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MisterVee
09-01-2006, 11:23 PM
http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/1826/0901061652bs9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/545/0830061654ar4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/4033/0831060854hv3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9369/0831060855anx3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/2162/0831061257ue6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/3318/0830061653zc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Fosale!
09-02-2006, 12:23 AM
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/9220/p1010173oq9.jpg

Fosale!
09-02-2006, 12:23 AM
fucked up on the S
pen freebie
C was too hard for me that early in the mornin
Sorry for the double post

MEBone
09-02-2006, 01:35 AM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/3342/1033909403305157440eg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bored crits? and no i dont write pherz its another entry for the battle, possibly

Seek139
09-02-2006, 02:21 AM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/6799/dsc02215ci2.th.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02215ci2.jpg)
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/9712/dsc02217vv7.th.jpg (http://img174.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02217vv7.jpg)
decided to stop coloring in for now...i need to get better letter structure and flow comment plz guys :D

NICCSACC
09-02-2006, 03:05 AM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1037.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1036.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1035.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1034.jpg
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1033.jpg

LegoMan
09-02-2006, 03:13 AM
Niccsacc get out of this forum goddamit. you dont belong here. you're not a toy ;)

Seek139
09-02-2006, 03:13 AM
i would agree your bridging the gap move on up...

LegoMan
09-02-2006, 03:14 AM
PS.... big ups to NORML man... im a member myself doggie

MEBone
09-02-2006, 03:32 AM
Originally posted by MEBone@Sep 2 2006, 12:35 AM
http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/3342/1033909403305157440eg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

bored crits? and no i dont write pherz its another entry for the battle, possibly
crits?

Fosale!
09-02-2006, 03:43 AM
Originally posted by Fosale!@Sep 1 2006, 11:23 PM
http://img224.imageshack.us/img224/9220/p1010173oq9.jpg
pen freebie
crits?

didnt do the C bc it was giving me trouble

si0n
09-02-2006, 03:53 AM
MEBone - make all your letters the same size and style. also try make your letters closer together.

fosale - define the letters a bit more

Fosale!
09-02-2006, 04:07 AM
you cant tell its a S and a E...

ESKI
09-02-2006, 04:08 AM
I'm new, I'm eski, and here's one of my sketches :rolleyes:

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c336/strikerx4/Picture001.jpg

si0n
09-02-2006, 04:16 AM
it threw me off that you used 2 colors, also im real baked :P

Fosale!
09-02-2006, 04:23 AM
i didnt use 2 colors
rofl.

ESKI
09-02-2006, 04:27 AM
you have tooooo many swoopdie doops in your letters take some out and it'll be straight.

Seek139
09-02-2006, 04:32 AM
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/8392/dsc02220ge7.th.jpg (http://img167.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02220ge7.jpg)
another simple critz?

Fosale!
09-02-2006, 04:38 AM
majorly ffeelin this.

-kosr-
09-02-2006, 06:55 AM
posted the coloured, ugly with add ons version of this, heres the original that i was to cheap to colour.. (most of my markers are dry)
http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/192/kosr6ey7.png

unlike last time, can i get some comments on this shit?

some_one
09-02-2006, 07:02 AM
I like that kosr. Just i think the lines that go thru the R kind of killed it.
http://photos.yafro.com/pics3/i/20060902/04/c/5/3/c53129cd306b4b80fa918acd4abd559c200609020_full.jpg
crits please?

Seek139
09-02-2006, 07:46 AM
any comments? http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9245/dsc02221tr5.th.jpg (http://img301.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02221tr5.jpg)

ESKI
09-02-2006, 07:48 AM
diggin' the techdeck lol

Seek139
09-02-2006, 08:00 AM
Originally posted by Seek139@Sep 2 2006, 06:46 AM
any comments? http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9245/dsc02221tr5.th.jpg (http://img301.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02221tr5.jpg)
the CR1TZ!!!!...and yes i'm into those but i handboard more

force
09-02-2006, 08:41 AM
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/7587/2307061840wr7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

not finished... just wondering what you thought of the structure....

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/2995/0109062345kz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

...

Skeam
09-02-2006, 08:52 AM
Originally posted by Skeam@Sep 1 2006, 01:39 AM
something i did in graphics today... new style and i tried to make it flow a bit.

i havent been sketching nearly as much as what i used to lately cause i been riding my 50 heaps and i mstartin to get pretty serious so havent had much time to sketch.

crits pleeease
http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/5811/hpim2115mh4.jpg
bit late but cheers for the crits obseen

bumpin for some crits... should i keep this style or fuck it off and keep going on what i was doing before?

cheers
matt

Skeam
09-02-2006, 08:55 AM
sorry force, i dumped my shit right after yours without critique...

i think the letters need to be defined a bit more in the peice i cant really tell what it says. maybe work on simples and letter structure a bit more and dont make it so complicated... just my opinion mate

those characs have some mad potential though

aces
09-02-2006, 09:25 AM
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4931/picture005le5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Crits?


Skeam - I don't really like your E or M. Your 3-D is good and your handy is sick.

Skeam
09-02-2006, 09:35 AM
cheers mate, i think your peice may look a little better if the letters were a little closer together, more so the last 3 letters then the first 2, and you focussed on keeping all the letters the same size and in a straight line and maybe work on your E and R a bit (if thats an R... sorry :P)

aces
09-02-2006, 09:42 AM
It is in a straight line but I see what you mean with the E and the letters being closer together. I really don't feel like changing it so I'll get to coloring. Also what do you think of like a lime green and a bright pink for a color scheme?

Skeam
09-02-2006, 10:03 AM
not sure about the colours but i sure can agree with you when u say you dont feel like changing it... i hate it when you know you have fucked something and cant be fucked changing it... and then cant be fucked doing another skecth... meh one day i wont be lazy

South-Pole
09-02-2006, 10:13 AM
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/SSA40152.jpg

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y191/HSL/Sauce%20L/SSA40074.jpg


critz :(?

Seek139
09-02-2006, 10:20 AM
simple's is my suggestion...if you can rock b-busters so far...i think if u can rock a b-buster in a blackie then go rock it on the lines

South-Pole
09-02-2006, 10:22 AM
^lol,,thanks for the feed

but i got sick of blocks so i decided to rock throwies but thanks

Skeam
09-02-2006, 10:36 AM
thats not rocking throwies mate... a throwie would usually be one colour fill and one colour outline. and maybe a drop shaddow... and a heap of other shit that would make it completely different to that

Seek139
09-02-2006, 10:37 AM
go ahead do what your into

http://img450.imageshack.us/img450/23/dsc02222we3.th.jpg (http://img450.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02222we3.jpg)
personally i didnt like how this job came out the structure i feel is getting more flowed with me more bending...trying to get more form next i assume i'll get some layering going

aces
09-02-2006, 12:49 PM
I'd say lose the extension off of the Z and the one off the I to the left is a little awkward. Other than that the coloring is good and the 3-D is good.

Nyc Sno
09-02-2006, 01:03 PM
DAMMIT EDITTT

SCR
09-02-2006, 01:19 PM
Well, uhh, this is my umm 1st (technically, its the 2nd, the 1st was was too wild and unreadable :P) *wild style-like* piece.
Constructive comments and criticism please!
LIEKTHX.
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3803/scrwilddu4.jpg

alera
09-02-2006, 01:33 PM
^^^ yo man i aint beefin or nothin but go simpiler, i know thats what everyone says but they say it
cous its true. Trust me i ust to do the same thing and my style dident progress untill i learned to go simple. :) that being said its way better that my first one if i can find it i'll post a pic.

kaoruone
09-02-2006, 01:45 PM
http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/7335/004io9.th.jpg (http://img372.imageshack.us/my.php?image=004io9.jpg)
This is my piece its really simple.could i please get some comments and criticism

lost_for_evex
09-02-2006, 02:08 PM
syno..

Nyc Sno
09-02-2006, 02:24 PM
omg that was so funny

lost_for_evex
09-02-2006, 03:24 PM
the fact that you cant write?

Nyc Sno
09-02-2006, 03:25 PM
yaa....

beke
09-02-2006, 03:28 PM
charac I did a few mins ago, crits?

http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/6222/charac1sv8.jpg

NICCSACC
09-02-2006, 03:36 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1039.jpg

trashhh
09-02-2006, 03:56 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40572-1.jpg

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/STA40579.jpg

ados
09-02-2006, 04:05 PM
lookin good trash, color them. i like your style you got goin.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan-1.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/augustcamp066.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0001-2.jpg

force
09-02-2006, 04:11 PM
Originally posted by force@Sep 2 2006, 12:41 PM
http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/7587/2307061840wr7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

not finished... just wondering what you thought of the structure....

http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/2995/0109062345kz0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

...


crit?

btw ados.. that black tags hella nice...

-MaCKiE-
09-02-2006, 04:22 PM
dope dog man

nerdx
09-02-2006, 04:23 PM
zin, looks nice. just work on the 3d seems to be off a bit in some spots.
colors are right on

fosale, think it looks pretty good. add in the rest of the letters and get that shit colord with a 3d

whoarethereal evil
09-02-2006, 04:33 PM
them stickers are hottt^^^

whoarethereal evil
09-02-2006, 04:35 PM
gaaaaargh i hate the new pages


i think there nicsaccs stix i liked hhhaa

RepUrSet
09-02-2006, 06:07 PM
ok... i THINK :unsure: i did better then my other things i posted up on here...crits on it would be great
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6592/picture83xz9.th.jpg (http://img212.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture83xz9.jpg)
^^^^^^
thumbnail

\(SIN)/[again]
09-02-2006, 06:08 PM
http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/htct.jpg
^
HTC

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/Sinpiece.jpg
^
sin

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/crowbattle1.jpg
^
This was suppose to be for a name trade battle me and my friend crow were doing for fun and practice, but he never got around to doing his.

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a257/sintagz/Sketches/sinsketch23.jpg
^
sin...

beke
09-02-2006, 06:11 PM
Originally posted by beke@Sep 2 2006, 02:28 PM
charac I did a few mins ago, crits?

http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/6222/charac1sv8.jpg
bump for crits

MEBone
09-02-2006, 06:12 PM
sin-dood go back to simples and blocks n hsit, u need some serious letter structure

nerdx
09-02-2006, 06:21 PM
Originally posted by RepUrSet@Sep 2 2006, 05:07 PM
ok... i THINK :unsure: i did better then my other things i posted up on here...crits on it would be great
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6592/picture83xz9.th.jpg (http://img212.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture83xz9.jpg)
^^^^^^
thumbnail
think it looks pretty good.
work on the G it seems to be the most off.

\(SIN)/[again]
09-02-2006, 06:28 PM
Originally posted by MEBone@Sep 2 2006, 05:12 PM
sin-dood go back to simples and blocks n hsit, u need some serious letter structure
Normally I don't ask questions, I try to figure out shit on my own. But i've been told this many times, I just don't get it... Letter structure I mean... do you mean like fonts? Basically every letter should be similiar kind of thing?

ados
09-02-2006, 06:31 PM
Originally posted by ados@Sep 2 2006, 03:05 PM
lookin good trash, color them. i like your style you got goin.

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan-1.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/augustcamp066.jpg

http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/dosar/scan0001-2.jpg
tryin some different styles..

aces
09-02-2006, 06:36 PM
Really liking it ados. The throwie (bottom left) is sick. The piece (second to bottom) is ehh not really liking it. The last one looks a little rushed and not clean. Other than that sick and keep it up

doomsayer
09-02-2006, 06:36 PM
those all look nice man ^^^^

any crits? i tried it with 3d and did a shadow

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/e6c28636.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/411b444d.jpg

RepUrSet
09-02-2006, 06:38 PM
Originally posted by nerdx+Sep 2 2006, 05:21 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (nerdx @ Sep 2 2006, 05:21 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-RepUrSet@Sep 2 2006, 05:07 PM
ok... i THINK :unsure: i did better then my other things i posted up on here...crits on it would be great
http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/6592/picture83xz9.th.jpg (http://img212.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture83xz9.jpg)
^^^^^^
thumbnail
think it looks pretty good.
work on the G it seems to be the most off. [/b][/quote]
alright..but how should i work on it...i mean, is there any things i should make thinner or sumin? or just completely change it

TricksForKids
09-02-2006, 06:59 PM
Whats good bombing science, hope everyones been having a dope summer, i was just freestyling with a some pens this mornin, threw in the libra scales if you can tell for the hell of it

Peace

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6598/regslibrage9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Seek139
09-02-2006, 07:05 PM
not diggin the style just my 0.02&#036;

pace1
09-02-2006, 07:28 PM
styles of the chain still as sick as last time i saw it.

magashna
09-02-2006, 07:38 PM
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c115/magashna/DSC01536.jpg

SEB

new style i&#39;m trying

TricksForKids
09-02-2006, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 2 2006, 05:59 PM
Whats good bombing science, hope everyones been having a dope summer, i was just freestyling with a some pens this mornin, threw in the libra scales if you can tell for the hell of it

Peace

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6598/regslibrage9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump, and magashna lose the arrows and weird thing on the S

Peace

alive
09-02-2006, 07:42 PM
yo.

im back from my trip alaska. bear viewing n shit. was dope. so here my first post back.
who remembers me?

tricks- thats sooooo dope. i thought u had moved on the big boys long ago?



peace.

doomsayer
09-02-2006, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 2 2006, 05:36 PM
those all look nice man ^^^^

any crits? i tried it with 3d and did a shadow

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/e6c28636.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/411b444d.jpg
id like to get sum crits plz

aces
09-02-2006, 07:53 PM
I think you emphasized the U too much with the tail. Now it just looks like a backwards N.

aces
09-02-2006, 07:55 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 2 2006, 06:59 PM
Whats good bombing science, hope everyones been having a dope summer, i was just freestyling with a some pens this mornin, threw in the libra scales if you can tell for the hell of it

Peace

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6598/regslibrage9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
The E got a little weird but other than that I don&#39;t see anything wrong with it.

Sluts_r_us
09-02-2006, 08:08 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 2 2006, 06:39 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 2 2006, 06:39 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 2 2006, 05:59 PM
Whats good bombing science, hope everyones been having a dope summer, i was just freestyling with a some pens this mornin, threw in the libra scales if you can tell for the hell of it

Peace

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/6598/regslibrage9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump, and magashna lose the arrows and weird thing on the S

Peace [/b][/quote]
fuckin right tricks...where the hell have you been?....

nerdx
09-02-2006, 08:13 PM
Originally posted by magashna@Sep 2 2006, 06:38 PM
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c115/magashna/DSC01536.jpg

SEB

new style i&#39;m trying
dont draw the the bottom of the page.
continute your full letters.
but its getting there.

Sluts_r_us
09-02-2006, 08:49 PM
some random ass sketch wit some wack colring after not sketchin in a month or two...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesksketch001.jpg

nerdx
09-02-2006, 08:49 PM
both look ill

The Fallen Slave of Atlantis
09-02-2006, 09:29 PM
the top ones tight.

beke
09-02-2006, 10:02 PM
http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/6222/charac1sv8.jpg

crits please

NICCSACC
09-02-2006, 10:42 PM
its pretty shitty. srry

uhhh
09-02-2006, 10:42 PM
Originally posted by Sluts_r_us@Sep 2 2006, 07:49 PM
some random ass sketch wit some wack colring after not sketchin in a month or two...
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v230/bigtymerz108/pesksketch001.jpg
woah. i remember when i thought your throws were just about the best thing i&#39;d ever seen :lol:

still good though. the k&#39;s a lil.. crowded or something but i&#39;ll guess thats just from not sketching for awile.

bouncingsoul
09-02-2006, 11:10 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/55e861e7.jpg

Listenin&#39; to Ghostface Killah, just chillin

:edit: Fucked up the 3d at the bottom of the H, but I&#39;ll fix it sooner or later

doomsayer
09-02-2006, 11:22 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/609c8067.jpg

crits?

bouncingsoul
09-02-2006, 11:31 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/55e861e7.jpg

bump for criticism

beke
09-02-2006, 11:32 PM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 2 2006, 09:42 PM
its pretty shitty. srry
lol i know its shitty..but what can I do to improve?

NICCSACC
09-02-2006, 11:35 PM
just add more details like hands etc. veiney eyeballs...something. also, i can tell your lines arent that steady. work on that first and foremost. i mean its not bad just boring as fuck.

TricksForKids
09-02-2006, 11:44 PM
Whats good sluts, aces, im sure gerky&#39;s still around here too, good to see you cats still holdin it down, ive been at a summer camp all summer as a leader in training, workin with kids, keeps me on my toes, ill hit up some next sketches soon,

Peace

beke
09-03-2006, 12:28 AM
Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 2 2006, 10:35 PM
just add more details like hands etc. veiney eyeballs...something. also, i can tell your lines arent that steady. work on that first and foremost. i mean its not bad just boring as fuck.
allrighty thanks man ill work on that

Seek139
09-03-2006, 12:34 AM
Originally posted by Seek139+Sep 2 2006, 07:00 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Seek139 @ Sep 2 2006, 07:00 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Seek139@Sep 2 2006, 06:46 AM
any comments? http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9245/dsc02221tr5.th.jpg (http://img301.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc02221tr5.jpg)
[/b][/quote]
bump&#33;

bouncingsoul
09-03-2006, 12:50 AM
That looks sweet. Nice simple letters, and from what I can tell, clean too. Just work on your blending more. The letters are sweet though... Actually, the I could use a lot of work and the N needs a little improvement, but I like the Z

pace1
09-03-2006, 01:01 AM
doom-lose the leg on the bottom of the u and bring the line down a little more and itll be good.

SEEK- the extension on the front of the Z is bad lose it

doomsayer
09-03-2006, 01:10 AM
when i lose the leg it looks like a V

pace1
09-03-2006, 01:26 AM
no just keep the bottom rounded

Seek139
09-03-2006, 01:27 AM
i&#39;m workin on another piece right now...i&#39;m gonna work on my bending

Necro-
09-03-2006, 02:19 AM
Hexa i like ur shit and that looks sweet, but i liked your more organic curved letters more. just my preferance tho.

myl
09-03-2006, 03:28 AM
havent posted anything up in a while...i came up with this in like 30 seconds, new style and so far i like what possibilities it could have.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0173-1.jpg

bouncingsoul
09-03-2006, 12:11 PM
Originally posted by Necro&#045;@Sep 3 2006, 01:19 AM
Hexa i like ur shit and that looks sweet, but i liked your more organic curved letters more. just my preferance tho.
Which ones? The ones with all the bits I posted a while ago? I wasn&#39;t doing too well with those. That&#39;s why I don&#39;t do em anymore...

aces
09-03-2006, 12:49 PM
Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Sep 2 2006, 11:31 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/55e861e7.jpg

bump for criticism
It&#39;s really good and all but I think that the lines going to the swirls could be a little thicker.

SCR
09-03-2006, 12:53 PM
Originally posted by SCR@Sep 2 2006, 12:19 PM
Well, uhh, this is my umm 1st (technically, its the 2nd, the 1st was was too wild and unreadable :P) *wild style-like* piece.
Constructive comments and criticism please&#33;
LIEKTHX.
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3803/scrwilddu4.jpg
Bump for more crits.

myl
09-03-2006, 01:29 PM
Originally posted by myl@Sep 3 2006, 02:28 AM
havent posted anything up in a while...i came up with this in like 30 seconds, new style and so far i like what possibilities it could have.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0173-1.jpg
bump for crits

What Happened to the Letters?
09-03-2006, 01:35 PM
heyre both ugly, dont make your letters get fatter liek that myl, keep em the same width like make a regular liek letter dont make it liek out you know dude

SCR
09-03-2006, 01:42 PM
Originally posted by What Happened to the Letters?@Sep 3 2006, 12:35 PM
heyre both ugly, dont make your letters get fatter liek that myl, keep em the same width like make a regular liek letter dont make it liek out you know dude
I know mine is ugly, thats why Im asking for crits and for help.

bouncingsoul
09-03-2006, 01:59 PM
Originally posted by What Happened to the Letters?@Sep 3 2006, 12:35 PM
heyre both ugly, dont make your letters get fatter liek that myl, keep em the same width like make a regular liek letter dont make it liek out you know dude
...mine?

TricksForKids
09-03-2006, 02:48 PM
tryin out phers for the pherz/phers battle, comments?

Peace&#33;

http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/1088/phersvk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

aces
09-03-2006, 03:09 PM
The S doesn&#39;t really seem to fit in with the rest of it. I think it&#39;s because it has such a narrow line in it.

ados
09-03-2006, 03:10 PM
i dont like those two dots, in the H and S

bouncingsoul
09-03-2006, 03:25 PM
Tricksforkids, it looks good, but I hate the H. It just looks horrible to me... I actually like the S though

alive
09-03-2006, 06:39 PM
i love ur style tricks. maybe u could give a some crits on my 5min pen freestyle for it? ill do a nicer one later.
thanks

in fact, maybe every1 can give some crits?
thanks again

haha this is new&#33; used to just be the url. couldnt name it. o boy. what fun. ummmm. . . pen freestyle pherz picture&#33; yay&#33; ladida ladida. yada yada blah blah. haha. priceless. (http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02638.jpg)

peace.

nerdx
09-03-2006, 06:52 PM
the P and the R are right on, but deffinitly the the E is kinda off.
the top of the E is super fat but im sure you noticed that.
its deffinitly a nice style. would like to see it done right with color.

uhhh
09-03-2006, 07:16 PM
hey guys look at this van i hit&#33;
http://i1.tinypic.com/281hs44.jpg

MEBone
09-03-2006, 07:25 PM
lol

AoAssis
09-03-2006, 07:31 PM
LOL PMSL ROFL LMOA SFMOLAOLAOSM &#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;11111ONEEEEE4EEERR111

alera
09-03-2006, 07:32 PM
i forgot all about thoes truck things. nice job :D

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/8215/0903061913aob7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres some thing simple that i am working on Critz? i might paint it soon.

aces
09-03-2006, 07:51 PM
The R looks too much like a B and on the A&#39;s the thing on the left of them are not good. Lose those and make it the same width throught the letter.

funky monky
09-03-2006, 09:02 PM
tell me wat u think&#33;&#33; crits.........
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/7523/euroattemptnu0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

meetermaid
09-03-2006, 09:31 PM
funkymonky, it&#39;s not cool to bite. at least give credit....

magic nyc
09-03-2006, 09:36 PM
Alera, The " L E " flow looks really good.. we must trade some time/

eype
09-03-2006, 09:39 PM
just messing around with making characs out of words
of course the letters may have been comprimised to make the charac better but tell me what u think

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1331/dscn6026ne4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

minesweep
09-03-2006, 10:10 PM
i dont think that&#39;s relly working out but just my opinion

d_g
09-03-2006, 10:16 PM
Originally posted by eype@Sep 4 2006, 01:39 PM
just messing around with making characs out of words
of course the letters may have been comprimised to make the charac better but tell me what u think

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1331/dscn6026ne4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
I think the letter structure is a little weird but overall I think as a drawing it looks good.

alive
09-03-2006, 10:29 PM
Originally posted by alive@Sep 3 2006, 05:39 PM
i love ur style tricks. maybe u could give a some crits on my 5min pen freestyle for it? ill do a nicer one later.
thanks

in fact, maybe every1 can give some crits?
thanks again

haha this is new&#33; used to just be the url. couldnt name it. o boy. what fun. ummmm. . . pen freestyle pherz picture&#33; yay&#33; ladida ladida. yada yada blah blah. haha. priceless. (http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02638.jpg)

peace.
how dumb am i? huh? accidently clicked da link button nstead of da pic button n didnt realize. hense the retardedness. my apologies.


http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02638.jpg

minesweep
09-03-2006, 10:32 PM
looks pretty good, but if your gonna sketch like that do it in pencil so you can erase those lines, work on your H a little more though

just a quick idea, let me know what you think
http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/5585/dscn0247ws2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

alive
09-03-2006, 10:48 PM
somehow, things never seem to turn out as well for me when theyre in pencil. i should though. i think its because the cloudyness from the pen lines kind of hides my lack of skill.


now i think ur sleet? is that right? handy looks nice, but the throw needs work. first of all, darken ur lines to make it easier to see, and then spread ur letters out a bit, ur hiding them 2 much.


peace.

minesweep
09-03-2006, 10:50 PM
it&#39;s delv, and okay ill do that, thanks

beefgerky
09-03-2006, 10:51 PM
Originally posted by eype@Sep 3 2006, 08:39 PM
just messing around with making characs out of words
of course the letters may have been comprimised to make the charac better but tell me what u think

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/1331/dscn6026ne4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
DIE59.

uhhh
09-03-2006, 10:57 PM
Originally posted by uhhh@Sep 3 2006, 06:16 PM
hey guys look at this van i hit&#33;
http://i1.tinypic.com/281hs44.jpg
god damn i need a new camera..

TricksForKids
09-03-2006, 10:58 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 3 2006, 01:48 PM
tryin out phers for the pherz/phers battle, comments?

Peace&#33;

http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/1088/phersvk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for some crits? :D

minesweep
09-03-2006, 10:58 PM
you need to work on them letters

uhhh
09-03-2006, 11:01 PM
i&#39;ll guess that was directed towards me.

and i know. i&#39;m starting to not like my letters again.

minesweep
09-03-2006, 11:02 PM
ok i was just saying
do you have a link to that print out by any chance?

TricksForKids
09-03-2006, 11:05 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 3 2006, 09:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 3 2006, 09:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 3 2006, 01:48 PM
tryin out phers for the pherz/phers battle, comments?

Peace&#33;

http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/1088/phersvk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for some crits? :D [/b][/quote]
new page

bouncingsoul
09-03-2006, 11:07 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/55e861e7.jpg

bump for critz once again

minesweep
09-03-2006, 11:08 PM
hot as always regs

beke
09-03-2006, 11:12 PM
Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 3 2006, 09:58 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 3 2006, 09:58 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 3 2006, 01:48 PM
tryin out phers for the pherz/phers battle, comments?

Peace&#33;

http://img506.imageshack.us/img506/1088/phersvk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump for some crits? :D [/b][/quote]
uhh the H is really hard to see I find...some of the letters are pretty un-structured. in particular the H and the Z, although i get the feeling this is what you were going for, id go with something more legible. I like your P though

TricksForKids
09-03-2006, 11:15 PM
thanks for the crits beke, but there is no Z :D

beke
09-03-2006, 11:20 PM
LOL wow then the S my bad i just had a hard time reading that one :P I do like your vanishing point though


**oh yea..whats that random t in a rectangle thing????***

alive
09-03-2006, 11:32 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02638.jpg


hope u dont mind, bump. do u think a clean version of it would make it to tip-top? just curious, be honest, (as if u wouldnt) thanks.


peace.

meetermaid
09-03-2006, 11:34 PM
the e and the r are kinda wierd, i don&#39;t know what it is about them but they just kinda bug me. the p h and z are all good though. i remember when you had the grodiest letters. cheers, good progress.

sky 5
09-03-2006, 11:34 PM
tricksforkids - thats fin dope man . . . the vertical line of the P could be alil smaller to amtch the rest . . . the all red is dope color choice but running a thin black forcefield outline on the letters might look even better against the red lined 3d . . .

beke
09-04-2006, 12:03 AM
Originally posted by alive@Sep 3 2006, 10:32 PM
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02638.jpg


hope u dont mind, bump. do u think a clean version of it would make it to tip-top? just curious, be honest, (as if u wouldnt) thanks.


peace.
i find the e doesnt go with the rest of the sketch..it looks too round and out of place compared to the other letters, but im feelin the rest of the sketch

uhhh
09-04-2006, 12:26 AM
Originally posted by minesweep@Sep 3 2006, 10:02 PM
do you have a link to that print out by any chance?
somebody dropped a link for that one a 5 or 6 more in toy story. just go back a few pages ;)

magic nyc
09-04-2006, 12:44 AM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5903/1223pt3.jpg

d_g
09-04-2006, 12:47 AM
Originally posted by uhhh+Sep 4 2006, 04:26 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (uhhh @ Sep 4 2006, 04:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-minesweep@Sep 3 2006, 10:02 PM
do you have a link to that print out by any chance?
somebody dropped a link for that one a 5 or 6 more in toy story. just go back a few pages ;) [/b][/quote]
It was me. Have a look through my posts, I can&#39;t remember the link off by heart.

minesweep
09-04-2006, 12:50 AM
ok thanks

myl
09-04-2006, 01:01 AM
this piece is a work in progress...just SE for now...F&#39;s are kinda tricky to pull off nicely

crits comments and suggestions are very appreciated

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0175.jpg

magic nyc
09-04-2006, 01:12 AM
Originally posted by magic nyc@Sep 4 2006, 12:44 AM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5903/1223pt3.jpg
MYL, feels very sky but its good

bump to bottom of page

The Stig
09-04-2006, 01:12 AM
that&#39;s too cluttered try making the extension smaller than the letter structure maybe

myl
09-04-2006, 01:26 AM
thanks guys....i def see what you mean about being cluttered

and magic...is it like im biting? cause i def dont wanna bite on people especially sky

uhhh
09-04-2006, 02:12 AM
i don&#39;t know about him. but to me it just feels kinda like sky&#39;s stuff. not biting just same feel to it. get it? :huh:

doomsayer
09-04-2006, 02:24 AM
this piece is a work in progress...just SE for now...F&#39;s are kinda tricky to pull off nicely

crits comments and suggestions are very appreciated

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0175.jpg

I don like all the arrows man



any crits b4 i try paintin this?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/cc33d4ed.jpg

nephs ike201
09-04-2006, 02:34 AM
loose the little pointson the tops of the letters....other than that...shit looks aight

DoMiNo
09-04-2006, 02:35 AM
user posted image

Comments and criticism without sarcasm please&#33; biggrin.gif

if u in NYC.. u would have to change ur name cuz there is already a SCR out here.. just trying to tell u before u get all nice and shyt and den get into sum beef and have to change becuz of ur name

pace1
09-04-2006, 02:40 AM
truth-no dont lose the points just make them come straight to the left of the letters.

myl
09-04-2006, 03:40 AM
yeah the points look cool

NICCSACC
09-04-2006, 03:44 AM
Originally posted by magic nyc+Sep 4 2006, 12:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (magic nyc @ Sep 4 2006, 12:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Sep 4 2006, 12:44 AM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5903/1223pt3.jpg
MYL, feels very sky but its good

bump to bottom of page [/b][/quote]
shits dope&#33;

weldo
09-04-2006, 04:02 AM
fukin love those bombs very fresh magic nyc
anway if could help please sorry for the messyness only had biro
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/8366/mobilephotos001mp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/5688/1125461424lay0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

MEBone
09-04-2006, 04:05 AM
dude ur sick

myl
09-04-2006, 04:11 AM
hot shit man

NICCSACC
09-04-2006, 04:13 AM
Originally posted by weldo@Sep 4 2006, 03:02 AM
fukin love those bombs very fresh magic nyc
anway if could help please sorry for the messyness only had biro
http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/8366/mobilephotos001mp8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/5688/1125461424lay0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
that shits nice dude&#33;&#33;

doomsayer
09-04-2006, 06:30 AM
ok, i, trying to develop a peice, i tryed really hard to keep my letters structured, i think it turned out ok, but what do you think... worth working on or should i just start from simpleness again crits appreciated.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/bd22c17f.jpg

DeathRow
09-04-2006, 07:57 AM
http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/9618/fdsghs6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Just did this, mines extremely messsy omg, no exscuses but i did have a thick pen which made it a little harder but yeah i am shitt sketcher... Anyway can I get some crits

cheers

myl
09-04-2006, 11:05 AM
the letter structure is poor...its just wack in general, id say continue doing block/straight letters till you get the feel of how the letters flow

funky monky
09-04-2006, 11:28 AM
Originally posted by meetermaid@Sep 3 2006, 08:31 PM
funkymonky, it&#39;s not cool to bite. at least give credit....
who the fuck did i bite <_<

alive
09-04-2006, 11:51 AM
truth-go simpler. ur coming along, but dont u da re try to connect your letters yet&#33; or rock them so hard. work on keeping your letters strokes the same width. the next step will be adding more curves.

deathrow- u really need to take it simple. stop connecting, extending, arrowing, and i have a good feeling, biting. go back to basics. not blocks, but straight letters.


anyway thanks for my crits to those who gave. heres another sketch of it, pen freestyle with red sharpie fill. more crits would make my day&#33; (ran outta room for the Z, wasnt rele thinking what i started it)

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02639.jpg

btw, can some1 better then me, tell me what i should be working on in particular? or how i can make my letters work together more? thanks soooo much.

peace.

*~ANZIO~*
09-04-2006, 12:00 PM
Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 12:01 AM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0175.jpg
use that style for the pherz battle, i like it

funky monky
09-04-2006, 12:08 PM
yeah man taht style is pretty dope jsut dont put as much arrows and ur set

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 12:18 PM
The S is sick, but I&#39;m not really likin&#39; the E. Make the middle two bars squished together so it has that same kinda feel as the S

:edit: weldo- They&#39;re sick, but I don&#39;t like your N&#39;s at all

pace1
09-04-2006, 12:31 PM
doom- the first t is good th second should be cleaned up . the R shouldnt have that line through it on the right leg. loose the conections to the r and others. no extention on the U and make the thickness of the U smaller and the smae witdh as the t

alive- make the widths all the same...just thicken up the P and no line through the R on the right leg. and redue int pencil and then color to make it clean. but for a pen freestyle its pretty good. also try and make the letters fit together more.

sky 5
09-04-2006, 12:41 PM
Originally posted by magic nyc+Sep 4 2006, 12:12 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (magic nyc @ Sep 4 2006, 12:12 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-magic nyc@Sep 4 2006, 12:44 AM
http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/5903/1223pt3.jpg
MYL, feels very sky but its good

bump to bottom of page [/b][/quote]
bump for magic nyc . .

myl - nice "se" sketch . . .you aint bitin my style .. you just did a classic semi-wildstyle that half the writers on the planet do . . . nice job, good use of the extensions to eat up some of the open sapce without havin them distract/take away/or cover up the letter flow . ..push that style hard and you should see some real progress soon . . . i use addons to take up unwanted empty space and if im lookin to reinforce my flow . . . i like how all your arrow extensions shoot horizontal (i do that alot), it gives good contrast/flow to the dominant vertical lines of the letters . . .

weldo - dopeness man . . .i hope you stick around and drop some more . . .

Fosale!
09-04-2006, 01:26 PM
Got bored on vacation so i did pen freestyle rollers/blockbusters for random people and one piece
Pesk
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/5539/a9179eeaaq2.jpg
Gerk-messed up on the R
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/9121/53bd6f28kj6.jpg
Sec/Ebk
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/3219/dd85561bqj0.jpg
I did one for Cezr but i cant find it and I tried a Evex one but I couldn&#39;t get a good V or X
Piece
http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/7525/7f969eb5ug8.jpg

whoarethereal evil
09-04-2006, 01:33 PM
hahah tht was nice of u^^


http://img438.imageshack.us/img438/4669/img0229re6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


crits ideas etc


ps i know its huge

im lazy :D

Fosale!
09-04-2006, 01:33 PM
resize.

whoarethereal evil
09-04-2006, 02:29 PM
http://img438.imageshack.us/img438/4669/img0229re6.th.jpg (http://img438.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0229re6.jpg)

myl
09-04-2006, 02:35 PM
i like the style, but i havent a clue as to what it says...poeh? poek?


ive been workin on the sketch some more...got the FT part down...i know it still needs more work and i can already guess youre gonna say "too many arrows" so im probably gonna take some out

crits, suggestions, advice anyone?


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0176-1.jpg

whoarethereal evil
09-04-2006, 02:42 PM
thts gna b dope bt yes on the 2many arrows

an it sez poet

alive
09-04-2006, 02:44 PM
Originally posted by alive@Sep 4 2006, 10:51 AM

heres another sketch of it, pen freestyle with red sharpie fill. more crits would make my day&#33; (ran outta room for the Z, wasnt rele thinking what i started it)

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02639.jpg

btw, can some1 better then me, tell me what i should be working on in particular? or how i can make my letters work together more? thanks soooo much.

peace.
bump&#33;




myl&#33; damn, am i thinking of the wrong person, have u gotten sooooo much better. seriously tho am i? i think i used to help u when u were fairly whack, trying this wierd semi-wildstyle that you couldnt pull off. i helped u smooth it all out n such. im gonna look back. lol perhaps im just an idiot?
yeah tho, its a bit busy, chill with the arrows n such, but i like it.

perhaps u can give me some crits?
ANYONE?

peace.

myl
09-04-2006, 03:08 PM
thanks guys...and alive yeah youre right im that dude that used to be super wack...ive just been sketchin my ass off usin simples till i got the feel of how the letters flow

as for your pher, its got potential....im not really diggin the extension off the P...the top of the R looks wierd cause its like a little ledge...i dunno...i suck at giving crits



just wait till you all see my version of "pherz" ;)

meetermaid
09-04-2006, 03:11 PM
Originally posted by funky monky+Sep 4 2006, 07:28 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (funky monky @ Sep 4 2006, 07:28 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by meetermaid@Sep 3 2006, 08:31 PM
funkymonky, it&#39;s not cool to bite. at least give credit....
who the fuck did i bite <_< [/b]
<!--QuoteBegin-HARE2@Sep 1 2006, 09:26 PM
couple more freestyles. there all i have time for .

http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/6846/scan10152pq5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
and one for soup

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/2825/scan10151ri4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)[/quote]


pics are kinda big but whatever.

alive
09-04-2006, 03:19 PM
Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 02:08 PM
thanks guys...and alive yeah youre right im that dude that used to be super wack...ive just been sketchin my ass off usin simples till i got the feel of how the letters flow

as for your pher, its got potential....im not really diggin the extension off the P...the top of the R looks wierd cause its like a little ledge...i dunno...i suck at giving crits



just wait till you all see my version of "pherz" ;)
wow&#33; im really impressed. im a little bit proud, and mostly jealous. u must have sketched soooo much. o well, school is starting soon, which means ill be sketching a lot more. someday. . . . ur style does remind me of sky5 tho. but i dont think ur biting.

well im working on a nice version of the pherz sketch. pencil first this time. i think for the first time in a long time im gonna enter the battle. do u think ill make tip top?


thanks,
peace.

Fosale!
09-04-2006, 04:00 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;@Sep 4 2006, 12:26 PM
Got bored on vacation so i did pen freestyle rollers/blockbusters for random people and one piece
Pesk
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/5539/a9179eeaaq2.jpg
Gerk-messed up on the R
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/9121/53bd6f28kj6.jpg
Sec/Ebk
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/3219/dd85561bqj0.jpg
I did one for Cezr but i cant find it and I tried a Evex one but I couldn&#39;t get a good V or X
Piece
http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/7525/7f969eb5ug8.jpg
bump for crits

myl
09-04-2006, 04:24 PM
Originally posted by alive+Sep 4 2006, 02:19 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Sep 4 2006, 02:19 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-myl@Sep 4 2006, 02:08 PM
thanks guys...and alive yeah youre right im that dude that used to be super wack...ive just been sketchin my ass off usin simples till i got the feel of how the letters flow

as for your pher, its got potential....im not really diggin the extension off the P...the top of the R looks wierd cause its like a little ledge...i dunno...i suck at giving crits



just wait till you all see my version of "pherz" ;)
wow&#33; im really impressed. im a little bit proud, and mostly jealous. u must have sketched soooo much. o well, school is starting soon, which means ill be sketching a lot more. someday. . . . ur style does remind me of sky5 tho. but i dont think ur biting.

well im working on a nice version of the pherz sketch. pencil first this time. i think for the first time in a long time im gonna enter the battle. do u think ill make tip top?


thanks,
peace. [/b][/quote]
yeah you could probably make it

this is gonna be my first battle ever so i cant wait to finish this sketch up

nerdx
09-04-2006, 04:26 PM
myl letters are fuckin bangin.
like you said loose some arrows, sick ass style

myl
09-04-2006, 04:32 PM
thanks dude, glad to see that im progressing finally

whoarethereal evil
09-04-2006, 04:42 PM
Originally posted by whoarethereal evil@Sep 4 2006, 01:29 PM
http://img438.imageshack.us/img438/4669/img0229re6.th.jpg (http://img438.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0229re6.jpg)
im gan b gay an bump 4 feedback :D

myl
09-04-2006, 04:50 PM
now that i know it says poet i see it, but that T is wack...looks like an L or K...id lose the last bubble thing like this:

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7237/poetthrowiezh8.jpg

Xsjadox
09-04-2006, 04:53 PM
http://img128.imageshack.us/img128/6981/img1853my0.jpg

myl
09-04-2006, 04:55 PM
yay rollerbooters, i have xsjado skates

Xsjadox
09-04-2006, 04:57 PM
I`m too lazy to skate anymore.. I need help.. I`m too lazy to even get paint lately... Female done gone fucked me around and made me even lazier... but yeah fruitbooters for the win.

beefgerky
09-04-2006, 05:04 PM
i got some stockwells, gettin mad dusty in my closet, haha.

i need to start skating again..

wordzcantexpress
09-04-2006, 05:07 PM
http://img327.imageshack.us/img327/2453/blackbook001vi2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



Something for the phers battle I didn&#39;t go with

meetermaid
09-04-2006, 05:12 PM
i kinda like the handbag idea... but you definitely need to work on the letters more, specifically the h, e, and z.

wordzcantexpress
09-04-2006, 05:24 PM
LOL that&#39;s exactly what I was thinking. The h,e and z just don&#39;t match very well

myl
09-04-2006, 05:25 PM
just a teaser as to what im gonna have for the battle...

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/4123/img0179ew5.jpg

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 05:29 PM
Is that like a new version of Prismas or something?

whoarethereal evil
09-04-2006, 05:29 PM
Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 03:50 PM
now that i know it says poet i see it, but that T is wack...looks like an L or K...id lose the last bubble thing like this:

http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/7237/poetthrowiezh8.jpg
hahah cheers dude

but tht wasnt part of the letter its just like a lil bubble

holds crew name or sumthing

doomsayer
09-04-2006, 06:05 PM
Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 04:25 PM
just a teaser as to what im gonna have for the battle...

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/4123/img0179ew5.jpg
that is sick man, i really like those balls, nice&#33;

FEN the HEN
09-04-2006, 06:22 PM
they are nice balls

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 07:18 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/86105ec5.jpg

Trying extensions...?

imported_Bes_one
09-04-2006, 07:27 PM
Comments or critz????
1
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/3307/pict0624yx8.th.jpg (http://img473.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0624yx8.jpg)

2
http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/4972/pict0625el6.th.jpg (http://img228.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0625el6.jpg)

3
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/6360/pict0626cd8.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0626cd8.jpg)

4
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/6963/pict0627ch4.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0627ch4.jpg)

5
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/7455/pict0628hu5.th.jpg (http://img208.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0628hu5.jpg)

6
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/5269/pict0629ar4.th.jpg
7
http://img458.imageshack.us/img458/6863/pict0630pa0.th.jpg (http://img458.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0630pa0.jpg)

8
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/355/pict0632to7.th.jpg (http://img373.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pict0632to7.jpg)

myl
09-04-2006, 07:29 PM
back to blocks

meetermaid
09-04-2006, 07:49 PM
Originally posted by doomsayer+Sep 4 2006, 02:05 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (doomsayer @ Sep 4 2006, 02:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-myl@Sep 4 2006, 04:25 PM
just a teaser as to what im gonna have for the battle...

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/4123/img0179ew5.jpg
that is sick man, i really like those balls, nice&#33; [/b][/quote]
i bet you like those balls..

myl, the erz is really good, but the p and h don&#39;t really match, 2 different styles

but really those balls are quite nice and shapely..

bouncinsoul, get rid of a lot of the little bits and extensions and shit, you can barely see the letters through all the add-ons.

uhhh
09-04-2006, 08:12 PM
myl-i really like that p. itd be reallllllly fuckin good if you could style the whole piece like that.

aces
09-04-2006, 08:12 PM
I wish I wasn&#39;t too lazy to finish coloring my PHERZ entry. I&#39;m just like bored and don&#39;t feel like drawing. I don&#39;t know why but it sucks.

Random I know but I saw the entries and decided to mention why mine isn&#39;t going to be there.

myl
09-04-2006, 08:21 PM
well heres my entry for the PHERZ battle....i kinda hurried on it cause i just started it today...wish i wouldve gotta a jump start on it right away

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5429/pherztoybattlekm4.jpg

Seek139
09-04-2006, 08:31 PM
floating pool ball?

myl
09-04-2006, 08:32 PM
youre god damn right

you know it does say 666 right

aces
09-04-2006, 08:33 PM
I&#39;d say your letters would look better if you made them thicker. Also the 3-D is good but could be less thick.

Seek139
09-04-2006, 08:33 PM
i know but floating pool ball with incorrect shadow?

myl
09-04-2006, 08:34 PM
yeah, its meant to be floating, the shadow looks fine

its like the light source is above it

meetermaid
09-04-2006, 08:35 PM
it doesn&#39;t really make sense if the light source for the pool balls differ than the one for the letters.

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 08:43 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/86105ec5.jpg

I&#39;m a crit whore

myl
09-04-2006, 08:44 PM
true. oh well too late...

crits on this stupid thing again? i reworked a few things here and there


http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/969/img01063jh7.jpg


think i could post this in the big boys forum just to see what i get out of it?

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 08:47 PM
I don&#39;t like your E and your F, but the S and the T are sweet. Also, I don&#39;t like addons overlapping letters for some reason. I prefer them underlapping the letters or just going around them.

myl
09-04-2006, 09:03 PM
good call on the add ons...but as for the E and F, its all i could come up with that i thought looked best...thank you everyone for there input and crits

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 09:07 PM
I think the only thing with the E is that middle part... I think I said it before but just put those two bars together instead of having the space between them... I just hate that for some reason. The F, I don&#39;t like the left bar. It&#39;s the way that it kinda bends one way halfway through the letter and then bends another way... I like it when it&#39;s just one solid bar going straight down or following the same curve or shape, if you get what I mean

myl
09-04-2006, 09:16 PM
alright i played around with the E and F some and this is what i got...i already like the E a lot more...not sure about the F, i hate that letter anyway

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/denialchild8698/IMG_0107-1.jpg

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 09:19 PM
Yep, that E looks better to me now. If you don&#39;t like a letter then change your name... I went through a good 15-20 names before I found one and stuck with it

myl
09-04-2006, 09:22 PM
thanks for your help dude

i dunno, i like the name seft, i like how it flows and i like the sound...its just that i have a little trouble with F&#39;s

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 09:23 PM
sepht? Haha, I actually used to write sepha

myl
09-04-2006, 09:25 PM
haha i never even thought of that

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 09:28 PM
Sketch it out and see if you like it... When you change your name you can&#39;t go all wildstyle again though, you have to start from simples again, but the good thing is you progress faster with the new name because you get fresh new ideas and mostly because you&#39;ve done the addon stuff before...

No flicks=bad

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/86105ec5.jpg

myl
09-04-2006, 09:33 PM
dude im not even gonna lie, that shit is ill

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 09:35 PM
Haha really? I do agree it is too busy and I REALLY fucked up the 3d on the right of the A... Just realized that, but yeah... btw school started last Wednesday so expect a lot more shitty 5-10 minute pen freestyles and a lot less blackbook sketches

meetermaid
09-04-2006, 09:36 PM
there&#39;s an a? :ph34r: what&#39;s it say?

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 09:37 PM
Hexa... I thought most people knew my name by now... Oh well

whoarethereal evil
09-04-2006, 09:37 PM
ye a at the end if im nt mistaken

reads hexa?

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 09:41 PM
Yep, it does... Also, I really have to start getting up.. I haven&#39;t written on anything or even put a sticker up at all... I&#39;m trying to get some paint and thinner but I keep forgetting. I have at least 3 empty kiwis too... Also, I&#39;ve been trying some new characters and they look a lot like Invader Zim stuff... It&#39;s OK though cuz that show was fucking sick (in a good way)

meetermaid
09-04-2006, 09:44 PM
yes, invader zim was THE SHIT. he&#39;s my hero.

but anyway, may i suggest you change the bottom of the e a bit so it&#39;s not so flat... and get rid of at least a FEW of the extensions, like the one&#39;s on the tops of the letters, it&#39;s soo crowded...

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 09:50 PM
Fosho, I will... That E is a little bitch though. I always hate trying to figure what to do with the flat bottom of the E cuz it just doesn&#39;t looks that good and it&#39;s hard to do anything with it, but when I try to change it up the rest of it looks fucked up... I&#39;ll try though

nerdx
09-04-2006, 09:53 PM
hexa looking dope as always. for the bottom of the E slighlty curve it down twards the bottom of the A, that might flow a bit better.
As for it beeing too clutterd, im not really sure it deffinitly looks good, but I think its all up to how you color it.

keep it up shits lookin good.

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 09:56 PM
I don&#39;t get what you mean by curving it toward the a...?

Thanks though, everyone

The Fallen Slave of Atlantis
09-04-2006, 10:06 PM
Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 07:44 PM
true. oh well too late...

crits on this stupid thing again? i reworked a few things here and there


http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/969/img01063jh7.jpg


think i could post this in the big boys forum just to see what i get out of it?
thats pretty tight i love the s man.

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 10:08 PM
Oh, myl, in the T, that right angle thing showing the arrow, you should make it a little smaller... Like dont make it reach the sides of the T, just show the corner and that should be enough... I think

Once again

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/86105ec5.jpg

beke
09-04-2006, 10:31 PM
the ever present criticism..go simpler for now its just a bit jumbled... HEXT? in anycase get rid of osme of the extensions on your X the like ovals with the triangle head and yeah..but its not bad, definately shows alot of promise

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 10:36 PM
Hexa, not hext... I should include a handie or type a little note whenever I post something haha. My A got a little screwed up anyway

beke
09-04-2006, 10:37 PM
ohh shit i see the A now, i thought the thin line extension thingy on it was an arm of a t lol

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 10:39 PM
Haha, alright

NICCSACC
09-04-2006, 10:56 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1047.jpg

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 10:58 PM
That&#39;s actually the first Venom sketch I&#39;ve seen from you... The V looks like an N... A very dope N I might add, but yeah. That&#39;s about it. Add some 3d and it&#39;d be bangin

beefgerky
09-04-2006, 11:06 PM
nice

Necro-
09-04-2006, 11:22 PM
it looks great hexa, i dont think it&#39;s too cluttered at all. i do think it would look a little better if the lettters werent angled upward tho. keep workin on that

myl
09-04-2006, 11:23 PM
ok i think i got it pretty much perfected now...


http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7408/img0112dg2.jpg

i would prefer crits from people who know what theyre talking about, like hexa and such

NICCSACC
09-04-2006, 11:23 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1048.jpg

TricksForKids
09-04-2006, 11:29 PM
Work on that V and E, make em bigger, and a little extra flava, hearts nice, nice fat roller material,

Peace

alive
09-04-2006, 11:32 PM
Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 10:23 PM
ok i think i got it pretty much perfected now...


http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7408/img0112dg2.jpg

i would prefer crits from people who know what theyre talking about, like hexa and such
haha&#33; just curious, tell me the truth. am i still in this elite group? haha. damn uve improved. but one this sketch and your pherz sketch are so different. i would say they&#39;re diff ppl. is that just cuz u spent such different amounts of time on them?

the bottom of you S extends down just slightly too far. and i would bring you F down a bit, just extend it. and bring your T down, but bend it back like the other letters to make it flow. u know what i mean? the vertical strokes of the S, E, and F bend like ( but the T bends like ), the other way see?

helpful i hope?
just ideas,


peace.

Fosale!
09-04-2006, 11:38 PM
Originally posted by Fosale&#33;+Sep 4 2006, 03:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Fosale&#33; @ Sep 4 2006, 03:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-Fosale&#33;@Sep 4 2006, 12:26 PM
Got bored on vacation so i did pen freestyle rollers/blockbusters for random people and one piece
Pesk
http://img425.imageshack.us/img425/5539/a9179eeaaq2.jpg
Gerk-messed up on the R
http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/9121/53bd6f28kj6.jpg
Sec/Ebk
http://img312.imageshack.us/img312/3219/dd85561bqj0.jpg
I did one for Cezr but i cant find it and I tried a Evex one but I couldn&#39;t get a good V or X
Piece
http://img336.imageshack.us/img336/7525/7f969eb5ug8.jpg
bump for crits [/b][/quote]
critss?

lost_for_evex
09-04-2006, 11:38 PM
Originally posted by myl@Sep 4 2006, 10:23 PM
ok i think i got it pretty much perfected now...


http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/7408/img0112dg2.jpg

i would prefer crits from people who know what theyre talking about, like hexa and such
remeber when u started..and sucked dick.

bouncingsoul
09-04-2006, 11:39 PM
Wierd, I just say what I think looks good haha. I&#39;m actually taking that as a compliment, thanks man.

Nicc- Your handie is good but it seems a little too plain for me... But about the piece, pretty much what Tricks said. The V should look more like a V, like make the bottom part pointy instead of like a U

myl
09-04-2006, 11:51 PM
hahaha evex thanks dude, those days sucked i dont even know what i was thinking

and yeah alive youre still in the "group" i guess? ha. you give good crits...but i see what youre saying about the S and F...i took a look at it in my book and i guess it was just a wierd angle i took the pic at because it looks fine when you tilt it a little bit

edit: yeah the pherz piece looks way different cause i started that and finished it like in an hour or so...ive been working on the seft piece since yesterday afternoon

nerdx
09-05-2006, 12:12 AM
idk trying something new(old)
wasnt the best.
http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/435/scan0001et7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)