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obseen
05-19-2006, 01:05 PM
i like the sort of style your trying to do, but im not feelin it

Jank
05-19-2006, 01:21 PM
i woudl avoid the wavynesss of the letters.. i think that makes it look bad/... cos it goes too skinny and stuff in places and too fat in otheres. also the little sticky out bits at the tops and bottoms of every letter dnt look great... but it jsut needs a bit o work m8 it aint bad


2 booooored in skl pen doodles... just kept screibbling on it in the first one... all pen...:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doooodlealapaul.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doodlepen.jpg

Kry_20CC
05-19-2006, 01:22 PM
im feelin the first one jank

obseen
05-19-2006, 01:24 PM
those are dope jank, are you antie of 12oz?

Jank
05-19-2006, 01:26 PM
yarrr...well my name is jank on all these forums... and i write antie on em all tooo.... so ye prolly lol

thx!

sky 5
05-19-2006, 01:32 PM
jank, nice as always. there aint a letter you cant do. the only crit i could give is that sometimes you kinda hide or compact letters that dont look right going north south. like the E on the top one, i think it would look better with a lil east west at the bottom so its not so up and down. if that makes sense.

Jank
05-19-2006, 01:39 PM
cheers m8 but... ..er... eh??? do u mean make em too skinny when they should be a bit thicker..wider.?

cord
05-19-2006, 02:11 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky+May 19 2006, 10:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beefgerky @ May 19 2006, 10:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Seti@May 19 2006, 04:14 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-beefgerky@May 19 2006, 12:18 AM
new crew name throw

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap008.jpg
wats it stand for?
what a waste, without a warning, WANKING AT WENDY&#39;s. ;) :lol: [/b][/quote]
there are already man W.A.W crews around, one of which is in either sweden or norway and they burn that

ados
05-19-2006, 03:06 PM
bored, tryin some shit out.... crits would be kool.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/pncilwackness.jpg

?..DeMo..?
05-19-2006, 03:11 PM
i like it . it looks nice the throw looks good and the 2 things on the obttom look good thre freehand looks good too

beefgerky
05-19-2006, 03:38 PM
Originally posted by cord+May 19 2006, 01:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cord &#064; May 19 2006, 01:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by beefgerky@May 19 2006, 10:04 AM

Originally posted by Seti@May 19 2006, 04:14 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-beefgerky@May 19 2006, 12:18 AM
new crew name throw

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap008.jpg
wats it stand for?
what a waste, without a warning, WANKING AT WENDY&#39;s. ;) :lol:
there are already man W.A.W crews around, one of which is in either sweden or norway and they burn that [/b][/quote]
were in california.

so we dont give a fuck. ;)

edit: i rarely make slaps, and then i do there just like this;
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap009.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap012.jpg
on a big WAW slap poster (below)
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap013.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap010.jpg
^should get flicks of that painted soon, i forgot my cam last time.

Jank
05-19-2006, 04:31 PM
i really like that orange waw, and the poster is nice too.

ados loving that throw top right. really nice. overall gd shit


my final entry for battle.... colours raped it like a bitch... red was runnin out.. all went to shit... any thoughts?

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/drsex2.jpg

aces
05-19-2006, 04:39 PM
love it dude the only thing i don&#39;t liek is the pointy thing at the top of the X but w/e

Amuk
05-19-2006, 04:41 PM
dis cuda been ten times better, colors fucked it

vare_187uk
05-19-2006, 05:28 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/drsex.jpg dr sex YO&#33;

AMAZ tbscrew
05-19-2006, 05:34 PM
Originally posted by smer@May 19 2006, 06:22 AM
ah it looks like it a bit il start agen
dont start again...keep doing the same style im tierd of runci this runci that he&#39;s not the only one that does it...mayb on this forum yes...but iv seen other people do it...so get over it


oh and 2 those who have herd im quiting....im not get over it :)

MF Feed Letter
05-19-2006, 06:08 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1027.jpg throw.

HeAm:oNeR
05-19-2006, 06:23 PM
ight thanks 2 all who crited.. i know my 3d is horrible any tips on how 2 make it better? if not ill jus keep playin around with it.. i designed a new throw.. but iono if i shud post it up, ive been playin around with it for like a half hour i tryed somethin unique i didnt want 2 make it look rele generic like my last one but oh well peace

esnet1r
05-19-2006, 06:37 PM
Originally posted by Jank@May 19 2006, 12:21 PM
i woudl avoid the wavynesss of the letters.. i think that makes it look bad/... cos it goes too skinny and stuff in places and too fat in otheres. also the little sticky out bits at the tops and bottoms of every letter dnt look great... but it jsut needs a bit o work m8 it aint bad


2 booooored in skl pen doodles... just kept screibbling on it in the first one... all pen...:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doooodlealapaul.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doodlepen.jpg
thats pretty sick man i llike that top one.
i tried my own pen steez, came out like this

esnet..
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/7374/esnet1r4ar.jpg
for the nephi battle never entered it cuz i didnt like it
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/7392/nepht3vu.jpg
for my man recon (yea i know i fucked up in mad places)
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/4980/rekn17gq.jpg
and this cracked out piece for hungr (THE G IS ILL) <_<
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/2391/hungr11lt.jpg

Jank
05-19-2006, 06:49 PM
hey man they are hot. that first one is my fave.. quality shit&#33;&#33; ye man its all about biro sketchess... then addin on lil shit around it like ur mushrroms... its all gdd... really nice man keep it up

near
05-19-2006, 07:17 PM
Originally posted by near@May 18 2006, 05:32 PM
birfday card for gf&#39;s 25th...says Laurén (i realise the e is small it was to preserve some sort of symmetry and fit the piece on the page lol :P) haha yeh no fills...i find that people who dont do graff have a hard time appreciating fills lol lemme know what ya think i guess (not that i can change it)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/ldgpiece.jpg
crits on my birthday card lol it got pushed off the page in like 1 post so i bumped it.... the mysterious esnetoner (:P) that first pen is phat...can i come over?

[biohazard]
05-19-2006, 08:23 PM
man im realyyy feelin those pen sketches yall some good mofos...anyways heres somethin I did a min ago cuz im bored and practice makes a lil bit better so here it is http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture019.jpg

Amuk
05-19-2006, 08:31 PM
i like ur sig near, the peice aint bad

dufus
05-19-2006, 08:48 PM
feedback on these?
edit:i know the U&#39;s look alot like J, didnt think of that until after i did them
-next batch those will be fixed
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/1006/refuse0016ia.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/5052/refuse0027nf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/5333/refuse0030ur.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Amuk
05-19-2006, 08:55 PM
in the first sketch draw the R a lil bit taller, then it&#39;ll be perfect, good shit, work on ur charcter

SiLeNt-BoB
05-19-2006, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by dufus@May 19 2006, 07:48 PM
feedback on these?
edit:i know the U&#39;s look alot like J, didnt think of that until after i did them
-next batch those will be fixed
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/1006/refuse0016ia.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/5052/refuse0027nf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/5333/refuse0030ur.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
felling this style alot

[biohazard]
05-19-2006, 09:03 PM
I&#39;m likein that third one the most is niccceee http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture021.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture019.jpg comments and crits yuhh

?..DeMo..?
05-19-2006, 09:33 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/9999999999.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/1010101010.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/asscheeklolol.jpg

ok well the first one is jsut somthing i did today ya know the second one is the samew thing ipsoted last time jsut a better m i think and a better &#33; ya know
and the third one is jsut a random word alright critz plz??

Pams.oner
05-19-2006, 09:35 PM
Originally posted by near+May 19 2006, 06:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (near @ May 19 2006, 06:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-near@May 18 2006, 05:32 PM
birfday card for gf&#39;s 25th...says Laurén (i realise the e is small it was to preserve some sort of symmetry and fit the piece on the page lol :P) haha yeh no fills...i find that people who dont do graff have a hard time appreciating fills lol lemme know what ya think i guess (not that i can change it)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/ldgpiece.jpg
crits on my birthday card lol it got pushed off the page in like 1 post so i bumped it.... the mysterious esnetoner (:P) that first pen is phat...can i come over? [/b][/quote]
please bump?

melo
05-19-2006, 09:35 PM
refuse your capital E&#39;s are a lot doper than your lowercase. im feelin the first one a lott

Amuk
05-19-2006, 09:42 PM
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/1131/7881pq.png (http://imageshack.us)

SykE-TON
05-19-2006, 10:13 PM
Originally posted by Kayone707@Jun 20 2005, 05:35 PM
x3?.. ^ fuck that scrap shit. go change your name
SURENO TRECE POR VIDA leva u cant phase habitual criminales

SykE-TON
05-19-2006, 10:22 PM
Originally posted by smer@May 19 2006, 05:08 AM
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/415/photo00459rn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8794/photo00466xy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8794/photo00466xy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
as you can see im addin to my style crits?
HE&#39;S WHITE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Tonkaha!!1!
05-19-2006, 10:44 PM
hands look kinda fat as well.

Amuk
05-19-2006, 10:47 PM
wtf? who cares, post pics

AMAZ tbscrew
05-19-2006, 11:22 PM
any jersey writers p.m me.

esnet1r
05-20-2006, 02:27 AM
lets smoke a blunt

ion-i
05-20-2006, 02:30 AM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ioni_sketch5-19-06.gif
fuckin around an whatnot, came out with this.

Quadratic
05-20-2006, 03:54 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/DAHMER.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/FLESH.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/CHLORO.jpg


for battles on crappy 12oz writers forum....


any feedback??

molotow_15
05-20-2006, 05:50 AM
Originally posted by Quadratic@May 20 2006, 02:54 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/DAHMER.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/FLESH.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/CHLORO.jpg


for battles on crappy 12oz writers forum....


any feedback??
not bad but whats with the top ones 3.d

Jank
05-20-2006, 07:55 AM
ioni thats gd sept the N. it goes thin and pointy a bit too much bt its gd m8.

quadratic not bad... make sure the letters are the same width througout i reakon.... not bad though


pen dooooodle while i was tryin gto learn a million lines of latin earlier... &#39;&#39;zegel&#39;&#39; .. for the battle,... obv not actually gonna enter it tho hahaha

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/zegelpendoodle.jpg

molotow_15
05-20-2006, 08:15 AM
nice jank

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/aaronsketchbs.jpg
crits ?

Voze
05-20-2006, 08:16 AM
nice shit jank - although the z looks a little like a g to me with the extensions..

did you do that exchange thing? i&#39;ll cook one for you now anyway :)

some new shit, new dub i was trying, i think it flows more than the other one, and some other stuff

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook13.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook15.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook12.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook11.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook14.jpg

Etcha
05-20-2006, 08:41 AM
Vose your stuff looks good to me
got a nice dub/throw up style there

The pink 1 looks reli clean
what pens you using?

Jank
05-20-2006, 08:45 AM
ye voze i dida quicky lil biro outline for u a while back.. very simpec and shitty but.. ill post it again 4 ya
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/soerexchange.jpg

ur stuff is gettin really good m8. such sweet colouring and nice letters too. keep it up man its hott&#33;&#33;&#33;

Jank
05-20-2006, 09:06 AM
dus ne1 want a pen freestyle exchange? or even ill jsut do u one cos im enjoyin them atm and wanna sketch sumit diff... lemme no in hreeor pms.....

edit***:: molotow i canyt see that. post a clearer pic or sumit bro

TricksForKids
05-20-2006, 09:26 AM
jank, and soer, lets do a three person exchange, i.e i write jank, jank writes soer, soer writes regs if you guys are down anywas, was nice and drunk last night fucking around with a drunken handstyle, haha,

Peace

and a next sketch that i got no damn crits on :(
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5839/lastscan23px.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/7920/lastscan6my.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

cord
05-20-2006, 09:31 AM
yo demo dont write &#39;&#39;con&#39;&#39;

SiLeNt-BoB
05-20-2006, 09:55 AM
Originally posted by Voze@May 20 2006, 07:16 AM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook12.jpg

fellin this green and pink number&#33;

obseen
05-20-2006, 10:01 AM
toy blackbooks have improved an awful lot

BoRe-719-
05-20-2006, 10:22 AM
Originally posted by Voze@May 20 2006, 07:16 AM
nice shit jank - although the z looks a little like a g to me with the extensions..

did you do that exchange thing? i&#39;ll cook one for you now anyway :)

some new shit, new dub i was trying, i think it flows more than the other one, and some other stuff

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook13.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook15.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook12.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook11.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook14.jpg
nice man, ur style is real consistent and u got some great color schemes in there too.

word to wat bob said....nice green n pink shit.

molotow, ur stupid, its not 3d

Voze
05-20-2006, 10:30 AM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@May 20 2006, 08:26 AM
jank, and soer, lets do a three person exchange, i.e i write jank, jank writes soer, soer writes regs if you guys are down anywas, was nice and drunk last night fucking around with a drunken handstyle, haha,

Peace

and a next sketch that i got no damn crits on :(
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5839/lastscan23px.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/7920/lastscan6my.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thanks for comments all ^^

regz - i&#39;m keen on that, i&#39;ll do a quick sketch of your name

your handstyle&#39;s nice, liking the piece too, though the s is a bit boring

molotow_15
05-20-2006, 10:56 AM
Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;+May 20 2006, 09:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BoRe-719- @ May 20 2006, 09:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Voze@May 20 2006, 07:16 AM
nice shit jank - although the z looks a little like a g to me with the extensions..

did you do that exchange thing? i&#39;ll cook one for you now anyway :)

some new shit, new dub i was trying, i think it flows more than the other one, and some other stuff

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook13.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook15.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook12.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook11.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook14.jpg
nice man, ur style is real consistent and u got some great color schemes in there too.

word to wat bob said....nice green n pink shit.

molotow, ur stupid, its not 3d [/b][/quote]
what u on about 3.d ?
??

Jank
05-20-2006, 11:07 AM
tricks i was fuk bored... fuk revision.....

quk simple biro bishbash
regs
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/regsdoodlage.jpg

tea dee sea
05-20-2006, 11:12 AM
yoo jank i dont like how the letters connect it would look better if they werent.peace.

AoAssis
05-20-2006, 11:14 AM
That air soft gun is mad hard core.

molotow_15
05-20-2006, 11:25 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/untitledvb.jpg

haha somert i composed on m.s paint

esnet1r
05-20-2006, 12:42 PM
Originally posted by near+May 19 2006, 06:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (near @ May 19 2006, 06:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-near@May 18 2006, 05:32 PM
birfday card for gf&#39;s 25th...says Laurén (i realise the e is small it was to preserve some sort of symmetry and fit the piece on the page lol :P) haha yeh no fills...i find that people who dont do graff have a hard time appreciating fills lol lemme know what ya think i guess (not that i can change it)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/ldgpiece.jpg
crits on my birthday card lol it got pushed off the page in like 1 post so i bumped it.... the mysterious esnetoner (:P) that first pen is phat...can i come over? [/b][/quote]
fat up letters, nice use of orange and blue, the heart is half shady but girls love that shit so yeah

aces
05-20-2006, 01:16 PM
Originally posted by esnet1r+May 20 2006, 12:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (esnet1r @ May 20 2006, 12:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by near@May 19 2006, 06:17 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-near@May 18 2006, 05:32 PM
birfday card for gf&#39;s 25th...says Laurén (i realise the e is small it was to preserve some sort of symmetry and fit the piece on the page lol :P) haha yeh no fills...i find that people who dont do graff have a hard time appreciating fills lol lemme know what ya think i guess (not that i can change it)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/ldgpiece.jpg
crits on my birthday card lol it got pushed off the page in like 1 post so i bumped it.... the mysterious esnetoner (:P) that first pen is phat...can i come over?
fat up letters, nice use of orange and blue, the heart is half shady but girls love that shit so yeah [/b][/quote]
I don&#39;t like how all the letters are big except the E but whatever its still sick.

Zire
05-20-2006, 01:46 PM
Nice shit voze, so clean, i always thought u wuold be a 16 year old white skater boy, but ur not. Lol tht was random, keep up ur nicely coloured shit.

Zire
05-20-2006, 01:48 PM
Soz

Zire
05-20-2006, 01:48 PM
soz

Zire
05-20-2006, 01:48 PM
OMG, pressed it once.

Zire
05-20-2006, 01:48 PM
FFS&#33;

Tonkaha!!1!
05-20-2006, 01:49 PM
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/6581/dscn37538ly.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/3595/dscn37548bd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/1958/dscn37520dn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my kitty wanted to be noticed, he prolly has add.

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3663/dscn37598oq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


CRITS?

molotow_15
05-20-2006, 01:51 PM
Originally posted by Zire@May 20 2006, 12:48 PM
soz double post.
not double 5

Jank
05-20-2006, 02:29 PM
uber fast .. no 3d.. it slants... ader for a 12oz budddyyyy. and the top lkeft arrow ruins the symmetry...meh..
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/Aderquickerthanshitdoodle.jpg

tonk i would prefer it if the T was the same height as the other letters.. tho i no the problems that caouses... not bad m8

Tonkaha!!1!
05-20-2006, 02:32 PM
thanks what should i do about is, and look at my kitty&#33;

-task-
05-20-2006, 03:41 PM
crits?
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/task2.jpg

Amuk
05-20-2006, 03:43 PM
u cant even see it

molotow_15
05-20-2006, 03:46 PM
looks nice though

-task-
05-20-2006, 04:01 PM
thanks, i know the pic is mad shitty though sry.

*EDIT*


ok added outline to it, once again sry for the shittiness of the flick
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/tizzassk.jpg

AceONE
05-20-2006, 04:33 PM
that seems good, finish it and get a better pic

aces
05-20-2006, 04:38 PM
lose all the bits that you have and does it say TASK if so the K doesn&#39;t look much like a K and S needs some work too

molotow_15
05-20-2006, 04:45 PM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/aaronsketchbs.jpg
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/woman.gif
yh shes from gta ;)
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/uhh.gif
crittttttttttttts

-task-
05-20-2006, 04:46 PM
ye it says TASK, thanks for the crits, i know the s and k are real shitty but im just tryin to atleast start to develop my style sum more so it was just a rough sketch i ended up coloring.

Amuk
05-20-2006, 04:49 PM
son, ur shit sucks, work on ur charcters and peices, dey look like scribble, plus theres no way ur better than me cuz u trace ur charcters

molotow_15
05-20-2006, 04:50 PM
fuck off you stupid toy

Amuk
05-20-2006, 05:15 PM
ur face says bitch ass scrawny lil toy
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/1483/aaronme7ws.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
so dont talk unless ur gona show sumthin thats worth a peep , aaron

ion-i
05-20-2006, 05:38 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 20 2006, 12:50 PM
fuck off you stupid toy
http://www.dragonkore.com/files/images/lold.jpg

AMAZ tbscrew
05-20-2006, 06:12 PM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 20 2006, 04:15 PM
ur face says bitch ass scrawny lil toy
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/1483/aaronme7ws.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
so dont talk unless ur gona show sumthin thats worth a peep , aaron
owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned

fuckin toy. dahahaha

DnK/eeK
05-20-2006, 06:19 PM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 20 2006, 04:15 PM
ur face says bitch ass scrawny lil toy
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/1483/aaronme7ws.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
so dont talk unless ur gona show sumthin thats worth a peep , aaron
looks like hes from nsync

aces
05-20-2006, 06:23 PM
is that molotow oh my god the famous molotow that traces disney characters

[biohazard]
05-20-2006, 06:26 PM
ay all tryna work on my shit still. I kinda like the red one the most (even tho the "e" suuuxxx) but um gimme some crits and shit thankx http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture022.jpg

?..DeMo..?
05-20-2006, 06:42 PM
Originally posted by ?..DeMo..?@May 19 2006, 08:33 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/9999999999.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/1010101010.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/asscheeklolol.jpg

ok well the first one is jsut somthing i did today ya know the second one is the samew thing ipsoted last time jsut a better m i think and a better &#33; ya know
and the third one is jsut a random word alright critz plz??
critz ??
bumpin because i ddint get nay critz b4 so help me now plz and dont be tooo harsh

Hater-AiD~>
05-20-2006, 06:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot

HeAm:oNeR
05-20-2006, 07:07 PM
demo- i like the first one but like if u look at it closely it really isnt that clean u cud see like black lines through the letters the 3d comin onto the sketch a lil try to clean that up make ur o smaller and work on ur D a lil theres too many extensions but ovall good im not really feelin the throw.. a bit to plain and the con i wasnt feelin too much why u writin con ne way

?..DeMo..?
05-20-2006, 07:09 PM
nah i wanted to jsut preacitce lettera ya know

aces
05-20-2006, 07:14 PM
Work on the 3d a lot try using one point perspective. Keep your lines straighter and if you don&#39;t know what one point perspective is then google it

Kry_20CC
05-20-2006, 08:54 PM
haha it seems like no one likes molotow...i just think his girl is shit

Amuk
05-20-2006, 09:20 PM
lol hard body, i hate him too, he talks alota trash

AMAZ tbscrew
05-20-2006, 09:38 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture006.jpg

-Joe
05-20-2006, 09:39 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i201/Joe-_2006/DSCF0819.jpg
messing around with some 3d, crits?

AoAssis
05-20-2006, 09:46 PM
Well stop "messing around" and get your God damn 3-D right.

jerm_mtl
05-20-2006, 10:00 PM
i just the the da vinci code:):)

ghostbusta5
05-20-2006, 10:55 PM
what do you want a medal?

ghostbusta5
05-20-2006, 10:57 PM
and i wouldnt write DEMO cause there is someone who posted in the toy bomb/piece thread who burns you

P.S which is pretty bad

Z FUSE
05-21-2006, 12:14 AM
tips are appreciated. (it&#39;s the bottom one)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7554/swirlpiece7bd.jpg

beone
05-21-2006, 12:30 AM
what ive been doin the past week

http://img1.yoxio.com/img/239668.jpg
impossible picture
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/239669.jpg
fuck the hands
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/239671.jpg
sketch was better
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/239672.jpg
shading is bad and it is a lil fucked on proportions

Voze
05-21-2006, 04:50 AM
looks like stuff you&#39;ve been doing in school, not in your blackbook. there&#39;s another thread for that

molotow_15
05-21-2006, 05:47 AM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my &#39;tracings&#39; are still winnin your SHIT in the battle

Voze
05-21-2006, 06:07 AM
Originally posted by Z FUSE@May 20 2006, 11:14 PM
tips are appreciated. (it&#39;s the bottom one)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7554/swirlpiece7bd.jpg
the bottom one&#39;s pretty sick - nice work

molotow_15
05-21-2006, 06:58 AM
http://www.foofinu.com/shark_sketch.jpg

how fucking dope is this

Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 07:02 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 21 2006, 04:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ May 21 2006, 04:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my &#39;tracings&#39; are still winnin your SHIT in the battle [/b][/quote]
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead

you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have

molotow_15
05-21-2006, 07:03 AM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+May 21 2006, 06:02 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ May 21 2006, 06:02 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 04:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my &#39;tracings&#39; are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead

you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have [/b][/quote]
call it quits then

Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 07:08 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 21 2006, 06:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ May 21 2006, 06:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:02 AM

Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 04:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my &#39;tracings&#39; are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead

you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have
call it quits then [/b][/quote]
nah..ill leave that up to you

molotow_15
05-21-2006, 07:09 AM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+May 21 2006, 06:08 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ May 21 2006, 06:08 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 06:03 AM

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:02 AM

Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 04:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my &#39;tracings&#39; are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead

you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have
call it quits then
nah..ill leave that up to you [/b][/quote]
your to much of a fucking kid to do that
bitch

Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 07:11 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 21 2006, 06:09 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ May 21 2006, 06:09 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:08 AM

Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 06:03 AM

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:02 AM

Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 04:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my &#39;tracings&#39; are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead

you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have
call it quits then
nah..ill leave that up to you
your to much of a fucking kid to do that
bitch [/b][/quote]
im going to stop spamming..ill leave it to the pro
take it away

molotow_15
05-21-2006, 07:12 AM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+May 21 2006, 06:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ May 21 2006, 06:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 06:09 AM

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:08 AM

Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 06:03 AM

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:02 AM

Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 04:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my &#39;tracings&#39; are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead

you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have
call it quits then
nah..ill leave that up to you
your to much of a fucking kid to do that
bitch
im going to stop spamming..ill leave it to the pro
take it away [/b][/quote]
haha im goin now anyway to some coursework

Voze
05-21-2006, 07:12 AM
please, stop it you two. and stop posting stuff that&#39;s not yours or not graffiti.. this is the blackbooks thread not the school art or gay beef thread

Jank
05-21-2006, 07:51 AM
that shark thing is crazy

doodle for vare
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/varedoodleage.jpg

Code
05-21-2006, 08:03 AM
k, this would be my 3rd sketch that i have done, took some advice that people posted on my last one. Hopefully after a few more simple ones i will be moving on to more complicated sketches.

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/9606/nick9am.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Voze
05-21-2006, 08:14 AM
uh... :(

i&#39;d stay with the simples for now, until you&#39;ve got them perfect. right now it&#39;s far from perfect. work on your colouring too, keep the colours in one direction

Jank
05-21-2006, 08:18 AM
ye hes right m8... if i was u i would just whip out a pencil and sketch without any pens for about a weeek nonstop then try colouring again... keep it really simple tho


gave 3d a go ant. bad spacing.. does it work at all tho?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/3d-1stattmeptANT.jpg

Voze
05-21-2006, 08:23 AM
actually looks dope, although what i would change - i&#39;d make the right side of the a overlape the middle horizontal bit, and yeah, spacing, bring the T in

Jank
05-21-2006, 08:36 AM
cheers m8 thats helpful..ye i wudve had the left side of the T over the N but i was thinkin as i was going to didnt plan that. cheers vozee

-task-
05-21-2006, 08:57 AM
new sketch from last night, getting better?
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/tizzask2.jpg

Jank
05-21-2006, 09:05 AM
i dont like how the letters flare at their ends... like u see how the K gets wider at every end? i dnt like that. also the S looks a bit squished and its top vertical bit is waaay too fat
and the 3d should all go in one direction, bt u got the 3d off the K going to the right and the 3d off the T going left..... i also dont like the big swirly mcswirl that swirls around it.]

not bad tho

obseen
05-21-2006, 09:10 AM
Originally posted by Jank@May 21 2006, 07:18 AM
ye hes right m8... if i was u i would just whip out a pencil and sketch without any pens for about a weeek nonstop then try colouring again... keep it really simple tho


gave 3d a go ant. bad spacing.. does it work at all tho?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/3d-1stattmeptANT.jpg
this is quite nice

Seti
05-21-2006, 09:25 AM
nice 3d jank ur goin with the more organic flow and u got the shadin down almost, but look at the bottom of the t... u shld make it so u cant see the underneeth of it, wld be cool if it started from behind the bottom of the n if u no wat i meen, hers one of mine, im tryin to work my way through a real mental dryspell, not that gd but wat the fuck ehh, sez ins

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image037.jpg

obseen
05-21-2006, 09:26 AM
hot hot hot

cord
05-21-2006, 09:31 AM
hey seti that is mad&#33;&#33;

how do you do it? do you use that horizon line technique with the vanishing points?

Seti
05-21-2006, 09:35 AM
thats how i started, but now i just draw one block and then add to it, imagining the vanishing points, but sometimes i switch the points while drawing to bring in a new dimention, an sometimes i use a curved line with the point perspective, i cant realy explain it man

cord
05-21-2006, 09:37 AM
ok man thanks

toxus
05-21-2006, 09:39 AM
oh, i was doing 3d aswell..., i need to work on the colouring, i&#39;ll colour it later if it can be botherd...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/P5210065.jpg
and yeah, JE, short for JESB :D

-task-
05-21-2006, 09:43 AM
Originally posted by Jank@May 21 2006, 08:05 AM
i dont like how the letters flare at their ends... like u see how the K gets wider at every end? i dnt like that. also the S looks a bit squished and its top vertical bit is waaay too fat
and the 3d should all go in one direction, bt u got the 3d off the K going to the right and the 3d off the T going left..... i also dont like the big swirly mcswirl that swirls around it.]

not bad tho
Thanks for the help. Im just tryin to develop a style other than bubble letters wich i feel like ive got down. As for the 3d i used 2 points thats why half faces one way and the other half faces the other way. but thansk again for the crits

Jank
05-21-2006, 10:12 AM
cheers for the help seti.. haha this page has turned all 3dish&#33; toxus that looks solid to me. not bad at all m8. ill have another go at 3d an post it up laterrrr

toxus
05-21-2006, 10:18 AM
yeah, i might try and take 3d down :P, i&#39;ll have some more up soon, with some basic letter simples and throws...

Zire
05-21-2006, 10:25 AM
Graffti has gone all 3 dimensional. :huh:

Seti
05-21-2006, 10:27 AM
TIP... wen drawing 3d try puttin the points of perspective above and below the piece and build ur letters allong a horozontal line, this&#39;ll make a piece that looks more like one object with a flow rather that parts of it lookin different ways.

toxus
05-21-2006, 10:31 AM
Originally posted by Seti@May 21 2006, 03:27 PM
TIP... wen drawing 3d try puttin the points of perspective above and below the piece and build ur letters allong a horozontal line, this&#39;ll make a piece that looks more like one object with a flow rather that parts of it lookin different ways.
yeah, i done two point perspective on my one ;)

Seti
05-21-2006, 10:33 AM
jus try it with the points above and below man

Jank
05-21-2006, 10:56 AM
did another quicky 1... 2nd try at 3d...T looks a bit too muchj like a 7 now and the top o the N is just fukered..... any other crits????
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/3d-2ndattemptANT.jpg

AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 10:57 AM
dam i wish i could do this abstract shit but...i cant..well i probly could if i tryed.... B)

Seti
05-21-2006, 11:09 AM
thats much betta jank, hers a lust...

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image038.jpg

AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 11:10 AM
wana point out where these letters are? lol

Seti
05-21-2006, 11:11 AM
one sec then u illiterate fool&#33;&#33;&#33;

AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 11:13 AM
:( :( i

Seti
05-21-2006, 11:17 AM
ther u go then. he left bar of the t goes behind the s
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/lust.jpg

-MaCKiE-
05-21-2006, 11:19 AM
sickness

AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 11:20 AM
ohhhh shit..thats is pretty dope..but if u cant read 3d.....ur fucked lol :wub: :)

\(SIN)/[again]
05-21-2006, 11:32 AM
My newest throw(I have yet to paint it though):
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/deckthrow.jpg

Some wierdo htc thing:
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/htct.jpg

Sticker:
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Stickers/sinsticky.jpg

Seti
05-21-2006, 12:02 PM
couple pages from my blackbookie, went a bit overboard with the colours on the first one, it was the first day i had owned em so i thought id betta try em out

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/61d3653d.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/48066fab.jpg

ion-i
05-21-2006, 12:04 PM
Originally posted by ion&#045;i@May 19 2006, 10:30 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ioni_sketch5-19-06.gif
fuckin around an whatnot, came out with this.
bump

and nice work seti, im feelin that first one. :D

aces
05-21-2006, 12:08 PM
I dont like the bits off the I&#39;s and the other add ons of the I&#39;s but it&#39;s good

vare_187uk
05-21-2006, 12:10 PM
seti sick feeling that lust and other stuff

jank keep trying man getting good but needs alot of werk

sin try simpler throw letters take a look about man theres plenty of stuff to look at throws etc in the pieces throws threads on here get inspired

ioni keep working that one outline for now over and over till you get it how u want it man

Code
05-21-2006, 12:36 PM
THis will be my first pencil sketch. I know the shading is pretty bad and the "O" is a little messed up, tried to be a little creative.

Critz please

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/2795/firstsketch6ta.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Kry_20CC
05-21-2006, 12:46 PM
the o&#39;s creative and the b needs some work but the c man, i dont even no what you&#39;re tryna do. its way to skinny comapred to the rest of it. nice try tho

-Joe
05-21-2006, 02:39 PM
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i201/Joe-_2006/joe.jpg

Amuk
05-21-2006, 02:40 PM
stop postin horrible "peices". stick to sketching

liber1
05-21-2006, 02:44 PM
joe that sucks, but im sure its your first time, jus keep practicing, and fix that bs you call 3-d. 3-D can only bee seen in one directionmto make it look like its popping up, that is 2-d you have their. and one more thing dont ever ever ever ever ever ever EVER EVER EVER EVER write your own name.

liber1
05-21-2006, 02:47 PM
http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/911/00001013tk.th.jpg (http://img343.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00001013tk.jpg)well its certainly not good but any thing i could do to make it better



ps sorry for the shitty camera take

Amuk
05-21-2006, 02:52 PM
joe&#39;s shit looks better than urs lol

liber1
05-21-2006, 02:58 PM
just gimmie the crits asshole

AoAssis
05-21-2006, 03:02 PM
Do you really think that after you called him an asshole he is going to give you critz? By all means no. And i thnik saying " joe&#39;s shit looks better than urs lol" is a crit. Joes shit sucks and if your shits worse the Joe;s that should be some inspiration to go sketch some more.

Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 03:02 PM
Originally posted by Code@May 21 2006, 11:36 AM
THis will be my first pencil sketch. I know the shading is pretty bad and the "O" is a little messed up, tried to be a little creative.

Critz please

http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/2795/firstsketch6ta.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
get rid of the line in the b and make the c fatter..if your going to do an "o
" like that i would suggest making it cleaner and even on all sides

Amuk
05-21-2006, 03:03 PM
heres sum crits dick head: learn how to color, get sum better letter structure, let me see YOUR 3-d and dont put sum elses work into the dirt if urs is worse

liber1
05-21-2006, 03:11 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis@May 21 2006, 02:02 PM
Do you really think that after you called him an asshole he is going to give you critz? By all means no. And i thnik saying " joe&#39;s shit looks better than urs lol" is a crit. Joes shit sucks and if your shits worse the Joe;s that should be some inspiration to go sketch some more.
that aint a fuckin crit its just some dickhole trying to be a smart ass. and amuc why didnt you just say that shit in thefirtst place, damn smart ass people.

toxus
05-21-2006, 03:12 PM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060521/11/0/1/e/01e83c7bdb48930d9ae8b243c93c0d46200605210_full.jpg
just another J...

liber1
05-21-2006, 03:13 PM
good outline

aces
05-21-2006, 03:29 PM
yea i like how thats startin up

Ironik
05-21-2006, 03:51 PM
Didnt know were to put this
its a sketch from that anime cartoon Interstella 5555 with the DAFT PUNK music

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3931/inter0089lj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think?

vare_187uk
05-21-2006, 03:55 PM
fuckin fresh ^^^^^^^^

aces
05-21-2006, 04:48 PM
Originally posted by Ironik@May 21 2006, 03:51 PM
Didnt know were to put this
its a sketch from that anime cartoon Interstella 5555 with the DAFT PUNK music

http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3931/inter0089lj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tell me wat yall think?
fuckin dope dude it should have been in either this or the characters thread but still its ill

Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 04:53 PM
that sketch is clean as hell ironik


heres a new throwie i tried..critz plz
http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/6605/newthrowie1bg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Amuk
05-21-2006, 04:56 PM
ur R looks like an S, and i dont like the rest of the letters or the 3-d

Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 04:58 PM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 21 2006, 03:56 PM
ur R looks like an S, and i dont like the rest of the letters or the 3-d
its not 3d..its a shadown..i dunno if i did it right but its a shadow

Amuk
05-21-2006, 05:01 PM
ill help u out, ill post sumthin in a few

Kry_20CC
05-21-2006, 05:05 PM
hater...i dont like how the letters lines go into each other like the e going into the top right part of the T for an example

smer
05-21-2006, 05:09 PM
nice toxus il like it alot,
a quicky
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/8610/photo00767hz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 05:09 PM
ill try it without the letters going into each other pretty soon and see how it looks

Jank
05-21-2006, 05:09 PM
ironik that craaazy gd&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; hater.... not bad id try doin blocky letters rather than bubbles ...


tried another 1
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/3d-3rdattmeptANT.jpg

smer
05-21-2006, 05:12 PM
thats fuckin mint man props

Amuk
05-21-2006, 05:13 PM
i think u shud use pencil, and i think those are the worst letters u cud possibly use, i kno from experience, cuz i used to use that tag, ANT

AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 05:13 PM
not feelin that n

Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 05:14 PM
wouldnt a blocky letter throwie look like a piece though?

nice 3d though

Amuk
05-21-2006, 05:18 PM
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/4897/ththe0ec.png (http://imageshack.us)
stick to simple stuff

beefgerky
05-21-2006, 06:11 PM
ew.

Amuk
05-21-2006, 06:42 PM
dont be scurred

beefgerky
05-21-2006, 06:44 PM
shut up.

Amuk
05-21-2006, 07:01 PM
take the beef sum where else gerk

aoime
05-21-2006, 07:03 PM
haha

AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 07:04 PM
take it to the stove <_<

beefgerky
05-21-2006, 07:04 PM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 21 2006, 06:01 PM
take the beef sum where else gerk
can i dry hump you?

cord
05-21-2006, 07:09 PM
look at the sig:

GERK1 WAW=

gerk1 what a wanker

sorry dont mean to start beef, the opportunity was just too good to pass up :D

Amuk
05-21-2006, 07:10 PM
Originally posted by cord@May 21 2006, 06:09 PM
look at the sig:

GERK1 WAW=

gerk1 what a wanker

sorry dont mean to start beef, the opportunity was just too good to pass up :D
sorry no, same to u gerk

beefgerky
05-21-2006, 07:17 PM
haha. best abreviation yet.

cord
05-21-2006, 07:20 PM
haha i can think of lots

''SCC''
05-21-2006, 07:39 PM
gerk1 Wants a Wang

liber1
05-21-2006, 07:43 PM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/9193/00001026wa.th.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00001026wa.jpg)crits?

Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 07:43 PM
entry for a battle gainst me and uhhh
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/3797/dscf16730ue.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
im going to get smashed but it was all in fun

liber1
05-21-2006, 07:48 PM
hater man that bkshadow ist tha bomb man. what bout mine?

liber1
05-21-2006, 07:48 PM
hater man that bkshadow ist tha bomb man. what bout mine?

liber1
05-21-2006, 07:48 PM
hater man that bkshadow ist tha bomb man. what bout mine?

liber1
05-21-2006, 07:49 PM
whoa sorry for the trip post damn dial up

jerm_mtl
05-21-2006, 07:54 PM
ya dial up sucks ass something better like a modem, gasshhh

Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 07:57 PM
Originally posted by liber1@May 21 2006, 01:47 PM
http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/911/00001013tk.th.jpg (http://img343.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00001013tk.jpg)well its certainly not good but any thing i could do to make it better



ps sorry for the shitty camera take
i would make letters same size..like the fatness of the dot on the i
stuff like that..but yoru starting right if your new to graf

ados
05-21-2006, 08:07 PM
Originally posted by ados@May 19 2006, 02:06 PM
bored, tryin some shit out.... crits would be kool.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/pncilwackness.jpg
i put a slug in yer heart like an atmosphere fan.

Amuk
05-21-2006, 08:10 PM
dats good keep it up

ion-i
05-21-2006, 08:13 PM
Originally posted by &#39;&#39;SCC&#39;&#39;@May 21 2006, 03:39 PM
gerk1 Wants a Wang
Who the fuck are you?
Your not funny, go away. The joke died right when you spoke.

klipa
05-21-2006, 08:19 PM
nice work ados but not reeling the lower case R.

a simple blitz quick exchange for meng

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/5011/cimg18826al.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tea dee sea
05-21-2006, 08:23 PM
yoo klipa not bad u shouldnt hav disconected the e and the g looks kinda like an s

Amuk
05-21-2006, 09:02 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7586/scanert9pd.png (http://imageshack.us)

siche
05-21-2006, 09:09 PM
Any Critz>?


http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/1305/sc0fv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

AoAssis
05-21-2006, 09:25 PM
Originally posted by cord@May 21 2006, 06:09 PM
look at the sig:

GERK1 WAW=

gerk1 what a wanker

sorry dont mean to start beef, the opportunity was just too good to pass up :D
Actualy its Wanking at Wendy&#39;s.

tea dee sea
05-21-2006, 09:37 PM
amuk i like that work on your tag a lil

Amuk
05-21-2006, 10:11 PM
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/1299/yg2au.png (http://imageshack.us)
quik shit for fosi

molotow_15
05-22-2006, 05:57 AM
and it is shit

aces
05-22-2006, 06:39 AM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 21 2006, 09:02 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7586/scanert9pd.png (http://imageshack.us)
i kinda like this the char is a little off but w/e

Amuk
05-22-2006, 07:25 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 22 2006, 04:57 AM
and it is shit
battle me pussy

Hater-AiD~>
05-22-2006, 07:29 AM
haha..just about everybody on this forum has battled molotow

Seti
05-22-2006, 07:44 AM
even me..lol
heres a mome..any crits?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image042.jpg

Amuk
05-22-2006, 07:51 AM
im about to bite that style, i dont see ur E

Seti
05-22-2006, 07:52 AM
oi dont bite biatch, especialy not off me.

MENG!
05-22-2006, 07:55 AM
Quick random one for Kilipa
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7307/klipabombingscience3qj.gif
Critz (Anything other than &#39;your suck&#39; is appreciated. :D)

Amuk
05-22-2006, 07:57 AM
Originally posted by Seti@May 22 2006, 06:52 AM
oi dont bite biatch, especialy not off me.
i was jokin dick, and i can use that block style, cuz u aint come up wit it

Seti
05-22-2006, 08:00 AM
wateva mate. i developed this style so it dont look like anyone elses, so fuck u mate, come back wen u got a style of ur own, cz right now u seem like a no talent prick.

Amuk
05-22-2006, 08:06 AM
u think ur talented cuz u can draw blocks, i got my own style, and i cud beat u in a battle using urs, iight? dont fuckin bring beef here becuz i made a joke about using that style. im not ur mate, stupid ass fuck

im out 1

Seti
05-22-2006, 08:22 AM
come on then, its a callout

cord
05-22-2006, 08:57 AM
seti will burn you amuk.

nice work seti, you&#39;re style is awesome but i have seen similar stuff

molotow_15
05-22-2006, 09:05 AM
i&#39;ll fukin battle u anyday amuk your wank

your shit is a-muk

jerm_mtl
05-22-2006, 10:20 AM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 21 2006, 08:02 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7586/scanert9pd.png (http://imageshack.us)
thats nice

klipa
05-22-2006, 10:28 AM
amuk i think you should simple things up a bit also black in the 3d so i can see the letters better
safe

hungr
05-22-2006, 10:29 AM
i got bored and did a rate throw
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/rate.jpg

sorry for the large amount of white left over :)

its for a few pages back

jerm_mtl
05-22-2006, 11:08 AM
thats a pretty cool throw

smer
05-22-2006, 11:18 AM
im likin also

obseen
05-22-2006, 11:30 AM
im sure ive seen those letters somewhere before though

nephsike
05-22-2006, 11:48 AM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 22 2006, 08:06 AM
u think ur talented cuz u can draw blocks, i got my own style, and i cud beat u in a battle using urs, iight? dont fuckin bring beef here becuz i made a joke about using that style. im not ur mate, stupid ass fuck

im out 1
you have style :lol:

Mse
05-22-2006, 11:59 AM
word^
seti would own your ass

molotow_15
05-22-2006, 12:02 PM
Originally posted by nephsike+May 22 2006, 10:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nephsike @ May 22 2006, 10:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Amuk@May 22 2006, 08:06 AM
u think ur talented cuz u can draw blocks, i got my own style, and i cud beat u in a battle using urs, iight? dont fuckin bring beef here becuz i made a joke about using that style. im not ur mate, stupid ass fuck

im out 1
you have style :lol: [/b][/quote]
u brought beef

so did i but not on purpose

Jank
05-22-2006, 12:52 PM
lovely beef.


dooooodle.. this is what happens when tehy try to make me do maths:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doodlewithfishcity3d.jpg

molotow_15
05-22-2006, 12:55 PM
nice chariks

MENG!
05-22-2006, 12:56 PM
Originally posted by MENG&#33;@May 22 2006, 06:55 AM
Quick random one for Kilipa
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7307/klipabombingscience3qj.gif
Critz (Anything other than &#39;your suck&#39; is appreciated. :D)
Bumpity

Jank
05-22-2006, 01:16 PM
wot? ur gonna bump ur own shit and not comment on mine? tutututut we dont like that.... fat boy&#33;

er.... stop with all the overlappings of the letters. stop with the extensions like the top and bottom of the K. go as simple as u possibly can. cos it doesnt look very gd im afraid and thats because ur letters have no basic foundation. as every1 says, do simple simple letters for a while at least m8..... and outline thinnner and giv it a 3d. i rekon.

smer
05-22-2006, 01:17 PM
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/1854/photo00786rb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

Jank
05-22-2006, 01:19 PM
i think its main prob is that the black lines are all ... unstraight.. like they wiggly... like u cant draw a straight line...... plan it out in pencil first... apart from that it dont look too bad. wots it say? jedi? jedt?

smer
05-22-2006, 01:32 PM
it sais jedt and im not gunna use black for outline next time im gunna just fade the outline in to the couler

molotow_15
05-22-2006, 01:37 PM
Originally posted by Jank@May 22 2006, 11:52 AM
lovely beef.


dooooodle.. this is what happens when tehy try to make me do maths:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doodlewithfishcity3d.jpg
bump for jank

DistortedThoughtz
05-22-2006, 01:57 PM
Janks Is Nice.. Yeah I &#39;Doooooodle&#39; During Maths Class Too Lol..

Smer - Its Nice.. I Like Your Style..

vare_187uk
05-22-2006, 02:02 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/kopt.jpg
needs works

but was a doodle for a new tag im thinking of

yerp
05-22-2006, 02:16 PM
http://img464.imageshack.us/img464/8227/throwies2ms.th.jpg (http://img464.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwies2ms.jpg)

http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8009/piece0gp.th.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/my.php?image=piece0gp.jpg)

crits and/or feedback please.

vare_187uk
05-22-2006, 02:22 PM
again another time where someone has asked for critz and gave any on the above even though i never asked for it i still expect it &#33;

ps the piece in blue has some but not alot of letter structure work with it

molotow_15
05-22-2006, 02:23 PM
someone&#39;s style im tryin needs a lotta work still

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molo.jpg

crits so far...

vare_187uk
05-22-2006, 02:24 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 22 2006, 01:23 PM
someone&#39;s style im tryin needs a lotta work still

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molo.jpg

crits so far...
some elses style your trying

what does that make you achieve ???

yerp
05-22-2006, 02:24 PM
hah my bad dude. i like it give it some color though not just pencil, i like the tag underneath it too

molotow_15
05-22-2006, 02:26 PM
Originally posted by vare_187uk+May 22 2006, 01:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (vare_187uk @ May 22 2006, 01:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-molotow_15@May 22 2006, 01:23 PM
someone&#39;s style im tryin needs a lotta work still

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molo.jpg

crits so far...
some elses style your trying

what does that make you achieve ??? [/b][/quote]
its not a bite
a fukin style


CRITS NOT BEEF&#33;

vare_187uk
05-22-2006, 02:28 PM
bite a style a tag or a letter is a bite in my eyes&#33; thats like me starting to bite daim

molotow_15
05-22-2006, 02:28 PM
i got rid of it
im not havin people beefin
mor than half gd stuff

molotow_15
05-22-2006, 02:29 PM
Originally posted by vare_187uk@May 22 2006, 01:28 PM
bite a style a tag or a letter is a bite in my eyes&#33; thats like me starting to bite daim
people try other people&#39;s style loads of time on ere

and i had permission as well

vare_187uk
05-22-2006, 02:31 PM
you had permission thats makes it so much better really doesnt it

ps i wasnt beefing im just playing it straight

its all about uniqueness this day and age many people say all the main styles are taken eg 3d wild simple try and come up with summat a bit original from your simples &#33;