Tot Black Books

[Belisle]

Originally posted by jerm_mtl+May 25 2006, 11:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (jerm_mtl @ May 25 2006, 11:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 25 2006, 06:08 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 24 2006, 09:39 PM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/921/dscf16866gg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
quick karak i did of a picture of my friend..dont mind the piece i know its crap..i just wanted to attempt to fill the page
bump


looks good jank..are you using a scanner? i think your stuff would look a lot better on camera because on a scanner every little detail shows
im feeling the karak but the piece ain&#39;t working&#39; <_< [/b][/quote]
yo jerm

[jerm_mtl]

belisle t fif

[smer]

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8568/photo00860bg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by jerm_mtl+May 25 2006, 11:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (jerm_mtl @ May 25 2006, 11:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 25 2006, 06:08 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 24 2006, 09:39 PM
http://img59.imageshack.us/img59/921/dscf16866gg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
quick karak i did of a picture of my friend..dont mind the piece i know its crap..i just wanted to attempt to fill the page
bump


looks good jank..are you using a scanner? i think your stuff would look a lot better on camera because on a scanner every little detail shows
im feeling the karak but the piece ain&#39;t working&#39; <_< [/b][/quote]
yea i know..i did it quick to fill up the page

[Beckone]

thats sick bruv i like

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by smer@May 25 2006, 11:34 AM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8568/photo00860bg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
better than any fuckers on ere for ages

[Beckone]

looks like it flows well

[vare_187uk]

Originally posted by molotow_15+May 25 2006, 11:40 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ May 25 2006, 11:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-smer@May 25 2006, 11:34 AM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/8568/photo00860bg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
better than any fuckers on ere for ages [/b][/quote]
this isnt actually that good to tell the truth the A is non proportionate to the K
which is a massive let down

id sugest drawinging it again and making it all same witdh etc &#33;

[smer]

il do it agen m8

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/wsv.jpg
blacked the outline to make it a bit sweeter and added 3d i think it looks a damn site cleaner to be honest &#33;

any others?

[Mse]

to everyone who says arrows are wack
shut up
stop riding gesus&#39; dick arrows are the shit"
e is fire

[nephsike]

Originally posted by vare_187uk@May 25 2006, 01:30 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/wsv.jpg
blacked the outline to make it a bit sweeter and added 3d i think it looks a damn site cleaner to be honest &#33;

any others?
what the hell is goin on with your 3d???

[pace1]

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/stisketch2.jpg
quick STI sketch need suggestions on fill

[smer]

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/4581/photo00888bw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
in couler

[aces]

nice coloring but as vare said it is poor letter structure

[beefgerky]

1 word. runci. no not because of the dots, because of the stucture and what not, im glad your getting influence, but tone it down a little bit.

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Originally posted by Mse@May 25 2006, 08:04 AM
i like the bottom one

bill cheese wheel learn anatomy and calm that shit down it looks like a 12 yr old drawing monsters
Dude, can you not tell, that i am in no way trying to draw my people anatomically correct? They are supposed to have exaggerated features, im not going for realism here.....

And i want to see you do a cooler lookin &#39;monster&#39;.

Nice avatar btw.

[Jank]

smer i like it but the A is too fat compared to the other letters i rekon..
another doodle for the battle... im havin so much fun with this&#33;
thoughts?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/singleletter2-S.jpg

[Amuk]

Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@May 25 2006, 02:37 PM
Dude, can you not tell, that i am in no way trying to draw my people anatomically correct? They are supposed to have exaggerated features, im not going for realism here.....

And i want to see you do a cooler lookin &#39;monster&#39;.

Nice avatar btw.
in my opinion, that certain style u got is an excuse to have bad, ugly, just "wrong" looking characters. i think ur being lazy like u just dont care how poorly drawn they look. no offense, thats just my opinion, maybe that is a good style, and it just aint lookin good in my eyes.

[klipa]

jank the spikey bits take away from it abit and the bottom of the s is a bit cluttered as oppossed to the top other than that your developing the style well keep at it.

heres one for the battle maybee
http://img345.imageshack.us/img345/9559/cimg19133hv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[cord]

wow nice &#39;&#39;b&#39;&#39;&#33;&#33;

sweet coloring man.

any tips for me?

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0279.jpg

[klipa]

/&#092;/&#092; sicko fill man a few lil thingys

try crossing the a and put a hole in the r, also try not takeing your 3d back to the vanishing point i mean its not a bad thing just might look neater on that particular peice.
shorten the end of the L and loose the blue splashs

oh and tight handie
peace

[artist]

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/3225/10002165fe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/7128/10002192cy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

any thoughts???

[artist]

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/3225/10002165fe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/7128/10002192cy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

any thoughts???

[artist]

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/3225/10002165fe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/7128/10002192cy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

any thoughts???

[vare_187uk]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/saroe.jpg

one for saroe in the toy exchange again

and a vare that i didnt wanna take any further it was leading nowhere

[vare_187uk]

edit my bad :rolleyes:

[klipa]

double dip

artist
looks good i like the look of the 2nd one what the look like in normal colour?


you 2 vare, i do like your simples there most pleaseing

the top one tho looks like the letters are trying to leg it organise em and shit will look heavy

[vare_187uk]

i got a thort less posting of the same fucking images yo edit that post for damn sake fucking post whore &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Sluts_r_us]

jus some quick shit from last night..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesimplebbookcolored.jpg

[UKCsire]

not too shabby man...

[TricksForKids]

http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/7912/ohye9ht.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

touched it up a wee bit.....well anyways, crits, hot shit pesk liking the simples and the throwie keep it up

[Jank]

regs even hotter&#33; lovin it m8&#33;

sluts its all nice man. the PE is clean an the throws got a nice little character to it. gd shit i like it.

vare the E is too high and the left hand side bottom of the R is too far righ or too fat. other than that its nice. the Saroe.. is arite... the 3d helps it.... the S is a bit too... long and snake like for my likin n i dont like the O, but it looks decent overall man.



moremoremoremore SSSSssss... cantr stop.. what works?

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/singleletter3-3xSSS.jpg

[cord]

hey tricksforkids, thats pretty cool, i really like the 3d.......

thanks for comments on mine klipa

[RYOT in the city]

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/2422/dsc013039nr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Amuk]

im feelin dat one ^^
http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/5340/456dl.png (http://imageshack.us)
i hate my scanner, supposed to be red

[cord]

ryot and amuk you&#39;re both on the right track.

ryot i just dont like the &#39;&#39;y&#39;&#39;

amuk try coloring the 3d in a complementary color to the fill

[Jank]

ryot:
real nice 3d. i dont like how the O is incomplete. the throws around it are not nice. neither is the blackness...its way too big. the stars look lonely and small. fix that lot and i really like it. also make it brighter. nice letters mainly man keep it up

[vare_187uk]

amuk thats hot in my opinion man that looks fine as it is

[Amuk]

much appreciated, thanks

[Mse]

Originally posted by Amuk+May 25 2006, 03:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Amuk &#064; May 25 2006, 03:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@May 25 2006, 02:37 PM
Dude, can you not tell, that i am in no way trying to draw my people anatomically correct? They are supposed to have exaggerated features, im not going for realism here.....

And i want to see you do a cooler lookin &#39;monster&#39;.

Nice avatar btw.
in my opinion, that certain style u got is an excuse to have bad, ugly, just "wrong" looking characters. i think ur being lazy like u just dont care how poorly drawn they look. no offense, thats just my opinion, maybe that is a good style, and it just aint lookin good in my eyes. [/b]
only time im gonna agree with you amuk
as for not drawing them correctly, i remember simpuhl, infekted and musashi arguing with anzio and me, the arguement was about graffiti fundamentals and this will be the 5000000000th time i have to say this: before you start drawing expressionist shit learn the basics otherwise it looks like <!--QuoteBegin-mse@ ????,??
a twelve year old drawing monsters[/quote]
otherwise amuk was right when he said your just making excuses

[beone]

http://img1.yoxio.com/img/240413.jpg
just some real ruff sketches of some tags i wanna put up tonight can u give me crits please

when u tell me what u like i will do them nicer these r ruff just to get a feel for what u guys think are the best dont judge on neatness please

NVFOUR

[Chop Logic]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/CHOPCHOP.jpg

more looking for crits on the throw up top

[beone]

jant i like all the s&#39;s they are nice

the second one would be good for a wildstyle

and the 3rd and 1st would be good for just a simple peice

[Mse]

wfour is it?
id say get rid of the thing wticking of to the left of the w and just do ordinary letters
choplogic big ups on the throw and blockbuster just keep on doing that

[beone]

NVFOUR

and choplogic i like the throw alot and the block buster would be nicer if the lines were smoother

[Recon]

some gay shit from today <_<

http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/8787/rekon82ot.jpg

[jerm_mtl]

how daym thats suck recon...wow

[jerm_mtl]

i mean SICK, not suck sry hahah

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by Chop Logic@May 25 2006, 06:19 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/CHOPCHOP.jpg

more looking for crits on the throw up top
i dont like ur L change it

[beone]

http://img1.yoxio.com/img/240418.jpg

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by beone@May 25 2006, 06:54 PM
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/240418.jpg
your handstyles improving..i would try to work with number 2..thats just my opinion though

[beone]

^thnx i want a variety tho could u give me any crits??? what to change take away add make bigger etc

[vare_187uk]

Originally posted by Recon@May 25 2006, 06:38 PM
some gay shit from today <_<

http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/8787/rekon82ot.jpg
dont smoke crak or u end up like this hahaha

id better start smokin it get my brain even more mashed up hey

btw nice steez recon ;)

[beone]

recon its not bad keep improving fuck the arrows for a lil tho and improve ur letters then go more complex just do a bunch of pencil sketches then do a peice when ur satisfied

[vare_187uk]

Originally posted by beone@May 25 2006, 07:01 PM
^thnx i want a variety tho could u give me any crits??? what to change take away add make bigger etc
tag small man they look alot neater unless there flared with fat caps then there big in places

just grab one sheet of say a4 paper and start from one corner and work from top to bottom left to right with those handstyles it might take u and hour to complete but ur bound to come out with at least three handstyles u will like

if not turn the page a do exaclty the same with a sharpie preferably or biro

peace ;)

[Recon]

thanks for the crits. I was bored, and mysad attempt at a wildstyle failed.

My arrows look nothing like that normaly :&#092;

[Amuk]

that is deff not gay, u got skill, lose sum arrows tho

[ChRoMa 11820]

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/6123/mezz3d29wr.png (http://imageshack.us)

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/5651/mezz12dn.png (http://imageshack.us)

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/4813/structure18gb.png (http://imageshack.us)

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/1120/crazy11qs.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits please, these are all blackbook pieces

[ghostbusta5]

that 3rd one is weak but all the other look good...but i dont like the 1st ones colours

[ChRoMa 11820]

it was actually a dark purple and a bright yellow on the first one with a light creamy orange but the scanner made it diff. Is the 1st one good tho

and the 3rd one has bad "u"&#39;s so it took away from it and it looks like i tried to hard on it , can anyone give suggestions/crits on the 3rd

[writer45]

got a new name

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5130/ners2lm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AoAssis]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4139/picture0605gq.png (http://imageshack.us)

wheat pastie.

[Amuk]

wtf

[AoAssis]

nice post retard. What just cuz its not graffiti its fucked up? Ever heard of street art, damn open your mind you close minded fuck.

[MF Feed Letter]

i used to wheat paste...its not as fun though....

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1042.jpg

[AoAssis]

I dont like the E on any of them, the best one I think is the one on the right side kinda in the middle, it has all that shit comin out of it, Take all that off that one looks good.

[ados]

what is wheat pasting?

[Amuk]

Originally posted by AoAssis@May 25 2006, 08:26 PM
nice post retard. What just cuz its not graffiti its fucked up? Ever heard of street art, damn open your mind you close minded fuck.
wat the fuck is ur problem, y r u posting a wheat pastie of sum charcs dancing in a black book thread, and y r u so quik to defend urself, are u insecure about sumthing, lucky this is the internet

[AoAssis]

Why do you post comments like wtf? in the blackbook thread, and why am I lucky? Are you going to beat my ass, yes im sure of it. I am quick to defend myself because you make retarded posts. like WTF? When all i did was post a wheat paste i worked on. I posted it in here because I am not going to make a whole new thread just for one of my wheat pastes like a retarded toy. Am I insecure about my self? To tell you the truth yes, but thats not the reason I am quick to defend myself. On another note are YOU insecure about yourself? Implying that you would beat my ass if this wasnt the net? Well go on with your big EGO thinkin all your sketches are dope and what not.

ados- wheat pasting is where you make postters and stuff, then you make a paste out of flower what and stuff and well you paste it up, kinda like stickers I guess is the only way to describe it. If you have ever seen any of mono&#39;s stuff or Lord Breakfasts thats wheat pasting.

[ados]

ahh shit i was too slow, alright thanks dude. sounds like not much fun, but that sketch of yours is good.

[AMAZ tbscrew]

Ao just shut u the fuck up



mf ur shit looks clean playboy

[Amuk]

actually yea i probly wud fuck u up, but im not gonna go on about that cuz it wud be point less,and i never sed my sketches were good, u cud post that in the charcters thread, and i posted wtf, cuz wtf is that doing here, its not exactly the stupidest thing u can say, ur an ass hole

[AMAZ tbscrew]

i dout u could fuck him up.

[What Happened to the Letters?]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@May 25 2006, 09:42 PM
Ao just shut u the fuck up



mf ur shit looks clean playboy
clean yes, good no...

sorry mf, but i dont want you to think its hott yet, it does have alot of potential though....the second one down is best, but to work on the s because it loksl iek a five replace the top of the s with the side bar of the y...in order to see what im sayign tilt your head counterclockwise or to the left until its sideways nad look at what then will seem as its the top of the y...put that on top of your s and itll look more liek an s and not so much a 5...hope this helps you

peace out man stay clean

[kill]

Originally posted by AoAssis@May 25 2006, 08:23 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4139/picture0605gq.png (http://imageshack.us)

wheat pastie.
did u jus draw a pic off the net or did u make this up??
i like the guys face buh thas it womans arm seems too long

[AoAssis]

ya i noticed the womans arm was real long too after I took the last flick. Well the slap i posted a while back was taken from a flyer i found lying around and it had those 2 people dancing on it and I thought it looked real good, so i grabbed it. It was free handed but the idea was takin from a flyer. Thanks for actually commenting on it.

[Amuk]

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@May 25 2006, 08:51 PM
i dout u could fuck him up.
the &#39;beef&#39; has been squashed, dont encourage it, u dont kno me , just shutup

[AMAZ tbscrew]

:mellow: dang that was quick....well anyway your rite i dont know you...but um idk w.e dont tell me 2 shutup you dont know me either.

[Amuk]

Originally posted by kill+May 25 2006, 08:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (kill @ May 25 2006, 08:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AoAssis@May 25 2006, 08:23 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4139/picture0605gq.png (http://imageshack.us)

wheat pastie.
did u jus draw a pic off the net or did u make this up??
i like the guys face buh thas it womans arm seems too long [/b][/quote]
it hink u shud probly work on the woman&#39;s back and her hair, other than that, it looks real good

[What Happened to the Letters?]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@May 25 2006, 05:42 PM
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/7912/ohye9ht.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

touched it up a wee bit.....well anyways, crits, hot shit pesk liking the simples and the throwie keep it up
this right here is style...hot dman man, i remember battling you way back in the day when i wrote faze, but this style you got now is soo original with much structure and it looks hott...kep it up bro

[ados]

he needs to work on his handsyles&#33;

[MF Feed Letter]

thanks letters..and ya i know cuz it is a 5...but ya i know what you mean i try it out

and ao...there is a thread..is called street art

[ados]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@May 25 2006, 09:08 PM
thanks letters..and ya i know cuz it is a 5...but ya i know what you mean i try it out

and ao...there is a thread..is called street art
don&#39;t you have dreadlocks and shit?

[AoAssis]

Yesh I know MF, but i figure my ish isnt good enough to post in there yet, and street art is for art on the street and as you can tell form that pic, that poster is still in my house :P

[writer45]

Originally posted by writer45@May 25 2006, 08:21 PM
got a new name

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5130/ners2lm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump

[ados]

noooooooo, don&#39;t bump shit like that.... im not gonna lie, it&#39;s horrible. surely you must know that. keep sketchin then post when you know its not as bad. just telling ya the truth bud, no hard feelins. do straight simple letters.

[Mexiklan Beaner]

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8735/fridayapril21200638hu.th.jpg (http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fridayapril21200638hu.jpg)

crits?

[Mexiklan Beaner]

damn i messed up. sorry bout that

[ados]

why? and how? you think you would have fixed it and put it in your other post, or just edited it instead of post whorin. not like i really give a fuck tho.

[Mexiklan Beaner]

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8735/fridayapril21200638hu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Volume_one_]

Originally posted by Chop Logic@May 11 2006, 08:32 PM
some sketches from class (I have so little time to draw when I&#39;m at home). Shit colors because all I had was red, blue and black.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/METZOFORTE.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/SHIG.jpg

Crits/Comments/Grievences welcome. Been practicing a lot trying to improve.
Thats a pritty cool sohw

[MF Feed Letter]

Originally posted by ados+May 25 2006, 09:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ados @ May 25 2006, 09:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MF Feed Letter@May 25 2006, 09:08 PM
thanks letters..and ya i know cuz it is a 5...but ya i know what you mean i try it out

and ao...there is a thread..is called street art
don&#39;t you have dreadlocks and shit? [/b][/quote]
um....ya....what does that have to do with anything?...at all?

[TricksForKids]

didnt you know? dreadlocks make you super tag star...gosh...

[ghostbusta5]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture045.jpg

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by Amuk+May 25 2006, 08:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Amuk &#064; May 25 2006, 08:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AoAssis@May 25 2006, 08:26 PM
nice post retard. What just cuz its not graffiti its fucked up? Ever heard of street art, damn open your mind you close minded fuck.
wat the fuck is ur problem, y r u posting a wheat pastie of sum charcs dancing in a black book thread, and y r u so quik to defend urself, are u insecure about sumthing, lucky this is the internet [/b][/quote]

you just got here motherfucker quit acting like oyu own shit you toy ass bitch. its a drawing, drawings go in this thread. dumbfuck. its kids like you that made bs go downhill.

[score1]

what do i need work on its a bad pichttp://img54.imageshack.us/img54/3679/05212006042649pmjpgscore3pm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[ados]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter+May 25 2006, 10:30 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MF Feed Letter @ May 25 2006, 10:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by ados@May 25 2006, 09:11 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-MF Feed Letter@May 25 2006, 09:08 PM
thanks letters..and ya i know cuz it is a 5...but ya i know what you mean i try it out

and ao...there is a thread..is called street art
don&#39;t you have dreadlocks and shit?
um....ya....what does that have to do with anything?...at all? [/b][/quote]
nah just some random irrelavent shit. no worries brosif. fix your 5, make it an S, and work on your E. shits lookin good tho. your improving lots.... what part of van you roam?

[Mexiklan Beaner]

score1, just keep practicin buddy, try workin on ur handstyle. ;)

[score1]

Originally posted by score1@May 26 2006, 12:04 AM
what do i need work on its a bad pichttp://img54.imageshack.us/img54/3679/05212006042649pmjpgscore3pm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i know my tag is shit

[MF Feed Letter]

ados- not really van somuch...only when i go down there but jus surrey/delta..

why you from van?

[Mexiklan Beaner]

its alright homie, we all start out like that. just keep practicin.

[vare_187uk]

FEN ive seen worst keep on trucking man

same goes for u SCORE ive seen worst keep going

[Amuk]

yo tricks wheres the battle thread, urs was due yesterday at 8

[Seti]

yo amuk u done that sketch yet?

[Amuk]

we never agreed on a word, i sed &#39;blaze&#39; u sed sum other shit

[Seti]

u sed blaze an i replyed sayin sound,

[Amuk]

lets stop posting in here, PM me

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by Amuk@May 26 2006, 06:43 AM
yo tricks wheres the battle thread, urs was due yesterday at 8
first of all you never responded, i didnt say some "other shit" i said ill write regs you write amuk, beause theres no way in hell i writing "blaze" because im not some 13 year old who impresses people by smoking weed, im away this weekend so ill set something up on monday, adios

[Amuk]

read the last few posts, i was talkin to seti

[Seti]

yo amuk, my pm&#39;s not workin so here
rules: the only rules we cn realy make is on colour seeing that our styles are totaly different, so how bout 3 colors not including black and white, and it must include a blaze handstyle.

[Amuk]

black and white aren&#39;t really colors anyway, so black, white, and 3 colors, and a handstyle, ok agreed, ill have it for u, if i have time, by tomoro, but i think it mite take longer with all the things i have to do,

[Jank]

ariyte heres me final outline for the battle.... i dont wanna colour it tho&#33;&#33; haha... prolly just do a realy simple fill and a red outline or sumit.... fukin colours ruin everything&#33;
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/singleletter4-FinalSoutline.jpg

[aces]

thats ill dude altho i dont really like the little thing on the S.

[Jank]

the whole thing is an S&#33;&#33; haha cheers m8

[TricksForKids]

Jank you beast why dont you sketch letters like that all the time?

[Jank]

haha cos iv bin working on that letter solidly for like four days... thats wot happens when i do that.. i might try it for my normal letters&#33; colouring it now will have the finished one up later. cheeeeers~&#33;

[klipa]

yeah jank feeling that one muchos better imagin if you spent the same time for a peice it would take you like 16 days but would be fire

[Tren-spain]

yo, i was just wanderin can you do me a favour anyone and quickly design a graffiti with the name "TREN" por favor..
i do shit in mexico..i just wanna have a good thing to start off with, sketch it down a few times then change it to my liking.
thanks man

[klipa]

/&#092;/&#092; i think that would defeat the point of your own style

[Jank]

finnniiished it. ye if i wasnt so lazy i mite try doin a full piece like that haha

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/singleletter5-FINALS.jpg

[ChRoMa 11820]

thats clean as hell i dunno what you were worried about wit color

[Tren-spain]

please people..just a quick sketch...
i wll put my own style into it and change it if you get me.....
please man...
i&#39;ll put your name up in spain mexico and the uk..

[Jank]

tren i mite doodle up a biro outline for u later. im off for a bit o foot now but i mite roll one out later. and boohooo at least try doing it urself&#33;&#33;&#33;

**and thanks Chroma.. always nice to hear that&#33;&#33; haha

[ChRoMa 11820]

tren.. end yourself for the viewing pleasure of everyone on this thread

[Tren-spain]

man...i try n try...i can get some good stuff but i want to see other styles if you get me..
where you at Jank?
peace out cheers..
ill put your name up around mexico and spain ok... im going to chile in a week...i can do that for you aswell...
peace..

[Tren-spain]

ChRoMa 11820...what you mean?

[smer]

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/4821/photo00893jw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

[Hater-AiD~>]

looks cool smer
i guess im finally trying to further my style..i think i f&#39;ed up bad..heres what i sketched up real quick
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/8740/dscf16926sm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[klipa]

smer.. not to keen on that one as its real difficult to see what letter it is looks kinda like an s the fill is nice but it does scramble the letter a bit. try a simple fill that flows wit the letter might make it stand out more.

hater try spreading your letters out abit it all seams a bit crowded also the right arm of the t comeing out of the e looks strange also the drips in the fill take away abit.

heres some sketchy sketches
http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/5910/cimg19296cu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by klipa@May 26 2006, 10:14 AM
smer.. not to keen on that one as its real difficult to see what letter it is looks kinda like an s the fill is nice but it does scramble the letter a bit. try a simple fill that flows wit the letter might make it stand out more.

hater try spreading your letters out abit it all seams a bit crowded also the right arm of the t comeing out of the e looks strange also the drips in the fill take away abit.

heres some sketchy sketches
http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/5910/cimg19296cu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
post in the blackbookies

[*~ANZIO~*]

Originally posted by beefgerky@May 25 2006, 01:32 PM
1 word. runci. no not because of the dots, because of the stucture and what not, im glad your getting influence, but tone it down a little bit.
you couldnt be more rite. runci is the man. def. his style

[smer]

half finished
http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/7801/photo00905tj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[ECGA]

Originally posted by Jank@May 26 2006, 08:43 AM
finnniiished it. ye if i wasnt so lazy i mite try doin a full piece like that haha

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/singleletter5-FINALS.jpg
thats clean as hell. get a whole piece going with that shit. might take a while but it&#39;ll be sick when your finished.



p.s. - good job.

[beone]

^ i like that but i dont like how some of the edges are curvy instead of just straaight and i dont like the top left extention

[smer]

finished
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/3466/photo00910lt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
throwy
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/2747/photo00929dp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[smartSOFT]

yo hater good work...im feeling the drips but klippa is right about T and the E...fix that extension on the right..looks kinda weird, like it shouldnt be there..

i like it though its coming along

[Hater-AiD~>]

thanks for the critz..ill keep workin on it

[klipa]

sorry to bump crits?
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/9698/cimg19299lp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[smer]

Originally posted by smer@May 26 2006, 11:50 AM
finished
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/3466/photo00910lt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
throwy
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/2747/photo00929dp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like the one on the left not too kien on the one on the rite
bump crtits?

[Jank]

the E dont work so well.. it all looks a bit... oi dno... skinny .... tall and thin.

the B (or is it an R?) is waaay better. i really like that one..... i personally would continu wit that

[Mexiklan Beaner]

im diggin the colors. what kind of markers did u guys use?

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by klipa@May 26 2006, 12:47 PM
sorry to bump crits?
http://img359.imageshack.us/img359/9698/cimg19299lp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ask in the blackbookies

[Mexiklan Beaner]

this is the blackbook thread..isnt it? :huh:

[molotow_15]

in the picture thread
he&#39;s toy no more

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by beefgerky+May 25 2006, 11:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beefgerky @ May 25 2006, 11:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Amuk@May 25 2006, 08:33 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-AoAssis@May 25 2006, 08:26 PM
nice post retard. What just cuz its not graffiti its fucked up? Ever heard of street art, damn open your mind you close minded fuck.
wat the fuck is ur problem, y r u posting a wheat pastie of sum charcs dancing in a black book thread, and y r u so quik to defend urself, are u insecure about sumthing, lucky this is the internet

you just got here motherfucker quit acting like oyu own shit you toy ass bitch. its a drawing, drawings go in this thread. dumbfuck. its kids like you that made bs go downhill. [/b][/quote]
wheat pasting in my opinion gets just as much credit dude, its art its underground culture art if you dont like it then fuck off i agree quit acting like you own shit, shut up or throw up and i gureentee ill waste your toy ass...

[aces]

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/4454/picture0154ct.jpg
here&#39;s the outline to my entry to the battle so i should have it done tonight maybe tommorow what do you think

[aces]

Sorry about the double post i lost connection and didnt think it went through

[molotow_15]

not to clear but it looks allright

[flclnaruto1213]

Originally posted by AoAssis@May 25 2006, 08:23 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4139/picture0605gq.png (http://imageshack.us)

wheat pastie.
hahha wtf is this shit?
this is on some homo ass shit hahaha

[jerm_mtl]

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/6614/s23sy.png

its for the battle, what u guys think? comments/crits plz

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by flclnaruto1213+May 26 2006, 02:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (flclnaruto1213 @ May 26 2006, 02:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AoAssis@May 25 2006, 08:23 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4139/picture0605gq.png (http://imageshack.us)

wheat pastie.
hahha wtf is this shit?
this is on some homo ass shit hahaha [/b][/quote]
no need for comments like that, you might not think its good but this is the
tot black books,

crits not beef

[jerm_mtl]

molotow whut do u think of mine

[Jank]

well said molotow. very true. and ao i kinda like it.. in a jokes sorta way. pretty wierd and corny but its... cute. night brighten some1s day if they saw that poppin out o nowhere. an if u like it keep at it.

nice jerm. not sure about the blue blocky bits but its not bad at all

[jerm_mtl]

cool man thanks

[Slushi]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4139/picture0605gq.png
Fill up the whole page with stuff similar to that. Spread around the people in the middle. Alot smaller though.
I love posters.

[jerm_mtl]

i agree

[scoot]

Originally posted by Slushi@May 26 2006, 02:55 PM

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4139/picture0605gq.png
Fill up the whole page with stuff similar to that. Spread around the people in the middle. Alot smaller though.
I love posters.
yea fill it up with stuff from that era ... i think its "rockabilly" so put hot rods and like a swing band in the back

[jerm_mtl]

u can draw good just ,ike jank said, choose somehting less corny

[Hater-AiD~>]

haha aoassis drew the lady with a badonkadonk

speaking of asses

rip me a new one
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7341/dscf16982rs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[smer]

likin it hater just not feelin that one as much as the last one you did i think its those lines comin from the forcy

[Amuk]

any more crit
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/3277/456an.png (http://imageshack.us)

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by Amuk@May 26 2006, 03:30 PM
any more crit
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/3277/456an.png (http://imageshack.us)
the theme is wierd..the words kinda look like they are melted..yet at the same time they are bolted..if thats what that is..
its cool though

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 26 2006, 03:11 PM
haha aoassis drew the lady with a badonkadonk

speaking of asses

rip me a new one
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7341/dscf16982rs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
glad to see my name in the background hater

[smartSOFT]

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 26 2006, 03:11 PM
haha aoassis drew the lady with a badonkadonk

speaking of asses

rip me a new one
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7341/dscf16982rs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yo rate i dunno if im lookin at it wrong or something but it seems like your T has shading on the top and bottom

may wanna fix that

[aces]

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2128/picture0167wi.jpg

Alright I have it all colored and I know the pic is horrible and I don&#39;t have markers so I used some colored pencils so yea any crits. It&#39;s for the single letter battle.

[Amuse-OnE]

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/2755/mark676x5076ms.th.jpg (http://img100.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mark676x5076ms.jpg)

thing i did for a battle on hhqc.com the fill-in had ot be "chromed".... tell me what u guys think

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by aces@May 26 2006, 04:31 PM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/2128/picture0167wi.jpg

Alright I have it all colored and I know the pic is horrible and I don&#39;t have markers so I used some colored pencils so yea any crits. It&#39;s for the single letter battle.
u need pens, your pencils dont giv much color

[aces]

the fill and characters are good but the letter structure needs some work

edit: yea i know i need pens im ordering some prismas prolly tommorow

[underground_culture]

aces its hot, feel me? ahahahahah get it fire, hot

ahh nevermind its aiight

amuse i like the fill not so much the lettering, i think i should be fatter with less slace between them






heres my sink throw peice i know the k is nastyyy but o well

http://img463.imageshack.us/img463/5015/sinkthrowbattle5pp.th.jpg (http://img463.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sinkthrowbattle5pp.jpg)

[molotow_15]

resize lol

[underground_culture]

yea my bad now its better

[aces]

the S is a little weird, i love the I and N and as you said the K is wack

[gift]

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/sier-simple1-greenorange-bluebubble.jpg

just did this the other night. what do you think? any crits? the dot on the "i" might be a little too big. thanks.

[underground_culture]

not bad^ very very very simple style, which is good for starters

make the ball part of the i just a bit smaller

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by gift@May 26 2006, 04:54 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/sier-simple1-greenorange-bluebubble.jpg

just did this the other night. what do you think? any crits? the dot on the "i" might be a little too big. thanks.
are u from finland ?

[aces]

also lose the bits comin off the S, I, and R

[gift]

nah man. never been to finland. i&#39;m from Ohio. U.S.

alright. thanks for the crits. yeah. i&#39;ve been going very simple lately to get letters down and stuff. the only problem is. when i try to get stuff a little different and bend the letters around a bit i can never think of anything that i like. so i&#39;m gonna have to work on that.

[aces]

thats how your supposed to start so it is perfectly fine

[Mse]

i love the fact that people are giving him advice they dont follow
fucking hypocrits

[Dusty]

I know thy&#39;re shitty but any crit is wanted

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/1624/picture2715ip.th.jpg (http://img89.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture2715ip.jpg)

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8471/picture2728oy.th.jpg (http://img89.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture2728oy.jpg)

Yeah, rip me a new one. The black/red one is a semi-bite. Jsut used a style as a kind of inspiration, haha.

[3pik norsk1]

IM FROM FINLAND

[Kry_20CC]

Originally posted by Dusty@May 26 2006, 05:49 PM
I know thy&#39;re shitty but any crit is wanted

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/1624/picture2715ip.th.jpg (http://img89.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture2715ip.jpg)

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8471/picture2728oy.th.jpg (http://img89.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture2728oy.jpg)

Yeah, rip me a new one. The black/red one is a semi-bite. Jsut used a style as a kind of inspiration, haha.
the first one is nice but im not feelin the k or the n

[aces]

the M is a little strange too but keep workin on it

[MF Feed Letter]

today at school

trying to develope...slowly..
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1046.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1045.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1044.jpg
crits?

[tea dee sea]

those r nice man...im not really feeling the throwie on the last one other than that looking good

[3pik norsk1]

i dont really know where to post this so im gonna post it here.

http://i44.photobucket.com/albums/f8/norskoneepic/djjonesakamycousin.jpg

that is my cousin

[Amuk]

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/5149/2345ce.png (http://imageshack.us)

[aces]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@May 26 2006, 07:32 PM
today at school

trying to develope...slowly..
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1046.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1045.jpg
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1044.jpg
crits?
i like the Y and E on the first one, the S and R on the second one, and the A on the last one but they are all pretty good. i really like the throwie tho.

that train thing should prolly be in either toy bombs/pieces or the freight whores and rail fans but its fine

[aces]

amuk i dont really like where that is goin. the letter structure isn&#39;t really all that great (not sayin im any better but) and i dont like the handstyle but handstyles arent exactly my specialty so ill keep quiet on that

[Kry_20CC]

keep it up kids =]

[aces]

Alright so I just ordered a set of 48 prismas and I am expecting them on Wednesday so I&#39;ll have a well colored piece for the next battle. Also I was just wondering what set of markers you guys had whether it was the 12, 24, 48, 72, 120, 144, or a bunch of random markers that you just racked from some store or whatever.

[Kry_20CC]

i use whatever i rack from places. mostly sharpies tho because thats really all i got

[aces]

yea i found these for 60 bucks so thats why i got them

[Hater-AiD~>]

i hope you didnt play full price for those
you could get 48 prismas on ebay for like 30-40 bux..

[jerm_mtl]

whut markers r good?

[Hater-AiD~>]

uhh..prismas..

[aces]

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 26 2006, 09:47 PM
i hope you didnt play full price for those
you could get 48 prismas on ebay for like 30-40 bux..
get me a link then cause that was the cheapest i could find them on ebay. this is including shipping just to let you know

[dufus]

yaser: im really feeling your simples, definitly my type of style. the throwie isnt bad either, but the straight letters are very nice in my opinion.


i plan on doing some stuff tommorow, maybe ill post some pics

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by aces+May 26 2006, 09:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces &#064; May 26 2006, 09:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Hater&#045;AiD~>@May 26 2006, 09:47 PM
i hope you didnt play full price for those
you could get 48 prismas on ebay for like 30-40 bux..
get me a link then cause that was the cheapest i could find them on ebay. this is including shipping just to let you know [/b][/quote]
trust me dude..just go on to ebay and search prismacolor markers

i got a 12 pack for 14 dollars including shipping one time

heres a 48 pack for 45 http://cgi.ebay.com/NEW-PRISMACOLOR-MARKER...1QQcmdZViewItem (http://cgi.ebay.com/NEW-PRISMACOLOR-MARKERS-Double-ENDED-ART-48_W0QQitemZ8287097966QQcategoryZ28108QQrdZ1QQcmdZ ViewItem)
http://cgi.ebay.com/PRISMACOLOR-48-COLORED...1QQcmdZViewItem (http://cgi.ebay.com/PRISMACOLOR-48-COLORED-Markers-Double-Ended-Case-SEALED_W0QQitemZ8288298639QQcategoryZ28109QQrdZ1QQ cmdZViewItem)
heres a 48 for 30..both of them include shipping


:ph34r: ninjastyle

[AMAZ tbscrew]

freakin fracken pm eachother keep the fourms clean jebus&#33;.

[ICER]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/cirax1.jpg

feedback

[C3ZR ONE]

I deffinately like your handstyle&#33; Very tight. The peice I&#39;m not feelin so much, but it&#39;s nothing to be ashamed of either. Keep it up.

[mikev734]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b164/mikev734/dkorgraff.jpg
hey im pretty new to graff and just came up with this today... its pretty much the first color piece ive done so feedback is welcomed.. thanks

[beone]

^basicly the exact opposite of what he said

peice is ok could use work is that a ON on the end of the cirax or just randumb shit??

[sice1]

what do i need to work on??? be hard but not to hardhttp://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3648/05272006020338am8ru.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[mikev734]

ur letters look pretty god.. just keep practicin i guess and kinda distort/stretch your letters out a little more... looks good imo tho...

EDIT: o and either lose the dot on the I in the second one or make it more proportional so it fits more with the other letters

[tea dee sea]

yoo icer im feeling that sketch keep it up

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by mikev734@May 27 2006, 12:18 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b164/mikev734/dkorgraff.jpg
hey im pretty new to graff and just came up with this today... its pretty much the first color piece ive done so feedback is welcomed.. thanks
hmm.. your name is very similar to the dekor on this thread already..
theres a dekor
now your here and you write dkor
and i used to write decor

[writer45]

critz??

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/8527/ners44ex.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[cord]

Originally posted by sice1@May 27 2006, 06:10 AM
what do i need to work on??? be hard but not to hardhttp://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3648/05272006020338am8ru.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
work on not biting my letters you fucking faggot

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0282.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0278.jpg

[aces]

Originally posted by writer45@May 27 2006, 07:42 AM
critz??

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/8527/ners44ex.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the top thing on the E and the bottom thing on the R dont really fit. they are too skinny but overall its pretty good. i like the S the best tho

[aces]

Originally posted by cord+May 27 2006, 07:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cord &#064; May 27 2006, 07:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 27 2006, 06:10 AM
what do i need to work on??? be hard but not to hardhttp://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3648/05272006020338am8ru.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
work on not biting my letters you fucking faggot

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0282.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0278.jpg[/b][/quote]
that bottom throwie is ill and as for biting the only thing i can see that could have been bitten is the C and that little tounge idea but the C is quite common for toys in my first throwie my C looked exactly like that and i didnt bit so yea

[MENG!]

Originally posted by aces+May 27 2006, 07:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ May 27 2006, 07:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by cord@May 27 2006, 07:57 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 27 2006, 06:10 AM
what do i need to work on??? be hard but not to hardhttp://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3648/05272006020338am8ru.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
work on not biting my letters you fucking faggot

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0282.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0278.jpg
that bottom throwie is ill and as for biting the only thing i can see that could have been bitten is the C and that little tounge idea but the C is quite common for toys in my first throwie my C looked exactly like that and i didnt bit so yea [/b][/quote]
He didnt bite shit. Bubble letters really do all have the same framework.

And instead of bashing his skull in, help him on working on his own style so you can keep your precious bubbles.

[alive]

christ, where the fuck do u get off with that shit
he didnt bite
y the hell would he want to when urs looks that bad neway
it rele pisses me off when toys get all high n mighty
FOR NO FUCKN REASON
ur a fuckin idiot

[hungr]

heres some shady things i did..mad bored just trying to get the straight letters down
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P5250041.jpg

ran outa room for hte R
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P5240040.jpg

[tea dee sea]

hungr i like your style simple but sick keep it up

[dufus]

very nice hungr, loving them

[Hater-AiD~>]

nice simples hunger

heres a quickie with some sharpies that were laying on my computer desk
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/9477/dscf17130tv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AceONE]

thats tight i like the R

[unknown...]

that fill is kinda wack man, it takes from the piece a lot...other than that it would look good

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by cord+May 27 2006, 06:57 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cord @ May 27 2006, 06:57 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 27 2006, 06:10 AM
what do i need to work on??? be hard but not to hardhttp://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3648/05272006020338am8ru.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
work on not biting my letters you fucking faggot

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0282.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0278.jpg [/b][/quote]
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Are you serious? :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
Those letters are damn generic, what makes you think their yours? And take the smiley faces off.

[some guy from NCI...]

huner thats some deeeeeep stuff. Keep it up&#33;

I made a few quick stickies... guess this is the place to put em.
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/9404/p10100127bw.jpg

[Etcha]

somthing quick i just did
any crits before i colour??
and im trying to not make it look so plain..so if you see any good points to have bits comming off then please let me know

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6925/imgp11588ni.jpg

[tea dee sea]

etcha im not really feeling thos random lines but looking good

[writer45]

critz...

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/8247/ners52sd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by Etcha@May 27 2006, 11:01 AM
somthing quick i just did
any crits before i colour??
and im trying to not make it look so plain..so if you see any good points to have bits comming off then please let me know

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6925/imgp11588ni.jpg
dont connect every letter

[jerm_mtl]

i did this for the battle, whut u guys think?http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/7677/a5jl.png

[littlerocky]

first wildstyle type thing attempted..turned out kinda wack ..done in school pen sketch
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/4534/imgp04480sv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

New Throw
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/1184/imgp04519ke.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Simples
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/7690/imgp04538fv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits and Comments please

[mikev734]

Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+May 27 2006, 06:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater&#045;AiD~> &#064; May 27 2006, 06:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-mikev734@May 27 2006, 12:18 AM
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b164/mikev734/dkorgraff.jpg
hey im pretty new to graff and just came up with this today... its pretty much the first color piece ive done so feedback is welcomed.. thanks
hmm.. your name is very similar to the dekor on this thread already..
theres a dekor
now your here and you write dkor
and i used to write decor[/b][/quote]
nah i alredy pmed him about it, he writes someting else now... but any other comments? crits?

[BoRe-719-]

i got a friend that used to write dekno

[jerm_mtl]

i really aint feelin the wildstyle attempt but the rest is cool, i especially like the throw

[writer45]

any critz for my sketch

[ChRoMa 11820]

Originally posted by jerm_mtl@May 27 2006, 11:52 AM
i did this for the battle, whut u guys think?http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/7677/a5jl.png
this is sick i just dont think u should have colored that space in all purple
you shouldve just outlined the inside of that loop

[jerm_mtl]

which one?

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by ChRoMa 11820+May 27 2006, 04:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ChRoMa 11820 @ May 27 2006, 04:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-jerm_mtl@May 27 2006, 11:52 AM
i did this for the battle, whut u guys think?http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/7677/a5jl.png
this is sick i just dont think u should have colored that space in all purple
you shouldve just outlined the inside of that loop [/b][/quote]
solid man thanks for the advice, ill prolly just trace it or something to take it out or something i dunno

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by writer45@May 27 2006, 11:44 AM
critz...

http://img73.imageshack.us/img73/8247/ners52sd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
continue practicin man if u just started thats pretty good continue sketchin

[littlerocky]

yea jerm i agree with chroma..u shouldnt of colored in that purple..i think u shoulda just colored the letter with highlights and shit otherwise i think its pretty solid

[jerm_mtl]

yeah since the deadline is only tuesday ill trace it and take the ugly purple shit out


heres another sketch i did like 2 minutes ago, whut u guys think of it?http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/3069/sector0rc.png

[jerm_mtl]

hahahahha i forgot to erase the pencil hahahahah oh well neways sry for the bad quality of the pic its really bad <_<

[littlerocky]

quality of flick is kinda ish but whatever..idk im not fealin it as much as your a..not fealin some of ur extensions and bumps i think u should smooth it out a little ad get rid of some extentions liek the T and the R connection and lose te arrow uner the E..and the thing under the c..basically clean it up and smooth it out a little and i think it could turn out solid
hope that helps

[jerm_mtl]

thats cool man

[sice1]

Originally posted by aces+May 27 2006, 07:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces &#064; May 27 2006, 07:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by cord@May 27 2006, 07:57 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 27 2006, 06:10 AM
what do i need to work on??? be hard but not to hardhttp://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3648/05272006020338am8ru.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
work on not biting my letters you fucking faggot

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0282.jpg
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0278.jpg
that bottom throwie is ill and as for biting the only thing i can see that could have been bitten is the C and that little tounge idea but the C is quite common for toys in my first throwie my C looked exactly like that and i didnt bit so yea [/b][/quote]
bubbbles or bubbbles i know im a toy but your a real toy if you think that there yours..lol in your face oh and thax guys for backing me up :)

[jerm_mtl]

children, stop whining

[BoRe-719-]

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/iiii.jpg


crits

[jerm_mtl]

i find the letters r cool just too skinny, but otherwise i like the fill and the bubbles too so in average, its a thumbs up for me, just make the letters fatter and more stucker on each other

[tea dee sea]

yoo ppl i need help give me advice plz thanx
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/1221/picture65oh.jpg

[beefgerky]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap029.jpg

:wacko:

[jerm_mtl]

nice letters man&#33; now just find a nice colour to fill and ur good to go&#33;

[jerm_mtl]

my last post was for teedeesa and gerky its pretty cool but i saw better from u