Blackbooks

[a!Ds]

wow nice shit musa, i wanna see it done :)

[Mse]

eatrichpeople the handstyles are ill
the e could ust a lot of work


http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/156866310.jpg

[shc | dogy]

see my work on www.shc.bloger.hr am a toy but see it PLS

[Skeam]

heres a few throwies, i finally completed one with my whole name in it :P just the beggining of startin again pretty much. im tryin some simples and stuff ill cuck up later probably. any crits appreciated.

cheers
matt

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7604/hpim18873fg.jpg

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/1647/hpim18883fs.jpg

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/2933/hpim18893du.jpg

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/3185/hpim18903ac.jpg

[weldo]

some older stuff
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/552/dsc000073yj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Belisle]

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/90/img1427110kr.jpg

crits?????

[MUSASHI]

Originally posted by Mse@Jun 16 2006, 04:16 AM


http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/156866310.jpg
wow! i like this. looks like trouble in the toy battle,yipes!

[backtoyou]

Originally posted by backtoyou@Jun 15 2006, 03:37 PM
http://i6.tinypic.com/14j44zb.jpg
http://i5.tinypic.com/14j45dd.jpg
new name
coments?
bumpin for critz

[Holidayy Styles]

Originally posted by Mse@Jun 16 2006, 04:16 AM
eatrichpeople the handstyles are ill
the e could ust a lot of work


http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/156866310.jpg
sick. love the character and how its on a map. big props

[EatRichPeople]

thanx for tha feed Mse, and damnn that craola spitting char is ILL, ya letterstyle dope aswell , not really usefull feed but ya it's dope.

That black&white throwie looks nice, also like the fluorant(??) colors a lot.

Bottom one looks real nice, don't know why just like the style.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

I did these jus last night...


My throw
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/throw.jpg

What looks better,
With red
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Bubbles-red.jpg

Or without?
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/no-red.jpg

[Skeam]

Originally posted by EatRichPeople@Jun 16 2006, 08:53 AM
That black&white throwie looks nice, also like the fluorant(??) colors a lot.

Bottom one looks real nice, don't know why just like the style.
are you talkin bout my throws? if so thanx mate

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by beefgerky@Jun 15 2006, 09:03 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap096.jpg

feeding every addict, do it cuz im gooood at it..
bumpercars.

[TricksForKids]

feelin the other sketches before way more gerky^, the thing is
when doing sketches with different thicknesses of letters, you have to keep the differences the same, if that makes sense, like all your skinny lines, keep them the same skinnyness, all your fat lines the same fatness, the letter dimensions just seem a little off in that sketch, and i dont like th R, still pretty nice though, fuck im hungover

Peace

[Fluffy Bunnies]

I added a lil pizzaz to my thing...
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Picture.jpg

[nephsike]

Originally posted by beefgerky+Jun 16 2006, 11:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beefgerky @ Jun 16 2006, 11:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-beefgerky@Jun 15 2006, 09:03 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap096.jpg

feeding every addict, do it cuz im gooood at it..
bumpercars. [/b][/quote]
your covering up to much of the R....but im really liking this style....i hope to see you continue to develop it

[Skeam]

heres the first of many simples to come, re-developing my style... or tryin too lol.

also 2 throwies, i feel i have progressed a bit in my throwies as im actually kinda happy with em for once.

any crits?

cheers
matt

http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/2581/hpim18970yp.jpg

http://img484.imageshack.us/img484/5746/hpim18923kt.jpg

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/2227/hpim18946ib.jpg

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/2058/hpim18959sx.jpg

[WolfBurrns]

I like it, the first one especially. Not feeling the 3d one the second though. You see how you did the splash off the &#39;M&#39;? You could&#39;ve did the same thing on the bottom part of the &#39;S&#39; too. Would&#39;ve looked better in my opinion, instead of just tucking it behind the top part.

[Laeos]

My attempt at a throwie, it&#39;s backwards ish cause i have real trouble getting L to flow in the same direction as the AOS meh. Obv it could do with being more cleaner and a bit more propportional but anyway what do you think - it wack?


http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/4817/laosbackwardsthrowie2ak.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[?..DeMo..?]

wow lol thats pretty funny i mean im not good either but lol first off wats it say? ok than alright now just keep doing tghrows and thorows and block busters and blbock busters any time u can and ull be pretty good. ur not thw worst ive seen jsut keep at it ur 3d is laright

[flclnaruto1213]

Originally posted by nephsike+Jun 16 2006, 11:17 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nephsike @ Jun 16 2006, 11:17 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by beefgerky@Jun 16 2006, 11:34 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-beefgerky@Jun 15 2006, 09:03 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap096.jpg

feeding every addict, do it cuz im gooood at it..
bumpercars.
your covering up to much of the R....but im really liking this style....i hope to see you continue to develop it [/b][/quote]
word i agree, i think the R is covered too much, and also, it looks like the r and k are like on an angle, idk how to explain it, almost as if you were like looking at them from the left.
the G and E are sick, and its sick in general too.

[BoRe-719-]

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0513.jpg

sorry bout the whole sideways thing...

[?..DeMo..?]

holy shit that is fucking nice keep that shit up

[aces]

one crit for ya bore. the pants at the bottom of them kind of looks like they were cut up instead of bunched up. i dont know how to fix it but thats just what i think. other than that its amazing

[BoRe-719-]

i see what ur sayin, i had to flick it with my cam so the xolor didnt come out very nice....ill scann it when i get the scanner up, resize it n flip it.

[EatRichPeople]

Bore you ill mofo, youre chars are sick man.
And skeam yes I was talking to you :)

[backtoyou]

Originally posted by backtoyou+Jun 16 2006, 08:18 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (backtoyou @ Jun 16 2006, 08:18 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-backtoyou@Jun 15 2006, 03:37 PM
http://i6.tinypic.com/14j44zb.jpg
http://i5.tinypic.com/14j45dd.jpg
new name
coments?
bumpin for critz [/b][/quote]
can i get some fucking comments please

[Outlaw ScumFuck]

keep sketchin. its like makin crack, we could give u a million tips but in the end you have to learn on your own.

[Quadratic]

Originally posted by BoRe&#045;719&#045;@Jun 16 2006, 02:25 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f52/Simpuhl/100_0513.jpg

sorry bout the whole sideways thing...
bump&#33;

sick as hell man, but i agree with aces about the pants

[sky 5]

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9438/11717062zz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[MF Feed Letter]

sky hats some killer coloring loving the 3d on the black peice..you should probably move outta the toy box soo

throw
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1187.jpg

[whodunit]

^^ im really not feeling the colors... no beef or anything

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8093/throwup000063mv.png (http://imageshack.us)

sticker i made from a throwie toon gave me

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by Skeam+Jun 16 2006, 10:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Skeam @ Jun 16 2006, 10:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-EatRichPeople@Jun 16 2006, 08:53 AM
That black&white throwie looks nice, also like the fluorant(??) colors a lot.

Bottom one looks real nice, don&#39;t know why just like the style.
are you talkin bout my throws? if so thanx mate [/b][/quote]
please..dont tag ghost a legend already writes that

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Jun 16 2006, 09:27 AM
I did these jus last night...


My throw
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/throw.jpg

What looks better,
With red
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/Bubbles-red.jpg

Or without?
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/no-red.jpg
i mean this

[toon!..]

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/6536/peterborough0563nr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for a battle..
i dont like it&#33; :(
gonne do another.

[tea dee sea]

a couple peices i did recently
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1640/picture198br.jpg
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2711/picture188xr.jpg
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8995/picture165ol.jpg
and a new throw
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5619/picture157yp.jpg

[Samschoicecola]

Originally posted by Samschoicecola@Jun 15 2006, 11:47 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/th_Picture039.jpg (http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/Picture039.jpg)

uhhhhh this is something simple. Says COLA&#33; i write nile but im thinking bout switchin to cola i like the letters any ways messed up on the A. Any crits other wise?
can i get some crits is it too small? i cant figure out how to make it bigger

[lost_for_evex]

i think you have potentiol..i think your L looks like a backwards J/b

keep workin on it tho.. i like it

[AoAssis]

theres already a cola, and hes on this site too, he doesnt visit to often any more, i dont even know if he visits any more. but hes alright, so i sugest a name change.

[Skeam]

Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Jun 16 2006, 12:41 PM
I like it, the first one especially. Not feeling the 3d one the second though. You see how you did the splash off the &#39;M&#39;? You could&#39;ve did the same thing on the bottom part of the &#39;S&#39; too. Would&#39;ve looked better in my opinion, instead of just tucking it behind the top part.
really apreciate the crits mate cheers, thanx for the idea on the S too mate, i mite use that if its cool wit u.

eatrichpeople, thanx also for the crits

sky5, i fucken love that shit man especially where youve blended it from red to yellow, looks real good mate. lovin the style.

[Fluffy Bunnies]

Originally posted by jerm_mtl@Jun 16 2006, 09:09 PM

please..dont tag ghost a legend already writes that
***** I don&#39;t be writin&#39; ghost it&#39;s "GHOSX" yeah that&#39;s right you punk ass btch mother fuckinhg ball licking cock sucker.
haha jus kiddin&#39; I am jus getting hardcore.

but how is my sketches anyways?

[toon!..]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2716/peterborough0564dl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
or
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3546/peterborough0585vb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
????

[Skeam]

lovin that first one mate, those faces are pretty sweet. second on isnt bad either

[cord]

i like them both a lot toon, but on the first one it looks like the characters are all clumped together too much at one side......

perhaps spread them out?

any crits for this?

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0305.jpg

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b48/teamsinister/IMG_0308.jpg

[Mse]

work on letter structure and 3d
your 3d sucks fucking balls

[The Fallen Slave of Atlantis]

I think the skulls pretty cool dude

[whodunit]

Originally posted by whodunit@Jun 16 2006, 08:22 PM
^^ im really not feeling the colors... no beef or anything

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/8093/throwup000063mv.png (http://imageshack.us)

sticker i made from a throwie toon gave me
bump for crits im trying to figure out how to make the picture bigger without making it to big

[EatRichPeople]

Imageshack has a resize option...and cord handstyles look dope and skull aswell but as Mse said 3d needs some work, coloring is dope specially the curly stuff

[magic nyc]

Toon, you know thats not your style. Ive seen it painted before on actual walls. Biter, just wait till i find the pic.

[lost_for_evex]

oh stfu...

[cord]

Originally posted by Mse@Jun 17 2006, 03:49 PM
work on letter structure and 3d
your 3d sucks fucking balls
please would you be more specific?

the letter structure looks fine to me :(

[lost_for_evex]

u missed 3d on the right side of the z....

u should make it all go to one side...it looks wierd..and make ur letters the same size...also idk if u used markers or color pencils...but work on ur coloring...i dont color my shit cuz i always seem 2 mess it up when i do. but yea work on that lol

[tea dee sea]

Originally posted by tea dee sea@Jun 16 2006, 10:36 PM
a couple peices i did recently
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1640/picture198br.jpg
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2711/picture188xr.jpg
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/8995/picture165ol.jpg
and a new throw
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5619/picture157yp.jpg
bump for crits

[toon!..]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Jun 17 2006, 12:00 PM
Toon, you know thats not your style. Ive seen it painted before on actual walls. Biter, just wait till i find the pic.
ive neva seen anyone use it, and if you think thats my only style u are fucking rong.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/nfvcrew_dr

[lost_for_evex]

to agon

on the first two...put a gap on the bottom of the N so it looks like an N
your A can pass for an R...work on those two letters

on the 3rd one you went a lil wild added to much stuff your N looks like a W...you should take some of the stuff u added to the A ..seems like u added too much

i like your trowie. instead on lines in ur letters..try doing those big circles like the ones cope does to see how they look..it mite look good.

[tea dee sea]

thanks yoo and ya i sumtimes do circles in my throws

[memorex]

This is an idea for the Craola battle. Im not entering, I fucked the bottom of the "R" up pretty hard. The coloring is shit, and the scanner darkens up the markers more then they already are. I just want comments or ideas on how I could progress this style further. Yet again, sorry about the shitty "R" and coloring.

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h212/awphelps13/Craola.jpg

[whodunit]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Jun 17 2006, 12:00 PM
Toon, you know thats not your style. Ive seen it painted before on actual walls. Biter, just wait till i find the pic.
lay off toon man he does lotsa styles, and sure there are other styles like that one but his is his own version of that style

[?..DeMo..?]

Originally posted by memorex@Jun 17 2006, 01:47 PM
This is an idea for the Craola battle. Im not entering, I fucked the bottom of the "R" up pretty hard. The coloring is shit, and the scanner darkens up the markers more then they already are. I just want comments or ideas on how I could progress this style further. Yet again, sorry about the shitty "R" and coloring.

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h212/awphelps13/Craola.jpg
ok first your right that r is pretty dudeys right and the l is pretty bad to looks like an h to me i dunno jsut work on blobk letters very simple very very very simple thats all i really gotta say

[cord]

Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Jun 17 2006, 06:00 PM
u missed 3d on the right side of the z....

u should make it all go to one side...it looks wierd..and make ur letters the same size...also idk if u used markers or color pencils...but work on ur coloring...i dont color my shit cuz i always seem 2 mess it up when i do. but yea work on that lol
aight thanks man, anymore crits for me anyone?

[TricksForKids]

http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/857/crizzle4da.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

craooooooooola&#33;

GO ENGLAND&#33;

[AoAssis]

Did you ever do a remik one? if you did i missed it :( Can you re post it?

Nice coloring.

[TricksForKids]

nah, i havnet done a remik, but have you done a regs....thats what i thought..... :(

Ill get started on one sometimes soon, peaaaaaaaaace

[AoAssis]

Ok ill start yous once i get done cutting out these slaps. Regs has hard ass letters, i suck at G&#39;s and S&#39;s :( Ill see what I can do.

[-MaCKiE-]

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/6966/weirdstyle3xd.jpg


tryna develop new style this first one... decided i am bored with well structured letters

[Eskimo33]

What does it say?

[-MaCKiE-]

rellik

[sky 5]

Originally posted by sky 5@Jun 16 2006, 06:56 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9438/11717062zz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/4536/11717082ir.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

piece of wood ...

regs- thats nice but it looks like the "LA" is kinda thin and inconsistent.

[Samschoicecola]

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/th_Picture.jpg (http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/Picture.jpg)

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/th_Picture051.jpg (http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/Picture051.jpg)

OK these are some stickers. I tried to color around the letters on the parts where they over lap to make it look 3-d. Trying to work on coloring and letter structure any crits. could this be a throwie?

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by sky 5+Jun 17 2006, 10:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sky 5 @ Jun 17 2006, 10:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Jun 16 2006, 06:56 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9438/11717062zz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/4536/11717082ir.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

piece of wood ...

regs- thats nice but it looks like the "LA" is kinda thin and inconsistent. [/b][/quote]
tha sam person dont bump over peoples stuff and
not even comment

------------------------------------------------------------
sky 5 this shit fuckin dope, you shouldent be posting in this thread
:wub:

[Samschoicecola]

gOSH
do YOU REALLY WANT A COMMENT FROM ME ???
i THINK IT LOOKS GOOD I LIKE THE COLORS IN THE TOP ONE
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/th_Picture051.jpg (http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/Picture051.jpg)
ANY CRITS ON MINE???

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by molotow_15+Jun 17 2006, 11:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ Jun 17 2006, 11:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by sky 5@Jun 17 2006, 10:27 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Jun 16 2006, 06:56 PM
http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/9438/11717062zz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/4536/11717082ir.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

piece of wood ...

regs- thats nice but it looks like the "LA" is kinda thin and inconsistent.
[/b][/quote]
i love this so much its sexual

[Samschoicecola]

okAY???

[Subjective Omnisciency]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/P1010138.jpg

[lost_for_evex]

dah...aone...tght u left the fourms bro.. good shit

no new painted stuff?

aint feeling this sketch

sam wuts it say?

molotow hop off his dick.

[Subjective Omnisciency]

i have new painted stuff, but I havn&#39;t gotten around to taking flix, ill post them soon tho

[MF Feed Letter]

what heappens when i get baked and try to use add ons..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1188.jpg

[umop 3pisdn]

Originally posted by Subjective Omnisciency@Jun 17 2006, 05:43 PM
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/P1010138.jpg
hahaha
"not an arrow"

[Subjective Omnisciency]

haha

[Subjective Omnisciency]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 17 2006, 06:24 PM
what heappens when i get baked and try to use add ons..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1188.jpg
haha, it looks good, but you added too many, and theres alot of fuckups so it makes it look worse than it actually is. Plus its way too big on the right side&#33;

sorry for double post

[MF Feed Letter]

what fuck ups?...well besides the one side being big

[Subjective Omnisciency]

well i can see where you erased shit, unless its stuff on the other side, and i think i mistook your shadow type thing for fuckups cuz it looks like you have random arrows and lines where they shouldn&#39;t be

[ScryberOneR]

SKY , bump as usual. MF I actually like that bro, if you had kept the letters all the same size you prolly coulda made it flow better. nice shit tho both.
Ups ups.

[magic nyc]

Originally posted by toon&#33;..+Jun 17 2006, 01:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (toon&#33;.. @ Jun 17 2006, 01:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Jun 17 2006, 12:00 PM
Toon, you know thats not your style. Ive seen it painted before on actual walls. Biter, just wait till i find the pic.
ive neva seen anyone use it, and if you think thats my only style u are fucking rong.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/nfvcrew_dr [/b][/quote]
That kid sate has okay letter and you style is kind bitten from NOXERs character throwie just changed a little and someone else does it like that too.

[jerm_mtl]

i actually like it yaser

[Eskimo33]

MF the only thing i see wrong with it is that your 3d is off. other then that its really good.

[Subjective Omnisciency]

Originally posted by magic nyc+Jun 17 2006, 07:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (magic nyc @ Jun 17 2006, 07:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by toon&#33;..@Jun 17 2006, 01:02 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Jun 17 2006, 12:00 PM
Toon, you know thats not your style. Ive seen it painted before on actual walls. Biter, just wait till i find the pic.
ive neva seen anyone use it, and if you think thats my only style u are fucking rong.
http://www.flickr.com/photos/nfvcrew_dr
That kid sate has okay letter and you style is kind bitten from NOXERs character throwie just changed a little and someone else does it like that too. [/b][/quote]
those letters are widely used and not very stylized... though the char throw does look familiar. But who cares... graf is graf, unless you are blatently biting someones unique style its all good.

[[]RENT[]]

new flicks,

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/9662/rent231za.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I knew i missed the one line of 3d on the T, I fixed that just now but im too lazy to take another pic just because of that

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6417/rent247fu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the shinyness is a paintmarker.

critics please :)

sorry about image size, it wouldnt resize it for somereason...

[FEN the HEN]

umm resize please

[Samschoicecola]

Originally posted by Samschoicecola@Jun 17 2006, 04:57 PM
http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/th_Picture.jpg (http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/Picture.jpg)

http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/th_Picture051.jpg (http://i46.photobucket.com/albums/f102/Avicra/Picture051.jpg)

OK these are some stickers. I tried to color around the letters on the parts where they over lap to make it look 3-d. Trying to work on coloring and letter structure any crits. could this be a throwie?
sorry im posting this again but the order got all fucked up cuz that kid and it says NILE

[[]RENT[]]

Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Jun 17 2006, 10:59 PM
umm resize please
I tried to resize it but it wouldnt work, I dont know why, if anyone has microsoft image resizer resizing it would be appreciated.

[FEN the HEN]

oh well they llook hot anyways

[beone]

delete them or sumn u fucked the whole page up and those are pretty whack

[.D.H.]

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/4085/10064923qf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6681/10065157zp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/8985/10065187je.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the little swirly firework thing was my friend tryin to be funny, so ignore it
but ya crits please

[Tek_805_RDG]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b265/ThioHuxtable/edeeko.jpg
Some shit I did a couple days ago for my cousin....tell me what you think, talk shit, whatever....

[Crucible]

Samschoice, I like it except for a couple things. The i needs a dot and the left side of the n is fucked up. Besides that though, I like it. The coloring is good especially.

Tek, you just gotta work on it. I know everyone says it, but go back to simples. If the letter doesn&#39;t look good without the arrows and extensions, don&#39;t add them. Plus, the 3d and coloring is fucked up. And what&#39;s with all those lines inside the letters? Shit&#39;s wack. Just work on it. That&#39;s all I have to say

[Tek_805_RDG]

Originally posted by Crucible@Jun 18 2006, 02:07 AM
Samschoice, I like it except for a couple things. The i needs a dot and the left side of the n is fucked up. Besides that though, I like it. The coloring is good especially.

Tek, you just gotta work on it. I know everyone says it, but go back to simples. If the letter doesn&#39;t look good without the arrows and extensions, don&#39;t add them. Plus, the 3d and coloring is fucked up. And what&#39;s with all those lines inside the letters? Shit&#39;s wack. Just work on it. That&#39;s all I have to say
Aight thanks for the advice, I know I still need a lot of work....

[a!Ds]

damn dood, those huge ass pics broke my internet.

[Skeam]

agon, i like the throwies alot more.

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 18 2006, 12:32 AM
what fuck ups?...well besides the one side being big
the three arrows on one arrow..
the piece is nice, it jus gets a bit on the right side,
so it looks out of proportion..
gd shit though

[tea dee sea]

just a simple
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4296/picture206wx.jpg

[SEL]

yo, checl out ma stuff on painted pieces.
peace

[Quake]

a bit scruffy but what the hell

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060617/03/e/7/4/e74697f79feb41e1eed6820bc4935d4d200606170_full.jpg

[SEL]

da kitkat is funny&#33;hahahaha

[jerm_mtl]

quake i like better quake then kwake so write it with a Q even if its like the hardest letter

[alive]

so heres my latin notebook from school

this ones older, but i still like it a lot
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/4c04af17.jpg

heres a rele fast one actually from global class
simple letters, i know the M is fucked up, too much is hidden by accident, and the O looks like an A
o well, says OTTOMAN, during a lecture on the ottoman empire
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/f4167d9e.jpg

aiight so this one is from the trip to school on the subway (Refer to sig)
looks a bit undefined, forgot an outline
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/6c3dcc69.jpg

from latin class, what i ended up basing my current throw from
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/56d749fa.jpg


and here is my throw, shittly done, letters shrink
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/3e878ee2.jpg


aiight well there goes
crits plz
all done with only bic pens, and then later some are extremely quickly and shittily filled in with prismas (i know a waste) but i usually take my time with them, and i got the 60 dollar 24 set for 20 bucks from another writer&#33;


PS. that last throw, i accidently did on the other side of the page the my school sercurity guard (i kid u not) hit up mad nicely. FUCK bled through, cant see a damn thing. neway, hes gonna hit up my black book later, ill put it up, hes incredible, used to write SOLID back in the day, on the trains n all great for me, nething i get in trouble for he gets me out of

aiight the end

[ICER]

^ i like the 2nd and the last one the best

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/ci.jpg

here is a simple any critz?

[flymolo]

only been drawing for 4 weeks soo I know I have a long way to go

http://img367.imageshack.us/img367/4577/dsc000190so.th.jpg (http://img367.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc000190so.jpg)

[.D.H.]

Originally posted by .D.H.@Jun 18 2006, 12:49 AM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/4085/10064923qf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6681/10065157zp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/8985/10065187je.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
the little swirly firework thing was my friend tryin to be funny, so ignore it
but ya crits please
bump for crits please

[aces]

just keep workin on it

Thinkin about a name change:
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/4051/picture0588ez.jpg
YEGS
or
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/8640/picture0596eq.jpg
YEDS

Which one is better? Check both the handstyle and throwie please.

[FEN the HEN]

your going places B)

directed at D.H

[magic nyc]

Alive, you take latin in school too? I thought my school was the only gay school in NY to fucking teach Latin. God I hate that class. I think I failed it too.


Im bored as well so does anyone want to battle me? Any word any rules but I just dont want to battle anyone too good, lol.

[MF Feed Letter]

Originally posted by jerm_mtl@Jun 18 2006, 02:27 PM
quake i like better quake then kwake so write it with a Q even if its like the hardest letter
dont tell people what to write

[[]RENT[]]

any crits on my huge pics back a page?

[MF Feed Letter]

Originally posted by aces@Jun 18 2006, 02:48 PM
just keep workin on it

Thinkin about a name change:
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/4051/picture0588ez.jpg
YEGS
or
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/8640/picture0596eq.jpg
YEDS

Which one is better? Check both the handstyle and throwie please.
there pretty much the same...an there not so great either

[alive]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Jun 18 2006, 03:09 PM
Alive, you take latin in school too? I thought my school was the only gay school in NY to fucking teach Latin. God I hate that class. I think I failed it too.


Im bored as well so does anyone want to battle me? Any word any rules but I just dont want to battle anyone too good, lol.
yo lol i failed that shit
a year back
i hate it too
with a passion

so anyway, lets battle

u make the rules, im uncreative
its a struggle for me to draw a fucking stick figure, i should get a pick of my first work, holy shit its bad.

[molotow_15]

mf are you in the toy battle :wub:

[aces]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter+Jun 18 2006, 04:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MF Feed Letter @ Jun 18 2006, 04:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Jun 18 2006, 02:48 PM
just keep workin on it

Thinkin about a name change:
http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/4051/picture0588ez.jpg
YEGS
or
http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/8640/picture0596eq.jpg
YEDS

Which one is better? Check both the handstyle and throwie please.
there pretty much the same...an there not so great either [/b][/quote]
there supposed to be the same just with a letter change and what should i change to make it better

[MF Feed Letter]

ya...i am in the toy battle...why?

and aces i dont liek the pointed tops of the e and s and i think you shoudl overlap your letters like dont worrie about the bottom of the y covering up some of the y a bit if you know what im talking about i dono if it makes any sense im kinda just typing shit so ya i dono loose the points make the structure better

[molotow_15]

cuz i love your stuff

[aces]

wow molotow over 2000 posts and half of them are in general disscussion

and MF i see what ur sayin i&#39;ll work on it some more

[ScryberOneR]

Aces why are you changing your name?

[alive]

Originally posted by alive@Jun 18 2006, 02:28 PM
so heres my latin notebook from school

this ones older, but i still like it a lot
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/4c04af17.jpg

heres a rele fast one actually from global class
simple letters, i know the M is fucked up, too much is hidden by accident, and the O looks like an A
o well, says OTTOMAN, during a lecture on the ottoman empire
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/f4167d9e.jpg

aiight so this one is from the trip to school on the subway (Refer to sig)
looks a bit undefined, forgot an outline
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/6c3dcc69.jpg

from latin class, what i ended up basing my current throw from
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/56d749fa.jpg


and here is my throw, shittly done, letters shrink
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/3e878ee2.jpg


aiight well there goes
crits plz
all done with only bic pens, and then later some are extremely quickly and shittily filled in with prismas (i know a waste) but i usually take my time with them, and i got the 60 dollar 24 set for 20 bucks from another writer&#33;


PS. that last throw, i accidently did on the other side of the page the my school sercurity guard (i kid u not) hit up mad nicely. FUCK bled through, cant see a damn thing. neway, hes gonna hit up my black book later, ill put it up, hes incredible, used to write SOLID back in the day, on the trains n all great for me, nething i get in trouble for he gets me out of

aiight the end
b-b-bump
for CRITS

[whodunit]

for some reason i like the e&#39;s on the last one

[ICER]

Originally posted by ICER@Jun 18 2006, 02:31 PM
^ i like the 2nd and the last one the best

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/ci.jpg

here is a simple any critz?
bump 4 critz&#33; :ph34r:

[tea dee sea]

nice icer u should add sum colour

[magic nyc]

Originally posted by alive+Jun 18 2006, 03:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Jun 18 2006, 03:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Jun 18 2006, 03:09 PM
Alive, you take latin in school too? I thought my school was the only gay school in NY to fucking teach Latin. God I hate that class. I think I failed it too.


Im bored as well so does anyone want to battle me? Any word any rules but I just dont want to battle anyone too good, lol.
yo lol i failed that shit
a year back
i hate it too
with a passion

so anyway, lets battle

u make the rules, im uncreative
its a struggle for me to draw a fucking stick figure, i should get a pick of my first work, holy shit its bad. [/b][/quote]
Alright lets battle then, umm, 3 color min, no character, paper and the word is the first thing someone post next but it has to be less than 5 characters cause i hate long words.... =] sounds fair??

[aces]

how about zorel for the word

[magic nyc]

okay its ZOREL
thats a weird letter combo for me but ill try
have no clue wat toy shit ima draw up
ohwell

[MF Feed Letter]

yaser







anyways
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1196_1.jpg

[beefgerky]

dope colors, feeling the throw, but i hate connected 3d on throwups, it ruins the style, drow shadow FTW.

[alive]

yo aiight lets go
lol
just wait until u see my toy shit

good luck

[magic nyc]

whos going to do the poll?

[tea dee sea]

Originally posted by tea dee sea@Jun 18 2006, 11:45 AM
just a simple
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/4296/picture206wx.jpg
bump for crits

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 18 2006, 06:17 PM
yaser







anyways
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1196_1.jpg
i love the piece

[magic nyc]

alright alive im done, how bout you? Get a poll up.

[-Tetra-]

http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/7889/sunp00267zh.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Any Comments?

[magic nyc]

I can barely see the letter because of the coloring. Its to advanced.

[jerm_mtl]

i like it

[magic nyc]

Alive, where are you bro? =/

[?..DeMo..?]

its dudeys lol and yaser sick keep it up

[pace1]

Nice shit yaser Sick fill

simple with some color
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/p5.jpg

[uhhh]

not the greatest for blackbooking but if you could do that same thing on a train or something... people would not say shiieeeeet ;)

[pace1]

thanks yeah i know its not crazy but yeah know its the toy forum more worried about getting the simples and letter structure first.
no beef

[TricksForKids]

DAMNIT, ok, listen up fools, theres either the idiots in here, that say, THATS SHIT, and start beef, but fuck, its just as bad to say "Thatd look sweet painted on a train", frankly, it WOULDNT, it wouldnt look sweet painted on a cardbox box shoved under the stairs where no one could see. Dont be dicks ( like i just was ) but dont be fucking saints either, people on here suck, and no im no king, but geeeezus, i dont know, im angry, and burnt out, fuck, just, skhfsalkf

[magic nyc]

Okay then, yes that sucked. You shouldnt worrk about colors or even a blackbook. Use printer paper for that ugly shit to practice on pace.

[beefgerky]

magic, since u came back from hiding there has been new battle rules. all seprate battles from the weekly/monthy ones run by the mods should be pm&#39;d to koper. he makes the polls now.

edit, and dont tell ppl how to sketch if u dont even know how.

[BoRe-719-]

gerk has a cool sig.

[Fosale!]

^yo Bore, when am I gonna get my bday karak=]

[Belisle]

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/4821/img1427114lc.jpg

critss???

[Socrates]

Do simple shit. Really, it looks better and just keep sketching practice doing precise lines.

Clean shit is nice.

[Belisle]

k thanks

[molotow_15]

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/vvvvvv.gif

[molotow_15]

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molotow-1.jpg

new sketch for hp battle..
not the origianl sketch for the battle
put it in some kind of effect

[Etcha]

Mr Feed that Yaser is nice...like the colours :D keep it up
Here some recent stuff i did.

MOAN...for a battle with a mate.

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/489/dsc04150e4if.jpg


latest sketch for myself...should paint it soon :D

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/8760/didld3qe.jpg

[uhhh]

emba- the sketch for your friend was pretty good. the one for you... not so much. the fills are good on both. the tags are shit.
well heres my newest shiiit:
http://i6.tinypic.com/14w6p7k.jpg
whole page
http://i5.tinypic.com/14w7dih.jpg
piece and throw
http://i6.tinypic.com/14w7drd.jpg
tags... i know the one liner&#39;s suuuuper sloppy. but this is my first trys with this name and i tryed some newer stuff with the piece... tell me what you think of all of it. and if you think them extensions work or not?

[RaZeRoCkS]

Originally posted by Etcha@Jun 19 2006, 08:43 AM
Mr Feed that Yaser is nice...like the colours :D keep it up
Here some recent stuff i did.

MOAN...for a battle with a mate.

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/489/dsc04150e4if.jpg


latest sketch for myself...should paint it soon :D

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/8760/didld3qe.jpg
im feelin that shit man. the chara is weird but you still get the idea

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by molotow_15@Jun 19 2006, 01:59 PM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molotow-1.jpg

new sketch for hp battle..
not the origianl sketch for the battle
put it in some kind of effect
point of bumping other peoples stuff etcha if thats what your name is,
even though some of your stuff looks nice i just looked at your
sketches and the letters are pretty bad work on the letters not
the fancy coloring

[nephsike]

Originally posted by pace1@Jun 18 2006, 10:07 PM


simple with some color
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/p5.jpg
on the right track....not sure about the E or the choice of colors tho...i dunno..i never liked when the outline and the 3d are different colors

[magic nyc]

Molotow, you shits disgusting. Just stop posting it and dont fucking bump.

[RaZeRoCkS]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Jun 19 2006, 11:03 AM
Molotow, you shits disgusting. Just stop posting it and dont fucking bump.
Molotow...he did the peice with the pinokeeo karas didnt he? Where u couldn&#39;t see what he wrote

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Jun 19 2006, 05:03 PM
Molotow, you shits disgusting. Just stop posting it and dont fucking bump.
ive bumped no one

[obseen]

i bumped your mum
twice

[molotow_15]

i made my post before 2&#39;oclock
its called scrolling up ^^^

[RaZeRoCkS]

Originally posted by molotow_15+Jun 19 2006, 10:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ Jun 19 2006, 10:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-molotow_15@Jun 19 2006, 01:59 PM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molotow-1.jpg

new sketch for hp battle..
not the origianl sketch for the battle
put it in some kind of effect
point of bumping other peoples stuff etcha if thats what your name is,
even though some of your stuff looks nice i just looked at your
sketches and the letters are pretty bad work on the letters not
the fancy coloring [/b][/quote]
what do you write

[RaZeRoCkS]

Originally posted by obseen@Jun 19 2006, 11:11 AM
i bumped your mum
twice
:lol: :lol: funny shit

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by RaZeRoCkS+Jun 19 2006, 05:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (RaZeRoCkS @ Jun 19 2006, 05:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by molotow_15@Jun 19 2006, 10:06 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-molotow_15@Jun 19 2006, 01:59 PM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molotow-1.jpg

new sketch for hp battle..
not the origianl sketch for the battle
put it in some kind of effect
point of bumping other peoples stuff etcha if thats what your name is,
even though some of your stuff looks nice i just looked at your
sketches and the letters are pretty bad work on the letters not
the fancy coloring
what do you write [/b][/quote]
mode

[RaZeRoCkS]

Originally posted by molotow_15+Jun 19 2006, 11:19 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ Jun 19 2006, 11:19 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by RaZeRoCkS@Jun 19 2006, 05:16 PM

Originally posted by molotow_15@Jun 19 2006, 10:06 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-molotow_15@Jun 19 2006, 01:59 PM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/molotow-1.jpg

new sketch for hp battle..
not the origianl sketch for the battle
put it in some kind of effect
point of bumping other peoples stuff etcha if thats what your name is,
even though some of your stuff looks nice i just looked at your
sketches and the letters are pretty bad work on the letters not
the fancy coloring
what do you write
mode [/b][/quote]
any flix

[molotow_15]

im scanning new sketches up later

[RaZeRoCkS]

Originally posted by molotow_15@Jun 19 2006, 11:32 AM
im scanning new sketches up later
Cool, im gona PM u

[BoRe-719-]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Jun 18 2006, 11:55 PM
^yo Bore, when am I gonna get my bday karak=]
ahhh shit, i totally forget, guess ill gte workin on it today. :)

[magic nyc]

Bores so awsome :) . Make me something cool.

[RaZeRoCkS]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Jun 19 2006, 11:43 AM
Bores so awsome :) . Make me something cool.
Ive never seen any of his stuff

[MF Feed Letter]

Originally posted by Etcha@Jun 19 2006, 08:43 AM
Mr Feed that Yaser is nice...like the colours :D keep it up
Here some recent stuff i did.

MOAN...for a battle with a mate.

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/489/dsc04150e4if.jpg


latest sketch for myself...should paint it soon :D

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/8760/didld3qe.jpg
like the fill letters not so much..kinda looks oldshcol

[krazzie_ammo]

hey all&#33; I just started graff last week and was wondering if you could give me some help.
firstly on this piece, any suggestions on how to make it better? i&#39;ve only done the outline so if you have any colours suggestions then that would be great
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/284/graff4jf.th.jpg (http://img382.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff4jf.jpg)
and the second piece, only the outline again, any crits?
http://img315.imageshack.us/img315/7143/graff21gp.th.jpg (http://img315.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff21gp.jpg)
and thirdly, something real quick.
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/2429/graff32tw.th.jpg (http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff32tw.jpg)
crits anyone?

[WolfBurrns]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Jun 19 2006, 12:41 PM
hey all&#33; I just started graff last week and was wondering if you could give me some help.
firstly on this piece, any suggestions on how to make it better? i&#39;ve only done the outline so if you have any colours suggestions then that would be great
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/284/graff4jf.th.jpg (http://img382.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff4jf.jpg)
and the second piece, only the outline again, any crits?
http://img315.imageshack.us/img315/7143/graff21gp.th.jpg (http://img315.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff21gp.jpg)
and thirdly, something real quick.
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/2429/graff32tw.th.jpg (http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff32tw.jpg)
crits anyone?
Wow. Okay, for the first pic, the outline looks more like a company logo than a throwie or piece or whatever you tried doing there. The 3d is okay. Just expieriment with whatever colors you like and what you think looks good. It&#39;ll all come later. Secondly, The letters below the outline, The M is decent but not great and the A needs work. But you have right idea. When filling-in try color within the lines. Thats shit you learn in pre-school. Also, try making you lines harder edged. you know, so they dont look so sloppy. Just work on your lines.

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Jun 19 2006, 06:41 PM
hey all&#33; I just started graff last week and was wondering if you could give me some help.
firstly on this piece, any suggestions on how to make it better? i&#39;ve only done the outline so if you have any colours suggestions then that would be great
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/284/graff4jf.th.jpg (http://img382.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff4jf.jpg)
and the second piece, only the outline again, any crits?
http://img315.imageshack.us/img315/7143/graff21gp.th.jpg (http://img315.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff21gp.jpg)
and thirdly, something real quick.
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/2429/graff32tw.th.jpg (http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff32tw.jpg)
crits anyone?
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/vvvvvv.gif

haha jus my little joke :wub:

[RaZeRoCkS]

Originally posted by molotow_15+Jun 19 2006, 01:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ Jun 19 2006, 01:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Jun 19 2006, 06:41 PM
hey all&#33; I just started graff last week and was wondering if you could give me some help.
firstly on this piece, any suggestions on how to make it better? i&#39;ve only done the outline so if you have any colours suggestions then that would be great
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/284/graff4jf.th.jpg (http://img382.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff4jf.jpg)
and the second piece, only the outline again, any crits?
http://img315.imageshack.us/img315/7143/graff21gp.th.jpg (http://img315.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff21gp.jpg)
and thirdly, something real quick.
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/2429/graff32tw.th.jpg (http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff32tw.jpg)
crits anyone?
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/vvvvvv.gif

haha jus my little joke :wub: [/b][/quote]
bwuahahahahahaaaaaaa...


i dont get it

[lost_for_evex]

shit u should look into that 2.

[krazzie_ammo]

Originally posted by molotow_15+Jun 19 2006, 01:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (molotow_15 @ Jun 19 2006, 01:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-krazzie_ammo@Jun 19 2006, 06:41 PM
hey all&#33; I just started graff last week and was wondering if you could give me some help.
firstly on this piece, any suggestions on how to make it better? i&#39;ve only done the outline so if you have any colours suggestions then that would be great
http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/284/graff4jf.th.jpg (http://img382.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff4jf.jpg)
and the second piece, only the outline again, any crits?
http://img315.imageshack.us/img315/7143/graff21gp.th.jpg (http://img315.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff21gp.jpg)
and thirdly, something real quick.
http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/2429/graff32tw.th.jpg (http://img512.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff32tw.jpg)
crits anyone?
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/vvvvvv.gif

haha jus my little joke :wub: [/b][/quote]
lol, yeah. im gunna hit some more up noww&#33;&#33;

[RaZeRoCkS]

Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Jun 19 2006, 01:03 PM
shit u should look into that 2.
who

[krazzie_ammo]

about staying inside the lines, my nib of the pen is fucked so it&#39;s kinda hard. im not a retard, even though i draw like one.

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Jun 19 2006, 07:06 PM

lol, yeah. im gunna hit some more up noww&#33;&#33;
nice one


i&#39;ll do some throwups,
who wonts one first 5 ?
:rolleyes:

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by RaZeRoCkS+Jun 19 2006, 01:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (RaZeRoCkS @ Jun 19 2006, 01:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-lost_for_evex@Jun 19 2006, 01:03 PM
shit u should look into that 2.
who [/b][/quote]
molotow

[molotow_15]

hell yeah

[krazzie_ammo]

me aswell please, write amar or craze. whichever is easiest :D

[magic nyc]

Moltow and Evex, the two of you are in no position to ever talk about toy. Ive challenged you once and again so stop talking.

Krazzie Ammo
You look like you have some idea of what graff is. The second pic is your best one. Make the lines straight and symetrical. Outline them to see it better in the future. Your throwie pic is decent to considering. You could lose the higlights on it cause its not helping. Again, make the letters scale and if it was cleaned up I think it would be okay.
Just my advice.

[molotow_15]

who else wonts one ?

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Jun 19 2006, 01:24 PM
Moltow and Evex, the two of you are in no position to ever talk about toy. Ive challenged you once and again so stop talking.

Krazzie Ammo
You look like you have some idea of what graff is. The second pic is your best one. Make the lines straight and symetrical. Outline them to see it better in the future. Your throwie pic is decent to considering. You could lose the higlights on it cause its not helping. Again, make the letters scale and if it was cleaned up I think it would be okay.
Just my advice.
:lol: :lol: :lol: wow stfu u never called me out ever...and if u have i havent seen it...ur mad toy u shouldnt even be allowed on the toy fourms stop talkin shit child


lmao :lol: :lol:

[molotow_15]

seen your shit FUCK YOU i&#39;ll post up later

WANNABEE

[Suv]

molotow, your a fag.

[MF Feed Letter]

fuck stop talking and post shit you fuckin homos





new name/style

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1199.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1198.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1197.jpg

CrItZZZZzzZZ?

[Belisle]

http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/8691/img1429110gu.jpg

Should I try the battle with this?

[krazzie_ammo]

hey, just did this. what do you think?? its supposed to say ama if you look really hard.
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/7624/dsc000868ye.th.jpg (http://img98.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc000868ye.jpg)

[pace1]

fix you letter size make them all the same size (width and height) and try some simpler stuff

[pace1]

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/YUC.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/kid.jpg

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/RANE.jpg

heres some stuff critz.

[Mse]

old shit was better,a lot better
this sucks fucking balls
mf feed letter

[pace1]

who you talking to?

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 19 2006, 01:44 PM
fuck stop talking and post shit you fuckin homos





new name/style

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1199.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1198.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1197.jpg

CrItZZZZzzZZ?
wtf is this shit?


this isnt ur work

[obseen]

what i was thinking
i thought mf feed was good

[Kingz514]

yeah mf ive seen much better.
throwie --
[img=http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/2716/throwie7ww.th.jpg] (http://img474.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwie7ww.jpg)
crits??

shitty quality
looks better on paper

[Belisle]

http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/2479/img1429113jo.jpg


Should I try the battle with this?

[some guy from NCI...]

MF WTF?&#33;

That&#39;s not your shit&#33; Noone who has done work like your previous stuff would use letter structure like in the *shudder* second one...

IF IT&#39;S A JOKE IT&#39;S NOT FUNNY&#33;&#33;&#33; GIVE US BACK THE OLD MF FEED&#33;

[Belisle]

who are you talking to?

[MF Feed Letter]

you guys dont like it?...ow :(

[Kingz514]

Originally posted by Belisle@Jun 19 2006, 02:28 PM
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/2479/img1429113jo.jpg


Should I try the battle with this?
i wouldnt.

[img=http://img474.imageshack.us/img474/2716/throwie7ww.th.jpg] (http://img474.imageshack.us/my.php?image=throwie7ww.jpg)

bump

*still love ya mf
just go back to what you were doing

[some guy from NCI...]

I was talkin to mf feed... ^look at his stuff he posted up there and then look for his previous stuff...


as for you belisle, I dont really understand what&#39;s going on with the fill there... Also if you notice, the outline looks kind of jagged and stiff (but hopefully you&#39;ll sort that the more you sketch). I like that you&#39;ve gone to simpler letters, but they still dont flow as well as they should do, try looking at other simples for tips. The 3d is better than on some of your other stuff, but you might wanna fix the bit of 3d ontop of the O (it&#39;s looking a bit thin.

Hope that helps :)

[Eskimo33]

Yeah bro that fill is horrible. Try to do solid fills

[magic nyc]

Evex, take that is a formal call out. Lets see what happends next.

[some guy from NCI...]

BATTLE, BATTLE, BATTLE&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[MF Feed Letter]

okay you guys got me...this is some of my actual recent shit all that was my first atemps at graffiti

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1200.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1201.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1202.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1203.jpg

[obseen]

so this is when you were just startin off?

[Eskimo33]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 19 2006, 02:48 PM
okay you guys got me...this is some of my actual recent shit all that was my first atemps at graffiti



http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1202.jpg


http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/Picture002.jpg

That middle, The C kinda looks like mine..... :blink:

[MF Feed Letter]

k im bored this is stupid...and theres not even a c in that it says think andddd ya im bored so i posted all my first ateemps pretty gay hey?> ya i would think os peace out

[Eskimo33]

No need to get heated bro. Its all good.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/Picture007.jpg

New stuff. Critz?

[magic nyc]

Reminds me of Cope, not that thats a bad thing.

[Eskimo33]

mine?

[Etcha]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter+Jun 19 2006, 12:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MF Feed Letter @ Jun 19 2006, 12:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Etcha@Jun 19 2006, 08:43 AM
Mr Feed that Yaser is nice...like the colours :D keep it up
Here some recent stuff i did.

MOAN...for a battle with a mate.

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/489/dsc04150e4if.jpg


latest sketch for myself...should paint it soon :D

http://img77.imageshack.us/img77/8760/didld3qe.jpg
like the fill letters not so much..kinda looks oldshcol [/b][/quote]
Thanks for crits guys :D
i an&#39;t been doing graff for long soo.....

If you have any tips on how i could improve the letters and such then.... :D

[SMAK....]

started writing about 3 weeks ago....i suck.....crits please



http://img78.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pieces3ob.jpg

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by molotow_15@Jun 19 2006, 07:43 AM
http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/vvvvvv.gif
there&#39;s no point in going molotow, it won&#39;t help you

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Jun 19 2006, 02:42 PM
Evex, take that is a formal call out. Lets see what happends next.
i dont have time 2 battle im really buzy and at the moment me and nephs are doing an exhange...


ill battle u with some of my old shit tho...unless u wana wait like 2 weeks.

[Jank]

smak try to thinnen out ur letters and show more clearly what letters they are. so define the shape of the letters bettter cos atm they kinda look all blobby. not too bad tho.. keep sketching. dont bother with colours atm.


my entry for that interforum battle that bombingscience isnt partaking in for some rewason.. i think it hasnt picked up enough for koper to like it.. fair enuff.. so im enterin for britishbombing.. neway here it is... u lotp rolly wont like the background but i do so there:P
&#39;&#39;germs&#39;&#39;
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/interforum1-3.jpg

[magic nyc]

Originally posted by lost_for_evex+Jun 19 2006, 07:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (lost_for_evex @ Jun 19 2006, 07:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Jun 19 2006, 02:42 PM
Evex, take that is a formal call out. Lets see what happends next.
i dont have time 2 battle im really buzy and at the moment me and nephs are doing an exhange...


ill battle u with some of my old shit tho...unless u wana wait like 2 weeks. [/b][/quote]
What bitches,
How long does it take to scribble something up? Im not asking for a fucking Mona Lisa. Whatever you just proved yourself. How about you Fosale&#33; ? You going to the Toy Fair? <_<

[MF Feed Letter]

jank good for the most part some parts of the letters im not feelin but good shit

pencil outline ..should have filled by tonight..

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1204.jpg

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/4492/dscn43444zz.th.jpg (http://img151.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn43444zz.jpg)

http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/7987/dscn43477qd.th.jpg (http://img68.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn43477qd.jpg)






crits

[MF Feed Letter]

what the first is that first thing even a letter?

[Cyto Aka Son1c]

a k, kinda funky though :hey:

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by magic nyc+Jun 19 2006, 06:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (magic nyc @ Jun 19 2006, 06:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Jun 19 2006, 07:11 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Jun 19 2006, 02:42 PM
Evex, take that is a formal call out. Lets see what happends next.
i dont have time 2 battle im really buzy and at the moment me and nephs are doing an exhange...


ill battle u with some of my old shit tho...unless u wana wait like 2 weeks.
What bitches,
How long does it take to scribble something up? Im not asking for a fucking Mona Lisa. Whatever you just proved yourself. How about you Fosale&#33; ? You going to the Toy Fair? <_< [/b][/quote]
r u kiddin kid i have a life besides graff...that just shows ur stright up toy and dont respect other writers...get a fuckin life..and im sure w.e ud post would be copyed off somewhere..

[uhhh]

Originally posted by uhhh@Jun 19 2006, 08:57 AM

well heres my newest shiiit:
http://i6.tinypic.com/14w6p7k.jpg
whole page
http://i5.tinypic.com/14w7dih.jpg
piece and throw
http://i6.tinypic.com/14w7drd.jpg
tags... i know the one liner&#39;s suuuuper sloppy. but this is my first trys with this name and i tryed some newer stuff with the piece... tell me what you think of all of it. and if you think them extensions work or not?
bump... for lack of crits :ph34r:

[Eskimo33]

Originally posted by Eskimo33@Jun 19 2006, 03:41 PM
No need to get heated bro. Its all good.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/Picture007.jpg

New stuff. Critz?
Bump for critz..

[fitzy5814]

haha i like how it says "another toy"

[Holidayy Styles]

Originally posted by Eskimo33+Jun 19 2006, 07:30 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Eskimo33 @ Jun 19 2006, 07:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Eskimo33@Jun 19 2006, 03:41 PM
No need to get heated bro. Its all good.

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/Picture007.jpg

New stuff. Critz?
Bump for critz.. [/b][/quote]
i like everything but the drips

[NOMX]

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/9442/img108227oq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
letta brotha know what ya tank

[Eskimo33]

Thanks for the critz guys.

[Eskimo33]

HOLY HUGE PICTURE&#33;......

Go to myimager.com and upload your pic and then resize it.

[Hater-AiD~>]

nice shit eskimo..i like everything but the drips too

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/1797/kiks5vn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
new name, new throwie..needs work on the letters but this is the first of very few attempts with the new name

[aces]

http://img235.imageshack.us/img235/8045/taco5ll.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

This is not mine. Taco is having some technical difficulties uploading so I&#39;m being nice and doing it for him.

[aces]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 18 2006, 07:17 PM
yaser







anyways
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1196_1.jpg
Just wondering what you use to color and what you use to put the lighter colored highlight in. Also I think your older shit was a lot better.

[MF Feed Letter]

letraset 3 tip
and sakura permapaque paint marker...which kinda blows by the way...i prefer jiffy artline 400 for paint markers ...but if any one could tell me wher ei could get somw different paint markers that would be...swell...

[NOMX]

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9021/11110mz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
(repost) let me know what u think

[Eskimo33]

Thanks hater aid. And Fucking josh howard&#33;&#33; wtf was he thinking&#33;

[aces]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 19 2006, 09:01 PM
letraset 3 tip
and sakura permapaque paint marker...which kinda blows by the way...i prefer jiffy artline 400 for paint markers ...but if any one could tell me wher ei could get somw different paint markers that would be...swell...
is it just like a white paint marker that isnt really opaque

[Hater-AiD~>]

Originally posted by Eskimo33@Jun 19 2006, 08:09 PM
Thanks hater aid. And Fucking josh howard&#33;&#33; wtf was he thinking&#33;
i dont even fucking know
probably was trying to put more pressure on wade without looking at how much time was left on the clock..the in-experience is starting to come out in him as much as i hate to say it.. i guess..just like when he missed those 2 free throws..hes not used to that much pressure

[MF Feed Letter]

ya basicly i jus go over it liek 4 tmes an its good..jiffy 400 is opaque but the tips are kinda wide

[Eskimo33]

Thats what i was trying to say he misses 2 clutch ass free throws and he didn&#39;t miss 1 before that. And how in the hell does dirk miss? god that game should have been over&#33;

NOMX try to go a little simpler. the stuff at the bottom doesn&#39;t flow well. But at least your 3d looks alright.

[NOMX]

fosheezy

[aces]

also try to color more clean cuz it just looks like shit if you do it the way you did

[MF Feed Letter]

finished product..
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1205.jpg

[aces]

The E and the R seem a little bit off. The E cuz it is so plain while all the other letters have style and the R cuz it kinda looks like a toy&#39;s A. Super clean coloring as usual and still really good.

[FEN the HEN]

thats looking really nice thats prob the best one if seen from you....props