down pretty well, why not try mixing shit up?
@ emune - get rid of those lines cutting through
@ cred - looks great for a freestyle, do you even need to be posting in the toy thread anymore?

gotta start somewhere right? i get that this doesn't look great, but i do like the P tilted up and the E tilted down, crits appreciated

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dankbudz
05-02-2012, 12:50 AM
mike- ya don't simply move from simps to a wild.
n pay attention to spacing, and work on that S, watch which way your letters lean, keep up all straight tup, or all leaning one way. watch that E its fat, try a upper case, it'll look a lot better with your letters
cred- work on the top of your E, noticed its pretty off in every piece, not really feel in that R too, but it looks good for a freestyle

gottapaintdaily
05-02-2012, 11:19 AM
@sear, both are dope as fuck, props on all them faces in the 1st one and the hand in the corner, shits sick. The S in the second one is dope too

1love
05-02-2012, 12:46 PM
heres one of my first tries of a new style
first post btw ;D


http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/2948/uploadl.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/826/uploadl.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

BoostIt
05-02-2012, 01:01 PM
Damn dude lose the arrows and extensions. focus on simplicity. some really dope pieces are just plain letters with a little flair. work on doing the letters in bars first and then cut back with your eraser and finish it off. check 2 pages back for my first post. i've been drawing and painting for almost 6 months and my letters and style aren't crazy. is that piece supposed to say Ghost?

1love
05-02-2012, 01:11 PM
yeah it's supposed to say ghost and i usually write another name(maybe ill take some pics of walls and upload em next days)

BoostIt
05-02-2012, 01:17 PM
my best advice on names is go to google images and type in "ghost graffiti" and if you see a pic of someone else who has done a piece with that name on a wall or wherever and it's better than yours, then you should pick a different name. I've gone through like 3 names already and i thought i had a good one with Goner but i met a dude at a local legal wall who's been painting for over 10 years and he knows the (or one of the) original Goner from back in Philly or something and his advice was change names cause if someone better than you sees you writing the same name as them then you got beef. i haven't seen another Enaml before so that's what i'm writing now. it's a long frustrating process but once you find a good one you feel so much better haha. that guy i met at the legal wall also said try to go for a 5 or 6 letter name cause almost everything with 4 letters has been done. he was writing Woems and he's pretty fucking good.

1love
05-02-2012, 01:24 PM
ah yeah checked it out.
maybe i should go on writing LARF but i would like to do something new

BoostIt
05-02-2012, 01:27 PM
post up a pic if you've written another name. i sat down and brainstormed for a couple hours just writing random combos of letters that sounded like words haha. Woems said his name has no meaning, but it sounds cool so he started writing it. i've always tried to pick something that means something to me but he said it doesn't always have to, but it's up to you man.

1love
05-02-2012, 01:45 PM
made a fast sketch. the space between the l and the a is too large...

http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/4794/20120502204107.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/827/20120502204107.jpg/)

Mildstyles
05-02-2012, 02:08 PM
I was wondering wtf modles was but now i get it, looks solid seldom.

Dog kennel, shopping carts, theyre all the same hahaha and MN if i ever send out my blackbook for people ill remember to slip in a 5 for you... :p

H1P30N3R
05-02-2012, 02:09 PM
ok trying a new vibe its throw inspired is this worth finishing or is it to much like a throw to be considered a piece ?

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120502_150233.jpg

Mildstyles
05-02-2012, 02:14 PM
I like it finish it^
make the p skinnier though

BoostIt
05-02-2012, 02:15 PM
Hipe- shit looks good man, i say finish it and see how it looks as a piece, if not then you got yourself a nice throw. the K looks kinda small as a whole letter compared to the O and P so maybe stretch it a little bit taller and a little fatter but not too much

1love- that L looks like a Z and the F needs work. the right leg of the A looks too skinny but i'm digging the style of the A and the R. to get some letters down when i first started, i copied fonts off of google but then i changed them a lot and gave them different direction and flow. it helps to have something to copy to get the hang of it but make sure that when you draw up stuff and paint stuff you consider to be original you make your own style. i made the mistake of copying something off of graffiticreator and throwing it up on a wall and i got flamed for it lol. us toys make mistakes though. but keep working on it dude, it has potential. try brainstorming with other letters and combos too, you might stumble across something you like better than Larf

KehmONE
05-02-2012, 03:48 PM
@Hipe - Shit's dope, finish it with a decent fill. The P needs to be a tad bit thinner.

@1Love - Your bar widths are way off, you've got the right idea when it comes to simplicity though.

dankbudz
05-02-2012, 04:17 PM
got tired of using a ton of ink on fills

ComradeR
05-02-2012, 04:36 PM
I'll just post here instead and see if I progress or not. Still have a ton of work to do to get some structure down but here is another one of my stuff.
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Shit Outta Luck
05-02-2012, 04:37 PM
That's steezy dank. Diggin it.

TastyMcNasty
05-02-2012, 04:42 PM
got tired of using a ton of ink on fills

dat S, E and 3D. diggin it

ven0m
05-02-2012, 05:00 PM
yo hipe, you're doing ok... you can go on with that piece, just switch the throw K to a normal straight letter K... unless you're doing the K like that on purpose, in which case I'd tell you to carry on :)

H1P30N3R
05-02-2012, 05:14 PM
dank - that shits proper ...

venom Im not sure where it will lead to just yet it is my first go at this style plenty of room for change and development.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120502_175836.jpg

Kaze
05-02-2012, 06:16 PM
that looks dope hipe, it looks like a throwie/burner hybrid to me. i like your R and K but maybe make them abit more like straightletter/burner type letters.

comrader- make your Z abit fatter, dont have the centry hole in your A so big, looks better then yesterdays post though, keep it up

dankbudz-that affect u did on ur letters is fukin sick i think, looks like theyv melted and r being pulled apart or somshit. letters on acid

Larf- dont have the F connecting to the L at the bottom, looks decent though just keep on practicing

DaFugg
05-02-2012, 06:22 PM
Comrader- BARS
Dank- That's fresh, something about the S is fucking with me though.
1love- Stop EVERYTHING your doing. Dont connect your letters dont draw your arrows or anything. See the letters I'm typing? Try copying them. It's boring, but eventually you'll progress.

dankbudz
05-02-2012, 06:30 PM
i fucked up outlining the S, right under where the top touches, a good portion of that should a been thinner but my hand wobbled and i had to compesate...
kopr- thats tight but more of a throwie/bomb

Mildstyles
05-02-2012, 06:37 PM
Dankz that E is butterssss
and the S is cool too, the color scheme is nice too

Mildstyles
05-02-2012, 06:50 PM
I just puked all over the page and this is what came out:
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But then this made it better
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MN Nice
05-02-2012, 07:27 PM
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/dc33034b.jpg

For this weeks battle. Get in it!

BigFaggot
05-02-2012, 07:37 PM
@dank, thats real nice, so clean.
@hipe, looking so much better. those keyboard letters are paying off, but you should finish those lines at the bottom of the K and R, just my opinion.
3Ds a little fucked at spots but, have at it.
67612 .... i dont know why two of them came up.

gottapaintdaily
05-02-2012, 08:15 PM
6762267623literally just fuckin round during class wit slaps, they are kinda shitty. crits anyway tho i guess?

no-sleep
05-02-2012, 08:50 PM
I just puked all over the page and this is what came out:
67554

But then this made it better
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i actually like this, now add some drop shadow 3D !!

DEMPO
05-03-2012, 02:44 AM
67645
trying to get some crits on this plz.

gottapaint, I like ur fish that boxes, I do a fish that smokes.. ha
neer, those lil circles on the end of some lines look bad. bars look pretty good, bottom right of N stands out.
kopr, feelin those bubble letters dude. the G and E on the bottom could be closer in size.
naked, ur puke peice is not that bad just looks sort of done by memory without much thought.
seldo, those connections are cool but look a lil forced. do em more though, bars n' 3d look clean.

ComradeR
05-03-2012, 02:51 AM
@Kaze thanks for the crits, trying out a new thing with the a and a bit with the z, still can't get my lines straight.
Also been reading up about bars since DaFugg mentioned it and I get the idea since it's basically the same concept as when you draw out something, using simple shapes. It's still a mess for me trying to figure out where lines should go after getting an outline down
@Big, I'm liking that NEER, pretty dope N

Got some other crap as well,
67648

notmikegiant
05-03-2012, 04:19 AM
sketching for the battle, actually pretty happy with this so far, 3d seems kinda fucked up though

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"PHYSH"
05-03-2012, 04:32 AM
6765167652
crits crits crits.............................

Willis1989
05-03-2012, 04:34 AM
Seld - Thats fresh, really like the colours
Naked - Maybe make the D a little closer in
Neer - Like the piece but the N looks kinda funny to me, maybe lose the extra bar on 1st leg and move it in a little
MN Nice - the R is too far behind the G in my opinion
Comrader - Dont worry to much about it looking like "graffiti letters" the top one is the best because its most simple, just keep working on simps

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-03085043.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-03085050.jpg?t=1336036598

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-03085058.jpg?t=1336036596

Willis1989
05-03-2012, 04:37 AM
CRITS

* Give crits if you expect to receive them. What goes around comes around, don't expect everyone to go out of their way to give you crits if you aren't polite to enough to help others out. If asking for crits try and give crits to the last 5 or so picture posters.

* Don't turn down crits from people who aren't as good as you. Just because their skill level is less doesn't mean your piece is flawless and they can't pick it out.
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This is clearly posted in forum rules, if motherfuckers want crits then they gotta give crits, if you dont wanna give crits then fuck off and dont expect to get any

Kaze
05-03-2012, 06:13 AM
Dempo- i dont really like the R or E but the concept of the drawing is cool, i like how the A is part of the N.

comrader- looks abit better then before, if your going to try and draw a straightletter/burner type thing then take your time, the bottum Z looks the best out of the Z's just lose that thing at the top of it. try to make the bottom part of ur lower case E more rounded or somthing. just keep practicing

mike that looks dope, the 3d on the E and A is off though. dont really like the E a hole lot but overal the whole thing looks good i think

Thats a dope character PHYSH, cant really crit you on that, i cant draw characters that well so any of my advice would be useless. Is the drawing about ur character suppose to be letters or just a city background?

Willis- I like the E in the first and third pic but dont really like the one in the second, only letter i like in the first one is your E, the other two pictures below look dope though, maybe you should have your A with the top part of the 3rd picture and the bottom part of the 2nd picture if you like the idea.

"PHYSH"
05-03-2012, 08:12 AM
actually Kaze san those are real shit letters, with a city fill, and a poor choice of color for the outline.............


WILLIS1989 - I don't really agree with the first one, there's just something off, but the other two clean and simple, i like that

Willis1989
05-03-2012, 09:09 AM
Thanks Physh, I was trying to make it a little more wavy/bendy but totally fucked it up lol

I quite like the tag in you piece with the gorilla, cant really read the other letters cuz of the fills but characters are real nice

1love
05-03-2012, 09:46 AM
tried out another name...
http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/747/20120503164253.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/694/20120503164253.jpg/)

BigFaggot
05-03-2012, 10:47 AM
@1love its a lot better. the R is decent other than a few minor details, but every letter gets progressively worse. try keeping all the letters just as basic as the R, and keep all of em on the tilt that the r has.
@Willis bottom has most potential, but fix the middle bar on the E and work on making the D more of a D, maybe if you made the left bar straighter.
@physh first is completly illegible, working on the colors might help that a little, but obviously overall letter structure would help more. second is kinda cool, but mabe drop the drips and extensions, and blow it up. do it as a piece, characters nice though, i suck at characters.
@comrade thanks man, but definitly work on basic bars. and dont round your bars off, make them all connect forming straight lines, so its not bumpy bars with bbumps in between other bumpy baars.

MN Nice
05-03-2012, 03:38 PM
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/37083d64.jpg

Pencil sketch. Might outline and color. Hit me with some crits.

Rale, thicken up your bars and bring em closer together.

dankbudz
05-03-2012, 03:54 PM
the 2nd E is too covered, and the top of it is fucked. The end of the bottom of the S shouldn't continue up so far. try and make the curves you put on the bottom of the E's more smooth and give the top of the 4 a bit more space. and consider dropping the extension. also i don't really like how straight the middle of the S is

oh ya physh, your characters are dopeee

the bitch isn't decreasing in size, just looks like it in the pic....

CRIT ME BRO!

cred1384
05-03-2012, 04:05 PM
@4Eyes Not bad my man. the second E got a bit too squished and the bottom end of the S should be cut off like the Y.
@Dank Can't find anything i don't like about it. Fresh as fuck.

Cleaning up my structure
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_88610172x-1.jpg

nine514
05-03-2012, 04:46 PM
cred, that is fuckin dope bro. paint that shit.

R3bel1995
05-03-2012, 05:27 PM
Not bad bro, the only thing is that T it just seems a bit too thin.

TastyMcNasty
05-03-2012, 05:31 PM
cred, your letters seem to be getting weaker man

dankbudz
05-03-2012, 05:32 PM
^^nah man that ones definitely got better structure, some weird parts and I'm not feeling all the extensions, but overall structure of the letters are deffff better, specially on the R and E

BigFaggot
05-03-2012, 05:41 PM
67699
something i shit out for the battle, nowhere near clean. also, A and E are fucked.

Kaze
05-03-2012, 05:46 PM
1love-fix up your A and especially the middle part of ur E, make the bars abit bigger, maybe take out the curve on top of your E, like how it comes in and curved into ur main bar or the E. i like ur R though, nice and simple.

mnnice- i like ur 4 a lot and first e, not really digging the top part of the Y or the middle/bottum or your S, maybe dont have it come down so sharp and tight, maybe have the bottom part of the S with some more angles or someshit... overall those it looks dope though i think

dankbudz that looks sick, i like ur k, the bar of your T looks kinda small but other then that i cant point anything out. it looks dope

Cred- looks good, i like your R alot more this way, maybe have the bottum bar of your D that comes in come in a little lower.

BigFaggot- that looks clean except i dont really like the black arrow type things u have in ur background, i dont really like that thing u have below ur middle bar of ur E and have the second bar of your U a little fatter so it matches the other bar of the U. maybe have your E a tiny bit smaller...looks like it drops down just a tad to low

Mildstyles
05-03-2012, 05:55 PM
I see the gees dripping off of you

kwu
05-03-2012, 06:16 PM
the 2nd E is too covered, and the top of it is fucked. The end of the bottom of the S shouldn't continue up so far. try and make the curves you put on the bottom of the E's more smooth and give the top of the 4 a bit more space. and consider dropping the extension. also i don't really like how straight the middle of the S is

oh ya physh, your characters are dopeee

the bitch isn't decreasing in size, just looks like it in the pic....

CRIT ME BRO!

yo punk bitch! na im playin lol, is that black pen or something else cause that shit is crispier than popeye's chicken g

H1P30N3R
05-03-2012, 06:23 PM
dank - thats nice as usual not much I can crit you on so listen to big krit
cred - looks good minus the bar atop the e going toward the r... I understand your probably trying to fill void space there it just doesn't look good to me personally.
faggot- thats nice I just dont dig the little triangle thing below the middle bar on the e.

crits please ill add 3d vanishing point something later.Opinions on which type would fit the best appreciated also.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120503_190543.jpg

cred1384
05-03-2012, 06:24 PM
cred, your letters seem to be getting weaker man

I've been trying to improve the overall structure and did a simpler one to see how it looked.

Here's a more complex one. R feels like it's too, and just now noticed the D looks way too much like a P..

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_45005972x.jpg

getpaiddaily
05-03-2012, 06:36 PM
Some of my stickers kinda rushed, not to good but any crits? 677246772567726


CRITS!

BigFaggot
05-03-2012, 07:01 PM
@ naked haha heavy influence muh nigguh, its burned in my brain.
@hipe, its not just a random triangle haha, its part of the mid bar of the E that swoops in. poor execution is all.

Kaze
05-03-2012, 07:03 PM
getpaid- dont like the top 2 but the bottom one is nice...drip affect on the first one is cool though.

cred that sick, bus the bottom bar of your D is too high

hiperoner- that throwie is sick, as for the burner try to make the gap in your G smaller, dont have the top part so round maybe and have it start tighter into the G or something, if u choose to do that, with the space left over at the top maybe do a little something with the R, like have the top bar of ur R come over ontop of your main vertical bar of the R then stop and come back tothe vertical bar, sounds confusing but hopefully u get what i meen, i like your R though its clean and with your A try to fill in the open space by were the legs stop, maybe have one drop down further with a bit of a bend or something

Mildstyles
05-03-2012, 07:08 PM
battle
Hipe- try striaghtletters for a little and avoid bending your bars until you got the movements down and widths and all that. and try to keep all your bars the same width cuz that N is super fat with the bars
HYP- That silver H is the best minus the stupid little serif thing at the top left, and with your Y's and P's try doing them more simple and dont let your outline go inside the letter
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