Tot Black Books

[robot sex]

alright, ill just do somthen and then post it befo i color it. probably pretty soon

[SiLeNt-BoB]

http://img304.imageshack.us/img304/3646/as5qm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
a half assed sketch..AS..was gonna do a asti..but a dont like it...so a stopped..and this is the only think a got to upload the now :P

[obseen]

if the letters were more along he same line and actually inked and stuff id probably like it

[Feliks]

it says pieces...not sketches. in any case, it's good work...the s isn't thick enough though...just liiiiitle bit thicker. keep it up.

[SiLeNt-BoB]

yea the space in the middle of them is where the arm of the T was gonna go..like the left hand side of it ....a dunno

[sky 5]

Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Jul 4 2006, 12:52 PM
dam i cant belive i forgot about gerky...that kids mad funny

we forgot alot of people tho


seti is sick his 3d is crazy

jwalk

bore

toon

all them... we use 2 run this thread lol now theres so many people everyday theres at lest like 5 new toys lol
lmfao ..... the only thing you run is your mouth homey! you should spend more time trying to get better instead of trying to play the part cuz you have ZERO skills.

[alive]

so ive been on vacation for the past 2 weeks, havent been sketching, but this is my last, 2 wk old sketch, but i think its the best ive ever done
was for a battle

SECRET
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/15401f17.jpg

crits please!

[slEEt]

Here's a new one I did, trying to keep it simple, any thoughts would be helpful :)

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3550/img0774medium3pr.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[AoAssis]

Alot better then your last one and I like the fact that your trying to keep it simple and not get ahead of yoruself, I dont know what else to say really just keep sketchin.

[slEEt]

Originally posted by AoAssis@Jul 6 2006, 07:06 PM
Alot better then your last one and I like the fact that your trying to keep it simple and not get ahead of yoruself, I dont know what else to say really just keep sketchin.
Thanks, I just did up another quick one, just trying to get basic structure down with the letters. I'm trying to draw like 10 mins everyday or more, just to keep ideas constantly flowing.

[slEEt]

Here's the next one, same stuff basically but I was going to color it, my red ran out so I said fuck it lol. Just focus more on the letters ;x

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/9750/img0777medium9ec.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[spuck]

http://f10.putfile.com/7/18621011319-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18621011319.jpg&s=f10)
new loki sketch trying to take into account previous crits, the o and the k are no longer making love, but i dunno, its kinda blocky and uninspired, i need to add some flair, but i wanted to see what people thought of the plain lettering first, no use trying to spruce up shit...
http://f10.putfile.com/7/18621001510-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18621001510.jpg&s=f10)
ive been messing around with spuck too, im thinking ill add somekinda jagged comic book special effect background to it at some point....

any critisism appreciated

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by spuck@Jul 6 2006, 08:10 PM
http://f10.putfile.com/7/18621011319-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18621011319.jpg&s=f10)
new loki sketch trying to take into account previous crits, the o and the k are no longer making love, but i dunno, its kinda blocky and uninspired, i need to add some flair, but i wanted to see what people thought of the plain lettering first, no use trying to spruce up shit...
http://f10.putfile.com/7/18621001510-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18621001510.jpg&s=f10)
ive been messing around with spuck too, im thinking ill add somekinda jagged comic book special effect background to it at some point....

any critisism appreciated
Dont like it sorry

looks nothing like graff just someone writing block letters

[Kata]

isn't that what graffiti is in its most basic primative form? Spuck, it looks cleaner and more sharp which is good, and you are sticking to simple lettering which is better- try and add little details here and there to give it some personality...


edit: stay away from arrows too.

[sice1]

yo sieet what kind of pens you us??

[spuck]

edit: stay away from arrows too
:(

and im working on making it more than just block letters, i love graff, but i aint no fucking artist so i gotta take it one little step at a time....

[scoot]

atleast you know how to start.

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by CHEN[Ken]+Jul 6 2006, 08:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (CHEN[Ken] @ Jul 6 2006, 08:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-spuck@Jul 6 2006, 08:10 PM
http://f10.putfile.com/7/18621011319-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18621011319.jpg&s=f10)
new loki sketch trying to take into account previous crits, the o and the k are no longer making love, but i dunno, its kinda blocky and uninspired, i need to add some flair, but i wanted to see what people thought of the plain lettering first, no use trying to spruce up shit...
http://f10.putfile.com/7/18621001510-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18621001510.jpg&s=f10)
ive been messing around with spuck too, im thinking ill add somekinda jagged comic book special effect background to it at some point....

any critisism appreciated
Dont like it sorry

looks nothing like graff just someone writing block letters [/b][/quote]
Obviously Chen hasn&#39;t been into graffiti long cuzz thats a stupid ass comment... <_< This is the toys thread. And block letters are an essential exercise..
Loki. 100% better than yer last post. Keep it up yo.

Chen- Come in here and read crits more often. You have alot to learn.

[uhhh]

dude i can&#39;t draw people or anything but letters, not that i&#39;m good at that, but i do alright... YOU CAN TOO&#33;*










*some restrictions apply. do not expect these results.

[alive]

Originally posted by alive@Jul 6 2006, 06:36 PM
so ive been on vacation for the past 2 weeks, havent been sketching, but this is my last, 2 wk old sketch, but i think its the best ive ever done
was for a battle

SECRET
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/15401f17.jpg

crits please&#33;
bump

[Tek_805_RDG]

http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b265/ThioHuxtable/Photo-0090.jpg
tryin simpler things out...comments?

[scoot]

that colour sceme hurts my brain

[wrek10]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Jul 6 2006, 08:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Jul 6 2006, 08:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-CHEN&#091;Ken
http://f10.putfile.com/7/18621011319-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18621011319.jpg&s=f10)
new loki sketch trying to take into account previous crits, the o and the k are no longer making love, but i dunno, its kinda blocky and uninspired, i need to add some flair, but i wanted to see what people thought of the plain lettering first, no use trying to spruce up shit...
http://f10.putfile.com/7/18621001510-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18621001510.jpg&s=f10)
ive been messing around with spuck too, im thinking ill add somekinda jagged comic book special effect background to it at some point....

any critisism appreciated
Dont like it sorry

looks nothing like graff just someone writing block letters [/b][/quote]
Obviously Chen hasn&#39;t been into graffiti long cuzz thats a stupid ass comment... <_< This is the toys thread. And block letters are an essential exercise..
Loki. 100% better than yer last post. Keep it up yo.

Chen- Come in here and read crits more often. You have alot to learn. [/b][/quote]
word. way better from ur 1st post&#39;s..
try bending the letters and shit. u know what i mean?

[Blak-T]

the fill is nice....but the T and E need work....but its a nice simple style(tek)

[Tek_805_RDG]

Yea...all i got right now is red n black markers, i need to get some different colors :&#092;

[Tek_805_RDG]

Originally posted by Blak&#045;T@Jul 6 2006, 09:15 PM
the fill is nice....but the T and E need work....but its a nice simple style
i&#39;m still tryin to figure out something to do with the T and E...I cant seem to find a way to do them that i like...but i&#39;ll figure it out

[alive]

Originally posted by wrek10+Jul 6 2006, 09:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (wrek10 @ Jul 6 2006, 09:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jul 6 2006, 08:26 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-CHEN&#091;Ken
http://f10.putfile.com/7/18621011319-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18621011319.jpg&s=f10)
new loki sketch trying to take into account previous crits, the o and the k are no longer making love, but i dunno, its kinda blocky and uninspired, i need to add some flair, but i wanted to see what people thought of the plain lettering first, no use trying to spruce up shit...
http://f10.putfile.com/7/18621001510-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18621001510.jpg&s=f10)
ive been messing around with spuck too, im thinking ill add somekinda jagged comic book special effect background to it at some point....

any critisism appreciated
Dont like it sorry

looks nothing like graff just someone writing block letters
Obviously Chen hasn&#39;t been into graffiti long cuzz thats a stupid ass comment... <_< This is the toys thread. And block letters are an essential exercise..
Loki. 100% better than yer last post. Keep it up yo.

Chen- Come in here and read crits more often. You have alot to learn. [/b][/quote]
word. way better from ur 1st post&#39;s..
try bending the letters and shit. u know what i mean? [/b][/quote]
im sure wrek had the best intentions
but i think hes wrong, as tempting as that will be, and probably is

DONT

although you are improving, you are not yet up to that stage
you should first have PERFECT block letters, if u feel the need to screw around with it a bit, only do so with infintismally small things, like maybe rounded corners vs straight corners, or fuck around with ur handstyle, that might give you ideas for later.

but do NOT stray far

good luck,
from a fellow toy

[alive]

Originally posted by alive@Jul 6 2006, 06:36 PM
so ive been on vacation for the past 2 weeks, havent been sketching, but this is my last, 2 wk old sketch, but i think its the best ive ever done
was for a battle

SECRET
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/15401f17.jpg

crits please&#33;
bump

[lost_for_evex]

at lest u progressed senc the first alive u posted i think it was painted...and it was red and blue and shit lol


im not feeling the 3rd...and ur e&#39;s are diffrent..i hate that

[alive]

haha ive posted shit like youve never seen before it was so damn bad
sketched, painted, i have mastered the worst

thats a good point about the E&#39;s ill try to fix that, now that i noticed it its really bothering me 2. the piece sinks a little too

oooo and i have much better handies

o well, i just gotta start practicing again


thanks 4 ur time

[uhhh]

since noone checks the charac thread i&#39;ll post this here.

i was playing around with throwie style characs and i did this head then the body was gonna be a mouth but i went to big so it looks better as a body
http://i6.tinypic.com/1z65s9y.jpg
this is my first try at charcs. like actually trying.

comments critz. whatever you feel the need to type. shouldn;t of said that...

[Kata]

edit: lol if im looking at it right than it looks funny, i would suggest making the shading solid and seeing if it looks better.

my 2 cents

[lost_for_evex]

demo u bit that kara...ima make one of my boys post up the pic 2marow cuz hes got the book...nice try.



http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/scan0001-1.jpg

[uhhh]

you said demo so was that a typo or were you talking to me?
cuz i&#39;ve never seen anything like that well like that like that style but not THAT one or anything DIRECTLY like it. so...

[lost_for_evex]

nope it was demo

[FEN the HEN]

it kinda looks like Calvin from those Calvin and Hobbes comics

[Feliks]

i was going to say that. make him high.

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by uhhh@Jul 6 2006, 09:38 PM
since noone checks the charac thread i&#39;ll post this here.

i was playing around with throwie style characs and i did this head then the body was gonna be a mouth but i went to big so it looks better as a body
http://i6.tinypic.com/1z65s9y.jpg
this is my first try at charcs. like actually trying.

comments critz. whatever you feel the need to type. shouldn;t of said that...
Bump. This is fun&#33; I wish it was mine&#33; :D

[myna]

http://img277.imageshack.us/img277/1192/sake17pq.png
i think this sucks but ill take critz anyway...

[beefgerky]

dont write sake.

[slEEt]

Originally posted by sice1@Jul 6 2006, 08:22 PM
yo sieet what kind of pens you us??
Just some sharpies..

[myna]

is it taken?

[Kata]

believe so

[C3ZR ONE]

It&#39;s VERY TAKEN. google Sake HYH...

bomber deeluxxx

[slEEt]

I got bored and colored it with a crayola marker lol.

http://img107.imageshack.us/img107/7443/img0782medium6zd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I&#39;m still working on it.

[Feliks]

obviously.
Stick to markers my friend. MAR KER S
all in all not bad, The e is grand, keep workin on it... however, the v and hte o.....I pretty much almost hurled what ever alcohol was in my tummy :(

[Feliks]

ps: lose the toy ass drips faggot
:wub:

[HoodRichSucka]

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/dopethrow1.jpg

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/dopethrow2.jpg


workin on a throw. i kno its toy but thats why im in the toy section. thanks for the crits

-d

[Skeam]

Originally posted by Skeam@Jul 6 2006, 06:27 AM
doesnt seem to look to bad rent sept for the top bit of the K that u mentioned.

can i get some crits on this stuff please. the top one is probably about as simple as you can get :P i dont mind the bottom peice if thats what u wanna call it.

cheers
matt

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/9742/hpim19698uv.jpg

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8686/hpim19705co.jpg

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4108/hpim19711lk.jpg
bump for critz :D

[HoodRichSucka]

Originally posted by HoodRichSucka@Jul 6 2006, 11:42 PM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/dopethrow1.jpg

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/dopethrow2.jpg


workin on a throw. i kno its toy but thats why im in the toy section. thanks for the crits

-d
wtf, bump man

[Feliks]

good thing you did the grey&#33; not.
lose it unless you know how to colour backgrounds.
i&#39;d like to say nice lettering, because there is potential...but you neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed to ...SKETCH. bitch. now. gogo.

and who are you, tinkerbell? lose the twinklies. you don&#39;t know how yet.

it looks rushed too...who you trying to impress? Do it for yourself. Work it like it&#39;s your masterpiece and love your mediums. That&#39;s it for being nice





FAG
:wub:

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by HoodRichSucka@Jul 6 2006, 11:42 PM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/dopethrow1.jpg

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/dopethrow2.jpg


workin on a throw. i kno its toy but thats why im in the toy section. thanks for the crits

-d
IMO you have a fantastic handstyle. (the throws, I don&#39;t like, but hey, that&#39;s why we&#39;re in toy forums, no doubt) How long have you been workin the handsteezys?

Skeam- all in all it&#39;s pretty good. Pull the added chunk off the ass of that M and the Green one will be alot fresher.

[HoodRichSucka]

damn dude, yea i kno its wack as fuck. but the only reason i posted is for help man. i kno ur prolly tight and shit but why u gotta go and talk shit bout this. im new at this shit, there was a point where u were to man. all im sayin is easy on the shit talkin. im toy and i already kno, no need to remind me.. and as for sketching, yes i kno.. i thought i would show yall wat my idea was for lettering as far as my throw goes. but ill work on it, thanks

-d

[HoodRichSucka]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Jul 6 2006, 11:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Jul 6 2006, 11:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-HoodRichSucka@Jul 6 2006, 11:42 PM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/dopethrow1.jpg

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/dopethrow2.jpg


workin on a throw. i kno its toy but thats why im in the toy section. thanks for the crits

-d
IMO you have a fantastic handstyle. (the throws, I don&#39;t like, but hey, that&#39;s why we&#39;re in toy forums, no doubt) How long have you been workin the handsteezys?

Skeam- all in all it&#39;s pretty good. Pull the added chunk off the ass of that M and the Green one will be alot fresher. [/b][/quote]
yea man, i really like doin handwriting and shit, im new to throws so i thought i could get some pointers. but i still need to work on my handstyle. AND my throw of course ;)

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by Feliks@Jul 6 2006, 11:46 PM
good thing you did the grey&#33; not.
lose it unless you know how to colour backgrounds.
i&#39;d like to say nice lettering, because there is potential...but you neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed to ...SKETCH. bitch. now. gogo.

and who are you, tinkerbell? lose the twinklies. you don&#39;t know how yet.

it looks rushed too...who you trying to impress? Do it for yourself. Work it like it&#39;s your masterpiece and love your mediums. That&#39;s it for being nice





FAG
:wub:
God damn yo... Yer kind of a bitch when you&#39;ve been draaaankin.. :huh:

[Skeam]

cheers for the crits cezr

[Feliks]

ahaha, hood rich. one love brah.
you&#39;re alright. I agree with cezr though, your handsteez is impressive.
I ain&#39;t shit talking. I&#39;m doing the friendly clowning to knight you into bs.

[HoodRichSucka]

o alright home boy, we straight. but yea, i kno its wack shit, but im workin at it. holla

[AoAssis]

Hoodrich is dope, no pun intended, I was going to rag on you for having the name Hoodrich and for writing dope, but you got the right attitude for writing and for BS, Feliks just called you a fag and what not, and you didnt come back saying much more then " i know my shit is wack" and thats good.

[HoodRichSucka]

yea man. i dunno , i just write cuz i love to and the more i improve, the more i love it. just tryin to get crits. thanks guys

-d



and as for the name HOODRICH, i dont live in no real ghetto ass hood, its kinda a joke.... peace

[Kata]

Originally posted by HoodRichSucka@Jul 7 2006, 12:03 AM
i just write cuz i love to and the more i improve, the more i love it. just tryin to get crits.
Word.

[Feliks]

mayhap bs isn&#39;t lost after all eh ao?

[pace1]

yeah hood you got some steez ptential if you take these tips everyone gives and work with it then you got a chance.
I like your handy.
first tip: letters have potential just make all the thickness the same on each letter ex. the e on the top sketch the bottom leg is way to small.
keep all letters same height(for now). thats about it.
p.s. simples are good to start with. best advice i ever got i just repeated to you

[pace1]

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/paceeuro.jpg
attempt at a euro style. the fade is balls.
p.s. critz well appreciated

[Feliks]

i hate laptops. I completel erased the nice crit i had for you. Oh well. Here goes:

the gist is
- your fade DOES suck, but at least you know. orange and red and yellow are the hardest to mix i find, green is the easiest. dark and lime. Blend excellently. then in place of the blue, use a nice bright colour, like candy coloured neon pink or some ish. as for the orange background. i suggest instead a diff colour o go with it.
- the background you have works well with your piece, but you have to enlarge the dots on top because if you paint that, all people are gonna see are pin pricks of orange and an orange lump behind PACE. less bumps, bigger, then bigger dots.

as for your handstyle. me likey, but the E ....looks like the c...spread apart maybe? don&#39;t change it, but it&#39;s too similar.
ciao&#33; :wub:

[Skeam]

since everyone has been gettin awsome crits i figured id post some of my latest throwie attempts. crits please

matt

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4710/hpim19721ix.jpg

[FEN the HEN]

man PACE i dont know if its the dope man, but im likeing that sketch, i love simple easy to read pieces good job man.

and your handstyle is sick to....

FENONE out :ph34r:

[Skeam]

pace the onl thing i dont like o nthat peice is the A but besides that i reacon it looks mad

[Feliks]

Originally posted by Skeam@Jul 7 2006, 02:34 AM
since everyone has been gettin awsome crits i figured id post some of my latest throwie attempts. crits please

matt

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/4710/hpim19721ix.jpg
i know chu were talking bout me mayne. :lol:

OKAY, i don&#39;t do throws but here goes:
-first one m is too far from the a. S is too complicated compared to teh rest of your letters. Top of the a is too fat, feed it salad. try making all your letters the same width. the E is pretty screwed up lol. widen it. Not like FAT wise. just...wider. don&#39;t make me draw it out.
-second one , work on your S&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; its the first letter they see :P
it&#39;s too small compared to your other letters. the bottom part of the S especially. again the top of the A, TOO FAT. run it a couple kms. your shadows are a TAD off. makea focus point, use a ruler. this is grade school ish.
- aughhhh three?&#33; fine.
i&#39;d say it&#39;s the best out of all of them. your shadows are def better here.
and whats with the thingy next to the &#33;


YOu&#39;re lucky . i never crit this good. Remember. constructive crit here. just pointing out what i see

[pace1]

i like those throw alot put the letters closser. good throwies.

another late night peice new style need crits on it.
p.s. thanks for the crits on my last i&#39;ll redo and post later.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/newstyle.jpg

[Feliks]

reminds me of an amoeba. i like the ends in the fill other than that it&#39;s pretty plain :( lose the little white things in there.....i dunno what you were going for. ope, here goes half ass again.
Hope it helped none the less

[flclnaruto1213]

feliks is a hoe

[Skeam]

realy appreciated it feliks ill try work on what u said.

edit: oh and the little thing next to the &#33; is a 6, thats why the dot has the little " things, its an 06 but also an &#33;

cheers

[slEEt]

Originally posted by Feliks@Jul 6 2006, 11:38 PM
ps: lose the toy ass drips faggot
:wub:
Thanks for a helpful critic faggot.

[slEEt]

Originally posted by Feliks@Jul 6 2006, 11:38 PM
obviously.
Stick to markers my friend. MAR KER S
all in all not bad, The e is grand, keep workin on it... however, the v and hte o.....I pretty much almost hurled what ever alcohol was in my tummy :(
Anything you&#39;d recommend to make the V and O better?

[spuck]

its kinda hard with the curvy bubble letter style, but id try to make the v more v-ish so it doesnt look like a u. i dunno, try to make it &#39;pointy&#39; at the bottom, if at all possible without making it look like shit. i dunno how hard that would be...

[CHEN[Ken]]

http://i6.tinypic.com/1z6y3o1.jpg

CRITS NE BODY?

[beefgerky]

pace that shit made me think of an amoeba or like a cactus or some shit haha.
not bad tho.
staying simple.
good shit.

[?..DeMo..?]

yo oace i sent u my entrey wa happend

[uhhh]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Jul 6 2006, 10:34 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Jul 6 2006, 10:34 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Jul 6 2006, 09:38 PM
since noone checks the charac thread i&#39;ll post this here.

i was playing around with throwie style characs and i did this head then the body was gonna be a mouth but i went to big so it looks better as a body
http://i6.tinypic.com/1z65s9y.jpg
this is my first try at charcs. like actually trying.

comments critz. whatever you feel the need to type. shouldn;t of said that...
Bump. This is fun&#33; I wish it was mine&#33; :D [/b][/quote]
thanks c3zr... means a lot comin from you. but i keep trying to resketch it and i can;t get the body right. hah.

[Mekr4]

whats up all, gimme some crits and pick ur fave...

http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g19/cons483/Picture001.jpg
http://i52.photobucket.com/albums/g19/cons483/Picture002.jpg

[toon!..]

i love that karak&#33;
edit.. that was to uhh

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/4600/picture0212hx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new style dont really like it

[uhhh]

haha thanks man. the body was gonna be a mouth cuz i wasn&#39;t gonna do a body but i did it too big but i like it. :)

[?..DeMo..?]

i dun like it either lol and i gotta question i was thinking of the name ginto g for my dads first letter in his first name and into for the last of the letter sin her last name so wat ya think

[some_one]

that ak bomb is good toon, as is the handstyle. dont know what to say from there... just keep drawing and painting i supose...
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060707/10/5/a/b/5abcb0556474a7e36a63f37e5680824b200607070_full.jpg

[?..DeMo..?]

i gotta question i was thinking of the name ginto g for my dads first letter in his first name and into for the last of the letter sin her last name so wat ya think

[obseen]

demo can you post some of your stuff cos i never seen your stuff

[?..DeMo..?]

ok here
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/slieze.jpg


http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/dammmir.jpg


http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/balley.jpg





http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/toyyyyyyyyy.jpg


http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/asssssssssss.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/scan0001-1.jpg






there not even that good but watever i could of done better

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/cope2.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/ooomann.jpg

[uhhh]

edit: damn obseen. you gots a shiiiiitload a posts

[WolfBurrns]

Nice shit, Demo.

Heres another bomb. Bad quality because I used a webcam this time. Crits are appreciated. :)

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture22.jpg

[Kata]

dude wolfburn i was thinking of doing that for my sig, great toys think alike i guess :D


edit: and as for a crit, your 3d is a little sketchy in some places, and try and work on making your letters more defined- maybe just little hints to show what the letters are- maybe im on crack and have no idea what im talking about.

[some_one]

Originally posted by some_one@Jul 7 2006, 05:16 PM
that ak bomb is good toon, as is the handstyle. dont know what to say from there... just keep drawing and painting i supose...
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060707/10/5/a/b/5abcb0556474a7e36a63f37e5680824b200607070_full.jpg
bumpizm

[?..DeMo..?]

fix up ur e no drips ans nice 3d and bubles now gimme some critz

[uhhh]

whats the thing coming ouit of the shield under the e?

[some_one]

just a random line :P

[?..DeMo..?]

critzz on mine ??

[uhhh]

Originally posted by some_one@Jul 7 2006, 01:34 PM
just a random line :P
yeah uh, don&#39;t do that

[toon!..]

Originally posted by toon&#33;..@Jul 7 2006, 11:54 AM
i love that karak&#33;
edit.. that was to uhh

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/4600/picture0212hx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new style dont really like it
sorry to have to bump my own stuff

[?..DeMo..?]

Originally posted by ?..DeMo..?@Jul 7 2006, 12:39 PM
ok here
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/slieze.jpg


http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/dammmir.jpg


http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/balley.jpg





http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/toyyyyyyyyy.jpg


http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/asssssssssss.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/scan0001-1.jpg






there not even that good but watever i could of done better

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/cope2.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/mutech99/ooomann.jpg
i already gave u critz i told ya i didnt like the overlaping watever it is on the top of ur letters

and im bumping my shit cuz i aint got no critz so how bout some critzz??

[Kata]

ok, so here is 3 sketchs that i have been trying to put on here for about 2 weeks but couldn&#39;t get onto a decent computer.
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/8849/blue8vw.jpg
http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/4994/brown1hk.jpg
dont know what i was thinking with the dark brown in this one ^^
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/4015/orange5wb.jpg

.... o.0



CRITZ PLEASE THANKS ALOT-


-kataaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah


edit: dont know why the quality on the last one is horrible.

[Eskimo33]

They dont have alot of structure. Clean them up a bit and go simpler.

[Eskimo33]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/Picture017.jpg

SIMPLE what you guys think?

[WolfBurrns]

Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Jul 7 2006, 12:46 PM
Nice shit, Demo.

Heres another bomb. Bad quality because I used a webcam this time. Crits are appreciated. :)

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture22.jpg
Fuckin bump.

[sky 5]

demo - work on your handstyle cuz in my mind it is the first step in understanding letter structure and how to add a lil graff flava to letters. and use a broad tip marker so you can go fat to thin ....

kata - its lookin alright but add some inner lines/cut ins where your letters get real fat and plain. maybe just a partial innner highlight/forcefield if you know what i mean. cant post pics right now so i cant show you.....

[toon!..]

Originally posted by Eskimo33@Jul 7 2006, 02:33 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/Picture017.jpg

SIMPLE what you guys think?
mmmm tasty

cant fault it one bit except, the double outline what the fuck is that? and those mickey mouse things..

other than hat its dopesheezy

[Eskimo33]

Thanks toon i kenw i shouldn&#39;t have done the bubbles. my bad

[?..DeMo..?]

and i only asked this about i dunno 4 times wat yall thnk of the name ginto g for my dads firs tletter in his last name and into for the last letters in my moms last name

[?..DeMo..?]

and i only asked this about i dunno 4 times wat yall thnk of the name ginto g for my dads firs tletter in his last name and into for the last letters in my moms last name

[spuck]

hey man, why you pick your name is up to you, im sure people have had lamer reasons

i write loki because thats the greek(?) god of mischef, although im thinking of switching to spuck if i can come up with a good tag...

[sky 5]

Originally posted by sky 5@May 2 2006, 06:26 PM
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/4018/11414933jj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4750/11414956kf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7424/11515024wn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2194/11414989rd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bumpin this from way back since i cant post pics right now


-- i like ginto G ( i hope your good at curves)

[Eskimo33]

I think that looks really hot, nice work man

[acek]

comments/crits please


http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/543/daskfire4rt.png



peace&#33;

[Eskimo33]

not bad. clean up the erase marks and lose the arrows and its solid.

[a!Ds]

fuck it edit

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by sky 5+Jul 7 2006, 03:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sky 5 @ Jul 7 2006, 03:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@May 2 2006, 06:26 PM
http://img352.imageshack.us/img352/4018/11414933jj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4750/11414956kf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/7424/11515024wn.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2194/11414989rd.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bumpin this from way back since i cant post pics right now


-- i like ginto G ( i hope your good at curves) [/b][/quote]
Bump... Very clean, very GQ.. If you&#39;re gonna use 100 arrows, this is the way to do it. :lol: Props

[xAWOKE.925]

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7347/pieceeee7rr.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/771/shiet4aw.jpg
^yes, i know its weird.
http://img438.imageshack.us/img438/6866/piece120me.jpg

[myl]

eh i just sketched this outline up...crits please

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/9184/idk6qn.jpg

[Eskimo33]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/Picture017.jpg
bump for critz?

[MF Feed Letter]

havent posted toy bullshit in a long time so here have at it

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1336.jpg

[doomsayer]

crits please

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/bff4d2bd.jpg

[Bem]

Damn im lovin it MF really luv the purple karik its dope...and to Doom, Fix the N it looks like it has arms... ,also fix the R dont over that the upper R .The Second to last letter needs work, And that last letter a C or a E w/e it needs to be fixed badly. Other than that keep sketching .

[ion-i]

awoke you left me out on one of the roll calls..





bish.


;)




mf: that ish is cleaaan.
edit: oh and awoke, your 3D is hella fucked up. you got some 3D ovrlapping. overlapping = bad. :unsure:

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by Eskimo33@Jul 7 2006, 02:33 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e337/Adam92awd/Picture017.jpg

SIMPLE what you guys think?
i tihnk u shouldnt write base

dope shit yaser.

lol ioni.

[Eskimo33]

I dont i was just messing around with some letters.

[wrek10]

DOAKrew

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/w1.jpghttp://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/cezr3.jpg :unsure:

[C3ZR ONE]

^^^Word.. THat shit&#39;s mad old.... :unsure: ..(embarassed..)^^^

[AoAssis]

Those thug life bunnies are the shit. My man c3zr making those the gehto way.

[C3ZR ONE]

You know what cool about bunnies?
















http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00559720f00000012.jpg


They multiply... :lol:

[sice1]

maybe my new name how is the trowie??http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5269/seya7dt.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[KaMIKaZE-AK]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Jul 7 2006, 09:37 PM
http://photos.fotango.com/p/eba00559720f00000012.jpg
:lol: nice, you make them by hand or on a computer???

[wrek10]

Originally posted by wrek10@Jul 7 2006, 09:17 PM
DOAKrew

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/w1.jpghttp://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/cezr3.jpg :unsure:
bump niggriods&#33;

[C3ZR ONE]

Handmade. I used a projector to replicate them.

[KaMIKaZE-AK]

lol, always the hard way :D

[wrek10]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/w9.jpg

[sice1]

maybe my new name how is the trowie any1??URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/2739/rgr4rn.jpgits seya

[C3ZR ONE]

I&#39;d say you&#39;re improving Sice. Keep workin at it yo. It aint beautiful, but it&#39;s improvement. ;)

[lost_for_evex]

didnt i give u that name?

[sice1]

Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Jul 7 2006, 10:11 PM
didnt i give u that name?
lol yeah you did..but what do i need to fix??

[lost_for_evex]

work on it...there hard letters..i use 2 mess around with it when i was bored 2 see wut i could come up with...

yea u can deff progress that if u just work with it for a while add a drop shadow and stuff once u get the letters down...

also work on ur handy...it should be easy there sick letters 2 do tags with


oh btw theres a mad crew here in jersey

[wrek10]

Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Jul 7 2006, 10:15 PM
work on it...there hard letters..i use 2 mess around with it when i was bored 2 see wut i could come up with...

yea u can deff progress that if u just work with it for a while add a drop shadow and stuff once u get the letters down...

also work on ur handy...it should be easy there sick letters 2 do tags with


oh btw theres a mad crew here in jersey
u talkin to me?

[sice1]

fuck its not my real crew any was im not in one i go solo i dont put mad when i go bombing i just did it on paper 4 fun

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by wrek10+Jul 7 2006, 10:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (wrek10 @ Jul 7 2006, 10:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-lost_for_evex@Jul 7 2006, 10:15 PM
work on it...there hard letters..i use 2 mess around with it when i was bored 2 see wut i could come up with...

yea u can deff progress that if u just work with it for a while add a drop shadow and stuff once u get the letters down...

also work on ur handy...it should be easy there sick letters 2 do tags with


oh btw theres a mad crew here in jersey
u talkin to me? [/b][/quote]
:mellow: no? lol..unless ur in a crew called mad.

[myl]

Originally posted by myl@Jul 7 2006, 08:03 PM
eh i just sketched this outline up...crits please

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/9184/idk6qn.jpg
anyone?

[?..DeMo..?]

umm lose the triangle in the m it looks wack your l is ok and if thats a y its ack everything looks pretty wack except the l peace

[EatRichPeople]

Let them bunny&#39;s multiply man...hot shit.

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/3272/opaenoma34xx.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
simple for my grandparents....Yes I know I&#39;m hardcore..

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/2603/zesyup27ph.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Zesy...still have to do something with tha coloring just don&#39;t know what yet..any Ideas..or critz?

[ICER]

Originally posted by wrek10+Jul 7 2006, 09:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (wrek10 @ Jul 7 2006, 09:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-wrek10@Jul 7 2006, 09:17 PM
DOAKrew

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/w1.jpghttp://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/cezr3.jpg :unsure:
bump niggriods&#33; [/b][/quote]
Tight shit&#33; oh yeah that Zesy bomb is tight too

[obseen]

love that simple

[some_one]

yeah, that simples good. And wrek, you dont need to post here...

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060708/04/e/5/8/e5872e39bac06ba5455e0e8d10d38af6200607080_full.jpg
comments? i know the lines arent clean, and this is a toy question.. big time, any tips on drawing clean?

[Skeam]

Originally posted by some_one@Jul 8 2006, 06:20 AM
And wrek, you dont need to post here...
i wouldnt be sayin that buddy, i learnt the hard way :P

[xenk]

yous all have sweet skeches

[xenk]

sorry about that i fucked up&#33;&#33;&#33;

.................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,................,,, ,,,,,,....

[xenk]

my bad about the last 1&#33;&#33; sorryhttp://img140.imageshack.us/img140/5039/dscf01375vd.jpg

[Skeam]

just finnished this then, im pretty happy with it. still keepin it kinda simple, not that simple but still simple :P

crits greatly appreciated

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/500/hpim19767in.jpg

[sice1]

yo i did the seya teowie a lil diff how is it any1??http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/7697/tryrtyt0fo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[EatRichPeople]

thanx people :) and those wrek fills are just horny.

I&#39;m diggin the simple skeam, fill looks dope....only thing that I don&#39;t really like is the S overllaping itself. But yeah dope shit man.

slice: don&#39;t really like the bottompart of the S and the left part of the A kinda takes the flow out of it, I like the Y and E. And maby a lil bigger 3d would come out nicer.

some one: The extending part of the s(on the bottom)seems a lil to big, the c is dope but the middle extension is blocking the e a lil to much in my opinion...E and B are dope.

Xenk: pritty small picture but as far as I can see loose the top extension on the X the bottom extension on the E and ya got a pritty decent bomb....coloring looks nice...not really diggin the background though.l

No hate just trying to give feedback for ones :)

[some guy from NCI...]

Originally posted by some_one@Jul 8 2006, 06:20 AM
yeah, that simples good. And wrek, you dont need to post here...

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060708/04/e/5/8/e5872e39bac06ba5455e0e8d10d38af6200607080_full.jpg
comments? i know the lines arent clean, and this is a toy question.. big time, any tips on drawing clean?
SEK&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; SCRAMBLED EGGZZZ ONEONEOENEON&#33;&#33;&#33; UK STYLEZZ&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;


BRAAAAAAAAAAP
2000000000000006&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Rane *DF* *HM*]

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j42/Manchgraff603/Picture.jpg


...i know...the e looks retarded. Any other crits?

[MF Feed Letter]

dont waste your markers

[Kata]

reminds me of a japanese talk show to be honest

[Kata]

Originally posted by Kata@Jul 7 2006, 02:22 PM
ok, so here is 3 sketchs that i have been trying to put on here for about 2 weeks but couldn&#39;t get onto a decent computer.
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/8849/blue8vw.jpg
http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/4994/brown1hk.jpg
dont know what i was thinking with the dark brown in this one ^^
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/4015/orange5wb.jpg

.... o.0



CRITZ PLEASE THANKS ALOT-


-kataaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah


edit: dont know why the quality on the last one is horrible.
bump


just for like 2 more crits please =X


edit: by the way the color is really desaturated in these pics- i was just looking at the normal versions in my book and realized the scanner must have sucked away some of the life from them.

[xAWOKE.925]

Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@Jul 7 2006, 05:34 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7347/pieceeee7rr.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/771/shiet4aw.jpg
^yes, i know its weird.
http://img438.imageshack.us/img438/6866/piece120me.jpg
BUMP FOR SOME FUCKING CRITZ PLEEEEEEEAASAAAAH

[Code]

HEres a new one i came up with, tried to add 3d. I know the other 0 looks like an A but other than that what do you guys think.




http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/1011/honor1tl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[xAWOKE.925]

Its awful. Damnit. crit my damn pieces.

[Code]

Originally posted by xAWOKE.925+Jul 8 2006, 01:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (xAWOKE.925 @ Jul 8 2006, 01:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-xAWOKE.925@Jul 7 2006, 05:34 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/7347/pieceeee7rr.jpg
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/771/shiet4aw.jpg
^yes, i know its weird.
http://img438.imageshack.us/img438/6866/piece120me.jpg
BUMP FOR SOME FUCKING CRITZ PLEEEEEEEAASAAAAH [/b][/quote]
lol fine i will crit yours since you crit mine, even though it wasent that good of a crit :P

THe first scetch i like, but the color scheme for some reason doesent really catch me.

The second one is creative, but i just think it kind of looks wierd :)

The Third Scetch is my faverite, even though it looks cursive the color scheme and the letter structure is good

[Kata]

Originally posted by Kata+Jul 8 2006, 01:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Kata @ Jul 8 2006, 01:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Kata@Jul 7 2006, 02:22 PM
ok, so here is 3 sketchs that i have been trying to put on here for about 2 weeks but couldn&#39;t get onto a decent computer.
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/8849/blue8vw.jpg
http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/4994/brown1hk.jpg
dont know what i was thinking with the dark brown in this one ^^
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/4015/orange5wb.jpg

.... o.0



CRITZ PLEASE THANKS ALOT-


-kataaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah


edit: dont know why the quality on the last one is horrible.
bump


just for like 2 more crits please =X


edit: by the way the color is really desaturated in these pics- i was just looking at the normal versions in my book and realized the scanner must have sucked away some of the life from them. [/b][/quote]
cough BUMP CRITS cough cough

[ion-i]

dont bump shit thats on the same fucking page&#33;
people will crit it if they want, just give it time.

jesus.

edit: ok heres some crits, your letter structure isn&#39;t even equivelent to being called letters. start simpler&#33; stop trying to do wildstyle&#33; if you start simple, your letters will form over time and youll develop your own style.

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by ion&#045;i@Jul 8 2006, 04:06 PM
dont bump shit thats on the same fucking page&#33;
people will crit it if they want, just give it time.

jesus.

edit: ok heres some crits, your letter structure isn&#39;t even equivelent to being called letters. start simpler&#33; stop trying to do wildstyle&#33; if you start simple, your letters will form over time and youll develop your own style.
word...ghostboys post is directly on point.... ;)

[Quake]

Originally posted by Quake@Jul 5 2006, 05:55 PM
Robot sex: Nice canvase

Anyway heres 2 sketces for you to comment:

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060705/15/5/7/d/57df38898183511221da42f49b06c353200607050_full.jpg
(I shouldent of put thouse cans in at the top)

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060705/15/c/1/4/c145d22f79196db88faf640ebbce455e200607050_full.jpg
(old school)

Comments please&#33;&#33;
And bumb for crits??? (<<What ever)

[beefgerky]

"penises soaring thru the air&#33; spurting love juice everywere" lol..

[slEEt]

Cans need caps.

[SiLeNt-BoB]

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/8626/asti4eb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
half finshed sketch..a&#39;ll finsh it off tomorrow

[doomsayer]

i write NERC but accidently wrote an A crits anyay plz

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/77dd7f51.jpg

[spek.]

http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b190/violLWK/spekkk.jpg

fucked up on 3d and i think the e fuckin blows but..crits??

[Eskimo33]

3d is way off the K could use some work. Dont make the bottom of the E come back in, and the end of it doesn&#39;t look anything like any other letter wich makes it stand out. keep working on it.

[svker]

Keeping it simple, give your thoughts, advice on this.

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/633/graff0486bg.th.jpg (http://img133.imageshack.us/my.php?image=graff0486bg.jpg)

[MF Feed Letter]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Jul 7 2006, 08:57 PM
havent posted toy bullshit in a long time so here have at it

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1336.jpg
bwomp.

eye
wood
all
so
lick
soma
crit
eye
sis
m

[Eskimo33]

The only thing i can critisize is that i think the bottom of the R should come out instead of down other then that its tits.

[EatRichPeople]

Hot
shit
man
...not
really
diggin
tha
chars
though
s is
faya
hot

peace

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter+Jul 8 2006, 06:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MF Feed Letter @ Jul 8 2006, 06:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-MF Feed Letter@Jul 7 2006, 08:57 PM
havent posted toy bullshit in a long time so here have at it

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1336.jpg
bwomp.

eye
wood
all
so
lick
soma
crit
eye
sis
m [/b][/quote]
This would be so well suited as an enormous roller. Custom fuckin made for a roller.. I&#39;d love to see it, minus the karaks. (Don&#39;t get me wrong, Mario 3 was this shizzle, and those little bastards with the Jason masks were in my oppinion, one of the most under appreciated charachters in gaming history, sans possibly the ostrich from Joust...)

You rock Yaser. Ever thaught of doing a play on words with "jager bombs"? I always think of them when I see Yaser. I dunno why. Maybe I&#39;m just always thinkin about boozin it...

[MF Feed Letter]

ya man thats gone through my head cuz jager is one my fav drnks black liquourish or how ever yo spell it is deelicioussss but jager bombs that fuckin awsoem

[spuck]

http://f10.putfile.com/7/18821003432-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18821003432.jpg&s=f10)

latest sketch, first one ive bothered to color, crits appreciated

[TheBNecrius]

Originally posted by Eskimo33@Jul 8 2006, 06:30 PM
The only thing i can critisize is that i think the bottom of the R should come out instead of down other then that its tits.
other than its tits?

[spuck]

appearently

[Monster Island]

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/7261/img19758xc.jpg


for a girl:

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/7339/img19718pq.jpg

[spuck]

personally, i would say tone it down a bit monster. I cant read a fucking thing that says.....

[Skeam]

yer i agree, im not to keen on the colour scheme

[sice1]

Originally posted by Monster Island@Jul 8 2006, 09:02 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/7261/img19758xc.jpg


for a girl:

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/7339/img19718pq.jpg
4 a girl?? i see girls kill wlids

[minesweep]

you need some better color schemes

[spuck]

http://f10.putfile.com/7/18822475565-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18822475565.jpg&s=f10)
spuck throwie i decided to color in. please excuse the shitty coloring job, i was using some pastel things i snatched from my sister and those things are about as accurate as a sawed off shotgun, its like coloring with fucking lipbalm....

and ill just use this as an excuse to repost my other picture even tho i just posted it a page ago.....

http://f10.putfile.com/7/18821003432-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18821003432.jpg&s=f10)

critisism appreciated

[minesweep]

keep letters a consistant length and width, for you mainly width, start with straight letters, and your 3d is way off

[spuck]

how is my 3d off?

i picked a vanish point in the center of the word and drew to there, it looks good to me.

its not the most conventional kind of 3d tho...
maybe your just used to a vanish point off in the corner?
*shrugs*

and with letter thickness the only thing that i could really see there is the p in spuck, which is supposed to be obscured by the s and the u, but i did that kinda poorly and the muddy coloring doesnt help
is that what you were talking about? or is there somewhere else its bad and im missing it?


just wanted to get in there and defend myself, dont get me wrong, i appreciate your critisism

[Sife]

Originally posted by Monster Island@Jul 8 2006, 09:02 PM
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/7261/img19758xc.jpg


for a girl:

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/7339/img19718pq.jpg





the colors made my eyes go out of focus and start to bleed. can&#39;t read what it says cuz of the blood and unfocusedness of my eyes...

[MUSASHI]

^^^ if your vanishing point was supposed to be in the middle then there shouldn&#39;t be any shadow fom the outside of the letters and all the shadows should be towards the point in the middle...anywho heres this little throw i did it&#39;s off and wierd I know but, That is the intent ,just a little funky comic value ,so people would see it as an image representative of the word...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/worm1.jpg

[alive]

spuck- dont put your 3d over your letters&#33; it will look soooooo much better. keep working on ur blockbusters

monster islands- ur color schemes need more contrast, they make it very hard to read. i cant make out the first, but the second is sarah tru? keep the line thickness more consistant, thatl help.


good luck to all
i hope i helped
keep going

[Sife]

Originally posted by Skeam@Jul 8 2006, 09:17 AM
just finnished this then, im pretty happy with it. still keepin it kinda simple, not that simple but still simple :P

crits greatly appreciated

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/500/hpim19767in.jpg
i like it alot, except the part where the s loops around under the top part to go on to the bottom part is too skinny. thicken it out a lil bit and itll be hella tight

[spuck]

all the shadows should be towards the point in the middle
dont they?

dont put your 3d over your letters&#33;
i&#39;ll keep that in mind

and while im here...

MUSASHI, i like the looks of that throwie, but is it supposed to be/say anything? i cant tell

and in regards to the skeam picture sife quoted, thats pretty sweet, i especially like the pink and orange, the only thing that kinda bugs me is the triple quotes at the begginning there

[pace1]

skeam- like the styl
Spuck- simpler work with letter structure more.

heres something i did qwik
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/PACE2222.jpg

[Skeam]

thanx heaps for the crits guys, i just tried a completely different style, kinda sharper... and it looks completely shit. i think i mgunna stik to this style.

matt

[spuck]

http://f10.putfile.com/7/18823592250-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18823592250.jpg&s=f10)

yet another, resisted the urge to make it 3d this time...
pretty simple, it only took me a few minutes, kinda roller-esque
im trying to come up with a style and i think big, fat and blocky suits me...

i am just churning shit out tonight, i should probably stop before i create a monster....

[pace1]

widths should all be the same size&#33;&#33;&#33;
everyone who starts keep that in mind and also keep it basic


heres a throw i think i like alot
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/Pathro.jpg

[Kata]

try it with a thick marker and make it plump and see if it looks neater- i dont know why but i think it would look a bit cooler like that in my brain, however it is yours so


blaahhh

[beefgerky]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/11.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap190.jpg

random simples.

[HoodRichSucka]

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/AREpiecesmall.jpg



my tag is DOPE, but i might make it ARE seeing as i havent thrown it up yet... lmk, thanks

-ad

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by beefgerky@Jul 8 2006, 11:58 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/11.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap190.jpg

random simples.
bump <_<

[HoodRichSucka]

sry to start a new page and not leave an opinion. gerk, its tight as hell, no lie, i may not kno much for being toy, but i like it straight up. simple but simple is good man. good work for sure

-ad

[xenk]

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5580/dscf01404er.jpgwhat do u think???
and im not sure on where u put the shine??
any pointers??.....

[SiLeNt-BoB]

Originally posted by SiLeNt&#045;BoB@Jul 8 2006, 05:34 PM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/8626/asti4eb.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
half finshed sketch..a&#39;ll finsh it off tomorrow
bump...any comments

[Code]

Originally posted by Code@Jul 8 2006, 01:22 PM
HEres a new one i came up with, tried to add 3d. I know the other 0 looks like an A but other than that what do you guys think.




http://img347.imageshack.us/img347/1011/honor1tl.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Bump please crit :)

[toxus]

bob...
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/51/asti9lg.jpg
The A looks a too big commpard to the other letters.
I think its lacking structure.
Oh and, i dont like that little part coming off from the T.
But its quite nice ;)

[EZ3iL]

http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j46/ez3il/IMG_21161.jpg
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j46/ez3il/IMG_21231.jpg
Critz...
And here are some characters my girl friend drew
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j46/ez3il/IMG_21201.jpg
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j46/ez3il/IMG_21191.jpg
She doesnt know im posting these also she doesnt write

[EZ3iL]

Just thought id add a picture of my kitty
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j46/ez3il/IMG_21121.jpg

[alive]

Originally posted by spuck@Jul 8 2006, 11:01 PM
http://f10.putfile.com/7/18823592250-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=7/18823592250.jpg&s=f10)

yet another, resisted the urge to make it 3d this time...
pretty simple, it only took me a few minutes, kinda roller-esque
im trying to come up with a style and i think big, fat and blocky suits me...

i am just churning shit out tonight, i should probably stop before i create a monster....
spuck- it looks much better&#33; make your i capital so it looks like this: "I" dont worry about color right now, keep working on the letter structure, thats the point of the blockbusters, getting down the basic form of the letters. keep going, i see improvement, one step at a time.

code- sry but it looks terrible, scratch it and get to blockbusters with spuck. dont try to stylize it, use simple, straight lines.

bob- i like it alot, but itl look soooo much better if u use straighter lines like toxus said and lose some of the extensions. in fact, itl look pretty hott.

xenk- it looks much better, keep going. mostly just work on the X, it doesnt look like an X, more like a messed up N or H. your overlapping a bit too much, and stop worrying about color. u shouldnt have shine without shadow, it goes oposite the shadow.

gerk- very hott, i love it. but maybe you line thickness could be a little more consistant, expecially on the first one, like the E. oh and your letters fluctuate in size a little on the second. all just minor things, i love it.

ez3il- dont worry about color yet&#33; and stop struggling so hard to stylize it. id like to see some blockbusters from you.


i better get some good crits on my next sketch

[Ethen]

[URL=http://img216.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00007334gr.jpg][IMG]http://img216
crits?

[Ethen]

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/439/00007334gr.th.jpg (http://img216.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00007334gr.jpg)

[Ethen]

done with paint any crits?

[xenk]

[FONT=Times][SIZE=7][COLOR=yellow]do u think i should try some block busters befor getting into bubble writing??

[xenk]

thanks alive you are really helpful...
cheers&#33;&#33;&#33;
cya mate

[?..DeMo..?]

i gotta question i write seko outside right and demo in my books. i have gotten up with seko alot right should i use ginto now that i wanna use outside now or noo?

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

go simple. often with paint simples look better and with a nice fill, can make a train/ wall. try it. see whre ya go ;)

[?..DeMo..?]

im jsut saying wat sohuld i use i mean should i go thorugh getting up alot with a new name or just stick wit the same name??

[HoodRichSucka]

Originally posted by HoodRichSucka@Jul 9 2006, 12:06 AM
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/AREpiecesmall.jpg



my tag is DOPE, but i might make it ARE seeing as i havent thrown it up yet... lmk, thanks

-ad
bump..

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

hmm, go slightly simpler, and use less extensions...

[Rane *DF* *HM*]

i like it...

i like the Dope handstyle too.

You could write a sick throw for "Dope" because all the letters are basically the same shape.

[uhhh]

yeah that&#39;d be a tight throw.

[Quadratic]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/new-maso5.jpg


any critz

[spuck]

the face and the blunt are really well done, but i think you should probably work on your letter structure some, i can hardly tell what the first 2 letters are.

[uhhh]

that m is tight. don;&#39;t change it

[Quadratic]

oh really? i thought they were pretty obvious, its a "m" and a "a"

anyways, thanks. its just a new thingy ive been fuckin with so yea i do need to develop it more.

[Quadratic]

http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g263/titmar/new-maso4.jpg

here is the other one i did like that

i like this one more. except i hate the black line in the fill....

[uhhh]

the a looks kinda o-ish. maybe if you made the middle only connected on one side and have it like come up out of it to the otherside. if ya get what i&#39;m sayin?

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

nice man with the fat lady in the sig....
i like the style. wel done..

[robot sex]

yo demo, if u start doing ginto or whatever out also with seko then write them next to each other if you want to make sure peeps know ur the same or at least in bizz with each other.

[robot sex]

heres a thing, kinda just doodles around on the characters and messed with pencil,

part 1
http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/5531/aa1bp.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

part 2
http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1043/aab8ul.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[robot sex]

oh says NEXST by the way..

[AoAssis]

You REALLY need to work on your letter structure man, I can berly make out the N, the X is a BIG stretch to make it out, the T is the only letter that took minimul effort to find, i couldnt find the rest.

[MUSASHI]

here&#39;s something real quick I did just for fun about 20 min. worth

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/saintchristopher.jpg

[robot sex]

woa, thats weird it looks amazing easy to read to me but i guess thats cuz i did it? i dunno

[lost_for_evex]

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture081-1.jpg

[toon!..]

loving it evex i cant really fault it except the tags..id just work on your tags for awhile bro

[doomsayer]

ok i sketched this last night crits pleas, ignore the writing in the letters lol i got really bored so just practiced some general words&#33;

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/NARCboredom.jpg

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Jul 9 2006, 04:24 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture081-1.jpg
Those are hot stickers. Can you them relatively fast? You&#39;ve developed a nice signature style. (By that, I mean your own style of piecing, your handstyle really does need alot of work tho. I gotta agree with Toon on that, ;) )

[Ethen]

one of mine still needs another colour and an outline
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/6210/00007335or.th.jpg (http://img505.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00007335or.jpg)
any crits?

[spuck]

well, the arrow on the top corner of the second F is random as hell, id drop that...

[Ethen]

Originally posted by MUSASHI@Jul 9 2006, 02:27 PM
here&#39;s something real quick I did just for fun about 20 min. worth

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/saintchristopher.jpg
im liking the letters

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Jul 9 2006, 05:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE &#064; Jul 9 2006, 05:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-lost_for_evex@Jul 9 2006, 04:24 PM
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture081-1.jpg
Those are hot stickers. Can you them relatively fast? You&#39;ve developed a nice signature style. (By that, I mean your own style of piecing, your handstyle really does need alot of work tho. I gotta agree with Toon on that, ;) ) [/b][/quote]
thanx...idk wut 2 do with my handy tho...seems like iv got everything down besides that...i always practice that shit 2 but can never get a style i like...capital e&#39;s i dont like and i want a handy thats easy 2 read.. *sigh* i hate life lol

oh and yea i think i can do them fast..that was pen freestyled

[magic nyc]

Nice shit from Musa, your improving alot. Evex thats a nice sticker too bro.

[Chop Logic]

Some qucik sketches. I havent been wasting time on fills or that shit latley becuase im just trying to get better so ive just been working on my letters. Crits please.

Me and my girlfreind were doodling together:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/maria.jpg

Been looking at the overkill site a lot lately and thought id try out a sketch:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/overkill.jpg

Random word:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/phow.jpg

Crits/comments thanks.

[EZ3iL]

Originally posted by Chop Logic@Jul 9 2006, 07:08 PM


Random word:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/phow.jpg

Crits/comments thanks.
the letters look good but your lines arent to steady... work on getting the lines steady maybe move the pen faster or somethin.. my 2 cents

[Skeam]

did this last nite, i dno im kinda happy wit it i guess...

critz greatly appreciated.

http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/8886/hpim19804cs.jpg

[spuck]

well i think it fucking pwns

you get toy props&#33;