Tot Black Books

[myl]

dont even bother coloring yet...just do the outlines

[lost_for_evex]

put some fuckin time into it then.

[Hilo]

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/894/picture64ma9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[sky 5]

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/8744/1181810zr3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

some random skecth . . .

[-MaCKiE-]

that shiz aint toy... dope. nice letters etc..

[Fosale!]

sky i love your guidlines.
the piece looks so dope as just a outline, i love that E.

[ados]

sky, i like that piece on the bottom. sick ish


http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0003-1.jpg

[NICCSACC]

sky is the shit

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5991/dddddau9.jpg

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/3059/yrueey5uc6.jpg

Havent posted in a while. been busy. trying to create a new charac, nothing to do with these though. these're doodles. comments/crits appreciated.

[spuck]

Originally posted by Hilo@Aug 20 2006, 01:44 PM
no shit...
that would imply that the penis resemblence was intentional, no?

[gift]

http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/toybattle-ensoe.jpg

crits please

[BAZE]

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f56/BBCTBAZE/baze_sketch.jpg
suggestions?

[obseen]

baze i dont like it that much, i think you should go a bit simpler maybe.
gift, thats a nice piece man! im just not sure about those splatters

[ados]

Originally posted by ados@Aug 20 2006, 03:43 PM


http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0003-1.jpg
crits

[Necro-]

ados i like those throwies.

im horrible at throwies, i was messin aroudn with a couple different styles. they all need work but which has the most potential? i like the one at the top of the first page i think.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture009.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture008-1.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture007-1.jpg

[NOMX]

Originally posted by Ladybug<3+Aug 20 2006, 06:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Ladybug<3 @ Aug 20 2006, 06:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Aug 20 2006, 05:09 AM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3998/560a0389so6.jpg

Yeah, I know it still needs a lot of work. But am I on the right track at least?
Yes yes you are [/b][/quote]
that should be put in the just starting out thread as a guidline for new ppl start :)

[BAZE]

Originally posted by BAZE@Aug 20 2006, 07:11 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f56/BBCTBAZE/baze_sketch.jpg
suggestions?
last on teh page so bump.
also any suggestions?

[BAZE]

yo ados love ur shit man. keep it up

[AteskOne]

baze man go a little simplier. it looks like your using block letters but it look likes ur jumping the gun a little. try doing more with just the letters themselves and loose all the add ons. start simple with just plain letters and start bending them a little like it looks like you were doing. you&#39;re just getting ahead of yourself and i&#39;ma quote me teacher on this "you needa hurry up and slow down"....wow i hate myself

[knucks]

dnt try wilds til u get the bloks perfect then slowly progress on...

[slEEt]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 20 2006, 08:41 PM
ados i like those throwies.

im horrible at throwies, i was messin aroudn with a couple different styles. they all need work but which has the most potential? i like the one at the top of the first page i think.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture009.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture008-1.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture007-1.jpg
I like everything on the second page the most, I love that style, almost tempted to ask you to do a throwie exchange, PM me if your up for it.

[si0n]

Necro - i really like the style on the 1st page, but not really feelin the the 2nd and 3rd pages. its all real clean to, but i like the 2nd throw on the 1st page. keep messin around with that style and youll have a dope throwie in no time

[slEEt]

http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/4833/img1244mediumah9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I haven&#39;t posted in awhile but haven&#39;t had much time to sketch so any crits?

[FEST!]

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/917/zzzzzzzz001vn7.jpg (http://My Webpage

[FEST!]

Esol,
Liking this sketch here. I like the fill. Simple yet sweet lookin

[slEEt]

Originally posted by FEST&#33;@Aug 20 2006, 10:48 PM
Esol,
Liking this sketch here. I like the fill. Simple yet sweet lookin
Thanks man, as for your sketch i&#39;d say make the extensions on the F a bit wider so they blend a bit more, that&#39;s about it though, looks pretty nice.

[FEST!]

Right on. Half way through the outline I realized I messed up the F pretty bad but I felt like it was necessary to work with what I had and try to make up for it.
I&#39;m sure you can connect with what im sayin

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by FEST&#33;@Aug 20 2006, 10:46 PM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/917/zzzzzzzz001vn7.jpg (http://My Webpage
dope colors shitty execution.

[slEEt]

^ Yeah I know what you mean, sometimes you just gotta work through stuff, can&#39;t be perfect.

I did another just for the hell of it.

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4270/img1246mediumxs0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[FEST!]

LOL...I would do my sketch over again but hell...i have no energy...it&#39;s late

[si0n]

esol man i dont really like that throwie, you need to put more style into it imo

[Necro-]

Originally posted by si0n@Aug 20 2006, 10:08 PM
Necro - i really like the style on the 1st page, but not really feelin the the 2nd and 3rd pages. its all real clean to, but i like the 2nd throw on the 1st page. keep messin around with that style and youll have a dope throwie in no time
thanks for the crits. i kinda liked teh first page more, too but i liked teh top one just because the bottoms of the letters were smaller than the top, liked that.

and sleet, i can do an exchange. not tonight tho because it&#39;s late. ill pm u tomorrow.

[slEEt]

Originally posted by si0n@Aug 20 2006, 11:33 PM
esol man i dont really like that throwie, you need to put more style into it imo
Yeah, i&#39;m still working on it, no where near done.

[slEEt]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 20 2006, 11:42 PM
Sleet, i can do an exchange. not tonight tho because it&#39;s late. ill pm u tomorrow.
I hear ya, i&#39;ll check the pms tomorrow.

[Quake]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060820/11/0/7/a/07a9c5ec2985b1983c8e97139a5bc933200608200_full.jpg

tips and comments please

[toxus]

quake&#33; gwan msn&#33;

[ion-i]

http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/chickhandystyle.jpg
sketch i did tonight. done with pencil, thats why its real lightly shown.
im just tryin to get female characters down clean. what can i say, they&#39;re fun to draw. ;)

[NOMX]

work on ur porportions

[ion-i]

such as what limbs/parts?
i know parts of the legs are wider then others, i had a sketchier version of this but re-drew over it so it would look cleaner for the scan, so a lot of them limbs might of came out different. but if youd be more specific ill be sure to fix em on the next one.

[bouncingsoul]

Here&#39;s some of the sketches I&#39;ve been doing

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/cf66b03f.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/b79ce5f9.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/a1a0bf85.jpg

...The last one was just messin&#39; around... I thought up an idea for O&#39;s and found I actually liked it... I&#39;m sticking with Hexa though

[What Happened to the Letters?]

Originally posted by ion&#045;i@Aug 21 2006, 06:26 AM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/chickhandystyle.jpg
sketch i did tonight. done with pencil, thats why its real lightly shown.
im just tryin to get female characters down clean. what can i say, they&#39;re fun to draw. ;)
have you seen boobs before haha, her right tight is underneath her armpit, they shouldnt be so spread in opposite directions, also her forarm on her right side is way to big and her heads the same size as her whoel torso

[-MaCKiE-]

n u missed tha nipples


the hed is faar 2 big

[ozi~amo~crs]

bouncingsoul did you just post those on 12 oz :huh:

[bouncingsoul]

Yeah, I post on both sites

:edit: Might as well bump this for critz


Originally posted by bouncingsoul
Here&#39;s some of the sketches I&#39;ve been doing

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/cf66b03f.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/b79ce5f9.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/a1a0bf85.jpg

...The last one was just messin&#39; around... I thought up an idea for O&#39;s and found I actually liked it... I&#39;m sticking with Hexa though

[Quake]

http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060821/03/f/b/f/fbf06630f06e7265aa5fcf75e453a61c200608210_full.jpg

comments and tips please

[obseen]

i actually think that looks pretty good

[beone]

kwake that style is gunna be ill check out rends stuff its very similiar

hexo or heto i like the stuff im seeing


http://img1.yoxio.com/img/251656.jpg
crits only everyone "e sissy fighting" just leave
fuck the s and fuck the shadow

[Fosale!]

^ im liking it, just doing a lil something with that leg on the R.

Nice job.

[ion-i]

Originally posted by What Happened to the Letters?+Aug 21 2006, 08:29 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (What Happened to the Letters? &#064; Aug 21 2006, 08:29 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ion&#045;i@Aug 21 2006, 06:26 AM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/chickhandystyle.jpg
sketch i did tonight. done with pencil, thats why its real lightly shown.
im just tryin to get female characters down clean. what can i say, they&#39;re fun to draw. ;)
have you seen boobs before haha, her right tight is underneath her armpit, they shouldnt be so spread in opposite directions, also her forarm on her right side is way to big and her heads the same size as her whoel torso [/b][/quote]
i didnt draw the nips for a reason

also, yeah the head is big, kinda wanted to keep a little cartoony affect goin. ill fix it tho
and yes i have seen boobs before. yes i have seen them on a female in person as well haha. but thats besides the point.. thats why im trying to draw females well, they are the one challenge in drawing people to me.
but thanks for the crits man, ill fix things around and keep practicing it.

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Before: http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5991/dddddau9.jpg

After: http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/2048/dddddau9copyzx4.jpg

First time ever coloring something in photo shop.

Crits/tips/comments appreciated. Or, if you have ne info on coloring in PS, then please pm me.

-Bill

[beastie_1989]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2007/blackbook12iw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7444/blackbook13ih2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

any tips/comments...

[NICCSACC]

http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/b9076d05f7.jpg
are these colors good?

[Quake]

^ i like them colores and the letters, the "R" is great&#33;&#33;

[NICCSACC]

thnx dude your stuff is dope too. pz

[Mugyver]

beastie that shit is sick.

[kicklip9634]

http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/7579/kurupt1fw3.th.jpg


what should i work on

[Quake]

^try simple block letters first

[obseen]

niccsacc that sketch is sick

[beastie_1989]

Originally posted by Mugyver@Aug 21 2006, 04:20 PM
beastie that shit is sick.
thanks i still have to work on my letters tho

[sky 5]

some nice stuff up in here lately . . . . i drink soo many coronas i got lime disease . . . .

[d_g]

At least you won&#39;t get scurvey.

[NICCSACC]

http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/6e1798cff1.jpg

[-kosr-]

Originally posted by kicklip9634@Aug 21 2006, 04:25 PM
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/7579/kurupt1fw3.th.jpg


what should i work on
try not to copy www.graffiticreator.net <_< your going to have a hard time fooling anyone

if you deny it, heres yours

http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/7579/kurupt1fw3.th.jpg

heres the graffiti creator

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/4476/ahes9.png

notice any exact similarities?

[obseen]

^haha, ive seen this scenario so many time&#33;
niccsacc, dope sketch as per usual, im going to have to buy you a new digicam though

[-kosr-]

^^yea, and i dont see why they cant even copy it right..

[beone]

i knew when i first saw the pic its justn ot worth it to call it on those kids who bite graff creator

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Aug 21 2006, 02:43 PM
Before: http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5991/dddddau9.jpg

After: http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/2048/dddddau9copyzx4.jpg

First time ever coloring something in photo shop.

Crits/tips/comments appreciated. Or, if you have ne info on coloring in PS, then please pm me.

-Bill
bump, yea?

[NOMX]

color it in real life

[NOMX]

Originally posted by ion&#045;i@Aug 21 2006, 05:58 AM
such as what limbs/parts?
i know parts of the legs are wider then others, i had a sketchier version of this but re-drew over it so it would look cleaner for the scan, so a lot of them limbs might of came out different. but if youd be more specific ill be sure to fix em on the next one.
the head is way to big and the length of the limbs compared to the torso

yea yea double post.... im badass like that

[ion-i]

hahaha thanks man for repeating what was said already










:wub:

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

Originally posted by NOMX@Aug 21 2006, 08:05 PM
color it in real life
yeah alright, howabout you suck my balls in real life? wtf&#39;? Yes, i normally color my shit with markers or colored pencils, just like the rest of you. but like i said on my post, i want to learn how to color things in photoshop, and was asking for crits on that.

Thanks though.

[...AG...]

Yo could someone help me out with this peice in on da bottomhttp://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1928/asenpg0.jpg

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 21 2006, 06:52 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/6e1798cff1.jpg
nice niccsacc...finally a good writer in the toy section...keep it up man im linking your simples..

[red november]

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/148/img1345eh1.jpg
first time doin all that arrow shit till me what you think

[nerdx]

i dont thikn you should add arrows yet but work on the letter structure.
the S is really nice but the rest of them are kinda undeveloped and hard to decipher.

[sky 5]

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/9295/1181813mk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

...forgot to put a lil rek in the bottom scroll thing on the bear piece . . . niccsaccs always lookin daper . . . .november i like the inner line work on the letters but your arrows are inconsistent . . . .

[Fosale!]

why do you post in the toy thread?

[sky 5]

i dont know, no real reason man . . . . shit is gettin old thoo aint it . .

bill cheese -nice to see your work back up here . . .

[MF Feed Letter]

develpment today all 2 minute sketches except color one

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1701.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1700.jpg

[NOMX]

Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze+Aug 21 2006, 08:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bill Cheese of Wheeze @ Aug 21 2006, 08:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NOMX@Aug 21 2006, 08:05 PM
color it in real life
yeah alright, howabout you suck my balls in real life? wtf&#39;? Yes, i normally color my shit with markers or colored pencils, just like the rest of you. but like i said on my post, i want to learn how to color things in photoshop, and was asking for crits on that.

Thanks though. [/b][/quote]
;)

[gift]

Originally posted by gift@Aug 20 2006, 05:17 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/toybattle-ensoe.jpg

crits please
bump for some crits mannnnne.

[sugarbomb]

the drips are too much.

[Skeam]

Sky5 even if your shit isnt toy and even if you think its getting old its still fucken dope and inspires the shit out of me so stay in the toy forum so i can keep seein your shit. hahaha.

MF Feed your shit is also dope as and im lovin that throwy ay

[beone]

aggreed^

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Aug 22 2006, 12:23 AM
develpment today all 2 minute sketches except color one

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1701.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1700.jpg
clean good

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Aug 22 2006, 12:23 AM
develpment today all 2 minute sketches except color one

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1701.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1700.jpg
clean good

[NICCSACC]

http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/a11432bf06.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/1d91011e00.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/cf9a27463a.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/846ddda247.jpghttp://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/c3d82ef252.jpg

[SeKz]

Originally posted by red november@Aug 21 2006, 10:33 PM
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/148/img1345eh1.jpg
first time doin all that arrow shit till me what you think
Dont just throw arrows out in all directions. It looks a lot better if you feel the angles with the angles of the letters. Also try to keep all the arrow heads the same size unless your trying a far away/close-up effect. Also dont try to do arrows. You got the first letter, bottom arrow on the right angle, just too long. Also dont overlap the arrows. Arrows only come when its a last resort to the tip of your extension, otherwise it just looks tacky. Thats my 2 cents on arrows.



NICCSACC that is fuckin ill. The YASER above your little throw needs some work is structure i think (maybe just the s, e and r). The one above that is on the money though.

Those Karate sketches are fucking dope, got some real style flowin there.

The ensoe sketch needs work on the drips, they should be on the left because of the slant of the word. Make them alot smaller too, i think someone already said that. Im not really feeling that 3D effect. I can see where you tried to fix it up too.

[SeKz]

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/1644/image022rh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Did this for a chick, it says NAT if you can&#39;t read it.

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7627/image007de8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Some random shit, not overly happy with it. Crits anyway

Cheers

[doomsayer]

im lovin that stuff sky 5 and yaser; sekz i dont like the first one, but the second one is nice

crits please....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/207c7b01.jpg

[-kosr-]

new sketch, uncoloured, experimentnig with add ons..

should i keep the add ons or get rid of them?

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/7484/kosr5ih1.png (http://imageshack.us)

some crits would be nice too.

[Skeam]

thats hell complex... a little two comple for my likings. maybe a clearer picture would help make it out more but as always you can really help it (i know how it feels having a Digi cam that came from the buttocks of a bufalo)

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Aug 22 2006, 03:55 AM
crits please....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/207c7b01.jpg
on the right track no doubt. never overlap the previous letter with the next one. (example: the T overlapping the U) anywwayy, from here just bend up some shit, fuck with it, give it some fuckin funk. yadidimeannnn?

[jerm_mtl]

Originally posted by &#045;kosr&#045;@Aug 22 2006, 04:37 AM
new sketch, uncoloured, experimentnig with add ons..

should i keep the add ons or get rid of them?

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/7484/kosr5ih1.png (http://imageshack.us)

some crits would be nice too.
keep em but colour it cuz we can barely see anything

[MF Feed Letter]

Originally posted by SeKz@Aug 22 2006, 03:22 AM



NICCSACC that is fuckin ill. The YASER above your little throw needs some work is structure i think (maybe just the s, e and r). The one above that is on the money though.

Those Karate sketches are fucking dope, got some real style flowin there.


did niccsacc jus get credit for my sketch?

meh whatever niccsaac those karate are pretty dope what do you do oyur fills with?

[...AG...]

Yo could someone help me out with this peice in on da bottom http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1928/asenpg0.jpg

[obseen]

kosr, from what i can see it actually looks quite good

[Slim Pickens]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 22 2006, 03:11 AM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/a11432bf06.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/1d91011e00.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/cf9a27463a.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/846ddda247.jpghttp://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/c3d82ef252.jpg
bizzzummpp

[Bill Cheese of Wheeze]

NICCSACC that &#39;life suks&#39; shit is ill man. im lovin it. the skull, and the drip really add to the effect. keep it up

Sky, that is fckin sik bro. I love it. and i agree with whoever said youre an inspiration to us all here in the toy box. lol. Keep it up.

and kosr, if you could get a cleaner pic, id like to see it.

Sekz, 1st one is tight. keep it up.

[EX_ND]

http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h209/Punjon/462f846e.jpg
Tell me how shit this is hahaha
Yeah it sucks, just getting inspiration from these forums hahaha i&#39;m not that good

[Necro-]

http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...showtopic=14335 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=14335)

[prank]

i need a couple of pointers

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/1830/image62cg5.jpg
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/3579/image63vt2.jpg
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3561/image64lr1.jpg
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/4133/image65gk3.jpg

[obseen]

the 2&#39;nd one is the best cos its got straighter letters
try to do more like that perhaps

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter+Aug 22 2006, 10:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MF Feed Letter @ Aug 22 2006, 10:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SeKz@Aug 22 2006, 03:22 AM



NICCSACC that is fuckin ill. The YASER above your little throw needs some work is structure i think (maybe just the s, e and r). The one above that is on the money though.

Those Karate sketches are fucking dope, got some real style flowin there.


did niccsacc jus get credit for my sketch?

meh whatever niccsaac those karate are pretty dope what do you do oyur fills with? [/b][/quote]
crayon
yeah im low budget

[-kosr-]

the coloured version..

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/5255/kosr5ar1.png (http://imageshack.us)

[tea dee sea]

kool

[obseen]

looks dope kosr, i think its better than your rent stuff

[Necro-]

experimenting with some addons. what do you think? if i were to finish it it would be shaded with a background.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture010.jpg

[Ladybug<3]

get rid of the sig?
and this is what you did
i/we gave you advice, you said ok, then kept on doing what you were doing
thsoe letters suck
do new shit
and to anyone who says otherwise : fuck you

[d_g]

Haha the sig is a bit long. DK are good though.

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture23.jpghttp://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture24.jpg

[Fosale!]

illl, do you ever post your work in the bb thread

[NICCSACC]

fuck&#33;&#33;&#33; ill post a regular pic later. pz

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by &#045;kosr&#045;@Aug 22 2006, 06:10 PM
the coloured version..

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/5255/kosr5ar1.png (http://imageshack.us)
i really like this shit. props

[Necro-]

Originally posted by Ladybug<3@Aug 22 2006, 07:15 PM
get rid of the sig?
and this is what you did
i/we gave you advice, you said ok, then kept on doing what you were doing
thsoe letters suck
do new shit
and to anyone who says otherwise : fuck you
i dont remember you ever giving me advice....

or seen you post any work, ever. and dont say "the letters suck" anybody can say that, tell me waht is wrong with the letters. and post some of your stuff.

and your from latvia? my fav writer&#39;s from latvia.


sry abou tthe sig, longer than i thought it would be..

[meek2]

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djchallenge/SUNP00041.jpg

my shit is not that good

[-kosr-]

Your on the right track, keep them simples going.

Your handy looks like it says meer though.

[Guerrilla876]

Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze+Aug 21 2006, 08:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bill Cheese of Wheeze @ Aug 21 2006, 08:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Aug 21 2006, 02:43 PM
Before: http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5991/dddddau9.jpg

After: http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/2048/dddddau9copyzx4.jpg

First time ever coloring something in photo shop.

Crits/tips/comments appreciated. Or, if you have ne info on coloring in PS, then please pm me.

-Bill
bump, yea? [/b][/quote]
not really feelin that. i wouldn&#39;t of used dem (grammar error&#33;) colors but i like that you&#39;re experimenting. everyone has their own style. like i said, i dont feel it, i never said it totally sucked. I don&#39;t know how to put ish on photoshop, but i use it for like layouts and stuff. but i must say, just keep doing what you do. ;)

[red november]

Originally posted by ...AG...@Aug 22 2006, 10:13 AM
Yo could someone help me out with this peice in on da bottom http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1928/asenpg0.jpg
try to keep the letters the same width
and clean your lines and 3d up
i like the top one more

[MEBone]

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1139/1014715713240107200su1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[myl]

is that short for syphilis?

just kidding

[MEBone]

Originally posted by myl@Aug 22 2006, 11:44 PM
is that short for syphilis?

just kidding
ha naw man but u got any crits

[Lumps[teampain]]

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a30/doodaman/Scan0002Small.jpg

what do you think?

[myl]

i think you should stop biting

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7084/callejeroxi1.jpg

(from da wolfs tutorial)

[xVxSinxVx]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 22 2006, 11:43 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1139/1014715713240107200su1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
uhhh.. how about make ur letters fatter, don&#39;t put them so bunched up (well it wasn&#39;t really that bunched up but whatever), don&#39;t leave ur letter the same width throughout the line, like this&#092;/&#092;/&#092;/
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/429/samplezy3.png

sprry for my poor Paint skills but my camera is out of bateries so i could show u better examples..but anyway just work on ur style and don&#39;t be afraid to try different things even if they look weiord sometimes. likr that stuff that Gesus paints. :lol:

[Lumps[teampain]]

i used the tutorial i know thats from that im just starting i have others this is the only one i scanned in. i just liked the style and decided to use the tutorial

[Lumps[teampain]]

http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a30/doodaman/scan0001.jpg

heres another one sorry its upside down

[myl]

why would you even post that up then if you knew it was a bite?

kids these days...

[NOMX]

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/8735/200608220001qm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[ShIfTeD]

damn dude thats fuckin straight as hell&#33;

put that bitch on a sticker, and you gots tha gold

**hits chest like a retard**

[NOMX]

unfortunately the pic didnt get all the really detailed parts on it. but oh well

[Skeam]

yeh that looks fucken ill... i cant really make out what it is, some ortof face maybe.but it still looks fucken dope

[Skeam]

tried a new E and A... liked the E but hate the A lol. i dont think the S and K really fit in, more so the S then the K. really want some crits ploise.

cheers

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1605/hpim2110ew6.jpg

[doomsayer]

dam skeam thats awesome, don know if u wanna take crits from me buuuuttt, i dont really like the E i think its to &#39;hidden&#39; by the K, i think the A would llook better if the first part of it was longer or maybe connected to to that bit that goes nderneath it.

anyways, i needa get some crits on this please from anyone. im trying to funk the letters up but i cant seem to,m this is the best i got when trying to &#39;funk&#39; them up, help and crits pppllleeeeaaassee

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/truththroagain.jpg

[Skeam]

S&#33;&#33;&#33; i kinda like it, if the whole peice was like this do you think there would be to much adons? i think this would fit in a bit better with the rest of the peice i did up a bit ^^^^

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4320/hpim2111pv8.jpg

[meek2]

http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djchallenge/SUNP00038.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djchallenge/SUNP00017.jpg

[Lune One]

Ignore the twistie things and sorry about the quality of the pic. This is my second sketch.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/lune1.jpg

[Ladybug<3]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Aug 22 2006, 07:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Aug 22 2006, 07:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ladybug<3@Aug 22 2006, 07:15 PM
get rid of the sig?
and this is what you did
i/we gave you advice, you said ok, then kept on doing what you were doing
thsoe letters suck
do new shit
and to anyone who says otherwise : fuck you
i dont remember you ever giving me advice....

or seen you post any work, ever. and dont say "the letters suck" anybody can say that, tell me waht is wrong with the letters. and post some of your stuff.

and your from latvia? my fav writer&#39;s from latvia.


sry abou tthe sig, longer than i thought it would be.. [/b][/quote]
new account, socrates
i have posted work lots of it

[krazzie_ammo]

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/2948/1vt2.th.jpg (http://img128.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1vt2.jpg)


http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7954/3jf9.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=3jf9.jpg)


http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7480/5sz3.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=5sz3.jpg)

Crits anyone?

[Lune One]

Edit

[myl]

yeah, but youre a toy.

[myl]

Originally posted by Lune One@Aug 23 2006, 11:57 AM
Ignore the twistie things and sorry about the quality of the pic. This is my second sketch.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/lune1.jpg
it took me a while to figure out what this said...its really sloppy

kids shouldnt be doing burners or wildstyles on their second sketches

lose the twisty shit and arrow shit, looks wack as fuck

back to blocks kiddo

[sky 5]

skeam - you got no flow, no repeated lines (angle and direction = movement) from one letter to the next . . .

that tune "1 2 pass" on the d&d allstars is dopealishish

[kidtelex]

http://x66.xanga.com/fc2a7be2c513374029660/w49924286.jpg

changed my dj name to digemz. dgmz for short? still mad ugly with coloring it in

[Lune One]

Any better?

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/lune2.jpg

[molotow_15]

yeah

[Lune One]

What can I do to improve?

[myl]

much better...but that doesnt mean go back to tryin wildstyle right now...keep doin blocks until you can rock a real nice one, then you can start adding shit and goin semiwildstyle and then eventually wildstyle

[Lune One]

Ok, thanks for the help.

[ados]

Originally posted by Lune One@Aug 23 2006, 01:51 PM
What can I do to improve?
sketch sketch sketch... thats how you get better. shit aint gonna happen over night. keep workin on simples till you learn proper letter structure, that way when you start doing letter extensions they wont be so outta place, and you will have structure.

[aeon]

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/3200/img0931jw4.jpg

crits/comments?

[sky 5]

another "rek 1", sweeeettt . . . . i was thinking about changing names . . .maybe "skeptic" . . . but i put in my work on "rek" so why change boats midstream ya know . . your rek sketch looks ok, the E is kinda busted . . . nice repition of the lines/bars

[krazzie_ammo]

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7909/5ft8.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=5ft8.jpg)
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/3266/6cu4.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=6cu4.jpg)
the paper was creased when i scanned it in so it doesnt really look like that.
Crits please?

[DJLotus]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Aug 23 2006, 03:10 PM
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7909/5ft8.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=5ft8.jpg)
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/3266/6cu4.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=6cu4.jpg)
the paper was creased when i scanned it in so it doesnt really look like that.
Crits please?
The R in the second one is kinda wack (((Because if I didn&#39;t know you wrote Craze it would look like... I don&#39;t even know ))) ... and the A in both need work, like in the first one it doesn&#39;t look like an A at all, and the second doesn&#39;t really either with the ubar long tail.

[aeon]

Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 23 2006, 02:56 PM
another "rek 1", sweeeettt . . . . i was thinking about changing names . . .maybe "skeptic" . . . but i put in my work on "rek" so why change boats midstream ya know . . your rek sketch looks ok, the E is kinda busted . . . nice repition of the lines/bars
dun worry. it&#39;s an old(ish) sketch i started writing wreks now. which admittedly aint that different, but is enough in my book. what you reckon?
cheers for the feedback, thought the e was a bit dodge, have been workin on that.
peace.

[myl]

theres a wrek 10 if im correct...writes with cezr? pretty sure...

but craze, that one looks like it says "CNGZE"

[aeon]

fuck. you right. well he&#39;s on the other side of the atlantic to me. n he ain&#39;t got that much fame yet. i ain&#39;t losing those letters&#33;
hmm. think ima change to werks. theres a wreck from germany n all and id rather avoid confusion...

[krazzie_ammo]

thanks, got any tips on how to make it look like CRAZE?

[BAZE]

lune nice n clean. well since im a big fan of simple tags.
yo btu 1 thing that came across my mind. isnt there a lune in the bomb the system movie lol.

either way man keep it up

[aces]

Originally posted by aeon+Aug 23 2006, 05:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aeon @ Aug 23 2006, 05:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Aug 23 2006, 02:56 PM
another "rek 1", sweeeettt . . . . i was thinking about changing names . . .maybe "skeptic" . . . but i put in my work on "rek" so why change boats midstream ya know . . your rek sketch looks ok, the E is kinda busted . . . nice repition of the lines/bars
dun worry. it&#39;s an old(ish) sketch i started writing wreks now. which admittedly aint that different, but is enough in my book. what you reckon?
cheers for the feedback, thought the e was a bit dodge, have been workin on that.
peace. [/b][/quote]
I bet there&#39;s a shitload of REKs but it doesnt matter because everyone here is still toy if they are posting their stuff here so whatever.

[NOMX]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Aug 23 2006, 03:10 PM
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7909/5ft8.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=5ft8.jpg)
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/3266/6cu4.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=6cu4.jpg)
the paper was creased when i scanned it in so it doesnt really look like that.
Crits please?
dont write craze, every toy who played marc ecko&#39;s game and starts writing uses that name

[doomsayer]

ok, yeah these are sloppy cause im just tryin different styles to see if it looks any good, crits...?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/2f82b9a9.jpg

[Ladybug<3]

dont flick everything you draw goddamnit

[-kosr-]

1. get better markers
2. colour better
3. the forcefield should be touching the letters
4. Practice.

Most of your sketches that I have seen loo the same, do some rounded block letters, and try to get your letters to flow more, by having some similar things in each letter, such as certain curves (not just little bumps coming off the same place, but having the base of the letters similar)

hope that helps..

[MUSASHI]

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/fetish.jpg

[doomsayer]

i dont flik everything i draw i only fliked about 4 of the 20 things i drew. i only flikked those cause i was trying different styles. and no telling me to get better markrs dusnt help, i know my markers suck, but theres not much i can do abou it.

forcefeilds sdont always touch letters and im trying to get flow thats why iom postin on here

[beastie_1989]

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/1102/blackbook14te3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

latest thing i made, tell me what u think

[beone]

musa is ill

[HK Army]

heres my very first piece, other then the alphabet i made, give me some feedback
also check out the last if you can, tell me what i need to improve on.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/vandal.jpg

[CLOVER_1_LV_702]

sup fello toys.. i write CLOV... anyways i need some info... how the fuck do you post pix up in this Bitch&#33;???

[d_g]

Originally posted by CLOVER_1_LV_702@Aug 23 2006, 07:56 PM
sup fello toys.. i write CLOV... anyways i need some info... how the fuck do you post pix up in this Bitch&#33;???
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...p?showtopic=134 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=134)

[si0n]

beastie - reflections go on one side of the letter, not both

[thief 127]

http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/thiefsmoke.jpg
wat u think. luv it or hate it

[nerdx]

think the top one looks hot.

[magic nyc]

Originally posted by MUSASHI@Aug 23 2006, 06:59 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/fetish.jpg
I&#39;ve always likes Musa since the beginning <3 Good stuff&#33;

[ShIfTeD]

http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5816/fetishoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my entry for the throw battle

[Skeam]

Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 23 2006, 01:19 PM
skeam - you got no flow, no repeated lines (angle and direction = movement) from one letter to the next . . .

that tune "1 2 pass" on the d&d allstars is dopealishish
so your saying i should try make some of the angles of my lines and the direction of them the same? and that will help it flow a bit more? thats fairly understandable actually.

thnx heaps mate i really appreciate it when a writer that knows there shit comments my work (i like it when anyone helps me out but you know what i mean)
cheers bro

[doomsayer]

crits??? my camera sucks i dont no why it wont focus properly

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/53467c42.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/ad6746cf.jpg

[Fosale!]

im feeling the bottom one a reel lot for a blockbuster

[tycoonin]

board just messin round

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4391/bounckga5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ehh critz¿

[d_g]

Doomsayer, top one looks goooood. Still needs a few little things here and there to be fixed up but all and all it&#39;s coming along nicely.

[Skeam]

did a bit moer with the S i posted earlier. tried to keep in mind what sky5 said about line direction and angle. i was loving it until i did the A now i just hat it haha. ive been having some realy troubles with my A&#39;s lately, finding ways to tweak them and put add ons on them. i find they just look so bare and stand out so much. really want some help with this please.

cheers
matt

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/238/hpim2114hd2.jpg

[nerdx]

yeah the A is deffinitly killing it.
try and slant the A like the K from top left to bottom right.
also bend the legs somewhat like you have done with the k.

[aces]

The A seems to be too straight like /-&#092; try making it have more curves in it like the rest of your letters.

[Mugyver]

comments, criz, whatver.

been workin on a lot of simples.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/simple2.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/simple1.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/tattoo.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/hollow.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/ish.jpg
i know the &#39;i&#39; on this one is wack, havent changed it yet, so ill post that one.

[aces]

Go simpler. Don&#39;t even do anything other than something that looks like this:
RISE

Make it look exactly like the letters that you would type from a keyboard but wider of course.

Check out this:

http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...ndpost&p=739235 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=14335&view=findpost&p=739235)

That should be helpful. Start with the first step or two but don&#39;t go any further yet. Just stay with the first one or two steps.

[ShIfTeD]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Aug 23 2006, 11:12 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5816/fetishoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my entry for the throw battle
bump for crits

[alera]

yo whats up? just finished this does enyone think it&#39;s worth coloring in?
:( sorry about the image quality i used a camera phone.
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1326/0824061500acc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[scoot]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Aug 24 2006, 01:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD &#064; Aug 24 2006, 01:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Aug 23 2006, 11:12 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5816/fetishoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my entry for the throw battle
bump for crits[/b][/quote]
buuummmmpp

[lost_for_evex]

ur a fuckin idiot....bump it 2 a new fuckin page...everyones guna ignore it cuz its shit.

[-kosr-]

Originally posted by Skeam@Aug 24 2006, 05:27 AM
did a bit moer with the S i posted earlier. tried to keep in mind what sky5 said about line direction and angle. i was loving it until i did the A now i just hat it haha. ive been having some realy troubles with my A&#39;s lately, finding ways to tweak them and put add ons on them. i find they just look so bare and stand out so much. really want some help with this please.

cheers
matt

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/238/hpim2114hd2.jpg
to help it flow more, try having the bottem part of your K be like the bottem have of your S (having something similar to the lower part of your S coming off the "bar" of your k at the bottem) as for the A, try a lowercase a to make it more round (do the lower case a shown on the computer screen, not the other kind)

[obseen]

skeam i think that looks sick&#33;

[Blix]

simple throw crits? http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/4773/zusepicfp5.th.jpg (http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zusepicfp5.jpg)

[MEBone]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/3126/1017701263250262250ua4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[MEBone]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/8702/1017703493250269940sp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nother one, crits?

[spuck]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 24 2006, 04:33 PM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/3126/1017701263250262250ua4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
i dont care what its supposed to look like, that is most definitely a 5

[_ghost_]

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan.jpg

heres somthing i drew i might have goteen carried away but o well. The smoke feel didnt come out the way i realy wanted it to but i didnt put much time into it, if you had n e crites on how i could get the same smoke ash like feel in this seen peice it would be apreciated

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/4madseenfallenwalls1.jpg

[Detoxication]

color would prolly help it a lot

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Aug 24 2006, 01:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Aug 24 2006, 01:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Aug 23 2006, 11:12 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5816/fetishoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my entry for the throw battle
bump for crits [/b][/quote]
that shit is fire IMO. good shit homey&#33;

[MR3___DOP]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v225/pokeman2/artartart/dkdkfjsdf005.jpg
crits/comments pleease

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by _ghost_@Aug 24 2006, 04:56 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan.jpg

heres somthing i drew i might have goteen carried away but o well. The smoke feel didnt come out the way i realy wanted it to but i didnt put much time into it, if you had n e crites on how i could get the same smoke ash like feel in this seen peice it would be apreciated

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/4madseenfallenwalls1.jpg
I&#39;m not going to lie to you homie. I didn&#39;t uderstand anything you typed, and the pic itself was ridiculous. Go look at the main blackbook thread for a while. Get some inspiration. No beef. I&#39;m only here to help. ;)

Also check out the New 2 Graff thread here in toy forum.

[HK Army]

Originally posted by HK Army@Aug 23 2006, 07:16 PM
heres my very first piece, other then the alphabet i made, give me some feedback
also check out the last if you can, tell me what i need to improve on.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/vandal.jpg
can someone give me some advice for what to do with this?

[_ghost_]

lol i know the previouse wun is horrible but i was board and thought i could meraculously pull of some amazing shit. heres another quickie crits please.

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan-1.jpg

[MR3___DOP]

Originally posted by _ghost_@Aug 24 2006, 05:39 PM
lol i know the previouse wun is horrible but i was board and thought i could meraculously pull of some amazing shit. heres another quickie crits please.

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan-1.jpg
keep the thickness of your stuff the same through the whole piece
round or square off some of those ugly sharp corners

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture25.jpg

any and all criticizm is appreciated. 1

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by HK Army+Aug 24 2006, 05:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HK Army @ Aug 24 2006, 05:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-HK Army@Aug 23 2006, 07:16 PM
heres my very first piece, other then the alphabet i made, give me some feedback
also check out the last if you can, tell me what i need to improve on.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/vandal.jpg
can someone give me some advice for what to do with this? [/b][/quote]
Go back to block letters yo. You haven&#39;t learned what the natural flow of letters are and it&#39;s fuckin up your steez.







GHOST- You topped yourself. That&#39;s even worse then the last one. Same advice as given to the guy above.


Both of you should check out the "New 2 Graff "thread,

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by _ghost_@Aug 24 2006, 04:56 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan.jpg

heres somthing i drew i might have goteen carried away but o well. The smoke feel didnt come out the way i realy wanted it to but i didnt put much time into it, if you had n e crites on how i could get the same smoke ash like feel in this seen peice it would be apreciated

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/4madseenfallenwalls1.jpg
:lol: :lol: :lol: wtf is this pre-k?

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by lost_for_evex+Aug 24 2006, 06:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (lost_for_evex @ Aug 24 2006, 06:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-_ghost_@Aug 24 2006, 04:56 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan.jpg

heres somthing i drew i might have goteen carried away but o well. The smoke feel didnt come out the way i realy wanted it to but i didnt put much time into it, if you had n e crites on how i could get the same smoke ash like feel in this seen peice it would be apreciated

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/4madseenfallenwalls1.jpg
:lol: :lol: :lol: wtf is this pre-k? [/b][/quote]
put more time into it. experiment. lose the acute angles. parallel your letters girth-wise.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 24 2006, 06:04 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture25.jpg

any and all criticizm is appreciated. 1
bump dont wanna get lost in the sauce.

[Detoxication]

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/8214/reasonfh6.jpg

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Detoxication@Aug 24 2006, 06:28 PM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/8214/reasonfh6.jpg
lose the angles it destroys any chance of it looking legit. ive seen alot worse but not too much. peace and keep drawing ya shit. itll evolve.

[Detoxication]

angles?

[NICCSACC]

yeah, sharp pointy things all over your letters. they are called "angles". srry for the confusion? i guess...

[Krash]

make your letters proportional.take off all the bits and peices.and don make all the sides point and sharp.hope i helped.

[MEBone]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 24 2006, 04:33 PM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/8702/1017703493250269940sp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Aug 24 2006, 06:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Aug 24 2006, 06:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Aug 24 2006, 06:04 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture25.jpg

any and all criticizm is appreciated. 1
bump dont wanna get lost in the sauce. [/b][/quote]
lovein it.

[CLOVER_1_LV_702]

http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/1351/orangecloves8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CLOV ONE

[Krash]

clov,what part of vegas yu in?

[Detoxication]

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7235/reasonqa2.jpg

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture26.jpg
simple fast bored. UFC is gonna come on in a few.

[meek2]

i like it ^^^^^

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture27.jpg

[d_g]

^^Dude your shit is always nice.

You need to do a tutorial for the New 2 Graff thread.

[HK Army]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Aug 24 2006, 06:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Aug 24 2006, 06:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by HK Army@Aug 24 2006, 05:36 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-HK Army@Aug 23 2006, 07:16 PM
heres my very first piece, other then the alphabet i made, give me some feedback
also check out the last if you can, tell me what i need to improve on.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/vandal.jpg
can someone give me some advice for what to do with this?
Go back to block letters yo. You haven&#39;t learned what the natural flow of letters are and it&#39;s fuckin up your steez.







GHOST- You topped yourself. That&#39;s even worse then the last one. Same advice as given to the guy above.


Both of you should check out the "New 2 Graff "thread, [/b][/quote]
thanks for the tip ;)

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by d_g@Aug 24 2006, 08:06 PM
^^Dude your shit is always nice.

You need to do a tutorial for the New 2 Graff thread.
ive been working on a little something something for that thread. ill post it when im done with it tho.

[ados]

crits

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0004-2.jpg

[Krash]

i dig that style you got rockin in the middle with the tck,the one on the bottom is nice, too. :)

[alera]

Originally posted by alera@Aug 24 2006, 02:20 PM
yo whats up? just finished this does enyone think it&#39;s worth coloring in?
:( sorry about the image quality i used a camera phone.
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1326/0824061500acc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for crits it kind of got lost in the shuffle :lol:

[alera]

Ados the TCK one in the middle is pretty nice

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by ados@Aug 24 2006, 08:24 PM
crits

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0004-2.jpg
real nice.

[obseen]

ados, all that stuff is good
alera i see potential there, keep working on that style

[ados]

alera, loose those cracks, and the lines on the top part of the A&#39;s.

[MEBone]

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9059/1018260583252151110af2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

for the weekly toy battle maybe

[sky 5]

Originally posted by thief 127@Aug 23 2006, 10:57 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/thiefsmoke.jpg
wat u think. luv it or hate it
this def gets a bump . . . i had crits for you but my comp crashed right as i clicked post so ....... your on the right track, just got spend mad hours developin . . . watch this shit not go thru again . .

[toon!..]

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9733/picture026os8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

basically my old style recycycled

[magic nyc]

You mean your bitten style re-bit?

[toon!..]

who the fucks rebit?..he doesnt even have the same letters as me..

[red november]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/5484/img1317uw9.jpg
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/6826/img1320pk8.jpg
here are two i did last month

[NICCSACC]

nice stuff reddy red.

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture28.jpg

[Fosale!]

just not feeling the S

[NICCSACC]

same here. the s sucks.

[sky 5]

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3844/1181817vv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[SeKz]

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6974/ealeraru3.png (http://imageshack.us)

Alera, your stuff is getting better, take time in making sure that the different parts of your letters arent obvious. When constructing your letters stroke by stroke its important you try to blend these parts together, ive circled what i mean in the pic above.



Heres my recent sketches, most of them are girls names who get me to do them. Its good practice.

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/1435/image036im0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9779/image039zn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4629/image038ga1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits please? :D

Lovin it theif, work on your structure and proportion a bit more. Fully sick.

[SeKz]

Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 25 2006, 01:31 AM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3844/1181817vv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
love it :lol:

[sky 5]

sekz - i would work on how you end your bars/lines . . . you got the bending/curvin down pretty good but your ends/caps could be better and their pretty easy to hook up . . . .

[SeKz]

I think i understand, ill try to work on that, do you just mean try to make better shapes out of them or like link them up? or what. Thanks dude.

[MEBone]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 24 2006, 08:56 PM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9059/1018260583252151110af2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


bump for crits

[Mugyver]

aight, i was told simpler, so this is what i got.
comments/critz much appreciated.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/simpleblock.jpg
*edit*
this one too
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/simple3.jpg

[Code]

Really simple stuff can i please get some critz

and ignore tags, i cant do one if my life depended on it :P
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/9773/scan0001ku9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[alera]

SeKz thanks for the help i rilly apriceat it

Deoms yo im lovin that second one keep it up