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Don't want to just carbon copy the post I made in Toy story:
So here are two I did on a poster for school.
http://img123.imageshack.us/img123/7940/p10100060af.th.jpg (http://img123.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p10100060af.jpg)
This one says Chiasmus, which is a rhetorical device, yeah...
http://img321.imageshack.us/img321/2338/p10100087vr.th.jpg (http://img321.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p10100087vr.jpg)
This says Abba, which is a way to remember what a chiasmus does
I used dry erase markers for the fills, and a black and silver sharpie for the outlines and glistening
weldo
10-04-2005, 07:48 AM
http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/1064/phto00196go.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
weldo
10-04-2005, 07:49 AM
sorry about the size feedback please
weldo
10-04-2005, 07:52 AM
http://img374.imageshack.us/img374/5922/phto00195ly.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
metro 519
10-04-2005, 07:58 AM
pretty cool stlye, and good pen control.... but what does it say???
weldo
10-04-2005, 08:03 AM
sue
older one i drew...old word "fear" then saw a fear tag next to some ill piece at the 416 (as in he was in the guy who did the pieces crew) so i changed it...but for what its worth..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/23aa7367.jpg
toxus
10-04-2005, 10:33 AM
just wondering if i should change my name?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/letters.jpg
heres some letters
T.S.R
10-04-2005, 01:57 PM
my simple black book
http://img322.imageshack.us/img322/1588/untitled34mz.th.jpg (http://img322.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitled34mz.jpg)
TSR i would make it shorter, just cos i think it wud help, and keep the letters the same width throughout, like u see at the top of the T, is not the same width as the rest.... keep sketchin like this tho..... make the letters up in bits, like the T is the verticle bit an the horizontal bit..if u get me....
fear, i quite like it in general, but the R is too big comparitively and its not quite as clear as the others... keep at it
toxus
10-04-2005, 02:06 PM
just got a scanner so im testing it out
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/1stscanner001.jpg
i know it sucks btw.
T.S.R
10-04-2005, 02:06 PM
thanks man ill work on it
T.S.R
10-04-2005, 02:38 PM
another quick one the bubbles look gay but i think i made the letters the smae size actually now that i look at it the s is the smallest then the t then the r damnit gotta work on it some more well feedback is welcome :D
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/5422/picture6479ox.th.jpg (http://img179.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture6479ox.jpg)
Sluts_r_us
10-04-2005, 02:45 PM
it looks OK, but i think the letters are too skinny and tall, do you mind if i just do a simple sketch to show you what I am talking about?
jus a couple of sketches, ignore the shitty fills
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v641/skitchpics/graff004.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v641/skitchpics/graff002.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v641/skitchpics/graff001.jpg
toxus
10-04-2005, 04:16 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/100.jpg
sorry that its so in the corner.
metro 519
10-04-2005, 04:30 PM
Originally posted by T.S.R@Oct 4 2005, 01:38 PM
another quick one the bubbles look gay but i think i made the letters the smae size actually now that i look at it the s is the smallest then the t then the r damnit gotta work on it some more well feedback is welcome :D
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/5422/picture6479ox.th.jpg (http://img179.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture6479ox.jpg)
http://img49.imageshack.us/img49/3564/picture6479ox1ub.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
here ya go:
1.when you do your "S" make sure the lines are parallel.
2. line the hole part in your "R" with the inside line of the back leg.
3. extend your fron leg out a bit to give it a look of a lil more stability.
thats all i see keep workin!
$NAKE$
10-04-2005, 04:39 PM
Originally posted by phat+Oct 2 2005, 03:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (phat @ Oct 2 2005, 03:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-$NAKE$@Oct 1 2005, 07:27 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v680/ben_clock/MAlte.jpg
YEAH MR. DONT PLAY!
man please stop writing your shit is horrible in fact all these toys sketches are horrible man get a life go out and paint shit sketchs are shit for little pussy who dont paint in fact stok or what the hell here that bull shit is next time you post something please dont make it a sketch or ill print it out take a shit on it and post the piece of shit you call graffiti back on here with shit on it you fag stop trying [/b][/quote]
;) did you just tell me to paint something ? fuck bitch i've painted my fair share
scOpeOne
10-04-2005, 04:53 PM
stock ure fucking gay ass shit doesnt even count as painting.. i could throw bucket paint on a wall and my letters would burn yours
$NAKE$
10-04-2005, 05:07 PM
well props?
your.....cool
snakes you havnt gotten any better,your shading is still off. are you retarded? so many people have told/shown you how to do it.i think your mom did heroine when she was pregnant with you.and no you havnt painted yer "fair share". just because you apply paint to a surface dosnt mean anything. you might as well be finger painting. now lets hear you "gangsta sudbury hard as fuck" reply.
p.s talking shit wont make you stop sucking.
sup everyone i was gone for a few days and theres so much beef
Sluts_r_us
10-04-2005, 06:49 PM
^^ troof
so what u been up to sluts
Sluts_r_us
10-04-2005, 07:02 PM
nothin really, changed my name, trying to practice during school, thats really it. oh yeah i was going to help out the guy with the TSR sketch, never got around to it thoug...Im gunna go do it real quick now.
Sluts_r_us
10-04-2005, 07:15 PM
uploading pics now...in have TSR's quick sketch, my name with my first 3-d try and soome other style thta i need help on...
LYTE-ONE
10-04-2005, 07:17 PM
quick sketch i just did. i only did a deks throw but my full name is dekster hence the character.
http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/5943/deks0pe.th.jpg (http://img119.imageshack.us/my.php?image=deks0pe.jpg)
Sluts_r_us
10-04-2005, 07:19 PM
first try on 3-d
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/MES3d.jpg
something I was making for a friend, sorry for the bad lighting...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/MIME.jpg
something i see everywhere but i can't get it to look right..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/MESpointy.jpg
TSR's sketch that i did for him in 1.5 min lol...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/TSR.jpg
once again sorry for the bad lighting on some of the pics...
Sluts_r_us
10-04-2005, 07:20 PM
thats a pretty cool character...
Originally posted by -=AgA=-TrAnCe+Oct 3 2005, 12:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-=AgA=-TrAnCe @ Oct 3 2005, 12:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by phat@Oct 2 2005, 03:15 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-$NAKE$@Oct 1 2005, 07:27 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v680/ben_clock/MAlte.jpg
YEAH MR. DONT PLAY!
man please stop writing your shit is horrible in fact all these toys sketches are horrible man get a life go out and paint shit sketchs are shit for little pussy who dont paint in fact stok or what the hell here that bull shit is next time you post something please dont make it a sketch or ill print it out take a shit on it and post the piece of shit you call graffiti back on here with shit on it you fag stop trying
post some of your stuff :lol: [/b][/quote]
your gay stuff looks liek shit now is perk abouts to have to post some tight ass throwies to kill your gay stright letter shit ill even draw you some shit i aint scared big perk money is a killa so its whatever :D
tonedope
10-04-2005, 09:56 PM
Originally posted by phat+Oct 4 2005, 08:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (phat @ Oct 4 2005, 08:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by -=AgA=-TrAnCe@Oct 3 2005, 12:35 PM
Originally posted by phat@Oct 2 2005, 03:15 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-$NAKE$@Oct 1 2005, 07:27 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v680/ben_clock/MAlte.jpg
YEAH MR. DONT PLAY!
man please stop writing your shit is horrible in fact all these toys sketches are horrible man get a life go out and paint shit sketchs are shit for little pussy who dont paint in fact stok or what the hell here that bull shit is next time you post something please dont make it a sketch or ill print it out take a shit on it and post the piece of shit you call graffiti back on here with shit on it you fag stop trying
post some of your stuff :lol:
your gay stuff looks liek shit now is perk abouts to have to post some tight ass throwies to kill your gay stright letter shit ill even draw you some shit i aint scared big perk money is a killa so its whatever :D [/b][/quote]
snake paints all the time, what he need to be doin sketchin more to get his shit straight cause its whack as eva, but if you gonna talk shit about people at least know about them first.
amet one
10-04-2005, 09:59 PM
http://static.flickr.com/28/48278298_def4c1c1ae_b.jpg
I EAT SNAKES FOR BREAKFAST
Sluts_r_us
10-04-2005, 10:20 PM
Originally posted by amet one@Oct 4 2005, 08:59 PM
http://static.flickr.com/28/48278298_def4c1c1ae_b.jpg
I EAT SNAKES FOR BREAKFAST
wow thats amazing!!!111oneone
Originally posted by Fate+Oct 4 2005, 08:27 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fate @ Oct 4 2005, 08:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fate@Oct 4 2005, 08:14 PM
i cant decide if i like it or not. any feedback?
http://img381.imageshack.us/img381/1931/fatl7yj.jpg
bump for new page [/b][/quote]
I like it.
However, i'm not really feeling the Double-Helix background things. And the 'A' should be connected near the top, now it looks like an 'H' (I'm assuming it is meant to be an A)
Oh, and maybe the branching limbs from the 'F' and the 'E' should be switched up (as of now they all start thin, then turn into the block) so if one or two of the limbs broke that pattern (like, they be the full size the whole way, instead of starting thin..I hope this makes sense, lol) it'd less uniform, unless that was what you were going for. This is just my opinion
Aside from that, I do like it, it's a pretty neat style.
amet one
10-05-2005, 04:08 PM
I EAT DEM $NAKE$
http://static.flickr.com/33/48278295_9616ea6cb6_b.jpg
amet, i personally dont like it that much but its pretty clever. on the E id make the hole further to the left, and the T doesnt really look that much like a T to me....
heres a nu ANT1.... ignore the silly colours and the bloke on top... just feedback on the letters n shit please and ye i no the A to N connection shud b killed... cheers
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/ANTone1.jpg
TankONE.bsf
10-05-2005, 04:59 PM
http://myspace-105.vo.llnwd.net/00246/50/10/246260105_l.jpg
my blockbuster
its pretty nice Tank, but i think theres sumit rong with that K... im not sure wot tho..work on it
T.S.R
10-05-2005, 05:02 PM
thanks for all the feed back ill do some more sketches soon
Sluts_r_us
10-05-2005, 05:45 PM
Originally posted by T.S.R@Oct 5 2005, 04:02 PM
thanks for all the feed back ill do some more sketches soon
TSR, the quick sketch i told you i was going to make for you is on page 118 or 119...just check them out and you will see what i meant about your letters being too tall and thin...
amet one
10-05-2005, 06:18 PM
yeah tank! thats my boy right there!
AoAssis
10-05-2005, 06:41 PM
Originally posted by acos@Oct 4 2005, 03:03 PM
jus a couple of sketches, ignore the shitty fills
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v641/skitchpics/graff004.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v641/skitchpics/graff002.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v641/skitchpics/graff001.jpg
i like the yellow one that all conected, wat do u use to color?
chill
10-05-2005, 07:00 PM
yo tank, theres already a tank from brooklyn, and hes mad good, so idk bout keeping taht name
chill
10-05-2005, 07:49 PM
not done yet, been wrkin on my letter structure, give me some feedback
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/8585/00005280ne.th.jpg (http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00005280ne.jpg)
JadedSketches
10-05-2005, 08:15 PM
You say that for every fucking sketch.
Why not just say "post count +1"?
Sluts_r_us
10-05-2005, 08:18 PM
no beef intended jaded but why the fuck do you just bitch about everything?
Scratch
10-05-2005, 08:32 PM
cuz its fun
(post count +1)
Originally posted by chill@Oct 5 2005, 06:49 PM
not done yet, been wrkin on my letter structure, give me some feedback
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/8585/00005280ne.th.jpg (http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?image=00005280ne.jpg)
I really like the letters, what's it say? Teals or Teabs..or something along those lines? The only thing that I'm not feeling is the whole Spaghetti strand thats throught out it, I dunno, it makes it feel a bit cluttered, to me at least.
nerdx
10-05-2005, 10:10 PM
tank
there should be a little indent at the top of the k part of the 3d, just like there is at the n. would look much better.
i showed a guy at work the name i tag, and he peiced it. here it is
semi
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/4180/semi43ej.th.jpg (http://img18.imageshack.us/my.php?image=semi43ej.jpg)
he likes to connect all his letters. not my style but its still nice.
JadedSketches
10-05-2005, 10:17 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Oct 5 2005, 07:18 PM
no beef intended jaded but why the fuck do you just bitch about everything?
Pff,'cause I'm right.
No seriously,because he isn't helping anybody,he's just postwhoring,plus,its fucking annoying.
faint rem one
10-05-2005, 11:20 PM
fighting on the internet is like running in the special olympics...
even if u win your still a retard
(stolen from a signature)
kbi.
Originally posted by AoAssis+Oct 5 2005, 05:41 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (AoAssis @ Oct 5 2005, 05:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-acos@Oct 4 2005, 03:03 PM
jus a couple of sketches, ignore the shitty fills
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v641/skitchpics/graff004.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v641/skitchpics/graff002.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v641/skitchpics/graff001.jpg
i like the yellow one that all conected, wat do u use to color?[/b][/quote]
cheers. i jus used some cheap felt tips that were kicking round the house. Il get decent pens sometime but i dont see the point until im skething decent letters.
Spydee87
10-06-2005, 05:34 PM
Here are some of my drawin'...........I reallly think i sux. but tell me what ya think. and for the fukin' haterz who be hatin cuz they can draw better keep it to ur self....and thank you.
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_Graff2.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/Graff2.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_PR.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/PR.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_graff6.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/graff6.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_Graff5.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/Graff5.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_graff4.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/graff4.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_graff3.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/graff3.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_Graff1.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/Graff1.jpg)
m is wack and uneven tell me what u guys think
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC03071.jpg
Sluts_r_us
10-06-2005, 05:42 PM
Originally posted by Spydee87@Oct 6 2005, 04:34 PM
Here are some of my drawin'...........I reallly think i sux. but tell me what ya think. and for the fukin' haterz who be hatin cuz they can draw better keep it to ur self....and thank you.
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_Graff2.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/Graff2.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_PR.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/PR.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_graff6.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/graff6.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_Graff5.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/Graff5.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_graff4.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/graff4.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_graff3.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/graff3.jpg)
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/th_Graff1.jpg (http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/SKoolrocks/Graff%20picz/Graff1.jpg)
puerto rico #1!!!!!!!!! yeah homes..im rican too...:P, my nick name is rico lol
Spydee87
10-06-2005, 05:54 PM
Lol i've drawe better puerto rican stuffff.............and yea puerto Rico number one....and ya kno most writerz are puerto rican....
Mekas
10-06-2005, 06:17 PM
I dont think i know any puerto rican writers, name a few.
Spydee87
10-06-2005, 06:30 PM
Cope2,futura 2000.....zori 4....Well look at this point of veiw...it started in the bronx and what is the bronx made out of..........Puerto ricans....and im not sayin' that were better or nethin. but some of the best who started the whole Graff world were puerto rican.....
Spydee87
10-06-2005, 06:42 PM
A large number of the early graffiti artists from the bronx were puerto rican. we helped spred the art. but now a dayz graffiti has no race....
metro 519
10-06-2005, 07:40 PM
http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/2521/dsc009756ty.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
something in math that came to me
comment please
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a34/robsk8ter247/36040d45.jpg
shone
10-06-2005, 08:03 PM
tryin a new sketch wit some colors
feedback is apreiciated just dont rip me a new assholehttp://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1494/pic0433ue.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
incase you cant see the lines heres a clearer Night cam picturehttp://img351.imageshack.us/img351/2140/pic0429ra.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
JadedSketches
10-06-2005, 08:22 PM
metro,very very nice,but im sorta getting tired of the same blue,black and white colours.
Sluts_r_us
10-06-2005, 08:25 PM
what is that supposed to say? shos?
i kno this might not be the right place for this question i kno its real toy but wat is a canvas. O ya comment my pic plese http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a34/robsk8ter247/36040d45.jpg
shone
10-06-2005, 08:42 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Oct 6 2005, 07:25 PM
what is that supposed to say? shos?
shoc
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/6109/esmnew0cm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/2282/smo2ey.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
two of my newest sketches.
toooooy.
__:Amok:_
10-06-2005, 10:09 PM
green ones o.k. other one...bad letter structure
faint rem one
10-06-2005, 11:55 PM
Originally posted by metro 519@Oct 6 2005, 06:40 PM
http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/2521/dsc009756ty.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
something in math that came to me
damn.
hella nice.
paint it?
Steve Martin
10-06-2005, 11:58 PM
Vote for your favorite custom hat at www.hhqc.com
toxus
10-07-2005, 06:30 AM
im going to change my name, could some one pic out the best letters please.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/letters1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/letters2.jpg
and also i rushed some of the letters.
Yo everyone, whatup?
Yeah, I'm back. I don't put up Wers anymore though, now I put up Met.
Here are some sketches that I did in class, trying to work on my letter structure and trying out some new colors... anyway, tell me what y'all think.
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/w3rs/met04.jpg
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/w3rs/met03.jpg
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/w3rs/met02.jpg
http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b302/w3rs/met01.jpg
Escape
10-07-2005, 09:35 AM
Originally posted by smOg@Oct 6 2005, 08:20 PM
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/6109/esmnew0cm.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/2282/smo2ey.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
two of my newest sketches.
toooooy.
The fade at the top, that orange to that deep red. Super DOPE.
@toxus - more blocky and don't chosoe a name yet, just do the alphabet and random words and super blocky. Keep working at it.
toxus
10-07-2005, 09:44 AM
yeah i will do that.
Yo feedback on my sketches would be appreciated.
Escape
10-07-2005, 10:36 AM
wers, umm extensions should be closer to the letter the letters, the arrow at the top of the 'e' in the green and white sketch is good, the rest, not so much. but lose them for now and experiemnt with different addons, liek 3d, or highlighting and point of origin 3ding. don't try for wildstyle yet. My personal feelings.
toxus
10-07-2005, 11:47 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/scrape.jpg
MainEvent
10-07-2005, 12:09 PM
Originally posted by toxus@Oct 7 2005, 10:47 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/scrape.jpg
what is that??
toxus
10-07-2005, 12:21 PM
Originally posted by MainEvent+Oct 7 2005, 05:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MainEvent @ Oct 7 2005, 05:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-toxus@Oct 7 2005, 10:47 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/scrape.jpg
what is that?? [/b][/quote]
dog ####.
Originally posted by metro 519@Oct 6 2005, 06:40 PM
http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/2521/dsc009756ty.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
something in math that came to me
Quality. i love it....
Toxus, i would try to not make the letters look like what u think graffiti should look like....if u get me.... dont worry about making the letters have unusual shape and stuff, like on that K, just have a straight down bit on the left...work on it tho..:)
comment plezcsry for postin so much i just wanna kno if im going in the right direction.http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a34/robsk8ter247/36040d45.jpg
JOPOTHREE
10-07-2005, 04:53 PM
Reads Jopo3. Crits please
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/DoctorHiggins/hands003.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/DoctorHiggins/hands002.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/DoctorHiggins/hands001.jpg
for a battle
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/DoctorHiggins/battle3002.jpg
metro.wow. lots of writers use that style, on the m. if anything, lose the line on the m that makes the outsde left leg. keep the swirl-ish, w.e part and the 1st leg all one piece.
smog looks to be the next okes almost
in the process...(notice shaky hands...)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/near_fiend.jpg
nerdx
10-07-2005, 06:09 PM
Originally posted by wfl@Oct 7 2005, 03:27 PM
comment plezcsry for postin so much i just wanna kno if im going in the right direction.http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a34/robsk8ter247/36040d45.jpg
its actm right? your style is nice. all the letters match. the m is dope, and its such a hard letter to pull off.
your defffinitly lin the right direction.
Mr Tasty
10-07-2005, 06:30 PM
http://www.imageshackuk.com/files/1007/Tasty.JPG
Myner
10-07-2005, 07:29 PM
some shit from school
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b101/meanscribblz/newm.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b101/meanscribblz/mm.jpg
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b101/meanscribblz/LA.jpg
handstyle practice hah
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b101/meanscribblz/handstyleprac.jpg
nvm i gotta change my m i just looked at this page and saw fates. i knew i saw a whole bunch of m's that looked the same and i dont wanna bite. its a bit different but i dono ill end up gettin better with practice abnd make a better one so it dont matter.
-=AgA=-TrAnCe
10-08-2005, 04:12 AM
some random character stuff for a battle on lochness, ill post finished one when i get my prismas <_< <_<
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a40/leact/characters.jpg
toxus
10-08-2005, 05:56 AM
just doodeling the alpherbet down
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/69.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/70.jpg
-=AgA=-TrAnCe
10-08-2005, 06:46 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a40/leact/charactersfinished.jpg
cess!
10-08-2005, 08:37 AM
shitty
post +1
aga, it seems to me u shud work on colouring in... u no..staying in the lines an wotnot... i quite liked (ish) that top characc till u coloured it... keep at it tho man...
and toxus, its gettin better, but now i would try an make the letters a lil thinner and maybe taller.. like ur topl letters... work at it
_:Kemical
10-08-2005, 10:23 AM
Hey, im new on this forum so take it easy on me. Im not new to graffiti n i kno most of the advice ppl give. Letter structure 3d n what not so dont tell me that.
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/2204/imag00522ht.th.jpg (http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imag00522ht.jpg)
Lighting isnt that good
defnitely on the right track... not bad i would say... shitt picture but ye..keep goin ike that....
heres my page for a battle... any feedback, espesh on the ANT1?
cheers
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/bowtieant1jokermajic.jpg
toxus
10-08-2005, 10:33 AM
Originally posted by _:Kemical@Oct 8 2005, 03:23 PM
Hey, im new on this forum so take it easy on me. Im not new to graffiti n i kno most of the advice ppl give. Letter structure 3d n what not so dont tell me that.
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/2204/imag00522ht.th.jpg (http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imag00522ht.jpg)
Lighting isnt that good
here i fixed the lighting...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/kemickal.jpg
it looks pretty nice.
toxus
10-08-2005, 10:34 AM
Originally posted by Jank@Oct 8 2005, 03:28 PM
defnitely on the right track... not bad i would say... ##### picture but ye..keep goin ike that....
heres my page for a battle... any feedback, espesh on the ANT1?
cheers
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y57/STAK/bowtieant1jokermajic.jpg
:o thats dope :D
cess!
10-08-2005, 10:49 AM
dope chars
not
_:Kemical
10-08-2005, 10:56 AM
thanks homes. ye its just a simple lookin one nothin fancy
Sluts_r_us
10-08-2005, 11:03 AM
kemical, the smoke you made on there looks sweet!
toxus
10-08-2005, 11:04 AM
Haha it does in all, it would have been better if it was like grey or black or somthing.
_:Kemical
10-08-2005, 12:12 PM
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/9972/pencil2wk.th.jpg (http://img84.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pencil2wk.jpg)
this is pics kinda a joke. bored in class picked the first thing i saw and drew it lol
The Incredible D
10-08-2005, 12:16 PM
boo, trance. boo.
_:Kemical
10-08-2005, 12:17 PM
wah
metro 519
10-08-2005, 12:21 PM
Originally posted by faint rem one+Oct 6 2005, 10:55 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (faint rem one @ Oct 6 2005, 10:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-metro 519@Oct 6 2005, 06:40 PM
http://img328.imageshack.us/img328/2521/dsc009756ty.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
something in math that came to me
damn.
hella nice.
paint it? [/b][/quote]
not yet but soon!
as soon as my unemployed ass mooches some money for paint!
stale
10-08-2005, 01:45 PM
what do you kids think i should work on here?
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b194/factotum8/stale.jpg
other than killing the wack hand
i like it but the "z" needs to look more like the "s"
New sketch, another wild attempt
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/909/p10100040cj.th.jpg (http://img379.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p10100040cj.jpg)
stale
10-08-2005, 02:35 PM
fate- its supposed to be an l not a z, damn.. i've worried that it looked too much like staze and now you confirmed it.. maybe i should drop that extension, i kinda like how it adds to the flow though
i thought it looked like a z too
JOPOTHREE
10-08-2005, 04:33 PM
Just workin on throws and playin around with certain things. Critz appreciated.
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/DoctorHiggins/throws003.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/DoctorHiggins/throws002.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b300/DoctorHiggins/throws001.jpg
$NAKE$
10-08-2005, 06:06 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v680/ben_clock/clit.jpg
gettin juiced LAKE PORT stylez
JOPOTHREE
10-08-2005, 07:39 PM
I think you should keep the letters all the same porportions and definitly work on the 3d.
Originally posted by stale@Oct 8 2005, 01:35 PM
fate- its supposed to be an l not a z, damn.. i've worried that it looked too much like staze and now you confirmed it.. maybe i should drop that extension, i kinda like how it adds to the flow though
on second look its the "L" that looks like a "z" i though the "l" was an "s' put the extension on the bottom of the "L" like in your "t"
Originally posted by metro 519@Oct 8 2005, 11:21 AM
as soon as my unemployed ass mooches some money for paint!
uhhh....steal it?
shifty 486
10-09-2005, 12:16 AM
http://img316.imageshack.us/img316/2090/untitled11pf.jpg
just scribing no real shit
-=AgA=-TrAnCe
10-09-2005, 06:21 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a40/leact/dudeyi.jpg
the new shit
toxus
10-09-2005, 06:49 AM
Originally posted by -=AgA=-TrAnCe@Oct 9 2005, 11:21 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a40/leact/dudeyi.jpg
the new ####
thats alot better than your first sketch you posted on this forum, but i would say take out all the arrows, addons of ect and just work on basic letters. And keep the colouring in there because that looks pretty good.
toxus
10-09-2005, 02:13 PM
changed my name to 'sako' or 'saco' cant think witch is better
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20051009/12/f/2/e/f2ed4531de91e1fedc9436093b667872200510090_full.jpg
i will do it on paper i just couldent be botherd to upload ect
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC03104.jpg
new peice i like the blending job i did with the dark yellow to true yellow in the fill
Originally posted by shae@Oct 10 2005, 12:12 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC03104.jpg
new peice i like the blending job i did with the dark yellow to true yellow in the fill
I did a sketch a few weeks ago and the E is pretty much identical. :blink:
The fade is hot.
Originally posted by m0ck@Oct 8 2005, 01:13 PM
New sketch, another wild attempt
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/909/p10100040cj.th.jpg (http://img379.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p10100040cj.jpg)
Your lines are all over the place. A lot of those extensions are just insane. Stick to simpler letters.
toxus
10-10-2005, 05:09 AM
appart from the green...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/72.jpg
im going to work on block letters then move on.
weldo
10-10-2005, 05:22 AM
wats it say
toxus
10-10-2005, 06:32 AM
it say samek, just ignore it, it suck very bad
http://www.vandalsquad.com/graffiti/wag_113311_1010_6428.jpg
toxus
10-10-2005, 11:45 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/74.jpg
going to work on block letters for a bit, and its ment to say samek, but i accedently but samok
SiLeNt-BoB
10-10-2005, 01:27 PM
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3738/picture0104of.th.jpg (http://img411.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0104of.jpg)
tell me what you think feedback please :ph34r:
cess!
10-10-2005, 01:36 PM
its alright
i dunno about fame tho haha
-=AgA=-TrAnCe
10-10-2005, 01:40 PM
Originally posted by toxus@Oct 10 2005, 10:45 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/74.jpg
going to work on block letters for a bit, and its ment to say samek, but i accedently but samok
nice handstlye there above teh piece
Originally posted by SiLeNt-BoB@Oct 10 2005, 05:27 PM
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3738/picture0104of.th.jpg (http://img411.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0104of.jpg)
tell me what you think feedback please :ph34r:
i like it alot. espech the S.. i like that best, work on the E, but its nice.:)
cess!
10-10-2005, 01:49 PM
Originally posted by shae@Oct 10 2005, 01:12 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC03104.jpg
new peice i like the blending job i did with the dark yellow to true yellow in the fill
you bite wreck liek a bitch
Originally posted by cess!+Oct 10 2005, 12:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cess! @ Oct 10 2005, 12:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-shae@Oct 10 2005, 01:12 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC03104.jpg
new peice i like the blending job i did with the dark yellow to true yellow in the fill
you bite wreck liek a bitch [/b][/quote]
i know i did with the e he is my good friend tho it was an unconsious bite tho i just wanted to finisht he peice so i could colour it i only like the fill i did thats all but dont worry it ws an accident its all good it was sub concious i didn't relize it till he pointed it out
shifty 486
10-10-2005, 02:23 PM
http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/5529/picture8tv.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC03113.jpg
new peice i like the colour fade what do u think
i think its the same as the post you put in blackbooks. i think you should turn it around and write time
cess!
10-10-2005, 05:26 PM
Originally posted by shae+Oct 10 2005, 02:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (shae @ Oct 10 2005, 02:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by cess!@Oct 10 2005, 12:49 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-shae@Oct 10 2005, 01:12 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC03104.jpg
new peice i like the blending job i did with the dark yellow to true yellow in the fill
you bite wreck liek a bitch
i know i did with the e he is my good friend tho it was an unconsious bite tho i just wanted to finisht he peice so i could colour it i only like the fill i did thats all but dont worry it ws an accident its all good it was sub concious i didn't relize it till he pointed it out [/b][/quote]
its more then the e
Originally posted by cess!+Oct 10 2005, 04:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cess! @ Oct 10 2005, 04:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by shae@Oct 10 2005, 02:03 PM
Originally posted by cess!@Oct 10 2005, 12:49 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-shae@Oct 10 2005, 01:12 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC03104.jpg
new peice i like the blending job i did with the dark yellow to true yellow in the fill
you bite wreck liek a bitch
i know i did with the e he is my good friend tho it was an unconsious bite tho i just wanted to finisht he peice so i could colour it i only like the fill i did thats all but dont worry it ws an accident its all good it was sub concious i didn't relize it till he pointed it out
its more then the e [/b][/quote]
he only noticed the e... and it was mainly the bottom extension off the e that he broguht up but all i notice is the middle extension of the e and the bottom extension the indents arent his style they are generic but whatever its all good i just posted tht thing for the fill its a wack ass peice anyways i rushed it id ont bite tho but wrek has influenced me alot since he basically got me into the art so there probably are some similarities in style but if there is a bite it was unintentional if i ever bit on purpose id be pissed off at myself for doing it but whatever its all good
tonedope
10-10-2005, 06:50 PM
Originally posted by smOg+Oct 10 2005, 01:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (smOg @ Oct 10 2005, 01:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-m0ck@Oct 8 2005, 01:13 PM
New sketch, another wild attempt
http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/909/p10100040cj.th.jpg (http://img379.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p10100040cj.jpg)
Your lines are all over the place. A lot of those extensions are just insane. Stick to simpler letters. [/b][/quote]
i think wen he gets better hes gonna be the rawest ***** on this site, i can see that shit wit better letters better addons and sick ass colors, comin wit the crazy ass pinks and purple an shit, practice like fuck kid cause that shits gonna be hott
minesweep
10-10-2005, 08:57 PM
can i get some feedback on a throwie its shortened down for the word orange but any feedback would be nice
http://img423.imageshack.us/img423/3447/dscn00641rv.th.jpg (http://img423.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn00641rv.jpg)
tonedope
10-10-2005, 09:13 PM
its dirty lookin, like ure fingernails....... but yea try makin it less fat lookin, like in the R, i dunno theres more stuff you could do to it but i dont know how to explain it
minesweep
10-10-2005, 09:14 PM
sorry my nails aren't my biggest concern at the moment
shone
10-10-2005, 09:17 PM
Originally posted by shone@Oct 6 2005, 07:03 PM
tryin a new sketch wit some colors
feedback is apreiciated just dont rip me a new assholehttp://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1494/pic0433ue.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
incase you cant see the lines heres a clearer Night cam picturehttp://img351.imageshack.us/img351/2140/pic0429ra.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for comments
nerdx
10-10-2005, 09:28 PM
Originally posted by minesweep@Oct 10 2005, 07:57 PM
can i get some feedback on a throwie its shortened down for the word orange but any feedback would be nice
http://img423.imageshack.us/img423/3447/dscn00641rv.th.jpg (http://img423.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn00641rv.jpg)
sofar it looks alright. but dont make the letters so fat. and there isnt really any style, just normal letters. the a is really messed. just keep working it.
nerdx
10-10-2005, 09:30 PM
Originally posted by shone+Oct 10 2005, 08:17 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (shone @ Oct 10 2005, 08:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-shone@Oct 6 2005, 07:03 PM
tryin a new sketch wit some colors
feedback is apreiciated just dont rip me a new assholehttp://img62.imageshack.us/img62/1494/pic0433ue.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
incase you cant see the lines heres a clearer Night cam picturehttp://img351.imageshack.us/img351/2140/pic0429ra.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for comments [/b][/quote]
this looks good sofar. liking the s
AoAssis
10-10-2005, 10:01 PM
ya looks nice
metro 519
10-10-2005, 10:02 PM
http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/6923/dsc010030hv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Another binder i did up. Although, it's not as good as the first though.
Originally posted by shae@Oct 10 2005, 03:48 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v685/adeckone/DSC03113.jpg
new peice i like the colour fade what do u think
bump
AoAssis
10-10-2005, 10:35 PM
Originally posted by metro 519@Oct 10 2005, 09:02 PM
http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/6923/dsc010030hv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Another binder i did up. Although, it's not as good as the first though.
DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPE
metro 519
10-10-2005, 10:39 PM
thanks man i appreciate it!
SiLeNt-BoB
10-11-2005, 06:07 AM
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/5425/picture0124rn.th.jpg (http://img291.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0124rn.jpg)
another quicky i done any feedback ?
AoAssis, what did you use to color that man thats prity dope man. allmost looks like a sticker.. damn
-=AgA=-TrAnCe
10-11-2005, 10:51 AM
dope metro
ive always liked ur style :wub:
Enemy
10-11-2005, 11:44 AM
metro u dont belong in the toy forum cause thats fuckin dope son!!! uve progressed so fuckin much in so little time. props!
this was suposed to be a quick sketch for my friend but it turned out alrite so for the first time i coloured it and kept it what youns think?
http://img414.imageshack.us/img414/8249/smic0mh.png (http://imageshack.us)
shineONE
10-11-2005, 11:48 AM
i dont really like the M [i think its an M]
but apart frm that its okay
metro thats dope get the fuck outta the toy forum
toxus
10-11-2005, 01:08 PM
just couldent not try something like this...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v234/toxus/75.jpg
tyrant
10-11-2005, 02:21 PM
Originally posted by metro 519@Oct 10 2005, 09:02 PM
http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/6923/dsc010030hv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Another binder i did up. Although, it's not as good as the first though.
nicely done metro thats ill
what did you use to get that shiny effect?
graff4hire
10-11-2005, 02:22 PM
dope shit metro!
tyrant
10-11-2005, 02:25 PM
where did you guys find that freight template thing? sorry never seen it before
Schiz
10-11-2005, 02:44 PM
Metro that looks dope as hell. What did you use ?
shone
10-11-2005, 04:01 PM
metro ill but im kinda getting tired of the blue
thats just me
meetermaid
10-11-2005, 04:12 PM
metro, the t is a little wierd 'imo' but the rest is fucking hott, yes, i say that alot but 'tis true.
toxus, the e is kinda mishapen, doesn't really look like an e at all, and stretch the bottom of the s to the left a bit more, so its roughly the same length as the top.
and enemy, what does that say?
funky monky
10-11-2005, 04:41 PM
that is dope metro!!!!
notownmonsters559
10-11-2005, 04:59 PM
NEW KID IN THE ROOM SO HERE
http://img423.imageshack.us/img423/4408/hobs10ek.jpg
i quite like it. does it say hors or wot? either way i like it, but i would go over it in pen or sumit, cos it just looks a lil shitty in pencil...just me tho
notownmonsters559
10-11-2005, 05:25 PM
IT SAYS HOBS THATS COOL YOUR OPINION I LIKE PENCIL DRAWING THOUGH SO ITS COOL
_:Kemical
10-11-2005, 08:03 PM
http://img426.imageshack.us/img426/9354/kemi8xz.th.jpg (http://img426.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kemi8xz.jpg)
Kemi sketch during spanish.^^
http://img414.imageshack.us/img414/8725/pour4pl.png
I just started doing this abut a week ago. How is it?
_:Kemical
10-11-2005, 08:21 PM
needs color and 3d 4sho
dont have it so spaced apart and by the way welcome to the graff world
notownmonsters559
10-11-2005, 08:25 PM
KEEP PRACTICING I WAS WAK AS FUCK WHEN I STARTED BUT NOW
IM 10 TIMES BETTER MY SHIT WAS WORSE THAN YOU BRO
BUT KNOW CHECK IT
http://img422.imageshack.us/img422/2513/box6tj.jpg
notownmonsters559
10-11-2005, 08:26 PM
ITS NOT THE BEST BUT A MAJOR IMPROVMENT
fuck u rogan ur such a bastard i gave him my opinion so shut the fuck up
skateparadise
10-11-2005, 08:38 PM
calm down ladies
aight. Thanks for the tips.
Originally posted by Rogan@Oct 11 2005, 08:10 PM
way to pms wers...ya dyke...i shat on your chest after i analled your mother
That is a lil weird.
hey ive been trying many names lately like rezin actm broke and now im trying trite. wat throw do u think was better actm or trite and same with the handstyles. Plez comment
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a34/robsk8ter247/b25c4a8a.jpg
Scene*
10-11-2005, 10:25 PM
Originally posted by metro 519@Oct 10 2005, 09:02 PM
http://img435.imageshack.us/img435/6923/dsc010030hv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Another binder i did up. Although, it's not as good as the first though.
i think you can come out of the toys and put your stuff on the regualr blackbooks
Yea I second what Scence said.
New sketch, I did it in school, so the lines and stuff are pretty messy, although this is just a rough sketch, as i'm waiting till I can get some good markers and do colours and stuff.
And like the previous sketch it says "Mahck" since I didn't like to write 'o's.
http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8363/p10100012ge.th.jpg (http://img296.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p10100012ge.jpg)
_:Kemical
10-11-2005, 10:59 PM
http://img439.imageshack.us/img439/5594/ey0kh.th.jpg (http://img439.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ey0kh.jpg)
color. Low on supplies. had to make do
nerdx
10-11-2005, 11:08 PM
Originally posted by _:Kemical@Oct 11 2005, 09:59 PM
http://img439.imageshack.us/img439/5594/ey0kh.th.jpg (http://img439.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ey0kh.jpg)
color. Low on supplies. had to make do
ah, i dont know but to me the name kemical will sound like a toy no matter how much you get up.
thats just my opinion.
Myner
10-11-2005, 11:53 PM
i know its hard to see, but any one got any tips before i color.
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b101/meanscribblz/sketch2.jpg
http://img23.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture3170cw.jpg
My first attempt at shadowing. WHat do you think. I know its uneven and all.
The date on my camera is messed up don;t mind it.
minesweep
10-12-2005, 12:07 AM
please give me feedbac on my throwie thanks
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/1961/dscn00685kn.th.jpg (http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn00685kn.jpg)
AoAssis
10-12-2005, 12:19 AM
Originally posted by minesweep@Oct 11 2005, 11:07 PM
please give me feedbac on my throwie thanks
http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/1961/dscn00685kn.th.jpg (http://img413.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dscn00685kn.jpg)
clean it up its all sketchy and ummmm its reli plain try and add just a little bit more style so ur throwie looks kooler.........hope that helps :blink:
minesweep
10-12-2005, 12:22 AM
ya i know its messy but ok thanks for the feedback
AoAssis
10-12-2005, 12:30 AM
no problem hope it helps :rolleyes:
toxus
10-12-2005, 05:47 AM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20051012/02/7/b/f/7bfaff58f4b9aee0875dec4448f4e450200510120_full.jpg
any sugestions?
nerdx
10-12-2005, 11:56 AM
im trying to peice rather tahn just do some throws. so tell me if im heading in the right direction.
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/5/img15409ra.jpg
not too bad but i would stop having those little bits sticking out/indents in the letters. keep it smooooth. work on it, itll get better
runci
10-12-2005, 01:30 PM
http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/6995/ameet6kv.jpg
-=AgA=-TrAnCe
10-12-2005, 01:34 PM
Originally posted by toxus@Oct 12 2005, 04:47 AM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20051012/02/7/b/f/7bfaff58f4b9aee0875dec4448f4e450200510120_full.jpg
any sugestions?
nice handstyle keep it up
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/PA120005.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/PA120004.jpg
http://img431.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture3215xh.jpg
My best ever in my opion. The colors never look right. It is supposed to be blue but looks black.
Well tell me what i need to improve on.
__:Amok:_
10-12-2005, 05:07 PM
no
pase.
10-12-2005, 05:22 PM
http://img429.imageshack.us/img429/7569/10014601ks3sc.th.jpg (http://img429.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10014601ks3sc.jpg)
http://img429.imageshack.us/img429/7275/10014784ak9uh.th.jpg (http://img429.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10014784ak9uh.jpg)
semi old stuff
Im working on stickers right now. Ill guess I might post those up later
I really dont know where to go with my current style. Im thinking of
dropping it for now and sticking with a style that I can mold and change more.
yes, the 3d is effed up.
post em bigger i cant see em
shifty 486
10-12-2005, 05:24 PM
Nice s and e's
pase.
10-12-2005, 05:25 PM
haha sorry Ill resize them
Rogan
10-12-2005, 10:19 PM
fate everytime iread your posts i notice your avatar and i think im reading somethign a retard made just causethat smile reminds me of a retarded kid
lol oh shit that made me laugh
tyrant
10-12-2005, 10:57 PM
here are some sketches i did recently.. the pens i used to fill in the colored ones bled crazy.. the others i havnt started to color yet.. some feed back would be ill
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/magus249/creat1.jpg
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/magus249/creat2.jpg
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/magus249/random.jpg
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y249/magus249/industrycreat.jpg
let me know what you think
they are tight man damn that is some good shit
faint rem one
10-13-2005, 12:19 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Picture027.jpg
messin with force fields
word to runci and tyrant.
tyrant
10-13-2005, 12:36 AM
Originally posted by faint rem one@Oct 12 2005, 11:19 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Picture027.jpg
messin with force fields
word to runci and tyrant.
damn man that outlining is awesome
Schiz
10-13-2005, 03:31 AM
Scratches head.. I dunno... Hey Mock your style is awesome. I love it !
shineONE
10-13-2005, 01:50 PM
did u hav 2 hav the same avatar as tony
tyrant those black and white ones look mighty nice..but ye the bleedin pens let the others down.... nice
tyrant
10-13-2005, 01:56 PM
yeah the pens raped the first ones... i was just messing around with them though
-=AgA=-TrAnCe
10-13-2005, 02:19 PM
xd
http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/6370/picture0012jy.th.png (http://img410.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture0012jy.png)
i need tips on what colors to put in it.
faint rem one
10-13-2005, 04:06 PM
not feelin the random arrows
and ur 3d needs a lil work
but who am i to talk.
ye. the O and the U hav this nice, clean str8 style, then the P has that fatty odd curved bit... i dno... ye and the arrows dont work... in terms of colours, just do wot u want... theres millions of colours to choose from..... trial and error m8...
I don't get it. where should i add arrows.
burned_out_Burner
10-14-2005, 12:20 AM
damn..go paint rainbow dawg.
AoAssis
10-14-2005, 12:27 AM
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/6930/graffiti0011rk.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thats my first atempt at wild style ya i kno its hard to read
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/3352/graffiti0020nv.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
thats my 2 letter throw up
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/6747/graffiti0034ds.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some new letters (i think that one looks pretty good)
http://img54.imageshack.us/img54/2874/graffiti0044ah.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some old shit, the colors got messed wen i took the pic, its supose to be blue and purple......and u can tell its old by the lame ass hand style in the corner, that was my old one
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/8205/graffiti0056to.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i think this is my best piece......
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/9134/graffiti0093sw.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
DW throwie
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/5979/graffiti0115om.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
another DW throwie, i think this one is better
well thats all i got for now leave some feedback plz :lol:
wreckone.
10-14-2005, 02:24 AM
Originally posted by -=AgA=-TrAnCe@Oct 9 2005, 05:21 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a40/leact/dudeyi.jpg
the new shit
You need to stop outlineing with markers. Are those prismas?
shineONE
10-14-2005, 03:22 AM
AoAssiss stay simple man u shudnt b moving on to wildstyle rite now.
AoAssis
10-14-2005, 10:18 AM
k thx ne more advice?
Originally posted by PouR@Oct 14 2005, 03:37 AM
I don't get it. where should i add arrows.
You shouldn't. leave em out all together for a while.... come back to em in a few months...
MoreOne
10-14-2005, 07:24 PM
What do you guys think of my throwie?
http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/986/morethrow2rx.jpg
__:Amok:_
10-14-2005, 07:26 PM
looks good. i would make the top squared off part of the M larger so it flows beter. and mabe make the r more R'ish cuz looks kinda like a T
meetermaid
10-14-2005, 07:29 PM
more, the shadow is a bit out of place i think, but i love it
ye the m isnt as nice as the others...ye i like the R alot actually, tho it dus look a bit like a t or sumit...not bad
MoreOne
10-14-2005, 07:37 PM
Yeah definatly need to work on my proportions but i'm pretty content with the basic style of the letters, thanks guys
Mekas
10-15-2005, 03:02 AM
What do you guys think of this.......feedback. Sorry it's so fuckin big i couldnt change it.
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/5065/mekbomb35fq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
-=AgA=-TrAnCe
10-15-2005, 03:04 AM
vry nice, again your "M" is the only letter work on, just doesnt fit the others. which lok reallly good
Mekas
10-15-2005, 03:33 AM
Alright, thanks man.
toxus
10-15-2005, 05:31 AM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20051015/02/6/0/a/60a799a086d3f0ab30051c40f107baf8200510150_full.jpg
this one kind of sucks.
__:Amok:_
10-15-2005, 10:09 AM
toxus those letters dont even look like graffiti. The E looks horrible. jus my opinion
arite toxus, on the E, that diagnal bit is odd..... make there b one long block going down at the left, with the bits comin out..if u get me. The S is better than last time, but still not great.
I would draw 2 light lines across the top and bottom b4 u start, so it doesnt bend up to the right like that, and i would make the letters taller(so each block is longer....if u get me...)... i dno i mite b ramblin all sorts of rong shite.... just owrk on it, itll get better on its own...keep goin tho man...
http://%20img422.imageshack.us/img422/8652/sketchorange0jm.th.jpg
^^ (http://img422.imageshack.us/img422/8652/sketchorange0jm.th.jpg)
doh!! http://img422.imageshack.us/img422/8652/sketchorange0jm.th.jpg
fight
10-15-2005, 06:22 PM
http://img414.imageshack.us/img414/6530/fight70vz.th.jpg (http://img414.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fight70vz.jpg)
feedback would be cool
maus1985
10-15-2005, 07:05 PM
more one- figure out how to make those characters interact with each other better, they have no relationship with each other as it is now, also, finish out your characters more, be confident with them huge shading doesn't solve these problems
maus1985
10-15-2005, 07:09 PM
ewww
maus1985
10-15-2005, 07:10 PM
hey aoassis-
arrows don't do anything but distract the viewer from mistakes, and you have about a million fucking arrows here
noone paints in metalics, they suck and they eat each other up
that "wildstyle" is just fat shapes outlined with a sharpie, you need negative space within the body of the piece it takes along time to figure out sometimes, but you'll get it
Mekas
10-15-2005, 07:33 PM
I took your advice (Aga Trance) so tell me what you think.
http://img421.imageshack.us/img421/8241/mekbombred2nq.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
faint rem one
10-15-2005, 07:47 PM
other than the top of the M i like it.
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