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sice1
05-27-2006, 05:31 PM
what do i need work on???http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7514/05272006062600pm7cs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

scoot
05-27-2006, 05:38 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@May 27 2006, 05:14 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap029.jpg

:wacko:
gerk your toooo good to be around these parts

sice1
05-27-2006, 05:46 PM
Originally posted by sice1@May 27 2006, 05:31 PM
what do i need work on???http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7514/05272006062600pm7cs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

mikev734
05-27-2006, 05:59 PM
Originally posted by tea dee sea@May 27 2006, 05:13 PM
yoo ppl i need help give me advice plz thanx
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/1221/picture65oh.jpg
i dunno but i like that throwup... way better than nething i can do rite now... all my bubble letters in throwups look os generic and i cant seem to get em looking more abstract.. i gess it just takes time tho

sice1
05-27-2006, 06:04 PM
Originally posted by sice1+May 27 2006, 05:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sice1 @ May 27 2006, 05:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 27 2006, 05:31 PM
what do i need work on???http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7514/05272006062600pm7cs.jpg (http://imageshack.us) [/b][/quote]
any1??

N:Craze
05-27-2006, 06:40 PM
not being such a post whore. there is one comment betwen your bump.... come on.

mikev734
05-27-2006, 06:46 PM
Originally posted by sice1+May 27 2006, 06:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sice1 @ May 27 2006, 06:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sice1@May 27 2006, 05:46 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 27 2006, 05:31 PM
what do i need work on???http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7514/05272006062600pm7cs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
any1?? [/b][/quote]
make your letters a lil taller and distort them more... also make the shadow bigger, not so close to the letters...

BoRe-719-
05-27-2006, 07:01 PM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl@May 27 2006, 05:10 PM
i find the letters r cool just too skinny, but otherwise i like the fill and the bubbles too so in average, its a thumbs up for me, just make the letters fatter and more stucker on each other
yeah i know the letters r skinny, i was sorta goin for this seaweed lookin thing. but yeah, thicker letters, more structure.....anyone else wanna help me out??

jerm_mtl
05-27-2006, 08:42 PM
i like the throw but i dont like the S

Mse
05-27-2006, 08:55 PM
Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;@May 27 2006, 07:01 PM
yeah i know the letters r skinny, i was sorta goin for this seaweed lookin thing. but yeah, thicker letters, more structure.....anyone else wanna help me out??
well you are getting better
but take away the amazing coloring you have bad letters
do b&w blockbusters draw a million then post your next attempt at illness

jerm_mtl
05-27-2006, 09:10 PM
why yes indeed

tea dee sea
05-27-2006, 10:13 PM
Originally posted by tea dee sea@May 27 2006, 05:24 PM
just a quickie ill post more flix tomorrow
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/5739/picture87gd.jpg
ne advice??

scoot
05-27-2006, 10:19 PM
Originally posted by sice1+May 27 2006, 06:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sice1 @ May 27 2006, 06:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sice1@May 27 2006, 05:46 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 27 2006, 05:31 PM
what do i need work on???http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7514/05272006062600pm7cs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
any1?? [/b][/quote]
this might help you a little

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/sice.jpg

im not that great at them or anything but thats what looks odd to me

AMAZ tbscrew
05-27-2006, 10:39 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/iiii.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap029.jpg




http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/5739/picture87gd.jpg
^keep it up ur on the right track.




only good shit on the last page

mikev734
05-28-2006, 12:04 AM
heres a quik throwie i did... tell me wat u guys think pls
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b164/mikev734/throwie.jpg

N:Craze
05-28-2006, 12:44 AM
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_2083.2a5.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_2084.cb1.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_2085.370.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_2087.80e.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_2088.e6d.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_2089.093.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_2092.0ef.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)
http://images6.theimagehosting.com/IMG_2094.8a2.jpg (http://www.theimagehosting.com)


couple new things


fix the huge bubble on the k make it conform more with the other letters.. get em all in the same style

darkdark
05-28-2006, 01:08 AM
writing &#39;inside&#39; any tips/crits?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v305/UrHABITforming/yes.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v305/UrHABITforming/upitnow.jpg
kinda shitty pics ill do some with the real cam in the morn...

sice1
05-28-2006, 01:37 AM
ok how about now???http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/5247/05282006023159am4ji.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

PoetDB
05-28-2006, 01:41 AM
Well, Im new to bombin, and no mentors or even good artists in my neighborhood. So was wonderin if yous can give me some pointers so I can work out a style before I go out bombin....
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/IM000790.jpg
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/IM000787.jpg


PS. Sorry if they&#39;re real big.

beone
05-28-2006, 01:46 AM
i like the second one more
its looks very similair tho

PoetDB
05-28-2006, 01:55 AM
Anything you would do different with them?

sice1
05-28-2006, 02:11 AM
Originally posted by sice1@May 28 2006, 01:37 AM
ok how about now???http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/5247/05282006023159am4ji.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
its gay i know

molotow_15
05-28-2006, 02:14 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/uhh.gif

crit the piece not the chariks

molotow_15
05-28-2006, 02:15 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/iopuntitled1.jpg

now crit the charik

beone
05-28-2006, 02:15 AM
poet sorry for the shitty feed back haha

anwyas the first one drop it do a diff style to many arrows and it is whack i no it hurts but its truth do a diff style

the second one could be turned into sumn real nice just work on it alot maybe move the top right of the e and top left of the t a lil closer so they connect more it would flow better


molotow make ur peice big so ppl can read it and wtf does it say tha karas are whack

PoetDB
05-28-2006, 02:22 AM
Thanks bro. It&#39;s cool about the first one, I just wanted to see what I could change about it, but I didnt get my hopes up I guess, But its chill. The second one is my favorite anyway, I wanted to add bomb horizens and this one worked best. But thanks bro, Ill prob redraw it tomorow. Thanks again.

-And Sice, nah dude, I think that sketch is mad chill. If you cleaned it up a little it would be sick.

urbans
05-28-2006, 02:26 AM
molotows are lookin good

sice1
05-28-2006, 02:56 AM
i know you guys are getting sick of seeing me but hey.....http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8441/05282006035125am2qn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

molotow_15
05-28-2006, 03:01 AM
Originally posted by sice1@May 28 2006, 02:56 AM
i know you guys are getting sick of seeing me but hey.....http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8441/05282006035125am2qn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dogey looking sice..

heres two new things:
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molo7.jpg

for pams

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/unfinished.jpg

footballer sketch infinished

extirpate
05-28-2006, 03:14 AM
edit*nice sketchs molotow
edit again* your charters are looking better as far as i know there oringal but either way there good. your pice is crazy looking, not sure what its says tho.

sice1, good throw level it out and itll look better

ok so every one knows how lust started the free style pen on BS? ima start the free style crayon. what now&#33;
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3817/graff0052xl.jpg

molotow_15
05-28-2006, 03:15 AM
Originally posted by extirpate@May 28 2006, 03:14 AM
ok so every one knows how lust started the free style pen on BS? ima start the free style crayon. what now&#33;
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3817/graff0052xl.jpg
you bumped mine <_<
crit first..

sice1
05-28-2006, 03:16 AM
dogey??wtf

molotow_15
05-28-2006, 03:17 AM
Originally posted by sice1+May 28 2006, 03:16 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sice1 @ May 28 2006, 03:16 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sice1@May 28 2006, 02:11 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 28 2006, 01:37 AM
ok how about now???http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/5247/05282006023159am4ji.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
its gay i know
dogey???wtf [/b][/quote]
wak then its jus the truth..

sice1
05-28-2006, 03:18 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 28 2006, 03:01 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 &#064; May 28 2006, 03:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 28 2006, 02:56 AM
i know you guys are getting sick of seeing me but hey.....http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8441/05282006035125am2qn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dogey looking sice..

heres two new things:
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molo7.jpg

for pams

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/unfinished.jpg

footballer sketch infinished [/b][/quote]
wtf is dogey??man your alot of help.. i need real feedback not bullshit

molotow_15
05-28-2006, 03:23 AM
wack

beefgerky
05-28-2006, 03:26 AM
molotow shut the fuck up, nobody fucking likes you, all u do is produce a meess of lines u call letters and trace shit. and you cant call anyone wack or toy, or else you&#39;ll be a hypocrit. now do us all a favor and LEAVE.

molotow_15
05-28-2006, 03:31 AM
Originally posted by beefgerky@May 28 2006, 03:26 AM
molotow shut the fuck up, nobody fucking likes you, all u do is produce a meess of lines u call letters and trace shit. and you cant call anyone wack or toy, or else you&#39;ll be a hypocrit. now do us all a favor and LEAVE.
who the fuck likes you prick
your a shit face from the states

sice1
05-28-2006, 03:33 AM
thanx man but is it wack???... its cool i know i need alot of workhttp://img81.imageshack.us/img81/5483/05282006035125am5bm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

molotow_15
05-28-2006, 03:34 AM
Originally posted by sice1@May 28 2006, 03:33 AM
thanx man but is it wack???... its cool i know i need alot of workhttp://img81.imageshack.us/img81/5483/05282006035125am5bm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yh its not beef though

sice1
05-28-2006, 03:35 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 28 2006, 03:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ May 28 2006, 03:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 28 2006, 03:33 AM
thanx man but is it wack???... its cool i know i need alot of workhttp://img81.imageshack.us/img81/5483/05282006035125am5bm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yh its not beef though [/b][/quote]
iight man i can handle that

molotow_15
05-28-2006, 03:38 AM
Originally posted by sice1+May 28 2006, 03:35 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sice1 @ May 28 2006, 03:35 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 28 2006, 03:34 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 28 2006, 03:33 AM
thanx man but is it wack???... its cool i know i need alot of workhttp://img81.imageshack.us/img81/5483/05282006035125am5bm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yh its not beef though
iight man i can handle that [/b][/quote]
i can handle mine too with beef gerky starting

Jank
05-28-2006, 03:46 AM
molotow lookin at ur shit i think the main problem si that it all melts into a bunch of lines. whip out a solid black and colour the 3d in. or somehow make the letters stick out.

and sice i think you should bump your stuff a bit more often..... i havent seen it enough times yet.



(i hope the sarcasm can come across over itnernet....)

bt lookin at that last one. the S is sound.. and it gets worse from there. what is that dot on the I?&#33;?&#33; and the bulge at the bottom of the I looks off. the C goes too skinny at the top. The little char in the E looks silly.

**and ur avatar is fucking grim.

molotow_15
05-28-2006, 03:48 AM
Originally posted by Jank@May 28 2006, 03:46 AM
molotow lookin at ur shit i think the main problem si that it all melts into a bunch of lines. whip out a solid black and colour the 3d in. or somehow make the letters stick out.

and sice i think you should bump your stuff a bit more often..... i havent seen it enough times yet.



(i hope the sarcasm can come across over itnernet....)

bt lookin at that last one. the S is sound.. and it gets worse from there. what is that dot on the I?&#33;?&#33; and the bulge at the bottom of the I looks off. the C goes too skinny at the top. The little char in the E looks silly.

**and ur avatar is fucking grim.
yh its far from finished i need go over some parts with
a rubber too

extirpate
05-28-2006, 04:07 AM
Originally posted by extirpate@May 28 2006, 03:14 AM

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/3817/graff0052xl.jpg
bump for bottem of page and krayon&#39;s rock

smer
05-28-2006, 04:47 AM
try goin a bit more simple and buildin up

Jank
05-28-2006, 09:39 AM
demo.... lose the addons. use a normal penil lol.. otherwise it looks like a 5 yr old did it haha.

tryin a nu style... bits of it obv need work on cos its thefirst try... but any crits? where shud i change?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/ants1.jpg

Amuk
05-28-2006, 10:04 AM
i think u shud extend the first letter down more so its level with the rest of the letters, mite look a bit better

AMAZ tbscrew
05-28-2006, 10:24 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 28 2006, 03:31 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 &#064; May 28 2006, 03:31 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-beefgerky@May 28 2006, 03:26 AM
molotow shut the fuck up, nobody fucking likes you, all u do is produce a meess of lines u call letters and trace shit. and you cant call anyone wack or toy, or else you&#39;ll be a hypocrit. now do us all a favor and LEAVE.
who the fuck likes you prick
your a shit face from the states [/b][/quote]
i like gerk...now stfu

ur work is garbage you have no letter structure and all ur charaters are traced.
go back 2 simples and stop telling other people there toys..cuz im guessing you really havent sat there and looked at your work. and dont even think about battleing me..all i have to do is a simple with 3d and ill get all the votes cuz no one can read ur shit. so stop talking shit and telling people there work is crap cuz you rite now are the lowest form of a toy where you trace work and your shit cant be read what so ever. oh and by the way no one likes you so stop thinking your hot shit.

oh and btw stop saveing pics to your comp and tracing them by putting a paper up to the screen...its so noticable just by looking at them that ur missing shadding and stuff and all u really have are the outlines of them.

Sprae
05-28-2006, 12:09 PM
lol i dont think there is one person on these forums that doesnt hate molotow

Stewe
05-28-2006, 12:14 PM
me either

SiMpUhL
05-28-2006, 12:43 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15@May 28 2006, 02:14 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/uhh.gif

crit the piece not the chariks
i hate u...plain n simple, i hate u.
looks like shit, probably traced, and like i said earlier to someone else they make no sense.

i got a piece im workin on, jus gotta throw in the color, trus me u guys&#39;ll love it.

Mse
05-28-2006, 12:58 PM
didnt you post something yesterday
and didnt i comment on it?
i seem to recall somethign like that

ion-i
05-28-2006, 01:23 PM
Originally posted by molotow_15+May 28 2006, 12:31 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ May 28 2006, 12:31 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-beefgerky@May 28 2006, 03:26 AM
molotow shut the fuck up, nobody fucking likes you, all u do is produce a meess of lines u call letters and trace shit. and you cant call anyone wack or toy, or else you&#39;ll be a hypocrit. now do us all a favor and LEAVE.
who the fuck likes you prick
your a shit face from the states [/b][/quote]
HAHA&#33;
Yeah man, because hes from "the states" he must suck hard then.
You&#39;re pathetic, at graff, insults, and life. KTHXBI.

aces
05-28-2006, 01:43 PM
really. there are a ton of people from "the states" on these forums so yea work on that

Code
05-28-2006, 01:55 PM
k, i have just been messing around and as you all know i am still new to sketchin so this is one of my new ones. THis is also my faverite i made. I know its crap compared to the ones i people have posted, so just give me some critz and i will hit you guys with a better one using your guys critz sometime this week

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5453/3dhelp6ho.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sheek
05-28-2006, 02:02 PM
a freind of mine has been wantin some crits on his shit

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7260/kaos2jg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Seti
05-28-2006, 02:41 PM
real quik outline, post it wen its colourd, i feel like im goin backwards with my style, i got outa this shit bout 3 weeks ago,
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/ins.jpg

tea dee sea
05-28-2006, 02:47 PM
yoo seti that is dope

C3ZR ONE
05-28-2006, 02:54 PM
Sheek- Tell "your friend" to drop the crown. That sure as shit aint his. The A is kinda nice. I&#39;d scrap the rest of it.

Seti- The shit you do is incredible. It amazes me you actually pull it off on walls too. Mad respect kid. ;)

Seti
05-28-2006, 02:56 PM
ha, cheers guys, thinkin of paintin tonight jus not sure were

tea dee sea
05-28-2006, 03:11 PM
crits plz
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/2729/picture52uu.jpg
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/8636/picture45vu.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
05-28-2006, 03:28 PM
Originally posted by Sheek@May 28 2006, 02:02 PM
a freind of mine has been wantin some crits on his shit

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7260/kaos2jg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
tell your friend to loose the crown

Seti
05-28-2006, 03:44 PM
an never colour the background the same colour as the prodominant fill, thats jus stupid

BoRe-719-
05-28-2006, 03:48 PM
Originally posted by aces@May 28 2006, 01:43 PM
really. there are a ton of people from "the states" on these forums so yea work on that
im from the states.
seti is the king of 3d, jus to let everyone know.

k ppl, here it is.
lemme know what i can do to make it better...

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/boogerface.jpg

ehhh i left some eraser shavings on the page....dayum

Seti
05-28-2006, 04:03 PM
thats phat as fuck m8, the only thing u cld realy do is ground the image, i.e. give the charak a shadow, an i think if he had a dangerdoom style mask itd be cool, but just over his eyes cuz u gota keep that distorted mouth fo sure. an maybe have his legs lyin on the floor twitchin or sumink.
edit: eatin his legs.

Hater-AiD~>
05-28-2006, 04:12 PM
i like the much coming out of the intestines..
nice shit&#33;

Code
05-28-2006, 04:17 PM
Originally posted by Code@May 28 2006, 01:55 PM
k, i have just been messing around and as you all know i am still new to sketchin so this is one of my new ones. THis is also my faverite i made. I know its crap compared to the ones i people have posted, so just give me some critz and i will hit you guys with a better one using your guys critz sometime this week

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5453/3dhelp6ho.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry to bump my stuff. i know its bad lol

critz please.

BoRe-719-
05-28-2006, 04:22 PM
Originally posted by Seti@May 28 2006, 04:03 PM
thats phat as fuck m8, the only thing u cld realy do is ground the image, i.e. give the charak a shadow, an i think if he had a dangerdoom style mask itd be cool, but just over his eyes cuz u gota keep that distorted mouth fo sure. an maybe have his legs lyin on the floor twitchin or sumink.
edit: eatin his legs.
i like ur thinkin, definately should of had a shadow.....mask?? ill experiment.

ionno it didnt really come out like i wanted it to, i wanted like half of him to be all swollen, melting flesh, jus hanging off the body....didnt really work out though <_<

Hater-AiD~>
05-28-2006, 04:24 PM
Originally posted by Seti@May 28 2006, 04:03 PM
thats phat as fuck m8, the only thing u cld realy do is ground the image, i.e. give the charak a shadow, an i think if he had a dangerdoom style mask itd be cool, but just over his eyes cuz u gota keep that distorted mouth fo sure. an maybe have his legs lyin on the floor twitchin or sumink.
edit: eatin his legs.
mf doom :D ;)
dangerdoom was just a collab of dj dangermouse and mf doom..mf doom wears the mask

Mse
05-28-2006, 05:00 PM
mf doom is gay anyway grimm owns his fucking ass


simpulh the body is fire i dont like that mouth or at least the angle of the mouth

aces
05-28-2006, 05:01 PM
Originally posted by Code+May 28 2006, 05:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Code &#064; May 28 2006, 05:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Code@May 28 2006, 01:55 PM
k, i have just been messing around and as you all know i am still new to sketchin so this is one of my new ones. THis is also my faverite i made. I know its crap compared to the ones i people have posted, so just give me some critz and i will hit you guys with a better one using your guys critz sometime this week

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5453/3dhelp6ho.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry to bump my stuff. i know its bad lol

critz please. [/b][/quote]
the 3d is goin everywhere and keep all the lines the same width. the one on the B that is slanted lose that

smartSOFT
05-28-2006, 05:11 PM
yeh your O has no slanted lines but you B and C do... keep all the lines straight dont slant em right now

jerm_mtl
05-28-2006, 05:24 PM
Originally posted by aces+May 28 2006, 05:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ May 28 2006, 05:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Code@May 28 2006, 05:17 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Code@May 28 2006, 01:55 PM
k, i have just been messing around and as you all know i am still new to sketchin so this is one of my new ones. THis is also my faverite i made. I know its crap compared to the ones i people have posted, so just give me some critz and i will hit you guys with a better one using your guys critz sometime this week

http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5453/3dhelp6ho.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry to bump my stuff. i know its bad lol

critz please.
the 3d is goin everywhere and keep all the lines the same width. the one on the B that is slanted lose that [/b][/quote]
makr the letters more funky

Seti
05-28-2006, 05:27 PM
cn people quite bumpin a shit sketch, i think he gets it now.

ghostbusta5
05-28-2006, 05:32 PM
ya molotow you dick dont say shit like "cuz your from the states" youll just make canadians look like dicks.....by the way because of that comment i officially hate you.....die.

Jank
05-28-2006, 05:46 PM
OH MY GOD just shutup about molotow. hes an idiot. fine. everyone knows that. but u lot group together and encourage him , and let millions of pages fill up all with hate about him. im not sayin stop hating him... thhat wud b impossible. im just sayin y bother with SO many posts about it....

and gohstbuster hes from the UK .... not canada...

bore..thats absolutely repulsive. amaaazing. quality shit. but horirble. haha

uhhh
05-28-2006, 05:48 PM
heres some my shiiiit

http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcr68.jpg
http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcwi9.jpg
http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcx87.jpg
^^^ tags pallette :D
http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcxtj.jpg
mediore one liner

critts please

cord
05-28-2006, 05:56 PM
yo bore, that is mad, kinda like anima from ffx mixed with the nutter from resident evil haha

aces
05-28-2006, 05:59 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@May 28 2006, 06:48 PM
heres some my shiiiit

http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcr68.jpg
http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcwi9.jpg
http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcx87.jpg
^^^ tags pallette :D
http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcxtj.jpg
mediore one liner

critts please
that K really looks like an X, the attached E and S looks like a W, the 3d is good, the tags i like #2 if you lose those lines at the end, and the one liner uhh i don&#39;t like that soo much

BoRe-719-
05-28-2006, 06:02 PM
jus bought two new black books, and a new white deco pen.....gunna be busted out mad amount of kraks in the next few days.

aces uve made a lot of progress man, ur handstyle if def. comin along and that two letter throw perfect...well u can do soooooo much shit with Ks, id complicate that, then agian it s athrow.....up to u.

tea dee sea
05-28-2006, 06:05 PM
Originally posted by tea dee sea@May 28 2006, 03:11 PM
crits plz
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/2729/picture52uu.jpg
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/8636/picture45vu.jpg
bump for crits

Hater-AiD~>
05-28-2006, 06:22 PM
Originally posted by tea dee sea+May 28 2006, 06:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tea dee sea @ May 28 2006, 06:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-tea dee sea@May 28 2006, 03:11 PM
crits plz
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/2729/picture52uu.jpg
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/8636/picture45vu.jpg
bump for crits [/b][/quote]
throwup has potential..i dont really like the n on the piece though

jerm_mtl
05-28-2006, 06:23 PM
i like the throw and i know this is my like 5th submission for this battle but theres always a sketch i do better than the past one so ya i wanted to know if u liked it
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/5508/a28cd.png

jerm_mtl
05-28-2006, 06:32 PM
Originally posted by aces+May 28 2006, 05:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ May 28 2006, 05:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@May 28 2006, 06:48 PM
heres some my shiiiit

http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcr68.jpg
http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcwi9.jpg
http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcx87.jpg
^^^ tags pallette :D
http://i4.tinypic.com/10zcxtj.jpg
mediore one liner

critts please
that K really looks like an X, the attached E and S looks like a W, the 3d is good, the tags i like #2 if you lose those lines at the end, and the one liner uhh i don&#39;t like that soo much [/b][/quote]
number 7 dude

jerm_mtl
05-28-2006, 06:33 PM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl@May 28 2006, 06:23 PM
i like the throw and i know this is my like 5th submission for this battle but theres always a sketch i do better than the past one so ya i wanted to know if u liked it
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/5508/a28cd.png
crit/comment me ppl

some guy from NCI...
05-28-2006, 06:42 PM
Try not to double/triple post. Use the edit button.

aces
05-28-2006, 07:03 PM
Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;@May 28 2006, 07:02 PM
jus bought two new black books, and a new white deco pen.....gunna be busted out mad amount of kraks in the next few days.

aces uve made a lot of progress man, ur handstyle if def. comin along and that two letter throw perfect...well u can do soooooo much shit with Ks, id complicate that, then agian it s athrow.....up to u.
thats not my shit dude sorry if you thought so and its 3 letters as far as i can tell KUS, KOS?

http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/1897/picture0177cg.jpg

^thats my entry to the battle and my handstyle sucks also my throwie isnt that great so yea sorry for the confusion

Nosypainter
05-28-2006, 07:07 PM
Originally posted by scoot+May 27 2006, 10:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (scoot @ May 27 2006, 10:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sice1@May 27 2006, 06:04 PM

Originally posted by sice1@May 27 2006, 05:46 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-sice1@May 27 2006, 05:31 PM
what do i need work on???http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7514/05272006062600pm7cs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
any1??
this might help you a little

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/1003/bodycount/sice.jpg

im not that great at them or anything but thats what looks odd to me [/b][/quote]
you need to work on prety much the whole thing it lacks any real creativity... sorry

aces
05-28-2006, 07:33 PM
yea work on it a lot. it takes a long time to get a good throwie. i havent gotten one yet really so i gotta work on mine

beefgerky
05-28-2006, 08:08 PM
some quick shits for thethrowie exchage
MOEK and TRANCE.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap030.jpg

aces
05-28-2006, 08:12 PM
those are ill the TRANCE handstyle is kinda wack but the throwies themselves are sick

Hater-AiD~>
05-28-2006, 08:41 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@May 28 2006, 08:08 PM
some quick shits for thethrowie exchage
MOEK and TRANCE.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap030.jpg
goddamn gerk you never cease to amaze me with yoru throwups..that trance throw up is fuckin nice

C3ZR ONE
05-28-2006, 09:01 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@May 28 2006, 08:08 PM
some quick shits for thethrowie exchage
MOEK and TRANCE.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap030.jpg
Gerk and Pesk- You guys are getting so fuckin fresh with you throwies. It&#39;s ridiculous. Props.

Fosale!
05-28-2006, 10:29 PM
I havent posted anything for awhile, so here is what i have been up to

well... my marker collection, aside from my complete prismacolorset...http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/4efcf8ce.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/2f2977be.jpg
thingy for lust

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/67203d09.jpg
something i started for my girl, there is a heart on top of the I but my cam cut it off

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/644f9183.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/a4d037c3.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/93809172.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010309.jpg
^i was boredd
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010308.jpg
^a not true statement
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010307.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010306.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010305.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010304.jpg
^messed up on the 3d, put round lines instead pf straight...grrri didn&#39;t move fast enough
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010303.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010302.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010301.jpg
^and a mad sloppy pen for Lust

C3ZR ONE
05-28-2006, 10:36 PM
Well....You got a real nice pen set.. :lol: Just fuckin with you. What are those fat white markers??

You&#39;re with EBK huh? Your boy Pesk is blowin up with the throwies. He been painting much?

Fosale!
05-28-2006, 10:44 PM
they are all designer markers, they were my moms, i hardly ever use em bc i dont wanna ruin the nibs, they are so expensive

beefgerky
05-28-2006, 10:46 PM
i dont like any of it. :wacko:

toon!..
05-28-2006, 11:09 PM
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/55/picture0126hh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new style im trying out
you likie?

Fosale!
05-28-2006, 11:11 PM
hott as hell toon, keep it up

BRAINE
05-28-2006, 11:39 PM
toon im about to steal you m

jk, but seriously that looks really good, save that i thought the o kinda looked like a b, but i knew what it said nonetheless

Z FUSE
05-28-2006, 11:48 PM
ugg teh guy with the prisma color set and million pics posted, fosale&#33; ur girl won&#39;t be ur girl anymore after u show her that throw thingy.

Sluts_r_us
05-29-2006, 12:13 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@May 28 2006, 10:36 PM
Your boy Pesk is blowin up with the throwies. He been painting much?
nah bro..minimal painting over here....for now...exams are coming up this week then im out of school june 6th....then i rack, then paint....:D

Seti
05-29-2006, 05:43 AM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@May 28 2006, 10:29 PM
I havent posted anything for awhile, so here is what i have been up to

well... my marker collection, aside from my complete prismacolorset...http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/4efcf8ce.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/2f2977be.jpg
thingy for lust

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/67203d09.jpg
something i started for my girl, there is a heart on top of the I but my cam cut it off

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/644f9183.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/a4d037c3.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/93809172.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010309.jpg
^i was boredd
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010308.jpg
^a not true statement
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010307.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010306.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010305.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010304.jpg
^messed up on the 3d, put round lines instead pf straight...grrri didn&#39;t move fast enough
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010303.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010302.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010301.jpg
^and a mad sloppy pen for Lust
complete waste of pens man, u got fuck loadsa colours an ur wastin em on shity throwies, get wise man an experiment, thats wat ther for.

smer
05-29-2006, 06:07 AM
im gunna rob ya prismas

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 06:37 AM
Originally posted by smer@May 29 2006, 06:07 AM
im gunna rob ya prismas
im going to help you..and we can split them down the middle...well both probably walk out with about 60 a piece..maybe more

aces
05-29-2006, 08:15 AM
theres 144 so you could each get off with 72

Belisle
05-29-2006, 08:22 AM
your skecht are good i would like to see your skecht on a wall in a pic.

Belisle
05-29-2006, 08:23 AM
i forgot i was taking to seti

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 08:50 AM
Originally posted by aces@May 29 2006, 08:15 AM
theres 144 so you could each get off with 72



that sounds good to me... :D
hey fosale...wassup buddy..where you live at

smer
05-29-2006, 09:35 AM
haha lol
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1728/photo00950qb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
nice n simple crits?

unknown...
05-29-2006, 09:52 AM
http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/558/p10109225zq.jpg



trying ta do sumthin a lil bit different....didnt finish the piece cuz i wana kno what the letters look like alone....if they look good im gonna finish it all

aces
05-29-2006, 10:03 AM
Originally posted by smer@May 29 2006, 10:35 AM
haha lol
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1728/photo00950qb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
nice n simple crits?
1. why do you have a ruler
2. the letters arent that simple
3. the letter structure sucks

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 10:05 AM
Originally posted by smer@May 29 2006, 09:35 AM
haha lol
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1728/photo00950qb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
nice n simple crits?
i dont like the little swirly thing coming out fo the first later..other then that its cool

HoodRichSucka
05-29-2006, 10:05 AM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/monster2.jpg


im a toy just tryin to get advice, thanks

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 10:06 AM
Originally posted by aces@May 29 2006, 10:03 AM

1. why do you have a ruler
2. the letters arent that simple
3. the letter structure sucks
im pretty sure he had the ruler for the vanishing point

alive
05-29-2006, 10:07 AM
YRK-
its nice, but theres a few things i think could improve
like ur going for some symmetricy i think
but the dot on either sides, off the K and Y, the one off the Y is seperated and the K isnt
then the left curvy extention on the y doesnt fit, i know u were trying to match the K, but it just doesnt work
and then personally, i dont like how the top half seems to be all straight, and then the bottom has all these curves, but if worked on, it might be nice

MONSTER-
i love it

FEC-
Bring the C in
its nice

------------

now last time i was here i was coming at u with this stuff
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/25-11-05_1310.jpg
for a throw (alive)
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/12-11-05_1742.jpg
for a piece (alive)


but i realized how shitty it was, and went away, quietly working on my own for a few months

now im back and id like some crits
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02443.jpg
heres a new piece, COERCE, (i know the arrow 3d is fucked up no need to mention that)
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02441.jpg
heres a throw, COERCE (but maybe u could help me on this,cuz i think it looks hot lyk this, but when i do it clean, it looks like shit)
ex.http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02442.jpg
is there a way to get the other effect on a wall? maybe with a needle cap or something?

heres another style ive been fuckin around with, its hard to see it though, cuz all ive got it bic pens, but with markers it looks better, ill use my friends and n get a pic of that
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02444.jpg
sez LUSTER

btw heres my luster contribute
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02432.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02445.jpg
finally, theres this style, which i can pull off fast for ne word, i did this ASTERISK in lyk 5 minutes at school yesterday for a friend

anyway, crits would be fantastic
thanks so much
sry so long

PS. i want some fuckin prismas
im using fukin bic pens
no fuckin fair

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 10:12 AM
Originally posted by alive@May 29 2006, 10:07 AM
YRK-
its nice, but theres a few things i think could improve
like ur going for some symmetricy i think
but the dot on either sides, off the K and Y, the one off the Y is seperated and the K isnt
then the left curvy extention on the y doesnt fit, i know u were trying to match the K, but it just doesnt work
and then personally, i dont like how the top half seems to be all straight, and then the bottom has all these curves, but if worked on, it might be nice

MONSTER-
i love it

FEC-
Bring the C in
its nice

------------

now last time i was here i was coming at u with this stuff
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/25-11-05_1310.jpg
for a throw (alive)
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/12-11-05_1742.jpg
for a piece (alive)


but i realized how shitty it was, and went away, quietly working on my own for a few months

now im back and id like some crits
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02443.jpg
heres a new piece, COERCE, (i know the arrow 3d is fucked up no need to mention that)
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02441.jpg
heres a throw, COERCE (but maybe u could help me on this,cuz i think it looks hot lyk this, but when i do it clean, it looks like shit)
ex.http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02442.jpg
is there a way to get the other effect on a wall? maybe with a needle cap or something?

heres another style ive been fuckin around with, its hard to see it though, cuz all ive got it bic pens, but with markers it looks better, ill use my friends and n get a pic of that
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02444.jpg
sez LUSTER

btw heres my luster contribute
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02432.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02445.jpg
finally, theres this style, which i can pull off fast for ne word, i did this ASTERISK in lyk 5 minutes at school yesterday for a friend

anyway, crits would be fantastic
thanks so much
sry so long

PS. i want some fuckin prismas
im using fukin bic pens
no fuckin fair
dont put your 3d over yoru letters

emokid
05-29-2006, 10:16 AM
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/8126/im0005203kw.th.jpg (http://img45.imageshack.us/my.php?image=im0005203kw.jpg)

my first post on here, its shit i know, any advice, comments?
ps done with felt pens as i dont believe in wasting expensive pens on shit sketches

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 10:22 AM
Originally posted by emokid@May 29 2006, 10:16 AM
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/8126/im0005203kw.th.jpg (http://img45.imageshack.us/my.php?image=im0005203kw.jpg)

my first post on here, its shit i know, any advice, comments?
ps done with felt pens as i dont believe in wasting expensive pens on shit sketches
dont try wildstyles yet..just work with basic letters until you get a structure down

smer
05-29-2006, 10:27 AM
emo kid?... i hate emos

emokid
05-29-2006, 10:50 AM
seems like everytime i try and do a simple, it looks even worse though
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/8742/im0005215xw.th.jpg (http://img102.imageshack.us/my.php?image=im0005215xw.jpg)
simple stuff like that for example

and smer, im only an emo at weekends, rest of the time im a transvestite, a biker, a geek and an indie rocka so dont hate me too much babez.

smer
05-29-2006, 11:03 AM
thats not that simple though

emokid
05-29-2006, 11:09 AM
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/3271/im0004937om.th.jpg (http://img126.imageshack.us/my.php?image=im0004937om.jpg)
simpler?

unknown...
05-29-2006, 11:19 AM
emokid, the R looks good, but the 3d should all go to 1 direction...like 3d only on the left or on the right, not on both sides.....

unknown...
05-29-2006, 11:22 AM
and dont listen to these kids....u already have a good style and its ur own....dont start back at simples, if u like how it looks than keep doing wat u want, every1 else is directing u towards a textbook style and urs is already ur own....

keep ur styles and get ta paintin....my opinion

smer
05-29-2006, 11:22 AM
edit moooooooooommmmmmmmmyyyyyyyyy ldbgkon si

emokid
05-29-2006, 11:27 AM
cheers unknown, im gonna put the r into a word sometime, it was meant to be a j but it went wrong
and the 3d, i was trying to get into to look like it bent inwards but its kinda hard so just looks dumb

tea dee sea
05-29-2006, 11:31 AM
crits plz
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/9827/picture73nx.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 11:32 AM
Originally posted by tea dee sea@May 29 2006, 11:31 AM
crits plz
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/9827/picture73nx.jpg
its gettin better..i dont like how the forcefield is the same color as the words are though

.D.H.
05-29-2006, 11:33 AM
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/2442/10064444kx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
overall style...been doin graff for around 1 and a half years
needs help

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 11:34 AM
you must be lying, a year and a half and your that shitty?

.D.H.
05-29-2006, 11:38 AM
sorry no lie
you shoulda seen me the first few months

smer
05-29-2006, 11:52 AM
it says ytok i think im gunna keep my style like this
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3080/photo00984dl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aces
05-29-2006, 12:14 PM
that style kinda reminds me of runcis shit pretty good though the Y is a little weird but other than that its good

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 12:19 PM
Originally posted by smer@May 29 2006, 11:52 AM
it says ytok i think im gunna keep my style like this
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3080/photo00984dl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
smer my man

nice shit..youre improving a lot..it looks like your style is changing a little too
the t looks a little wierd though with the big side and the little side
im also wondering what it would look like with the part of the k that is hidden coming from the top

aces
05-29-2006, 12:24 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/92/picture0194rk.jpg

new style im workin on. i know its hard to see but i did it in pencil and since im gettin prismas in a few days i thought i wouldnt waste the piece by usin sharpies. its not really crooked but i suck at taking pics so yea crits, comments, ideas for fills, or anything else are welcome

Fosale!
05-29-2006, 12:31 PM
If you people want some markers, i&#39;d be more than happy to send a couple people a couple markers, maybe not my prismas but those designer markers, just tell me what colors, and if the ones u want arent dried up i can send em to you, if ya want this, PM me

smer
05-29-2006, 12:33 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+May 29 2006, 12:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ May 29 2006, 12:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-smer@May 29 2006, 11:52 AM
it says ytok i think im gunna keep my style like this
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3080/photo00984dl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
smer my man

nice shit..youre improving a lot..it looks like your style is changing a little too
the t looks a little wierd though with the big side and the little side
im also wondering what it would look like with the part of the k that is hidden coming from the top [/b][/quote]
yea im gunna change the t ive decided i dont like it well... back to sketchin :D

smer
05-29-2006, 12:34 PM
edit* thanks for crits you guys

aces
05-29-2006, 12:35 PM
that would be cool but my mommy said dont talk to strangers

jk i just dont think that its a good idea to give out adresses on a site that is all about illegal stuff ya know cuz for all i know you could be a cop not sayin you are but still dont feel like takin the risk

aces
05-29-2006, 12:35 PM
Originally posted by aces@May 29 2006, 01:24 PM
http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/92/picture0194rk.jpg

new style im workin on. i know its hard to see but i did it in pencil and since im gettin prismas in a few days i thought i wouldnt waste the piece by usin sharpies. its not really crooked but i suck at taking pics so yea crits, comments, ideas for fills, or anything else are welcome
bumpin to the new page

C3ZR ONE
05-29-2006, 12:57 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+May 29 2006, 12:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ May 29 2006, 12:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-smer@May 29 2006, 11:52 AM
it says ytok i think im gunna keep my style like this
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3080/photo00984dl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
smer my man

nice shit..youre improving a lot..it looks like your style is changing a little too
the t looks a little wierd though with the big side and the little side
im also wondering what it would look like with the part of the k that is hidden coming from the top [/b][/quote]
Smer- You know you can&#39;t keep that style.... That IS a straight up Runci bite. I&#39;d even edit the pic out before he sees it cause some kid tried that shit a while back and Runci got super heated and everybody shit on him... He gave up and left the forums. It&#39;s nice, but you&#39;d better drop it like a bad habit...

aces
05-29-2006, 12:59 PM
i dont think its a straight up bite more of a play on runci&#39;s style

C3ZR ONE
05-29-2006, 01:01 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol: It&#39;s not a bite. It&#39;s a chomp&#33; He ate the whole fuckin thing and shit out a clone... That is Runci&#39;s own style. Period.

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 01:12 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@May 29 2006, 01:01 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol: It&#39;s not a bite. It&#39;s a chomp&#33; He ate the whole fuckin thing and shit out a clone... That is Runci&#39;s own style. Period.
i think its a coiensidence(sp?)
im not sure though because ive already questioned him about having a style similar to runci&#39;s...
runcis letters are a bit thicker though but im still not sure

Amuse-OnE
05-29-2006, 01:14 PM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/6113/amusedegrader676x5073mc.th.jpg (http://img71.imageshack.us/my.php?image=amusedegrader676x5073mc.jpg)

Crits plz... :rolleyes:

C3ZR ONE
05-29-2006, 01:16 PM
Let&#39;s come back to reality kids. It&#39;s a fucking Runci BITE. Not possibly coincidence...

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 01:22 PM
wouldnt somebody have enough sense not to bite somebody from the same site and post up their sketches on the same site though..if he did bite it, it would be like he was begging to be caught

but like i said..i dunno

aces
05-29-2006, 01:41 PM
if he bit he bit let him continue to bite and if he bit he knew it so he knows that he wont get any better but if he didnt bite then its fine just give him crits all the same and stop the beef

can i please get crits on my piece up a few posts

C3ZR ONE
05-29-2006, 01:43 PM
You would think so, especially cuzz Runci&#39;s style is so unique, but I&#39;ve seen it happen before. People love his shit, so they give it a try and they end up liking it so much they just have to post it. It would be allright if you noted that you were just trying it out for practice and gave props to Runci, but you can&#39;t just claim it as your new style. It&#39;s Runci style. Scotland thug shit.

smer
05-29-2006, 01:43 PM
like aces said if i bit it i woudnt post it in here and i woudnt post it in the uk thread either

aces
05-29-2006, 01:47 PM
can i just get some fuckin crits and can you guys just stop fightin about it

C3ZR ONE
05-29-2006, 01:54 PM
Smer- the piece you posted in the UK thread wasn&#39;t even the piece in question which makes me even more suspisicous, especially since there&#39;s a massive skill level jump involved, but I guess we can just agree to disagree.
Now someone crit Aces piece before he has a stroke&#33; :lol:
I&#39;m going bombing. Peace kids.
Rate- I&#39;ll get at you later when I get home. ;)

Hater-AiD~>
05-29-2006, 02:06 PM
aight cezr

aces your piece is cool..i wouldnt hide the "c" though

smer
05-29-2006, 02:08 PM
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...c=2938&st=25095 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=2938&st=25095) it is the sme flic
aces i like it

Sluts_r_us
05-29-2006, 02:33 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@May 29 2006, 01:54 PM
Smer- the piece you posted in the UK thread wasn&#39;t even the piece in question which makes me even more suspisicous, especially since there&#39;s a massive skill level jump involved, but I guess we can just agree to disagree.
Now someone crit Aces piece before he has a stroke&#33; :lol:
I&#39;m going bombing. Peace kids.
Rate- I&#39;ll get at you later when I get home. ;)
ahhh cezr what about me?&#33;?&#33;?


:( i feel so left out :(

smer
05-29-2006, 02:34 PM
new sketch
http://img450.imageshack.us/img450/3456/photo00993bx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?

alive
05-29-2006, 02:45 PM
Originally posted by alive@May 29 2006, 10:07 AM

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02443.jpg
heres a new piece, COERCE, (i know the arrow 3d is fucked up no need to mention that)
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02441.jpg
heres a throw, COERCE (but maybe u could help me on this,cuz i think it looks hot lyk this, but when i do it clean, it looks like shit)
ex.http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02442.jpg
is there a way to get the other effect on a wall? maybe with a needle cap or something?

heres another style ive been fuckin around with, its hard to see it though, cuz all ive got it bic pens, but with markers it looks better, ill use my friends and n get a pic of that
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02444.jpg
sez LUSTER

btw heres my luster contribute
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02432.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02445.jpg
finally, theres this style, which i can pull off fast for ne word, i did this ASTERISK in lyk 5 minutes at school yesterday for a friend
crits please?
sry so long - i shortend my orginal post but still gigantic

Mse
05-29-2006, 03:06 PM
well
you are better than you were before but you seem to have gone astray mse says "Dont color, That throw is pretty wack remember throws arent letters with bumps, that first piece (i know you stole those arrows from tonedope but its all good) it looks like a blockbuster not a piece and that r is wack"
overall keep doing your thing dont put 3d over letters it looks bad
my advice would be do throws for now as in just bubble letters i can try to show you what i mean in paint if you want?

-=ZANE=-
05-29-2006, 03:40 PM
well iv never been good at throwies but lately iv been trying to get into them...
only on lined paper, not wasting my good paper yet...

big one
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6213/goodzentthrow0rb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

page of em
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/8157/goodzentthrow29tl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dunno really... critz on em?

Mse
05-29-2006, 03:42 PM
does it say vant?
i think you shouldnt do one liners yet just normal bubble letters
and put lines between all letters

alive
05-29-2006, 03:44 PM
haha i did bite those arrows
i dunno if from tonedope or not
but i apologize either way,
i liked them and thought i mind as well play around with them
stole nothing else tho
they were an after thought, and now i wish i hadnt, they dont look vry good either

i would love it if ud show me abt the throws if its not to much trouble
thanks so much

lust told me that my pieces look to bubbly, i dont know exactly what that means or how to fix it, any ideas?

thanks again&#33;

ps. how in the world does that look like a blockbuster? sry but i dont understand

blaike
05-29-2006, 03:47 PM
Originally posted by Mse@May 29 2006, 03:42 PM
does it say vant?
i think you shouldnt do one liners yet just normal bubble letters
and put lines between all letters
i think it says &#39;text&#39; :P

Code
05-29-2006, 03:51 PM
k, i know you are all sick of my simple letters, but i got to start somewhere

In this one i took the peoples advice, i made the lines straighter and just put some wavy stuff.

So tell me how bad it is and follow it up with some critz

http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/9653/879ecb621ny.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-=ZANE=-
05-29-2006, 04:03 PM
lmao "zent"

first prob :rolleyes:

Mse
05-29-2006, 04:03 PM
block buster as in normal letters
as for the luster pieces i think your letters are just fundamentaly wrong you need to make it simpler thats all
as for paint here is the best i can do i suck at paint
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/150940671.jpg
but i hope you get what im trying to say dont do wobbly lines but the again i am being a hypocrite

runci
05-29-2006, 04:14 PM
Originally posted by smer@May 29 2006, 07:34 PM
new sketch
http://img450.imageshack.us/img450/3456/photo00993bx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits?
go simple
why is there bits comin off randomly

AMAZ tbscrew
05-29-2006, 04:33 PM
amet...in the toy thread...wtf? lol i double cheked 2 see wut thred i was in

C3ZR ONE
05-29-2006, 04:46 PM
Anybody feelin this throwie? I suck at &#39;em but I really wanted to try to enter something in the "sink" battle..
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00561144f00000014.jpg
:unsure:

Seti
05-29-2006, 04:48 PM
i like the s man, but doesnt it have to be painted to qualify?

C3ZR ONE
05-29-2006, 04:51 PM
Not unless they changed the rules... :blink:
Damn...I gotta quit with the emoticons..

Amuse-OnE
05-29-2006, 05:04 PM
Originally posted by Amuse&#045;OnE@May 29 2006, 01:14 PM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/6113/amusedegrader676x5073mc.th.jpg (http://img71.imageshack.us/my.php?image=amusedegrader676x5073mc.jpg)

Crits plz... :rolleyes:
CRITZ PLZ&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

C3ZR ONE
05-29-2006, 05:06 PM
Amuse- Nice color usage. It&#39;s a very good start. ;)
PS.- The M is a little wack tho.

BRAINE
05-29-2006, 05:15 PM
that sink is a crazy style, cezr.
i just dont like how theres big cylinders coming out of all the letters.
they say "air is expensive" if you understand that hyperbole or whatever type of verbal formation i just typed
all the letters match up but the NK dont match the S because of how the top of the s comes back down? hard to explain
and the I looks like an L but its excuseable.



basically, its better than i can do

jerm_mtl
05-29-2006, 05:21 PM
Originally posted by Amuse&#045;OnE+May 29 2006, 05:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Amuse-OnE @ May 29 2006, 05:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Amuse&#045;OnE@May 29 2006, 01:14 PM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/6113/amusedegrader676x5073mc.th.jpg (http://img71.imageshack.us/my.php?image=amusedegrader676x5073mc.jpg)

Crits plz... :rolleyes:
CRITZ PLZ&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; [/b][/quote]
hahahahahha marco little dude whutup man

tea dee sea
05-29-2006, 05:21 PM
Originally posted by tea dee sea@May 29 2006, 11:31 AM
crits plz
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/9827/picture73nx.jpg
bump for crits

jerm_mtl
05-29-2006, 05:24 PM
Originally posted by alive+May 29 2006, 02:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ May 29 2006, 02:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@May 29 2006, 10:07 AM

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02443.jpg
heres a new piece, COERCE, (i know the arrow 3d is fucked up no need to mention that)
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02441.jpg
heres a throw, COERCE (but maybe u could help me on this,cuz i think it looks hot lyk this, but when i do it clean, it looks like shit)
ex.http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02442.jpg
is there a way to get the other effect on a wall? maybe with a needle cap or something?

heres another style ive been fuckin around with, its hard to see it though, cuz all ive got it bic pens, but with markers it looks better, ill use my friends and n get a pic of that
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02444.jpg
sez LUSTER

btw heres my luster contribute
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02432.jpg

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02445.jpg
finally, theres this style, which i can pull off fast for ne word, i did this ASTERISK in lyk 5 minutes at school yesterday for a friend
crits please?
sry so long - i shortend my orginal post but still gigantic [/b][/quote]
i really hate ur R`s

smer
05-29-2006, 05:25 PM
its nice just dont couler the holes in the letters with the forcy couler

jerm_mtl
05-29-2006, 05:25 PM
Originally posted by Amuse&#045;OnE+May 29 2006, 05:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Amuse-OnE @ May 29 2006, 05:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Amuse&#045;OnE@May 29 2006, 01:14 PM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/6113/amusedegrader676x5073mc.th.jpg (http://img71.imageshack.us/my.php?image=amusedegrader676x5073mc.jpg)

Crits plz... :rolleyes:
CRITZ PLZ&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; [/b][/quote]
tiens homie, uuh ben yƩ kan mm chill mais add kkch au lettre

cord
05-29-2006, 05:27 PM
Originally posted by .D.H.@May 29 2006, 04:33 PM
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/2442/10064444kx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
overall style...been doin graff for around 1 and a half years
needs help
does one of em say dose?

writing dose would be a bad idea for this reason:

http://img503.imageshack.us/img503/7892/61dk.jpg

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9273/freedombuilding3rk.jpg

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/9468/doseanotherbillboard20op.jpg

C3ZR ONE
05-29-2006, 05:31 PM
I thought Dose was in Florida..?? Him and Buk 50 are all over last months Undastream mag.

aces
05-29-2006, 05:31 PM
Originally posted by tea dee sea+May 29 2006, 06:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (tea dee sea &#064; May 29 2006, 06:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-tea dee sea@May 29 2006, 11:31 AM
crits plz
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/9827/picture73nx.jpg
bump for crits[/b][/quote]
i dont really like the n and the little things on the bottom of the A and G also the 3d is a little weird in some places

edit: and the forcefeild being the same color as the letters doesnt work for me but w/e

cord
05-29-2006, 06:38 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@May 29 2006, 10:31 PM
I thought Dose was in Florida..?? Him and Buk 50 are all over last months Undastream mag.
i have no idea mate :D

BoRe-719-
05-29-2006, 06:50 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@May 29 2006, 04:46 PM
Anybody feelin this throwie? I suck at &#39;em but I really wanted to try to enter something in the "sink" battle..
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00561144f00000014.jpg
:unsure:
u did this?? tight shit, looks like u tried to squeeze that entire S into the spade arrow thingy, maybe spread it out into two arrows like u did with the N and the K....also loose the buuble shit around it.

-----------------------------

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/457.jpg
mkay a piece ive been workin on for a while, i know my flow sucks n all that bull, id really appreciate SOMBODY GOOD, critting this shit.
oh and its fuckin huge i got this new black book that barely fit onto my scanner, and the sketch covers up the whole bottom of the page.

.D.H.
05-29-2006, 08:22 PM
does one of em say dose?


nope. deco hase risem

hungr
05-29-2006, 08:30 PM
some next thang i did..still straight letters ...shitty picture all the others were mad light and no lines were visible :(

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a365/mct1ts/P5290046.jpg

ados
05-29-2006, 08:37 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0009.jpg
high as fuck on pain killers...
some crits?????

bore, thats comin along. you&#39;ve improved tons since last time iv&#39;e seen your shit...you gotta work on your structure, and loose some arrows. those colours are fresh. some of your extensions are out of place. keep practicin tho man, it&#39;s comin along.

hunger, your E doesn&#39;t fit, its a different style. and your R needs some work.

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 08:43 PM
Switched names to Tranq Cause poet was an old school bomber from the 80&#39;s. Im in dire need of some crits whatchyas think?


http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/IM000794.jpg

beone
05-29-2006, 08:46 PM
^i dont like it at all but keep workin it lose the sloppy details and try makin em all the same size

aces
05-29-2006, 08:47 PM
http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/2736/picture0019ou.jpg
i wanna do this tonight what do you think of it

ados
05-29-2006, 08:47 PM
before you post, resize your fucking picture. learn to colour. black and dark green dont go together well. do block letters, and keep them all the same size. loose that weird ass forcefield with the ..__... not sure what the fuck that is. sketch more, then post when it&#39;s good enough to crit. cuz you aint anywhere near that yet.

ados
05-29-2006, 08:48 PM
ace, you need to sketch alot more before you go painting. im not gonna lie thats ugly shit.

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 08:50 PM
Originally posted by PoetDB@May 29 2006, 08:43 PM
Switched names to Tranq Cause poet was an old school bomber from the 80&#39;s. Im in dire need of some crits whatchyas think?


http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/IM000794.jpg
hahaha wow, your a fucking idiot.
you bit marc ecko&#39;s video game and thought youd get away with it?
your a fucking fag.
seriously, your a piece of shit. there is no hope for you.
tranq.wow haha your fucking dumb.

AMAZ tbscrew
05-29-2006, 08:51 PM
agreed.

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 08:52 PM
I didnt pick Tranq cause It was close to trane.... I played Gettin up a while back. When I decided to switch to tranq I looked there for a reference. I plan to change my style to something original once I get a hang of coloring and shaping letters. So relax, I dont plan on straight biting everything.....

aces
05-29-2006, 08:54 PM
alright ill lay offthepainting

ados
05-29-2006, 08:55 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213+May 29 2006, 08:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (flclnaruto1213 @ May 29 2006, 08:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-PoetDB@May 29 2006, 08:43 PM
Switched names to Tranq Cause poet was an old school bomber from the 80&#39;s. Im in dire need of some crits whatchyas think?


hahaha wow, your a fucking idiot.
you bit marc ecko&#39;s video game and thought youd get away with it?
your a fucking fag.
seriously, your a piece of shit. there is no hope for you.
tranq.wow haha your fucking dumb. [/b][/quote]
and your a fuckin idiot for quoting that ugly ass fuckin shit. idiot goof nuts. crit shit. instead of ruining this forum with your tough guy replies, crit the stuff worth criting. theres and idea. idiot.

near
05-29-2006, 08:58 PM
ados theres no "E" in that hungr thing

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 08:59 PM
No what the fuck? Why the fuck is everyone so beat?. I only ever get constructive opinions from Cezr one, and beone. So fuck you if your not gonna be considerate enough to help instead of beef...

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:00 PM
if you really suck that bad that you have to use a video game for a reference, and cant even decently bite it.
then you dont deserve to do graffiti.

not to mention the fact that you must have incedentally forgotten to say that you used the game as a "reference"

beone
05-29-2006, 09:01 PM
who cares if he writes tranq as long asd he isnt biting he can write what he wants

and what fucking person who is just starting out doesnt use a reference didnt u ever look at the local graf in ur area to see the styles and how they write letters if u say know thats complete bullshit because everyone looks at somthing to start with thats why there is a thing called graffiti and not word writing because it has a certain style to it everyone has to reference some one in the beging

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by ados+May 29 2006, 08:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ados @ May 29 2006, 08:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@May 29 2006, 08:50 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-PoetDB@May 29 2006, 08:43 PM
Switched names to Tranq Cause poet was an old school bomber from the 80&#39;s. Im in dire need of some crits whatchyas think?


hahaha wow, your a fucking idiot.
you bit marc ecko&#39;s video game and thought youd get away with it?
your a fucking fag.
seriously, your a piece of shit. there is no hope for you.
tranq.wow haha your fucking dumb.
and your a fuckin idiot for quoting that ugly ass fuckin shit. idiot goof nuts. crit shit. instead of ruining this forum with your tough guy replies, crit the stuff worth criting. theres and idea. idiot. [/b][/quote]
so wait a second, your telling me a bitten piece of trash is actually worth criting?
your not supposed to crit bitten stuff you fucking idiot.
and poet you dont deserve people to be considerate to you if you bite video games.

Sluts_r_us
05-29-2006, 09:03 PM
yo cezr heres a wack ass throw i did for you...shitty as hell....i did it while watching american history x...great movie but w.e.....the z was hard to come up wit...anyway here it is...hope you see it...
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3083/cezrthrow0018yq.jpg

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:04 PM
Originally posted by beone@May 29 2006, 09:01 PM
who cares if he writes tranq as long asd he isnt biting he can write what he wants
he is biting.
incase you guys didnt notice he stole that throwie from the game, not only did he copy the name, he copied a throw.

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:07 PM
Originally posted by beone@May 29 2006, 09:01 PM
who cares if he writes tranq as long asd he isnt biting he can write what he wants

and what fucking person who is just starting out doesnt use a reference didnt u ever look at the local graf in ur area to see the styles and how they write letters if u say know thats complete bullshit because everyone looks at somthing to start with thats why there is a thing called graffiti and not word writing because it has a certain style to it everyone has to reference some one in the beging
and what the fuck beone, why are you even in this conversation, your like one of the fucking worst fags on this site, your seriously bad.

Sluts_r_us
05-29-2006, 09:07 PM
who votes kick to the face?

BoRe-719-
05-29-2006, 09:08 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213+May 29 2006, 09:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (flclnaruto1213 &#064; May 29 2006, 09:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-beone@May 29 2006, 09:01 PM
who cares if he writes tranq as long asd he isnt biting he can write what he wants
he is biting.
incase you guys didnt notice he stole that throwie from the game, not only did he copy the name, he copied a throw. [/b][/quote]
you sir, need to stfu.
seriously. I, along with everyone else has realized that......now shut it
edit-american hist. x IS one of the coolest movies EVA, id put it up there with fight club

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 09:09 PM
WHAT?&#33;, you fuckin retarted? I didnt bite the Name? Trane isnt Tranq....I write tranq cause its short for tranquility..... I just used the game cause it was close to what I write, and it was my first sketch for tranq.... So chill....

Although I do admit to bitin the style from the game, we all know that....

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:09 PM
...what i just said about beone goes the same for you bore, all your good for is characters.

ados
05-29-2006, 09:11 PM
how about you shut up cause your pissin me off. and fuck thats a G not E, thanks for pointing that out. still doesnt fit. and poet i gave you crits...so go fuck yourself.

beone
05-29-2006, 09:11 PM
how am i a faggot your the one going around beefin and shit all i do is post my stuff and crit on other peoples u sit on ur fucking ass all day typin on a computer shut the fuck up

BoRe-719-
05-29-2006, 09:12 PM
edit

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:13 PM
battle me then.

BoRe-719-
05-29-2006, 09:14 PM
...what i just said about beone goes the same for you bore, all your good for is characters.



and ur mom, but besides that i jus posted a piece last page....jus cuz im more used to karaks than letters doesnt mean u need to trash my style.

post ur shit. THEN beef.

yes i know bout the dub.

BoRe-719-
05-29-2006, 09:15 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@May 29 2006, 09:13 PM
battle me then.
mkay, uve obviously rotted ur brain from watching too much anime porn....isaid, POST UR SHIT

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 09:15 PM
Chill, my bad ados, I forgot you did. I was more or less referin to people who just beef, even if the style was bittin, I was jus trien to see where I made mistakes. Than tweak it and makemy own style from it...

ados
05-29-2006, 09:15 PM
all you clowns shut the fuck up. not directed at you bore. your chill and you posted a dope sketch. but everyone else go die.

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 09:17 PM
Why does every post get so hostile?

beone
05-29-2006, 09:18 PM
and its fuckin blocky simple simple toy letters all toys do that shit you can hardly call it a bite

BoRe-719-
05-29-2006, 09:19 PM
this shit ALWAYS happens.....every time i challenge naruto he skips.....seriously, shits happened like 4 times

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:19 PM
bore, forget posting my shit. why dont you just battle me.
ill battle you too, beone

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 09:20 PM
I dot blame him, we&#39;ve all seen your sick charaks.

ados
05-29-2006, 09:21 PM
CRIT THIS FUCKIN SHIT&#33;&#33;

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0009.jpg

CRIT THIS FUCKIN SHIT
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/457.jpg


fuck off flcuntsssssdouche bag

BoRe-719-
05-29-2006, 09:21 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@May 29 2006, 09:19 PM
bore, forget posting my shit. why dont you just battle me.
ill battle you too, beone
how bout u jus tell me where u live so i can kill u.....POST UR GODDAMN SHIT

edit-(sorry to bring the beef back....listen to ados, im out)

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:21 PM
what the fuck, bore please dont start with that shit. you never challengedme.
i challenged you once, and you dissapeared for a week.

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:22 PM
ill fucking take you all on, ados, bore, and beone.

ados
05-29-2006, 09:22 PM
hey you cunt rag. quit post whoring. your wack. take it to pm. hahaha buddy your shit isnt even on a level near me and bores. so you go fist yourself tell you come post something half decent, and then maybe i will battle you. im not wasting my time on your wackness.

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 09:25 PM
Yo ados, how long doe sit take you to sketch pieces like that? Which are sick by the way.

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:35 PM
Originally posted by ados@May 29 2006, 09:22 PM
hey you cunt rag. quit post whoring. your wack. take it to pm. hahaha buddy your shit isnt even on a level near me and bores. so you go fist yourself tell you come post something half decent, and then maybe i will battle you. im not wasting my time on your wackness.
hahahah. wow.
IF YOUR SO FUCKING CONFIDENT BATTLE ME THEN YOU PUSSY BITCH.

BoRe-719-
05-29-2006, 09:38 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@May 30 2005, 12:07 AM
hey guys any suggestions on this sketch?
anything at all would be great

im not sure which link to paste so there may be a few extras


http://img14.imgspot.com/u/05/149/00/akira.JPG

http://img14.imgspot.com/?u=05/149/00/akira.JPG

http://img14.imgspot.com/?u=05/149/00/akira.JPG

thanks

narutos shit^^



i wil soooooooooooooo battle u, cmon ados, lets waste some paper

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:39 PM
k. lets do it then.

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 09:41 PM
I dont mean to beef but how can you call me unoriginal if you write Akira? Good movie though...

And Im sorry, but my old "poet" bomb horizen sketch destroys your akira pieces in my opinion. So I dont know how you can beef with me...

ados
05-29-2006, 09:43 PM
hahaha alright bore...... i could take a shit and wipe my ass with a piece of paper and it would burn that fuckin kid......how about this, if we win, you leave. and don&#39;t ever come back.

and to poet. the sketch took 30 minutes to an hour, depends if im sidetracked, talkin on here and such.

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 09:44 PM
Damn bro, thats pretty quick. I&#39;ma try and make a quick sketch tonight for crits, but this time I wont use a game as a reference so no one can beef. heh.

BoRe-719-
05-29-2006, 09:44 PM
lol, naruto pmed me hes al.

NO KARAKS.....nigafuckthat i do what i wont

edit....and u better be done by friday bitch :angry:
im sick of starting battles that never get finished

ados
05-29-2006, 09:47 PM
Originally posted by ados@May 29 2006, 09:21 PM
CRIT THIS FUCKIN SHIT&#33;&#33;

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0009.jpg

CRIT THIS FUCKIN SHIT
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/457.jpg


fuck off flcuntsssssdouche bag
bore can do whatever he wants.


bump

beone
05-29-2006, 09:47 PM
since when am i not in this battle quick sketch for narturas whack ass

can i get some crits on this dont be like it sloppy cuz its not done

u make me look like a pro
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/240962.jpg

flclnaruto1213
05-29-2006, 09:49 PM
ok but if you guys werent fucking stupid youd know that that akira shit was from like 8 months ago. haha fucking dumbasses.i dont even knowwhere you found that. oh well. the battle&#39;s still on.
(i dont write "akira") i write junk.

BoRe-719-
05-29-2006, 09:54 PM
be, good shit, noce letters. it sorta seems like u crammed that K in, let it go off the page....two page pieces r the shit...gimme some color

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 09:55 PM
damn thats some dope shit beone, Sorta seems like letters are a little far a part though. But thats only what I see, I dont know whether or not you did it intentionally.

riddleboxxmcl
05-29-2006, 09:58 PM
Originally posted by PoetDB@May 29 2006, 09:43 PM
Switched names to Tranq Cause poet was an old school bomber from the 80&#39;s. Im in dire need of some crits whatchyas think?


http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/IM000794.jpg
thats a almost conplet bite off one of the throwies u can do on Getting up
except insted of E at the end its Q

AMAZ tbscrew
05-29-2006, 09:58 PM
tght u wrote fund...

old pen freestyle...my photobucket shit wont upload my pen freestyle i jus did rite now so idk



http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture066.jpg

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 10:00 PM
Yea riddle, I forgot to mention I used Getting up as a reference. I already got bitched at for it but its cool I guess. Imma make a quick throwie later for some crits of a different style....not froma game.

AMAZ tbscrew
05-29-2006, 10:01 PM
also old...but better then the gay beef rite now


http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture006.jpg
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture071.jpg

ghostbusta5
05-29-2006, 10:01 PM
theres already a guy on this thread who writes SEK but youve sure come a long way from your first few

EDit directed at Beone

riddleboxxmcl
05-29-2006, 10:08 PM
.

riddleboxxmcl
05-29-2006, 10:09 PM
Originally posted by PoetDB@May 29 2006, 11:00 PM
Yea riddle, I forgot to mention I used Getting up as a reference. I already got bitched at for it but its cool I guess. Imma make a quick throwie later for some crits of a different style....not froma game.
ah..ok

Dent
05-29-2006, 10:09 PM
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/1088/denture0014oc.th.jpg (http://img338.imageshack.us/my.php?image=denture0014oc.jpg)

Pro&#39;s, Con&#39;s?

riddleboxxmcl
05-29-2006, 10:11 PM
ok 3d, loose the green arrow thing, change ur "d" its the only rounded letterso it dosent really fit

scoot
05-29-2006, 10:33 PM
Originally posted by Dent@May 29 2006, 10:09 PM
http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/1088/denture0014oc.th.jpg (http://img338.imageshack.us/my.php?image=denture0014oc.jpg)

Pro&#39;s, Con&#39;s?
yea the arrow and the D throw it off other then that it looks pretty decent


oh riddleboxx lol u juggalo runnin with a hatchet lol