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Ume
05-11-2006, 10:58 PM
haha your so gay ill :P

smartSOFT
05-12-2006, 12:20 AM
Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze+May 11 2006, 10:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bill Cheese of Wheeze @ May 11 2006, 10:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@May 11 2006, 09:32 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@May 8 2006, 04:44 PM
edit*¬* ^^^ fresh and simple i cant find any mistake..but the bottem one has a hotter style then the top one.and u picked nice colors...orange and blue..stand out a shit load¬* oh and the bottem one is cleaner. keep at it




pen freestyle yes......math test yes.....did i hand the test in.....no. did i get a grade...yes....

on the left side i did a freestyle...but it came out garbage so i tryed 2 cover it up with a city haha dont mind it.

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture071.jpg
no one ever said anything about my freestyle :(
dude, i friggen love your pics. Love the style, love the words. Everything. i love.

But uhh, isnt a math test more important than doodles? Idk, maybe thats just me.....I usually do the test, then doodle...turn it in and at least get somehat of a grade. and bro ALG2? That class does blow, ill give you that. [/b][/quote]
damn...do i miss factors....if u dont like that...wait til u get to trig...sin and cosine fucntions are a bitch :D

extirpate
05-12-2006, 12:30 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5231/throw0010cp.jpg

new throw whatcha think

score1
05-12-2006, 12:49 AM
be 4 you guys get on my shit i just start 3 months agohttp://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4192/05122006014314am2vf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)i know its toy but im a toy what y&#39;all got to say??

Seek139
05-12-2006, 01:02 AM
ahh...this is too toy for me to even post sketch&#39;s

epikone
05-12-2006, 01:11 AM
yo seco ,i wanna battle u , one whole page w/ throwie and karak,( oh yeah its a two letter throwie u down ??

some guy from NCI...
05-12-2006, 07:34 AM
Originally posted by aoime@May 11 2006, 11:25 PM
a FAILED attempt at the toy battle.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v305/omfgomfg/blackbook/DSC01592.jpg
PRISMAS WHY HAVE YOU FORSAKEN ME?&#33;?&#33;?&#33;?
I think i should stick to B&W for a long while..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v305/omfgomfg/blackbook/041906sketch.jpg
[repost]
Oh those poor wasted prismas...




Work on teh structure of teh letters

unknown...
05-12-2006, 08:52 AM
Ya aoime, do basic blocks...you have a cool tearaway effect thing with the forcefield, just get some block letters and start tweakin them til u find ur style, but u got good coloring and effects going, just get the letters down

unknown...
05-12-2006, 08:54 AM
and to seek up there, thers no way this si to toy...Recon has some of the sickest stuff ive seen and he posts here...dont pretend ur 2 good for this shit

[biohazard]
05-12-2006, 09:33 AM
just a real quickie i did wit a new name about a min ago http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture009.jpg ill do a better black n white one in a sec

writer45
05-12-2006, 10:12 AM
i did this for the weekly toy battle, critz??

http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/8158/image3br.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aces
05-12-2006, 10:45 AM
structure dude keep workin on it

keep the letters the same size throughout and keep it the same like one is a sharp corner keep the rest as sharp corners not one sharp and one round

unknown...
05-12-2006, 11:03 AM
EDITEDITEDIT&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

backtoyou
05-12-2006, 11:07 AM
you need to go more simple the extension on the top of the f is to high up and it draws away from the whole peice lose the bottom of the e and some of the back of the f try to make all your letters on the same level

nephsike
05-12-2006, 11:08 AM
lose the extensions

unknown...
05-12-2006, 11:09 AM
yup, i figured....i will use that shiiite from the battle i was in 2 paint this weekend

Jank
05-12-2006, 12:55 PM
ye that trik aint bad. the R-K gap is too big, and i dont like the way the botom of the R curls back under, but its not bad in gen. keep it up

First of a series ima do.... got broed by the trime i was tryin to do thesea so whipped out the colourin pencils for a one minute wonder jobby... any thoughts aside from the crappot sea?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/TOOcold.jpg

cord
05-12-2006, 01:07 PM
amaz what the fuck??&#33;&#33;

rape girls??&#33;&#33;

thats some wacked out shit, fucking gay man.

why be a faggot saying shit like that

vincevalentine
05-12-2006, 01:35 PM
my new stuff

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i24/jordannuttall/fate.jpg

thoughts?

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i24/jordannuttall/Point.jpg

Jank
05-12-2006, 01:39 PM
ur missing part of the code for the 1st onne so i cant see it. second one... i dno... the 3d should all go in one direction or all to one point. what is that big first letter? and the big bulge on the T looks a bit off.... i wuld keep em similar heights atm.. and the buubbbley things dont work.. and i dont get the start thing with the .. other things on it....

comment on mine bitch

Jank
05-12-2006, 01:40 PM
Originally posted by Jank@May 12 2006, 05:55 PM
ye that trik aint bad. the R-K gap is too big, and i dont like the way the botom of the R curls back under, but its not bad in gen. keep it up

First of a series ima do.... got broed by the trime i was tryin to do thesea so whipped out the colourin pencils for a one minute wonder jobby... any thoughts aside from the crappot sea?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/TOOcold.jpg
o no i can see the first one now. its bot good. sorry.. keep the letters more consistent. the dont have them all squiggly with the thin and thick bits. and the 3d thing i said b4.

bumping mine for a new page and cos im a selfish cunt

beefgerky
05-12-2006, 01:41 PM
dont like the snowman&#39;s hat. otherwise its dope. love your coloring.

Jank
05-12-2006, 01:43 PM
cheers mate. ye neither of the hats came out nice actually lol .thanks

unknown...
05-12-2006, 01:53 PM
ya, those letters are so ill&#33;

unknown...
05-12-2006, 01:55 PM
and the whole amaz rape girls thing....AMAZ IS A CHICK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; WTF&#33;&#33;&#33;

sky 5
05-12-2006, 01:56 PM
yo jank i like that, reminds me of chilly willy. i really like the shading where the ice goes into the sea . . .

underground_culture
05-12-2006, 02:07 PM
http://img371.imageshack.us/img371/8248/realthrowie9oj.th.jpg (http://img371.imageshack.us/my.php?image=realthrowie9oj.jpg)
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/1375/blackbooksketchreal0lp.th.jpg (http://img88.imageshack.us/my.php?image=blackbooksketchreal0lp.jpg)

ba bumpp, need some crits i know theres improvments to be made i jsut need some help

[biohazard]
05-12-2006, 03:03 PM
This hasta be the worste ive done byfar but ima post it neway becuase im tryna think of a new name so tell me which one looks or sounds better http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture010.jpg

bacK-home
05-12-2006, 03:05 PM
Underground on that bottom one i think the E needs a little work, the top part doesn&#39;t look fat enuf

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
05-12-2006, 03:05 PM
http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/9677/picture1014hc.jpg

Crits?

some guy from NCI...
05-12-2006, 03:08 PM
wtf is thaat meant to say?

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
05-12-2006, 03:16 PM
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/204/picture101t9ey.jpg

just an E. with some doodling.

[biohazard]
05-12-2006, 03:24 PM
ay back again heres a quick karak i been playin wit this weekend crits and comments (i only had black red and blue markers sorry) http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture012.jpg

some guy from NCI...
05-12-2006, 03:31 PM
lose the bullet/bullet hole/blood. Then that car&#39; would look wiickkeeddd&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[biohazard]
05-12-2006, 03:37 PM
ight thanks man ill do a notha one later

Hater-AiD~>
05-12-2006, 03:46 PM
did this at school
i edited the photo to amke it a little darker so you can see it kuz it was down with a pen and 2 highlighters
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/4603/dscf15732bi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

underground_culture
05-12-2006, 04:08 PM
llooks fresh, turn a light on then flick it so we can actaully see it in all its glory

beone
05-12-2006, 04:39 PM
hater thats note to bad right part of the t is to long and the e is bad


colors arnt great either

http://img1.yoxio.com/img/238530.jpg
im tryin to make the shit perfect feel me? shawdows suck but just ignore them i just put them in there quick

uhhh
05-12-2006, 04:41 PM
what you think of this?
http://i1.tinypic.com/zjgygl.jpg
sorry you can&#39;t see the tag, my cameras about a bazillion years old
crits comments please?

AMAZ tbscrew
05-12-2006, 04:50 PM
Originally posted by unknown...@May 12 2006, 01:55 PM
and the whole amaz rape girls thing....AMAZ IS A CHICK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; WTF&#33;&#33;&#33;
yeah uuuhh..http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/78615955_246947624_0.jpg.......................... ..no.


fuck love

rape girls.



u just had 2 be me at the time i was sketching
girls r gay sumtimes :( and i was bored

Sluts_r_us
05-12-2006, 04:57 PM
dont punch me next time we paint...

jez
05-12-2006, 05:37 PM
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c226/Jezuhlyn/mami.jpg

Sticker in black book

raping girls?? SUHWEET&#33;&#33;

BAOS
05-12-2006, 05:50 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 12 2006, 03:46 PM
did this at school
i edited the photo to amke it a little darker so you can see it kuz it was down with a pen and 2 highlighters
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/4603/dscf15732bi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ur tag is "hate"?.....at least make a "mean" peice...

>x]
05-12-2006, 05:56 PM
read the tag it says "rate"

Mr Tasty
05-12-2006, 06:10 PM
wow i never color sketchs
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a356/MrTastie/tastecolor.jpg

backtoyou
05-12-2006, 06:39 PM
i like that nice fill and 3d
whats the second letter

aces
05-12-2006, 06:40 PM
Really like it taste but i dont really like the arrow on the s because it kinda seems outa place

Mr Tasty
05-12-2006, 06:42 PM
yea totaly man..the arrow sucks...

@backtoyou...the 2nd letter is the A..and its my fav out of them all :|

aces
05-12-2006, 06:49 PM
the T is a little weird too

siche
05-12-2006, 07:41 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/4196/grafti0133gk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Heres a quick shitty throwie i did i got a better one here sum where

Hater-AiD~>
05-12-2006, 08:07 PM
resize

siche
05-12-2006, 08:25 PM
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/3910/grafti0133pr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

writer45
05-12-2006, 08:32 PM
critz??


http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8576/m18bi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Hater-AiD~>
05-12-2006, 09:08 PM
Originally posted by writer45@May 12 2006, 08:32 PM
critz??


http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/8576/m18bi.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
youre getting better..i think your E needs work though
your l is a little fatter then the other letters

hitemup101
05-12-2006, 09:19 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/dodododod.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/lakey.jpg
crits??

hitemup101
05-12-2006, 09:19 PM
sorry for it being so big

uhhh
05-12-2006, 09:36 PM
the piece... has some weird cutouts and stuff, go simpler.
the tag... needs some work, lke style.
the throwie... i actually really like that trowie, but with the quality of everything else i can&#39;t help but ask, did you bite it?

ghostbusta5
05-12-2006, 09:45 PM
and try to work on 3d

hitemup101
05-12-2006, 09:53 PM
no i did not bite i have been wroking on a lot of stuff for a long time thats all

Hater-AiD~>
05-12-2006, 09:53 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3226/dscf15802tb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz please

sabeSAHBEY
05-12-2006, 10:24 PM
^make the top right part of the r thicker a is bad e is ok

work on it but that is a good style to transform it into

Hater-AiD~>
05-12-2006, 10:35 PM
more pen sketches
this was done in Ap us history today with a blue highlighter as the forcefiled
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5895/dscf15856hl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this was done in chemistry real quick kuz that class sucks..man im glad school is out in 2 weeks
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2785/dscf15895qb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
05-13-2006, 01:21 AM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+May 12 2006, 04:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ May 12 2006, 04:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-unknown...@May 12 2006, 01:55 PM
and the whole amaz rape girls thing....AMAZ IS A CHICK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; WTF&#33;&#33;&#33;
yeah uuuhh..http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/78615955_246947624_0.jpg.......................... ..no.


fuck love

rape girls.



u just had 2 be me at the time i was sketching
girls r gay sumtimes :( and i was bored [/b][/quote]
i agree.

extirpate
05-13-2006, 02:22 AM
Originally posted by extirpate@May 12 2006, 12:30 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5231/throw0010cp.jpg

new throw whatcha think
bump becuse i got caught on the end od the page

Seek139
05-13-2006, 03:09 AM
yea...we need a novice section anyone else think soo?

btw people keep working on that structure..back the basic&#39;s...it works

Nosypainter
05-13-2006, 03:54 AM
what do you guys think?



http://xb5.xanga.com/d0ea1a465063253875816/z36110193.jpg

Voze
05-13-2006, 04:46 AM
Originally posted by extirpate+May 13 2006, 02:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (extirpate &#064; May 13 2006, 02:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-extirpate@May 12 2006, 12:30 AM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5231/throw0010cp.jpg

new throw whatcha think
bump becuse i got caught on the end od the page [/b][/quote]
hehe, caught at te end of the pag again... looks okay, i&#39;m not sure what the 3rd letter is though, the first 2 look prtty good, kinda different.

nosypainter - looks pretty dope, but i&#39;m not sure what it says. maybe that&#39;s not a good thing, i dunno.
----------------------

trying out new throw, new name etc. i wanted to write steak, but in my area theres a SEAK and theres a SOAK so hmm

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/soer.jpg

Jank
05-13-2006, 05:40 AM
nice vozse. look a little rushed, but they are niice. keep it up.. u do love ur pink throws haha&#33;
nosy, i have no idea whats going on ni there. nice colours, but thats all i personally see... maybe try to bring out the letters more... make em clearer?
for trik battle..final entry
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/trikOneFinal.jpg

*EDIT*: and seek...this IS the novice section&#33;&#33;&#33;

Voze
05-13-2006, 05:43 AM
jank, looks nice, for the orange bits, do you just avoid the grey or do you have special paint pens that can go over each other? it&#39;s a nice colour scheme, looks like you&#39;ll get into tip top again :)

and yeah, when i&#39;m drawing my throws i tend to design em first and then just draw em as quick as possible. and the pink - the paint i&#39;m getting is just white, black and various shades of pink :D

Jank
05-13-2006, 06:10 AM
haha u big girl&#33; haha.. nice shit m8

nah i just do the brown first... then pop grey around it.. avoidin the brown

Hater-AiD~>
05-13-2006, 06:11 AM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 12 2006, 10:35 PM
more pen sketches
this was done in Ap us history today with a blue highlighter as the forcefiled
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/5895/dscf15856hl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this was done in chemistry real quick kuz that class sucks..man im glad school is out in 2 weeks
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/2785/dscf15895qb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump

Jank
05-13-2006, 06:15 AM
wtf man? ur bumping us shit and not even commenting on mine, voze&#39;s and nosypainters? thats whats wrong with this fuking forum&#33;?&#33;


the first one is arite sept u cant see the second letter (A) .. itrs obscured by the R.. which i like. the T is also squashed in. i like the first and last letters tho... not so sure about the second one... not really feelin the pointy bits on it and stuff or the blak lines in it..

Voze
05-13-2006, 06:18 AM
yeah, everyone esle needs crits too rate - anyway.. it looks alright, but i honestly think you&#39;re not improving - i see your previous stuff, same kinda style and it looks better than this - keep going

Seek139
05-13-2006, 06:33 AM
i know jank...but i&#39;m kinda looking here less cause of the poor sketch&#39;s people need to sticky the if your stuff has no structure start basic...mandatory or we should get a mod to ban them it will make this toy section more effective

Hater-AiD~>
05-13-2006, 06:38 AM
Originally posted by Nosypainter@May 13 2006, 03:54 AM
what do you guys think?



http://xb5.xanga.com/d0ea1a465063253875816/z36110193.jpg
i think it looks good but i dont like the drips on it

jank yours looks good but i dont like the color sceme or the stars

voze your shit is always nice..theres nothing really to critique

Seti
05-13-2006, 08:01 AM
nosy painter that fill is mental...but i agree the drips are a bit shit, hers a sketch i did for a mate zeph,
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image032.jpg
^^^el roacho

Hater-AiD~>
05-13-2006, 08:02 AM
ill seti

Voze
05-13-2006, 08:07 AM
Originally posted by Seti@May 13 2006, 08:01 AM
nosy painter that fill is mental...but i agree the drips are a bit shit, hers a sketch i did for a mate zeph,
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image032.jpg
^^^el roacho
sick&#33; it looks a bit like you did it with watercolours - love the handstyle too

Seti
05-13-2006, 08:20 AM
cheers an yeh it was water colour pencils, the only thing i had to hand

Jank
05-13-2006, 08:23 AM
is it just me or is that on fancy paper seti? very snazzzy. nice as always.. starting to see ur letters finally which is good lol, nice shit, espesh love the colouring, keep itup

cord
05-13-2006, 08:54 AM
nosypainter- SICK i love the fill, dont like the drips though.... Thats gonna be damn hard to paint&#33;&#33;

jank- very nice, cool letters and color scheme but the stars are fucked.

voze- nice throw apart from the character is a bit sketchy and the &#39;&#39;p&#39;&#39; looks like its bitten from &#39;&#39;cap&#39;&#39;. Why would you want to bite such a toy dickhead writer?

seti- weird but cool as usual haha nice one

Voze
05-13-2006, 09:04 AM
cord - it&#39;s meant to be an r - i did the other stalk bit a bit small, should change it - and most likely i&#39;ll not use the rounded one, i just realised now it looks like cap&#39;s p...

and the chara.. :P yeah i&#39;ll work on it

Seti
05-13-2006, 09:08 AM
sez sane, jus messin bout on photoshop, u thinki it turned out gd? i mite put sm text in ther
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/SANE.jpg

SiLeNt-BoB
05-13-2006, 09:14 AM
i&#39;d mess about with a different color/colors...cant really make out the shading and that in it..

Seti
05-13-2006, 09:19 AM
gd point man i jus changed it to red n orange an it looks much betta

Jank
05-13-2006, 10:32 AM
ye seti thats nice.. tinker with it to make it clearer tho.

10 second thing for lusts page.. had nothign else to sketch.. wot u thin apart form the obvous fact taht its is stupidly unclean and rush?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/shitness4lust.jpg

Voze
05-13-2006, 11:11 AM
looks good, i like the S - don&#39;t like the connection from s to m though, but overal nice

Hater-AiD~>
05-13-2006, 11:13 AM
i dont like how the s connects to the m either but its cool

molotow_15
05-13-2006, 11:15 AM
you dont have the right to say what u dont like
if you cant do better

SiLeNt-BoB
05-13-2006, 11:32 AM
well u should shut up all together then...

molotow_15
05-13-2006, 11:35 AM
i neva sed i disliked or liked
hater is poor

Hater-AiD~>
05-13-2006, 11:39 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 13 2006, 11:35 AM
i neva sed i disliked or liked
hater is poor
dude why are you always talking shit

i will battle you again just to prove it
just me and you..you down?

SiLeNt-BoB
05-13-2006, 11:40 AM
if i remember correctly..about 2weeks to a month ago..u where a hater..so we battling again...painted..ur tag..no limit on colors..and i can do what ever u want piece,bomb,dub,throw,rollers blockbusters??..due when ??

sabeSAHBEY
05-13-2006, 11:41 AM
u can say whatever u want just because you arnt better doesnt mean you dont know what your talking bout u are one ignorant fuck

AoAssis
05-13-2006, 11:42 AM
Molotow since when does somebody not have the right to voice their opinion? This is the toy forum people are here to get better and to get adivce. The person can either choose to take the advice if they think its good or they can just simply ignore it. Aids has the right to voice his opnion, even if he isnt good. I use to give out adivxe like crazy, because people use to listen but now there butt hurt people like you here when you try and give advice they automaticaly say "the fuck you talkin about your shit is wack LETS BATTLE" like this is some pokemon card game. Fuck it, im going to take my own advice and just ignore you from now on.

Hater-AiD~>
05-13-2006, 11:43 AM
Originally posted by SiLeNt&#045;BoB@May 13 2006, 11:40 AM
if i remember correctly..about 2weeks to a month ago..u where a hater..so we battling again...painted..ur tag..no limit on colors..and i can do what ever u want piece,bomb,dub,throw,rollers blockbusters??..due when ??
i was talking to molotow

SiLeNt-BoB
05-13-2006, 11:44 AM
yes i know..but me n him where gonna battle again...we set it up this morning.. :)...i knew u where going to say that..

Voze
05-13-2006, 11:45 AM
u can say whatever u want just because you arnt better doesnt mean you dont know what your talking bout u are one ignorant fuck

usually you know more what you&#39;re talking about when you&#39;re better at it i think.

Hater-AiD~>
05-13-2006, 11:47 AM
Originally posted by Voze@May 13 2006, 11:45 AM

u can say whatever u want just because you arnt better doesnt mean you dont know what your talking bout u are one ignorant fuck

usually you know more what you&#39;re talking about when you&#39;re better at it i think.
you do but you still have the right to voice your opinion even you cant produce the same thing yourself

AoAssis
05-13-2006, 11:48 AM
To break up all this shit talking and random rambling


http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/5701/picture0184yj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

will color in a bit.

molotow_15
05-13-2006, 11:48 AM
Originally posted by Voze@May 13 2006, 11:45 AM

u can say whatever u want just because you arnt better doesnt mean you dont know what your talking bout u are one ignorant fuck

usually you know more what you&#39;re talking about when you&#39;re better at it i think.
so true

sabeSAHBEY
05-13-2006, 11:54 AM
Originally posted by Voze@May 13 2006, 11:45 AM

u can say whatever u want just because you arnt better doesnt mean you dont know what your talking bout u are one ignorant fuck

usually you know more what you&#39;re talking about when you&#39;re better at it i think.
thats not always true alot of toys (prolly not on bs) know their history and know what they have to do to make their peice/throwie w/e better and they are trying they are just improving slowly









aaosis u should make it bigger i dont really like the style tho hopefully it will look better colored

Jank
05-13-2006, 12:01 PM
aossis make the 3d black and the letters will pop out of the page nicer. its gd tho apart from thath i like it it flows well... sept i dont like the bottom right leg of the R. gd work

and molotow why not jsut leave? out of nothing u have got everyone all het up, and ruined a gd thing. just shut up, post ur stuff, post positively, or just plain leave cos ur obviously not helping anyone and no1 wants you here..... and apart from anything else, unless uve changed in the last 2 weeks, ur terrible at graff so by ur mentality shuoldnt b saying anything to anyone.... ever

SiLeNt-BoB
05-13-2006, 12:09 PM
:wub: :) jank for president :) :wub:

Jank
05-13-2006, 12:20 PM
:lol: :blink: :blink: ok... president sounds nice... well.. prime minister maybe.. wudnt wanna be going all american would i&#33;? :P

SiLeNt-BoB
05-13-2006, 12:23 PM
haha yea

gift
05-13-2006, 01:07 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/sier-block-greenpinkorangeblue.jpg


new piece i did. block letters like whoah. tell me what you think. is the fill a little too complicated?

AoAssis
05-13-2006, 01:14 PM
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/1985/picture5od.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I dont know which color to color it, Ideas?

backtoyou
05-13-2006, 01:21 PM
purple red black?

AoAssis
05-13-2006, 01:24 PM
I dont have red. Purple for the Fill and what color Forcefield? Im thnking Light green.


Originally posted by AoAssis@May 13 2006, 01:14 PM
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/1985/picture5od.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I dont know which color to color it, Ideas?

bump ******.

sky 5
05-13-2006, 01:28 PM
Originally posted by Seek139@May 13 2006, 06:33 AM
i know jank...but i&#39;m kinda looking here less cause of the poor sketch&#39;s people need to sticky the if your stuff has no structure start basic...mandatory or we should get a mod to ban them it will make this toy section more effective
[QUOTE]

i dont remember seein your stuff and i aint gonna look it up but if your good get outta here then. if your not good enough for the big boy thread, post here be happy and stfu.

AMAZ tbscrew
05-13-2006, 01:29 PM
Ao ur i looks like a t


well 2 me it does.

AoAssis
05-13-2006, 01:31 PM
i know, someone told me to take off the dot.i think it just curved it a little to much this time. ideas on fill? and forcefield?

Fosale!
05-13-2006, 01:34 PM
I think you should put a dot on top or a heart or star...but w.e do waht u wish, i cant&#39;t saw much about coloring, im not good at that

cord
05-13-2006, 01:34 PM
i like it AO, apart from the &#39;&#39;m&#39;&#39;

heres some stuff of mine....... :s

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0239.jpg

and some stuff for a battle on stencilrevolution......

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0238.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0236.jpg

tips and advice pleeeeeeeeeeeassssssssssssseeeeeee

molotow_15
05-13-2006, 02:26 PM
Originally posted by Jank@May 13 2006, 12:01 PM
aossis make the 3d black and the letters will pop out of the page nicer. its gd tho apart from thath i like it it flows well... sept i dont like the bottom right leg of the R. gd work

and molotow why not jsut leave? out of nothing u have got everyone all het up, and ruined a gd thing. just shut up, post ur stuff, post positively, or just plain leave cos ur obviously not helping anyone and no1 wants you here..... and apart from anything else, unless uve changed in the last 2 weeks, ur terrible at graff so by ur mentality shuoldnt b saying anything to anyone.... ever
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molotowbattle.jpg

why should i leave ?

Fosale!
05-13-2006, 02:33 PM
WOW you can trace Dinsney characters your sickkkkkk
You should leave bc Stok pwns you and also bc no one likes you.

molotow_15
05-13-2006, 02:34 PM
they arnt traced

N:Craze
05-13-2006, 02:40 PM
http://img3.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/53a4f19b6f.jpg

new stuf in order form oldest to newest (newest is 6) (5 is the throw)

DynamiteBoy
05-13-2006, 02:45 PM
i like your throw the best mino

molotow_15
05-13-2006, 02:50 PM
the last 2 are the best

Ironik
05-13-2006, 03:11 PM
i like nuber four the colors and the pink things going thro it but ur 3d kinda off and how do yall know molotow_15 is tracing i can look at sumthing and draw it with out tracing it.

BoRe-719-
05-13-2006, 03:14 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 13 2006, 02:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ May 13 2006, 02:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Jank@May 13 2006, 12:01 PM
aossis make the 3d black and the letters will pop out of the page nicer. its gd tho apart from thath i like it it flows well... sept i dont like the bottom right leg of the R. gd work

and molotow why not jsut leave? out of nothing u have got everyone all het up, and ruined a gd thing. just shut up, post ur stuff, post positively, or just plain leave cos ur obviously not helping anyone and no1 wants you here..... and apart from anything else, unless uve changed in the last 2 weeks, ur terrible at graff so by ur mentality shuoldnt b saying anything to anyone.... ever
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molotowbattle.jpg

why should i leave ? [/b][/quote]
stop using fukin disney karaks....make ur own, ur writing is getting alittle better though

Jank
05-13-2006, 03:55 PM
i was sayin u shud leave because u do nothin but stir up beef and get every1 grumpy which means they ignore posts with pics in them so ppl dont get their stuff critted. if u expected me to see taht and say, o wow ur good i want u stay, ur rong, because, while the chars are undoubtedly not bad (i aint gonna deny that.. they are fine.. but just copied so nothin incred) the pieces are still shit from what i can see


mino the last one is good, i like that, and the top one is pretty good too. make sure the pieces are consistent all the way through.. keep the letters the same size/style. uits its on the right track, keep going.

cord, the truck one is good sept the K where it tries to avoid the wheel. i really like the char in the first one too. gd shit

AMAZ tbscrew
05-13-2006, 05:11 PM
i dont even think hes gettin better



.....wheres the letter structure?

aces
05-13-2006, 05:13 PM
Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;+May 13 2006, 04:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BoRe-719- @ May 13 2006, 04:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 13 2006, 02:26 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Jank@May 13 2006, 12:01 PM
aossis make the 3d black and the letters will pop out of the page nicer. its gd tho apart from thath i like it it flows well... sept i dont like the bottom right leg of the R. gd work

and molotow why not jsut leave? out of nothing u have got everyone all het up, and ruined a gd thing. just shut up, post ur stuff, post positively, or just plain leave cos ur obviously not helping anyone and no1 wants you here..... and apart from anything else, unless uve changed in the last 2 weeks, ur terrible at graff so by ur mentality shuoldnt b saying anything to anyone.... ever
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molotowbattle.jpg

why should i leave ?
stop using fukin disney karaks....make ur own, ur writing is getting alittle better though [/b][/quote]
You can barely see the actual graff cause it&#39;s hidden by the disney characs

Nosypainter
05-13-2006, 05:17 PM
give me critz ^^ specially you ao cause your my boy... What do you guys think...

http://xb5.xanga.com/d0ea1a465063253875816/z36110193.jpg

cord
05-13-2006, 05:34 PM
nosy i bloody love it, the fill is dope&#33;&#33;

cant read it for shit but its cool.

only thing i dont like is the &#39;&#39;drips&#39;&#39;, perhaps slam some 3d there instead?

now stop beefin and help a poor toy out&#33;&#33;

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0239.jpg

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0238.jpg

score1
05-13-2006, 05:39 PM
i been doing this for 3 month now http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/4603/05132006062644pmjpghhh0ay.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AoAssis
05-13-2006, 05:42 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter@May 13 2006, 05:17 PM
give me critz ^^ specially you ao cause your my boy... What do you guys think...

http://xb5.xanga.com/d0ea1a465063253875816/z36110193.jpg
i thought you forgot about me B)

the color skeme is nice n&#39; all but what ever happened to going simple? you were doin good in the begning. Now your trying to pull off wild styles, if you really want to take my adivce, go back to simples.

2KoS
05-13-2006, 05:43 PM
Quit.

Jank
05-13-2006, 05:55 PM
score make sure the letters are all the same width all the way through. dont bother colouring thematm.
iv said somethin about everything else on this page cos its all been bumped....

new one.... bits of it dont work obviously.. any advice?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/antiebwcurlofNtoA.jpg

Nosypainter
05-13-2006, 05:59 PM
Originally posted by cord@May 13 2006, 05:34 PM
nosy i bloody love it, the fill is dope&#33;&#33;

cant read it for shit but its cool.

only thing i dont like is the &#39;&#39;drips&#39;&#39;, perhaps slam some 3d there instead?

now stop beefin and help a poor toy out&#33;&#33;

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0239.jpg

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0238.jpg
it doesnt say anything ts just a wildstyle, im not hatin or beefin i just wanted to know what people thought... and if you talk with n acent i love you ... lol and sure ill help you with anything you need help with not to shabby for a girl huh ^^

Jank
05-13-2006, 06:05 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter@May 13 2006, 10:59 PM

it doesnt say anything ts just a wildstyle, im not hatin or beefin i just wanted to know what people thought... and if you talk with n acent i love you ... lol and sure ill help you with anything you need help with not to shabby for a girl huh ^^
AAAHHH i seeee now.. so its just a jumble of colourful shapes? i was wandering why i couldnt find any letters. bt..er... in general.. wildstyle graffiti does HAVE letters... they are just elaborated and extended and concealed.. but they are there...... thats wots wrong with ur ... thingy

Nosypainter
05-13-2006, 06:06 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis+May 13 2006, 05:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ May 13 2006, 05:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Nosypainter@May 13 2006, 05:17 PM
give me critz ^^ specially you ao cause your my boy... What do you guys think...

http://xb5.xanga.com/d0ea1a465063253875816/z36110193.jpg
i thought you forgot about me B)

the color skeme is nice n&#39; all but what ever happened to going simple? you were doin good in the begning. Now your trying to pull off wild styles, if you really want to take my adivce, go back to simples. [/b][/quote]
oh no no no ao im still a simple girl that loves to do old school i just drew that for simph cause i sent him a package im not trying to go wild wild isnt really my style i just drew that on the back of his package... you know me i love the old school

Jank
05-13-2006, 06:14 PM
Originally posted by Jank@May 13 2006, 10:55 PM


new one.... bits of it dont work obviously.. any advice?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/antiebwcurlofNtoA.jpg
well, if every1 else is doing it.....

cord
05-13-2006, 06:20 PM
haha cheers nosy&#33;&#33;

and what about my accent :ph34r:

haha im from england so i guess so&#33;&#33;

jank i like that shit, its nice and simple, i like black and white.

only thing im not into is the heart on a stick/ spiky penis

Jank
05-13-2006, 06:25 PM
cheers hahaha hadnt seen it as a penis&#33;&#33; u just got a one track mind :lol:

Nosypainter
05-13-2006, 06:29 PM
Originally posted by cord@May 13 2006, 06:20 PM
haha cheers nosy&#33;&#33;

and what about my accent :ph34r:

haha im from england so i guess so&#33;&#33;

jank i like that shit, its nice and simple, i like black and white.

only thing im not into is the heart on a stick/ spiky penis
acents make me melt hardcore specially english ones ^^ im glad you liked my picture and if you ever need any help or ink recipes give me a pm ill help ya out...

Rend
05-13-2006, 06:41 PM
repitition tags:
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC02004.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC02009.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01988.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01987.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01986.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01984.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01983.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01982.jpg

water tank throw:
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01991.jpg

bridge throws
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC01998.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC02001.jpg

some guy from NCI...
05-13-2006, 07:00 PM
feeling those repition tags... not much of a fan of the throwies. The can control could use a bit of work (but that&#39;s a given), and the last two letters of your throw don&#39;t really fit in with the RE (and I think the s doesn&#39;t look much like a s)...

But compared to most I&#39;m really liking it... Just keep it up I guess :)

Sluts_r_us
05-13-2006, 07:21 PM
how come every1 is doin the pointy throws now?

AoAssis
05-13-2006, 07:22 PM
colored:

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1477/picture0201iq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ghostbusta5
05-13-2006, 07:23 PM
cause its the cool thing to do........

AMAZ tbscrew
05-13-2006, 07:34 PM
this is the sketch thread why the fuck is he posting that here

AoAssis
05-13-2006, 07:38 PM
cuz hes posting it in everythread so everyone can see how cool he is. And give him some e-props.

aces
05-13-2006, 07:41 PM
it is pretty sick tho

ados
05-13-2006, 07:53 PM
thats a waste of ink in that bathroom.

some guy from NCI...
05-13-2006, 07:57 PM
^yeah ados that&#39;s quite true, because it probably wont get seen much.^

And yeah everyone is doing pointy throws... I finally perfected my throw now... All I did was take out the points :P.

aces
05-13-2006, 08:32 PM
http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/7104/aces17fx.png
I like my C, E, and S but can&#39;t figure out the A

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/6753/aces25jb.png
This is an attempt at an A

Crits please. Keep in mind it was on a computer because I don&#39;t have my camera at the moment. That is why they aren&#39;t the same.

some guy from NCI...
05-13-2006, 09:12 PM
I&#39;d say remove the dot thing from the &#39;e&#39;... and as for the a... dont use that one, try and go for a &#39;curvier&#39; one that matches the C and E (try to lose the straight bit at the side)


But the CES is lookin nice.

Nosypainter
05-13-2006, 10:31 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@May 13 2006, 07:21 PM
how come every1 is doin the pointy throws now?
im straight old skool i dunno i dont like pointed throws

Tonkaha!!1!
05-13-2006, 11:09 PM
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/5752/dscn37251jm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?

>skea<
05-14-2006, 12:21 AM
dont.

xAWOKE.925
05-14-2006, 12:56 AM
make the letters less solid and blocky and resize the fucking picture.

Voze
05-14-2006, 04:20 AM
looks pretty nice mr. vowels - l like the throwie

Seti
05-14-2006, 05:31 AM
that digital remastered, sez sane..

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/SANE.jpg

beefgerky
05-14-2006, 05:35 AM
Originally posted by AoAssis@May 13 2006, 07:22 PM
colored:

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/1477/picture0201iq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
BUMP

Jank
05-14-2006, 05:56 AM
yo aoisisisis that looks a lot better coloured. still dont like the R leg, and no i notice the very bottome left of the m is too skinny, cos u can see a bit o green under the E&#39;s arm. gd though

Hater-AiD~>
05-14-2006, 06:31 AM
this is my entry into the beef battle between me and molotow..he submitted that stuff with the 2 disney characters

i kept it simple
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/120/dscf15961og.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aces
05-14-2006, 06:52 AM
^^Do you just constantly change your name or something

Jank
05-14-2006, 07:13 AM
rate, dont overlap the 3d over letters... so where the E&#39;s 3d goes ovver the T.. it shouldnt. not bad other wise really.. i dont really like the whole..fat and thin style.. but wateva, its good m8.

nu one: what needs changing?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/antiebwpinkoutline.jpg

aces
05-14-2006, 07:14 AM
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8889/aces2ra.png

How&#39;s the A on this one. I also changed the dot on the E and A.

Crits plz

aces
05-14-2006, 07:16 AM
Originally posted by Jank@May 14 2006, 08:13 AM
rate, dont overlap the 3d over letters... so where the E&#39;s 3d goes ovver the T.. it shouldnt. not bad other wise really.. i dont really like the whole..fat and thin style.. but wateva, its good m8.

nu one: what needs changing?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/antiebwpinkoutline.jpg
I don&#39;t really like the thing at the top of the E that goes off into the other letter. I also don&#39;t really like the fact that the letters are kind of see through but whatever. Other than that it&#39;s good.

aces
05-14-2006, 07:17 AM
Originally posted by aoime@May 14 2006, 05:18 AM
just some quick throw im thinking off plus a few tags....also i tried to somewhat explain my A-bomb karak, but I should give a better diagram next time.

AEIOU, mr vwls...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v305/omfgomfg/blackbook/DSC01595.jpg
Sick throwie dude and the tag at the top right is the best in my opinion.

vare_187uk
05-14-2006, 07:41 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/flesh.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
05-14-2006, 07:45 AM
Originally posted by aces@May 14 2006, 06:52 AM
^^Do you just constantly change your name or something
ive changed it 4 times but im sticking with this one

Laeos
05-14-2006, 08:00 AM
Hey, sorry for not critting others, but everyone on this page is better than me lol

Two latest:

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/1278/2laosbubbles2zg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thanks

-AbSrD
05-14-2006, 08:05 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/mothersday.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
05-14-2006, 08:57 AM
vare..i like yours but do you use a scanner? i think if you used a camera it would look a lot better

laeos..i wouldnt worry about coloring right now..just work on your letter stucture

absrd..i think yours would look better with a better marker and getting rid of all that folding curvy stuff in the piece

but heres mine
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/5752/rate28ou.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tear me apart

molotow_15
05-14-2006, 09:13 AM
the best johnny cash songs are
hurt
one
folsom prison blues
man in black
and the legendery ring of fire

-AbSrD
05-14-2006, 09:17 AM
ya i was kinda tryin something different with that one. im pretty happy with it tho turned out mostly how i was hoping it would turn out. however i wish i hadnt put in certain notches. such as the one on the E it makes it look like some kinda witch on crack or some shit i dunno i got quite the imagintion but looking back i did make a couple mistakes i just like the flow. but ya that green u did ur backround with. is fuckin severrree man.

and molotow u forgot. I BEEN EVERYWHERE MANN

molotow_15
05-14-2006, 09:19 AM
one of the greatest cowboys ever

DynamiteBoy
05-14-2006, 09:20 AM
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/1341/img00177vv.jpg
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/2527/img00189ft.jpg

just some school sketches and doodles. crits? i was jsut fuckin around with the retzone

-AbSrD
05-14-2006, 09:23 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 14 2006, 09:19 AM
one of the greatest cowboys ever
for sure man.

and dynamite im feeling ur caracs. didnt really look at the bombs 2 much. but my only suggestion is try n make ur lines more solid. i scribble alot 2 n u&#39;ll find it makes ur shit look sloppy. but ya good shit man

aces
05-14-2006, 09:42 AM
Originally posted by DynamiteBoy@May 14 2006, 10:20 AM
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/1341/img00177vv.jpg
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/2527/img00189ft.jpg

just some school sketches and doodles. crits? i was jsut fuckin around with the retzone
sick characs dude and the throwie is gettin better and better

-AbSrD
05-14-2006, 09:57 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/fishmanshank.jpg

just some flows... i call it fishman-shank.

molotow_15
05-14-2006, 10:04 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/woman.gif

crits

NO BEEF&#33;&#33;&#33;

-AbSrD
05-14-2006, 10:06 AM
it looks like u did 3d on both sides. n ur lady friend looks nice. i like the effect on the armpit. good shit.

molotow_15
05-14-2006, 10:08 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/uhh.gif

another

Hater-AiD~>
05-14-2006, 10:14 AM
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/3433/karak9ce.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AMAZ tbscrew
05-14-2006, 10:15 AM
u have no fuckin letter structure do effin simples first.

its all lines arrows and extenstions thats all.

aces
05-14-2006, 10:49 AM
Originally posted by &#045;AbSrD@May 14 2006, 10:57 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/fishmanshank.jpg

just some flows... i call it fishman-shank.
I really like the tag in the center on the left, and the throwies are sick too. I&#39;m not really feelin the charac tho but w/e

aces
05-14-2006, 10:50 AM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 14 2006, 11:14 AM
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/3433/karak9ce.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sick charac dude but I think the tag needs some work.

KANZ-KONVIKS
05-14-2006, 11:03 AM
why do i post for a bit then leave for ages and then post some new shit?


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_2547.jpg


http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b259/kanzone/IMG_2546.jpg

obseen
05-14-2006, 11:10 AM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 14 2006, 10:14 AM
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/3433/karak9ce.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like this

score1
05-14-2006, 11:51 AM
ok i tryd to make it all the same size http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/4567/05142006124322pmjpgrrr1gs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tea dee sea
05-14-2006, 12:25 PM
yoo kans im feeling your stuff keep it up

DR FORCE
05-14-2006, 12:29 PM
Originally posted by DynamiteBoy@May 14 2006, 09:20 AM
http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/1341/img00177vv.jpg
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/2527/img00189ft.jpg

just some school sketches and doodles. crits? i was jsut fuckin around with the retzone
Shit men thats cool shit
Keeep up tha good work :D

molotow_15
05-14-2006, 12:29 PM
random charik :lol:

Hater-AiD~>
05-14-2006, 12:38 PM
Originally posted by aces+May 14 2006, 10:50 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ May 14 2006, 10:50 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 14 2006, 11:14 AM
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/3433/karak9ce.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Sick charac dude but I think the tag needs some work. [/b][/quote]
yea i screwed it up kuz i did it all in pen but thanks anyway

aces
05-14-2006, 12:41 PM
its cool

aces
05-14-2006, 12:43 PM
Originally posted by aces@May 14 2006, 08:14 AM
http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/8889/aces2ra.png

How&#39;s the A on this one. I also changed the dot on the E and A.

Crits plz
Bump for crits plz.

-AbSrD
05-14-2006, 12:43 PM
Originally posted by aces+May 14 2006, 10:49 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ May 14 2006, 10:49 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#045;AbSrD@May 14 2006, 10:57 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/fishmanshank.jpg

just some flows... i call it fishman-shank.
I really like the tag in the center on the left, and the throwies are sick too. I&#39;m not really feelin the charac tho but w/e [/b][/quote]
thanks bro&#33; yea the characters stupid as fuck i was just kinda showing what i meant by sketchy lines. i can do alot better ones. especially in paint. but thanks for the props man i prreciate it.

BAOS
05-14-2006, 12:51 PM
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/7484/b2sb.png (http://imageshack.us)
i kno is wack..boredom

Hater-AiD~>
05-14-2006, 12:53 PM
Originally posted by BAOS@May 14 2006, 12:51 PM
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/7484/b2sb.png (http://imageshack.us)
i kno is wack..boredom
try that on paper and post it..youll get a better tournout
your flow with a pencil is better then that of a mouse

BAOS
05-14-2006, 01:08 PM
http://img275.imageshack.us/img275/9986/untitled6kp.png (http://imageshack.us)
quik one

whats-a-toy?
05-14-2006, 01:17 PM
why does everyone say make the letters the same size? i like making mine different sizes sometimes , its more artistic. imho. i might write a small capital a and a large CM and like maybe a sideways e. would you guys hate it and say "that sucks make all the letters the same size, and straighten that e"?

SiLeNt-BoB
05-14-2006, 01:22 PM
because it looks retarded if u make them all different sizes...

aces
05-14-2006, 01:22 PM
Originally posted by BAOS@May 14 2006, 02:08 PM
http://img275.imageshack.us/img275/9986/untitled6kp.png (http://imageshack.us)
quik one
I like it dude but do it on paper it will be better.

Hater-AiD~>
05-14-2006, 01:22 PM
Originally posted by whats&#045;a&#045;toy?@May 14 2006, 01:17 PM
why does everyone say make the letters the same size? i like making mine different sizes sometimes , its more artistic. imho. i might write a small capital a and a large CM and like maybe a sideways e. would you guys hate it and say "that sucks make all the letters the same size, and straighten that e"?
thats how its supposed to be..you cant have letters in all kinds of proportions..i feel if you do that youll never have develop a style

AMAZ tbscrew
05-14-2006, 01:23 PM
omfg grab a pencil and paper u fuckin tard

Jank
05-14-2006, 01:24 PM
no not necessarily,. like some style make diff sized lettersd work, but its for the people in here, who&#39;s stuff is fankly utterly shite and looks like it was done by a 8 yr old with a crayon. those people need to realise how to make basic letters look good before they try to go changing letter sizes. if you cant make normal letters look nice then u def cant make stylish letters that look nice...

haha baos thats pretty jokes... sketch things tho..quicker and u can do it better and more

Jank
05-14-2006, 01:25 PM
and ye... what silent bob said too

score1
05-14-2006, 01:37 PM
i can us all the crdisiom i can gethttp://img181.imageshack.us/img181/6939/05142006124322pmjpgrrr9ze.jpg (http://imageshack.us)http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/7596/05122006014314am8ke.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Jank
05-14-2006, 01:42 PM
just out of interest, how old are you?
dont bother colouring them atm.... it makes themn look worse tbh. draw the letters like on your keyboard.. seriously.. try it.. it&#39;ll look better than that^^^

so draw em like fat keyboard letters with a bit o 3d.

aces
05-14-2006, 01:52 PM
keep em straight wit no extensions and no bits

edit: also keep them the same size throughout the letter

AoAssis
05-14-2006, 01:55 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+May 14 2006, 01:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ May 14 2006, 01:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-whats&#045;a&#045;toy?@May 14 2006, 01:17 PM
why does everyone say make the letters the same size? i like making mine different sizes sometimes , its more artistic. imho. i might write a small capital a and a large CM and like maybe a sideways e. would you guys hate it and say "that sucks make all the letters the same size, and straighten that e"?
thats how its supposed to be..you cant have letters in all kinds of proportions..i feel if you do that youll never have develop a style [/b][/quote]
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/2199/picture0106ot.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

score1
05-14-2006, 01:55 PM
lol im 18...... [URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/843/05142006024852pmjpg55554pz.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
05-14-2006, 01:56 PM
your experienced though..hes just starting out and hasnt developed a style like you yet..

ne who
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/2432/karak22uw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz plz

Stewe
05-14-2006, 02:00 PM
i like it except for the drips coming off of the cloud..

Voze
05-14-2006, 02:06 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/trikonebat.jpg

for the toy battle. the letters felt off to me in the first place. meh, oh well

Stewe
05-14-2006, 02:08 PM
i like it alot you got crazy coloring skills and the simpler letters with good coloring and backround made it real nice

molotow_15
05-14-2006, 02:08 PM
i dont like it

lets see somert nex to the charik though

SiLeNt-BoB
05-14-2006, 03:24 PM
double post...more next one down...

SiLeNt-BoB
05-14-2006, 03:24 PM
thats real nice vose...and molotow..remember ur "advice".."if u cant do better dont say anything"....ssshhh*be quite*

siche
05-14-2006, 03:25 PM
http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/5453/grafti0149fx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

First Throwie any Critz?

molotow_15
05-14-2006, 03:29 PM
they are better

Hater-AiD~>
05-14-2006, 03:45 PM
here..you wanted it with writing
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/3140/karak38nn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

BAOS
05-14-2006, 03:56 PM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/5552/untitled5mw.png (http://imageshack.us)
i kno its not in a black book....but im bored rite now, crit anyone?

molotow_15
05-14-2006, 04:01 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 14 2006, 03:45 PM
here..you wanted it with writing
http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/3140/karak38nn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ha

BAOS
05-14-2006, 04:05 PM
i suggest u change the way u write ur &#39;R&#39; and probly all other letters too, practice makes close to perfect

aces
05-14-2006, 04:06 PM
Hater how do you get your pics on the computer. Do you use a camera or a scanner?

molotow_15
05-14-2006, 04:17 PM
camera

aces
05-14-2006, 04:22 PM
my pictures look like shit

SiLeNt-BoB
05-14-2006, 04:29 PM
i think he uses a scanner..camera arent that good..

Mse
05-14-2006, 04:48 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 14 2006, 04:17 PM
camera
im not a violent person but if you were in my immediate vicinity i would stab you with rusty spoons until your liver turned into a pincushion, then id piss all over your stupid body rip out your brain and sell it to a jewish man for 9.99
god damn

Rend
05-14-2006, 04:49 PM
For a Battle:
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC02020.jpg

For a Battle:
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC02022.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC02024.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC02026.jpg

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC02028.jpg

The Official throws:
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC02032.jpg

Currently all the slaps:
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/DSC02035.jpg

Plain Black and White:
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h49/fluentkrylon4/baw.jpg

Jank
05-14-2006, 04:53 PM
really nice slaps. i also like ur nephii.. but the trik aint as gd

one i did ages ago bt wasnt happy with and got bored with so never finished.....
andtie vs the panda.. dnt ask y&#33;
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/antievspandaoutline.jpg

AceONE
05-14-2006, 04:57 PM
rend, you have a really wierd up style but i like it alot you have alot of good shit

Hater-AiD~>
05-14-2006, 05:02 PM
i use both camera and scanner to take my pictures..and im not changing the way i write my r..thats my style of writing it and im going to keep it

tubedisasters
05-14-2006, 05:10 PM
not completly done

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/12345678900987.jpg

BAOS
05-14-2006, 05:13 PM
ur camera is crap, it looks like it will be good but u shud get a scanner

xAWOKE.925
05-14-2006, 05:17 PM
shiiit, there&#39;s someone on here who has that exact same style..can&#39;t remember who it is though o.O

AMAZ tbscrew
05-14-2006, 05:17 PM
scanners are shit 2 they kill all ur colors and details

N:Craze
05-14-2006, 05:20 PM
not if you have a good one

AMAZ tbscrew
05-14-2006, 05:21 PM
:mellow: do u wana die young?

BAOS
05-14-2006, 05:39 PM
:(

LOLRed
05-14-2006, 05:43 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/ForgetfulPhoto/Fatigue_v2_1_by_Sandman42.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v653/ForgetfulPhoto/Delirium_by_Sandman42.jpg

Any thoughts?

DynamiteBoy
05-14-2006, 05:50 PM
Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@May 14 2006, 05:17 PM
shiiit, there&#39;s someone on here who has that exact same style..can&#39;t remember who it is though o.O
its seti lol

Laeos
05-14-2006, 06:08 PM
Originally posted by Laeos@May 14 2006, 08:00 AM
Hey, sorry for not critting others, but everyone on this page is better than me lol

Two latest:

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/1278/2laosbubbles2zg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thanks
Sorry to bump, but was on the bottom of a page - any crits or just work on letter structure?

DynamiteBoy
05-14-2006, 06:22 PM
3D is off in some parts. work on the letter structure a bit more. make them kinda the same thickness and stuff like that. just keep at it.

MF Feed Letter
05-14-2006, 06:56 PM
lolred....you better not write "lol"...

been camping havent got any writing done in a while

simple
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1010.jpg

new throwie
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1009.jpg

pace1
05-14-2006, 06:58 PM
Karak with fill
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/CIMG0005.jpg

Throwie i need critz on
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/CIMG0001.jpg

sticker i am working on
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/CIMG0002.jpg

srry for the size i use phot bucket

AoAssis
05-14-2006, 07:00 PM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/1289/picture0288bg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

had to scrunch the K

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/7452/picture0296rp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/130/picture0301oc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/7133/picture0344rf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/6130/picture0352il.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/2204/picture0362ia.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

comments.

beone
05-14-2006, 07:07 PM
i like em the one wit the big and lil letters is sweet

karaks are cool to

MF Feed Letter
05-14-2006, 07:08 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@May 14 2006, 06:56 PM
lolred....you better not write "lol"...

been camping havent got any writing done in a while

simple
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1010.jpg

new throwie
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1009.jpg
bump... last on page

pace-not feelin the character and that throwie needs lots of work made the letters same style an poportion

ao- really dont liek the first one the letters are kinda wack
second one is nice an clean i ;liek it except fore the two undetlines those look sloppy
third one had some wobbly lines but its pretty cool
the character is okay but if those bump things by his shoulders are his pec&#39;s then they should be frther down an more in the middle
black thing i dont liek at all...is it a stencil?
last character decent except his left arm is fucked..


so ya i give crits nw someone cit mine

AoAssis
05-14-2006, 07:15 PM
The first one is kinda ment to be like a wack style thing, dont really know how to describe it, and on the karak with those numbs, those are his arms, hes like amputated i guess.

The Y is kinda mesed up. Just like straighten it out.

Heres how i would have done it:

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/7229/img10107nt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I just straightened out the Y and on those bump things make em come out more. Looks good. And the throw is nice, just aint felling the R.

Scratch
05-14-2006, 07:26 PM
wow this is akward.... i used to write "Yaer" (not Yare) like until a week ago

and i do Ya for throws too...

ummmm yea, coincidence?

nephsike
05-14-2006, 07:32 PM
ao....shits lookin alright.....gonna be nice to that that style progress...
one suggestion....on thwe one with the big/small letters....put the big letters closer to each other...so theres not so much empty space inbetween the letters....
and try to steady your hand...everything looks extremely shaky