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obseen
05-19-2006, 01:05 PM
i like the sort of style your trying to do, but im not feelin it
i woudl avoid the wavynesss of the letters.. i think that makes it look bad/... cos it goes too skinny and stuff in places and too fat in otheres. also the little sticky out bits at the tops and bottoms of every letter dnt look great... but it jsut needs a bit o work m8 it aint bad
2 booooored in skl pen doodles... just kept screibbling on it in the first one... all pen...:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doooodlealapaul.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doodlepen.jpg
Kry_20CC
05-19-2006, 01:22 PM
im feelin the first one jank
obseen
05-19-2006, 01:24 PM
those are dope jank, are you antie of 12oz?
yarrr...well my name is jank on all these forums... and i write antie on em all tooo.... so ye prolly lol
thx!
sky 5
05-19-2006, 01:32 PM
jank, nice as always. there aint a letter you cant do. the only crit i could give is that sometimes you kinda hide or compact letters that dont look right going north south. like the E on the top one, i think it would look better with a lil east west at the bottom so its not so up and down. if that makes sense.
cheers m8 but... ..er... eh??? do u mean make em too skinny when they should be a bit thicker..wider.?
Originally posted by beefgerky+May 19 2006, 10:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beefgerky @ May 19 2006, 10:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Seti@May 19 2006, 04:14 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-beefgerky@May 19 2006, 12:18 AM
new crew name throw
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap008.jpg
wats it stand for?
what a waste, without a warning, WANKING AT WENDY's. ;) :lol: [/b][/quote]
there are already man W.A.W crews around, one of which is in either sweden or norway and they burn that
bored, tryin some shit out.... crits would be kool.
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/pncilwackness.jpg
?..DeMo..?
05-19-2006, 03:11 PM
i like it . it looks nice the throw looks good and the 2 things on the obttom look good thre freehand looks good too
beefgerky
05-19-2006, 03:38 PM
Originally posted by cord+May 19 2006, 01:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cord @ May 19 2006, 01:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by beefgerky@May 19 2006, 10:04 AM
Originally posted by Seti@May 19 2006, 04:14 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-beefgerky@May 19 2006, 12:18 AM
new crew name throw
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap008.jpg
wats it stand for?
what a waste, without a warning, WANKING AT WENDY's. ;) :lol:
there are already man W.A.W crews around, one of which is in either sweden or norway and they burn that [/b][/quote]
were in california.
so we dont give a fuck. ;)
edit: i rarely make slaps, and then i do there just like this;
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap009.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap012.jpg
on a big WAW slap poster (below)
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap013.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap010.jpg
^should get flicks of that painted soon, i forgot my cam last time.
i really like that orange waw, and the poster is nice too.
ados loving that throw top right. really nice. overall gd shit
my final entry for battle.... colours raped it like a bitch... red was runnin out.. all went to shit... any thoughts?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/drsex2.jpg
love it dude the only thing i don't liek is the pointy thing at the top of the X but w/e
dis cuda been ten times better, colors fucked it
vare_187uk
05-19-2006, 05:28 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/drsex.jpg dr sex YO!
AMAZ tbscrew
05-19-2006, 05:34 PM
Originally posted by smer@May 19 2006, 06:22 AM
ah it looks like it a bit il start agen
dont start again...keep doing the same style im tierd of runci this runci that he's not the only one that does it...mayb on this forum yes...but iv seen other people do it...so get over it
oh and 2 those who have herd im quiting....im not get over it :)
MF Feed Letter
05-19-2006, 06:08 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1027.jpg throw.
HeAm:oNeR
05-19-2006, 06:23 PM
ight thanks 2 all who crited.. i know my 3d is horrible any tips on how 2 make it better? if not ill jus keep playin around with it.. i designed a new throw.. but iono if i shud post it up, ive been playin around with it for like a half hour i tryed somethin unique i didnt want 2 make it look rele generic like my last one but oh well peace
esnet1r
05-19-2006, 06:37 PM
Originally posted by Jank@May 19 2006, 12:21 PM
i woudl avoid the wavynesss of the letters.. i think that makes it look bad/... cos it goes too skinny and stuff in places and too fat in otheres. also the little sticky out bits at the tops and bottoms of every letter dnt look great... but it jsut needs a bit o work m8 it aint bad
2 booooored in skl pen doodles... just kept screibbling on it in the first one... all pen...:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doooodlealapaul.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doodlepen.jpg
thats pretty sick man i llike that top one.
i tried my own pen steez, came out like this
esnet..
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/7374/esnet1r4ar.jpg
for the nephi battle never entered it cuz i didnt like it
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/7392/nepht3vu.jpg
for my man recon (yea i know i fucked up in mad places)
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/4980/rekn17gq.jpg
and this cracked out piece for hungr (THE G IS ILL) <_<
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/2391/hungr11lt.jpg
hey man they are hot. that first one is my fave.. quality shit!! ye man its all about biro sketchess... then addin on lil shit around it like ur mushrroms... its all gdd... really nice man keep it up
Originally posted by near@May 18 2006, 05:32 PM
birfday card for gf's 25th...says Laurén (i realise the e is small it was to preserve some sort of symmetry and fit the piece on the page lol :P) haha yeh no fills...i find that people who dont do graff have a hard time appreciating fills lol lemme know what ya think i guess (not that i can change it)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/ldgpiece.jpg
crits on my birthday card lol it got pushed off the page in like 1 post so i bumped it.... the mysterious esnetoner (:P) that first pen is phat...can i come over?
[biohazard]
05-19-2006, 08:23 PM
man im realyyy feelin those pen sketches yall some good mofos...anyways heres somethin I did a min ago cuz im bored and practice makes a lil bit better so here it is http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture019.jpg
i like ur sig near, the peice aint bad
dufus
05-19-2006, 08:48 PM
feedback on these?
edit:i know the U's look alot like J, didnt think of that until after i did them
-next batch those will be fixed
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/1006/refuse0016ia.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/5052/refuse0027nf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/5333/refuse0030ur.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
in the first sketch draw the R a lil bit taller, then it'll be perfect, good shit, work on ur charcter
SiLeNt-BoB
05-19-2006, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by dufus@May 19 2006, 07:48 PM
feedback on these?
edit:i know the U's look alot like J, didnt think of that until after i did them
-next batch those will be fixed
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/1006/refuse0016ia.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/5052/refuse0027nf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/5333/refuse0030ur.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
felling this style alot
[biohazard]
05-19-2006, 09:03 PM
I'm likein that third one the most is niccceee http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture021.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture019.jpg comments and crits yuhh
?..DeMo..?
05-19-2006, 09:33 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/9999999999.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/1010101010.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/asscheeklolol.jpg
ok well the first one is jsut somthing i did today ya know the second one is the samew thing ipsoted last time jsut a better m i think and a better ! ya know
and the third one is jsut a random word alright critz plz??
Pams.oner
05-19-2006, 09:35 PM
Originally posted by near+May 19 2006, 06:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (near @ May 19 2006, 06:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-near@May 18 2006, 05:32 PM
birfday card for gf's 25th...says Laurén (i realise the e is small it was to preserve some sort of symmetry and fit the piece on the page lol :P) haha yeh no fills...i find that people who dont do graff have a hard time appreciating fills lol lemme know what ya think i guess (not that i can change it)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/ldgpiece.jpg
crits on my birthday card lol it got pushed off the page in like 1 post so i bumped it.... the mysterious esnetoner (:P) that first pen is phat...can i come over? [/b][/quote]
please bump?
refuse your capital E's are a lot doper than your lowercase. im feelin the first one a lott
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/1131/7881pq.png (http://imageshack.us)
SykE-TON
05-19-2006, 10:13 PM
Originally posted by Kayone707@Jun 20 2005, 05:35 PM
x3?.. ^ fuck that scrap shit. go change your name
SURENO TRECE POR VIDA leva u cant phase habitual criminales
SykE-TON
05-19-2006, 10:22 PM
Originally posted by smer@May 19 2006, 05:08 AM
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/415/photo00459rn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8794/photo00466xy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8794/photo00466xy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
as you can see im addin to my style crits?
HE'S WHITE!!!!
Tonkaha!!1!
05-19-2006, 10:44 PM
hands look kinda fat as well.
wtf? who cares, post pics
AMAZ tbscrew
05-19-2006, 11:22 PM
any jersey writers p.m me.
esnet1r
05-20-2006, 02:27 AM
lets smoke a blunt
ion-i
05-20-2006, 02:30 AM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ioni_sketch5-19-06.gif
fuckin around an whatnot, came out with this.
Quadratic
05-20-2006, 03:54 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/DAHMER.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/FLESH.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/CHLORO.jpg
for battles on crappy 12oz writers forum....
any feedback??
molotow_15
05-20-2006, 05:50 AM
Originally posted by Quadratic@May 20 2006, 02:54 AM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/DAHMER.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/FLESH.jpg
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/CHLORO.jpg
for battles on crappy 12oz writers forum....
any feedback??
not bad but whats with the top ones 3.d
ioni thats gd sept the N. it goes thin and pointy a bit too much bt its gd m8.
quadratic not bad... make sure the letters are the same width througout i reakon.... not bad though
pen dooooodle while i was tryin gto learn a million lines of latin earlier... ''zegel'' .. for the battle,... obv not actually gonna enter it tho hahaha
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/zegelpendoodle.jpg
molotow_15
05-20-2006, 08:15 AM
nice jank
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/aaronsketchbs.jpg
crits ?
nice shit jank - although the z looks a little like a g to me with the extensions..
did you do that exchange thing? i'll cook one for you now anyway :)
some new shit, new dub i was trying, i think it flows more than the other one, and some other stuff
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook13.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook15.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook12.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook11.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook14.jpg
Etcha
05-20-2006, 08:41 AM
Vose your stuff looks good to me
got a nice dub/throw up style there
The pink 1 looks reli clean
what pens you using?
ye voze i dida quicky lil biro outline for u a while back.. very simpec and shitty but.. ill post it again 4 ya
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/soerexchange.jpg
ur stuff is gettin really good m8. such sweet colouring and nice letters too. keep it up man its hott!!!
dus ne1 want a pen freestyle exchange? or even ill jsut do u one cos im enjoyin them atm and wanna sketch sumit diff... lemme no in hreeor pms.....
edit***:: molotow i canyt see that. post a clearer pic or sumit bro
TricksForKids
05-20-2006, 09:26 AM
jank, and soer, lets do a three person exchange, i.e i write jank, jank writes soer, soer writes regs if you guys are down anywas, was nice and drunk last night fucking around with a drunken handstyle, haha,
Peace
and a next sketch that i got no damn crits on :(
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5839/lastscan23px.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/7920/lastscan6my.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yo demo dont write ''con''
SiLeNt-BoB
05-20-2006, 09:55 AM
Originally posted by Voze@May 20 2006, 07:16 AM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook12.jpg
fellin this green and pink number!
obseen
05-20-2006, 10:01 AM
toy blackbooks have improved an awful lot
BoRe-719-
05-20-2006, 10:22 AM
Originally posted by Voze@May 20 2006, 07:16 AM
nice shit jank - although the z looks a little like a g to me with the extensions..
did you do that exchange thing? i'll cook one for you now anyway :)
some new shit, new dub i was trying, i think it flows more than the other one, and some other stuff
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook13.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook15.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook12.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook11.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook14.jpg
nice man, ur style is real consistent and u got some great color schemes in there too.
word to wat bob said....nice green n pink shit.
molotow, ur stupid, its not 3d
Originally posted by TricksForKids@May 20 2006, 08:26 AM
jank, and soer, lets do a three person exchange, i.e i write jank, jank writes soer, soer writes regs if you guys are down anywas, was nice and drunk last night fucking around with a drunken handstyle, haha,
Peace
and a next sketch that i got no damn crits on :(
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/5839/lastscan23px.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/7920/lastscan6my.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thanks for comments all ^^
regz - i'm keen on that, i'll do a quick sketch of your name
your handstyle's nice, liking the piece too, though the s is a bit boring
molotow_15
05-20-2006, 10:56 AM
Originally posted by BoRe-719-+May 20 2006, 09:22 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (BoRe-719- @ May 20 2006, 09:22 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Voze@May 20 2006, 07:16 AM
nice shit jank - although the z looks a little like a g to me with the extensions..
did you do that exchange thing? i'll cook one for you now anyway :)
some new shit, new dub i was trying, i think it flows more than the other one, and some other stuff
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook13.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook15.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook12.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook11.jpg
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i304/brrap_brrap/bbook14.jpg
nice man, ur style is real consistent and u got some great color schemes in there too.
word to wat bob said....nice green n pink shit.
molotow, ur stupid, its not 3d [/b][/quote]
what u on about 3.d ?
??
tricks i was fuk bored... fuk revision.....
quk simple biro bishbash
regs
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/regsdoodlage.jpg
tea dee sea
05-20-2006, 11:12 AM
yoo jank i dont like how the letters connect it would look better if they werent.peace.
AoAssis
05-20-2006, 11:14 AM
That air soft gun is mad hard core.
molotow_15
05-20-2006, 11:25 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/untitledvb.jpg
haha somert i composed on m.s paint
esnet1r
05-20-2006, 12:42 PM
Originally posted by near+May 19 2006, 06:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (near @ May 19 2006, 06:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-near@May 18 2006, 05:32 PM
birfday card for gf's 25th...says Laurén (i realise the e is small it was to preserve some sort of symmetry and fit the piece on the page lol :P) haha yeh no fills...i find that people who dont do graff have a hard time appreciating fills lol lemme know what ya think i guess (not that i can change it)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/ldgpiece.jpg
crits on my birthday card lol it got pushed off the page in like 1 post so i bumped it.... the mysterious esnetoner (:P) that first pen is phat...can i come over? [/b][/quote]
fat up letters, nice use of orange and blue, the heart is half shady but girls love that shit so yeah
Originally posted by esnet1r+May 20 2006, 12:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (esnet1r @ May 20 2006, 12:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by near@May 19 2006, 06:17 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-near@May 18 2006, 05:32 PM
birfday card for gf's 25th...says Laurén (i realise the e is small it was to preserve some sort of symmetry and fit the piece on the page lol :P) haha yeh no fills...i find that people who dont do graff have a hard time appreciating fills lol lemme know what ya think i guess (not that i can change it)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/ldgpiece.jpg
crits on my birthday card lol it got pushed off the page in like 1 post so i bumped it.... the mysterious esnetoner (:P) that first pen is phat...can i come over?
fat up letters, nice use of orange and blue, the heart is half shady but girls love that shit so yeah [/b][/quote]
I don't like how all the letters are big except the E but whatever its still sick.
Nice shit voze, so clean, i always thought u wuold be a 16 year old white skater boy, but ur not. Lol tht was random, keep up ur nicely coloured shit.
Tonkaha!!1!
05-20-2006, 01:49 PM
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/6581/dscn37538ly.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img368.imageshack.us/img368/3595/dscn37548bd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/1958/dscn37520dn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
my kitty wanted to be noticed, he prolly has add.
http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/3663/dscn37598oq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CRITS?
molotow_15
05-20-2006, 01:51 PM
Originally posted by Zire@May 20 2006, 12:48 PM
soz double post.
not double 5
uber fast .. no 3d.. it slants... ader for a 12oz budddyyyy. and the top lkeft arrow ruins the symmetry...meh..
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/Aderquickerthanshitdoodle.jpg
tonk i would prefer it if the T was the same height as the other letters.. tho i no the problems that caouses... not bad m8
Tonkaha!!1!
05-20-2006, 02:32 PM
thanks what should i do about is, and look at my kitty!
-task-
05-20-2006, 03:41 PM
crits?
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/task2.jpg
molotow_15
05-20-2006, 03:46 PM
looks nice though
-task-
05-20-2006, 04:01 PM
thanks, i know the pic is mad shitty though sry.
*EDIT*
ok added outline to it, once again sry for the shittiness of the flick
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/tizzassk.jpg
AceONE
05-20-2006, 04:33 PM
that seems good, finish it and get a better pic
lose all the bits that you have and does it say TASK if so the K doesn't look much like a K and S needs some work too
molotow_15
05-20-2006, 04:45 PM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/aaronsketchbs.jpg
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/woman.gif
yh shes from gta ;)
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/uhh.gif
crittttttttttttts
-task-
05-20-2006, 04:46 PM
ye it says TASK, thanks for the crits, i know the s and k are real shitty but im just tryin to atleast start to develop my style sum more so it was just a rough sketch i ended up coloring.
son, ur shit sucks, work on ur charcters and peices, dey look like scribble, plus theres no way ur better than me cuz u trace ur charcters
molotow_15
05-20-2006, 04:50 PM
fuck off you stupid toy
ur face says bitch ass scrawny lil toy
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/1483/aaronme7ws.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
so dont talk unless ur gona show sumthin thats worth a peep , aaron
ion-i
05-20-2006, 05:38 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 20 2006, 12:50 PM
fuck off you stupid toy
http://www.dragonkore.com/files/images/lold.jpg
AMAZ tbscrew
05-20-2006, 06:12 PM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 20 2006, 04:15 PM
ur face says bitch ass scrawny lil toy
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/1483/aaronme7ws.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
so dont talk unless ur gona show sumthin thats worth a peep , aaron
owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned owned
fuckin toy. dahahaha
DnK/eeK
05-20-2006, 06:19 PM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 20 2006, 04:15 PM
ur face says bitch ass scrawny lil toy
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/1483/aaronme7ws.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
so dont talk unless ur gona show sumthin thats worth a peep , aaron
looks like hes from nsync
is that molotow oh my god the famous molotow that traces disney characters
[biohazard]
05-20-2006, 06:26 PM
ay all tryna work on my shit still. I kinda like the red one the most (even tho the "e" suuuxxx) but um gimme some crits and shit thankx http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v155/polishpimp75/graff%20art/Picture022.jpg
?..DeMo..?
05-20-2006, 06:42 PM
Originally posted by ?..DeMo..?@May 19 2006, 08:33 PM
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/9999999999.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/1010101010.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/asscheeklolol.jpg
ok well the first one is jsut somthing i did today ya know the second one is the samew thing ipsoted last time jsut a better m i think and a better ! ya know
and the third one is jsut a random word alright critz plz??
critz ??
bumpin because i ddint get nay critz b4 so help me now plz and dont be tooo harsh
Hater-AiD~>
05-20-2006, 06:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
HeAm:oNeR
05-20-2006, 07:07 PM
demo- i like the first one but like if u look at it closely it really isnt that clean u cud see like black lines through the letters the 3d comin onto the sketch a lil try to clean that up make ur o smaller and work on ur D a lil theres too many extensions but ovall good im not really feelin the throw.. a bit to plain and the con i wasnt feelin too much why u writin con ne way
?..DeMo..?
05-20-2006, 07:09 PM
nah i wanted to jsut preacitce lettera ya know
Work on the 3d a lot try using one point perspective. Keep your lines straighter and if you don't know what one point perspective is then google it
Kry_20CC
05-20-2006, 08:54 PM
haha it seems like no one likes molotow...i just think his girl is shit
lol hard body, i hate him too, he talks alota trash
AMAZ tbscrew
05-20-2006, 09:38 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture006.jpg
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i201/Joe-_2006/DSCF0819.jpg
messing around with some 3d, crits?
AoAssis
05-20-2006, 09:46 PM
Well stop "messing around" and get your God damn 3-D right.
jerm_mtl
05-20-2006, 10:00 PM
i just the the da vinci code:):)
ghostbusta5
05-20-2006, 10:55 PM
what do you want a medal?
ghostbusta5
05-20-2006, 10:57 PM
and i wouldnt write DEMO cause there is someone who posted in the toy bomb/piece thread who burns you
P.S which is pretty bad
Z FUSE
05-21-2006, 12:14 AM
tips are appreciated. (it's the bottom one)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7554/swirlpiece7bd.jpg
beone
05-21-2006, 12:30 AM
what ive been doin the past week
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/239668.jpg
impossible picture
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/239669.jpg
fuck the hands
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/239671.jpg
sketch was better
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/239672.jpg
shading is bad and it is a lil fucked on proportions
looks like stuff you've been doing in school, not in your blackbook. there's another thread for that
molotow_15
05-21-2006, 05:47 AM
Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my 'tracings' are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
Originally posted by Z FUSE@May 20 2006, 11:14 PM
tips are appreciated. (it's the bottom one)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7554/swirlpiece7bd.jpg
the bottom one's pretty sick - nice work
molotow_15
05-21-2006, 06:58 AM
http://www.foofinu.com/shark_sketch.jpg
how fucking dope is this
Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 07:02 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 21 2006, 04:47 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ May 21 2006, 04:47 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Hater-AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my 'tracings' are still winnin your SHIT in the battle [/b][/quote]
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead
you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have
molotow_15
05-21-2006, 07:03 AM
Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>+May 21 2006, 06:02 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ May 21 2006, 06:02 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 04:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater-AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my 'tracings' are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead
you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have [/b][/quote]
call it quits then
Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 07:08 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 21 2006, 06:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ May 21 2006, 06:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:02 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 04:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater-AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my 'tracings' are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead
you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have
call it quits then [/b][/quote]
nah..ill leave that up to you
molotow_15
05-21-2006, 07:09 AM
Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>+May 21 2006, 06:08 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ May 21 2006, 06:08 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 06:03 AM
Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:02 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 04:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater-AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my 'tracings' are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead
you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have
call it quits then
nah..ill leave that up to you [/b][/quote]
your to much of a fucking kid to do that
bitch
Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 07:11 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 21 2006, 06:09 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ May 21 2006, 06:09 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:08 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 06:03 AM
Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:02 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 04:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater-AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my 'tracings' are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead
you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have
call it quits then
nah..ill leave that up to you
your to much of a fucking kid to do that
bitch [/b][/quote]
im going to stop spamming..ill leave it to the pro
take it away
molotow_15
05-21-2006, 07:12 AM
Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>+May 21 2006, 06:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ May 21 2006, 06:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 06:09 AM
Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:08 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 06:03 AM
Originally posted by Hater-AiD~>@May 21 2006, 06:02 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 21 2006, 04:47 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater-AiD~>@May 20 2006, 05:57 PM
molotow must have a lot of other lil boys pictures on his pc
lil faggot
if i saw u id smash your face
my 'tracings' are still winnin your SHIT in the battle
shut the fuck up..weve both been in the lead
you have no excuse lil bitch.youve been writing way longer then i have
call it quits then
nah..ill leave that up to you
your to much of a fucking kid to do that
bitch
im going to stop spamming..ill leave it to the pro
take it away [/b][/quote]
haha im goin now anyway to some coursework
please, stop it you two. and stop posting stuff that's not yours or not graffiti.. this is the blackbooks thread not the school art or gay beef thread
that shark thing is crazy
doodle for vare
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/varedoodleage.jpg
k, this would be my 3rd sketch that i have done, took some advice that people posted on my last one. Hopefully after a few more simple ones i will be moving on to more complicated sketches.
http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/9606/nick9am.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
uh... :(
i'd stay with the simples for now, until you've got them perfect. right now it's far from perfect. work on your colouring too, keep the colours in one direction
ye hes right m8... if i was u i would just whip out a pencil and sketch without any pens for about a weeek nonstop then try colouring again... keep it really simple tho
gave 3d a go ant. bad spacing.. does it work at all tho?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/3d-1stattmeptANT.jpg
actually looks dope, although what i would change - i'd make the right side of the a overlape the middle horizontal bit, and yeah, spacing, bring the T in
cheers m8 thats helpful..ye i wudve had the left side of the T over the N but i was thinkin as i was going to didnt plan that. cheers vozee
-task-
05-21-2006, 08:57 AM
new sketch from last night, getting better?
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y272/sk8rpaco/tizzask2.jpg
i dont like how the letters flare at their ends... like u see how the K gets wider at every end? i dnt like that. also the S looks a bit squished and its top vertical bit is waaay too fat
and the 3d should all go in one direction, bt u got the 3d off the K going to the right and the 3d off the T going left..... i also dont like the big swirly mcswirl that swirls around it.]
not bad tho
obseen
05-21-2006, 09:10 AM
Originally posted by Jank@May 21 2006, 07:18 AM
ye hes right m8... if i was u i would just whip out a pencil and sketch without any pens for about a weeek nonstop then try colouring again... keep it really simple tho
gave 3d a go ant. bad spacing.. does it work at all tho?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/3d-1stattmeptANT.jpg
this is quite nice
nice 3d jank ur goin with the more organic flow and u got the shadin down almost, but look at the bottom of the t... u shld make it so u cant see the underneeth of it, wld be cool if it started from behind the bottom of the n if u no wat i meen, hers one of mine, im tryin to work my way through a real mental dryspell, not that gd but wat the fuck ehh, sez ins
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image037.jpg
obseen
05-21-2006, 09:26 AM
hot hot hot
hey seti that is mad!!
how do you do it? do you use that horizon line technique with the vanishing points?
thats how i started, but now i just draw one block and then add to it, imagining the vanishing points, but sometimes i switch the points while drawing to bring in a new dimention, an sometimes i use a curved line with the point perspective, i cant realy explain it man
toxus
05-21-2006, 09:39 AM
oh, i was doing 3d aswell..., i need to work on the colouring, i'll colour it later if it can be botherd...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/P5210065.jpg
and yeah, JE, short for JESB :D
-task-
05-21-2006, 09:43 AM
Originally posted by Jank@May 21 2006, 08:05 AM
i dont like how the letters flare at their ends... like u see how the K gets wider at every end? i dnt like that. also the S looks a bit squished and its top vertical bit is waaay too fat
and the 3d should all go in one direction, bt u got the 3d off the K going to the right and the 3d off the T going left..... i also dont like the big swirly mcswirl that swirls around it.]
not bad tho
Thanks for the help. Im just tryin to develop a style other than bubble letters wich i feel like ive got down. As for the 3d i used 2 points thats why half faces one way and the other half faces the other way. but thansk again for the crits
cheers for the help seti.. haha this page has turned all 3dish! toxus that looks solid to me. not bad at all m8. ill have another go at 3d an post it up laterrrr
toxus
05-21-2006, 10:18 AM
yeah, i might try and take 3d down :P, i'll have some more up soon, with some basic letter simples and throws...
Graffti has gone all 3 dimensional. :huh:
TIP... wen drawing 3d try puttin the points of perspective above and below the piece and build ur letters allong a horozontal line, this'll make a piece that looks more like one object with a flow rather that parts of it lookin different ways.
toxus
05-21-2006, 10:31 AM
Originally posted by Seti@May 21 2006, 03:27 PM
TIP... wen drawing 3d try puttin the points of perspective above and below the piece and build ur letters allong a horozontal line, this'll make a piece that looks more like one object with a flow rather that parts of it lookin different ways.
yeah, i done two point perspective on my one ;)
jus try it with the points above and below man
did another quicky 1... 2nd try at 3d...T looks a bit too muchj like a 7 now and the top o the N is just fukered..... any other crits????
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/3d-2ndattemptANT.jpg
AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 10:57 AM
dam i wish i could do this abstract shit but...i cant..well i probly could if i tryed.... B)
thats much betta jank, hers a lust...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image038.jpg
AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 11:10 AM
wana point out where these letters are? lol
one sec then u illiterate fool!!!
AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 11:13 AM
:( :( i
ther u go then. he left bar of the t goes behind the s
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/lust.jpg
-MaCKiE-
05-21-2006, 11:19 AM
sickness
AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 11:20 AM
ohhhh shit..thats is pretty dope..but if u cant read 3d.....ur fucked lol :wub: :)
\(SIN)/[again]
05-21-2006, 11:32 AM
My newest throw(I have yet to paint it though):
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/deckthrow.jpg
Some wierdo htc thing:
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/htct.jpg
Sticker:
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Stickers/sinsticky.jpg
couple pages from my blackbookie, went a bit overboard with the colours on the first one, it was the first day i had owned em so i thought id betta try em out
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/61d3653d.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/48066fab.jpg
ion-i
05-21-2006, 12:04 PM
Originally posted by ion-i@May 19 2006, 10:30 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/ioni_sketch5-19-06.gif
fuckin around an whatnot, came out with this.
bump
and nice work seti, im feelin that first one. :D
I dont like the bits off the I's and the other add ons of the I's but it's good
vare_187uk
05-21-2006, 12:10 PM
seti sick feeling that lust and other stuff
jank keep trying man getting good but needs alot of werk
sin try simpler throw letters take a look about man theres plenty of stuff to look at throws etc in the pieces throws threads on here get inspired
ioni keep working that one outline for now over and over till you get it how u want it man
THis will be my first pencil sketch. I know the shading is pretty bad and the "O" is a little messed up, tried to be a little creative.
Critz please
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/2795/firstsketch6ta.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Kry_20CC
05-21-2006, 12:46 PM
the o's creative and the b needs some work but the c man, i dont even no what you're tryna do. its way to skinny comapred to the rest of it. nice try tho
http://i73.photobucket.com/albums/i201/Joe-_2006/joe.jpg
stop postin horrible "peices". stick to sketching
liber1
05-21-2006, 02:44 PM
joe that sucks, but im sure its your first time, jus keep practicing, and fix that bs you call 3-d. 3-D can only bee seen in one directionmto make it look like its popping up, that is 2-d you have their. and one more thing dont ever ever ever ever ever ever EVER EVER EVER EVER write your own name.
liber1
05-21-2006, 02:47 PM
http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/911/00001013tk.th.jpg (http://img343.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00001013tk.jpg)well its certainly not good but any thing i could do to make it better
ps sorry for the shitty camera take
joe's shit looks better than urs lol
liber1
05-21-2006, 02:58 PM
just gimmie the crits asshole
AoAssis
05-21-2006, 03:02 PM
Do you really think that after you called him an asshole he is going to give you critz? By all means no. And i thnik saying " joe's shit looks better than urs lol" is a crit. Joes shit sucks and if your shits worse the Joe;s that should be some inspiration to go sketch some more.
Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 03:02 PM
Originally posted by Code@May 21 2006, 11:36 AM
THis will be my first pencil sketch. I know the shading is pretty bad and the "O" is a little messed up, tried to be a little creative.
Critz please
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/2795/firstsketch6ta.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
get rid of the line in the b and make the c fatter..if your going to do an "o
" like that i would suggest making it cleaner and even on all sides
heres sum crits dick head: learn how to color, get sum better letter structure, let me see YOUR 3-d and dont put sum elses work into the dirt if urs is worse
liber1
05-21-2006, 03:11 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis@May 21 2006, 02:02 PM
Do you really think that after you called him an asshole he is going to give you critz? By all means no. And i thnik saying " joe's shit looks better than urs lol" is a crit. Joes shit sucks and if your shits worse the Joe;s that should be some inspiration to go sketch some more.
that aint a fuckin crit its just some dickhole trying to be a smart ass. and amuc why didnt you just say that shit in thefirtst place, damn smart ass people.
toxus
05-21-2006, 03:12 PM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060521/11/0/1/e/01e83c7bdb48930d9ae8b243c93c0d46200605210_full.jpg
just another J...
liber1
05-21-2006, 03:13 PM
good outline
yea i like how thats startin up
Ironik
05-21-2006, 03:51 PM
Didnt know were to put this
its a sketch from that anime cartoon Interstella 5555 with the DAFT PUNK music
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3931/inter0089lj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
tell me wat yall think?
vare_187uk
05-21-2006, 03:55 PM
fuckin fresh ^^^^^^^^
Originally posted by Ironik@May 21 2006, 03:51 PM
Didnt know were to put this
its a sketch from that anime cartoon Interstella 5555 with the DAFT PUNK music
http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3931/inter0089lj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
tell me wat yall think?
fuckin dope dude it should have been in either this or the characters thread but still its ill
Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 04:53 PM
that sketch is clean as hell ironik
heres a new throwie i tried..critz plz
http://img455.imageshack.us/img455/6605/newthrowie1bg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ur R looks like an S, and i dont like the rest of the letters or the 3-d
Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 04:58 PM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 21 2006, 03:56 PM
ur R looks like an S, and i dont like the rest of the letters or the 3-d
its not 3d..its a shadown..i dunno if i did it right but its a shadow
ill help u out, ill post sumthin in a few
Kry_20CC
05-21-2006, 05:05 PM
hater...i dont like how the letters lines go into each other like the e going into the top right part of the T for an example
nice toxus il like it alot,
a quicky
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/8610/photo00767hz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 05:09 PM
ill try it without the letters going into each other pretty soon and see how it looks
ironik that craaazy gd!!!! hater.... not bad id try doin blocky letters rather than bubbles ...
tried another 1
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/3d-3rdattmeptANT.jpg
thats fuckin mint man props
i think u shud use pencil, and i think those are the worst letters u cud possibly use, i kno from experience, cuz i used to use that tag, ANT
AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 05:13 PM
not feelin that n
Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 05:14 PM
wouldnt a blocky letter throwie look like a piece though?
nice 3d though
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/4897/ththe0ec.png (http://imageshack.us)
stick to simple stuff
beefgerky
05-21-2006, 06:11 PM
ew.
beefgerky
05-21-2006, 06:44 PM
shut up.
take the beef sum where else gerk
aoime
05-21-2006, 07:03 PM
haha
AMAZ tbscrew
05-21-2006, 07:04 PM
take it to the stove <_<
beefgerky
05-21-2006, 07:04 PM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 21 2006, 06:01 PM
take the beef sum where else gerk
can i dry hump you?
look at the sig:
GERK1 WAW=
gerk1 what a wanker
sorry dont mean to start beef, the opportunity was just too good to pass up :D
Originally posted by cord@May 21 2006, 06:09 PM
look at the sig:
GERK1 WAW=
gerk1 what a wanker
sorry dont mean to start beef, the opportunity was just too good to pass up :D
sorry no, same to u gerk
beefgerky
05-21-2006, 07:17 PM
haha. best abreviation yet.
''SCC''
05-21-2006, 07:39 PM
gerk1 Wants a Wang
liber1
05-21-2006, 07:43 PM
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/9193/00001026wa.th.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00001026wa.jpg)crits?
Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 07:43 PM
entry for a battle gainst me and uhhh
http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/3797/dscf16730ue.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
im going to get smashed but it was all in fun
liber1
05-21-2006, 07:48 PM
hater man that bkshadow ist tha bomb man. what bout mine?
liber1
05-21-2006, 07:48 PM
hater man that bkshadow ist tha bomb man. what bout mine?
liber1
05-21-2006, 07:48 PM
hater man that bkshadow ist tha bomb man. what bout mine?
liber1
05-21-2006, 07:49 PM
whoa sorry for the trip post damn dial up
jerm_mtl
05-21-2006, 07:54 PM
ya dial up sucks ass something better like a modem, gasshhh
Hater-AiD~>
05-21-2006, 07:57 PM
Originally posted by liber1@May 21 2006, 01:47 PM
http://img343.imageshack.us/img343/911/00001013tk.th.jpg (http://img343.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00001013tk.jpg)well its certainly not good but any thing i could do to make it better
ps sorry for the shitty camera take
i would make letters same size..like the fatness of the dot on the i
stuff like that..but yoru starting right if your new to graf
Originally posted by ados@May 19 2006, 02:06 PM
bored, tryin some shit out.... crits would be kool.
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/pncilwackness.jpg
i put a slug in yer heart like an atmosphere fan.
ion-i
05-21-2006, 08:13 PM
Originally posted by ''SCC''@May 21 2006, 03:39 PM
gerk1 Wants a Wang
Who the fuck are you?
Your not funny, go away. The joke died right when you spoke.
klipa
05-21-2006, 08:19 PM
nice work ados but not reeling the lower case R.
a simple blitz quick exchange for meng
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/5011/cimg18826al.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
tea dee sea
05-21-2006, 08:23 PM
yoo klipa not bad u shouldnt hav disconected the e and the g looks kinda like an s
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7586/scanert9pd.png (http://imageshack.us)
siche
05-21-2006, 09:09 PM
Any Critz>?
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/1305/sc0fv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
AoAssis
05-21-2006, 09:25 PM
Originally posted by cord@May 21 2006, 06:09 PM
look at the sig:
GERK1 WAW=
gerk1 what a wanker
sorry dont mean to start beef, the opportunity was just too good to pass up :D
Actualy its Wanking at Wendy's.
tea dee sea
05-21-2006, 09:37 PM
amuk i like that work on your tag a lil
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/1299/yg2au.png (http://imageshack.us)
quik shit for fosi
molotow_15
05-22-2006, 05:57 AM
and it is shit
Originally posted by Amuk@May 21 2006, 09:02 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7586/scanert9pd.png (http://imageshack.us)
i kinda like this the char is a little off but w/e
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 22 2006, 04:57 AM
and it is shit
battle me pussy
Hater-AiD~>
05-22-2006, 07:29 AM
haha..just about everybody on this forum has battled molotow
even me..lol
heres a mome..any crits?
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image042.jpg
im about to bite that style, i dont see ur E
oi dont bite biatch, especialy not off me.
MENG!
05-22-2006, 07:55 AM
Quick random one for Kilipa
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7307/klipabombingscience3qj.gif
Critz (Anything other than 'your suck' is appreciated. :D)
Originally posted by Seti@May 22 2006, 06:52 AM
oi dont bite biatch, especialy not off me.
i was jokin dick, and i can use that block style, cuz u aint come up wit it
wateva mate. i developed this style so it dont look like anyone elses, so fuck u mate, come back wen u got a style of ur own, cz right now u seem like a no talent prick.
u think ur talented cuz u can draw blocks, i got my own style, and i cud beat u in a battle using urs, iight? dont fuckin bring beef here becuz i made a joke about using that style. im not ur mate, stupid ass fuck
im out 1
come on then, its a callout
seti will burn you amuk.
nice work seti, you're style is awesome but i have seen similar stuff
molotow_15
05-22-2006, 09:05 AM
i'll fukin battle u anyday amuk your wank
your shit is a-muk
jerm_mtl
05-22-2006, 10:20 AM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 21 2006, 08:02 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7586/scanert9pd.png (http://imageshack.us)
thats nice
klipa
05-22-2006, 10:28 AM
amuk i think you should simple things up a bit also black in the 3d so i can see the letters better
safe
hungr
05-22-2006, 10:29 AM
i got bored and did a rate throw
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/rate.jpg
sorry for the large amount of white left over :)
its for a few pages back
jerm_mtl
05-22-2006, 11:08 AM
thats a pretty cool throw
obseen
05-22-2006, 11:30 AM
im sure ive seen those letters somewhere before though
nephsike
05-22-2006, 11:48 AM
Originally posted by Amuk@May 22 2006, 08:06 AM
u think ur talented cuz u can draw blocks, i got my own style, and i cud beat u in a battle using urs, iight? dont fuckin bring beef here becuz i made a joke about using that style. im not ur mate, stupid ass fuck
im out 1
you have style :lol:
word^
seti would own your ass
molotow_15
05-22-2006, 12:02 PM
Originally posted by nephsike+May 22 2006, 10:48 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nephsike @ May 22 2006, 10:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Amuk@May 22 2006, 08:06 AM
u think ur talented cuz u can draw blocks, i got my own style, and i cud beat u in a battle using urs, iight? dont fuckin bring beef here becuz i made a joke about using that style. im not ur mate, stupid ass fuck
im out 1
you have style :lol: [/b][/quote]
u brought beef
so did i but not on purpose
lovely beef.
dooooodle.. this is what happens when tehy try to make me do maths:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doodlewithfishcity3d.jpg
molotow_15
05-22-2006, 12:55 PM
nice chariks
MENG!
05-22-2006, 12:56 PM
Originally posted by MENG!@May 22 2006, 06:55 AM
Quick random one for Kilipa
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/7307/klipabombingscience3qj.gif
Critz (Anything other than 'your suck' is appreciated. :D)
Bumpity
wot? ur gonna bump ur own shit and not comment on mine? tutututut we dont like that.... fat boy!
er.... stop with all the overlappings of the letters. stop with the extensions like the top and bottom of the K. go as simple as u possibly can. cos it doesnt look very gd im afraid and thats because ur letters have no basic foundation. as every1 says, do simple simple letters for a while at least m8..... and outline thinnner and giv it a 3d. i rekon.
http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/1854/photo00786rb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
i think its main prob is that the black lines are all ... unstraight.. like they wiggly... like u cant draw a straight line...... plan it out in pencil first... apart from that it dont look too bad. wots it say? jedi? jedt?
it sais jedt and im not gunna use black for outline next time im gunna just fade the outline in to the couler
molotow_15
05-22-2006, 01:37 PM
Originally posted by Jank@May 22 2006, 11:52 AM
lovely beef.
dooooodle.. this is what happens when tehy try to make me do maths:
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/doodlewithfishcity3d.jpg
bump for jank
DistortedThoughtz
05-22-2006, 01:57 PM
Janks Is Nice.. Yeah I 'Doooooodle' During Maths Class Too Lol..
Smer - Its Nice.. I Like Your Style..
vare_187uk
05-22-2006, 02:02 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/kopt.jpg
needs works
but was a doodle for a new tag im thinking of
http://img464.imageshack.us/img464/8227/throwies2ms.th.jpg (http://img464.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwies2ms.jpg)
http://img20.imageshack.us/img20/8009/piece0gp.th.jpg (http://img20.imageshack.us/my.php?image=piece0gp.jpg)
crits and/or feedback please.
vare_187uk
05-22-2006, 02:22 PM
again another time where someone has asked for critz and gave any on the above even though i never asked for it i still expect it !
ps the piece in blue has some but not alot of letter structure work with it
molotow_15
05-22-2006, 02:23 PM
someone's style im tryin needs a lotta work still
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molo.jpg
crits so far...
vare_187uk
05-22-2006, 02:24 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 22 2006, 01:23 PM
someone's style im tryin needs a lotta work still
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molo.jpg
crits so far...
some elses style your trying
what does that make you achieve ???
hah my bad dude. i like it give it some color though not just pencil, i like the tag underneath it too
molotow_15
05-22-2006, 02:26 PM
Originally posted by vare_187uk+May 22 2006, 01:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (vare_187uk @ May 22 2006, 01:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-molotow_15@May 22 2006, 01:23 PM
someone's style im tryin needs a lotta work still
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molo.jpg
crits so far...
some elses style your trying
what does that make you achieve ??? [/b][/quote]
its not a bite
a fukin style
CRITS NOT BEEF!
vare_187uk
05-22-2006, 02:28 PM
bite a style a tag or a letter is a bite in my eyes! thats like me starting to bite daim
molotow_15
05-22-2006, 02:28 PM
i got rid of it
im not havin people beefin
mor than half gd stuff
molotow_15
05-22-2006, 02:29 PM
Originally posted by vare_187uk@May 22 2006, 01:28 PM
bite a style a tag or a letter is a bite in my eyes! thats like me starting to bite daim
people try other people's style loads of time on ere
and i had permission as well
vare_187uk
05-22-2006, 02:31 PM
you had permission thats makes it so much better really doesnt it
ps i wasnt beefing im just playing it straight
its all about uniqueness this day and age many people say all the main styles are taken eg 3d wild simple try and come up with summat a bit original from your simples !
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