Blackbooks

[H1P30N3R]

KOPR. Try making your O out of two bars and give them a similar flex to the rest of your letters. Bend the left bar like the left of the K and the right bar like the bottom of the K and R, just stretched out. Just make sure to connect them so that it is clear it's an O. Idk if it will work, but it's worth a shot. Maybe shape the top like the top of the P and R.

solid idea wish I had thought that while sketching. thanks man

[Kaze]

mild styles those all look dope, only thing i can say is maybe maybe make your E of naked abit closer to the other letters but other then that it looks cool.

uknowigetup- i like your 3d shading on it, your last E seems to be bigger then the first one, but maybe thats just me, it looks like you messed up one of ur 3d bars on the M but other then those things i think looks good. just keep doing it and make it more tidy and what not

hipe- that idea peter said about the O sounds cool, i like your k and the bend on the letters, maybe try to incorporate those curves you have on the P and R on top your K somehow. the O is kinda big but Os just r a pain in the ass, overall it looks good and clean

[Mildstyles]

Thanks all and yeah the KE is always hard to work out, but I'm gonna try.
And i had to color the gees cuz he left...my brain pretty much died trying to keep up with his blueprints im not ready for complex hahaha

[DaFugg]

http://i112.photobucket.com/albums/n193/Hatchetwarrior1246/f8e91bfd.jpg
Crits?

[Friidom]

seld-fatten up the left half of the m its lookin a little anorexic but im diggin the D a lot

[dankbudz]

ill pm your exchange in a day or some with some crits on yours, dafuug

[no-sleep]

characters are mine rest is my boy
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[DaFugg]

Don't hold back. I know that it's pretty wack, it's nice stepping out of my comfort zone though, thank dude
Nosleep that's pretty dope, I can't draw like that but the shit looks a little unoriginal, no offense just played out a bit, still good. Not a fan of those throws though.

[no-sleep]

Don't hold back. I know that it's pretty wack, it's nice stepping out of my comfort zone though, thank dude
Nosleep that's pretty dope, I can't draw like that but the shit looks a little unoriginal, no offense just played out a bit, still good. Not a fan of those throws though.

oh of course its unoriginal i only wish i could think of characters like that, and my boys still workin on em hes gotten alot better

[DaFugg]

The last one is the worst spaced randomly and no letter structure. The second one is just inconsistent and I don't like. The first one, is best but still needs more work, you can't make out any of the letters at all.

[no-sleep]

[QUOTE=DaFugg;1794260]The last one is the worst spaced randomly and no letter structure. The second one is just inconsistent and I don't like. The first one, is best but still needs more work, you can't make out any of the letters at all.[/QU

ill be sure to tell him

[TastyMcNasty]

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0075.jpg

[no-sleep]

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[Kaze]

that looks pretty cool dafugg, i like the top part of your E but i think the bottom part of your D is too fat but its a cool idea. i like your O just maybe make a litttle bit smaller and your M is nice just make it a little bigger lol...overal though i think its pretty cool looking

tastymcnasty- i think that throw is fucking sick.

no sleep- those characters are cool, your first one on the other page is my fav, the others could use work but still alot better then wat i can do. i like your friends simpler graff work too

[no-sleep]

that looks pretty cool dafugg, i like the top part of your E but i think the bottom part of your D is too fat but its a cool idea. i like your O just maybe make a litttle bit smaller and your M is nice just make it a little bigger lol...overal though i think its pretty cool looking

tastymcnasty- i think that throw is fucking sick.

no sleep- those characters are cool, your first one on the other page is my fav, the others could use work but still alot better then wat i can do. i like your friends simpler graff work too

thanks what u think of the letters?

[TastyMcNasty]

no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well

EDIT:
it;s like the blind leading the blind in here.
before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site.

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April 2012
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[Mildstyles]

that grand theft auto page is so nice though, i like that

[Kaze]

thanks what u think of the letters?
no sleep- letters wise i like the bottum 2 pics, i think that R is dope. and yeh that gta one that you did is dope lol

[Friidom]

no sleep-too many arrows, simp it up a bit. i really like the orange one, maybe lean your c a little more so it touches the top of the r

[no-sleep]

no sleep, you're trying too hard. you're not good enough, in my opinion, to be working on two pagers. you need to get structure down better. lose any addons to letters as well

EDIT:
it;s like the blind leading the blind in here.
before no-sleep gets too much of an ego, and never simple-s up: you kinda suck. i am saying this for your benefit. cause if you get a big head now, you'll never learn the basics, and never progress. it took a lot of getting shit on to get to where i am now, even then i'm still not great. but i'm better. just for shits n gigs i'll show my progression since i joined this site.

Sep 2010
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April 2012
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ight ill take what you said into consideration, when i have some more time ill upload afew more pictures

[no-sleep]

also the first picture is from the beginning of summer at that time i was only writing for around 9-10 months, i try to stay away from arrows as best as i can now

[DaFugg]

Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.

[TastyMcNasty]

Tasty, that pic is bad, but I love your through dude. I can't speak for the bottom bit. Not really feeling the second one at all TBH.

shit ****** you just went full on retard. never go full on retard.

and no-sleep, atta be.

[BigFaggot]

both pretty sloppy, plenty of mistakes. seconds a work in progress. 6742867429

[no-sleep]

i like the set of E's in the first one

[getpaiddaily]

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A little thing i made up for a friend how is it?

[Mildstyles]

Nice shopping cart neer
that first one isnt even bad yo
But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking

[DaFugg]

I hate iPhones. Autocorrect I grammar-retarded.

[DaFugg]

FULL grammar retard.

[BigFaggot]

thanks no sleep.
Naked, What shopping cart? hahaha, thanks man, and i know the Rs need work, i wanna kick em out more and make the bottom bar that comes back in more symmetrical with the N's, but i always run out of space.

[MN Nice]

Nice shopping cart neer
that first one isnt even bad yo
But you need to work on your R's cuz both of them could use some tweaking

Its a dog kennel. I'll put $5 on it.

[BigFaggot]

Its a dog kennel. I'll put $5 on it.
hahahaha, you guessed it meng.

[MN Nice]

Awwww yeeeee.

Mild, you never said you WON'T take the bet, so therefore you owe me 5 dollaz.

[4menace2society0]

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[BigFaggot]

sear, both are fresh as hell, seconds my favorite.

[DEMPO]

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no matta who ya familys are everybody needs familys yall.
sear, those balls had better be gobstopers a somethin close 2 a jawbreaker

[H1P30N3R]

diggin that 1 tempo looks nice and clean keep it up man
crits please changed the o up like suggested and I know its a little sloppy

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120501_233536.jpg

[Mori]

Gettin there hype. id say drop the 3d for a drop shadow or just a bold outline, and id take those little cuts out of the inside of your letters where the top bar of the k conects and the bottom of the o and the p and r. and i don know how i feel bout the o looking fat like that. try a more old school looking o, kinda like a flat topped tear drop shape if that makes any sense.

[H1P30N3R]

word Ill try that out man ... as long as I am progressing atleast somewhat it helps. thanks for the crits man

[EWL24]

before u guys start telling me about structure u should know that this was just for fun
and yes, i know the letters r all wack, :)
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[Kaze]

hipe- i like your P and R but not really feeling the K. try to make the dip thing on top of your p more suttle like it is on the R. the 3d looks off at the bottum of your P and the bottum left leg of your R but it looks good elsewhere. you know with ur P and R how at the top it has the dips, maybe in the centre part of the 2 letters the 3d should have the dip too if you get what im saying, may look better but i donno, could fuck it up too but maybe try it out.

EWL- i think that looks dope haha its a cool idea for sure.

[dankbudz]

sear top ones dope, could do without the A pms ing all over the place
bottom ones dope as fuck too, but that tounge is flat as fuccck

[uknowigetup]

I'm not digging some of my follow through lines on my bars. It looked a lot better with pencil shading but fuck it. Drips are ugly too, can I get some critz on my letters?
http://i268.photobucket.com/albums/jj12/tophaa/20120501_213526.jpg

[dankbudz]

then don't do em, def aint helping your letters

[cred1384]

@Emune ^ He has a point. Also for your letters the bend in the bottom bar of the E looks wack. Those extra lines aren't playing into your flow at all, try to position them so they look more natural if ya get what i mean.
@Dank So clean, damn good work.

Freestyle messing around with some new colored pens.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_10999652x.jpg

[notmikegiant]

@ sear - reminds me A LOT of Rime, still looks sick though
@ Hipe - not really feeling the lines that cut in, otherwise looks solid, on the right track
@ ewal - cool concept, looks like it was fun
@ dank - i feel like you've got your simples down pretty well, why not try mixing shit up?
@ emune - get rid of those lines cutting through
@ cred - looks great for a freestyle, do you even need to be posting in the toy thread anymore?

gotta start somewhere right? i get that this doesn't look great, but i do like the P tilted up and the E tilted down, crits appreciated

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[dankbudz]

mike- ya don't simply move from simps to a wild.
n pay attention to spacing, and work on that S, watch which way your letters lean, keep up all straight tup, or all leaning one way. watch that E its fat, try a upper case, it'll look a lot better with your letters
cred- work on the top of your E, noticed its pretty off in every piece, not really feel in that R too, but it looks good for a freestyle

[gottapaintdaily]

@sear, both are dope as fuck, props on all them faces in the 1st one and the hand in the corner, shits sick. The S in the second one is dope too

[1love]

heres one of my first tries of a new style
first post btw ;D


http://img826.imageshack.us/img826/2948/uploadl.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/826/uploadl.jpg/)

Uploaded with ImageShack.us (http://imageshack.us)

[BoostIt]

Damn dude lose the arrows and extensions. focus on simplicity. some really dope pieces are just plain letters with a little flair. work on doing the letters in bars first and then cut back with your eraser and finish it off. check 2 pages back for my first post. i've been drawing and painting for almost 6 months and my letters and style aren't crazy. is that piece supposed to say Ghost?

[1love]

yeah it's supposed to say ghost and i usually write another name(maybe ill take some pics of walls and upload em next days)

[BoostIt]

my best advice on names is go to google images and type in "ghost graffiti" and if you see a pic of someone else who has done a piece with that name on a wall or wherever and it's better than yours, then you should pick a different name. I've gone through like 3 names already and i thought i had a good one with Goner but i met a dude at a local legal wall who's been painting for over 10 years and he knows the (or one of the) original Goner from back in Philly or something and his advice was change names cause if someone better than you sees you writing the same name as them then you got beef. i haven't seen another Enaml before so that's what i'm writing now. it's a long frustrating process but once you find a good one you feel so much better haha. that guy i met at the legal wall also said try to go for a 5 or 6 letter name cause almost everything with 4 letters has been done. he was writing Woems and he's pretty fucking good.

[1love]

ah yeah checked it out.
maybe i should go on writing LARF but i would like to do something new

[BoostIt]

post up a pic if you've written another name. i sat down and brainstormed for a couple hours just writing random combos of letters that sounded like words haha. Woems said his name has no meaning, but it sounds cool so he started writing it. i've always tried to pick something that means something to me but he said it doesn't always have to, but it's up to you man.

[1love]

made a fast sketch. the space between the l and the a is too large...

http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/4794/20120502204107.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/827/20120502204107.jpg/)

[Mildstyles]

I was wondering wtf modles was but now i get it, looks solid seldom.

Dog kennel, shopping carts, theyre all the same hahaha and MN if i ever send out my blackbook for people ill remember to slip in a 5 for you... :p

[H1P30N3R]

ok trying a new vibe its throw inspired is this worth finishing or is it to much like a throw to be considered a piece ?

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120502_150233.jpg

[Mildstyles]

I like it finish it^
make the p skinnier though

[BoostIt]

Hipe- shit looks good man, i say finish it and see how it looks as a piece, if not then you got yourself a nice throw. the K looks kinda small as a whole letter compared to the O and P so maybe stretch it a little bit taller and a little fatter but not too much

1love- that L looks like a Z and the F needs work. the right leg of the A looks too skinny but i'm digging the style of the A and the R. to get some letters down when i first started, i copied fonts off of google but then i changed them a lot and gave them different direction and flow. it helps to have something to copy to get the hang of it but make sure that when you draw up stuff and paint stuff you consider to be original you make your own style. i made the mistake of copying something off of graffiticreator and throwing it up on a wall and i got flamed for it lol. us toys make mistakes though. but keep working on it dude, it has potential. try brainstorming with other letters and combos too, you might stumble across something you like better than Larf

[KehmONE]

@Hipe - Shit's dope, finish it with a decent fill. The P needs to be a tad bit thinner.

@1Love - Your bar widths are way off, you've got the right idea when it comes to simplicity though.

[dankbudz]

got tired of using a ton of ink on fills

[ComradeR]

I'll just post here instead and see if I progress or not. Still have a ton of work to do to get some structure down but here is another one of my stuff.
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[Shit Outta Luck]

That's steezy dank. Diggin it.

[TastyMcNasty]

got tired of using a ton of ink on fills

dat S, E and 3D. diggin it

[ven0m]

yo hipe, you're doing ok... you can go on with that piece, just switch the throw K to a normal straight letter K... unless you're doing the K like that on purpose, in which case I'd tell you to carry on :)

[H1P30N3R]

dank - that shits proper ...

venom Im not sure where it will lead to just yet it is my first go at this style plenty of room for change and development.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120502_175836.jpg

[Kaze]

that looks dope hipe, it looks like a throwie/burner hybrid to me. i like your R and K but maybe make them abit more like straightletter/burner type letters.

comrader- make your Z abit fatter, dont have the centry hole in your A so big, looks better then yesterdays post though, keep it up

dankbudz-that affect u did on ur letters is fukin sick i think, looks like theyv melted and r being pulled apart or somshit. letters on acid

Larf- dont have the F connecting to the L at the bottom, looks decent though just keep on practicing

[DaFugg]

Comrader- BARS
Dank- That's fresh, something about the S is fucking with me though.
1love- Stop EVERYTHING your doing. Dont connect your letters dont draw your arrows or anything. See the letters I'm typing? Try copying them. It's boring, but eventually you'll progress.

[dankbudz]

i fucked up outlining the S, right under where the top touches, a good portion of that should a been thinner but my hand wobbled and i had to compesate...
kopr- thats tight but more of a throwie/bomb

[Mildstyles]

Dankz that E is butterssss
and the S is cool too, the color scheme is nice too

[Mildstyles]

I just puked all over the page and this is what came out:
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But then this made it better
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[MN Nice]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/dc33034b.jpg

For this weeks battle. Get in it!

[BigFaggot]

@dank, thats real nice, so clean.
@hipe, looking so much better. those keyboard letters are paying off, but you should finish those lines at the bottom of the K and R, just my opinion.
3Ds a little fucked at spots but, have at it.
67612 .... i dont know why two of them came up.

[gottapaintdaily]

6762267623literally just fuckin round during class wit slaps, they are kinda shitty. crits anyway tho i guess?

[no-sleep]

I just puked all over the page and this is what came out:
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But then this made it better
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i actually like this, now add some drop shadow 3D !!

[DEMPO]

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trying to get some crits on this plz.

gottapaint, I like ur fish that boxes, I do a fish that smokes.. ha
neer, those lil circles on the end of some lines look bad. bars look pretty good, bottom right of N stands out.
kopr, feelin those bubble letters dude. the G and E on the bottom could be closer in size.
naked, ur puke peice is not that bad just looks sort of done by memory without much thought.
seldo, those connections are cool but look a lil forced. do em more though, bars n' 3d look clean.

[ComradeR]

@Kaze thanks for the crits, trying out a new thing with the a and a bit with the z, still can't get my lines straight.
Also been reading up about bars since DaFugg mentioned it and I get the idea since it's basically the same concept as when you draw out something, using simple shapes. It's still a mess for me trying to figure out where lines should go after getting an outline down
@Big, I'm liking that NEER, pretty dope N

Got some other crap as well,
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[notmikegiant]

sketching for the battle, actually pretty happy with this so far, 3d seems kinda fucked up though

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["PHYSH"]

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crits crits crits.............................

[Willis1989]

Seld - Thats fresh, really like the colours
Naked - Maybe make the D a little closer in
Neer - Like the piece but the N looks kinda funny to me, maybe lose the extra bar on 1st leg and move it in a little
MN Nice - the R is too far behind the G in my opinion
Comrader - Dont worry to much about it looking like "graffiti letters" the top one is the best because its most simple, just keep working on simps

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-03085043.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-03085050.jpg?t=1336036598

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-03085058.jpg?t=1336036596

[Willis1989]

CRITS

* Give crits if you expect to receive them. What goes around comes around, don't expect everyone to go out of their way to give you crits if you aren't polite to enough to help others out. If asking for crits try and give crits to the last 5 or so picture posters.

* Don't turn down crits from people who aren't as good as you. Just because their skill level is less doesn't mean your piece is flawless and they can't pick it out.
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This is clearly posted in forum rules, if motherfuckers want crits then they gotta give crits, if you dont wanna give crits then fuck off and dont expect to get any

[Kaze]

Dempo- i dont really like the R or E but the concept of the drawing is cool, i like how the A is part of the N.

comrader- looks abit better then before, if your going to try and draw a straightletter/burner type thing then take your time, the bottum Z looks the best out of the Z's just lose that thing at the top of it. try to make the bottom part of ur lower case E more rounded or somthing. just keep practicing

mike that looks dope, the 3d on the E and A is off though. dont really like the E a hole lot but overal the whole thing looks good i think

Thats a dope character PHYSH, cant really crit you on that, i cant draw characters that well so any of my advice would be useless. Is the drawing about ur character suppose to be letters or just a city background?

Willis- I like the E in the first and third pic but dont really like the one in the second, only letter i like in the first one is your E, the other two pictures below look dope though, maybe you should have your A with the top part of the 3rd picture and the bottom part of the 2nd picture if you like the idea.

["PHYSH"]

actually Kaze san those are real shit letters, with a city fill, and a poor choice of color for the outline.............


WILLIS1989 - I don't really agree with the first one, there's just something off, but the other two clean and simple, i like that

[Willis1989]

Thanks Physh, I was trying to make it a little more wavy/bendy but totally fucked it up lol

I quite like the tag in you piece with the gorilla, cant really read the other letters cuz of the fills but characters are real nice

[1love]

tried out another name...
http://img694.imageshack.us/img694/747/20120503164253.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/694/20120503164253.jpg/)

[BigFaggot]

@1love its a lot better. the R is decent other than a few minor details, but every letter gets progressively worse. try keeping all the letters just as basic as the R, and keep all of em on the tilt that the r has.
@Willis bottom has most potential, but fix the middle bar on the E and work on making the D more of a D, maybe if you made the left bar straighter.
@physh first is completly illegible, working on the colors might help that a little, but obviously overall letter structure would help more. second is kinda cool, but mabe drop the drips and extensions, and blow it up. do it as a piece, characters nice though, i suck at characters.
@comrade thanks man, but definitly work on basic bars. and dont round your bars off, make them all connect forming straight lines, so its not bumpy bars with bbumps in between other bumpy baars.

[MN Nice]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/37083d64.jpg

Pencil sketch. Might outline and color. Hit me with some crits.

Rale, thicken up your bars and bring em closer together.

[dankbudz]

the 2nd E is too covered, and the top of it is fucked. The end of the bottom of the S shouldn't continue up so far. try and make the curves you put on the bottom of the E's more smooth and give the top of the 4 a bit more space. and consider dropping the extension. also i don't really like how straight the middle of the S is

oh ya physh, your characters are dopeee

the bitch isn't decreasing in size, just looks like it in the pic....

CRIT ME BRO!

[cred1384]

@4Eyes Not bad my man. the second E got a bit too squished and the bottom end of the S should be cut off like the Y.
@Dank Can't find anything i don't like about it. Fresh as fuck.

Cleaning up my structure
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_88610172x-1.jpg

[nine514]

cred, that is fuckin dope bro. paint that shit.

[R3bel1995]

Not bad bro, the only thing is that T it just seems a bit too thin.

[TastyMcNasty]

cred, your letters seem to be getting weaker man

[dankbudz]

^^nah man that ones definitely got better structure, some weird parts and I'm not feeling all the extensions, but overall structure of the letters are deffff better, specially on the R and E

[BigFaggot]

67699
something i shit out for the battle, nowhere near clean. also, A and E are fucked.

[Kaze]

1love-fix up your A and especially the middle part of ur E, make the bars abit bigger, maybe take out the curve on top of your E, like how it comes in and curved into ur main bar or the E. i like ur R though, nice and simple.

mnnice- i like ur 4 a lot and first e, not really digging the top part of the Y or the middle/bottum or your S, maybe dont have it come down so sharp and tight, maybe have the bottom part of the S with some more angles or someshit... overall those it looks dope though i think

dankbudz that looks sick, i like ur k, the bar of your T looks kinda small but other then that i cant point anything out. it looks dope

Cred- looks good, i like your R alot more this way, maybe have the bottum bar of your D that comes in come in a little lower.

BigFaggot- that looks clean except i dont really like the black arrow type things u have in ur background, i dont really like that thing u have below ur middle bar of ur E and have the second bar of your U a little fatter so it matches the other bar of the U. maybe have your E a tiny bit smaller...looks like it drops down just a tad to low

[Mildstyles]

I see the gees dripping off of you

[kwu]

the 2nd E is too covered, and the top of it is fucked. The end of the bottom of the S shouldn't continue up so far. try and make the curves you put on the bottom of the E's more smooth and give the top of the 4 a bit more space. and consider dropping the extension. also i don't really like how straight the middle of the S is

oh ya physh, your characters are dopeee

the bitch isn't decreasing in size, just looks like it in the pic....

CRIT ME BRO!

yo punk bitch! na im playin lol, is that black pen or something else cause that shit is crispier than popeye's chicken g

[H1P30N3R]

dank - thats nice as usual not much I can crit you on so listen to big krit
cred - looks good minus the bar atop the e going toward the r... I understand your probably trying to fill void space there it just doesn't look good to me personally.
faggot- thats nice I just dont dig the little triangle thing below the middle bar on the e.

crits please ill add 3d vanishing point something later.Opinions on which type would fit the best appreciated also.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120503_190543.jpg

[cred1384]

cred, your letters seem to be getting weaker man

I've been trying to improve the overall structure and did a simpler one to see how it looked.

Here's a more complex one. R feels like it's too, and just now noticed the D looks way too much like a P..

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_45005972x.jpg

[getpaiddaily]

Some of my stickers kinda rushed, not to good but any crits? 677246772567726


CRITS!

[BigFaggot]

@ naked haha heavy influence muh nigguh, its burned in my brain.
@hipe, its not just a random triangle haha, its part of the mid bar of the E that swoops in. poor execution is all.

[Kaze]

getpaid- dont like the top 2 but the bottom one is nice...drip affect on the first one is cool though.

cred that sick, bus the bottom bar of your D is too high

hiperoner- that throwie is sick, as for the burner try to make the gap in your G smaller, dont have the top part so round maybe and have it start tighter into the G or something, if u choose to do that, with the space left over at the top maybe do a little something with the R, like have the top bar of ur R come over ontop of your main vertical bar of the R then stop and come back tothe vertical bar, sounds confusing but hopefully u get what i meen, i like your R though its clean and with your A try to fill in the open space by were the legs stop, maybe have one drop down further with a bit of a bend or something

[Mildstyles]

battle
Hipe- try striaghtletters for a little and avoid bending your bars until you got the movements down and widths and all that. and try to keep all your bars the same width cuz that N is super fat with the bars
HYP- That silver H is the best minus the stupid little serif thing at the top left, and with your Y's and P's try doing them more simple and dont let your outline go inside the letter
67732

[4menace2society0]

that shits way to simple to call a bite because i was doin the same shit a few years ago
unless the letters are bend for bend then it worth callin out
67736

[Mildstyles]

me? i was talking about the influence on his style if you're talking to me, i can see the gees influence on his stuff a lot
I wasnt talking about biting

[Mildstyles]

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00494-20111217-1357.jpg?t=1324152244

Going back through these pages brings back the memories, haha, mues this is fresh. i think you should do more this style

[Shit Outta Luck]

Hell yeah^
And Naked your ANE are good except the breaks on the N seem a like they shouldn't be there and your E is a little big overall. The bar sizes on the G are what made it look weird and the bottom left of the R is too pointy. It like gets wider then pointier. I dunno that shits weird.

[BigFaggot]

y0 cHu TiNk iM bItttiN NiqqqAh?!?! ChU && mE g0t BeEf KeHed. MeeT 0N dA bAtTle f0RuM.

[TastyMcNasty]

y0 cHu TiNk iM bItttiN NiqqqAh?!?! ChU && mE g0t BeEf KeHed. MeeT 0N dA bAtTle f0RuM.

wow. you're username basically sums you up, doesn't it?

[Coleo]

obviously yes lol

[DEMPO]

doritos

[Coleo]

are you implying to dick face's comic thing? or just doritos?

[dankbudz]

kwu- was a office depot black ben. like them bics but cheaper..
cred- those lil things just ruined it, don't waste your ink on that one
naked, thats dope
sear gtfo outta this thread mang!! too proper

[no-sleep]

dankbudz that punk bitch piece was poppin!

[BigFaggot]

@Tasty haha its obviously a joke dude.

[Mildstyles]

boy I'm no meteorologist but I'm pretty sure it's been raining toys this month

yessss


ps i still <3 you neer

[BigFaggot]

:o oh, you made me blush.

[Beko]

dafuk?^

[Mildstyles]

2 letters because who needs full names?
actually like the snag though...
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[Kaze]

mild styles that N in naked is sick, the picture on the left is suppose to say smag right? not snag? looks dope though i dig both pictures.

Was just experimenting, kinda fuked up on the 3d and the spacing of the letters but ohwell. would appreciate crits on this
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[Bama61]

D:

[Bama61]

unfinished

[TastyMcNasty]

^^no

[R3bel1995]

y0 cHu TiNk iM bItttiN NiqqqAh?!?! ChU && mE g0t BeEf KeHed. MeeT 0N dA bAtTle f0RuM.
Dude stop WriTeIng LIKe a BitCH.

[dankbudz]

mild- yup thrown up my name! :cool:

["PHYSH"]

67843
crits..............

[Willis1989]

Naked - Maybe straighten left bar on A just a little bit on your 2 letter then id be nice
Kaze - Looks good but dont really like the U
Bama - work on your letters more than fills, the top one is too stretched IMO
Physh - looks ok but the hanging bars at the bottom make it harder to read

Not finished but I thot id post for some crits just incase i dont get online over weekend

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-04090658.jpg

[MN Nice]

Those bar bumps don't look good on every bar lap. Especiall on the bottom of the L and the top of the E

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/462e82a1.jpg?t=1336134896

[GpersKreepers]

sorry for the size!
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSCF1181a.jpg

[MN Nice]

Those bar bumps don't look good on every bar lap. Especiall on the bottom of the L and the top of the E

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/462e82a1.jpg?t=1336134896

Bottom page

[GpersKreepers]

mn - is that ment to be a ribbon style? overlapping and such, if so the Y and S need adjusting

[MN Nice]

Not sure what you mean but most likely not.

Pretty good stuff from you. Just try to clean up your lines.

[GpersKreepers]

like a scroll or something you know?
http://www.abcteach.com/free/b/banner3longrgb.jpg

[kwu]

dope gpers n mues

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[MN Nice]

like a scroll or something you know?
http://www.abcteach.com/free/b/banner3longrgb.jpg

Ohhhh naw just separated bar colors.

Usual heat from kwu. Good shit man.

[BigFaggot]

Dude stop WriTeIng LIKe a BitCH.
its a joke man dont get your panties in a bunch.
@ kwu thats sick, i love how you always keep the A's real symmetrical.

[H1P30N3R]

nice stuff on this page everyone now time for me to break that trend

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120504_153329.jpg

[MN Nice]

Looks good. Connect the middle bar of the G to the bottom of the loop of the R so that the letter connections are flush throughout the piece.

[dankbudz]

had to hold the pages together so the E is miss allighned

hipe- the N i small and the E is huge, other than that i like

[notmikegiant]

@ gpers - i like the top one the best, digging that bleeding glow
@ 4eyes - letters look good, color idea is cool but it's kinda distracting for me
@ kwu - love your style, always so clean
@ hipe - like dank said, if those last two letters had consistent size it would look sick, real nice
@ dank - really dig that G, N looks kinda big though, clean as always

heres this polished turd, i can't keep my hand steady, it's like michael j fox does my outlines

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[Mildstyles]

Just make it one movement^ don't go slow and just do it in one fluid movement and never stop outlining in the middle of a curve haha only stop at corners, dont sketch the outline.
Dank that R has steeze
girls name, oh im so kewl.
67868

[KehmONE]

67869
Debating leaving it like this, or actually making a fill.

[H1P30N3R]

had to hold the pages together so the E is miss allighned

hipe- the N i small and the E is huge, other than that i like

The n was supposed to be those 3 bars and the e coming off that third bar but the look didnt pan out ...

[4menace2society0]

67872

[Mildstyles]

Workin my way towards a full piece hahaha, if any got any crits dont be shy
Likin' my recent junk
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[dankbudz]

i hate when people do gay little lines and shit in their fills.............

[Mildstyles]

yeah me too those kids make me mad

[sez.]

67881

[aiko]

i dig it sez

[sez.]

thank u sir!

[dankbudz]

i dont

[aiko]

its a lot better than that duck you painted lol

[dankbudz]

HA! biitch you dnt know shit other than how to gargle my cum

[sez.]

thats the beautiful thing about art an life we all have diffrent taste. if everybody was the same this would be a boring world

[TastyMcNasty]

that may be so, but aiko telling you thats good, is like a downy comparing a childs artwork to michael angelo.
**i am not calling you a downy, nor am i calling sez a child. it is simply a simile**

[dankbudz]

sure...

well sez if ya want some crits...- the 3d is off, on just about every part of the letters. your bars are weak, the thin parts are way too thin, the Z looks like a weak T. the colors are cool though, justeverthing is is not. just work on it and when some dip shit hops on your dick saying its good like aiko does, be like, BITCH get off me, slap her around a few times take her money..., and realize then that it clearly aint great, and work on it....

oh and aiko

[aiko]

i aint saying it doesn't need work, i like the colours though, and what he's going for, whether its quite there yet or not.

you can suck your own dick dank, its too funny getting you all rowled up

[sez.]

lol

[sez.]

thanks for crits

[dankbudz]

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/Pull-a-Face-for-PutPlace-contest.jpg

[aiko]

u mad bro

[Coleo]

yes

[kwu]

ahahahaha too funny dank.. too funny

[GpersKreepers]

um, that fuck you is nice,

little SR battle, that forum has gone to shit lately
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02681.jpg

[MN Nice]

little SR battle, that forum has gone to shit lately

Like you wouldn't believe

[mookone]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RpbpDH_9YNM&feature=plcp

[cred1384]

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/Pull-a-Face-for-PutPlace-contest.jpg
----------------------------------------------- ^^ Cock goes here haha. Good shit dank.
@Gpers Try placing that first arrow behind the left bar of the D, good work though. that N and E are freshh.

At my sisters house so only had a ballpoint pen to use, didn't come out very clean.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_48382102x-1.jpg

[Kaze]

Gpers- i like your style, its raw and shit. your A is dope but the arrow at the D should either be at the same angle as the one coming out the E or vice versa...that N is sick aswell.

cred-once again it looks good, i like your R alot but maybe have your E alittle lower...other then that though it looks dope...

this looks like crap compared to the others but crits would be appreciated alot.
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[DRIG]

I like the eyeball my man!

67984

[P A N D E M]

67989
First sketch in ages, crits? Still unfinished

[KehmONE]

67869
Debating leaving it like this, or actually making a fill.

Crits? Should I bother painting this?

[P A N D E M]

do a white fill? i like the yellow outline bro makes it funky fresh haha

[Skee]

It's all shaky and shit, like you got parkinsons.

[KehmONE]

Haha, it's shaky yes. I take diazepam for tremors.

[gottapaintdaily]

68000
just sum i did for a battle, any crits?

[TastyMcNasty]

everyone on this page, your graffiti is bad, and you should feel bad.
but honestly, none of you are going simple enough. you guys are not yet good enough to be doing stuff like that, or even good enough to worry about putting fills on your pieces in the first place

[Jake_NN_Bake]

I know this is toy, but its actually got meaning for me. Dedicated to everyone we've lost. Don't let their memory die. Gonna paint it this week.
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7412/img20120506163645.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/12/img20120506163645.jpg/)

[lostyoursense]

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5325/7149974397_e045067cfb.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7149974397/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7149974397/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

Some retarded shit I drew

[Rask Wsk LA]

just some shizz i made, crit or dont w/e68009

Edit: i know the R is shitty

[DEMPO]

68010

[BigFaggot]

some random dumb shit, wasnt really working on letters, just shit them out cuz i wanted to work on keepin it clean. tips on that would be nice.
68027 having an R crisis so i left it out.

[H1P30N3R]

neer - I like your style its somewhat like naked's but with a little different twist .. looks good to me
rask- not bad minus the r being bigger than the other letters

everyone else with flicks on this page go keyboard letters like myself.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120506_201420.jpg

[BigFaggot]

@hipe thanks man, you got those keyboard letters down with proper spacing, i think its time to start adding slight bends and a little flava. 3D' gotta improve, seems pretty on point besides the inside of the O. not sure what happened there haha.

[dankbudz]

i wanna llearn to not cover my letters

[DRIG]

68000
just sum i did for a battle, any crits?

the R is kinda off, and i'm not so sure about cutting in on the p just before it comes out, and i would blow the eye up a bit, add some veins to it possibly.

the handy is nice though.

[DRIG]

i wanna llearn to not cover my letters

what I do is make the line cross over and then dot out... not sure how to describe it.

[DRIG]

everyone on this page, your graffiti is bad, and you should feel bad.
but honestly, none of you are going simple enough. you guys are not yet good enough to be doing stuff like that, or even good enough to worry about putting fills on your pieces in the first place

...theres a reason we post in the toy thread...

[H1P30N3R]

dank them lines are crisp as fuck man props looks good and always dig your 3d ... neer yea got a little sketchy on that o but yeah guess I will start experimenting more with tilts,curves minor tweaks thanks man

[Kaze]

Rask thats dope, dont really dig the S though and maybe give the bottom of your K the same bend as your R before it kicks out as it does
Bigfaggot, the last E looks alittle to fat in the middle but i like u N alot. hole thing looks dope
kopr- looks good, the 3d looks off and the bottom of your K and inside your O but other then that it looks clean, like bigfaggot said maybe start tweaking ur letters abit.
seldom- cant even give crits on that...looks good

[BigFaggot]

damn dank, killed mine haha. some one could give you piece of shit letters to work with, once you add the 3d it looks good haha.

[Mildstyles]

OH MY GOD NEER NICE N
Dont want to waste the time microsoft painting the background so you all get to see some super sweet interiorzz and glassez
68050

[BigFaggot]

i cant tell if thats a "it looks like my N joke" or not...

[Mildstyles]

hahaha it is, just look at that break at the bottom left leg... shatters my heart

just kidding, not the whole N just the little part i pointed out haha

[BigFaggot]

well good, i almost left that out cuz i thought it looked stupid.

[MTK]

68053 sorry it is big cant resize it on my phone.... Auste batlle pic didnt send right i guess... crits are welcome. I like the T :D

[GpersKreepers]

mtk - its obvious you can draw, but some of those bars are off, like the bottom of the U, the hidden S is massive compared, and the two main down bars of your A aint parallel, think you need to take that style back a few steps personally,

Mildstyles - only thing i might say about that is maybe the K looks a little squashed compared to the N and the D, no? just me then...

writing this made me realize i dont know how to spell parallel, i had to google it, ha

[kwu]

rask neer kopr n dank doin it right lol everything else is gonna make me cry

[Mildstyles]

i make you cry :'(

[cred1384]

i make you cry :'(

Yeah but they are tears of joy.

[H1P30N3R]

the k to o is wack maybe a lil too much bending and tweaking... thoughts crits please

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120507_170226.jpg

[Mori]

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7092/7154212220_e931980dee_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/73382494@N04/7154212220/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/73382494@N04/7154212220/) by mori95 (http://www.flickr.com/people/73382494@N04/), on Flickr

[pover]

Ok I didn't know how to express it so I drew it for ya, hell yeah! Try to make the things I circled thinner.

68120
Also, try something different in the holes of the P and the R.
Besides that, pretty nice, I like the bending, and that K is neat.

[gottapaintdaily]

the R is kinda off, and i'm not so sure about cutting in on the p just before it comes out, and i would blow the eye up a bit, add some veins to it possibly.

the handy is nice though.
thanks, yeah the R came out wierd, ill work on it

[gottapaintdaily]

68133
another throwie done for a battle, crits?

[Mildstyles]

Yeah don't shape your letters like rocks^^^
Do a smooth line instead of a jaggedy outline

[BigFaggot]

@kopr, pover beat me too it haha, definitely thin those up, also, Space the k and O out a lil more. and the top of the K needs some attention, make it two seprate bars, with the horizontal bar moved out to the left farther, hard to explain.
@gotta paint daily, please look up how to 3d online or something, every single one of those 3d lines should all be in the same direction. also the outside of the 3d should be paralell to the letters, you must be able to find a quick art lesson on google or some shit.

[lostyoursense]

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8015/7155674588_9ac1762166.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7155674588/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7155674588/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

[H1P30N3R]

Thanks for the crits guys and yeah I understand what you mean neer.
sense- looks good man idk about that add on at the bottom of the n but maybe that is just an opinion rather than crit
naps- shit looks wicked I dont think I know enough to break that down to crits...do a throw ill give u crits all day lol
naked -nice slippy slap
gottapaint- not sure if you even understand the difference between a throw and simp from what you call that pic(no diss) I would start doing some research on pieces and throws learn the difference first then try again.

[dankbudz]

der

[ComradeR]

something new, still much to learn
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[iPwnF00lz]

http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/5159570e.jpg
new name, bars are off but it was a sloppy one, the u is a pain in the ass for me

[Willis1989]

Dank - Like the Auste piece best
Zeam - Use bars
iPwnF00lz - Like the S but dont know much about throws so cant give any decent crits

I drew this on Friday and have had writers block since, can I pls get crits. thanks

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-04214937.jpg?t=1336471443

[kwu]

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["PHYSH"]

Dank - that is very fuckin nice clean as hell, the colors match up perfect........ loving yer work as usual...
Zeam - needs work buddy, just practice, practice, practice...
iPwnF00lz - the idea is nice but the letters need some working on, there needs to be some consistency in the letters.
Willis - I like the style, it's a touch of oldschool very nice
kwu - what can i say other than that is the shit right there bro........ sick style....

[lostyoursense]

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8015/7155674588_9ac1762166.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7155674588/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7155674588/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

Bottom page bump

[Willis1989]

Yo atma, everything you post on here is gold keep it up man!!!!

[aaesoo]

http://i1199.photobucket.com/albums/aa468/aeso6/05062012357.jpg
Got too high and tried to wildstyle.

[cred1384]

@Atma so fresh.. love it.

Sketch for my boy Bear.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_1970282x.jpg

[H1P30N3R]

^^ I dislike you for the span of time you have been writing and how much you have developed (hater mode)

lines are always super crisp fresh style. im just glad your hand handstyle lacks (hater mode pt. 2)

[cred1384]

^^ I dislike you for the span of time you have been writing and how much you have developed (hater mode)

lines are always super crisp fresh style. im just glad your hand handstyle lacks (hater mode pt. 2)

Haha that is a shite representation of my handstyle cause all i have with me right now is a ballpoint pen... but either way it still sucks more than playin' leapfrog with a unicorn. Nice Gif by the way.

[H1P30N3R]

word I dig your work man keep it up you will be lacin face melters in about 2 months by the way you progress lol

[ven0m]

wow, I finally have access to this thread again...

[DEMPO]

68230
I kind of dont like og sharpies but they ok I guess.
decided that even though AGIDA is a cool ass name I needed to stick with tempo for a while.
cred, I like the way it feels like a thick hand style. that bear is decent.
aeso, can you do one without all the extentions? they're just not working there.
sense, do you even write anything any other way?

[KroeGHK]

fuckin around, some recent shit, did the all green one like an hour ago
682316823268233

[no-sleep]

shittin around, crits?68242

[lostyoursense]

sense, do you even write anything any other way?

Haha whatcha mean? Like different styles?

[lostyoursense]

And if that's wha ya meant here's your answer

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5446/7162030648_60d79f37fe.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162030648/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162030648/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7088/7162028798_4a6fa4c655.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162028798/)http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162029654/in/photostream/
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162028798/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7221/7162027802_5bfa85c741.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162027802/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162027802/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7099/7162029654_b553d0fea3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162029654/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162029654/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

[6i9o]

68250
I'm still fairly new to graffiti but I came up with this. It says "Art"

[Rasm]

And if that's wha ya meant here's your answer

That's what he means... your E's hardly change and nor does your N... and that's 3 outta 5 letters right there.
Not saying it's a bad thing, but you'll improve the most if you try mixing it up a little more.

And for all the talk, here's a hardly half decent sketch from a couple months ago. Now that I have some free time I'll bust out some new shit.
http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/2924/imag01212.jpg

[Willis1989]

Cred- Letters are nice not really feeling bottom right bar on A
Tempo - Would be nicer if it was all straight
6i9o - Make simple letters and use bars
Serch - Put letters closer together

Fucked the D on this one and the A on the next one
http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-09090552.jpg?t=1336556581

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-09090529.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-08194806-1.jpg

[Coleo]

6826168262
bored as hell in math ...just sketches... crits?

[lostyoursense]

That's what he means... your E's hardly change and nor does your N... and that's 4 outta 5 letters right there.
Not saying it's a bad thing, but you'll improve the most if you try mixing it up a little more.

And for all the talk, here's a hardly half decent sketch from a couple months ago. Now that I have some free time I'll bust out some new shit.



I guess I'm one of those guys who's style doesn't change much but look a nekst that dudes stuff is always the same and people think he's mad good

[603Bombsquad]

@Atma so fresh.. love it.

Sketch for my boy Bear.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_1970282x.jpg



Totally looks like your ripping SEARS letters hardcore

[Coleo]

6826168262
bored as hell in math ...just sketches... crits?

bottom page bump for crits

[TeeBeeEss]

i was bored so my friend gave me a word to do..tell me what you think68277

[H1P30N3R]

I think you attachment is invalid

[TeeBeeEss]

shit my b68278

[Moe_13]

any comments i know i miss consistency and letter structure yet i really don't know how to maintain them
68323683246832568319

[Coleo]

Hello there... crits?
68299

no

[pover]

Why?

[PETER]

See the new to graf thread for your explanation

[pover]

Um... could you specify? It's long as fuck.

[Coleo]

keyboard letters.... thats all you get... you bother me for some reason

[pover]

So much love in here isnt there?

[Coleo]

yes yes there is....prove that you deserve to be loved...

[pover]

Maybe, with time, I will. But stop being an ass for no reason.

[Coleo]

lol i just felt like being an ass today!

[Moe_13]

this page dosn't accept crits on flicks ?

[Coleo]

^ i cant read any of that work on letter structure!!!!

[pover]

Well now you've made me cry, are you happy?