Tot Black Books

[WolfBurrns]

That shit is nice. Real original in my opinion. No flashy colors. Its differant from what i'm used to but I really like it. Oh, and that charac is fuckin gee.

[NICCSACC]

"screw DK" hahaha

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Aug 13 2006, 09:56 PM
no to be an asshole nerdex, but that looks like some 6th grade shit. I mean seriously put some effort into it.
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/9668/1031788108lbg9.jpg

[Guerrilla876]

Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Aug 13 2006, 10:14 PM
That shit is nice. Real original in my opinion. No flashy colors. Its differant from what i'm used to but I really like it. Oh, and that charac is fuckin gee.
yeah thanks for the props. i forgot the 3-D though . . . oh well. i'll be puttin some more stuff up later.

[Guerrilla876]

bad post . . . DELETE

[Ziontific]

Guerrilla, that shit was soooo sick, Ive got apair of addidas that are brown with that exact plaid pattern in em, i tried to do a piece with argyle, but ive only been writing for a mont hnow, tell me what you think.
argyle piece (http://www.photoape.com/album/photo/index.cfm?albumID=5519&photoPage=6)

[Guerrilla876]

Originally posted by Ziontific@Aug 13 2006, 11:17 PM
Guerrilla, that shit was soooo sick, Ive got apair of addidas that are brown with that exact plaid pattern in em, i tried to do a piece with argyle, but ive only been writing for a mont hnow, tell me what you think.
argyle piece (http://www.photoape.com/album/photo/index.cfm?albumID=5519&photoPage=6)
i say, do your letters and get them down in pencil first. then when you're happy with them, outline them in your black pen & then do the design with a pencil lightly. i use decos . . . so a couple layers just covers the pencil lines. idk what you use, but if it doesnt cover up the pencil lines then you'll have to memorize the pattern i guess? but anyways, in whatever color your doing, use a ruler and then do the design. so far, for a month, it looks pretty good. just keep practicing is all i can really tell ya besides what was just said. but ill try and help you out more. pm me if you need more help & i hope this helps. ;)

[NICCSACC]

http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/9279aab1cd.jpg

[MUSASHI]

i like that style nic
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/kingz3.jpg

[Ziontific]

guerilla, I know your gonna laugh, but i did do it in pencil first i drew the box, whci is whats blacjk\, htne drew an argyle pattenr with a ruler, and then i drew my letters i nthe box and erased around them, i use sharpies.

[magic nyc]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Aug 13 2006, 10:30 PM
http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/2581/paper014vv8.jpg
http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/5530/paper015md2.jpg
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/2141/paper017xw8.jpg
more pics yay!!

[Guerrilla876]

Originally posted by Ziontific@Aug 13 2006, 11:43 PM
guerilla, I know your gonna laugh, but i did do it in pencil first i drew the box, whci is whats blacjk\, htne drew an argyle pattenr with a ruler, and then i drew my letters i nthe box and erased around them, i use sharpies.
haha. for real? then all you really need is practice. just start with foundation like everyone else says. get your letters down, then start on the fillings. i didnt start filling until recently. hopefully you can start before i had managed to try it out. but yup, practice is what gets ya there. at least you know how to make the design. ohh and sharpies aren't really the best, especially when you're trying with patterns. you need markers that can go over or bleed. like the white for the stitching like part. so try to go and get better supplies, at all costs. but if it's all you can get at this point, then it's going to be a challenge. if you dont rack your ish, then try ebay, i got a good deal on about 28 deco paint markers

[SeKz]

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/8483/image004ip9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Pretty messy, did it at school thats why its lined paper. Crits please, cheers

[NICCSACC]

line paper is better than graph paper any day!!

[svker]

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/9664/p7230047ht2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Guerrilla876]

dont really like the background . . . but who am i to judge?

[DeathRow]

Originally posted by DeathRow@Aug 13 2006, 06:47 AM
Nice sekz ^^^

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7893/p0813212815sq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Yeah just did thisss, aint really that great but yeahh im trying to progress


peace
uhh bump for crits, havent got any

Peace

[doomsayer]

dam i hate this my thros suck so much i dont have a clue what to do, crits please:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/crap.jpg

[DeathRow]

Just practise like crazy bro, it helps trust me.. but it wont happen over night,

I just did this crits please an i aint gettin no crits on the page before this one...

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9146/p0814193734bn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



Well yeahh pleaseeeeee can i get crits

peaceeeeeee

[doomsayer]

anotha peice of poo

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/crap-1.jpg

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by DeathRow@Aug 14 2006, 04:46 AM
Just practise like crazy bro, it helps trust me.. but it wont happen over night,

I just did this crits please an i aint gettin no crits on the page before this one...

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9146/p0814193734bn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



Well yeahh pleaseeeeee can i get crits

peaceeeeeee
why you need crits man thats dope as i cant see anything wrong with it. actually maybe make the P a tiny bit thinker, it kinda looks thin compared to the other leytters.

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

yeah, it dont match, and get rid of those silly other bits, stick with the letters.

[Zire]

Death row, i really like tht, the only thing tht looks out of place is the last bit on the right,

just finished this, first skecth since i stopped for a while, im pleased with it but w/e.

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/386/dscf0147cl5.jpg

[CHEN[Ken]]

Originally posted by Guerrilla876@Aug 13 2006, 10:11 PM
http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l99/cjohnson816/guerrillagraff.jpg


wanted to make the backpack with the plaid design . . . but i was eager to just finish it and post it. :lol: but yeah, got inspired with the plaid design from Slobs slaps in the slaps thread.

monkey . . . bananas . . . plaid design . . . converse . . . what's not to love?
oh and the outline looks signifigantly like a poo color. . . irony?
awsome fuckin colors

[tea dee sea]

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/7701/damean050go4.jpg
just sumthin simple

[nerdx]

agon, the bottom one looks good, i would just try and change up the N a bit.

[sky 5]

deathrow - thats solid man .. only part im not felling is the bottom right of the A and the bottom left of the M . . .

guerilla - your coming along nicely, maybe with the fill and how your letters overlap from left to right I would have done the white highlight on the the innner right of the letters instead of the inner left to show if off more . . .

[Sluts_r_us]

oh my fucking god NERDX IS BACK WTF!

[AoAssis]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Aug 14 2006, 12:43 PM
oh my fucking god NERDX IS BACK WTF!
tis is trew.

[trac]

http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6541/dronebytracix8.jpg
crits..

[Guerrilla876]

Originally posted by DeathRow+Aug 14 2006, 03:23 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DeathRow @ Aug 14 2006, 03:23 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DeathRow@Aug 13 2006, 06:47 AM
Nice sekz ^^^

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7893/p0813212815sq3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Yeah just did thisss, aint really that great but yeahh im trying to progress


peace
uhh bump for crits, havent got any

Peace [/b][/quote]
i wouldnt of added the arrows . . . just would have kept it more simpler. but i still like it, somewhat.

[RollTRS]

Originally posted by DeathRow@Aug 14 2006, 04:46 AM
Just practise like crazy bro, it helps trust me.. but it wont happen over night,

I just did this crits please an i aint gettin no crits on the page before this one...

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9146/p0814193734bn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



Well yeahh pleaseeeeee can i get crits

peaceeeeeee
I like that a lot, I&#39;m really feelin&#39; the colors and the flow

[Zire]

Bumpin this:

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/386/dscf0147cl5.jpg

and just finnished this, camera kills it a bit:

http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/4601/dscf0148qq0.jpg

[flclnaruto1213]

this page is 1337 bros

[RollTRS]

Damn right it is&#33; Whoo&#33;

Anyway, I&#39;m working on an throw that&#39;s easy to get up in paint quickly, and I just sketched this, and I&#39;m wondering if you guys think it has any merit to continue working on.

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/2077/picture9cj2.png

I&#39;m thinking I might try not overlapping the "O" over the "C". I think I&#39;ll ditch the "X"s too Whatchoo guys think?

[clockworkfuse]

3v3ry p057 mu57 b3 m4d3 1n 1337

[Fosale!]

[10[|<&#092;/&#092;/0r|< f|_|53, y0|_| |)0/&#092;/&#39;7 |</&#092;/0&#092;/&#092;/ |-|0&#092;/&#092;/ 70 5p34|< pr0p3r 1337 5p34|<

57f|_|, y0|_| /&#092;/|_|8 [|_|p.

[RollTRS]

{R175?

[Fosale!]

[0|)3 Y0|_| /&#092;/008.

&#33;7&#39;5 [R&#33;75

In 1337 speak I is &#33; L is 1
so you wrote CRLTS
instead of CRITS

[geon_ARG]

outline

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/879/skate002lx2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

and with colors :lol: don&#39;t laught to much, I only have poscas :( and 1 or 2 sharpies <_<

http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/6356/skate004jj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


and. . . I don&#39;t know why I post this shit but..

http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/7524/skate006yv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

the only good one is the S but wtf?

any suggestion? tip I don&#39;t know

What you think about paint the first sketch?¿
:) peace

[Fosale!]

http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/1899/p1010155dw7.th.jpg (http://img159.imageshack.us/my.php?image=p1010155dw7.jpg)
THUMBNAIL^^^^
idk...throwie on my computer fucked up on the E, but i love this S

[d_g]

Just starting out with throws.

http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/8260/560a0386hi2.jpg

Crits/tips/advice?

[Necro-]

1337

[DeathRow]

Thanx guys for the replies before (other page)


Geon man, that middle one is lookin like it has potential man, practise that, i like it&#33;

[prank]

the 2 first letters of my throw up YA

i need suggestions&#33;&#33;&#33;




http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/4736/image61oo0.jpg

[d_g]

The &#39;y&#39; looks a little to similar to a &#39;z&#39; IMO.

[tycoonin]

yea i whould suggest changing the y a little cus it definitly rezembles a z

[doomsayer]

Haha I thought it was a Z.

[bouncingsoul]

This thread aint leet no more... Oh well, revised throwie... I changed the H from lowercase to a capital H

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/76a312d8.jpg

:edit: Just realized the 3d&#39;s a little screwed up in some places but I jut want critz on the actual throw

[Zire]

Its really annoyning when u just post ur own work but dont crit anyone, its mostly newbies who do tht.

[d_g]

^^^ Yeah but if you&#39;re having trouble getting your own shit sorted you&#39;re probably not in the position to say what&#39;s wrong with others.

[doomsayer]

if u just started ur not gunna know what looks good or how to crit work anyways

soul that looks alot betta than b4, cept on the last letter, what is that pointy thing on the top, its like a straight line? hahah sorry mate im getting u mixed up wit sumone else, anyway the trowie look aight just that striahg line things confusin, make it a bit thickr ior w/e

[Zire]

Well theres no harm in making comments, anyways how u sposed to know how to improve if evryone is &#39;not good enough&#39; to crit or comment. We are in the toy forum so if we lived by tht rule then no one here wud comment.

[d_g]

Originally posted by d_g@Aug 14 2006, 08:10 PM
Just starting out with throws.

http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/8260/560a0386hi2.jpg

Crits/tips/advice?
Bizzump.

[Krash]

Originally posted by d_g+Aug 15 2006, 06:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Aug 15 2006, 06:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Aug 14 2006, 08:10 PM
Just starting out with throws.

http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/8260/560a0386hi2.jpg

Crits/tips/advice?
Bizzump. [/b][/quote]
i&#39;d say work on keeping your lines smoother

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Aug 15 2006, 05:26 AM
soul that looks alot betta than b4, cept on the last letter, what is that pointy thing on the top, its like a straight line? hahah sorry mate im getting u mixed up wit sumone else, anyway the trowie look aight just that striahg line things confusin, make it a bit thickr ior w/e
I dunno, I used to give people critz and stuff a while ago but people used to not take it good so I stopped... If you guys really want me to voice my opinions I will, just don&#39;t take it in a bad way... And that pointy thing was supposed to be like angry eyes in place of the hole in the e... In that example they were kinda squished so yeah...

Just so this post isn&#39;t completely useless...

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/e564c354.jpg

I REALLY liked how this one turned out... I&#39;ll add 3d and all that stuff soon

[uhhh]

ohhhh damn. i really like your stuff. your characs moe but your letters are most defienetly getting there. keep it upp

[bouncingsoul]

Honestly, my characters are dead simple, but thanks anyway

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by d_g+Aug 15 2006, 06:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Aug 15 2006, 06:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Aug 14 2006, 08:10 PM
Just starting out with throws.

http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/8260/560a0386hi2.jpg

Crits/tips/advice?
Bizzump. [/b][/quote]
i dont like ur letters

[beone]

fuck paper and fuck not having paint and fuckin not having people to paint with

can i get some critsh i know the top of the s is to big, im defenatly gunna work on this
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/250889.jpg

[Krash]

make the them...rounder.practice drawing circles for a few minutes as a warm up excercise,and your circular parts will look rounder.try to give the letters more distinction as well :)

[nerdx]

does that say regs?

[beone]

yes it says regs
bump for crits
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/250889.jpg

[N.O.T.E]

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/6343/picture014co0.jpg
sorry for blurrines

any critiques?

[Krash]

first resize.its eazy.click edit on your pic.when in paint,press ctrl+w,then put in like 30 an 30.from what i can make out:take off tha bits.don&#39;t connect the letters....an work on your 3-d

[N.O.T.E]

resized....thanx for the tip

[Krash]

anytime

[Remz125]

damn i wish i could write graff, everytime i put somethin in my blackbook it always comes out shitty. The only thing i know how to do is create words in other styles. But i hate that, i wanna hav my own style.

[WolfBurrns]

http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...opic=14335&st=0 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=14335&st=0)

;)

[tea dee sea]

Originally posted by tea dee sea@Aug 14 2006, 09:30 AM
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/7701/damean050go4.jpg
just sumthin simple
bump for crits

[Krash]

your 3-d is off.your letters are out of proportion.

[near]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/picture014co0.jpg

take away those things...decent letters

[near]

Originally posted by beone@Aug 15 2006, 12:03 PM
yes it says regs
bump for crits
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/250889.jpg
sake seems to like it

http://www.visualorgasm.com/photos/mo-sake022.jpg

[beone]

switched it up....and i didnt bite at all im doing a similiar style, you can even see the changes i made in my re throws to get the style down get the S&#39;s are very similiar tho
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/250919.jpg
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/248960.jpg

[near]

ok well regs im not trying to beef with you but look at your &#39;E&#39; and look at sakes &#39;E&#39; it is the exact same letter i guarantee if you post that on the main thread 10 ppl call you on a sake bite just because one line in your S is fatter than the one is sake&#39;s S doesnt mean it isnt a bite it is basically the same letters dude plus your old Regs shit (assuming you are the one who wrote it before on this forum) was nicer than that bomb u posted, that style just screams sake like compare the bottom of your r with the bottom of his k its the same, your holes in the letters are the same if you really want proof go post that on the main forum...hear it from them...

edit: that second RE looks nice

[N.O.T.E]

Originally posted by near@Aug 15 2006, 01:49 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v285/j_w_a_t_s/picture014co0.jpg

take away those things...decent letters
thanx man...i second that 2 i luv the sig

[Zire]

Posting up for the last time so i can get some feed back plz.

http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/386/dscf0147cl5.jpg

http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/4601/dscf0148qq0.jpg

[Krash]

work on proportion,infact,save that blackbook,jus go back to your simples.jus print out arial times new roman,an learn each letter.

[Zire]

No beef, but can i see some of ur work? becuase i dont think i need to look at times new roman to learn each letter, i know wht evry letter of the alphabet looks like. Fair enough my work is toy and ur trying to help but i just want to know if u are right to comment.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Zire@Aug 15 2006, 05:31 PM
No beef, but can i see some of ur work? becuase i dont think i need to look at times new roman to learn each letter, i know wht evry letter of the alphabet looks like. Fair enough my work is toy and ur trying to help but i just want to know if u are right to comment.
just listen to what he told you to do. and try it itll help ya.

[Zire]

edit

[Zire]

edit

[beone]

lol why try to help someone who doesnt want it dont do simples keep up your whack color schemes and unproportioned letters, you think his stuff isnt good enough because u cant recignize what makes somthing good because you dont know shit bout where it comes from because you are being a whiney bitch about doing simples

[Zire]

edit

[Clear Fruit Nectar]

Listen, you know what letters look like, but you dont understand them.
YOU will become better if you sit there for an hour drawing out the alphabet. You dont have to believe me or anyone but they were trying to help you. If you dont want to put in the effort (in this case drawing out the alphabet) then stop writing we have enough toys with over-inflated egos.
As for crash i dunno but this NICCSASS, pwns your ass so fucking bad. Now if you dont wanna listen to advice i suggest you "le fuck off"

[doomsayer]

no offende man but u shud probly take the advice, i used to wanna try to go all tech and all my letters were unproprtioned or w/e u wanna call that. i went back to simple block letters and start to uinserstand the letters better and my stuffs improved so much more sincie then. i know it seems stupid but u just gotta do it man. i helps alot

[beone]

I dont have to listen, i dont think its good enough advise.

if u dont think its good enough dont ask for any

[doomsayer]

the reason ur stuff is lookin so ugly is cause all ur letters r wack, u gotta go back to simple and get the letters all the same size thickness get em into proportion man

=if u don want the real truth about ur stuff, dont post it up in here, if u cant take crits, dont post it up in here, simple as that aye

[Zire]

Firstly, i dont have an over infalted ego, i undestand u lot were trying to help, all i said was how is tht goin to help and u lot just fuking jump down my throat.
Secondly, beone, why the fuck are u getting involved, ur fuking shit and u cant even comment so stop poking ur fuking nose in.

[doomsayer]

fine dont take the advise but u need to get ur letters into propertion somehow.

[Clear Fruit Nectar]

Then your gonna get wacker and wacker.
Its your choice, as for jumping down your throat its called tough love.
Again if you dont wanna take advice from people who are clearly better than you, "le fuck off"

[Zire]

OK, i will work on proportion, but im not gonna draw the alphabet, atleast u said it nicely.

props doom

[pace1]

heres a start need help to know whats not good befor i color
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pacesimpler.jpg

[Fosale!]

fix up that E

[Necro-]

zire... when someone gives you advice, even if you decide not to listen to it, at least take it into consideration and then be thankful that someone actually gives a rat&#39;s ass enough to try and help you.

here some things to look at. i should have color-coded the lines or something but i didnt. the biggest problem isnt the width of the letters but is the width of the individual parts of the letters. look at the completely inconsistant widths of the parts. there isnt anything wrong with some parts thick and some thin, but even when writers do that they keep the thin parts CONSISTANT, and the thick parts CONSISTANT. i wish i could find the example i was thinking of, i looked through like 100 pages in the blackbook thread looking for it, so just imagine it. the thicknesses in your&#39;s just look random. from what it looks like, you should jsut be keeping all of the pieces of your letters the same thickness for now. and the addon on the end of this looks forced. and the 3d is off.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/zare.jpg
and these arent all of the things that look wrong to me.


but u dont have to listen to me. idk how long uve been writing, but you might have been writing for longer than me. just my input.



EDIT: and you may not think simples will help you, i didnt either and i was throwing out wack shit for probably 2 weeks of writing before i found this forum. gesus even said that he thought the same thing, until after a while he finally swallowed his pride and went back to simples and it helped him a ton.

[Sluts_r_us]

why must you go and start shit with beone. more beef to the forum. this shit is ruining bombing science...

zire - doing the alphabet in simple letters helps you learn letter form and structure, so calm the fuck down and take the advice.

edit: be one how can you say his throws have no flavor when your biting your throws off of another writer?

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Aug 10 2006, 06:18 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4913/abfb15f1ra7.th.jpg (http://img153.imageshack.us/my.php?image=abfb15f1ra7.jpg)
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/5755/c57242d8th5.th.jpg (http://img128.imageshack.us/my.php?image=c57242d8th5.jpg)
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/6274/761dc3e2xl4.th.jpg (http://img111.imageshack.us/my.php?image=761dc3e2xl4.jpg)
http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/4376/ca27ebb8hx3.th.jpg (http://img48.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ca27ebb8hx3.jpg)


new shit.

[Sluts_r_us]

&#39;at a boy

[Fosale!]

i was bored
never done a R or a G before in my life

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010162.jpg

[Fosale!]

yo pesk we need to paint again this summer, are we ever gonna do that crew roller.?

[Laeos]

Hey guys, haven&#39;t sketched in ages. Here&#39;s my entry to the toy battle but didn&#39;t get it in on time unfortunately - any crits?

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/4803/dalekrg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

As you can see I tried and failed miserably to blend - can anyone give me some tips on that please?

Thanks, and i would crit on others but it&#39;s been about 3 pages of pure beef ^^

[Sluts_r_us]

ahh yes the nerdx....we missed you....alot...lol u never come on aim anymore but w.e. is raels still gettin up in florida?

[nerdx]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Aug 15 2006, 10:00 PM
ahh yes the nerdx....we missed you....alot...lol u never come on aim anymore but w.e. is raels still gettin up in florida?
yeah yo. ill try and get some flicks of his latest shit.
too bad some fag kid is sidebustin raels like whoa.

http://www.t-mobilepictures.com/photos/pho...nx6nbosij05jbr3 (http://www.t-mobilepictures.com/photos/photo10/75/7e/58dd6b97f77f.jpg?_rh=5qoh5ittownx6nbosij05jbr3)
http://www.t-mobilepictures.com/photos/pho...dsyxdfauguxn0t4 (http://www.t-mobilepictures.com/photos/photo02/d6/65/5b50c33ffd87.jpg?_rh=8dovbptyyjdsyxdfauguxn0t4)

[magic nyc]

That shit looks wack, but he got some nice straights over here. Unless their two different Raels.

http://www.graffiti.org/nj/nj_raels.jpg

[Laeos]

Originally posted by Laeos@Aug 15 2006, 09:53 PM
Hey guys, haven&#39;t sketched in ages. Here&#39;s my entry to the toy battle but didn&#39;t get it in on time unfortunately - any crits?

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/4803/dalekrg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

As you can see I tried and failed miserably to blend - can anyone give me some tips on that please?

Thanks, and i would crit on others but it&#39;s been about 3 pages of pure beef ^^
Sorry to bump wack shit

[nerdx]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Aug 15 2006, 10:21 PM
That shit looks wack, but he got some nice straights over here. Unless their two different Raels.

http://www.graffiti.org/nj/nj_raels.jpg
majik how you ganna say raels is wack man. hes got mad style.

[sky 5]

Originally posted by pace1@Aug 15 2006, 07:27 PM
heres a start need help to know whats not good befor i color
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pacesimpler.jpg
the P and A are good to go, but worl on the C and E, i might try to curve the inner middle line of the C instead of having it angled/sharp/cornered .. however you say that .. with the E i wouldnt do that middle bubble/cirle thing, try drawing a bar across the middle that slowly tappers/gets thinner than cut the end at a slant . . . the P and A are nice thoo, cont that style . .

[magic nyc]

Originally posted by nerdx+Aug 15 2006, 11:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nerdx @ Aug 15 2006, 11:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Aug 15 2006, 10:21 PM
That shit looks wack, but he got some nice straights over here. Unless their two different Raels.

majik how you ganna say raels is wack man. hes got mad style.
[/b][/quote]
Nah, he does have nie style. Im saying the pics you posted look wack, like an imposter from the one im used to seeing. ( the pic i posted of the Raels i see around here)

[sky 5]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Aug 15 2006, 09:26 PM
yeah im going to start beef because your starting shit with crew and im not gunna have that . . . .
shit if we talkin crew put me down in beones and lets do this (paint, sketch, pics of our girls brown eye, whatever) ... not that i got anything against yall (i dont know you) but i got beones b/c hes cool with me . . . .

[Sluts_r_us]

magic, your not in jersey right? just wondering where your catchin raels shit...not much in nyc but hes all over the train lines n shit in jersey...hes my favorite writer in jersey...when he was livin out here...him and tacoe

heres some of my raels flix
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/bloomfieldtracksraelllsthrow.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/bloomfieldtracksdoperaels.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/bloomfieldtracksraelstag.jpg

his shit is sooo hot always clean..i miss him lol

[sky 5]

pace - i just noticed your letters are getting progressively smaller, look at the top shooting-left tabs you got . . . . get them letters/lines all the same size unless you mean to have them go bigger to smaller homie . . . come on now man, you got letter proportion down you just got lazy on this one, if it aint proportional/same size erase that shit and do it again . . .

[pace1]

thanks yeah i kinda just worked the PA and did less to the CE
but thanks for the tips ill do a new one and post.

p.s. i forgot to draw proportions out cuase i was lazy.

[nerdx]

yeah sluts its the real raels.
look at the bomb you posted and the one i posted, its same.
might be the wall its reall rought almost like its shells or someshit.

[sky 5]

Originally posted by pace1@Aug 15 2006, 10:44 PM
thanks yeah i kinda just worked the PA and did less to the CE
but thanks for the tips ill do a new one and post.

p.s. i forgot to draw proportions out cuase i was lazy.
sorry for blowing up this thread but im too hurt for a tues . . .

pace - you see how your P goes lower than your A, try making the C come down lower than the A . . . it shoud get your letters to lie next to each better, help keep you keeping your letter proportional/on the same plain (grab a ruller and draw a straight line or even better draw a rectangle and keep your letters inside there with a couple of tailoring lines jumping outside the rec) and lying your letters at slightly different lines gives you alot of opportunities for your 3d to have more going for it . .. those sharp lil 3d edges give that shit a dynamic&#33; look . . . . fuck i need to eat somethin my heads gettin light . . .

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by nerdx+Aug 15 2006, 10:25 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nerdx &#064; Aug 15 2006, 10:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Aug 15 2006, 10:21 PM
That shit looks wack, but he got some nice straights over here. Unless their two different Raels.

http://www.graffiti.org/nj/nj_raels.jpg
majik how you ganna say raels is wack man. hes got mad style. [/b][/quote]
oh shit well look at that...cosk he gave able a shout out...

able use 2 go 2 my skool kids sick as hell gradutated last year

he dosnt write anymore i dont think...but this kid was in one of the best crews in jersey

[Fosale!]

Able still writes i&#39;ve seen a lot of new shit on the highway by him.

[C3ZR ONE]

Alright kids... I&#39;ve been busy the last couple days and haven&#39;t been in the main threads to check on shit for a few and I come back to a whole fuckin mess of bullshit and porn to delete.

NOT
FUCKING
HAPPY.

This is a pic and CONSTRUCTIVE crit thread. If your post contains neither, then go to fucking toy chat. I shouldn&#39;t have to babysit you guys, and I don&#39;t like deleting pages upon pages of bullshit so keep it in check or get a suspension.

beone is gone for 3 days for posting foul pussy. <_<

[pace1]

back to graffiti and not gapping pussy.
heres the revised sketch. thanks to sky i think its pretty good
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pacersimpler.jpg

[bouncingsoul]

Damn, the last 2-3 threads has been nothing but text beef... Post some more flicks guys&#33;&#33; I&#39;ll get one up soon

[lost_for_evex]

:lol: :lol: cezr said foul pussy. :mellow: -_- :lol:

[nerdx]

pace, i think that one looks a lot better than the last one.

[pace1]

thanks anything i should do. or no?
(not being sarcastic)

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Aug 15 2006, 09:31 PM
i was bored
never done a R or a G before in my life

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/AlexheartsJennifer/P1010162.jpg
nice and clean :D :blink:

[nerdx]

Originally posted by pace1@Aug 15 2006, 11:59 PM
thanks anything i should do. or no?
(not being sarcastic)
add some 3d and color.
the you can use thoes same letters in another peice and try and add on to them.
now dont go crazy but just try stuff out and dont be afraid to erase.
you will be able to tell if the extensions look nuts or if they fit.

[pace1]

alright thanks i will post the 3-d i just did in like 20 min. should i ink it so its permanent?

[pace1]

with 3d.
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/99e6ae2a.jpg

[nerdx]

3d looks good. now just get some damn color on there. and think of a nice fill to do.

it just came to me. next peice do PAC3 lol.

[RollTRS]

Ok, I was at this house with some friends gettin&#39; high, and Someone had two sharpies laying on the ground so I did this. Watchoo guys think? This is the first piece I&#39;ve drawn in 4 months.

http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/5523/picture10se1.png

[nerdx]

i tihnk it says CODE right?
I would just say to try and keep all the letters porportional.
cause if you look the E is super fat compared to the rest of them.

other than that just work on the letters. it seems like your heading in
the right direction. good luck.

[pace1]

i dont have much options on collor i was thinking a green fade or and orange to goldenrod. but im shit with fills. any suggestions.

p.s. i have no art backround watsoever

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/114bed4c.jpg

[nerdx]

if you got two colors close to eachother you can do a fill in the lighter color then go back over in the darker with like bubles, or like some dodads. whatever.

dont try and fade it caues i think you might ruin it. no offence but pletnty of times ive tried something like that and then im like wow. that was a waste.

[RollTRS]

Originally posted by nerdx@Aug 16 2006, 12:18 AM
i tihnk it says CODE right?
I would just say to try and keep all the letters porportional.
cause if you look the E is super fat compared to the rest of them.

other than that just work on the letters. it seems like your heading in
the right direction. good luck.
Thanks man, I&#39;ll definately keep that in mind&#33;

[nerdx]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Aug 16 2006, 12:23 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/114bed4c.jpg
HEXA?
if so, the only thing im not feelin is the X.
im really diggin the porportions but for some reason the X doesnt look right.

[sky 5]

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/3425/1171798at8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/4627/1181804uf7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


top one is my drunk scribbles . . . debating whether to skip work tomorrow and just stay up all night finishing this 3 pager . .. . too bad yall cant see it :D

pace - lookin better but your left-shooting tabs at the top left of your letters arent consistent in angle or proportion . . . . my guess is your not staying true to your lines, when you sketch draw the lines past where it meets the next line and past the backend of that line/bar . . . you cant just add tabs after the fatct, they must be layed down within the letter structure . . . the sketch i did for you i tried to follow your letter structure but you had no structure up top to follow . . . . also curcve your P the same way you curve the left leg/line/bar of your A . . . . if you have a dominat north to south line in more than 1 letter of your word (normally the case), curve/bend the dominant northsouth line of every letter the same way . . .

cezr - i knew dem pussy pics were gonna get somebody banned, thats just a no no for website licensing type stuff . . . . .then next girl i get with is gonna get the dr.octagon inspection like that looose goose thoo . . .

who said drunk people talk alot . . . .. . fuckin fibbers

[sky 5]

look at me . . .my PACE letters get unproportionally bigger too . . .. that fuckin toy ass bitch rek needs to buy himslef a ruler&#33;

[pace1]

thanks sky. ill fix that P it doesnt fit and i see wat you mean. Thanks for the advice shit helps alot. ill do another in the morning for now love peace and chicken grease,im out.

[Skeam]

Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 16 2006, 01:49 AM
look at me . . .my PACE letters get unproportionally bigger too . . .. that fuckin toy ass bitch rek needs to buy himslef a ruler&#33;
bahahahahaha funny shit man

[Bowser]

LOL @ sky5

any way nice pieces and half of a grinder...

[sky 5]

skeam bowser - wtf yall doin up this late man . . . unless youre waitin till about 4 in the mornin when i prefer to lower my blocks property value . . . just hope i dont run into this wack ass crew FBK again thoo . . . .

[klipa]

its 10 in the mornin in my time frame

[sky 5]

i got half a can of balck, 2 of yellow and an orange . . . . and a montana pink but that dont help with my color combo i got going . . . . i need more black for the 3d . . . .

[sky 5]

klipe where you from (no specifics) and where you been at man? .. your one of the top peoples around here . . . . im pacific

[klipa]

im in the uk, yeah man i been on holiday for a bit then the police wernt nice to me and well i only just really been able to chill for time. iv been sketching loads tho so ill post some as soon as i can

[sky 5]

look forward to your posts man . .

[sky 5]

i wish i was in the uk or europe where the graf is more mainstream than the us . . . .wont stop me in a half hour thooo . . . .

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

it aint mainstream here. im the most up iin my town and i still aint painted.

im up with the most tags but not with paint. soon my friend soon.

[sky 5]

i like 4 am b/c you can assume every car is a cop and duck into lil hudeaways . . .

[klipa]

yeh but staying up all night on a school night is wrong.

[toxus]

Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 16 2006, 10:41 AM
i wish i was in the uk or europe where the graf is more mainstream than the us . . . .wont stop me in a half hour thooo . . . .
too much gang graffiti though... looks mad whack

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

i know, i go over that shit. and they dont know wut it means. hahahah

i <3 opaque

[klipa]

a few random letters with a shitty colour pencil.

res.

http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/5536/dsc01887wm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Zire]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 15 2006, 08:00 PM
zire... when someone gives you advice, even if you decide not to listen to it, at least take it into consideration and then be thankful that someone actually gives a rat&#39;s ass enough to try and help you.

here some things to look at. i should have color-coded the lines or something but i didnt. the biggest problem isnt the width of the letters but is the width of the individual parts of the letters. look at the completely inconsistant widths of the parts. there isnt anything wrong with some parts thick and some thin, but even when writers do that they keep the thin parts CONSISTANT, and the thick parts CONSISTANT. i wish i could find the example i was thinking of, i looked through like 100 pages in the blackbook thread looking for it, so just imagine it. the thicknesses in your&#39;s just look random. from what it looks like, you should jsut be keeping all of the pieces of your letters the same thickness for now. and the addon on the end of this looks forced. and the 3d is off.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/zare.jpg
and these arent all of the things that look wrong to me.


but u dont have to listen to me. idk how long uve been writing, but you might have been writing for longer than me. just my input.



EDIT: and you may not think simples will help you, i didnt either and i was throwing out wack shit for probably 2 weeks of writing before i found this forum. gesus even said that he thought the same thing, until after a while he finally swallowed his pride and went back to simples and it helped him a ton.
Ok, ive calmed down now, it was really wiinidng me up how evryone got involved but it dont matter.
Now tht u have pointed it out, my work is damn ugly, i didnt think my 3d was off tht much but u wud know coz u have mad 3d pieces.
I spose its back to simples now. <_<

[klipa]

bump or no one will see it


http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/5536/dsc01887wm5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[SeKz]

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/6921/image000kx6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5615/image007ed4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/3344/image010gj9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


These are my latest sketches. I really am not proud of the pink and green one probably because of the little bits i stuck randomly on the edges. Can i get crits please? cheers

PS: klipa that is dope&#33; just the bottom extension underneath it is far too thin. Youve got a sick style goin there man.

[SeKz]

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/7517/image013wc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

oops forgot this one as well. did it for a mate.

[Skeam]

looks good man keep practicing.

sky5 its ten to 11pm here and when u made that post it woulda been like 8 or 9 so yeah.

just did this tonight, it looked much better in pencil causemy sharpies are fucken terrible. i hate sharpies :P

crits?

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/2803/hpim2106ah0.jpg

[SeKz]

^^ sick shit. nice style. im off to sketch again.

[DeathRow]

Originally posted by Skeam@Aug 16 2006, 07:49 AM
looks good man keep practicing.

sky5 its ten to 11pm here and when u made that post it woulda been like 8 or 9 so yeah.

just did this tonight, it looked much better in pencil causemy sharpies are fucken terrible. i hate sharpies :P

crits?

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/2803/hpim2106ah0.jpg
Hell yeah thats sick dude, Do you live in Australia? PM me man if you doo

[NICCSACC]

sharpies are great

[Krash]

wow...i guess i started something i didn&#39;t mean to...well um..sorry everyone bout that.

[nerdx]

seKs the shit is getting better man.
keep it up.

[klipa]

any critz for mine up top??

[gift]

Originally posted by gift@Aug 11 2006, 06:13 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/toybattle-lilwayne.jpg

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/toybattle-dalek.jpg

some pieces i did for the toy battle section. crits would be appreciated
bump for some crits. i put them both into the weekly battle, and got no votes, i need some help on what i&#39;m doing wrong. other than the fills and shit.

[Necro-]

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/purple.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/orange.jpg
outline on this one is actually purple
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/throwie1.jpg

the purple one is uneven, it goes up a little bit but i didnt really notice until i had done the shading. and the V could probably be a bit closer to the A.

throwie is pretty generic looking, i think.

[Necro-]

i dont think there is much wrong with the wayne one, just needs time and practice and it will progress. the dalek one just looks bad, the colors and fill look horrible to me.

[UKCsire]

just some random shit...melodie piece is reeeeally old actually...mostly just some scribbles on the last one...

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/b66b919c.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/c14bc4a3.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/9b292d83.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/stencil011.jpg

[Nyc Sno]

bro ur leeters are so fucking dope &#33;&#33;&#33;

[Sluts_r_us]

yay sire is back <3<3

[UKCsire]

got some stencils that I was test spraying...might as well throw em in here as well...

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/052a071a.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/ceb52508.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/71a9f6d8.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/268e411c.jpg
http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/4aa5e489.jpg

[sake!.]

nice stencils man....the only part i dont like is where the sk8ters right arms is just floating there...like the should be a least sumfin there to look like a continuing arm

[tea dee sea]

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/5417/picturexv9.jpg
trying a new style crits plz

[UKCsire]

sorry not feelin this...you need to keep some consistancy with the widths of your letters...keep in mind you&#39;re probably going to want your horizontals to be near the same as the rest of your other horizontals and viceversa for the verticals...if that makes sense.

[tea dee sea]

Originally posted by UKCsire@Aug 16 2006, 12:58 PM
sorry not feelin this...you need to keep some consistancy with the widths of your letters...keep in mind you&#39;re probably going to want your horizontals to be near the same as the rest of your other horizontals and viceversa for the verticals...if that makes sense.
yea i know wut u mean i usally keep it the same width and shit but i got board of it so im just trying new styles. thanks for the crits

[UKCsire]

If you still need some help I&#39;d be willin to do an exchange?

[NICCSACC]

width dosent really have antything to do with the style it always has to be proportionate or itll look like shit reguardless. its easy just keep workin on it.

[xAWOKE.925]

^agreed. ay nicc what do you actually wriet?

[UKCsire]

I was just trying to get him to recognize the basic aspects of forming some letters but I do agree with you...proportions...

[UKCsire]

stencil I just cut and testsprayed

http://i24.photobucket.com/albums/c35/UKCsire/stencil.jpg

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

super sick nice nice. that is the nicest stencil ive seen in awhile, go multi layer with some red eyes... :ph34r:

[obseen]

woohoo ukc sire is posting again&#33;
dope stencils man,

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/557db814.jpg

New style...?

[Zire]

I like it but i think some of the random bits look odd. eg. the lowest one on the h and the one on the e.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@Aug 16 2006, 02:38 PM
^agreed. ay nicc what do you actually wriet?
VENOM THC OMG

[Necro-]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 16 2006, 11:10 AM
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/purple.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/orange.jpg
outline on this one is actually purple
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/throwie1.jpg

the purple one is uneven, it goes up a little bit but i didnt really notice until i had done the shading. and the V could probably be a bit closer to the A.

throwie is pretty generic looking, i think.
bump

[NICCSACC]

good shading, bad letters

[Zire]

^^^ agreed, to me ur stuff dosent really seem like graff but thst to me, its more on the artistic side. its really good .... its hard to explain. like is tht the only work u want to do or do u want to eventually learn stuff like wildstyles or do u want to do stuff like seti and fsh?

[doomsayer]

hey man i love his work its somethin different if you could start paintin those first too people would really start to notice ya

[Zire]

Yeh same here, i said its really good,

[doomsayer]

ok ive been going simple for ages now and finally worked out my letters. first i just did a quick simple thro which i might try to paint (what do u guys think) and then second is a T i worked on last night which has progreddes from the simple form. so what do u guys think of my T and my simple thro. is the thro readu for painting? and is the T any good? im thinking of connecting the pinty bit of the left side of the T onto the R somehow, idno im gunna work on it more at school today and tonight.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/1eba55ec.jpg

[Zire]

doom the thro wud look better in two colours, yeh its quite orginal so go for it, u probs dont want my advice coz im toy but take it or leave it.

[doomsayer]

haha ill try advice from anyone, aslong as its not too farfetched, i found a legal wall nearby so when i got some paint ill paint it and take some flicks. yeah when i paint it i will paint in two colours i was just trying different stuff out

[Zire]

how can u tell its a legal wall? and wht time is it over there, im in uk and its nearly 11

[Necro-]

thanks guys, i DO think the letters need work tho, i see problems in both of those the moment i look at them.

im on monitored probation so i cant paint, and i&#39;ll probably still have a monitor for like a year after my court date. felony destruction of property. it sucks bad.

but i dont see any reason this style couldnt evolve into wildstyle stuff. it just wouldnt be a "traditional"-looking wildstyle. i mean look at totem&#39;s stuff.... :o. he&#39;s the wildstyle king imo.

(btw im not comparing my stuff to totem&#39;s :lol: )

[doomsayer]

8am in australia. ive seen the wall heaps and it kinda stands out cause theres barely any graffiti in my town and then theres just this one wall with loads and loads of throws on it. so i emailed the council and they reassured me its a legal practice wall and i can go paint on it anytime i like. we also have these "legal permission walls" which they let really good artists paint on with their permission most are skate parks and stuff, and when the paints started to wear down the get another artist to paint over it. its pretty cool cause my local skate park is always getting paintied by some OK artists, most of the people on here are way better though even some kids in the toy forum are better than em let alone the big boys forum.

[Zire]

kk, i would love to have a legal wall round my area, oh well the illegal walls will have to do haha in ur face council.

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 16 2006, 04:56 PM
thanks guys, i DO think the letters need work tho, i see problems in both of those the moment i look at them.

im on monitored probation so i cant paint, and i&#39;ll probably still have a monitor for like a year after my court date. felony destruction of property. it sucks bad.

but i dont see any reason this style couldnt evolve into wildstyle stuff. it just wouldnt be a "traditional"-looking wildstyle. i mean look at totem&#39;s stuff.... :o. he&#39;s the wildstyle king imo.

(btw im not comparing my stuff to totem&#39;s :lol: )
i reckon if you got some good letters and kept that mad 3d shading thngo happening u would get the best looking stuff ever, have u tried painting that stuff on a legal wall or sumthin?

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by Zire@Aug 16 2006, 05:00 PM
kk, i would love to have a legal wall round my are, oh well the illegal walls will have to do haha in ur face council.
haha, u can just email the council and theyll tell ya if u got any, im just doin my stuff on the legal wall till it looks good, just somewhere to practice b4 goin public

[NICCSACC]

legal walls are gay as hell unless you get paid for it.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 16 2006, 04:56 PM
thanks guys, i DO think the letters need work tho, i see problems in both of those the moment i look at them.

im on monitored probation so i cant paint, and i&#39;ll probably still have a monitor for like a year after my court date. felony destruction of property. it sucks bad.

but i dont see any reason this style couldnt evolve into wildstyle stuff. it just wouldnt be a "traditional"-looking wildstyle. i mean look at totem&#39;s stuff.... :o. he&#39;s the wildstyle king imo.

(btw im not comparing my stuff to totem&#39;s :lol: )
you ever see anything by that artist DAIM? i think hes european his shit is 3d like yours but in wildstyle letters kinda like sky 5&#39;s its hard to explain. it would be dope if your letters was like that but with the cold shading.

[Skeam]

Originally posted by Skeam@Aug 16 2006, 07:49 AM
looks good man keep practicing.

sky5 its ten to 11pm here and when u made that post it woulda been like 8 or 9 so yeah.

just did this tonight, it looked much better in pencil causemy sharpies are fucken terrible. i hate sharpies :P

crits?

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/2803/hpim2106ah0.jpg
bump for crits

[ados]

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0001-1.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0002-1.jpg

skeam, im likin that style, you gotta fix your extensions, the K and E. and the m is too close to the A.

[Necro-]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Aug 16 2006, 05:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC &#064; Aug 16 2006, 05:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 16 2006, 04:56 PM
thanks guys, i DO think the letters need work tho, i see problems in both of those the moment i look at them.

im on monitored probation so i cant paint, and i&#39;ll probably still have a monitor for like a year after my court date. felony destruction of property. it sucks bad.

but i dont see any reason this style couldnt evolve into wildstyle stuff. it just wouldnt be a "traditional"-looking wildstyle. i mean look at totem&#39;s stuff.... :o. he&#39;s the wildstyle king imo.

(btw im not comparing my stuff to totem&#39;s :lol: )
you ever see anything by that artist DAIM? i think hes european his shit is 3d like yours but in wildstyle letters kinda like sky 5&#39;s its hard to explain. it would be dope if your letters was like that but with the cold shading.[/b]
yeah ive seen daim&#39;s stuff, he&#39;s really amazing. ive always kinda considered daim and totem the kings of 3d. daim&#39;s got his "flat-pane" 3d style which fucking burns and totem&#39;s is just insane. theyre both brilliant but i prefer totem&#39;s style a little more.

http://www.mr-totem.com/
http://www.daimgallery.com/

<!--QuoteBegin-doomsayer@Aug 16 2006, 05:00 PM
have u tried painting that stuff on a legal wall or sumthin?[/quote]
no, me and my friend were the only ppl that wrote in my town but we were both ratted out by someone, not sure who. but we just went out twice (just put stencils and stickers up everywhere) and my whole town was like freaking out. it was in the paper twice and everthing. i dont think they&#39;d ever put up a legal wall.

[Necro-]

something simple that just popped in my head

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture.jpg

[Zire]

U live in a strict town and if i found out who the person was i would have my revenge. if were on the subject of 3-d i like &#39;mers&#39; his stuff is like letters but 3-d, such nice work. check him out.

mers (http://www.graffiti.org/mers/index.html)

[tare]

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m45/skare1/Picture010.jpg

ahed, critique or whatever i dont care <_<

[Necro-]

that mers stuff is pretty tight

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 16 2006, 07:19 PM
something simple that just popped in my head

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture.jpg
you bit mopar

[Necro-]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Aug 16 2006, 08:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Aug 16 2006, 08:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Necro&#045;@Aug 16 2006, 07:19 PM
something simple that just popped in my head

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture.jpg
you bit mopar [/b][/quote]
i didnt bite anyone.

and ive never heard of mopar :blink:

pic?

[tea dee sea]

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2848/picture001zg8.jpg
i desided to finish it tell me wut u think

[Guerrilla876]

Originally posted by Skeam+Aug 16 2006, 05:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Skeam @ Aug 16 2006, 05:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Skeam@Aug 16 2006, 07:49 AM
looks good man keep practicing.

sky5 its ten to 11pm here and when u made that post it woulda been like 8 or 9 so yeah.

just did this tonight, it looked much better in pencil causemy sharpies are fucken terrible. i hate sharpies :P

crits?

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/2803/hpim2106ah0.jpg
bump for crits [/b][/quote]
wow skeam. i like that. not the K so much. but feeling everything else. i can never do sharpies . . . i reminisce those days.



ahhh.


props though.

[slEEt]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Aug 16 2006, 08:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Aug 16 2006, 08:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Necro&#045;@Aug 16 2006, 07:19 PM
something simple that just popped in my head

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture.jpg
you bit mopar [/b][/quote]
ROFL&#33; I was going to say the same fucking thing.

Mopar is the Dodge sport company/racing team.

http://www.moparpart.com/images/logo.jpg

The M is the same as yours lol.

[sake!.]

haha did it pop into ur head when u were watchin tv

[magic nyc]

Then I guess you all bit my friends band logo...or something like that.

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/1434/manicspreewhitegreyredyb7.jpg

[slEEt]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Aug 16 2006, 10:50 PM
Then I guess you all bit my friends band logo...or something like that.

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/1434/manicspreewhitegreyredyb7.jpg
I&#39;m sure Mopar has been around longer than your friends band, but pretty similar, yes.

[ion-i]

im pretty sure thats a font, not your friends band logo. like.. he didnt make the letters, the guy who made the font did.

anyways, who cares if he bit? he didnt paint it.

[ShIfTeD]

EVERYONE NEEDS TO STOP BITING MOPAR&#33;&#33;&#33;
LMAO

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/4897/ensoexj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my entry for the estoe battle

[NICCSACC]

MOPAR = the foundation of all of graffiti

[ion-i]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v158/PlayBoarder/oldandnewthrow.gif
top slap is my old throw.
bottom is my new throw. (well, more of just messing around and trying new letters)

which one you guys like more?

I think I&#39;m gonna just mess around and make a bunch of different style throws for a while, mix up and make my style mroe unique. its been pretty bland lately. :unsure:

[ShIfTeD]

i like the top bettr

[nerdx]

bottom one is nice, the first i and o are the best. I think the rest of it needs to be changed up.
the top one woudl work also it just needs some more work.

[roller4u]

i enjoy the classical lines of the top better, it sets all of the other throwups aside for sure

cheers ion-i&#33;

[ados]

Originally posted by ados@Aug 16 2006, 06:04 PM
http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0001-1.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0002-1.jpg

skeam, im likin that style, you gotta fix your extensions, the K and E. and the m is too close to the A.
whats with everyone bumping that wack shit and fuckin up this forum? squid fuckers

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by roller4u@Aug 16 2006, 11:50 PM
i enjoy the classical lines of the top better, it sets all of the other throwups aside for sure

cheers ion-i&#33;
wtf? hahahah

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/557db814.jpg

Any more??

[ion-i]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Aug 16 2006, 09:59 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Aug 16 2006, 09:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-roller4u@Aug 16 2006, 11:50 PM
i enjoy the classical lines of the top better, it sets all of the other throwups aside for sure

cheers ion-i&#33;
wtf? hahahah [/b][/quote]
i didnt understand it that much either..

[doomsayer]

some stuff ive been drawing, did this in schiool today, any stand outs? any crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/TRUTHTHRO1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/TRUTHTHRO2.jpg

[Skeam]

hexa that shit looks pretty good man

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Aug 17 2006, 02:20 AM
some stuff ive been drawing, did this in schiool today, any stand outs? any crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/TRUTHTHRO1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/TRUTHTHRO2.jpg
bump for crits

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/557db814.jpg

Might as well bump mine too

[SeKz]

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/6870/image002qn6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/8064/image006nu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Sketches i did today. Not overly happy with them. Crits anyway

[NICCSACC]

top one isnt that bad.
buttom one too much flare 4 me.

[bouncingsoul]

Mine?

[Skeam]

bouncingsoul: it deffinetely has potential keep sketching man.

sekz: top one lookz pretty good, bottom i dont like the way the S is made out of 2 parts and i dont like the way the top right of the z conects with the K, it doesnt looks very natural it just looks some like rare bar coming out from it. i also think there are a few to many add ons around the letters. im deffinetly feeling that E on the first and the second. keep sketching man.

[doomsayer]

mine? i wanna know if its crap or not, shud i bother to keep workin on it?

[bouncingsoul]

Honestly the throws are shit. The shading in the dead letter sketch (last flick) was well done though

[doomsayer]

thanks for the honest advice man

[bouncingsoul]

Haha no problem. Just define the letters more. Like I couldn&#39;t even tell what they said until I saw the last one

[d_g]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Aug 17 2006, 02:20 AM
some stuff ive been drawing, did this in schiool today, any stand outs? any crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/TRUTHTHRO1.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/TRUTHTHRO2.jpg
The block letter one is good. The "U" in it needs a little fixing but no biggie.

[Skeam]

just finnished this then... for the toy battle. like i said in the battle thread i shouldnt of put the orange line through it. also i think the O is pretty average but besides that im happy.

crits please guys

cheers
matt

edit: usually a pic helps...

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/3569/hpim2109jm0.jpg

[Zire]

Its good but the orange line is real distracting, it takes my eye of the actuall peice and i just follow the line haha.

[klipa]

my battle entry any critz befor i colour it up.

and skeam the last E is a bit squigle if you no what i mean&#33; and next time take a picktur befor you try orange lines and stuff.

http://img50.imageshack.us/img50/7659/dsc01890dk1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Skeam]

i just got my ass kicked in

[bouncingsoul]

Haha dope shit klipa. You missed some 3d though... Just pointin that out. Still nice though

[klipa]

oh were abouts??

[klipa]

never mind i havent got time for a propa fill so itl have to do.

http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/5420/dsc01891aw4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[DeathRow]

Thats sweet as klipa ^^^


http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/7420/newpiecevy9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Just did this.. Shitty camera quality but an it shows a little bright patch on the P but thats because it was wet an the flash but yeah its actually a nice orange and pink but comes out yuck on camera... crits needed pleease


Peace

[tea dee sea]

Originally posted by tea dee sea@Aug 16 2006, 08:47 PM
http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/2848/picture001zg8.jpg
i desided to finish it tell me wut u think
bump for crits

[SEROKID]

http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/9066/ayytodnk004uu1.jpgayyyy was good

[tare]

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m45/skare1/Picture014.jpg
era

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m45/skare1/Picture013.jpg
era

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m45/skare1/Picture012.jpg
era


http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m45/skare1/Picture011.jpg
prospect heights