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riddleboxxmcl
05-29-2006, 10:59 PM
^hella :D

o and dent if i were u inless ur name means somethin to u id change it cuz every time i read it ,it reminds me of a reteard that got droped on his head
no beaf inbtended tho :lol:

beone
05-29-2006, 11:20 PM
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/240971.jpg
dont really like it im not writing sek just doing it cuz i like the lettersd

scoot
05-29-2006, 11:27 PM
Originally posted by riddleboxxmcl@May 29 2006, 10:59 PM
^hella :D

o and dent if i were u inless ur name means somethin to u id change it cuz every time i read it ,it reminds me of a reteard that got droped on his head
no beaf inbtended tho :lol:
haha

-ex-juggalo

PoetDB
05-29-2006, 11:40 PM
Damn be, thats pretty vicious. Odd coloring. But vicious nonetheless.

ados
05-29-2006, 11:45 PM
be one, loose those drips, and that point at the top of your E

beone
05-29-2006, 11:47 PM
its old school coloring

yeah i didnt relize till u put it in ink that the e was fucked

IKEZ
05-29-2006, 11:48 PM
Just two new styles im tryin to work with right now... I apologize for the mess :D .

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/8168/14wg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9669/20ta.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

beone
05-29-2006, 11:53 PM
i like the second one but not the first

PoetDB
05-30-2006, 12:03 AM
Alright, read through all the forums and such. I'm gonna head back to the very basics. First time trien to use blockbuster....

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/TranqBlockBuster.jpg

Resized it this time. I know its pretty bad hence the reason Im asking for crits.

Mse
05-30-2006, 03:34 AM
this beef pisses me off i wanna get in on narutos side

Hater-AiD~>
05-30-2006, 04:38 AM
Originally posted by IKEZ@May 29 2006, 11:48 PM
Just two new styles im tryin to work with right now... I apologize for the mess :D .

http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/8168/14wg2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9669/20ta.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
try some sideways 3d on that..it might turn out to look ok

Recon
05-30-2006, 07:47 AM
new style

http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/8334/rekon952ei.jpg

Belisle
05-30-2006, 09:20 AM
thats good

jerm_mtl
05-30-2006, 09:40 AM
Originally posted by ados+May 29 2006, 09:47 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ados @ May 29 2006, 09:47 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ados@May 29 2006, 09:21 PM
CRIT THIS FUCKIN SHIT&#33;&#33;

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0009.jpg

CRIT THIS FUCKIN SHIT
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/457.jpg


fuck off flcuntsssssdouche bag
bore can do whatever he wants.


bump [/b][/quote]
thats cool man

PTG
05-30-2006, 10:06 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v57/CMBEN/Havoc1.jpg

This is ma latest sketch...Defo feeling like im getting somwhere now. I&#39;m gonna do this sketch again, and sort out the V and the O...and it will look much better i rekon...what do you guys think? Safeeee.

beone
05-30-2006, 10:13 AM
Originally posted by beone@May 29 2006, 11:20 PM
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/240971.jpg
dont really like it im not writing sek just doing it cuz i like the lettersd
^ its pretty good make the outline all one color tho

jerm_mtl
05-30-2006, 10:17 AM
Originally posted by PTG@May 30 2006, 10:06 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v57/CMBEN/Havoc1.jpg

This is ma latest sketch...Defo feeling like im getting somwhere now. I&#39;m gonna do this sketch again, and sort out the V and the O...and it will look much better i rekon...what do you guys think? Safeeee.
i like it, does it say HAVOC?

jerm_mtl
05-30-2006, 10:19 AM
Originally posted by PoetDB@May 30 2006, 12:03 AM
Alright, read through all the forums and such. I&#39;m gonna head back to the very basics. First time trien to use blockbuster....

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/TranqBlockBuster.jpg

Resized it this time. I know its pretty bad hence the reason Im asking for crits.
i really dont like it sry

some guy from NCI...
05-30-2006, 10:31 AM
Originally posted by PTG@May 30 2006, 10:06 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v57/CMBEN/Havoc1.jpg

This is ma latest sketch...Defo feeling like im getting somwhere now. I&#39;m gonna do this sketch again, and sort out the V and the O...and it will look much better i rekon...what do you guys think? Safeeee.
Liiikin itt&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Yeh just sort out the V (maybe push the two bits closer together)

Belisle
05-30-2006, 11:17 AM
I want to know what could be better and what is good for my sketches.

Tahnks.

some guy from NCI...
05-30-2006, 11:35 AM
yo belisle... you come to back it up?

WESTSIDE HOMIE&#33;

I and I think thats crap&#33;

The bottom one&#39;s.... just no. Try to stay simple.

The top one looks to me like it says... B...L...I... and then I get lost. Sort out the letters for both of &#39;em. Make em clearer.

For the bottom one... the 3d is a flop. it&#39;s going in two different directions?&#33; sort that out. The 3d is also overlapping some of the letters which make it look like a flop. Avoid doing that.

Cant be bothered for much more advice. Might post some in a bit.

PoetDB
05-30-2006, 11:43 AM
Reffering to jerm, its cool bro. I really dont like any of it but the Q myslef. But I wanted to head back to the basics, and I wanted to see how I could improve from there ya know?

some guy from NCI...
05-30-2006, 11:55 AM
Tranq... stay at the basics for a bit i&#39;d say. Just Until you get them down. Try and do the same again but keeping the same width throughout your letters. IMO it should come out alot better. The 3d seems to be fine &#39;n all, just sort out the letter size.

uhhh
05-30-2006, 12:16 PM
i&#39;d say once you can make simple letters look good, then start trying other stuff ;)

Sluts_r_us
05-30-2006, 12:17 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@May 29 2006, 09:03 PM
yo cezr heres a wack ass throw i did for you...shitty as hell....i did it while watching american history x...great movie but w.e.....the z was hard to come up wit...anyway here it is...hope you see it...
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3083/cezrthrow0018yq.jpg
for cezr.....also this beef is mad gay....im on narutos side because...hes good n im cool wit him....w.e get this shit over wit n stop ruining the forums...

Code
05-30-2006, 12:40 PM
k, i know you are all sick of my simple letters, but i got to start somewhere

In this one i took the peoples advice, i made the lines straighter and just put some wavy stuff.

So tell me how bad it is and follow it up with some critz



http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/2582/scan00057jg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Seti
05-30-2006, 12:50 PM
to be honest man, i see no imagination in your work, try something new, that sketch is way too simple, but for the constructive crits id say bring the o and c to the right, cuz the o doesnt look like an o.

BoRe-719-
05-30-2006, 12:52 PM
Originally posted by Code@May 30 2006, 12:40 PM
k, i know you are all sick of my simple letters, but i got to start somewhere

In this one i took the peoples advice, i made the lines straighter and just put some wavy stuff.

So tell me how bad it is and follow it up with some critz



http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/2582/scan00057jg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
keep ur work clean, smudges r bad.
and yeah, move the o and c over more. add color

Code
05-30-2006, 12:53 PM
k, ty for the crit i see you point on the imagination, i will do that on my next sketch. The thing is i was trying to get the simple letter structure down, but now that its better than before i will start messing around with the letters and all.

Hater-AiD~>
05-30-2006, 01:09 PM
Originally posted by Code@May 30 2006, 12:40 PM
k, i know you are all sick of my simple letters, but i got to start somewhere

In this one i took the peoples advice, i made the lines straighter and just put some wavy stuff.

So tell me how bad it is and follow it up with some critz



http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/2582/scan00057jg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
stop hiding your o so much

it looks like its getting sawed in half by the b

PoetDB
05-30-2006, 01:30 PM
Yo NCI, thanks for the crits, Ill give it a shot. This time I might add color.

littlerocky
05-30-2006, 02:57 PM
i dunno if i already posted this shit in hear if i did my bad sry :huh:
first wildstyle type thing attempted..turned out kinda wack ..done in school pen sketch
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/4534/imgp04480sv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

New Throw
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/1184/imgp04519ke.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Simples
http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/7690/imgp04538fv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits and Comments please

Hater-AiD~>
05-30-2006, 03:10 PM
Originally posted by littlerocky@May 30 2006, 02:57 PM
i dunno if i already posted this shit in hear if i did my bad sry :huh:
first wildstyle type thing attempted..turned out kinda wack ..done in school pen sketch
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/4534/imgp04480sv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

never do your 3d over your letters

flip
05-30-2006, 03:35 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h65/pHiLLyfLips/d23fd99b.jpg
.... yea

beefgerky
05-30-2006, 03:36 PM
no.

flip
05-30-2006, 03:40 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h65/pHiLLyfLips/philspics.jpg
and this

Hater-AiD~>
05-30-2006, 03:40 PM
is there anybody out there that can help me with my a, t, and e
maybe even the R
haha
critz please
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/5274/dscf17534wa.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aces
05-30-2006, 03:43 PM
ok if you cant do the letters in your own name chose a different one or check out some other peoples letters and take some of the BASIC LETTER STRUCTURE meaning dont bite completely just play off their letters

Hater-AiD~>
05-30-2006, 03:48 PM
i dont want to change it completely..i just need help with basic stuff like placement and addons..

aces
05-30-2006, 03:51 PM
dont do add ons and make your letters all the same hieght and your 3d is off in some places but not too bad

flip
05-30-2006, 04:02 PM
mines are no good?

mluckxxx
05-30-2006, 04:08 PM
just got into graff a few weeks ago, lookin for crits:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v250/infekt/eh.jpg

its real sloppy, didnt bother adding any color just wanted to get it up here and get some critiicism

TricksForKids
05-30-2006, 04:28 PM
right direction man^ like to see kids not using tons of colour right away, just clean it up a bit, lookds like you took 0.89234624 seconds to do it, try and fix the L and U but the C and K re looking decent

Peace

aces
05-30-2006, 04:32 PM
considering you just started a few weeks ago that is really good

mluckxxx
05-30-2006, 04:45 PM
thanks dudes, yeah ive been tryin to get other u&#39;s but i dont know, i keep goin back to this one. i&#39;ll work on it and post somethin up a little later

flip
05-30-2006, 05:05 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h65/pHiLLyfLips/philspics076.jpg

Quadratic
05-30-2006, 05:06 PM
for a toy battle on 12oz...

any crits?

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/SOUR.jpg

mluckxxx
05-30-2006, 05:08 PM
quad - not bad, i like how the o kinda blends into the whole smokey theme. not sure about the points on the s and r though. good idea overall

Quadratic
05-30-2006, 05:20 PM
thanks.

personally i like the points on the R and S but i fucked up the bottom of the S, it looks too straight.... oh well.

BoRe-719-
05-30-2006, 05:31 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/scan00014.jpg

uhh kay, i know it sucks....alls im asking for is some help with a colorscheme.
ive got like, every prisma.....so gimme a scheme. thx

mluckxxx
05-30-2006, 05:41 PM
Originally posted by Quadratic@May 30 2006, 05:20 PM
thanks.

personally i like the points on the R and S but i fucked up the bottom of the S, it looks too straight.... oh well.
yeah dont worry about what i tihnk, if you wanna keep the points go for it.

nephsike
05-30-2006, 05:45 PM
Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;@May 30 2006, 06:31 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/scan00014.jpg

uhh kay, i know it sucks....alls im asking for is some help with a colorscheme.
ive got like, every prisma.....so gimme a scheme. thx
dont waste your time coloring it....lose all the arrows and simplify your letters...11 or h/e many arrows is a little much...but the arrows themslef look pretty good..it just doesnt flow at all with the letters

Quadratic
05-30-2006, 05:52 PM
Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;@May 30 2006, 05:31 PM


uhh kay, i know it sucks....alls im asking for is some help with a colorscheme.
ive got like, every prisma.....so gimme a scheme. thx
im a big fan of the combination of Prisma "sky blue light" and "mute turqoise" and then highliting it with a silver gel pen....

the 3 colors seem to work well together in my opinion

as far as the arrows, there is a little too many but the only one that really looks out of place to me is the big long one on the top left

Pams.oner
05-30-2006, 05:52 PM
id use a really bright orange that sticks out.

aces
05-30-2006, 06:26 PM
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/8596/picture0037gl.jpg
any crits finished for toy battle

Pams.oner
05-30-2006, 06:29 PM
(http://img346.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture236bf.jpg)

some bomb&#39;s.^^^

[img]http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/6049/picture278rv.th.jpg (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture278rv.jpg)
http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/5877/picture266rj.th.jpg (http://img317.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture266rj.jpg)

http://img317.imageshack.us/img317/6421/picture289th.th.jpg (http://img317.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture289th.jpg)

funniest shit ive ever done.
http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/254/picture291cj.th.jpg (http://img402.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture291cj.jpg)

^^
http://img415.imageshack.us/img415/4/picture309ih.th.jpg (http://img415.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture309ih.jpg)

http://img415.imageshack.us/img415/5866/picture318lg.th.jpg (http://img415.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture318lg.jpg)
http://img420.imageshack.us/img420/2346/picture321zi.th.jpg (http://img420.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture321zi.jpg)

thats it/

PTG
05-30-2006, 06:34 PM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl+May 30 2006, 10:17 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (jerm_mtl @ May 30 2006, 10:17 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-PTG@May 30 2006, 10:06 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v57/CMBEN/Havoc1.jpg

This is ma latest sketch...Defo feeling like im getting somwhere now. I&#39;m gonna do this sketch again, and sort out the V and the O...and it will look much better i rekon...what do you guys think? Safeeee.
i like it, does it say HAVOC? [/b][/quote]
Yea man B)

Pams.oner
05-30-2006, 06:37 PM
aces like that stuff.

AMAZ tbscrew
05-30-2006, 06:57 PM
Originally posted by nephsike+May 30 2006, 05:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nephsike @ May 30 2006, 05:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-BoRe&#045;719&#045;@May 30 2006, 06:31 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/scan00014.jpg

uhh kay, i know it sucks....alls im asking for is some help with a colorscheme.
ive got like, every prisma.....so gimme a scheme. thx
dont waste your time coloring it....lose all the arrows and simplify your letters...11 or h/e many arrows is a little much...but the arrows themslef look pretty good..it just doesnt flow at all with the letters [/b][/quote]
u never posted ur work.

jooker
05-30-2006, 08:19 PM
I´ve tried to do one bomb SLIP.
this bomb is good?
What I can improve?

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/606/cimg85708rw.jpg

excuse me for the English im from BRAZIL

thanks,

beone
05-30-2006, 08:20 PM
^do not overlap
make all letters the same size

Pams.oner
05-30-2006, 08:23 PM
can any one say any thing about mine ive crited enuf

AMAZ tbscrew
05-30-2006, 08:38 PM
pams i like ur 2nd trowie the most...work on that one the most if ur guna add a shadow or w.e u added...add it to the hole thing..not just a bottem part....yano wut i mean?....and fix up ur letters some dont look good...


arite i did this pen freestyle yesturday it wouldnt upload tho...http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture073.jpg

Pams.oner
05-30-2006, 08:52 PM
thnks i like that man i dont think that shud be critted its too good,

C3ZR ONE
05-30-2006, 09:34 PM
Pams- Second pic throw is super fresh&#33; pic one&#39;s got some good shit too. Looking forward to seeing more.

PTG- Nice structure and flow. I like it.

Bore- Nephiske has a bug up his ass with that "don&#39;t waste time coloring it" bullshit. It&#39;s unique and one of the nicest pieces I&#39;ve seen in the toys thread in a while. Props.

Amaze........................GOD DAMN nigguh...I feel sorry for your girlfriend. I detect some mental instability comin from you.. :lol: You&#39;re still my boy tho.

Sink Throwie battle
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00561144f00000017.jpg

nephsike
05-30-2006, 09:38 PM
i&#39;ll stab you *****

C3ZR ONE
05-30-2006, 09:40 PM
Don&#39;t be a fuckin kid.

nephsike
05-30-2006, 09:41 PM
amaz....you got to be the dumbest little kid on this site.....ive aready reposted shit for you like 3 times....i cant believe you like it that much that you keep requesting it over and over...


nephs

nephsike
05-30-2006, 09:42 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@May 30 2006, 10:40 PM
Don&#39;t be a fuckin kid.
im about to cyber slap you man....im not joking any more&#33;

C3ZR ONE
05-30-2006, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us+May 30 2006, 12:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sluts_r_us @ May 30 2006, 12:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@May 29 2006, 09:03 PM
yo cezr heres a wack ass throw i did for you...shitty as hell....i did it while watching american history x...great movie but w.e.....the z was hard to come up wit...anyway here it is...hope you see it...
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3083/cezrthrow0018yq.jpg
for cezr.....also this beef is mad gay....im on narutos side because...hes good n im cool wit him....w.e get this shit over wit n stop ruining the forums... [/b][/quote]
Thanks Pesk. I like that shit. Now quit makin money and put it on a slap for my book fucker&#33; :P

nephsike
05-30-2006, 09:46 PM
i&#39;ll post some new shit in the AM...i know you kids are runnin low on shit to bite...i&#39;ll hook yall up

on the nephs ike

ados
05-30-2006, 09:50 PM
that throw is wack.. i dont like that style your going for.

nephsike
05-30-2006, 10:04 PM
new name.....just wait till you see the throwie
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g167/theironcitypounder/graffiti062.jpg
more tommorrow or sometime soon after

beone
05-30-2006, 10:08 PM
twalk?

i like it

nephsike
05-30-2006, 10:08 PM
jaywalk

beone
05-30-2006, 10:10 PM
ahhh u sly mofo i wasnt sure if it was a j or the t was mad extended

nephsike
05-30-2006, 10:16 PM
kinda old.......never finished..lost intrest after the WA...just found it under my desk
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g167/theironcitypounder/graffiti063.jpg

Fosale!
05-30-2006, 10:19 PM
i dont like your R but that jaywalk, fuckin sick i just think the curl on the A is a little off on the bottom

AoAssis
05-30-2006, 10:22 PM
Originally posted by nephsike+May 30 2006, 09:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nephsike @ May 30 2006, 09:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@May 30 2006, 10:40 PM
Don&#39;t be a fuckin kid.
im about to cyber slap you man....im not joking any more&#33; [/b][/quote]
O shit you better cyber run Cezr.

C3ZR ONE
05-30-2006, 10:36 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis+May 30 2006, 10:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ May 30 2006, 10:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by nephsike@May 30 2006, 09:42 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-C3ZR ONE@May 30 2006, 10:40 PM
Don&#39;t be a fuckin kid.
im about to cyber slap you man....im not joking any more&#33;
O shit you better cyber run Cezr. [/b][/quote]
:lol: I&#39;m to old for cyber beef. It&#39;s just too fuckin gay. If you can&#39;t exchange actual punches, then just go about your fuckin buisiness in my oppinion.

nephsike
05-30-2006, 10:37 PM
we could meet up somehwere between our cities....i&#39;d be glad to give ya the fair one

C3ZR ONE
05-30-2006, 10:47 PM
Say&#33; That&#39;s a great idea&#33; And I&#39;ve got all the time in the world to trot around the country picking fights with kids&#33; It&#39;s not like I have a job and bills and a family a family to support. Let&#39;s meet in.... oh... Minneapolis&#33; We&#39;ll have lunch first and do some shopping, then we can beat eachother senseless untill the cops come and take me to jail for attacking a minor. Drop it guy. This thread has seen way too much beef in the last 5 pages and I have no interest in adding to it. If I pissed you off by saying you had a bug up your ass, then I&#39;m sorry. I thought you were hard on Bore&#39;s piece. It&#39;s not like it wasn&#39;t one of the best in the last 20 pages.

Hater-AiD~>
05-30-2006, 10:54 PM
beef...its whats for dinner

nice shit cezr..i liked the lunch part, haha

nephsike
05-30-2006, 10:54 PM
it wasnt one of the best..it was horrible...
whos saying im a minor???? and since your such an old head what you still doing down here in the toys section???

nephsike
05-30-2006, 10:56 PM
and for real...at least i was giving some real feedback...telling him how he cou;d make it better, telling him what to focus on working on...
thats better than everyone saying,...
WICKED AWESOME DUDE&#33;

thats the reason noone ever gets better down here.....all they get is peopel 10 times worse than them tellling them that there good...

AoAssis
05-30-2006, 10:59 PM
There is an edit button you know? Just drop it, even if you arent a minor your acting like one.

nephsike
05-30-2006, 11:00 PM
i know that there an edit button....sorry you got butt hurt for me not using it

C3ZR ONE
05-30-2006, 11:01 PM
I didn&#39;t say I was an old head, I said I was old.....
I wrote when I was a kid, and it sucked, and I got busted in 93. I didn&#39;t get back into it till last October. I&#39;m in the toys thread cause that&#39;s my skill level. I&#39;m not gonna go to the main thread just because I&#39;m old.... And if you&#39;ve got hardcore steezy for us to bite, why are you in here?

AoAssis
05-30-2006, 11:03 PM
Originally posted by nephsike@May 30 2006, 11:00 PM
i know that there an edit button....sorry you got butt hurt for me not using it
Little defencive arent we? All i recomended is that you use the dit button. Now your bitching to me and telling me im but hurt.

I have to agree on the giving crits part where everyone says "Thats dope steeze" but why dont you just drop it cezr was willing to drop it last page but you continue on to drag it out. Are you doing this for your ego?

nephsike
05-30-2006, 11:04 PM
you being old makes you an old head.....the reason i post in the toy section is cause alot more people post in here than anywhere else.....
and if your still a toy after 15 years of writng then you might as well just quit...hopefully you just never really took graffiti seriously, but if you did then you have problems....but how old are you...im just wondering what you consider old

nephsike
05-30-2006, 11:06 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis+May 31 2006, 12:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ May 31 2006, 12:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nephsike@May 30 2006, 11:00 PM
i know that there an edit button....sorry you got butt hurt for me not using it
Little defencive arent we? All i recomended is that you use the dit button. Now your bitching to me and telling me im but hurt.

I have to agree on the giving crits part where everyone says "Thats dope steeze" but why dont you just drop it cezr was willing to drop it last page but you continue on to drag it out. Are you doing this for your ego? [/b][/quote]
naw...not worried about my ego...just delirious and a little high.

beone
05-30-2006, 11:09 PM
cant we all hit the bowl chill out and watch the steeler in nephsikes sig dance around??? would be much better than beef between two people you never seen

AoAssis
05-30-2006, 11:10 PM
I wasnt beefing with him I was just tellin him to chill out too, it would be nice if a MOD came in here to clean this up, but its a shame they gave up the toy thread, but I can&#39;t say I dont see why.

nephsike
05-30-2006, 11:10 PM
this aint beef...this is clownin...
listen to some biggie and mobb deep....whats beef 06...
thats beef&#33;

fuck a bowl...all about rollin L&#39;s son

beone
05-30-2006, 11:22 PM
L&#39;s all day man but i dont got nuff weed for that right now haha

nephsike
05-30-2006, 11:33 PM
haha..i feel you...when you say bowl...what you working with???

sice1
05-30-2006, 11:46 PM
yo i did a 2 letter throwie and a 4 letter any crits on them?http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/8857/05312006121147am5sm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6423/05312006120140am1al.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Z FUSE
05-31-2006, 12:11 AM
very simple letters on both. no me gusta. and the tear drop/ water drop at the end is too fat. looks more like a ball, not a drop.

PoetDB
05-31-2006, 12:15 AM
Damn sice, they&#39;re pretty chill. I think you should lose the pointless ball though. Not the tear drop, the period thing. Only my opinion though. Well on that note, quick block letters in need of improvment. My "R" came out Dookie I know. But any suggestions on what I could of done better on overall?

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/Tranq-BlockLetterColored.jpg

xDISMALx
05-31-2006, 12:50 AM
for a blockbuster id say make the letters even thickness

MF Feed Letter
05-31-2006, 01:09 AM
and closer together

for upcomin battle..
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1052.jpg

Kiks
05-31-2006, 02:00 AM
http://img326.imageshack.us/img326/1091/image0183cf.th.jpg (http://img326.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image0183cf.jpg)
I NEED HELP WITH THIS&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; i need sum crits and tips on how to improve this ugly ass drawing.

Mse
05-31-2006, 05:12 AM
clean it up
make the letters the same size
thats about it

Xsjadox
05-31-2006, 05:54 AM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/8715/img10637tm.jpg

Would have looked better if I had an erazer :(

Belisle
05-31-2006, 06:00 AM
thanks or your advice man appriviate.

Belisle
05-31-2006, 06:00 AM
talking to some guy from NCY

AMAZ tbscrew
05-31-2006, 06:37 AM
Originally posted by nephsike@May 30 2006, 09:41 PM
amaz....you got to be the dumbest little kid on this site.....ive aready reposted shit for you like 3 times....i cant believe you like it that much that you keep requesting it over and over...


nephs
you got a big ego...if i saw u on the streets im sure ud walk past me with ur head down. and your work isnt at all that good...seems like you have the same style in that old flick as in the new one. try 2 change it up...oh and btw im 17...and im not that lil

arite im out..its 736 and im in skool....wtf <_<

Belisle
05-31-2006, 08:28 AM
some guy from NCI

thanks for your advice man. I appriciate

Hater-AiD~>
05-31-2006, 08:57 AM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+May 31 2006, 06:37 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ May 31 2006, 06:37 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nephsike@May 30 2006, 09:41 PM
amaz....you got to be the dumbest little kid on this site.....ive aready reposted shit for you like 3 times....i cant believe you like it that much that you keep requesting it over and over...


nephs
you got a big ego...if i saw u on the streets im sure ud walk past me with ur head down. and your work isnt at all that good...seems like you have the same style in that old flick as in the new one. try 2 change it up...oh and btw im 17...and im not that lil

arite im out..its 736 and im in skool....wtf <_< [/b][/quote]
schools out here :D

some guy from NCI...
05-31-2006, 09:04 AM
no probs belisle

Fluffy Bunnies
05-31-2006, 09:14 AM
How is dis.. I don&#39;t like dat G cuz it&#39;s whack.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/GHosxstyle.jpg

MF Feed Letter
05-31-2006, 10:53 AM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@May 31 2006, 01:09 AM


for upcomin battle..
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1052.jpg
fluffy lose the the extension on the h and the slice in the x + lose g and then go back to workin on structure.


bump for crits..

nephsike
05-31-2006, 11:13 AM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+May 31 2006, 07:37 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ May 31 2006, 07:37 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nephsike@May 30 2006, 09:41 PM
amaz....you got to be the dumbest little kid on this site.....ive aready reposted shit for you like 3 times....i cant believe you like it that much that you keep requesting it over and over...


nephs
you got a big ego...if i saw u on the streets im sure ud walk past me with ur head down. and your work isnt at all that good...seems like you have the same style in that old flick as in the new one. try 2 change it up...oh and btw im 17...and im not that lil

arite im out..its 736 and im in skool....wtf <_< [/b][/quote]
i burn you on 3 different levels....sketching, painting and bombing....sounds like you been listenin to a little bit to much 50 cent....your so gangsta id have to walk with my head down....im done talking this fight bullshit you and me both know you wouldnt be saying this shit in person....we can battle if you want...push all this shit aside...just lemme know

nephs

aces
05-31-2006, 11:21 AM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter+May 31 2006, 11:53 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MF Feed Letter @ May 31 2006, 11:53 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MF Feed Letter@May 31 2006, 01:09 AM


for upcomin battle..
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1052.jpg
fluffy lose the the extension on the h and the slice in the x + lose g and then go back to workin on structure.


bump for crits.. [/b][/quote]
Mf Feed I really like it but on the 123 part the 1 has extentions and the 2 and 3 don&#39;t other than that really good. Can&#39;t wait to see it colored.

klipa
05-31-2006, 11:23 AM
and the end N looks like an R other than that an the 1 its quite pleasnt

PTG
05-31-2006, 11:24 AM
Here was my original HAVOC sketch...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v57/CMBEN/Havoc1.jpg
Wernt really happy with it overall so I did it again...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v57/CMBEN/Havoc2.jpg

Wha you guys think, i&#39;m gonna try put this on a wall at the weekend, any tips, how to improve my sketch?

nephsike
05-31-2006, 11:33 AM
i would say lose the extension/connector on the V to the C...its not really needed there because there wasnt any on the rest of the piece

nephsike
05-31-2006, 11:34 AM
Originally posted by nephsike@May 30 2006, 11:04 PM
new name.....just wait till you see the throwie
http://i56.photobucket.com/albums/g167/theironcitypounder/graffiti062.jpg
more tommorrow or sometime soon after
:D

BoRe-719-
05-31-2006, 11:37 AM
add some color it would make a great piece.
---------------
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/scan00023.jpg

meh, the finished product.

PTG
05-31-2006, 11:46 AM
I&#39;m feelin that Bore, definitely prefer it with tha fill and background bubbles, takes way the fact the outline isn&#39;t completely solid. But well done...looks neat.

Code
05-31-2006, 12:16 PM
k, in my last sketch you guys said lose the really simple letters and become more creative. Well in this sketch i made the "B" a little more creative, but cant seem to come up with the "O". With the "C" i have some idea of how to make it more creatvie but didn&#39;t add this time

So give me some critz and i will make it better and give you guys a better sketch next time.

Hopefully i will get some markers or color pencils soon for i can start coloring it in.

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/5760/scan00067er.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aoime
05-31-2006, 12:27 PM
sorry..dont like it at all.

But you are improving in thought, you are noticing that each letter is a combination of seperate elements..its just creating these elements slightly out of proportion and just fucking around.

But the advice I would give, get some typography books and check that shit out. These artists are going for letters that all have common rules among shaping all 26 letters in a uniform pattern and they are mainly 2-d images and very readable.

My first piece was a alteration of a Mario Tennis ad I saw when sketching as a kid. God the good old days of not knowing shit and not caring about shit.

Code
05-31-2006, 12:37 PM
k, i see what you mean, and i will see if i can find a book like that.

Thanks for the Crit

aces
05-31-2006, 01:20 PM
http://img450.imageshack.us/img450/9140/picture0244sf.jpg
just wondering what color to do the 3d and any crits are good too since the letters are easier to see

pace1
05-31-2006, 02:13 PM
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/gozipeice.jpg
some sketch need colors

Hater-AiD~>
05-31-2006, 02:17 PM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@May 31 2006, 09:14 AM
How is dis.. I don&#39;t like dat G cuz it&#39;s whack.
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/GHosxstyle.jpg
dont overlap your latters with 3d..like on your g

pace1
05-31-2006, 02:19 PM
edit*

Ume
05-31-2006, 02:26 PM
Originally posted by aces@May 31 2006, 02:20 PM
http://img450.imageshack.us/img450/9140/picture0244sf.jpg
just wondering what color to do the 3d and any crits are good too since the letters are easier to see
i would say black with some orange or pink highlights.... like just some lines..


here&#39;s a quick 10 minute drawing brought on by boredom..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006557.jpg

aces
05-31-2006, 02:27 PM
Originally posted by pace1@May 31 2006, 03:13 PM
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/gozipeice.jpg
some sketch need colors
i like it its nice and simple but the character looks a little wack from what i can see but maybe not
the bits off the H are a little akward (sp) tho

Sluts_r_us
05-31-2006, 02:37 PM
Originally posted by nephsike+May 31 2006, 11:13 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nephsike @ May 31 2006, 11:13 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@May 31 2006, 07:37 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-nephsike@May 30 2006, 09:41 PM
amaz....you got to be the dumbest little kid on this site.....ive aready reposted shit for you like 3 times....i cant believe you like it that much that you keep requesting it over and over...


nephs
you got a big ego...if i saw u on the streets im sure ud walk past me with ur head down. and your work isnt at all that good...seems like you have the same style in that old flick as in the new one. try 2 change it up...oh and btw im 17...and im not that lil

arite im out..its 736 and im in skool....wtf <_<
i burn you on 3 different levels....sketching, painting and bombing....sounds like you been listenin to a little bit to much 50 cent....your so gangsta id have to walk with my head down....im done talking this fight bullshit you and me both know you wouldnt be saying this shit in person....we can battle if you want...push all this shit aside...just lemme know

nephs [/b][/quote]
he definately would be saying that to your face haha..

Quadratic
05-31-2006, 03:53 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/char-2-tmzl.jpg

finished pencil sketch

any crits

aces
05-31-2006, 04:46 PM
keep the letters the same width

aces
05-31-2006, 04:48 PM
Originally posted by aces@May 31 2006, 02:20 PM
http://img450.imageshack.us/img450/9140/picture0244sf.jpg
just wondering what color to do the 3d and any crits are good too since the letters are easier to see
bump for crits

Quadratic
05-31-2006, 05:21 PM
ace

for the 3D i suggest makin the 3D a darker/lighter shade of the color of the respective letter. (darker/lighter whichever u prefer)

the letters look good though

aces
05-31-2006, 05:22 PM
like dark/light blue on the A and E and dark/light green on the C and S

klipa
05-31-2006, 05:40 PM
aces try useing a nicer green and im not feeling the stripes at the bottom other than that the structures fairly nice and yeah adding a darker shade for the 3d would look smart

4 spek i bumped em here for some crits.
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/4676/cimg19709ht.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
this ones a bit messy as i used a otr .6" marker.
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/2123/cimg19740uo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

jerm_mtl
05-31-2006, 05:48 PM
IiiIII Like it&#33;

cord
05-31-2006, 05:52 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+May 31 2006, 11:37 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ May 31 2006, 11:37 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nephsike@May 30 2006, 09:41 PM
amaz....you got to be the dumbest little kid on this site.....ive aready reposted shit for you like 3 times....i cant believe you like it that much that you keep requesting it over and over...


nephs
you got a big ego...if i saw u on the streets im sure ud walk past me with ur head down. and your work isnt at all that good...seems like you have the same style in that old flick as in the new one. try 2 change it up...oh and btw im 17...and im not that lil

arite im out..its 736 and im in skool....wtf <_< [/b][/quote]
im not one to start unecessary beef but to be honest you do seem to run your mouth off a bit amaz.

as far as i understand, you&#39;ve been workin out a bit and puttin on some mass and thinking you&#39;re bad ass.......

well, dont try to be a tough guy, because no one likes it man :rolleyes:

just be nice haha :lol:

aces
05-31-2006, 06:12 PM
Originally posted by klipa@May 31 2006, 06:40 PM
aces try useing a nicer green and im not feeling the stripes at the bottom other than that the structures fairly nice and yeah adding a darker shade for the 3d would look smart

4 spek i bumped em here for some crits.
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/4676/cimg19709ht.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
this ones a bit messy as i used a otr .6" marker.
http://img349.imageshack.us/img349/2123/cimg19740uo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yea the stripes at the bottom looked good in pencil but in ink they kinda look like shit and those sketches you got are ill what do you use to color on the top one and how do you blend it

klipa
05-31-2006, 06:17 PM
um i used a berol broad felt tip then went over it with a stablio felt tip both yellow so eather ones darker or its just a double layer makes it look orange,

HoodRichSucka
05-31-2006, 06:42 PM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/ELFS3dAD2.jpg


thanks for the help.. im toy

aces
05-31-2006, 07:03 PM
http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/967/picture0272tu.jpg
here is the finished product i was and still am a little high so i decided it would be cool to do dark green the whole way through instead of dark green on the green ones and dark blue on the blue onesbut w/e i still like it and the brown was like fading off on me so it seemed like i was runnin low on ink but that was the first time i used it so idk why that happened but w/e

Beso!
05-31-2006, 07:15 PM
http://img429.imageshack.us/img429/8831/peice0014cr.th.jpg (http://img429.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0014cr.jpg)


http://img433.imageshack.us/img433/5999/peice0021mx.th.jpg (http://img433.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0021mx.jpg)


http://img433.imageshack.us/img433/3923/peice0033ek.th.jpg (http://img433.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0033ek.jpg)


http://img433.imageshack.us/img433/6425/peice0049yw.th.jpg (http://img433.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0049yw.jpg)


http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/5919/peice0057fi.th.jpg (http://img441.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0057fi.jpg) <--- looks like the S is broken >.>

been writin for a month so ,how do they look ? Critz plz

aces
05-31-2006, 07:27 PM
Originally posted by Beso&#33;@May 31 2006, 08:15 PM
http://img429.imageshack.us/img429/8831/peice0014cr.th.jpg (http://img429.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0014cr.jpg)


http://img433.imageshack.us/img433/5999/peice0021mx.th.jpg (http://img433.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0021mx.jpg)


http://img433.imageshack.us/img433/3923/peice0033ek.th.jpg (http://img433.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0033ek.jpg)


http://img433.imageshack.us/img433/6425/peice0049yw.th.jpg (http://img433.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0049yw.jpg)


http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/5919/peice0057fi.th.jpg (http://img441.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0057fi.jpg) <--- looks like the S is broken >.>

been writin for a month so ,how do they look ? Critz plz
keep the letters the same width
dont overlap your 3d
dont use a flag as your coloring
dont do the drips
work on straighter letters not as bubbly
practice practice practice

aces
05-31-2006, 07:29 PM
Originally posted by aces@May 31 2006, 08:03 PM
http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/967/picture0272tu.jpg
here is the finished product i was and still am a little high so i decided it would be cool to do dark green the whole way through instead of dark green on the green ones and dark blue on the blue onesbut w/e i still like it and the brown was like fading off on me so it seemed like i was runnin low on ink but that was the first time i used it so idk why that happened but w/e
bump

AMAZ tbscrew
05-31-2006, 07:40 PM
Originally posted by cord+May 31 2006, 05:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cord @ May 31 2006, 05:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@May 31 2006, 11:37 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-nephsike@May 30 2006, 09:41 PM
amaz....you got to be the dumbest little kid on this site.....ive aready reposted shit for you like 3 times....i cant believe you like it that much that you keep requesting it over and over...


nephs
you got a big ego...if i saw u on the streets im sure ud walk past me with ur head down. and your work isnt at all that good...seems like you have the same style in that old flick as in the new one. try 2 change it up...oh and btw im 17...and im not that lil

arite im out..its 736 and im in skool....wtf <_<
im not one to start unecessary beef but to be honest you do seem to run your mouth off a bit amaz.

as far as i understand, you&#39;ve been workin out a bit and puttin on some mass and thinking you&#39;re bad ass.......

well, dont try to be a tough guy, because no one likes it man :rolleyes:

just be nice haha :lol: [/b][/quote]
oh yea...i was "running my mouth" before i even "worked out and gained some mass" and no im not gangster...im nothing but myself... i dont dress like a skater and dont dress like a gangster...im stright up myself. and iv been in more fights then probly u and nephs put 2gether...im not the kind of kid 2 talk shit and not back it up...cuz ill be in ur face saying it not behind ur back..

and nephs keep gettin up i still dout u have more then wut i put up before i got arrested. now im just sketchin and paintin on tracks. and ur style isnt all the great it dosnt look like it changes. and im sure u can piece better then me with those mezer letters..

i dont have time 2 battle..i got exams coming up...more important then sketchin rite now to me.

i guess u haters can hate all u want.

unknown...
05-31-2006, 07:43 PM
AMaz, rnt u a girl? and ur talkin about fighting on a forum, any1 can talk that shit, ull never c them in ur life....and if u r a chick like ive always thot u wer then no guy that has any respect towards women and anyone for that matter would hit u

AMAZ tbscrew
05-31-2006, 07:47 PM
wtf...yea im a girl... <_<

Quadratic
05-31-2006, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@May 31 2006, 07:47 PM
wtf...yea im a girl... <_<
thats hot

will u kick my ass too?

AMAZ tbscrew
05-31-2006, 07:52 PM
^im not a girl u idiot.

aces
05-31-2006, 07:53 PM
haha can i get some crits on my piece

Beso!
05-31-2006, 07:53 PM
http://img308.imageshack.us/img308/9536/peice0tj.th.jpg (http://img308.imageshack.us/my.php?image=peice0tj.jpg)


Lol well this is something i did in like 3 min. critz.

aces
05-31-2006, 07:54 PM
still dont have the 3d overlap onto the next letter like on the B, E, and S

Beso!
05-31-2006, 07:56 PM
well aces should it look sort of like my first pic (Green one) cause i tried what you said n it looks uber weird ...ill post it later.

unknown...
05-31-2006, 08:02 PM
Amaz.....

either way, u talk alot of shit, especially considering its over the internet

aces
05-31-2006, 08:04 PM
Originally posted by Beso&#33;@May 31 2006, 08:56 PM
well aces should it look sort of like my first pic (Green one) cause i tried what you said n it looks uber weird ...ill post it later.
look at my piece. see where the A and the C meet and how there is no 3d there. that is what i mean

Beso!
05-31-2006, 08:06 PM
ooo ok so no over lapage just connect? I understand what you mean .Thanks man

Quadratic
05-31-2006, 08:21 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/maso-new28.jpg


http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/maso-new28-2.jpg


outlined the fill cuz it scanned kind of lightly.. its supposed to be silver but that also scanned weird.
also, i kinda scanned it a little crooked...


anyways, what do yall think

flclnaruto1213
05-31-2006, 08:21 PM
ok well that battle was complete bullshit...ados definetely didnt deserve to win by that much if at all.

aces
05-31-2006, 08:23 PM
i think youre in the wrong thread

Quadratic
05-31-2006, 08:24 PM
Originally posted by Quadratic@May 31 2006, 08:21 PM
http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/maso-new28.jpg


http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/maso-new28-2.jpg


outlined the fill cuz it scanned kind of lightly.. its supposed to be silver but that also scanned weird.
also, i kinda scanned it a little crooked...


anyways, what do yall think
bump cuz it went to a new page

?..DeMo..?
05-31-2006, 08:25 PM
i like em but wats the diffrence between em ?? but its good and nice color scheme keep it up i soon will be posting up a couple pics of mine so yea

aces
05-31-2006, 08:26 PM
the s is weird lose the little bits off the M and O they kinda look stupid good basics although i dont really like the bits inside of it and why are their two of the same pics

Quadratic
05-31-2006, 08:27 PM
Originally posted by ?..DeMo..?@May 31 2006, 08:25 PM
i like em but wats the diffrence between em ??
the silver outline around the shapes in the fill is the only difference




____
and yea i agree Aces, i didnt end up liking the stupid lits bits on the M and O...

aces
05-31-2006, 08:29 PM
take off the first one then it just takes up more room

MF Feed Letter
05-31-2006, 08:42 PM
meh..
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1053.jpg

Hater-AiD~>
05-31-2006, 08:44 PM
i like everything but the one..i dont think it fits in with everything else..nice though

.D.H.
05-31-2006, 08:49 PM
nice color sheme

gift
05-31-2006, 08:55 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/100_3218.jpg


alright. i&#39;m in the process of sketching this. i tweaked my letters just a little. still very simple though. i&#39;m not done. have done the "S" at the front of the sketch yet. you think i should keep going and try the s? or should i change a couple things on it and adjust a few things to get everything looking right. give me your input and give me some crits.

nephsike
05-31-2006, 09:30 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+May 31 2006, 08:40 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ May 31 2006, 08:40 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by cord@May 31 2006, 05:52 PM

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@May 31 2006, 11:37 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-nephsike@May 30 2006, 09:41 PM
amaz....you got to be the dumbest little kid on this site.....ive aready reposted shit for you like 3 times....i cant believe you like it that much that you keep requesting it over and over...


nephs
you got a big ego...if i saw u on the streets im sure ud walk past me with ur head down. and your work isnt at all that good...seems like you have the same style in that old flick as in the new one. try 2 change it up...oh and btw im 17...and im not that lil

arite im out..its 736 and im in skool....wtf <_<
im not one to start unecessary beef but to be honest you do seem to run your mouth off a bit amaz.

as far as i understand, you&#39;ve been workin out a bit and puttin on some mass and thinking you&#39;re bad ass.......

well, dont try to be a tough guy, because no one likes it man :rolleyes:

just be nice haha :lol:
oh yea...i was "running my mouth" before i even "worked out and gained some mass" and no im not gangster...im nothing but myself... i dont dress like a skater and dont dress like a gangster...im stright up myself. and iv been in more fights then probly u and nephs put 2gether...im not the kind of kid 2 talk shit and not back it up...cuz ill be in ur face saying it not behind ur back..

and nephs keep gettin up i still dout u have more then wut i put up before i got arrested. now im just sketchin and paintin on tracks. and ur style isnt all the great it dosnt look like it changes. and im sure u can piece better then me with those mezer letters..

i dont have time 2 battle..i got exams coming up...more important then sketchin rite now to me.

i guess u haters can hate all u want. [/b][/quote]
its called my style......thats why its not changing, but im glad to know im being compared to meser..he&#39;s a pretty dope writer.....you can talk all you want about fighting on here...botom line is if you and your toy ass crew ever painted a spot in my city you would get your ass beat for your paint...
not to mention you punked out of the battle i layed out for you...if you dont have any time for graffiti then why are you on here everyday???? and im not talking bout sketching either
suburban toys crack me up everytime :lol:

MF Feed Letter
05-31-2006, 09:42 PM
holy fuckin shit will you two shut the fuck up already and jsut fuckin battle....FUCK no beef with either but ya...common

nephsike
05-31-2006, 09:47 PM
he&#39;s to shook too...
on yours....colors are fresh...dunno bout the 1 tho.

AMAZ tbscrew
05-31-2006, 10:05 PM
<_< <_< ill battle ur wack ass when im done with exams.

nephsike
05-31-2006, 10:13 PM
fuck school....you dont need education

Hater-AiD~>
05-31-2006, 10:26 PM
i feel like im getting worse and worse everyday
my pieces that were shit are getting even shittier..my handstyle doesnt seem the same
fuck
http://img423.imageshack.us/img423/899/newratestyle4lv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
critz please

gift
05-31-2006, 10:27 PM
Originally posted by gift@May 31 2006, 08:55 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/100_3218.jpg


alright. i&#39;m in the process of sketching this. i tweaked my letters just a little. still very simple though. i&#39;m not done. have done the "S" at the front of the sketch yet. you think i should keep going and try the s? or should i change a couple things on it and adjust a few things to get everything looking right. give me your input and give me some crits.
bumpin it. anyone? i&#39;m trying to tweak my stuff a little more to incoporate some style instead of doing simples nonstop. anything there i should adjust?

Nosypainter
05-31-2006, 11:02 PM
Originally posted by pace1@May 31 2006, 02:13 PM
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/gozipeice.jpg
some sketch need colors
i like that alot dude

ICER
05-31-2006, 11:06 PM
Originally posted by Nosypainter+May 31 2006, 11:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nosypainter &#064; May 31 2006, 11:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-pace1@May 31 2006, 02:13 PM
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/gozipeice.jpg
some sketch need colors
i like that alot dude [/b][/quote]
yea i like that bomb too&#33;

ICER
05-31-2006, 11:13 PM
Originally posted by gift+May 31 2006, 10:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (gift @ May 31 2006, 10:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-gift@May 31 2006, 08:55 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/100_3218.jpg


alright. i&#39;m in the process of sketching this. i tweaked my letters just a little. still very simple though. i&#39;m not done. have done the "S" at the front of the sketch yet. you think i should keep going and try the s? or should i change a couple things on it and adjust a few things to get everything looking right. give me your input and give me some crits.
bumpin it. anyone? i&#39;m trying to tweak my stuff a little more to incoporate some style instead of doing simples nonstop. anything there i should adjust? [/b][/quote]
try adding some 3-D

Nosypainter
05-31-2006, 11:14 PM
Originally posted by ICER+May 31 2006, 11:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ICER @ May 31 2006, 11:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by gift@May 31 2006, 10:27 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-gift@May 31 2006, 08:55 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/100_3218.jpg


alright. i&#39;m in the process of sketching this. i tweaked my letters just a little. still very simple though. i&#39;m not done. have done the "S" at the front of the sketch yet. you think i should keep going and try the s? or should i change a couple things on it and adjust a few things to get everything looking right. give me your input and give me some crits.
bumpin it. anyone? i&#39;m trying to tweak my stuff a little more to incoporate some style instead of doing simples nonstop. anything there i should adjust?
try adding some 3-D [/b][/quote]
make it more thick and bubbly it will make look 10 times better plus oldschool owns

uhhh
05-31-2006, 11:29 PM
Originally posted by gift+May 31 2006, 10:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (gift @ May 31 2006, 10:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-gift@May 31 2006, 08:55 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/100_3218.jpg


alright. i&#39;m in the process of sketching this. i tweaked my letters just a little. still very simple though. i&#39;m not done. have done the "S" at the front of the sketch yet. you think i should keep going and try the s? or should i change a couple things on it and adjust a few things to get everything looking right. give me your input and give me some crits.
bumpin it. anyone? i&#39;m trying to tweak my stuff a little more to incoporate some style instead of doing simples nonstop. anything there i should adjust? [/b][/quote]
make it thicker, and whenever lines parts of the same letter gointo eachother, just make it go together, dont have a line... it looks stupid :(

PoetDB
06-01-2006, 12:07 AM
My first 2MV throwie. Im spent mayber 20 mins on this. Sorta proud cause I thought It came out sorta nice. But I definitly need improvement...Suggestions?

2MV= Two Mad Vandals

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f311/xgetspunx/DemBombers/2mvBombPiece.jpg

By the way, I only have very few markers so most of my coloring schemes will remain relitivily the same.

Ume
06-01-2006, 12:59 AM
Originally posted by Ume@May 31 2006, 03:26 PM
here&#39;s a quick 10 minute drawing brought on by boredom..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006557.jpg
brizzump cause beef is gay and it&#39;s filling up the page&#39;s.

beone
06-01-2006, 01:19 AM
why r u so good haha

MF Feed Letter
06-01-2006, 01:26 AM
kinda messy

EatRichPeople
06-01-2006, 01:27 AM
dope, C is a bit to pointy compared to the other letters I think.

some quick trowies
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/7414/crappy3my.jpg (http://imageshack.us)JTI

MF Feed Letter
06-01-2006, 01:29 AM
like your hand style but what do those throws even say...

EatRichPeople
06-01-2006, 01:32 AM
thanx, they say JTI
friggin imigshack won&#39;t resize

beefgerky
06-01-2006, 01:59 AM
no, they dont say anything

GRABSOMELETTERSPLZKTHXBI.

EatRichPeople
06-01-2006, 02:09 AM
I feel bored by doing things that others already developed...

80% of all writers are idiots...

-richard Schwarz-

2 quotes that bombingscience proves right
deside for youreself if youre one of them...

Autronik
06-01-2006, 02:10 AM
http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/8890/img03814vf.jpg

xDISMALx
06-01-2006, 02:11 AM
that looks really nice do that onm some good paper and color it and shti dude

sice1
06-01-2006, 02:56 AM
any crits???http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/8769/06012006034927amjpgykk2jf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Ume
06-01-2006, 03:56 AM
almost 5am and can&#39;t sleep...fucking boring shit...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006562.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006561.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006558.jpg

Code
06-01-2006, 05:05 AM
Originally posted by Code@May 31 2006, 12:16 PM
k, in my last sketch you guys said lose the really simple letters and become more creative. Well in this sketch i made the "B" a little more creative, but cant seem to come up with the "O". With the "C" i have some idea of how to make it more creatvie but didn&#39;t add this time

So give me some critz and i will make it better and give you guys a better sketch next time.

Hopefully i will get some markers or color pencils soon for i can start coloring it in.

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/5760/scan00067er.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry to bump my own shit lol, but i just need one more usefull crit and i wont bump again

Belisle
06-01-2006, 06:53 AM
need ya advice. I do you find them?

What do I should change and his good.

smer
06-01-2006, 07:29 AM
Originally posted by Ume@Jun 1 2006, 03:56 AM
almost 5am and can&#39;t sleep...fucking boring shit...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006562.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006561.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006558.jpg
the first one looks like its comin off the page wow

uhhh
06-01-2006, 07:35 AM
Originally posted by Code+Jun 1 2006, 05:05 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Code @ Jun 1 2006, 05:05 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Code@May 31 2006, 12:16 PM
k, in my last sketch you guys said lose the really simple letters and become more creative. Well in this sketch i made the "B" a little more creative, but cant seem to come up with the "O". With the "C" i have some idea of how to make it more creatvie but didn&#39;t add this time

So give me some critz and i will make it better and give you guys a better sketch next time.

Hopefully i will get some markers or color pencils soon for i can start coloring it in.

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/5760/scan00067er.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
sorry to bump my own shit lol, but i just need one more usefull crit and i wont bump again [/b][/quote]
wow...
1. boc&#39;s a stupid name, almost as stupid as mine.
2. don&#39;t try and do more "creative" stuff, cuz it won&#39;t look god, do basic letters nothing more, maybe, make something shorter or add a shield, but once you can make those look good then start trying other stuff, it will come to you a lot easier too

damn, 2 was long :lol:

Skeam
06-01-2006, 07:35 AM
hey im pretty new to this site, ive done a hell of alot of peices like this in books and stuff but never tried with a spray can. i would do em for a while and then get over em and lose all my style then have to start again hahaha. i write skeam so heres some of the ones ive done. some crits please, what can i improve? im not to keen on my e and a but the rest i dont mind.

(soz for the shit quality i cbf scannin em lol)

cheers
matt

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/7825/hpim18328ni.jpg

http://img125.imageshack.us/img125/7860/hpim18373nm.jpg

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/9974/hpim18339oy.jpg

uhhh
06-01-2006, 08:03 AM
i like your m, try nd make everything els that style.

reminds me of this guy apex, a little bit

cord
06-01-2006, 08:18 AM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew+Jun 1 2006, 12:40 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AMAZ tbscrew @ Jun 1 2006, 12:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by cord@May 31 2006, 05:52 PM

Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@May 31 2006, 11:37 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-nephsike@May 30 2006, 09:41 PM
amaz....you got to be the dumbest little kid on this site.....ive aready reposted shit for you like 3 times....i cant believe you like it that much that you keep requesting it over and over...


nephs
you got a big ego...if i saw u on the streets im sure ud walk past me with ur head down. and your work isnt at all that good...seems like you have the same style in that old flick as in the new one. try 2 change it up...oh and btw im 17...and im not that lil

arite im out..its 736 and im in skool....wtf <_<
im not one to start unecessary beef but to be honest you do seem to run your mouth off a bit amaz.

as far as i understand, you&#39;ve been workin out a bit and puttin on some mass and thinking you&#39;re bad ass.......

well, dont try to be a tough guy, because no one likes it man :rolleyes:

just be nice haha :lol:
oh yea...i was "running my mouth" before i even "worked out and gained some mass" and no im not gangster...im nothing but myself... i dont dress like a skater and dont dress like a gangster...im stright up myself. and iv been in more fights then probly u and nephs put 2gether...im not the kind of kid 2 talk shit and not back it up...cuz ill be in ur face saying it not behind ur back..

and nephs keep gettin up i still dout u have more then wut i put up before i got arrested. now im just sketchin and paintin on tracks. and ur style isnt all the great it dosnt look like it changes. and im sure u can piece better then me with those mezer letters..

i dont have time 2 battle..i got exams coming up...more important then sketchin rite now to me.

i guess u haters can hate all u want. [/b][/quote]
:lol:

haha chill man im not starting any shit hahahaha&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

keep it real

uhhh
06-01-2006, 09:05 AM
theres enough beef on this site for everyone to be eating hamburgers til the day they die <_<

Belisle
06-01-2006, 09:26 AM
Thanks guys.

Belisle
06-01-2006, 09:27 AM
skeam you are pretty good.

sice1
06-01-2006, 09:33 AM
Originally posted by sice1@Jun 1 2006, 02:56 AM
any crits???http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/8769/06012006034927amjpgykk2jf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
any1??

jerm_mtl
06-01-2006, 09:37 AM
Originally posted by sice1+Jun 1 2006, 09:33 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sice1 @ Jun 1 2006, 09:33 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sice1@Jun 1 2006, 02:56 AM
any crits???http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/8769/06012006034927amjpgykk2jf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
any1?? [/b][/quote]
if its a piece it sucks, if its a throw its cool

MF Feed Letter
06-01-2006, 10:23 AM
what the fuck...what would you think its a piece

Jank
06-01-2006, 10:50 AM
not a bad throw, tho the colours kinda make it look sily, and i dont like the drop at the end or the dot at the start.

ariyte, the result of 2 days of &#39;&#39;revision&#39;&#39;:
feel free to try to figure out what the hell is going on with all the little.. things. haha. comments? black bits kinda ruined it. it was the last thing i put on and i didnt no wot to do with that space.. shame really
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/thegangsofgouliesatnight.jpg

TricksForKids
06-01-2006, 11:56 AM
the colourings on point, and that PSG at the bottom is damn fresh as a big simple, i dont know what the fuck you smoked before drawing the little winged fruit loop bats but oh well, still gotta space your eltters out a bit more im thinking, fresh E though

Jank
06-01-2006, 12:18 PM
i didnt smoke nothing. im naturally fucked up&#33;

haha cheers m8.

uhhh
06-01-2006, 01:02 PM
haha, but what he was sayin about the letters, i think theyre just finely spaced, but see if you can come up with the style of the e for all the letters, that a looks nice too, the e style just lookd better

aces
06-01-2006, 01:24 PM
Originally posted by aces+May 31 2006, 08:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ May 31 2006, 08:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@May 31 2006, 08:03 PM
http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/967/picture0272tu.jpg
here is the finished product i was and still am a little high so i decided it would be cool to do dark green the whole way through instead of dark green on the green ones and dark blue on the blue onesbut w/e i still like it and the brown was like fading off on me so it seemed like i was runnin low on ink but that was the first time i used it so idk why that happened but w/e
bump [/b][/quote]
bump again didn&#39;t get ne crits

nephsike
06-01-2006, 01:27 PM
letters are pretty dope....but it looks unfinished...the letters need outlined

aces
06-01-2006, 01:42 PM
aight ill do that later tonight and post it up

pace1
06-01-2006, 01:58 PM
Originally posted by ICER+May 31 2006, 11:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ICER @ May 31 2006, 11:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Nosypainter@May 31 2006, 11:02 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-pace1@May 31 2006, 02:13 PM
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/gozipeice.jpg
some sketch need colors
i like that alot dude
yea i like that bomb too&#33; [/b][/quote]
what bomb would that be??
Bump for critz

some guy from NCI...
06-01-2006, 01:59 PM
yo aces... you&#39;re improving alot&#33;

But somethings missing... It might be the outline, but dont know. It just seems a little... somethings missing. It might be the outline though, give it a shot I guess.

The things at the bottom of the letters are quite nice... but I think on the A they&#39;re a bit too big/too much.

Hope any of that helps.

You&#39;re definitly improving alot, keep it up :)

-----

to pace1... that&#39;s sick. dont listen to icer... that&#39;s not a bomb. With some colour that&#39;d look sick.

pace1
06-01-2006, 02:10 PM
thanks i need to get some good markers i was thinking touch twins or prismas what opinions any body got?

some guy from NCI...
06-01-2006, 02:23 PM
I just got some letraset promarkers in a pack... but I find they&#39;re all relatively the same. So give em all a try I guess. See which ones (if any) you prefer.

Amuk
06-01-2006, 02:57 PM
Originally posted by aces+Jun 1 2006, 01:24 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Jun 1 2006, 01:24 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by aces@May 31 2006, 08:29 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-aces@May 31 2006, 08:03 PM
http://img323.imageshack.us/img323/967/picture0272tu.jpg
here is the finished product i was and still am a little high so i decided it would be cool to do dark green the whole way through instead of dark green on the green ones and dark blue on the blue onesbut w/e i still like it and the brown was like fading off on me so it seemed like i was runnin low on ink but that was the first time i used it so idk why that happened but w/e
bump
bump again didn&#39;t get ne crits [/b][/quote]
nice, last time i posted ur peices needed mad work, good shit

aces
06-01-2006, 03:18 PM
thanks amuk
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2431/picture0042ed.jpg
for the toy throwie exchange but i just did up a quick piece cuz i suck at throwies the O had to be a little small cuz i ran out of room

the priority mail things on the stickers suck but yea i ordered 400 so im just gunna have to use them

aces
06-01-2006, 03:21 PM
Originally posted by some guy from NCI...@Jun 1 2006, 02:59 PM
yo aces... you&#39;re improving alot&#33;

But somethings missing... It might be the outline, but dont know. It just seems a little... somethings missing. It might be the outline though, give it a shot I guess.

The things at the bottom of the letters are quite nice... but I think on the A they&#39;re a bit too big/too much.

Hope any of that helps.

You&#39;re definitly improving alot, keep it up :)

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to pace1... that&#39;s sick. dont listen to icer... that&#39;s not a bomb. With some colour that&#39;d look sick.
yea the A was supposed to be bigger since it was supposed to be capitol but it didnt end up lookin like it was supposed to

beefgerky
06-01-2006, 03:41 PM
aces, other than the k its cool. but it seems like your copying them, cuz u do the sammmmmeee letters for all of em. like a font or sumthing.

aces
06-01-2006, 03:48 PM
thats my second piece with that kinda style so i stayed wit the same letters ill mix it up a bit on the next one

maybe add in some add ons or something

Laeos
06-01-2006, 03:51 PM
just keeping it as basic as possible - any crits?



http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/2149/laosvanishpointblock8zu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/3217/laostwobubbles5bd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

uhhh
06-01-2006, 03:56 PM
i like the first one, the tags and throwies don&#39;t have much style, well neither does that but it till looks good, just nice and simple :D

aces
06-01-2006, 04:08 PM
good use of 3d on the first one but if you did that with a ruler dont because when you are painting you arent going to have a ruler so dont get in that habit

jerm_mtl
06-01-2006, 04:08 PM
ya thats true

flip
06-01-2006, 04:15 PM
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h65/pHiLLyfLips/philspics081.jpg

jerm_mtl
06-01-2006, 04:18 PM
definitely not feeling the fill

flip
06-01-2006, 04:26 PM
whattaya mean =|

jerm_mtl
06-01-2006, 04:29 PM
the coloring inside the letters.....duhhhhh :wacko:

jerm_mtl
06-01-2006, 04:29 PM
oh ya,and u fucked the 3d real bad

aces
06-01-2006, 04:34 PM
check out vanishing point for 3d
keep your letters nice and straight unlike the f but more like the p
dont worry about crazy fills yet just worry about structure
practice practice practice
that list thing is pretty sweet first time trying it

gift
06-01-2006, 04:57 PM
Originally posted by uhhh+May 31 2006, 11:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (uhhh @ May 31 2006, 11:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by gift@May 31 2006, 10:27 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-gift@May 31 2006, 08:55 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/100_3218.jpg


alright. i&#39;m in the process of sketching this. i tweaked my letters just a little. still very simple though. i&#39;m not done. have done the "S" at the front of the sketch yet. you think i should keep going and try the s? or should i change a couple things on it and adjust a few things to get everything looking right. give me your input and give me some crits.
bumpin it. anyone? i&#39;m trying to tweak my stuff a little more to incoporate some style instead of doing simples nonstop. anything there i should adjust?
make it thicker, and whenever lines parts of the same letter gointo eachother, just make it go together, dont have a line... it looks stupid :( [/b][/quote]
hey man those lines in the "R" and the other letters are just from sketching out the letters. not going to be in the actual piece. just drawing the shapes inside the letter.
so just make it a little thicker huh? anything else or is it looking good so far?

smer
06-01-2006, 04:58 PM
i realy wanna paint this style i think i am gunna wen i get some paint
http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/8318/photo01075ub.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
its says utok

aces
06-01-2006, 05:06 PM
from what i can see (not a great pic) it looks good cant wait to see it painted

Amuk
06-01-2006, 05:32 PM
that tag &#39;utok&#39; sounds sick, gotta work the letters and take a beter pic tho

ScryberOneR
06-01-2006, 05:43 PM
Any suggestions?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v682/sheshe143/shllyestes143001.jpg

Amuk
06-01-2006, 05:46 PM
cant read it, but it looks good

nephsike
06-01-2006, 05:48 PM
your a straight up idiot

ScryberOneR
06-01-2006, 06:06 PM
your a straight up idiot

whos an idiot?

nephsike
06-01-2006, 06:13 PM
not you

cord
06-01-2006, 06:18 PM
all i can see in that thing is &#39;&#39;MZSINE&#39;&#39;

whats goin on thats a weird combo of letters

Ume
06-01-2006, 06:29 PM
oh wow i&#39;ve been fucking bored for the past couple days and feeling really fucked up...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/0ffd4835.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/ab9776f5.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/Picture003.jpg

messed up on some parts of the letters and made remik too big to start with....oh well...

oh this post is another hint to what the surprise would be about shoutouts...you&#39;ll find out soon enough.

;)

TricksForKids
06-01-2006, 06:46 PM
*looks at ume&#39;s sketch for hours trying to find regs:(*

getting my appendix taken out does weird shit to my style....bored pen freestyle...sue me for the ugliness...comments?

http://img385.imageshack.us/img385/9031/haha9aa.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Amuk
06-01-2006, 06:50 PM
i bet if u did a peice with that style it wud look sick

TricksForKids
06-01-2006, 06:52 PM
so thats a throwup....?^

Amuk
06-01-2006, 06:56 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jun 1 2006, 06:46 PM
....bored pen freestyle...

Ume
06-01-2006, 07:05 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jun 1 2006, 07:46 PM
*looks at ume&#39;s sketch for hours trying to find regs:(*
i knew i forgot someone. :(

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006566.jpg

it looks bad cause i did it in a hurry....haha
:)

beefgerky
06-01-2006, 07:05 PM
thast cees. lookin good.


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