Tot Black Books

[*~ANZIO~*]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Aug 24 2006, 06:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Aug 24 2006, 06:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by lost_for_evex@Aug 24 2006, 06:06 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-_ghost_@Aug 24 2006, 04:56 PM
http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/LastScan.jpg

heres somthing i drew i might have goteen carried away but o well. The smoke feel didnt come out the way i realy wanted it to but i didnt put much time into it, if you had n e crites on how i could get the same smoke ash like feel in this seen peice it would be apreciated

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m318/sketch_10/4madseenfallenwalls1.jpg
:lol: :lol: :lol: wtf is this pre-k?
put more time into it. experiment. lose the acute angles. parallel your letters girth-wise. [/b][/quote]
oh my god, those planes and stuff look terrible. theres noway in hell your over the age of 13.

[Necro-]

question for ppl like niccsacc and sky5; do you guys know what your entire sketch is gonna look like before you even start it? i dont really know, i just know what the letters should look like and then I do addons and background afterward.

[aeon]

Originally posted by Mugyver@Aug 25 2006, 02:33 AM
aight, i was told simpler, so this is what i got.
comments/critz much appreciated.
they&#39;re both ok.
make sure you keep the thicknesses of strokes consitant tho.
and don&#39;t use a lower case i. actually you might be able to get away with it of the bottomo stroke is the smae size as the other letters n the dot hover above...
keep it up.

[aeon]

Originally posted by toon&#33;..@Aug 24 2006, 09:16 PM

basically my old style recycycled
i&#39;m feelin that.
the s need works...

[aeon]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Aug 24 2006, 06:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC @ Aug 24 2006, 06:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-NICCSACC@Aug 24 2006, 06:04 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture25.jpg

any and all criticizm is appreciated. 1
bump dont wanna get lost in the sauce. [/b][/quote]
ruuuude&#33;&#33;&#33;
love the symmetry.

[obseen]

toon thats looking good as always

[sky 5]

Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 25 2006, 01:31 AM
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/3844/1181817vv6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i think im slippin into a new style . . .could you all tell me what works and what dont . . . . i went overboard to see what the limits/what line combos look/flow best . . . .

[sky 5]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Aug 25 2006, 10:40 AM
question for ppl like niccsacc and sky5; do you guys know what your entire sketch is gonna look like before you even start it? i dont really know, i just know what the letters should look like and then I do addons and background afterward.
kind of, depends on my mind state and what im doing . . . i guess i sketch 3 ways . . .1 - just going with it with no clue what you are going to do like that "wast" above, no clue how it was gonna come out so you sketch the first letter, then see how the next lettter can best lay next to the first keepin the same style/flow etc (most of my sketching). . . . 2 - when you can see the general form in your head and try to follow that, i can visualize a letter or piece in my head but its hard to translate that to the paper. . 3 - is when im really crunchin ill do a bunch of quick sketches of each letter bending them everyway possible then lookin at them seein what i like, then sketchin each letter like in (1) except you take lil bits from the quick skecthes and use them instead of just freeflowin with it . . . alot of times you can get an idea from random stuff you see everyday like plaster spackle on a wall . . . . mostly its just get thru the first letter, then start on the second letter but make sure when yoour done someone cant tell that you did each letter on an island . . . nicc probaly has a better more consistent approach, i like grabbin a pencil and just running with it, tryin not to erase as much as possible . . . also sketch light with a pencil so the lead can run smoothly over the paper then when you get a line or two you like darken it in with pencil, so on and so on . .

[aces]

My god that&#39;s sick dude. The second spiral under the A looks a little off and some of your lines are really sketch like but its still a shitload better than I could do.

[C3ZR ONE]

sky 5- All I could really decipher was the N the A and the S. It&#39;s an interesting new style. I&#39;d continue to work with both of them. You&#39;re old style will always be a favorite here, but the new one could go places too. It looks like you tried fusing both together. I&#39;d like to see one with only the new style.

PS- You do post your stuff in the main blackbook thread as well yes? It really deserves critique over there as well, but please continue to take part in our forums also. We really need good writers helping out in here like you have been. ;)

[sky 5]

one last thing ... i like sketchin letters in halves or quarters . . so if im doing an R, ill sketch the dominant North south line, see if i like it then it is very easy to visualize how you are going to finish the second half of it, then when you go onto the next (second) letter, mess with the first half thats goign to be touching unerlapping the right most part of the first letter and tweak it so the letters lay next to each other nicely then finish the second half of the second letter etc. . . .is this shit making any sense . . .

[ICER]

damn its been a while since i posted something well here is my latest style&#33;

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/civk.jpg

any critz please?

[thief 127]

basically my old style recycycled


You mean your bitten style re-bit?


who the fucks rebit?..he doesnt even have the same letters as me..


wat? r u retarded

[aces]

Originally posted by ICER@Aug 25 2006, 01:53 PM
damn its been a while since i posted something well here is my latest style&#33;

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/civk.jpg

any critz please?
Make your lines more crisp and clean.

[Detoxication]

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/823/reason3dx8.jpg

[beone]

good start keep working on that its good besides the colors are booty

http://img1.yoxio.com/img/252295.jpg
n-o-e-s

[Fosale!]

The O looks like a C because of the line.

[Necro-]

yeah sky5, that makes sense. i sometimes have an idea of what my letters will be, but most of the time i just do the first letter and then try to do the other letters to match and look ok.

[SeKz]

I can really relate to how sky5 sketches. Keeping a style is probably the main thing toys need to get down. I think once you have a style, or a few styles, you can basically do anything that comes into your mind. ;) Graff is creativity, your style will progress, and you will come up with new things. You cant really see what your style will be in a few months but you will see the progression. The fourth way to sketch that sky5 missed is probably sketching out of pure feeling. This is the real way to do it, and i think how most writers veiw their work, as an expression of feeling or emotion. I would think this is the pinnicle of graff :lol: But you need style. :(

But for me, I usually cant tell where im going until ive got a few letters down. and then i usually go back a fix it all to suit :D

[KrookONE]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v640/x_yoHomie4Lyfe_x/anthem.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v640/x_yoHomie4Lyfe_x/krkoner.jpg

[obseen]

you obviously try hard in your sketches, and some of them are quite good&#33; i like this one the best
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v640/x_yoHomie4Lyfe_x/Untitled-1.jpg

[KrookONE]

sorry..really not good at resizing..and thanks obseen

[doomsayer]

crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/44421ffb.jpg

[thief 127]

yo krook dope shit. i see alot of potential from u.

[graffer that tags]

dam how do you make the images bigger

[shifty!]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Aug 25 2006, 08:53 PM
crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/44421ffb.jpg
looks so much better painted, but i would say get rid of the &#39;eyes&#39; or holes in your R, make every letter same size, width, and change your U a little, the line going down the middle doesnt really flow with the whole style, hope that helps...

[meetermaid]

yeah shifty just copy my advice without a word of recognition <_<

[doomsayer]

yeah im not really trying heaps hard on it im just workin on changin it gettin it ready for looking better, so when it is better, ill spend more time on colouring in and stuff. anyways, i changed the U, it was an accident how i put the holes in the R again so ignore them and i kept all my letters the same width, i think, crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/cd6aa148.jpg

[meetermaid]

shit son
bring the bottom legs of the r up a bit, think of the letter in terms of a human body: the torso is twice the length of the legs, looks confusing. i&#39;d change the u even more, look at the letter U: it&#39;s got that dip in the middle right, try it with a dip in the middle just to see how it looks cause it&#39;s still looking awkward. (or you could just change the curvy line into a straight one that goes down to about the middle of the letter)

[shifty!]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Aug 25 2006, 09:20 PM
yeah shifty just copy my advice without a word of recognition <_<
what do you mean?&#33;

[meetermaid]

i said that &#39;cause i had said pretty much the exact same thing you had said about the sketch in the toy bombs and pieces thread

[MF Feed Letter]

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1704.jpg

[meetermaid]

work on your handy, make it more readable for one. the simples are nice, and with the piece i&#39;d take out the extension from the a and r unless you wanna make one going from the r to the e as well, cause it looks like ar *backwards 3* 4

[shifty!]

ahhhhh didnt see that, so uhm sorry? where is 604? and graffer that tags c&#39;mon man where is it?

[meetermaid]

ok then shifty it&#39;s all good haha, 604&#39;s vancouver, BC.

[MF Feed Letter]

hye meete ri forgot you were form 604 you been out bombing lately?

[meetermaid]

nah i haven&#39;t touched a can of paint in a while, i stopped writing for a bit cause of personal &#39;issues&#39; haha, but i&#39;ve just been sketching recently and tagging busses, hopefully gonna start piecing in a few weeks or so, hyped for that shit :D

[shifty!]

ahhh i didnt know if it was close to me liek maine or something cause im 603

[meetermaid]

yeah i don&#39;t think area codes work that way, where&#39;s 603?

[shifty!]

yeh i dont think so either, 603-New Hampshire, US, and the state next to me is 978 so your right they dont work that way :P

[xAWOKE.925]

My eraser kind of fucked up the red piece. anyways, says awoke


http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/1985/ohwellohlp5.jpg


Second version, minor changes.

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/541/shitonyourfacemz1.jpg

[beone]

like the style but im not feelin the A

[Natural Mystic]

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/5416/picture164na0.th.jpg (http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture164na0.jpg)

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/1330/picture161ar6.th.jpg (http://img209.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture161ar6.jpg)


comments? suggestions?

[C-SONE]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/9.jpg
crits?

[yogah frog]

had to stop sleeping and stop being a lurker. first post woooo. heres some flicks. crits appreciated. :)
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/5671/dscn0698sy4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/1246/dscn0699ho9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img237.imageshack.us/img237/9028/dscn0700nc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[meetermaid]

sone, work on it being cleaner.. the s is hot, though it&#39;d be a lot better if it looked cleaner, but you can always work on that. with the extensions, you&#39;ve got the gist of em, but work on them more, you got em but not quite, know what i mean? the n is a little wierd, with the top right extension so i&#39;d take that out, and make the e a lil bigger, it looks like you added it as an afterthought >_<


dae, you&#39;ve got a basic understanding of the letters which is good.. but, here comes my toy tip of the week... extensions should only be used once you have developed letters of your own, or with a certain style, as opposed to just simple letters.. stay away from the connections and extensions untill then.

[yogah frog]

so get my letters more tweaked out first? cus i thought if i added a few simple extensions that would help give it more of my own style.

[meetermaid]

well, what i mean is like, just work with the letters.. extensions don&#39;t make a letter. the way the letter&#39;s formed does. keep drawing out simple letters, over and over again, and as you draw them and get a better understanding of how the letter is shaped you&#39;ll naturally morph the letter into something of your own creation. it really helps to look at as much graffiti as you can, and i know it&#39;s "against the rules" but copy established writers work, not to put it on a wall or use it as your own, but to help you get a sense of the letters, graffiti is no different than any other art; you have to understand your subject before trying to emulate it, get it?

[doomsayer]

ok, tried fixing up the U, crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/ee4552d2.jpg

[meetermaid]

i think it looks better, i&#39;d still say bring the line down just a touch, and i don&#39;t know what you did differently with the h but the middle lines look wierd, change em back to the way you had em before (or if i&#39;m being a retard and it&#39;s always been that way, make the lines cross both sides if that makes sense, instead of going up and then to the right make the part that goes to the right, extend to both sides, whatever, fuck around with it it looks better already)
*oh and to be even more picky, make the first T the same size as the 2nd, and the flicky extension part on the top left of the letter should be a bit smaller, if you&#39;re going to have a reccurring theme in your letters have them be just that: consistant.

[doomsayer]

ok, thanks for all the help so far man.

well top one is the H i was using before and bottom is the H i tried to do again to fit in with the style. i made the bit on the U longer and gah i dont think the Ts are the same size, idno i tried to get em the same size, sort of.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/270d363a.jpg

[meetermaid]

no prob, i think the 2nd pic looks better, although i don&#39;t think you quite got what i meant, so i just reworked your throw on paint: http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/6182/truththrowzo5.jpg

i&#39;m really bad at wording what i&#39;m thinking so it&#39;s just easier to draw it out, cheers :D

[doomsayer]

aha cool, like this?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/a9dafa9b.jpg

[meetermaid]

yeah more like that, you don&#39;t have to put the arrow in the u or the squigly in the r theyr&#39;e just little things i like using, but work on it being cleaner, take your time on it (i used to just scribble shit out like it was nothing but when you take your time on something it almost always turns out better), the top left of the 1st t is a lil fucked up as is the top right of the 2nd t, but that&#39;s prolly just cause your rushing, take your time, have some pride in your work, your art is you&#33; *listen to mama meetr she knows what she&#39;s babbling about ;)*

[doomsayer]

alright im off to go do a good one, or at least try to...

[doomsayer]

ok, here, what do you think?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/fdeecfb1.jpg

[meetermaid]

the top 2 are good, i think you should work on the middle one and develop that style, i like it cause it&#39;s still like, bubbly, but it&#39;s straighter and the letters are more narrow. i like the lil bump you put on the h in the first pic, it works. watch out for the dropshadow, try and keep it all *consistent*, all it really is is the same letters layered over top of the original throw but moved a bit, so the shadow should be equal distance from the original throw all around, know what i mean?

[MEBone]

the 1st one is aight. besides workin on proportion and keepin the t&#39;s similar (which is ridiculously hard) i wud only change the top right part of the u, but thats just my opinion. the 2nd one i wud change the squigly thing in the r and the arrow in the u cuz u cdidnt come up wit it. and the 3rd needs a lot of work. fix both upper right and stems of the t&#39;s and the u,r,h are just not well constructed. its gettin better tho

[Ume]

i miss you guys...so i&#39;m back for this one...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/meh1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/meh2.jpg
i was on some magical things last night..
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v367/Teemo/meh3.jpg

[-kosr-]

the first two look like ceszi, i would suggest erasing the line that overlaps the two parts of the u.

[ICER]

Originally posted by aces+Aug 25 2006, 01:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Aug 25 2006, 01:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ICER@Aug 25 2006, 01:53 PM
damn its been a while since i posted something well here is my latest style&#33;

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/civk.jpg

any critz please?
Make your lines more crisp and clean. [/b][/quote]
bumpfor critz

[MEBone]

icer- im diggin that style, the color scheme cud use a lil work tho, imo. maybe try to add sum blendin n shaduin in there insteadof such straight away colors.

ume-im reely feelin the last one and the first ones good 2 but the middle one, i dunno im just not feelin the shaky lines. i dunno, its just me. work on ur z&#39;s a lil more 2 they seem to be disproportional to the rest of ur letters...easier said than done tho

[MEBone]

icer where u from dawg

[Ume]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 26 2006, 03:57 AM
work on ur z&#39;s a lil more 2 they seem to be disproportional to the rest of ur letters...easier said than done tho
haha thanks, but they aren&#39;t Z&#39;s. ;)

[MEBone]

o lol my bad wat r they

[ICER]

im from san bernardino southern cali i dont write icer no more now its civik, im in no crew either were you from?

[MEBone]

im jus chillin down here in la

[Ume]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 26 2006, 04:13 AM
o lol my bad wat r they
it&#39;s a U that isen&#39;t connected.

[MEBone]

o aight. imo u might wanna change it up to make it more obvious

[MEBone]

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/8867/1020737433260554110hu8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bad light but that shits just in pencil on a blank white page but i cant figure out wat to do wit a sort of color scheme. im thinkin bout adding some shit in the back round but cant come up wit anythin. suggestions?

[ZoToS ...]

The 3-d is off on the T and the what looks to be a G

The bottom of the A has 3-d overlapping the T which is not a wise thing to have since it doesnt look good in my opinion.

The S doesnt flow with the rest of the letters, the width of the bars and the curves set it off. Try to make all of your letter bars the same width so that they all look uniform.

I suggest that you should not worry about coloring as much as getting your letters to look like they should marry each other and live happily ever after. My 2 cents

Not a bad start though ... improvements will come. Just keep at it.

-Z

[MEBone]

thanks wat bout the csm?

[Natural Mystic]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/950/picture235xm2.th.jpg (http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture235xm2.jpg)

comments? suggestions?

[Detoxication]

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/245/reason4up7.jpg

crits plz

[MUSASHI]

Detox .keep at it those are hard letters to make work together,but it looks like you are getting a feel for them...make sure your accents are all on the same side. like on the "N" if you feel like you need to addan accent to the first leg make sure it overlaps rather than under,does that make any sense?

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/666crew-1.jpg

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by ICER+Aug 26 2006, 02:44 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ICER @ Aug 26 2006, 02:44 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by aces@Aug 25 2006, 01:43 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-ICER@Aug 25 2006, 01:53 PM
damn its been a while since i posted something well here is my latest style&#33;

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v70/Scorpion-13/civk.jpg

any critz please?
Make your lines more crisp and clean.
bumpfor critz [/b][/quote]
that shits hottt&#33; im feeelin it alot

[sky 5]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9043/1181820tp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

slop page . . .

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture29.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture30.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture31.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture32.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture33-1.jpg
this is actually from a looong time ago.

[cord]

Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 26 2006, 04:02 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9043/1181820tp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

slop page . . .
man please dont go for that gay 3d shit, your wildstyles are much better.

[Zire]

Yep, he is right, i hate tht 3-d stuff, looks nice but i never can read it.

anyways couple of throws sorry bout shit image quality.

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/1724/jghujgujywy6.jpg

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/8526/ghgic0.jpg

[meetermaid]

zare, get rid of the wierd pompadour extensions off the top of the z and the a and the e (both bumps on the e on the top pic, and the ones on the bottom of the e&#39;s on the bottom pic), and on the bottom of the r on both pics.

[whoarethereal evil]

got bored thought id say a blurry

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8219/img0228ce9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



wow it really is blurry hahah i dno y i also dont care :P

[Zire]

thanks for the comments, i kinda like my top one but i will work on the bottom, i also think most throws have bumps to give them character.

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Aug 25 2006, 09:23 PM
well, what i mean is like, just work with the letters.. extensions don&#39;t make a letter. the way the letter&#39;s formed does. keep drawing out simple letters, over and over again, and as you draw them and get a better understanding of how the letter is shaped you&#39;ll naturally morph the letter into something of your own creation. it really helps to look at as much graffiti as you can, and i know it&#39;s "against the rules" but copy established writers work, not to put it on a wall or use it as your own, but to help you get a sense of the letters, graffiti is no different than any other art; you have to understand your subject before trying to emulate it, get it?
what i said to someone else a few pages back, yes extensions and bumps and things give a letter character, but you shouldn&#39;t have to add extensions for the letter to have any character at all, know what i mean? you don&#39;t need to add shit on a simple letter, simple, plain letters speak for themselves. it&#39;s all just my take on it but i do like to think i know what i&#39;m talking about :P

[Code]

Originally posted by Code@Aug 25 2006, 08:38 AM
Really simple stuff can i please get some critz

and ignore tags, i cant do one if my life depended on it :P
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/9773/scan0001ku9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CAn i get some critz please

[RepUrSet]

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/4434/picture53vt8.th.jpg (http://img241.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture53vt8.jpg)
new marshmellow-y throwie as oppose to my other throwie style
i messed up at the bottom of the e its too fat lol but i decided to color it neways

[Zire]

Originally posted by meetermaid+Aug 26 2006, 12:07 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (meetermaid @ Aug 26 2006, 12:07 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-meetermaid@Aug 25 2006, 09:23 PM
well, what i mean is like, just work with the letters.. extensions don&#39;t make a letter. the way the letter&#39;s formed does. keep drawing out simple letters, over and over again, and as you draw them and get a better understanding of how the letter is shaped you&#39;ll naturally morph the letter into something of your own creation. it really helps to look at as much graffiti as you can, and i know it&#39;s "against the rules" but copy established writers work, not to put it on a wall or use it as your own, but to help you get a sense of the letters, graffiti is no different than any other art; you have to understand your subject before trying to emulate it, get it?
what i said to someone else a few pages back, yes extensions and bumps and things give a letter character, but you shouldn&#39;t have to add extensions for the letter to have any character at all, know what i mean? you don&#39;t need to add shit on a simple letter, simple, plain letters speak for themselves. it&#39;s all just my take on it but i do like to think i know what i&#39;m talking about :P [/b][/quote]
which one do u think has the most potentiol?

[AoAssis]

http://i68.photobucket.com/albums/i36/Muffinman0/Picture010.jpg

[nerdx]

i like fill on the super blurry one but im not even going to hurt my eyes to look at it again.

[South-Pole]

i&#39;v been rocking simples for a while like y&#39;all asked,and i like it.Im starting to get better from there


a throwie i&#39;v done before

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/SSA40023.jpg


a simple:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/SSA40024.jpg

for the white shit on the pic,its me.i added it because some ink dropped on my piece

i&#39;v got some more simples and other stuff i&#39;v done since i posted last time,i&#39;ll try to take pics and post tomorow

[-kosr-]

Originally posted by cord+Aug 26 2006, 11:18 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cord @ Aug 26 2006, 11:18 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Aug 26 2006, 04:02 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9043/1181820tp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

slop page . . .
man please dont go for that gay 3d shit, your wildstyles are much better. [/b][/quote]
You sir, are an idiot.

[xAWOKE.925]

Originally posted by xAWOKE.925@Aug 25 2006, 10:13 PM
My eraser kind of fucked up the red piece. anyways, says awoke


http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/1985/ohwellohlp5.jpg


Second version, minor changes.

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/541/shitonyourfacemz1.jpg
critz?

[Rend]

http://i70.photobucket.com/albums/i86/fluentkrylon5/DSC02208.jpg

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by cord+Aug 26 2006, 11:18 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (cord @ Aug 26 2006, 11:18 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Aug 26 2006, 04:02 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9043/1181820tp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

slop page . . .
man please dont go for that gay 3d shit, your wildstyles are much better. [/b][/quote]
wtf&#33;? that 3d shit is tight as fuck everything on this page is dope.

[dcite]

yo rend thats a nice style but i cant pick out any letters, haha.

[ados]

Rend, fix your E, and your D, that extension looks off.

[South-Pole]

Originally posted by South&#045;Pole@Aug 26 2006, 04:37 PM
i&#39;v been rocking simples for a while like y&#39;all asked,and i like it.Im starting to get better from there


a throwie i&#39;v done before

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/SSA40023.jpg


a simple:

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/SSA40024.jpg

for the white shit on the pic,its me.i added it because some ink dropped on my piece

i&#39;v got some more simples and other stuff i&#39;v done since i posted last time,i&#39;ll try to take pics and post tomorow
Bump?

[NICCSACC]

id work on the structure of the letters before the fills. do more simples thats the bottom line. forget about colors for the time being mabye just fuck with forcefeilds or 1 color fills.

[whoarethereal evil]

Originally posted by nerdx@Aug 26 2006, 02:32 PM
i like fill on the super blurry one but im not even going to hurt my eyes to look at it again.
hahah sorry man i jus thought id b kind and say hello but i cunt b arsed cleaning the lens lol

[graffer that tags]

http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7181/untitledhatkm9.th.png (http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitledhatkm9.png)

here is a quick sketch i did like a month ago, its not coloured or anything but its the only thing i have on my computer, Shift wants me to post something :angry: so here it is.

[MEBone]

work on ur letter structure and ur fills. if u clean it up a bit and make it a bit more organized that shitll be reel tight

[nerdx]

but its only one letter.

[xAWOKE.925]

haha, exactly what i was thinking. So basically hes saying out of that one letter, the structure and fills are bad....but besides that its fire&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; :rolleyes:

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by graffer that tags@Aug 26 2006, 07:35 PM
http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7181/untitledhatkm9.th.png (http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=untitledhatkm9.png)

here is a quick sketch i did like a month ago, its not coloured or anything but its the only thing i have on my computer, Shift wants me to post something :angry: so here it is.
youre on the right track. forget about the fill and concentrate on the form of the letter. make it perfect then move on to a fill or whatever.

[MEBone]

basically...jus didnt feel like bein a dick...well at leats not straightfoward about it anyways :ph34r:

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 26 2006, 09:08 PM
basically...jus didnt feel like bein a dick...well at leats not straightfoward about it anyways :ph34r:
whats the point criticizing it then?
you gotta be brutally honest.
these cats are asking for it if they cry about something you say, fuck em. they shouldnt have asked for crits in that case.

[DJLotus]

So true...

[MEBone]

aight i feel u...speakin of brutally honest crit this piece of shit i just did...w/e i just colored it wit some dry erase markers

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/9024/1022243723265615410vd2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[nerdx]

i think you already know its not very good.
S and CSM is very fat and the rest is all skinny.
Keep working on the simples and you will get it.

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by Zire+Aug 26 2006, 11:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Zire @ Aug 26 2006, 11:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by meetermaid@Aug 26 2006, 12:07 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-meetermaid@Aug 25 2006, 09:23 PM
well, what i mean is like, just work with the letters.. extensions don&#39;t make a letter. the way the letter&#39;s formed does. keep drawing out simple letters, over and over again, and as you draw them and get a better understanding of how the letter is shaped you&#39;ll naturally morph the letter into something of your own creation. it really helps to look at as much graffiti as you can, and i know it&#39;s "against the rules" but copy established writers work, not to put it on a wall or use it as your own, but to help you get a sense of the letters, graffiti is no different than any other art; you have to understand your subject before trying to emulate it, get it?
what i said to someone else a few pages back, yes extensions and bumps and things give a letter character, but you shouldn&#39;t have to add extensions for the letter to have any character at all, know what i mean? you don&#39;t need to add shit on a simple letter, simple, plain letters speak for themselves. it&#39;s all just my take on it but i do like to think i know what i&#39;m talking about :P
which one do u think has the most potentiol? [/b][/quote]
the top one on the bottom pic, just keep working at it, sketch it a million times, just the simple letters, then start morphing them a bit, try a million different things with each letter, your bound to find something that works.

[MEBone]

Originally posted by nerdx@Aug 26 2006, 09:33 PM
i think you already know its not very good.
S and CSM is very fat and the rest is all skinny.
Keep working on the simples and you will get it.
ya fer sure wat u think bout the csm letter style tho, i mean its simple n all but doest it flow at all?

[nerdx]

yeah the CSM letters are good.

[NICCSACC]

the CSM is ok but squeeze the letters together more. thats what I would do.

[doomsayer]

OK, what do you think of this one? better than my last one? i like this one better... crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/37516fb8.jpg

[MEBone]

aight chillin thanx

[MEBone]

shit man i keep runnin into problems tryin to match the a n g to the style that the s and csm r in

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture63.jpg

[MEBone]

thats tight as fuck man...chilllin karak

[MEBone]

yo niccsacc...can u help me out wit gettin that style down a lil better...i aint got no clu wat the a n g r suppiosed to look like

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Aug 26 2006, 07:17 PM
OK, what do you think of this one? better than my last one? i like this one better... crits?

[picture]
ok so i&#39;m&#39;a give you a basic lil art lesson.

today i&#39;ll be lecturing you on proportion. (keep in mind i&#39;m no art teacher so i don&#39;t know how to explain it properly or anything, if anyone is actually serious about writing graffiti i suggest taking a few art courses.)

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/152/truthnewthrowproportionhm7.jpg

the line through the middle is where all your lines and shit should end.

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7489/truthnewthrowproportion2rw7.jpg

(rough and messy yeah but you get my point.)

this isn&#39;t only applicable to doomsayer most kids on this site would benefit from knowing about it.. mebone you for example, look at the pics and relate em to your piece. study up&#33; :lol:


* you kiddies could take a lesson from niccsacc, that venom piece is a perfect example of what i&#39;ve been trying to explain to people, simple, but it has a certain style or flair to it.

[Sluts_r_us]

meet lets see your throwies...back in the day you used 2 have the hottest throw...

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 26 2006, 10:39 PM
yo niccsacc...can u help me out wit gettin that style down a lil better...i aint got no clu wat the a n g r suppiosed to look like
aight what exactly do you need me to draw? ill just draw it how i would do it real simple like fo ya. holler atcha boy.

[meetermaid]

hahaha, i haven&#39;t any pics of anything recent, i&#39;ve changed it a lil from what it was before but all for the better :D i still haven&#39;t gotten around to getting a camera... (lazy ass)


and, not like i wanna embarrass you or anything ( :P) but
were you the one &#39;back in the day&#39; who showed up in the toy forum with a pic of a sketch with your feet in it, and there were toenail clippings everwhere? :lol:

[MEBone]

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/6453/1022463153266357930xf7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

yo meet i tried that proportion shit, used a ruler to determine width and height and stuff, lemme know how it turned out

[Sluts_r_us]

no hahaha...i forget who that was but i remember it to but nah that wasnt me...

[meetermaid]

haha k i keep thinking that was you, and meb, i was aiming that comment more towards your saigon piece, it works for the csm but that&#39;s not as much of a problem as it is in the saigon one. (the proportion thing works both horizontally and vertically, vertically the csm is ok but their all different thicknesses, work on that)

[MEBone]

yah forgot bout that, ill work on the saigon piece as soon as i can figure out a way to keep the rest iof the letters in the same style wit da s

[MEBone]

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5194/1022497733266473030je7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

hows that, i made the legs of the m a lil thicker, the c a lil thicker

[NICCSACC]

heres a little sumthing i cooked up... i tried to keep all the other letters in the same vein of the "S". hope this inspires you somewhat.

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture66.jpg

[MEBone]

dude ur sick

[MEBone]

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/6642/1022606013266838630zr4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

i dont even know...it seems to be gettin better but that may jus be hope lol

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 27 2006, 12:05 AM
heres a little sumthing i cooked up... i tried to keep all the other letters in the same vein of the "S". hope this inspires you somewhat.

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture66.jpg
That&#39;s fresh.....

:wub:

Do Cezr &#33;&#33;&#33; :D B)

[NICCSACC]

in THAT style? ill have it up tomorrow im going to go lay down and watch RAW. i gotchu tho fa sho. 1

[sky 5]

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/6146/1181822qk5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

just taking it mellow and fin up this canvas . . . never do karaks . . . i have no clue how this is gonna come out . . . im gonna do a squirell next . . .dont know what im thinkin . . .

[NICCSACC]

whos that supposed to be in the top right hand corner Bette Midler at 90?
nice.

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by meetermaid+Aug 26 2006, 10:41 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (meetermaid &#064; Aug 26 2006, 10:41 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-doomsayer@Aug 26 2006, 07:17 PM
OK, what do you think of this one? better than my last one? i like this one better... crits?

[picture]
ok so i&#39;m&#39;a give you a basic lil art lesson.

today i&#39;ll be lecturing you on proportion. (keep in mind i&#39;m no art teacher so i don&#39;t know how to explain it properly or anything, if anyone is actually serious about writing graffiti i suggest taking a few art courses.)

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/152/truthnewthrowproportionhm7.jpg

the line through the middle is where all your lines and shit should end.

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7489/truthnewthrowproportion2rw7.jpg

(rough and messy yeah but you get my point.)

this isn&#39;t only applicable to doomsayer most kids on this site would benefit from knowing about it.. mebone you for example, look at the pics and relate em to your piece. study up&#33; :lol:


* you kiddies could take a lesson from niccsacc, that venom piece is a perfect example of what i&#39;ve been trying to explain to people, simple, but it has a certain style or flair to it. [/b][/quote]
what? :huh: it looks like all my inward bump thingys (except for the line coming up from the R) do meet at that line.... im confused...

[Code]

Originally posted by Code+Aug 26 2006, 12:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Code @ Aug 26 2006, 12:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Code@Aug 25 2006, 08:38 AM
Really simple stuff can i please get some critz

and ignore tags, i cant do one if my life depended on it :P
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/9773/scan0001ku9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CAn i get some critz please [/b][/quote]
bump critz please

[MEBone]

clean up ur lines and work on the proportion thing that meet was talkin bout above. ur 3d is off a whole lot and ur structue needs a lot of work. it sux dude...sorry for the straightfowardness but work on it, ull get it

[SeKz]

URL=http://imageshack.us]http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/198/image002yt5.jpg[/URL]

heres my latest, i think its pretty wack. :lol: but gimme crits, dont go easy on me either.

[MEBone]

uh the first thing i noticed were the fuckin overkill of arrows anyways other than that theres too big of a gap in between the e and k and the middle part of the e cud be a bit thicker imo. also the top right part of the s cud use a lil more structure it just needs to be distinguished tho. other than that its real tight. colors r simple but chillin

[SeKz]

cheers, i hardly ever go crazy on fill/colour, paint pens are hard to get around my place and when i cant rack them they are expensive. Back to the drawing board.

[westsida]

Originally posted by NICCSACC+Aug 26 2006, 06:06 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (NICCSACC &#064; Aug 26 2006, 06:06 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by cord@Aug 26 2006, 11:18 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Aug 26 2006, 04:02 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9043/1181820tp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

slop pageÂ*Â* . . .
man please dont go for that gay 3d shit, your wildstyles are much better.
wtf&#33;? that 3d shit is tight as fuck everything on this page is dope. [/b][/quote]
i know this is like 5 pages old but could some1 make a tutorial for this 3d stuff plz??? help appreciated

[cord]

3d fuckin robo graff is gay.

its all just the same.

&#39;&#39;eventually when enough people bite someone, its not biting anymore, its just rocking a style&#39;&#39;

and im sure if you&#39;re a writer with any knowledge you&#39;ll know what im talking about

[uhhh]

i know what your saying. but you can&#39;t saying that walking by a wall and thinking for a second someones pice is gonna hit you in the face isn&#39;t cool.

[aeon]

that ain&#39;t too bad sekz. you fucked it up with the addons tho. strip it down and keep working on the letters.

a nice chunky simple i just knocked out.

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/6394/urkdp8.jpg

what ya reckon?

[aces]

First of all is that an N or an R because if it&#39;s an R then it goes too close to the bottom of the piece an if it is an N then I don&#39;t think it goes down far enough. Second I like it real nice and simple but the K looks weird and kind of out of place. Just my opinion. Also you could make the letters overlap more so that it flows a little better. I really like the U though for some reason it just jumps out as the best letter.

[uhhh]

i reckon its nice
but if the middle lettersn r. then you ned to revamp it. because makin it smaller will fuck up the letter. but if its an n. not too bad.

[whoarethereal evil]

the u is dopeeeee

[aeon]

hmm. thought the r was pretty obvious. both legs of an n touch the ground no? maybe caps would be clearer. i see what you mean with the k, tho, needs rounding off a bit. anywayz safe for the feedback. peace&#33;

[xmeth5x]

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6905/imag0366cy4.jpg
sumthin little i made while i was in the car

[cess!]

Originally posted by westsida+Aug 27 2006, 07:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (westsida &#064; Aug 27 2006, 07:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 26 2006, 06:06 PM

Originally posted by cord@Aug 26 2006, 11:18 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Aug 26 2006, 04:02 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9043/1181820tp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

slop page . . .
man please dont go for that gay 3d shit, your wildstyles are much better.
wtf&#33;? that 3d shit is tight as fuck everything on this page is dope.
i know this is like 5 pages old but could some1 make a tutorial for this 3d stuff plz??? help appreciated [/b][/quote]
The FUCK?
you want a fuckin tutorial?
go the fuck home


*oh and sky that 3ds lookin alright, keep with it

[aeon]

are you that little meth fuck who challenged me to a battle then dissapeared?
whatever the case, your letters are all out of proportion. make sure all the stroke are the same width (or have a consistent rule which defines their width). keep the letters a similiar size. and make sure your 3d is all pointing in the same direction.

[xmeth5x]

nah man im a 2 year toy comin from nj nah i neva faced u and wat else do i need to fix it cuz i need help

[aeon]

aiit, no probs son
like i said, its all about proportion, at the stage you&#39;re at you want all yr letters to be the same size.

[contraband]

Originally posted by xmeth5x@Aug 27 2006, 02:20 PM
nah man im a 2 year toy comin from nj nah i neva faced u and wat else do i need to fix it cuz i need help
you shouldnt write meth unless you add a number or something meth kmfd will burn you then stomp your face.

[-PriMeZ-]

I&#39;ve been experimenting with a new Name. FiLLz
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/6461/imgp0324wincehv5.jpg
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5826/imgp0325wincerd3.jpg
Crits ?

[NICCSACC]

id drop one of the "L&#39;s" cuz two identical letters especially the letter "L" is a pain in the ass to do and usually dont look good.

[FEN the HEN]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture049.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture048-1.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture047-1.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture045-1.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture043.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture042.jpg

[FEN the HEN]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture038.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture037.jpg
the only couloured one :lol: ^^
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture035.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture034.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture033.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture031.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture030.jpg

[FEN the HEN]

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture029.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture028.jpg

http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture026.jpg
random gun, sorry for the shitty letteriing i was pretty done ;)
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c58/ghostbusta5/Picture025.jpg

[*~ANZIO~*]

all your E&#39;s need help fen. work on structure and make it look smoother

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Aug 26 2006, 11:30 PM



[pic]

the line through the middle is where all your lines and shit should end.

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7489/truthnewthrowproportion2rw7.jpg

(rough and messy yeah but you get my point.)



what? :huh: it looks like all my inward bump thingys (except for the line coming up from the R) do meet at that line.... im confused...
*ah shit sorry i read it wrong, yeah the r is mostly what i was going on about, and the line of the u (although it&#39;s not too bad), and the 2nd t, the bottom bit of it stops too low, i&#39;m being picky but fuck it, that&#39;s the kinda person i am.


fen, drop all the wierd lettering and just start out again with simple, plain letters, once you get a hang of those you can start changing up the letters a bit and fucking around with them. graffiti isn&#39;t just adding a bunch of lines to a letter, it&#39;s more strategic than that ^_^

[Fosale!]

Meeter&#39;s back&#33;&#33;
(i know all this has been talked abt on the previous pages but ive been away)
the old bs is coming back...:D

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by meetermaid+Aug 27 2006, 04:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (meetermaid @ Aug 27 2006, 04:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-doomsayer@Aug 26 2006, 11:30 PM



[pic]

the line through the middle is where all your lines and shit should end.

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/7489/truthnewthrowproportion2rw7.jpg

(rough and messy yeah but you get my point.)



what? :huh: it looks like all my inward bump thingys (except for the line coming up from the R) do meet at that line.... im confused...
*ah shit sorry i read it wrong, yeah the r is mostly what i was going on about, and the line of the u (although it&#39;s not too bad), and the 2nd t, the bottom bit of it stops too low, i&#39;m being picky but fuck it, that&#39;s the kinda person i am.


fen, drop all the wierd lettering and just start out again with simple, plain letters, once you get a hang of those you can start changing up the letters a bit and fucking around with them. graffiti isn&#39;t just adding a bunch of lines to a letter, it&#39;s more strategic than that ^_^ [/b][/quote]
sweet, ill do some more todaay and get those R lines and U lines and T lines more into perspective. thanks bro

[MUSASHI]

A blast from tha past&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musastuff.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/ADRO-3.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musapiece1.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musavs.jpg

[Fosale!]

resize

[Hilo]

truth is still doing that ugly shit killin it always

[FEN the HEN]

Meeter and Anzio i see what your saying and all, but thats just how i learned here on the westcoast alot of people rock that style. I did simples for quite some time, and i was taught by some pretty huge heads. But i totally respect your opinions cause i know you guys know what your talking about

[MEBone]

musashi-not really feelin the space one but that others are ill. u always come wit fire. props

[MUSASHI]

Originally posted by MUSASHI@Aug 27 2006, 05:29 PM
A blast from tha past&#33;&#33;&#33;

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musastuff.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/ADRO-3.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musapiece1.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musavs.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/musashipiece1.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/burner.jpg

http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e343/5_busharu/bluemusagirl.jpg
sorry &#39;bout the bump ,it was the bottom of the page...

[-PriMeZ-]

Musashi I like the character on the last one as well as the lettering. Has a very smooth feel.

[aces]

Musa do you mind resizing please. Lovin the coloring on all of them and the characs and the letters so pretty much the whole thing&#33;

[Fosale!]

lala blah blah edit.

[MEBone]

the last 3 r ill as fuck

[Hilo]

comments for a battle.


http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/570/picture69zh9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[MUSASHI]

hilo...it depends on who you are battling,if you havn&#39;t allready submitted I&#39;d go back on that one...try and not stop on your outlines especially if you are using sharpies...upon further inspection everything is wrong...the r looks like a b,the o looks like a d,the a looks like an elephant trunk ,and the m looks like a screwed up h...

no offence but look at the pics I flicked above,ok coloring and zero letter structure... I posted them to show that anyone can draw,but not everyone can create good letters,those were in my beginning ,dont give
crap about structure,just kill&#39;em with color days...

keep at it and for all of you don&#39;t make the same mistakes I did ...

start simple and stay simple untill you are killin it with simples ,and after you have sufficiently killed it then start adding personal styles and flairs
..but keep in mind of what you are progressing towards cuz if people cant read it what&#39;s the point of putting it up

peace

[xAWOKE.925]

not gonna lie, shits mad wack.

[-PriMeZ-]

Originally posted by &#045;PriMeZ&#045;@Aug 27 2006, 03:48 PM
I&#39;ve been experimenting with a new Name. FiLLz
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/6461/imgp0324wincehv5.jpg
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5826/imgp0325wincerd3.jpg
Crits ?
Crits Please ?

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Aug 27 2006, 02:44 PM
Meeter and Anzio i see what your saying and all, but thats just how i learned here on the westcoast alot of people rock that style. I did simples for quite some time, and i was taught by some pretty huge heads. But i totally respect your opinions cause i know you guys know what your talking about
aiight fen, well, i&#39;m from pretty much the same area as you and well.. i never seen those styles before :blink: but other than that i&#39;d say clean up your sketches, i&#39;d suggest trying shit out in pen cause pencil always gets so messy.

fillz, somebody else already suggested this a while back but i&#39;d have to agree, drop one l cause l&#39;s are a bitch to have 2 in a row of.

[Nade]

http://xs305.xs.to/xs305/06351/Picture115.jpg

Forget the name, just testing the limit of my very limited skills.

[aeon]

Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Aug 27 2006, 05:44 PM
Meeter and Anzio i see what your saying and all, but thats just how i learned here on the westcoast alot of people rock that style. I did simples for quite some time, and i was taught by some pretty huge heads. But i totally respect your opinions cause i know you guys know what your talking about
If thats what the huge heads in your area teach then i feel real sorry for westcoast US.
Dont mean to dis, but you need to simplify. You need clarity before adding complexity....

[pace1]

mush--sick i mean the fills are nuts.

Fillz-need to make the word look like this FILLZ

heres a new word i think i like couldnt find anyone with the name HevN but if there is holla at me

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HEVN.jpg

PACE finished with color

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pacesky5.jpg

[FEN the HEN]

Originally posted by aeon+Aug 27 2006, 09:32 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aeon @ Aug 27 2006, 09:32 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-FEN the HEN@Aug 27 2006, 05:44 PM
Meeter and Anzio i see what your saying and all, but thats just how i learned here on the westcoast alot of people rock that style. I did simples for quite some time, and i was taught by some pretty huge heads. But i totally respect your opinions cause i know you guys know what your talking about
If thats what the huge heads in your area teach then i feel real sorry for westcoast US.
Dont mean to dis, but you need to simplify. You need clarity before adding complexity.... [/b][/quote]
and you are?

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by FEN the HEN+Aug 27 2006, 09:49 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (FEN the HEN @ Aug 27 2006, 09:49 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by aeon@Aug 27 2006, 09:32 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-FEN the HEN@Aug 27 2006, 05:44 PM
Meeter and Anzio i see what your saying and all, but thats just how i learned here on the westcoast alot of people rock that style. I did simples for quite some time, and i was taught by some pretty huge heads. But i totally respect your opinions cause i know you guys know what your talking about
If thats what the huge heads in your area teach then i feel real sorry for westcoast US.
Dont mean to dis, but you need to simplify. You need clarity before adding complexity....
and you are? [/b][/quote]
the worst writer in the west coast would eat your babies style-wise. go to the beef thread so i can textually rape you. respect the USA hoe we started it you bit and ran with it. eat shit.

[FEN the HEN]

i aint from the US, nor do i care that the US started graffiti, and im sure you suck worst then i do so eat shit. thats all i have to say cause this is gay

[MEBone]

dude theres no way ur better then niccsacc. not even fuckin close, take a look at his work...clean everytime and casn do w.e the fuck he likes. learn to accept crits without takin offense, no ones tryin to make u feel like a bitch or anything, theyre tryin to help dawg. my shit sux balls, but i know it and am workin on it, u shud do the same. yo niccsacc u from the west coast?

[pace1]

Originally posted by pace1@Aug 27 2006, 09:38 PM
heres a new word i think i like couldnt find anyone with the name HevN but if there is holla at me

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/HEVN.jpg

PACE finished with color

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pacesky5.jpg
Bump for stopping beef just stop and put it in a battle now heres pics

critz please

[aeon]

Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Aug 27 2006, 09:54 PM
i aint from the US, nor do i care that the US started graffiti, and im sure you suck worst then i do so eat shit. thats all i have to say cause this is gay
quit whining.
your stuff looks fuckin dodge.
accept it and improve.

[cookies!]

def lose that arrow pace, my opinion.

[NICCSACC]

id battle ol boy any time any place and serve him fresh steaming logs of my shit.... but that&#39;ll never happen.

naw, im not from the west coast but i lived in Brawley California for a few years.
west coast style has been around for years and years and should be respected by everyone that writes period. thats a fact.

but enough of the beef in here its for another thread.
case closed.

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 27 2006, 08:19 PM
id battle ol boy any time any place and serve him fresh steaming logs of my shit.... but that&#39;ll never happen.

naw, im not from the west coast but i lived in Brawley California for a few years.
west coast style has been around for years and years and should be respected by everyone that writes period. thats a fact.

but enough of the beef in here its for another thread.
case closed.
alright kiddies there&#39;s been a bit of a misunderstanding here.


nicc, aeon thought fen was talking about west coast US, which he wasn&#39;t. aeon evidently doesn&#39;t know much about the west coast [us] scene, and wasn&#39;t dissing it.

heads needa drop the ego, most of you suck equally hard (including me, so if you&#39;re going to call me out, stuff it.), it&#39;s the toy thread, get over yourselves.

[NICCSACC]

pfffth its been squashed.

[meetermaid]

irie good shit.






mo money mo problems..

[Seek139]

not to call someone out but who was bashing that kid for rocking 3d?

[aces]

Originally posted by &#045;PriMeZ&#045;+Aug 27 2006, 09:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (&#045;PriMeZ&#045; &#064; Aug 27 2006, 09:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-&#045;PriMeZ&#045;@Aug 27 2006, 03:48 PM
I&#39;ve been experimenting with a new Name. FiLLz
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/6461/imgp0324wincehv5.jpg
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5826/imgp0325wincerd3.jpg
Crits ?
Crits Please ? [/b][/quote]
Are you by any chance trying to use PILLZ but changing the P to an F? Just wondering because if I was you I wouldn&#39;t do that. Otherwise it isn&#39;t all that great. Do more straight up block busters like lose the things on the ends of the L&#39;s and the Z

[menace_305]

I know the 3d aint right on overlapping extensions but Im trying to mimic an oldschool vibe.

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/7803/pic0825066jpg7qr7.jpg

[meetermaid]

yeah... forget the oldschool vibe. don&#39;t even ATTEMPT wildstyle till you have good, solid letter structure down. start with nice, plain, simple letters, and progress from there. it looks like that pokemon, tangela. (pokemon rocks my balls off)

[menace_305]

HAHA SO MY SKETCH IS ROCKIN UR BALLS OFF :D

[meetermaid]

maybe so, but it ain&#39;t cause it looks particularly great. or even good, for that matter. ;)

[scoot]

Originally posted by westsida+Aug 27 2006, 06:34 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (westsida @ Aug 27 2006, 06:34 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 26 2006, 06:06 PM

Originally posted by cord@Aug 26 2006, 11:18 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-sky 5@Aug 26 2006, 04:02 PM
http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/9043/1181820tp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

slop pageÂ*Â* . . .
man please dont go for that gay 3d shit, your wildstyles are much better.
wtf&#33;? that 3d shit is tight as fuck everything on this page is dope.
i know this is like 5 pages old but could some1 make a tutorial for this 3d stuff plz??? help appreciated [/b][/quote]
http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...showtopic=14335 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=14335)

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by menace_305@Aug 28 2006, 01:21 PM
HAHA SO MY SKETCH IS ROCKIN UR BALLS OFF :D
its betetr than most of the ones ive seen lately. stick with the old school fundamentals. save the gay new age shit for later.

[molotow_15]

Originally posted by Nade@Aug 28 2006, 03:30 AM
http://xs305.xs.to/xs305/06351/Picture115.jpg

Forget the name, just testing the limit of my very limited skills.
not teh bad i quite like them flick offs on the ends shame about the
letters though

[SKITS]

thought id post some old battle shit up here n some doodles
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/1228/gesusbsbattleskitsoejz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/5019/skitsosadisbsbatle06lz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/65/copyofsleizebagrezyeeeeeskitspy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6376/skitsinboltedarmourkc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/5726/sensoe2006yn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

enjoy <_< ima try that 3d shit soon jus cos i think i luks gud

[Bosh]

Your shit is as tight as a ducklings pussy...

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by SKITS@Aug 28 2006, 04:01 PM
thought id post some old battle shit up here n some doodles
http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/1228/gesusbsbattleskitsoejz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/5019/skitsosadisbsbatle06lz6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/65/copyofsleizebagrezyeeeeeskitspy3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/6376/skitsinboltedarmourkc3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/5726/sensoe2006yn4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

enjoy <_< ima try that 3d shit soon jus cos i think i luks gud
that 4th one is fuckin fire.

[aces]

That&#39;s good shit there SKITS. I&#39;m lovin the last and second to last ones.

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture70.jpg

[uhhh]

for tha battle against hilo:
http://aycu07.webshots.com/image/2406/2001763550533890787_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001763550533890787)
http://aycu33.webshots.com/image/3592/2001747860996255666_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001747860996255666)

fo a friend:
http://aycu08.webshots.com/image/2607/2001749910625561016_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001749910625561016)

flowa powa *****&#33;
http://aycu13.webshots.com/image/2052/2001742208363893753_rs.jpg (http://allyoucanupload.webshots.com/v/2001742208363893753)

crita and comments about all please ;)

[meetermaid]

you&#39;ve got great styles. the roah&#39;s fucking hot. the only thing i could suggest for that one is to outline it in like, a bright coloured gel pen or some shit cause it&#39;s kinda hard to differentiate the letters without an outline. and what&#39;s the 2nd one say?

[RepUrSet]

uhhmmmm some sorta sharp thing? iunno i was bored waiting for a movie to finish downloading....but yeah ignore the pencil crap in the background
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/9655/picture68hi3.th.jpg (http://img82.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture68hi3.jpg)

[-PriMeZ-]

Originally posted by aces+Aug 28 2006, 08:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Aug 28 2006, 08:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by &#045;PriMeZ&#045;@Aug 27 2006, 09:26 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-&#045;PriMeZ&#045;@Aug 27 2006, 03:48 PM
I&#39;ve been experimenting with a new Name. FiLLz
http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/6461/imgp0324wincehv5.jpg
http://img79.imageshack.us/img79/5826/imgp0325wincerd3.jpg
Crits ?
Crits Please ?
Are you by any chance trying to use PILLZ but changing the P to an F? Just wondering because if I was you I wouldn&#39;t do that. Otherwise it isn&#39;t all that great. Do more straight up block busters like lose the things on the ends of the L&#39;s and the Z [/b][/quote]
No I&#39;m not. And thanks for the crits.

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by uhhh@Aug 28 2006, 06:07 PM
LOL IM UHHHH&#33;
hahahahaha im in ur sig...funny...

[pace1]

waste of time:
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pacergroestyle.jpg

[meetermaid]

ughhhhhh


get ridd&#39;a them arrows. the sketch itself would look ok if it didn&#39;t have those arrows. the letters themselves are pretty good, nice and simple, but the arrows just wreck it.

[FEN the HEN]

yo meeter where abouts in the lower mainland you live anyways?

[pace1]

kinda like this

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/99e6ae2a.jpg

[meetermaid]

west side&#39;a vancity.

pace, that&#39;s more like it, i think those letter&#39;s would look better if you rounded &#39;em out though instead of having sharp angles, i dunno, try it out, fuck around.

[pace1]

ok thanks yeah ... i will

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 28 2006, 06:06 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture70.jpg
Fresh Nicca&#33; Thanks yo.

Uhh- Your handys are gettin really fresh. We should do an exchange.

[Seek139]

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4162/dsc02211ni6.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02211ni6.jpg)
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2408/dsc02212jg3.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02212jg3.jpg)
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/2351/dsc02213hn6.th.jpg (http://img242.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02213hn6.jpg)
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/3373/dsc02214lx8.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02214lx8.jpg)

[doomsayer]

crits please&#33;

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/62834c7d.jpg

[Seek139]

it reads "truth" right? well its got a nice form of overall balance you just need to start defining the letters more

[doomsayer]

yeah it does say truth... how do i define my letters more, i tried to define em as much as i could... which letters need the most work?

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture71-1.jpg

[obseen]

thats fucking dope, love the way the letters are connecting together there

[NICCSACC]

thanx mayne
i shoulda connected more but i didnt. next time.

[C-SONE]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/10.jpg
cits?

[aces]

Originally posted by Seek139@Aug 29 2006, 01:35 AM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/4162/dsc02211ni6.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02211ni6.jpg)
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2408/dsc02212jg3.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02212jg3.jpg)
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/2351/dsc02213hn6.th.jpg (http://img242.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02213hn6.jpg)
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/3373/dsc02214lx8.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02214lx8.jpg)
Since nobody gave you crits here ya go


1st piece...
Good block buster that is the kinda thing that we want to see from kids that just go straight to wildstyles.d

2nd...
Really good one but make your lines really crisp so that the piece doesn&#39;t look as sloppy.

3rd...
I am no critic to that 3d shit and it confuses the shit out of me so I&#39;m not even gunna try. If no one can give you good advice PM seti. He&#39;s really good with 3d.

4th...
Try to give some definition to the letters. You can&#39;t see where the letters stop and where the 3d starts. Just make the 3d a different color than the letters are.

All in all they&#39;re really good.

[alera]

http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/1228/0829061024aeo2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
working with a new style could int think of what to do with the fill any sugestions? any way
critz always welcom

aces im likin that 3d one wish i could do one :(

[obseen]

thats not looking too bad at all&#33; i like it a bit
just im not sure about that r, and some of the random add ons like on the a i dont like either, shadowing is nice though

[bouncingsoul]

My 666 toy battle entry

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/bb8af344.jpg

:o Colors&#33;&#33;&#33;

[Apoc]

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b365/Apocaloid/P1010032.jpg

navy bootcamp.. ship 17 medical seperations... fuck the military

[aces]

Apoc - Go a lot simpler ancd lose all the bits and shit flyin around in there.

Bouncingsoul - Really liking it but at the top it becomes too hard to see because of the black coloring with the black outline.

Alera - Your R looks too much like your A. It&#39;s good but lose the extras for now.

PAGE 1400&#33;&#33;&#33;

[nerdx]

super shitty pen freestyle.
welcome back to cclass. fuck.

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/2459/img2469fy9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[lost_for_evex]

i like...

but some ur 3d is fucked

[ESCA]

somethin&#39;
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a168/gepek/05755aea.jpg


http://forum.vip-net.ch/images/avatars/124798564444f37d191f28c.jpg :)

[Detoxication]

http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/5931/reson1zo2.jpg

[shifty!]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/4069/sh033zu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits on the new throw, thanks...

[ShIfTeD]

shi? its pretty good..work on the shadow and the S

[-MaCKiE-]

top middle of H is fucked nice other than that

[shifty!]

Originally posted by ShIfTeD@Aug 29 2006, 06:34 PM
shi? its pretty good..work on the shadow and the S
short for &#39;shifty&#39; i just want to get a good style down before a do the whole throw, but yeh thanks and is it better than this one?
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/1323/sh024hv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us) ...i know its painted but thats the recent throw and i dont have asketch of it...

[-MaCKiE-]

that wud be better with a shadow/3d, also the big black gap on the i looks bad like the h n s tho

[shifty!]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Aug 29 2006, 06:30 PM
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/4069/sh033zu9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits on the new throw, thanks...
yeh, but is this one better then the on above^^^^^

[shifty!]

Originally posted by shifty&#33;@Aug 29 2006, 06:43 PM
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/1323/sh024hv4.jpg (http://imageshack.us) ...i know its painted but thats the recent throw and i dont have a sketch of it...
witch one is better? this or the one above^^^ thanks

[C-SONE]

Originally posted by C&#045;SONE@Aug 29 2006, 07:55 AM
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/10.jpg
cits?
bump for crits

[sky 5]

http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7797/1181829or8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

.... canvas i messed around with this weekend . . . . trying to give it a happy cartoon type vibe . . . . . karaks are pretty much freestyled b/c i hve no clue how to do them . . . . . im likin the yellow drop/3d ... with a majority green fill it would go together nice . . .. that color wheel in the new 2 graf thread is a nice tool to use for color scheme . . .can someone explain what the contrast and complimentary colors are? i know greens complimentary color is red but thats about it . . . . shit im on the internet i ll just look that shit up meself . . .

reson - im not feeling the bottom right leg of your N . . .

[aces]

Don&#39;t connect the letters. It&#39;s ok to have them touching as long as there is a line in between them.

It&#39;s not that bad but having them connected like that makes it look like shit unless you know what you&#39;re doing.

EDIT: This is for C-SONE.

[Toy Story]

Shiffty, your 3d on the one is very simple and yet the 3d is still shit. You have to check where you put the 3d lines to make sure it does actually make it look 3d.

I have also seen that "H" of yours in your throwie everywhere, try to get your own style maybe.

Just experiment.

So far so good though.

[aces]

Originally posted by sky 5@Aug 29 2006, 09:02 PM
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/7797/1181829or8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

.... canvas i messed around with this weekend . . . . trying to give it a happy cartoon type vibe . . . . . karaks are pretty much freestyled b/c i hve no clue how to do them . . . . . im likin the yellow drop/3d ... with a majority green fill it would go together nice . . .. that color wheel in the new 2 graf thread is a nice tool to use for color scheme . . .can someone explain what the contrast and complimentary colors are? i know greens complimentary color is red but thats about it . . . . shit im on the internet i ll just look that shit up meself . . .

reson - im not feeling the bottom right leg of your N . . .
That is so sick dude. Lovin the charaks. Just one question. How do you do canvases? I see you have an can of paint but you can&#39;t possibly spray that thin and exact. Is there a thread about it cause if there is I can&#39;t find it.

[shifty!]

which one? the first or second?