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d_g
08-10-2006, 06:44 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Aug 10 2006, 06:47 AM
I'm pretty sure it's the same dude... Yep, it says he's in TMD too.

:edit: Does TMD have a website? I wanna check out more of their stuff
Not that I know of.

But there is a thread on HipHopNZ forums with heaps of TMD stuff in it.

http://hiphopnz.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t...4&postorder=asc (http://hiphopnz.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=39234&postorder=asc)

shifty!
08-10-2006, 06:46 PM
Originally posted by shifty!@Aug 10 2006, 05:04 PM
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/9823/sh018uw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6653/sh020oq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/8033/sh019xd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits pleasee, tryin to get a better throwie
crits...

sky 5
08-10-2006, 06:49 PM
Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Aug 10 2006, 05:36 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

magic u start shit with everone and look at ur work.
why the f you always runnin your mouth startin ish . . . . spend more time doing graffitti instead of tryin to sound and look it sucka . . .

ras
08-10-2006, 06:54 PM
just a small peice....tryna use new 3d's and shit....and grasp diff' letter sturture's.....critz an' comment's would be helpful ?? :D

ras
08-10-2006, 06:55 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8060/raug1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Mugyver
08-10-2006, 06:56 PM
thanks for the critz NACCSACC. the colors i was using are really old, and the red was 1 mm and the purple was .5 mm, and they were both running out of ink, so i didnt have much choice but to scribble :huh:

NICCSACC
08-10-2006, 07:06 PM
yeah i feel you i just ganked a couple of these liquid ball point bic's from the spot.
my personal favorite by the way.

ras
08-10-2006, 07:08 PM
yo naccsacc who wuz that post too ?

NICCSACC
08-10-2006, 07:09 PM
macguyver

Fosale!
08-10-2006, 07:18 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4913/abfb15f1ra7.th.jpg (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=abfb15f1ra7.jpg)
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/5755/c57242d8th5.th.jpg (http://img128.imageshack.us/my.php?image=c57242d8th5.jpg)
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6274/761dc3e2xl4.th.jpg (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=761dc3e2xl4.jpg)
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/4376/ca27ebb8hx3.th.jpg (http://img48.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ca27ebb8hx3.jpg)

Started for the berzerker battle then left for camp and i decided to finish it idk and yes, i know i suck at fake drips.
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/7452/d3b808bbpr7.th.jpg (http://img116.imageshack.us/my.php?image=d3b808bbpr7.jpg)
Idk
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/773/ba0f7c80mc2.th.jpg (http://img160.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ba0f7c80mc2.jpg)

ras
08-10-2006, 07:32 PM
im liking ta throw ! :)

bourbon
08-10-2006, 08:21 PM
im really liking your throws fosale, not so sure about ur pieces tho

bourbon
08-10-2006, 08:22 PM
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/3769/1108061004kl4.jpg

starting real basics, block busters, like everyone is saying, used the bar method

spuck
08-10-2006, 08:26 PM
http://f10.putfile.com/thumb/8/22120250489.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=main/8/22120250489.jpg&s=f10)<thumb

i got some blocks too, cept i just started with big squares and &#39;whittled&#39; them down, is that cheating?

magic nyc
08-10-2006, 08:34 PM
I can see a roller developing :)

Fosale!
08-10-2006, 08:50 PM
new style crits?
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/2493/p1010147df6.th.jpg (http://img86.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010147df6.jpg)
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/7200/p1010148lt0.th.jpg (http://img82.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010148lt0.jpg)
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/4774/p1010149pg5.th.jpg (http://img239.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010149pg5.jpg)
^^^Thumbnails...

shifty!
08-10-2006, 09:00 PM
Originally posted by shifty&#33;+Aug 10 2006, 05:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (shifty&#33; @ Aug 10 2006, 05:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-shifty&#33;@Aug 10 2006, 05:04 PM
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/9823/sh018uw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6653/sh020oq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/8033/sh019xd0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits pleasee, tryin to get a better throwie
crits... [/b][/quote]
yo can i get some feedback on these? i havent got anything back i need to know if they are all shit and some advice thanks...

NICCSACC
08-10-2006, 09:02 PM
ok add a couple letters. the style on the bottom one is the best so far. SC is so anon to me. no style to it........................... pz

shifty!
08-10-2006, 09:09 PM
yeh i have a full throwie it somewhere with my school shit i will put it up later...
by the way its a H not C...

extirpate
08-10-2006, 09:26 PM
shifty i like em, just put the rest of your name in, the first 2 letters are always the easyest

lost_for_evex
08-10-2006, 09:31 PM
Originally posted by sky 5+Aug 10 2006, 05:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (sky 5 @ Aug 10 2006, 05:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-lost_for_evex@Aug 10 2006, 05:36 PM
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

magic u start shit with everone and look at ur work.
why the f you always runnin your mouth startin ish . . . . spend more time doing graffitti instead of tryin to sound and look it sucka . . . [/b][/quote]
cuz unlike you i have a life...i got better shit 2 do then sit around and sketch 100 times a day...my shit develops on its own i dont have 2 force it...

and cuz ur boy runs his mouth all day about other people sayin he can shit on us but then when he posts suttin he posts dumb shit

magic nyc
08-10-2006, 09:53 PM
I havent talked shit in a while so dont start me, and this is the fucking toy fourm&#33; I here only because I know im toy and im working on it. If you think your so great then go to the big thread and see how far you sketches go.

jerm_mtl
08-10-2006, 09:54 PM
crits? http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/894/jermxv7.png

jerm_mtl
08-10-2006, 09:55 PM
crits? http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/894/jermxv7.png

Fosale!
08-10-2006, 09:57 PM
i really ike it, espically the R

jerm_mtl
08-10-2006, 09:58 PM
aight thanks dood

magic nyc
08-10-2006, 10:11 PM
Actually I liked it all except the R, you need to bring the bottom legs out more. But other than that get you consistancy down on thickness and your good.

NICCSACC
08-10-2006, 10:17 PM
Originally posted by jerm_mtl@Aug 10 2006, 08:55 PM
crits? http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/894/jermxv7.png
light years beyond alot of the shit ive seen lately.

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-10-2006, 10:29 PM
Originally posted by ras@Aug 10 2006, 05:55 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/8060/raug1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
R aint bad... make the A look more like an A.

Skeam
08-10-2006, 10:39 PM
heres my dalekentrie i mpretty happy with it. crits would be great. my camera is ultimate shit and i spend all my money on my 50 so im to poor to by another one

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1835/hpim2093jp2.jpg

lost_for_evex
08-10-2006, 10:44 PM
Originally posted by magic nyc@Aug 10 2006, 08:53 PM
I havent talked shit in a while so dont start me, and this is the fucking toy fourm&#33; I here only because I know im toy and im working on it. If you think your so great then go to the big thread and see how far you sketches go.
iv been in the big thread...and if been accepted.. ;) all u need is letter structure and style...shit aint that hard.

alive
08-10-2006, 10:45 PM
Originally posted by spuck@Aug 10 2006, 07:26 PM
http://f10.putfile.com/thumb/8/22120250489.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=main/8/22120250489.jpg&s=f10)<thumb

i got some blocks too, cept i just started with big squares and &#39;whittled&#39; them down, is that cheating?
hey i thought you were going to be PMing some sketches to me. w/e suit urself&#33; :lol: who the fuck am i anyway? i think some1 alrdy said this, but u gotta work on the consistancy of the strkes of your letters. use BARS, itl make sure a difference.

i also suggest you dont try to use diagonals on your S yet.

and
damn SKEAM. i love it. tip-TOP for sure. dunno wut else to say.


peace.

spuck
08-10-2006, 10:47 PM
yeah, i was gonna pm it, but i just posted instead

Fosale!
08-10-2006, 11:13 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Aug 10 2006, 07:50 PM
new style crits?
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/2493/p1010147df6.th.jpg (http://img86.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010147df6.jpg)
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/7200/p1010148lt0.th.jpg (http://img82.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010148lt0.jpg)


keep new style?
work on it?
ditch it?
what should i do, crits?

DJLotus
08-10-2006, 11:19 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Aug 10 2006, 10:13 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Aug 10 2006, 10:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Aug 10 2006, 07:50 PM
new style crits?
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/2493/p1010147df6.th.jpg (http://img86.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010147df6.jpg)
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/7200/p1010148lt0.th.jpg (http://img82.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010148lt0.jpg)


keep new style?
work on it?
ditch it?
what should i do, crits? [/b][/quote]
I actually like the second one... but the first one is meh. The E looks like a C and the C looks like an R... also, try to stay proportional. The capital S is tiny compared to the lowercase "ec".... Just my 2 cents though.

alive
08-10-2006, 11:20 PM
actually, i like the first better then the second, u just gotta fix the bottom of the S, it gets too narrow compared to the rest. keep working on it. but also work on ur blockletters and pieces.

Fosale!
08-11-2006, 12:41 AM
i don&#39;t do piece and blockbusters i only do throwies and tags.

NICCSACC
08-11-2006, 12:45 AM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/2c6f8497e8.jpg

bouncingsoul
08-11-2006, 01:00 AM
Going simpler again... I&#39;ll try some addons and stuff in a bit cuz I got some new ideas.

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/179cdce7.jpg

fukbuff124
08-11-2006, 01:46 AM
one of the stickers on thre has been posted a few times but yeah anything about the other stuff ??
http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k319/OTRwriter1/pagechar.jpg

Seek139
08-11-2006, 01:55 AM
http://hammeroftruth.com/2006/08/06/busted-now-on-youtube/
learn your writes with video to show you what to do when u get pulled over on the street.

ShIfTeD
08-11-2006, 01:57 AM
post in the right section dumbass, thats already been see on here anyways

ras
08-11-2006, 04:59 AM
http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/7656/homerhv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Critz and comment&#39;s pleeeease :D ? .........................

Socrates
08-11-2006, 05:10 AM
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...=0&#entry742787 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=14335&st=0&#entry742787)

read it all

AoAssis
08-11-2006, 06:41 AM
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/Muffinman0/New%20Graff/Picture210.jpg
FDC
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/Muffinman0/New%20Graff/Picture212.jpg
Pogo
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/Muffinman0/New%20Graff/Picture213.jpg
Remik
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/Muffinman0/New%20Graff/Picture214.jpg
FDC
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/Muffinman0/New%20Graff/Picture215.jpg
WAW
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/Muffinman0/New%20Graff/Picture219.jpg
Sheepe
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/Muffinman0/New%20Graff/Picture226.jpg
FDC
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/Muffinman0/New%20Graff/Picture227.jpg
FDC
http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/Muffinman0/New%20Graff/Picture228.jpg
Remik

Socrates
08-11-2006, 07:26 AM
yo yoi
FDC rrpresent&#33;&#33;&#33;

ras
08-11-2006, 07:46 AM
http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/4289/rain2pd5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

quick peice....critz comments ? ...

ras
08-11-2006, 11:44 AM
http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7707/burnerab8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits comments on this 1 to please ? .. .. . . ..

sky 5
08-11-2006, 01:13 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 10 2006, 11:45 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/2c6f8497e8.jpg
bump for consistent style . . .

sky 5
08-11-2006, 01:17 PM
Originally posted by bourbon@Aug 10 2006, 07:22 PM
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/3769/1108061004kl4.jpg

starting real basics, block busters, like everyone is saying, used the bar method
for the bottom one, get it to lay even, draw a straight horizontal line on the paper before you get started . . . then look for areas where you can give the north to south lines a lil kink, either bend it in or bend it out . . . . once you get the bends for the NS lines/bars down then you can look for areas where you can start to add curves to the rest of the lines/bar . . . . .

some_one
08-11-2006, 01:25 PM
real nice style aoasis..
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060811/10/c/b/4/cb46f6676a69738b139b6bde6ac2271b200608111_full.jpg
crits?

RFI. SPit
08-11-2006, 01:40 PM
One of the latest-

http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/1200/p8100086ek8.jpg

Fosale!
08-11-2006, 02:43 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Aug 10 2006, 06:18 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4913/abfb15f1ra7.th.jpg (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=abfb15f1ra7.jpg)
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/5755/c57242d8th5.th.jpg (http://img128.imageshack.us/my.php?image=c57242d8th5.jpg)
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6274/761dc3e2xl4.th.jpg (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=761dc3e2xl4.jpg)
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/4376/ca27ebb8hx3.th.jpg (http://img48.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ca27ebb8hx3.jpg)

Thumbnails^^^^
Critsdidaliits?

NICCSACC
08-11-2006, 02:55 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/08b1926edf.jpg

Fosale!
08-11-2006, 02:56 PM
fucking fireee^^^

Fosale!
08-11-2006, 03:32 PM
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/3607/p1010150wg5.th.jpg (http://img105.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010150wg5.jpg)
http://img116.imageshack.us/img116/4389/p1010153pl3.th.jpg (http://img116.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010153pl3.jpg)

crits?

NICCSACC
08-11-2006, 03:36 PM
too bad you cant see whats really on that pie box the s on the bottom one is bad those other s&#39;s are great tho on the other pics. like most of those "e&#39;s" as well. very much

xAWOKE.925
08-11-2006, 03:40 PM
looks like gerks E. suppose it could be somewhat generic. but yeah, NOT feelin the style

Fosale!
08-11-2006, 03:48 PM
They are thumbnails if you lick the pie box pic you can see it better.

Mugyver
08-11-2006, 04:42 PM
more simples.
critz pleeeeeaaase&#33;

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/tattoo.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/hollow.jpg

throwies
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/throwie2.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/throwie.jpg

MUSASHI
08-11-2006, 06:09 PM
muguyver,I been tooling around with the word "ROSE",not looking too bad on your "Rise" stuff just try and make all your shadows consistent ...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/kings.jpg

a little throw for this weeks battle.

xAWOKE.925
08-11-2006, 06:13 PM
Im not feelin it man. i&#39;ve seen better shit from you.

Zire
08-11-2006, 06:15 PM
Musa: Spend a little bit more time on it, some purple overlaps the white making it look sloppy.

Anyway, did these a few months ago, have laid of skethcing since then but recently started again. tell me wht u think, im a toy so whatever crits,comments will be taken into consideration.

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9791/20060811cameradanielas0051rz5.jpg

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/4080/20060811cameradanielas0044zi4.jpg

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/3174/20060811cameradanielas0057mi3.jpg

http://img108.imageshack.us/img108/6271/20060811cameradanielas0043mh4.jpg

xAWOKE.925
08-11-2006, 06:17 PM
work with that big blockletter ZARE 3 flix up. and the blue pen simple below that one. progress those styles and quit with all the loopy ends and shit.

Zire
08-11-2006, 06:19 PM
cheers, i quite like the purple one aswell so i will work with tht aswell

xAWOKE.925
08-11-2006, 06:27 PM
quick question...are you euro?

Zire
08-11-2006, 06:33 PM
yeh U.K

shifty!
08-11-2006, 06:34 PM
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/3722/sh021fd1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/2368/sh022mn7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
advice on these...im not sure about the char. in the S, and the second one sucks i cant sketch with pens

anarchy
08-11-2006, 06:39 PM
dude use a pen/marker that isnt like dead and work on that first one and itll get good i bet.

gift
08-11-2006, 07:13 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/toybattle-lilwayne.jpg

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/toybattle-dalek.jpg

some pieces i did for the toy battle section. crits would be appreciated

beefgerky
08-11-2006, 07:58 PM
musa, thats not a throwup, there too much complexity too it, and the fact that it straight also throws it off a bit, i wont fornt, theres dope straight letter throws, but i dunno, i just wouldnt consider that a throwup. w/e. idsay try more bubble shit, similarly shaped letters, etc.

Necro-
08-11-2006, 08:52 PM
couple flix from today. i have always hated my V&#39;s so ive been workin on it quite a bit. i like the V on the green one.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development020.jpg

i am very happy with this:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development019.jpg

same 1 further away because it looks better far away:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development021.jpg

what do u think? :ph34r:

BAZE
08-11-2006, 08:57 PM
looks weird lol. wat u color it with. looks kinda like wool lol

shifty!
08-11-2006, 09:01 PM
i like them the shading and color/fill is real good, keep it up man...

Skeam
08-11-2006, 09:31 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Aug 10 2006, 09:39 PM
heres my dalekentrie i mpretty happy with it. crits would be great. my camera is ultimate shit and i spend all my money on my 50 so im to poor to by another one

http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/1835/hpim2093jp2.jpg
bump for crits w000t

NICCSACC
08-11-2006, 09:52 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/4690041fd1.jpg

WolfBurrns
08-11-2006, 10:12 PM
Killin it NICCSACC, Why no fill?

Some new shit. I&#39;ve been sketching alot lately but I havent posted any of it because it just looks all the same. I tried something a little differant with the grey and black one. Sorry about the quality I had to use my webcam.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture4.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture3.jpg

CRITS?

clockworkfuse
08-11-2006, 10:15 PM
wow.. improvment.. nice

spuck
08-11-2006, 10:40 PM
http://f10.putfile.com/thumb/8/22222350799.jpg (http://putfile.com/pic.php?pic=main/8/22222350799.jpg&s=f10)<thumbnail

its a sticker, but its also a throw...

and before any of you go to say anthing about it, i like my incredibly simple face-e, it stays :angry:

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-11-2006, 11:31 PM
^ here&#39;s a tip...and dont get me wrong...im in no way telling you to bite, or promoting biting at all....but why don&#39;t you check out other artists work who maybe use the same letters as you, and see their style, and try and develop your own style based around it...

again...dont bite it...
it&#39;s okay to bite at first i guess...just to get a clue on letters and style, but if you do intend on biting...keep it on paper.

just a tip..

krysnum1
08-11-2006, 11:32 PM
Quick tip.

Magnadoodles are great for practicing thowies/tags.

So if your little sister/brother has one, bust it out and practice.

alive
08-11-2006, 11:39 PM
EDIT. damn sry. for those of u who saw that alrdy, i was looking at another page and didnt realize i was behind, and it was abt a mad old post. haha i feel dumb.

NICCSACC
08-11-2006, 11:41 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/e9bf9a0ce4.jpg

ZOMone
08-11-2006, 11:45 PM
nice color

spuck
08-11-2006, 11:53 PM
Originally posted by Rane *DF* *HM*@Aug 11 2006, 10:31 PM
^ here&#39;s a tip...and dont get me wrong...im in no way telling you to bite, or promoting biting at all....but why don&#39;t you check out other artists work who maybe use the same letters as you, and see their style, and try and develop your own style based around it...

again...dont bite it...
it&#39;s okay to bite at first i guess...just to get a clue on letters and style, but if you do intend on biting...keep it on paper.

just a tip..
so can i take that to mean "get style&#33;"?

it is quite plain.

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-12-2006, 12:09 AM
Originally posted by spuck+Aug 11 2006, 10:53 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (spuck @ Aug 11 2006, 10:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Rane *DF* *HM*@Aug 11 2006, 10:31 PM
^ here&#39;s a tip...and dont get me wrong...im in no way telling you to bite, or promoting biting at all....but why don&#39;t you check out other artists work who maybe use the same letters as you, and see their style, and try and develop your own style based around it...

again...dont bite it...
it&#39;s okay to bite at first i guess...just to get a clue on letters and style, but if you do intend on biting...keep it on paper.

just a tip..
so can i take that to mean "get style&#33;"?

it is quite plain. [/b][/quote]
Yeah, it&#39;s just so generic, and I&#39;m trying to give as much help as I can without getting into specifics, or talking shit.

Plain bubble letters can only do so much for you, but you are on the right track as far as trying to develop your style...but i wouldnt put the sticker anywhere if i was you. :P

gift
08-12-2006, 12:27 AM
Originally posted by gift@Aug 11 2006, 06:13 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/toybattle-lilwayne.jpg

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/toybattle-dalek.jpg

some pieces i did for the toy battle section. crits would be appreciated
bump for crits. i know they&#39;re horrible. but i need some input on them.

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-12-2006, 12:30 AM
the coloring on that dalek is wack...

[]RENT[]
08-12-2006, 01:31 AM
finally got this pic..

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9405/kosr4wu8.png (http://imageshack.us)

think its good enough to try the big boys thread with?

Ziontific
08-12-2006, 02:50 AM
Hey whats up, I know im a toy, thats why im here, id appreciate any critisism, i just started writing last month, but i have always taken photos of graffitti and enjoyed it.
my favorite blackbook piece ive done so far (http://www.photoape.com/album/photo/index.cfm?albumID=5519&photoPage=5)
another blackbook piece (http://www.photoape.com/album/photo/index.cfm?albumID=5519&photoPage=9)
this is actualy the piece i meant when i said my favorite. (http://www.photoape.com/album/photo/index.cfm?albumID=5519&photoPage=15)

NOMX
08-12-2006, 02:52 AM
^ get a new name/ practice and observe other pieces/ dont use paint

Ziontific
08-12-2006, 03:00 AM
just wondering, whats wrong with the name, oh and i have been using paint, but only on canvas, and i just recently started using caps other than stock, i went to scrapyard in new york and got them.

ShIfTeD
08-12-2006, 03:11 AM
thers nothing wrong with your name, he just wants himself to seem like he&#39;s actually giving good crits

your name is fine, just work on your letter structure, and keep drawing man, i wouldnt use paint until youve mastered the paper

how long have you been writing?

NOMX
08-12-2006, 03:15 AM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Aug 12 2006, 02:11 AM
thers nothing wrong with your name, he just wants himself to seem like he&#39;s actually giving good crits

mang shutup, zion?? that name is more played out than ur can stickers, i wouldnt give him shitty advice becuase when i was starting out i didnt have any influences and i wanna help him out, i want to see people coming up with some original shit rather than doing the same old played out shit

ShIfTeD
08-12-2006, 03:27 AM
your cool, stfu

Ziontific
08-12-2006, 03:30 AM
ive been writing for a month now. I have had trouble with the name, it comes from my emcee name,Ziontific, which was given to me by the guy who mentored me in lyricism, its because at the time i was using words like Quark and enzyme and stuff so he said im gonna call you scientific, and I was living with some rastafarians at the time so I said no I like ziontific. ive tried to change the name before, but found myself struggling to come up with something different that meant something to me. anyways I DO appreciate your critisim and im only painting canvas, I probably already spent too much money on all the krylon canvas and caps I bought, BUT i have done my research, I ownthe style wars special edition DVD (which has awesome special features), read william upskis book "bombing the suburbs", and I have always observed Graff, I also just recently went to NY and went to the wall of fame and Scrapyard where i bought a bunch of caps i dont even know how to use. anyways this is a rediculously long post whic his partly due to the fact that i dont know anyone out here where i just moved and hence have no friends, lol.

ShIfTeD
08-12-2006, 03:33 AM
lol, good reason???

but keep your name, just write ziontific

thats not played out man ;)

NOMX
08-12-2006, 03:34 AM
do u write ziontific or zion?
u also want to take into consideration what letters u like drawing, what letter u think that flow well. and remember that ur name doesnt always need to be a word or w/e. u can have ur name with a deeper meaning like mine i write AGOE but that doesnt stand for shit its: AGent OrangE. so in a nutshell what im saying is come up with something that means something to u and something that is truley unique.

shifted no beef but what u said about me was not needed

ShIfTeD
08-12-2006, 03:36 AM
no but neither was yours :blink:

Ziontific
08-12-2006, 03:48 AM
i like the to write Z and N but ive always felt like when i get to I and O that they just always end up looking too simple ESPECIALLY O. oh and i write Zion here are two handstyles that i do
handstyle 1 (http://www.photoape.com/album/photo/index.cfm?albumID=5519&photoPage=8)
2nd handstyle (http://www.photoape.com/album/photo/index.cfm?albumID=5519&photoPage=7)
the second one is the one i use the most, its a shittily done( iknow its not a word, but it just rolls off the toungue so well) I know trhey dont look like"Traditional" handstyles but i like em anyway.

doomsayer
08-12-2006, 03:50 AM
"It doesn&#39;t matter what word you write, all that matters is what you do with it."

Hey kid, go simpler on those tags, start out writing your letters just like normal handwriting and working on getting them to flow together. But a chisel tip marker too. Once youve got letters that flow well together then you can start thinking about adding on arrows and underlines or w/e u wanna do.

Ziontific
08-12-2006, 03:51 AM
thats very well put lol

Ziontific
08-12-2006, 03:53 AM
it is a chisel tip marker but ive been using shitty ass sharpies, i just got a pilot and i love it.

doomsayer
08-12-2006, 04:01 AM
Ok, well go simpler then.

---CRoR---
08-12-2006, 04:06 AM
Originally posted by Ziontific@Aug 12 2006, 02:30 AM
ive been writing for a month now. I have had trouble with the name, it comes from my emcee name,Ziontific, which was given to me by the guy who mentored me in lyricism, its because at the time i was using words like Quark and enzyme and stuff so he said im gonna call you scientific, and I was living with some rastafarians at the time so I said no I like ziontific. ive tried to change the name before, but found myself struggling to come up with something different that meant something to me. anyways I DO appreciate your critisim and im only painting canvas, I probably already spent too much money on all the krylon canvas and caps I bought, BUT i have done my research, I ownthe style wars special edition DVD (which has awesome special features), read william upskis book "bombing the suburbs", and I have always observed Graff, I also just recently went to NY and went to the wall of fame and Scrapyard where i bought a bunch of caps i dont even know how to use. anyways this is a rediculously long post whic his partly due to the fact that i dont know anyone out here where i just moved and hence have no friends, lol.
the word enzyme sounds dope to write but kinda long... but ya zion is used in toronto and many big citys but who cares write wat u want n just practice for about another 11months n see where ur at thats wat i was told 17months and im still drawing more then i paint but im a bomber..

heres n sketch i posted b4 but i like it for some reason..

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/5324/im002610sg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-=AgA=-TrAnCe
08-12-2006, 04:06 AM
simpler everyone, part from the guy who said he improved his v, dudue your dope.

[]RENT[]
08-12-2006, 04:12 AM
Originally posted by []RENT[]@Aug 12 2006, 12:31 AM
finally got this pic..

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9405/kosr4wu8.png (http://imageshack.us)

think its good enough to try the big boys thread with?
*cough*

zion, like everyone else said, go simpler, you dont need tons of crazy lines going everywere for a tag, it should take you 2 - 5 seconds

NICCSACC
08-12-2006, 04:20 AM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/76af64a47b.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/c568075c42.jpg

NOMX
08-12-2006, 04:28 AM
Originally posted by []RENT[]+Aug 12 2006, 03:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE ([]RENT[] @ Aug 12 2006, 03:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#091;
RENT[],Aug 12 2006, 12:31 AM] finally got this pic..

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9405/kosr4wu8.png (http://imageshack.us)

think its good enough to try the big boys thread with?
*cough*

zion, like everyone else said, go simpler, you dont need tons of crazy lines going everywere for a tag, it should take you 2 - 5 seconds [/b][/quote]
i dont think its big boy thread material

[]RENT[]
08-12-2006, 04:41 AM
i ended up posting it there anyway, if people dont like me doing so, ill edit it out.

NOMX
08-12-2006, 04:58 AM
u also cant really tell what it really looks like becuz the pic quality is really bad

-=AgA=-TrAnCe
08-12-2006, 05:19 AM
Originally posted by NOMX+Aug 12 2006, 03:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NOMX @ Aug 12 2006, 03:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#091;@
RENT[],Aug 12 2006, 03:12 AM] <!--QuoteBegin-&#091;
RENT[],Aug 12 2006, 12:31 AM] finally got this pic..

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9405/kosr4wu8.png (http://imageshack.us)

think its good enough to try the big boys thread with?
*cough*

zion, like everyone else said, go simpler, you dont need tons of crazy lines going everywere for a tag, it should take you 2 - 5 seconds
i dont think its big boy thread material [/b][/quote]
never good enough. SIMPLE

some_one
08-12-2006, 07:08 AM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060812/04/5/8/3/583f03b521f98125c40deaa7dea6a42b200608120_full.jpg
i dident expect it to come out as scrappy as this. But, crits please?

bouncingsoul
08-12-2006, 07:31 AM
I know, I know, simple simple simple... Just trying out something a bit different and I actually kinda like the results

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/094feb5e.jpg

Socrates
08-12-2006, 07:39 AM
waY TOO MANY pointless addons

bouncingsoul
08-12-2006, 07:44 AM
Yeah, I know but I had fun drawing them haha

:edit: Might as well post the simple I just sketched... What do you think? Like it, don&#39;t like it? Why, why not?

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/037b2674.jpg

Personally I liked my H and my E, the other letters were OK... trying something a little different with my A

bouncingsoul
08-12-2006, 12:28 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/939f14d2.jpg

Detoxication
08-12-2006, 12:54 PM
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9634/kosy5yw2.jpg
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/4876/kosy3jk2.jpg


Comments on what I could improve on please..

Necro-
08-12-2006, 01:10 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Aug 11 2006, 07:52 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro&#045; &#064; Aug 11 2006, 07:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>couple flix from today. i have always hated my V&#39;s so ive been workin on it quite a bit. i like the V on the green one.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development020.jpg

i am very happy with this:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development019.jpg

same 1 further away because it looks better far away:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development021.jpg

what do u think? :ph34r:[/b]
bump

<!--QuoteBegin-BAZE@Aug 11 2006, 07:57 PM
looks weird lol. wat u color it with. looks kinda like wool lol[/quote]

its pencil :P

lost_for_evex
08-12-2006, 01:33 PM
^loveing that shit.

WolfBurrns
08-12-2006, 01:35 PM
Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Aug 11 2006, 09:12 PM
Killin it NICCSACC, Why no fill?

Some new shit. I&#39;ve been sketching alot lately but I havent posted any of it because it just looks all the same. I tried something a little differant with the grey and black one. Sorry about the quality I had to use my webcam.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture4.jpg

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/Picture3.jpg

CRITS?
Bumping for crits. Im really trying to progress that second style.

Kosy- The first one isnt real bad. The fill Looks like flowers in there and the yellow things dont look right. Work alot on your structure(making every part of the letter equal in width and size). Go to the "New to Graff" thread for some help. But otherwise, good try.

Necro- Good shit. Thats a crazy style and it looks like its just popping off the page.

lost_for_evex
08-12-2006, 01:35 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Aug 12 2006, 11:28 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/939f14d2.jpg
bump i like dis shit 2 lol

clockworkfuse
08-12-2006, 02:14 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Aug 12 2006, 12:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Aug 12 2006, 12:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 11 2006, 07:52 PM
couple flix from today.Â* i have always hated my V&#39;s so ive been workin on it quite a bit. i like the V on the green one.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development020.jpg

i am very happy with this:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development019.jpg

same 1 further away because it looks better far away:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development021.jpg

what do u think?Â* :ph34r:
bump

<!--QuoteBegin-BAZE@Aug 11 2006, 07:57 PM
looks weird lol. wat u color it with. looks kinda like wool lol

its pencil :P [/b][/quote]
wow those look fucking cool...

bouncingsoul
08-12-2006, 02:17 PM
Necro, those look niiiice... I can&#39;t figure out what it says though Mav? Still dope. A page I filled just now

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/9a563384.jpg

I think I posted the first two simples on the left already, I like my H in the 3rd one. And the rest are just practicin throwies and shit

Necro-
08-12-2006, 02:40 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Aug 12 2006, 01:17 PM
Necro, those look niiiice... I can&#39;t figure out what it says though Mav? Still dope. A page I filled just now

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/9a563384.jpg

I think I posted the first two simples on the left already, I like my H in the 3rd one. And the rest are just practicin throwies and shit
yeah says Mav


i really like the one that is 2 down from the throwies, just not the E. your shit looks good.

MUSASHI
08-12-2006, 02:42 PM
bouncing you never cease to amaze me...nice &#33;

here is a word I been screwing with alot lately,"ROSE" I also been doing"IRIS" alot

this flick is just of an outline just so you can see where it&#39;s coming from I&#39;ll post a finnished later

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/rose1er.jpg

contraband
08-12-2006, 03:57 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Aug 12 2006, 12:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Aug 12 2006, 12:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 11 2006, 07:52 PM
couple flix from today.Â* i have always hated my V&#39;s so ive been workin on it quite a bit. i like the V on the green one.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development020.jpg

i am very happy with this:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development019.jpg

same 1 further away because it looks better far away:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development021.jpg

what do u think?Â* :ph34r:
bump

<!--QuoteBegin-BAZE@Aug 11 2006, 07:57 PM
looks weird lol. wat u color it with. looks kinda like wool lol

its pencil :P [/b][/quote]
dam thats nice , if you could paint that then it would be super fresh.

imported_Kev_Graff
08-12-2006, 04:04 PM
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e105/Kev_Graff/Sketches%202/zeacsmall2.jpg

Crits??

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-12-2006, 04:07 PM
clean fill...its ballin.

[]RENT[]
08-12-2006, 04:19 PM
Originally posted by &#045;=AgA=&#045;TrAnCe+Aug 12 2006, 04:19 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (-=AgA=-TrAnCe @ Aug 12 2006, 04:19 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by NOMX+Aug 12 2006, 03:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NOMX &#064; Aug 12 2006, 03:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#091;@
RENT[],Aug 12 2006, 03:12 AM] <!--QuoteBegin-&#091;
RENT[],Aug 12 2006, 12:31 AM] finally got this pic..

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9405/kosr4wu8.png (http://imageshack.us)

think its good enough to try the big boys thread with?
*cough*

zion, like everyone else said, go simpler, you dont need tons of crazy lines going everywere for a tag, it should take you 2 - 5 seconds
i dont think its big boy thread material [/b][/quote]
never good enough. SIMPLE [/b][/quote]
You telling me to go simple? that is simple. Its plain, it has no stupid extensions, no crappy add ons n no arrows. The only thing that isnt simple is the fill (which some of it you can see cuz of the pic..)

NOMX, yea its bad image quality, I have to take pics with my webcam..

NICCSACC
08-12-2006, 04:36 PM
Originally posted by []RENT[]+Aug 12 2006, 03:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE ([]RENT[] @ Aug 12 2006, 03:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#091;
RENT[],Aug 12 2006, 12:31 AM] finally got this pic..

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/9405/kosr4wu8.png (http://imageshack.us)

think its good enough to try the big boys thread with?
*cough*

zion, like everyone else said, go simpler, you dont need tons of crazy lines going everywere for a tag, it should take you 2 - 5 seconds [/b][/quote]
i think that shits dope.

MonoR
08-12-2006, 05:04 PM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/9020/sketch02ld5.png (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

MUSASHI
08-12-2006, 05:17 PM
666 I don&#39;t like when people draw with crayons...

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/kingz.jpg

trac
08-12-2006, 06:00 PM
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/7143/dsc00022oi6.jpg
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6148/dsc00011dy7.jpg
Any Crits

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-12-2006, 06:01 PM
if your name is trac, and you are gonna design a throwie...why not just spend the extra 2 seconds to put the 4th letter in there?

trac
08-12-2006, 06:06 PM
some i do and others i dont. gives me a variety of styles

mrceb
08-12-2006, 06:13 PM
crayons are cheap

Socrates
08-12-2006, 06:37 PM
musashi that kingz is a LOOOT better than your older shit
it has structure and something that looks like style


trac what the fuck is that?

near
08-12-2006, 06:49 PM
amen i was gonna say that kings is fire musa you come a long way as far as letter structure goes (your fills/colours have always been good) keep it up

rats
08-12-2006, 07:25 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Aug 12 2006, 06:31 AM
I know, I know, simple simple simple... Just trying out something a bit different and I actually kinda like the results

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/094feb5e.jpg
Whoa. Add-ons are crazy in this, like tentacles on a japanese schoolgirl.


You should colour this if you have the time, though. I&#39;m interested as to how it&#39;ll look.

Necro-
08-12-2006, 07:39 PM
Havnt doen my throwie in a while so i tried to do it again without looking. turned out good imo.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development022.jpg

i dont know why i added a drip... i dont like them :P

Socrates
08-12-2006, 07:43 PM
honestly, its ugly

and your pieces arent any better, the letters are always the same just colored differently

MonoR
08-12-2006, 07:51 PM
wht do you loose by trying? keep it up try shit but if its ugly just work on it ;)

peace

Chop Logic
08-12-2006, 07:55 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/sect.jpg

Crits, its for abattle.

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-12-2006, 08:44 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 12 2006, 06:39 PM
Havnt doen my throwie in a while so i tried to do it again without looking. turned out good imo.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development022.jpg

i dont know why i added a drip... i dont like them :P
bah...work that V some...and get rid of the face in the A...it makes it look like you are jocking Reas a little bit.

DJLotus
08-12-2006, 08:56 PM
The M looks kinda akward.... And the right side of the V looks like a face thats throwing up :huh:

NICCSACC
08-12-2006, 09:00 PM
everyones worried about whos "jocking" who etc... shits comedy.

http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/7a2968f30d.jpg
extra blurry for ya.

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-12-2006, 09:08 PM
flava&#33;

Necro-
08-12-2006, 09:29 PM
thanks for the crits everyone, ill work on it.


Originally posted by Socrates@Aug 12 2006, 06:43 PM
honestly, its ugly

and your pieces arent any better, the letters are always the same just colored differently
thanks man. looking back lots of my shit looks too much the same :unsure: . here&#39;s something i just did that is a lil different. i just cant think of how to color it. anyone got some suggestions?

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development023.jpg

DJLotus
08-12-2006, 09:39 PM
Watermelon and white/green apple. Would make it pop...

nerdx
08-12-2006, 09:42 PM
just messing around.
RIP Harold.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2452/img2440hg3.jpg

super grimey

Socrates
08-12-2006, 09:51 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Aug 12 2006, 08:29 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Aug 12 2006, 08:29 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> thanks for the crits everyone, ill work on it.

<!--QuoteBegin-Socrates@Aug 12 2006, 06:43 PM
honestly, its ugly

and your pieces arent any better, the letters are always the same just colored differently
thanks man. looking back lots of my shit looks too much the same :unsure: . here&#39;s something i just did that is a lil different. i just cant think of how to color it. anyone got some suggestions? [/b][/quote]
you sound like someone who deserves to hear something more than go simpler. soooo
dont color it man, pump out sketches, try out new shit, if it looks wack make it look good.

OR

Go back to blockbusters rock them a while then mould letters

this sketch still looks pretty much the same. the second leg of the A is positioned a little lower but thats basically it.

keep drawing

WolfBurrns
08-12-2006, 09:51 PM
Necro- Its a nice change. Good job. When coloring I like doing a dark color for the "face" of the letters than a lighter color for the 3-d. Or the opposite. You dont have too, but it usually works for me. Be creative on the fill and 3-d. Add some shading to the 3-d and some kind of design with your fill. Again, you don&#39;t have to. Simple works just fine.

lost_for_evex
08-12-2006, 09:54 PM
nerco..i like ur shit...its a diffrent style from everyone elses...

Socrates
08-12-2006, 10:00 PM
evex wanna do an exchange
steroid man :)

lost_for_evex
08-12-2006, 10:05 PM
call me hulk...haha yea sure wut you write

edit: btw my fuckin ass cheek hurts from injectiin it there :(

Necro-
08-12-2006, 10:05 PM
thx guys.

im not gonna color it right now, i probably will maybe tomorrow. ill post it if i do.


Originally posted by Socrates@Aug 12 2006, 08:51 PM

this sketch still looks pretty much the same. the second leg of the A is positioned a little lower but thats basically it.

keep drawing

heck ive even been dropping that part of teh A on the last couple of sketches. they&#39;re posted a couple pages ago :P

Socrates
08-12-2006, 10:08 PM
Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Aug 12 2006, 09:05 PM
call me hulk...haha yea sure wut you write

edit: btw my fuckin ass cheek hurts from injectiin it there :(
****** do me a "petak"


i like you necro you admit your shit has flaws

uhhh
08-12-2006, 10:17 PM
necro-i do kinda like your style. but it could evolve some. but at least your take crits and say "yeah. i&#39;ll try that." instead of getting yourself banned

lost_for_evex
08-12-2006, 10:35 PM
Originally posted by Socrates+Aug 12 2006, 09:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Socrates @ Aug 12 2006, 09:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-lost_for_evex@Aug 12 2006, 09:05 PM
call me hulk...haha yea sure wut you write

edit: btw my fuckin ass cheek hurts from injectiin it there :(
****** do me a "petak"


i like you necro you admit your shit has flaws [/b][/quote]
its guna be a pen freestyle no color...cuz im lazy like that

myl
08-12-2006, 11:12 PM
new throw i came up with...

http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/458/img0117fr6.jpg

DJLotus
08-12-2006, 11:14 PM
Just my thoughts but....

-The L looks like a C.

-The M&#39;s ear/tail/whatever you wanna call it just looks out of place.

clockworkfuse
08-12-2006, 11:16 PM
looks like hyc

lost_for_evex
08-12-2006, 11:23 PM
pen free .......... w.e letters i never use..ever lol <_< exchange

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture084.jpg

nerdx
08-12-2006, 11:24 PM
the Y and the L looks arlight. just need to be messed with slightly like the porpotions.
but the M needs to be reworked.

fitzy5814
08-12-2006, 11:46 PM
http://f10.putfile.com/main/8/22323414424.jpg
http://f10.putfile.com/main/8/22323444960.jpg
They were quick, Any comment on how to make them better?

lost_for_evex
08-12-2006, 11:56 PM
another exchange..looks way better in person..w.e

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture085.jpg

DJLotus
08-13-2006, 12:01 AM
Howwabout you draw me a This1 piece? =)

lost_for_evex
08-13-2006, 12:02 AM
<_< <_<

nerdx
08-13-2006, 12:05 AM
using evex old name
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/4536/img0660ks4.jpg

clockworkfuse
08-13-2006, 12:06 AM
evex? evep?

HoodRichSucka
08-13-2006, 12:46 AM
Originally posted by nerdx@Aug 12 2006, 08:42 PM
just messing around.
RIP Harold.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2452/img2440hg3.jpg

super grimey
harold hunter RIP&#33; legend for sure&#33;

-d

nerdx
08-13-2006, 01:16 AM
Originally posted by clockworkfuse@Aug 12 2006, 11:06 PM
evex? evep?
his old name EVER

Ziontific
08-13-2006, 01:17 AM
Heres my latest piece, it took forever to get the pattern and i still dont really like the way it turned out, but i do like this piece anyway, let me know what you think.
argyle piece (http://www.photoape.com/album/photo/index.cfm?albumID=5519&photoPage=6)

DJLotus
08-13-2006, 01:26 AM
You should try to keep the color scheme a little more basic while you&#39;re still drawing basic pieces.... and the orange triangles don&#39;t look very good behind it.. how long have you been drawing again?

EDIT: Not trying to sound like a smart ass. :ph34r:

Ziontific
08-13-2006, 01:32 AM
only a month, but ive always loved Graff

Ziontific
08-13-2006, 01:36 AM
ive also never really done visual art, until this year really but I like it, i see what your saying about the oarnge "triangles" but in the end I like the look of this piece anyways, id like to try to do the argyle fill in again with less colors

doomsayer
08-13-2006, 01:38 AM
Originally posted by HoodRichSucka+Aug 12 2006, 11:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HoodRichSucka @ Aug 12 2006, 11:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-nerdx@Aug 12 2006, 08:42 PM
just messing around.
RIP Harold.

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/2452/img2440hg3.jpg

super grimey
harold hunter RIP&#33; legend for sure&#33;

-d [/b][/quote]
haha, he was the funniest guy.

Ziontific
08-13-2006, 01:44 AM
argyle piece (http://www.photoape.com/album/photo/index.cfm?albumID=5519&photoPage=6)
bumping for crit

WolfBurrns
08-13-2006, 01:45 AM
Dog, your not painting are you?

Ziontific
08-13-2006, 01:46 AM
hell yes he was, my friend brandon said he met him at this skate demo in NC and he smoked them up, and started acting crazy, he was saying like"when your rich man, everythings complimentary, see this water? (throws it on the floor) complimentary water, see this cereal?(knocks box of the shelf) fuckin complimentary bitch&#33;" lol i would have loved to meet him.

Ziontific
08-13-2006, 01:49 AM
im painting on canvas in my garage, just for practice, but ive decided to save my money( i spent alot on paint and caps) and just stick to sketching for now.

Ziontific
08-13-2006, 01:49 AM
im painting on canvas in my garage, just for practice, but ive decided to save my money( i spent alot on paint and caps) and just stick to sketching for now.

Ziontific
08-13-2006, 01:49 AM
im painting on canvas in my garage, just for practice, but ive decided to save my money( i spent alot on paint and caps) and just stick to sketching for now.

DJLotus
08-13-2006, 01:54 AM
Dude... just sketch on paper... so you can correct mistakes and itll be so much easier... get it on paper before paint...

Ziontific
08-13-2006, 01:57 AM
yeah i was doing that from the begining with my painting stuff, I sketch it in pencil, outline it in marker and color it in with marker, then i paint it, i was bombing for a bit, but i did it in a REALLY public place and then was like paranoid for three days, so im sticking to my book and my graage, even though ive hidden all my stuff i nthere for the time being.

bouncingsoul
08-13-2006, 02:51 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/9a563384.jpg

Bump

---CRoR---
08-13-2006, 04:24 AM
something i thot i had goin well wen i drew the first R then the C then the O and the last r jus went to shit but here it is ne crits?
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/226/im002639pd7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

-=AgA=-TrAnCe
08-13-2006, 04:42 AM
Originally posted by clockworkfuse+Aug 12 2006, 01:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (clockworkfuse @ Aug 12 2006, 01:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 12 2006, 12:10 PM

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 11 2006, 07:52 PM
couple flix from today. i have always hated my V&#39;s so ive been workin on it quite a bit. i like the V on the green one.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development020.jpg

i am very happy with this:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development019.jpg

same 1 further away because it looks better far away:
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/development021.jpg

what do u think? :ph34r:
bump

<!--QuoteBegin-BAZE@Aug 11 2006, 07:57 PM
looks weird lol. wat u color it with. looks kinda like wool lol

its pencil :P
wow those look fucking cool... [/b][/quote]
dude start progressing that style man&#33;, it fucking burns.

SeKz
08-13-2006, 06:05 AM
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4585/image001hj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Just did this, easily the best ove done, need advice please&#33; thanks

doomsayer
08-13-2006, 06:29 AM
thats ill man

bouncingsoul
08-13-2006, 07:46 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/d218928d.jpg

DeathRow
08-13-2006, 07:47 AM
Nice sekz ^^^

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7893/p0813212815sq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Yeah just did thisss, aint really that great but yeahh im trying to progress


peace

bouncingsoul
08-13-2006, 08:01 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/d218928d.jpg

doomsayer
08-13-2006, 09:02 AM
crits please, this is my first peice ever

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/ae028b87.jpg

edit: whoops too small how bout this:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/b85b9c38.jpg

-=AgA=-TrAnCe
08-13-2006, 09:05 AM
doomsayer go simple man, no offence but simple starts, thats not too bad, but go somple.

doomsayer
08-13-2006, 09:06 AM
ive been doing simple for the last month

SeKz
08-13-2006, 09:12 AM
If youve been doing simple for the last month then why is that your first peice. Keep to the simple shit for at least 4-6 months before progressing but its all about pace and feeling your letters, how fast you progress all depends on practice though. Keep it up.

doomsayer
08-13-2006, 09:14 AM
ive only been doing sketches in pencil, this is the first one ive added 3d to and coloured int and outlined

Zire
08-13-2006, 09:21 AM
Listen to him man, dont try and rush ur progession it comes naturally, if u want to learn some new techniques just look at some of the work on www.graffiti.org but dont bite it, just look at it and see how its done.

Seti
08-13-2006, 10:31 AM
sez kings, completely unreadable exept for u perseptive mother fuckers... now gimme some crits pleez...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image050.jpg

-=AgA=-TrAnCe
08-13-2006, 10:38 AM
thats hot, clean it up. do another but clean.

clockworkfuse
08-13-2006, 10:45 AM
6 more pages and this thread is 1337:):):):):)
i havn&#39;t postred any work in a while
ill throw somthing together today

Seti
08-13-2006, 10:46 AM
wats so mad about 1337?

What Happened to the Letters?
08-13-2006, 11:27 AM
it means leet as in elite, its liek counterstrike fag tlak, jsut like pwned

seti looks ill

Necro-
08-13-2006, 12:08 PM
looks awesome seti. i cant find the G, though.

lost_for_evex
08-13-2006, 12:12 PM
Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Aug 12 2006, 10:56 PM
another exchange..looks way better in person..w.e

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c302/ever_ebk/Picture085.jpg
...

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-13-2006, 12:23 PM
i love that style...

as a matter of fact...would you mind doing a "Naem" throw for me?

you don&#39;t have to, im just feeling it so much.

lost_for_evex
08-13-2006, 01:02 PM
i cant do a&#39;s in that style :( im sowwie...ill try anyway tho.

some_one
08-13-2006, 01:17 PM
Likeing that bomb evex, the flow&#39;s good, and it&#39;s different from the normal styles out there. And the force field is abit messy. I like the handstyles too.

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060813/10/e/e/b/eebe245414cd8f4f0d3e6dedb086672d200608130_full.jpg
crits/ comments? please..

sate-one
08-13-2006, 01:20 PM
im new 2 graff started wantin to get serious now so im sketchin more and more

http://images6.theimagehosting.com/Picture%207.9c4.th.jpg

for a quick throwie...i was thinkin of a name used Sate and made this quick...any tips on makin it better are needed

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-13-2006, 01:34 PM
Originally posted by some_one@Aug 13 2006, 12:17 PM
Likeing that bomb evex, the flow&#39;s good, and it&#39;s different from the normal styles out there. And the force field is abit messy. I like the handstyles too.

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060813/10/e/e/b/eebe245414cd8f4f0d3e6dedb086672d200608130_full.jpg
crits/ comments? please..
im feelin that...simple, but nice.

and evex...dont worry about it...it&#39;s not a big deal

KRON1*NVK
08-13-2006, 02:19 PM
Somethin my bro did:

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/5189/imstraest0.th.jpg (http://img65.imageshack.us/my.php?image=imstraest0.jpg)
crits

KRON1*NVK
08-13-2006, 02:20 PM
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/5189/imstraest0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

cheif3d
08-13-2006, 04:03 PM
Originally posted by Seti@Aug 13 2006, 09:31 AM
sez kings, completely unreadable exept for u perseptive mother fuckers... now gimme some crits pleez...
http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b144/nightbreedkru/Image050.jpg
Another fuckin reason for me to get off my ass and put something on this site. yo kid nice work if you can paint this shit I would flip my wig if I saw this shit. yo 3d fo real, good shit. do some more kid peace&#33;&#33;&#33;. :o

beefgerky
08-13-2006, 05:11 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap240.jpg
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/unlessineedafatcap241.jpg
you see more of this style later, without the scribles and the grimey fill.




now i gottta shit.

-=AgA=-TrAnCe
08-13-2006, 05:11 PM
overload with the colors dude... hahah
looks sick.

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-13-2006, 05:13 PM
the g looks ill, but the k is plain

beefgerky
08-13-2006, 05:15 PM
its still progressing, ima flick the new version in a minute.

quick shit huh?

Kept1
08-13-2006, 05:43 PM
I decided for athstetic purposes to drop the T and go with an H and use Keph1, pronounced "K E F". So heres a couple quick slappies I did the other night when BS wasnt workin.
Tryna keep it simple.
http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b217/Scryber/8-12-06001.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b217/Scryber/8-12-06003.jpg

http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b217/Scryber/8-12-06004.jpg

beefgerky
08-13-2006, 05:49 PM
not bad, staying simple, keep at it.

Monster Island
08-13-2006, 05:55 PM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/2766/img2031dl2.jpg

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/1118/img2032wx6.jpg




doodling the women i have trapped in my shed.

Clear Fruit Nectar
08-13-2006, 05:58 PM
http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/177358051.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/177358079.jpg

http://pic20.picturetrail.com/VOL1259/4596805/9654950/177358120.jpg

dont even ask what the blue shit is

Rane *DF* *HM*
08-13-2006, 06:20 PM
Originally posted by Monster Island@Aug 13 2006, 04:55 PM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/2766/img2031dl2.jpg

http://img57.imageshack.us/img57/1118/img2032wx6.jpg




doodling the women i have trapped in my shed.
weird shit yo...lol

keph..thats pretty nice...i just don&#39;t like all the inner details.

NICCSACC
08-13-2006, 06:20 PM
youre a pervert but thats cool. nice stuff chester&#33;&#33;

EatRichPeople
08-13-2006, 06:30 PM
Last page whas hot...specially the colorspacetrip shit from gerk

some scribbles I&#39;ve been workin with...critz advice?
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/999/bsox0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1144/kkay3bb3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/725/bs1cx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/7940/durlx9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

NOMX
08-13-2006, 06:36 PM
DAMN MONSTER&#33;&#33;&#33; those sketchs are sick&#33;

Monster Island
08-13-2006, 07:27 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/9521/img2033ut5.jpg

rushed it way to much, feel like its the ugliest piece ive ever done. dunno why i posted it

xAWOKE.925
08-13-2006, 07:33 PM
im reaaaaaaally not feelin the letters at all. The colors are good and it seems like you have that part down but you NEED to work on yoru structure.

Kept1
08-13-2006, 07:54 PM
Eat the Rich,
Third one down is illies. Some of your best stuff yet. (Ive seen at least).
Edit: Sick hands too.

nerdx
08-13-2006, 08:02 PM
Originally posted by Monster Island@Aug 13 2006, 06:27 PM
http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/9521/img2033ut5.jpg

rushed it way to much, feel like its the ugliest piece ive ever done. dunno why i posted it
the fill man. it kinda throws it off.

EatRichPeople
08-13-2006, 08:04 PM
thanx alot man

peace

NICCSACC
08-13-2006, 08:05 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/8d404a9a54.jpghttp://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/1349cc1a8b.jpg

CHEN[Ken]
08-13-2006, 08:19 PM
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y69/Martin90/newchennn.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y69/Martin90/chenred.jpg
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y69/Martin90/chensss.jpg

Diff Word I Tried

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y69/Martin90/sip1.jpg



ANY CRITS?

NICCSACC
08-13-2006, 08:43 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/4b6804872a.jpg

nerdx
08-13-2006, 09:06 PM
the N looks like a H

sky5 it looks dope not sure if itw as on purpos but the 5 looks like S



realllll quick simple i did for a dude who writes solow
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7729/img0663tz3.jpg

NICCSACC
08-13-2006, 09:24 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/b224a381a7.jpg

magic nyc
08-13-2006, 10:03 PM
Originally posted by Kept1@Aug 13 2006, 05:43 PM


http://i20.photobucket.com/albums/b217/Scryber/8-12-06003.jpg


bump for the nice handy, theirs been some good shit in here lately, im going to upload a piece ive been working but im finished now

NICCSACC
08-13-2006, 10:11 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/df67c25de6.jpg

Kept1
08-13-2006, 10:12 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 13 2006, 07:05 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/8d404a9a54.jpghttp://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/1349cc1a8b.jpg
Bump Nicc, always comin with the sick shit.
That charak is blaze.

magic nyc
08-13-2006, 10:18 PM
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6997/paper019lt4.jpg

I know my 3D sucks, it gets confusing when the piece isnt on a straight plane.

uhhh
08-13-2006, 10:22 PM
you&#39;ve got some good ideas. the letters just need some mo workk

Kept1
08-13-2006, 10:25 PM
I was thinkin the same thing.
The flow overall looks good, colors, all that.
It looks like you started it kinda funkin it up a bit and then deicided to go simple twords the end.
Good shit tho, keep it up.

magic nyc
08-13-2006, 10:30 PM
Thanks, it was my first like full color 2 page piece. Heres some more stuff from my book. Some stuffs a colab with my boy FEC.

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2581/paper014vv8.jpg
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5530/paper015md2.jpg
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2141/paper017xw8.jpg

NICCSACC
08-13-2006, 10:41 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/45ac03e94f.jpg
an old alias i used to go by...

NICCSACC
08-13-2006, 10:41 PM
oops double post

war terror
08-13-2006, 10:47 PM
Originally posted by nerdx@Aug 13 2006, 08:06 PM
the N looks like a H

sky5 it looks dope not sure if itw as on purpos but the 5 looks like S



realllll quick simple i did for a dude who writes solow
http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/7729/img0663tz3.jpg
make sure all the lines are the same width....

Kept1
08-13-2006, 10:54 PM
yeah that W kills it.

magic nyc
08-13-2006, 10:56 PM
no to be an asshole nerdex, but that looks like some 6th grade shit. I mean seriously put some effort into it.

Guerrilla876
08-13-2006, 11:11 PM
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l99/cjohnson816/guerrillagraff.jpg


wanted to make the backpack with the plaid design . . . but i was eager to just finish it and post it. :lol: but yeah, got inspired with the plaid design from Slobs slaps in the slaps thread.

monkey . . . bananas . . . plaid design . . . converse . . . what&#39;s not to love?
oh and the outline looks signifigantly like a poo color. . . irony?