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some guy from NCI...
04-27-2006, 01:19 PM
The reason I said sticker was because you could spend time on the hand and shadows etc... The letters on it are nice too. But I'm just not feeling the top one, once again I'd recommend simpler letters... more like the ones in the second picture.

Keep it up :)

Aven
04-27-2006, 01:19 PM
anyone have any crits for my stuff....its a couple pages back and i never got any crit cause of all the molotov beef shit....im toy....but hey you gotta start with basics

Blak-T
04-27-2006, 01:23 PM
wut page?

some guy from NCI...
04-27-2006, 01:25 PM
Originally posted by Aven@Apr 26 2006, 08:08 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/7269/dscf08359ik.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i think this is it. I cant really give crits because I cant really see it.

Blak-T
04-27-2006, 01:28 PM
the 3d has structure....but i can't see it.

Jank
04-27-2006, 01:32 PM
cant make that out.... is it a letter? i cant see one.. hmmm... tru 3d is solid.


i mite add more to this to make the piece and the face go together a big better
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/faceantie.jpg

Aven
04-27-2006, 01:38 PM
sorry bout the bad quality...its a C....turn it sideways....again sorry for the quality

mr.T
04-27-2006, 01:57 PM
http://home.no.net/ramsesk/tr3.jpg

this i made for a friend:
http://home.no.net/ramsesk/tr1.jpg

some guy from NCI...
04-27-2006, 01:57 PM
Originally posted by Jank@Apr 27 2006, 12:32 PM
cant make that out.... is it a letter? i cant see one.. hmmm... tru 3d is solid.


i mite add more to this to make the piece and the face go together a big better
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/faceantie.jpg
Get the hell out of the toy section :P

Mse
04-27-2006, 02:07 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@Apr 27 2006, 11:01 AM
and you could do better
yh.... hmmm no <_<
dont front like you know shit, you suck do simples even my shit wildstyles are better than yours


dope ish jank

Jank
04-27-2006, 02:16 PM
wow someguy thats one o the nicest things ne1 has ever said lol &#33;&#33; cheers

trem nice simple one at top, real gd start..nice 3d too. the mauzas is nice too..tho i dnt like the M..nice quicky.
and aven now i realies its sideways and its a C my advice would b to get rid of that big blobbed bit at the top o the pic... make it simpler.... make sure it actually looks like a C

some guy from NCI...
04-27-2006, 02:29 PM
:P... It&#39;s really good(letters, colouring, 3d, character, everything) . You definitly dont have to be here. Keep it up&#33;&#33;

Mse
04-27-2006, 02:54 PM
jank id say your characters shouldnt be here
that thing has mad ethics :)

Mse
04-27-2006, 03:02 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Apr 27 2006, 10:05 AM
mse u got flix of wut u painted? and what kind of paint is that?
dont have them now but ill hopefully get them soon
and its mainly cheap euro paiint

bacK-home
04-27-2006, 03:08 PM
jank im really feeling that man looks good

bacK-home
04-27-2006, 03:10 PM
as for moltow stop gettin so fuckin mad man, they&#39;re telling you what u should do, stop with that wack wildstyle and focus on bubble letters and stuff. Im a toy too and thats all i do and it looks good. Work your way up bro

Zire
04-27-2006, 03:45 PM
Originally posted by Zire@Apr 26 2006, 02:32 PM
Hey, finally got a digi cam so i can post some pics now.


http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9647/sunp00163sc.jpg

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/5105/sunp00216ql.jpg

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/6872/sunp00203qj.jpg

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/3725/sunp00173ew.jpg

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/4452/sunp00182oi.jpg

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/2334/sunp00199cj.jpg

comments? crits?
Bump

Eichoner
04-27-2006, 03:58 PM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f42/eichoner/eichy.jpg
comments.....

AMAZ tbscrew
04-27-2006, 04:09 PM
u got ur shit down....keep practicein

lose some arrows....and make the c a lil skinnier its to think compared to the other letters.

sabeSAHBEY
04-27-2006, 05:32 PM
the e to but that shit is pretty fresh

flclnaruto1213
04-27-2006, 05:42 PM
some wack shit

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/1952/sketcher2816fp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/4638/sketcher2767zc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

TricksForKids
04-27-2006, 05:53 PM
first one kills the second one feteezy, and as for zare, i dunno man, youll get there

some guy from NCI...
04-27-2006, 05:57 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Apr 27 2006, 04:53 PM
and as for zare, i dunno man, youll get there
looooooool :P

flclnaruto1213
04-27-2006, 06:07 PM
yeah, the second ones mad old.

bacK-home
04-27-2006, 06:30 PM
Eich thats lookin good

beefgerky
04-27-2006, 06:46 PM
they&#39;re pretty good, but your not fetus one sorry.

edit:

http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/to-fetus001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/fetus001.jpg
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/fetus002.jpg

stolen from VO...

not sure if this is the fetus in CCC with waster...maybe..

AoAssis
04-27-2006, 06:59 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@Apr 27 2006, 11:03 AM
theres nothing wrong with them...

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/Copy2ofP4230008.jpg


Im sorry you must not be looking at the same picture i am.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-27-2006, 07:28 PM
ewwww what is that?&#33;

hitemup101
04-27-2006, 07:46 PM
edit

hitemup101
04-27-2006, 07:48 PM
edit

hitemup101
04-27-2006, 07:48 PM
edit

hitemup101
04-27-2006, 07:48 PM
iedit

hitemup101
04-27-2006, 07:48 PM
edit

ZeNiTh
04-27-2006, 07:52 PM
the c in the purple one isnt legable as a c , looks more like an l

hitemup101
04-27-2006, 07:53 PM
wow lol sorry for all the post lolol mi bad

HeIsT422
04-27-2006, 07:59 PM
lol edit all those posts and put the last one with all the sketches so we can c

hitemup101
04-27-2006, 08:06 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/cmonguyyy.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/madudu.jpg

[http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/scan0005.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/3da82a23.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/4736becd.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/9a4cf942.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/scan0001.jpg

critz some of em have bad 3d i know i learnerd howda do it but but anyways critz and the ones with idff names are things i did 4 ppl

MF Feed Letter
04-27-2006, 08:25 PM
first one the colors are to light like the sailver and white dont have any contrst
second one d is kinda wack doesnt fit wit rest of letters
third one doesnt even look like it says shot
the h kinda look liek m
last one the style of letters kinda cghanges as oyu go


yare

simples
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0894.jpg

thorws
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0893.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0892.jpg

critz?

near
04-27-2006, 08:26 PM
deck umm basically stick to simples which you are doing...lose the arrows some of those pen bombs (the black and white) look a lil bit like blobs maybe try defining the letters more

umm i got a new sketchbook lol so i got a pen...some of its ugly but you cant go back with ink o_O

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/BSPOST.jpg

tea dee sea
04-27-2006, 08:38 PM
yoo near sick man keep it upp

writer45
04-27-2006, 09:02 PM
heres a few, comments-tips???


http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/850/elder24nu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/4284/elder35bm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/2425/elder41ef.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/2235/elder58ka.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AMAZ tbscrew
04-27-2006, 09:04 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Apr 27 2006, 07:25 PM
first one the colors are to light like the sailver and white dont have any contrst
second one d is kinda wack doesnt fit wit rest of letters
third one doesnt even look like it says shot
the h kinda look liek m
last one the style of letters kinda cghanges as oyu go


yare

simples
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0894.jpg

thorws
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0893.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0892.jpg

critz?
wut happend 2 intwo :(

props 2 near.

MF Feed Letter
04-27-2006, 09:08 PM
those letters were really starting to piss me off i couldnt really get a flow i liked...i really didnt want to change but whatever

anyways what you think of them

AMAZ tbscrew
04-27-2006, 09:11 PM
simples are tight...work on the trowie tho before u put it up.

ion-i
04-27-2006, 09:16 PM
This page is hurtin, except for MF tho, hell of dope ish. ;)
edit: and near, good stuff man.

Fucking around/freestylin:
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/freestyle_wildstyle.gif

Rend
04-27-2006, 09:42 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01602.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01605.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01608.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01609.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01617.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01701.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01705.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01708.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01713.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01714.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01709.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01710.jpg

myna
04-27-2006, 09:46 PM
how do u get 2 pics in one post?

flclnaruto1213
04-27-2006, 09:53 PM
oh..ok thanks for telling me gerk.
ill just write fetus-gravity crew then

shone
04-27-2006, 09:54 PM
dam yo its been a while i think i can move up to the real blackbook section
you tell me?

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8125/pic0841ro.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8254/pic0784ht.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4930/pic0810nj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/3913/pic0839wv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7264/pic0826bl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fresh throwie
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/7199/pic0871wr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

myna
04-27-2006, 09:54 PM
http://i3.tinypic.com/wl9b9s.jpg
critz please

myna
04-27-2006, 09:56 PM
http://i3.tinypic.com/wjt3dk.jpg
this one too

ion-i
04-27-2006, 10:00 PM
Originally posted by ion&#045;i@Apr 27 2006, 05:16 PM
This page is hurtin, except for MF tho, hell of dope ish. ;)
edit: and near, good stuff man.

Fucking around/freestylin:
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/freestyle_wildstyle.gif
fuck it got covered and hit the last post in the last page. bu-bump

bacK-home
04-27-2006, 10:10 PM
Rend i like your second tag

flclnaruto1213
04-27-2006, 10:14 PM
ioni i love it, look very developed.

shone
04-27-2006, 10:16 PM
critz?

near
04-27-2006, 10:16 PM
rend: your handstyle has cleaned up ALOT since the last set of tags you posted
shoc: ...no, not yet
ion-i: thats pretty dope not feelin the last &#39;i&#39; that much it kind of looks like a bad &#39;e&#39; but ya once that gets coloured it could be pretty ill, the &#39;n&#39; is your best letter on it and looks pretty dope
myna: at this point i dont think crits will really help you just keep doin what your doin and practice your basic letter structure
mf feedletter: those letters r dope you just need to work them a lil closer together they almost look like u meant to draw each letter on its own but other than that lookin fkn fressssh

just my 2 cents take it or leave it

AMAZ tbscrew
04-27-2006, 10:39 PM
Originally posted by shone@Apr 27 2006, 08:54 PM
dam yo its been a while i think i can move up to the real blackbook section
you tell me?

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8125/pic0841ro.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/8254/pic0784ht.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4930/pic0810nj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/3913/pic0839wv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7264/pic0826bl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

fresh throwie
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/7199/pic0871wr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yeah...um no.

PureSole
04-27-2006, 11:00 PM
just did this...sorry scanner broke
Trying to add arrows and change up my letters a bit...
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a95/puresole/1.jpg

leaks
04-27-2006, 11:01 PM
Originally posted by near@Apr 27 2006, 07:26 PM
deck umm basically stick to simples which you are doing...lose the arrows some of those pen bombs (the black and white) look a lil bit like blobs maybe try defining the letters more

umm i got a new sketchbook lol so i got a pen...some of its ugly but you cant go back with ink o_O

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/BSPOST.jpg
yo r u reppin the pcp

extirpate
04-27-2006, 11:26 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2964/peice4ua.jpg

crits?

Crucible
04-27-2006, 11:46 PM
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/3708/crux0103wd.th.jpg (http://img86.imageshack.us/my.php?image=crux0103wd.jpg)

Just entered that for the toy battle this week. Any crits?

MF Feed Letter
04-27-2006, 11:58 PM
lose the arrows all together and that e isnt in porportion to the other letters

improvement on throw what you thinhk compared to last post of it?
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0895.jpg

Rend
04-28-2006, 12:05 AM
so about my cap question pleasseee

extirpate
04-28-2006, 12:12 AM
musashi why does all your stuff seem pixelated? im just woundering. its nice looking but im not feeling it that much.

DnK/eeK
04-28-2006, 12:13 AM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSCF0026.jpg

MUSASHI
04-28-2006, 12:31 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/x5.jpg

MUSASHI
04-28-2006, 12:35 AM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/a6.jpg

beefgerky
04-28-2006, 01:31 AM
MF, go back to intwo, i aint feelin that shit honestly...

i know u said it dont flow, but thats the challenge in a name dude, making something of it, doing something with your letters, and i, as most people, loved your intwo shit.

beefgerky
04-28-2006, 01:33 AM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Apr 27 2006, 08:53 PM
oh..ok thanks for telling me gerk.
ill just write fetus-gravity crew then
naw mang, keep at it, shits pretty good, just saying, u aint fetus one... ;)

extirpate
04-28-2006, 01:46 AM
Originally posted by extirpate@Apr 27 2006, 10:26 PM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/2964/peice4ua.jpg

crits?
bumb for crits, and new throwy
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/3118/throwy7dp.jpg

littlerocky
04-28-2006, 10:19 AM
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/1967/tag53qc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6122/tag43aa.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits comments..i dotn kno y i even colored the second one just bored as shit i guess

Aven
04-28-2006, 10:25 AM
i like the color on the first one and the style on the second......

obseen
04-28-2006, 10:49 AM
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00558133f00000018.jpg

Eichoner
04-28-2006, 11:51 AM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f42/eichoner/eichoner.jpg
comments......

Eichoner
04-28-2006, 11:53 AM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f42/eichoner/DSCF1211.jpg
comments....

obseen
04-28-2006, 11:56 AM
i love the character but i dont like th letters, apart from the &#39;a&#39;

SiLeNt-BoB
04-28-2006, 11:57 AM
first ones dope as fuck...second good charater..not fellin the letter..and get out of here

LYTE
04-28-2006, 11:59 AM
Hey wasup its Lyte reppin 310 from WTC wrecking the city barely got into the game ain&#39;t anybody gunna congrat me hit me up

vare_187uk
04-28-2006, 12:34 PM
good for u &#33;&#33;&#33;

beefgerky
04-28-2006, 12:47 PM
Originally posted by Eichoner@Apr 28 2006, 10:51 AM
http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f42/eichoner/eichoner.jpg
comments......
kerbump for eicher

SiLeNt-BoB
04-28-2006, 12:48 PM
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/4125/imag00060wy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
red biro free style..tryin a new name..kay-9

ados
04-28-2006, 12:55 PM
didnt you just change your name^

SiLeNt-BoB
04-28-2006, 12:57 PM
yea..am just tryin them out the now..not decided yet..

beefgerky
04-28-2006, 12:58 PM
info ftw.

SiLeNt-BoB
04-28-2006, 12:59 PM
ftw??

Eichoner
04-28-2006, 01:02 PM
wut does kerbump mean?

Mse
04-28-2006, 01:10 PM
i think you need to stop coloring for a while and just do lots of sketches,
you&#39;ve got coloring down, now just make your structure dope and your set.
Right now its kinda iffy

directed at eiche

littlerocky
04-28-2006, 01:13 PM
Originally posted by littlerocky@Apr 28 2006, 09:19 AM
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/1967/tag53qc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6122/tag43aa.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits comments..i dotn kno y i even colored the second one just bored as shit i guess

bump

Mse
04-28-2006, 01:17 PM
calm down with the add ons?

Mse
04-28-2006, 01:28 PM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9643562/142756232.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9643562/142756233.jpg
nature drawings

aces
04-28-2006, 01:29 PM
http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/1954/picture0018as.jpg
Throwie. Changed the A to capitol.


http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/9789/picture0020go.jpg
Handstyles.

Crits?

ados
04-28-2006, 01:31 PM
i like that heart. E just needs some work

Mse
04-28-2006, 01:38 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Apr 28 2006, 12:28 PM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9643562/142756232.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9643562/142756233.jpg
nature drawings
actually i fucked up bump for me

unknown...
04-28-2006, 01:44 PM
Aces, good tags but i cant read that throwie except for the A

Seek139
04-28-2006, 01:46 PM
ACES make em all one size...god

unknown...
04-28-2006, 01:48 PM
i think he was trying to play with diferent styles of his tag, but u should make the letters all the same size

Eichoner
04-28-2006, 02:13 PM
the one wit the charater is old
slient bob wut u mean buy get out.......

Stewe
04-28-2006, 02:14 PM
meast up sketch..
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00593.jpg
crits comments?

beefgerky
04-28-2006, 02:18 PM
dont overlap the top of / bottom of e

and as for a comment, that karak is bad.

mse, i like your simpls, but how do u say your name :blink:

silent bob, ftw=for the win.

and for whoever ask what kerbump means, its like kerplunk, but its kerbump.

zomgggg.

Stewe
04-28-2006, 02:20 PM
i kno it was just a smiley type deal i was bored last night haha now that i look at it enough it is worse then i thought

Mse
04-28-2006, 02:36 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@Apr 28 2006, 01:18 PM
mse, i like your simpls, but how do u say your name :blink:
ptah is the egiption creator god
look it up in google i would assume its ptaa but then again i dont know shit

unknown...
04-28-2006, 04:05 PM
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/6243/p10108735nu.jpg
all criticism please...

Stewe, good letters, bad character. Your E and S look good though, keep that up

Klone
04-28-2006, 04:07 PM
your 3-d was pretty decent..but make ur sketches a bit more cleaner..solid lines..its a scratchy...ur drips were decent..but keep practicin&#39; yo.

Voze
04-28-2006, 04:36 PM
got me a book that i can do just rough sketches in - i&#39;m including all the pages, not just putting in just polished shit so you can see how i&#39;m thinkin... love highlighters

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot1.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot2.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot3.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot4.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot5.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot6.jpg
i&#39;d like crits on the second throw and the other stuff too.. thanks

DnK/eeK
04-28-2006, 05:09 PM
Originally posted by DnK/eeK@Apr 27 2006, 11:13 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSCF0026.jpg
crits any 1?????????????

aces
04-28-2006, 05:11 PM
Originally posted by Voze@Apr 28 2006, 03:36 PM
got me a book that i can do just rough sketches in - i&#39;m including all the pages, not just putting in just polished shit so you can see how i&#39;m thinkin... love highlighters

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot1.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot2.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot3.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot4.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot5.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot6.jpg
i&#39;d like crits on the second throw and the other stuff too.. thanks
On the throwies the V looks very similar to a U but i really like the O and S.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-28-2006, 05:13 PM
v&#39;s are kinda hard 2 do for trowies...but his shits nice.

Voze
04-28-2006, 05:13 PM
the 3d&#39;s wrong - it&#39;s all coming off at different angles.. i&#39;d say get rid of the fills etc. keep practicing your letters and make them look good, look at other people&#39;s stuff for reference to 3d (look at non toys)

oh, and draw, draw draw&#33; like me :D

Slushi
04-28-2006, 05:21 PM
Originally posted by DnK/eeK+Apr 28 2006, 04:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DnK/eeK &#064; Apr 28 2006, 04:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DnK/eeK@Apr 27 2006, 11:13 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSCF0026.jpg
crits any 1?????????????
[/b][/quote]
Thats some wackass 3d man.
Work on perspective a lil bit. try drawing 3d boxes using vanishing points

xAWOKE.925
04-28-2006, 06:01 PM
Eich i think silent bob meant to go to the normal forum but i could be totally wrong...

Klone
04-28-2006, 06:13 PM
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/8442/r0011pj.jpg

JUst felt like doin it...

Blak-T
04-28-2006, 06:40 PM
heres some stuff i did today.....i like to make pieces with the word ace, but cant make a bomb or throw with....but the ones i make bombs and throws for i dont like to make pieces for...sort of a dilemma, crits....
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/acepiece.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/PHOT00k.jpg

some guy from NCI...
04-28-2006, 06:50 PM
Originally posted by Slushi+Apr 28 2006, 04:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Slushi @ Apr 28 2006, 04:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by DnK/eeK@Apr 28 2006, 04:09 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-DnK/eeK@Apr 27 2006, 11:13 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSCF0026.jpg
crits any 1?????????????

Thats some wackass 3d man.
Work on perspective a lil bit. try drawing 3d boxes using vanishing points [/b][/quote]
If he&#39;s having trouble with normal 3D then why would you tell him to try perspective?

Dont make the 3d overlap, draw it in pencil first. then once you&#39;ve got all the lines and know which ones you want do them in pen and rub out the rest.

You&#39;ll notice that when all the letters are on the same layer it looks much better.

SiLeNt-BoB
04-28-2006, 07:05 PM
Originally posted by Eichoner@Apr 28 2006, 01:13 PM
the one wit the charater is old
slient bob wut u mean buy get out.......
i mean that ur getin better. so soon u can go onto the big boy thread soon

i dont mean "get out&#33;"...like get out of this forum..someppl get confused when i say that

Blak-T
04-28-2006, 07:05 PM
you guys thinks i should stick with ace or a name that ican easily bomb with and jus make a piece for it

some guy from NCI...
04-28-2006, 07:10 PM
Whatever feels good with you. Of the few names I&#39;ve had, I&#39;ve only ever gone for names which I like personally, I like to write (find it smooth), and looks good. If the name qualifies for those then I&#39;d go for it.

Blak-T
04-28-2006, 07:46 PM
a sudden surge of ideas...INSPIRATION..lol crits...comments?
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/acebombs2.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/acebombs.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
04-28-2006, 07:50 PM
nice sketches ace..i like that A at the bottom middle

Blak-T
04-28-2006, 08:06 PM
thnks...here some more....crits
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/morebombs.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/bombsagain.jpg

SiLeNt-BoB
04-28-2006, 08:07 PM
stick with that for a bomb..make the E a little smaller..

Blak-T
04-28-2006, 08:10 PM
ok...will do.

Blak-T
04-28-2006, 09:09 PM
few more sketches...bad camera...crits
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/bnb2.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/bnb1.jpg

esnet1r
04-28-2006, 09:52 PM
Originally posted by leaks+Apr 26 2006, 11:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (leaks &#064; Apr 26 2006, 11:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-leaks@Apr 26 2006, 02:39 PM
pcp crew holla
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/9422/picture2570uo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/6606/picture2595aa.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/613/picture2606qu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/6171/picture2586wy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

no comments?[/b][/quote]
hook up that criticness mang

+HyBriD+
04-28-2006, 10:39 PM
i like urs jaze

AMAZ tbscrew
04-28-2006, 11:06 PM
jaze the a on the last one is dooooope ass fuck... i think iv seen it somewhere tho..but idk w.e its dope

HoodRichSucka
04-28-2006, 11:12 PM
CAPS CAPS CAPS

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoo...a/CAPSthorw.jpg (http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/CAPSthorw.jpg)

im toyyyyyyyy but please help me out..thanks guys.

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/CAPSthorw.jpg


thanks

AMAZ tbscrew
04-28-2006, 11:14 PM
wuts it say?

HoodRichSucka
04-28-2006, 11:16 PM
CAPS

DynamiteBoy
04-29-2006, 12:01 AM
there was a writer in the 1980s called CAP started beef with everyone.

ghostbusta5
04-29-2006, 12:17 AM
dont write CAPS go check the Victoria thread in the pictures section

Ironik
04-29-2006, 01:02 AM
JAZE u got a nice simplistic style and his A is or looks lik JA&#39;s style throw A.

toxus
04-29-2006, 06:06 AM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060429/03/4/3/7/437132bf042fc4085aa6a1dbb0688ab2200604290_full.jpg
any comments?

Hater-AiD~>
04-29-2006, 06:54 AM
Originally posted by DynamiteBoy+Apr 28 2006, 11:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DynamiteBoy @ Apr 28 2006, 11:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> there was a writer in the 1980s called CAP started beef with everyone. [/b]
<!--QuoteBegin-DynamiteBoy@Apr 28 2006, 11:01 PM
there was a writer in the 1980s called CAP started beef with everyone.[/quote]
yup..CAP was on style wars and he still writes today for some skateboard company i think
he goes by Cap-One now

his throws are godly
http://www.valladolidwebmusical.org/graffi...ianyc_img15.jpg (http://www.valladolidwebmusical.org/graffiti/historia/imagenes_graff/004&#39;_historianyc_img15.jpg)

Hater-AiD~>
04-29-2006, 07:02 AM
Originally posted by toxus@Apr 29 2006, 05:06 AM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060429/03/4/3/7/437132bf042fc4085aa6a1dbb0688ab2200604290_full.jpg
any comments?
i would take the 3d off of it..good throw though
and im likin that handstyle

SiLeNt-BoB
04-29-2006, 07:47 AM
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/6274/imag00078vx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
tryin a new throw..dont like the A

SiLeNt-BoB
04-29-2006, 08:03 AM
Originally posted by Voze@Apr 28 2006, 03:36 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/phot3.jpg

a like the green one up the side...stick with that..

Logikalone
04-29-2006, 09:06 AM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/fullpageane.jpg

First attempt at a wildstyle...Says ANE.

hitemup101
04-29-2006, 10:11 AM
i dont like it i know its ur first attempt but noped and i dunno how to fix it i dont the only thign i would normaly say is saty simple

*~ANZIO~*
04-29-2006, 10:21 AM
Originally posted by Logikalone@Apr 29 2006, 08:06 AM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/fullpageane.jpg

First attempt at a wildstyle...Says ANE.
looks like barbed wire or some shit

-MaCKiE-
04-29-2006, 10:32 AM
good 4 first attempt

some guy from NCI...
04-29-2006, 10:38 AM
Stay simple

Klone
04-29-2006, 10:38 AM
Originally posted by *~ANZIO~*+Apr 29 2006, 09:21 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (*~ANZIO~* @ Apr 29 2006, 09:21 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Logikalone@Apr 29 2006, 08:06 AM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/fullpageane.jpg

First attempt at a wildstyle...Says ANE.
looks like barbed wire or some shit [/b][/quote]
yeah i see that too..but yo, work on your structure a bit more..and let your colors flow in better..to be honest..all i see is some stuff written and slabbed on w/e color on there...make your letters come out more. Cause i can&#39;t really read out the word that you said it was..

ss_Solo
04-29-2006, 11:19 AM
Originally posted by Klone+Apr 29 2006, 09:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Klone @ Apr 29 2006, 09:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by *~ANZIO~*@Apr 29 2006, 09:21 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Logikalone@Apr 29 2006, 08:06 AM
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d39/Lithium_theory/fullpageane.jpg

First attempt at a wildstyle...Says ANE.
looks like barbed wire or some shit
yeah i see that too..but yo, work on your structure a bit more..and let your colors flow in better..to be honest..all i see is some stuff written and slabbed on w/e color on there...make your letters come out more. Cause i can&#39;t really read out the word that you said it was.. [/b][/quote]
agreed...work on the colors - makes it look sloppy but good for first attempt

myna
04-29-2006, 11:31 AM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i70/dtpm/nibz.jpg


critz... did in math so i had no colors.

ss_Solo
04-29-2006, 11:53 AM
what does it say?

Paint Magic
04-29-2006, 12:07 PM
make it so u can actually read the letters instead of connecting them so much

ss_Solo
04-29-2006, 12:14 PM
Originally posted by Paint Magic@Apr 29 2006, 11:07 AM
make it so u can actually read the letters instead of connecting them so much
definately...looks like a blob

AMAZ tbscrew
04-29-2006, 12:17 PM
it says nibz....read the tag. lol

ss_Solo
04-29-2006, 12:27 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Apr 29 2006, 11:17 AM
it says nibz....read the tag. lol
thats not the point...you cant read the actual thing...who cares about the tag

Hater-AiD~>
04-29-2006, 12:51 PM
Constructive Crits plz
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1153/dscf14571hj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/8832/dscf14596fn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sketched these at school like tuesday or something

vare_187uk
04-29-2006, 01:32 PM
simple simple simple i wont fucking say it again&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Ironik
04-29-2006, 02:15 PM
New throw SBK first time using prismas and gel pens.

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/9625/sbk0037ek.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think

beefgerky
04-29-2006, 02:19 PM
i dont like how the bottom of the S goes over the middle, the B looks like an 8 and all except for the K&#39;s structures are ugly, annndd the fill is too.

but again, you said "tell me what u think" so dont get mad ok? haha.

vare_187uk
04-29-2006, 02:36 PM
edit

toxus
04-29-2006, 03:09 PM
Originally posted by Ironik@Apr 29 2006, 06:15 PM
New throw SBK first time using prismas and gel pens.

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/9625/sbk0037ek.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think
dont go too mad with the colours yet, all i can say at the moment is just keep the letters at a simpler structure... and lay off the force feild bar things...

Blak-T
04-29-2006, 04:45 PM
heres some i did today...the black stuff on the blue fill is bleeding from the page before..lol...crits....which color scheme should i go with.
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/newbomb.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/newbomb2.jpg

-MaCKiE-
04-29-2006, 06:40 PM
first 1.. almost definetly

ghostbusta5
04-29-2006, 07:17 PM
Bored as fuck today.....

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture011.jpg

Recon
04-29-2006, 07:24 PM
some new Erb crue thangz

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/2772/erb27yv.jpg
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/6764/erb13wi.jpg

N:Craze
04-29-2006, 07:24 PM
a new throw thingie that im workin on any suggestions?
yeah i know it gets smaller as it goes im workinon that im aksin specificaly on the letters..

http://i3.tinypic.com/wsk1u9.jpg

http://images6.theimagehosting.com/newthrow.jpg

A blockbuster crits?


http://images6.theimagehosting.com/blockbusta.jpg

ghostbusta5
04-29-2006, 07:33 PM
Recon im enjoyin that shit man good job.......hot fiyaaahhhhh.....haha ^_^

Hater-AiD~>
04-29-2006, 08:37 PM
nice shit recon
heres a new style im trying out for my throwies
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4286/dscf14667yw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

rectone
04-29-2006, 09:08 PM
how do i post up graffiti on dis fuccing site

Seek139
04-29-2006, 09:14 PM
first you must learn to spell

Slushi
04-29-2006, 09:14 PM
imageshack.us

~ROYAL~
04-29-2006, 10:12 PM
Just got my first blackbook yesterday so these are what ive done so far

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/8415/royallogo19rt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4297/citylovepiece8yd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

any coments would be appreciated

Hater-AiD~>
04-29-2006, 10:22 PM
work on your letter structure and take that crown (if thats what it is) off of your piece..
also your 3d is off terribly in the 2nd sketch..it looks like you used a vanishing point but it didnt work out right

kill
04-29-2006, 10:22 PM
whoa ur on a roll there

BRAINE
04-29-2006, 10:32 PM
Originally posted by Recon@Apr 29 2006, 06:24 PM
some new Erb crue thangz

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/2772/erb27yv.jpg
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/6764/erb13wi.jpg
bump-worthy.com

MF Feed Letter
04-29-2006, 10:47 PM
first page in new ginat blackbook
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0901.jpg

fornt cover of new mini blackbook
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0902.jpg

got both today

Hater-AiD~>
04-29-2006, 10:54 PM
nice shit letter
i got me a new mini black book today too..and these neon colored prismas

kill
04-29-2006, 10:58 PM
is u throw up suppose to say yare cus i cant read any letter cept for e

MF Feed Letter
04-29-2006, 11:01 PM
ya it says yare
but i can read it just fine so its allll good

AMAZ tbscrew
04-29-2006, 11:09 PM
:(

MF Feed Letter
04-29-2006, 11:12 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/hiIMG_0902.jpg

xAWOKE.925
04-29-2006, 11:46 PM
I dont really get the structure that much, but it&#39;s dope lookin i guess.

AMAZ tbscrew
04-29-2006, 11:54 PM
ur r dosnt really look like an r

Hater-AiD~>
04-29-2006, 11:57 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 29 2006, 07:37 PM
nice shit recon
heres a new style im trying out for my throwies
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4286/dscf14667yw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bumpp for critz

Seek139
04-29-2006, 11:58 PM
idk i can read it fine...bomb hard bro

rectone
04-30-2006, 12:35 AM
naa yall not understanding me i got da code from photobucket but wut do i do on dis shit

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 12:42 AM
whipped this together real quick so i could try out my 2 new prisma colors
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/3192/dscf14746ww.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and this is another throwie
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9809/dscf14797lj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bacK-home
04-30-2006, 12:44 AM
ahhh im not really feeling the 1st one but i like the second one :D

aces
04-30-2006, 12:46 AM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+Apr 29 2006, 10:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater&#045;AiD~> &#064; Apr 29 2006, 10:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 29 2006, 07:37 PM
nice shit recon
heres a new style im trying out for my throwies
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4286/dscf14667yw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bumpp for critz[/b][/quote]
not really feelin the E

Ironik
04-30-2006, 12:57 AM
Originally posted by toxus+Apr 29 2006, 02:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (toxus @ Apr 29 2006, 02:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ironik@Apr 29 2006, 06:15 PM
New throw SBK first time using prismas and gel pens.

http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/9625/sbk0037ek.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think
dont go too mad with the colours yet, all i can say at the moment is just keep the letters at a simpler structure... and lay off the force feild bar things... [/b][/quote]
I reall dont know how i can go more simpler but what eva

N:Craze
04-30-2006, 01:03 AM
Originally posted by N:Craze@Apr 29 2006, 06:24 PM
a new throw thingie that im workin on any suggestions?
yeah i know it gets smaller as it goes im workinon that im aksin specificaly on the letters..

http://i3.tinypic.com/wsk1u9.jpg

http://images6.theimagehosting.com/newthrow.jpg

A blockbuster crits?


http://images6.theimagehosting.com/blockbusta.jpg
bump for da critz got any?

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 01:05 AM
you have a lot of hesitation marks on your throws

aces
04-30-2006, 01:13 AM
keep the lines a lot smoother

N:Craze
04-30-2006, 01:15 AM
yeah i know these are my very first sketches of this throw so im still gettin the feeling down how bout the letters ? and the buster

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 01:17 AM
i feel you could make something good with your throws..just keep working on it
blockbuster needs 3d i feel..and make the dot about the i a square

Voze
04-30-2006, 07:14 AM
hater aid, i actualy like the first piece, looks nice compared to the stuff you were doing few weeks ago - good improvement

n.craze - you&#39;ve gotta have confidence in your lines, don&#39;t do the little sketchy lines, just go for it and draw it up more smoothly.. like the others said

some new stuff, got some new paint markers in the post (art ones) so i was trying them out on a piece of cardboard:

chrome burners? :rolleyes:
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/vose1.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/vose2.jpg

and on the other side.. i think i do it better when i do it bigger.
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/vose3.jpg

tell me what you think.

Jank
04-30-2006, 08:25 AM
vose that pink one is clean&#33; i like them alot
hater i like that yello one. work on that&#33;


arite not graff but there will be above it later..
this is for a card im making... not sure if i like this or not... i need some advice. do u lot rekon its worth continuing or shud i start again?

obv theres gonna b other stuff bt this is the main bit lol
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/palmtree.jpg

any thoughts?

cord
04-30-2006, 09:11 AM
voze that pink throwup is niiiiiiiceeee, super clean

Voze
04-30-2006, 10:08 AM
jank, looks good, if you&#39;re gonna add colour, but i can see grey shading so i suppose not - it looks nice anyway.. would look great with your letters on it

ty for comments cord and jank

backtoyou
04-30-2006, 11:55 AM
Originally posted by Voze@Apr 30 2006, 06:14 AM
hater aid, i actualy like the first piece, looks nice compared to the stuff you were doing few weeks ago - good improvement

n.craze - you&#39;ve gotta have confidence in your lines, don&#39;t do the little sketchy lines, just go for it and draw it up more smoothly.. like the others said

some new stuff, got some new paint markers in the post (art ones) so i was trying them out on a piece of cardboard:

chrome burners? :rolleyes:
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/vose1.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/vose2.jpg

and on the other side.. i think i do it better when i do it bigger.
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/vose3.jpg

tell me what you think.
nice job on the throws clean man the only thing i would change is ont the second one and the last one bring the whole in the o up a little

bacK-home
04-30-2006, 11:59 AM
Voze that pink one looks sick

Seek139
04-30-2006, 12:02 PM
vose keeping working on throw&#39;s

WAKE-1
04-30-2006, 01:29 PM
watcha think

http://img270.imageshack.us/img270/6336/wakefire0bb.jpg

Stewe
04-30-2006, 01:31 PM
i dont think its horrible i dont think its great but then again my last few have been shit

backtoyou
04-30-2006, 02:04 PM
quick
http://img273.imageshack.us/img273/267/pict00527nl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
coment

Ironik
04-30-2006, 02:04 PM
I did this for the battle aganist GERK its says SHAM i kinda fucked up on the H

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5133/sham0028ro.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think

molotow_15
04-30-2006, 02:12 PM
Originally posted by backtoyou@Apr 30 2006, 01:04 PM
quick
http://img273.imageshack.us/img273/267/pict00527nl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
coment
how dare you post this and say my stuff is shit..

ironiks&#39;s is well nice like 2 see it complety finished

aces
04-30-2006, 02:17 PM
Vose keep up the good work.
Wake the 3-d is a little messed up try using one point perspective. This website is helpful.
http://www.ider.herts.ac.uk/school/coursew...erspective.html (http://www.ider.herts.ac.uk/school/courseware/graphics/one_point_perspective.html)
Ironic I love it and that pig is sick.

Aven
04-30-2006, 02:17 PM
moloto






thats what letter structure looks like....get some

esnet1r
04-30-2006, 02:19 PM
tripping balls with markers --______--
http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/4386/drugs8ib.jpg

Aven
04-30-2006, 02:22 PM
^^haha....thats sweet

unknown...
04-30-2006, 02:29 PM
Ironik, it seems to me that its time for you to move up from the toy section, Your stuff is so far above any1 elses...i like how you did the lines like you were going to do 3d then didnt connect it, that is a very different look...

http://img270.imageshack.us/img270/7527/p10108751ev.jpg

criticism please&#33;

Jank
04-30-2006, 02:32 PM
ironik itlooks really nice. a couple o bits are a bit off tho i rekon.... like the bit to the bottom left of the S... i dno. real nice shit tho keep it up.

esnet1r that is jookes&#33; awesome &#33;
backtoyou thats not a bad start. nice n simple. add a bit o 3d on it, and start to push the letters closer together. not bad start tho.
and molotow that is WAY better than wot iv seen of your shit. how do u not understand that your &#39;&#39;wildstyle&#39;&#39; shit is just plain CRAP&#33; you have to go at it like he is&#33; stop causing trouble and pretending that ur not as horrendously bad as u r. i mean every1 starts bad so it aint a bad thing but dont persuade urself ur any different. sorry..not trying to beef

AMAZ tbscrew
04-30-2006, 02:32 PM
Originally posted by Ironik@Apr 30 2006, 01:04 PM
I did this for the battle aganist GERK its says SHAM i kinda fucked up on the H

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5133/sham0028ro.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think
uh wud u do 2 ur s? ....yea it looked tight until i looked at it for a while and started seein the mistakes

Jank
04-30-2006, 02:34 PM
+ unknown, nice too., thats clean. i dont htink the I works.. if its got a dot on top then it prolly shudnt have the horizontal bit on the bottom. apart from that its solid

WAKE-1
04-30-2006, 02:35 PM
aces... it wasnt suppose to be a one point perspective on the 3d. it was isometric block

Jank
04-30-2006, 02:36 PM
ye amaz thats wot i got wen i looked at ironiks.

neway this was gonna p part of a card for this girl.. sorta a private joke but maybe a bit too sadistic lol. neway, will redo it in part of a lil page ill do later.. anything i shud change?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/angrypanda1.jpg

ss_Solo
04-30-2006, 02:36 PM
Originally posted by Ironik@Apr 30 2006, 01:04 PM
I did this for the battle aganist GERK its says SHAM i kinda fucked up on the H

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5133/sham0028ro.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think
i like it

i looks good and complete ;)

ss_Solo
04-30-2006, 02:39 PM
Originally posted by Jank@Apr 30 2006, 01:36 PM
ye amaz thats wot i got wen i looked at ironiks.

neway this was gonna p part of a card for this girl.. sorta a private joke but maybe a bit too sadistic lol. neway, will redo it in part of a lil page ill do later.. anything i shud change?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/angrypanda1.jpg
it looks good except make the top of the legs wider maybe the same wit the arms

unknown...
04-30-2006, 02:43 PM
thanks for the criticism jank, i felt like the I was out of place 2, i was going to make it lower case then it seemed a little bland so i decided to do that, so i think im going to make the top part upper case as well

ados
04-30-2006, 02:44 PM
Originally posted by unknown...@Apr 30 2006, 01:29 PM
Ironik, it seems to me that its time for you to move up from the toy section, Your stuff is so far above any1 elses...i like how you did the lines like you were going to do 3d then didnt connect it, that is a very different look...



ahaha stop telling toys to go to the other section, he aint anywhere near good enough for the big boy section. i see so many toys in there now that other toys gave them the OK to go there. fuckin pathetic....

unknown...
04-30-2006, 03:04 PM
before i entered taht post i had it down as since im a toy i dont really have the right to tell other toys that they can move up, but i erased it and reworded it and it just came out that way... dont call me fuckin pathetic ..i dont want any beef, but im not gonna lay down and take it from u

ados
04-30-2006, 03:12 PM
well you should. your my bitch. i wasnt specifically talking to you. i know a few that have said same shit.

unknown...
04-30-2006, 03:16 PM
and im not ur bitch...im trying not to start stuff on here cuz im not that type of kid but if ur gonna b a dick about it then fuck u

ados
04-30-2006, 03:22 PM
hah don&#39;t clown kid, your outta your league, so shut the fuck up right now.

DynamiteBoy
04-30-2006, 03:26 PM
Originally posted by ss_Solo+Apr 30 2006, 01:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ss_Solo @ Apr 30 2006, 01:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ironik@Apr 30 2006, 01:04 PM
I did this for the battle aganist GERK its says SHAM i kinda fucked up on the H

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5133/sham0028ro.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think
i like it

i looks good and complete ;) [/b][/quote]
the extension on the S shouldnt be there. otherwise its pretty good

unknown...
04-30-2006, 03:35 PM
ados, check ur pms

ados
04-30-2006, 04:01 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0003.jpg
dosR TCK ARMY

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/graphs176_edited.jpg
Drunk canvasette

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/graphs175_edited.jpg
drunk canvas with the crew in victoria.

Voze
04-30-2006, 04:05 PM
nice shit ados - what do you write?

was just messing around today, trying a one liner :| and some scrappy looking blockbuster, and my toy battle entry.

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/vose4.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/vose5.jpg

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/battle1.jpg

ados
04-30-2006, 04:14 PM
i write DOSR...the shark, somtimes i rock ados, not so much tho. i like that AXE bro, nice simple and clean.

ados
04-30-2006, 04:22 PM
theres this clown, names unknown, his shit sucks, and he wants to battle me. keep smoking crack buddy.
here is a sample of his finest sketch. blah

http://img270.imageshack.us/img270/7527/p10108751ev.jpg

AMAZ tbscrew
04-30-2006, 04:24 PM
Originally posted by Jank@Apr 30 2006, 01:36 PM
ye amaz thats wot i got wen i looked at ironiks.

neway this was gonna p part of a card for this girl.. sorta a private joke but maybe a bit too sadistic lol. neway, will redo it in part of a lil page ill do later.. anything i shud change?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/angrypanda1.jpg
change its legs then look funky

writer45
04-30-2006, 04:44 PM
critz???

http://img275.imageshack.us/img275/7708/eldersimple0jb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Ironik
04-30-2006, 04:45 PM
Danm shut the fuck up ADOS the kid gave me a fucking commpliment and ur acting like ur the fucking prodigy and king of BS and i wont go in the black book thread i lik the toy one better u get more crits ur shits ok but not relly that good.

beefgerky
04-30-2006, 04:50 PM
thats true tho, your not ready to move out of the toy section, and he shouldnt be the one telling you to.

ados
04-30-2006, 04:59 PM
Originally posted by Ironik@Apr 30 2006, 03:45 PM
Danm shut the fuck up ADOS the kid gave me a fucking commpliment and ur acting like ur the fucking prodigy and king of BS and i wont go in the black book thread i lik the toy one better u get more crits ur shits ok but not relly that good.
yeah buddy, so sit the fuck down. shut your goddamned mouth. wack motherfucker. haha i act like im the king of BS? haha your a joke.

aces
04-30-2006, 05:00 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15+Apr 30 2006, 01:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 &#064; Apr 30 2006, 01:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-backtoyou@Apr 30 2006, 01:04 PM
quick
http://img273.imageshack.us/img273/267/pict00527nl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
coment
how dare you post this and say my stuff is shit.. [/b][/quote]
Dude you don&#39;t need to be a good writer to know if something is shit or not. I know what good graff is but I&#39;m not very good at actually doing it. Guess what art critics are&#33; People who don&#39;t know how to paint well but they still have the qualifications to critique them.

P.S. I&#39;ve seen your shit and most of it is quite poor quality.

beefgerky
04-30-2006, 05:00 PM
......wow calm down younglings, its the internet, just post flicks, get crits and chill the fuck out.

xAWOKE.925
04-30-2006, 06:19 PM
hahaha. oh the sarcasm. ^ I second that.

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 06:19 PM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/4092/dscf14882ld.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8622/dscf14917pm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits please

xAWOKE.925
04-30-2006, 06:22 PM
ur shit is definitely progressing but the styles on the bottom ar wack. It&#39;s tight that you&#39;er fuckin around with shadowing tho. The square ero style/abstract thing is wack. The C looks like an L, if you&#39;re gonna do abstract, you stll gotta spend time on it. Abstract doesn&#39;t mean Boring

writer45
04-30-2006, 06:29 PM
any comments on mine



thats some pretty staight stuff hater

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 06:32 PM
Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@Apr 30 2006, 05:22 PM
ur shit is definitely progressing but the styles on the bottom ar wack. It&#39;s tight that you&#39;er fuckin around with shadowing tho. The square ero style/abstract thing is wack. The C looks like an L, if you&#39;re gonna do abstract, you stll gotta spend time on it. Abstract doesn&#39;t mean Boring
abstract is for the piece in color that is not pictured, lol
:lol:
there are 2 pieces on that page and 2 throwups
but thanks anyway

rectone
04-30-2006, 06:33 PM
how do i post up. some one help me plz

rectone
04-30-2006, 06:35 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/viper1213/redrobot.jpg

rectone
04-30-2006, 06:35 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/viper1213/redrobot.jpg

writer45
04-30-2006, 06:36 PM
go to the picture gallery and look in the imoportant topics

rectone
04-30-2006, 06:36 PM
some feed back people

toon!..
04-30-2006, 07:38 PM
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7523/picture115ps.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new throwie, ent posted in a while, stok still around? lol

DJLotus
04-30-2006, 07:43 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 30 2006, 05:19 PM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/4092/dscf14882ld.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nice man, looks good but the arms look kinda messed up... I dunno that&#39;s just my 2cents. keep it up

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 07:51 PM
thanks for the crits..thats a nice fucking throwie toon

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/4584/dscf14994cn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits plz

DJLotus
04-30-2006, 08:08 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@Apr 30 2006, 06:51 PM
thanks for the crits..thats a nice fucking throwie toon

http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/4584/dscf14994cn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits plz
Hater that color scheme is fuckin&#39; tight. I like the 3d on it.....

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 08:10 PM
thanks..i used 2 prismas for the 3d and this foohy glitter marker for the forcefield..if you saw it in person it would be shining

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 08:23 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/6257/decthrowie2xu.png (http://imageshack.us)
ms paintin it up

DJLotus
04-30-2006, 08:35 PM
Heh, don&#39;t be too harsh - i know they arent that great but they are my first sketches. I did &#39;em with a &#036;1 box of crayola colored pencils....

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/5661/10001611iq.th.jpg (http://img135.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10001611iq.jpg)
http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/1195/10001600un.th.jpg (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10001600un.jpg)

any crit would be nice - thanks.

toon!..
04-30-2006, 08:37 PM
1st of all take off the crown