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4menace2society0
05-03-2012, 08:16 PM
that shits way to simple to call a bite because i was doin the same shit a few years ago
unless the letters are bend for bend then it worth callin out
67736

Mildstyles
05-03-2012, 08:22 PM
me? i was talking about the influence on his style if you're talking to me, i can see the gees influence on his stuff a lot
I wasnt talking about biting

Mildstyles
05-03-2012, 08:54 PM
http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/IMG00494-20111217-1357.jpg?t=1324152244

Going back through these pages brings back the memories, haha, mues this is fresh. i think you should do more this style

Shit Outta Luck
05-03-2012, 09:03 PM
Hell yeah^
And Naked your ANE are good except the breaks on the N seem a like they shouldn't be there and your E is a little big overall. The bar sizes on the G are what made it look weird and the bottom left of the R is too pointy. It like gets wider then pointier. I dunno that shits weird.

BigFaggot
05-03-2012, 09:43 PM
y0 cHu TiNk iM bItttiN NiqqqAh?!?! ChU && mE g0t BeEf KeHed. MeeT 0N dA bAtTle f0RuM.

TastyMcNasty
05-03-2012, 09:49 PM
y0 cHu TiNk iM bItttiN NiqqqAh?!?! ChU && mE g0t BeEf KeHed. MeeT 0N dA bAtTle f0RuM.

wow. you're username basically sums you up, doesn't it?

Coleo
05-03-2012, 09:52 PM
obviously yes lol

DEMPO
05-03-2012, 09:55 PM
doritos

Coleo
05-03-2012, 09:57 PM
are you implying to dick face's comic thing? or just doritos?

dankbudz
05-03-2012, 09:59 PM
kwu- was a office depot black ben. like them bics but cheaper..
cred- those lil things just ruined it, don't waste your ink on that one
naked, thats dope
sear gtfo outta this thread mang!! too proper

no-sleep
05-03-2012, 10:06 PM
dankbudz that punk bitch piece was poppin!

BigFaggot
05-03-2012, 10:11 PM
@Tasty haha its obviously a joke dude.

Mildstyles
05-03-2012, 10:24 PM
boy I'm no meteorologist but I'm pretty sure it's been raining toys this month

yessss


ps i still <3 you neer

BigFaggot
05-03-2012, 10:26 PM
:o oh, you made me blush.

Beko
05-03-2012, 10:31 PM
dafuk?^

Mildstyles
05-03-2012, 10:35 PM
2 letters because who needs full names?
actually like the snag though...
6776367764

Kaze
05-03-2012, 11:11 PM
mild styles that N in naked is sick, the picture on the left is suppose to say smag right? not snag? looks dope though i dig both pictures.

Was just experimenting, kinda fuked up on the 3d and the spacing of the letters but ohwell. would appreciate crits on this
6776967770

Bama61
05-03-2012, 11:23 PM
D:

Bama61
05-04-2012, 12:07 AM
unfinished

TastyMcNasty
05-04-2012, 12:40 AM
^^no

R3bel1995
05-04-2012, 01:35 AM
y0 cHu TiNk iM bItttiN NiqqqAh?!?! ChU && mE g0t BeEf KeHed. MeeT 0N dA bAtTle f0RuM.
Dude stop WriTeIng LIKe a BitCH.

dankbudz
05-04-2012, 02:58 AM
mild- yup thrown up my name! :cool:

"PHYSH"
05-04-2012, 03:36 AM
67843
crits..............

Willis1989
05-04-2012, 08:19 AM
Naked - Maybe straighten left bar on A just a little bit on your 2 letter then id be nice
Kaze - Looks good but dont really like the U
Bama - work on your letters more than fills, the top one is too stretched IMO
Physh - looks ok but the hanging bars at the bottom make it harder to read

Not finished but I thot id post for some crits just incase i dont get online over weekend

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-04090658.jpg

MN Nice
05-04-2012, 08:34 AM
Those bar bumps don't look good on every bar lap. Especiall on the bottom of the L and the top of the E

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/462e82a1.jpg?t=1336134896

GpersKreepers
05-04-2012, 08:46 AM
sorry for the size!
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSCF1181a.jpg

MN Nice
05-04-2012, 08:50 AM
Those bar bumps don't look good on every bar lap. Especiall on the bottom of the L and the top of the E

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/462e82a1.jpg?t=1336134896

Bottom page

GpersKreepers
05-04-2012, 09:19 AM
mn - is that ment to be a ribbon style? overlapping and such, if so the Y and S need adjusting

MN Nice
05-04-2012, 09:44 AM
Not sure what you mean but most likely not.

Pretty good stuff from you. Just try to clean up your lines.

GpersKreepers
05-04-2012, 10:56 AM
like a scroll or something you know?
http://www.abcteach.com/free/b/banner3longrgb.jpg

kwu
05-04-2012, 12:24 PM
dope gpers n mues

67856

MN Nice
05-04-2012, 01:52 PM
like a scroll or something you know?
http://www.abcteach.com/free/b/banner3longrgb.jpg

Ohhhh naw just separated bar colors.

Usual heat from kwu. Good shit man.

BigFaggot
05-04-2012, 03:11 PM
Dude stop WriTeIng LIKe a BitCH.
its a joke man dont get your panties in a bunch.
@ kwu thats sick, i love how you always keep the A's real symmetrical.

H1P30N3R
05-04-2012, 03:43 PM
nice stuff on this page everyone now time for me to break that trend

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120504_153329.jpg

MN Nice
05-04-2012, 04:21 PM
Looks good. Connect the middle bar of the G to the bottom of the loop of the R so that the letter connections are flush throughout the piece.

dankbudz
05-04-2012, 04:24 PM
had to hold the pages together so the E is miss allighned

hipe- the N i small and the E is huge, other than that i like

notmikegiant
05-04-2012, 04:39 PM
@ gpers - i like the top one the best, digging that bleeding glow
@ 4eyes - letters look good, color idea is cool but it's kinda distracting for me
@ kwu - love your style, always so clean
@ hipe - like dank said, if those last two letters had consistent size it would look sick, real nice
@ dank - really dig that G, N looks kinda big though, clean as always

heres this polished turd, i can't keep my hand steady, it's like michael j fox does my outlines

67867

Mildstyles
05-04-2012, 04:41 PM
Just make it one movement^ don't go slow and just do it in one fluid movement and never stop outlining in the middle of a curve haha only stop at corners, dont sketch the outline.
Dank that R has steeze
girls name, oh im so kewl.
67868

KehmONE
05-04-2012, 04:49 PM
67869
Debating leaving it like this, or actually making a fill.

H1P30N3R
05-04-2012, 05:49 PM
had to hold the pages together so the E is miss allighned

hipe- the N i small and the E is huge, other than that i like

The n was supposed to be those 3 bars and the e coming off that third bar but the look didnt pan out ...

4menace2society0
05-04-2012, 05:53 PM
67872

Mildstyles
05-04-2012, 08:18 PM
Workin my way towards a full piece hahaha, if any got any crits dont be shy
Likin' my recent junk
67878

dankbudz
05-04-2012, 08:30 PM
i hate when people do gay little lines and shit in their fills.............

Mildstyles
05-04-2012, 08:33 PM
yeah me too those kids make me mad

sez.
05-04-2012, 08:43 PM
67881

aiko
05-04-2012, 09:02 PM
i dig it sez

sez.
05-04-2012, 09:11 PM
thank u sir!

dankbudz
05-04-2012, 09:18 PM
i dont

aiko
05-04-2012, 09:21 PM
its a lot better than that duck you painted lol

dankbudz
05-04-2012, 09:47 PM
HA! biitch you dnt know shit other than how to gargle my cum

sez.
05-04-2012, 09:52 PM
thats the beautiful thing about art an life we all have diffrent taste. if everybody was the same this would be a boring world

TastyMcNasty
05-04-2012, 09:59 PM
that may be so, but aiko telling you thats good, is like a downy comparing a childs artwork to michael angelo.
**i am not calling you a downy, nor am i calling sez a child. it is simply a simile**

dankbudz
05-04-2012, 10:08 PM
sure...

well sez if ya want some crits...- the 3d is off, on just about every part of the letters. your bars are weak, the thin parts are way too thin, the Z looks like a weak T. the colors are cool though, justeverthing is is not. just work on it and when some dip shit hops on your dick saying its good like aiko does, be like, BITCH get off me, slap her around a few times take her money..., and realize then that it clearly aint great, and work on it....

oh and aiko

aiko
05-04-2012, 10:13 PM
i aint saying it doesn't need work, i like the colours though, and what he's going for, whether its quite there yet or not.

you can suck your own dick dank, its too funny getting you all rowled up

sez.
05-04-2012, 10:24 PM
lol

sez.
05-04-2012, 10:25 PM
thanks for crits

dankbudz
05-04-2012, 10:40 PM
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/Pull-a-Face-for-PutPlace-contest.jpg

aiko
05-04-2012, 10:44 PM
u mad bro

Coleo
05-04-2012, 11:16 PM
yes

kwu
05-05-2012, 12:25 AM
ahahahaha too funny dank.. too funny

GpersKreepers
05-05-2012, 05:18 AM
um, that fuck you is nice,

little SR battle, that forum has gone to shit lately
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02681.jpg

MN Nice
05-05-2012, 08:23 AM
little SR battle, that forum has gone to shit lately

Like you wouldn't believe

mookone
05-05-2012, 10:15 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RpbpDH_9YNM&feature=plcp

cred1384
05-05-2012, 04:23 PM
http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q168/matthew1o/Pull-a-Face-for-PutPlace-contest.jpg
----------------------------------------------- ^^ Cock goes here haha. Good shit dank.
@Gpers Try placing that first arrow behind the left bar of the D, good work though. that N and E are freshh.

At my sisters house so only had a ballpoint pen to use, didn't come out very clean.
http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_48382102x-1.jpg

Kaze
05-05-2012, 06:17 PM
Gpers- i like your style, its raw and shit. your A is dope but the arrow at the D should either be at the same angle as the one coming out the E or vice versa...that N is sick aswell.

cred-once again it looks good, i like your R alot but maybe have your E alittle lower...other then that though it looks dope...

this looks like crap compared to the others but crits would be appreciated alot.
67929

DRIG
05-06-2012, 12:37 PM
I like the eyeball my man!

67984

P A N D E M
05-06-2012, 01:47 PM
67989
First sketch in ages, crits? Still unfinished

KehmONE
05-06-2012, 02:02 PM
67869
Debating leaving it like this, or actually making a fill.

Crits? Should I bother painting this?

P A N D E M
05-06-2012, 02:13 PM
do a white fill? i like the yellow outline bro makes it funky fresh haha

Skee
05-06-2012, 02:14 PM
It's all shaky and shit, like you got parkinsons.

KehmONE
05-06-2012, 02:28 PM
Haha, it's shaky yes. I take diazepam for tremors.

gottapaintdaily
05-06-2012, 02:53 PM
68000
just sum i did for a battle, any crits?

TastyMcNasty
05-06-2012, 03:07 PM
everyone on this page, your graffiti is bad, and you should feel bad.
but honestly, none of you are going simple enough. you guys are not yet good enough to be doing stuff like that, or even good enough to worry about putting fills on your pieces in the first place

Jake_NN_Bake
05-06-2012, 04:44 PM
I know this is toy, but its actually got meaning for me. Dedicated to everyone we've lost. Don't let their memory die. Gonna paint it this week.
http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/7412/img20120506163645.jpg (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/12/img20120506163645.jpg/)

lostyoursense
05-06-2012, 05:17 PM
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5325/7149974397_e045067cfb.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7149974397/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7149974397/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

Some retarded shit I drew

Rask Wsk LA
05-06-2012, 05:46 PM
just some shizz i made, crit or dont w/e68009

Edit: i know the R is shitty

DEMPO
05-06-2012, 05:50 PM
68010

BigFaggot
05-06-2012, 08:04 PM
some random dumb shit, wasnt really working on letters, just shit them out cuz i wanted to work on keepin it clean. tips on that would be nice.
68027 having an R crisis so i left it out.

H1P30N3R
05-06-2012, 08:35 PM
neer - I like your style its somewhat like naked's but with a little different twist .. looks good to me
rask- not bad minus the r being bigger than the other letters

everyone else with flicks on this page go keyboard letters like myself.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120506_201420.jpg

BigFaggot
05-06-2012, 08:55 PM
@hipe thanks man, you got those keyboard letters down with proper spacing, i think its time to start adding slight bends and a little flava. 3D' gotta improve, seems pretty on point besides the inside of the O. not sure what happened there haha.

dankbudz
05-06-2012, 09:07 PM
i wanna llearn to not cover my letters

DRIG
05-06-2012, 09:11 PM
68000
just sum i did for a battle, any crits?

the R is kinda off, and i'm not so sure about cutting in on the p just before it comes out, and i would blow the eye up a bit, add some veins to it possibly.

the handy is nice though.

DRIG
05-06-2012, 09:12 PM
i wanna llearn to not cover my letters

what I do is make the line cross over and then dot out... not sure how to describe it.

DRIG
05-06-2012, 09:17 PM
everyone on this page, your graffiti is bad, and you should feel bad.
but honestly, none of you are going simple enough. you guys are not yet good enough to be doing stuff like that, or even good enough to worry about putting fills on your pieces in the first place

...theres a reason we post in the toy thread...

H1P30N3R
05-06-2012, 09:18 PM
dank them lines are crisp as fuck man props looks good and always dig your 3d ... neer yea got a little sketchy on that o but yeah guess I will start experimenting more with tilts,curves minor tweaks thanks man

Kaze
05-06-2012, 09:31 PM
Rask thats dope, dont really dig the S though and maybe give the bottom of your K the same bend as your R before it kicks out as it does
Bigfaggot, the last E looks alittle to fat in the middle but i like u N alot. hole thing looks dope
kopr- looks good, the 3d looks off and the bottom of your K and inside your O but other then that it looks clean, like bigfaggot said maybe start tweaking ur letters abit.
seldom- cant even give crits on that...looks good

BigFaggot
05-06-2012, 09:34 PM
damn dank, killed mine haha. some one could give you piece of shit letters to work with, once you add the 3d it looks good haha.

Mildstyles
05-06-2012, 10:32 PM
OH MY GOD NEER NICE N
Dont want to waste the time microsoft painting the background so you all get to see some super sweet interiorzz and glassez
68050

BigFaggot
05-06-2012, 10:50 PM
i cant tell if thats a "it looks like my N joke" or not...

Mildstyles
05-06-2012, 10:51 PM
hahaha it is, just look at that break at the bottom left leg... shatters my heart

just kidding, not the whole N just the little part i pointed out haha

BigFaggot
05-06-2012, 10:55 PM
well good, i almost left that out cuz i thought it looked stupid.

MTK
05-06-2012, 11:15 PM
68053 sorry it is big cant resize it on my phone.... Auste batlle pic didnt send right i guess... crits are welcome. I like the T :D

GpersKreepers
05-07-2012, 04:11 AM
mtk - its obvious you can draw, but some of those bars are off, like the bottom of the U, the hidden S is massive compared, and the two main down bars of your A aint parallel, think you need to take that style back a few steps personally,

Mildstyles - only thing i might say about that is maybe the K looks a little squashed compared to the N and the D, no? just me then...

writing this made me realize i dont know how to spell parallel, i had to google it, ha

kwu
05-07-2012, 12:13 PM
rask neer kopr n dank doin it right lol everything else is gonna make me cry

Mildstyles
05-07-2012, 02:56 PM
i make you cry :'(

cred1384
05-07-2012, 04:39 PM
i make you cry :'(

Yeah but they are tears of joy.

H1P30N3R
05-07-2012, 05:11 PM
the k to o is wack maybe a lil too much bending and tweaking... thoughts crits please

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120507_170226.jpg

Mori
05-07-2012, 06:38 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7092/7154212220_e931980dee_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/73382494@N04/7154212220/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/73382494@N04/7154212220/) by mori95 (http://www.flickr.com/people/73382494@N04/), on Flickr

pover
05-07-2012, 06:41 PM
Ok I didn't know how to express it so I drew it for ya, hell yeah! Try to make the things I circled thinner.

68120
Also, try something different in the holes of the P and the R.
Besides that, pretty nice, I like the bending, and that K is neat.

gottapaintdaily
05-07-2012, 07:54 PM
the R is kinda off, and i'm not so sure about cutting in on the p just before it comes out, and i would blow the eye up a bit, add some veins to it possibly.

the handy is nice though.
thanks, yeah the R came out wierd, ill work on it

gottapaintdaily
05-07-2012, 07:55 PM
68133
another throwie done for a battle, crits?

Mildstyles
05-07-2012, 08:40 PM
Yeah don't shape your letters like rocks^^^
Do a smooth line instead of a jaggedy outline

BigFaggot
05-07-2012, 09:21 PM
@kopr, pover beat me too it haha, definitely thin those up, also, Space the k and O out a lil more. and the top of the K needs some attention, make it two seprate bars, with the horizontal bar moved out to the left farther, hard to explain.
@gotta paint daily, please look up how to 3d online or something, every single one of those 3d lines should all be in the same direction. also the outside of the 3d should be paralell to the letters, you must be able to find a quick art lesson on google or some shit.

lostyoursense
05-07-2012, 11:12 PM
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8015/7155674588_9ac1762166.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7155674588/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7155674588/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

H1P30N3R
05-08-2012, 01:10 AM
Thanks for the crits guys and yeah I understand what you mean neer.
sense- looks good man idk about that add on at the bottom of the n but maybe that is just an opinion rather than crit
naps- shit looks wicked I dont think I know enough to break that down to crits...do a throw ill give u crits all day lol
naked -nice slippy slap
gottapaint- not sure if you even understand the difference between a throw and simp from what you call that pic(no diss) I would start doing some research on pieces and throws learn the difference first then try again.

dankbudz
05-08-2012, 02:12 AM
der

ComradeR
05-08-2012, 02:29 AM
something new, still much to learn
68140

iPwnF00lz
05-08-2012, 02:32 AM
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i157/iPwnF00lz/5159570e.jpg
new name, bars are off but it was a sloppy one, the u is a pain in the ass for me

Willis1989
05-08-2012, 06:14 AM
Dank - Like the Auste piece best
Zeam - Use bars
iPwnF00lz - Like the S but dont know much about throws so cant give any decent crits

I drew this on Friday and have had writers block since, can I pls get crits. thanks

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-04214937.jpg?t=1336471443

kwu
05-08-2012, 09:07 AM
68142

"PHYSH"
05-08-2012, 09:27 AM
Dank - that is very fuckin nice clean as hell, the colors match up perfect........ loving yer work as usual...
Zeam - needs work buddy, just practice, practice, practice...
iPwnF00lz - the idea is nice but the letters need some working on, there needs to be some consistency in the letters.
Willis - I like the style, it's a touch of oldschool very nice
kwu - what can i say other than that is the shit right there bro........ sick style....

lostyoursense
05-08-2012, 10:00 AM
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8015/7155674588_9ac1762166.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7155674588/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7155674588/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

Bottom page bump

Willis1989
05-08-2012, 10:43 AM
Yo atma, everything you post on here is gold keep it up man!!!!

aaesoo
05-08-2012, 10:56 AM
http://i1199.photobucket.com/albums/aa468/aeso6/05062012357.jpg
Got too high and tried to wildstyle.

cred1384
05-08-2012, 03:33 PM
@Atma so fresh.. love it.

Sketch for my boy Bear.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_1970282x.jpg

H1P30N3R
05-08-2012, 03:56 PM
^^ I dislike you for the span of time you have been writing and how much you have developed (hater mode)

lines are always super crisp fresh style. im just glad your hand handstyle lacks (hater mode pt. 2)

cred1384
05-08-2012, 03:59 PM
^^ I dislike you for the span of time you have been writing and how much you have developed (hater mode)

lines are always super crisp fresh style. im just glad your hand handstyle lacks (hater mode pt. 2)

Haha that is a shite representation of my handstyle cause all i have with me right now is a ballpoint pen... but either way it still sucks more than playin' leapfrog with a unicorn. Nice Gif by the way.

H1P30N3R
05-08-2012, 04:04 PM
word I dig your work man keep it up you will be lacin face melters in about 2 months by the way you progress lol

ven0m
05-08-2012, 07:33 PM
wow, I finally have access to this thread again...

DEMPO
05-08-2012, 08:01 PM
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I kind of dont like og sharpies but they ok I guess.
decided that even though AGIDA is a cool ass name I needed to stick with tempo for a while.
cred, I like the way it feels like a thick hand style. that bear is decent.
aeso, can you do one without all the extentions? they're just not working there.
sense, do you even write anything any other way?

KroeGHK
05-08-2012, 08:04 PM
fuckin around, some recent shit, did the all green one like an hour ago
682316823268233

no-sleep
05-08-2012, 09:35 PM
shittin around, crits?68242

lostyoursense
05-08-2012, 09:46 PM
sense, do you even write anything any other way?

Haha whatcha mean? Like different styles?

lostyoursense
05-08-2012, 09:56 PM
And if that's wha ya meant here's your answer

http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5446/7162030648_60d79f37fe.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162030648/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162030648/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7088/7162028798_4a6fa4c655.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162028798/)http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162029654/in/photostream/
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162028798/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7221/7162027802_5bfa85c741.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162027802/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162027802/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7099/7162029654_b553d0fea3.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162029654/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7162029654/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

6i9o
05-09-2012, 02:17 AM
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I'm still fairly new to graffiti but I came up with this. It says "Art"

Rasm
05-09-2012, 02:22 AM
And if that's wha ya meant here's your answer

That's what he means... your E's hardly change and nor does your N... and that's 3 outta 5 letters right there.
Not saying it's a bad thing, but you'll improve the most if you try mixing it up a little more.

And for all the talk, here's a hardly half decent sketch from a couple months ago. Now that I have some free time I'll bust out some new shit.
http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/2924/imag01212.jpg

Willis1989
05-09-2012, 05:47 AM
Cred- Letters are nice not really feeling bottom right bar on A
Tempo - Would be nicer if it was all straight
6i9o - Make simple letters and use bars
Serch - Put letters closer together

Fucked the D on this one and the A on the next one
http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-09090552.jpg?t=1336556581

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-09090529.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/2012-05-08194806-1.jpg

Coleo
05-09-2012, 07:23 AM
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bored as hell in math ...just sketches... crits?

lostyoursense
05-09-2012, 08:57 AM
That's what he means... your E's hardly change and nor does your N... and that's 4 outta 5 letters right there.
Not saying it's a bad thing, but you'll improve the most if you try mixing it up a little more.

And for all the talk, here's a hardly half decent sketch from a couple months ago. Now that I have some free time I'll bust out some new shit.



I guess I'm one of those guys who's style doesn't change much but look a nekst that dudes stuff is always the same and people think he's mad good

603Bombsquad
05-09-2012, 11:14 AM
@Atma so fresh.. love it.

Sketch for my boy Bear.

http://i1051.photobucket.com/albums/s424/cred1384/preview_image_1_1970282x.jpg



Totally looks like your ripping SEARS letters hardcore

Coleo
05-09-2012, 12:04 PM
6826168262
bored as hell in math ...just sketches... crits?

bottom page bump for crits

TeeBeeEss
05-09-2012, 12:40 PM
i was bored so my friend gave me a word to do..tell me what you think68277

H1P30N3R
05-09-2012, 12:42 PM
I think you attachment is invalid

TeeBeeEss
05-09-2012, 12:52 PM
shit my b68278

Moe_13
05-09-2012, 04:35 PM
any comments i know i miss consistency and letter structure yet i really don't know how to maintain them
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Coleo
05-09-2012, 04:42 PM
Hello there... crits?
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no

pover
05-09-2012, 04:47 PM
Why?

PETER
05-09-2012, 04:50 PM
See the new to graf thread for your explanation

pover
05-09-2012, 04:55 PM
Um... could you specify? It's long as fuck.

Coleo
05-09-2012, 04:56 PM
keyboard letters.... thats all you get... you bother me for some reason

pover
05-09-2012, 04:58 PM
So much love in here isnt there?

Coleo
05-09-2012, 04:59 PM
yes yes there is....prove that you deserve to be loved...

pover
05-09-2012, 05:01 PM
Maybe, with time, I will. But stop being an ass for no reason.

Coleo
05-09-2012, 05:02 PM
lol i just felt like being an ass today!

Moe_13
05-09-2012, 05:02 PM
this page dosn't accept crits on flicks ?

Coleo
05-09-2012, 05:03 PM
^ i cant read any of that work on letter structure!!!!

pover
05-09-2012, 05:04 PM
Well now you've made me cry, are you happy?

Moe_13
05-09-2012, 05:05 PM
coleo didnt understand you

PETER
05-09-2012, 05:05 PM
Specifically all of it. Not trying to be hateful, but you should visit it regularly just to keep it in your head.

Coleo
05-09-2012, 05:06 PM
lol very happy.... dude just stick to simple letters with even bar widths ... check out my last picture post on this thread

MN Nice
05-09-2012, 05:07 PM
Take it to your PM's. Too much chat.

flick for talk. posted before.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/462e82a1.jpg?t=1336134896

Coleo
05-09-2012, 05:08 PM
coleo didnt understand you

use simple keyboard letters no crazy shit that you cant pull off yet...

Coleo
05-09-2012, 05:09 PM
Take it to your PM's. Too much chat.

flick for talk. posted before.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/462e82a1.jpg?t=1336134896

i like the outline ... hey can you give me some crits on my last post of my two random sketches?? please

Mildstyles
05-09-2012, 05:15 PM
Oh my god i want to peel my face off my face. except 4eyes

Coleo
05-09-2012, 05:16 PM
Pcp?

MN Nice
05-09-2012, 05:17 PM
i like the outline ... hey can you give me some crits on my last post of my two random sketches?? please

Just keep sketching and watch your bars. Before you really get into a piece, either take a step back from it or take a picture of it and really take a good look at it. It'll help you find little errors.

And for real guys, all this chat in here sucks.

Mildstyles
05-09-2012, 05:22 PM
Can't a man just say he wants to peel his face off his face without being questioned?
Bored in class, i actually like this, wish it was in my blackbook for the VAJRA battle :[
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pover
05-09-2012, 05:24 PM
Fuck! It was VAJRA? I wrote VAJR.

AND IT WASN'T AS SHITTY AS THE POVER I'VE JUST POSTED DON'T WORRY.

Coleo
05-09-2012, 05:27 PM
i like vag......... and thanks MN ill keep practicing and once i think i imroved ill post some stuff up!

PETER
05-09-2012, 05:31 PM
i like vag
me too.

Mildstyles
05-09-2012, 05:34 PM
Fuck! It was VAJRA? I wrote VAJR.

just add an A...

Coleo
05-09-2012, 05:37 PM
me too.

we have so much in common!

pover
05-09-2012, 05:39 PM
just add an A...

Yeah I already sent it. Well I guess I'll have to tell the moderator.

TeeBeeEss
05-09-2012, 05:41 PM
shit my b68278

No crits?

pover
05-09-2012, 05:42 PM
No crits?

I like the colors, but those black squares are kinda sketchy...

PETER
05-09-2012, 05:59 PM
Tbs: Way too busy. You seem to grasp the idea of straight letters for the most part. A solid straight looks better than poorly executed wilds all day. Think weed not speed.

DEMPO
05-09-2012, 07:02 PM
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on this WHOLE page 2 pics.... that is weak
nake, raise up the j some and the way u end bars with circles is ok but be thoughtful of where you put em. they sort of put off your bars where they would be fine without them in some places.
4eyes, the puzzle thing is sorta wack bro, your letters look fine with out the puzzle thing. try something else to spice em up.
all the rest of u fizzoools post some more photodees. im out

BasekInfamy
05-09-2012, 08:33 PM
Quick pen freebie
http://i47.tinypic.com/hx17uv.jpg

TeeBeeEss
05-09-2012, 09:35 PM
Tbs: Way too busy. You seem to grasp the idea of straight letters for the most part. A solid straight looks better than poorly executed wilds all day. Think weed not speed.

Thx bro I appreciate it ill work on it

BigFaggot
05-09-2012, 10:28 PM
@ basek, thats nice, you got a real original style that i believe is under appreciated, keep it up.
@ moe, its not complete shit. thers some hidden potential and you have a light idea of letter structure. i like the fills though. and that relik one is kinda nice, or least the R is.
@ pover, keep it more basic, and please make all your bars even and uniformed. itll look alot better.
@ everybody who is chatting too much and giving stupid crits, when they themselves dont understand letter structure. thers a toy chat. go there. and please everyone, post some goddamn pictures.
Just some for fun shit. i almost didnt upload this cuz i know someones gunna shit their pants and say "OMG your totes biting SEAR" shut up.
68416 playin with different shit.

MN Nice
05-09-2012, 11:05 PM
Good shit Basek and Neer. It'd be cool to see some drips coming off of it to match with that gooey look.

Go ahead and crit. My S is a bit funky but I'm just messing around with it more. I'd really like some advice on a Y from a more experienced head.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/a7ae600c.jpg?t=1336618987

Kaze
05-09-2012, 11:27 PM
that looks cool basek, dont really like the S but its alot better then what i can do lol. i dig the B and A.
@neer, looks dope, maybe the bottom leg or the R should have come out a bit more? looks sick though
@4eyes-i think ur second E looks better then the first and S could use some work but the hole thing looks good, i like that 4 alot for some reason.
i know in the second picture the letters rnt even and stuff and the D's need lots of work...any of crits plz?
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MN Nice
05-10-2012, 12:52 AM
Colored it.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/0563ec12.jpg?t=1336625627

H1P30N3R
05-10-2012, 01:30 AM
kaze lookin good man props gettin them simps down 1st one is my personal fav with the r from the third one keep it up man. And tighten up the spacing going bigger with your 3d drop shadow or whatever helps with that.

Rasm
05-10-2012, 01:56 AM
That 4 could make a decent Y.

MN Nice
05-10-2012, 01:58 AM
Think I should use it as a Y and then work with a 4 thats connected at the top?

BasekInfamy
05-10-2012, 01:59 AM
thanks everybody apreciate it and crits
dope shit neer

Rasm
05-10-2012, 02:10 AM
Think I should use it as a Y and then work with a 4 thats connected at the top?
I think you should work with it a little bit first before you just call it a Y, but I was thinking along the same lines about a 4 that's connected at the top, such as the one I just typed.

And for talking, here's something that's nowhere near finished. Trying something different with this one.
I actually just copied it onto another sheet of paper so I can fuck around with all the letters. I'm not satisfied with any of them.

http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/1526/imag0459a.jpg http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/5186/imag0450p.jpg

Kaze
05-10-2012, 02:24 AM
thanks hipe, i appreciate the feedback man. i gotta work on the D alot.

MN- a closed top 4 would be cool or maybe just play around with the angles, maybe have the first bar of the 4 and Y reverse of eachother or having one more slanted or somshit, if not a closed top 4 would be cool

Rasm- i like the E, P and L but really dont like the N, the first part of it seems goodbut that bottom thing is weird i find. the style of ur drawing overal is cool though i think.

KroeGHK
05-10-2012, 03:21 AM
Basek - I really dig your style for real its dope, one thing i'd suggest trying would be to extend your bars a bit so the letters look a bit less beefy, not a necessity, just curious as to how that'd look, keep up the dope work though
Neer - It looks dope, id say maybe take those extra connections er holes or whatever and make them different angles and sizes cos the way it is the N looks kinda like an AI and the R looks like it could almost be a funky B, just a suggestion, props though the letters do look nice
4Eyes - I like it, try rounding off the top left bar of the Y some more though, make it stick out some more, might add some punch to it, like how you did in the green tag on the colored one(as i was typing this i read the crits on the 4/y and proceeded to facepalm....awkward....but yeah second opinions never hurt i guess..)
Kaze - I second Kopr's statement on yours(yeah i was halfway through typing out the same thing he said when i realized thats just stupid and i need to start reading all the crits given before i add mine in...)
Rasm - I like what youre doing, that I is wicked fresh (not to say the others arent, that one just stood out to me for some reason, id say just play with thickening some of your bars like in the L and the N, its coming along dope so far though
Flick for talking:
Some old shit i did a few months back
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Kaze
05-10-2012, 03:58 AM
thanks kroe appreciate the feedback, like kopr said i gotta fill up the empty space in between the letters and shit...that drawing u did is fucking sick... Your R is my favorite letter in it, the extension coming off the bottom of ur first letter is sick too...i dont even know what to say to crit that besides i dig it...just keep practicing i guess lol

Rasm
05-10-2012, 03:59 AM
4Eyes - I like it, try rounding off the top left bar of the Y some more though, make it stick out some more, might add some punch to it, like how you did in the green tag on the colored one(as i was typing this i read the crits on the 4/y and proceeded to facepalm....awkward....but yeah second opinions never hurt i guess..)
Rasm - I like what youre doing, that I is wicked fresh (not to say the others arent, that one just stood out to me for some reason, id say just play with thickening some of your bars like in the L and the N, its coming along dope so far thoughThat's basically what I meant in regards to 4eyes. If his Y had a sharper bend kind of like the top left bar of his 4 does, I think it would look better and more defined. Also, thanks man. Your piece is pretty damn fresh too.


Rasm- i like the E, P and L but really dont like the N, the first part of it seems goodbut that bottom thing is weird i find. the style of ur drawing overal is cool though i think.Haha I didn't really like the E and plan to rebuild it. As far as the N goes, I was fucking around with taking a star shaped cut out of a letter. I think it could work better if it wasn't on the bottom corner of the piece. As for your Dviser sketches up there, I'm liking the D, E, and R in the second sketch the best and the I and S from the first. The third sketch is probably the weakest, especially with the S looking like a 5.

Kaze
05-10-2012, 04:12 AM
thanks rasm i appreciate the crits, i gotta get more flouent and smoother with my letters and shit. i kinda liked the 5 looking S but i should make it look less like a 5, put more style and shit into it i guess and make sure the other letters match it. i like the idea of your E but it is a bit skinny but i like how your middle and top bar come from behind ur main bar. i didnt realize the star idea but now that u say it, it sounds like a good idea...just try and work it into the drawing smoothly somehow, woud look sick

MN Nice
05-10-2012, 08:47 AM
appreciate it guys.

KroeGHK
05-10-2012, 12:19 PM
thanks for the props everyone,i definitely appreciate it
i know this isnt a blackbook piece but i didnt know where else to post it haha
got high and drew on girls
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DEMPO
05-10-2012, 01:00 PM
kinda looks like u gave her an std

KroeGHK
05-10-2012, 02:19 PM
well...i have heard people describe graff as a disease...

pover
05-10-2012, 02:22 PM
Some stuff for you to hate... JK. Or not.

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DEMPO
05-10-2012, 03:08 PM
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MN Nice
05-10-2012, 03:53 PM
Quit trying to add style and work on your structure. The best letter you got there is your J and its still lacking.

Keep your bars even Pover

DEMPO
05-10-2012, 05:40 PM
so its all a big ass waste of my time n' shit ohhhh ma bad

Rasm
05-10-2012, 05:59 PM
Dempo- Nothing's a waste of time... graffiti's one big learning experience. You have a lot of extensions on the bottom that don't really help the piece, and the one on the top right of the V is the same deal. Keep working on those letters to build structure, and then try adding extensions that compliment the style and flow of the piece.

Pover- Keep your bar widths even, or at least fairly even. Although there are times and places where varying the bar width works, you're not quite there yet. Also, your 3D needs some serious help. What happened in the gap towards the bottom of the P? And at the top of the P you made a drop shadow instead... Check out the good threads on this site to get an idea of how 3D should work.

pover
05-10-2012, 06:01 PM
Thanks, learning a lot in here.

DEMPO
05-10-2012, 07:10 PM
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this 1 is prolly equally as bad right?

Mildstyles
05-10-2012, 07:21 PM
No, thats much better. Just drop some of the stupid stuff like the horizontal bar at the bottom of the V, and some of the cuts(or all).
Its not that bad

BigFaggot
05-10-2012, 07:29 PM
lookin way better Dempo, although i would drop the horizontal bar on the v as mentioned but also on the 2nd A. i understand you probly put them there to look symmetrical which os good, cuz your paying attention to balance and shit, but they dont fit. and the first A looks funny, woulda made it same as the second. over all its jery clean and R has potential.

DEMPO
05-10-2012, 08:02 PM
I got to bitch now, it's so irritating that 1 centimeter can ruin your structure. FUCK THAT

BigFaggot
05-10-2012, 08:18 PM
thats why you gotta watch out for that centimetr bro. keep workin on it.

DEMPO
05-10-2012, 08:30 PM
alright yall, this is probobly the most challenging thing in my spare time at the moment so if I happen to get frustrated dont take it personal. thanks for keeping me in check.

BigFaggot
05-10-2012, 09:58 PM
no problem dude.
My nightly peice a crap. i understand the 3d is off it was just freehand, crits.68642
mess around colab!! i was outshined...68644

MN Nice
05-10-2012, 10:06 PM
Much better temp. Neer you gotta step off naked's coattail and work on your own thing. Its all good to take notes and get ideas from each other but that last page looks like it came straight outta his blackbook.

New sketch

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/6e809b32.jpg?t=1336701841

BigFaggot
05-10-2012, 10:20 PM
i dont understand why everybody thinks im "on his coattails". that pissed me off. ive been doing my N's along with everything else before i ever heard of naked. i have been writing writing twice as long as him, i know it doesnt show but i have. he's been posting here longer so suddenly everyone thinks he inspired me to start writing or something. its a generic ass style, and neither of ours of began to delvelop yet. naked does not own diamond tipped bars, or the letter N. your S and 4 are off.

MN Nice
05-10-2012, 10:36 PM
Don't you guys know each other?

BigFaggot
05-10-2012, 10:37 PM
what does that have to do with anything?

Shit Outta Luck
05-10-2012, 10:37 PM
haha funny shit

MN Nice
05-10-2012, 10:42 PM
Chill man. No need to freak the fuck out over the internet. I don't know you or Naked, but him posting his stuff on here first and then you coming along with similar work makes it SEEM like he's been around longer, also considering his sketches and painting are cleaner than yours.

Zookyook
05-10-2012, 10:43 PM
yo VAGINA that shit its tight son! ;-) hahaha

NEER i like that N in the top one fo sho...

goin over the old with some new... paint markers w00t!
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5343/7174286228_48c672dca7.jpg
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7078/7174287250_ab18b8cf3c.jpg

BigFaggot
05-10-2012, 10:54 PM
im not freaking out, i just can never post anything without some one saying that i suck nakeds dick.
and thanks zookyook.

TastyMcNasty
05-10-2012, 10:56 PM
meh
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0078.jpg

Zookyook
05-10-2012, 11:07 PM
no prob bob... yo tasty ur style reminds me a lot of seyor, some dude that used to post on here, i like the ER connection a lot...

bottom page last post bummpin bummpin


http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5343/7174286228_48c672dca7.jpg
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7078/7174287250_ab18b8cf3c.jpg

H1P30N3R
05-10-2012, 11:09 PM
nice stuff zook always liked your style

MN Nice
05-10-2012, 11:22 PM
New sketch

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/6e809b32.jpg?t=1336701841

bumping

Kaze
05-11-2012, 12:09 AM
Tasty- the R is dope but it seems a little small compared to the other letters, i dont really like the loop thing at the bottom, maybe use something like that attachment on your A (assuming its an a) on the R and take out the thing below your E and have the R leg attachment some were there, overal it looks cool

Zookyook- those look clean, bottom blue and green one are my favorites ones

MN nice- it looks good, the first E's top and bottom gap are bigger then the second E's, the first e looks better though i think. you should give the bottom bar of your 4 a slight bend going out alittle bit from the E.

lostyoursense
05-11-2012, 12:40 AM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7213/7174721376_c96d8dcb80.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7174721376/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7174721376/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr


I did the tag in the dark haha I couldn't see it

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 07:19 AM
tasty - i dig what youre doing with the bars and stuff, might look dope if your letters were closer together, bring the attention to them so that the negative space doesnt distract at all, just a thought (art school is rubbing off on me...fuck)
zook - i just creamed over that green drippy throw, its all just filthy in the best way possible, props
4Eyes - that Y is lookin way better, i agree with kaze tho, bend the bottom of those E's, maybe so they match the Y and the S, or just to give it some added style, keep up the good shit though
Flick for the talk
Just fuckin around68668
Crits?

GpersKreepers
05-11-2012, 08:02 AM
good shit from this page,
s is too small i know, trying to nail a clean sketch,
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02715.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02714.jpg
pen freestylezo
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02713.jpg
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee278/backwards_halo/DSC02712.jpg

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 08:15 AM
definitely diggin those middle two, the top bar of the G in the orange one is kinda iffy imo, dope shit though

6i9o
05-11-2012, 10:19 AM
^Digging the second one man
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It says Hydrate. I know I gotta use bars but for some reason my small ass brain cannot understand them yet :|

MN Nice
05-11-2012, 10:49 AM
HYDRATE. Draw it like that, not /)?-(/>^}, ok?

BigFaggot
05-11-2012, 11:23 AM
hydrate, that is beyond being able to say that is illegible, thats not even letters. cpy the letters from your keyboard and play around with em. not too much.
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MN Nice
05-11-2012, 11:34 AM
Redo that one, but don't cover the middle bar of your N with your left leg so much and use the first e twice. Its pretty fresh

BigFaggot
05-11-2012, 12:50 PM
redooo! black fill was real hard and took a long ass time. and ended up looking like shit. trial and error i guess. oh and i left out the second e cause i had no room.
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pover
05-11-2012, 02:44 PM
Posting more toy shit, less toy than yesterday, more than tomorrow.

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Rasm
05-11-2012, 02:45 PM
4EYES- I think that's a nice improvement off your last one. Keep tweaking those letters and it will keep improving.
SENSE- I like how you used a lowercase N this time to mix things up. Still looks very similar to the rest of your work but it's not bad.
KROE- Loving it. But please throw some 3D on there. Could look real dope with a vanishing point in the perfect spot. For example:
http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/5940/kroekilla.jpg
But mess around with a few different ones.
GPERS- Digging those middle two. Keep it up.
NEER- I'd try using the second E from the white and brown sketch twice. Would look real nice along with that R. I'm not sure if I'm feeling the way you have your first E sectioned off like that.
POVER- Looking better but your 3D is still off. Keep it all the same width. Try to keep your bars lined up... the hole inside the P doesn't line up with the bottom leg, etc. Also, you should probably drop the unnecessary bump in the round part of the R and the junk at the top of the O. Does nothing but hurt the piece. Overall an improvement though.

pover
05-11-2012, 03:24 PM
Yeah that shit on my O looks like it has a boner on it's head. Thanks for the crits.

pover
05-11-2012, 04:44 PM
And since I have too much time on my hands, another two here.
Note: The shit inside the V in the first one were to test my markers, and I know I fucked it hard when doing the R on the second one.

68709

68710

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 05:09 PM
that top one is dope, the P is wicked fresh

pover
05-11-2012, 05:18 PM
Thanks dude, been working on that, I need to clean up a lot.

Kaze
05-11-2012, 05:31 PM
sense looks cool man, looks like u got that pretty much down, maybe try to tweak it abit or add some streaks in ur 3d or something.

kroe thats so sick, i like the K and R alot, the E is what i least like about it but it still looks dope.10000times better then what i can do so im not one to be saying what is nice and what isnt.

gpers i like that straight grimey style you have its sick. the bottom 3 are my favorites..which is all of them basicaly lol

6i9o- start with keyboard letters. like we all have to do

neer- The R in the first one is sick, i like the first E and the E u got in the second pic but try to make it match the R abit more but overal it looks dope

pover- the P in the first picture is dope like kroe said. maybe try to make your R match it more, like at the top have the bar swing up and over the main bar like in your P, thenhave the leg extention come out from that and try to have it come down lower then wat its at. the V is interesting just maybe make the line at the bottom of it shorter and have the gap inbetween the two bars bigger. with your E dont have it swing on such a sharp angle, try to make it match the P and R..overal though nice work man, keep it up

pover
05-11-2012, 05:35 PM
Thanks kaze, I'm kinda starting to get this name.

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 05:38 PM
dug up the old books and found these old gems i did for shits n gigs
Amber and Indigo
68716
68715

pover
05-11-2012, 05:40 PM
Wow, that colors, fucking cool, what markers do u use?

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 05:41 PM
all sharpie

6i9o
05-11-2012, 05:54 PM
That's some crazy detail for sharpie's

H1P30N3R
05-11-2012, 05:58 PM
nice stuff kroe I need to get my piece game going .... been working at it for a little over a month as you can tell I put too much time into throws and not piecing.

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120511_160505.jpg

Kaze
05-11-2012, 06:04 PM
-pover. yeh dude just gotta draw the name over and over again until it becomes part of ur muscle memory or w.e the term is. i can see that ur starting to get a flow with the name down, just keep practicing man.
kroe those are sick, the colors are fuking siick, only thing in the first one is that it seems like your D and G are offset from eachother but thats nothing, it all looks sick. the bottom one is sick 2 and flows nicely, just dont really dig the E, i like the concept of it just dont love how it came out there

kopr- that looks cool, maybe with your K, have the leg extend down then up into your O rather then having the bar go long and having the O ontop of it. mahybe have the bottom leg of your P abit longer or somthing. The R is cool but try to do something bout the gap inbetween the top part of ur R to were the right leg comes out, possibly have the leg of the R come up on the same angle so theres no gap there or somthing

Moe_13
05-11-2012, 06:14 PM
68729

dankbudz
05-11-2012, 06:19 PM
hip3- thats a step back, toooo many kinks and bends n shit.

Kaze
05-11-2012, 06:44 PM
seldom- the S in the first one looks kinda off, maybe the top part should be a bit longer. the A and R in the second one looks super clean. E and S in last one are my favorite letters u got there...streaks in the 3d looks spot on too except the missing part in the S lol

dankbudz
05-11-2012, 06:51 PM
ya the hops is super weak. and i don't spend much time on them so when i don't finish i don't finish... ya know?

pover
05-11-2012, 07:04 PM
ya the hops is super weak. and i don't spend much time on them so when i don't finish i don't finish... ya know?

Haha I can imagine you at the end of the S

"Okay, almost done... FUCK THIS SHIT."

Kaze
05-11-2012, 07:11 PM
ya the hops is super weak. and i don't spend much time on them so when i don't finish i don't finish... ya know?

yeh true, everything someone draws is just part of the building block to slowly improve and shit i guess, not like it was for some kind of battle or anything, it looks dope though. the hops doesnt even look bad just comparing to the other 2 its not as nice but u can tell that u didnt spend much time at all on it...still nice though lol

KehmONE
05-11-2012, 07:34 PM
Haha, Hops. I've been playing with that name for a while, it's fun to write.

KroeGHK
05-11-2012, 10:18 PM
-kroe those are sick, the colors are fuking siick, only thing in the first one is that it seems like your D and G are offset from eachother but thats nothing, it all looks sick. the bottom one is sick 2 and flows nicely, just dont really dig the E, i like the concept of it just dont love how it came out there

yeah i see what you mean about the E, the top part is too chunky and the bottom doesnt flow enough so it sticks out like a sore thumb, my E's have improved since that piece though

Kaze
05-11-2012, 10:21 PM
i know the 3d and the streaks are fuked up and that i shouldnt have had the E so close to the S on the bottom one. and the tags r sloppy.
Any crits would be really appreciated.
68768
Kroe- the E still worked but could have gone better too, how long have u been writing for? you got really dope stuff

BigFaggot
05-12-2012, 01:06 AM
68843 pretty happy about this one. need to work on matching the es to the rest

MN Nice
05-12-2012, 01:53 AM
Nice job ^

Work in progress. The pics gonna be big, posting off my phone. Too drunk to fuck with it tonight.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/a3516ec9.jpg

KroeGHK
05-12-2012, 01:58 AM
dug up these oldies from back when i was fuckin with that death metal logo type of lettering
both say Circle Nine
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68846

MN Nice
05-12-2012, 01:59 AM
Nice job ^

Work in progress. The pics gonna be big, posting off my phone. Too drunk to fuck with it tonight.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/a3516ec9.jpg

Bumping

KroeGHK
05-12-2012, 02:02 AM
i dig what you did with the coloring, came out fresh, kinda got a little wonky in the bottom of the S and the Y though