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some guy from NCI...
06-04-2006, 12:10 PM
lol that's just what I wanted to say.

ScryberOneR
06-04-2006, 12:13 PM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213+Jun 3 2006, 10:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (flclnaruto1213 @ Jun 3 2006, 10:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Jun 3 2006, 10:21 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-flclnaruto1213@Jun 3 2006, 05:05 PM
my new throw for junk, crits needed

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/8605/junkthrow3xm.png (http://imageshack.us)

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/7483/junkthrowrg9qb.png (http://imageshack.us)

http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/8925/junkthrowg0yd.png (http://imageshack.us)

thanks
bumpitty bump
fuck it was at bottom of page

re-bump [/b][/quote]
okay, well.. Im likein the overall style and design. The thing im seeing is maybe bringin that drop shadow out a lil bit so that those white areas in the middle of your letters are just fills and not open spaces that you may hafta hit with white. That s all I can say. Oh, and I like the hand steez simple but nice. and "simple is important" hahahha. ok yeah.
:ph34r:

ScryberOneR
06-04-2006, 12:15 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Jun 4 2006, 12:05 PM
vare when u came in...u wer better then wut u are now.
ouch.

Jank
06-04-2006, 12:33 PM
no its true that 123 klan is really poor compared to what vare can do. im sure he knows that. hes waay better than that

Keffer
06-04-2006, 12:43 PM
Crits?
http://img447.imageshack.us/img447/354/roe26vm.jpg
imagine that all the letters are the same size :) i was falling asleep

flclnaruto1213
06-04-2006, 12:45 PM
thanks scryber for crits.

Hater-AiD~>
06-04-2006, 12:48 PM
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/4347/ratethrows6vs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
throws

critz please

Jank
06-04-2006, 12:56 PM
FUKIN HELL hater at least say someting about the thing above u if u expect &#39;&#39;crits&#39;&#39;&#39;.

not really feelin the tear drops but if u havae one make sureits close enough to look part of the throw. i think the r in the top left thing has potential.. maybe work into that... i dno throws aint my thing

and keffer.. wtf is going on in there? what are the lines coming off it..? are u using charcoal? what does it say? i dont like the general shape of the letters.. the pointy top and ass crack lower region... i dno.. keep at it

chili
06-04-2006, 12:59 PM
fghjn

Keffer
06-04-2006, 01:00 PM
lol... it was some art pencil i took from school. it says Roe, and the lines are some wierd shit i did where they... just a sec
http://img480.imageshack.us/img480/9516/roe10dk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
it comes out and spells
R
O
E


god im toy :rolleyes:

some guy from NCI...
06-04-2006, 01:05 PM
Originally posted by chili@Jun 4 2006, 12:59 PM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/6031/untitled13js.jpg
my first 3 attempts at graffiti
any advice would be great

im using berol markers just now cuse i dont have anything decent but im ordering some touch markers

cheers
You&#39;re ordering touch markers?

You&#39;re a waste.

Dont even bother investing in crayola markers at the moment. You wanna be able to do some basic letters at least before you go into complex colouring with expensive markers.

Keffer
06-04-2006, 01:07 PM
Crits for chili
hmmm ummmm keep working at it... not bad if its accualy your FIRST TIME EVER trying to write with style... keep it simple (see my simpleness?)

lol... im trying to be nice, but NCI (sorry i dont read you name and memorize it) is just a straight up prick... you gotta love it, BS STYLE&#33;

some guy from NCI...
06-04-2006, 01:12 PM
First off.. It&#39;s NCI.

Second off, most twin touch pens are pretty expensive, so if someone who can even do basic bubble letters is going to buy some then he/she is wasting quite a bit of there money.

Dont call me a prick you hypocrit, telling him to keep it simple like yours when you&#39;re trying all these toy hookups with your tag to your throwie, and fix your shadow while you&#39;re at it, wtf is going on there.

flclnaruto1213
06-04-2006, 01:15 PM
they arent that expensive are they?

Torrent
06-04-2006, 01:18 PM
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/9338/imgp3859custom3qq.jpg

http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/180/imgp3860custom9of.jpg

http://img432.imageshack.us/img432/221/imgp3861custom5fh.jpg

Any critique? I really could use some on the 123klan one.

Keffer
06-04-2006, 01:19 PM
dude calm down, people like you MAKE bombing science what it is... a huge beef factory that its kinda fun to read when your bored. it was a compliment.

some guy from NCI...
06-04-2006, 01:20 PM
£1.25 (roughly) here in england for one pen. If he&#39;s ordering some of the markers, he&#39;s probably getting them in a pack. The cheapest pack of those I&#39;ve seen was something like £27 which is pretty expensive for pens which he/she will probably go around doing tags or toy fills with.

So in my opinion (and most other writers opinions) that&#39;d be a waste of money.

chili
06-04-2006, 01:53 PM
fghj

aces
06-04-2006, 02:44 PM
chili - dont buy the good markers please dont waste your money cause you never know if you&#39;re going to actually stick with graff if that is your first time doin it so dont invest in good markers quite yet. spend some time with sharpies they are pretty cheap and have like 24 colors even though they are quite dark on paper

some guy from NCI...
06-04-2006, 02:59 PM
Originally posted by Keffer@Jun 4 2006, 01:19 PM
dude calm down, people like you MAKE bombing science what it is... a huge beef factory that its kinda fun to read when your bored. it was a compliment.
why are you chatting like you&#39;ve been on bombingscience for time, and starting beef in such early stages of your graffiti life.

Hater-AiD~>
06-04-2006, 03:06 PM
Originally posted by Keffer@Jun 4 2006, 12:43 PM
Crits?
http://img447.imageshack.us/img447/354/roe26vm.jpg
imagine that all the letters are the same size :) i was falling asleep
i would get rid of the lines




oh and jank..ive been critiquing peoples sketches for the past week

xAWOKE.925
06-04-2006, 03:49 PM
^ to that quoted throwie. Its wack. The letters are very amoebaish and kind of look like jelly beans.

Keffer
06-04-2006, 04:13 PM
hey guys, thanks. im woking on it, but i was kinda aiming for the jellybean ameoba affect... it reminds me of bananas imo (speshly the e). the lines were just something i was experimenting with, i just came up with that last night. (with a bit of help from a guy named dylan)

jerm_mtl
06-04-2006, 04:16 PM
well then work on ur throwie

vare_187uk
06-04-2006, 04:30 PM
everyone has there off days i really wasnt fukt with the 123klan


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v438/vare/psc.jpg
summat new summat fresh

aces
06-04-2006, 04:31 PM
really like it vare loads better than the 123klan piece

beone
06-04-2006, 04:32 PM
v looks like a y but ur simples are getting much better

a is terribnle tho i actualy hate it no offence it just really bothers me

vare_187uk
06-04-2006, 04:41 PM
i need to get back on my 3d shit man

vare_187uk
06-04-2006, 04:43 PM
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>+Jun 4 2006, 03:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Hater-AiD~> @ Jun 4 2006, 03:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Keffer@Jun 4 2006, 12:43 PM
Crits?
http://img447.imageshack.us/img447/354/roe26vm.jpg
imagine that all the letters are the same size :) i was falling asleep
i would get rid of the lines




[/b][/quote]
nah forget the lines burn the paper &#33; :lol:

Jank
06-04-2006, 05:11 PM
vare thats way betta.. haha thats one of ur best&#33; tho thats gettin worryingly close to psg.. watch ur back... haha

and hater ye sorry bout that.. no harm meant

Hater-AiD~>
06-04-2006, 06:34 PM
no harm no foul

ICER
06-04-2006, 06:53 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/th_icera.jpg (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/icera.jpg)

i suck at throw ups&#33; any critz?

Holidayy Styles
06-04-2006, 07:41 PM
Originally posted by vare_187uk+Jun 4 2006, 04:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (vare_187uk @ Jun 4 2006, 04:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Hater&#045;AiD~>@Jun 4 2006, 03:06 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-Keffer@Jun 4 2006, 12:43 PM
Crits?
http://img447.imageshack.us/img447/354/roe26vm.jpg
imagine that all the letters are the same size :) i was falling asleep
i would get rid of the lines





nah forget the lines burn the paper &#33; :lol: [/b][/quote]
Haha... yeah, i agree i would get rid of the lines they just look retarded.

and are you using crayons...?

aces
06-04-2006, 07:46 PM
hes usin some art pencil he stole from school apparently

Holidayy Styles
06-04-2006, 07:50 PM
haha

Holidayy Styles
06-04-2006, 07:57 PM
Originally posted by Holidayy Styles@Jun 4 2006, 11:14 AM
my first piece in like 4 months i know the handstyles are wack...crits?



http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i75/HolidayyStyles/Enics-One.jpg
bumb, crits...?

xDISMALx
06-04-2006, 08:06 PM
just my opinion but i think you should lose some of those arrows some look nice some are kinda not working

Holidayy Styles
06-04-2006, 08:10 PM
yeah...thanks i know what u mean

ZeNiTh
06-04-2006, 08:13 PM
just trying to keep it simple, since Im a T-O-Y
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h106/ZENITH91/000_0125.jpg

ZeNiTh
06-04-2006, 08:17 PM
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h106/ZENITH91/000_0125.jpg
whoa that was big, sorry heres the smaller version..... sorry again :(



(edit) shit it didnt resise

edit again... sorry my computer was fucked up and the pic looked huge until now so sorry for the double post

beone
06-04-2006, 08:18 PM
resize it???

Holidayy Styles
06-04-2006, 08:26 PM
loose the bubbles and try making it smaller it might make it easier

Keffer
06-04-2006, 08:28 PM
i dont think he knows how... make sure you put a check in the box (for imageshack) when you select the size ;) lol
yea.. its some wierd art pencil because im to lazy to find a real pencil or sharpie. i have accualy used a crayon while trying to sketch before, lol

Holidayy Styles
06-04-2006, 08:32 PM
no, i wasnt talking about the size of the image i was talking about the size of his throwie when u make ur drawings smaller instead of the whole paper its easier to keep the letters consistant

ZeNiTh
06-04-2006, 08:32 PM
i dont know what happened, and i use photobucket anyway, much better than imageshack

aces
06-04-2006, 08:35 PM
Originally posted by aces@Jun 3 2006, 03:39 PM

Go to www.imageshack.us (http://www.imageshack.us).

http://img188.imageshack.us/img188/6793/19kj.jpg
When you get to the front page it should look like this. Now press BROWSE.

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/3838/28tv.jpg
A box like this should pop up. Click on your file and it will show up where the green box is. Now click OPEN.

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/6163/33qu.jpg
Now make sure to click on resize image and select the size you want becuase nobody likes a massive picture, I personally like 640x480. Now click HOST IT.

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/1586/51va.jpg
It should now look like this. Now copy the DIRECT LINK TO IMAGE.

http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/9503/66xn.jpg
Now go to Bombing Science and press ADD REPLY to whichever thread you want to reply to. It should now look like this. Click on the IMG button.

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/6720/73bc.jpg
This window will now pop up and ask for the image URL and this is where you paste the DIRECT LINK TO IMAGE.

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9632/86rl.jpg
The URL will now show up in that red box. Now press OK

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/3527/96ko.jpg
It will now look like this and now all you do is press ADD REPLY.
alright i made this yesterday so i thought i would share it with all of you that dont know how to post images

Holidayy Styles
06-04-2006, 08:35 PM
yeah i use photobuckey also :P

aces
06-04-2006, 08:36 PM
imageshack is so much easier and the pics never get deleted

Holidayy Styles
06-04-2006, 08:42 PM
word...? i never used it

TricksForKids
06-04-2006, 08:43 PM
http://img346.imageshack.us/img346/5118/umm6ch.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

use it, it hosts sexy pictures like this one^

Regs with another freestyle, crits?

Peace

aces
06-04-2006, 08:47 PM
i still dont like where the E is goin the other letters are sick but the E ruins it also on the R the 3d that goes al the way across at the top should be like the one on the S with no blue in between the letter and the thing that goes off to the left

TricksForKids
06-04-2006, 08:48 PM
notice the direction of the 3D and the direction of the top of the R, theyre the same, meaning there should be no 3D there, but thanks for the crits on the E

AoAssis
06-04-2006, 08:51 PM
Aces theres an even easier way, just take Hotlink #1 and put it striaght on the board, instead of taking direst link and puting image brackets around it.

aces
06-04-2006, 09:05 PM
whatever they both work

Holidayy Styles
06-04-2006, 09:45 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i75/HolidayyStyles/Enics-One001.jpg

kwik throw up crits?

xAWOKE.925
06-04-2006, 09:51 PM
resize your damn picture.

N.O.T.E
06-04-2006, 10:05 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9831/06010607090vc.jpg
crits?
excuse the crown..

ICER
06-04-2006, 10:30 PM
^ i dont know i kind of dont like that snake looking thing

N.O.T.E
06-04-2006, 10:40 PM
thats cool
thanx 4 the comment man

FEN the HEN
06-04-2006, 10:47 PM
i like the throwies in your sig...but its hard to tell what it says just resize it first

FEN the HEN
06-04-2006, 10:49 PM
fuck

[]RENT[]
06-05-2006, 12:08 AM
&#036;48 worth of markers, 2nd canvas :ph34r:

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/1017/rentcanvas0031gz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

critics please :D

sky 5
06-05-2006, 12:08 AM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1403/11616706th.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

D-Bois
06-05-2006, 12:14 AM
that was a waste of 48&#036; man haha

C3ZR ONE
06-05-2006, 12:21 AM
Originally posted by sky 5@Jun 5 2006, 12:08 AM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1403/11616706th.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump.. That&#39;s fresh kid..

Apoc
06-05-2006, 01:07 AM
big ups

doomsayer
06-05-2006, 02:14 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/CIMG3586.jpg

My first sketch.

chili
06-05-2006, 03:42 AM
ghn

Skeam
06-05-2006, 04:59 AM
i had a few goes at some throws today, pretty happy with what i came up with. my scanner must be pretty shit cause the green one is actually fluro green and the 2 darkish blue ones the S is actually purple and the K is dark blue. swing some crits my way please guys, what should i work on cause i wouldnt mind gettin a good throw then practicin sprayin it.

cheers
matt

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/8835/33pl1.jpg

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/9457/16wd1.jpg

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/2838/22tk1.jpg

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/341/40zw.jpg

had a bit of fun with my VERY FIRST HOMEMADE MARKER&#33;&#33;&#33; :D haha, made it pretty dodgily... white shoe cleaner with house paint thinned with water :wacko: . seems to work alright though...

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b294/DoorMatt91/5.jpg

Laeos
06-05-2006, 06:34 AM
Doomsayer, i dont know if it&#39;s just me, but i cant read your sketch - for now just write out like keyboard letters and try and twist them a little to your style - nothing too crazy untill you get letter structure down.

Chili, you gotta work on the letter structure, keep all the letters the same width - like the c is thin at the top and then fat at the bottom, should be the same thickness throughout. Keep the sketch on the same level - there is a slight slant in yours which makes it look weird.

Lose the cloud and try adding some 3d as it&#39;s an important part of writing - but you&#39;re doing simples which is always a good start =).

Keep practicing to both&#33;

Skeam, those look pretty dope man, but i&#39;m not really in a position to crit lol

Skeam
06-05-2006, 06:44 AM
thanx for the positive eedback mate, anything you reacon i should try change or just work on perfecting it?

cheers
matt

chili
06-05-2006, 06:52 AM
fghj

Belisle
06-05-2006, 06:54 AM
need ya advice&#33;

SEL
06-05-2006, 07:21 AM
hi ppl,
have a look at this and give me feedback plz.
cheers homies.
this is one of ma 1st.. ;)
http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/6289/05060600036pn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some guy from NCI...
06-05-2006, 07:28 AM
Did you just say "cheers homies"?

SEL
06-05-2006, 07:30 AM
well if u read u will c dat it it sez dat.
im black wass da problem?

Belisle
06-05-2006, 07:31 AM
need ya advice

some guy from NCI...
06-05-2006, 07:32 AM
Originally posted by SEL@Jun 5 2006, 07:30 AM
well if u read u will c dat it it sez dat.
im black wass da problem?
Is that a fucking joke?

SEL
06-05-2006, 07:32 AM
from me?

SEL
06-05-2006, 07:36 AM
sum guy from NCI can you repost wat u sed wit no "offensive" words cos ma comp wont open da page.
peace

some guy from NCI...
06-05-2006, 07:40 AM
only if you repost what you did with no "offensive" sentences cos ur t00 focking illiterate to tipe on teh keeboard.

oh yeh nd peace my homeboy.

Belisle
06-05-2006, 07:47 AM
crits?

Laeos
06-05-2006, 08:14 AM
Belisle - I presume you want crits on the sketches in your sig? In any case, dont constantly ask for crits and whatnot just post and be patient or you&#39;ll just piss a lot of people off and get a bad name around the forums.

They&#39;re pretty bad man tbh, like I said in a couple of posts above lol - you need to stick with the simple keyboard letters for now - nothing too wild at all, dont bother with colouring or doing a background until you get the basic letter structure down and then you can go crazy. Keep the letters the same size, keep the sketch level (i.e dont let it slant like your second one has) and work on your 3d, on the first one it&#39;s going off at different angles on different letters. Although the site is pretty wack, check out http://www.mrwiggles.biz/how_to_do_block_3d.htm for a half decent 3d guide - just copy the principles of that, and it should help =)

But keep practicing&#33;

Peace

Belisle
06-05-2006, 09:28 AM
thx man appriciate

Mse
06-05-2006, 09:47 AM
new photos old sketches
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153156349.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153156351.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153156354.jpg
crits comments?

molotow_15
06-05-2006, 09:51 AM
Originally posted by Mse@Jun 5 2006, 03:47 PM
new photos old sketches
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153156349.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153156351.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153156354.jpg
crits comments?
nice nice nice

BoRe-719-
06-05-2006, 11:14 AM
what do u write??
its nice u got structure from what ican see, alls u gotta work on is add ons, shit thatll make ur letters look more unique.
thos up on a wall with a nice fill would look great.

jerm_mtl
06-05-2006, 11:19 AM
yo sky thats awesome looking but i dont c whuts written i kinda c R E R :blink:

jerm_mtl
06-05-2006, 11:20 AM
Originally posted by sky 5@Jun 5 2006, 12:08 AM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/1403/11616706th.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i mean this one

Mse
06-05-2006, 11:45 AM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153156342.jpg
fo got this piece of shit
peace

AoAssis
06-05-2006, 12:06 PM
How come you bitch ass aint on MSN? and who did the Chonky, its nice.

ZeNiTh
06-05-2006, 12:07 PM
Originally posted by ZeNiTh@Jun 4 2006, 08:13 PM
just trying to keep it simple, since Im a T-O-Y
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h106/ZENITH91/000_0125.jpg
so the bubbles need to go, i know that, but is there anything else that needs to be done?

Laeos
06-05-2006, 12:28 PM
To zenith - the o looks a bit skinny and keeping all the letters on the same level might help and i think you should round off the bottom right part of the e a bit more, it goes a little too straight in comparison with the rest of the sketch

ZeNiTh
06-05-2006, 12:31 PM
ok

AoAssis
06-05-2006, 12:37 PM
What the fuck? Are you serious? you actualy left a comment that just said ok. You dont have to leave a comment back everytime someone leaves you one, this aint AIM or MSN. If someone leaves you a comment, then you just read their comment, and you dont have to say ok, ill do that, sure, really? etc anything like that. Leave fucking comments that are worth reading, fuck this is what bs has turned into. -_-

ZeNiTh
06-05-2006, 12:41 PM
fuckin chill man, go beef with someone else.

Blak-T
06-05-2006, 12:55 PM
havent posted in min....here some sketches with a new name ....comments crits.
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/d1.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/d3.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/d2.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/d4.jpg

chili
06-05-2006, 01:06 PM
fghjn

ZeNiTh
06-05-2006, 01:14 PM
no

ZeNiTh
06-05-2006, 01:20 PM
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h106/ZENITH91/000_0126.jpg
i thought this could be better without the splashes so ignore em

chili
06-05-2006, 01:59 PM
fghj

uhhh
06-05-2006, 02:20 PM
i know with throwies it&#39;s hard to make them bubbly without having them like that, but it is possible...
i&#39;ll post a flick of mine when my mom gets back with the camera.

Mse
06-05-2006, 02:22 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis@Jun 5 2006, 12:06 PM
How come you bitch ass aint on MSN? and who did the Chonky, its nice.
vice versa?
i did it you homosexual sheep

Laeos
06-05-2006, 02:53 PM
To chili, sorry man but lol that one is a lot worse than before - you obviously haven&#39;t listened to the advice given as those letters 1) aren&#39;t the same thickness 2) aren&#39;t keyboard style 3) aren&#39;t on the same level. It&#39;s a bit annoying man after time was spent trying to help you and you just ignore it. I&#39;m not flaming - just letting you know. Anyway, to reiterate, seriously try and write chili in just keyboard type letters, keeping the letters the same size and thickness and on the same level without using a ruler or anything like it - you&#39;ll see how hard it is. Once you&#39;ve done that, do it again, and again and again untill you can appreciate how to make a sketch look good you&#39;ve gotta have good letter structure - which that one you just did, really doesn&#39;t have. Use a thinner black pen and work on that handie too - just try experimenting with different like styles of letters. The 3d looks ok though so grats on that - just make sure it&#39;s regular, like the downward lines go off at slightly different angles in some places.

To zenith, I dunno if you intended for it to increase in size from left to right but meh it doesn&#39;t really work as the o is smaller than the r lol. For now, i&#39;d recommend keeping it all the same size. I&#39;m guessin the purple is meant to be a forcefield thingie, if it is, try and keep it the same size around the sketch like yours is real thick around the r and real small around the e. The E also looks a bit silly with a massive bottom half and a small top half. And like chili said, a nice black outline would really help.

Keep practicing&#33;

Peace

molotow_15
06-05-2006, 02:58 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Jun 5 2006, 05:45 PM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153156342.jpg
fo got this piece of shit
peace
the first sketch is a super nice throwie

BoRe-719-
06-05-2006, 03:13 PM
thats not a throwie dipshit, hell the second one isnt even a throwie....their both ill pieces that belong on a wall

?..DeMo..?
06-05-2006, 03:19 PM
ok well here are some things that ive done. critz will be nice
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/cannss.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/asssssssssss.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/scannnnnyoooo.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/koooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/koooooliooo.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/toyyyyyyyyy.jpg

Sluts_r_us
06-05-2006, 03:35 PM
fosale&#39;s net isant workin so he asked me 2 put this sketch up....and im a nice guy so i did....
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/fornikki.jpg

ScryberOneR
06-05-2006, 03:38 PM
whats with all the v&#39;s?
:rolleyes:

jerm_mtl
06-05-2006, 03:38 PM
thats a hella nice throwie

ScryberOneR
06-05-2006, 03:39 PM
Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;@Jun 5 2006, 03:13 PM
thats not a throwie dipshit, hell the second one isnt even a throwie....their both ill pieces that belong on a wall
bro you seriously think that "Line" is a piece? :blink:

TricksForKids
06-05-2006, 03:51 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Jun 4 2006, 08:43 PM
http://img346.imageshack.us/img346/5118/umm6ch.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

use it, it hosts sexy pictures like this one^

Regs with another freestyle, crits?

Peace
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/1671/handy8br.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump&#33;

Aizo
06-05-2006, 03:57 PM
Hah.

Seti
06-05-2006, 04:00 PM
SAVE
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/save.jpg

BoRe-719-
06-05-2006, 04:07 PM
seti u can count on ME bumping THAT for at leats 10 pages...u ARE the knig of 3d

alls i can say is clean it up, i can see some pencil marks and eraser shavings.

ScryberOneR
06-05-2006, 04:09 PM
Originally posted by Seti@Jun 5 2006, 04:00 PM
SAVE
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/save.jpg
thats that shit right there.

Bo yah.

Chevy ridin high boy&#33;

molotow_15
06-05-2006, 04:09 PM
sweet seti

bore chek your spellings

sky 5
06-05-2006, 04:13 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/777/11616717jz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

from this mornings session. .. . fucked up on the fill in the middle but it happens.

seti - always nice but i really like this cuz it shoots out more on the extensions which to my eye emphasis the depth of the 3d/seti style more than usual

molotow_15
06-05-2006, 04:18 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Jun 5 2006, 10:13 PM
http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/777/11616717jz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

from this mornings session. .. . fucked up on the fill in the middle but it happens.

seti - always nice but i really like this cuz it shoots out more on the extensions which to my eye emphasis the depth of the 3d/seti style more than usual
yh thats sweet..

Mime
06-05-2006, 04:26 PM
Damn Seti, those angles are sick, man. Shading is off the chain, too. Good shit. Deserves every bump it gets.

Sky, solid page, man&#33; Your main piece is kind of boring - seeing as your handstyle is almost the same as it, minus flare. Loving the color scheme & the other two, though. I&#39;d recommend trying to avoid ever having your pieces resemble your handstyles, in any way. It&#39;ll make you look repetitive and un-original to veteran cats.

BoRe-719-
06-05-2006, 04:34 PM
not meaning to throw out beef but, molotw, uneed to stop quoting shit thats right above ur post....it gets annoying

molotow_15
06-05-2006, 04:36 PM
i&#39;ll put a stop to it

beone
06-05-2006, 05:23 PM
sky that shit is tight i dont think the peice looks like the handstyle the r does al il bit o well it still gots style

beone
06-05-2006, 05:25 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jun 5 2006, 03:35 PM
fosale&#39;s net isant workin so he asked me 2 put this sketch up....and im a nice guy so i did....
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/fornikki.jpg
that is a tight throw for nikki but i wish the black lines were a little cleaner and the top was all the same size the bottom is straight but the top goes at an angle getting taller

and he should loose the hearts because they suck and ruin it

beefgerky
06-05-2006, 05:27 PM
tight, but the n is mad weak.

beone
06-05-2006, 05:30 PM
it is weak but how could u make it good for that style??? dont think anyway u do it it would look good

[]RENT[]
06-05-2006, 06:07 PM
i got no comments on my canvas, but heres the sketch, its alot better, i messed up alot with the canvas

http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/7599/rent227rt.png (http://imageshack.us)

beefgerky
06-05-2006, 06:10 PM
god damn...

im glad i dont frequent these forums anymore...

BoRe-719-
06-05-2006, 06:17 PM
Originally posted by Seti@Jun 5 2006, 04:00 PM
SAVE
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/save.jpg
guess what.....this shits rockin

Laeos
06-05-2006, 06:22 PM
rent: lose all the arrows, keep the letters the same size and thickness, do simple keyboard style letters for now untill you get better letter structure and try to sharpen up your colouring it&#39;s a bit messy in places. If you flick back a few pages i gave loads of crits for people in a similar position to you and cant be arsed to retype it sorry, might be worth checking out.

Anywho, here&#39;s my latest - hardly better than those that i&#39;ve been crittin but oh well:


Throwie, recon the pencil sketch has any potential?

http://img516.imageshack.us/img516/2269/laosthrowiieee9jd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Piece type thingie like

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/516/loaspeice3pp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Thanks for the crits

Peace

AMAZ tbscrew
06-05-2006, 06:35 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky@Jun 5 2006, 06:10 PM
god damn...

im glad i dont frequent these forums anymore...
agreed i think we all steped outa the toy section...

like we got to a point where bs just got bored and we dont feel like sittin around and lookin at the bull shit anymore cuz wer not on that level anymore

seti killin shit rite now with his 3d
regs has that sick style
awoke got his tight trowie down
you got ur shit down
pesk has the dope trowie
cezr&#39;s a dad and hes got his handstyle and stickers...and he use 2 have those sick pieces
ioni was always good and i saw that sticker he had shit looked sick
bore has the kara&#39;s and his boy infected to show him everything
fosale is almost there hes guna be a good bomber
ao has that sick euro style thing going on lol
ume has all the paint in the world and those simples


and yea who else am i forgetting?if i missed u im sorry :( we all use to run the toys fourm theres so many new heads tho...we wer really that bad at one point?

and the sad thing is all u have to do is get your simples down and progress from there its not even that hard because once u get your style into it..your set

Fosale!
06-05-2006, 06:41 PM
Originally posted by beone@Jun 5 2006, 05:25 PM

that is a tight throw for nikki but i wish the black lines were a little cleaner and the top was all the same size the bottom is straight but the top goes at an angle getting taller

and he should loose the hearts because they suck and ruin it
there is no point in losing the hearts, she is a girl, they love shit like that

Laeos
06-05-2006, 06:44 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Jun 5 2006, 06:35 PM
like we got to a point where bs just got bored and we dont feel like sittin around and lookin at the bull shit anymore cuz wer not on that level anymore


Thats true, but there&#39;s also the whole giving back to the community that helped you factor

AMAZ tbscrew
06-05-2006, 06:48 PM
*sigh* really no one helped us.. there wasnt anyone on the toy fourms on a higher level to help us...besides cezr hes been doing it the longest and yet he bearly gave feedback to us..he was in his own world lol

keep working on the second one dont over lap ur letters like that,fix the 3d...and on the pencil sketch in a few months ull be like wtf was i thinking...

sky 5
06-05-2006, 06:50 PM
lmao right now ...

Laeos
06-05-2006, 06:51 PM
Haha, props for your advancement and cheers for the crits =)

BoRe-719-
06-05-2006, 06:53 PM
i dont give a fuck what level ppl think im at, itll be a while before i give up the toys forum.

ICER
06-05-2006, 06:55 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/civik.jpg

it says CIVIK i might start writing that&#33; any feedback please&#33;

BoRe-719-
06-05-2006, 07:01 PM
dude civik is an awsome name, if i were u id start writing that, jus dont forget to practice other letters, thats what makes u better.

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/save.jpg
bumping settis ish

TNS_NOPE
06-05-2006, 07:03 PM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d181/arojo/asylm1.jpg

very messy, just a quik sketch of a style im workin on...i&#39;ll post a cleaner one tomaro

[]RENT[]
06-05-2006, 07:19 PM
Originally posted by Laeos@Jun 5 2006, 06:22 PM
rent:* lose all the arrows, keep the letters the same size and thickness, do simple keyboard style letters for now untill you get better letter structure and try to sharpen up your colouring it&#39;s a bit messy in places. If you flick back a few pages i gave loads of crits for people in a similar position to you and cant be arsed to retype it sorry, might be worth checking out.
<_< ive done blockbuster and bubble letters, im not doing it again, ive been doing graff for 7 months now. Im not gonna start from the beggining.

civik, your I&#39;s look like R&#39;s

edit: and dont tell people how to make it look better when your still doing the basics, its like a small town company telling Coke how to make their business more sucessful. (not saying im amazingly good) and making your letters all the same size is what you do when you start out, adjusting size will make most sketches better, for you first blue one for example, you can even see half the A, if it was bigger, you would be able to. Its called Euro style, adjusting the size of your letters.

Sluts_r_us
06-05-2006, 07:38 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Jun 5 2006, 06:48 PM
*sigh* really no one helped us.. there wasnt anyone on the toy fourms on a higher level to help us...besides cezr hes been doing it the longest and yet he bearly gave feedback to us..he was in his own world lol


uhhh cezr was pretty much the most helpful guy....to me at least...always crits and feedback and always positive which helps....anywayssss....im not gettin out of the toy box anytime soon....i got a long way to go from here....

Fosale!
06-05-2006, 07:45 PM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/2633445a.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/e696ad74.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/c839b0a9.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/69d911c4.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/e221a228.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/029da460.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/24a80b13.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/84a08fcd.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/d7bb5d2c.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/6193f559.jpg
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/9f7062a4.jpg
^dont mind the fuck up with the 3-d

?..DeMo..?
06-05-2006, 07:47 PM
hmm i like the first one alot the last one looks pretty good to keep it up man nice work

Amuk
06-05-2006, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;@Jun 5 2006, 07:01 PM
dude civik is an awsome name, if i were u id start writing that, jus dont forget to practice other letters, thats what makes u better.

http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/save.jpg
bumping settis ish
that shit is fuckin dope

ZeNiTh
06-05-2006, 07:49 PM
demo battle wtf?

ScryberOneR
06-05-2006, 07:50 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us+Jun 5 2006, 07:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sluts_r_us @ Jun 5 2006, 07:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Jun 5 2006, 06:48 PM
*sigh* really no one helped us.. there wasnt anyone on the toy fourms on a higher level to help us...besides cezr hes been doing it the longest and yet he bearly gave feedback to us..he was in his own world lol


uhhh cezr was pretty much the most helpful guy....to me at least...always crits and feedback and always positive which helps....anywayssss....im not gettin out of the toy box anytime soon....i got a long way to go from here.... [/b][/quote]
Yeah bro, fo sho. Cezr is always helpful. COmes with this crits and isnt a dick about it.

AMAZ tbscrew
06-05-2006, 08:15 PM
hmm true i guess...i dont rember him giving me feed back i remeber him sayin my shit was dope and stuff lol w.e cezr is a beast.

FEN the HEN
06-05-2006, 08:21 PM
we all love CEZR :wub:

ZeNiTh
06-05-2006, 08:23 PM
cezr is great

furious
06-05-2006, 08:31 PM
idk why it posted twice?

AoAssis
06-05-2006, 08:37 PM
I remember when i use to come on here everyday and be like cezr and give crits to everyone and be nice all the time, then you just get sick off all the toys always coming back with the same crap so you turn into the world renound (sp?) BS asshole.

furious
06-05-2006, 08:37 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e336/notvdoctor/06-05-06_1700.jpg
agh its garbage, crits?

it&#39;s fu-short for furious

AoAssis
06-05-2006, 08:40 PM
^^ Thats why i became an asshole.

FEN the HEN
06-05-2006, 08:46 PM
shit i thought it was a P

nephsike
06-05-2006, 08:52 PM
Originally posted by AMAZ tbscrew@Jun 5 2006, 07:48 PM
*sigh* really no one helped us.. there wasnt anyone on the toy fourms on a higher level to help us...besides cezr hes been doing it the longest and yet he bearly gave feedback to us..he was in his own world lol

keep working on the second one dont over lap ur letters like that,fix the 3d...and on the pencil sketch in a few months ull be like wtf was i thinking...
this is funny as hell... talkin like you made it to the top and shit..... :lol:
your so full of yourself its hilarious...you dont even paint, and your boy pesk bombs chill spots....you guys are the greatest&#33;

TricksForKids
06-05-2006, 08:54 PM
before this escalates into useles beef, both of you just chill. Amaz has been here longer and put in a lot of work for the toys here, and he knows hes still a toy, trust me. As for you neph youve been here since april, just calm down, theres no need for beef

Case Closed

Sluts_r_us
06-05-2006, 08:57 PM
i paint trainlines....why do you always come in here beefin with people? ands wtf does this have to do with me? you come in here full of yourself to....

Sluts_r_us
06-05-2006, 08:58 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis@Jun 5 2006, 08:37 PM
I remember when i use to come on here everyday and be like cezr and give crits to everyone and be nice all the time, then you just get sick off all the toys always coming back with the same crap so you turn into the world renound (sp?) BS asshole.
renowned...not renouned...

AoAssis
06-05-2006, 09:02 PM
Sluts R US uses dictionary.com and you should too&#33;

AMAZ tbscrew
06-05-2006, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by nephsike+Jun 5 2006, 08:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nephsike @ Jun 5 2006, 08:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-AMAZ tbscrew@Jun 5 2006, 07:48 PM
*sigh* really no one helped us.. there wasnt anyone on the toy fourms on a higher level to help us...besides cezr hes been doing it the longest and yet he bearly gave feedback to us..he was in his own world lol

keep working on the second one dont over lap ur letters like that,fix the 3d...and on the pencil sketch in a few months ull be like wtf was i thinking...
this is funny as hell... talkin like you made it to the top and shit..... :lol:
your so full of yourself its hilarious...you dont even paint, and your boy pesk bombs chill spots....you guys are the greatest&#33; [/b][/quote]
yurp your rite im full of myself

but my work is respected by other writers and iv came a long way to the point where i am now. and i do paint sorry i dont have a cam to flick stuff

im not even guna start beef...the person that seems like hes full of himself here is you...because your the one that always has a smart comment to say about all my posts

at lest people in here respect my work... yea ur a good writer...but ur attitude just pulls you to the bottem everytime u post something


wait...here comes a smart ass reply from you.

Blak-T
06-05-2006, 09:13 PM
Originally posted by Blak&#045;T@Jun 5 2006, 12:55 PM
havent posted in min....here some sketches with a new name ....comments crits.
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/d1.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/d3.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/d2.jpg
http://i27.photobucket.com/albums/c164/racerboi06/d4.jpg
any crits....got looked over by all the chit chat

nephsike
06-05-2006, 09:15 PM
tricks...ive been on bs for a minute..just with a diff name...
you guys crack me up...

AMAZ tbscrew
06-05-2006, 09:24 PM
i had a diffrent name before this one 2... so w.e

ados
06-05-2006, 09:34 PM
Originally posted by AoAssis@Jun 5 2006, 08:37 PM
I remember when i use to come on here everyday and be like cezr and give crits to everyone and be nice all the time, then you just get sick off all the toys always coming back with the same crap so you turn into the world renound (sp?) BS asshole.
i agree with that.... im sick of kids posting shit soo wack and bumping it a whole bunch. fuck... everday it seems to be getting worse... seems since that getting up game came out all these little kids wanna graff. we need a forum for intermediate toys, and a forum for kids that suck so bad they don&#39;t even qualify as toy.

Blak-T
06-05-2006, 09:41 PM
okay we have established that some people on here suck....is anyone going to get back to giving crits...

ScryberOneR
06-05-2006, 09:41 PM
I can understand what yall are sayin, in some cases. I mean some shit is just so wack that they know whats commin. Some shit just looks really wack, but the cat actually tried and does wanna know. and some is some progressing stuf thats getting better. This IS the toy forum, and I dont understand why yall&#39;d be up in the toy forum bitchin about toys. Everyones gotta start somewhere and I think this site is badass in offering ops to cats tryin to write.
But there is some kids that just post shit that they know isnt even really worth it and posting it over and over askin for crits instead of waiting or saying hey, i posted a pic a while back, whatd yall think.

:blink:

ados
06-05-2006, 09:45 PM
Originally posted by Blak&#045;T@Jun 5 2006, 09:41 PM
okay we have established that some people on here suck....is anyone going to get back to giving crits...
you want crits? its wack. stop bumpin it.

FEN the HEN
06-05-2006, 09:45 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture056.jpg

<_< ...just to stop the beef...its about a month old

ScryberOneR
06-05-2006, 09:49 PM
i like the green throwie fenone.

AoAssis
06-05-2006, 09:53 PM
Originally posted by ScryberOneR@Jun 5 2006, 09:41 PM
I can understand what yall are sayin, in some cases. I mean some shit is just so wack that they know whats commin. Some shit just looks really wack, but the cat actually tried and does wanna know. and some is some progressing stuf thats getting better. This IS the toy forum, and I dont understand why yall&#39;d be up in the toy forum bitchin about toys. Everyones gotta start somewhere and I think this site is badass in offering ops to cats tryin to write.
But there is some kids that just post shit that they know isnt even really worth it and posting it over and over askin for crits instead of waiting or saying hey, i posted a pic a while back, whatd yall think.

:blink:
This is the toy forum you are correct. The only reason i am bitching in the toy forum about toys is some toys are so retarded they dont even progress, i can see the progression in some people, but lots of people just keep on coming back with the same wack ass shit with nothing even changed. Or if it is changed its changed to something even wacker.

Crucible
06-05-2006, 09:57 PM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Jun 5 2006, 09:45 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture056.jpg

<_< ...just to stop the beef...its about a month old
Fen, you gotta keep all your letters on the same plane. Don&#39;t let them increase/decrease in size or run away from where the word started, get what I&#39;m sayin? Also, just because it&#39;s a bubble letter doesn&#39;t mean that every single thing has to be circular like a bubble. Just looking at the yellow and green throwies, the bottom and top of the F looks like a bubble. Just keep it rounded at the edges. Also, you got some unnecessary "molding" as I&#39;ve heard it called in your e&#39;s.

I like the one at the bottom of the page though. Those stripes are hot and you kept it simple.



Pleeeease, if you&#39;re gonna beef do it in PM. We don&#39;t want your lame asses arguing where people are trying to improve&#33;

AMAZ tbscrew
06-05-2006, 09:58 PM
Originally posted by ados+Jun 5 2006, 09:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ados @ Jun 5 2006, 09:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Blak&#045;T@Jun 5 2006, 09:41 PM
okay we have established that some people on here suck....is anyone going to get back to giving crits...
you want crits? its wack. stop bumpin it. [/b][/quote]
not guna lie...this made my nite lol

ScryberOneR
06-05-2006, 09:59 PM
^^ I understand that point as well, as i said. And I havent been in the forums a long time, so i prolly havent really noticed it yet.

ados
06-05-2006, 10:11 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/squidbattle2.jpg

TNS_NOPE
06-05-2006, 10:17 PM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d181/arojo/throwie1.jpg

my throwie...for now, critz plz

TricksForKids
06-05-2006, 10:30 PM
Regs commin at ya, id like to say its a freestyle but well, thatd be a lie.

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/5571/regsred0qe.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Ume
06-05-2006, 10:34 PM
nice regs, the R looks a little bigger then the rest of them...and the E is shaping up nicely. :)


here&#39;s a work in progress....
the "drips" on the bubbles looks likes it&#39;s going up, but the book is upside down so you can see what it says...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006751.jpg

FEN the HEN
06-05-2006, 11:36 PM
girl&#39;s suck wtf :lol:

Ume
06-05-2006, 11:37 PM
they fucking do...and i don&#39;t mean the good sucking...i mean the stuff where they fuck with you in small ways...shit like that...they can fuck off.

MF Feed Letter
06-05-2006, 11:45 PM
meh girls dont suck...jus go fuck with them in small ways make it even

beone
06-05-2006, 11:59 PM
alot of ppl write girls suck idk why maybe cuz they are attention craving whores???

with nice asses and titties :) and soft skin bitch&#33;&#33;&#33; lol

C3ZR ONE
06-06-2006, 12:01 AM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Jun 5 2006, 08:21 PM
we all love CEZR :wub:
Awww shucks.. :wub: Cezr loves you little nigguhs back.
I appreciate what you guys said. I&#39;ll always try to be helpful when I can.

AO- I know how you feel, but it&#39;s not always failure.....Toxus is gettin better&#33;&#33; :lol:

Cesu- I didn&#39;t even think you owned a blackbook. I thought you just used the Canadian frieghtline instead. :lol: I like the drips upside down..

Regs- Fresh

Asylum- Clean it up a bit and repost.

Ume
06-06-2006, 12:06 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jun 6 2006, 01:01 AM
Cesu- I didn&#39;t even think you owned a blackbook. I thought you just used the Canadian frieghtline instead. :lol: I like the drips upside down..
:lol: :lol:

i own maybe 3....the one i posted is huge...i can&#39;t fit it in my backpack. :(

the c3zr drawing i did is done...but my cameras been fucking up since i took that last flick. :(

sky 5
06-06-2006, 12:10 AM
ume - that fill is nice. simple and clean and it really pops the letters. i am straight up stealing that fill for a sketch tomorrow, sorry homey.
did you use a white marker for the highlight or where you just real good about not coloring those areas in?


http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/1790/11616474ai.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

re-postin this ... regs i like how your shootin those 2 tabs down, ive been tryin to work somethin like that in, somethin that flows straight down

Ume
06-06-2006, 12:11 AM
go ahead and steal the colour scheme...i know i did...well i saw it somehwere...then i painted it...the i drew it...


and i use a white out pen to do those....

tint1
06-06-2006, 12:25 AM
its not wack, dont take shit from ados cause hes probably gay O_o

hue
06-06-2006, 12:28 AM
Wow this is supposed to be the toy thread and I see really nice stuff. Well i joined the forums in 04 and haven&#39;t been on since. I really like the whole graffiti culture and really appreciate it. Yesterday I started making some stickers and well I just wanted to get some feedback. Thanks&#33;

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/1715/blah8bj.jpg

doomsayer
06-06-2006, 01:52 AM
Can someone give me some critique on this, I cant find my last post >.<:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/CIMG3586.jpg

smer
06-06-2006, 04:16 AM
sketch block letters and loose the arrows ur piece has no letture scructure

SEL
06-06-2006, 05:20 AM
can someone give me like feedback on this i did.
i though real hard to make a cool, but simple style.

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/6681/05060600035vj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

thanks.
peace

NEW

Seti
06-06-2006, 06:59 AM
THE ONLY THING I CAN SAY IS THAT THE LETTERS ARE NOT ALL THE SAME FATNESS, TRY MAKING IT CONSISTENT, HERES A DELETE ONE IM WORKING ON, AND CHEERS FOR ALL THE CRITS....BLAPBLAP
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/DELETE.jpg

svear
06-06-2006, 07:13 AM
HEY HUE LAD THERES A KUE DOWN HERE IN AUS HES A FUCKING BURNER .

some guy from NCI...
06-06-2006, 08:00 AM
YESYES SETI&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;


some nice shit... but maybe on the complete left side, where there&#39;s the sircly bit, it needs a bit of cleaning up (it just doesn&#39;t look even enough). Same with the bit on the complete bottom right (not the circle/dot though)


But yeh its nice. And I can actually read this one clearly :o :o :o

ZeNiTh
06-06-2006, 09:54 AM
well new name...
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h106/ZENITH91/000_0128.jpg

(P.S. the letters are supose to do that. :D

hue
06-06-2006, 10:00 AM
Originally posted by svear@Jun 6 2006, 07:13 AM
HEY HUE LAD THERES A KUE DOWN HERE IN AUS HES A FUCKING BURNER .
Kue or Hue? There&#39;s also a crew in Madrid that goes by HUE but no 1 in the states and im in the states. It&#39;s pretty tuff getting a name that hasn&#39;t been used and well I thought HUE wasn&#39;s used until a couple of days ago. I&#39;m aslo starting out and really like writing this name and there&#39;s no 1 that famous with HUE,so im chillin with it...lol. Thanks for the heads up though. What do you think about the stIckers up therE?

AoAssis
06-06-2006, 10:19 AM
04 heads still got respect and dont act stupid and toy, thats good. As for the stickers the only one im kinda feelin is the ninja, work on your handy.

chili
06-06-2006, 10:38 AM
fghj

sky 5
06-06-2006, 10:57 AM
Originally posted by tint1@Jun 6 2006, 12:25 AM
its not wack, dont take shit from ados cause hes probably gay O_o
ados is good you wanker&#33; :)

sel - unlike alot of heads you r on the right track and tryin what everyones been sayin on here -- keep your letters proportional and simpler the better. the E is too fat on the left side and the L is smaller and slants NE. sometimes i draw a straight line on the paper then skecth the letters on top so it stays level. with the L i would suggest extending the bottom part of the L out more horizontally

also you need to work on your hand, either use a fatter marker or if using a fine point squish it in more

ZeNiTh
06-06-2006, 11:02 AM
Originally posted by ZeNiTh@Jun 6 2006, 09:54 AM
well new name...
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h106/ZENITH91/000_0128.jpg

(P.S. the letters are supose to do that. :D
???

beone
06-06-2006, 11:14 AM
Originally posted by sky 5@Jun 6 2006, 12:10 AM
ume - that fill is nice. simple and clean and it really pops the letters. i am straight up stealing that fill for a sketch tomorrow, sorry homey.
did you use a white marker for the highlight or where you just real good about not coloring those areas in?


http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/1790/11616474ai.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

re-postin this ... regs i like how your shootin those 2 tabs down, ive been tryin to work somethin like that in, somethin that flows straight down
this is some tight shit and im really feelin the word relek color scheme is hott and the letters are tight to

what did u use an airbrush???

unknown...
06-06-2006, 11:15 AM
http://img346.imageshack.us/img346/1295/p10109339bc.jpg

looks crappy, but i like the general idea of what im trying to do

Mse
06-06-2006, 11:18 AM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153522249.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153522254.jpg
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/153522257.jpg
if you know cyrillic you know what the first two say :(

beone
06-06-2006, 11:18 AM
FEC^improvment&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

looks better just loose the details till u get the style down

the c gets overlaped to much try just making them touch and not overlaping i think it would look better

and the bottom of the c and e shouldnt touch itself it looks bad



guy above me ur style is fresh i like it, is that russian cuz i can read russian but i dont understand it or speak it very well

ZeNiTh
06-06-2006, 11:21 AM
anyone alive out there&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;
anyone crit the first post, pls

unknown...
06-06-2006, 11:23 AM
hmmm, i kinda like it zenith...i would say go all the letters the same size but if u like it like that then keep doin it...

Mse
06-06-2006, 11:33 AM
it serbian and the first one is an exchange
the 3rd one is just the names of crew members

AMAZ tbscrew
06-06-2006, 11:41 AM
Originally posted by Ume@Jun 5 2006, 10:34 PM
nice regs, the R looks a little bigger then the rest of them...and the E is shaping up nicely. :)


here&#39;s a work in progress....
the "drips" on the bubbles looks likes it&#39;s going up, but the book is upside down so you can see what it says...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/IM006751.jpg
bump....i agree. :(

unknown...
06-06-2006, 11:48 AM
hmmmm, i heart girls....just ask em to rub their belly button......from the inside&#33; That always works for me&#33; and if it doesnt than i geuss id prolly hate girls 2

ZeNiTh
06-06-2006, 12:31 PM
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h106/ZENITH91/000_0130.jpg
its my 1st into something other than bubbles...go easy :(

Ume
06-06-2006, 01:03 PM
mse....i...i...i fucking love you. :wub:

obseen
06-06-2006, 01:29 PM
Originally posted by beone+Jun 6 2006, 11:14 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beone @ Jun 6 2006, 11:14 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Jun 6 2006, 12:10 AM
ume - that fill is nice. simple and clean and it really pops the letters. i am straight up stealing that fill for a sketch tomorrow, sorry homey.
did you use a white marker for the highlight or where you just real good about not coloring those areas in?


http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/1790/11616474ai.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

re-postin this ... regs i like how your shootin those 2 tabs down, ive been tryin to work somethin like that in, somethin that flows straight down
this is some tight shit and im really feelin the word relek color scheme is hott and the letters are tight to

what did u use an airbrush??? [/b][/quote]
im lovin the one on the left, the other too dont have as much flow though, still
good stuff keep it up
are you rekone?

?..DeMo..?
06-06-2006, 02:01 PM
Originally posted by ?..DeMo..?@Jun 5 2006, 03:19 PM
ok well here are some things that ive done. critz will be nice
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/cannss.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/asssssssssss.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/scannnnnyoooo.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/koooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/koooooliooo.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/toyyyyyyyyy.jpg
i aint got no critz on da firs titme so plz help this timne not to ahrsh nither plz

ZeNiTh
06-06-2006, 02:05 PM
demo battle wtf happend?

?..DeMo..?
06-06-2006, 02:09 PM
ooo yea mi bad zenith i had ot go someware and couldnt scna it and im oging someware soon so illl post it up tongihgt

ZeNiTh
06-06-2006, 02:13 PM
Originally posted by ZeNiTh@Jun 6 2006, 12:31 PM
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h106/ZENITH91/000_0130.jpg
its my 1st into something other than bubbles...go easy :(
i still havent heard words for this one

ScryberOneR
06-06-2006, 02:40 PM
the d and s not bad. the e could use some work and make sure your 3d is consistant.
ch yeah.
peas

chili
06-06-2006, 02:42 PM
dfgh

ZeNiTh
06-06-2006, 02:46 PM
that handi needs work, but the first has good flow, but the three dee is different on the end L and I

ScryberOneR
06-06-2006, 02:52 PM
^^Bump that top one chili&#33; Thats a VAST improvement. The handi needs work tho. Try not to make your letters (the bottom one) so plain. Kinda make them have more extreme features, if that makes any scence to you. Keep workin that top one is the best ive seen yet.

chili
06-06-2006, 02:55 PM
fghj

chili
06-06-2006, 02:56 PM
ghjkl

Ume
06-06-2006, 03:04 PM
i&#39;m not saying that chili handies good...but ZeNiTh you should work on yours before you say someones is bad when it&#39;s better then yours.

AMAZ tbscrew
06-06-2006, 03:28 PM
mse got good ass fuck lol

Laeos
06-06-2006, 03:35 PM
Nice chili - hate to say i told you so... =P

Just work on keepin them tidy like, no smudgies etc - but much better allover =)

ZeNiTh
06-06-2006, 04:10 PM
yeah its lame but it can be fixed with your improvement thoughts, so
http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h106/ZENITH91/000_0131.jpg

aces
06-06-2006, 04:14 PM
i dont really liek the style youre goin at there but at least its simple
the D kind of looks like a backwards E and i&#39;d lose the exclamation mark

jerm_mtl
06-06-2006, 04:57 PM
http://img279.imageshack.us/img279/504/sect2ze.pngwhut u guys think its my 2nd piece

some guy from NCI...
06-06-2006, 05:04 PM
hahaha painting wood. It doesn&#39;t get much worse than that.

jerm_mtl
06-06-2006, 05:05 PM
well the wall is legal, and its made outta wood. so ya, so id rather do legals to start

TNS_NOPE
06-06-2006, 05:18 PM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d181/arojo/dylm1.jpg

a lil cleaner and i decided to go with DYLM...critz plz, thnx

jerm_mtl
06-06-2006, 05:21 PM
i like ur style just dont over lap the 3d on the red part over the yellow

aces
06-06-2006, 05:25 PM
Originally posted by TNS_NOPE@Jun 6 2006, 06:18 PM

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d181/arojo/dylm1.jpg

a lil cleaner and i decided to go with DYLM...critz plz, thnx
clean up the lines a bit but its lookin good i quite enjoy it
and i made it so you could see the pic

some guy from NCI...
06-06-2006, 05:29 PM
? I saw it fine ?

TNS_NOPE
06-06-2006, 05:30 PM
thnx, i&#39;ll try not going over the yellow and makin it a lil cleaner...

MSE- that style sik, keep ot up...

TNS_NOPE
06-06-2006, 05:32 PM
Originally posted by some guy from NCI...@Jun 6 2006, 05:29 PM
? I saw it fine ?
i posted it were u had to clik on the url, but i changed it...

Mse
06-06-2006, 05:51 PM
thanks to all
specially emu and amaz :wub:
ahahha im off i have the biggest headache ever known to man

aces
06-06-2006, 06:07 PM
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/4329/picture2zj.jpg
i know the A is weak but i did it real quick for KLIPA crits? i may use some markers sometime but finals are coming up so maybe not

Sluts_r_us
06-06-2006, 06:09 PM
mse....<3<3<3 those new sketches are dope...like ur style alot....nice jbb...

TNS_NOPE
06-06-2006, 06:14 PM
Originally posted by aces@Jun 6 2006, 06:07 PM
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/4329/picture2zj.jpg
i know the A is weak but i did it real quick for KLIPA crits? i may use some markers sometime but finals are coming up so maybe not
mabe u should make the hole in the A a lil smaller and the line thiker so it maches the other letters...just a suggestion, looking good tho

beefgerky
06-06-2006, 06:16 PM
definatly

EatRichPeople
06-06-2006, 06:17 PM
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/3266/zoen0vo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Zoen
I dunno ever since I quit smoking green I can&#39;t seem to focus, I just wanna hurry my shit, anybody else had that? Anyway..critz??

Sweet shit MSE

Aces maby move the I a lil to the left to fill up the gap, letters look nice.

Mse
06-06-2006, 06:36 PM
Eatrichpeople i dont like the e or the o they dont seem to flow
your older shit was better

and why do people type MSE instead of mse or Mse im confused

aces your letters are overlapping too much i think :(

FEN the HEN
06-06-2006, 07:04 PM
Originally posted by some guy from NCI...@Jun 6 2006, 05:04 PM
hahaha painting wood. It doesn&#39;t get much worse than that.
hows that bad....its better then seeing that out in the streets

EatRichPeople
06-06-2006, 07:12 PM
Than for the critz Mse

ion-i
06-06-2006, 07:26 PM
this is a canvas I did for my commercial art class, yes, wack ass letters, but I didn&#39;t really care since it wont matter, I just wanted to follow a theme and base it off the band Sublime. Pretty gay, but whatever:
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/sublime_canvas.gif

2 new slaps:
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/pornstar_slap2.gif

&#036;20 for all this paint, pretty good deal since the place I went to was having a "everything must go sale." (10 cans: 9 painters touch, 1 gold "touch tone")
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/painters_touch.gif

TNS_NOPE
06-06-2006, 08:11 PM
i rak my shit...but thats just me....

minesweep
06-06-2006, 08:14 PM
nice stencil

ion-i
06-06-2006, 08:15 PM
meh, i rack other shit, from shirts to shoes, to paint pens and those homemade flowpens. but paint.. i dunno
plus, &#036;20, couldnt beat a deal like that for 10 cans. I got the &#036;20 easily for working, so I said, "what the fuck, why not".

{. GEAR .}
06-06-2006, 08:22 PM
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/gwurk1.jpg
i needed to work on my g&#39;s so...here it is. crits plz