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Necro-
07-21-2006, 10:31 PM
some ppl on 12oz recommended i go back to simples cuz my shit was lookin wack. here's some i did today.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Blackbook014.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Blackbook013.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Blackbook012.jpg

and things i did in my folder at work

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Blackbook016.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Blackbook015.jpg

i think i understand simples well, but wtf do i move onto when i got straight block letters like that down?

SEROKID
07-21-2006, 10:40 PM
"heist" you have to have respect for people that came and put their work in before you. im sure you have no clue how much heist painted.
your ignorance would catch up with you eventually

Chop Logic
07-21-2006, 10:56 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/CHOPLOGIC1.jpg

went simpler. crits/comments?

Z FUSE
07-21-2006, 11:06 PM
Originally posted by ion-i@Jul 21 2006, 05:18 PM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/womenovermatersmall.jpg
i get bored. so i draw on my board.
it was kinda hard drawing the girl because she would look betetr if i had a skinnier deco to make mroe detail on the face. meh whatever.
edit: fixed up the girl a bit.
BUMP

spuck
07-21-2006, 11:08 PM
pretty dope if you ask me, better than i could do, i just stickered the hell out of my board

http://x11.putfile.com/3/8516223815-thumb.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=3/8516223815.jpg&s=x11)
pure sex

Chop Logic
07-21-2006, 11:27 PM
Colored in a sketch from before, cant really see the silver outline but whatever.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/choplogic2.jpg

Skeam
07-22-2006, 12:47 AM
necro, i reacon those grey throwies are fresh as, they look dope. and for the rest it seems like your on the right track from where i see it. i cant really help you out with what to do next though, maybe just start tweaking your letters a little to develop some style, dont get ahead of yourself though... just small tweaks

matt

myl
07-22-2006, 01:18 AM
any one have any crits/suggestions?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0206.jpg

magic nyc
07-22-2006, 01:30 AM
Seems a little squashed together and off plane at points but its good putting in work

BluegrassBomber
07-22-2006, 01:40 AM
http://www.geocities.com/thetrojanman21/Erah.jpg

New name i'm trying...

magic nyc
07-22-2006, 01:44 AM
:lol: LOL, that little crown on the E is cute haha, you should definately paint that.

BluegrassBomber
07-22-2006, 02:07 AM
Yea, i like the word a lot, its more fun to write.

doomsayer
07-22-2006, 02:38 AM
ok, i think i finally got sumthin that might come out somewat out alright, someone give me crits or sumthin or at least tell me if its got potential before i work my ass off on it tonight

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/659e3ed6.jpg

doomsayer
07-22-2006, 06:49 AM
meh, drew it out cleaner and colored it, crits? what u think? i think this is the best sketch ive done so far. but thats just me

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/1744d9d4.jpg

Chop Logic
07-22-2006, 08:11 AM
Make your 3d bigger. Go simpler.

Bump for crits.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/choplogic2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/CHOPLOGIC1.jpg

BluegrassBomber
07-22-2006, 08:21 AM
The blue one is pretty tight, add some more detail to it though... I like em' both

HoodRichSucka
07-22-2006, 08:27 AM
Originally posted by HoodRichSucka@Jul 21 2006, 10:11 PM
just some sketches...

http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/SNAPpieces.jpg
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/LAMEpieces.jpg
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/GAMEpieces.jpg
http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j106/hoodrichsucka/AREpieces.jpg


just some sketches, nothing much, crits, thanks guys.

-d
bump..

Bafty
07-22-2006, 08:52 AM
I like your handstyle.
Mainly on the Game one.

Add some colour + outline with a marker.

EatRichPeople
07-22-2006, 08:59 AM
I like youre last one just make the a bit longer it's a lil bit smaller then the other 2 letters.
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/7070/creamqv2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Cream...fucked up the first 2 letters but I like the last 3..anyway critz??

C3ZR ONE
07-22-2006, 09:35 AM
Originally posted by Kayone707@Jul 20 2006, 10:54 AM
this goes for EVERYONE in here posting sketches..

dont start off doing wild style.


copy these first so you get a feel for letters and flow.
http://www.csnews.com/csnews/photos/cokelogo.jpg
http://www.crackrabbit.com/flyers/Ross/Ross-XMen-First-Ross-Flyer-No-Shit.jpg
http://images.amazon.com/images/P/078311494X.01.LZZZZZZZ.jpg

sketch all these. an put some fuckin effort in them. then you'r gonna get a feel for some shit..

i'll check up later to see if anyone did em
I'm gonna start bumping this every so often to remind the people that really want to learn something what they should be doing. Most of us are at this point. ;)

klipa
07-22-2006, 10:11 AM
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/4548/cimg2271ps1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

clockworkfuse
07-22-2006, 10:24 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Jul 22 2006, 09:35 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Jul 22 2006, 09:35 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Kayone707@Jul 20 2006, 10:54 AM
this goes for EVERYONE in here posting sketches..

dont start off doing wild style.


copy these first so you get a feel for letters and flow.
http://www.csnews.com/csnews/photos/cokelogo.jpg
http://www.crackrabbit.com/flyers/Ross/Ross-XMen-First-Ross-Flyer-No-Shit.jpg
http://images.amazon.com/images/P/078311494X.01.LZZZZZZZ.jpg

sketch all these. an put some fuckin effort in them. then you&#39;r gonna get a feel for some shit..

i&#39;ll check up later to see if anyone did em
I&#39;m gonna start bumping this every so often to remind the people that really want to learn something what they should be doing. Most of us are at this point. ;) [/b][/quote]
I&#39;ll do that...

myl
07-22-2006, 10:38 AM
chop...the blue one is hot

jerm_mtl
07-22-2006, 10:41 AM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4953/berserkerbattlemt9.png
for the battle.. crits ?

clockworkfuse
07-22-2006, 10:42 AM
OH NOES

Slushi
07-22-2006, 10:48 AM
Originally posted by Slushi@Jul 21 2006, 09:46 PM
http://img233.imageshack.us/img233/8404/picture80ea1.jpg
I worked on my s alot what do you guys think.
bump

jerm_mtl
07-22-2006, 10:48 AM
Originally posted by clockworkfuse@Jul 22 2006, 10:42 AM
OH NOES
double you tee eff? what duz that mean

robot sex
07-22-2006, 10:51 AM
bunch of work, some ive already posted...
http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/7465/aabbif4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5158/aaddvn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/1172/artpiecefiv5fq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/5370/baavp7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img332.imageshack.us/img332/865/banselr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img332.imageshack.us/img332/2231/aaagggvq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/2783/banseeaw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tame_187
07-22-2006, 11:14 AM
i got some new sketches, crits or comments?


http://img423.imageshack.us/img423/6940/sketchpd6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/3395/spraycansre0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/7306/3dsketchno6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/5486/city2jh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Fosale!
07-22-2006, 11:16 AM
first off, don&#39;t write Tame.

Fosale!
07-22-2006, 11:16 AM
first off, don&#39;t write Tame.

knucks
07-22-2006, 11:19 AM
http://content.bolt.com/uploads4/photo/8/7/8/7/4/5/878745/small/1153583762099.jpg (http:///knucks/photo/1684139)

i rite smet btw now

alive
07-22-2006, 12:08 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Jul 22 2006, 09:35 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Jul 22 2006, 09:35 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Kayone707@Jul 20 2006, 10:54 AM
this goes for EVERYONE in here posting sketches..

dont start off doing wild style.


copy these first so you get a feel for letters and flow.
http://www.csnews.com/csnews/photos/cokelogo.jpg
http://www.crackrabbit.com/flyers/Ross/Ross-XMen-First-Ross-Flyer-No-Shit.jpg
http://images.amazon.com/images/P/078311494X.01.LZZZZZZZ.jpg

sketch all these. an put some fuckin effort in them. then you&#39;r gonna get a feel for some shit..

i&#39;ll check up later to see if anyone did em
I&#39;m gonna start bumping this every so often to remind the people that really want to learn something what they should be doing. Most of us are at this point. ;) [/b][/quote]
:( u promised me crits. o well, no worries, ill put up another sketch later today. but i wanted to ask you, do u think i should do that? i think im past that level, but maybe im very wrong.

spuck
07-22-2006, 12:37 PM
http://f10.putfile.com/thumb/7/20213370460.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=main/7/20213370460.jpg&s=f10)<click for fullsize view


in reality this would probably just be a one color fill throwie, i just threw in the second fill color to keep it interesting...

and i have a steadier arm than i do hand, i need diazapham to draw straight lines with a pencil.....

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-22-2006, 12:43 PM
Originally posted by robot sex@Jul 22 2006, 10:51 AM
bunch of work, some ive already posted...
http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/7465/aabbif4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5158/aaddvn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/1172/artpiecefiv5fq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/5370/baavp7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img332.imageshack.us/img332/865/banselr1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img332.imageshack.us/img332/2231/aaagggvq9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img467.imageshack.us/img467/2783/banseeaw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
why do you post in the TOY forum?? Have you painted anything?

HEIST
07-22-2006, 12:58 PM
forget about the solid black beggining of the H
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c107/smackahoe3/SA400091.jpg

alive
07-22-2006, 01:08 PM
heist, its kinda wack sry. but thats ok, this is toy forum, were all here to improve. go SIMPLE. it sucks i know&#33; but itl help so much. and forget about color for now, i suggest a black pen, and a red pen MAYBE. and please dont try fancy fills. nothing personal, i know it hurts. try making your I&#39;s like I, not l. itl look better.

on the upside, i like the S. it reminds me of gesus&#39; S.

keep going

C3ZR ONE
07-22-2006, 01:09 PM
Originally posted by alive@Jul 21 2006, 08:43 AM
i decided to try my hand at the beserker toy battle word, i dont think ill enter this, this is more of a rough sketch before i try to actually do it. a pen freestyle. im suprised it came out this well tho, only abt 5 minutes. so, please, crits&#33;


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02536.jpg



thanks&#33;
Sorry, I forgot I promised you crits. ;)
It&#39;s got pretty solid letters and they&#39;re right for where you art at right now with skill. Alot of improvement over your older stuff. That said, if thats a battle entry, you should clean it up. All the writing around it really detracts from the piece and espescially the part you scribbled over. Pen freestyles are cool, but unless you&#39;re Lust One, I don&#39;t recommend them for battles, they just aren&#39;t gonna get proper attention. There are a few spots on the letters that could be fattened up and evened, but I can&#39;t see the pic as I&#39;m critiqueing since I quoted from another page.

As far as working on those simples that Kayone posted, If you&#39;re in toy forum, you should always practice them. I&#39;m not saying you have to do nothing but them, cuzz I know they&#39;re a bit boring to work on, but everyone in here should continually try them out. The only people I think are comepletely past simples are SKY5 and probably Robot Sex (and they can probably post in big boy thread if they want.). Everyone else should keep trying them. Even me. ;)

jerm_mtl
07-22-2006, 01:11 PM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl@Jul 22 2006, 10:41 AM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4953/berserkerbattlemt9.png
for the battle.. crits ?
bump 4 some crits

spuck
07-22-2006, 01:24 PM
http://f10.putfile.com/thumb/7/20214212144.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=main/7/20214212144.jpg&s=f10)<thumbnail

meh?

again, if i was actually painting these theyd probably not have the interior designs, i just got bored...

that second one was supposed to look like it had sheets of scrap metal bolted onto it, it only came out meh tho, not much of a selection when it came to colors, i had to steal my sisters pencils

letter structure is the main thing im asking for crits on here...

and i think the m might be a tad too big on both of them....

whoarethereal evil
07-22-2006, 02:17 PM
deleted as it was huuuge scrowl down 2 c the decently sized 1

:lol:

spuck
07-22-2006, 02:18 PM
gah, resize

whoarethereal evil
07-22-2006, 02:19 PM
ahhh bollocks sorry

elcs
07-22-2006, 02:20 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/oitrey/MortonPeoria023.jpg

Im thinkin about makin this into a throwie...im not sure though. Is it good enough? What do i need to change?

whoarethereal evil
07-22-2006, 02:21 PM
http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h155/concrete-poet/IMG_0022-1.jpg

spuck
07-22-2006, 02:22 PM
much better, you might wanna edit out the old one so that theres no horizontal scrollage on this page...

ShIfTeD
07-22-2006, 02:23 PM
dont make your 3D shade with a pen, do it with a marker

work on letter structure

work on making "clean" lines

ShIfTeD
07-22-2006, 02:24 PM
Originally posted by elcs@Jul 22 2006, 02:20 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y66/oitrey/MortonPeoria023.jpg

Im thinkin about makin this into a throwie...im not sure though. Is it good enough? What do i need to change?
i think its good enough for a throw..go for it..just dont fuck up

whoarethereal evil
07-22-2006, 02:31 PM
hahaha sound advice^

BluegrassBomber
07-22-2006, 03:38 PM
You gotta love those free stickers.

spuck
07-22-2006, 03:53 PM
:ph34r:

spuck
07-22-2006, 03:57 PM
http://f10.putfile.com/thumb/7/20216525585.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=main/7/20216525585.jpg&s=f10)
http://f10.putfile.com/thumb/7/20214212144.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=main/7/20214212144.jpg&s=f10)

im going away for a week tommorrow and im gonna be sketching alot, id appreciate some crits before i go so i can work on shit :D

edit: damn, bottom of the page...

BluegrassBomber
07-22-2006, 04:12 PM
I think you should start creating your own style instead of just plain old bubble letters, just start messin with the words and make them your own... Don&#39;t know if that helps you or not.

prank
07-22-2006, 04:36 PM
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/4111/image48th5.jpg

WolfBurrns
07-22-2006, 04:53 PM
Some new shit.
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/fuckyocouch.jpg

CRITS?

Slushi
07-22-2006, 05:27 PM
Originally posted by prank@Jul 22 2006, 04:36 PM
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/4111/image48th5.jpg
lose all the exess rectangles and shit around the word

doomsayer
07-22-2006, 05:29 PM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Jul 22 2006, 06:49 AM
meh, drew it out cleaner and colored it, crits? what u think? i think this is the best sketch ive done so far. but thats just me

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/1744d9d4.jpg
bump for crits

spuck
07-22-2006, 05:33 PM
Originally posted by BluegrassBomber@Jul 22 2006, 04:12 PM
I think you should start creating your own style instead of just plain old bubble letters, just start messin with the words and make them your own... Don&#39;t know if that helps you or not.
yeah, it does, im planning on moving into that kinda shit now, i just wanted to get my letter structure down well. Im still gonna keep it pretty simple tho...

BluegrassBomber
07-22-2006, 05:51 PM
I personally like simple, but you can just add your own personal thing.

spuck
07-22-2006, 06:27 PM
yup, its just a matter of finding it...

fukbuff124
07-22-2006, 06:47 PM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k319/OTRwriter1/caosrezizeEEE.jpg
crits?

SARMONE
07-22-2006, 07:01 PM
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/544/0722061948ava8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[url=http://imageshack.us][img=http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/5618/0721061448aad7

SARMONE
07-22-2006, 07:02 PM
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/3016/0721061448aks6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

magic nyc
07-22-2006, 07:43 PM
Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Jul 22 2006, 05:53 PM
Some new shit.
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/fuckyocouch.jpg

CRITS?
woot

spuck
07-22-2006, 07:47 PM
that reminds me, a friend of mine stole one of my capos, i should go about getting that back

doomsayer
07-22-2006, 08:03 PM
Originally posted by magic nyc+Jul 22 2006, 07:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (magic nyc &#064; Jul 22 2006, 07:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-WolfBurrns@Jul 22 2006, 05:53 PM
Some new shit.
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/fuckyocouch.jpg

CRITS?
woot [/b][/quote]
letters cud do with some work and work on the structure, i think brign th C close to the A and the thin on the end is weird

BUFF - i like it its clean, i think it wuyd look better if all the letters were closer to the same size

knucks
07-22-2006, 08:42 PM
Originally posted by knucks@Jul 22 2006, 11:19 AM
http://content.bolt.com/uploads4/photo/8/7/8/7/4/5/878745/small/1153583762099.jpg (http:///knucks/photo/1684139)

i rite smet btw now
CRITS ??

prank
07-22-2006, 08:46 PM
you guys said simple

tell me what you think
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/4060/image49fi2.jpg

Slushi
07-22-2006, 08:50 PM
looks much better.

knucks
07-22-2006, 08:50 PM
DONT KOIN THE Vand A but im feelin that n n i like t more

prank
07-22-2006, 08:59 PM
Originally posted by knucks@Jul 22 2006, 08:50 PM
DONT KOIN THE Vand A but im feelin that n n i like t more
thats actually a y that i flipped backwards loll

ShIfTeD
07-22-2006, 09:06 PM
yeah dont do that...i thought that was an x

just don&#39;t connect your letters until you go pro
connecting letters can looked fucked up if you dont do it right

prank
07-22-2006, 09:26 PM
ok thats cool

lost_for_evex
07-22-2006, 09:34 PM
Originally posted by fukbuff124@Jul 22 2006, 06:47 PM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k319/OTRwriter1/caosrezizeEEE.jpg
crits?
your 3d is way off.

aces
07-22-2006, 09:39 PM
Most of the stuff that I did in the little free time that I had. I had to mess with the brightness and contrast to let some of them be seen but can I get any crits? I changed my name to PACE and started doing simples because I realized that my style was going nowhere.



http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4581/picture078jb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ACES

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7171/picture080yu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7427/picture087vc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4696/picture093nx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2267/picture091ss3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
PACE

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4373/picture081xm3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4625/picture090yx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Unfinished PACE


http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2729/picture089yn7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/675/picture088ca3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9140/picture092lm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
YAEK (Scratch)

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4424/picture079lj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Unfinished CAN-D for a friend supposed to be CANDY but I hate Y&#39;s so I did CAN-D.

HEIST
07-22-2006, 10:12 PM
here we go again tell me how yah people feel
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c107/smackahoe3/SA400092.jpg

uhhh
07-22-2006, 10:17 PM
Originally posted by aces@Jul 22 2006, 09:39 PM
Most of the stuff that I did in the little free time that I had. I had to mess with the brightness and contrast to let some of them be seen but can I get any crits? I changed my name to PACE and started doing simples because I realized that my style was going nowhere.



http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4581/picture078jb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ACES

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7171/picture080yu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7427/picture087vc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4696/picture093nx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2267/picture091ss3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
PACE

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4373/picture081xm3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4625/picture090yx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Unfinished PACE


http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2729/picture089yn7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/675/picture088ca3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9140/picture092lm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
YAEK (Scratch)

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4424/picture079lj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Unfinished CAN-D for a friend supposed to be CANDY but I hate Y&#39;s so I did CAN-D.
stuffs not lookin to bad.

the other day i was contemplating going back to simples again(except do it for morethen a week this time) but then i came up with this whole new. well not whole. but cool idea for my letters. and now i like emm. i&#39;ll post emm up when my mom finds our camera she lost :(

pace1
07-22-2006, 11:08 PM
hey were you from. I write PACE also. just dont bite my P&#39;s and we got no problems

kronikbomber
07-22-2006, 11:47 PM
oh man i havnt been in this forum in forever and its still the same. everybody&#39;s making fun of everyone&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

Monster Island
07-23-2006, 12:09 AM
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/6861/img1997zc4.jpg

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5064/img1998vo0.jpg

Fosale!
07-23-2006, 12:19 AM
fuck you brah, sorry botu htihsj im messed up idk w.e
im gona be gone for 2 weeks, this forum will be better w/o me, w.e

HEIST
07-23-2006, 12:33 AM
says koze tell me whut yah think
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c107/smackahoe3/somemorekoze1.jpg

flclnaruto1213
07-23-2006, 12:42 AM
really feelin your shit monster island, just might be the best on the toys forums right now, keep it up.

fukbuff124
07-23-2006, 01:18 AM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k319/OTRwriter1/texaschaossketch.jpg

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k319/OTRwriter1/CAOSREZISESLFKDJYELLOW.jpg

anycrits ?

fukbuff124
07-23-2006, 01:21 AM
one wit H one wit out

Ekscyle
07-23-2006, 01:26 AM
Originally posted by fukbuff124@Jul 23 2006, 01:18 AM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k319/OTRwriter1/texaschaossketch.jpg

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k319/OTRwriter1/CAOSREZISESLFKDJYELLOW.jpg

anycrits ?
how long u been writin

ShIfTeD
07-23-2006, 01:36 AM
Originally posted by fukbuff124@Jul 23 2006, 01:18 AM
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k319/OTRwriter1/texaschaossketch.jpg

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k319/OTRwriter1/CAOSREZISESLFKDJYELLOW.jpg

anycrits ?
work on letter structure

work on fill tequineke

add some handstyle

fukbuff124
07-23-2006, 01:41 AM
i only been writen for a couple months
and handstyle has notin to do wit that

fukbuff124
07-23-2006, 01:44 AM
nvm i read wrong bout the handstyle but yeah i dunno thats kinda some old stuff

ShIfTeD
07-23-2006, 01:44 AM
ok good for you, dont ask for crits then

and every good piece includes some handstyle

ShIfTeD
07-23-2006, 01:45 AM
how can it be old stuff if youve only been writing for a couple months?

aren1
07-23-2006, 02:00 AM
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aren1
07-23-2006, 02:01 AM
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aren1
07-23-2006, 02:02 AM
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aren1
07-23-2006, 02:03 AM
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aren1
07-23-2006, 02:05 AM
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aren1
07-23-2006, 02:06 AM
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hmm some shit of mine.. i realy suck at charackters , the ones that are good and the stickyes are made by a m8 of mine , re.. please comment and contructive crticism plss ... er 4 all :P

Skeam
07-23-2006, 03:18 AM
i think i got ahead of myself a bit on the extensions, and the arrows were a bit of a bite. maybe i should keep workin on my simples... ohwell. any crits before i attempt to colour it?

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9984/hpim2038de2.jpg

fukbuff124
07-23-2006, 03:37 AM
the 3-d looks kinda funky on the M and theres only 3 arrows but my opinion go ahead and color it y not

DeathRow
07-23-2006, 04:21 AM
I think it looks pretty sweet skeam ^^^^




This is a fairly quick sketch, did this on a wall.. Havent got flicks yet though..

Crits wanted&#33; Thanx


http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/1434/p0723190712ic4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-23-2006, 07:59 AM
Originally posted by Skeam@Jul 23 2006, 03:18 AM
i think i got ahead of myself a bit on the extensions, and the arrows were a bit of a bite. maybe i should keep workin on my simples... ohwell. any crits before i attempt to colour it?

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9984/hpim2038de2.jpg
i like how the E goes into the A like that.

obseen
07-23-2006, 08:33 AM
^^
i think thats pretty dope

alive
07-23-2006, 09:34 AM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Jul 22 2006, 01:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Jul 22 2006, 01:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@Jul 21 2006, 08:43 AM
i decided to try my hand at the beserker toy battle word, i dont think ill enter this, this is more of a rough sketch before i try to actually do it. a pen freestyle. im suprised it came out this well tho, only abt 5 minutes. so, please, crits&#33;


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02536.jpg



thanks&#33;
Sorry, I forgot I promised you crits. ;)
It&#39;s got pretty solid letters and they&#39;re right for where you art at right now with skill. Alot of improvement over your older stuff. That said, if thats a battle entry, you should clean it up. All the writing around it really detracts from the piece and espescially the part you scribbled over. Pen freestyles are cool, but unless you&#39;re Lust One, I don&#39;t recommend them for battles, they just aren&#39;t gonna get proper attention. There are a few spots on the letters that could be fattened up and evened, but I can&#39;t see the pic as I&#39;m critiqueing since I quoted from another page.

As far as working on those simples that Kayone posted, If you&#39;re in toy forum, you should always practice them. I&#39;m not saying you have to do nothing but them, cuzz I know they&#39;re a bit boring to work on, but everyone in here should continually try them out. The only people I think are comepletely past simples are SKY5 and probably Robot Sex (and they can probably post in big boy thread if they want.). Everyone else should keep trying them. Even me. ;) [/b][/quote]
haha solid letters. u know how long ive been waiting to hear that? way to fucking long. thanks.


anyway SKEAM - i like it alot, but i do want to say that the E is a bit too covered. n theres a few little mistakes on 3d, like a line missing that should be comnig from the left leg of the M, and it stops a bit short on the left leg of the A. the last extension on the K doesnt really work when u look at it closely, and the arrows from the M and the K dont totally flow, i think it would look a lot better without the arrow from the K. try it. but its all a thousand times better then what i can do. i love it.

AMPED- straighter lines will make it look a lot better, try to keep your letters the same size. keep going.

so heres something pretty old, but i thought it was kind of an interesting style
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/5b7b7569.jpg

heres a clean version of the berserker that im working on
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02537-1.jpg

and finally, to all the new yorkers out there, ull appriciate this. one of my birthday presents from my dad.
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02540.jpg
gracing my desk at the moment but i might have it framed and put up on my wall



peace

knucks
07-23-2006, 10:39 AM
Originally posted by knucks@Jul 22 2006, 08:42 PM



http://content.bolt.com/uploads4/photo/8/7/8/7/4/5/878745/small/1153583762099.jpg (http:///knucks/photo/1684139)

CRITS????

flclnaruto1213
07-23-2006, 10:45 AM
Originally posted by Skeam@Jul 23 2006, 03:18 AM
i think i got ahead of myself a bit on the extensions, and the arrows were a bit of a bite. maybe i should keep workin on my simples... ohwell. any crits before i attempt to colour it?

http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9984/hpim2038de2.jpg
i like the arrows, they are well done. but usually one wouldnt cover up the other letters so much with them. like the arrow coming off the k.
try to work arrows in where theres gaps between letters, or just away. they dont look bad though. keep it up.

uhhh
07-23-2006, 10:45 AM
whats the word?

whoarethereal evil
07-23-2006, 11:17 AM
skeam isnt it?

BluegrassBomber
07-23-2006, 11:23 AM
I think its Smet

alive
07-23-2006, 11:24 AM
christ are you serious? its obviously skeam, besides, thats his screenname, or the fuck u wanna call it. but hes gotten enough talk. wut abt meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

whoarethereal evil
07-23-2006, 11:25 AM
oh naaaah man we gt confused i was talkin bout skeap he was talkin bout the guy above

alive
07-23-2006, 11:26 AM
Originally posted by knucks+Jul 23 2006, 10:39 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (knucks @ Jul 23 2006, 10:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-knucks@Jul 22 2006, 08:42 PM



http://content.bolt.com/uploads4/photo/8/7/8/7/4/5/878745/small/1153583762099.jpg (http:///knucks/photo/1684139)

CRITS???? [/b][/quote]
go SIMPLE. forget that you own markers. no color. no fills. itl hurt. but itl help.

keep going

whoarethereal evil
07-23-2006, 11:28 AM
yeah thts the 1 he was on bout :lol:


but yeah alive i do like urs get sum colur thrown in sum shadow itl look sick...everyone told me 2 make my lines clearner on mine bt i did use a biro which it looks like u have 2 so ye colour shadow clean lines


smet:

make the letter more recognizeable start with a basic letter shape then twist it an shit an leave out the detail in the coluring 4 no it distracts away frm the actually letter which is wht i reckon u need 2 focus on B)

alive
07-23-2006, 11:33 AM
ooooo haha i see now. sry for my exasperation. btw SMET ur M looks more like an N with a wierd extention. make it look like this: M

C3ZR ONE
07-23-2006, 11:41 AM
Alive- have you inked the cleaned up version yet? if not, I&#39;m thinking you should pull the extensions out a bit on the R&#39;s and the top of the K. Also maybe fatten up the bit at the top of the E

myl
07-23-2006, 12:05 PM
Originally posted by myl@Jul 22 2006, 01:18 AM
any one have any crits/suggestions?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0206.jpg
eh?

C3ZR ONE
07-23-2006, 12:11 PM
It&#39;s pretty nice. Good thickness on the 3d. Why don&#39;t you try coloring it? Hey, aren&#39;t you the one that benched havik? Where do you live? PM me if you don&#39;t wanna say in the thread.

myl
07-23-2006, 12:16 PM
thanks, now ill probably color it and fuck that part up haha. but nah dude its cool, i live in the buffalo area. i saw that freight roll by and snapped a flick real quick.

HEIST
07-23-2006, 01:02 PM
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c107/smackahoe3/SA400092.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c107/smackahoe3/somemorekoze1.jpg

bump... wonderin if the top one was simple enough?? i almost did a colored it then remember whut alive said.... then tryin out another name tell me whut you think

Twitch1
07-23-2006, 01:53 PM
yo alive where did u get that poster at??? i wanna snag one. Cezr1 i know ur boy wrek10 :P aiight heres some sketches n stuff since 4th of july.since then ive been trying new names. think im going with Twitch7

for a friend
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i194/TwitchOne/nicoledone1-1.jpg
tryin new things
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i194/TwitchOne/t1finish.jpg
scribbles turned to somethin
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i194/TwitchOne/twitch12color.jpg
pink throwup from yesterday
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i194/TwitchOne/t7pinkthrowup.jpg
and i jsut thought the 2 colors of bubbles were cool in this one
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i194/TwitchOne/t7purplenblack.jpg

alrite crit me and all that. plz dont be an ass and crit my scribbles or something. thaaanx

Krash
07-23-2006, 03:01 PM
your 3-d iz a lil off.but your letters are hard to distinguish form the others,a lil too contrasting for my taste.add some volume to your letters,and make sure their widths are equal. :)

Twitch1
07-23-2006, 03:50 PM
alrite thanx krash&#33; yee im self taught so i know i have flaws.

alive
07-23-2006, 04:09 PM
TWITCH-we&#39;re all self taught silly boy. sketch sketch sketch. i agree that theres way to much contrast, and remember, dont overlap your 3D with ur letters&#33; i think you should go simpler. itl help, trust me. as for the poster, i live in NYC, n they&#39;re up in the trains. i just tore one down from the 1 line. well actually my dad did. it was a birthday present.

CEZR&#33; i havent inked it yet, and i dont know exactly what u mean by the extensions. btw i noticed that ur still listed as an advanced member on the side. but u a mod. any reason y?

MYL- i wouldnt bring the loop part of the M down so low. dont extend your lines so far into the letters. start using curves and keeping the letters the same width all the way threw.

HEIST. im glad to see ur listening, tho i wouldnt have even bothered with the fill. but i suppose if it brings u pleasure. as long as you dont ink it. the reason for that is that it distracts you from the letter structure, which is what matters, and what you need to focus on. i can see that its a bit simpler, and i like it. heres what i suggest though - first, take it off the side of the page, put it in the center. itl b harder, but ul need the practice later. then, go even simpler. i mean really basic. but, use BLOCKS. not block letters, but blocks to form your letters. ill get up a sketch later to show you exactly what i mean if u dont know. then you can start using the blocks to show you where to add style and extensions. btw, ur def missing some 3D
finally, ur hiest looks a lot better then ur KOZE, but a name switch is advised.

phew, that was long, i hope it helps.



never stop

magic nyc
07-23-2006, 04:13 PM
I still need to snag me a fresh poster like that alive. All the ones ive seen on the train I hit up but havent took one. Cant get them out the case their in.

Fuck Vandal Squad

aces
07-23-2006, 04:36 PM
Originally posted by aces@Jul 22 2006, 10:39 PM
Most of the stuff that I did in the little free time that I had. I had to mess with the brightness and contrast to let some of them be seen but can I get any crits? I changed my name to PACE and started doing simples because I realized that my style was going nowhere.



http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4581/picture078jb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ACES

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7171/picture080yu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7427/picture087vc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4696/picture093nx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2267/picture091ss3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
PACE

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4373/picture081xm3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4625/picture090yx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Unfinished PACE


http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2729/picture089yn7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/675/picture088ca3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9140/picture092lm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
YAEK (Scratch)

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4424/picture079lj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Unfinished CAN-D for a friend supposed to be CANDY but I hate Y&#39;s so I did CAN-D.
BUMP for crits.

MF Feed Letter
07-23-2006, 04:36 PM
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1442.jpg

didnt come out they way i thoguth it would

Twitch1
07-23-2006, 04:43 PM
haaa i ment that as i havent asked for help b4 and all that.. but thanks man. i might just post another pic later on to show where im at.

WolfBurrns
07-23-2006, 04:43 PM
More new shit. Personally, I dont think it&#39;s my best. Cant really place why. Oh well.
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/untitled2.jpg

CRITS?

obseen
07-23-2006, 04:45 PM
^ block letters maybe
that berzerker piece is fukin dope and aces, im quite likin the pace pieces, no sure about the tags though

WolfBurrns
07-23-2006, 04:48 PM
Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Jul 23 2006, 04:43 PM
More new shit. Personally, I dont think it&#39;s my best. Cant really place why. Oh well.
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/untitled2.jpg

CRITS?
Bumpage.. Hate being at the bottom of the page.

MF Feed Letter
07-23-2006, 04:53 PM
letters and handstyle are horrid but colorings decent whats it say capo?

WolfBurrns
07-23-2006, 04:56 PM
Horrid? Okay.. That gives me a ton of ideas on how to improve. Thanks. And yeah, Says Capo.

MF Feed Letter
07-23-2006, 05:02 PM
ya it means change your structure

alive
07-23-2006, 05:10 PM
lol dont worry wolf. heres what i want u to do. GO SIMPLE&#33; STOP COLORING. STOP FILLING. focus on the letters. go back a page, and read what i said to HEIST. a lot of it applies to you. all of it, except that u alrdy moved off the side of the page.


and now HEIST and i suppose WOLF and most ppl here. what i promised. this is pretty rough, but u should get the idea. remember of course eventually you would fill the letters in so you wouldnt see the blocks, or bars and it would look a lot better, trust me. but for now, let me see them.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02541.jpg


PS. MF FEED. fucking hott. ur ona the best here. and so damn clean.

btw cezr, and feed, what do u think of my little progression i mapped up? good advice? maybe ill make a nice one

alive
07-23-2006, 06:41 PM
so sry for athe double post in advance, its been a while since that post, but things are moving slow here right now i guess.


anyway, so i was doing an exchange for uhhhh, who writes EHKU, but i stupidly wrote down ESKU, and took that to my room to work on. so then i couldnt figure out a nice K to match with the style, so i changed it to a C, and figured that would do. but now i realized that that&#39;l make it 2 letters off, one of which is TOTALLY off, which for a 4 letter word, is too much. so im just gonna post the sketch here. i like it though, so gimmie some crits please&#33; btw, excuse the orange squarish thing on the right, that bled through from another page i was working on.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02544Small.jpg



thanks,
peace.

gm_wise
07-23-2006, 07:34 PM
Just started drawin random lines and it turnd into this, the pens i used 2 colour it are cheap crappy felt tip pens u&#39;d use for school but if u skint ur eyes a bit u can see what it&#39;s sposed to look like..haha

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5247/dsc00623js5.jpg

crits welcome

A-Town Bomber
07-23-2006, 07:36 PM
http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/3645/runykk4.th.jpg (http://img50.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runykk4.jpg)
I didn&#39;t know what to do with the "Y" so it looks retarted...

jerm_mtl
07-23-2006, 07:42 PM
wtf is that "A town bomber", plz dont bomb that

ZoNe1
07-23-2006, 07:49 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g293/ZoNe_bucket/07-23-06_1737.jpg
andhttp://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g293/ZoNe_bucket/07-23-06_1738.jpg
Crtiz please sorry for bad flix gay camrea phone sucks balls

---CRoR---
07-23-2006, 07:53 PM
something im thinkin to throw up sometime
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3631/im002542ul3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



CRITS&#33;

sheltr
07-23-2006, 08:02 PM
yo trying to develop some tagging shit isnt workin too well though :-/

WolfBurrns
07-23-2006, 08:08 PM
Originally posted by alive@Jul 23 2006, 06:41 PM
so sry for athe double post in advance, its been a while since that post, but things are moving slow here right now i guess.


anyway, so i was doing an exchange for uhhhh, who writes EHKU, but i stupidly wrote down ESKU, and took that to my room to work on. so then i couldnt figure out a nice K to match with the style, so i changed it to a C, and figured that would do. but now i realized that that&#39;l make it 2 letters off, one of which is TOTALLY off, which for a 4 letter word, is too much. so im just gonna post the sketch here. i like it though, so gimmie some crits please&#33; btw, excuse the orange squarish thing on the right, that bled through from another page i was working on.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02544Small.jpg



thanks,
peace.
Your 3d is off in alot of places. And the red outline you have could be alot cleaner.

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-23-2006, 08:21 PM
Originally posted by &#045;&#045;&#045;CRoR&#045;&#045;&#045;@Jul 23 2006, 07:53 PM
something im thinkin to throw up sometime
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3631/im002542ul3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
i like the handstyle.

uhhh
07-23-2006, 08:37 PM
before erasing:
http://i7.tinypic.com/20svmz8.jpg
after erasing:
http://i7.tinypic.com/20svqz8.jpg

and heres some canvases i did earlier. well one canvas. one mirror.
canvas:
http://i7.tinypic.com/20svi0z.jpg
mirror:
http://i7.tinypic.com/20svsw0.jpg

---CRoR---
07-23-2006, 08:49 PM
yeh my handie is my fave thing to do right now iunno why

ZoNe1
07-23-2006, 08:50 PM
Originally posted by ZoNe1@Jul 23 2006, 07:49 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g293/ZoNe_bucket/07-23-06_1737.jpg
andhttp://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g293/ZoNe_bucket/07-23-06_1738.jpg
Crtiz please sorry for bad flix gay camrea phone sucks balls
Bump cus i want crits

---CRoR---
07-23-2006, 08:51 PM
fix that K&#33;

magic nyc
07-23-2006, 09:57 PM
Not such bad canvas :)

Monster Island
07-23-2006, 10:05 PM
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/9766/img2000eg4.jpg


crits?

ShIfTeD
07-23-2006, 10:33 PM
http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/5130/relaxwh6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

for the relax throwup battle

alive
07-23-2006, 10:39 PM
o boy&#33; i think minel beat that&#33; il put it up later. lol
round ur letters, flat tops n bottoms look terrible

magic nyc
07-23-2006, 10:40 PM
Atleast its got character...

ShIfTeD
07-23-2006, 10:41 PM
hell nah&#33;
thats the style right there, i didnt round it for a reason

alive
07-23-2006, 10:55 PM
i guess i see that, but i was thinking about it from a little more of a technical point of view as its a throw up. i dont think it would look very good on a wall like that, and straight lines are harder to paint. but hey&#33; dont let me get u down, just a style, maybe we have diff taste.


dont stop

ShIfTeD
07-23-2006, 10:56 PM
nice point of view ther bud ;) post pics of yours so i know what im up against :D

alive
07-23-2006, 11:01 PM
Originally posted by WolfBurrns+Jul 23 2006, 08:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (WolfBurrns &#064; Jul 23 2006, 08:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@Jul 23 2006, 06:41 PM
so sry for athe double post in advance, its been a while since that post, but things are moving slow here right now i guess.


anyway, so i was doing an exchange for uhhhh, who writes EHKU, but i stupidly wrote down ESKU, and took that to my room to work on. so then i couldnt figure out a nice K to match with the style, so i changed it to a C, and figured that would do. but now i realized that that&#39;l make it 2 letters off, one of which is TOTALLY off, which for a 4 letter word, is too much. so im just gonna post the sketch here. i like it though, so gimmie some crits please&#33; btw, excuse the orange squarish thing on the right, that bled through from another page i was working on.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02544Small.jpg



thanks,
peace.
Your 3d is off in alot of places. And the red outline you have could be alot cleaner. [/b][/quote]
well, as for the 3D i dont really see the mistakes. could u point them out? im sure ill see em big, n feel pretty dumb when u do, so i cant wait&#33; :rolleyes:

as for the forcefield, its actually orange, and it doesnt look nearly that bad in person, the camera magnifies it so it looks a lot worse. trust me. it sounds like BS but i swear&#33; and its a bleedy marker on copy paper. i defy you to make lines that are much cleaner then that with prisma on copy paper.

any other crits?



anyone?


thanks.


ps. the throw is coming soon. . .

ShIfTeD
07-23-2006, 11:11 PM
make sure your marker lines are straight and clean
its good tho

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
07-24-2006, 12:01 AM
dude, uhhh, i love the mirror piece. nice job.

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
07-24-2006, 12:03 AM
Ive been gone fore a month in Georgia. Heres everything ive drawn. Dont take it all completley serious. some of these are doodles. i hope you have the sense to tell the difference lol. Crits/Comments appreciated

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7382/picturejl5.jpg

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5945/picture001kb6.jpg

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/1568/picture002he1.jpg

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/6784/picture003km8.jpg

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5070/picture004bh4.jpg

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9096/picture005yj6.jpg

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/3396/picture006ll6.jpg

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8530/picture007rw0.jpg

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/7371/picture008gy4.jpg

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2765/picture009ih3.jpg

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2724/picture010vc5.jpg

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5446/picture011xb5.jpg

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8408/picture012ut5.jpg

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/6839/picture013yb8.jpg

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2887/picture014xd8.jpg

ZoNe1
07-24-2006, 12:04 AM
Some more fuck around shit i did http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g293/ZoNe_bucket/07-23-06_1940.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g293/ZoNe_bucket/07-23-06_1736.jpg
Crits please O and shitty flix cus of the camera phone yall know that shit sucks

ShIfTeD
07-24-2006, 12:08 AM
too dark

myl
07-24-2006, 01:04 AM
colored and shit

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0302.jpg

SARMONE
07-24-2006, 01:35 AM
(http://imageshack.us)

"block buster"

[img]http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/2694/0723062313ajh4.th.jpg (http://img231.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0723062313ajh4.jpg)

quick one so small so u cant really see the 3d

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/2694/0723062313ajh4.th.jpg (http://img231.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0723062313ajh4.jpg)

SARMONE
07-24-2006, 01:36 AM
shit i posted the same one twice

[img=http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/3070/0723062111aiu4.jpg] (http://imageshack.us)

SARMONE
07-24-2006, 01:37 AM
http://img204.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0723062111aiu4.jpg

doomsayer
07-24-2006, 01:46 AM
Originally posted by doomsayer+Jul 22 2006, 05:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (doomsayer @ Jul 22 2006, 05:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-doomsayer@Jul 22 2006, 06:49 AM
meh, drew it out cleaner and colored it, crits? what u think? i think this is the best sketch ive done so far. but thats just me

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/1744d9d4.jpg
bump for crits [/b][/quote]
anyone gunne give me some critds?

ShIfTeD
07-24-2006, 01:57 AM
yeah man dont do arrows...nice fill tho

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
07-24-2006, 02:01 AM
i like your S

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-24-2006, 02:28 AM
Originally posted by doomsayer+Jul 24 2006, 01:46 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (doomsayer @ Jul 24 2006, 01:46 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by doomsayer@Jul 22 2006, 05:29 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-doomsayer@Jul 22 2006, 06:49 AM
meh, drew it out cleaner and colored it, crits? what u think? i think this is the best sketch ive done so far. but thats just me

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/1744d9d4.jpg
bump for crits
anyone gunne give me some critds? [/b][/quote]
is that supposed to say akes or ames? because the "piece" looks like akes, but the "handstyle" under it looks like ames...

ShIfTeD
07-24-2006, 02:30 AM
i believe from previous pics it says AKES

doomsayer
07-24-2006, 02:59 AM
yeah its true i originally deisgned it as AKES and then sort of merged to AMES because i couldnt do any sort of tags in with a K but yeah its AKES and the handtyle does say AMES because i suck at Ks with handstyles. so be honest with me, does it suck or is it ok? should i keep working on it?

ShIfTeD
07-24-2006, 03:02 AM
yump keep working on it :D

doomsayer
07-24-2006, 03:06 AM
ok so its worht being worked on? but be hionest pleeeasssee if i draw it on my skateboad will i regret drawing it onto my deck ion a few days/weeks i really want to know if it sucks or not just be honest

ShIfTeD
07-24-2006, 03:12 AM
it doesnt completely suck, but its not wort puting on a skateboard...in about a year you&#39;ll be really good and you&#39;ll look back and say "fuck why didnt i wait?"

just keep practicing until it looksperfect...then put it on the deck

doomsayer
07-24-2006, 03:21 AM
haha in a year, skateboards only last me about 2-3 weeks, its just i drew a tag on there when i thought the tag was real nice, then in two or three days i hated it. i snapped that deck about 1 weeks ago and have a new one to work with, if i draw it on, are other skaters/graffers around me going to think it sucks and will i realize that it sucks in a few days and regeret drawing it?

aces
07-24-2006, 07:27 AM
Originally posted by aces+Jul 23 2006, 05:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Jul 23 2006, 05:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Jul 22 2006, 10:39 PM
Most of the stuff that I did in the little free time that I had. I had to mess with the brightness and contrast to let some of them be seen but can I get any crits? I changed my name to PACE and started doing simples because I realized that my style was going nowhere.



http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4581/picture078jb7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ACES

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7171/picture080yu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/7427/picture087vc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/4696/picture093nx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2267/picture091ss3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
PACE

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4373/picture081xm3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4625/picture090yx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Unfinished PACE


http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2729/picture089yn7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/675/picture088ca3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/9140/picture092lm7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
YAEK (Scratch)

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4424/picture079lj3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Unfinished CAN-D for a friend supposed to be CANDY but I hate Y&#39;s so I did CAN-D.
BUMP for crits. [/b][/quote]
Bump again. My stuff hasn&#39;t gotten any crits.

molotow_15
07-24-2006, 07:51 AM
Originally posted by alive+Jul 24 2006, 05:01 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Jul 24 2006, 05:01 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Jul 23 2006, 08:08 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-alive@Jul 23 2006, 06:41 PM
so sry for athe double post in advance, its been a while since that post, but things are moving slow here right now i guess.


anyway, so i was doing an exchange for uhhhh, who writes EHKU, but i stupidly wrote down ESKU, and took that to my room to work on. so then i couldnt figure out a nice K to match with the style, so i changed it to a C, and figured that would do. but now i realized that that&#39;l make it 2 letters off, one of which is TOTALLY off, which for a 4 letter word, is too much. so im just gonna post the sketch here. i like it though, so gimmie some crits please&#33; btw, excuse the orange squarish thing on the right, that bled through from another page i was working on.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02544Small.jpg



thanks,
peace.
Your 3d is off in alot of places. And the red outline you have could be alot cleaner.
well, as for the 3D i dont really see the mistakes. could u point them out? im sure ill see em big, n feel pretty dumb when u do, so i cant wait&#33; :rolleyes:

as for the forcefield, its actually orange, and it doesnt look nearly that bad in person, the camera magnifies it so it looks a lot worse. trust me. it sounds like BS but i swear&#33; and its a bleedy marker on copy paper. i defy you to make lines that are much cleaner then that with prisma on copy paper.

any other crits?



anyone?


thanks.


ps. the throw is coming soon. . . [/b][/quote]
dont go all the way back to the point of perspective
cut it off half way :rolleyes:

uhhh
07-24-2006, 08:17 AM
Originally posted by uhhh@Jul 23 2006, 08:37 PM
some canvases i did earlier. well one canvas. one mirror.
canvas:
http://i7.tinypic.com/20svi0z.jpg
mirror:
http://i7.tinypic.com/20svsw0.jpg
bumpism

alive
07-24-2006, 09:09 AM
Originally posted by doomsayer+Jul 24 2006, 03:21 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (doomsayer &#064; Jul 24 2006, 03:21 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> haha in a year, skateboards only last me about 2-3 weeks, its just i drew a tag on there when i thought the tag was real nice, then in two or three days i hated it. i snapped that deck about 1 weeks ago and have a new one to work with, if i draw it on, are other skaters/graffers around me going to think it sucks and will i realize that it sucks in a few days and regeret drawing it? [/b]
the honest truth? it sucks. hopefully you will progress and see that soon. other WRITERS (not graffers, writers, remember that) dont put it on your deck, ull look dumb. it hurts to hear that i know, but im not telling you to give up. theres a depressingly high turnover rate here in the toy forum, but believe me, you will improve. later on today im gonna put up some of my begining sketches. youll see.
sketch sketch sketch. BASIC letters, dont worry about color right now, focus on the letters, not as much fun, but itl help.

keep going.


ps.
<!--QuoteBegin-molotow_15
dont go all the way back to the point of perspective
cut it off half way [/quote]

i usually dont, just thought it might make for a nice change in scenery. thanks though&#33;

DistortedThoughtz
07-24-2006, 09:21 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/a_s_h/402f1799.jpg

Any Crits?

alive
07-24-2006, 09:30 AM
loose the arrows. straighten the lines. go a bit more basic. loose the bits. dont worry abt the forcefield. keep the letters the same size. put the handy at the bottom. loose the extentions with no basis. loose the drippy things. go back a page to where i posted my "progression of letters." read up. u show potentional, but ur trying too hard.

keep going


FROM NOW ON, DO NOT POST YOUR OWN WORK, AND ASK FOR CRITS, WITHOUT GIVING AT LEAST ONE PIECE OF ADVICE TO SOMEONE ELSE. ITS GIVE AND TAKE.

DistortedThoughtz
07-24-2006, 09:41 AM
Okay Thanks Man.

myl
07-24-2006, 09:51 AM
first attempt at semi-wildstyle...crits please.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0304.jpg

alive
07-24-2006, 10:03 AM
it seems like you forgot to use your eraser. u need to connect the lines that form your letters. but i dont think you should be trying anything related to wildstyle. no one in this thread should be. you should be staying basic, and starting to add curves to your work. all ive ever seen from you are totally straight lines. also, dont have all your lines end square. . . and then one be pointed (the M). start to round your square edges. and i wouldnt extend the middle of the M down so far, you always seem to do that. finally, i think you only did it to work in ur "wild" attempt, but dont tilt one letter (the M) and then keep the others straight.

btw i nvr got a chance to say, your coloring job on ur last piece looks fantastic.


keep going



ps. read the red font in my last post plz

alive
07-24-2006, 10:05 AM
Originally posted by uhhh+Jul 24 2006, 08:17 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (uhhh &#064; Jul 24 2006, 08:17 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Jul 23 2006, 08:37 PM
some canvases i did earlier. well one canvas. one mirror.
canvas:
http://i7.tinypic.com/20svi0z.jpg
mirror:
http://i7.tinypic.com/20svsw0.jpg
bumpism [/b][/quote]
try to put some curves into your handstyle. go a bit more basic with ur pieces. i like the way they look overall, but the letters are lacking. go a bit more basic. dont worry about coloring stuff right now. its fun and tempting, but itl have more benefits in the long run to focus on the letters.



sry for the double post.
keep going

EatRichPeople
07-24-2006, 11:11 AM
aces..stuff looks good...most of em have good letterstructure and the stickers look good aswel...not really feeling the first one but most of the pencil sketches seem asif they can result in something nice.

peace

SARMONE
07-24-2006, 12:12 PM
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/3576/0723062313auq9.th.jpg (http://img68.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0723062313auq9.jpg)

SARMONE
07-24-2006, 12:14 PM
http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/1345/0723062111azh0.th.jpg (http://img68.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0723062111azh0.jpg)

pace1
07-24-2006, 12:15 PM
not at all start more basic

WolfBurrns
07-24-2006, 12:27 PM
Originally posted by alive+Jul 23 2006, 11:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Jul 23 2006, 11:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Jul 23 2006, 08:08 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-alive@Jul 23 2006, 06:41 PM
so sry for athe double post in advance, its been a while since that post, but things are moving slow here right now i guess.


anyway, so i was doing an exchange for uhhhh, who writes EHKU, but i stupidly wrote down ESKU, and took that to my room to work on. so then i couldnt figure out a nice K to match with the style, so i changed it to a C, and figured that would do. but now i realized that that&#39;l make it 2 letters off, one of which is TOTALLY off, which for a 4 letter word, is too much. so im just gonna post the sketch here. i like it though, so gimmie some crits please&#33; btw, excuse the orange squarish thing on the right, that bled through from another page i was working on.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02544Small.jpg



thanks,
peace.
Your 3d is off in alot of places. And the red outline you have could be alot cleaner.
well, as for the 3D i dont really see the mistakes. could u point them out? im sure ill see em big, n feel pretty dumb when u do, so i cant wait&#33; :rolleyes:

as for the forcefield, its actually orange, and it doesnt look nearly that bad in person, the camera magnifies it so it looks a lot worse. trust me. it sounds like BS but i swear&#33; and its a bleedy marker on copy paper. i defy you to make lines that are much cleaner then that with prisma on copy paper.

any other crits?



anyone?


thanks.


ps. the throw is coming soon. . . [/b][/quote]
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/untitled-1.jpg

I understand the outline. I know how things distort when you take up close pics of them.

alive
07-24-2006, 01:02 PM
aiight thanks, i cant believe i missed that line on the E, how retarded was that? i need to go fix that immediately. the rest doesnt look so bad when its in person tho, its much much smaller. but ur completely right.

thanks
peace

pace1
07-24-2006, 01:13 PM
Escu keep working on your simples.

taking some tips. heres a new one.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pace123.jpg

alive
07-24-2006, 01:25 PM
haha escu happens to be me, COERCE, i dont write ESCU, was for an exchange. and it was a tiny sketch, the camera magnified it so much it looks a lot worse then it is. i swear&#33; but even so i can still do better then that. i swear. lol. you should try to keep your lines all the same width. the loop of the P is way to narrow compared to the rest. and the cross of the A is also a bit too thin.

keep going

myl
07-24-2006, 02:43 PM
Originally posted by myl@Jul 24 2006, 09:51 AM
first attempt at semi-wildstyle...crits please.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0304.jpg
ok i messed with this and used your advice alive...this is what i turned that ^^ into...which i think is much better but i know it still needs work...

i think the extension of the Y is too long so i think ill change that after i post this...anything else anyone?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0305.jpg

sky 5
07-24-2006, 03:23 PM
mf letter - i wanted to bump your berzerker but its too far back

myl - in my opinion thats not semi-wildstyle, its more bar or noodle to me. i think waht i do is semi-wildstyle, you dont wanna see one of my true wildstyles. as for a crit, bend/curve your letters alil more and try to entertwine tham better

pace - it shows your righthandded cuz it leans NE, beforee you start sketching draw a straight line or start at the bottom of the page but your well on your way to gettin decent. personal prefernce but i hate that style of "a&#39; in your handie

eype
07-24-2006, 03:24 PM
k
i want the brutal and honest truth about this snipet of my peices
i write eype
please help....... :(

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/2260/1005881wi4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
current throwie
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/4672/1005884vt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alive
07-24-2006, 03:33 PM
MYL - wow&#33; i think its a huge improvement. ur still thinking a bit wild, which i disapprove of, but moving beyond that for the moment, the the biggest problems are one: the top of the Y looks unnaturally huge. i think i see what your going for, but it just doesnt work. pull it in so its a natural shape. next, i would shorten the overextention of the M if u know wut im talking abt. then on the Y where you tried to continue the striaght line with the little edge, it just doesnt work, get rid of it. finally your L looks to much like a Z, so shorten that, and shorten where it overextends at the bottom. and i think the L would look better with this shape: ( instead of ) if u know wut i mean. bend it the other way. and i would get rid of the extention of the bottom of the L to the right too. ok so the real final piece of advice, is to round some of the things u passed over. the only edge that really shouldnt be rounded is the connection of the M and the Y.

christ thats long. but i hope it helps. remember, im just a toy too, but i try my best. so really, i would stop this and go simple. but since i just saw such improvement, i guess u can keep fooling with it. but next sketch please go simple.

EYP- pieces look good. go a little simpler. dont worry about the connections. but i would seperate the top of the y. it actually kind of looks like it says COPE at first. lol. i hate the throws tho. but then again, i always dilike that style.

peace.
good luck.
dont stop.


PS. sky is right, its not really semi-wildstyle, its hard to describe, but its your level wildstyle if u know wut i mean.

magic nyc
07-24-2006, 04:08 PM
EYP- throwie gay, piece is sexy though

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
07-24-2006, 04:43 PM
Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Jul 24 2006, 12:03 AM
Ive been gone fore a month in Georgia. Heres everything ive drawn. Dont take it all completley serious. some of these are doodles. i hope you have the sense to tell the difference lol. Crits/Comments appreciated

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7382/picturejl5.jpg

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5945/picture001kb6.jpg

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/1568/picture002he1.jpg

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/6784/picture003km8.jpg

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/5070/picture004bh4.jpg

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9096/picture005yj6.jpg

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/3396/picture006ll6.jpg

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8530/picture007rw0.jpg

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/7371/picture008gy4.jpg

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2765/picture009ih3.jpg

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/2724/picture010vc5.jpg

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5446/picture011xb5.jpg

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/8408/picture012ut5.jpg

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/6839/picture013yb8.jpg

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/2887/picture014xd8.jpg
Bump.

Btw, is Web on this forum?

bombed
07-24-2006, 05:18 PM
Originally posted by bombed@Jul 24 2006, 04:15 PM
here are some of my sketches and shit....these are thick old, but imma get som e more up once i get a scanner haha

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y110/scene2005/scene.jpg

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y110/scene2005/make.jpg
obvious fcuk up on the 3D, and i write scene not make...just did make for a friend
i found another from 04 haha....C/C please&#33;&#33; thanks

http://ezgraphicstudio.com/upload/images/unoriginal/scene04.jpg

bourbon
07-24-2006, 07:18 PM
EYP im feeling that throwie but i cant really see your piece that much but some of the 3D looks out of whack.

ill post a sketch up soon of mine

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-24-2006, 07:43 PM
Originally posted by eype@Jul 24 2006, 03:24 PM
k
i want the brutal and honest truth about this snipet of my peices
i write eype
please help....... :(

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/2260/1005881wi4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
current throwie
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/4672/1005884vt6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Im diggin the throwie...But I&#39;m a throwie person anyways.

The piece is dope too...except i think you should get rid of the little curly thing on the e.

edit: and don&#39;t connect your letters.

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-24-2006, 07:56 PM
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j42/Manchgraff603/Picture053.jpg


just a throwie i&#39;ve been working on.

crits?

ZoNe1
07-24-2006, 08:19 PM
Originally posted by ZoNe1+Jul 23 2006, 08:50 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ZoNe1 @ Jul 23 2006, 08:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ZoNe1@Jul 23 2006, 07:49 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g293/ZoNe_bucket/07-23-06_1737.jpg
andhttp://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g293/ZoNe_bucket/07-23-06_1738.jpg
Crtiz please sorry for bad flix gay camrea phone sucks balls
[/b][/quote]
Bump ill have more shit up later but critz?

uhhh
07-24-2006, 08:27 PM
that r is f-f-f-f-f-freshh. the a is regularly fresh. the ne is kind plain though..

uhhh
07-24-2006, 08:31 PM
Originally posted by alive+Jul 24 2006, 10:05 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Jul 24 2006, 10:05 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by uhhh@Jul 24 2006, 08:17 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-uhhh@Jul 23 2006, 08:37 PM
some canvases i did earlier. well one canvas. one mirror.
canvas:
http://i7.tinypic.com/20svi0z.jpg
mirror:
http://i7.tinypic.com/20svsw0.jpg
bumpism
try to put some curves into your handstyle. go a bit more basic with ur pieces. i like the way they look overall, but the letters are lacking. go a bit more basic. dont worry about coloring stuff right now. its fun and tempting, but itl have more benefits in the long run to focus on the letters.



sry for the double post.
keep going [/b][/quote]
thanks for the crits. i tweaked out the h a little more and am quite happy with it. the k i tweaked more and is on the way. i&#39;m trying new stuff on the e and not findsing anything i really really like. as for the handstyle comment. thats not my handstyle its more... trying be artsy on my cnavas... hah.

Venom.
07-24-2006, 08:40 PM
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/2715/venomspray1smallfr0.jpg

Crits would be awesome.

alive
07-24-2006, 08:45 PM
welcome to the BombingScience forums. forget you own color markers. keep the strokes of your letters all the same width. continue practicing block letters.

keep going

alive
07-24-2006, 08:46 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Jul 24 2006, 08:27 PM
that r is f-f-f-f-f-freshh. the a is regularly fresh. the ne is kind plain though..
666 posts. i just had to point that out.

uhhh
07-24-2006, 08:55 PM
ACTUALLY THAT POST WAS IN THE TOY THROWIE EXCHANGE. SHIT. NOW I GOT 667 :(

edit-sorry about the caps

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-24-2006, 08:56 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Jul 24 2006, 08:27 PM
that r is f-f-f-f-f-freshh. the a is regularly fresh. the ne is kind plain though..
yeah...ive had the RA down for a bit...i cant think of anything ill to do with the NE...but I like it for now...Ima have to go paint it somewhere this week.

fukbuff124
07-24-2006, 09:11 PM
evok it looks to me like the shading needs work it looks off

TricksForKids
07-24-2006, 09:26 PM
Whats up you animals?

Chop Logic
07-24-2006, 09:28 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/67f44330.jpg

random sketch from today, fucked up the R, don&#39;t know why i did it like that I never do it like that. oh well.

magic nyc
07-24-2006, 10:32 PM
Your getting you style now, but im dislikeing some overlapping thats all. its a pet peeve of mine.

xKaLiBeR
07-24-2006, 11:00 PM
http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/5391/xkalhr2.th.jpg (http://img170.imageshack.us/my.php?image=xkalhr2.jpg)
I know the lines are off cuz I used a open and tried to make the lines darker by goin over it but I just ended up fkin it up.....CRITS??

bombed
07-24-2006, 11:08 PM
Originally posted by bombed+Jul 24 2006, 05:18 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (bombed &#064; Jul 24 2006, 05:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-bombed@Jul 24 2006, 04:15 PM
here are some of my sketches and shit....these are thick old, but imma get som e more up once i get a scanner haha

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y110/scene2005/scene.jpg

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y110/scene2005/make.jpg
obvious fcuk up on the 3D, and i write scene not make...just did make for a friend
i found another haha....C/C please&#33;&#33; thanks

http://ezgraphicstudio.com/upload/images/unoriginal/scene04.jpg[/b][/quote]
http://members.lycos.co.uk/utsc/bump.gif

pace1
07-24-2006, 11:40 PM
^^^^^stick to your simples and block letters. trust me and everyone else.

Pace simple.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/CIMG0157.jpg

myl
07-25-2006, 12:07 AM
Originally posted by alive@Jul 24 2006, 03:33 PM
MYL - wow&#33; i think its a huge improvement. ur still thinking a bit wild, which i disapprove of, but moving beyond that for the moment, the the biggest problems are one: the top of the Y looks unnaturally huge. i think i see what your going for, but it just doesnt work. pull it in so its a natural shape. next, i would shorten the overextention of the M if u know wut im talking abt. then on the Y where you tried to continue the striaght line with the little edge, it just doesnt work, get rid of it. finally your L looks to much like a Z, so shorten that, and shorten where it overextends at the bottom. and i think the L would look better with this shape: ( instead of ) if u know wut i mean. bend it the other way. and i would get rid of the extention of the bottom of the L to the right too. ok so the real final piece of advice, is to round some of the things u passed over. the only edge that really shouldnt be rounded is the connection of the M and the Y.

christ thats long. but i hope it helps. remember, im just a toy too, but i try my best. so really, i would stop this and go simple. but since i just saw such improvement, i guess u can keep fooling with it. but next sketch please go simple.

EYP- pieces look good. go a little simpler. dont worry about the connections. but i would seperate the top of the y. it actually kind of looks like it says COPE at first. lol. i hate the throws tho. but then again, i always dilike that style.

peace.
good luck.
dont stop.


PS. sky is right, its not really semi-wildstyle, its hard to describe, but its your level wildstyle if u know wut i mean.
thanks man. even though you say youre toy, you know a shitload more than i do...thanks again.

bourbon
07-25-2006, 12:08 AM
im liking your simple pace except there is like a grew rectangle under the "c" and i cant see what its for as the "e&#33;" are in exclamation marks, so just remember with over lapping not to do it to much, as long as u can still see the word.

BERZK sketch i did, crits please, just trying to work on letter structure, out line is poor coz only using a pencil and didnt have enuff time to resharpen it but u get the idea, crists on structure, didnt know whether it was worth it to colour and put a drop shadow on it.

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1250/berzkcu5.jpg

pace1
07-25-2006, 12:12 AM
do it a the bottom of the page and barley round sharp cormners and make the thicknesses the same in the letters.

bourbon
07-25-2006, 12:15 AM
thanks but do you mean barely round sharp corners ?

pace1
07-25-2006, 12:18 AM
um in stead of sharp lines like a straight letter just soft corners. if that helps.

bourbon
07-25-2006, 12:21 AM
mine are soft arent they ? there not sharp :S

pace1
07-25-2006, 12:23 AM
oh srry should have specified that you should do a new on really simple like that more blockletters thought with soft edges. yeah know

bourbon
07-25-2006, 12:35 AM
ill do another sketch tomorrow

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-25-2006, 01:17 AM
Originally posted by Rane *DF* *HM*@Jul 24 2006, 07:56 PM
http://i77.photobucket.com/albums/j42/Manchgraff603/Picture053.jpg


just a throwie i&#39;ve been working on.

crits?
bumperoni...

ignore the dots in the letters...as they are extremely homosexual.

thank you.

bourbon
07-25-2006, 01:37 AM
i dont like how your first letter is smaller than the others apart from that its looking fairly dope.

ShIfTeD
07-25-2006, 01:54 AM
nah i like it..just make the last letter the same size as the 1st

nice tho keep that shit up

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-25-2006, 02:12 AM
thanks guys...the r isnt supposed to be smaller than the rest of the letters...its just fucked up. :P

AbEc187
07-25-2006, 06:28 AM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/6896/weirdstyle013cy0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

leaks
07-25-2006, 07:44 AM
dont really know wat that is but watever rane ur shit def lookin good i would fix the a a little but its lookin all good

ZoNe1
07-25-2006, 09:43 AM
Somthen new i did lastnight before i passed out http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g293/ZoNe_bucket/07-24-06_1909.jpg

Critz please

alive
07-25-2006, 10:25 AM
Originally posted by myl+Jul 25 2006, 12:07 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (myl &#064; Jul 25 2006, 12:07 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-alive@Jul 24 2006, 03:33 PM
MYL - wow&#33; i think its a huge improvement. ur still thinking a bit wild, which i disapprove of, but moving beyond that for the moment, theĀ* the biggest problems are one: the top of the Y looks unnaturally huge. i think i see what your going for, but it just doesnt work. pull it in so its a natural shape. next, i would shorten the overextention of the M if u know wut im talking abt. then on the Y where you tried to continue the striaght line with the little edge, it just doesnt work, get rid of it. finally your L looks to much like a Z, so shorten that, and shorten where it overextends at the bottom. and i think the L would look better with this shape: ( instead of ) if u know wut i mean. bend it the other way. and i would get rid of the extention of the bottom of the L to the right too. ok so the real final piece of advice, is to round some of the things u passed over. the only edge that really shouldnt be rounded is the connection of the M and the Y.

christ thats long. but i hope it helps. remember, im just a toy too, but i try my best. so really, i would stop this and go simple. but since i just saw such improvement, i guess u can keep fooling with it. but next sketch please go simple.

EYP- pieces look good. go a little simpler. dont worry about the connections. but i would seperate the top of the y. it actually kind of looks like it says COPE at first. lol. i hate the throws tho. but then again, i always dilike that style.

peace.
good luck.
dont stop.


PS. sky is right, its not really semi-wildstyle, its hard to describe, but its your level wildstyle if u know wut i mean.
thanks man. even though you say youre toy, you know a shitload more than i do...thanks again. [/b][/quote]
why thank you&#33; im always glad to help.

ABE-i cant really tell what it is so i cant rele give u crits. try to get a better pic next time. or some explanation?

RANE- it would be solid if u did it all the same size. a bit TOO bubbly for my taste, but if u like that style, go for it.

EVOK- ur 3d, completely and utterly wrong. go simpler, keep all ur letters the same size n it will look a lot better.

BOURBON- what i think he was trying to get at, is that your sketch is TOO soft. you want rectangles forming the letters, and then u go back and soften the edges, meaning to SLIGHTLY round them, just to make it not look so harsh. then later you add curves to your work by twisting and bending the rectangles.


peace
dont stop

Chop Logic
07-25-2006, 10:56 AM
Originally posted by Chop Logic@Jul 24 2006, 09:28 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/67f44330.jpg
bump

whoarethereal evil
07-25-2006, 11:13 AM
thats nice

id lose the lighteng ish arrow frm the h tho an the w needs sumthing bt im nt sure wht yet an u need 2 try an get ur letters proportioned like the same size for example the o then to the v the v is alot smaller an looks squashed.

bt yeah tis good tho

esquire.
07-25-2006, 11:14 AM
Alright, boiyos...
i&#39;ve been working my way into the graffiti scene for a month or so now; nothing on walls just yet, but filling my books. Here&#39;s the latest sketch (tilt your head, I&#39;m not computer savvy):

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/8489/esqbunnybi9.jpg

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-25-2006, 11:32 AM
Originally posted by ZoNe1@Jul 25 2006, 09:43 AM
Somthen new i did lastnight before i passed out http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g293/ZoNe_bucket/07-24-06_1909.jpg

Critz please
what&#39;s the point of posting something "new" when all your stuff looks the same?


:unsure: just wondering.

DistortedThoughtz
07-25-2006, 11:33 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v398/a_s_h/55cc45d9.jpg

Ain Great Only Took Me Like 4 Mins.. should Work More On Them I Guess Lol

bombed
07-25-2006, 11:41 AM
if your lookin for help...try spending more time on yur shit...

---CRoR---
07-25-2006, 11:41 AM
Originally posted by &#045;&#045;&#045;CRoR&#045;&#045;&#045;@Jul 23 2006, 07:53 PM
something im thinkin to throw up sometime
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3631/im002542ul3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


CRITS&#33;
BUMP... CRITS PLZ..

esquire.
07-25-2006, 11:47 AM
Could you cats comment on my work up there, the one with the rabbit.
Feel free to rip that shit apart, but I&#39;d prefer you provide some advice.
Thanks, fellow toys.

Rane *DF* *HM*
07-25-2006, 12:31 PM
Originally posted by esquire.@Jul 25 2006, 11:47 AM
Could you cats comment on my work up there, the one with the rabbit.
Feel free to rip that shit apart, but I&#39;d prefer you provide some advice.
Thanks, fellow toys.
um...i like the Q...

What Happened to the Letters?
07-25-2006, 12:52 PM
Originally posted by esquire.@Jul 25 2006, 12:47 PM
Could you cats comment on my work up there, the one with the rabbit.
Feel free to rip that shit apart, but I&#39;d prefer you provide some advice.
Thanks, fellow toys.
yo your s is aight, the rest im nto feeling

yo what th fuck i cannot rock a throw ive been doing pages of letters ill psot in a minute this shits pissing me off

What Happened to the Letters?
07-25-2006, 12:57 PM
Originally posted by Rane *DF* *HM*+Jul 25 2006, 02:17 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Rane *DF* *HM* &#064; Jul 25 2006, 02:17 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Rane *DF* *HM*@Jul 24 2006, 07:56 PM
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just a throwie i&#39;ve been working on.

crits? [/b][/quote]
well god dman doesthis bring back memories

i wrote sane back in 04 a year before i even understood what graffiti was, it looked just like that, minus the r of course, same 3d same everythign, i would even sometimes make the outline in dfotted lines over the other letters liek you did

DR FORCE
07-25-2006, 01:01 PM
Originally posted by What Happened to the Letters?+Jul 25 2006, 12:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (What Happened to the Letters? &#064; Jul 25 2006, 12:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Rane *DF* *HM*@Jul 25 2006, 02:17 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-Rane *DF* *HM*@Jul 24 2006, 07:56 PM
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just a throwie i&#39;ve been working on.

crits?
well god dman doesthis bring back memories

i wrote sane back in 04 a year before i even understood what graffiti was, it looked just like that, minus the r of course, same 3d same everythign, i would even sometimes make the outline in dfotted lines over the other letters liek you did[/b][/quote]
I dont like it

What Happened to the Letters?
07-25-2006, 01:07 PM
i didnt say i did i jsut said i used to do the smae hting, and theres a reason my shit cahgned haha, take the wart out of the r though and drop my monster circle and thats a popular r used by alto of dudes lately


http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/3631/im002542ul3.jpg
its ugly, even the circle isnt clean, work on cleanliness at least and maybe the letters will pop a bit more, the r&#39;s suck also

alive
07-25-2006, 01:45 PM
Originally posted by esquire.@Jul 25 2006, 11:14 AM
Alright, boiyos...
i&#39;ve been working my way into the graffiti scene for a month or so now; nothing on walls just yet, but filling my books. Here&#39;s the latest sketch (tilt your head, I&#39;m not computer savvy):

http://img129.imageshack.us/img129/8489/esqbunnybi9.jpg
this is for EVERONE starting out



alright, heres the advice i can give you.

GO SIMPLE.

i want you to stop styling your letters. stop shading. stop using 3d. dont color. i want you to focus on the basic letter structure. the first thing i want to see from you is blockbuster letters. thats straight, block letters. show me that and i can help you move on to the next step. using rectangles to form your letters, called bars. then you slowly learn to twist and bend the bars, overextend this. this is where everyone needs to start. it takes patience. dont pick up a can of paint until we tell you your ready. dont talk shit either, remember, ur a toy.

now if you are just entering the game, i want to wish you welcome and tell give you another major piece of advice. i need you to read up. know your history. you gotta know how this shit started. the first writer to get written about. TAKI183. u should know the article title. TAKI183 SPAWNS PENPALS. learn about cornbread. learn about broadway style. then learn the kings. learn the bombers. JA. CAP. COPE2. learn the piecers, SEEN, DONDI. learn the crews, UNITED ARTISTS. learn SANE. learn SMITH. work from the back forward. go around your neighborhood, learn the local heads. learn the different types of graffiti, tag, throw, bomb, piece, wildstyle, burner. its not hard to find, and if your serious about this, learn it all.


dont give up
stay up
peace

What Happened to the Letters?
07-25-2006, 02:12 PM
you dont gotta learn that much shit ust to write, youll pick it all up if you read around, jsut go to boarders and tget "the art of getign up" and read the whole thign and youll knwo all the legends and shit basically, jsut read books and article online and stuff and just sektch...its nto that tricky you just gotta practice alot, liek any art

myl
07-25-2006, 02:58 PM
subway art is also a good one to pick up. its the book that got me into graffiti.

obseen
07-25-2006, 02:59 PM
^^
basically the same as me, i was always doin graff but afetr that book i started really concentratin on it