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Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 07:46 PM
get yourself a comp. book and fill it with handstyles..ill show you how i started off in a sec

toon!..
04-30-2006, 07:47 PM
how u started off? your still starting..

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 07:54 PM
Originally posted by toon!..@Apr 30 2006, 07:47 PM
how u started off? your still starting..
im talking about practicing my handstyle

My frist attempt at developing a handstyle
http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/9149/dscf15085jz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

About 3 weeks later
http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/2886/dscf15119ai.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

did this about 3 days ago
http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/7089/dscf15139yi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

you can see the progression
i have been writing for little over a month

writer45
04-30-2006, 07:58 PM
commentz plz

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/7144/throwie8fd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

DJLotus
04-30-2006, 07:59 PM
Originally posted by writer45@Apr 30 2006, 07:58 PM
commentz plz

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/7144/throwie8fd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
It looks good but the E looks a little strange... and the ? is kinda confusing. Just my 2 cents tho.

uhhh
04-30-2006, 08:02 PM
that elder, just work really hard on making stuff, line up and be perfectly or at least look perfectly round

unknown...
04-30-2006, 08:06 PM
ados, dont get on here being a dickhead, thats y i pmed u, so that it didnt have to b a bunch of bullshit and baggin on eachother and we could just settle it, u could stomp me and get it over with...so quit frontin like ur the shit, u may b, but if u really were u wouldnt b in the toy section...someday when im a big headed retard ill use u as my role model, but hopefully thats not sometime soon, cuz ill never wana b king of the toys...ill leave that to u!

AMAZ tbscrew
04-30-2006, 08:12 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+Apr 30 2006, 07:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ Apr 30 2006, 07:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-toon&#33;..@Apr 30 2006, 07:47 PM
how u started off? your still starting..
im talking about practicing my handstyle

My frist attempt at developing a handstyle
http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/9149/dscf15085jz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

About 3 weeks later
http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/2886/dscf15119ai.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

did this about 3 days ago
http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/7089/dscf15139yi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

you can see the progression
i have been writing for little over a month [/b][/quote]
and u still suck....high five.

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 08:15 PM
i dont know anybody who has been godly after a month

and why does everybody act like they have a rat up their ass on this forum sometimes

AMAZ tbscrew
04-30-2006, 08:23 PM
idk...cuz wev been here for so long...that toys on a lower level piss us off.

anyway that retart said u had a hot color schem. u didnt it looked fugly
and keep workin on ur 3d u almost got it down perfect.

DJLotus
04-30-2006, 08:23 PM
[img=http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8148/10001637mf.th.jpg] (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10001637mf.jpg)

I just did this because I wanted to mess around with the style since it&#39;s as basic as you get. Any crit please?

AMAZ tbscrew
04-30-2006, 08:24 PM
i give up.

AceONE
04-30-2006, 08:24 PM
Originally posted by writer45@Apr 30 2006, 07:58 PM
commentz plz

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/7144/throwie8fd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
teribble fix your E and R

but thats just my opinion

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 08:27 PM
Originally posted by DJLotus@Apr 30 2006, 08:23 PM
[img=http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8148/10001637mf.th.jpg] (http://img183.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10001637mf.jpg)

I just did this because I wanted to mess around with the style since it&#39;s as basic as you get. Any crit please?
just keep practicing man..dont stop at 2
fill up pages upon pages with them until you find something comforatable

AMAZ tbscrew
04-30-2006, 08:34 PM
oh ye dec ur color schem sucked dont belive that kid. and keep practicin ur 3d ull get it perfect...anyway i saw u sketch more and forget about the colros for now.

but u can do w.e u want.

Hater-AiD~>
04-30-2006, 08:39 PM
thanks for an actual critique instead of the insults people give everyday to other writers just looking for advice

extirpate
04-30-2006, 08:54 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1667/stuff0034wd.jpg

sum stuff

unknown...
04-30-2006, 08:56 PM
Extir, that blue Demo is really cool man, for some reason i really really like the M

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/2581/feti27qe.jpg
criticism please....still working on developing and keeping good letter structure....

Stewe
04-30-2006, 08:56 PM
i really like the blue one to the left its nice

AMAZ tbscrew
04-30-2006, 09:01 PM
demo da blue one is dope

feti keep workin on it. ur shits clean.

dropsom3
04-30-2006, 10:14 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9669/picture45022pv.jpg
hey havnt posted in ages something simple dont like the colors not one of my best
what u think

Blak-T
04-30-2006, 10:16 PM
does it say acid

dropsom3
04-30-2006, 10:23 PM
acid 2

Blak-T
04-30-2006, 10:32 PM
well your a is hard to read.....and your "I" is just a lil short...try to do it without so many connections....dont try to make it look all wild without the basics.....the 3d is coming along nice tho

+HyBriD+
04-30-2006, 10:57 PM
nice demo

beefgerky
04-30-2006, 11:25 PM
dont write acid at all.

kill
04-30-2006, 11:50 PM
acid is a cool name

N:Craze
05-01-2006, 12:01 AM
Originally posted by extirpate@Apr 30 2006, 08:54 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1667/stuff0034wd.jpg

sum stuff
this is ill especialy the blue one keep it up that "m" is dope

IKEZ
05-01-2006, 01:00 AM
Lil sketcy poo i just finished. Crits http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4960/new3iv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Proper
05-01-2006, 01:23 AM
Work on that letter structure kiddo.

toon!..
05-01-2006, 05:52 AM
Originally posted by toon&#33;..@Apr 30 2006, 06:38 PM
http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7523/picture115ps.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new throwie, ent posted in a while, stok still around? lol
critz pleeeeeeez

Jank
05-01-2006, 05:58 AM
if u want &#39;&#39;critz&#39;&#39; y dont u fukin comment on that shit aboce u???? idiot.....

ikez thats got nice colours but the letters are poor. make them less crazy and more like... well letters.

dropsom same to you. define the letters more so they arent so squiggly. make them solid things.. make sure the letters are clear.

demo that blue one is raw, keep it up

Mse
05-01-2006, 07:13 AM
im slowly stopping giving advice to people because no one listens, you have biginches who thinks he&#39;s the fucking shit and so on blah bla
but you have all those stupid toys who say something is dope when it isnt
grrrrrrrrRRRrrrRRRRRRRrrrRRRrrrrrrrrRRR

Jank
05-01-2006, 07:24 AM
i agree... i think theres a few too many ppl on this site and so it just gets flooded. and people post their shit without even commenting on the stuff above them...which defeats the point... it seems to work better on PG altho there are slightly too few ppl over there now... but it makes it a bit nicer.. altho it seems to b down atm...

Mse
05-01-2006, 07:32 AM
the people who come on here post their shit and expect only good comments annoy me the most you say something negative and there all like "you suck"
fuck that and i cant see anyones pics at the moment otherwise i would give crits

weldo
05-01-2006, 07:53 AM
critz i would but no one has one on this page sorry guys. you have a good point to.
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/5647/cci000014kx3ip.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5586/cci000027rq2rq.png (http://imageshack.us)

Voze
05-01-2006, 07:55 AM
well, i do listen to crits, and i try to give crits but to be honest i don&#39;t really get much apart from "keep it up" even when i can see there&#39;s bits i don&#39;t like in my stuff. i don&#39;t see many non-toys looking in here, maybe if we got crits from really experienced people the toys would listen to them more.

anyway&#33; time to put some pictures on this page.

i was trying out some pieces, since i&#39;ve never really done any apart from really simple ones. anyway, i hope the letter structure etc still shows through. CRITS PLEASE

first one. i was tired. not as proud of this one but, meh..
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/piece1.jpg

second, i quite like this one since i did it in the morning
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/piece2.jpg

and third
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/piece3.jpg

Voze
05-01-2006, 07:57 AM
Originally posted by weldo@May 1 2006, 07:53 AM
critz i would but no one has one on this page sorry guys. you have a good point to.
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/5647/cci000014kx3ip.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5586/cci000027rq2rq.png (http://imageshack.us)
weldo, the first one looks pretty nice, but i&#39;m really not sure what it says. or what that pink thing is either. the colouring and everything is quite nice, but work on the letter structure more, keep it simpler

the second one the colouring isn&#39;t really to my taste, but that&#39;s just me. i don&#39;t like bits in my letters

weldo
05-01-2006, 07:57 AM
holy shit i press refresh n thers some pieces her fuk. im liking the second one good coulours. but drop all that spicky shit off it would look alot better and the third is good but make the bottum of the e flow more it isnt as flowing as the other letters

Voze
05-01-2006, 07:59 AM
haha, yeah that happened to me too - thanks for the crits - the spiky bits i&#39;m not sure why i added them but hey, i have to finish what i started

*~ANZIO~*
05-01-2006, 08:10 AM
Originally posted by weldo@May 1 2006, 07:53 AM
critz i would but no one has one on this page sorry guys. you have a good point to.
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/5647/cci000014kx3ip.png (http://imageshack.us)
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5586/cci000027rq2rq.png (http://imageshack.us)
the drip on the charac is to think and looks like u used sharpies but as for the peice i was feelin it big time

-MaCKiE-
05-01-2006, 08:41 AM
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/8069/mackieaxegraff0011xh.jpg


quik shit.. jus experimentin 4 a new style.

Jank
05-01-2006, 09:15 AM
vose im not a big fan of the first one. but i wud say with that make sure the width is consistent. its pretty gd bt like at the bottom of the S it goes a bit skinny. 2nd one, i think the hole in the O is too big, and its too skinny at the top. i like the style of the last one bt the bottom of the E doesnt work. its too big or sumit.... keep at it tho man i like em alot
.

weldo i agree wit him. really nice colours, but i struggle to find any letters in there... altho it does look nice so maybe its arite lol... actually lookin again i see an e at the ends.. and its quite nice.. make the letters clearer cos maybe the letters are fine u jsut cant see em.. or go simpler... either way keep goin man, gd shit

mackie, sorry, i dont like it.... i cant find any letters in there and it just looks like a spiky abstract thing to me.. sorry dno wot else to say.... get to grips with standard letters b4 tryin that shit

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 09:53 AM
Originally posted by &#045;MaCKiE&#045;@May 1 2006, 08:41 AM
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/8069/mackieaxegraff0011xh.jpg


quik shit.. jus experimentin 4 a new style.
It looks good but i can&#39;t make out a few of the letters and the color scheme kinda clashes but that&#39;s just my 1 cent.

field marshal
05-01-2006, 10:26 AM
it puts the lotion on its skin or else it gets the hose again

weldo: nice stuff
makie :????
vose: keep skeching it looks ok

-MaCKiE-
05-01-2006, 10:32 AM
i marked out a point an madeall the lines go ino that one point.. the point is in the middle of the first letter.. it says mackie.. looks better on paper.. its purple but has come out blue.. bah like i said i was jus playing about i wouldnt paint it or usually do that type of thing..

Etcha
05-01-2006, 11:09 AM
Vose your last one you posted look tight :D
would be good for a dub/throwie :D

what you use for the colouring ( i know you only used black and white)


http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/piece3.jpg

Laeos
05-01-2006, 11:28 AM
Hey all, I&#39;m new to the graffiti scene - only been writing a week or two - here are my latest:

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/7767/laeosblockbusterandbubble4hq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Any crits?

Sorry for lack of colour but I&#39;m still waiting to find a good deal for some prismas on ebay heh

I was also wondering...what sorta pens do you guys use to do the black outline? A black prisma? I was having to use a lame biro which smudged loads =/

Thanks

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 11:32 AM
Originally posted by Laeos@May 1 2006, 11:28 AM
Hey all, I&#39;m new to the graffiti scene - only been writing a week or two - here are my latest:

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/7767/laeosblockbusterandbubble4hq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Any crits?

Sorry for lack of colour but I&#39;m still waiting to find a good deal for some prismas on ebay heh

Thanks
Uhh.... the lettering in the first one is kinda bad but i like where the second one is going but the letter structure is kinda weak - you should try to define the letters more but thats just my 2 cents.

Voze
05-01-2006, 11:35 AM
etcha - i used a thin black pen, and a silver gel pen, that&#39;s all. thought it came out good :D

laeos - it looks a bit like you&#39;re making shapes and then trying to put the letters in them. you should really go for for a different method, here something i took from knowme on 12oz..

http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/7047/sausagetheory7lu.jpg

reconnaissance unit
05-01-2006, 11:43 AM
GAYSUS krist likes toys up his ass

Jank
05-01-2006, 11:43 AM
nice one. not the best description but the general technique is def wat id advise. FOLLOW IT&#33; see hoe the T is made up of blcoks... or &#39;&#39;sausages&#39;&#39;(silly ass name &#33;)

laeos. the second E looks like a smily fat pac-man. listen to vose... do letters like that.. he got it spot on. ur letters are shapes with indents on em, instead of letters....

IKEZ
05-01-2006, 11:50 AM
just workin on my letter structure like some of u suggested. used a shitty eraser. tell me what yall think.
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/606/new23qr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Laeos
05-01-2006, 11:58 AM
Ok tyvm - will follow your advice vose, thanks a lot to Jank and DJlotus too =)

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 12:19 PM
Originally posted by IKEZ@May 1 2006, 11:50 AM
just workin on my letter structure like some of u suggested. used a shitty eraser. tell me what yall think.
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/606/new23qr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I like the way it flows - i see how you attempted 3d on the L..... The only thing i see that I really don&#39;t think fits are the arrows on the I... they just kinda look out of place.. but I like the way its going keep it up.

IKEZ
05-01-2006, 12:57 PM
thanks man. I think ur confusing my I with adn L...it says IKEZ. But ill keep workin on it

beefgerky
05-01-2006, 01:38 PM
yea ikez i htink your E is lacking a bit, but fuck with it somemore and add a Z. dope otherwise.

Sluts_r_us
05-01-2006, 02:31 PM
got bored today when i stayed home....o well...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskcoloredsimple.jpg

backtoyou
05-01-2006, 02:51 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@May 1 2006, 02:31 PM
got bored today when i stayed home....o well...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskcoloredsimple.jpg
nice colours but change the top back part of the s its to fat other than that its nice props man

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 03:15 PM
Originally posted by backtoyou+May 1 2006, 02:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (backtoyou @ May 1 2006, 02:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@May 1 2006, 02:31 PM
got bored today when i stayed home....o well...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/peskcoloredsimple.jpg
nice colours but change the top back part of the s its to fat other than that its nice props man [/b][/quote]
Like Backtoyou said, I dig the colors, and just the overall layout itself. The only part that I don&#39;t really like is the top of the "e"(the inside hole looks disproportionate) looks kinda messy and the P doesn&#39;t really fit the other letters in like size and style... just my 2 cents but it&#39;s good keep it up man.

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 03:17 PM
Originally posted by IKEZ@May 1 2006, 12:57 PM
thanks man. I think ur confusing my I with adn L...it says IKEZ. But ill keep workin on it
What I was talking about are the two bottom arrows on the first I... I think they are a little big and kinda make the whole bottom look strange. Also, the center line on the E kinda is lacking a bit.

aces
05-01-2006, 03:26 PM
Originally posted by unknown...@Apr 30 2006, 08:56 PM
Extir, that blue Demo is really cool man, for some reason i really really like the M

http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/2581/feti27qe.jpg
criticism please....still working on developing and keeping good letter structure....
I&#39;m liking it but the longer addon to the I seems really out of place.

aces
05-01-2006, 03:27 PM
Originally posted by dropsom3@Apr 30 2006, 10:14 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9669/picture45022pv.jpg
hey havnt posted in ages something simple dont like the colors not one of my best
what u think
work more on the structure of the letters than the coloring

aces
05-01-2006, 03:28 PM
Originally posted by IKEZ@May 1 2006, 01:00 AM
Lil sketcy poo i just finished. Crits http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/4960/new3iv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
letter structure is not very good but you have really good coloring which draws your eye from the structure to the colors themselves. just work simples.

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 03:31 PM
Originally posted by aces+May 1 2006, 03:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ May 1 2006, 03:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-dropsom3@Apr 30 2006, 10:14 PM
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/9669/picture45022pv.jpg
hey havnt posted in ages something simple dont like the colors not one of my best
what u think
work more on the structure of the letters than the coloring [/b][/quote]
Yeah, your right the colors are shit but I can see where your yellow died so it&#39;s all cool. The 3d is kinda messed up in some places and the CI looks sketchy. The white lines in the 3d make it look way too complex and the bottom tail on the S is wack. Just my 2 cents, keep it up.

aces
05-01-2006, 03:37 PM
Originally posted by Voze@May 1 2006, 07:55 AM
well, i do listen to crits, and i try to give crits but to be honest i don&#39;t really get much apart from "keep it up" even when i can see there&#39;s bits i don&#39;t like in my stuff. i don&#39;t see many non-toys looking in here, maybe if we got crits from really experienced people the toys would listen to them more.

anyway&#33; time to put some pictures on this page.

i was trying out some pieces, since i&#39;ve never really done any apart from really simple ones. anyway, i hope the letter structure etc still shows through. CRITS PLEASE

first one. i was tired. not as proud of this one but, meh..
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/piece1.jpg

second, i quite like this one since i did it in the morning
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/piece2.jpg

and third
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/piece3.jpg
On the 2nd and 3rd E the middle part of it seems kinda out of place but everything else looks pretty sweet

also you missed some 3d on the first one
ORIGIONAL
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/piece1.jpg

3D MISSING AT LIGHT BLUE
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/576/vose8nd.jpg

Voze
05-01-2006, 03:41 PM
oh shit, i always miss a bit.. ty for crits everyone

Fosale!
05-01-2006, 03:43 PM
Idk, bored in math, 2 new throwies

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010003.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010001.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
05-01-2006, 03:48 PM
second one is nice..i dont like the first

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 03:55 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@May 1 2006, 03:43 PM
Idk, bored in math, 2 new throwies

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010003.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010001.jpg
I really don&#39;t like the first one... the second one is ok. The inside of the a (3d fillin ) is a little akward tho.

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 03:57 PM
The 3d filling on the "a" is akward because there is no other 3d on any other letters....

aces
05-01-2006, 04:04 PM
Keep working on it but just to let you know I wouldn&#39;t have a two letter name.

AMAZ tbscrew
05-01-2006, 04:28 PM
why? hes a bomber. not a piecer.

AMAZ tbscrew
05-01-2006, 04:34 PM
Originally posted by DJLotus+May 1 2006, 09:53 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DJLotus @ May 1 2006, 09:53 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#045;MaCKiE&#045;@May 1 2006, 08:41 AM
http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/8069/mackieaxegraff0011xh.jpg


quik shit.. jus experimentin 4 a new style.
It looks good but i can&#39;t make out a few of the letters and the color scheme kinda clashes but that&#39;s just my 1 cent. [/b][/quote]
yo seriously...stfu u say everything looks good or is dope. how the fuck dose that look good?

r u fuckin blind? wtf

wow roid rage.

AMAZ tbscrew
05-01-2006, 04:35 PM
Originally posted by reconnaissance unit@May 1 2006, 11:43 AM
GAYSUS krist likes toys up his ass
wrong thread idiot go 2 the big boys thread.

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 04:35 PM
Chill the fuck out man... what the hell are you ranting about? I think it looks good - how the fuck can you argue with an opinion?

aces
05-01-2006, 04:55 PM
amaz its OK but go a little simpler with less addons

unknown...
05-01-2006, 05:05 PM
positive crits please&#33;&#33;&#33; what do u guys think


http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/658/feti21zw.jpg

and aces, thats not amaz&#39;s thats mackies or sumthin i think...unless u wer talkin about sumthin else

AMAZ tbscrew
05-01-2006, 05:09 PM
Originally posted by aces@May 1 2006, 04:55 PM
amaz its OK but go a little simpler with less addons
chill thats not mine id never produce anything like that.


djwutever....ur opinions dont matter...uv said everything is dope and its not. no letter structure at all. read it tell me wut it says.

unknown...
05-01-2006, 05:10 PM
ya, so it isnt amaz&#39;s i was right....

critzzz please&#33;

aces
05-01-2006, 05:11 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+May 1 2006, 05:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ May 1 2006, 05:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@May 1 2006, 04:55 PM
amaz its OK but go a little simpler with less addons
chill thats not mine id never produce anything like that.


djwutever....ur opinions dont matter...uv said everything is dope and its not. no letter structure at all. read it tell me wut it says. [/b][/quote]
1. I wasn&#39;t bein harsh or anything just givin crits
2. Sorry thought it was yours

AMAZ tbscrew
05-01-2006, 05:11 PM
^stfu. =]

i like it...i guess cuz i can read it.

level the letters so there all even. and try suttin diffrent with ur I.

unknown...
05-01-2006, 05:13 PM
im trying really hard to develop while keeping good structure
i think its sorta workin out

aces
05-01-2006, 05:19 PM
it&#39;s good but keep workin on the handstyle also try to either level out your 3d or do it differently like a one point perspective. This website is helpful.
http://www.ider.herts.ac.uk/school/coursew...erspective.html

unknown...
05-01-2006, 05:22 PM
i dont like 1 point perspective a lot, i like the type of 3d i do, every1 does 1 point perspective man

joker00
05-01-2006, 05:50 PM
Originally posted by joker00@Apr 26 2006, 08:33 PM
http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/108/picture0do.jpg

first attempt at this style wut ya think?
:( like this i know its old and sloppy but around these lines ?

flclnaruto1213
05-01-2006, 06:03 PM
joker has 1234 posts

like teh lol

ghostbusta5
05-01-2006, 06:48 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@May 1 2006, 03:43 PM
Idk, bored in math, 2 new throwies

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010003.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010001.jpg
your doin the same stuff were doing in math :o :lol:

rectone
05-01-2006, 06:53 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/viper1213/rect1.jpg

some feed back

MF Feed Letter
05-01-2006, 06:54 PM
first pages of my new giant blackbook
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0930.jpg
tell me what ya think

unknown...
05-01-2006, 07:03 PM
rectone, work on that man&#33; the throw is ok, but the piece is umm, idk it needs structure, its lackin it a lil bit

mf, those yares are sick, but i dont care for the one liner lookin thing that the guy with the glasses is like presenting...everything else is soooo dope, the characters, the styles, everything&#33;

Hater-AiD~>
05-01-2006, 07:06 PM
damnit feed letter i love your shit..keep it up

esnet1r
05-01-2006, 07:08 PM
This is just about everything i got pics of, im fucking ghetto and without a camera so most of this is a couple months old. I&#39;ll try and get a camera or find someone with one to post new shit. CRITS PLZ, most of the shits been posted without much feed back :/
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1507/stingburnr0dv.jpg
http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/8365/picture2595aa7rj.jpg
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/8261/picture2606qu5dp.jpg
http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/4386/drugs8ib.jpg
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5683/seting22ca.jpg
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/6691/tensrsketch3pw.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/3953/tensrnear1ho.jpg

unknown...
05-01-2006, 07:09 PM
you write tenser the best by far&#33; imo u should stick to that

esnet1r
05-01-2006, 07:12 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@May 1 2006, 06:54 PM
first pages of my new giant blackbook
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0930.jpg
tell me what ya think
those characters are jokes still.
I dunno i see how ppl think that yare bomb is shady but i like it alright.
It&#39;s different, got some style, im always down for next bombing steez.
the rest of stuffs chill, keep it up

rectone
05-01-2006, 07:13 PM
yo vose dat shit hot as hell stay up

aces
05-01-2006, 07:14 PM
rect you need to get a better picture to begin and lose the chips they arent doing anything to the piece. SIMPLE how many times does this word have to be said.

mf i love the third from the bottom. the one in the middle needs work it looks like 4are and the E is bad the throwie is sick and so are the chars. the second from the top looks good except that thing from the E seems kinda misplaced

MF Feed Letter
05-01-2006, 07:15 PM
none of those characters are mine...all from shows..bottom is gandhi form clone high..great show..then bode&#39;s characters then aqua teen hunger force guys..so dont rag on the characters becaus ethey look shitty or simple thats how there drawn

MF Feed Letter
05-01-2006, 07:17 PM
o an throw is not a one liner... it doenst even look liek one

esnet1r
05-01-2006, 07:18 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@May 1 2006, 07:15 PM
none of those characters are mine...all from shows..bottom is gandhi form clone high..great show..then bode&#39;s characters then aqua teen hunger force guys..so dont rag on the characters becaus ethey look shitty or simple thats how there drawn
lol when i say their jokes i ain&#39;t bashing them.
I know the athf characters never seen those other ones.
tell whoever did them gj cuz their crisp.
Little miscommunication, wasn&#39;t ragging on shit

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 07:19 PM
Originally posted by esnet1r@May 1 2006, 07:08 PM
This is just about everything i got pics of, im fucking ghetto and without a camera so most of this is a couple months old. I&#39;ll try and get a camera or find someone with one to post new shit. CRITS PLZ, most of the shits been posted without much feed back :/
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/1507/stingburnr0dv.jpg
http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/8365/picture2595aa7rj.jpg
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/8261/picture2606qu5dp.jpg
http://img283.imageshack.us/img283/4386/drugs8ib.jpg
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/5683/seting22ca.jpg
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/6691/tensrsketch3pw.jpg
http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/3953/tensrnear1ho.jpg
Alright- you want crit? Here&#39;s my opinions :

1) way too many fucking arrows..... the letter structure is decent as in I can make out most everything, but what happened with the color job? Was it supposed to look like your marker ran out?

3) I like the color scheme and the 3d is ok. I like the basic simple letter structure but the "ens" are smaller than the rest of the letters.... but I kinda like whats going on with the white worms or whatever they are.

5) the colors are crazy, looks like a fucking acid trip. the problem is with all the colors and extra stuff i can&#39;t make out any letters except an E....

And I&#39;m not trying to start beef, that&#39;s just my 1 cent.

MF Feed Letter
05-01-2006, 07:22 PM
o alright hah well i still dont get what joke means then

an how can y ou not know about bodes character cheech wizard common&#33;

Hater-AiD~>
05-01-2006, 07:23 PM
^^
you mean 2 cents..

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 07:26 PM
Nahh my lousy opinions aren&#39;t worth that much heh.

esnet1r
05-01-2006, 07:46 PM
word, yea ty for crits, they didn&#39;t sound negative if thats what u were going for.
The one with the small ens is kinda shady but i dropped that for a friend in like half an hour so i didn&#39;t spend much time refining anything
in fact, i didn&#39;t really spend much time on any of them asides from the tenser with the big shady r at the end.
Most of my stuff i just shit out of my ass and leave the paper smelling like yesterdays garbage.
the more abstract one was my shady attempt at a piece style that i&#39;ve seen around, unfourtunatly i failed and that artsy fartsy seting came out instead ~___~
I didn&#39;t even remember doing the one with tags for fills until my boy sent me the pic :/ and the one with the gorillaz character i sketched out the tenser in red pen but all the fills and such were done by my friend at a later date, guess he didnt think it was as bad as i did. so ya thats my life story thanks for the critz lotus
HEY HEY HEY, SMOKE WEED EVERYDAY


FUCK NICK CANNON
DAVE CHAPELLE&#33;

myna
05-01-2006, 07:58 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i70/dtpm/nibz2.jpg

critz plz. theres no color, cuz i always screw it up by putting color in.

aces
05-01-2006, 08:03 PM
the S doesn&#39;t even look like an S the B is ok the dot on the I seems a little small and the N is strange because it goes from bubble to straight lines

myna
05-01-2006, 08:04 PM
thats a z not a s

myna
05-01-2006, 08:05 PM
Originally posted by myna@May 1 2006, 07:58 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i70/dtpm/nibz2.jpg

critz plz. theres no color, cuz i always screw it up by putting color in.
bump, cuz i got last post on the last page

DJLotus
05-01-2006, 08:10 PM
Is the I a sandwich? also, the Z doesn&#39;t really look like a letter at all and the n is a little strange looking. about the i; it&#39;s disproportionate to the rest of the letters...

Logikalone
05-01-2006, 08:27 PM
your letter structure needs some work, and not feelin the N. Practice.

joker00
05-01-2006, 08:38 PM
Originally posted by DJLotus@May 1 2006, 08:10 PM
Is the I a sandwich? also, the Z doesn&#39;t really look like a letter at all and the n is a little strange looking. about the i; it&#39;s disproportionate to the rest of the letters...
:) agreed and all ur letter have no space in it cept 4 the "i"so kept tryin

beone
05-01-2006, 08:39 PM
bender
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237171.jpg
old school
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237172.jpg
hand
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237173.jpg
bomber
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237174.jpg

dropsom3
05-01-2006, 08:54 PM
Originally posted by esnet1r+May 1 2006, 07:12 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (esnet1r @ May 1 2006, 07:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MF Feed Letter@May 1 2006, 06:54 PM
first pages of my new giant blackbook
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_0930.jpg
tell me what ya think
those characters are jokes still.
I dunno i see how ppl think that yare bomb is shady but i like it alright.
It&#39;s different, got some style, im always down for next bombing steez.
the rest of stuffs chill, keep it up [/b][/quote]
feelin everything besides the 2 black and whites those are kinda whack

Stewe
05-01-2006, 08:59 PM
those yare sketches are nice athf kicks ass and vaughn bode does too
probably one of the best writers on here that uses his stuff is avos..hes in the big boy section tho

rectone
05-01-2006, 09:35 PM
good looks unknown. dat piece wast wen i firs started i trye wildstyle but i came out worng.wen i get web cam i put some new shit on

Stewe
05-01-2006, 09:46 PM
whoa what did you say?

running man
05-01-2006, 09:57 PM
rect, you need grammar school, not sketch help.

near
05-02-2006, 12:38 AM
hopefully this doesnt get bumped off right away http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/near_piece_good.jpg

extirpate
05-02-2006, 01:07 AM
pretty cool near

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/2328/newstuff0017sv.jpg
^little simp

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/2733/newstuff0028pt.jpg
^new atempt to get more complext

crits?

weldo
05-02-2006, 05:07 AM
demo sory man but im not liking either of them first off the top pink one the bubles are the same colour as the 3d making it look really weird n the second piece i dont even know whats going on just keep it simple

near
lookin good but drop all the brown off it makes it to hard to look at and drop the lines in the 3d other than that its preety good

*~ANZIO~*
05-02-2006, 05:33 AM
shit piss and cotton candy. no offense

DJLotus
05-02-2006, 07:35 AM
Originally posted by extirpate@May 2 2006, 01:07 AM
pretty cool near

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/2328/newstuff0017sv.jpg
^little simp

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/2733/newstuff0028pt.jpg
^new atempt to get more complext

crits?
The first one doesn&#39;t appeal to me at all.... the 3d isn&#39;t very great and the colors don&#39;t go together at all. Also, some of your letters like the "d" aren&#39;t as wide as the letters like the "m". They all gotta look the same size...

The second one needs a lot more work, and the two arrows comming out of the top I don&#39;t really dig....

Aven
05-02-2006, 07:39 AM
i really like the d on the second one


an update of the big sketch....

what do you think....

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/9973/dscf08794it.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits moothafookahs

aces
05-02-2006, 10:07 AM
Originally posted by extirpate@May 2 2006, 01:07 AM
pretty cool near

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/2328/newstuff0017sv.jpg
^little simp

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/2733/newstuff0028pt.jpg
^new atempt to get more complext

crits?
The first one is ok the letters kinda are sideways but the second one is sic the only thing i dont like is the little bubble things in the D and O. are you gunna color it?

aces
05-02-2006, 10:08 AM
Originally posted by near@May 2 2006, 12:38 AM
hopefully this doesnt get bumped off right away http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/near_piece_good.jpg
I really like it the coloring is nice the structure is solid but the only thing i dont like is the squiggle in the A. keep it goin

near
05-02-2006, 10:58 AM
Originally posted by *~ANZIO~*@May 2 2006, 05:33 AM
shit piss and cotton candy. no offense
heh r u describing the fills on my sketch lol

obseen
05-02-2006, 11:00 AM
aces thats very nice

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 11:13 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/untigffftled1.jpg

not finished
crits ?
and please no beef

vare_187uk
05-02-2006, 11:30 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/gf.jpg

ados
05-02-2006, 11:32 AM
make your V bigger, your E smaller, and fix that extension on the R. werd.

cape
05-02-2006, 11:32 AM
molotow i like the characs but you need make the peice a lot more simpler

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 11:43 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/iopuntitled1.jpg

charik
arnt finished either

obseen
05-02-2006, 12:01 PM
i like it on the right but not on the left for some reason

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 12:05 PM
its not finished lol

Aven
05-02-2006, 12:26 PM
i love how i post something up and then someone posts something right fucking after mine.....and i get no crits...




CRITS....please

DR FORCE
05-02-2006, 12:36 PM
Originally posted by ghostbusta5+May 1 2006, 06:48 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ghostbusta5 @ May 1 2006, 06:48 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@May 1 2006, 03:43 PM
Idk, bored in math, 2 new throwies

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010003.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010001.jpg
your doin the same stuff were doing in math :o :lol: [/b][/quote]
Yes that maths we did alsouw in Belgium :P
in wan of the first chapters

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 12:46 PM
always use a ruoler on your maths diagrams
and in pencil too
and underline the date and heading
a neat presentation

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 12:46 PM
flood control

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 12:46 PM
flood control :(

beefgerky
05-02-2006, 02:22 PM
Originally posted by near@May 2 2006, 12:38 AM
hopefully this doesnt get bumped off right away http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/near_piece_good.jpg
http://www.mrcleantools.com/graphics/logo.jpg

Puffer
05-02-2006, 02:23 PM
^^?

AMAZ tbscrew
05-02-2006, 02:26 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 2 2006, 11:13 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/untigffftled1.jpg

not finished
crits ?
and please no beef
stop tracin shit. dumbfuck.

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 02:37 PM
unbelievable,
jus tell me how do you trace onto card ?

AMAZ tbscrew
05-02-2006, 02:39 PM
u can trace onto anything......wait ur guna tell me...u um just drew them off the yop of ur head?

ook ;)

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 02:42 PM
im not so great on graffiti the idea&#39;s just dont come for me,
but i got a a* in an anamation course.
its called a stedy hand and a good eye

AMAZ tbscrew
05-02-2006, 02:46 PM
so u copyed it from somewhere?

awsome high five.

who cares if u got an a in anamation....i skiped all my drawing and paintin class&#39;s last year and pasted with a b...and didnt even hand in my final exam...

want a cookie for gettin an a?

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 02:48 PM
your lame

AMAZ tbscrew
05-02-2006, 02:51 PM
nah ur just a fagget.

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 02:53 PM
no your lame.

beefgerky
05-02-2006, 03:00 PM
stop bickering.

AMAZ tbscrew
05-02-2006, 03:09 PM
<3 nfk.

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
05-02-2006, 03:14 PM
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/914/picture0845rv.jpg

Someone asked me to make them a random sticker, so i did. those animals arent meant to be taken seriously. so get over it lol.

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/176/picture0853nr.jpg

Another sticker i did, about a foot long

http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/2381/picture0866fq.jpg

Whatever ^

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/9969/picture0879bo.jpg

Crits on this would be nice. I colored it and 3-D&#39;d it, by suggestion. tell me what you think.

molotow_15
05-02-2006, 03:18 PM
the bottom one&#39;s the best and it kinda has
straight lines..

R00k1
05-02-2006, 03:24 PM
I think if you used markers instead of colored pencils or whatever you used it would look better.

Aven
05-02-2006, 03:43 PM
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3664/dscf08795rj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

second time posting it cause the first time i was totally blown over

crits?

Etcha
05-02-2006, 03:47 PM
done this just a min ago
not really feeling tho "A" though...couldn&#39;t think of nething in the same style for that letter :S
any help?

http://img429.imageshack.us/img429/1711/imgp11331cv.jpg

near
05-02-2006, 04:08 PM
and another

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/piecezilla.jpg

leaks
05-02-2006, 04:15 PM
holdin it down on the pcp and erb
looks real nice and i like the colors just make change the r it looks more lke a k

vare_187uk
05-02-2006, 04:16 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 2 2006, 02:37 PM
unbelievable,
jus tell me how do you trace onto card ?
so when did they start making card with a ring binderdown the side

atleast be honest youved missed no end of parts on the piece that i can see of
and no im not pointin them out

also ur still trying to bite as far as i can see

quit while your head your not a wildstylised your not even a simples man yet asfar as i can see

show your 2d before ur 3d and then we can judge yo&#33;

beone
05-02-2006, 05:36 PM
Originally posted by beone@May 1 2006, 08:39 PM
bender
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237171.jpg
old school
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237172.jpg
hand
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237173.jpg
bomber
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237174.jpg
bump for criots

mizta
05-02-2006, 06:00 PM
CLOSE&#33; J.k

N:Craze
05-02-2006, 06:08 PM
Originally posted by Aven@May 2 2006, 07:39 AM
i really like the d on the second one


an update of the big sketch....

what do you think....

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/9973/dscf08794it.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits moothafookahs
im likin it so far ... the e is kinda wierd but its nice finish colorin it and post it up

R00k1
05-02-2006, 06:10 PM
Originally posted by mizta@May 2 2006, 06:00 PM
CLOSE&#33; J.k
Why do ou keep posting this?

sky 5
05-02-2006, 06:26 PM
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/4018/11414933jj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4750/11414956kf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7424/11515024wn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2194/11414989rd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Stewe
05-02-2006, 06:33 PM
nice sketches i like the last one.. edit since i thought i was in the wrong thread

rectone
05-02-2006, 06:37 PM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/viper1213/redrobot.jpg

some feed back

Stewe
05-02-2006, 06:40 PM
when your doing a karak right behind the piece dont make it the exact same colors because it blends to well and then it looks kinda wack..not that my shits really good but ya try that

rectone
05-02-2006, 07:10 PM
good looks stewe ill try dat

CHEN[Ken]
05-02-2006, 07:52 PM
hey this is some of my friends stuff hes askin for some crits hellppp



http://i2.tinypic.com/x22zc0.jpg
http://i3.tinypic.com/x22zgn.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/x22zk7.jpg
http://i3.tinypic.com/x22zp2.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/x22zvc.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/x22zxi.jpg
http://i2.tinypic.com/x2302g.jpg

esnet1r
05-02-2006, 08:11 PM
Originally posted by near@May 2 2006, 04:08 PM
and another

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/piecezilla.jpg
whos this near guy, hes pretty ill :lol: :lol:

hey bore hey
05-02-2006, 08:12 PM
to the guy above me: id say the third to last one is the best, the letters are most evenly proportioned in that one, and the color scheme is cool. in the others, there are some like real skinny sections in the letters that look a little wack. the A in the last one seems kinda cool, maybe youre getting somewhere with that.

heres some shit i drew like 5 min ago, help me out peeps.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b66/jameshodges/th_STA70424.jpg (http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b66/jameshodges/STA70424.jpg)


i know the lines are sloppy and the 3-d is mad inconsistent. i think the letters are all right, or they would be if i got more precise, less sloppy. less skinny too, probably. lol i know everyone&#39;s gonna say "do simples&#33;". advice?

Hater-AiD~>
05-02-2006, 08:15 PM
^^dont disconnect your letters..make them thicker
and like you said your 3d is messed up

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
05-02-2006, 08:22 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@May 2 2006, 06:26 PM
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/4018/11414933jj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4750/11414956kf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7424/11515024wn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2194/11414989rd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Dude thats fuckin righteous. im lovin the first one. i like. keep it up.

flclnaruto1213
05-02-2006, 08:54 PM
eyyo...guess what everybody

ive decided to change back to fund.

forget fetus.

Stewe
05-02-2006, 08:57 PM
i wasnt around to see any of your fund stuff so enlighten me
heres some shit for a girl and then 2 little scrap sketches..

http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/cassie2.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/cassie1.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00600.jpg
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00602.jpg
the metallic marker kept goin over my black and stuff so its not great but im working on it
EDIT the stuff is covered because it has my name..

any crits comments?

beone
05-02-2006, 09:33 PM
Originally posted by beone+May 2 2006, 05:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beone &#064; May 2 2006, 05:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-beone@May 1 2006, 08:39 PM
bender
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237171.jpg
old school
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237172.jpg
hand
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237173.jpg
bomber
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237174.jpg
bump for criots [/b][/quote]
cassie work on letter structure stewe i like the first one better if it was colored more make the lines more even 2

some one give me crits please i wanna put the throws and handstyle stuff up but i wanna make it good first

dropsom3
05-02-2006, 09:36 PM
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9910/picture45033hz.jpg
hmm somethign i did lastnight i was bored its mmkay.
what do you think

flclnaruto1213
05-02-2006, 09:39 PM
old fund stuff
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/040306_16041.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/sketcher207.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/sketcher211.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/untitled.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/jkjk.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/b.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/sketcher017.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/sketcher015.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/sketcher003.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/040306_18391.jpg

there it is

ill sketch some stuff up and post new stuff later
peace

beone
05-02-2006, 09:40 PM
make the lines straighter u have so many hesitation lines the outline is shaky in some place why is the arrow shoing thru the c and d kinda?
hands are also whack look like scribbles make them closer and have so much flavor u can taste it

Stewe
05-02-2006, 09:42 PM
Originally posted by beone@May 2 2006, 09:33 PM
cassie work on letter structure stewe i like the first one better if it was colored more make the lines more even 2

some one give me crits please i wanna put the throws and handstyle stuff up but i wanna make it good first
that stuff is by me FOR a girl not by a girl haha

beone
05-02-2006, 09:46 PM
^idk what name it was posted under just givin suggestions by the writing name

any crits for me??

fund ur shit is fresh work on letter structure a little bit on some peices tho

dropsom3
05-02-2006, 09:46 PM
the arrow is souposed to be showing through the c and d thats how i do shit the handstyle is all whack looking cuz i did it with 2 colors and the secound color is all weird i dont mind it 2 much kinda differnt and shit i like to do differnt shit in my stuff not be the same as everone else, i like the euro style graff alot. i love american graff but i would love to hav my shit turn out like euro stuff, guess im tryin to say thats the style i want lol sorry for going on and on

Stewe
05-02-2006, 09:48 PM
ya and fund i liked some of that shit it was nice

and beone when you do a handy dont you pick either square like angles or rounded ones? im no expert i dont really have a handstyle but i think so but ask someone who knows about it for crits..

dropsom3
05-02-2006, 09:53 PM
yea fund some shit u hav is sick keep working on ur stlye it will be rele nice to see later on

dropsom3
05-02-2006, 09:59 PM
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/716/picture45042ss.jpg
handstyles in color pencil

xAWOKE.925
05-02-2006, 10:25 PM
....cool? i like the assip one. or does it say assie

flclnaruto1213
05-02-2006, 10:48 PM
thanks yall

beefgerky
05-02-2006, 11:49 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@May 2 2006, 09:39 PM
old fund stuff
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/040306_16041.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/sketcher207.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/sketcher211.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/untitled.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/jkjk.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/b.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/sketcher017.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/sketcher015.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/sketcher003.jpg
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e305/charcoalboy/040306_18391.jpg

there it is

ill sketch some stuff up and post new stuff later
peace
bump. ;)

and this is a new style im trying...shitttty asss flick and i fucked up the k&#39;s angling and its in the middle of the 2 pages. o well. ill re-do / re-flick a little later.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture775.jpg

dropsom3
05-03-2006, 12:00 AM
Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@May 2 2006, 10:25 PM
....cool? i like the assip one. or does it say assie
...assit like acid

beefgerky
05-03-2006, 02:01 AM
update on that style^

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture778.jpg

brap brap.

Bone2006
05-03-2006, 02:05 AM
No one fucking responds on 12ozprophet&#33;&#33;&#33; I think i&#39;ll stay here.

Crits n comments on this pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee...
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a199/123ENKO/DSC00400.jpg

Rend
05-03-2006, 02:14 AM
okay ppo say to start simple:
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01705.jpg
and then go abit more wild. how can i do that to this?

hey bore hey
05-03-2006, 03:30 AM
i like that rend man. the letters are solid and the drippy dots are a nice touch.

as for getting wilder.... see the little notch on the bottom left of your R? its all about understanding where those little exaggerations can go in each letter, and how certain sections can connect- and then pushing it as hard as you can.

Etcha
05-03-2006, 04:10 AM
Originally posted by Etcha@May 2 2006, 03:47 PM
done this just a min ago
not really feeling tho "A" though...couldn&#39;t think of nething in the same style for that letter :S
any help?

http://img429.imageshack.us/img429/1711/imgp11331cv.jpg
^^Bump

Enemy
05-03-2006, 05:29 AM
Originally posted by sky 5@May 2 2006, 06:26 PM
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/4018/11414933jj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4750/11414956kf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7424/11515024wn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2194/11414989rd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
if u post in the toy thread again ill hunt u down and cut ya&#33;&#33;
big up&#33; u got a mad style&#33;&#33;

toxus
05-03-2006, 09:54 AM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060503/07/a/4/0/a407262912b19d03b03162340e76c840200605030_full.jpg
schooool sketch.

toon!..
05-03-2006, 10:42 AM
youve improved so much&#33;

http://img433.imageshack.us/img433/4623/peterborough1gn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

something i done in science lol took phot in class to

some guy from NCI...
05-03-2006, 11:08 AM
Originally posted by dropsom3@May 2 2006, 09:36 PM
http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/9910/picture45033hz.jpg
hmm somethign i did lastnight i was bored its mmkay.
what do you think
AHAHAHA Assit-TWO...


Joooker..

sky 5
05-03-2006, 12:00 PM
id rather post in here where its a factory of people poppin shit and givin crits and comments than upstairs where theres only a handful of writers that deserve to post up while the rest of em who have no skill will diss your shit cuz it aint still tipin or luster or runci. fuck dat, id rather be down here with the sleezes rolled up puttin in work with yall .... bone nice letters good proportion, bar underneath looks a lil odd, maybe not so much if you connected/had it coming out from the first part of the B

some guy from NCI...
05-03-2006, 12:15 PM
:huh:

Voze
05-03-2006, 12:22 PM
sky5, your work doesn&#39;t deserve to be put here. it&#39;s like you&#39;re punishing it for some reason, sending it down to us :P

anyway, that&#39;s cool, means it&#39;s not just toys giving crits to toys - i like your stuff, looks good

some guy from NCI...
05-03-2006, 12:24 PM
Oooh that&#39;s who you are.


Sick stuff sky

Etcha
05-03-2006, 02:01 PM
Originally posted by toon&#33;..@May 3 2006, 10:42 AM
youve improved so much&#33;

http://img433.imageshack.us/img433/4623/peterborough1gn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

something i done in science lol took phot in class to
you must have been bored :P
science sucks as it is

You got drop shadow on that?

Blak-T
05-03-2006, 02:15 PM
here some stuff i did in class....yeah im that bored.
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/scan0007.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/scan0006.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/scan0005.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/scan0004.jpg


also for the really new people on here try this for...just a suggestion....i aint tryin to say im better then nobody...jus some tips on letter progression.
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/scan0003.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/scan0002.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/scan0001.jpg

near
05-03-2006, 02:17 PM
toon thats dope as fuck ill bombing steez

some guy from NCI...
05-03-2006, 02:17 PM
Oy toon breh people know your name now

Blak-T
05-03-2006, 02:24 PM
toon your style has really progressed...i like it....any crits on mine.

nephsike
05-03-2006, 02:44 PM
simple freight sketches....
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f352/whatuptizzy/graffiti023.jpg

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f352/whatuptizzy/graffiti026.jpg

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f352/whatuptizzy/145454453.jpg

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f352/whatuptizzy/graffiti024.jpg

a few pages from my sticker book...
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f352/whatuptizzy/Picture006.jpg

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f352/whatuptizzy/Picture001.jpg

peacceeeeeeee
http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f352/whatuptizzy/432801103_m.gif

Fosale!
05-03-2006, 03:29 PM
That W looks exactly like Meser&#39;s M but upside down

N:Craze
05-03-2006, 03:33 PM
Originally posted by Bone2006@May 3 2006, 02:05 AM
No one fucking responds on 12ozprophet&#33;&#33;&#33; I think i&#39;ll stay here.

Crits n comments on this pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee...
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a199/123ENKO/DSC00400.jpg
lovvin that go paint

nephsike
05-03-2006, 03:43 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@May 3 2006, 03:29 PM
That W looks exactly like Meser&#39;s M but upside down
haha...you r funny kid....i only just heard of mesr like a week ago....

nephsike
05-03-2006, 03:50 PM
i was just looking thru some of mesr&#39;s shit just to see how close of a similarity there was...and theres really wasnt...at best the style is somewhat similar.....but not really...so if u couyld.....find a flick and flip it and post it next to mine....so i can see this...
word to your mother

Mse
05-03-2006, 05:17 PM
hahah it looks like mesr except its simpler and you can see the shaky hand
uhh blak t you need to make that letter progression thing simpler ya know?
andd uhh warn those frieght simples are good but the rest is the opposite
mse is off to sleepy good night foosls

aoime
05-03-2006, 05:21 PM
shit MSE im sooo sorry,....

I just did the dirty with your avatar....seven times in six minutes.



Edit..that W only looks slightly bitten from Meser, but only anal freaks would bitch about that, and its barely slightly IF THAT. People bitch too much about biting, there are only so many ways you can do simples for letters.

Plus, observing other styles helps build knowledge in the game of style and design, minimal biting helps to some degreee inorder to help yourself learn and develop further.

So please, toys need to stop bitching about biting so much. Everyone does and did it....Unless you dont have eyes, then you are one original cat.

beefgerky
05-03-2006, 05:29 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@May 3 2006, 02:01 AM
update on that style^

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/Picture778.jpg

brap brap.
dhl bump.

Mse
05-03-2006, 05:32 PM
i wasnt bitching i was just stating that it looks like meser i didnt even say that it was bad that he might have looked

gerk its all good cept the k and the g and the e and the r :)
nah its good i dont like the part of the g that overlaps or the way the k overlaps but other than that TIP TOP

aoime
05-03-2006, 05:33 PM
Im really liking it. [someone needs to crit this so its not bumped again, hehe]

Naw but really looks nice and clean. liking the negative spaced dome atop the letters along with the dots for the letter holes. I dont see much wrong with it, but do me a favor...tweak the G tail so it ends like the bottom K leg and maybe make the top K leg a bit longer like the G top.

Not saying this will look better, just more symmetric and uniform. The way I like it most.

TricksForKids
05-03-2006, 05:59 PM
gerk, i still dunno about that sketch^ ive been looking at it for like 5 minutes and cant decide if i like it or hate it, anyways, just messin around with the word mosnter for the handy battle, any good?

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/8499/monster8vw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aoime
05-03-2006, 06:03 PM
god, should i really be allowed to give crits, i barely sketch.

anyways...

Tricks >> the M dont like how the end curves in, liking the small O, the top N would look nicer if it was more parallel with the underline, nice S, not liking the T that looks like an I, E is nice except how it connects to the R, enlarge the R and get rid of the X in the middle.

Am I being too anal now? too over analytical?

TricksForKids
05-03-2006, 06:05 PM
yeah but hold on, ill do exactly what you said

beone
05-03-2006, 06:57 PM
REAP not done just need suggestions on what to change before i color it
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237374.jpg

gerk i like that alot i know this would throw it off but it would look better if u gave the k more space on the top right part

dropsom3
05-03-2006, 08:28 PM
nice work everone

ados
05-03-2006, 09:18 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan.jpg

sketchin some wackness. red pen&#33;

ados
05-03-2006, 09:19 PM
damn that shits big, sorry bout that.

Blak-T
05-03-2006, 09:27 PM
hot pen sketches....the top one and the throw are smooth

Stewe
05-03-2006, 09:28 PM
i like that hand and the top left piece..i&#39;m not to sure about the extensions on the o(top right hand corner) but i like that shit keep it up

ss_Solo
05-03-2006, 09:30 PM
Originally posted by ados@May 3 2006, 09:18 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan.jpg

sketchin some wackness. red pen&#33;
ooh i&#39;m likin the red pen...i like the top one the best

nephsike
05-03-2006, 09:34 PM
Originally posted by aoime@May 3 2006, 05:21 PM
People bitch too much about biting, there are only so many ways you can do simples for letters.

Plus, observing other styles helps build knowledge in the game of style and design, minimal biting helps to some degreee inorder to help yourself learn and develop further.

So please, toys need to stop bitching about biting so much. Everyone does and did it....Unless you dont have eyes, then you are one original cat.
word......people can have similar styles without biting....look at the state of california for example ;) 90% of it is very similar.....

beone
05-03-2006, 09:44 PM
Originally posted by beone@May 3 2006, 06:57 PM
REAP not done just need suggestions on what to change before i color it
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/237374.jpg
bump for crits befopre i put it in pen please

Blak-T
05-03-2006, 09:50 PM
Originally posted by Blak&#045;T@May 3 2006, 02:15 PM
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/scan0007.jpg

any crits on these...trying out some new ideas

unknown...
05-03-2006, 09:59 PM
This is my sad excuse for a wildstyle...i do not think i was ready yet, but i want to see if i am atleast in the right direction, i tried to keep my letter structure and just put in simple add ons, how does it look?
http://img320.imageshack.us/img320/660/feti44vx.jpg

N:Craze
05-03-2006, 10:36 PM
figure out your 3d first. it is wierd lookin

Volume_one_
05-03-2006, 10:38 PM
Here are a few drawlings that i&#39;m working on
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2467.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2468.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2471.jpg

Here are some handstyles i was working on
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2473.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/volume_one_/IMG_2472.jpg

Ironik
05-03-2006, 10:40 PM
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/6015/maxx0017nb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Volume_one_
05-03-2006, 10:49 PM
TTHAT SHITS FUCKIN GANGSTER ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

AoAssis
05-03-2006, 10:50 PM
and your fuckin gay.

Volume_one_
05-03-2006, 10:58 PM
wtf aoassis who are you and why are you talking shit that pic is badass i dont care what you think

beefgerky
05-04-2006, 12:08 AM
your fucking gay.

kill
05-04-2006, 12:26 AM
the hell talkin bout the sketch was sick

nephsike
05-04-2006, 01:01 AM
it was actually pretty gay

Mse
05-04-2006, 04:42 AM
that sketch is wack what are you people talking about?

mr.T
05-04-2006, 06:28 AM
http://home.no.net/ramsesk/tremie.jpg

Wrok
05-04-2006, 06:37 AM
Wak?

Yes

unknown...
05-04-2006, 07:25 AM
Mr T, that would look aight but it needs a black outline around the letters...and ik my piece is whack, idk y i felt like posting it. I have purty good letters as they are, ill just leave em

FuKe
05-04-2006, 07:44 AM
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2922/elsegraff15rk.jpg

Any comments?

I got one&#33; I know the last E sucks... But i didn&#39;t have many cm. left on the paper, so it looks a kinda strange.. :)

Ironik
05-04-2006, 07:51 AM
how is my shit wak i really dont understand but watever

some guy from NCI...
05-04-2006, 08:07 AM
omg Wrok is pissin me off. Who the fuck is he? Why doesn&#39;t he show some of his shit? poosaayyy.

On another note Bone your stuff is nice... and whatshisface is right, go paint.

ss_Solo
05-04-2006, 08:35 AM
Originally posted by FuKe@May 4 2006, 07:44 AM
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/2922/elsegraff15rk.jpg

Any comments?

I got one&#33; I know the last E sucks... But i didn&#39;t have many cm. left on the paper, so it looks a kinda strange.. :)
ummm drop the green bubbles...keep letters the same size/dimensions...dont use arrows on the L&#39;s...marker would be tight

Mr Tasty
05-04-2006, 09:23 AM
hey guys need ur help
im painting this tommrow
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/icecream.jpg
ive never done this kinda style
were gonna have a white backround...paintrolled
the colors i have are...light grey....lime green....peach....darker green....darker orange. and a bright orange....black...blue..red..but like 1 quarter of a White can(cheap one) that i have to share with my friend...
u think il do alright?
if u got any ideas tell me &#33; peace