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Fosale!
08-20-2006, 03:16 PM
sky i love your guidlines.
the piece looks so dope as just a outline, i love that E.

ados
08-20-2006, 03:43 PM
sky, i like that piece on the bottom. sick ish


http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0003-1.jpg

NICCSACC
08-20-2006, 04:35 PM
sky is the shit

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
08-20-2006, 04:57 PM
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5991/dddddau9.jpg

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/3059/yrueey5uc6.jpg

Havent posted in a while. been busy. trying to create a new charac, nothing to do with these though. these're doodles. comments/crits appreciated.

spuck
08-20-2006, 05:02 PM
Originally posted by Hilo@Aug 20 2006, 01:44 PM
no shit...
that would imply that the penis resemblence was intentional, no?

gift
08-20-2006, 05:17 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/toybattle-ensoe.jpg

crits please

BAZE
08-20-2006, 07:11 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f56/BBCTBAZE/baze_sketch.jpg
suggestions?

obseen
08-20-2006, 07:15 PM
baze i dont like it that much, i think you should go a bit simpler maybe.
gift, thats a nice piece man! im just not sure about those splatters

ados
08-20-2006, 07:24 PM
Originally posted by ados@Aug 20 2006, 03:43 PM


http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0003-1.jpg
crits

Necro-
08-20-2006, 08:41 PM
ados i like those throwies.

im horrible at throwies, i was messin aroudn with a couple different styles. they all need work but which has the most potential? i like the one at the top of the first page i think.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture009.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture008-1.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture007-1.jpg

NOMX
08-20-2006, 09:02 PM
Originally posted by Ladybug<3+Aug 20 2006, 06:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Ladybug<3 @ Aug 20 2006, 06:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Aug 20 2006, 05:09 AM
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/3998/560a0389so6.jpg

Yeah, I know it still needs a lot of work. But am I on the right track at least?
Yes yes you are [/b][/quote]
that should be put in the just starting out thread as a guidline for new ppl start :)

BAZE
08-20-2006, 09:24 PM
Originally posted by BAZE@Aug 20 2006, 07:11 PM
http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f56/BBCTBAZE/baze_sketch.jpg
suggestions?
last on teh page so bump.
also any suggestions?

BAZE
08-20-2006, 09:28 PM
yo ados love ur shit man. keep it up

AteskOne
08-20-2006, 09:29 PM
baze man go a little simplier. it looks like your using block letters but it look likes ur jumping the gun a little. try doing more with just the letters themselves and loose all the add ons. start simple with just plain letters and start bending them a little like it looks like you were doing. you&#39;re just getting ahead of yourself and i&#39;ma quote me teacher on this "you needa hurry up and slow down"....wow i hate myself

knucks
08-20-2006, 09:29 PM
dnt try wilds til u get the bloks perfect then slowly progress on...

slEEt
08-20-2006, 09:37 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 20 2006, 08:41 PM
ados i like those throwies.

im horrible at throwies, i was messin aroudn with a couple different styles. they all need work but which has the most potential? i like the one at the top of the first page i think.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture009.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture008-1.jpg
http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture007-1.jpg
I like everything on the second page the most, I love that style, almost tempted to ask you to do a throwie exchange, PM me if your up for it.

si0n
08-20-2006, 10:08 PM
Necro - i really like the style on the 1st page, but not really feelin the the 2nd and 3rd pages. its all real clean to, but i like the 2nd throw on the 1st page. keep messin around with that style and youll have a dope throwie in no time

slEEt
08-20-2006, 10:43 PM
http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/4833/img1244mediumah9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

I haven&#39;t posted in awhile but haven&#39;t had much time to sketch so any crits?

FEST!
08-20-2006, 10:46 PM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/917/zzzzzzzz001vn7.jpg (http://My Webpage

FEST!
08-20-2006, 10:48 PM
Esol,
Liking this sketch here. I like the fill. Simple yet sweet lookin

slEEt
08-20-2006, 10:59 PM
Originally posted by FEST&#33;@Aug 20 2006, 10:48 PM
Esol,
Liking this sketch here. I like the fill. Simple yet sweet lookin
Thanks man, as for your sketch i&#39;d say make the extensions on the F a bit wider so they blend a bit more, that&#39;s about it though, looks pretty nice.

FEST!
08-20-2006, 11:04 PM
Right on. Half way through the outline I realized I messed up the F pretty bad but I felt like it was necessary to work with what I had and try to make up for it.
I&#39;m sure you can connect with what im sayin

NICCSACC
08-20-2006, 11:11 PM
Originally posted by FEST&#33;@Aug 20 2006, 10:46 PM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/917/zzzzzzzz001vn7.jpg (http://My Webpage
dope colors shitty execution.

slEEt
08-20-2006, 11:16 PM
^ Yeah I know what you mean, sometimes you just gotta work through stuff, can&#39;t be perfect.

I did another just for the hell of it.

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4270/img1246mediumxs0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

FEST!
08-20-2006, 11:19 PM
LOL...I would do my sketch over again but hell...i have no energy...it&#39;s late

si0n
08-20-2006, 11:33 PM
esol man i dont really like that throwie, you need to put more style into it imo

Necro-
08-20-2006, 11:42 PM
Originally posted by si0n@Aug 20 2006, 10:08 PM
Necro - i really like the style on the 1st page, but not really feelin the the 2nd and 3rd pages. its all real clean to, but i like the 2nd throw on the 1st page. keep messin around with that style and youll have a dope throwie in no time
thanks for the crits. i kinda liked teh first page more, too but i liked teh top one just because the bottoms of the letters were smaller than the top, liked that.

and sleet, i can do an exchange. not tonight tho because it&#39;s late. ill pm u tomorrow.

slEEt
08-20-2006, 11:51 PM
Originally posted by si0n@Aug 20 2006, 11:33 PM
esol man i dont really like that throwie, you need to put more style into it imo
Yeah, i&#39;m still working on it, no where near done.

slEEt
08-20-2006, 11:53 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 20 2006, 11:42 PM
Sleet, i can do an exchange. not tonight tho because it&#39;s late. ill pm u tomorrow.
I hear ya, i&#39;ll check the pms tomorrow.

Quake
08-21-2006, 04:43 AM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060820/11/0/7/a/07a9c5ec2985b1983c8e97139a5bc933200608200_full.jpg

tips and comments please

toxus
08-21-2006, 05:00 AM
quake&#33; gwan msn&#33;

ion-i
08-21-2006, 05:26 AM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/chickhandystyle.jpg
sketch i did tonight. done with pencil, thats why its real lightly shown.
im just tryin to get female characters down clean. what can i say, they&#39;re fun to draw. ;)

NOMX
08-21-2006, 05:55 AM
work on ur porportions

ion-i
08-21-2006, 05:58 AM
such as what limbs/parts?
i know parts of the legs are wider then others, i had a sketchier version of this but re-drew over it so it would look cleaner for the scan, so a lot of them limbs might of came out different. but if youd be more specific ill be sure to fix em on the next one.

bouncingsoul
08-21-2006, 06:09 AM
Here&#39;s some of the sketches I&#39;ve been doing

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/cf66b03f.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/b79ce5f9.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/a1a0bf85.jpg

...The last one was just messin&#39; around... I thought up an idea for O&#39;s and found I actually liked it... I&#39;m sticking with Hexa though

What Happened to the Letters?
08-21-2006, 10:29 AM
Originally posted by ion&#045;i@Aug 21 2006, 06:26 AM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/chickhandystyle.jpg
sketch i did tonight. done with pencil, thats why its real lightly shown.
im just tryin to get female characters down clean. what can i say, they&#39;re fun to draw. ;)
have you seen boobs before haha, her right tight is underneath her armpit, they shouldnt be so spread in opposite directions, also her forarm on her right side is way to big and her heads the same size as her whoel torso

-MaCKiE-
08-21-2006, 10:31 AM
n u missed tha nipples


the hed is faar 2 big

ozi~amo~crs
08-21-2006, 10:35 AM
bouncingsoul did you just post those on 12 oz :huh:

bouncingsoul
08-21-2006, 11:10 AM
Yeah, I post on both sites

:edit: Might as well bump this for critz


Originally posted by bouncingsoul
Here&#39;s some of the sketches I&#39;ve been doing

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/cf66b03f.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/b79ce5f9.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/a1a0bf85.jpg

...The last one was just messin&#39; around... I thought up an idea for O&#39;s and found I actually liked it... I&#39;m sticking with Hexa though

Quake
08-21-2006, 11:55 AM
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060821/03/f/b/f/fbf06630f06e7265aa5fcf75e453a61c200608210_full.jpg

comments and tips please

obseen
08-21-2006, 12:04 PM
i actually think that looks pretty good

beone
08-21-2006, 12:57 PM
kwake that style is gunna be ill check out rends stuff its very similiar

hexo or heto i like the stuff im seeing


http://img1.yoxio.com/img/251656.jpg
crits only everyone "e sissy fighting" just leave
fuck the s and fuck the shadow

Fosale!
08-21-2006, 01:00 PM
^ im liking it, just doing a lil something with that leg on the R.

Nice job.

ion-i
08-21-2006, 01:09 PM
Originally posted by What Happened to the Letters?+Aug 21 2006, 08:29 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (What Happened to the Letters? &#064; Aug 21 2006, 08:29 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ion&#045;i@Aug 21 2006, 06:26 AM
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d60/ioninfk/chickhandystyle.jpg
sketch i did tonight. done with pencil, thats why its real lightly shown.
im just tryin to get female characters down clean. what can i say, they&#39;re fun to draw. ;)
have you seen boobs before haha, her right tight is underneath her armpit, they shouldnt be so spread in opposite directions, also her forarm on her right side is way to big and her heads the same size as her whoel torso [/b][/quote]
i didnt draw the nips for a reason

also, yeah the head is big, kinda wanted to keep a little cartoony affect goin. ill fix it tho
and yes i have seen boobs before. yes i have seen them on a female in person as well haha. but thats besides the point.. thats why im trying to draw females well, they are the one challenge in drawing people to me.
but thanks for the crits man, ill fix things around and keep practicing it.

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
08-21-2006, 02:43 PM
Before: http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5991/dddddau9.jpg

After: http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/2048/dddddau9copyzx4.jpg

First time ever coloring something in photo shop.

Crits/tips/comments appreciated. Or, if you have ne info on coloring in PS, then please pm me.

-Bill

beastie_1989
08-21-2006, 03:04 PM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/2007/blackbook12iw3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7444/blackbook13ih2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

any tips/comments...

NICCSACC
08-21-2006, 03:36 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/b9076d05f7.jpg
are these colors good?

Quake
08-21-2006, 04:00 PM
^ i like them colores and the letters, the "R" is great&#33;&#33;

NICCSACC
08-21-2006, 04:10 PM
thnx dude your stuff is dope too. pz

Mugyver
08-21-2006, 04:20 PM
beastie that shit is sick.

kicklip9634
08-21-2006, 04:25 PM
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/7579/kurupt1fw3.th.jpg


what should i work on

Quake
08-21-2006, 04:28 PM
^try simple block letters first

obseen
08-21-2006, 05:04 PM
niccsacc that sketch is sick

beastie_1989
08-21-2006, 05:44 PM
Originally posted by Mugyver@Aug 21 2006, 04:20 PM
beastie that shit is sick.
thanks i still have to work on my letters tho

sky 5
08-21-2006, 06:41 PM
some nice stuff up in here lately . . . . i drink soo many coronas i got lime disease . . . .

d_g
08-21-2006, 06:48 PM
At least you won&#39;t get scurvey.

NICCSACC
08-21-2006, 06:52 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/6e1798cff1.jpg

-kosr-
08-21-2006, 07:03 PM
Originally posted by kicklip9634@Aug 21 2006, 04:25 PM
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/7579/kurupt1fw3.th.jpg


what should i work on
try not to copy www.graffiticreator.net <_< your going to have a hard time fooling anyone

if you deny it, heres yours

http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/7579/kurupt1fw3.th.jpg

heres the graffiti creator

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/4476/ahes9.png

notice any exact similarities?

obseen
08-21-2006, 07:20 PM
^haha, ive seen this scenario so many time&#33;
niccsacc, dope sketch as per usual, im going to have to buy you a new digicam though

-kosr-
08-21-2006, 07:24 PM
^^yea, and i dont see why they cant even copy it right..

beone
08-21-2006, 07:50 PM
i knew when i first saw the pic its justn ot worth it to call it on those kids who bite graff creator

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
08-21-2006, 08:02 PM
Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Aug 21 2006, 02:43 PM
Before: http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5991/dddddau9.jpg

After: http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/2048/dddddau9copyzx4.jpg

First time ever coloring something in photo shop.

Crits/tips/comments appreciated. Or, if you have ne info on coloring in PS, then please pm me.

-Bill
bump, yea?

NOMX
08-21-2006, 08:05 PM
color it in real life

NOMX
08-21-2006, 08:07 PM
Originally posted by ion&#045;i@Aug 21 2006, 05:58 AM
such as what limbs/parts?
i know parts of the legs are wider then others, i had a sketchier version of this but re-drew over it so it would look cleaner for the scan, so a lot of them limbs might of came out different. but if youd be more specific ill be sure to fix em on the next one.
the head is way to big and the length of the limbs compared to the torso

yea yea double post.... im badass like that

ion-i
08-21-2006, 08:11 PM
hahaha thanks man for repeating what was said already










:wub:

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
08-21-2006, 08:16 PM
Originally posted by NOMX@Aug 21 2006, 08:05 PM
color it in real life
yeah alright, howabout you suck my balls in real life? wtf&#39;? Yes, i normally color my shit with markers or colored pencils, just like the rest of you. but like i said on my post, i want to learn how to color things in photoshop, and was asking for crits on that.

Thanks though.

...AG...
08-21-2006, 09:42 PM
Yo could someone help me out with this peice in on da bottomhttp://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1928/asenpg0.jpg

Sluts_r_us
08-21-2006, 09:49 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 21 2006, 06:52 PM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/6e1798cff1.jpg
nice niccsacc...finally a good writer in the toy section...keep it up man im linking your simples..

red november
08-21-2006, 10:33 PM
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/148/img1345eh1.jpg
first time doin all that arrow shit till me what you think

nerdx
08-21-2006, 10:34 PM
i dont thikn you should add arrows yet but work on the letter structure.
the S is really nice but the rest of them are kinda undeveloped and hard to decipher.

sky 5
08-21-2006, 11:48 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/9295/1181813mk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

...forgot to put a lil rek in the bottom scroll thing on the bear piece . . . niccsaccs always lookin daper . . . .november i like the inner line work on the letters but your arrows are inconsistent . . . .

Fosale!
08-21-2006, 11:52 PM
why do you post in the toy thread?

sky 5
08-22-2006, 12:15 AM
i dont know, no real reason man . . . . shit is gettin old thoo aint it . .

bill cheese -nice to see your work back up here . . .

MF Feed Letter
08-22-2006, 12:23 AM
develpment today all 2 minute sketches except color one

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1701.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1700.jpg

NOMX
08-22-2006, 12:27 AM
Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze+Aug 21 2006, 08:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bill Cheese of Wheeze @ Aug 21 2006, 08:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NOMX@Aug 21 2006, 08:05 PM
color it in real life
yeah alright, howabout you suck my balls in real life? wtf&#39;? Yes, i normally color my shit with markers or colored pencils, just like the rest of you. but like i said on my post, i want to learn how to color things in photoshop, and was asking for crits on that.

Thanks though. [/b][/quote]
;)

gift
08-22-2006, 12:27 AM
Originally posted by gift@Aug 20 2006, 05:17 PM
http://i69.photobucket.com/albums/i57/bsc-sier/black%20book/toybattle-ensoe.jpg

crits please
bump for some crits mannnnne.

sugarbomb
08-22-2006, 01:08 AM
the drips are too much.

Skeam
08-22-2006, 01:08 AM
Sky5 even if your shit isnt toy and even if you think its getting old its still fucken dope and inspires the shit out of me so stay in the toy forum so i can keep seein your shit. hahaha.

MF Feed your shit is also dope as and im lovin that throwy ay

beone
08-22-2006, 01:27 AM
aggreed^

NICCSACC
08-22-2006, 02:03 AM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Aug 22 2006, 12:23 AM
develpment today all 2 minute sketches except color one

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1701.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1700.jpg
clean good

NICCSACC
08-22-2006, 02:04 AM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Aug 22 2006, 12:23 AM
develpment today all 2 minute sketches except color one

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1701.jpg

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1700.jpg
clean good

NICCSACC
08-22-2006, 03:11 AM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/a11432bf06.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/1d91011e00.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/cf9a27463a.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/846ddda247.jpghttp://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/c3d82ef252.jpg

SeKz
08-22-2006, 03:22 AM
Originally posted by red november@Aug 21 2006, 10:33 PM
http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/148/img1345eh1.jpg
first time doin all that arrow shit till me what you think
Dont just throw arrows out in all directions. It looks a lot better if you feel the angles with the angles of the letters. Also try to keep all the arrow heads the same size unless your trying a far away/close-up effect. Also dont try to do arrows. You got the first letter, bottom arrow on the right angle, just too long. Also dont overlap the arrows. Arrows only come when its a last resort to the tip of your extension, otherwise it just looks tacky. Thats my 2 cents on arrows.



NICCSACC that is fuckin ill. The YASER above your little throw needs some work is structure i think (maybe just the s, e and r). The one above that is on the money though.

Those Karate sketches are fucking dope, got some real style flowin there.

The ensoe sketch needs work on the drips, they should be on the left because of the slant of the word. Make them alot smaller too, i think someone already said that. Im not really feeling that 3D effect. I can see where you tried to fix it up too.

SeKz
08-22-2006, 03:36 AM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/1644/image022rh4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Did this for a chick, it says NAT if you can&#39;t read it.

http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7627/image007de8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Some random shit, not overly happy with it. Crits anyway

Cheers

doomsayer
08-22-2006, 03:55 AM
im lovin that stuff sky 5 and yaser; sekz i dont like the first one, but the second one is nice

crits please....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/207c7b01.jpg

-kosr-
08-22-2006, 04:37 AM
new sketch, uncoloured, experimentnig with add ons..

should i keep the add ons or get rid of them?

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/7484/kosr5ih1.png (http://imageshack.us)

some crits would be nice too.

Skeam
08-22-2006, 07:05 AM
thats hell complex... a little two comple for my likings. maybe a clearer picture would help make it out more but as always you can really help it (i know how it feels having a Digi cam that came from the buttocks of a bufalo)

beefgerky
08-22-2006, 08:38 AM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Aug 22 2006, 03:55 AM
crits please....

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/207c7b01.jpg
on the right track no doubt. never overlap the previous letter with the next one. (example: the T overlapping the U) anywwayy, from here just bend up some shit, fuck with it, give it some fuckin funk. yadidimeannnn?

jerm_mtl
08-22-2006, 09:30 AM
Originally posted by &#045;kosr&#045;@Aug 22 2006, 04:37 AM
new sketch, uncoloured, experimentnig with add ons..

should i keep the add ons or get rid of them?

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/7484/kosr5ih1.png (http://imageshack.us)

some crits would be nice too.
keep em but colour it cuz we can barely see anything

MF Feed Letter
08-22-2006, 10:03 AM
Originally posted by SeKz@Aug 22 2006, 03:22 AM



NICCSACC that is fuckin ill. The YASER above your little throw needs some work is structure i think (maybe just the s, e and r). The one above that is on the money though.

Those Karate sketches are fucking dope, got some real style flowin there.


did niccsacc jus get credit for my sketch?

meh whatever niccsaac those karate are pretty dope what do you do oyur fills with?

...AG...
08-22-2006, 10:13 AM
Yo could someone help me out with this peice in on da bottom http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1928/asenpg0.jpg

obseen
08-22-2006, 10:21 AM
kosr, from what i can see it actually looks quite good

Slim Pickens
08-22-2006, 12:36 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 22 2006, 03:11 AM
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/a11432bf06.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/1d91011e00.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/cf9a27463a.jpg
http://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/846ddda247.jpghttp://graffitispot.com/upload/uploads/c3d82ef252.jpg
bizzzummpp

Bill Cheese of Wheeze
08-22-2006, 01:07 PM
NICCSACC that &#39;life suks&#39; shit is ill man. im lovin it. the skull, and the drip really add to the effect. keep it up

Sky, that is fckin sik bro. I love it. and i agree with whoever said youre an inspiration to us all here in the toy box. lol. Keep it up.

and kosr, if you could get a cleaner pic, id like to see it.

Sekz, 1st one is tight. keep it up.

EX_ND
08-22-2006, 01:27 PM
http://i65.photobucket.com/albums/h209/Punjon/462f846e.jpg
Tell me how shit this is hahaha
Yeah it sucks, just getting inspiration from these forums hahaha i&#39;m not that good

Necro-
08-22-2006, 01:30 PM
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...showtopic=14335 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=14335)

prank
08-22-2006, 01:43 PM
i need a couple of pointers

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/1830/image62cg5.jpg
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/3579/image63vt2.jpg
http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/3561/image64lr1.jpg
http://img397.imageshack.us/img397/4133/image65gk3.jpg

obseen
08-22-2006, 01:58 PM
the 2&#39;nd one is the best cos its got straighter letters
try to do more like that perhaps

NICCSACC
08-22-2006, 03:59 PM
Originally posted by MF Feed Letter+Aug 22 2006, 10:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (MF Feed Letter @ Aug 22 2006, 10:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SeKz@Aug 22 2006, 03:22 AM



NICCSACC that is fuckin ill. The YASER above your little throw needs some work is structure i think (maybe just the s, e and r). The one above that is on the money though.

Those Karate sketches are fucking dope, got some real style flowin there.


did niccsacc jus get credit for my sketch?

meh whatever niccsaac those karate are pretty dope what do you do oyur fills with? [/b][/quote]
crayon
yeah im low budget

-kosr-
08-22-2006, 06:10 PM
the coloured version..

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/5255/kosr5ar1.png (http://imageshack.us)

tea dee sea
08-22-2006, 06:23 PM
kool

obseen
08-22-2006, 07:04 PM
looks dope kosr, i think its better than your rent stuff

Necro-
08-22-2006, 07:11 PM
experimenting with some addons. what do you think? if i were to finish it it would be shaded with a background.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture010.jpg

Ladybug<3
08-22-2006, 07:15 PM
get rid of the sig?
and this is what you did
i/we gave you advice, you said ok, then kept on doing what you were doing
thsoe letters suck
do new shit
and to anyone who says otherwise : fuck you

d_g
08-22-2006, 07:16 PM
Haha the sig is a bit long. DK are good though.

NICCSACC
08-22-2006, 07:43 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture23.jpghttp://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture24.jpg

Fosale!
08-22-2006, 07:44 PM
illl, do you ever post your work in the bb thread

NICCSACC
08-22-2006, 07:44 PM
fuck&#33;&#33;&#33; ill post a regular pic later. pz

NICCSACC
08-22-2006, 07:46 PM
Originally posted by &#045;kosr&#045;@Aug 22 2006, 06:10 PM
the coloured version..

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/5255/kosr5ar1.png (http://imageshack.us)
i really like this shit. props

Necro-
08-22-2006, 07:54 PM
Originally posted by Ladybug<3@Aug 22 2006, 07:15 PM
get rid of the sig?
and this is what you did
i/we gave you advice, you said ok, then kept on doing what you were doing
thsoe letters suck
do new shit
and to anyone who says otherwise : fuck you
i dont remember you ever giving me advice....

or seen you post any work, ever. and dont say "the letters suck" anybody can say that, tell me waht is wrong with the letters. and post some of your stuff.

and your from latvia? my fav writer&#39;s from latvia.


sry abou tthe sig, longer than i thought it would be..

meek2
08-22-2006, 07:57 PM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djchallenge/SUNP00041.jpg

my shit is not that good

-kosr-
08-22-2006, 08:06 PM
Your on the right track, keep them simples going.

Your handy looks like it says meer though.

Guerrilla876
08-22-2006, 08:24 PM
Originally posted by Bill Cheese of Wheeze+Aug 21 2006, 08:02 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Bill Cheese of Wheeze @ Aug 21 2006, 08:02 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Bill Cheese of Wheeze@Aug 21 2006, 02:43 PM
Before: http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/5991/dddddau9.jpg

After: http://img67.imageshack.us/img67/2048/dddddau9copyzx4.jpg

First time ever coloring something in photo shop.

Crits/tips/comments appreciated. Or, if you have ne info on coloring in PS, then please pm me.

-Bill
bump, yea? [/b][/quote]
not really feelin that. i wouldn&#39;t of used dem (grammar error&#33;) colors but i like that you&#39;re experimenting. everyone has their own style. like i said, i dont feel it, i never said it totally sucked. I don&#39;t know how to put ish on photoshop, but i use it for like layouts and stuff. but i must say, just keep doing what you do. ;)

red november
08-22-2006, 09:42 PM
Originally posted by ...AG...@Aug 22 2006, 10:13 AM
Yo could someone help me out with this peice in on da bottom http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1928/asenpg0.jpg
try to keep the letters the same width
and clean your lines and 3d up
i like the top one more

MEBone
08-22-2006, 11:43 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1139/1014715713240107200su1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

myl
08-22-2006, 11:44 PM
is that short for syphilis?

just kidding

MEBone
08-22-2006, 11:46 PM
Originally posted by myl@Aug 22 2006, 11:44 PM
is that short for syphilis?

just kidding
ha naw man but u got any crits

Lumps[teampain]
08-23-2006, 12:36 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a30/doodaman/Scan0002Small.jpg

what do you think?

myl
08-23-2006, 12:40 AM
i think you should stop biting

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7084/callejeroxi1.jpg

(from da wolfs tutorial)

xVxSinxVx
08-23-2006, 12:53 AM
Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 22 2006, 11:43 PM
http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1139/1014715713240107200su1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
uhhh.. how about make ur letters fatter, don&#39;t put them so bunched up (well it wasn&#39;t really that bunched up but whatever), don&#39;t leave ur letter the same width throughout the line, like this&#092;/&#092;/&#092;/
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/429/samplezy3.png

sprry for my poor Paint skills but my camera is out of bateries so i could show u better examples..but anyway just work on ur style and don&#39;t be afraid to try different things even if they look weiord sometimes. likr that stuff that Gesus paints. :lol:

Lumps[teampain]
08-23-2006, 01:21 AM
i used the tutorial i know thats from that im just starting i have others this is the only one i scanned in. i just liked the style and decided to use the tutorial

Lumps[teampain]
08-23-2006, 01:29 AM
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a30/doodaman/scan0001.jpg

heres another one sorry its upside down

myl
08-23-2006, 01:54 AM
why would you even post that up then if you knew it was a bite?

kids these days...

NOMX
08-23-2006, 02:04 AM
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/8735/200608220001qm2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ShIfTeD
08-23-2006, 02:09 AM
damn dude thats fuckin straight as hell&#33;

put that bitch on a sticker, and you gots tha gold

**hits chest like a retard**

NOMX
08-23-2006, 02:13 AM
unfortunately the pic didnt get all the really detailed parts on it. but oh well

Skeam
08-23-2006, 02:35 AM
yeh that looks fucken ill... i cant really make out what it is, some ortof face maybe.but it still looks fucken dope

Skeam
08-23-2006, 05:00 AM
tried a new E and A... liked the E but hate the A lol. i dont think the S and K really fit in, more so the S then the K. really want some crits ploise.

cheers

http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/1605/hpim2110ew6.jpg

doomsayer
08-23-2006, 05:55 AM
dam skeam thats awesome, don know if u wanna take crits from me buuuuttt, i dont really like the E i think its to &#39;hidden&#39; by the K, i think the A would llook better if the first part of it was longer or maybe connected to to that bit that goes nderneath it.

anyways, i needa get some crits on this please from anyone. im trying to funk the letters up but i cant seem to,m this is the best i got when trying to &#39;funk&#39; them up, help and crits pppllleeeeaaassee

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/truththroagain.jpg

Skeam
08-23-2006, 07:23 AM
S&#33;&#33;&#33; i kinda like it, if the whole peice was like this do you think there would be to much adons? i think this would fit in a bit better with the rest of the peice i did up a bit ^^^^

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/4320/hpim2111pv8.jpg

meek2
08-23-2006, 08:07 AM
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djchallenge/SUNP00038.jpg
http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l129/djchallenge/SUNP00017.jpg

Lune One
08-23-2006, 11:57 AM
Ignore the twistie things and sorry about the quality of the pic. This is my second sketch.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/lune1.jpg

Ladybug<3
08-23-2006, 12:15 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;+Aug 22 2006, 07:54 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Necro- @ Aug 22 2006, 07:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Ladybug<3@Aug 22 2006, 07:15 PM
get rid of the sig?
and this is what you did
i/we gave you advice, you said ok, then kept on doing what you were doing
thsoe letters suck
do new shit
and to anyone who says otherwise : fuck you
i dont remember you ever giving me advice....

or seen you post any work, ever. and dont say "the letters suck" anybody can say that, tell me waht is wrong with the letters. and post some of your stuff.

and your from latvia? my fav writer&#39;s from latvia.


sry abou tthe sig, longer than i thought it would be.. [/b][/quote]
new account, socrates
i have posted work lots of it

krazzie_ammo
08-23-2006, 12:24 PM
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/2948/1vt2.th.jpg (http://img128.imageshack.us/my.php?image=1vt2.jpg)


http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7954/3jf9.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=3jf9.jpg)


http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/7480/5sz3.th.jpg (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=5sz3.jpg)

Crits anyone?

Lune One
08-23-2006, 12:31 PM
Edit

myl
08-23-2006, 01:05 PM
yeah, but youre a toy.

myl
08-23-2006, 01:08 PM
Originally posted by Lune One@Aug 23 2006, 11:57 AM
Ignore the twistie things and sorry about the quality of the pic. This is my second sketch.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/lune1.jpg
it took me a while to figure out what this said...its really sloppy

kids shouldnt be doing burners or wildstyles on their second sketches

lose the twisty shit and arrow shit, looks wack as fuck

back to blocks kiddo

sky 5
08-23-2006, 01:19 PM
skeam - you got no flow, no repeated lines (angle and direction = movement) from one letter to the next . . .

that tune "1 2 pass" on the d&d allstars is dopealishish

kidtelex
08-23-2006, 01:28 PM
http://x66.xanga.com/fc2a7be2c513374029660/w49924286.jpg

changed my dj name to digemz. dgmz for short? still mad ugly with coloring it in

Lune One
08-23-2006, 01:39 PM
Any better?

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e387/x_casper/lune2.jpg

molotow_15
08-23-2006, 01:44 PM
yeah

Lune One
08-23-2006, 01:51 PM
What can I do to improve?

myl
08-23-2006, 01:52 PM
much better...but that doesnt mean go back to tryin wildstyle right now...keep doin blocks until you can rock a real nice one, then you can start adding shit and goin semiwildstyle and then eventually wildstyle

Lune One
08-23-2006, 01:55 PM
Ok, thanks for the help.

ados
08-23-2006, 01:55 PM
Originally posted by Lune One@Aug 23 2006, 01:51 PM
What can I do to improve?
sketch sketch sketch... thats how you get better. shit aint gonna happen over night. keep workin on simples till you learn proper letter structure, that way when you start doing letter extensions they wont be so outta place, and you will have structure.

aeon
08-23-2006, 02:25 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/3200/img0931jw4.jpg

crits/comments?

sky 5
08-23-2006, 02:56 PM
another "rek 1", sweeeettt . . . . i was thinking about changing names . . .maybe "skeptic" . . . but i put in my work on "rek" so why change boats midstream ya know . . your rek sketch looks ok, the E is kinda busted . . . nice repition of the lines/bars

krazzie_ammo
08-23-2006, 03:10 PM
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7909/5ft8.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=5ft8.jpg)
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/3266/6cu4.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=6cu4.jpg)
the paper was creased when i scanned it in so it doesnt really look like that.
Crits please?

DJLotus
08-23-2006, 03:13 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Aug 23 2006, 03:10 PM
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7909/5ft8.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=5ft8.jpg)
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/3266/6cu4.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=6cu4.jpg)
the paper was creased when i scanned it in so it doesnt really look like that.
Crits please?
The R in the second one is kinda wack (((Because if I didn&#39;t know you wrote Craze it would look like... I don&#39;t even know ))) ... and the A in both need work, like in the first one it doesn&#39;t look like an A at all, and the second doesn&#39;t really either with the ubar long tail.

aeon
08-23-2006, 04:09 PM
Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 23 2006, 02:56 PM
another "rek 1", sweeeettt . . . . i was thinking about changing names . . .maybe "skeptic" . . . but i put in my work on "rek" so why change boats midstream ya know . . your rek sketch looks ok, the E is kinda busted . . . nice repition of the lines/bars
dun worry. it&#39;s an old(ish) sketch i started writing wreks now. which admittedly aint that different, but is enough in my book. what you reckon?
cheers for the feedback, thought the e was a bit dodge, have been workin on that.
peace.

myl
08-23-2006, 04:31 PM
theres a wrek 10 if im correct...writes with cezr? pretty sure...

but craze, that one looks like it says "CNGZE"

aeon
08-23-2006, 04:39 PM
fuck. you right. well he&#39;s on the other side of the atlantic to me. n he ain&#39;t got that much fame yet. i ain&#39;t losing those letters&#33;
hmm. think ima change to werks. theres a wreck from germany n all and id rather avoid confusion...

krazzie_ammo
08-23-2006, 04:41 PM
thanks, got any tips on how to make it look like CRAZE?

BAZE
08-23-2006, 04:47 PM
lune nice n clean. well since im a big fan of simple tags.
yo btu 1 thing that came across my mind. isnt there a lune in the bomb the system movie lol.

either way man keep it up

aces
08-23-2006, 04:47 PM
Originally posted by aeon+Aug 23 2006, 05:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aeon @ Aug 23 2006, 05:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Aug 23 2006, 02:56 PM
another "rek 1", sweeeettt . . . . i was thinking about changing names . . .maybe "skeptic" . . . but i put in my work on "rek" so why change boats midstream ya know . . your rek sketch looks ok, the E is kinda busted . . . nice repition of the lines/bars
dun worry. it&#39;s an old(ish) sketch i started writing wreks now. which admittedly aint that different, but is enough in my book. what you reckon?
cheers for the feedback, thought the e was a bit dodge, have been workin on that.
peace. [/b][/quote]
I bet there&#39;s a shitload of REKs but it doesnt matter because everyone here is still toy if they are posting their stuff here so whatever.

NOMX
08-23-2006, 04:59 PM
Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Aug 23 2006, 03:10 PM
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/7909/5ft8.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=5ft8.jpg)
http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/3266/6cu4.th.jpg (http://img380.imageshack.us/my.php?image=6cu4.jpg)
the paper was creased when i scanned it in so it doesnt really look like that.
Crits please?
dont write craze, every toy who played marc ecko&#39;s game and starts writing uses that name

doomsayer
08-23-2006, 05:12 PM
ok, yeah these are sloppy cause im just tryin different styles to see if it looks any good, crits...?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/2f82b9a9.jpg

Ladybug<3
08-23-2006, 05:24 PM
dont flick everything you draw goddamnit

-kosr-
08-23-2006, 05:31 PM
1. get better markers
2. colour better
3. the forcefield should be touching the letters
4. Practice.

Most of your sketches that I have seen loo the same, do some rounded block letters, and try to get your letters to flow more, by having some similar things in each letter, such as certain curves (not just little bumps coming off the same place, but having the base of the letters similar)

hope that helps..

MUSASHI
08-23-2006, 05:59 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/fetish.jpg

doomsayer
08-23-2006, 06:14 PM
i dont flik everything i draw i only fliked about 4 of the 20 things i drew. i only flikked those cause i was trying different styles. and no telling me to get better markrs dusnt help, i know my markers suck, but theres not much i can do abou it.

forcefeilds sdont always touch letters and im trying to get flow thats why iom postin on here

beastie_1989
08-23-2006, 06:25 PM
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/1102/blackbook14te3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

latest thing i made, tell me what u think

beone
08-23-2006, 06:41 PM
musa is ill

HK Army
08-23-2006, 07:16 PM
heres my very first piece, other then the alphabet i made, give me some feedback
also check out the last if you can, tell me what i need to improve on.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/vandal.jpg

CLOVER_1_LV_702
08-23-2006, 07:56 PM
sup fello toys.. i write CLOV... anyways i need some info... how the fuck do you post pix up in this Bitch&#33;???

d_g
08-23-2006, 08:01 PM
Originally posted by CLOVER_1_LV_702@Aug 23 2006, 07:56 PM
sup fello toys.. i write CLOV... anyways i need some info... how the fuck do you post pix up in this Bitch&#33;???
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...p?showtopic=134 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=134)

si0n
08-23-2006, 09:38 PM
beastie - reflections go on one side of the letter, not both

thief 127
08-23-2006, 10:57 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/thiefsmoke.jpg
wat u think. luv it or hate it

nerdx
08-23-2006, 11:01 PM
think the top one looks hot.

magic nyc
08-23-2006, 11:07 PM
Originally posted by MUSASHI@Aug 23 2006, 06:59 PM
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/fetish.jpg
I&#39;ve always likes Musa since the beginning <3 Good stuff&#33;

ShIfTeD
08-23-2006, 11:12 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5816/fetishoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my entry for the throw battle

Skeam
08-24-2006, 01:00 AM
Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 23 2006, 01:19 PM
skeam - you got no flow, no repeated lines (angle and direction = movement) from one letter to the next . . .

that tune "1 2 pass" on the d&d allstars is dopealishish
so your saying i should try make some of the angles of my lines and the direction of them the same? and that will help it flow a bit more? thats fairly understandable actually.

thnx heaps mate i really appreciate it when a writer that knows there shit comments my work (i like it when anyone helps me out but you know what i mean)
cheers bro

doomsayer
08-24-2006, 01:47 AM
crits??? my camera sucks i dont no why it wont focus properly

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/53467c42.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/ad6746cf.jpg

Fosale!
08-24-2006, 03:04 AM
im feeling the bottom one a reel lot for a blockbuster

tycoonin
08-24-2006, 04:26 AM
board just messin round

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4391/bounckga5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ehh critz┬┐

d_g
08-24-2006, 05:03 AM
Doomsayer, top one looks goooood. Still needs a few little things here and there to be fixed up but all and all it&#39;s coming along nicely.

Skeam
08-24-2006, 05:27 AM
did a bit moer with the S i posted earlier. tried to keep in mind what sky5 said about line direction and angle. i was loving it until i did the A now i just hat it haha. ive been having some realy troubles with my A&#39;s lately, finding ways to tweak them and put add ons on them. i find they just look so bare and stand out so much. really want some help with this please.

cheers
matt

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/238/hpim2114hd2.jpg

nerdx
08-24-2006, 10:34 AM
yeah the A is deffinitly killing it.
try and slant the A like the K from top left to bottom right.
also bend the legs somewhat like you have done with the k.

aces
08-24-2006, 11:52 AM
The A seems to be too straight like /-&#092; try making it have more curves in it like the rest of your letters.

Mugyver
08-24-2006, 12:32 PM
comments, criz, whatver.

been workin on a lot of simples.
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/simple2.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/simple1.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/tattoo.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/hollow.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/ish.jpg
i know the &#39;i&#39; on this one is wack, havent changed it yet, so ill post that one.

aces
08-24-2006, 12:50 PM
Go simpler. Don&#39;t even do anything other than something that looks like this:
RISE

Make it look exactly like the letters that you would type from a keyboard but wider of course.

Check out this:

http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...ndpost&p=739235 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=14335&view=findpost&p=739235)

That should be helpful. Start with the first step or two but don&#39;t go any further yet. Just stay with the first one or two steps.

ShIfTeD
08-24-2006, 01:16 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Aug 23 2006, 11:12 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5816/fetishoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my entry for the throw battle
bump for crits

alera
08-24-2006, 02:20 PM
yo whats up? just finished this does enyone think it&#39;s worth coloring in?
:( sorry about the image quality i used a camera phone.
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1326/0824061500acc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

scoot
08-24-2006, 02:24 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Aug 24 2006, 01:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD &#064; Aug 24 2006, 01:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Aug 23 2006, 11:12 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5816/fetishoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my entry for the throw battle
bump for crits[/b][/quote]
buuummmmpp

lost_for_evex
08-24-2006, 03:07 PM
ur a fuckin idiot....bump it 2 a new fuckin page...everyones guna ignore it cuz its shit.

-kosr-
08-24-2006, 03:21 PM
Originally posted by Skeam@Aug 24 2006, 05:27 AM
did a bit moer with the S i posted earlier. tried to keep in mind what sky5 said about line direction and angle. i was loving it until i did the A now i just hat it haha. ive been having some realy troubles with my A&#39;s lately, finding ways to tweak them and put add ons on them. i find they just look so bare and stand out so much. really want some help with this please.

cheers
matt

http://img246.imageshack.us/img246/238/hpim2114hd2.jpg
to help it flow more, try having the bottem part of your K be like the bottem have of your S (having something similar to the lower part of your S coming off the "bar" of your k at the bottem) as for the A, try a lowercase a to make it more round (do the lower case a shown on the computer screen, not the other kind)

obseen
08-24-2006, 03:23 PM
skeam i think that looks sick&#33;

Blix
08-24-2006, 03:31 PM
simple throw crits? http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/4773/zusepicfp5.th.jpg (http://img176.imageshack.us/my.php?image=zusepicfp5.jpg)

MEBone
08-24-2006, 04:33 PM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/3126/1017701263250262250ua4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

MEBone
08-24-2006, 04:33 PM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/8702/1017703493250269940sp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

nother one, crits?

spuck
08-24-2006, 04:53 PM
Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 24 2006, 04:33 PM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/3126/1017701263250262250ua4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?
i dont care what its supposed to look like, that is most definitely a 5

_ghost_
08-24-2006, 04:56 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan.jpg

heres somthing i drew i might have goteen carried away but o well. The smoke feel didnt come out the way i realy wanted it to but i didnt put much time into it, if you had n e crites on how i could get the same smoke ash like feel in this seen peice it would be apreciated

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/4madseenfallenwalls1.jpg

Detoxication
08-24-2006, 05:07 PM
color would prolly help it a lot

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 05:19 PM
Originally posted by ShIfTeD+Aug 24 2006, 01:16 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ShIfTeD @ Aug 24 2006, 01:16 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ShIfTeD@Aug 23 2006, 11:12 PM
http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/5816/fetishoo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

my entry for the throw battle
bump for crits [/b][/quote]
that shit is fire IMO. good shit homey&#33;

MR3___DOP
08-24-2006, 05:22 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v225/pokeman2/artartart/dkdkfjsdf005.jpg
crits/comments pleease

C3ZR ONE
08-24-2006, 05:31 PM
Originally posted by _ghost_@Aug 24 2006, 04:56 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan.jpg

heres somthing i drew i might have goteen carried away but o well. The smoke feel didnt come out the way i realy wanted it to but i didnt put much time into it, if you had n e crites on how i could get the same smoke ash like feel in this seen peice it would be apreciated

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/4madseenfallenwalls1.jpg
I&#39;m not going to lie to you homie. I didn&#39;t uderstand anything you typed, and the pic itself was ridiculous. Go look at the main blackbook thread for a while. Get some inspiration. No beef. I&#39;m only here to help. ;)

Also check out the New 2 Graff thread here in toy forum.

HK Army
08-24-2006, 05:36 PM
Originally posted by HK Army@Aug 23 2006, 07:16 PM
heres my very first piece, other then the alphabet i made, give me some feedback
also check out the last if you can, tell me what i need to improve on.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/vandal.jpg
can someone give me some advice for what to do with this?

_ghost_
08-24-2006, 05:39 PM
lol i know the previouse wun is horrible but i was board and thought i could meraculously pull of some amazing shit. heres another quickie crits please.

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan-1.jpg

MR3___DOP
08-24-2006, 05:41 PM
Originally posted by _ghost_@Aug 24 2006, 05:39 PM
lol i know the previouse wun is horrible but i was board and thought i could meraculously pull of some amazing shit. heres another quickie crits please.

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan-1.jpg
keep the thickness of your stuff the same through the whole piece
round or square off some of those ugly sharp corners

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 06:04 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture25.jpg

any and all criticizm is appreciated. 1

C3ZR ONE
08-24-2006, 06:06 PM
Originally posted by HK Army+Aug 24 2006, 05:36 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (HK Army @ Aug 24 2006, 05:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-HK Army@Aug 23 2006, 07:16 PM
heres my very first piece, other then the alphabet i made, give me some feedback
also check out the last if you can, tell me what i need to improve on.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/vandal.jpg
can someone give me some advice for what to do with this? [/b][/quote]
Go back to block letters yo. You haven&#39;t learned what the natural flow of letters are and it&#39;s fuckin up your steez.







GHOST- You topped yourself. That&#39;s even worse then the last one. Same advice as given to the guy above.


Both of you should check out the "New 2 Graff "thread,

lost_for_evex
08-24-2006, 06:06 PM
Originally posted by _ghost_@Aug 24 2006, 04:56 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan.jpg

heres somthing i drew i might have goteen carried away but o well. The smoke feel didnt come out the way i realy wanted it to but i didnt put much time into it, if you had n e crites on how i could get the same smoke ash like feel in this seen peice it would be apreciated

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/4madseenfallenwalls1.jpg
:lol: :lol: :lol: wtf is this pre-k?

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 06:19 PM
Originally posted by lost_for_evex+Aug 24 2006, 06:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (lost_for_evex @ Aug 24 2006, 06:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-_ghost_@Aug 24 2006, 04:56 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan.jpg

heres somthing i drew i might have goteen carried away but o well. The smoke feel didnt come out the way i realy wanted it to but i didnt put much time into it, if you had n e crites on how i could get the same smoke ash like feel in this seen peice it would be apreciated

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/4madseenfallenwalls1.jpg
:lol: :lol: :lol: wtf is this pre-k? [/b][/quote]
put more time into it. experiment. lose the acute angles. parallel your letters girth-wise.

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 06:21 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 24 2006, 06:04 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture25.jpg

any and all criticizm is appreciated. 1
bump dont wanna get lost in the sauce.

Detoxication
08-24-2006, 06:28 PM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/8214/reasonfh6.jpg

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 06:31 PM
Originally posted by Detoxication@Aug 24 2006, 06:28 PM
http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/8214/reasonfh6.jpg
lose the angles it destroys any chance of it looking legit. ive seen alot worse but not too much. peace and keep drawing ya shit. itll evolve.

Detoxication
08-24-2006, 06:35 PM
angles?

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 06:37 PM
yeah, sharp pointy things all over your letters. they are called "angles". srry for the confusion? i guess...

Krash
08-24-2006, 06:37 PM
make your letters proportional.take off all the bits and peices.and don make all the sides point and sharp.hope i helped.

MEBone
08-24-2006, 06:43 PM
Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 24 2006, 04:33 PM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/8702/1017703493250269940sp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits?

lost_for_evex
08-24-2006, 06:48 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC+Aug 24 2006, 06:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Aug 24 2006, 06:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Aug 24 2006, 06:04 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture25.jpg

any and all criticizm is appreciated. 1
bump dont wanna get lost in the sauce. [/b][/quote]
lovein it.

CLOVER_1_LV_702
08-24-2006, 06:59 PM
http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/1351/orangecloves8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CLOV ONE

Krash
08-24-2006, 07:33 PM
clov,what part of vegas yu in?

Detoxication
08-24-2006, 07:34 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7235/reasonqa2.jpg

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 07:50 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture26.jpg
simple fast bored. UFC is gonna come on in a few.

meek2
08-24-2006, 07:52 PM
i like it ^^^^^

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 07:57 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture27.jpg

d_g
08-24-2006, 08:06 PM
^^Dude your shit is always nice.

You need to do a tutorial for the New 2 Graff thread.

HK Army
08-24-2006, 08:07 PM
Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Aug 24 2006, 06:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Aug 24 2006, 06:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by HK Army@Aug 24 2006, 05:36 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-HK Army@Aug 23 2006, 07:16 PM
heres my very first piece, other then the alphabet i made, give me some feedback
also check out the last if you can, tell me what i need to improve on.

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c81/provinT13/vandal.jpg
can someone give me some advice for what to do with this?
Go back to block letters yo. You haven&#39;t learned what the natural flow of letters are and it&#39;s fuckin up your steez.







GHOST- You topped yourself. That&#39;s even worse then the last one. Same advice as given to the guy above.


Both of you should check out the "New 2 Graff "thread, [/b][/quote]
thanks for the tip ;)

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 08:19 PM
Originally posted by d_g@Aug 24 2006, 08:06 PM
^^Dude your shit is always nice.

You need to do a tutorial for the New 2 Graff thread.
ive been working on a little something something for that thread. ill post it when im done with it tho.

ados
08-24-2006, 08:24 PM
crits

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0004-2.jpg

Krash
08-24-2006, 08:29 PM
i dig that style you got rockin in the middle with the tck,the one on the bottom is nice, too. :)

alera
08-24-2006, 08:30 PM
Originally posted by alera@Aug 24 2006, 02:20 PM
yo whats up? just finished this does enyone think it&#39;s worth coloring in?
:( sorry about the image quality i used a camera phone.
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1326/0824061500acc4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for crits it kind of got lost in the shuffle :lol:

alera
08-24-2006, 08:32 PM
Ados the TCK one in the middle is pretty nice

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 08:34 PM
Originally posted by ados@Aug 24 2006, 08:24 PM
crits

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0004-2.jpg
real nice.

obseen
08-24-2006, 08:35 PM
ados, all that stuff is good
alera i see potential there, keep working on that style

ados
08-24-2006, 08:38 PM
alera, loose those cracks, and the lines on the top part of the A&#39;s.

MEBone
08-24-2006, 08:56 PM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9059/1018260583252151110af2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

for the weekly toy battle maybe

sky 5
08-24-2006, 09:00 PM
Originally posted by thief 127@Aug 23 2006, 10:57 PM
http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i311/thief127/thiefsmoke.jpg
wat u think. luv it or hate it
this def gets a bump . . . i had crits for you but my comp crashed right as i clicked post so ....... your on the right track, just got spend mad hours developin . . . watch this shit not go thru again . .

toon!..
08-24-2006, 09:16 PM
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/9733/picture026os8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

basically my old style recycycled

magic nyc
08-24-2006, 10:16 PM
You mean your bitten style re-bit?

toon!..
08-24-2006, 10:23 PM
who the fucks rebit?..he doesnt even have the same letters as me..

red november
08-24-2006, 10:52 PM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/5484/img1317uw9.jpg
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/6826/img1320pk8.jpg
here are two i did last month

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 10:59 PM
nice stuff reddy red.

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture28.jpg

Fosale!
08-24-2006, 11:03 PM
just not feeling the S

NICCSACC
08-24-2006, 11:05 PM
same here. the s sucks.

sky 5
08-25-2006, 01:31 AM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3844/1181817vv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

SeKz
08-25-2006, 01:31 AM
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/6974/ealeraru3.png (http://imageshack.us)

Alera, your stuff is getting better, take time in making sure that the different parts of your letters arent obvious. When constructing your letters stroke by stroke its important you try to blend these parts together, ive circled what i mean in the pic above.



Heres my recent sketches, most of them are girls names who get me to do them. Its good practice.

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/1435/image036im0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9779/image039zn5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4629/image038ga1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Crits please? :D

Lovin it theif, work on your structure and proportion a bit more. Fully sick.

SeKz
08-25-2006, 01:35 AM
Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 25 2006, 01:31 AM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3844/1181817vv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
love it :lol:

sky 5
08-25-2006, 01:48 AM
sekz - i would work on how you end your bars/lines . . . you got the bending/curvin down pretty good but your ends/caps could be better and their pretty easy to hook up . . . .

SeKz
08-25-2006, 02:00 AM
I think i understand, ill try to work on that, do you just mean try to make better shapes out of them or like link them up? or what. Thanks dude.

MEBone
08-25-2006, 02:04 AM
Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 24 2006, 08:56 PM
http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9059/1018260583252151110af2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


bump for crits

Mugyver
08-25-2006, 02:33 AM
aight, i was told simpler, so this is what i got.
comments/critz much appreciated.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/simpleblock.jpg
*edit*
this one too
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b59/Mugyver/simple3.jpg

Code
08-25-2006, 08:38 AM
Really simple stuff can i please get some critz

and ignore tags, i cant do one if my life depended on it :P
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/9773/scan0001ku9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alera
08-25-2006, 09:18 AM
SeKz thanks for the help i rilly apriceat it

Deoms yo im lovin that second one keep it up

*~ANZIO~*
08-25-2006, 09:50 AM
Originally posted by NICCSACC+Aug 24 2006, 06:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Aug 24 2006, 06:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Aug 24 2006, 06:06 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-_ghost_@Aug 24 2006, 04:56 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan.jpg

heres somthing i drew i might have goteen carried away but o well. The smoke feel didnt come out the way i realy wanted it to but i didnt put much time into it, if you had n e crites on how i could get the same smoke ash like feel in this seen peice it would be apreciated

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/4madseenfallenwalls1.jpg
:lol: :lol: :lol: wtf is this pre-k?
put more time into it. experiment. lose the acute angles. parallel your letters girth-wise. [/b][/quote]
oh my god, those planes and stuff look terrible. theres noway in hell your over the age of 13.

Necro-
08-25-2006, 10:40 AM
question for ppl like niccsacc and sky5; do you guys know what your entire sketch is gonna look like before you even start it? i dont really know, i just know what the letters should look like and then I do addons and background afterward.

aeon
08-25-2006, 11:31 AM
Originally posted by Mugyver@Aug 25 2006, 02:33 AM
aight, i was told simpler, so this is what i got.
comments/critz much appreciated.
they&#39;re both ok.
make sure you keep the thicknesses of strokes consitant tho.
and don&#39;t use a lower case i. actually you might be able to get away with it of the bottomo stroke is the smae size as the other letters n the dot hover above...
keep it up.

aeon
08-25-2006, 11:33 AM
Originally posted by toon&#33;..@Aug 24 2006, 09:16 PM

basically my old style recycycled
i&#39;m feelin that.
the s need works...

aeon
08-25-2006, 11:35 AM
Originally posted by NICCSACC+Aug 24 2006, 06:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Aug 24 2006, 06:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Aug 24 2006, 06:04 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture25.jpg

any and all criticizm is appreciated. 1
bump dont wanna get lost in the sauce. [/b][/quote]
ruuuude&#33;&#33;&#33;
love the symmetry.