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Kaze
06-07-2012, 04:07 PM
last 2 pages r lookg sick, geepers one of my buddies writes resin hahah, urs looks dope though nice dude keep it up

dank i like that top kalm more but bot look sick, both ruby's looks dope, those streaks look spot on, maybe with your Y on the bottom Ruby you should have had it bend up on a slight angle or somthing

kroe that looks dope dude, i dont dig the top part of the E though but it all looks real nice, i dig that G and P

bigfaggot i like your new MEGR name, i really dig that R u did on the last page in the bottom pic with the 2 megrs

willis looking better, keep practicing man and work on those S's

Shit outta luck, thats a interesting drawing u did, could have gone simpler but it still looks cool, keep at it man

KroeGHK
06-07-2012, 04:15 PM
word? lol the G and the P are actually my least favorites, but thanks tho, i'm bored af, you down for a handstyle exchange?

Shit Outta Luck
06-07-2012, 05:19 PM
Dank, I really dig that top one and I feel you about Y's. Gotta give it to people like Yes2 who kill it. Anyways besides the bottom Y the left bar of the upper B is real awkward and the B on the bottom is good. It kind of reminds me of an R though...but that's probably because of the pencil lines you left in.

Kaze
06-07-2012, 06:32 PM
^^ yeh im for sure down kroe, haha thats funny, i unno i think the G looks dope, i like that bottom notch you got on it. the "some fancy clown" handstyle is nice too...clean rolling

BigFaggot
06-07-2012, 06:39 PM
thanks tasty and kaze
gophe that looks nice, digital fill looks sick.
some wacky shiiiiiii.
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Kaze
06-07-2012, 07:02 PM
fucking awsome E and R haha. dig those faces. maybe take out the middle bar in your G, kinda makes it look like an uppercase E

BigFaggot
06-07-2012, 07:13 PM
shit i didnt even notice that haha, its supposed to be a little extension to R. thanks breh

Kaze
06-07-2012, 07:29 PM
np man, either way the hole thing still looks dope, just an idea..maybe for the extension going to the R ahve it coming from the top extension bar of your G...like were ur extension ontop of G comes down and kinda meets the middle part of your G and the part that is already pointing out sorta towards your R, sounds really confusing but hopefully u get what im saying...it could end up not looking tat great though

BigFaggot
06-07-2012, 07:31 PM
nah i get what your saying, sshoulda done that haha.

dankbudz
06-07-2012, 08:03 PM
kaze- shoulda just done my Y like a normal Y and not get it twisted
sol- them pen lines
faggot- thats dope

used sharpie to outline instead of ballpoint... so much quicker but it doesn't look as nice
and i know my bars are off

Mildstyles
06-07-2012, 08:19 PM
Fun experiment and same old piece
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dankbudz
06-07-2012, 08:32 PM
the one on the right

no-sleep
06-07-2012, 09:31 PM
Mild - those are pre good work on the skull
Dank - that bottom one is fressh

Kaze
06-07-2012, 11:52 PM
dank top one looks nice, onlything i can say is it looks liek the bottom part of you L is abit too thin, bottom one is dope too, maybe should have made the two edges of your S more of a striaght line then rounded like on your E and L

looks good naked, right one looks better i think but it looks like your E and D went abit high, thats real minor though

BigFaggot
06-07-2012, 11:55 PM
and another because i have no life.
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MN Nice
06-08-2012, 12:36 AM
Pen freebie colored. I'm didn't want to finish the glow/bubbles around it so I just did some shoopin on it. Good shit guys, Anyone who posted on this page before want to exchange, hit me up, I'm a little drunk and bored.

Oh and Kaze too, your name seems fun to fuck with.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/6ba53987.jpg?t=1339133950

"MONSTER"
06-08-2012, 04:32 PM
7390273903739047390573906739077390873909

monsters blackbook from a while back

TastyMcNasty
06-08-2012, 05:26 PM
New work in progress. Let me know what you think
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0096-1.jpg

Mildstyles
06-08-2012, 05:38 PM
me gusta^^ circle part on the R looks a little small, and the left of the A gets a little crazy for my taste

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graffiti bad boy
06-08-2012, 07:37 PM
hi im a giant faggot look at my gay face

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yeah your a faggot

blackmath
06-08-2012, 09:15 PM
Finally figured out how to blend with those damn prisma markers. E's fucked up fuck off

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Shit Outta Luck
06-08-2012, 10:51 PM
The people in this thread are degrading even more then the sketches. Ugh, anyways Tasty I dig it but the bottom of the N looks a little empty, or maybe the A just has too much going on. Listen to Mone's crits for ya in the intermediate thread. Naked, some of the letter widths are off, the K is a bit odd (the top bar mostly) in my opinion and the D is a bit large. Otherwise looking good.

Buck
06-08-2012, 11:57 PM
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu23/kronikcrawler/69e5b636.jpg
Pissed off a bit that it looks like DUCK.
The white outline kinda ruined it too. :/

snday
06-09-2012, 12:32 AM
What you said it is very interesting.Thank you.

Wizard
06-09-2012, 08:22 AM
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just testing so fuunnnnnky shiiit lol.. any crits? :)

Hick94
06-09-2012, 09:21 AM
sketch i did today any crits
http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/7090/img0088gf.jpg
just noticed aswell that i missed a bit of 3d on the E

Wizard
06-09-2012, 09:26 AM
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Hick94
06-09-2012, 09:42 AM
go simpler...lose all the tweaks especially on the w and space out them letters also try keep them along the same line

TastyMcNasty
06-09-2012, 01:08 PM
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just testing so fuunnnnnky shiiit lol.. any crits? :)

better

Buck
06-09-2012, 01:40 PM
One from today. Turned out a little dark.
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu23/kronikcrawler/83ccbac1.jpg
Crits welcome as always. Thanks

Rasm
06-09-2012, 02:28 PM
Wiz, lose the halo in your tag.

Kaze
06-09-2012, 03:23 PM
ur on the right track hick, keep doing those simples, wizzard first post is better then the second one, keep doing simple stuff dude

Buck thats dope, i like that B alot, only thing is it seems like your C and K are smaller then ur first 2 letters. i dig those highlights too, looks dope man, ur tag has gotten better too, i like the buck 12 idea haha nice dude

KEAZE
06-09-2012, 04:16 PM
http://i1057.photobucket.com/albums/t383/MRsevenOHfive/BS%20toy%20tread%20and%20sketch%20battles/DSC01407.jpg

Buck
06-09-2012, 04:54 PM
Buck thats dope, i like that B alot, only thing is it seems like your C and K are smaller then ur first 2 letters. i dig those highlights too, looks dope man, ur tag has gotten better too, i like the buck 12 idea haha nice dude

thanks mayne!
Now that you say it. The c and k do look smaller.
Back to the drawing board. Lol

Willis1989
06-09-2012, 07:37 PM
Buck keep workin those letters man n ur shit will be minted in a short while, u got the colors n 3d down keep at it.
Wiz, take a look at the new to graffiti thread and work on simp letters ur fills etc r ok but ur letters are way off, ur first piece on this page is probs best uve posted on here keep working on those n ull progress

TastyMcNasty
06-09-2012, 08:11 PM
closer to being done
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0097-1-1.jpg

Mildstyles
06-09-2012, 08:52 PM
Just did this freestyle.... WITH A NEW SILVER SHARPIE. this things amazing
yeah my hipster phase came back
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TastyMcNasty
06-09-2012, 09:02 PM
closer to being done
http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0097-1-1.jpg

bottom page bamp

Axil
06-10-2012, 04:17 AM
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Doing this on a wall today Chrome Fill

Critz are welcome :)

Kitten
06-10-2012, 11:20 AM
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graffiti bad boy
06-10-2012, 02:42 PM
doing this on a wall today chrome fill

please dont

Axil
06-10-2012, 05:25 PM
Mate Get a picture up instead of Being a dick in every one off your post

Brosef Stalin
06-10-2012, 06:15 PM
I second what he said to you, please don't.

OSAPonder
06-10-2012, 07:34 PM
Two pieces, forget that ther is no outline, I just wanted the second one to look really clean7420174199

Brosef Stalin
06-10-2012, 07:39 PM
^ No.

akaSKIZ
06-10-2012, 08:08 PM
this page suckkkks right now hahaha someone post somethin good. Pretty much everyone who has posted a pic on this page so far: Go Simpler!

Mildstyles
06-10-2012, 08:12 PM
Son u gay.... Mines too hipster for you

H1P30N3R
06-10-2012, 08:13 PM
^^ why dont you bro since they all suck n it was your idea ....

best thing I have cause my piece game is whackkk too. Also the toy forum always gets flooded with hipster kids goin through the "its rebelious to do graff in the summer stage."

http://i1204.photobucket.com/albums/bb409/heyzues07/IMG_20120512_202747.jpg

dankbudz
06-10-2012, 08:16 PM
akaskiz- go jump off a really really REALLY tall building

skinaone
06-10-2012, 09:04 PM
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ugh i feel toy

Kaze
06-10-2012, 09:12 PM
^those 2 top drawings r dope,i like the bottom graff pic the most, maybe try to go more simple and shit for a bit

akaskizz, what you said would hold more weight if you showed that you yourself are actualy good....and even if you were it would just make u an arrogant asshole.

mildstyles and Tasty i dig those both alot, real sick

Axil, the D and B dont match

kitten keep doing them simples and keep working on ur letter sizing..i gotta do that too alot

osaPonder...holy shit those r terrible, do keyboard letters dude

kopr looking good, nice consistency, 3D is nice too except just in the middle of the O, the coloring u did inside makes it looks like a yellow brick wall design, even thouse the lines r more circular then square lol

this is for the exchange with MnNice, wanted to get some advice on any ways to fix it up before i go any further
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H1P30N3R
06-10-2012, 09:17 PM
the top loop on the y looks off but your learning and developing well might even have passed me piece wise ..... suprise suprise the hopeless piecer I am lol im just too impatient. If I start something I have to finish it and piecing takes more time than I like spending on 1 thing.... maybe ill cop some adderol and zone out for a few months and get decent.

<J-one>
06-10-2012, 09:26 PM
What's up gents
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Get drunk and throw up
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GASR.
GKK.

skinaone
06-10-2012, 09:28 PM
ive been doing simps for like 4 years and 3 diff names i think its time to try harder stuff for me lmao
but yeah
yeyes its wayyy to simp bars are way too fat makes them look like bombs not peices if that what your going for then ok keep them fat as bars but play around with them try making dudads here and there

Kaze
06-10-2012, 09:33 PM
@hipe. thanks for the crits man, do you think i should make it less circular and have the vertical bar line up better or? i know what u meen with pieces man there a fukin pain in the ass...im trying to gain more patients too, sometimes i have more then other times but usualy taking a chop or if not smoking a j or somshit helps out. and nah man fuck no ur not hopeless with piecing, just gotta be persistent with that shit...your really strong with doing throwies and u can do handstyles so y not burners? i feel envy towards pple that r just naturaly good at it and who can learn so fast, that shit makes me want to just give up with this shit but we all develop differently

Brosef Stalin
06-10-2012, 09:53 PM
Kinda fucking with something for the first time since I started writing... been mostly focused on handstyles and throws... I'll post when I'm finished.

akaSKIZ
06-10-2012, 10:19 PM
lol my bad dudes.. i really didnt mean to be mean.. and @mildstyles i didnt mean yours (again i apologize i didnt specify lol) yours is pretty dope tho up at the top. and same for tasty mcnasty... those ones under them were really the ones i was talkin about and they got me mad because they are pretty bad (here i am actually being mean) but for real im liking what im seeing now. thanks peoples

Brosef Stalin
06-10-2012, 11:03 PM
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Work in progress.
Not sure what the fuck to do with the H, first attempt at piece style.

Buck
06-11-2012, 12:20 AM
Piece I did tonight.
Got a little crazy. Lol.
Crits welcome as always.
http://i630.photobucket.com/albums/uu23/kronikcrawler/62e26baa.jpg

Kaze
06-11-2012, 12:47 AM
Stalin that looks like more of a throwie then a piece, it looks interesting though i like the monkeyhead ontop of ur I lol. go on the internet and get some ideas and just keep practicing

Buck the bottom extension on ur B looks kinda off. i like the buck on the bottom alot

Bas
06-11-2012, 12:49 AM
I dunno Buck. Why don't you focus a bit more on letter structures before throwing in that much colour? You obviously know how to do that, but the letters aren't working. Furthermore, don't just throw in a million of the same additions, like cracks, glares, bubbles, and - especially - drips. It's just overkill (and none of them are done right, so that they distract from the rest of the sketch, which is of higher quality).

Buck
06-11-2012, 01:01 AM
Thanks.
I dont know why I go so crazy.
I just go and don't stop until I'm happy or it looks too busy. Lol

Obviously way to busy with this one.
I just figure the more I practice (good or shitty) the better I will get.
It's not so much that I don't work on structure. I just get something I kinda like and run with it.


My biggest problem is not being able to give all the letters the same style I guess... If that makes sense?
It will come with time and practice.


Thank you again for the positive crits fellas.
I'm trying to do one decent piece a day in hope I will get better. Lmao.

That's bottom extension on the b looks off because it's not flat like the rest. Its at an angle. I noticed it when I uploaded the pic. S.O.B. oh well. Lol

Bas
06-11-2012, 01:13 AM
Having fun doing is of course the most important part. And practicing every day is obviously a good strategy. Good luck!

Wizard
06-11-2012, 04:12 AM
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Any crits?

Willis1989
06-11-2012, 05:02 AM
Hipe - Looks ok, I dont think the H is too bad I quite like it. Use bars and straight letters and it will help u get better.
Buck - I like it but too busy as has been said. If you want to get better at letters then just forget colours n shit for now, in the time it probably took to colour and add effects to that one piece you could draw 4 or 5 black and white pieces and your letters will develop way quicker.
Wiz - Looking better keep using them bars.

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120611_083026.jpg?t=1339408940

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120609_094217.jpg?t=1339409012

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120611_083053.jpg?t=1339408907

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120611_083105.jpg?t=1339408864

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120611_083117.jpg?t=1339409113

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120609_094232.jpg?t=1339409171

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120609_094210.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120609_094055-1.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120609_114416.jpg

Wizard
06-11-2012, 05:33 AM
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Any crits? :P

Willis1989
06-11-2012, 06:32 AM
Better, I would make the bars coming of top and bottom of Z a little shorter, and make sure bar widths are the same, keep at it.

Kaze
06-11-2012, 10:40 AM
looking good willis, i like thatbottom acid one, maybe the I should have had a similar bend as the A though or just been striaght, looking good though man


WIZ, like willis said dont have that Z like that, both shorten the vertical top and bottom bars, on ur top picture the 3d looks kinda off 2, just keep practicing simples

dankbudz
06-11-2012, 02:56 PM
class drawn

skinaone
06-11-2012, 03:01 PM
nice nice nice seld is dopish
fix that D tho

BigFaggot
06-11-2012, 04:14 PM
dank that character is sick. piece is nice as well just the D looks a little too tilted.
some gay ass busy work. i hide my shitty structure in stupid extensions. 3ds way off.
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i tried to update it after i added a background but i cant delete the other. sue me.

Sinister151
06-11-2012, 05:26 PM
74516
not crazy but crisp

TastyMcNasty
06-11-2012, 05:47 PM
dank, shit's clean. love the character
megr, there;s definitely structure there, but you went a little too crazy on add ons and stuff. all in all, not bad
sinister, i dont know what you're doing, but you should stop. simple it up

EWL24
06-11-2012, 11:19 PM
wiz - ur finally moving in the right direction, but lose the extensions on the Z

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blackmath
06-12-2012, 03:57 AM
Not finished
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Willis1989
06-12-2012, 04:56 AM
http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120612_084902.jpg?t=1339494976

blackmath
06-12-2012, 11:44 AM
That character sucks.... and so does that 'skyline'

EWL24
06-12-2012, 12:54 PM
bump for crits
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MN Nice
06-12-2012, 01:06 PM
You gotta get in the mindset of fonts. Like on the top one, Your E is curved, but yet your W and L are sharp on the direction changes. Second one is pretty good, diggin the portal theme.

Wizard
06-12-2012, 02:40 PM
74696
any crits

EWL24
06-12-2012, 02:52 PM
^^go buy or rack a skin colored marker, it makes chars look a lot better

not sure what else to do with this so
any crits would be helpful
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Wizard
06-12-2012, 02:55 PM
[QUOTE=EWL24;1804860]^^go buy or rack a skin colored marker, it makes chars look a lot better

nah cbf.. dont do that many characters lol

MN Nice
06-12-2012, 02:57 PM
Wiz go fill up a notebook with only pen handstyles. Then look around at other peoples handstyles, take notes, and do it again. A better handstyle does more to your pieces than you think.

Ewl - pretty solid, cool idea for the question mark coloring.

some sloppy isht for talk.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/95ffd314.jpg?t=1339531136

notmikegiant
06-12-2012, 03:35 PM
@ ewal - dig the portal theme, MN is right about keeping letters uniform though, either way the top one looks clean even if it isnt totally on point, what if you used the question mark fill on the enigma but like going with the letters, so you flip ? on its side and make it line up with ENIGMA, i think that would be cool
@ wiz - work on everything, sorry but it all looks like it took five minutes total to draw, not that time spent is super important, but if you spent five minutes on it you dont want it to look like you did, ya dig?
@ mn - quick and dirty, i like your letters because they look kinda bubbly and juicy with that shine, no homo, keep using that capital E in your handstyle i love it

disgusting pencil sketch, i want to do something with a red cup for an O, crits always appreciated

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<J-one>
06-12-2012, 03:39 PM
GASR
GKK
Bic pen freestyle

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Saul Gud
06-12-2012, 03:49 PM
^That Gasr is sick! Only crit is that the R doesn't seem to match the rest of the letters, but gud work

Shit Outta Luck
06-12-2012, 03:53 PM
4eyes and Gasr dope.
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MASTAH_RIBCAGE
06-12-2012, 04:39 PM
Only crit is that the R doesn't seem to match the rest of the letters, but gud work

the r matches fine.

TastyMcNasty
06-12-2012, 05:57 PM
GASR
GKK
Bic pen freestyle

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dooopppeeeeeeeeeeee

Wizard
06-12-2012, 07:48 PM
I'm stoned... revising for tests is borrrring 74756

Arose.One
06-12-2012, 08:16 PM
@GASR: that's so dope, and simplistic too. really nice form and structure. want to see one of your pieces with a nice fill.
@Wizard: That char at the top is pretty bad. white kid with a backwards cap, smirking with a paint can, you must be one of those suburbs or beverely hills cats trying to connect with the street aesthetic. Anyways, that char at the bottom, it works somehow. i think with some flat colors, a bit offset from the lines, would look really good on a wall. no jokes.

H1P30N3R
06-12-2012, 09:16 PM
word alot of times simple characters outshine detailed characters

EWL24
06-12-2012, 10:05 PM
simple characters can be good, but that shit looks like a 12 year old drew it

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KroeGHK
06-13-2012, 01:00 AM
just somethin to keep from getting too rusty
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Wizard
06-13-2012, 02:00 AM
@GASR: that's so dope, and simplistic too. really nice form and structure. want to see one of your pieces with a nice fill.
@Wizard: That char at the top is pretty bad. white kid with a backwards cap, smirking with a paint can, you must be one of those suburbs or beverely hills cats trying to connect with the street aesthetic. Anyways, that char at the bottom, it works somehow. i think with some flat colors, a bit offset from the lines, would look really good on a wall. no jokes.
yea im from ireland mate.. and im from the street.. im a white kid that wears a cap backways.. whats the big dealeo?

Wizard
06-13-2012, 02:22 AM
hahaha having fun with this wee dude.74827

Willis1989
06-13-2012, 03:39 AM
Any crits on my letters?


http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120612_084902.jpg?t=1339494976

Willis1989
06-13-2012, 03:43 AM
http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/fadea.jpg?t=1339577297

KroeGHK
06-13-2012, 04:26 AM
just somethin to keep from getting too rusty
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bottom page bumpage
i hate the P with a passion

Dossbog
06-13-2012, 10:25 AM
YOKEL
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I've put in time with straight letters and simples and now i want to start bombing with more of a euro style

Chrae713
06-13-2012, 10:58 AM
Just started sketching 2 days agos, need some help with the shadowing.
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PETER
06-13-2012, 11:06 AM
Chrae: You need help with everything. Please see the new to graffiti thread. Start at page one and read all the way through.

Mcnuggets
06-13-2012, 11:10 AM
http://i47.tinypic.com/2eph5wj.jpg

Mcnuggets
06-13-2012, 11:15 AM
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/cfb38cc5.jpg

http://i47.tinypic.com/165qwz.jpg


Crits please

HeyThere(O.o)
06-13-2012, 11:19 AM
Got no love from the Pic Gallery so fuck it...
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EWL24
06-13-2012, 04:59 PM
Kroe - yeah the P is weird, but every thing else looks pretty good so nice job
chrae and mcnuggets - you guys have to go a lot simpler. use keyboard letters for now

bump for crits
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Arose.One
06-13-2012, 06:19 PM
@Wiz: keep rocking that char

skets
06-13-2012, 06:57 PM
What I've been up to latley, most of these are from class:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/pomb1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/rmp1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/tonedeaf1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/phow1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/maria1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/lime1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/cupid1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/claim1.jpg

crits/comments please.

nice quick little pieces, its nice that you were not like most toys adding unececary aarows, splaters, colors, ect., keep it up

Live4TheWall
06-13-2012, 07:13 PM
75036

Left it a little simple cause Im gonna be using colored pencils on this, not sure if I wanna do 3-D or just some kinda crazy outline. Fill is gonna be a lil crazy. Thoughts ?

HeyThere(O.o)
06-13-2012, 07:29 PM
I loiik it!
Thicken it up a little..

Live4TheWall
06-13-2012, 07:48 PM
I think Im gonna thicken up the outline once I do the fill, make the letters a lil more pronounced.

AstoK
06-13-2012, 08:13 PM
75045

HeyThere(O.o)
06-13-2012, 08:14 PM
Astok if you can really put that down I'll give you "Creds"...

AstoK
06-13-2012, 08:17 PM
digital colouring of a sketch i did, heres the sketch
75046

HeyThere(O.o)
06-13-2012, 08:23 PM
Yeah I see, the sketch isn't digital? If not good shit.

BigFaggot
06-13-2012, 08:33 PM
good shit astok.
not my favorite, 3ds off, and i had to do black and white because i fucked up the color scheme cuz i iz a buttcheek.
75062 crits appreaciated.

HeyThere(O.o)
06-13-2012, 08:55 PM
That's dope BigFag. I'll upload a piece I sketched today in a little.

no-sleep
06-13-2012, 09:26 PM
Bigfagg ur shits lookin good

no-sleep
06-13-2012, 09:30 PM
some ish from a few weeks ago.. critzz7506775068j is fucked75069 dislike that purple e

HeyThere(O.o)
06-13-2012, 10:25 PM
Drunk.. But fuck it...
75086

P3arLY Pa1nT
06-14-2012, 12:08 AM
a lil paper play(:
75095

P3arLY Pa1nT
06-14-2012, 12:10 AM
"could have" been better but...
75096

Mcnuggets
06-14-2012, 01:21 AM
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/cfb38cc5.jpg

http://i47.tinypic.com/165qwz.jpg


Crits please

Bumpsssss

Sicotik13
06-14-2012, 01:38 AM
a lil paper play(:
75095

wtf? O.o

GpersKreepers
06-14-2012, 03:30 AM
dont bump and re- quote pictures that are shit,

Mildstyles
06-14-2012, 07:26 AM
yeah im leaving bombingscience for the summer

BigFaggot
06-14-2012, 08:04 AM
only things on this page that arent shit are jern and hey ther.
thanks heyther/no sleep.
jern, your on the path but you gotta bar your stuff out more, once you learn the structure with the bars you can start to round the letters like that.

PETER
06-14-2012, 08:22 AM
Jern: your lower case R's look like P's. otherwise you're on the right track.

Heyther: on the right track keep it up. Give your letters a little more deffinition. It's a little difficult to read. you said butt fuck.

Everyone else see the new to graffiti thread.

Axil
06-14-2012, 10:12 AM
First sketch with my fully name

Critz - are welcome

http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7228/7371967512_2ee71a8d44_z.jpg

ZIK_ONER
06-14-2012, 10:32 AM
3d is fucked up, and your letters aren't the same style, see how your A is sharp, and your K is oval round the edges? Yeah, fix that. There's a lot more I could say but that's a no brainer.

HeyThere(O.o)
06-14-2012, 10:48 AM
Hell yeah I said butt fuck! Hah.
It's supposed to be that way my mans.
and @Axil try pens.. You should be throwin down with those markers.

Shit Outta Luck
06-14-2012, 10:55 AM
yeah im leaving bombingscience for the summer
Let's do it. It can be a collaborative effort.

Axil
06-14-2012, 11:01 AM
Some of the best in the toy thread leaving :(

Wizard
06-14-2012, 11:07 AM
75125

PETER
06-14-2012, 11:15 AM
751287512975126
75127

Randy Lahey
06-14-2012, 11:19 AM
<YOKEL> Just trying out some euro style
75130
75131

Wizard
06-14-2012, 11:20 AM
you already uploaded that top pic???

GpersKreepers
06-14-2012, 12:00 PM
yokel - did you see some oker stuff? he's sick at this style
http://www.puregraffiti.com/graffiti-gallery/data/1189/IMG_12572.JPG
http://getnloose.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/oker1_600px-600x397.jpg

Randy Lahey
06-14-2012, 12:39 PM
75140

MN Nice
06-14-2012, 02:30 PM
exchange with da dude kaze

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/d8d1c6e3.jpg?t=1339701614

Kaze
06-14-2012, 02:58 PM
looks real dope man, dig how u did that I, im gonna go get back working on urs

Jern, looking good keep doing simples like that

Peter i dig the bottom yellow and black warning, it looks dope

Yokel, those should be in throwie section but dope style i dig it

Axil go simpler

ZIK_ONER
06-14-2012, 03:55 PM
75172 simple, freestyle, crits?

Kaze
06-14-2012, 04:04 PM
nice cast, just an idea, maybe with the bottom of your S have it going under the A and C or sothing maybe, C looks kinda small compared to other letters and uneven at parts, also maybe have the top of the A a little rounded off, it looks good though dude, keep at it

Kaze
06-14-2012, 07:09 PM
need help on this fucking 3d, looks like a fucking 4 year old did it...i know letters rnt that great either...any kind of advice on how to make my 3d not look like complete shit would be handy...or if this is just not going to work if i should just scratch that 3d idea and go with something easier.

75214

HeyThere(O.o)
06-14-2012, 07:14 PM
Yo it's just like doin the same shape of yer letter just back beside under above before out or in alittle or alot, tis up to you my friend. Lol..
You got the idea though..

Kaze
06-14-2012, 07:18 PM
thanks for the words of widsom, they are helpfull lol but its like some lines i do will just make it look akward and throw it off and it just pisses me off...i dono fuk it il prob jsut erase all that bullshit and do something else with the 3D

HeyThere(O.o)
06-14-2012, 07:23 PM
You'll figure it out, a real tip though take a ruler draw your lines back some with the ruler at the same exact measurement at each angle and you got it..

Kaze
06-14-2012, 07:59 PM
thanks man i appreciate your help, sadly i cant use rulers on curves or id be saved lol il try to figure somthing out...do u think i should just erase the hole thing and redue it or just try to go back and fix errors

HeyThere(O.o)
06-14-2012, 08:03 PM
No problem.
I'd say fix the errors, if that outline's thick enough it'll look pretty dope.

Kaze
06-14-2012, 08:12 PM
k dope thanks for the advice, il just fix the errors rather then erasing it all...gonna draw some simpler letters and practice the 3d with a ruler after. so once i get the 3d looking decent i should go and outline the hole thing with a sharpie or somthing to hide the little angle problems and stuff?

Curry952
06-15-2012, 02:34 AM
75239
I need to work with some colors. It's supposed to be "Sunny" it was an old tag, I'm workin on something new now.
75240
Doodle
75241
I tried somethin new here and I know the sizes are all off but I think it has potential

I'm open to advice and criticism, so have at it if ya like.

Kaze
06-15-2012, 04:14 AM
^ go much simpler, practice drawing out keyboard letters
exchange for MNnice, kinda fuked up on the tags srry.
75242

Crok
06-15-2012, 05:35 AM
75243

75244

any crits please ?

Mcnuggets
06-15-2012, 07:02 AM
been practsing<cant spell that :S<on characters and letters crits please

http://i45.tinypic.com/f4grnk.jpg
http://i45.tinypic.com/34xexrq.jpg

Mcnuggets
06-15-2012, 07:07 AM
@curry you shud practice on the 3rd more buddy
@Kaze im feeling it man
@crok you i,n need some work but nice thought the first one is good but the 3d is kinda messed up

Willis1989
06-15-2012, 08:56 AM
flash sux on this cam, crits on letters pls
http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120614_224242.jpg?t=1339768821

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120614_224318.jpg

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120614_224305.jpg

Wizard
06-15-2012, 09:01 AM
75125
bump! cus i got no crits haha

Big Africa
06-15-2012, 09:42 AM
@ cro2k both are pretty good i like the ears the best though just keep working with your bars man
@ mcnuggets try going more simple man
@ willis keep it up man just keep working on your bar widths
@ wiz keep working on your bars man, i would leave the drips and stuff alone for now

I havent really posted anything in a while, I'm just working on my bars and structure before i starts with fills and 3d crits are welcome.
P.S. i know my marker skills are lacking lolz

http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/2012-06-15101141.jpg

http://i1171.photobucket.com/albums/r554/sjmason92/2012-06-15101236.jpg

HeyThere(O.o)
06-15-2012, 10:28 AM
Lol take your own advice homie work on em barrs.
And I'd just throw on some drop shadow.

Rasm
06-15-2012, 10:30 AM
@Willis, watch your bar widths man... and don't extend the horizontal bar of the A so far into the two vertical bars.
@Mcnuggets, go way simpler. You have almost zero letter structure in there. Also learn how to spell practicing.
@Cro2k, I definitely see potential in your work. Keep putting in time. Your 3D is a little off in a few places though.
@Kaze, your 3D is fucked on that one man... at the very bottom of the letters it goes almost horizontally out to the left, but in some spots, like the far right part of the S, it goes almost vertically upwards. The 3D should come off at the same angle everywhere, and should also be the same width, which it isn't in your piece.
@BigAfrica, you also gotta keep your bars the same width man.

HeyThere(O.o)
06-15-2012, 10:41 AM
Yo Kaze good shit with the fill and shadow still could use some work but nice.
And that Ears is lookin pretty dope too, thicken up that E though. Keep progressin'

Kaze
06-15-2012, 03:50 PM
^ thanks man, yeh it came out better then i thought it was gonna but still could be alot better

BigFaggot
06-15-2012, 03:57 PM
not my favorite
75323
crits please

MN Nice
06-15-2012, 04:13 PM
Got damn you've been going hard on those pieces. Good shit, mad improvement.

Jiska Matos
06-15-2012, 04:28 PM
75324
under construction :P

Jiska Matos
06-15-2012, 04:30 PM
75325
and something new

Wizard
06-15-2012, 05:11 PM
Lol take your own advice homie work on em barrs.
And I'd just throw on some drop shadow.
I second that

Rasm
06-15-2012, 09:39 PM
In the words of Kool A.D,
Shut up, hush up
Please, shut the fuck up
Shut up, dude, shut up

Arose.One
06-16-2012, 01:21 AM
BigFag & Jiska. you cats should move up to the intermediate thread.

BigFaggot
06-16-2012, 10:07 AM
thanks man, but i think ill chill in here for a while, till i get a style down and some shit under control. jiska definitely though, thats stuffs nice.
been playin around with some geometric stuff.
75373

Hick94
06-16-2012, 02:09 PM
Jiskas your definitely intermidiate material
Big Faggot loving that sketch your not far from inetermediate in my opinion
any crits on this sketch i did
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/2163/img0095kb.jpg

Tranc
06-16-2012, 02:36 PM
Letters kinda get smaller and the N isn't working for me

burn222
06-16-2012, 03:08 PM
75375
crits please

Hick94
06-16-2012, 03:32 PM
leave charecters out of your schetches for a while....focus more on your letters more aswell notice how the bars are all different widths same with height.Your best off just to do keyboard letters for a while to get better structure

Kaze
06-16-2012, 03:39 PM
yeh do what hick says and just practice keyboard letters for little whille, look at how off sized all those letters are, especialy the I, gotta work on that man i know its hard though, i have a hard tme with it my self

Axil
06-16-2012, 08:59 PM
5min sketch critz please
75425

Big Africa
06-16-2012, 11:09 PM
@ axil spend more time on it, use your bars man

akaSKIZ
06-17-2012, 09:22 AM
made this real quick last night for my pops
75446
i know i should probly go simpler and stuff still but i thought id throw something cool up for him for Father's Day!
Happy Father's Day to any dads out there too!
Critz are welcome as always

BigFaggot
06-17-2012, 11:37 AM
quickie collabs yo!
75459

H1P30N3R
06-17-2012, 11:39 AM
nice shit bro your style is developing into some sick shit!

BigFaggot
06-17-2012, 11:42 AM
haha thanks man

H1P30N3R
06-17-2012, 11:44 AM
join my internet crew bro OFFB in this bitch!!

Jiska Matos
06-17-2012, 11:45 AM
quickie collabs yo!
75459
i like the US style that you do, keep it up! i don't plan on going to itermidiate thread so soon, like u said im going to tchill here for a litlle bit more

Jiska Matos
06-17-2012, 11:49 AM
join my internet crew bro offb in this bitch!!
epic name xd

H1P30N3R
06-17-2012, 11:51 AM
Its not a crew its a way of life! lmao

omiz
06-17-2012, 12:55 PM
75467
75468
comments?
crits?

Shit Outta Luck
06-17-2012, 02:13 PM
AKA The Rugged Child
75487

Mildstyles
06-17-2012, 03:09 PM
Black one came out bad
7549075491

Gatsoi
06-17-2012, 03:13 PM
Nes, i havent posted in a minute
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/nes.jpg

dankbudz
06-17-2012, 09:07 PM
good shit megr

BigFaggot
06-18-2012, 11:19 AM
thanks man, those selds are nice, the one with blue 3d is the best i think because the s is sick. but make the middle bar on the E longer to fill that space

Randy Lahey
06-18-2012, 12:27 PM
<yokel>
75600

omiz
06-18-2012, 12:40 PM
looks like "jok=L" to me

PETER
06-18-2012, 01:18 PM
looks like "jok=l" to me

i second that. The y isn't working at all nor is the broken up e. Or the lumpy left side of the k for that matter. Tighty up your bar widths a bit and try putting the short piece of the y on the other side.

dankbudz
06-18-2012, 04:23 PM
.

BigFaggot
06-18-2012, 04:39 PM
seld, the bottom left one is sick. the one on the right would look tight if the letters were a little closer.
and yokel, listen to those guys, and please get rid of those stars.
75618

Kaze
06-18-2012, 07:03 PM
i really like the bottom right one dank, the faces r sick i dig the eyebrows haha. bottom left pic and devise looks tight as well

yokel that does not look nice. go more simple

looking good megr and all the others above

Rasm
06-18-2012, 07:41 PM
Megr, you're really coming along but I'd lose those handles on the M and the R... that shit's so overplayed.

BigFaggot
06-18-2012, 07:42 PM
i feel ya, thanks

lostyoursense
06-18-2012, 08:39 PM
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8142/7398387332_fbce8033ee.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7398387332/)
Untitled (http://www.flickr.com/photos/71521355@N06/7398387332/) by senseless slaps(cosmo) (http://www.flickr.com/people/71521355@N06/), on Flickr

Bored and rarely draw anymore

@megr I'm liking your style man

Kaze
06-18-2012, 10:19 PM
drew these a little while ago for an exchange, added drop shadow and color today...not really happy with it though

7566975670

lostyoursense
06-18-2012, 10:20 PM
Those aren't bad

Kaze
06-18-2012, 11:37 PM
thanks man i appreciate it, i dig the face in your E, the hole thing has a dope style to it

MN Nice
06-19-2012, 01:02 AM
Kaze your bars are a bit inconsistent and your l covers the d a lil too much on both of em. Keep sketchin.

for a bitty.

http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p104/skier46/40e1fd55-1.jpg?t=1340086017

Wizard
06-19-2012, 04:52 AM
just messing about.. i know the 3d is off.. 757337573475735

Kaze
06-19-2012, 05:26 AM
thanks for the crits MN, i see what u mean with the bottom part of the L being to long and the bar inconsistency, gotta work on that
that drawing is sick...really dig the M alot

Willis1989
06-19-2012, 06:49 AM
Apes - Looks nice dont really liek the bottom left of the A tho
Kaze - Looks good, the L into the D in kinda off tho
MN - Nice but im not a huge fan of the curls
Wiz - The bottom Rizla style one is best, thats the way you should be going, just work on letters and bars and forget all the other shit like fills and shading for now, if your letters arent good then no amount of fills and extra shits going to make it looks nice. Something like the bottom one is a good starting point if you really want to progress.

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120619_080036.jpg?t=1340106849

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120619_080133.jpg?t=1340106779

http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/zz72/willis1690/20120619_080118.jpg?t=1340106833

BigFaggot
06-19-2012, 07:04 AM
thanks lostyoursense.
75741
the bars in muh M are lookin anorexic

Mcnuggets
06-19-2012, 12:00 PM
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/g480/Ammarxz1/8f9a059d.jpg

Axil
06-19-2012, 12:28 PM
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7093/7402540256_cd880d963b_z.jpg

Kaze
06-19-2012, 02:07 PM
Wiz that bottom picture is good, you should keep drawing more of those and u will see improvement

Thanks for the crits willis i appreciate it...yeh i messed up on those L's. your top picture is looking nice man, the bottom leg of ur E in the middle picture seems to be abit long and the F in the last picture has too much bend in it near the bottom if u get wat im saying, keep working at it man looking good. Scotland is where its at.

bigfaggit that megry looks fuking nice...real spiffy lol

MCnuggets that clown in the middle is pretty trippy

axil, try drawing out some straight letter stuff sort of like what wiz did above and thousands of others on here have done, that there ^ sorta looks more like a throwie the a "burner" or straight letter, keep working at it man

Mcnuggets
06-19-2012, 02:23 PM
Thanks man
Ifinally gota good feedback :P

Kaze
06-19-2012, 02:26 PM
the drawing is interesting, keep practicing and you could draw some dope ass characters. for the letters though u gotta go more simple man :/ try some straight keyboard letters...its not really a shit load of fun but its what will get your basic letter structure and all that shit down

<J-one>
06-19-2012, 03:38 PM
Thanks to all who gave me the positive feedback a few pages ago
@omiz- I like where you're join with that top one, there's just a couple things you coulda left out e.g.: the extension com in off the top of the Z, and I'm just not a fan when one letter covers anthers outline/bar completely like your O into your M
@dank-That first post looks real clean, I'd like to see the second one coloured.

I'm here cause I'm bored and was wondering if anyone wanted to do a quick exchange?

Edit: Apparently I was on the previous page as I wrote this

Kitten
06-19-2012, 04:06 PM
75760

HeyThere(O.o)
06-19-2012, 04:23 PM
Whoa back offa that name Kitten, do some research!
Not to mention, NEKST MSK... But also (Cough NECS cough)..

skud9
06-19-2012, 04:36 PM
75774

Getting off the toy level...

P3arLY Pa1nT
06-19-2012, 05:10 PM
75844
little ones(:

Kaze
06-19-2012, 05:17 PM
looking very good kitten. great improvement, if u like those letters and do choose to change ur name maybe beks, veks, teks...seks anything haha

skud that looks dope...looks like dragon graffiti lol

pearly paint thats a big NO go...use straight keyboard letters for now and get basic structure down

ZIK_ONER
06-19-2012, 05:36 PM
Pearly that sucks. Keyboard letters now, and dont hurt any poor walls until you get mediocre.

Kitten
06-19-2012, 05:42 PM
Why should I change the name? I never heard off NEKST, but I heard off NECS, and I didn't stole my name from him, I was trying to find my name for 1 YEAR, 1 YEAR man... I finally found it, some actually good writers have nothing against my name... and by the way there is noone with NEKS, but there are 1000 writers with DAZE or MERK or something like that

HeyThere(O.o)
06-19-2012, 06:02 PM
Dude it took me like 30 different names and about 6 years to find my number one along with a few others, don't change your name you're choosing to bring problems amongst yourself player...

Jiska Matos
06-19-2012, 09:49 PM
7590075901 first one something i didi at work, 2 a colab with a girlfriend of mine, she did the sponge bob kitty thing i did the letters

HeyThere(O.o)
06-19-2012, 10:00 PM
That shit's dope!

KroeGHK
06-19-2012, 10:01 PM
never got crits on this... :/
75902

HeyThere(O.o)
06-19-2012, 10:03 PM
Dude don't be upset, your pen work's nice! Lol.

DUEN
06-20-2012, 01:29 AM
Haha Pearly, are those little kids you have drawn around yours??

Kaze
06-20-2012, 02:31 AM
jiska u can draw but those letters are terrible. start on some more basic letters and u will have it down fast

Kroe thats sick, i dig the H alot. maybe the top extension of your G should have been a bit wider like the one on your E. the 3d shading is dope dude

Gatsoi
06-20-2012, 11:20 AM
me and my boy werm's collab.
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/collab.jpg
Jiska, those pieces are fire...
Gopher, it looks pretty good, i think you should widen the bars on the right side of the p and the o, and do something different with the middle of your e.

HeyThere(O.o)
06-20-2012, 12:03 PM
That Werm's kinda whack...

Gatsoi
06-20-2012, 12:04 PM
Really? i've always liked his style, its real grimey lookin.

HeyThere(O.o)
06-20-2012, 12:13 PM
No hate what so ever mayng, I'm juss sayin the M looks awkward.. I think it could use some more work..

DEMPO
06-20-2012, 12:20 PM
75960
Jiska, stay on it, that bucktooth spongebob ahh ha, yo whats you name again sers, seri??

TastyMcNasty
06-20-2012, 02:17 PM
jiska, its a dammed shame that your letters are as weak they are, because as an artist you have some raw talent

http://i1239.photobucket.com/albums/ff518/TastyMcNasty/Graffiti/IMAG0111.jpg

defaultlegend
06-20-2012, 02:57 PM
a few throwies..havnt been in it that long...
http://img83.echo.cx/img83/5294/cesgreen7mm.jpg
http://img83.echo.cx/img83/4463/cesbrown9el.jpg
http://img83.echo.cx/img83/9486/cess19vd.jpg
http://img83.echo.cx/img83/694/cessblue3tr.jpg
http://img10.echo.cx/img10/8971/cess8ek.jpg love your style bro

Kaze
06-20-2012, 03:35 PM
gatsoi i dig the R alot, dope style just keep doing ur thing and improving

dempo im not feeling the E and maybe u should have had thebottom part of your T on abit less of an angle

tasty like usual that is sick...i like ur R's

Mildstyles
06-20-2012, 04:44 PM
Default there's nothing to love that's junk
Gophe try to keep bar widths the same and all your letters the same size, just take a little step back

SSK EVO
06-20-2012, 06:46 PM
Kroe- dope style I like it.
Dempo- Simple style but pretty good. Keep working on it.
Tasty- Nice letters but you should make it more legible
crits anyone?
760267602476025

Kaze
06-20-2012, 07:30 PM
does the bottom say labor? i thought the first letter was V for a sec..botom one is the best..but still should be simpler so it is cleaner but it aint terrible. you have to start alot more simple though especialy with straightletter/pieces...draw out keyboard letters and a drop shadow or 3d for it and fuk around with color and shit...main thing is to get solid letters down though

BigFaggot
06-20-2012, 08:25 PM
i dont know whys everyones hating on jiska so hard, those letters are weak, but the one he posted 1 or 2 pages ago was fresh.

SSK EVO
06-20-2012, 08:25 PM
yeah it does and okay I'll start practicing with the keyboard letters. Thanks for the crit.

dankbudz
06-20-2012, 08:53 PM
tasty- i think its time to mess around with something different

Kaze
06-20-2012, 09:13 PM
both are dope and real clean. i dig the bottom one, really like the S. maybe the extension on ur L and top of E in the bottom pic should be in the top picture and give the bottom of ur L in the bottom picture a similar edge to the one of ur S if u get wat im saying...i dunno though u know ALOT more about this then me so keep doing ur thing

KEAZE
06-20-2012, 09:25 PM
http://i1057.photobucket.com/albums/t383/MRsevenOHfive/BS%20toy%20tread%20and%20sketch%20battles/DSC01417.jpg
http://i1057.photobucket.com/albums/t383/MRsevenOHfive/BS%20toy%20tread%20and%20sketch%20battles/DSC01418.jpg

Kaze
06-20-2012, 09:44 PM
looks dope, just dont really dig that bar coming out downwards of the middle of your E, but thats just my opinion though, other then that i think it looks dope

SicK-
06-20-2012, 09:56 PM
me and my boy werm's collab.
http://i880.photobucket.com/albums/ac9/gatsoi/collab.jpg
Jiska, those pieces are fire...
Gopher, it looks pretty good, i think you should widen the bars on the right side of the p and the o, and do something different with the middle of your e.
Bumping this cause thats my WERM

HeyThere(O.o)
06-20-2012, 11:03 PM
Ahah not bumpin this cause that Werm's whack as fuck kid!
Also Dankbudz that shit's clean!

TastyMcNasty
06-20-2012, 11:19 PM
Tasty- Nice letters but you should make it more legible

LOL, i dont know how much more legible it could be. Take your own advice yo

and dank, i've been trying man hahah

SicK-
06-21-2012, 12:28 AM
Ahah not bumpin this cause that Werm's whack as fuck kid!
Also Dankbudz that shit's clean!

Damn too bad your a bitch

DEMPO
06-21-2012, 01:26 AM
we're all bitches when it comes to fighting a tiger. cause you know and I know a tiger will fuck yo ass up