Blackbooks

[Axil]

i'll remove the video for all of those that are crying about it :P

[cred1384]

@Peter thanks man, I'll try that

Fixed up the last one.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_83735082x.jpg

[HëRbN]

REALLY feeling that sketch man, nice steez. Only thing im not a huge fan of is the "foot" of the E if you know what i mean. Maybe just a little tweak

[Shit Outta Luck]

Why would you want a 2 lettter nameget some more letters

holy fuck yoiu little shit, you're making me stop posting here. you are not my friend and you will not put my shit on your fucking youtube video. jesus christ.

Besides the S being to far from the O and E, and the middle of the E being weird what's wrong.
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[dankbudz]

uknowigetup- i know what the internet is you grimey douche, if anyone shouldn't be writing it should be you...

and hell, if its was someone else... almost anyone else... making a video of actual good shit, on an actual GOOD youtube channel, id dig.. but this shit.... hellllll no.

[nine514]

um.... use a new paper?

[uknowigetup]

SOL,
In the above piece, I would work on getting the S and the E balanced out. See how the top portion of your E, is curved, and the top portion of your S is bar-d out. Work on bringing down to S a little bit. Mostly just generally try to get the S and the E the same style, and balanced. If you kept the bottom part of that E, and worked on the bottom left bar of the S, you could get those to look balanced/symmetrical. nomsaying?

[nine514]

can some1 crit my throwies in the throwies section ":)))

[uknowigetup]

uknowigetup- i know what the internet is you grimey douche, if anyone shouldn't be writing it should be you...

and hell, if its was someone else... almost anyone else... making a video of actual good shit, on an actual GOOD youtube channel, id dig.. but this shit.... hellllll no.

Once again with the clever comebacks man. It must be easy to argue when you use said formula;
[Insert profanity and other vulgar terminology (it'll scare people and not make you look unintelligent at all!)] Then simply [Insert an insult your opponent just used and send it right back at them! (this is an intense scare tactic, BE CAREFUL WHEN YOU USE It, it won't make you appear illogical in the slightest.)]

[uknowigetup]

@Peter thanks man, I'll try that

Fixed up the last one.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_83735082x.jpg

Looking a lot better man. Have you experimented with dropping the E down, and removing the back extension on the D? If you could make the bottom of the e, or the lower leg symmetrical and balanced with the R it would look more amazing. Just a suggestion, it looks really good as is. Loving the flow, the back of the D/what the E sits on is the only thing that pops out as odd to me.

[dankbudz]

im glad you've formulated my plan to scare little kids on the internet. maybe you can go do it on other forums and think you are cool :cool:

also, don't double post and quote a photo in the same page, it makes YOU look unintelligent , and don't give crits cause you suck nuts.

[Mildstyles]

I better have been in that video

[Shit Outta Luck]

Haha Naked...and fuck you nine I didn't have any other paper.
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[bio99]

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Thanks for the crits guys. Should I just try to go more simple? I also tried to make my letters look more different from each other, whadya think?

[blackmath]

What do you guys think about these? Criticize my shit hard, it helps

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[Strange Journeys]

3rd has most potential, fatten the K bars and make em str8 not kinked

[centrysam]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7042/6968342814_86ff6c161e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6968342814/)
IMG_0247 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6968342814/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr

[H1P30N3R]

sol - not sure bout that s man the o an e are solid
bio - try doing straights for a while before you start using bends and leans in your letters
crits please

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120425_200644.jpg

[centrysam]

not bad. top right part of the k would look better without kink. then because u changed the k make the bottom right leg of r the same . also the o seems to not fit the style of the other letters . and the 3d is off on the o a lil bit . would be nice if there was a way to fill neg space between the p and r . just thoughts
but with a lil practice . all those things will fix its self. keep fillin pages,

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7042/6968342814_86ff6c161e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6968342814/)
IMG_0247 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6968342814/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr


i was always told that simps beat weak pieces.
and in my opinon. if u cant do the conncections right. then u should just do a simp

Nіgga please

[H1P30N3R]

word I gotta just practice alot get basic down before I start with mor bends tweaks and blending letters ... thanks man would give you crits but thats out of my league.

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

yall in the same league, on the same team, on the same mini field

[centrysam]

fuck off . my shit stomps urs all day . u havent improved in a year . lol
***** plzz.... stop talkin like ur black . u retarted fat white kid

atleast i try to do conections right , ahhahahh im surprized u ant been stabed in the neck yet .. i guess u dont paint much ahaha

[H1P30N3R]

I love this place lol rib your awesome at bein an asshole ... thing is I know im no good and ego naww it does nothing to have 1 online for myself.

[centrysam]

and if u wanna talk shit we will take it to beef battle thread .. were all ur friends will vote for ur wackness ... lol
u need a week to come up with a shitty attempt at a burner ahhaha
i could fill the whole book in that amount of time

[dankbudz]

hipe- the top right bar on the K is a no go, and the O is pretty wobbly and looks like and egg, id just make it more round. also watch out on the 3d, should go out the same length at every point. and keep doing them simps,
just work on a nice clean line for your outlines n shit. fuck around with slightly bending the bars once you get more confident with the letters, whenever ya think so. hope this helps loll

centry- the 3d is off in a lot of places, and the lines inside it, watch out for that. and try more bars which form the letter rather then bars which form arrows, nah mean?
im digging the background, beam type thing. reminds me of dragon ball Z, but you changed the perspective from bottom then at top, in the wrong way. shoulda kept it like the bottom.
and please work on your hand, a simple tag is better than one with tons of lil extension type things, just write in clean ass script.

also lose the ego, you only really have it with rib, buuut idunno if it really affects on how you look at your work. but being modest never hurt anyone.


edit:
on the H and E you have those lil down and up "cuts" ya know?
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[centrysam]

there are no extentions on that hand
but i no that my handies are weak and i am workin on them
but thanks for the crits

im not losin no ego when it comes to rib .. he always talks shit about my stuff . and is an overall ass to everyone .
soo he can take it ... cuz he deff dishes it .

plus his work isnt good enough to talk shit about anyones stuff ,
an im pretty nice to everone on every fourm
i crit everyone i think i might be able to help . and never tell anyone there shitty or anythin like that .

soo thats it
if he waants to shut me up he can beat me in a battle other than that he can suck my fat dick

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

fuck off . my shit stomps urs all day . u havent improved in a year . lol
***** plzz.... stop talkin like ur black . u retarted fat white kid

atleast i try to do conections right , ahhahahh im surprized u ant been stabed in the neck yet .. i guess u dont paint much ahaha
Lol centrysam got mad burners!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! Nіgga please. I am a fat retarded white kid, youre correct. How to paint? what is to paint? will you paint and teach me? Lol because I dont rush home to post my pics on bombingscience like you, I must have never picked up a can in my life.

You try so hard to do connections correctly, but fail miserably, and somehow think your shit is tight

and if u wanna talk shit we will take it to beef battle thread .. were all ur friends will vote for ur wackness ... lol
u need a week to come up with a shitty attempt at a burner ahhaha
i could fill the whole book in that amount of time
Lol
@hipe you have a grasp of whats up;).

[centrysam]

i fail go back an look at ir battle piece bro .. holy fuck ... worst attepmt at connections ever .... that I omfg that I looks like it got curb stompd ahahhahah
and that D the conncetion on that D is horrible ..... but enough talkin .... do the battle if ur better than me man. prove ur shit is better,

or shut up an go trace some more pinnochios ahahhahaah faggot .

[centrysam]

an fuck ip ban .... losser puts . got OWNED by winner in sig ... for ever
we dont need mod to aprove that . agreement between me an u ...
an i dont need no week eather , if ur good u can do it in a few hours max ,,,

not that a battle matters . i mean lyfe killed u with a two pager and ur retared sea horse background somehow managed to get more votes...
u must have payed off the other voters, giving hand jobs with the back of ur throat ahahhaha

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

^http://www.reactionface.info/sites/default/files/images/1310566609761.jpg

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7042/6968342814_86ff6c161e.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6968342814/)
IMG_0247 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6968342814/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/)
Lol u mad bro? dude. seriously? seriously though? seriously bro? omg seriously?

so many arrows, so many directions, so little time!!!!

[centrysam]

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5198/6968454370_be616afd04.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6968454370/)
lol (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6968454370/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr

everything circled represents horible misstakes...

o and nice connection between the c and the h Hhahahaahha ...

[centrysam]

thats one page fool .
everything u do is horrible the battle is the best thing u ever done . and its bad.
u cant honnestly tell me that a guy with a h in his fuckin name cant rock a better h than that .. IN A BATTLE .
let alone a battle that took a week ahahahh a
and the I
thats all ima say about that .
u no how bad that i is

and on a final note . if u even dream ur better than me ... u better wake up an appoligize ...

so thats it . not commenting on no more of ur posts ..
if u wanna settle this ... pick a word . gladly crush u . today . tomorrow . or when u develop a bit of skill . .. gimme a shout in 15 years . u might be able to do a nice i then ahha

[centrysam]

lol ur h need more than space bro ... look at the fuckin c to h connect. lol it makes the marker u used want to run away .
look how u angled the bottom of the fuckin letter , runes the flow . theres amillion ways to end a letter and u did it the worst way.
then u come out an say that u never took it seriously, soo u come on here talkin shit ripin up peoples shit , circling there mistakes then make the same ones in ur own
. i cant belive me an lyfe are the only ones on here who will call u out on ur bullshit .
he surpized u ,, maby ur to quick to judge people bro .
i cant belive im wasting my time talkin about this .
i call u out and u wont take it to beef battle because u no how wack u are .
... master rib ... wat a joke . only thing u are master of is being a tool.
eat a fat one.
ima beefin u for ever. i dont kare if i get banned . which will probly happen because everone is so far up ur ass . i cant see were u end and everone else begins .
u lost the last battle . and u no it . mike nos it . i no it .
so get back on ur tracing table . and get the prismas ur mom bought u out bro . an quit ragin on other peeps shit . an work on ur own .
only thing u can rock is a toss . which 85% of people on here can do .
and like i said . any time any word.... fuck ill beat u at ur own name . little boy .
master throat jobs. ... u were wack when i first posted. and i wasnt any better . but i am now ... an u still ant shit ....

[BigFaggot]

neer, are you homies with mild style?

yo Dafugg, this aint one of them, just wanted to fux with it in class

yeaa, thats my boy.

[centrysam]

yea ur right battle is a waste of time . seeing as . it dont matter wat i would post u could post a stick man an u would win

[dankbudz]

yo centry, you say you can bust out a burner in an hour? you want to battle?

[centrysam]

. never said i could bust a burner in an hour . i post in toy threads so i cant really burn . i try . but ... can deff bust a piece in an hour . and im only interested in battling rib ... got no beef with u .

[H1P30N3R]

Ill burn all you biatches !!!

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

trying to test your skillz mang!!!!!! hokay, 30 seconds, word is "phazer". ready go!!!!!

[centrysam]

Humor is laughin at ur wackness

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

youre a fat loser and you have body odor

BURNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOT HIMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGG GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGg

so pro dude. you are the best in the toy thread, hands down man. will you exchange with man?! please o please o please!!! gotta have a paper with some weird half open bars and a dozen arrows so i can bitez that shit!!!!

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

and on a final note...

so thats it . not commenting on no more of ur posts ..


wait what?

[dankbudz]

lol^
common... battle me, I'm bored, you can pick the word...

[centrysam]

might as well bite me . ull never come up with a decent anythin . ever .
because ur wack. even with 7 24 hour days u still had nothin hahahahhahah . its amazing. ...... u could have sketched a letter a day an still had time to fill it . and STILL . u shit the bed ahahahahhahahahahahahhhhahahahahahhaha ... . u coulda called ur friends,( which u probly did ,) and got them to help u in a giant retartard REACH around sketech fest an still . u managed to fail .

[dankbudz]

so... yes?

[centrysam]

yea sure tomorrow when i get home from work . ill battle u . and u can pick the word ...

[akaSKIZ]

yoooo why dont you dudes just do like a battle for real and stop runnin your mouths.. haha

Personally i think humor's stuff is probly some of the best in this toy section (other than me........ hahahahahaha sikee i suck) but the only good way to prove that is to battle so stop blowin up this page and draw! lol

[TastyMcNasty]

what the fuck is going on in this thread lol

[DEMPO]

Leave me out of it b.
Yall dumb

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

sams man, you know why I gave him a week to do a sketch right? Cause I dont have the time to sketch everyday. I have what normal people call a schedule. Its this little thing you do everyday in order to have a happy life. I took 3 days, about 2-3 hours a piece on 2 sketchs. I picked the one I liked best. Im sorry that my sketch isnt to your liking bro. but it doesnt make you better, sowwy frowny face frowny face frowny face.

You know samuel, you can look at my pen freebies in my thread, or my old throws(that rhaped your old throws LOLOLOLOLOL) or a strange battle piece, and my words of truth towards you and youre work, and you can dislike them all you want. It makes me happy and joyous. This alone has turned my day from a 9/10 to a 10/10. thanks bro <3

[dankbudz]

me gusta

centry- REDRUM work for ya?

[MN Nice]

I think we're all wondering why you didn't enter that second piece instead...

[DEMPO]

@Physh Love how you're steppin outside the box. Good shit.
@Neer The top of the right leg of the R get's too skinny and the extensions looks out of place, maybe try covering half of it with the letter?
@Sol The bottom of the S get's a wee bit skinny but overall looks really nice.

Paint marker ran out on me while filling the last letter. (Not saying D...) looks sloppy.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_81199772x-1.jpg
Didnt notice this, cred

[uknowigetup]

Repost, critz please. Probably painting this tomorrow.
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120425_164421.jpg

[dankbudz]

dont paint it, its weak

[H1P30N3R]

dont paint it bro go way simpler like what im working on a simple straight....the e's look deformed the connections are wack, your skipping steps you dont dunk before you learn to do layups. crits please trying to get a simple straight together to paint this weekend at a chill spot.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_010011.jpg

[Kaze]

P looks a little fat at the top, i like your K and the upside down R is trippy

[dankbudz]

i dunked before i lay upped muhhh fucka!

but uh, your vertical bars are all a bit off, like the K is slight going right and the P slight to the left and the K bar is thin and the P bar is fatter that O is better but still fat on the right, thin on the left and thinnest on the top left. cool idea on the R but id save that idea for a lil. you got the letters, and structure. you just gotta keep doing what your doing and you will master them letters on that basic level which is kinda the 1st step i guess. but if you paint it try and put a lil bit of steeze, as is curving the bar n shit. not what Uknowigetup did.

[H1P30N3R]

word I see that I gotta kinda step back away from the paper and get the bigger picture. I just gotta draw it 100's of times just like a throw I guess.. atleast Im on the right track appreciate you always giving me crits/pointers. I will draw it quite a few more times until I am atleast semi satisfied on paper before i try a wall. Fuckin toy forum has been flooded with kids thinking they just start out as revok or some shit.

[dankbudz]

yup, its just practice practice practice, different words help too. and no problem on the crits, you aren't gay like 90% of the people on here and you offer good crits on my throws, so you deserve some real crits that aren't from fags like axil and uknowigetup

[Kaze]

sloppy and still needs work, should probably go more simple but anyways crits appreciated.
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[cred1384]

Nіgga please

this post made my fucking night.

[Willis1989]

How long do most writers wait before they start painting walls/trains?

Did these two last night, trying to do characters more I know they suck but can I get crits on letters? Thanks

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-25083315.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-26082103.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-26082114.jpg

[uknowigetup]

yup, its just practice practice practice, different words help too. and no problem on the crits, you aren't gay like 90% of the people on here and you offer good crits on my throws, so you deserve some real crits that aren't from fags like axil and uknowigetup

Go cry to an admin about it <3.

[H1P30N3R]

willis I would say as long as your comfortable on paper start with a chill wall then work toward freights... but then again it is never to early to get a little can control under your belt. Even if your letters are off executing them with paint and gaining can experience always helps in the end.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_124853.jpg

[MN Nice]

Get them closer to each other now

[PETER]

hipe the right side of your K is out of proportion. I suggest keeping the legs on the K and R straight for now.

[H1P30N3R]

thanks for crits looking any better? I now see the k has a bigger tilt on it.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_144343.jpg

[BigFaggot]

66457 quickie, crits yo.

[H1P30N3R]

looks good mildstyles having an identity crisis?

[Kaze]

willis-maybe lose the extension on ur L in the 1st and 3rd picture. i like your E and D in your second picture but just keep practicing. practice your smurf character, its weak right now but better then i can do and in time if you keep practicing it, it will be a dope ass character to put up in spots... if your going to paint stick to tags and throwies, dont attempt burners or a straight letter yet....maybe attempt a straight letter after some practice but just stick to mainly tags and throwies for now if ur going out painting. just keep practicing simpler stuff. your second photo is good just work on the L and W the most, E and D i like but still needs more work as do i lol.

looking clean Hipe, make your letters bit closer to together, mainly the P and R, the space in-between in the two kinda puts it off. your R's first bar seems to go from skinny to fat but maybe thats just me, if your going to make your K's two smaller bars with that fat to skinny look, you should do it with your R as well, like the leg thing connecting your R's circular part if you get what im saying, sounds kind of confusing. your 3d looks good but maybe your O should have a bit more? keep it up

i like your N and R BigF. i dont like the top bar on your E's though, maybe give it a bit of a dip or somthing and dont have it come back as far behind the letter. maybe make the top of the E one closed off bar or like leave a little gap and then draw the bottom part. the bottom part is nice i think, just keep practicing and get it more clean and what not...yours seems to be cleaner then mine though ahah

Can i plz get some crits on the pictures i posted before??

[PETER]

Kaze. Straight letters. that is all.

[Kaze]

thanks peter, so i should just lose all the bends and shit? should i just toss out and scratch the idea i had there or go more simple and try to build into it rather then jump some steps.

[Shit Outta Luck]

word I see that I gotta kinda step back away from the paper and get the bigger picture. I just gotta draw it 100's of times just like a throw I guess.. atleast Im on the right track appreciate you always giving me crits/pointers. I will draw it quite a few more times until I am atleast semi satisfied on paper before i try a wall. Fuckin toy forum has been flooded with kids thinking they just start out as revok or some shit.
Yes! Always take a step back and look at your shit! When painting or drawing, it helps so much and that last part is true as well.


quickie, crits yo.
I can tell you're homies with Naked, ya got similar letters. But forreal straight letters for awhile or just fix these, the bar widths are all off. The left side of the Es, the right side of the R, the bottom right of the N. Fix it.

[Mildstyles]

Nice N bigfaggot
Im about to flood this cuz ive been gone a little while.
Judging by all the Fuck you pieces I guess I've been in a good mood lately huh?
and a Gees piece for eyecandy
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[Mildstyles]

Rewz shut up its all joins ha

[rewz]

664806648166482 someone batlle me.

[BigFaggot]

@shit otta luck, haha yea people say that, thatnks for the crit ill put it to use
@MildStyles haha shut meng you stole my N. and that was me on rewz, i forgot i was on his and posted.

[MN Nice]

You guys could just like, hang out with each other instead of talking on a forum...

Just a thought.

[Mildstyles]

No way hes a bigfaggot

[BigFaggot]

yea thats true, iam.
@MN haha, yea i feel ya.

[BigFaggot]

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[MTK]

66489 humor exchange 66490 top one i did 66491 thinkin bout a throwie

[ven0m]

shit you haven't progressed an inch... I say it's a sign you should probably find a new hobby

[MTK]

thanks for the helpful crit,, dick

[H1P30N3R]

that was a very helpful crit he gave you imo.

[Shit Outta Luck]

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Bottom right leg of the R is to thin. Fix dat mutha fuckaa
Naked haha the first Fuck looks like Euck...and Gees is killin it.

The first one of these is like 1-2 months old, I don't think I ever posted it.
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[Mildstyles]

Paint that top one

[Shit Outta Luck]

I was gonna today...but I wasn't sure. It didn't feel right...I dunno it felt like I was biting someone.
Thanks.

[Mildstyles]

Forgot to post this little sticker, crits on it?
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[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

i know u like that A, but if your going to do it, make a balance of the letters that have it. You cant just put some strange non connected style A thats the second letter in a 5 letter word in a piece that has every single other letter normal, ya dig? If you want to make only one letter different from the rest in terms of style, do it to your middle letter. If you make an E with that kind of overlapped seperate bar look, that would give the piece balance. understand?

that e could easily be an upside down version of the a, so it shouldnt be difficult for you

[Mildstyles]

yeah i feel you. i will try that the next time i do a piece like that. thanks man

[kwu]

bump this is sick


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[cred1384]

@Sol that blue fill sticker is nicee.
@Atma i love your steez man so dope.

Exchange with Antik1
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_24509942x.jpg

[kwu]

thank you
some more simple shit for your retinas
tired of looking at these I need to switch it up
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[Mildstyles]

My retinas thank you

[DUEN]

@Vemon ,Dude, who the fuk are you to say that to someone? This is why its called a TOYS thread? People that are not very good come here? Just cause he not the best yet don't mean he should give up... Respect other writers? No hating just saying....

[cred1384]

@Vemon ,Dude, who the fuk are you to say that to someone? This is why its called a TOYS thread? People that are not very good come here? Just cause he not the best yet don't mean he should give up... Respect other writers? No hating just saying....



Who cares man. If someone says your shit's wack than either respect it as an opinion and try to learn from it or say fuck it and do your thing. Less arguing more sketching.

Flick for talk, a pen freestyle from class. Not very clean and the D is squished cause i ran outa space.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_89769222x.jpg

[MN Nice]

Lol phat ain't the first one to say it, so don't flip out on only him. And frankly I agree with him. You can tell when someone has potential.

[uknowigetup]

shit you haven't progressed an inch... I say it's a sign you should probably find a new hobby

C'mon mang, unless MTK is a straight asshole/you guys have previous beef, this is a bit uncalled for. You are a good ass writer, so help out those who are just starting or not as good as you. So much of the drama on here is unnecessary. Additionally, you're a moderator dude, you should set a good example for other members.

[BigFaggot]

I know everybodys gunna tell me to drop the drips alredy haha, just some experiment, over tired shit. not finished yet, ill color it soon.
66534

[Mildstyles]

drop the drips...

not bad

[H1P30N3R]

uh oh naked got a gang of homies in here now !! If your assembling a crew you better have strict rules like dmgraff (fight to the death)

[Mildstyles]

Hahaha i did not cause this ^^^
and yes our super crew fights to the death and no writing on anything illegal...and stuff. more r00lez later
Exchange with mues, my s... :(
66535

Got bored...crits?
66551

[DUEN]

Who cares man. If someone says your shit's wack than either respect it as an opinion and try to learn from it or say fuck it and do your thing. Less arguing more sketching.

Flick for talk, a pen freestyle from class. Not very clean and the D is squished cause i ran outa space.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_89769222x.jpg

I agree, but saying to give up all together?....
ANYWAYS, nice piece, just with your E the middle bar of it, trying making it shorter? Don't know if it will work but something to try out.

[ven0m]

I'll tell you who I am, DUEN, I'm someone who's been here long enough to be able to tell when someone is meant for graffiti or not... it's not a trend, it's not something anyone can adapt to and become part of over night... CRED up there has been here about just a month and progressed over 500% more than MTK had in a whole year.
I've seen users signing up with shit works, being told how to do it, and fixing themselves to the point they're at now. people like MN nice, Dankbudz, Cred, Flatskank etc have all listened to crits and progressed and got better with time. I've also seen other users signing up with shit works, being told how to do it, and not listening, or not getting it and staying where they're at forever, in which case they either stay here and annoy us with crap posts and get hated on, or they just take the hint and leave and use their time for something more constructive.

I've seen a lot.. enough to be able to say such words to someone. If I couldn't back it up, I wouldn't say it.
Also, if I'm a moderator, it doesn't mean I have to sugarcoat shit, instead, I need to increase this forum's quality, even if it's the toy part... this is what the guy needs to hear, it better come from a stranger on the internet than from someone important..

[gemer]

Good shit Dank.

2 different but similar simples.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_2_83339892x.jpg

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_2_58905942x.jpg

a post by cred 3-22-2012 thumbs up dude

[rewz]

66534[/QUOTE]

HA. how many times you got to erase your lines

[cred1384]

I agree, but saying to give up all together?....
ANYWAYS, nice piece, just with your E the middle bar of it, trying making it shorter? Don't know if it will work but something to try out.

@Gemer and Venom - much love to the both of you.
@Duen Thanks for the crit, i see what you mean on the E, i gotta mess with it a bit. About giving it up, just because someone tells you to give up doesn't mean you have to do it. If it really get's under your skin than work your ass off and prove them wrong.

[PETER]

Damn Cred that is sick. Thank you!

[Shit Outta Luck]

BigFaggot with the drips!

Pen freestylin
66571

[Norfsuthr]

get some steez on the end of those L's

[uknowigetup]

Ignore the shitty acrylic background and the whack bubbles, critz?

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120427_150215.jpg

[dankbudz]

i would give you crits cause you really need them, but i fuckin hate you... soooo....

[cred1384]

^lol
@Sol Looking good. The top bar of the O is a wee bit small, if ya tweak and then maybe try making the top left extension of the O reach the top of the S. Love how well you pull off simps.

Exchange with Naked, don't have any tape or glue so had to staple the pages together...
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_370702x-1.jpg

[Big Africa]

http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/Graff/2012-04-27164140.jpg

I know the O isn't the best but Critz anyway

[DUEN]

See Cred, I think that looks quite nice on the E, that middle bit shorter on Nakeds, good stuff keep it up.

[DEMPO]

66597
bigafrica, I assume your writing drem, was there some structure b4 your sharpie?
cred, your style almost seems to become consistent and I have a difficult time buying your date of beginning. Regardless you've become an inspiration to all of us.
uknow, those branches on all your bars seems to not flow very well.
sol, the way you almost have flow is because you (like me) have not got to the point where u end your letters with style.
neer, you've got more flo than I do bro but at the same time your not as good as naked. no offense see his bars and yours its easy to agree.

[Mildstyles]

rEWZ IS BETTER THAN ME LOLZ

oh wait unless you're talking about the picture he bumped, that was bigfaggot.

[MASTAH_RIBCAGE]

rewz/geez scrapes yall. he belongs in the intermediate thread no doubt

[Shit Outta Luck]

get some steez on the end of those L's
But how? I been messing with em but haven't found anything that works...yet.


^lol
@Sol Looking good. The top bar of the O is a wee bit small, if ya tweak and then maybe try making the top left extension of the O reach the top of the S. Love how well you pull off simps.
Cred whadda ya mean by making the top left extension of the O? And thanks haha

[DEMPO]

oops i ment bigfaggot sry... haha

[cred1384]

@Sol The horizontal bar that reaches towards the S. Might be worth a try who knows.

Sloppy fill.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_4373272x.jpg

[Big Africa]

@ DEMPO i actually write orem, but there was some structure before my sharpie my marker skills are just lackin

[DEMPO]

@ bigafrica its school just next time you post acknowledge the crit and post a pic(of your next try) with your comment/crit.

[BigFaggot]

66620 Dropped most of the drips, left the bottoms fo flava.

[Quote1]

1st try at a wildstyle
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[Strange Journeys]

nah man go simple, it dont look good

[DaFugg]

Go simple Africa.

[dark2]

66654

[ven0m]

cred how the fuck did you do that fill?

[centrysam]

^ i was thinkin the same thing .. cred is pretty good

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7099/6975187316_547ca89308.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6975187316/)
IMG_0249 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/humorone/6975187316/) by centrysams (http://www.flickr.com/people/humorone/), on Flickr

[cred1384]

cred how the fuck did you do that fill?

It was sort of a flook how it came out. I used various shades of decocolor paint pens faded for the base layer, and prisma's on top using colorless blender to spread out the shades. Came out fancier than expected, looks a bit blotchy though.

@Centry thanks man.
@Soda Watcht the negative space on your S. You have lines representin all of the holes on your other letters but on the S you have gaps, try to keep it all consistent.

Flick for talk, black and white of the last one just cleaner. Need to figure out better positioning for my E or something, it's always hiding behind my R.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_65996502x.jpg

[GpersKreepers]

can i get a crit on this, is this style too much of a push or what?

http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02673.jpg

[Friz_One]

http://www.bildites.lv/images/c19iuq6oy7u76awehkn.jpg

[PETER]

Cred: It's tight as fuck. looks like spray paint. You're workin' out the bottom of that E. It's a bit hidden now though.... but honestly who cares you've about got it down. start moving your 3d perspective.
Gpers. I love that name. Is it too much of a push?... Yes, but it's not a huge stretch. Drop the arrows and some of the extra shit. Your bar consistency needs a bit of work but you're close. Draw what you have there, but with just straight letters and we'll go from there.

[dankbudz]

gpers, im diggggin that style, i just think it could be cleaned up in some places

[H1P30N3R]

I like the grimeyness of the style gpers
friz start all over keyboard letters

crits please I know I should keep my shit straight and simple. But I gotta experiment to develop... but Im lookin for crits on structure and 3d

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120428_174517.jpg

[Norfsuthr]

^3d is fucked around the O. Just draw lines coming off the corners in the exact same direction every time, then draw the 3d on. It looks like you do that, just gotta be more precise.
Oh yeah the bottom right of the K is probly where you went wrong on 3d.

Structure of the O needs work, pretty good bar consistency everywhere else.

[Kaze]

like norfsuthr said the 3d on your O is kinda messed up. On your P it looks like it rises before it turns and drops down to complete the circle of the P. Maybe make your R closer to your P, other then the O's 3d it looks cool.

Drew this with out a ruler so there is lots of areas that are off. crits please
66797

[Shit Outta Luck]

Crits on this rugged marker freestyle?
66829

[DEMPO]

66831
crits plz.
sol, the 3d on the bottom of ur S is a lil off, im not feelin those cuts on ur letters yet.
kaser, best not to use a ruler. those blocks on ur S and R should be bar width matching your other letters.
kopr, try not using structure on your O, your good at throws so an O should be easy for you. imo

[H1P30N3R]

yea I like the o in this piece but I need to take a step back with big tweaks and rock simps for a while...

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_232051.jpg

[Kaze]

looks cool sol, your S looks top heavy though and the cut on your L is off.

thanks for the crits dempo i appreciate it, il fix that S and R bar width.
i dont really like the E but the proportion of your bars looks good. maybe with your M when it drops down and cuts inside, keep it straight and make it drop abit lower. even though its rising on an angle it looks like its still abit to high. the shadow looks good, maybe try putting the lines on the curves of the letters were it changes angles if you get what i meen

[Silky Johnson]

Some shit pictures on this page yall weak muhfukkas

[Mildstyles]

Because your comment totally just benefitted this page. Yall a weak mofucka

[H1P30N3R]

flooding this bitch today but crits please

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120428_211540.jpg

[Mildstyles]

pretty good but the K is too small and you probably should have let the O be regular and not have that bottom thing, but thats not bad at all. keep it up homes

[DRIG]

Some shit pictures on this page yall weak muhfukkas

Wow... wheres your dope shit silky? dont dish shit out unless you have backup. I dont have any pics up yet, therefore, ive got no business criting people, constructive or not. I reccomend you do the same. All youve posted on here so far is to the effect of "your shit sucks muhfukka". All 4 of your posts. Now, fuck off.

[Mildstyles]

Any crits on this little piece
66837

[dankbudz]

dope

[MN Nice]

Dat negative space. Work on it.

[Mildstyles]

Its hard nagger those letters loooove neg space, like the KED part. but thanks ill try some new junk

[cred1384]

@Naked I dig i dig. Only suggestion is the negative space and the top bar of the E looks a little funky.

Got a little sloppy on this one. Experimenting with extensions to fill negative space
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_85256062x-1.jpg

[Norfsuthr]

^youre good as fuck with shading and coloring. Nice one.

Might paint this banger
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7265/6977347586_037e7efb5a.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6977347586/)
photo-6 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/76434462@N08/6977347586/)

really though

[Kaze]

that looks dope norfsuthr, only thing i dont really like is the j but overal it looks sick i think

[H1P30N3R]

Its a concept that j is a dick and balls and the add ons are puddles of cum ...

[Mildstyles]

Cred i like the new style you been doing lately but in almost all of them the E looks off to me. in that last one its too small, try bringing the bottom bar of that E further down, basically just let the middle of that E breathe and break it up a little.

[Kaze]

Its a concept that j is a dick and balls and the add ons are puddles of cum ...
oh hahah, creative

[GpersKreepers]

Mildstyles, i think the big loop on the N makes it look too different from the other letters, maybe change that to make it more angular,
H1P31er, out of the three that have the red outline the last is the best, but try to make the K as big as the R,
Dempo, not sure why the e and b are so small, bar size anyway, and a lower case b for the end of a word doesn't work for me

couple pennies

[Shit Outta Luck]

Any crits on this little piece
66837
I dig that, alot. The bottom right of the N is a little big for my like though. But the colors are so pretty.

[MyTagNameIsDune]

This is some toy shit I did a while back. Felt like posting it just for kicks 66862

[MyTagNameIsDune]

This is also pretty toy even though it's my avatar right now but I might as well post it to the toy blackbook page. 66863

[GoPaintDay]

I was just messin around but what do u think of the clo at the bottom? 66864

[rewz]

^theirs a thread that you should go in before posting here its called new to graffiti of what ever its called. go there learn letter structure then come back and post something

[Beko]

Got a little sloppy on this one. Experimenting with extensions to fill negative space
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_85256062x-1.jpg

the 3D on the C at the bottom is off. it should go back like the vanashing point. instead you curved it up with it other than that its siick!

[TastyMcNasty]

everyone on this page, garbage. you need to go more simple.

[Norfsuthr]

the 3D on the C at the bottom is off. it should go back like the vanashing point. instead you curved it up with it other than that its siick!

youre not seeing it right.

[cred1384]

youre not seeing it right.

I just forgot to re-ink one of the 3d lines. And Tasty i feel ya, i got carried away with that one.

[IronyATB]

66891

Would like some crits please, I know I need to work on spacing (Mainly between the N R and D.)

[ComradeR]

that's dope Irony. like u said u need to work on the spacing

[uknowigetup]

i would give you crits cause you really need them, but i fuckin hate you... soooo....
...

when i ask for crits, I'm asking for crits from someone who's not a total fag, such as you.

[4menace2society0]

your still gettin up dawgggggggggg

[Norfsuthr]

u know it

[DEMPO]

smh

[cred1384]

your still gettin up dawgggggggggg

I mean his name says he does. so obviously he does...

Felt like coloring.. Pen exploded on the D letter right as i'm finishing up.. Never even attempting to draw ambient light with markers again..

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_16220972x-1.jpg

[IronyATB]

I mean his name says he does. so obviously he does...

Felt like coloring.. Pen exploded on the D letter right as i'm finishing up.. Never even attempting to draw ambient light with markers again..

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_16220972x-1.jpg

Cred I'd suck your dick if I could right now.

[cred1384]

Cred I'd suck your dick if I could right now.

haha you just won a spot in my sig!

[IronyATB]

haha you just won a spot in my sig!

Just as I clicked "post" I figured there would probably be a consequence of that post.

For real though, the lighting is great.

[uknowigetup]

your still gettin up dawgggggggggg

Hell yeah my dude. I stay up. Not about to get a new username just because I don't write know anymore haha. I expect you to troll at least 90% of my posts now that you're back.

[Mildstyles]

Irony.. I don't understand where that comment was even going.
All i got out of it is that was really really gay

[dankbudz]

yeah irony, you're just as gay as "uknowigetup"


need some crits on the monkey.., gonna have chains flying and breakin, but his arms are pretty fucked so i gotta fix that.

[uknowigetup]

.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TVicCD8FmMs&feature=youtu.be

[4menace2society0]

ohhp there he is again killinnn it

[MN Nice]

Try getting a better looking fist grabbing on the right. it looks kind of limp

[DEMPO]

6696866969
want this as a name change with a passion. lil pencil outline for some crits.
dank, nice concept we're waiting 2 see it filled in

[Kaze]

Dank- the picture looks cool so far, maybe with the monkeys left arm have it giving the middle finger or holding a 40 or some shit like that lol.
Dempo- the agida looks good i think, a name change could be good, do it up if you really want to. I like how the G and D come out of your I like that. and who is holding that massive bowl or chronic in it??? those nugs look to big to be real lol

Would appreciate crits on these pieces of shit, fucked up on the R.
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[H1P30N3R]

dank - goin ape shit homie I dig the face just touch up his arms your characters are boss!!
agida - top of the g is a little off and I really dont dig the the off set legs on the a's , but that could be just personal preference. But overall it looks alot cleaner than your recent work so keep at it.

thinking of a name change myself "nephu" didn't have room for the u but I dig the name and the letters for pieces seem to fit together well.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120429_212403.jpg

[dankbudz]

thanks mayne.
id advice refraining from changing your name unless someone in your area already writes it and is up.
if your having trouble with the KOPR i was gonna suggest earlier tryng KOPER

crits on that though, id of done and uppercase N, personally. but the lil extension on the foot is a no go right now, also the top of the N gets a lil thin. not really feel in the boxy P. and If you made the middle bar of the E the same size its kill some space. try pulling your letters closer in together. , just some thoughts. keep up the work

kaser- man theres alotta kaser's out there.. think I've told you that before. good use of bars i guess, just make your S curve and Your top R curve. don't hid ethe leg of the A behind the K like that

[Kaze]

hipeoner-3d in your P is wak, and make it closer to your E

[Kaze]

thanks dank i appreciate the crits. il think of another name, i only used kase/kaser for throwies and straightletters cuz i like the letter combo but il think of somthing else lol. if i have the A's leg infront of the K then wont it like throw off the angle its on? or should i just make all my letters further away from eachother?

[H1P30N3R]

thanks mayne.
id advice refraining from changing your name unless someone in your area already writes it and is up.
if your having trouble with the KOPR i was gonna suggest earlier tryng KOPER

crits on that though, id of done and uppercase N, personally. but the lil extension on the foot is a no go right now, also the top of the N gets a lil thin. not really feel in the boxy P. and If you made the middle bar of the E the same size its kill some space. try pulling your letters closer in together. , just some thoughts. keep up the work

kaser- man theres alotta kaser's out there.. think I've told you that before. good use of bars i guess, just make your S curve and Your top R curve. don't hid ethe leg of the A behind the K like that

Yea thats a solid idea ill try the koper ... I was just frustrated paintin my first simp today the o is a bitch to make perfect on a wall. But then again it was my first attempt. Thanks for the crits I need to try different letters to gain experience anyway. Ive only drew about 15 -20 simps I just need to get down on my spacing next. Question do you all add your 3d as you complete each letter or after you do all letters?

kase - try out nephu lol you might like it

[dankbudz]

space it out. it take some tweaking of the K and A from the looks.

[Silky Johnson]

naw I hit him wit da a to da k muhfukka!

[Mildstyles]

I want to see this kid post a picture^
or just shut up. Either one works.

[Silky Johnson]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120426_165433.jpg

THERE YA GO MUHFUKKA !

[Mildstyles]

One of your own created things**
H1p3 crushes you hahaha

[H1P30N3R]

yea the alter ego wasn't as amusing as I had thought it would be.

[Mildstyles]

yeah you crush yourself, muhfukka

[Kaze]

lol hipeoner i could try it but i cant do P's...i guess i gotta learn all letters eventually, i was thinking of either going back to my old one seak, or maybe try something like Ashmuk, like that jewish word shmuk..thought it would be funny but i dono still trying to decide. i add the 3d after i draw the outline most of the time but sometimes i add in 3d after each letter too...dono if u were asking me though cuz i suck

thanks dank, il space them out more then what i got now.

[H1P30N3R]

lol muhfukka dave chappelle, gotta love that guy.

[Beko]

I just forgot to re-ink one of the 3d lines.
okay i see it now!

[Beko]

the O bothers me a lot! crits appreciated!
66993

[cred1384]

@Beko the K looks nice, the wobble in the O looks strange you're right. the top of the E looks iffy as well, maybe try making it expand a bit like the bottom right leg of the k?

Improving my structure.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_2_76947152x.jpg

[HëRbN]

your D could be confused for an O and i dont like how short the left leg on the R is but other than that i love your style. nice work

[Kaze]

beko- like both you and cred said, the O is weird. i like your T and and K though and the bottom part of your E is nice. maybe with the middle bar of your E have it coming out a little bit in the back of the E if u know what i meen. the shading looks good too i think.

Cred- as usual it looks pretty fucking dope from my stand point lol. only thing i dont really like is the left leg on your R and that thing ontop of your D that comes out to the right looks kinda weird, sorta makes it looks like a crazy J lol. other then that though i like the D and i think your E is sick.

[Willis1989]

Cred - Like the piece but not really feeling the top of the D
Kote - Id move the K over a little, feel free to ignore me but It looks like its taking to much off the O
4Eyes - Dont like the top of the Es and S otherwise the throws are ok

I fucked up most of these, thought id post em anyway, fuck Ws I started writing Lead instead of Lewd cuz just cant do Ws and Ive been doing Ws since my first name twice as long as my other letters, I think the LEAD looks better anyway, could I get some crits on these?

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081117.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081133.jpg?t=1335776351

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081140.jpg?t=1335776351

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081048.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081105.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-04-30081057.jpg

[IronyATB]

@Lewd your fills need work, too messy.

Also graff culture is too homophobic, I plan to change that. Embrace the dick, become the dick.

[Willis1989]

yea not too bothered about colours atm just letters, just coloured it to fuck around

[MN Nice]

Some exchanges

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/214c91e8.jpg?t=1335475171

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/c6c0ab5a.jpg?t=1335501085

[kwu]

^ dope these letters suit your style more

havent given crits in a while but i see some worth mentioning
Lewd/Lead n Kote, just avoid the extra kinks, bends and extentions, and focus on the movement of the bars, the illest simples in my opinion dont need all that extra shit if the flow is on point
Cred, I kno you're trying to develop your style, and your structure is improving quick, but keep practicing simples cause that shit will help you figure out how your letters best coincide and where you can kill negative space without throwing in the extra ish.

recents
67113
67114

[dankbudz]

that shit is straight fressh, atma

[H1P30N3R]

thats dope shit atma only thing I dislike is the philly get you a swisher lol

[Mildstyles]

Atma i love the 2 page ones. And that last one is so dope.
Cred thats much better but fix yo D

[Reality]

Opinions? Somewhat new to graffiti. Practiced for quite some time. Some suck, some are better.

6718467185671866718767188

[no-sleep]

you WILL get better just keep practicing

[DEMPO]

67198
trying to do @ least one sketch each day. wish I had the patience to do more.

[dankbudz]

if you are trying to improve, dempo, the advice id give is to not color your work for a while. just stick with black sharpie and pencil. youll get twice as much done... which should lead to quicker improvement.

gotta start coloring my older shit, just got a new black sharpie so i can outline fuck ya...

[Kaze]

^^Reality- like no-sleep said, just keep practicing and you will see improvement. its good that your practicing lots of different letters but you should pick a name and practice that and try to master it, its still good to experiment with other shit too though, just concentrate mainly on what you write. keep it up

Dempo- your letters look cool but i dont really like the coloring in there. the shadowing looks good i think, try to push your self to draw 2-6 sketches each day or something. patience will grow

dank- i think that looks sick, the one thing i dont really like is the D but it doesnt look bad, better then what i can do. the streaks looks good and i like the concept with your E and O...the ripped neck character is dope too

[cred1384]

@Dank that M and S are poppin' Good shit man.
@Dempo very nice. The middle bar of the G maybe should go behind the curving bar on the left? shit idk haha

Fucked up this fill.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_44983572x.jpg

[Friidom]

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reposting for crits
ignore the terrible fill I had no good markers to use

[Reality]

Thanks for feedback no-sleep and Kaze. Will def keep practicing.

[EWL24]

cred - that E is sick and i like how it matches the C. the D i think looks a lot like an O though
Friidom - work on bars and keyboard letters

[H1P30N3R]

yeah I should have used a ruler to make my vanishing point lines cleaner and fucked up the line to the leg of my r .... any other crits ?

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_005250.jpg

[dankbudz]

the O is a no go, loose those lines in the letters. you want to get your letters down before you mess with that. and pic a vanishing point that compliments your piece. id try something to fill the neg space between the P and R. and don't draw your lines all the way to the vanishing point. and there is also no need to use a ruler, looks clean as is

[Kaze]

^that looks good, maybe make your O a litttle bit smaller and the circular part on your P, the first bar on your R looks a little crooked. i like those lines u have coming out of the centre point of your o, p and r, the one on the O is a little crooked it looks but thats minor. other then that it looks nice and clean

[H1P30N3R]

yea the koper would help with the negative space. Ill have to work on the vanishing point shit that was my first go at it. And the o well fuck an o lol gonna have all kind of fun gettin them down. but thanks for the crits

2 -3 weeks of piecing still the 0 is annoying is that normal ?

[Kaze]

O's just seem like there a pain in the ass to make perfect.

[H1P30N3R]

november 2006 you joined ??? wtf just noticed that, 6 years and you dont even have a name ?

[BoostIt]

Crits? I know i fucked up the 3d on the top of the E and the letters aren't all the same proportion. Not feeling the L or the E, ran out of room on the edge of the paper..just trying to work out my own style

http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120501_014008.jpg

[braxtons a g]

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A sneak peak of a pack i just sent out, Dont mind that gay shit in the background. lol
Just trying new stuff out

[dankbudz]

I've gotta take a fat shit. mind if i use the sticker as teepee?

[DaFugg]

How the hell do you write "SELDOM" on a piece of average sized paper. I'm about to kill myself.

[braxtons a g]

I've gotta take a fat shit. mind if i use the sticker as teepee?

Thats all you partner, Just stick that shit when your finished

[DaFugg]

Struggling with the S. not a fan of it in general but I need to widen my ability in writing more than just MK. Lol
Crits? Btw, exchange.
http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/f001611e.jpg

[Friidom]

boost-left leg of the a looks disconnected and I'm not really feelin how the top of the e covers the middle bar. also the handy looks like it says ENAMT so fix up the l
dafugg-i like the d but not really feelin the bottom bit of the e and maybe add a little more flavor to the L but overall not bad at all

no fill on this one, crits appreciated
my e's kinda hiding too much behind my O but I like my m and s
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[BoostIt]

just finished this one, did the whole thing in bars first and i like it a lot better than freehanding it. also tried some new tags at the top of the paper.

Crits? I thought the mixed colors would turn out better so if i painted this piece it would probably be a solid fill
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120501_121631.jpg

[Big Africa]

http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/Graff/simps.jpg

Critz por favor, I know the O is lopsided I forgot to make it larger at the top and my marker skils still be lackin but im workin on them

[Friidom]

boost-left leg of the a looks disconnected and I'm not really feelin how the top of the e covers the middle bar. also the handy looks like it says ENAMT so fix up the l
dafugg-i like the d but not really feelin the bottom bit of the e and maybe add a little more flavor to the L but overall not bad at all

no fill on this one, crits appreciated
my e's kinda hiding too much behind my O but I like my m and s
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bringin it over from bottom of last page

[cred1384]

@Frii try to keep your bar size more consistent. and your letters are too squished.

Messing with perspective
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_0_87749182x.jpg

[PETER]

not feeling that R at all. I don't like the left* leg of it. You seem to be getting your E worked out though. That hand needs help too!

[Mildstyles]

This thread....
Not done yet, still space for juan more person and a background
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[H1P30N3R]

Word I think that r can be a easy fix tho cred. Like the leg on your c almost looks like it could naturally be the r's leg also jus a thought with a little tweaking..I may be off to cause idk alot on piecing.

[H1P30N3R]

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_161107.jpg

[DaFugg]

Put the O on a diet

[PETER]

KOPR. Try making your O out of two bars and give them a similar flex to the rest of your letters. Bend the left bar like the left of the K and the right bar like the bottom of the K and R, just stretched out. Just make sure to connect them so that it is clear it's an O. Idk if it will work, but it's worth a shot. Maybe shape the top like the top of the P and R.

[uknowigetup]

Critz? Its not great but its the only thing I've felt like uploading recently.
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120501_171239.jpg

[dankbudz]

so did you punk outta the battle? or are you gonna reply... pussy

oh and that page is dope, naked

[Shit Outta Luck]

Naked I'm diggin that. The GEES dude...but your K-E leaves a bit too much space I think.