Tot Black Books

[Dropping Bombs On Society]

wow thats such an improvement from the other one like halfway up the page. Good goin'.

Oops that was ment for the last page for truth... But good goin cear. I think just work on making them a bit cleaner.

[alive]

haha thanks bombs but this is my only post on the page? maybe ur talking to some1 else. lol. or up the page in the book? lol

cezr - cool thanks for the crits, ill try to round it off, i have noticed that often dont do that enough. do you think you could explain what you mean by "twisted up"? i really liked that A! haha. i did really like that extention, but i wanted to counter the C's extention. im just starting to use extentions like these too. trying to take a step up with them and connections. maybe its too early? let me know


thanks, i repect ur advice
peace

[+HyBriD+]

thnxs C3ZR 4 ur crits, im thinking of changing my name idk yet i cant come up with any good ways to do V's

[NICCSACC]

cezr that outline is too generic looking like sum fonts shit, no beef just my opinion. i hate that "E" how it has those karate slashes on top and bottom thru the monkey tails. besides that its fresh... (i can see what you were doing tho making the letters real skinny to add 3d effects. i bet itll look alot better with those in there.)... the tag on top is perfect as usual. im not really hip to how good you are at doing outlines tho cuz i havent seen too much of them by you. you know the sex of your seed yet?

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE@Sep 9 2006, 10:08 AM
Doomsayer- That karak's pretty cool yo. The throwies seem a bit iffy on the bottom. Maybe a more uniform, sharper slant would do the trick? Just a thought.
Hybrid- Nice overall shape, but the letter structure seems just a bit touchy.


Here's an outline I fucked around this morning. Trying to get some ideas for the toy train I'm painting for my baby. (He's not born just yet for those that were asking ;) )
http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/9868/im000245om4.jpg
Crits?
Most of the kids on here have some predetermined image of what graffiti looks like in their brain. Hmmm, well i dont see any arrows so i guess its not toy, and the letters connect so he must be good" , like come on, graffiti's all about style, about finding your own, you shouldnt be trying to live up to some perfect piece, it should legitimately look good to you when you compare it to others. You should be happy with it. My only crits for cezr, cuz hes one of the real cats on here, and actually helps kids out, while still managing to keep his graaf his way, is that the space in the middle of your C is too large, everything else flows, is clean, and id be proud to ride a miniature train with that on it any day, so paint it, anywways, heres a little something that i didnt get crits on and would like some from:

http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/7530/saracsp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
for a girl, says Sara C


PEace

[C3ZR ONE]

Alive- By "twisted up" I mean that the right leg of the A kicking inward like that just looks a bit unnatural, but if you really like it, then by all means, use it. As for the extensions, I'd say, they aren't really working yet, but I'd continue to try them. That's the only way you're gonna get them right eventually.

Nicca- You don't like the E? :( I was feelin that.. Oh well. Maybe I'll try a more basic one. My skill level on outlines isn't much higher than what you see here, cuzz I focus more on wheatepasting and when I do freights, they're generally pretty simple like this.
I put the 3d on and filled it in, but since I inked the outline before adding the 3d, it's all fucked up. Pluss I decided mid fill to make the Z orange, so it's all splotchy, but you get what I was going for..
http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/3249/im000246oc1.jpg

I might have to paint the whole car to fit it on there, but don't worry, I'll teach the kid right. I'll tape over the numbers before I paint it. :lol: :lol: :lol:

[C3ZR ONE]

Oh snap! Thanks Tricks! I appreciate it. ;) That Sara C looks fresh as always. Do you work with paint?
(I'll bump your pic to the next page, since I went over it. ;) )

[NICCSACC]

i actually gave a criticizm for that sara peice but eh... fuck it. it wasnt very detailed anyways...

damn, that shit looks 100 times better with the outline etc... nice shit. but yeah im a "E" feind so i, personally, dont like many cats "E's" you dig? just bein me... keep it goin moderator.

[alive]

oooo i like the fill. can i suggest making your 3d longer next time? ive only ever seen that 3d from you. try a new direction length and fill. u dont have to, but i think itd be interesting.

i c what u mean abt the A. what do you think of the connections?

i hate the way when i make a piece at first, i love it love it. and then as time goes on i start to realize all the little problems with it and i get pissed off. b/c u can nvr see them at first. u know?

i do like your E btw! and you know what? i figured out what bothers me abt ur letters. its that the structure is so perfectly. seriously though. theyre like exactly what graffiti is classically supposed to be. i like that though. classicly. am i making sense? but i still say you should thicken it somehow.

tricks i love that. the only prob is that the H is a bit unclear, the bridge is too low. great style.

this is a great page. lol. can i say that?
peace.


ps. haha posted too slow, im a page behind

[TricksForKids]

lol, theres no H, its SARA C, but thanks anyways...

[obseen]

but you can turn those letters into anything really, if you just swap a few lines abou
only the s stood out as an s to me, but it still stood out to me as sarac
and i think it looks dope

[alive]

haha! thats it! it makes sense now. its perfect then. i wouldnt have guessed it was a C, but for some reason i thought, sarah, cuz a friend of mine spells it like that. so i searched for the H u know?

peace.


ps. i dont think thats true obseen, there all defined, im just an idiot

[C3ZR ONE]

Bump for Tricks as promised.
http://img465.imageshack.us/img465/7530/saracsp5.jpg

Alive- I know what you mean about the 3d. I'll try it. ;) The connections on yours seem to be coming along. With work they'll get there.

[alera]

yo tricks thats ill, im lovin the 3d

heres some thing im workin on now ran out of room for the last A but whatever cant add color becous i got no markers :( got 2 get some soon

http://img318.imageshack.us/img318/6514/0909061322vu1.th.jpg (http://img318.imageshack.us/my.php?image=0909061322vu1.jpg)

crap image shak is only lettin me us a thumbnail

[obseen]

why would this be too big or something
http://img318.imageshack.us/img318/6514/0909061322vu1.jpg
well im glad to see you have a better 'r' sorted out but the letters are a bit too skinny for my liking

[NICCSACC]

the "a" and and "r" are great but the "L" is ghastly.

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1080.jpg

[cap j]

well here sometihing i threw 2gether in spanish class ive only been doin this stuff 4 liek a week or 2 so jest lookin 4 anything 2 help well here it it tell me wat u think http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/7475/capwc1.jpg
it says captain i hate how i did the "n" tho

[WolfBurrns]

First time posting in this thread in like.. 8 years. A new style Im working with.
Kinda happy with it, too. Except the ''P''.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/capoblue.jpg

CRITS?

[TricksForKids]

not bad for a start captian, you know how to do 3D which is impressive, the only thing is it seems that your eltters get progressively worse, thinner, and smaller as your pice goes alone, i mean the C's pretty good, A's ok, P's weird and then it just get sugly, try to keep your size and style consisitent, go a bit simpler, and nic thats pretty sick, theres just too many annoying bumps on the part that says venom, mainly the E, fresh simple cyclops and carac tho, peace

[Chop Logic]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/chp1.jpg

Really trying to get better and break out of what I've been doing, been in kind of a rut latley with letters.

Crits?

[Fosale!]

dont hide the P as much

[shifty!]

http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/6546/ashhthrowgu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some feedback on both, im having trouble trying to get the AS to flow with the bottom H...

[Venom.]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 9 2006, 01:28 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1080.jpg
Your 'N' is backwards lol...

[WolfBurrns]

Originally posted by WolfBurrns@Sep 9 2006, 01:46 PM
First time posting in this thread in like.. 8 years. A new style Im working with.
Kinda happy with it, too. Except the ''P''.

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/capoblue.jpg

CRITS?
Bump.

Backward N's kick ass, fool.

[Venom.]

I think it looks silly :P

[NKOB-NEO5]

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/4374/picture001ms1.th.jpg (http://img172.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture001ms1.jpg)

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by Venom.@Sep 9 2006, 02:18 PM
I think it looks silly :P
sounds like you talking shit. i better watch out!
seriously tho, i always do mine backwards. if you dont like it, tuff shit. im still a class act.

[trashhh]

Originally posted by NKOB-NEO5@Sep 9 2006, 02:30 PM
http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/4374/picture001ms1.th.jpg (http://img172.imageshack.us/my.php?image=picture001ms1.jpg)
too confusing becuase of the fill! hard to see the letters

[Chop Logic]

Originally posted by Chop Logic@Sep 9 2006, 01:56 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v479/FluxOfPinja/chp1.jpg

Really trying to get better and break out of what I've been doing, been in kind of a rut latley with letters.

Crits?
b to the issump for c ritzay

[Fosale!]

http://img446.imageshack.us/img446/88/p1010186mz1.jpg

http://img427.imageshack.us/img427/7364/p1010187cx6.jpg
marker freestyle

[trashhh]

A bit too thin i think sec, fatten up the letters and add 3d itd be rockin

[NICCSACC]

pretty dope besides those 3 little lines or whatever.

[NOMX]

chop logic hella copied thesoner but w/e, u gotta do what u gotta do when ur a toy. the fill on it is pretty bad and the i would lose the dots on the end, i like the rest though...

fosale u need to some better markers yo!

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1081.jpg

[trashhh]

^likin that style alot

[Chop Logic]

Originally posted by NOMX@Sep 9 2006, 03:15 PM
chop logic hella copied thesoner but w/e, u gotta do what u gotta do when ur a toy. the fill on it is pretty bad and the i would lose the dots on the end, i like the rest though...

fosale u need to some better markers yo!
Who? Can you show me? I got the idea for the black line thing from Phos4.

Post a pic please, thanks.

[NOMX]

http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1363/dscn0618gi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i didnt mean that u copied it hella hard, i meant u sorta used the style and that corner ish. i wasnt sayin it was a bad thing, sometimes u just have to take ideas from other writers.

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by NOMX@Sep 9 2006, 03:15 PM
chop logic hella copied thesoner but w/e, u gotta do what u gotta do when ur a toy. the fill on it is pretty bad and the i would lose the dots on the end, i like the rest though...

fosale u need to some better markers yo!
i dont feel like buying touch twins, prismas are fine for me.

[NICCSACC]

Originally posted by NICCSACC@Sep 9 2006, 03:22 PM
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/digicam1081.jpg
bump

[MEBone]

thats ill

[WolfBurrns]

NICC, Good shit yo. Even though I cnat read it. Haha. What did you use?

PS
I cant get any crits on this shit?

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g86/wolfburrns/capoblue.jpg

[shifty!]

Originally posted by shifty!@Sep 9 2006, 02:05 PM
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/6546/ashhthrowgu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some feedback on both, im having trouble trying to get the AS to flow with the bottom H...
bump for crits...

[trashhh]

Its alryt just try n add a bit more style, it doesnt have to hav the same feature throughout

[obseen]

niccsacc that is so fresh, its says war type ye?
the characters you did on paper were ill, are you gonna amke em stand out more on that sketch? whats it on and what pens did you use?
fuckin ill !

[NICCSACC]

i cheated and just inverted the colors. i know i know... cheap... but effective IMO.
the character is from the e plurbus shit i just posted in the karakter thread it bled thru the paper haha turned out pretty nice tho so i left it a ghost character. pzzzz

[NICCSACC]

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i164/NICCSACC/nick2.jpg

[koper]

please stop bumping your own image for crits people. It makes everyone else's last shorter.

A collab between myself and some close friends.

Why simples are a good road to follow:

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/1748/weksinkofonfs1.jpg

mixed media on paper.

[alera]

nicc im lovin thoes reverse collor things, i do that some times too :D

koper thats prety ill what did you do it on?

oh and here's a simple type thing i just did crits?
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/4333/0909061801lp3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[obseen]

ye alera, thats probably one of the best sketches yet!
koper thas fuckin dope man, the colours on the letters are well good
nevermind the actualy letters themselves! the sky background looks sick, especially the stars.
the only thing that slightly ruined it for me was the planets, the blue one seemed a bit cheesy.
niccsacc, dope as usual

[doomsayer]

wow koper that looks mad man nice job

[doomsayer]

ok still workin on my peice any of these good?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/peicesep9.jpg

[doomsayer]

oh i just counted the posts and im on the bottom of the page i hate that:

any of these working at all?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/peicesep9.jpg

[alive]

not really man. u were going well, dont do this now. u gotta start simple, and STAY simple. for a long time. sorry. i mean im just starting to connect my letters myself now. and cezr says they dont even really work yet. lol. so im still working on em. ur not up to it. i know how bitchy that sounds. sry again but i think its true.
u got potential truth. eplore how you can twist the letters individually.

peace

[doomsayer]

hahaha, nah man i like it ALOT that your being honest, i wasnt feeling any of those, so ill just keep it simple and work on the letterrs more so i should keep working on it from here, like is this a good one to work from..?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/sep9peice.jpg

[NICCSACC]

real nice dude! im feelin those "T's" especially.

[doomsayer]

and i kinda like thses bumps i put on the bottom of my letters in this thro, what do u think, any good?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/sep10thros.jpg

[aces]

I kinda like the 2nd

[doomsayer]

any crits for it?

[bouncingsoul]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0235.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0236.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0237.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0234.jpg

New sticks... Don't really belong here but I thought I'd get some critz

:edit: See my post in the stickers thread to see what's up with the H and stuff

[cap j]

more new shit jest finished tell me wat u think

http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/5453/pillmatickc9.png

[doomsayer]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Sep 9 2006, 09:05 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0234.jpg

New sticks... Don't really belong here but I thought I'd get some critz

:edit: See my post in the stickers thread to see what's up with the H and stuff
:lol: :lol: :lol:

[NOMX]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 9 2006, 08:27 PM
and i kinda like thses bumps i put on the bottom of my letters in this thro, what do u think, any good?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/sep10thros.jpg
ur t's look like c's

[doomsayer]

and L's too.

[uhhh]

just playing around with some letters...
http://i7.tinypic.com/29f4idi.jpg
i'm not very happy with the e, the h needs to be more defined. any otha crits?

[Hilo]

thts why u change it and dont post shit u dont like couse others wont

[nerdx]

cap j, work on your letters being more defiend, but lookin good.

bouncing soul dont you write hexa or smething?

uhhhh, its alright but they letters are very abstract. not sure if that was on purpose
or what, but i think it could woork just try and throw some 3d on there and maby
fatten up the letters or somethieng.

[Hilo]

Originally posted by NOMX@Sep 9 2006, 03:34 PM
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/1363/dscn0618gi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i didnt mean that u copied it hella hard, i meant u sorta used the style and that corner ish. i wasnt sayin it was a bad thing, sometimes u just have to take ideas from other writers.
smug did that or was it bitn?

[nerdx]

you guys dont make any sense.
that is in no way a bite.
its just a fucking half of a rectangle.

[Hilo]

what teh fuck

[uhhh]

it was a bitten idea. that counts for something too...

[doomsayer]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/peicethrosep10.jpg

CRITS PLEASE!

i wanna get this thro rdy to paint....... crit it plleeeease

[SeKz]

http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/4107/image031ub5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

any crits for this outline? except lose the arrows which i will do next time.

[doomsayer]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/sep10thro.jpg

crits pls

[aces]

I think its good. Make the T's more alike though so that they are both rounded or both straight if you understand what I mean. Also erase the pencil lines and possibly extend that second T down to be at the same general area of the bottom of the other letters.

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5185/picture009bs5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
MAC
Colored it. Messed up with the 3-D at the top of the M on the left but whatever. This is going to be my reference for painting the boards in my backyard.

[trashhh]

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h194/trashhh_/sketches/Picture001.jpg

Just improving my throwie.. any crits?

[whoarethereal evil]

truth it looks a bit sketchy letters rnt the same size etc

y dnt u bomb tru

or thry summit shorter

[aces]

Originally posted by aces@Sep 10 2006, 08:29 AM
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5185/picture009bs5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
MAC
Colored it. Messed up with the 3-D at the top of the M on the left but whatever. This is going to be my reference for painting the boards in my backyard.
Bump for crits.

[-MaCKiE-]

i like the A and M.. not sure about the bottom part of the C, will look nice painted with a forcefield. i dont like ya coulor scheme tho pink doesnt go with the, pink n black has nice contrast tho.


biro freestyle
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9103/rushdgraffln4.jpg
critz?

[shifty!]

Originally posted by shifty!@Sep 9 2006, 02:05 PM
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/6546/ashhthrowgu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
some feedback on both, im having trouble trying to get the AS to flow with the bottom H...
bump for critssss

[-MaCKiE-]

played H.. looks nice ho if ya angled it n made it semi 3D would look dope, ud have 2 work perspective.. the bump is almost nice.. can u critz mine?

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by Fosale!@Sep 9 2006, 03:11 PM
http://img446.imageshack.us/img446/88/p1010186mz1.jpg

http://img427.imageshack.us/img427/7364/p1010187cx6.jpg
marker freestyle
ima join all this bumpage.
feedback?

[WolfBurrns]

Your fills need work. So do your letters. I cant really suggest anything. I mean. Try going back to black letters and then slowly add the curves and such.

[-MaCKiE-]

Originally posted by -MaCKiE-@Sep 10 2006, 09:17 AM
i like the A and M.. not sure about the bottom part of the C, will look nice painted with a forcefield. i dont like ya coulor scheme tho pink doesnt go with the, pink n black has nice contrast tho.


biro freestyle
http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9103/rushdgraffln4.jpg
critz?
this bumpage is gay...


fosale, drop the wierd bit at the start. add 3D n coulor inbtween the lines.. CAN SOMEONE CRITZ MINE NOW PLZ

[sky 5]

mackie - you need instant gratification eh . . . i dont really do throws but try to get the C and K on the same level and the short upper right leg of the K needs some work . . . .

seks - man you got some style but you need to work on addons so they flow and compliment yoiur letters and flow . . .your addons overpower your letters and your addons dictate your flow when the letters should . . i might post a "how to" in the new 2 graff thread for how/where/why i put my addons . ..even though i feel embarrased or kinda like a jerk when i try to educate/help out . . .

bleep bleep . .

[alive]

Originally posted by alive@Sep 9 2006, 10:56 AM
here we go! my new blackbook

the first page, fuckin with paint, then my throw
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02669.jpg

next page, pen freestyle markered over
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02670.jpg

third page, pen freestyle markerd over
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02671.jpg

next up, handstyle with a marker i made
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02672.jpg

fifth page, more pen freestyles, some markerd over
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02673.jpg

more pen fuckarounds some markerd over
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02674.jpg

and next, the first thing in the book i spent time on, and my VERY FIRST connections!
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02675.jpg

finally, basically the same piece as on the last page, but much bigger, i need to start rocking the whole page.
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g121/coercethemasses/DSC02676.jpg




there we go! crits would make you my new best friend, expecially on my only penciled pieces.

thanks so much,
peace.
bump for some love

[aces]

Originally posted by aces+Sep 10 2006, 09:59 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (aces &#064; Sep 10 2006, 09:59 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-aces@Sep 10 2006, 08:29 AM
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5185/picture009bs5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
MAC
Colored it. Messed up with the 3-D at the top of the M on the left but whatever. This is going to be my reference for painting the boards in my backyard.
Bump for crits. [/b][/quote]
Still not much in the way of crits.

Edit: Alive just lose the connections. Don&#39;t start doing those yet.

[alive]

damnit boy. dont u dare bump over me without giving me crits.

get a more original name. that is played played played
your handy looks like NAC
round the edges
try to use more curves



ps. haha i see u gave me some now. peace. but if not connections. whats wrong with those connections?

[cord]

aces why the fuck did you color the whole page black???

thats a sorry waste of markers......

[aces]

Alive the connection was the one from the E->A and A->R

Cord it was a sharpie that was almost completely used and I had racked it anyways so it didn&#39;t matter.

[alive]

? sry im confused. what did you just say?

[bouncingsoul]

Originally posted by bouncingsoul@Sep 9 2006, 09:05 PM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0235.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0236.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0237.jpg
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g314/poopdepants/IMG_0234.jpg

New sticks... Don&#39;t really belong here but I thought I&#39;d get some critz

:edit: See my post in the stickers thread to see what&#39;s up with the H and stuff
bumpitty

[myl]

that smoke is off the chain dude...and that axe can was a brilliant idea

[Blix]

wth is up with the axe can??

[ARMAwonR]

there&#39;s a sticker on it ...

[Blix]

yeah I know but what is the sticker??

[tack]

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/dsg1104.jpg

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/stage20fideahead.jpg

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f232/azzer7/stage3ofideahead.jpg

<_<

[ARMAwonR]

i think its an &#39;h&#39; with an extenstion

[beone]

i noes
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/254082.jpg
http://img1.yoxio.com/img/254081.jpg

[Fosale!]

face looks like a bite off les.

[*~ANZIO~*]

old school throw, love the charac. keep it up

[beone]

looks like i based the karaks lip off les big fuckin deal
http://robotswillkill.com/graffiti/07282005214403IMG0927.JPG

[xAWOKE.925]

E looks bitten from my boy gerk . The N is kinda wack man. I dont like how it goes from skinny to fat on the first part

[beone]

i dont like the n either ive been trying to get it to look better but its hard to flow with the letters, but nah i didnt bite the e off of gerk can u show me the pic ill change that up so it doesnt look like his

[TricksForKids]

noes the handstyle is decent, work on that S though, and the carac is ok and the E is very fresh but im gunna go out on a limb here and say your E might be bitten, and the S in your throw needs some serious work

I was messin around with some sharpies and busted this sloth freestyle just cuz i felt like tryin the 7 deadly sins battle crits?

Peace

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6030/slothzg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[beone]

thats really nice tricks i like it

idk i didnt bite the e but w/e u guys say can u please show me the picture

[cord]

wow fuckin hell you used more than one color&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

hahaha ;)

its nice man i like your style.

you use a ruler for the 3d fill though??

[TricksForKids]

hell no, i have hands of stone baby, lol, yeah i used a ruler, my godddd im still not a fan of colourssssss

[cyber one]

tricks, do you write regs?

[TricksForKids]

yep.

[MF Feed Letter]

thats a common e...no bite...an certainly not a bite off gerks im sure other people use it

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1749.jpg

[TricksForKids]

lose the arrows in the A&#39;s and work on that S...thanks for the crits too MF ;)

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Sep 10 2006, 08:14 PM
thats a common e...no bite...an certainly not a bite off gerks im sure other people use it

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1749.jpg
no the s is amazing

[TricksForKids]

Originally posted by TricksForKids@Sep 10 2006, 06:18 PM
noes the handstyle is decent, work on that S though, and the carac is ok and the E is very fresh but im gunna go out on a limb here and say your E might be bitten, and the S in your throw needs some serious work

I was messin around with some sharpies and busted this sloth freestyle just cuz i felt like tryin the 7 deadly sins battle crits?

Peace

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6030/slothzg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump, and no offense to MF or nosy but that S is ugly.

[bouncingsoul]

I&#39;m not a fan of that S either... Nice foot btw haha

[Nosypainter]

shrugs i like it and im not talking about the s in the one wit the bear

[BoRe-719-]

nosy your sig is from pendulum awsome (;

feed, that first piece is clean as fuck, put it up

[MF Feed Letter]

thanks nosey didnt think you were still on this forum

an reg i woulda given you vritz but my computers slow as fuck so it didnt show up but i can see it now and the only thing i dont really liek is that l and somethin bout the t

im gona try in paper piece battle this week to

[emel]

http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/9186/latestrelapsiv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ya one of mybetter pieces i kno im toy but i would like some crits.... i never get any ...
so plz crit and aanyone in the 512 area pm me

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/5089/23km7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ya i ilek this one the best cir.t.s....

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8461/rerellmq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i love prismas : )

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9748/relpadifhslqj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CRITS PLEASE DAMN

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[Flash_One]

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3590/1001591xz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Could some body give me some feedback before i paint this by thursday thx. ;)

[myl]

Originally posted by emel@Sep 10 2006, 10:51 PM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/9186/latestrelapsiv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ya one of mybetter pieces i kno im toy but i would like some crits.... i never get any ...
so plz crit and aanyone in the 512 area pm me

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/5089/23km7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ya i ilek this one the best cir.t.s....

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8461/rerellmq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i love prismas : )

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9748/relpadifhslqj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CRITS PLEASE DAMN

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your letter structure is horrible son

go back to blocks cause you have no clue what youre doing

[minesweep]

new throw idea (btw i know my shadow is really horrible)
crits?
http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/8366/dscn0251ew4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[NOMX]

Originally posted by Flash_One@Sep 10 2006, 11:16 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3590/1001591xz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Could some body give me some feedback before i paint this by thursday thx. ;)
dont bother painting it, if thats the best or some of ur good stuff and its only on paper im pretty sure that ur piece is gonna look worse.
loose all the extensions and crap and work on ur letters

minesweep do another becuase i cant tell what it says

[d_g]

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/3840/560a0418je0.jpg

Working on simples. I&#39;m not too fond of the &#39;e&#39;.

What&#39;s wrong with it/what needs changing? Should I move on? What should I do next?....Usual questions.

Oh, and excuse my pen control, I&#39;m pretty terrible working on a small scale.

[MEBone]

make it uppercase, everything else looks like it is so the e shud be as well, the t isnt as wide as everything else but otherwise its pretty good

[Runit One]

after you do what he said, bend the letters some and make them overlap just a little

[koper]

Originally posted by Flash_One@Sep 10 2006, 11:16 PM
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3590/1001591xz3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
Could some body give me some feedback before i paint this by thursday thx. ;)
my advice:
dont paint this. Dont waste the paint, dont waste your time, tdont waste the space.

Retract yoourself frm your currently style which is basically horrible letter styles with tone of flashy addons that dont work, and go back to drawing simple letters like the guy above this

[d_g]

Originally posted by MEBone@Sep 11 2006, 06:07 PM
make it uppercase, everything else looks like it is so the e shud be as well, the t isnt as wide as everything else but otherwise its pretty good
Oh yeah, I didn&#39;t notice the &#39;T&#39;. I rushed it cause it&#39;s a pretty simple letter so that&#39;s probably why.


Thanks guys.

[doomsayer]

I think you should make the letters thinner, cause i find it easir to tweak thinner letters, what i did was i wrote my name out in the font IMPACT in word, then printed it out and traced it then worked off it from there just addin little extension and stuff on the letters.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/truththrosep11.jpg

crrits>?

[d_g]

Cheers.

I usually do them skinnier, just doing them big and fat this time.

I&#39;ll have a look at that impact font.

[doomsayer]

yeah heres my progression, first is font, second is trace and tweak, third is just freehand.
still working on it
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/simpprogressionasfosep11.jpg

[SeKz]

Originally posted by SeKz@Sep 10 2006, 05:02 AM
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/4107/image031ub5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

any crits for this outline? except lose the arrows which i will do next time.
Bump yo, i need to know if im doin this shit right. Gimme some

truth im diggin your handstyle man

[wrek10]

http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/lest.jpgcrits

[doomsayer]

sekz, id give ya crits, but im not adnvanced enough IMO, from what I can see its lookin great, but yeah, lose the arrows and maybe derfine the Z more, but yea, idno, im not good enough to be able to tell ya know

yeah crits please somebody

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/sep11thro2.jpg

[wordzcantexpress]

That handstyle is rockin. I&#39;m not feeling the throw at all the t&#39;s really look like j&#39;s and that u looks more like a c idk just try some other stuff with the throw but your handstyle looks hella good

[aces]

I like it how you had it a while ago when you first got crits.

[doomsayer]

k ill go back to that again i spose.

[doomsayer]

like this?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/sep11thruthback.jpg

[nemzone]

well am new here, im 17 from scotland and write nes or nems. heres sum flicks.
and ye i kno my handy is shit :lol:
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/7241/10006075uo.th.jpg (http://img114.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10006075uo.jpg)
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3300/10006181pr.jpg
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/9928/10006356tq.jpg
http://img475.imageshack.us/img475/176/10006520uy.jpg
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/6070/10006539xn.jpg
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/6256/10006578dv.jpg
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/7718/10006613it.jpg
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/2134/evadenj3.png
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/892/gfgmm8.png
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6049/ty7y7xs4.png
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3330/jfujrk0.png
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1639/uytrtecn6.png
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8538/jujujac2.png
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/5097/rtthtin8.png

[nemzone]

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/9292/dsc00953rz8.th.jpg (http://img82.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00953rz8.jpg)
http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/5082/dsc00950lz7.th.jpg (http://img245.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dsc00950lz7.jpg)
http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1447/img109go6.th.jpg (http://img171.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img109go6.jpg)
http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/358/img102ki1.th.jpg (http://img353.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img102ki1.jpg)
http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/8568/img104iy9.th.jpg (http://img90.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img104iy9.jpg)

[beefgerky]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/20.jpg


thank the loyal servants for being so loyal, soon they&#39;ll be happy and very safe; if not, sent off like a pigeon with his head cut off. if it wasn&#39;t for the guillotine, there would be no umbilical cord. isn&#39;t it pitiful? at our pinnical, they make it sound so pinnocchio. that&#39;s how i know it&#39;s so dumb, it could even write its own article

[C3ZR ONE]

That&#39;s a fresh fill Gerk. How&#39;d you do it?

And when did you get all Shakespearian on our asses??? :huh: :huh: :huh:

[beefgerky]

lol its a song lyric. i was listening to at the time. he says it at like 3830mph. sounds awsome.


and fill is just thin purple deco on black.

[obseen]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 10 2006, 08:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 10 2006, 08:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 10 2006, 06:18 PM
noes the handstyle is decent, work on that S though, and the carac is ok and the E is very fresh but im gunna go out on a limb here and say your E might be bitten, and the S in your throw needs some serious work

I was messin around with some sharpies and busted this sloth freestyle just cuz i felt like tryin the 7 deadly sins battle crits?

Peace

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6030/slothzg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump, and no offense to MF or nosy but that S is ugly. [/b][/quote]
woah, finally, one of your sketches with colours looks hot man&#33;
gerk that looks dope aswell
nems nice stuff

[krazzie_ammo]

http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/5664/2us8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/7651/1dn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits please :D

[WolfBurrns]

The first and last ones are cool. Not really feelin the 3rd one. Try an be a little more consistant with you letters too(talking about that bubble style you got going on). That third one though needs alot of work on the letter structure..

[Tasher-B]

im new to this :D

http://i48.photobucket.com/albums/f230/cheekyliltasha/Photo-0028.jpg

[alive]

Originally posted by beefgerky+Sep 11 2006, 09:54 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (beefgerky &#064; Sep 11 2006, 09:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/20.jpg


thank the loyal servants for being so loyal, soon they&#39;ll be happy and very safe; if not, sent off like a pigeon with his head cut off. if it wasn&#39;t for the guillotine, there would be no umbilical cord. isn&#39;t it pitiful? at our pinnical, they make it sound so pinnocchio. that&#39;s how i know it&#39;s so dumb, it could even write its own article [/b]
<!--QuoteBegin-CEZR ONE
That&#39;s a fresh fill Gerk. How&#39;d you do it?

And when did you get all Shakespearian on our asses???Â* Â* [/quote]

haha.

artist: sole
album: selling live water
track: plutonium

great piece and amazing fill tho

[Detoxication]

drop the extensions and work on letter structure for now

[alive]

Originally posted by alive+Sep 11 2006, 04:57 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (alive @ Sep 11 2006, 04:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by beefgerky@Sep 11 2006, 09:54 AM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/20.jpg


thank the loyal servants for being so loyal, soon they&#39;ll be happy and very safe; if not, sent off like a pigeon with his head cut off. if it wasn&#39;t for the guillotine, there would be no umbilical cord. isn&#39;t it pitiful? at our pinnical, they make it sound so pinnocchio. that&#39;s how i know it&#39;s so dumb, it could even write its own article
<!--QuoteBegin-CEZR ONE
That&#39;s a fresh fill Gerk. How&#39;d you do it?

And when did you get all Shakespearian on our asses???Â* Â*

haha.

artist: sole
album: selling live water
track: plutonium

great piece and amazing fill tho [/b][/quote]

lol its a song lyric. i was listening to at the time. he says it at like 3830mph. sounds awsome.


and fill is just thin purple deco on black.

whoops. haha he alrdy said it.

still a great piece.



peace.

[tycoonin]

Originally posted by TricksForKids+Sep 10 2006, 08:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (TricksForKids @ Sep 10 2006, 08:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-TricksForKids@Sep 10 2006, 06:18 PM
noes the handstyle is decent, work on that S though, and the carac is ok and the E is very fresh but im gunna go out on a limb here and say your E might be bitten, and the S in your throw needs some serious work

I was messin around with some sharpies and busted this sloth freestyle just cuz i felt like tryin the 7 deadly sins battle crits?

Peace

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/6030/slothzg4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
bump, and no offense to MF or nosy but that S is ugly. [/b][/quote]
im luvin it tricks...everything iv seen from u is dope i love ur style

[NOMX]

Originally posted by krazzie_ammo@Sep 11 2006, 01:50 PM
http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/5664/2us8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/7651/1dn8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
crits please :D
change ur name

[FEN the HEN]

why does he have to change his name?, those throwies, specially the bottom one is looking fresh

[lost_for_evex]

Originally posted by nemzone@Sep 11 2006, 07:24 AM
well am new here, im 17 from scotland and write nes or nems. heres sum flicks.
and ye i kno my handy is shit :lol:
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/7241/10006075uo.th.jpg (http://img114.imageshack.us/my.php?image=10006075uo.jpg)
http://img239.imageshack.us/img239/3300/10006181pr.jpg
http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/9928/10006356tq.jpg
http://img475.imageshack.us/img475/176/10006520uy.jpg
http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/6070/10006539xn.jpg
http://img454.imageshack.us/img454/6256/10006578dv.jpg
http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/7718/10006613it.jpg
http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/2134/evadenj3.png
http://img238.imageshack.us/img238/892/gfgmm8.png
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6049/ty7y7xs4.png
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3330/jfujrk0.png
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/1639/uytrtecn6.png
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/8538/jujujac2.png
http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/5097/rtthtin8.png
bump im feelin it.

[Bartic]

Not too fond of the S, sorta started with 1 style and it turned into another
http://img226.imageshack.us/img226/5433/suki2cd3.png

Any Suggestions? Next Steps?

[NOMX]

Originally posted by FEN the HEN@Sep 11 2006, 08:01 PM
why does he have to change his name?, those throwies, specially the bottom one is looking fresh
becuase every kid that just beat marc ecko&#39;s getting up and runs around hittin shit with sharpies uses that name, i didnt say his stuff was bad, its just a horrible/unoriginal name. (<--- thats just me)

[beke]

you could say that about alo0t of names, doesnt mean he cant make it his own though

[NOMX]

can u think of any name that kids choose more than that?

[beke]

flash, king, sniper...want some more?

[alive]

sic, sick, sik. i swear to god 3 out of every 5 ppl starting write that shit. goddamn.

but just cuz theres other common names, doesnt mean its ok to take one. ur name should be something special.

[beke]

what if it is special to him? whos to say its not? he could make it special depending on if he sticks with his name and really works at it. why not? I understand original names are better, but still, why should he not use his name now?

[NOMX]

i never said he couldnt. i just was saying that its a really unoriginal name which im pretty sure doesnt mean anything to him/her. i could be wrong but i just really really hate that name.

[shifty!]

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/8482/gothrowgh3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
could i get some advice and comments on this, thanks, and is it street worthy...

[d_g]

The &#39;o&#39; is kinda plain compared to the &#39;g&#39;.

[nerdx]

g is nice, but o needs some helpin

[wrek10]

Originally posted by wrek10@Sep 11 2006, 03:28 AM
http://i59.photobucket.com/albums/g299/wrek10r/lest.jpgcrits
:P ???

[doomsayer]

Something I drew it maths. I quite like it :lol:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/characsep12.jpg

[d_g]

The head itself would make for good mass production slaps.

[doomsayer]

Where can I get some slaps? Oh damn, just after I made my order at thebutchershop, I found they sell a 50 pack of slaps for 9 bucks. Ahh well, when I make another order I&#39;ll grab some.

[si0n]

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/3941/img0238ds3.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=img0238ds3.jpg)

it took me a while, but im finnally developing some letters that i like, sry bout the shitty pic. but ya a sketch that i acutally like... critz

[d_g]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 12 2006, 04:28 PM
Where can I get some slaps? Oh damn, just after I made my order at thebutchershop, I found they sell a 50 pack of slaps for 9 bucks. Ahh well, when I make another order I&#39;ll grab some.
Stationery shops.

Work out about 7(NZD) for 100 but they&#39;re kinda small.

I&#39;m trying to find somewhere I can dumpster sticker paper.

[Venom.]

Here&#39;s what I have so far for the phsyk toy battle... I need to rack some markers to color it in, but I have the outline & 3d done:

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/460/phsykpiecezy4.jpg

Crits?

[NOMX]

round off ur edges and do it again

[SeKz]

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/1157/image004af8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres my entry finished it a couple of minutes ago, yeah man racking pens is easy i racked a whole set. ignore that little black shit at the bottom its balls

[ceroX24X]

hey i was wondering if i could please get some crits for this. i know my fills and coloring need work.


http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6799.jpg

[ARMAwonR]

http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e67/only1fancypants/Picture2004.jpg

Hmm ... Critiques?

[wordzcantexpress]

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/7349/blackbook006qc9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



I liked the seven sins battle idea so I decided to do one.......... last page in my first book
so off to jack a book tommorow. Crits?

[wordzcantexpress]

Ape: I like it alot. Maybe make the E longer.
Arma: IDK maybe have the last a overlap instead of under lap, the M being over it really messes with how the A looks.

My 2 cents

[SeKz]

Why would you rack a book, they cost like a buck :blink:

[TricksForKids]

cuz hes thug like that

[SeKz]

lawl

[myl]

Originally posted by SeKz@Sep 12 2006, 12:51 AM
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/1157/image004af8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

heres my entry finished it a couple of minutes ago, yeah man racking pens is easy i racked a whole set. ignore that little black shit at the bottom its balls
hottttttt

nice work

and yea ....that black box is wack



and ape...that shit is awesome i wish i could do shit like that

[krazzie_ammo]

hey ape, that is looking hottt&#33;&#33;&#33; but one thing...try and make the E more definative....i couldn&#39;t really tell what it was but the first two letters are the shizz :P

[alera]

yo ape thats hot&#33; not shure if i like the black fill things but its all good.

Heres a 9/11 thing i did, i still only have a camera phone but what ever
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5093/0912061321atf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[wordzcantexpress]

Originally posted by SeKz@Sep 12 2006, 06:17 AM
Why would you rack a book, they cost like a buck :blink:
Where can I get a hardbound book for a dollar?....... Still I don&#39;t think I would pay for it

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by emel@Sep 10 2006, 10:51 PM
http://img150.imageshack.us/img150/9186/latestrelapsiv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ya one of mybetter pieces i kno im toy but i would like some crits.... i never get any ...
so plz crit and aanyone in the 512 area pm me

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/5089/23km7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
ya i ilek this one the best cir.t.s....

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8461/rerellmq6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
i love prismas : )

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9748/relpadifhslqj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
CRITS PLEASE DAMN

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not to bad dude some of them need some work but overall your style isnt to shabby.... i would work on the 3d and the color scemes

[nemzone]

well neva got many comments on ma shit few pages back but owel, mostlyt old shit anyway..

but heres a new style av bin workin on, wat ya think, anything i should change or that?

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/paulman21/img111.jpg

[trashhh]

Very nice nemz, green and yellow parts look good together... nice 3d too

[C3ZR ONE]

Originally posted by ceroX24X@Sep 12 2006, 02:48 AM
hey i was wondering if i could please get some crits for this. i know my fills and coloring need work.


http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6799.jpg
This is VERY nice. It makes me a bit suspicious tho. Got any other work you could show?

I like the fill, but the letters are EXTREMELY quality. How long have you been writing?

[Sumoe]

http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/6919/dsc0489qr4.jpg
i&#39;m still toy only eriting a little while, crits?

[C3ZR ONE]

Nice coloring and feel. The overall shape is good too, but the letter structure will need work. ;)

[Sumoe]

thnx, and yea the structure does need sum work.

[Sumoe]

http://img476.imageshack.us/img476/9576/dsc0485xk3.jpg
crits?

[+HyBriD+]

i like it

[Nosypainter]

Originally posted by nemzone@Sep 12 2006, 01:16 PM
well neva got many comments on ma shit few pages back but owel, mostlyt old shit anyway..

but heres a new style av bin workin on, wat ya think, anything i should change or that?

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y155/paulman21/img111.jpg
change the colors take the yellow and green out and add a more earth tones to match the red and orange....... over all not to bad but the colors hurt my head...

[Bartic]

Hey, this is my first attempt at something a bit more complex, i think i might have over done it, the letters are also in my opinion spaced too far apart. Any comments would be appriciated.
http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9991/suki3xc7.png
Comments?/Crits>

[Sumoe]

it cool :)

[Sumoe]

a little confusing tho... :huh:

[Fosale!]

Originally posted by C3ZR ONE+Sep 12 2006, 02:09 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (C3ZR ONE @ Sep 12 2006, 02:09 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-ceroX24X@Sep 12 2006, 02:48 AM
hey i was wondering if i could please get some crits for this. i know my fills and coloring need work.


http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y21/teenagesound/100_6799.jpg
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bumpppp
mad nice.

[TricksForKids]

not ot play the devil&#39;s advocate here..or maybe i am, but theres just too many random lines going on in your eltters to make me appreciate it ape, i can tell the structure&#39;s down, just work on that fill, im trying to get some good fills down too

anyways, heres a 2 min freestyle for mom

Peace ( lookin good nems keep it up )

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/5528/mompo8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[aces]

That&#39;s prettys sick dude. Only thing I&#39;d change is the little thing on the right of the first M near the middle. The little bump makes it look weird. It may be good but I don&#39;t really like it so I guess that it&#39;s just my opinion.

[ceroX24X]

thanks for everyones critiques. ive been writing for almost a year now ive posted a few things befor but im really happy with this one. i usually bust simples but i tried going a little harder on this one.

[magic nyc]

Everyones really been steping up in this thread, good shit peoples and heres a piece I did in this girls book in art class

http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/3613/paperrc8.jpg

[jerm_mtl]

dont write magic because its really common and it needs works but its alright

[klipa]

i llike that, all id say is move the i nearer by curving it in

[aces]

Klipa where have you been? I haven&#39;t seen you post in ages.

[Sumoe]

any1 got suggestions for the fill or colors for the lettering? :ph34r: http://img158.imageshack.us/img158/4803/dsc0490gb2.jpg

[Detoxication]

http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/6029/sevorpf3.jpg


advice please

[magic nyc]

Sumoe- fade in the 3d a little or round the interior edged of rhe darker yellow in the 3d

[Sumoe]

thnx

[Venom.]

Sumoe- I&#39;m not really feelin&#39; it I would suggest going simpler..



Something I did on one of my school notebooks..

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1553/drainthrowie1yv5.jpg

I realized after that I need to make the N wider to match the rest of the letters.

[Bartic]

Sumoe: U have the beginnings of it try to keep your lines more parallel to start off with, some of those overlapping cracks or overkill. Over all nice job, ur also missing a little 3d on the S

Detox: Watch your 3d, all your 3d lines should end up/point towards one point the vanishing point. Take a look at ur R the Loop on top and the hook on the bottom are at tottally different agnles 3d wise. Good work tho, simples are the way to start.

http://img464.imageshack.us/img464/9486/suki4bz2.png

Sorta fixed up / outlined

What you think?

[Sumoe]

yeah i noticed the missing 3d afterwards :blink:

[Sumoe]

not to happy with it <_< ...there&#39;s always next time
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6339/dsc0493ps1.jpg

[Voices]

http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/5170/pv042ak8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

hey give some feedback plz

[curv]

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7696/lastscantz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Sumoe]

curv u write hope?....jus work on ur letters also ur hand seems to be a lil shaky, not feelin the colors either maybe take the red and yellow out idk yellow and red jus dont seem to fit in the pic ;)

[Bartic]

curv: there is too much going on in ur peice and ur skill level cannot compensate for it.(i&#39;m not much better ) Simple it out (your going to be told this eventually, don&#39;t take it offensivly) Make all your letter the same size and on the same plane. And work on that 3d, drawing boxes and random polygons and making them 3d helps

[ShIfTeD]

http://img146.imageshack.us/img146/8278/phsyk2nl6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

here goes my entry for the toy battle

[Sumoe]

i&#39;m feelin it i&#39;ll prolly enter it too :D

[nerdx]

i like that style a lot. big extenions looks goood.
just thinkin it could be better. but still the style is nice.

[nerdx]

Originally posted by Sumoe@Sep 12 2006, 08:36 PM
not to happy with it <_< ...there&#39;s always next time
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/6339/dsc0493ps1.jpg
bump for a mad nice color.
sumoe you deffintly know what to do its just getting there.
good luck man and keep it up.

[ShIfTeD]

yeah i like my big extensions....alot of people try them and fuck them up...like i think the extension of the k is too skinny

[AteskOne]

Originally posted by curv@Sep 12 2006, 08:56 PM
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7696/lastscantz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
dawg no....that&#39;s just a disgrace to the name of graffiti. my advice....restart the entire thing but this time only do letters for right now...only do simple letters that look like this HOPE...do that for a long time until u get structure...and dont color until you get decent markers. those look like corola markers used in kindergarden.

[dibz]

left my pens at my homies crib. so its colored pencil but not like its good enough for pens hahaha
my first attempt at a p iece.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v304/muffybuns88/100_2882.jpg
(rant)

[Bartic]

Dibz: I&#39;m likin&#39; it. The N needs a bit of work, more structure and i dunno if i&#39;m hot on the little ball accents on the top of the A but to each their own. You got the 3d, now just work on structure.

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/2567/suki5dy1.png

Somthing new, i&#39;m surprised how much u improve when u draw every chance you get. This would the most important peice of advice.
I&#39;m not too sure what to do with the centre line?trunk? w/e it is Any Ideas?

[fost]

bartic, your structure looks good and your 3d looks nice overall looks pretty good

i&#39;d say get rid of that middle trunk thing and if you actually paint it flair the s and the k

[dibz]

bartic that steez is heat&#33;&#33;

[MF Feed Letter]

does that say cuki? i dono im baked piece i just finished for battle

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1750.jpg

[wrek10]

:ph34r: god damnit fuckers fuck u to then dont crit my shit

[blaike]

Originally posted by curv@Sep 12 2006, 05:56 PM
http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/7696/lastscantz9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
yeah seriously, like the other guy said...

try to avoid backgrounds and add-ons completely for now... hell, maybe even color

try to do some basic sketches... check out the &#39;new 2 graf&#39; thread for letter structure.

basically means keep your letters the same size and in line and legible

[ceroX24X]

deeng MF FEED that piece is hot im really feeling it especially the fill, keep up the good shit man

[ARMAwonR]

something for my ladyyy

http://www.imagestation.com/picture/sraid214/pd020fbb1aa7ddb2904a88e27fb821cbf/ecffa8ec.jpg

yay or nay?

crits ... jeah

[doomsayer]

yay, that looks sick&#33;

any crits on my thro? extension on H good or bad? crits please

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/truththrosep13.jpg

[ARMAwonR]

you&#39;ve come a ways :)

but i&#39;d leave the extenstion off personally

good work and keep drawing ...

[doomsayer]

what can i do now to inprove it?

[ARMAwonR]

you could always tweak the proportions of the letters ... incorporate a larger hole in the R ... little shit&#39;s always good

[OliveOil]

much better truth, although im not a big fan of points.

that anna is illin.



BTW GERK is dead. the names OLIVE now bruvahs.


toy battle entry

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b87/Ctrl_Alt_Defeat/Benders%20shit/21.jpg

not too happy with it..

[Sluts_r_us]

wow...i was abot to say...that looks suspiciously like gerks shit lol...why the change?

[OliveOil]

im gay?

dunno, new letters, new styles, wasnt like i was up..

answer me on aim u cunt&#33;

[myl]

but that gerk throwie you had was fiyuh

[OliveOil]

it was hard to do consistantly, i was in over my head.

[MF Feed Letter]

Originally posted by MF Feed Letter@Sep 12 2006, 11:30 PM


http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y8/four420twenty/IMG_1750.jpg
..bumpo..

[ARMAwonR]

fire ...

that fill is outta hand

[aces]

Originally posted by doomsayer@Sep 13 2006, 02:23 AM
yay, that looks sick&#33;

any crits on my thro? extension on H good or bad? crits please

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v218/surfgrommit/truththrosep13.jpg
I like the top one the best.

[sky 5]

looks like we got a bunch of new cats bringin the heat up in here . . . nice to see some new steez . . . .

[obseen]

olvie oil that skecth looks hot, love all the colours
reminds me of something gerk would do

[myl]

haha

[nerdx]

went nuts with the colors. trying something new.
http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/9254/img2499ue7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

posted this also in the sticker section, just looking to get some feedback.
basically i was just trying shit i never have before, the gradient in the 3d, bits, cracks, shinners.

im also looking for a real narrow white out or white marker for hightlights, anyone got any?

[wordzcantexpress]

^ That is sick... It might look a little better with a hole in the R. I don&#39;t really like the 2 block things at the end, maybe change the angle on them. But it&#39;s really good.