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you'll never paint steel
06-22-2006, 06:25 PM
who the fuck is toon

when you post tilt and noxer and say someone bites

at least show the thing in question for comparison you fag

PERKS
06-22-2006, 06:27 PM
What do you guys think of my stuff? suggestions? tips?

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h182/Penya69/Perka.jpg (http://photobucket.com)

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h182/Penya69/jfhydvcfd.jpg (http://photobucket.com)

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h182/Penya69/gcghfvhbh.jpg (http://photobucket.com)

nephsike
06-22-2006, 06:27 PM
Originally posted by pace1@Jun 22 2006, 05:20 PM
yeah that sleize bag thing might have better picture quility scanned but the letters are weak especialy the I. no beef just saying that you could do better

heres a simpl again need some crits.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/paceburner.jpg
not feelin this at all....i dont thin all the little recatngles comin of the letters look good at all...you overused them

PERKS
06-22-2006, 06:28 PM
aww shit u got the tag again. hold on lemme post it again.

uhhh
06-22-2006, 06:29 PM
Originally posted by klipa@Jun 22 2006, 04:34 PM
uhh i do like the way thats going just straiten it up a bit and maybe dont squash it so much and yeah!

thanks for the critz everyone. i know it's smushed i just need to start it closer to the other side of the page. ;)
and whoever said i don't like the "i"... i don't either. i was just trying something out but it's didn't exactly work. o well.

underground culture- i hate molotow too. even though hic critz were trying to be constructive.. i still just hate him. MOLOTOW IS A DOUCHEBAG! :)

klipa
06-22-2006, 06:30 PM
kolored

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/5011/cimg20929mg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

PERKS
06-22-2006, 06:32 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h182/Penya69/Perka.jpg
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h182/Penya69/jfhydvcfd.jpg
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h182/Penya69/gcghfvhbh.jpg
there you go. tell me what you think.

MUSASHI
06-22-2006, 06:34 PM
what are scrabled eggs?looks good sept for the "G's"

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/amusa12.jpg

just something I did in traffic today

PERKS
06-22-2006, 06:36 PM
its actually an E i guess i can see how it would look like a G

uhhh
06-22-2006, 06:38 PM
i think you suck.

know constructive ness. go simple... for a looooong time. all of that is too advanced try doing it more like this "PERKS" actually try to sketch it like that ;)

klipa
06-22-2006, 06:39 PM
PERKS the first one is too spidery and the add ons look a bit lame
the second one is real nice botom arms of the k and thr r need to be seperated a bit if y get me and try add some 3d two the last one

MUSA like the fill but the S is a bit fruity and the left leg of the a is too scrawney but def feeling the M tight

and SE KREW= scrambled eggs krew or second era krew.

uhhh
06-22-2006, 06:40 PM
i think musa was talking about klipa. and iw as talking t you... not musa. thats actually not bad. just try doing some slightly simpler fills. i mean you have some tight ones. they just ar eweird.

lost_for_evex
06-22-2006, 06:43 PM
wow perks just had the stupidest sig ever...repost that shit lol

klipa
06-22-2006, 06:43 PM
any crits 4 me or is everyone scared?

PERKS
06-22-2006, 06:45 PM
i trying to resize it.

PERKS
06-22-2006, 06:49 PM
ok here it is. uhhhh i was pretty confused with all of that. but ill take the advise i got and as for MUSASHI: i get it (you werent talking to me) ok sorry

nephsike
06-22-2006, 06:57 PM
perks i think your just a straight up loser.....your signature is one of the gayest things ive ever seen, after that first skecth of yours

hue
06-22-2006, 07:01 PM
bumpe for new page :rolleyes:




eh ;) CrIts THx:


Stickers:

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/8454/st3xl.jpg


On Paper:
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/135/cc7lv.jpg

TNS_NOPE
06-22-2006, 07:01 PM
Originally posted by TNS_NOPE@Jun 20 2006, 03:26 PM
practicing in summer school...been working on this style
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d181/arojo/ayge5-1.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d181/arojo/ayge6.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d181/arojo/ayge4.jpg
b-bipidy bump..critz?

PERKS
06-22-2006, 07:03 PM
uhhh...... ok. i dont like you ethier....... i guess.
and as for the sig-its a guy on myspace. i told him to run into a sick burner really fast head first and that some of its awsomeness would fuse with his brain.

Jank
06-22-2006, 07:05 PM
pace thats not bad but the lil rectangles comin off dont work.

klipa not much to say! its real nice.. shudnt scrabled have an M though? either way, its nice man!

perks the second one is real nice but the 1st and 3rd need to be thrown away pronto. work on no.2, that has bukets o potential.

musa: the M and U are nice, but i dont get eh S.. i gues u tried to do it like a handwritten S? and the A dont fit at all, but overall i like it.


my sleize bag entry.. ne comments?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/sleizebag.jpg

Jank
06-22-2006, 07:07 PM
o shit how'd that happen. hue the last one is niiice but the other 2 look sloppy. keep em simple like the last one and ur golden.

TNS not bad at all. the edges are a bit jaggedy but it kinda works. work on making it cleaner but its gd man

TNS_NOPE
06-22-2006, 07:09 PM
thnx bro junk..i'll fix up my other ones

TNS_NOPE
06-22-2006, 07:35 PM
I DID THIS IN THE CAR...MESSY BUT FUK IT
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d181/arojo/AYGENEWS1.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d181/arojo/AYGENEWS2.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d181/arojo/AYGENEWS3.jpg
CRITZOS PORFAVOR

Beso!
06-22-2006, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by Beso!@Jun 22 2006, 03:57 PM
http://img431.imageshack.us/img431/8466/bsntr0215ny.th.jpg (http://img431.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bsntr0215ny.jpg)

http://img277.imageshack.us/img277/6290/bsntr0227qn.th.jpg (http://img277.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bsntr0227qn.jpg)

http://img362.imageshack.us/img362/3715/bsntr0233lp.th.jpg (http://img362.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bsntr0233lp.jpg)


Critz plz.
Bump for critz

bboystillin
06-22-2006, 07:48 PM
Here is a little something I did on the BART.


http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c221/bboystillin/DSC01091.jpg


Hrmmm... :unsure: I dont know. Now bring the critics.

MF Feed Letter
06-22-2006, 08:57 PM
bboy thats horrible especially that o clean it up an make the letters look like normal lletters

not enterin this in battle cuz its fucked
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1216.jpg

Sluts_r_us
06-22-2006, 09:11 PM
jus a couple random letters for a new style im doin....
http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/940/lettersteez4yi.jpg

magic nyc
06-22-2006, 09:12 PM
MF thats nice coloring

aces
06-22-2006, 09:36 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 22 2006, 09:57 PM
bboy thats horrible especially that o clean it up an make the letters look like normal lletters

not enterin this in battle cuz its fucked
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1216.jpg
What happened to your old amazingly clean letters dude? It seems like you have gotten worse. Love the coloring though.

aces
06-22-2006, 09:42 PM
Originally posted by Jank@Jun 22 2006, 08:05 PM
pace thats not bad but the lil rectangles comin off dont work.

klipa not much to say! its real nice.. shudnt scrabled have an M though? either way, its nice man!

perks the second one is real nice but the 1st and 3rd need to be thrown away pronto. work on no.2, that has bukets o potential.

musa: the M and U are nice, but i dont get eh S.. i gues u tried to do it like a handwritten S? and the A dont fit at all, but overall i like it.


my sleize bag entry.. ne comments?
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/sleizebag.jpg
I don't really like the L or the I and the Z looks a little like a G because the top part of it looks like it is part of the I. Other than that it looks good

uhhh
06-22-2006, 09:51 PM
Originally posted by bboystillin@Jun 22 2006, 07:48 PM
Here is a little something I did on the BART.


http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c221/bboystillin/DSC01091.jpg


Hrmmm... :unsure: I dont know. Now bring the critics.
oh so you live in san fran?

that "piece" is horrid by the way

MF Feed Letter
06-22-2006, 10:00 PM
Originally posted by aces+Jun 22 2006, 09:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Jun 22 2006, 09:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MF Feed Letter@Jun 22 2006, 09:57 PM
bboy thats horrible especially that o clean it up an make the letters look like normal lletters

not enterin this in battle cuz its fucked
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1216.jpg
What happened to your old amazingly clean letters dude? It seems like you have gotten worse. Love the coloring though. [/b][/quote]
dont worry about it man i was jus fuckin around definatly not a style i like the only thinkg i like about it is the fill

aces
06-22-2006, 10:02 PM
Yea the fill is dope. What do you use to color and how did you get the fades to go that well.

Sluts_r_us
06-22-2006, 10:08 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Jun 22 2006, 09:11 PM
jus a couple random letters for a new style im doin....
http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/940/lettersteez4yi.jpg
burmp

Samschoicecola
06-22-2006, 10:08 PM
Originally posted by Z FUSE@Jun 22 2006, 01:18 AM
don&#39;t post ur first sht on here, i mean all it is , is block letter, at least psend some more time sketching before posting up ur 1st or 2nd sketch. i mean there&#39;s not that much u can fuck up if ur letters are block. c&#39;mon put sum effort into 3d u see it&#39;s too short fix it stop being fucking lazy., stop w/ the weird fill. while sketchin basic structure it&#39;s a good time to experiment w/ colors, and see which go together best. if 3d is soo fucking hard then get graph paper u can&#39;t mess up 3d unless ur stupid.
You dont have to be an asshole fine i will try more complicated stuff but i asked for fuckin crits not to be put down you smug son of a bitch. I see way worse stuff on this forum and way better too. SO dont fucking be a dick and talk shit cuz you think your better than me&#33; dont act like you started out and were brilliant. ass hole graff writers like you make the game shit

PERKS
06-22-2006, 10:20 PM
just ignore that kind of stuff. people will be dick heads about your stuff but you cant give in and fight with him because thats what he wants. because he wants to be known good or bad.

nephsike
06-22-2006, 10:22 PM
shut up

PERKS
06-22-2006, 10:25 PM
uuuuuumm.......... im sorry mister?

uhhh
06-22-2006, 10:49 PM
he said shut up. it&#39;s very simple you don&#39;t have to put another post up saying, what&#39;d yousay? because if you REALLY didn&#39;t understand SHUT UP then you wouldn&#39;t be on this forum or even a computer cuz ytou&#39;ve obviously couldn&#39;t read. so stop nd think for at least a few seconds before writing something like "what?"

edit: and change your sig. it&#39;s stupid and makes me want to slap the shit out of you. :)

lost_for_evex
06-22-2006, 10:57 PM
i agree i dont feel like seein that shit everytime i scroll down the pages.

PERKS
06-22-2006, 11:14 PM
i didnt say "what", im not changing my sig for you, and why the hell do you have to be so mean? besides if he says shut up im going to post somening to spite him.

magic nyc
06-22-2006, 11:24 PM
www.leekspin.com

PERKS
06-22-2006, 11:32 PM
thank you for that. heres mine:
http://halo3ending.ytmnd.com/

nephsike
06-22-2006, 11:58 PM
dude...your a lame.. im just tryin to figure out why you would post that pic of you in your signature...most people would be embarrassed by it...

PERKS
06-23-2006, 12:19 AM
thats not me, thats a kid i told to run really fast head first into a peice so that some of its awsomeness would fuse with his brain and he wouldnt suck so much. and i already posted what it was.

Mse
06-23-2006, 04:31 AM
if you beef i will find out where you live and stick something sharp up your ass
toys dont need beef, they need help

aces
06-23-2006, 04:44 AM
Alright so me and flclnaruto1213 had a battle and we finished and everything but when I sent it to get polled Gesus said the polls were not working in the toy forum so here are the entries can I just get some votes for these and see who won.

flclnaruto1213
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/1796/sketcher2928fe.jpg
JENIFR

aces
http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/5761/picture0666ha.jpg
ANUS

aces
06-23-2006, 06:41 AM
Here&#39;s an outline for the toy battle. Any crits what to change before I ink it. First sketch in my new sketchbook YAY.
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/6196/picture0678tx.jpg

EatRichPeople
06-23-2006, 08:29 AM
can&#39;t really deside wich one is better between you and naruto, like his coloring and letterstructure is ok on most points. Yours has better letterstructure...so I would have nulled it :)

for the sleize bag...I think the hole between the l and the e is a bit to big...I dunno and I like the second e better then the first.

Zesy throw
http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/3931/trow7as.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
any critz? specially where the shadow is off.

peace

aces
06-23-2006, 08:39 AM
The Z looks a little weird but other than that its good. Thanks for the crits. I was trying to make the E&#39;s different so that it wasnt just the same thing twice but should I make them the same? The whole between the L and E I realize its too big but if I move the E closer it just looks weird so I&#39;ll keep that the way it is. Thanks again for the crits. Any more crits?

nephsike
06-23-2006, 09:14 AM
Originally posted by PERKS@Jun 23 2006, 01:19 AM
thats not me, thats a kid i told to run really fast head first into a peice so that some of its awsomeness would fuse with his brain and he wouldnt suck so much. and i already posted what it was.
its ok man...we know its you :lol:

Beso!
06-23-2006, 09:29 AM
http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1186/bsntr0246aa.th.jpg (http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bsntr0246aa.jpg)

Critz Plz...

Fluffy Bunnies
06-23-2006, 09:37 AM
^^^
I don&#39;t like it too far apart


http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/redstyleghosx.jpg

how&#39;s that. I made the X a lil bit too big but that was jus messin&#39; around

Beso!
06-23-2006, 09:47 AM
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/5512/bsntr0258uc.th.jpg (http://img352.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bsntr0258uc.jpg)

Critz on the letter structer I was messin around with this one gonna 3d it also does the E look a little far away from the S? Srry for blurry pic.

QuEeNz-StyLe
06-23-2006, 09:49 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/14.jpg

something i did for my girl, that unfilled 3d i&#39;m going to fill

flclnaruto1213
06-23-2006, 09:51 AM
hahaha? did this kid just take my I and bite it into an o?

dude beso...try not to bite shit thats on the same page
lmao.

aces
06-23-2006, 09:57 AM
thats hilarious haha good try though beso

Amuk
06-23-2006, 09:58 AM
Originally posted by QuEeNz&#045;StyLe@Jun 23 2006, 09:49 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v248/anarx/14.jpg

something i did for my girl, that unfilled 3d i&#39;m going to fill
props kid its defenitly not toy u shud take ur art to the black book thread in the picture gallery. not much more to say except dat im from queens too, college point, holla at me&#33; 1-718&#33;

Amuk
06-23-2006, 10:03 AM
Originally posted by Fluffy Bunnies@Jun 23 2006, 09:37 AM
^^^
I don&#39;t like it too far apart


http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/redstyleghosx.jpg

how&#39;s that. I made the X a lil bit too big but that was jus messin&#39; around
wat is that supposed to say? ghosx ? stop "messing around"

and i think naruto won the battle so he gets my vote

Beso!
06-23-2006, 10:07 AM
meh ...Just noticed But I looking at min one stuff not yours but ok..

toon!..
06-23-2006, 10:11 AM
Originally posted by magic nyc@Jun 22 2006, 05:32 PM
Toon bites from "Tilt" and "Noxer" fused together.

http://www.graffiti.org/seak/img/sketches_12_2001/tilt194.jpg

http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/09302005152420islandsofadventureanddaytonabeach083 .jpg
none of my stuff looks like that..and i guess name bites noxer aswel? fukin faggot toy.

Fluffy Bunnies
06-23-2006, 10:14 AM
Originally posted by Amuk+Jun 23 2006, 10:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Amuk @ Jun 23 2006, 10:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fluffy Bunnies@Jun 23 2006, 09:37 AM
^^^
I don&#39;t like it too far apart


http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c312/Fluffybunnyrabbits/redstyleghosx.jpg

how&#39;s that. I made the X a lil bit too big but that was jus messin&#39; around
wat is that supposed to say? ghosx ? stop "messing around"

and i think naruto won the battle so he gets my vote [/b][/quote]
yeah it says Ghosx

and no I am not acting like ghost I had this name for aloooooooong time.. even before I knew about graff. and when I did start writing, I never knew there was a guy named ghost

Sluts_r_us
06-23-2006, 10:16 AM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us+Jun 22 2006, 10:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Sluts_r_us @ Jun 22 2006, 10:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Sluts_r_us@Jun 22 2006, 09:11 PM
jus a couple random letters for a new style im doin....
http://img462.imageshack.us/img462/940/lettersteez4yi.jpg
burmp [/b][/quote]
...

nephsike
06-23-2006, 10:19 AM
really liking the E, F, and U...not liking the rest at all....what you writing now??

nephsike
06-23-2006, 10:23 AM
Originally posted by toon&#33;..+Jun 23 2006, 11:11 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (toon&#33;.. @ Jun 23 2006, 11:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Jun 22 2006, 05:32 PM
Toon bites from "Tilt" and "Noxer" fused together.

http://www.graffiti.org/seak/img/sketches_12_2001/tilt194.jpg

http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/09302005152420islandsofadventureanddaytonabeach083 .jpg
none of my stuff looks like that..and i guess name bites noxer aswel? fukin faggot toy. [/b][/quote]
just ignore him....your shit looks nothing like either noxer or tilt...actually that tilt is pretty damn lame...just keep doin what your doin...

aces
06-23-2006, 10:41 AM
Originally posted by aces@Jun 23 2006, 07:41 AM
Here&#39;s an outline for the toy battle. Any crits what to change before I ink it. First sketch in my new sketchbook YAY.
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/6196/picture0678tx.jpg
bump for crits

flclnaruto1213
06-23-2006, 10:43 AM
aces we arent getting any votes this way. but im still winning 1-0

Beso!
06-23-2006, 10:45 AM
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9278/bsntr0271eb.th.jpg (http://img404.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bsntr0271eb.jpg)

Critz on this please. My dad keeps saying that the 3d in the middle of the E needs fix ,and thinin the 3d under the B , and widin at the bottom of the O. But Critz plz

aces
06-23-2006, 10:58 AM
Originally posted by flclnaruto1213@Jun 23 2006, 11:43 AM
aces we arent getting any votes this way. but im still winning 1-0
yea i know

aces
06-23-2006, 11:06 AM
Originally posted by Beso&#33;@Jun 23 2006, 11:45 AM
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9278/bsntr0271eb.th.jpg (http://img404.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bsntr0271eb.jpg)

Critz on this please. My dad keeps saying that the 3d in the middle of the E needs fix ,and thinin the 3d under the B , and widin at the bottom of the O. But Critz plz
You&#39;re asking your dad for crits on graff. If he was a writer/artist then thats fine but if not then why are you asking him.

Beso!
06-23-2006, 11:12 AM
Did i say I asked him... lol nope, He saw me doing it in my room and he was just telling me tweak this tweak that...my dads 55 he&#39;s good with kariks but doesnt do letters n stuff and plus he disapproves me doing graff. cause my cousin got 3 years in Ny. I&#39;m not sure if he&#39;s right or not but thats all he saw was that right there...thats it.

aces
06-23-2006, 11:35 AM
It&#39;s cool it just kind of seemed like you asked him for help.


Alright so I got one of these type things to try to help draw people.
http://www.menageriearts.com/artist_accessories/woodenmannequin.jpg

This is what I got on my first sketch:
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/493/picture0691oy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Any crits are welcome and if you know how or are good at doing characs could you tell me how to bring this to the next level kind of thing and make it look more like a human than the manniquan (I can&#39;t spell).

Beso!
06-23-2006, 11:44 AM
Hey aces thats a good Idea ,also looking at anime not hentai might help too you know with detail n stuff thats how my friend got real good with kariks now he&#39;s doin like small chars stickers for dominion skateboards. And was manikin is what you meant? I&#39;m not too good with spelling either so i dunno.

http://www.citaexam.com/images/Manikin%20Head%20Position.gif

Maybe this might help with ideas for ur head like weird teeth n diff heads n crap?

aces
06-23-2006, 11:46 AM
yea i dont even care about spelling but i will look into that anime and yea hentai=anime porn so thats not the best idea

Beso!
06-23-2006, 11:48 AM
WAIIIT it might, if your gonna do a naked women char..like seens naked one but 21332 times better with nice boobs xD

aces
06-23-2006, 11:53 AM
haha but i&#39;m kinda lookin a little on the realism side less charac kinda thing

Beso!
06-23-2006, 11:56 AM
Ah i see...also Is having a char play the role as a letter a no no? Cause I just thought of an idea.

aces
06-23-2006, 12:00 PM
Well it can come out well but usually for toys it isn&#39;t recommended. ZOTOS pulls it off quite nicely.

MF Feed Letter
06-23-2006, 01:26 PM
Originally posted by aces@Jun 23 2006, 11:35 AM
It&#39;s cool it just kind of seemed like you asked him for help.


Alright so I got one of these type things to try to help draw people.
http://www.menageriearts.com/artist_accessories/woodenmannequin.jpg

This is what I got on my first sketch:
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/493/picture0691oy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Any crits are welcome and if you know how or are good at doing characs could you tell me how to bring this to the next level kind of thing and make it look more like a human than the manniquan (I can&#39;t spell).
how old are you??

TricksForKids
06-23-2006, 02:14 PM
dear god i think i shat myself^

magic nyc
06-23-2006, 02:22 PM
That figure was a waste of money because your not ready for it yet. You should have stuck to sketching apples untill you got good.

aces
06-23-2006, 02:27 PM
Thanks. I picked it up for 1.50 so I didn&#39;t really care if it would be a waste or not but alright and MF I&#39;m 15

FEN the HEN
06-23-2006, 02:29 PM
me 2 :) ..........

Beso!
06-23-2006, 02:30 PM
im 13...in a half :)

MF Feed Letter
06-23-2006, 02:36 PM
thats a horrid sketch man i mean common it doesnt look like a 15 yearold drew that all the shapes are completely off

?..DeMo..?
06-23-2006, 03:43 PM
well he said it was his first attempt and if u wanna learn how ot do ppl and stuff to me wat i did is jsut animation works best i dunno that me

aces
06-23-2006, 03:44 PM
I know. I can&#39;t sketch anything but graff. That&#39;s why I wanted to practice but yea I&#39;ll work more and make a more presentable one for when I get back from camp in a month. I&#39;ll have a shitload of sketches to post up then.

BoRe-719-
06-23-2006, 04:20 PM
jus take an artclass....hmmm if ur 15, u better start crackin down on ur art if u wanna get good

aces
06-23-2006, 04:42 PM
http://img459.imageshack.us/img459/57/picture0703je.jpg
Sleize bag. Tell me what ya think

MF Feed Letter
06-23-2006, 04:45 PM
dont liek fill...to much

aces
06-23-2006, 04:45 PM
Should I add 3D

beefgerky
06-23-2006, 04:46 PM
no point, fill ruined it.

aces
06-23-2006, 04:48 PM
Yea it was a good idea when I thought of it but I didn&#39;t get it done well on paper.

Eskimo33
06-23-2006, 05:09 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/WAES.jpg

Is this to advanced for me. Should i go back to simples???

beone
06-23-2006, 05:18 PM
that s is fire
w is ok but to small
a and e are no good tho

fix it up tho dont use those bs lines that shouldnt be there

good start tho

MF Feed Letter
06-23-2006, 05:18 PM
dont liek the w

will be entering this one if i dont make another
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1217cropped.jpg

beone
06-23-2006, 05:20 PM
aces that is horrible man i no u are better than that the fill is bad and the letters are to

the fill is more ugly tho

Eskimo33
06-23-2006, 05:25 PM
I wanted the W to be small cause the letters gradually get bigger. But i&#39;ll fix it up thanks for the critz guys

Socrates
06-23-2006, 05:44 PM
eskimo that s is ILL
and mf i dont like it dunno why :(


dont even ask im high
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/159503270.jpg

aces
06-23-2006, 06:16 PM
Originally posted by beone@Jun 23 2006, 06:20 PM
aces that is horrible man i no u are better than that the fill is bad and the letters are to

the fill is more ugly tho
Yea I&#39;m packin up 4 camp and only had like 30 minutes to do it in total between packing. I&#39;m leaving tommorow morning around 7 so yea that is my excuse for the lameness. I will have a bunch of high quality (for me) sketches when I get back in a month because we have a good hour to hour and a half of free time every day so yea expect some sketches then.

Kayone707
06-23-2006, 06:36 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 23 2006, 12:36 PM
thats a horrid sketch man i mean common it doesnt look like a 15 yearold drew that all the shapes are completely off
some people jus cant do things like that..


but for real.... it gave me a giggle

aces
06-23-2006, 06:40 PM
Thanks. Like I haven&#39;t heard it enough.

Socrates
06-23-2006, 06:48 PM
allright keep sketching
just comment for christs sake

cord
06-23-2006, 07:39 PM
eskimo that s is fucking sex but i dont like how you tagged on it.

socrates i like yours too, there are a few dodgy letters and the coloring needs work but its looking good.

MF- sick coloring on the fill what pens are they?

obseen
06-23-2006, 07:42 PM
Originally posted by Eskimo33@Jun 23 2006, 05:09 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/WAES.jpg

Is this to advanced for me. Should i go back to simples???
this is is dope&#33;
but the letters dont seem to go together

Eskimo33
06-23-2006, 07:51 PM
I did the S first then i was hell i&#39;ll role with this. I should extend the S alittle more to flow with the rest of the letters.

Im about to get some Touch Twin markers. Hopefully the piece gets better with some color.

MUSASHI
06-23-2006, 08:02 PM
here ya go ,sump from the last two hours

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/ballon.jpg

Eskimo33
06-23-2006, 08:04 PM
thats pretty hot musa.

cord
06-23-2006, 08:05 PM
wowwwwwwwww dope shit&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

sweet coloring man, but i think the 3d at the top of the &#39;&#39;s&#39;&#39; is a little bit off

aces
06-23-2006, 08:08 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Jun 23 2006, 09:02 PM
here ya go ,sump from the last two hours

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/ballon.jpg
Dope charac

aces
06-23-2006, 08:35 PM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/7940/picture0714zg.jpg
Is this worth painting tonight. If so I&#39;m gunna try to sneak out cuz it&#39;s Friday and my parents are pretty much passed out right now. I could almost ask them to go out painting and they would say yes and never know they did. It isnt as perfect as I could have done it but you get the gist of it.

magic nyc
06-23-2006, 08:39 PM
No, if you go out just get handy tags up and slaps.

MUSASHI
06-23-2006, 08:39 PM
get it to where you are happy with it before you paint it...cuz you dont wanna be like holy shit in 6 months from now seeing some work you did that you werent happy with...make sense aces?

C3ZR ONE
06-23-2006, 08:41 PM
^^^agreed.^^^

aces
06-23-2006, 08:45 PM
Yea. I just got all amped on painting because my parents are too fucking strict and they would flip if they caught me painting but I was hoping that tonight, since they are now passed out completely and my brother can scream in front of their faces without them waking up, would be a good night to paint but I see your point MUSA.

fastt
06-23-2006, 08:46 PM
here&#39;s a sketch i did today

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/moan.jpg

MF Feed Letter
06-23-2006, 08:59 PM
cord i use letraset 3 tip markers

beone
06-23-2006, 09:03 PM
or u could go painting just go to your own spot keep working that tonight till ur satisfied with it then go paint it

everyone is always sayin DONT PAINT DONT PAINT yeah dont go paint a heat fucking spot but u need to practice painting just like u need to practice drawing

u cant get real good on paper then go out thinkin ur hot shit and have it look like a dog getting fucked in the ass did it with his mouth

aces
06-23-2006, 09:15 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 23 2006, 09:59 PM
cord i use letraset 3 tip markers
how do you get such good fades

MF Feed Letter
06-23-2006, 09:38 PM
because im pro

aces
06-23-2006, 09:43 PM
Ah I understand.

fitzy5814
06-23-2006, 09:55 PM
Originally posted by beone@Jun 23 2006, 09:03 PM
or u could go painting just go to your own spot keep working that tonight till ur satisfied with it then go paint it

everyone is always sayin DONT PAINT DONT PAINT yeah dont go paint a heat fucking spot but u need to practice painting just like u need to practice drawing

u cant get real good on paper then go out thinkin ur hot shit and have it look like a dog getting fucked in the ass did it with his mouth
Yeah I would sya that i&#39;m DESCENT at sketching but when i went to go tag some place it looked like shit and it looked nothing like my sketch

aces
06-23-2006, 10:05 PM
Some sketches from when I wouldn&#39;t believe that you had to start simple:

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/4053/picture0737ch.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/7852/picture0776jj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Pencil wouldn&#39;t erase on this one^

Copying a word font:
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/8475/picture0724jc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

First charac which was bitten:
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/5056/picture0767vc.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Joined the site and got simpler, kind of:
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/4783/picture0757zm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Even more simple:
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/3276/picture0745lm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

HAHA&#33; I found these when I was cleaning out my closet and decided they would be funny to post up. They were from when I just joined BS under the name fuzbal1 or before so I don&#39;t need crits on them cuz they are completely wack except possibly the KAOS one. HAHA but even that isn&#39;t that great and it is a gay name considering a lot of toys think of it and are like "Oh yea that&#39;s an awesome name&#33;" and then they come here and people are like "No get rid of it."

I&#39;m just blabering on so I&#39;m gunna stop now.

Beso!
06-23-2006, 10:24 PM
Yo aces when you copied that word font one that was pretty tight just 3d that and its good to go on paper and that bunny...is weird. And the one with the Bomb in it, If you took that bomb out and just had KAS it would look good

aces
06-23-2006, 10:28 PM
The word font one might have been tight but it was a complete and total bite. More of a swallow. The bunny is weird I know. The KAOS one at least it was simple.

Beso!
06-23-2006, 10:31 PM
Simple But a good one for the KAOS I myself my think of tweakin my name up cause I&#39;m sick of O&#39;s...I just dont what to do with them and I keep makin em too plain >.<

aces
06-23-2006, 10:32 PM
Yea O&#39;s are a hard letter to pull off.

Beso!
06-23-2006, 10:35 PM
Fuck I&#39;m goin with Besi r Besk and BS fuck O&#39;s :*( BS was really the first one I started with then I desided to add beso...then my friend said it means "Kiss" in spanish so I&#39;m like...wtf well atleast HOPEFULLY the cops think a hispanic/latino writes it and i&#39;m far away from that nationality.

field marshal
06-23-2006, 11:09 PM
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/9893/throwzy8tj.jpg
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/7263/zyagain8yh.jpg
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/7720/zyone8ez.jpg

ZYSR x 3

some crits one these plz and thanks





-ACES the font letter one is sick

Laeos
06-24-2006, 12:00 AM
field marshall, in my opinion, your handies are sweet and that top throwie is pretty dope.
Not really feeling the second one, looks a bit out of proportion to me, like the leg of the R comes too far out
I think the last one would like nice if it was peiced as it&#39;s kinda hard to tell when it&#39;s done by a marker, maybe lose a few of those addon crack thingies on the R too, but yeah has potential fo sheez.

Anywho here&#39;s my latest, trying a new name out. The bottom one is pretty messy sorry and on the top my outline is pretty wack due to the fact i&#39;m using a berol clothes labelling pen lol - what do you guys use for your outlines? Small sharpies? Gel pens?

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/6813/aonicenewnamewooo8gl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits please&#33;

Thanks very much

fastt
06-24-2006, 02:26 AM
Originally posted by fastt@Jun 23 2006, 08:46 PM
here&#39;s a sketch i did today

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d45/bullshat830/moan.jpg
bump

ion-i
06-24-2006, 02:39 AM
Originally posted by aces@Jun 23 2006, 08:05 PM
Joined the site and got simpler, kind of:
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/4783/picture0757zm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
oh c&#39;mon now.. (http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/flash/bunny.php)

lost_for_evex
06-24-2006, 02:53 AM
sad.

Mse
06-24-2006, 04:04 AM
meh

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/159668205.jpg



http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/159668216.jpg



http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/159668208.jpg



http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/159668199.jpg

molotow_15
06-24-2006, 04:15 AM
how did you get so beautiful, that last ones dope

alive
06-24-2006, 05:21 AM
well, this was supposed to be a friendly battle between the two of us, but when i pmed it to koper, he said he was "done with toy battles." so im putting it here, as i have no other choice. tell us who you think you won. and give us mad critiques, cuz we need it

word: secret

COERCE(alive):
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/15401f17.jpg


SETOKE(kase121):
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h239/kase121/secret004.jpg


thanks,
may the best win

emokid
06-24-2006, 05:54 AM
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/8449/im0005511ml.th.jpg (http://img157.imageshack.us/my.php?image=im0005511ml.jpg)

i was only supposed to do one letter, but then one led to another, and so on

knucks
06-24-2006, 05:59 AM
http://content.bolt.com/uploads3/photo/8/7/8/7/4/5/878745/small/1151069991384.jpg (http:///knucks/photo/1387060)

whoarethereal evil
06-24-2006, 07:33 AM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5235/img97893cx.th.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img97893cx.jpg)


crits

comments


wht eva



merci

whoarethereal evil
06-24-2006, 07:37 AM
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/8540/img97889cz.th.jpg (http://img96.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img97889cz.jpg)

life thingy i did same as above neither are great

molotow_15
06-24-2006, 07:50 AM
4 things hav been bumped so far lol

Laeos
06-24-2006, 07:50 AM
About 7 people Just posted for crits without critting those above them...

some guy from NCI...
06-24-2006, 07:56 AM
Originally posted by Mse@Jun 24 2006, 04:04 AM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/159668208.jpg

:o you dont even understand how tempting it is to turn that 3 backwards and take a bite out of it as an e&#33;&#33;&#33;


Lovely work there.

whoarethereal evil
06-24-2006, 08:12 AM
oops sorry well yeah tht 3 is really quite nice an skunks majiggy is pretty cool b interesting 2 c it painted

South-Pole
06-24-2006, 08:41 AM
ight,wich ones better this one or that one(look at the pic)


http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/Scan45copy-2.gif

5z or bomberman.The character in the first one looks cool for me,what do you think?

aces
06-24-2006, 10:05 AM
The SZ is better because the BOMBERMAN one had bad M&#39;s and the holes in the letters like the B are off in their placement. The charac in the top one I don&#39;t like as much as the bottom one though.

beone
06-24-2006, 10:24 AM
the only thing worth working on is the SZ

the first karak is terrible, it seriously looks like someone took a shit on your paper then colored it

if u made the second karak much more simple and worked on it from there it could turn out nice

and bomber man is a ridiculious name and u made it looks bad anyways

whoarethereal evil
06-24-2006, 10:33 AM
use more defined shapes for the charac on the second, develop a new m for sure the top looks like a w

South-Pole
06-24-2006, 10:37 AM
ight thanks for the advice guys

molotow_15
06-24-2006, 10:38 AM
how old are you though

South-Pole
06-24-2006, 10:56 AM
14 and you?

molotow_15
06-24-2006, 11:03 AM
16

Skeam
06-24-2006, 11:06 AM
just finnished this then... and for once i really like it... i didnt have enough room for the A and M so i just chucked it on a little sign haha. im just doing outlines for now until i get some sharpies cause fills look like cattle borris with "conector textors"

any crits welcome.

cheers
matt

http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/3555/hpim19227bh.jpg

South-Pole
06-24-2006, 11:27 AM
Originally posted by molotow_15@Jun 24 2006, 11:03 AM
16
cool ;)

cord
06-24-2006, 11:48 AM
skeam, dont do that thing where the outline carries on into the letters, it makes your piece look like a shitty throwup

pace1
06-24-2006, 12:04 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jun 23 2006, 01:26 PM
It&#39;s cool it just kind of seemed like you asked him for help.


Alright so I got one of these type things to try to help draw people.
http://www.menageriearts.com/artist_accessories/woodenmannequin.jpg

This is what I got on my first sketch:
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/493/picture0691oy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Any crits are welcome and if you know how or are good at doing characs could you tell me how to bring this to the next level kind of thing and make it look more like a human than the manniquan (I can&#39;t spell).

Hey yeah thats not a bad idea for drawing motion people and stuff like so you can get down forshortening and stuff. but if you want to learn fast but learn to do your own you should probably get a book. i know it sounds cheesy but it helped me alot it was a simple kids book. but it gave me solid ideas and a good base to build off. here this book is really good my sister uses it for to learn her characters when she draws.(she wants to do the graffilthy now, + shes 11 :D ) Its called characters with Don Jardine.

Peace and good luck

Mse
06-24-2006, 12:07 PM
Originally posted by Mse@Jun 24 2006, 04:04 AM
meh

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/159668205.jpg



http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/159668216.jpg



http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/159668208.jpg



http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/159668199.jpg
bump for crits
thanks allll

Eskimo33
06-24-2006, 01:40 PM
Those are pretty clean MSE.

field marshal
06-24-2006, 01:47 PM
Originally posted by field marshal@Jun 23 2006, 11:09 PM
http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/9893/throwzy8tj.jpg
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/7263/zyagain8yh.jpg
http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/7720/zyone8ez.jpg

ZYSR x 3

some crits one these plz and thanks





-ACES the font letter one is sick
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/6960/bumpinthenight4wi.png



MSE - that "E" is sick on the fisrt one and ur hand is sick too

emokid
06-24-2006, 02:12 PM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/9126/im0005518bn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bump

ZoToS ...
06-24-2006, 02:31 PM
I know you EMO kids are all into razors and sharp shit but the peice itself doesnt need to be able to cut you

ados
06-24-2006, 03:11 PM
didnt know what color to do the force field... i also did this hammerd so my outlines shaky and the 3d is a bit fucked. anyways, crit
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0004-1.jpg

?..DeMo..?
06-24-2006, 03:33 PM
i gotta question umm does nayone here kno if theres any good graffiti games besdie mark ecko ??

the jones 63
06-24-2006, 03:37 PM
yo what up people,
Im new on this forum and i write GE and the JONES
Can some 1 tell me how to put pics from a camera phone onto a computer so i can post them.

obseen
06-24-2006, 03:41 PM
Originally posted by pace1@Jun 24 2006, 12:04 PM
she wants to do the graffilthy now
haha, what the hell is graffilthy

jones, i think theres a tutorial at the top of the picture gallery forum
maybe you can work it out for yourself if i just tell you this though
get the pictures on to your comp-you should know how to do that
then go here www.imageshack.us
or www.photobucket.com

Eskimo33
06-24-2006, 03:46 PM
Originally posted by ZoToS ...@Jun 24 2006, 02:31 PM
I know you EMO kids are all into razors and sharp shit but the peice itself doesnt need to be able to cut you
HAHAHAHAH

jerm_mtl
06-24-2006, 03:47 PM
yo i have a new tag, what do u guys think of the word Zwiz

emokid
06-24-2006, 03:56 PM
ZoToS ... Posted on Jun 24 2006, 02:31 PM
I know you EMO kids are all into razors and sharp shit but the peice itself doesnt need to be able to cut you


oh man, yeah im sorry about that. i got a file in the tool box, i&#39;ll file down the corners tommorrow to make it regulation safe.

obseen
06-24-2006, 03:59 PM
that was gay

jerm
i&#39;d like to see some sketches of this new name
casue its style not name, your stuff is good so id like to see some more anway

the jones 63
06-24-2006, 04:16 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i67/thejones63/jonesge.jpg
GE throw

beefgerky
06-24-2006, 04:20 PM
1st, quit jocking ghost and that karak makes it look like an O.

edit: looking for the flick hold on.

the jones 63
06-24-2006, 04:22 PM
whos ghost? how can i make it look more like an e?

obseen
06-24-2006, 04:27 PM
i like that character

some guy from NCI...
06-24-2006, 04:31 PM
Originally posted by the jones 63@Jun 24 2006, 04:16 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i67/thejones63/jonesge.jpg
GE throw
if you didn&#39;t bite that, then that characters sick&#33;

Shame about the tag :(

--

I would never have known that was a throw, the g looks like the caracs hand... and the carac looks nothing like an e...


I kinda got the feeling it&#39;s bitten... but hopefully you&#39;ll prove me wrong.

beefgerky
06-24-2006, 04:33 PM
http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/05032005215230throwupjaghost.jpg

that is ghost, its obviously "influenced" but w/e now that i compare it aint that bad..

the jones 63
06-24-2006, 04:35 PM
personally i think mine is better but i can see the similarities

obseen
06-24-2006, 04:39 PM
just develoop it so it looks more like the letters you want

i often use a character like that on my stickers
but mine is slightly different

beefgerky
06-24-2006, 04:41 PM
Originally posted by the jones 63@Jun 24 2006, 04:35 PM
personally i think mine is better but i can see the similarities
ghost is a king you better watch who u talk shit about in this game burva.

Voze
06-24-2006, 04:53 PM
Originally posted by the jones 63@Jun 24 2006, 04:35 PM
personally i think mine is better but i can see the similarities
whatever you think, ghost has got more ups than you&#39;ll probably ever have, so...

anyway, the character looks good (but it does look like an O) and why are you writing both GE and JONES anyway? stick a J in front of that, see how it looks, JO as a JONES two-letter


---

first post in aaaaaaaaaaaages... :D I&#39;m still here, but i&#39;m spending my time drawing and getting up rather than sitting watching these boards. new name too (not telling you, but SOER was gay cause everyone i knew said it in a different way) have fun anyways

obseen
06-24-2006, 04:56 PM
ye make it jo, that&#39;d be better

jerm_mtl
06-24-2006, 05:05 PM
Originally posted by obseen@Jun 24 2006, 03:59 PM
that was gay

jerm
i&#39;d like to see some sketches of this new name
casue its style not name, your stuff is good so id like to see some more anway
sounds good

the jones 63
06-24-2006, 05:14 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i67/thejones63/jothro.jpg
jo? i tried
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i67/thejones63/jonestoytag.jpg

obseen
06-24-2006, 05:19 PM
i like it

pace1
06-24-2006, 06:14 PM
Yeah jones I like it make the J a little less sharp and bigger. I really like that karak.

heres a quick pacer straight letter: critz and comments please
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pacerburner.jpg

Quake
06-24-2006, 06:25 PM
the jones 63-i like yore charactor

heres a thro up design ann its now in my signicture
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060624/15/8/6/9/86983e799cf5a7454798fd3ac19e9aab200606240_full.jpg

Eskimo33
06-24-2006, 06:53 PM
dont hide to much of the H in the first letter. other then that it doesn&#39;t look bad at all

Laeos
06-24-2006, 07:28 PM
Originally posted by Laeos@Jun 24 2006, 12:00 AM
field marshall, in my opinion, your handies are sweet and that top throwie is pretty dope.
Not really feeling the second one, looks a bit out of proportion to me, like the leg of the R comes too far out
I think the last one would like nice if it was peiced as it&#39;s kinda hard to tell when it&#39;s done by a marker, maybe lose a few of those addon crack thingies on the R too, but yeah has potential fo sheez.

Anywho here&#39;s my latest, trying a new name out. The bottom one is pretty messy sorry and on the top my outline is pretty wack due to the fact i&#39;m using a berol clothes labelling pen lol - what do you guys use for your outlines? Small sharpies? Gel pens?

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/6813/aonicenewnamewooo8gl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits please

Thanks very much
Sorry to bump...any crits?

Looks nice quake, i agree with eskimo about the first H and i think the same applies to the second H - the left hand side of it is a little too small imo

pace1
06-24-2006, 07:53 PM
I like the bottom one you should work with that and for the bottom maybe a little more simple.butr a good start.

heres a quick burner i did.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pace6.jpg
critz comments

What Happened to the Letters?
06-24-2006, 09:38 PM
im pritty sure those are k&#39;s not h&#39;s because if they&#39;re k&#39; then its kwake, if h then its hwahe...considering the name is quake i bet they&#39;re k&#39;s

havign that said, they look liek h&#39;s

What Happened to the Letters?
06-24-2006, 09:41 PM
Originally posted by beefgerky+Jun 24 2006, 05:41 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beefgerky @ Jun 24 2006, 05:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-the jones 63@Jun 24 2006, 04:35 PM
personally i think mine is better but i can see the similarities
ghost is a king you better watch who u talk shit about in this game burva. [/b][/quote]
are you retarted? he didnt say shit, the kid said "personally i think mines better" did he say "oh shit muthafucka ghost sucks balls id teabag the fuck otua that *****"? no he didnt, i like his as well, but it looks nothing liek a j

Eskimo33
06-24-2006, 10:02 PM
hahaha. Thanks for the correction what happend to the letters.

beone
06-24-2006, 10:31 PM
Originally posted by the jones 63@Jun 24 2006, 04:35 PM
personally i think mine is better but i can see the similarities
well its official you are a fucking moron

ghosts G has much much much more letter structure than ur whack attempted to bite the g

the jones 63
06-24-2006, 10:50 PM
i looked up that guy ghost
and the only pic that has the same g as mine is the one you showed me
every other one has a g that look like an egg
and to that guy who did think it was even a throw
i like the way u think
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i67/thejones63/gefingure.jpg

Skeam
06-24-2006, 11:09 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Jun 24 2006, 11:06 AM
just finnished this then... and for once i really like it... i didnt have enough room for the A and M so i just chucked it on a little sign haha. im just doing outlines for now until i get some sharpies cause fills look like cattle borris with "conector textors"

any crits welcome.

cheers
matt

http://img358.imageshack.us/img358/3555/hpim19227bh.jpg
bumpin for critz

lost_for_evex
06-24-2006, 11:16 PM
define ur letters more. instead of makin them connect

FEN the HEN
06-25-2006, 12:45 AM
JO that&#39;ll work....their isnt enough kids doing two letter throwies anymore...so i give you props and that first one would look good on the streets

lost_for_evex
06-25-2006, 12:52 AM
^^^ i do one letter trowies and leave my tag next 2 it...


you give me props for that?

FEN the HEN
06-25-2006, 01:01 AM
props to you&#33; :) ...but he does two letters...

hokum
06-25-2006, 01:27 AM
some feedback would be nice.
<center>
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f180/dallis420/DCFC0014a.jpg


</center>

hokum
06-25-2006, 01:28 AM
some feedback would be nice.http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f180/dallis420/DCFC0014a.jpg]

Z FUSE
06-25-2006, 02:03 AM
wat does hokum mean? it&#39;s an unusual name, anyway work on ur fade if u want a lot, and ur 3d is goin everywhere, work on simple 3d before trying to do more technical styles. practice choosing one point on the paper and draw all 3d to it

Quake
06-25-2006, 04:14 AM
heres a thro up design ann its now in my signicture
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060624/15/8/6/9/86983e799cf5a7454798fd3ac19e9aab200606240_full.jpg

im posing it again i just want more comments and yes they are K&#39;s not H&#39;s its KWAKE

Skeam
06-25-2006, 05:14 AM
heres my entry for the toy battle. im pretty happy with it its my first time using sharpies.

crits would be apprectiated

matt

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/5489/hpim19248zx.jpg

whoarethereal evil
06-25-2006, 05:19 AM
thtas v nice^

whoarethereal evil
06-25-2006, 05:20 AM
Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Jun 24 2006, 07:33 AM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5235/img97893cx.th.jpg (http://img134.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img97893cx.jpg)


crits

comments


wht eva



merci
crits?????

Jank
06-25-2006, 06:15 AM
wow skeam thats so much better than i was expecting having just commented on ur painted shit.thats real nice. a bit too much overlappage and i dont really like the skinny bits or certain areas like the extension on the A but its nice overall man

whoarethereal thats...er... ookay. umm... dont bothr colouring atm. make all the letters the same height. avoid making them in the shape of those boxes. form the letters like you see them on your keyboard....

quake thats crisp, clean atttractive. i like it

some guy from NCI...
06-25-2006, 07:46 AM
Originally posted by Quake@Jun 25 2006, 04:14 AM
heres a thro up design ann its now in my signicture
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060624/15/8/6/9/86983e799cf5a7454798fd3ac19e9aab200606240_full.jpg

lol we realise it&#39;s in your sig... we&#39;re not complete morons :huh:

klipa
06-25-2006, 08:40 AM
/&#092;/&#092;/&#092;lol

skeam= i think the extentions on some of your letters like the A in bag cover the next letter too much dont lose them just relocate them or weave them through or sumat also i think your letters go too thin in some parts hope i helped


any better???
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/6175/cimg20957vt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

toxus
06-25-2006, 08:54 AM
ah, that sek&#39;s good klipa, i think you should have forced in a different colour though, oh and also, the side part of the K looks abit thinner than the rest. but apart from that... nice ;)

klipa
06-25-2006, 08:56 AM
yeah i see now once thats changed will paint it up track style cheers mate :ph34r:

toxus
06-25-2006, 09:01 AM
nice to here, morrrree ups for SEK B)
dont forget to put sewar in the shout out box :P

;) ;)

klipa
06-25-2006, 09:06 AM
dont forget to put sewar in the shout out box

you decided then,,,i will do

klipa
sewar
shroom
oakey
rocksteady

+ur boys

furious
06-25-2006, 09:42 AM
Originally posted by the jones 63@Jun 24 2006, 05:14 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i67/thejones63/jothro.jpg
jo? i tried
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i67/thejones63/jonestoytag.jpg
yeah doesnt look like a ghost bite anymore, the handy looks cool too even though its just like cursive writing it&#39;s easily recognized

obseen
06-25-2006, 09:52 AM
is jones your real name?

it might not be a good idea to write your real name

dufus
06-25-2006, 10:13 AM
feedback please

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/2803/refuse0328wy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4278/refuse0339kt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/7039/refuse0340ml.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/9866/refuse0353ok.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4026/refuse0367hf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/8343/refuse0372pa.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/3020/refuse0388nk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MUSASHI
06-25-2006, 10:18 AM
those look real tasty,props

Eskimo33
06-25-2006, 11:57 AM
Beautiful Throws Dufus.

obseen
06-25-2006, 11:58 AM
there well good

Torrent
06-25-2006, 12:06 PM
http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/6361/imgp3825custom5fd.jpg
-Old piece

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2189/bscritscustom3gi.jpg
-Now


Any critique? I posted one of my older ones to see if I&#39;m making any repeated mistakes.

obseen
06-25-2006, 12:09 PM
so simpler

furious
06-25-2006, 12:10 PM
Originally posted by dufus@Jun 25 2006, 10:13 AM
feedback please

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/2803/refuse0328wy.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4278/refuse0339kt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/7039/refuse0340ml.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/9866/refuse0353ok.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4026/refuse0367hf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/8343/refuse0372pa.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/3020/refuse0388nk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i like them all alot except the third, idk im just not feelin the third one

the straight letter one looks really sick keep it up

TricksForKids
06-25-2006, 12:17 PM
hot shit dufus, go paint, as to the rest of you, have a good summer, im out for 2 months, fulfilling kids wildest dreams as a camp counselor in training, yes im hard like that. Keep sketching, i hope to see some of you kids out of this thread come september.

Peace&#33;

omatto
06-25-2006, 01:04 PM
2 of my latest sketches. wat u think n where can i improve?

http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/5858/image0192yb.th.jpg (http://img456.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image0192yb.jpg)

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/3351/image0154qb.th.jpg (http://img442.imageshack.us/my.php?image=image0154qb.jpg)

South-Pole
06-25-2006, 01:51 PM
went normal on this one,didn&#39;t try to add characs or do some crazy shit cuz it would look wack

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/Scan450003-1.jpg

Eskimo33
06-25-2006, 02:33 PM
lose the arrows

the jones 63
06-25-2006, 03:01 PM
Originally posted by obseen@Jun 25 2006, 09:52 AM
is jones your real name?

it might not be a good idea to write your real name
No jones isn&#39;t my real name.
Ge is my real name thats why i kinda wanted to right it.

obseen
06-25-2006, 03:05 PM
o right
thats good, cos its very easy to get found out when you write your real name

i found that out the hard way

pace1
06-25-2006, 03:08 PM
Originally posted by pace1@Jun 24 2006, 06:14 PM
heres a quick pacer straight letter: critz and comments please
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pacerburner.jpg
bump for crits

refuse i like all of them nice work and sarn start simpler and make the letters look like "SARN" it works

the jones 63
06-25-2006, 03:10 PM
i really do wanna write my name thou
it just seems better to me

?..DeMo..?
06-25-2006, 03:13 PM
well if u wanna right ur name lets say if ur name was max put a number and another leter like so it would say maxer 17 or something like that or jsut maxer i dunn o

dufus
06-25-2006, 03:25 PM
pacer- i like it alot, im a fan of simple straight letters like that. only thing i can really think of is make the letters a bit more straight across the page. other than that, good stuff.

the jones 63
06-25-2006, 03:33 PM
my name is ge

?..DeMo..?
06-25-2006, 05:07 PM
i know ur names ge u said that i was using a example

T R E O
06-25-2006, 05:45 PM
i havent been here in a loooong ass time.

pacer:its an alright simple.the colors arent too good and your fill is sketchy.work on your handy as well.

FEN the HEN
06-25-2006, 06:08 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture-1.jpg

PolerOner
06-25-2006, 06:14 PM
cen if ur gonna drop that line on ur E , drop that line on your C too, just a suggestion&#33;

FEN the HEN
06-25-2006, 06:15 PM
its a fuckin F how do you see it as a C.................DAMN&#33;

T R E O
06-25-2006, 06:18 PM
i see the "f"
its an alright throwie.

PolerOner
06-25-2006, 06:24 PM
that looks like a fucking c u faggot

?..DeMo..?
06-25-2006, 06:26 PM
i see it as an f but it kinda looks like a c to me also

FEN the HEN
06-25-2006, 06:26 PM
then your fuckin stupid, show me how the fuck it looks like a C,

.D.H.
06-25-2006, 06:35 PM
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/4070/10067512dz.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tryin a new style

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7379/10067526of.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/2807/10067572lg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits

yo pace youre in DPK? are you from vermont?

FEN the HEN
06-25-2006, 06:37 PM
that throw in the second pic(the black and white one) is sick, fuck ya

hungr
06-25-2006, 06:41 PM
i dont know how u cant see a C in that

heres a C that looks like yer "f" a bit
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/to-focus004.jpg

another one that is somewhat the same
http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/to-ec002.jpg

FEN the HEN
06-25-2006, 06:45 PM
what are you talking about? the letters in the first one are so obvious, that C looks nothing like my F...and in the second the letters are completely different.

ICER
06-25-2006, 07:37 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/cv.jpg
i waz trying to do some add-ons i dont know what the hell i was thinking :blink:
any critz please&#33;

myl
06-25-2006, 07:56 PM
these are 2 sketches i did tell me what you think...


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/oi2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/oi1.jpg

Quadratic
06-25-2006, 08:02 PM
the second one isnt bad ; if u bring the letters a bit closer together

cord
06-25-2006, 08:49 PM
Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Jun 25 2006, 11:08 PM
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture-1.jpg
haha it is a c.

if you wanna make it look more like an f make the top part significantly larger