Blackbooks

[Scratch]

wow this is akward.... i used to write "Yaer" (not Yare) like until a week ago

and i do Ya for throws too...

ummmm yea, coincidence?

[nephsike]

ao....shits lookin alright.....gonna be nice to that that style progress...
one suggestion....on thwe one with the big/small letters....put the big letters closer to each other...so theres not so much empty space inbetween the letters....
and try to steady your hand...everything looks extremely shaky

[whats-a-toy?]

im lovin the style on that yellow one yare. is it your own or you borrowed it from someone?

[unknown...]

kid up there....DONT WRITE RANE!!!! TRANE(=)RANE?????


http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/8123/p10109039dl.jpg
trying to start something new....i liked these letters so tell me what ya think
thinkin like FCA or FC1 or sumtin....sumthin new

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by nephsike@May 14 2006, 07:32 PM
ao....shits lookin alright.....gonna be nice to that that style progress...
one suggestion....on thwe one with the big/small letters....put the big letters closer to each other...so theres not so much empty space inbetween the letters....
and try to steady your hand...everything looks extremely shaky
the only thing that looks shaky to me is the first one and the karak. But my hands do shake like a mo fo when im drawing or not.

[MF Feed Letter]

Originally posted by whats-a-toy?@May 14 2006, 07:47 PM
im lovin the style on that yellow one yare. is it your own or you borrowed it from someone?
jus made it up but im sure theres stuff liek it

[beone]

unkown its pretty good but the 3d is way off

[flclnaruto1213]

the 3d is actually right on you fucking dumbass

[ados]

haha fuck your stupid the 3d doesn't fall to the same point. so yeah it is off.

[sky 5]

http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/2734/11515659kx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/704/11515577ir.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/6532/11515619sv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alot of unfinished soso stuff comin out lately but theres nothing wrong with flippin the page alil early.

to me it looks like the top 3d and the bottom 3d of the FC are at different angles but defintely keep the 3d on the left side it looks good.

[Z FUSE]

the top pic is awesome.

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by unknown...@May 14 2006, 07:57 PM
kid up there....DONT WRITE RANE!!!! TRANE(=)RANE?????


http://img173.imageshack.us/img173/8123/p10109039dl.jpg
trying to start something new....i liked these letters so tell me what ya think
thinkin like FCA or FC1 or sumtin....sumthin new
looks the same to me

[pace1]

kid up there....DONT WRITE RANE!!!! TRANE(=)RANE?????

i dont see a t or any of that style in there i mean i can battle if you want. You should have thought about using uppercase letters and getting keyboard load with me.
get better than we'll talk.

fucking punkrock beazy

to everybody else love peace and chicken grease.

[Hater-AiD~>]

http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/3319/dscf16206jv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
3 new sticks

[Nosypainter]

what do you guys think of my canvas's give me some critz

http://xd6.xanga.com/f24a05073423254280878/z36375611.jpg

http://xeb.xanga.com/ffda17353143354281368/z36376005.jpg

http://xe4.xanga.com/ad6a25345353454281979/z36376497.jpg

[beefgerky]

like the middle 1

[Ambulance]

Those are solid. I like the top ones writing I gotta learn that.

[unknown...]

wow rane, thats a lot of shit talkin for someone who def cant burn me...u might beat me, but it would b close...



check ur pms

[nephsike]

nosy..your letter structure is horrible....you gotta learn to walk before you can run.....hit the simples up

[aeon]

rend your shit has come along lightyears mate. keep it up, you coming with some decent shit.
lovin sky 5s work as well. brap!

[Jank]

hot shit sky.
unknown the 3d is a bit dodgy, make sure its consistent, but apart from taht it looks good. nice n clean, keep going

nosy, i like the second one alot, bt i aint really likin the one with the pbig piece.. mainly cos i dont like the letters. bt ye no.2 is nice.


quikjob in a lesson earlier... says jewit.. dnt ask y.. is random... wot u think? obv bits didnt work.... like the start to fill the gap and the arrow on the J.. any thoughts?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/Jewitgeography.jpg

[jerm_mtl]

whatevah

[jerm_mtl]

what did u write???

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/bb.jpg
new shit

few new busts a few tags i liked aswell might be time for a change i think

[unknown...]

those vare simples are ill man

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/s4.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/s1.jpg
otherz not sure if ive posted yet

[sky 5]

....

[sky 5]

vare, nice stuff. i really like that Brik straight letter the i is kinda hidden but you got a good eye for what colors to use and how. i guees the only advice i could give ya is try to add a new lil somethin everytime you sketch cuz youve got waht you do now down pat.

jank nice as always i like how you pop new words out every time, to be able to do A to Z all in the same exact style is skillz. came on here to give some crits and compliments cuz i never do that and everybodies got there stuff on point.

Ao, that Y has a lot of potential to be a beast (real good) keep bendin it different ways until you get it jus right

anybody wannna do an exchange this morning? pm me in the next 30 mins or so or post a lil "yupZ" here if your down.

[Jank]

another quicky.... tryin to sketch loads atm... pushing out the letters to develop em.. as usual bits have failed miserably.. like the T... i liked other bits of it too tho ... meh... crtist?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/antieoutlineyellowoneline.jpg

vare, i love that erav.. espesh the fill. i like the vertical one too, bt the first vare looks a lil unclean.. i dont like the lines around the inside of the letters... gd as usual tho.. keep it up

[Jank]

ye sky im up for a bit o that... chek yar pm!

[Zire]

Jank u got well good letter structure, why dont u colour ur pieces?

[beefgerky]

he wastes no time with coloring on paper, you should see this fool fills. they make me all :wacko:

[Jank]

cheers guys! ye i actually spend ages filling shit ... i do alot o full page mini prod things.. there one a few pages back of a penguin with a ''cold' piece just for jokes.. im tryin to sketch loads for a week or so tho so i can push the letters out, focus on really developping alot... pushing out of my normal style.. cheers!!!

[DR FORCE]

Originally posted by Jank@May 15 2006, 01:26 PM
cheers guys! ye i actually spend ages filling shit ... i do alot o full page mini prod things.. there one a few pages back of a penguin with a ''cold' piece just for jokes.. im tryin to sketch loads for a week or so tho so i can push the letters out, focus on really developping alot... pushing out of my normal style.. cheers!!!
Off Topic

chek style wars online http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-5...le+wars&pl=true (http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-5065949310221269915&q=style+wars&pl=true)

[SiLeNt-BoB]

http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/1905/pict00440pe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
tryin something new...

[aces]

Vare I love the vertical one. It's sick except that white on the ONE but w/e.

Silent bob keep your letters the same size cause yours are tilting upwards

[unknown...]

http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/7274/p10109072ej.jpg

some new ish...watcha think

[Mse]

if its your idea ( the guy holding the piece) than its a good idea
just keep drawing and be original
otherwise the piece itself is ok dont put 3d over letters
the letters are better than what half of the toys do so its good in that sense
..........................

[unknown...]

thanks....ya, its supposed 2 b a guy holding the piece....and ya i get wat ur saying, by the guy touching the piece is makes the 3d seem like it doesnt exist or w/e

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>@May 14 2006, 11:10 PM
http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/3319/dscf16206jv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
3 new sticks
big ol bump

btw unknown..its lookin better then your other stuff

is the name fecz

like effects?

[unknown...]

yes surrrr fecz like effects

[Mse]

kllah efekts check out his thread in the pics section
but i wasnt saying that the 3d doesnt exist i was saying that you should percieve the piece as a whole whilst doing 3d not each letter individually

[Voze]

Originally posted by vare_187uk@May 15 2006, 11:25 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/bb.jpg
new shit

few new busts a few tags i liked aswell might be time for a change i think

vare and brik simples - looks on par with all the simples round my area. i think that's your area too, but i dunno what part of london you're from

nice shit

[Etcha]

just done this
looks a little odd to me though..any crits before i colour?

http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/9058/imgp1139e5vf.jpg

[AceONE]

i like it execpt for the random lines by the E and under the left leg of the M

[Sluts_r_us]

new pen sketch simple.....crits
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4306/pesksimple6hk.jpg

[`~SNEK~']

Originally posted by aces+May 14 2006, 10:49 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ May 14 2006, 10:49 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#045;AbSrD@May 14 2006, 10:57 AM
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y145/internetsucks-savzone/fishmanshank.jpg

just some flows... i call it fishman-shank.
I really like the tag in the center on the left, and the throwies are sick too. I&#39;m not really feelin the charac tho but w/e [/b][/quote]
lol... that char looks like a ballchinian from MIB2 haha

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/b.jpg

[beone]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@May 14 2006, 08:45 PM
the 3d is actually right on you fucking dumbass
plug your pussy bitch the 3d is off fuck u getting so pissed bout constructive crits that wernt even towards u hard ass fucking e-thug sitting home trying to suck your own dick

[beone]

Originally posted by sky 5@May 14 2006, 09:11 PM
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/2734/11515659kx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/704/11515577ir.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/6532/11515619sv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alot of unfinished soso stuff comin out lately but theres nothing wrong with flippin the page alil early.

to me it looks like the top 3d and the bottom 3d of the FC are at different angles but defintely keep the 3d on the left side it looks good.
shit is really nice man i like ur style i am trying to improve my shit to a kind of similair style any tips

[joker00]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@May 15 2006, 04:39 PM
new pen sketch simple.....crits
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/4306/pesksimple6hk.jpg
i like it but i think the p and the e match in style but the s and k kinda loose the style its like straight but not pointy do u get what im sayin and then on the bottom part of the s it gets curvy and the same wit the k i say either fix the k & the s or the p and the e




p.s. snek ur sig is dope i saw that video i was laughin muh ass off

[[biohazard]]

here are a few a I did last nite wit a new name (kinda hard to think of a good one that aint takin) but nonetheless its practice so comments crits yadda yadda http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture009.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture016.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture013.jpg and this one ima make a lil more cartoony and put it up near my school on a big wall so this kinda practice http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture014.jpg

[AoAssis]

why the helll did you post the last one? it has nothing to do with graff, not even closley related.

[Mse]

its magic
like willy wonka&#33;

[-task-]

Well first lose the little extra bumps and stuff on the letters and the periods in between. Umm make sure u keep the sizes consistent not fat then skinny, also the N needs work maybe check out sum other peoples for inspiration, and dont put the last one up i dont think ur really ready to start juts keep it in ur book till u get a lil better but yea just keep practicing and keep it simple.

[LTD*LimiTeD]

http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/4120/dsc012864mz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[xAWOKE.925]

The letter structure is wack. Try to stay away from < shape at the end of your letters...like...dont let them just have points at the end, maybe square them off to make it look more even. Or stylize your points. Fill is alright, keep workin

[LiBRE]

http://img432.imageshack.us/img432/2328/scan3xx.png (http://imageshack.us)

[TricksForKids]

awoke, be quiet, the letter structure isnt that bad, hes better than 75 percent of the kids here, but limited, calm down on the fill man

as for the the throw libre, i like the L, and the apple ideas cool, just gotta refine it, work on the other letters a bit, especially the bottom leg of the R

Peace
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/7202/lastscan9by.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[DnK/eeK]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSCF0031.jpg

something old with a canvas to fool around with

[xAWOKE.925]

bleeeegh son

[flclnaruto1213]

Originally posted by beone+May 15 2006, 05:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beone @ May 15 2006, 05:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-flclnaruto1213@May 14 2006, 08:45 PM
the 3d is actually right on you fucking dumbass
plug your pussy bitch the 3d is off fuck u getting so pissed bout constructive crits that wernt even towards u hard ass fucking e-thug sitting home trying to suck your own dick [/b][/quote]
battle me then you fucking piece of shit.

[-task-]

not exactly bbook but any comments crits?

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/null2.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/null1.jpg

[sky 5]

Originally posted by vare_187uk@May 15 2006, 04:49 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/b.jpg
thats what im talkin about, damn this homey is well rounded. i really like the style but the E and begginin part of the R dont flow with the rest... .

yo beone, its all about praticin bending the letters every which way all day all night without trying to add stuff on.

[?..DeMo..?]

im feelin the yellow and blue one the top 3 i dont liike and the rest are pretty good keep praciticng though

[?..DeMo..?]

hey wats up guys alright i write demo im toy and jsut starting out i have a throw an dsome something else i did today and will be posting up this week 3 throwies (diffrent ones) 2 pieces(diffrent ones) 2 handstlyes(diffrent ones) and a simple like 2 of them alrihgt so ill try to psot up my 2 things today and the rest this week probably alright k

[esnet1r]

Originally posted by Jank@May 15 2006, 01:10 PM
another quicky.... tryin to sketch loads atm... pushing out the letters to develop em.. as usual bits have failed miserably.. like the T... i liked other bits of it too tho ... meh... crtist?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/antieoutlineyellowoneline.jpg

vare, i love that erav.. espesh the fill. i like the vertical one too, bt the first vare looks a lil unclean.. i dont like the lines around the inside of the letters... gd as usual tho.. keep it up
nice shit jank, i like this one the most outa the ones i seen
you got ur letters on lock, although it&#39;d be ill to see u switch it up a little
i agree with whoever mentioned you should trying filling it in, cuz if u got ur fills on lock that would be sick
Fills are a bitch though, i respect that

keep up the illness


btw TRICKS there are mad fucking kids who write regs, keep that shit in mind when u reach next cities.

[-task-]

Originally posted by ?..DeMo..?@May 15 2006, 07:29 PM
hey wats up guys alright i write demo .......
Yo demo just to let ya know there are lots of ppl who write that so just keep that in mind. In miami alone i know of 2...

[LiBRE]

Originally posted by ?..DeMo..?@May 15 2006, 07:29 PM
hey wats up guys alright i write demo im toy and jsut starting out i have a throw an dsome something else i did today and will be posting up this week 3 throwies (diffrent ones) 2 pieces(diffrent ones) 2 handstlyes(diffrent ones) and a simple like 2 of them alrihgt so ill try to psot up my 2 things today and the rest this week probably alright k
lol wow i thought this was a joke

[Stewe]

dont tell us youll post just post..haha thats priceless

[-task-]

hahah hes just giving us his posting agenda guys chill out... :rolleyes:

[?..DeMo..?]

thanks task well i live in brooklyn havent seen it at all so yea alreaght tho thanks for the heads up here are those 2 things

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/a1e0f781.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/8a274a11.jpg
alright well i jsut stasrted so dont be to harsh i know to start simple but i wanted to try this so watever and in my throwie its not that good but i need help on how ot make thses batter so help plz dont be too harsh plzz

[sok]

those are pretty good for just starting but u should add some color to the second one

[sky 5]

demo, the throw is aight, maybe try slanting the O NE instead of NW so it doesnt look like your hiding it behind the M.

alright, im gonna shut up, blaze one and start sketchin and who knows, maybe eat a p n j sandwich or somethin just as crazy, and thats my agenda.

[extirpate]

hmm this is kinda akward posting right after you... umm my advice demo is to start off with all your letter at basicaly the same size.
your throw isnt that grand, i wont lie to you, jsut start off with less distorted letters and pull your o out from under the m.
for you peice thingy... just try simpler letters and as time gos on youll find the good spots to put add ons.

donno if that helpped at all but gl xD, where you live tho? im in OR

damn thats like the 2nd demo in 2 days, i feel so popular


i know its kinda hard to see but i just wanted some crits before i filled
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/8517/demo15nn.jpg

**edit** took to long to post right after you so nvm haha

[Hater-AiD~>]

that m looks sooo bitten..i know ive seen it before^^^

critz plz
http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/8075/dscf16286ks.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[beone]

thee r is good i dont like the a at all it looks like a huge cube t would be better if the left side was just at long as the right and the e is also good but i would sugest leaving some space between the middle and the top extentions

also the 3d is good but the bottom right of the a should have a lil 3d and the bottom right of the t also on the extentions

[extirpate]

ya iv posted m&#39;s like that before*

*edit** i like your r the most. the "ate"(its rate right?) was hard for me to see. maybe outline letters with a thiker pen? donno maybe its jsut me

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by extirpate@May 15 2006, 08:35 PM
ya iv posted m&#39;s like that be for
you must be the same person then..

ok nvm

thanks for the critz be one..ill put that into consideration next time i sketch

[dibz]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/bw.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/colored.jpg
crits please

[Hater-AiD~>]

i think the dot on your i should be more boxy since thats kinda the flow of the piece

[Sluts_r_us]

http://img290.imageshack.us/img290/2829/pesksketch5bt.jpg

[unknown...]

that pesk is serial thriller style

[nephsike]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@May 15 2006, 10:14 PM
http://img290.imageshack.us/img290/2829/pesksketch5bt.jpg
pesk...you either need to put a loop on the P....or looose it on the E and K...it doesnt look right them all not having it

[Stewe]

a quickie for the toy battle..not my best
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00622.jpg

crits?comments..

EDIT:oh and the bubbles are crap i know the purple prisma bled a lot..

[DnK/eeK]

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSCF0032.jpg

[Hater-AiD~>]

i finally admitted to myself my shit was horrible..so im starting simpel again..with some help from aoassis..this is what i got
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/1882/dscf16464ud.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[HeAm:oNeR]

Pesk-Love it man.. ur style is really startin 2 come out from doin all those simples, u can try 2 do wat nephsike said about the other loop.. and yes ive been here i was heist422 jus keep it up man heard u got caught from racking cans?

Stewe- ehh nice u stayed simple but i would fix your R, and try to pull your I away it looks like its hidden a bit anyways keep it up

Dipz-nice 3d but as for the letters u made em a bit too boxy, try simple straight letters but keep sketchin

Rate-i cant really see the letters too well.. take all the stuff off from the fill and get ur letters down

extirpate- i love it.. u gonna ink and color it?

other demo- I dont rele like ur throw but the other one take all the arrows and clean it up then maybe itll look a lot better
EDIT
seems while i was typing more ppl posted
Dnk eek- not really feeling itt.. i dunno how to crit it good that ur experimentin with new stuff

and now for some of my more recent stuff.. havent done anything in a while

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e366/heist422/scanheamhandie.jpg
some handys
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e366/heist422/scandreamlevel.jpg
sticker callabo thingy wit my friend
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e366/heist422/scanheampurple.jpg
pen freestyle in class, then decided to color it with gay sharpies.. oh well
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e366/heist422/heampiecesalmon.jpg
modified version... messed the m..lol
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e366/heist422/scanheamsimpthrow.jpg
some simple with my first attempt at a throw with this name.. h didnt come out as planned
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e366/heist422/scanheampotato.jpg
some new style i thought off.. 3d is messed
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e366/heist422/scanheamspaceletter.jpg
some other new thing that came to my head
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e366/heist422/scanameoba.jpg
some random karak that i decided to multiply in photoshop and put on stickypaper
lol

ne way crits and comments&#33;
dont be too harsh, and if i missed ppl crits on this page tell me and ill try 2 help
hows that for a first post.. lol

[Stewe]

Originally posted by Stewe@May 15 2006, 09:45 PM
a quickie for the toy battle..not my best
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h257/STEWE1/DSC00622.jpg

crits?comments..

EDIT:oh and the bubbles are crap i know the purple prisma bled a lot..
bump last on page..

[HeAm:oNeR]

i gave u some crits up there.. how bout some on mine?

[Etcha]

Originally posted by Etcha@May 15 2006, 04:18 PM
just done this
looks a little odd to me though..any crits before i colour?

http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/9058/imgp1139e5vf.jpg
bumpity bump

[beefgerky]

QUIT BUMPING SHIT.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/GERKAH.jpg

trying to develope something out of this. more of this style later...

[Jank]

FUKIN HELL&#33;&#33;&#33; twice on this page people have bumped their shit and not even commented on Heam who wrote a fukin mini essay for u lot??&#33;?&#33;?&#33; jesus.......

rate, i personally wudnt let the letters get fatter at point, like the bottom of the A swells out abit. i dont think having rounded edges helps atm.. i personally would make them all more straight and consistent. and the R sticks out a bit too much leaving too big a gap, but keep workin at it.

emba: its gd sept the bits that stick out from under the letters like on the bottom of the E. also if ur doing this style, which is good and i advise it, then keep the letters srtrictly the same width throughout.. like that B has eaten a bit too much. gd though

heam, the little blobs of colour make me laugh&#33; niice&#33;&#33; ur best ones are ur striahg line ones with the rulers cos those ones look really clean and presice, whereas some of the others look v sloppy and not as proffesionalish. i would now try to develop those straight line ones... repeat them freehand a lot and it will start to mould itself out eventually. not bad though.

beef i think thats got a lot o potnential. the K&#39;s swirl looks awkward and the R has too big a gap in the bottom half of it, but its got potential m8

[sky 5]

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/9058/11515759de.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"antie", i like the letters but the fill looks like a bad case of the plague. man thats frustrating, havin nice letters then f&#39;in it on the fill. should have keep it simple, this is gonna eat at me man. well there it is Jank, i tried, look forward to seein yours. no rush i work pretty fast

[ZoToS ...]

^^ Rek?

Gerk ... with some work that&#39;ll be ill ... K mostly needs the work ... maybe make it kind of like the R?? i dunno maybe like this
http://www.5images.com/uploads/a1df68345f.jpg (http://www.5images.com)

sorry fer doin it like that but ...

[Jank]

yo sky ill have one for yalater.. got a exam (gcse..fukin hell) this afternoon so il get one up this evening. thats increeed&#33; i dntr think i can colour it atm, and def cant match up to that but ill get one later.. thats incred mannn&#33; awersome&#33;

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by sky 5@May 16 2006, 05:03 AM
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/9058/11515759de.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"antie", i like the letters but the fill looks like a bad case of the plague. man thats frustrating, havin nice letters then f&#39;in it on the fill. should have keep it simple, this is gonna eat at me man. well there it is Jank, i tried, look forward to seein yours. no rush i work pretty fast
uhh..its safe for you to go to the big boy thread

[MENG!]

http://img471.imageshack.us/img471/1954/trick1bombinscience20tn.gif

Latest piece. If I had decent markers, I would have used them, but pencils were my only bet.

Crits Please. :D

[LiBRE]

heam, ur 3d is horrible and i wasnt feelin ur throws, gotta keep at it,
meng, good thing u mite have going on if u practice wit it, cuz rite now it really looks like a jigsaw puzzle and i cant read it

[HeAm:oNeR]

thanks guys..
jank i noo.. some of them i just messed up in the beginning so i rushed em didnt come out as planned

libre yea i no like i said first time attempting a throw with that name oh and as for 3d.. the first one where is it messed?i no the brown one its completely messed and for the red and green one i dont knowthe straight letter one has no 3d but ill try to fix it, anyone have any ideas or knows of anywhere to learn forms of 3d.. im jus gonna keep messing around with it and il get it eventually but anyone know of any help?

im gonna try to make a better throw in school today as in i have 2 tests and nothing to do in between
but thanks anyway, i would do a giant crit like i did but i got school in 5 min
but wen i scrolled through the page i was really feelin gerks and sky 5 holy shit
other then that i just wasnt paying attention
peace

[Pams.oner]

gerk off i want to see that on a freight

[Recon]

quick shit for cesar1

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/7344/cesar4kc.jpg

[Pams.oner]

nice shit recon

[cord]

sky that shit is hot, and recon thats pretty damn nice too, just not feeling the green circles...

[Etcha]

Originally posted by Jank@May 16 2006, 04:09 AM

emba: its gd sept the bits that stick out from under the letters like on the bottom of the E. also if ur doing this style, which is good and i advise it, then keep the letters srtrictly the same width throughout.. like that B has eaten a bit too much. gd though


Cheers for the tips
ill try and sort out the B

and the random bits comming off... wanted to make it look not so plain.

[BBoy_ErbN]

One a did for a friend
http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/8761/lisa17cf.jpg
Too slack to colour in with texters so I did it with paint. *she asked for green, orange and brown as colours*
http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/1153/lisa21wy.jpg

i noticed after i missed the 3d at the top of the L, meh.

[molotow_15]

needs structure
some 3.d missin

best ive seen from you though
keep at it

[Flash]

<adhjdghj

[Pams.oner]

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2343/picture116lt.th.jpg (http://img149.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture116lt.jpg)

crits good bad

[Voze]

looks nice, i&#39;d try keeping the letters the same size, may look better, i know you were doing that on purpose though

[Pams.oner]

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/3704/picture120ge.th.jpg (http://img45.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture120ge.jpg)

i like this one its more simple but like it looks better like how its going up i like it o well

[Pams.oner]

and there was the 3rd

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/9569/picture136he.th.jpg (http://img230.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture136he.jpg)

more bubaly ahahaha arggg im so bored

[cord]

hmmmmm

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0243.jpg

[BBoy_ErbN]

Originally posted by cord@May 16 2006, 11:47 AM
hmmmmm

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0243.jpg
i like it,

but the bottom looks a little too messy for my tastes..

what did you use for it?

[cord]

markers and paint.

oh and a liquid chalk pen for the blue

[Pams.oner]

nice stuff cord

[Voze]

yeah, nice canvas cord

---

new stuff - not that great, just mostly rough biro stuff etc.
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook7.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook8.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook9.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook10.jpg
last one&#39;s a throw I was trying, different to my usual normal bubble letter one.. was doingit really quick once i got the design down

[obseen]

i dont know why you post in toys

[Jank]

that blue vose is niiiiiiiiice&#33;&#33;so clean&#33; the soers on taht page are the best uns too. that stone ocld killer quicky is nice too.. chars look familiar.... sorta like Panik&#39;s stuff (ur from london..u no who i meann&#33;&#33;&#33;).. not in a biting way... just saying... nice shit man. not liking the last page AS much but its all really gd ur movin fast keep goin&#33;

[Jank]

Originally posted by sky 5@May 16 2006, 10:03 AM
http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/9058/11515759de.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

"antie", i like the letters but the fill looks like a bad case of the plague. man thats frustrating, havin nice letters then f&#39;in it on the fill. should have keep it simple, this is gonna eat at me man. well there it is Jank, i tried, look forward to seein yours. no rush i work pretty fast
hey man... i&#39;m a true spak&#33; i thought u wrote ryke... i got u confused with that crazy ass on ethat does the siko canvases hahaha... and the silly thing is I hate Y... well here it is ... soorry bout that and the horrible extension i gave to the K... live with it&#33; urs had all those crazy colours... so i thort id point out that only girls like colours.... obv no math here but cheers m8, urs was crazy good&#33;&#33;&#33;

above, antie by rEKS , RYKE?&#33;?&#33;?&#33; by Antie below:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/colouris4girls.jpg

[Jank]

anyone else want a quick exchange.. il try to get ur name right&#33;?&#33;?&#33; ill pop out a pen freestyle for ne1 doooodle style while i watch ice age 2??? a nice sloppy sketch? any1 want some?
triple posts r koool

[Voze]

i&#39;m up for one jank - be nice if you wrote soar

you want antie right?

[cord]

hey thanks a lot guys for the comments&#33;&#33;&#33;

and im up for trading sketches with people if anyone&#39;s interested.

voze that stuff is fresh man, the colors are proper nice

[Jank]

ye ill doodle up a soarfor ya.. only sumit slopp n fast tho.. ill have it later,

[Jank]

hang on soer or soar?

[?..DeMo..?]

vose thos shits are fire

[beefgerky]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap005.jpg

new style im trying, even worth coloring?

edit: VOSE&#33; paint that shit meng. you got simplocoty working for u no doubt and im loving the throws.

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by beefgerky@May 16 2006, 02:48 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap005.jpg

new style im trying, even worth coloring?
yh it is
its got potential
a nice color scheme on it..

[tea dee sea]

yoo gerk i like it not really feeling the k tho

[-task-]

im feelin it, just make sure u put in the 3d, its missing in sum places.

[molotow_15]

mm its more of a gerb
jus needs a little flick off to make it mor into a k

[beefgerky]

i didnt put 3d lines because its not nessicary, its all gunna one color going down to those bottom lines so yea.

[molotow_15]

it wud be looking nice in color
how long will it take you do it ?

[-task-]

aight i feel u, but yea man just makin sure, should be real nice. origional shit

[Jank]

gerk thats reallly nice. really nice keep it up man..&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[beefgerky]

ill color it later, i gotta do some school shit. :(.

[tubedisasters]

i think this one is better than the last one i posted

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/daet001.jpg

[tea dee sea]

tubedisasters not bad keep it up

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by tubedisasters@May 16 2006, 03:03 PM
i think this one is better than the last one i posted

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v415/tubedisasters/daet001.jpg
nothing against you i dont like the style at all,
seti pulls it off sweet though,
i cant reali crit this one, i&#39;ll leave it for someone else
clearer pics and some better markers wud be a start
no beef man

[tubedisasters]

I have prismas so its probably not the markers, i just cant get the shading down just right.

and i cant take pictures to save my life.

[molotow_15]

i wis i had some decent markers..

[beefgerky]

steal them you pussy. :lol:

[Zire]

Although i hate most pieces in 3d, tht is really cool, it looks like its hovering above the page.

Peace

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by beefgerky@May 16 2006, 03:23 PM
steal them you pussy. :lol:
i would and id buy them

if i could they dont sell around here

[SEROKID]

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/4782/serrrrrrrrrroe1da.jpg

[SiLeNt-BoB]

thats hot..nice euro style&#33;

[MENG!]

Originally posted by MENG&#33;@May 16 2006, 06:08 AM
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/8060/bombinscinecetrick222hn.gif

Latest piece. If I had decent markers, I would have used them, but pencils were my only bet.

Crits Please. :D
Bump-ity for Crits/Comments.

:ph34r:

[molotow_15]

horrible
not beefin the truth
safe

[SiLeNt-BoB]

go simple...

molotow15..its better than yours...

[molotow_15]

psssh

[Voze]

Originally posted by Jank@May 16 2006, 01:06 PM
ye ill doodle up a soarfor ya.. only sumit slopp n fast tho.. ill have it later,
Soer ;)

[Etcha]

Serokid...you got a nice style going there i think :D

coloured the sketch from earlier.. crits?

http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/2042/dsc04024e5mc.jpg

[unknown...]

my piece with color.....the white things are shines from my kitchen lites
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/1769/p10109098bp.jpg

[Voze]

did this quickly for pams, kinda bored of homework

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/exchange1.jpg

[unknown...]

nice soer throw, the mesc i dont like the M.....

got anything for me?

[Voze]

nvm

[Voze]

oh, yeah, crits sorry - the letters are solid, i don&#39;t like how the 3d overlaps though, draw all your letters and then draw the 3d, it&#39;ll look better.

hanstyle needs work, character pretty well drawn

[Jank]

haha the face in the O makes me laugh. nice throws voze.. i no nought about em so cant crit, but look nice to me.

fecz i think the blu outline is a bit too fat, and doesnt look good. the blak and white bits in the 3d arent always completely consistent and it really shows up.. i no iv done that alot b4 too.. maybe have fewer changes in the bb&w.. and have it mostly black with just a few white bits. bottom of the Z is too fat. upwards extension on top right of F doesnt work. Apart from that its on the right track m8 keep going, gd job

emba the bit on top o the E dont work bu tthe rest is sound, keep it up


for lust... bored as fuk..... as always fukd a few bits
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/luster.jpg


vose ill do a biro doodle for ya now or tomoro

[Voze]

yeah same same - nice sketch, doesn&#39;t look like you fucked up, maybe yo cover up well ;)

[Jank]

lol cheers...ye well i did whip out a bit o the CGI special effects on the top o the S where i seriously bummed it (MSPaint)..... bt.. i dno.. im tryin lots o extensions n stuff atm.. seein wot work n wot doesnt...

[shifty!]

http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/8355/throwies9fw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits please, on both...

[DABcrew]

put some drop shadow on them..or some 3-d to it. both are straight as far as buble style and for throw ups they could be fresh..try adding some color to them too..and maybe a charac. to either of them.

[wreckone.]

Who agrees that Motolow talks way too much for his own good? Because I just so happen to.
Anyways, a freestyle form yesterday...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v468/wreakone/100_8152.jpg

[DABcrew]

I believe molotow talks hella shit, and needs his hands cut off so he can&#39;t do no biting anymore..or typing..

[Jank]

i agree

niice wreck&#33;@ maybe use a darker colour for the outline ?? really gd thoug m8 keep it up, no crits from me.

here ya go voze, one minute wonder biro jobby
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/soerexchange.jpg

[DnK/eeK]

Originally posted by DnK/eeK@May 15 2006, 09:56 PM
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a158/steven_otterpop/DSCF0032.jpg
bump for critz on the style

[sky 5]

http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/4378/11515777pv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[unknown...]

im with those kids on the molotow stuff....

[aces]

Originally posted by Voze@May 16 2006, 05:19 PM
did this quickly for pams, kinda bored of homework

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/exchange1.jpg
I really like it but not really feelin the S but w/e

[TricksForKids]

my boy kay ten, holdin down some quick sloppy shit, peace



http://img452.imageshack.us/img452/7807/kaytenword2cb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[?..DeMo..?]

Originally posted by ?..DeMo..?@May 15 2006, 08:06 PM
thanks task well i live in brooklyn havent seen it at all so yea alreaght tho thanks for the heads up here are those 2 things

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/a1e0f781.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/8a274a11.jpg
alright well i jsut stasrted so dont be to harsh i know to start simple but i wanted to try this so watever and in my throwie its not that good but i need help on how ot make thses batter so help plz dont be too harsh plzz
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/a1e0f781.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/8a274a11.jpg

bump for critz

[-AbSrD]

ur bomb looks like a poke&#39;ball

[Kry_20CC]

^hahah yea

[DABcrew]

well first off..don&#39;t think " man I want this to be sick&#33;"..sickness comes after you put in work and make shitty drawings..you gotta develope your style a little more....first off start out with your outline, all the arrows and crazy shit should come last..try making a bubble letter throw up of your word first. practice some drop shadow or 3-d. Your drop shadow and 3-d perspective need alot of work..that&#39;s just what i think though..p&#39;z

[MF Feed Letter]

my mini blackbook..usually done at school rough no color with a few exceptions

goes from oldest to newest
1http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1012.jpg
2http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1013.jpg
3http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1014.jpg
4http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1015.jpg
5http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1016.jpg
6http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1017.jpg
7http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1018.jpg
8http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1019.jpg
9http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1020.jpg
10http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1022.jpg
11http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1024.jpg
12http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1025.jpg

[beefgerky]

pretty nice but i liked your intwo shit better...

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap006.jpg
colored while watching piece by piece, so its mad sloppy :wacko:

[extirpate]

thats a nice style not feeling the k tho.

did you buy pice by pice or d/l it? if you d/led it hook me up with a link pls :)

[DABcrew]

how do i put my sketches in these message boxes?

[aces]

...

[DABcrew]

for real..man why didn&#39;t I think of that..?

[DABcrew]

no but for real..i got sketches I wanna upload, and I dont know how to put them in my message boxes?

[AoAssis]

Dab go to this http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...wtopic=134&st=0 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=134&st=0)

[AMAZ tbscrew]

uhh go 2 photobucket.com

click browse...click pic u want...then upload it

umm then click the url of the pic. copy it

come here click add reply

click img on top

paste url

and there u go...now get on ur knees nukka

[DABcrew]

AAWWW SKEET SKEET SKEET SKEET&#33;

[DABcrew]

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j86/phresh1_2006/hipiece1.jpg

aight aight..so now..THE SHOW YOU&#39;VE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR...---------&#62;I need any input on what you think about this...I&#39;m not feeling the arrow coming off the top, and i really wanna do something about the cap..as far as style and skill level, I come from a small town, so I consider my self a little above toy.

[AoAssis]

The show we have all been waiting for? I think not. Had i wish i had not seen the show, yes.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

can i get my money back?

[DABcrew]

OK, OK...so it isn&#39;t fire..but still I mean c&#39;mon and give me an idea on what ya&#39;ll think about it..

[nephsike]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@May 16 2006, 08:59 PM
uhh go 2 photobucket.com

click browse...click pic u want...then upload it

umm then click the url of the pic. copy it

come here click add reply

click img on top

paste url

and there u go...now get on ur knees nukka
or you could copy and paste the IMG from photobucket ;)

[DABcrew]

I&#39;ve never known how to use the forums until now..so I&#39;m gonna submit this drawin too..again, any ideas, opinions..just don&#39;t bite it, or hate on it..http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j86/phresh1_2006/hi2.jpg

[DABcrew]

yah..now I know i had that rotated 180 degreez...so forgive me for the malfunction..but that photo is upside down..

[graffitispot.com]

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9601/10006561xh.jpg

[graffitispot.com]

http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/315/10005888px.jpg

[graffitispot.com]

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/7061/10006631fd.jpg

[unknown...]

graffit spot, dont postwhore...post more than 1 pic per post

[-task-]

really quick one,sorry for such a shitty pic it looks alot crisper and cleaner in person.
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/nul3.jpg

[--SORE--]

Here i&#39;m totally new to the forum so i would like to get some crits on that graff:

(any critz are appreciated):

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/3796/sore16dt.th.png (http://img106.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sore16dt.png)

thx.

[Stonk]

sore yeah thats pretty nice.

trying another new name, sen.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/senthrow2.gif

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v377/Canonfilmer/senthrow1.gif

criticism please, and be as harsh as you want (it helps in the long run haha)

[--SORE--]

I think you should try a different pen it would give a better idea of your letters..i bet ur using some bic pen or whatever crappy thing.


http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/3796/sore16dt.th.png (http://img106.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sore16dt.png)

Here mine again for some crits

[DABcrew]

who is down to battle hi? lookin for a toy&#33;

[--SORE--]

i certainly would if i could get crits from good people just to know if i&#39;m doing good or need to improve some things.

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/3796/sore16dt.th.png (http://img106.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sore16dt.png)

[extirpate]

sore #1 dont repost your pic 3 times on the same fuking page its annoying and needless. #2 its not bad try making the extending part of the R a thick as the rest of it.

[DABcrew]

lol extirpate..that&#39;s crazy.. ok ok.. so SORE..u down to battle right now?

[log_in]

jus somthing random

http://img118.imageshack.us/img118/6908/cesargorebite7dc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by &#045;&#045;SORE&#045;&#045;@May 16 2006, 09:49 PM
I think you should try a different pen it would give a better idea of your letters..i bet ur using some bic pen or whatever crappy thing.


http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/3796/sore16dt.th.png (http://img106.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sore16dt.png)

Here mine again for some crits
doesnt matter what pen he uses, he still sucks, its 90% skill 10% supplies.

[Z FUSE]

dude that page up ther was like a swirm of terrible throws . no beef it was just shocking. people please like the guy said up ther^extirpate- don&#39;t post ur pics twice or more on the same page. one is enough&#33; and don&#39;t post ur every single sketch cuz not all of em are are worth seeing.

[melo]

i post about 1 out of every 20 sketches i do.. heres the weekly winner

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/e862a8e7.jpg

comment it suckas.

[aoime]

lovin the E, hating the I.

Loose the arrow going throw the A, it looses the uniformity of the piece being so compact looking...too much space.

[Kiks]

Originally posted by melo@May 17 2006, 12:48 AM
i post about 1 out of every 20 sketches i do.. heres the weekly winner

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/e862a8e7.jpg

comment it suckas.
wow thats nice

[TricksForKids]

nice shit melo, think it says mesia? i just dont like the I and A that much, everything else is fresh, throw some colour on that badboy

Peace


Originally posted by TricksForKids+May 15 2006, 10:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids &#064; May 15 2006, 10:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@May 15 2006, 06:19 PM
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/7202/lastscan9by.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

not a bad tag, lose the stars though

Peace
i like how i never, ever get comments [/b][/quote]
bumb for some feedback, im feelin it gerk, still got a ways to go, but nice potential, the regs is mine, of course, and my boy kay ten holdin down the next sketch, how bout some CRITS

Peace

my boy kay ten, holdin down some quick sloppy shit, peace



http://img452.imageshack.us/img452/7807/kaytenword2cb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[near]

melo thats pretty nice but i thought it said "Aesn" not "Mesia" your letters are a little weak (mainly the m...and the e) the "SIA" actually isnt so bad now that i know what it says...but you certainly know how to make it &#39;look&#39; like a piece (like with all the stuff &#39;happening&#39; around the letters) if that makes sense...hope critz helpd a bit peace

feelin that kay bomb/burner w/e it is (but not really the tags) regs you hit up near runnymede/jane station area in toronto, every time i go pickup i see this one &#39;regs&#39; tag on a mailbox lol looks like yer steez

[klipa]

TricksForKids, feeling the e on that one big time but the s is a bit fuity,


also anyone noticed the 3d at the top right of the &#39;R&#39; is a opticle illusion as it could be going both ways if that makes any sense

[BBoy_ErbN]

Originally posted by melo@May 17 2006, 12:48 AM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/loller90278/e862a8e7.jpg


Im really feeling that,
even up the letters a bit though.

U is whack, messed up in a couple of places and the m is too big, but yeah, what do you all think of this? I&#39;m trying to develop this style >_<
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/da09ab27f1.jpg (http://graffitispot.com/upload)

[unknown...]

heres a piece with a couple new things for me....a new take on 3d and a new backgroundish thing.....new character as well....WATCHA THINK
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/7726/p10109135wd.jpg
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/7963/p10109166ye.jpg
http://img483.imageshack.us/img483/392/p10109175hl.jpg

[jerm_mtl]

did u do that on photoshop???

[jerm_mtl]

i mean muse, not fec

[unknown...]

photoshop? no....


o u meant that kid....my bad

[jerm_mtl]

fec im feelinh the dude, its cool just add more details in the body

[jerm_mtl]

no, i was asking muse if he did it on photoshop

[unknown...]

thanks, i like this style to....im learning 2 do a lot more with these letters....im gonna go try ta paint some of this ish friday...well c wat happens

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/erav2.jpg
new stuff tryed to level it all out man as the AV was lighter and flimsyer than the ER before

bit more weight in it this time


critzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz"&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[unknown...]

a lil more weight and id like it....its still a lil too skinny

[vare_187uk]

any pointers as too where exaclty?

[unknown...]

ya...the e is all good, leave that the way it is
the R needs more weight on the left leg..since its shorter make it purty thick to even it out.

take out those extensions that go over the R, they dont flow real well...and if that last letters a D, figure out how to fix that ish cuz its def not as good as the rest of the piece....

[unknown...]

the more i look at it tho i like the E alot

[vare_187uk]

cool its a V the last letter it swings over itself though&#33;

ill do one with no extentions just bare structure see whatu think &#33;

[BBoy_ErbN]

I sketched it with a sharpie

then scanned and coloured with with that paint bucket tool...

my markers are dead, so im using that til i get some new ones,

meh lol.

[BBoy_ErbN]

Originally posted by vare_187uk@May 17 2006, 11:50 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/erav2.jpg
new stuff tryed to level it all out man as the AV was lighter and flimsyer than the ER before

bit more weight in it this time


critzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz"&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
yeah I agree with what unknown was saying

but you are definately getting there man....

soon you will be posting in the big boy section ;)

[Sbu]

comments please

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i73/sclavi/Slika002.jpg
in progres

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i73/sclavi/Slika02.jpg

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i73/sclavi/Slika01.jpg

[BBoy_ErbN]

Originally posted by unknown...@May 17 2006, 11:16 AM
thanks, i like this style to....im learning 2 do a lot more with these letters....im gonna go try ta paint some of this ish friday...well c wat happens
make sure to take some flix for us.


Sbu Posted on May 17 2006, 12:19 PM
comments please

narabha? <-- get some letter structure

looks a bit busy and a bit plain at the same time to me, try adding a bit of 3d or shadow to enhance it, take out a few of those addons, especially the on the side of the a.

but looks like it has potential

[vare_187uk]

Originally posted by Sbu@May 17 2006, 12:19 PM
comments please

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i73/sclavi/Slika002.jpg

in progres
extention after extention man

get rid of at least half of them


if not all for a start

its not about extentions strat away its about getting the basic letter and styling that

then learning how to grab n place exentions

[vare_187uk]

a quicky with not extentions just bare letters with a few modifications and thicknesses



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/erav3.jpg

[BBoy_ErbN]

im not feeling that r (the curl looks too big and the extra little point at the top) or the top of the a.

v seems too low and possibly the e is too big?

the curl at the bottom of the a seems too solid and fat,

likeeverything else in the piece changes except that?

**not dissing your piece, it still looks nice, just advice?**

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/erav3b.jpg
remikz again no 3d this time and a shorter extention on the E

[BBoy_ErbN]

liking it man

but the the gap between the a and the top of the v

could you raise the v a bit but just have it drop done, if you know what I mean?

[vare_187uk]

im not sure what u asking here about the V

heres another
from last night for a battle over on 12oz
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/dahmer.jpg

[BBoy_ErbN]

http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/25320015b7.jpg (http://graffitispot.com/upload)

the letters dont line up... and see how much lower the v is?

i will try to show you what i mean.
haha so didnt work...

but to get the flow of the letters better,

or I could have no clue what im talking about :ph34r:
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/be726fcf72.jpg (http://graffitispot.com/upload)

[unknown...]

i like the simple man....i dont like the left half of the V, but other than that it is purty ill man...keep it up with that style and in a day or 2 itll b sick

[Jank]

that damer is nice except i dont like the way it seems to get bigger as it goes along


preliminary entry for dr sex
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/DrSex1.jpg

[BBoy_ErbN]

^that is looking tighter than a catholic schoolgirl.

I dig that karak, looking forward to the finished product.

[FuKe]

Hello people&#33; I&#39;m back again :P

I think i got a bit better since last time i posted something.. :)

This time, i tryed with some 3D.. But it&#39;s the first time, and i really have to pracitice a lot to get some tight 3D.. :)

But here it is
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/262/elsegraff39xm.jpg

[beefgerky]

man these last few pages(besides jank)....:(

edit: mass bump


http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap006.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v468/wreakone/100_8152.jpg
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/4378/11515777pv.jpg
http://img452.imageshack.us/img452/7807/kaytenword2cb.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook7.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook8.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook9.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook10.jpg

[vare_187uk]

think i get it but ill try this computerised one any way

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/erav3c.jpg

i really gotta start drawing straight lines to keep my pieces from going small to big really i think jank &#33;

[BBoy_ErbN]

Originally posted by BBoy_ErbN@May 17 2006, 09:41 AM

U is whack, messed up in a couple of places and the m is too big, but yeah, what do you all think of this? I&#39;m trying to develop this style >_<
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/da09ab27f1.jpg (http://graffitispot.com/upload)
I really hate &#39;bumping&#39; my shit...

but im really keen for some solid feedback on this,

I dont want to pursue this style more if it is just whack, youknow?

edit:I sketched it with a sharpie, but markers are dead so I coloured with the paint bucket tool thing.

[BBoy_ErbN]

Originally posted by vare_187uk@May 17 2006, 01:18 PM
think i get it but ill try this computerised one any way

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/erav3c.jpg

i really gotta start drawing straight lines to keep my pieces from going small to big really i think jank &#33;
yeah man, getting there eh. :D

[vare_187uk]

im really keen on getting this right man

think im gonna leave it for now though and do a few simples again in a different style to my usuals

oh and bb

theres not structure i can see there in that
3d isnt bad but i dont see real letters like&#33;

[beefgerky]

why would u bump some computerized piece of shit that you did...then double post and quote the post above your last one. do you kids have brains? its called the fucking edit button, learn how to use it. i fucking loath this part of the forum.

EDIT: and vare, that sucks, go back to simples and grab yourself some letter structure.

[vare_187uk]

was there any need to be so harsh like that &#33;

[unknown...]

beef ur being harsh bro...theres a couple good pieces throughout the last couple pages man.....

[BBoy_ErbN]

Originally posted by beefgerky@May 17 2006, 01:26 PM
why would u bump some computerized piece of shit that you did...then double post and quote the post above your last one. do you kids have brains? its called the fucking edit button, learn how to use it. i fucking loath this part of the forum.

EDIT: and vare, that sucks, go back to simples and grab yourself some letter structure.
because he posted that while I was doing mine, then I had to quote him?

I&#39;m sorry its so offensive princess...
maybe its that time of month?

By the way, no one forces you to come here, so maybe, fuck off?

Oh yeah, since you really are a dumb fuck, since you cant read. I drew that with a sharpie, scanned it and used paint to colour it in since my markers are dead, a friend asked so thats why I coloured it like that, instead of leaving it just the sharpie and as for me being an unintelligent kid, I&#39;m a 19 year old uni student.

Go figure.

Edit: With me asking for crits, I dont give two fucks about the colour, I was wondering about the style because I am trying something new and was wondering whether it was worth building on.