Blackbooks

[aces]

Then what is the spray paint in that picture doing?

[shifty!]

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/1052/sh040xz2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits? any better?

[aces]

It's the same thing but colored in.

[MEBone]

for the toy battle...needa fix some small things but what u think of it overall

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/4488/1027981143285043210fp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[meetermaid]

shifty don't have the top of the s leaning into the other letters like that, unless your gonna lean the other letters as well, cause it looks wierd.

sry i edited this post before i saw yours aces and said pretty much the exact same thing :lol:

[aces]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 29 2006, 09:57 PM
for the toy battle...needa fix some small things but what u think of it overall

http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/4488/1027981143285043210fp2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Each letter seems to have a different style of it's own. The P has that thing on the left of it, the H is just straight up block buster style, the E looks like a widened tag, the R has that thing at the bottom of it, and the Z looks like a next step up from blockbusters. Ahh they all suck except the H and the P if you didn't have that shit off too the left of it.


Yea I saw that when I finished editing the quote into this one. Haha!

[prank]

http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/6201/image66sw1.jpg

an y that i thought could be cool with practice. I know its sloppy but with somme work and efort i think it could be cool. whta do u guys think?? anywyas crits an recommandations are strongly welcomme...

[aces]

An Y??? Haha nice grammar...just kidding. I don't know about the whole sketching one letter at a time but whatever. It's ok for a simple but as you said quite sloppy. So rework it and take your time on it. Don't rush it.

[N:Craze]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/4160/photo33nk6.jpg

a new throw that i randomly decided to color

crits please

[pace1]

thr will br good if instead of making the top like a U make i like a V and keep the back of the V traight... get it maybe.

[FEN the HEN]

does that say MINO? or MINP?

[prank]

Originally posted by pace1@Aug 29 2006, 09:33 PM
thr will br good if instead of making the top like a U make i like a V and keep the back of the V traight... get it maybe.
u think? k i might try that

[pace1]

try it if not change it

[meetermaid]

n:craze, the i and n are perfect, the m and o need work. make them more square, to fit the style of the i and the n.

[Seek139]

yeah the i&n are pretty dope

[N:Craze]

yeah its mino and iv been foolin with it more with a regular o it looks dope and a boxyer m

[sky 5]

Originally posted by prank@Aug 29 2006, 09:23 PM
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/6201/image66sw1.jpg

an y that i thought could be cool with practice. I know its sloppy but with somme work and efort i think it could be cool. whta do u guys think?? anywyas crits an recommandations are strongly welcomme...
thats excatly what i be doin with letters .....bend em one way in a sketch . .. bend em the other way in a sketch . .. bend em a thrid way in a sketch .. .. then see what works and what dont . . .. you got the proportion down pat which is a huge first step (just drawing bars seems to be a tough step for soem people) .. well on your way homie!

[pace1]

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g220/ginoforce/pacethrowiebean.jpg
pace throwie new^^

[-MaCKiE-]

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/2453/000throwexgraff002hl0.jpg

first go at the rectangle thingy... looks shit at the mo, cn see how this shit works tho so hopefully will cum good at the the end of a few weeks

[meetermaid]

pace work on that e, separate the top bit from the bottom bit (if that makes sense) like how a normal e looks like

[-MaCKiE-]

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/2453/000throwexgraff002hl0.jpg

http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/927/000throwexgraffnx1.jpg

[Fosale!]

i was lookiing back and found this
Meetermaid, i love that bottom M so much.
http://img460.imageshack.us/img460/9848/meet1072x7449jm.jpg

[meetermaid]

ooooooooooh shit, i totally forgot about that m, i'm'a sketch something with it right now hahahaha.. and fuck those tags are so gross, i remember thinking they were total hot shit when i first came up with em :unsure:

[Sheek]

workin on simples
crits?

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/5219/3dsheekij2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[meetermaid]

did you edit some of the 3d lines in ms paint? :lol:

[Sheek]

no i went over them wit a bic marker
it jus blead a little

[-MaCKiE-]

up fo critz on mine.... sheek nice work on the s

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Aug 29 2006, 11:23 PM
ooooooooooh shit, i totally forgot about that m, i'm'a sketch something with it right now hahahaha.. and fuck those tags are so gross, i remember thinking they were total hot shit when i first came up with em :unsure:
I fucking love those tags
roflcopter

those Es are so effin' hot imo

[meetermaid]

hahaha i wish i had a camera or a scanner or something right now i'd show you my updated shit, i haven't ditched any of those styles (except for the bottom throw) i've just tweaked em a lot.

sheek the 3d on the h is totally fucked, and the k's kinda ugly. but cheers on the simple letters, keep at em.

mackie, get rid of all the unnecessary bumps and extensions and shit on the 1st pic.

[MEBone]

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/921/1028320913286200000eo2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

tried to smooth out the style differnces, not done with that yet but cant thinkm of a color scheme to save my life. light colors seem right cuz the swirly things i dunno im drunk cant think too straight

[meetermaid]

i like the swirly things but you added too many of em, get rid of the two on the e, and the one on the left of the p and it'll look better i do believe.

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture73-1.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture74.jpghttp://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture75.jpg

[MEBone]

added 3d just to see wat it was like b4 i got ur crits meeter...lemme know if the 3d changes anythin, imo it evens it out more but i dunno

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/3901/1028361443286337370xb9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

the angle of the pic makes the e look ridiculously unproportioned to the rest of the letters

[meetermaid]

it definitely looks better with 3d, but i still think you got too many of them swirlies, and the letters are still kinda different styles

[MEBone]

meet i changed the top part of the p but when i looked at taking off the bottom left part, it really fucked up the rest of the piece, hows it now

[novella]

hey, just looking for some crits on some simple sketches

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/anonnew.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/anonsevennew.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/anonpage1new.jpg

[meetermaid]

it looks way better without the thing on top of the p, and well the only thing i could think of to suggest is to change the style of the e, r, and z, because i have a feeling it would look less wierd with the swirlies and shit if the letters were a plainer (and thicker) style like the p and h.

[MEBone]

tru i really like the right leg of the r so imma try to work that into it and the z just kills me, but i dunno how imma do the e

[meetermaid]

good luck ;)

[MEBone]

srry bout the number of posts lol but im thinking that the e and r isnt exactly the same but somehow fits, but i have to fix the z. any suggestions for that

[meetermaid]

try to make the z thicker and the same height as the other letters, z's are incredibly hard to do in my opinion haha

[MEBone]

yah i fixed the z but im dyin with the colors...hahaha didnt mean for this to be that serious but w.e

[meetermaid]

haha, try some purples and pinks, hottest colour scheme: light purple fill, royal purple outline, and a hot pink uni. sex.

[MEBone]

that sounds tight i might just use a white fill black 3-d a red forcefield thing and then just color the rest of the page black

how u think thatll look

[meetermaid]

go for it, never hurts to try :P


and my apologies for having so much talk and no pics, so here's some old school meet (not meat) flava back when i had a scanner...

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/8645/jawnpourjecoogc0.jpg
http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/895/meeeetpa0.png
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/12/scan0016meet584x425oa7.jpg
^all about half a year old or something like that.

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture78-1.jpg

[meetermaid]

what's that say?

[NICCSACC]

"KRAB" with a backward letter k

[MEBone]

thats tight as always nicc

[meetermaid]

sick shit. you've got some style on your hands...

[MEBone]

with the red, dunno if im gonna color the page black...also its not required but a handy probably wud be cool but the letters are killin me heres the sketch...

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2601/1028456233286657570xw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[sky 5]

Originally posted by Sheek@Aug 29 2006, 11:26 PM
workin on simples
crits?

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/5219/3dsheekij2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yeah .. .thats bout simple s you canget .. . . ... fallin off my chair drunk lookin at my paint covereed hands .. . .

[MEBone]

yo sky, is that ur life...drinkin n bombin...if so, ur a god...btw if any1s interested theres this shit called dxm thats in some copugh n cold medicines shit makes u trip balls. go get this cough syrup called deslym, drink the whole thing, ull be trippin for like 12 hours, shti dank. i drank like half a bottle and went and did a piece on some roof, turns out it was my neighbors roof, they dont know whose it is tho. its tight i can see that shit everyday lol

[sky 5]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Aug 30 2006, 02:09 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture78-1.jpg
nic sac paddy wac ..never cease to amaze a mac!

[sky 5]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 30 2006, 03:07 AM
yo sky, is that ur life...drinkin n bombin...if so, ur a god...btw if any1s interested theres this shit called dxm thats in some copugh n cold medicines shit makes u trip balls. go get this cough syrup called deslym, drink the whole thing, ull be trippin for like 12 hours, shti dank. i drank like half a bottle and went and did a piece on some roof, turns out it was my neighbors roof, they dont know whose it is tho. its tight i can see that shit everyday lol
apparently for tha last few hours its been . . . im thinkin about clena off my trigger finger and takin my pup up to the spot before last call so i can try to get a better angle on this suppa fine chicano . . .. i live in the ghetto but this is no joke one of th ewhite bouncers got vanilla ice "ice ice baby" song to play as a joke nad i ripped the floorTONIGHT . . ... i had cats comin g up to me afterwards givin me daps and sayin im th emaN .. . LOOKIN AROUND AND CANT FIND THE DELETE BUTTON OR NON CAPITRALIZER SO I JUST BE OUT TAKIN MY PUP UP THE BLOCK TO SEE WHATS UP . .. . NICCSACC BE THE MOTHA FUCKIN MAN UP IN THIS HOUSE!1

[MEBone]

haha wat u think ive my sketch btw

[smokincron]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 30 2006, 02:33 AM
with the red, dunno if im gonna color the page black...also its not required but a handy probably wud be cool but the letters are killin me heres the sketch...

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2601/1028456233286657570xw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
im lovin it bro!

[Fosale!]

Meeter killin' it with those ill handies keep it up gurrrl!

[X-Sage]

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y251/Bizzyman/IMG_1098.jpg

I literally just got ma black book an just started taggin late summer. So I am gettin used to it, or trying.

[MEBone]

yo start off doin a shit ton of simples till u get that down to the point where u can do it wit ur dick and its still perfect. then start tweaking ur letters a lil bit. stay away from anykind of wild style for now. just keep practicin

[-kosr-]

cuz of what MEBone said, if you want a DXM trip, dont try it on tripple c's i knew a guy who got really fucked up off it an almost died.

X sage, tone it down, go simpler, do blocks and bubbles, cut out the arrows for now.

[MEBone]

hahaha i used to only know of trip c's i took like 20 once and didnt have a bad trip but my homie took like 25 and wanted to die, its cuz they have other shit in it and its mostly the other shit. deslym is the ish fer sure. crits on my pherz post above?

[Fosale!]

I miss Regs, the good regs(TrickforKids)
come back!

[-kosr-]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 30 2006, 03:56 AM
hahaha i used to only know of trip c's i took like 20 once and didnt have a bad trip but my homie took like 25 and wanted to die, its cuz they have other shit in it and its mostly the other shit. deslym is the ish fer sure. crits on my pherz post above?
yeah tripple c's dont actually give you a dxm trip, it fucks around with your system and you think you are, the trips similar just it leads to dependance and constand bad trips. and it can casue liver failure and shit

[MEBone]

damn lucjky i found that deslym shit...ne ways nuff of this drug talk how bout some crits

[C-SONE]

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a387/XteriorMotive/11.jpg
crits?

[MEBone]

work on simple stuff, blockbusters and stuff like that

[ESCA]

Originally posted by ESCA@Aug 29 2006, 03:17 PM
somethin'
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a168/gepek/05755aea.jpg


http://forum.vip-net.ch/images/avatars/124798564444f37d191f28c.jpg :)
comments?

[Necro-]

Originally posted by X-Sage@Aug 30 2006, 03:46 AM
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y251/Bizzyman/IMG_1098.jpg

I literally just got ma black book an just started taggin late summer. So I am gettin used to it, or trying.
totally shweet sig bro

[Detoxication]

Originally posted by Detoxication@Aug 29 2006, 05:16 PM
http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/5931/reson1zo2.jpg
bump for crits

[nerdx]

letters are simple, threedeee sucks

[aces]

Detox - The leg of the R comes too close to the other leg of the R making it look too much like a B. Work on making your lines smoother and your letters all the same width and of course the 3-D. Check out the New 2 Graff? Start here. Thread for tips on 3-D. Link for that thread found here: http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/in...showtopic=14335 (http://bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/index.php?showtopic=14335)

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture80.jpg

[just graffiti]

i like the second one alot keep it up

[FEST!]

http://img48.imageshack.us/img48/2909/fest1016pg8.jpg (http://My Webpage
!Mr. FESTdos
[src]

[aces]

I like your handstyle but I saw one of your pieces a little while ago and those could use some work.

[FEST!]

we all need a little work i guess

[serial-bomber]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/saltmann/babyface.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/saltmann/phildrawings.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/saltmann/phildrawings.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/saltmann/fatphuck.jpg

no writing but jus a couple of old pics i thort i wud post up

[jpnil]

http://i5.tinypic.com/261p9g3.jpg
seethereallife
http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9333/dsc00147nv3.jpg
Dora

~~jpnil~~

[serial-bomber]

bumpin toy fuck :lol:

[meetermaid]

jpnil that oldschool dora piece is WAY better than the other shit you posted. drop the other styles and play around with the dora piece style.

serialbomber, that baby has a huge nose haha, good to see an actual artist on here...

[doomsayer]

crits please!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/da6e814e.jpg

[meetermaid]

truuuuuuth. you've regressed! fix the line on the r and u, and make the bottom of the t longer, try to make it look like the first t.

[doomsayer]

ahhh crap, i didnt even notice... soz its 4am im friggin tired i was focusing on defining my letters. hang on lemme do another.

[doomsayer]

k, i think ive defined my letters more.... this time i got perspective down... right?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/1b5abc18.jpg

[beefgerky]

^much better staying simple.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/thuggg1.jpg

[meetermaid]

truth that's waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better. i just had an idea for the u cause it kinda looks like a v, instead of having the line go down to where the line of the r stops, have it go farther down and leave the same amount of space left on the bottom as you left on the top of the r, if that makes any sense at all, if it doesn't say so and i'll draw you a picture

(sorry i'm like engineering your throw for you but i'm a bossy bitch...)

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

Originally posted by serial-bomber@Aug 30 2006, 12:53 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/saltmann/babyface.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/saltmann/phildrawings.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/saltmann/phildrawings.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v284/saltmann/fatphuck.jpg

no writing but jus a couple of old pics i thort i wud post up
fucking nice man, u got the proportions and the face nailed, less nakedness though, work on clothing for him..

[doomsayer]

k, i brought the line down like you said, in the first on i added something in thought, does it work?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/20e455e8.jpg

[serial-bomber]

trance check the lookie lookie blackblack they might be a few pages
back though if you wont to see some more of my work
thanks for your comments

[meetermaid]

truth the one on top is looking niiice, i'd definitely keep that lil thing on the u.

[aces]

Yea it definately defines it more as a U because the second one still kinda looks like a V. Keep the first one.

[South-Pole]

nice drawings serial :P

[whoarethereal evil]

im thinking the r needs a bit more work


but your doing aceeeeeee

[MEBone]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 30 2006, 02:33 AM
with the red, dunno if im gonna color the page black...also its not required but a handy probably wud be cool but the letters are killin me heres the sketch...

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2601/1028456233286657570xw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for crits

[jpnil]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Aug 30 2006, 01:21 PM
jpnil that oldschool dora piece is WAY better than the other shit you posted. drop the other styles and play around with the dora piece style.

thanks for ur comment.. im gonna try try n try. . :unsure: :huh: ;) :)

[obseen]

serial bomber them sketches are well good, lovin em
i did a pherz ketch, quick one, im not gonna enter it for the battle though cos i dont like it
http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/1554/shot16ec4.jpg
MEBone im not sure about them wiggly things and i think you should work on your letters being the same width as each other aswell

[aces]

I like the PHER and then the Z is just way too small so I can't quite tell how it looks.

[Hilo]

new throwey crits

http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/933/picture71ss5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[FEN the HEN]

that could deff work if ya cleaned it up a bit and fix the 3d....more specifically on the O and on the drips

[Hilo]

yea thanks man i knew i messed hte o up

[beefgerky]

diggin it hilo.

[Hilo]

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8385/picture72mv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


something new i unno i was thinking of gerk while i did it. ahhahaha

[obseen]

ye i bet you were thinking of gerk while you were doing something else aswell :lol: jkz

i like your pen sketch best hilo

[Hilo]

ahahha thanks im working on some thing not all that decent but ill post it. im actully taking time on my stuff now. its making me better.

[Hilo]

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7703/picture73fr2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

this is quik

[Slushi]

Originally posted by MEBone@Aug 30 2006, 02:33 AM
with the red, dunno if im gonna color the page black...also its not required but a handy probably wud be cool but the letters are killin me heres the sketch...

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2601/1028456233286657570xw1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

the e and z are a different style than the rest of it..
also lose the squiggley shit

[Hilo]

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/4168/picture74ps9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

new name im thinking of.

who likes my awsome cool awsome cool awsome tag im so #1

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture82-1.jpg
was for the battle prolly wont use it.

[FEN the HEN]

thats nice but the pic quality is kinda shitty

[MEBone]

nicc amazin as usual, imma get my ass kicked if i enter the battle

[FEN the HEN]

MEB yours isnt really that bad tho, you might have a shot, just fix up the Z a bit

[Detoxication]

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/7621/reson2ek3.jpg

[aces]

Lose those lines on the inside of the letters and try to make all the lines that you have straighter. They can still be curved but less squigley (sp?).

[FEN the HEN]

and fix up the N a bit

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture83.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture84-1.jpghttp://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture85-1.jpg

[Fosale!]

dope, as always.

[Necro-]

ive been working on throwies because theyre really hard for me. here's one i just finished its my fav one so far. just MA because every V i tried sucked.

http://i85.photobucket.com/albums/k76/Saldort/Picture012.jpg


i hate ballpoint pens >.<

[N:Craze]

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/9763/photo35cw0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/91/photo36ij1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6150/photo37xk1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/1269/photo38zw8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

crits?

[meetermaid]

mino, the penciled-in throw on the top pic is great. in the 2nd pic, the m doesn&#39;t look like an m at all, same with the 3rd. the min in the last pic is good, but the m shouldn&#39;t be twice the size as all the other letters.

[kemzone]

Necro- make the top of the A about the same height as the M and it would look fucking dope

[Necro-]

kk ty

[N:Craze]

yeah that bottom one is really wide haha.

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture87.jpghttp://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture88-1.jpg

[MR3___DOP]

venom your stuff is nice but there&#39;s already a venom out there

[beefgerky]

VENOM MSKKK AWRRRRR. KILL YOURSELFFFF.

[d_g]

Thought I might as well post this up for cc.

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5974/560a0400smallcf9.jpg

[NICCSACC]

ive always wrote venom. thnx tho&#33;

[WolfBurrns]

Heres my page and half piece for the Pherz toy battle. I was dong good until the fill. Fucked it up completely and tried to fix it. Only made it worse.. Definately not my best. But I tried something new with the letters.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/untitled.jpg

Crits?

EDIT: Looking at that.. It looks really bad. So im gonna add a better quality pic of my entry from the last toy battle I did to show im not completely horrible.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/dalek2.jpg

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture89.jpghttp://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture90.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture91.jpg

[nerdx]

yo nisacc waht do you really write, or on paper you just like to write other shits for fun.
eithere way your shits is nice.
write miser if you get boarddd some timess

[NICCSACC]

i write venom mostly or KUSH but i also just do random words, letters etc...

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture92.jpghttp://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/Picture93.jpg

[novella]

Originally posted by novella@Aug 30 2006, 12:33 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/anonnew.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/anonsevennew.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v408/crowned_royalty/anonpage1new.jpg
bump for crits?

[NOMX]

ur on the right path.....i think

[novella]

thanks, i only started sketching a couple months ago, ive had a few guys around to help me out though

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by d_g@Aug 30 2006, 10:21 PM
Thought I might as well post this up for cc.

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5974/560a0400smallcf9.jpg
i rly like it the shiny stuff on the 3d looks mad and the letters are so clean, nice one

[NOMX]

Originally posted by novella@Aug 31 2006, 12:59 AM
thanks, i only started sketching a couple months ago, ive had a few guys around to help me out though
thats good, most writers that i have met and myself had to kinda teach ourselves so ur lucky to know some heads

[Seek139]

the heads in my area basicly tought me how to rack and how to get up wit out fucking shit up...

[NICCSACC]

i tought myself how to draw.

[d_g]

Originally posted by d_g@Aug 30 2006, 10:21 PM
Thought I might as well post this up for cc.

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5974/560a0400smallcf9.jpg
Buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuump.

[SeKz]

http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/2087/image015pj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Latest sketch crits please.

[nerdx]

Originally posted by d_g+Aug 31 2006, 02:53 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (d_g @ Aug 31 2006, 02:53 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Aug 30 2006, 10:21 PM
Thought I might as well post this up for cc.

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5974/560a0400smallcf9.jpg
Buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuump. [/b][/quote]
this does not flow at allll
all of your letters need to have the same style

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1025.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1024.jpg

new camera test

[obseen]

woohoo you got a new camera, n those are fuckin dope
your letters are well good
but, how come your stickers all say different things, i thought you wrote venom

[aces]

I don&#39;t know why but I don&#39;t really like the coloring on the first one.

[NICCSACC]

yeah thats why it didnt get entered in the 666 battle the colors suck.

i usually write venom on my stickers etc but sometimes ill just write random shit. its all me tho if thats what ya meant&#33;&#33;

[funky monky]

something new
[img=http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/2787/gaco2yt5.th.jpg] (http://img175.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gaco2yt5.jpg)
[img=http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/2898/gacozg7.th.jpg] (http://img266.imageshack.us/my.php?image=gacozg7.jpg)

[MicoDOK]

Originally posted by SeKz@Aug 31 2006, 06:57 AM
http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/2087/image015pj2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Latest sketch crits please.
Sekz tyhis style is pretty ill, As far as critz i&#39;d probaably fade it when you actually go to paint it. That green outline is okay.. But a limeyier green would be a bit better once you gert it on a wall. Take it easy man


-Me

[Fosale!]

Pen freestyle and another random bomb.
http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1231/384f6fd7vx0.jpg

[obseen]

that dog looks pretty cool, i know someone who writes sear
he lives in england thouogh so it probably wont matter too much
edit, your shadows look kinda weird on the s

[Fosale!]

that dog is Odie, from garfield.

[BRAINE]

heathcliff would definitely fuck garfield up in any cat-related event.
cat fight, cat scratch fever, dem cats from down the block, other things, etc


nicc sacc you should mail me some stickers, those dont look half bad.

[Fosale!]

yeah, of course he would, heathcliff is the illest but i was watching old garfield cartoons when i drew that so yeah.

[Hilo]

was gonna say that nothing originall in that throw at all

[Fosale!]

http://www.cfhf.net/lyrics/images/heathcliff.jpg
what a g

[Fosale!]

yeah i was just bored, yo hilo you do anything else with your new throwie, that work was fire.

[lost_for_evex]

go sketch more...u make me sad.

[Fosale!]

sorry.

[nerdx]

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/9421/img2473cg0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
working on new style. fuckin lame man.
crits?

[beefgerky]

lose the random thin things...good structure otherwise..colour&#33;

[meetermaid]

the s and r are good, the i is kinda boring and small, and the m is a little misshapen, fix the middle leg.

[nerdx]

thanks yo. the R is waht i was having trouble with, weird you say its one of the best.
ganna fix the m and ink it.

[alera]

i cant get my Rs to work eather <_< like in my throw
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/2228/0817061859aqg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
any one got sugestions?
oh and here&#39;s some thing i was mess in with, i know the big teeth are played out but whatever i like them.
http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/3908/0831061651ad5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[nerdx]

the bomb is alright, but i dont like how the LER have that curve to them and the A&#39;s dont. it doesnt flow so well wiht the change up like that.

[obseen]

ye alera, its always your r that lets it down for me

[-=AgA=-TrAnCe]

try lower case R?..

[alera]

for some reason i suck at R&#39;s but im tryin to make them better maby i will try a lowercase r like
ya said. And im workin on a new throw that flows better hope to post it soon :D

[ESCA]

Originally posted by ESCA+Aug 30 2006, 07:42 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (ESCA @ Aug 30 2006, 07:42 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ESCA@Aug 29 2006, 03:17 PM
somethin&#39;
http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a168/gepek/05755aea.jpg


comments? [/b][/quote]
comments >&#33;>&#33;

[Hilo]

thats something you dont hear about me my throw is fire well sure thing man ill do more of emm il even post how that sound ahahhahaha

[meetermaid]

bruce willis ain&#39;t that hot.


and go more simple with your letters.

[nerdx]

http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/9098/img2475ek9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
trying something new for the fill and fucked up so just filled them in.

[ESCA]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Aug 31 2006, 05:05 PM
bruce willis ain&#39;t that hot.


and go more simple with your letters.
tnx for comment...

and about style, hm , thats my style ;)

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by nerdx@Aug 31 2006, 02:08 PM
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/9098/img2475ek9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
trying something new for the fill and fucked up so just filled them in.
shit-brown and dead-grass-green..&#33;

coloured in, that s is a fucking sick letter.

[nerdx]

thanks yo. im working on making my simples more than simple.
but still simple. you konw.

[beastie_1989]

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/4221/blackbook16lr2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

latest thing i did tell me what u think,

P.S i think my N would look like a pretty sweet A if i flip it over, what do u think.

[nerdx]

dont like hte colors, but yeah that N upside down would make a sweet A

[Hilo]

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/8692/picture75cf8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

dont mind the blob im working on my 3b and im new to the bomb so i still dont have a good out line

[meetermaid]

hilo that&#39;s a fuckin great bomb. you missed a bit of shadow on the left of the h and on the right of the h the shadow doesn&#39;t quite follow the curve of the letter, but the letters themselves are beautiful.

[Hilo]

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/69/picture76vt4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

hilos penism fave sketch yet. crits?

[d_g]

Originally posted by nerdx+Aug 31 2006, 09:35 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nerdx @ Aug 31 2006, 09:35 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by d_g@Aug 31 2006, 02:53 AM
<!--QuoteBegin-d_g@Aug 30 2006, 10:21 PM
Thought I might as well post this up for cc.

http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5974/560a0400smallcf9.jpg
Buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuump.
this does not flow at allll
all of your letters need to have the same style [/b][/quote]
Anyone else got anything to say?

Cheers.

[Blix]

the drest is pretty clean but id prolly cap that e oh and make all the letters the same heigth

[meetermaid]

hilo work on your drop-shadowing harshcore, the shadow is basically the exact same letters layered underneath and to whichever side you want (so the shadow should look exactly like the letters, just moved a bit.)

drest the dr is one style, and the est is another altogether, fix that

[d_g]

Cheers. I&#39;ll work on that.

[LegoMan]

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d163/wampastompa/083006_01171.jpg
some shit i sketched in class
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d163/wampastompa/sigismthrow2.jpg
this is the throwie im gonna start using now on... critz?

[NICCSACC]

looks real dope to me. the throwup i mean.

[Fosale!]

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1583/54a734dfwy8.jpg
ignore the top picture
and on the bottom one ignore the fuckedup shadow
just fooling around with new letters
crits?

[LegoMan]

try making your E taller and skinnier.... im feelin ur handsteez

[Fosale!]

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2252/39eff4beht0.jpg
sorry for the double post.

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by LegoMan@Aug 31 2006, 07:50 PM
try making your E taller and skinnier.... im feelin ur handsteez
Thank you, your the first person who has.

[Fosale!]

Lego, in your first sketch, i really like the 2006 in the corner, shits illin&#39;

[nerdx]

fosale, the SR bomb is nice.

[Hilo]

Originally posted by Hilo@Aug 31 2006, 06:10 PM
http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/69/picture76vt4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

hilos penism fave sketch yet. crits?
bump couse it was on bottom of page.

[Fosale!]

i think its gettin a little to complex, that&#39;s just to me though, work on that O as well
keep it up

[NOMX]

ur 3d doesnt make sense, work with it some more

[fudgeymoose]

My Bomb... Crits Please.
http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/5346/mybomb1cy8.jpg

A style I thought up a while ago and finally found the free time to do it... Crits Please.
http://img386.imageshack.us/img386/9089/style1iq1.jpg

Style biting the fuck out of some letters for control practise... NO CRITS (as most of it is not mine).
http://img190.imageshack.us/img190/6655/stylebitingjustpractisers9.jpg

[magashna]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c115/magashna/sewn_shadow.jpg

critz please

[d_g]

SEWA? I think the letters need a little bit of defining.

[meetermaid]

magashna, the s and e are totally hot, the 2 letters suck ass. which leads me to believe you were biting the first 2, but i won&#39;t make any accusations untill i see more of your work..

"fudgymoose"...how old are you?

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by LegoMan@Aug 31 2006, 07:19 PM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d163/wampastompa/083006_01171.jpg
some shit i sketched in class
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d163/wampastompa/sigismthrow2.jpg
this is the throwie im gonna start using now on... critz?
fucking dopee bro so sick (excuse the pun)

i use to write sic and my throwie was no were near the level urs is

[beefgerky]

the S is a little shitty, keep at it tho bruv.

[nerdx]

think it says SEMN lol.

[fudgeymoose]

How old am I? Why ask that? Just crits please...

[nerdx]

is your signature a joke?

[fudgeymoose]

No, I do wear that... And fuck off with the beef, crits is all I asked for.

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by fudgeymoose@Aug 31 2006, 07:07 PM
How old am I? Why ask that? Just crits please...
i&#39;m asking you that so i CAN crit your pieces fairly, because frankly they&#39;re shit, and your pen-control looks pretty shoddy, but i don&#39;t want to judge you in case your like 12 or something. but anyway, yeah. keep working on em.

[fudgeymoose]

Thanks for the crits.
My can control is better than my pen control, I shake like all fuck with fine details.

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Nyc Sno+Aug 31 2006, 10:03 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Nyc Sno @ Aug 31 2006, 10:03 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-LegoMan@Aug 31 2006, 07:19 PM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d163/wampastompa/083006_01171.jpg
some shit i sketched in class
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d163/wampastompa/sigismthrow2.jpg
this is the throwie im gonna start using now on... critz?
fucking dopee bro so sick (excuse the pun)

i use to write sic and my throwie was no were near the level urs is [/b][/quote]
Nyc Snow, get it right, it says SIG not SIC
his piece says SIGISM and so does his tag.

[meetermaid]

sig, in the piece, spread out the letters more so they&#39;re not all squished together, it&#39;s insanely hard to read that way. the throw&#39;s pretty tight..

[uhhh]

sig-the throws not too bad. could use some more work though.

the piece. i thought it was d&#39;s on both ends. now that i know what it says. ehh. i&#39;d say try some simpler stuff. not completly start over. just take a step back. ;)

[civicman]

here&#39;s my stuff...i have a shit camera
http://img522.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bomb010906va6.png
soz it&#39;s a link not a pic :(

[LegoMan]

bumble just do basic letters man so you get an understanding of how shit should flow... your starting out in the wrong direction homie

[Nyc Sno]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Aug 31 2006, 11:30 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Aug 31 2006, 11:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by Nyc Sno@Aug 31 2006, 10:03 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-LegoMan@Aug 31 2006, 07:19 PM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d163/wampastompa/083006_01171.jpg
some shit i sketched in class
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d163/wampastompa/sigismthrow2.jpg
this is the throwie im gonna start using now on... critz?
fucking dopee bro so sick (excuse the pun)

i use to write sic and my throwie was no were near the level urs is
Nyc Snow, get it right, it says SIG not SIC
his piece says SIGISM and so does his tag. [/b][/quote]
allright guy i didnt see the handy and u cant tell me that doesnt look like a c

[civicman]

critz allready?...thanx man

[Skeam]

something i did in graphics today... new style and i tried to make it flow a bit.

i havent been sketching nearly as much as what i used to lately cause i been riding my 50 heaps and i mstartin to get pretty serious so havent had much time to sketch.

crits pleeease
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/5811/hpim2115mh4.jpg

[doomsayer]

i dont like the A, the left side of it is too skinny and i dont like how the letters gradually get bigger... i think the E and the A dont fit in so well.

[-kosr-]

ayo, new flick.. digi cam finally... not so blurry&#33;

http://img414.imageshack.us/img414/1381/kosr001ex2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[beefgerky]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/doodles.jpg

when the stress burns my brain just like acid raindrops, mary jane is the only thing that makes the pain stop...

[Hilo]

the O ruins it over all its sick gerk nice seeing new stuff

[obseen]

gerk thats hot&#33; love the colours
skeam that piece has some dope letter structure

[aces]

Originally posted by beefgerky@Sep 1 2006, 05:37 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/doodles.jpg

when the stress burns my brain just like acid raindrops, mary jane is the only thing that makes the pain stop...
Love the coloring and the letters of course. You should start doing real pieces. I&#39;ve never really seen anything that really goes under the category of piece. Everything kinda seems like it&#39;s a throwie. Don&#39;t get me wrong they&#39;re sick but I want to see some pieces from you.

By the way sick song.

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Aug 31 2006, 07:48 PM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1583/54a734dfwy8.jpg
ignore the top picture
and on the bottom one ignore the fuckedup shadow
just fooling around with new letters
crits?
hey yo where do you live fosale cause i&#39;ve been seein mad someone named sear getting up like crazy round my area.

[lost_for_evex]

hes from jersey,

[sky 5]

damn .. everythin up on this page is nice ...

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by beefgerky@Sep 1 2006, 04:37 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/doodles.jpg

when the stress burns my brain just like acid raindrops, mary jane is the only thing that makes the pain stop...
gerkah...nice shit, lovin the green fill n shit...but whats after the k in your handy?

[meetermaid]

it says gerks1 and i don&#39;t wanna jump the jockwagon but gerk that&#39;s hot shit, i agree with aces, you should start sketching bigger and more detailed and get on some reaal piecing shit, but work on your dropshadow it&#39;s a bit off in places, the k mainly.

[Sluts_r_us]

yeah top right arm of the k - shadow is off

[epico]

some shit i drew in school. i wish i could have used some color. feedback would be cool.
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f180/dallis420/th_scan.jpg (http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f180/dallis420/scan.jpg)

[Slushi]

lose all the arrows and work on simples (simple letters)

[aces]

And provide a larger picture next time.

[SCR]

http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/8811/scr2ua8.jpg

Comments and criticism without sarcasm please&#33; :D

[meetermaid]

nice fill, 3d&#39;s on point, good start. work on your handy.

[SCR]

Yeah, I always had a problem with it <_<

[RKT47]

Originally posted by nerdx@Aug 31 2006, 05:08 PM
http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/9098/img2475ek9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
trying something new for the fill and fucked up so just filled them in.
thats nice

[RKT47]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Aug 31 2006, 07:48 PM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1583/54a734dfwy8.jpg
ignore the top picture
and on the bottom one ignore the fuckedup shadow
just fooling around with new letters
crits?
dude they&#39;re nice. i used to write sear but changed because i realised it was like an anagram of a writer near me so i quit. please dont write sear one because you aren&#39;t the first sear, and i don&#39;t mean me check this kid outhttp://www.graffiti.org/winnipeg/sear04.jpg

[aces]

Originally posted by SCR@Sep 1 2006, 04:56 PM
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/8811/scr2ua8.jpg

Comments and criticism without sarcasm please&#33; :D
Did you use a ruler? If not good but if so then DON&#39;T. Bad habits come from using rulers considering you won&#39;t have one when you go out painting unless you&#39;re doing stencils or stuff like that. Like meetermaid said you&#39;re starting out well&#33;

[grimace]

tell the truth, if u dont like it tell me why, any help is greatly apreciated.
oh yea the first one was the piece before i segmented the letters off.
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/pherz5.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/PHERZ3.jpg

[meetermaid]

chill out with those crazy letters. i can&#39;t read em at all... scratch all that and start afresh with plain simple letters, trust me.. you&#39;ve got the extensions and fills and everything down, but they don&#39;t even begin to make up for your lack of letter structure.

[SCR]

Originally posted by aces+Sep 1 2006, 04:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces @ Sep 1 2006, 04:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-SCR@Sep 1 2006, 04:56 PM
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/8811/scr2ua8.jpg

Comments and criticism without sarcasm please&#33; :D
Did you use a ruler? If not good but if so then DON&#39;T. Bad habits come from using rulers considering you won&#39;t have one when you go out painting unless you&#39;re doing stencils or stuff like that. Like meetermaid said you&#39;re starting out well&#33; [/b][/quote]
Nope, no ruler, I just like to check my pencil-lines 5 times before I go over them with a pen :)

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by RKT47+Sep 1 2006, 04:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (RKT47 @ Sep 1 2006, 04:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Aug 31 2006, 07:48 PM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1583/54a734dfwy8.jpg
ignore the top picture
and on the bottom one ignore the fuckedup shadow
just fooling around with new letters
crits?
dude they&#39;re nice. i used to write sear but changed because i realised it was like an anagram of a writer near me so i quit. please dont write sear one because you aren&#39;t the first sear, and i don&#39;t mean me check this kid outhttp://www.graffiti.org/winnipeg/sear04.jpg [/b][/quote]
I dont write sear, jesus how many times to i have to say it.
I was just using the name to get a feel for As and Rs
I still write Sec...

[ESCA]

Originally posted by LegoMan@Aug 31 2006, 07:19 PM
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d163/wampastompa/083006_01171.jpg
some shit i sketched in class
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d163/wampastompa/sigismthrow2.jpg
this is the throwie im gonna start using now on... critz?
dope throwie, nadstyle A+





rezpect mate :ph34r: B)

[aces]

Originally posted by SCR+Sep 1 2006, 05:31 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SCR @ Sep 1 2006, 05:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by aces@Sep 1 2006, 04:26 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-SCR@Sep 1 2006, 04:56 PM
http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/8811/scr2ua8.jpg

Comments and criticism without sarcasm please&#33;Â* :D
Did you use a ruler? If not good but if so then DON&#39;T. Bad habits come from using rulers considering you won&#39;t have one when you go out painting unless you&#39;re doing stencils or stuff like that. Like meetermaid said you&#39;re starting out well&#33;
Nope, no ruler, I just like to check my pencil-lines 5 times before I go over them with a pen :) [/b][/quote]
That&#39;s a good thing. A lot of people like to try to make their stuff look better by using a ruler and telling people they didn&#39;t but they are only cheating themselves because they will realize that if they ever go out to paint they will be fucked without a ruler.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by grimace@Sep 1 2006, 04:27 PM
tell the truth, if u dont like it tell me why, any help is greatly apreciated.
oh yea the first one was the piece before i segmented the letters off.
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/pherz5.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a93/-Kohen-/PHERZ3.jpg
man that last one looks great reminds me of the thing.

[aces]

The structure sucks but the coloring is sweet

[magashna]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c115/magashna/DSC01534-1.jpg

says SEWN

critz please

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1028.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1029.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1030.jpg

[aces]

Ill as always niccsacc. I love the slap. Those goldish things and the charac are sick. :P

[tompenny]

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/DSC02124.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a129/tompenny104/DSC02120.jpg

[Necro-]

wow. go back to simple block letters and work on making everything the same size/width ect. do that a lot.


why dont people browse these threads before they post? someone gets told the same thing like every day.

[aces]

^Toys will be toys&#33; :P



http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/664/picture004rh2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Um...new style kinda. Just adding something to my always bland pieces. Tell me what ya think.