Blackbooks

[-GEKS-]

sewn- i'm not much better than u, if better at all, so u dont hav to take my advice. i say u should change the w a bit so it matches wit the other letters. its a pretty good throwup if u ask me

[Lune!]

NICCSACC: mad decent

[MisterVee]

http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/1826/0901061652bs9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/545/0830061654ar4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/4033/0831060854hv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9369/0831060855anx3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/2162/0831061257ue6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/3318/0830061653zc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Fosale!]

http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/9220/p1010173oq9.jpg

[Fosale!]

fucked up on the S
pen freebie
C was too hard for me that early in the mornin
Sorry for the double post

[MEBone]

http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/3342/1033909403305157440eg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bored crits? and no i dont write pherz its another entry for the battle, possibly

[Seek139]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/6799/dsc02215ci2.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02215ci2.jpg)
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/9712/dsc02217vv7.th.jpg (http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02217vv7.jpg)
decided to stop coloring in for now...i need to get better letter structure and flow comment plz guys :D

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1037.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1036.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1035.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1034.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1033.jpg

[LegoMan]

Niccsacc get out of this forum goddamit. you dont belong here. you're not a toy ;)

[Seek139]

i would agree your bridging the gap move on up...

[LegoMan]

PS.... big ups to NORML man... im a member myself doggie

[MEBone]

Originally posted by MEBone@Sep 2 2006, 12:35 AM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/3342/1033909403305157440eg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bored crits? and no i dont write pherz its another entry for the battle, possibly
crits?

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Fosale!@Sep 1 2006, 11:23 PM
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/9220/p1010173oq9.jpg
pen freebie
crits?

didnt do the C bc it was giving me trouble

[si0n]

MEBone - make all your letters the same size and style. also try make your letters closer together.

fosale - define the letters a bit more

[Fosale!]

you cant tell its a S and a E...

[ESKI]

I'm new, I'm eski, and here's one of my sketches :rolleyes:

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c336/strikerx4/Picture001.jpg

[si0n]

it threw me off that you used 2 colors, also im real baked :P

[Fosale!]

i didnt use 2 colors
rofl.

[ESKI]

you have tooooo many swoopdie doops in your letters take some out and it'll be straight.

[Seek139]

http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8392/dsc02220ge7.th.jpg (http://img167.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02220ge7.jpg)
another simple critz?

[Fosale!]

majorly ffeelin this.

[-kosr-]

posted the coloured, ugly with add ons version of this, heres the original that i was to cheap to colour.. (most of my markers are dry)
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/192/kosr6ey7.png

unlike last time, can i get some comments on this shit?

[some_one]

I like that kosr. Just i think the lines that go thru the R kind of killed it.
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060902/04/c/5/3/c53129cd306b4b80fa918acd4abd559c200609020_full.jpg
crits please?

[Seek139]

any comments? http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9245/dsc02221tr5.th.jpg (http://img301.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02221tr5.jpg)

[ESKI]

diggin' the techdeck lol

[Seek139]

Originally posted by Seek139@Sep 2 2006, 06:46 AM
any comments? http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9245/dsc02221tr5.th.jpg (http://img301.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02221tr5.jpg)
the CR1TZ!!!!...and yes i'm into those but i handboard more

[force]

http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/7587/2307061840wr7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

not finished... just wondering what you thought of the structure....

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/2995/0109062345kz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

...

[Skeam]

Originally posted by Skeam@Sep 1 2006, 01:39 AM
something i did in graphics today... new style and i tried to make it flow a bit.

i havent been sketching nearly as much as what i used to lately cause i been riding my 50 heaps and i mstartin to get pretty serious so havent had much time to sketch.

crits pleeease
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/5811/hpim2115mh4.jpg
bit late but cheers for the crits obseen

bumpin for some crits... should i keep this style or fuck it off and keep going on what i was doing before?

cheers
matt

[Skeam]

sorry force, i dumped my shit right after yours without critique...

i think the letters need to be defined a bit more in the peice i cant really tell what it says. maybe work on simples and letter structure a bit more and dont make it so complicated... just my opinion mate

those characs have some mad potential though

[aces]

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4931/picture005le5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits?


Skeam - I don't really like your E or M. Your 3-D is good and your handy is sick.

[Skeam]

cheers mate, i think your peice may look a little better if the letters were a little closer together, more so the last 3 letters then the first 2, and you focussed on keeping all the letters the same size and in a straight line and maybe work on your E and R a bit (if thats an R... sorry :P)

[aces]

It is in a straight line but I see what you mean with the E and the letters being closer together. I really don't feel like changing it so I'll get to coloring. Also what do you think of like a lime green and a bright pink for a color scheme?

[Skeam]

not sure about the colours but i sure can agree with you when u say you dont feel like changing it... i hate it when you know you have fucked something and cant be fucked changing it... and then cant be fucked doing another skecth... meh one day i wont be lazy

[South-Pole]

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/SSA40152.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/SSA40074.jpg


critz :(?

[Seek139]

simple's is my suggestion...if you can rock b-busters so far...i think if u can rock a b-buster in a blackie then go rock it on the lines

[South-Pole]

^lol,,thanks for the feed

but i got sick of blocks so i decided to rock throwies but thanks

[Skeam]

thats not rocking throwies mate... a throwie would usually be one colour fill and one colour outline. and maybe a drop shaddow... and a heap of other shit that would make it completely different to that

[Seek139]

go ahead do what your into

http://img450.imageshack.us/img450/23/dsc02222we3.th.jpg (http://img450.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02222we3.jpg)
personally i didnt like how this job came out the structure i feel is getting more flowed with me more bending...trying to get more form next i assume i'll get some layering going

[aces]

I'd say lose the extension off of the Z and the one off the I to the left is a little awkward. Other than that the coloring is good and the 3-D is good.

[Nyc Sno]

DAMMIT EDITTT

[SCR]

Well, uhh, this is my umm 1st (technically, its the 2nd, the 1st was was too wild and unreadable :P) *wild style-like* piece.
Constructive comments and criticism please!
LIEKTHX.
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3803/scrwilddu4.jpg

[alera]

^^^ yo man i aint beefin or nothin but go simpiler, i know thats what everyone says but they say it
cous its true. Trust me i ust to do the same thing and my style dident progress untill i learned to go simple. :) that being said its way better that my first one if i can find it i'll post a pic.

[kaoruone]

http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/7335/004io9.th.jpg (http://img372.imageshack.us/my.php?image=004io9.jpg)
This is my piece its really simple.could i please get some comments and criticism

[lost_for_evex]

syno..

[Nyc Sno]

omg that was so funny

[lost_for_evex]

the fact that you cant write?

[Nyc Sno]

yaa....

[beke]

charac I did a few mins ago, crits?

http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/6222/charac1sv8.jpg

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1039.jpg

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40572-1.jpg

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40579.jpg

[ados]

lookin good trash, color them. i like your style you got goin.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan-1.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/augustcamp066.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0001-2.jpg

[force]

Originally posted by force@Sep 2 2006, 12:41 PM
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/7587/2307061840wr7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

not finished... just wondering what you thought of the structure....

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/2995/0109062345kz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

...


crit?

btw ados.. that black tags hella nice...

[-MaCKiE-]

dope dog man

[nerdx]

zin, looks nice. just work on the 3d seems to be off a bit in some spots.
colors are right on

fosale, think it looks pretty good. add in the rest of the letters and get that shit colord with a 3d

[whoarethereal evil]

them stickers are hottt^^^

[whoarethereal evil]

gaaaaargh i hate the new pages


i think there nicsaccs stix i liked hhhaa

[RepUrSet]

ok... i THINK :unsure: i did better then my other things i posted up on here...crits on it would be great
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6592/picture83xz9.th.jpg (http://img212.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture83xz9.jpg)
^^^^^^
thumbnail

[\(SIN)/[again]]

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/htct.jpg
^
HTC

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/Sinpiece.jpg
^
sin

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/crowbattle1.jpg
^
This was suppose to be for a name trade battle me and my friend crow were doing for fun and practice, but he never got around to doing his.

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/sinsketch23.jpg
^
sin...

[beke]

Originally posted by beke@Sep 2 2006, 02:28 PM
charac I did a few mins ago, crits?

http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/6222/charac1sv8.jpg
bump for crits

[MEBone]

sin-dood go back to simples and blocks n hsit, u need some serious letter structure

[nerdx]

Originally posted by RepUrSet@Sep 2 2006, 05:07 PM
ok... i THINK :unsure: i did better then my other things i posted up on here...crits on it would be great
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6592/picture83xz9.th.jpg (http://img212.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture83xz9.jpg)
^^^^^^
thumbnail
think it looks pretty good.
work on the G it seems to be the most off.

[\(SIN)/[again]]

Originally posted by MEBone@Sep 2 2006, 05:12 PM
sin-dood go back to simples and blocks n hsit, u need some serious letter structure
Normally I don't ask questions, I try to figure out shit on my own. But i've been told this many times, I just don't get it... Letter structure I mean... do you mean like fonts? Basically every letter should be similiar kind of thing?

[ados]

Originally posted by ados@Sep 2 2006, 03:05 PM
lookin good trash, color them. i like your style you got goin.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan-1.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/augustcamp066.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0001-2.jpg
tryin some different styles..

[aces]

Really liking it ados. The throwie (bottom left) is sick. The piece (second to bottom) is ehh not really liking it. The last one looks a little rushed and not clean. Other than that sick and keep it up

[doomsayer]

those all look nice man ^^^^

any crits? i tried it with 3d and did a shadow

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/e6c28636.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/411b444d.jpg

[RepUrSet]

Originally posted by nerdx+Sep 2 2006, 05:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nerdx @ Sep 2 2006, 05:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-RepUrSet@Sep 2 2006, 05:07 PM
ok... i THINK :unsure: i did better then my other things i posted up on here...crits on it would be great
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6592/picture83xz9.th.jpg (http://img212.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture83xz9.jpg)
^^^^^^
thumbnail
think it looks pretty good.
work on the G it seems to be the most off. [/b][/quote]
alright..but how should i work on it...i mean, is there any things i should make thinner or sumin? or just completely change it

[TricksForKids]

Whats good bombing science, hope everyones been having a dope summer, i was just freestyling with a some pens this mornin, threw in the libra scales if you can tell for the hell of it

Peace

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6598/regslibrage9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Seek139]

not diggin the style just my 0.02&#036;

[pace1]

styles of the chain still as sick as last time i saw it.

[magashna]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c115/magashna/DSC01536.jpg

SEB

new style i&#39;m trying

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 2 2006, 05:59 PM
Whats good bombing science, hope everyones been having a dope summer, i was just freestyling with a some pens this mornin, threw in the libra scales if you can tell for the hell of it

Peace

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6598/regslibrage9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump, and magashna lose the arrows and weird thing on the S

Peace

[alive]

yo.

im back from my trip alaska. bear viewing n shit. was dope. so here my first post back.
who remembers me?

tricks- thats sooooo dope. i thought u had moved on the big boys long ago?



peace.

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 2 2006, 05:36 PM
those all look nice man ^^^^

any crits? i tried it with 3d and did a shadow

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/e6c28636.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/411b444d.jpg
id like to get sum crits plz

[aces]

I think you emphasized the U too much with the tail. Now it just looks like a backwards N.

[aces]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 2 2006, 06:59 PM
Whats good bombing science, hope everyones been having a dope summer, i was just freestyling with a some pens this mornin, threw in the libra scales if you can tell for the hell of it

Peace

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6598/regslibrage9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
The E got a little weird but other than that I don&#39;t see anything wrong with it.

[Sluts_r_us]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 2 2006, 06:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 2 2006, 06:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 2 2006, 05:59 PM
Whats good bombing science, hope everyones been having a dope summer, i was just freestyling with a some pens this mornin, threw in the libra scales if you can tell for the hell of it

Peace

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6598/regslibrage9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump, and magashna lose the arrows and weird thing on the S

Peace [/b][/quote]
fuckin right tricks...where the hell have you been?....

[nerdx]

Originally posted by magashna@Sep 2 2006, 06:38 PM
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c115/magashna/DSC01536.jpg

SEB

new style i&#39;m trying
dont draw the the bottom of the page.
continute your full letters.
but its getting there.

[Sluts_r_us]

some random ass sketch wit some wack colring after not sketchin in a month or two...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesksketch001.jpg

[nerdx]

both look ill

[The Fallen Slave of Atlantis]

the top ones tight.

[beke]

http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/6222/charac1sv8.jpg

crits please

[NICCSACC]

its pretty shitty. srry

[uhhh]

Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Sep 2 2006, 07:49 PM
some random ass sketch wit some wack colring after not sketchin in a month or two...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesksketch001.jpg
woah. i remember when i thought your throws were just about the best thing i&#39;d ever seen :lol:

still good though. the k&#39;s a lil.. crowded or something but i&#39;ll guess thats just from not sketching for awile.

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/55e861e7.jpg

Listenin&#39; to Ghostface Killah, just chillin

:edit: Fucked up the 3d at the bottom of the H, but I&#39;ll fix it sooner or later

[doomsayer]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/609c8067.jpg

crits?

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/55e861e7.jpg

bump for criticism

[beke]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 2 2006, 09:42 PM
its pretty shitty. srry
lol i know its shitty..but what can I do to improve?

[NICCSACC]

just add more details like hands etc. veiney eyeballs...something. also, i can tell your lines arent that steady. work on that first and foremost. i mean its not bad just boring as fuck.

[TricksForKids]

Whats good sluts, aces, im sure gerky&#39;s still around here too, good to see you cats still holdin it down, ive been at a summer camp all summer as a leader in training, workin with kids, keeps me on my toes, ill hit up some next sketches soon,

Peace

[beke]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 2 2006, 10:35 PM
just add more details like hands etc. veiney eyeballs...something. also, i can tell your lines arent that steady. work on that first and foremost. i mean its not bad just boring as fuck.
allrighty thanks man ill work on that

[Seek139]

Originally posted by Seek139+Sep 2 2006, 07:00 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Seek139 @ Sep 2 2006, 07:00 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Seek139@Sep 2 2006, 06:46 AM
any comments? http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9245/dsc02221tr5.th.jpg (http://img301.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02221tr5.jpg)
[/b][/quote]
bump&#33;

[bouncingsoul]

That looks sweet. Nice simple letters, and from what I can tell, clean too. Just work on your blending more. The letters are sweet though... Actually, the I could use a lot of work and the N needs a little improvement, but I like the Z

[pace1]

doom-lose the leg on the bottom of the u and bring the line down a little more and itll be good.

SEEK- the extension on the front of the Z is bad lose it

[doomsayer]

when i lose the leg it looks like a V

[pace1]

no just keep the bottom rounded

[Seek139]

i&#39;m workin on another piece right now...i&#39;m gonna work on my bending

[Necro-]

Hexa i like ur shit and that looks sweet, but i liked your more organic curved letters more. just my preferance tho.

[myl]

havent posted anything up in a while...i came up with this in like 30 seconds, new style and so far i like what possibilities it could have.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0173-1.jpg

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Sep 3 2006, 01:19 AM
Hexa i like ur shit and that looks sweet, but i liked your more organic curved letters more. just my preferance tho.
Which ones? The ones with all the bits I posted a while ago? I wasn&#39;t doing too well with those. That&#39;s why I don&#39;t do em anymore...

[aces]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Sep 2 2006, 11:31 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/55e861e7.jpg

bump for criticism
It&#39;s really good and all but I think that the lines going to the swirls could be a little thicker.

[SCR]

Originally posted by SCR@Sep 2 2006, 12:19 PM
Well, uhh, this is my umm 1st (technically, its the 2nd, the 1st was was too wild and unreadable :P) *wild style-like* piece.
Constructive comments and criticism please&#33;
LIEKTHX.
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3803/scrwilddu4.jpg
Bump for more crits.

[myl]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 3 2006, 02:28 AM
havent posted anything up in a while...i came up with this in like 30 seconds, new style and so far i like what possibilities it could have.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0173-1.jpg
bump for crits

[What Happened to the Letters?]

heyre both ugly, dont make your letters get fatter liek that myl, keep em the same width like make a regular liek letter dont make it liek out you know dude

[SCR]

Originally posted by What Happened to the Letters?@Sep 3 2006, 12:35 PM
heyre both ugly, dont make your letters get fatter liek that myl, keep em the same width like make a regular liek letter dont make it liek out you know dude
I know mine is ugly, thats why Im asking for crits and for help.

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by What Happened to the Letters?@Sep 3 2006, 12:35 PM
heyre both ugly, dont make your letters get fatter liek that myl, keep em the same width like make a regular liek letter dont make it liek out you know dude
...mine?

[TricksForKids]

tryin out phers for the pherz/phers battle, comments?

Peace&#33;

http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/1088/phersvk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[aces]

The S doesn&#39;t really seem to fit in with the rest of it. I think it&#39;s because it has such a narrow line in it.

[ados]

i dont like those two dots, in the H and S

[bouncingsoul]

Tricksforkids, it looks good, but I hate the H. It just looks horrible to me... I actually like the S though

[alive]

i love ur style tricks. maybe u could give a some crits on my 5min pen freestyle for it? ill do a nicer one later.
thanks

in fact, maybe every1 can give some crits?
thanks again

haha this is new&#33; used to just be the url. couldnt name it. o boy. what fun. ummmm. . . pen freestyle pherz picture&#33; yay&#33; ladida ladida. yada yada blah blah. haha. priceless. (http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02638.jpg)

peace.

[nerdx]

the P and the R are right on, but deffinitly the the E is kinda off.
the top of the E is super fat but im sure you noticed that.
its deffinitly a nice style. would like to see it done right with color.

[uhhh]

hey guys look at this van i hit&#33;
http://i1.tinypic.com/281hs44.jpg

[MEBone]

lol

[AoAssis]

LOL PMSL ROFL LMOA SFMOLAOLAOSM &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;11111ONEEEEE4EEERR111

[alera]

i forgot all about thoes truck things. nice job :D

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/8215/0903061913aob7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres some thing simple that i am working on Critz? i might paint it soon.

[aces]

The R looks too much like a B and on the A&#39;s the thing on the left of them are not good. Lose those and make it the same width throught the letter.

[funky monky]

tell me wat u think&#33;&#33; crits.........
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/7523/euroattemptnu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[meetermaid]

funkymonky, it&#39;s not cool to bite. at least give credit....

[magic nyc]

Alera, The " L E " flow looks really good.. we must trade some time/

[eype]

just messing around with making characs out of words
of course the letters may have been comprimised to make the charac better but tell me what u think

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1331/dscn6026ne4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[minesweep]

i dont think that&#39;s relly working out but just my opinion

[d_g]

Originally posted by eype@Sep 4 2006, 01:39 PM
just messing around with making characs out of words
of course the letters may have been comprimised to make the charac better but tell me what u think

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1331/dscn6026ne4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I think the letter structure is a little weird but overall I think as a drawing it looks good.

[alive]

Originally posted by alive@Sep 3 2006, 05:39 PM
i love ur style tricks. maybe u could give a some crits on my 5min pen freestyle for it? ill do a nicer one later.
thanks

in fact, maybe every1 can give some crits?
thanks again

haha this is new&#33; used to just be the url. couldnt name it. o boy. what fun. ummmm. . . pen freestyle pherz picture&#33; yay&#33; ladida ladida. yada yada blah blah. haha. priceless. (http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02638.jpg)

peace.
how dumb am i? huh? accidently clicked da link button nstead of da pic button n didnt realize. hense the retardedness. my apologies.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02638.jpg

[minesweep]

looks pretty good, but if your gonna sketch like that do it in pencil so you can erase those lines, work on your H a little more though

just a quick idea, let me know what you think
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/5585/dscn0247ws2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[alive]

somehow, things never seem to turn out as well for me when theyre in pencil. i should though. i think its because the cloudyness from the pen lines kind of hides my lack of skill.


now i think ur sleet? is that right? handy looks nice, but the throw needs work. first of all, darken ur lines to make it easier to see, and then spread ur letters out a bit, ur hiding them 2 much.


peace.

[minesweep]

it&#39;s delv, and okay ill do that, thanks

[beefgerky]

Originally posted by eype@Sep 3 2006, 08:39 PM
just messing around with making characs out of words
of course the letters may have been comprimised to make the charac better but tell me what u think

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1331/dscn6026ne4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
DIE59.

[uhhh]

Originally posted by uhhh@Sep 3 2006, 06:16 PM
hey guys look at this van i hit&#33;
http://i1.tinypic.com/281hs44.jpg
god damn i need a new camera..

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 3 2006, 01:48 PM
tryin out phers for the pherz/phers battle, comments?

Peace&#33;

http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/1088/phersvk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for some crits? :D

[minesweep]

you need to work on them letters

[uhhh]

i&#39;ll guess that was directed towards me.

and i know. i&#39;m starting to not like my letters again.

[minesweep]

ok i was just saying
do you have a link to that print out by any chance?

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 3 2006, 09:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 3 2006, 09:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 3 2006, 01:48 PM
tryin out phers for the pherz/phers battle, comments?

Peace&#33;

http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/1088/phersvk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for some crits? :D [/b][/quote]
new page

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/55e861e7.jpg

bump for critz once again

[minesweep]

hot as always regs

[beke]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 3 2006, 09:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 3 2006, 09:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 3 2006, 01:48 PM
tryin out phers for the pherz/phers battle, comments?

Peace&#33;

http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/1088/phersvk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for some crits? :D [/b][/quote]
uhh the H is really hard to see I find...some of the letters are pretty un-structured. in particular the H and the Z, although i get the feeling this is what you were going for, id go with something more legible. I like your P though

[TricksForKids]

thanks for the crits beke, but there is no Z :D

[beke]

LOL wow then the S my bad i just had a hard time reading that one :P I do like your vanishing point though


**oh yea..whats that random t in a rectangle thing????***

[alive]

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02638.jpg


hope u dont mind, bump. do u think a clean version of it would make it to tip-top? just curious, be honest, (as if u wouldnt) thanks.


peace.

[meetermaid]

the e and the r are kinda wierd, i don&#39;t know what it is about them but they just kinda bug me. the p h and z are all good though. i remember when you had the grodiest letters. cheers, good progress.

[sky 5]

tricksforkids - thats fin dope man . . . the vertical line of the P could be alil smaller to amtch the rest . . . the all red is dope color choice but running a thin black forcefield outline on the letters might look even better against the red lined 3d . . .

[beke]

Originally posted by alive@Sep 3 2006, 10:32 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02638.jpg


hope u dont mind, bump. do u think a clean version of it would make it to tip-top? just curious, be honest, (as if u wouldnt) thanks.


peace.
i find the e doesnt go with the rest of the sketch..it looks too round and out of place compared to the other letters, but im feelin the rest of the sketch

[uhhh]

Originally posted by minesweep@Sep 3 2006, 10:02 PM
do you have a link to that print out by any chance?
somebody dropped a link for that one a 5 or 6 more in toy story. just go back a few pages ;)

[magic nyc]

http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5903/1223pt3.jpg

[d_g]

Originally posted by uhhh+Sep 4 2006, 04:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (uhhh @ Sep 4 2006, 04:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-minesweep@Sep 3 2006, 10:02 PM
do you have a link to that print out by any chance?
somebody dropped a link for that one a 5 or 6 more in toy story. just go back a few pages ;) [/b][/quote]
It was me. Have a look through my posts, I can&#39;t remember the link off by heart.

[minesweep]

ok thanks

[myl]

this piece is a work in progress...just SE for now...F&#39;s are kinda tricky to pull off nicely

crits comments and suggestions are very appreciated

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0175.jpg

[magic nyc]

Originally posted by magic nyc@Sep 4 2006, 12:44 AM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5903/1223pt3.jpg
MYL, feels very sky but its good

bump to bottom of page

[The Stig]

that&#39;s too cluttered try making the extension smaller than the letter structure maybe

[myl]

thanks guys....i def see what you mean about being cluttered

and magic...is it like im biting? cause i def dont wanna bite on people especially sky

[uhhh]

i don&#39;t know about him. but to me it just feels kinda like sky&#39;s stuff. not biting just same feel to it. get it? :huh:

[doomsayer]

this piece is a work in progress...just SE for now...F&#39;s are kinda tricky to pull off nicely

crits comments and suggestions are very appreciated

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0175.jpg

I don like all the arrows man



any crits b4 i try paintin this?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/cc33d4ed.jpg

[nephs ike201]

loose the little pointson the tops of the letters....other than that...shit looks aight

[DoMiNo]

user posted image

Comments and criticism without sarcasm please&#33; biggrin.gif

if u in NYC.. u would have to change ur name cuz there is already a SCR out here.. just trying to tell u before u get all nice and shyt and den get into sum beef and have to change becuz of ur name

[pace1]

truth-no dont lose the points just make them come straight to the left of the letters.

[myl]

yeah the points look cool

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by magic nyc+Sep 4 2006, 12:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (magic nyc @ Sep 4 2006, 12:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Sep 4 2006, 12:44 AM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5903/1223pt3.jpg
MYL, feels very sky but its good

bump to bottom of page [/b][/quote]
shits dope&#33;

[weldo]

fukin love those bombs very fresh magic nyc
anway if could help please sorry for the messyness only had biro
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/8366/mobilephotos001mp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/5688/1125461424lay0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[MEBone]

dude ur sick

[myl]

hot shit man

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by weldo@Sep 4 2006, 03:02 AM
fukin love those bombs very fresh magic nyc
anway if could help please sorry for the messyness only had biro
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/8366/mobilephotos001mp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/5688/1125461424lay0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
that shits nice dude&#33;&#33;

[doomsayer]

ok, i, trying to develop a peice, i tryed really hard to keep my letters structured, i think it turned out ok, but what do you think... worth working on or should i just start from simpleness again crits appreciated.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/bd22c17f.jpg

[DeathRow]

http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/9618/fdsghs6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Just did this, mines extremely messsy omg, no exscuses but i did have a thick pen which made it a little harder but yeah i am shitt sketcher... Anyway can I get some crits

cheers

[myl]

the letter structure is poor...its just wack in general, id say continue doing block/straight letters till you get the feel of how the letters flow

[funky monky]

Originally posted by meetermaid@Sep 3 2006, 08:31 PM
funkymonky, it&#39;s not cool to bite. at least give credit....
who the fuck did i bite <_<

[alive]

truth-go simpler. ur coming along, but dont u da re try to connect your letters yet&#33; or rock them so hard. work on keeping your letters strokes the same width. the next step will be adding more curves.

deathrow- u really need to take it simple. stop connecting, extending, arrowing, and i have a good feeling, biting. go back to basics. not blocks, but straight letters.


anyway thanks for my crits to those who gave. heres another sketch of it, pen freestyle with red sharpie fill. more crits would make my day&#33; (ran outta room for the Z, wasnt rele thinking what i started it)

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02639.jpg

btw, can some1 better then me, tell me what i should be working on in particular? or how i can make my letters work together more? thanks soooo much.

peace.

[*~ANZIO~*]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 12:01 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0175.jpg
use that style for the pherz battle, i like it

[funky monky]

yeah man taht style is pretty dope jsut dont put as much arrows and ur set

[bouncingsoul]

The S is sick, but I&#39;m not really likin&#39; the E. Make the middle two bars squished together so it has that same kinda feel as the S

:edit: weldo- They&#39;re sick, but I don&#39;t like your N&#39;s at all

[pace1]

doom- the first t is good th second should be cleaned up . the R shouldnt have that line through it on the right leg. loose the conections to the r and others. no extention on the U and make the thickness of the U smaller and the smae witdh as the t

alive- make the widths all the same...just thicken up the P and no line through the R on the right leg. and redue int pencil and then color to make it clean. but for a pen freestyle its pretty good. also try and make the letters fit together more.

[sky 5]

Originally posted by magic nyc+Sep 4 2006, 12:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (magic nyc @ Sep 4 2006, 12:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Sep 4 2006, 12:44 AM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5903/1223pt3.jpg
MYL, feels very sky but its good

bump to bottom of page [/b][/quote]
bump for magic nyc . .

myl - nice "se" sketch . . .you aint bitin my style .. you just did a classic semi-wildstyle that half the writers on the planet do . . . nice job, good use of the extensions to eat up some of the open sapce without havin them distract/take away/or cover up the letter flow . ..push that style hard and you should see some real progress soon . . . i use addons to take up unwanted empty space and if im lookin to reinforce my flow . . . i like how all your arrow extensions shoot horizontal (i do that alot), it gives good contrast/flow to the dominant vertical lines of the letters . . .

weldo - dopeness man . . .i hope you stick around and drop some more . . .

[Fosale!]

Got bored on vacation so i did pen freestyle rollers/blockbusters for random people and one piece
Pesk
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/5539/a9179eeaaq2.jpg
Gerk-messed up on the R
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/9121/53bd6f28kj6.jpg
Sec/Ebk
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/3219/dd85561bqj0.jpg
I did one for Cezr but i cant find it and I tried a Evex one but I couldn&#39;t get a good V or X
Piece
http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/7525/7f969eb5ug8.jpg

[whoarethereal evil]

hahah tht was nice of u^^


http://img438.imageshack.us/img438/4669/img0229re6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits ideas etc


ps i know its huge

im lazy :D

[Fosale!]

resize.

[whoarethereal evil]

http://img438.imageshack.us/img438/4669/img0229re6.th.jpg (http://img438.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0229re6.jpg)

[myl]

i like the style, but i havent a clue as to what it says...poeh? poek?


ive been workin on the sketch some more...got the FT part down...i know it still needs more work and i can already guess youre gonna say "too many arrows" so im probably gonna take some out

crits, suggestions, advice anyone?


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0176-1.jpg

[whoarethereal evil]

thts gna b dope bt yes on the 2many arrows

an it sez poet

[alive]

Originally posted by alive@Sep 4 2006, 10:51 AM

heres another sketch of it, pen freestyle with red sharpie fill. more crits would make my day&#33; (ran outta room for the Z, wasnt rele thinking what i started it)

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02639.jpg

btw, can some1 better then me, tell me what i should be working on in particular? or how i can make my letters work together more? thanks soooo much.

peace.
bump&#33;




myl&#33; damn, am i thinking of the wrong person, have u gotten sooooo much better. seriously tho am i? i think i used to help u when u were fairly whack, trying this wierd semi-wildstyle that you couldnt pull off. i helped u smooth it all out n such. im gonna look back. lol perhaps im just an idiot?
yeah tho, its a bit busy, chill with the arrows n such, but i like it.

perhaps u can give me some crits?
ANYONE?

peace.

[myl]

thanks guys...and alive yeah youre right im that dude that used to be super wack...ive just been sketchin my ass off usin simples till i got the feel of how the letters flow

as for your pher, its got potential....im not really diggin the extension off the P...the top of the R looks wierd cause its like a little ledge...i dunno...i suck at giving crits



just wait till you all see my version of "pherz" ;)

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by funky monky+Sep 4 2006, 07:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (funky monky @ Sep 4 2006, 07:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by meetermaid@Sep 3 2006, 08:31 PM
funkymonky, it&#39;s not cool to bite. at least give credit....
who the fuck did i bite <_< [/b]
<!--QuoteBegin-HARE2@Sep 1 2006, 09:26 PM
couple more freestyles. there all i have time for .

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/6846/scan10152pq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and one for soup

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/2825/scan10151ri4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)[/quote]


pics are kinda big but whatever.

[alive]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 02:08 PM
thanks guys...and alive yeah youre right im that dude that used to be super wack...ive just been sketchin my ass off usin simples till i got the feel of how the letters flow

as for your pher, its got potential....im not really diggin the extension off the P...the top of the R looks wierd cause its like a little ledge...i dunno...i suck at giving crits



just wait till you all see my version of "pherz" ;)
wow&#33; im really impressed. im a little bit proud, and mostly jealous. u must have sketched soooo much. o well, school is starting soon, which means ill be sketching a lot more. someday. . . . ur style does remind me of sky5 tho. but i dont think ur biting.

well im working on a nice version of the pherz sketch. pencil first this time. i think for the first time in a long time im gonna enter the battle. do u think ill make tip top?


thanks,
peace.

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Sep 4 2006, 12:26 PM
Got bored on vacation so i did pen freestyle rollers/blockbusters for random people and one piece
Pesk
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/5539/a9179eeaaq2.jpg
Gerk-messed up on the R
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/9121/53bd6f28kj6.jpg
Sec/Ebk
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/3219/dd85561bqj0.jpg
I did one for Cezr but i cant find it and I tried a Evex one but I couldn&#39;t get a good V or X
Piece
http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/7525/7f969eb5ug8.jpg
bump for crits

[myl]

Originally posted by alive+Sep 4 2006, 02:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Sep 4 2006, 02:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-myl@Sep 4 2006, 02:08 PM
thanks guys...and alive yeah youre right im that dude that used to be super wack...ive just been sketchin my ass off usin simples till i got the feel of how the letters flow

as for your pher, its got potential....im not really diggin the extension off the P...the top of the R looks wierd cause its like a little ledge...i dunno...i suck at giving crits



just wait till you all see my version of "pherz" ;)
wow&#33; im really impressed. im a little bit proud, and mostly jealous. u must have sketched soooo much. o well, school is starting soon, which means ill be sketching a lot more. someday. . . . ur style does remind me of sky5 tho. but i dont think ur biting.

well im working on a nice version of the pherz sketch. pencil first this time. i think for the first time in a long time im gonna enter the battle. do u think ill make tip top?


thanks,
peace. [/b][/quote]
yeah you could probably make it

this is gonna be my first battle ever so i cant wait to finish this sketch up

[nerdx]

myl letters are fuckin bangin.
like you said loose some arrows, sick ass style

[myl]

thanks dude, glad to see that im progressing finally

[whoarethereal evil]

Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Sep 4 2006, 01:29 PM
http://img438.imageshack.us/img438/4669/img0229re6.th.jpg (http://img438.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0229re6.jpg)
im gan b gay an bump 4 feedback :D

[myl]

now that i know it says poet i see it, but that T is wack...looks like an L or K...id lose the last bubble thing like this:

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7237/poetthrowiezh8.jpg

[Xsjadox]

http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/6981/img1853my0.jpg

[myl]

yay rollerbooters, i have xsjado skates

[Xsjadox]

I`m too lazy to skate anymore.. I need help.. I`m too lazy to even get paint lately... Female done gone fucked me around and made me even lazier... but yeah fruitbooters for the win.

[beefgerky]

i got some stockwells, gettin mad dusty in my closet, haha.

i need to start skating again..

[wordzcantexpress]

http://img327.imageshack.us/img327/2453/blackbook001vi2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



Something for the phers battle I didn&#39;t go with

[meetermaid]

i kinda like the handbag idea... but you definitely need to work on the letters more, specifically the h, e, and z.

[wordzcantexpress]

LOL that&#39;s exactly what I was thinking. The h,e and z just don&#39;t match very well

[myl]

just a teaser as to what im gonna have for the battle...

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/4123/img0179ew5.jpg

[bouncingsoul]

Is that like a new version of Prismas or something?

[whoarethereal evil]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 03:50 PM
now that i know it says poet i see it, but that T is wack...looks like an L or K...id lose the last bubble thing like this:

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7237/poetthrowiezh8.jpg
hahah cheers dude

but tht wasnt part of the letter its just like a lil bubble

holds crew name or sumthing

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 04:25 PM
just a teaser as to what im gonna have for the battle...

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/4123/img0179ew5.jpg
that is sick man, i really like those balls, nice&#33;

[FEN the HEN]

they are nice balls

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/86105ec5.jpg

Trying extensions...?

[imported_Bes_one]

Comments or critz????
1
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/3307/pict0624yx8.th.jpg (http://img473.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0624yx8.jpg)

2
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4972/pict0625el6.th.jpg (http://img228.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0625el6.jpg)

3
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/6360/pict0626cd8.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0626cd8.jpg)

4
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/6963/pict0627ch4.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0627ch4.jpg)

5
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7455/pict0628hu5.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0628hu5.jpg)

6
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/5269/pict0629ar4.th.jpg
7
http://img458.imageshack.us/img458/6863/pict0630pa0.th.jpg (http://img458.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0630pa0.jpg)

8
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/355/pict0632to7.th.jpg (http://img373.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0632to7.jpg)

[myl]

back to blocks

[meetermaid]

Originally posted by doomsayer+Sep 4 2006, 02:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (doomsayer @ Sep 4 2006, 02:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-myl@Sep 4 2006, 04:25 PM
just a teaser as to what im gonna have for the battle...

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/4123/img0179ew5.jpg
that is sick man, i really like those balls, nice&#33; [/b][/quote]
i bet you like those balls..

myl, the erz is really good, but the p and h don&#39;t really match, 2 different styles

but really those balls are quite nice and shapely..

bouncinsoul, get rid of a lot of the little bits and extensions and shit, you can barely see the letters through all the add-ons.

[uhhh]

myl-i really like that p. itd be reallllllly fuckin good if you could style the whole piece like that.

[aces]

I wish I wasn&#39;t too lazy to finish coloring my PHERZ entry. I&#39;m just like bored and don&#39;t feel like drawing. I don&#39;t know why but it sucks.

Random I know but I saw the entries and decided to mention why mine isn&#39;t going to be there.

[myl]

well heres my entry for the PHERZ battle....i kinda hurried on it cause i just started it today...wish i wouldve gotta a jump start on it right away

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5429/pherztoybattlekm4.jpg

[Seek139]

floating pool ball?

[myl]

youre god damn right

you know it does say 666 right

[aces]

I&#39;d say your letters would look better if you made them thicker. Also the 3-D is good but could be less thick.

[Seek139]

i know but floating pool ball with incorrect shadow?

[myl]

yeah, its meant to be floating, the shadow looks fine

its like the light source is above it

[meetermaid]

it doesn&#39;t really make sense if the light source for the pool balls differ than the one for the letters.

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/86105ec5.jpg

I&#39;m a crit whore

[myl]

true. oh well too late...

crits on this stupid thing again? i reworked a few things here and there


http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/969/img01063jh7.jpg


think i could post this in the big boys forum just to see what i get out of it?

[bouncingsoul]

I don&#39;t like your E and your F, but the S and the T are sweet. Also, I don&#39;t like addons overlapping letters for some reason. I prefer them underlapping the letters or just going around them.

[myl]

good call on the add ons...but as for the E and F, its all i could come up with that i thought looked best...thank you everyone for there input and crits

[bouncingsoul]

I think the only thing with the E is that middle part... I think I said it before but just put those two bars together instead of having the space between them... I just hate that for some reason. The F, I don&#39;t like the left bar. It&#39;s the way that it kinda bends one way halfway through the letter and then bends another way... I like it when it&#39;s just one solid bar going straight down or following the same curve or shape, if you get what I mean

[myl]

alright i played around with the E and F some and this is what i got...i already like the E a lot more...not sure about the F, i hate that letter anyway

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0107-1.jpg

[bouncingsoul]

Yep, that E looks better to me now. If you don&#39;t like a letter then change your name... I went through a good 15-20 names before I found one and stuck with it

[myl]

thanks for your help dude

i dunno, i like the name seft, i like how it flows and i like the sound...its just that i have a little trouble with F&#39;s

[bouncingsoul]

sepht? Haha, I actually used to write sepha

[myl]

haha i never even thought of that

[bouncingsoul]

Sketch it out and see if you like it... When you change your name you can&#39;t go all wildstyle again though, you have to start from simples again, but the good thing is you progress faster with the new name because you get fresh new ideas and mostly because you&#39;ve done the addon stuff before...

No flicks=bad

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/86105ec5.jpg

[myl]

dude im not even gonna lie, that shit is ill

[bouncingsoul]

Haha really? I do agree it is too busy and I REALLY fucked up the 3d on the right of the A... Just realized that, but yeah... btw school started last Wednesday so expect a lot more shitty 5-10 minute pen freestyles and a lot less blackbook sketches

[meetermaid]

there&#39;s an a? :ph34r: what&#39;s it say?

[bouncingsoul]

Hexa... I thought most people knew my name by now... Oh well

[whoarethereal evil]

ye a at the end if im nt mistaken

reads hexa?

[bouncingsoul]

Yep, it does... Also, I really have to start getting up.. I haven&#39;t written on anything or even put a sticker up at all... I&#39;m trying to get some paint and thinner but I keep forgetting. I have at least 3 empty kiwis too... Also, I&#39;ve been trying some new characters and they look a lot like Invader Zim stuff... It&#39;s OK though cuz that show was fucking sick (in a good way)

[meetermaid]

yes, invader zim was THE SHIT. he&#39;s my hero.

but anyway, may i suggest you change the bottom of the e a bit so it&#39;s not so flat... and get rid of at least a FEW of the extensions, like the one&#39;s on the tops of the letters, it&#39;s soo crowded...

[bouncingsoul]

Fosho, I will... That E is a little bitch though. I always hate trying to figure what to do with the flat bottom of the E cuz it just doesn&#39;t looks that good and it&#39;s hard to do anything with it, but when I try to change it up the rest of it looks fucked up... I&#39;ll try though

[nerdx]

hexa looking dope as always. for the bottom of the E slighlty curve it down twards the bottom of the A, that might flow a bit better.
As for it beeing too clutterd, im not really sure it deffinitly looks good, but I think its all up to how you color it.

keep it up shits lookin good.

[bouncingsoul]

I don&#39;t get what you mean by curving it toward the a...?

Thanks though, everyone

[The Fallen Slave of Atlantis]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 07:44 PM
true. oh well too late...

crits on this stupid thing again? i reworked a few things here and there


http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/969/img01063jh7.jpg


think i could post this in the big boys forum just to see what i get out of it?
thats pretty tight i love the s man.

[bouncingsoul]

Oh, myl, in the T, that right angle thing showing the arrow, you should make it a little smaller... Like dont make it reach the sides of the T, just show the corner and that should be enough... I think

Once again

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/86105ec5.jpg

[beke]

the ever present criticism..go simpler for now its just a bit jumbled... HEXT? in anycase get rid of osme of the extensions on your X the like ovals with the triangle head and yeah..but its not bad, definately shows alot of promise

[bouncingsoul]

Hexa, not hext... I should include a handie or type a little note whenever I post something haha. My A got a little screwed up anyway

[beke]

ohh shit i see the A now, i thought the thin line extension thingy on it was an arm of a t lol

[bouncingsoul]

Haha, alright

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1047.jpg

[bouncingsoul]

That&#39;s actually the first Venom sketch I&#39;ve seen from you... The V looks like an N... A very dope N I might add, but yeah. That&#39;s about it. Add some 3d and it&#39;d be bangin

[beefgerky]

nice

[Necro-]

it looks great hexa, i dont think it&#39;s too cluttered at all. i do think it would look a little better if the lettters werent angled upward tho. keep workin on that

[myl]

ok i think i got it pretty much perfected now...


http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7408/img0112dg2.jpg

i would prefer crits from people who know what theyre talking about, like hexa and such

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1048.jpg

[TricksForKids]

Work on that V and E, make em bigger, and a little extra flava, hearts nice, nice fat roller material,

Peace

[alive]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 10:23 PM
ok i think i got it pretty much perfected now...


http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7408/img0112dg2.jpg

i would prefer crits from people who know what theyre talking about, like hexa and such
haha&#33; just curious, tell me the truth. am i still in this elite group? haha. damn uve improved. but one this sketch and your pherz sketch are so different. i would say they&#39;re diff ppl. is that just cuz u spent such different amounts of time on them?

the bottom of you S extends down just slightly too far. and i would bring you F down a bit, just extend it. and bring your T down, but bend it back like the other letters to make it flow. u know what i mean? the vertical strokes of the S, E, and F bend like ( but the T bends like ), the other way see?

helpful i hope?
just ideas,


peace.

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Sep 4 2006, 03:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Sep 4 2006, 03:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Sep 4 2006, 12:26 PM
Got bored on vacation so i did pen freestyle rollers/blockbusters for random people and one piece
Pesk
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/5539/a9179eeaaq2.jpg
Gerk-messed up on the R
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/9121/53bd6f28kj6.jpg
Sec/Ebk
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/3219/dd85561bqj0.jpg
I did one for Cezr but i cant find it and I tried a Evex one but I couldn&#39;t get a good V or X
Piece
http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/7525/7f969eb5ug8.jpg
bump for crits [/b][/quote]
critss?

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 10:23 PM
ok i think i got it pretty much perfected now...


http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7408/img0112dg2.jpg

i would prefer crits from people who know what theyre talking about, like hexa and such
remeber when u started..and sucked dick.

[bouncingsoul]

Wierd, I just say what I think looks good haha. I&#39;m actually taking that as a compliment, thanks man.

Nicc- Your handie is good but it seems a little too plain for me... But about the piece, pretty much what Tricks said. The V should look more like a V, like make the bottom part pointy instead of like a U